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I selected this field and subject as my degree because it allows me to pursue both of my passions: solving problems and creating creative experiences. Because I used to answer a lot of math-related problems and wanted to continue engaging math in my future life, I chose this degree as my major because of the tight tie ... | I selected this field and subject as my degree because it allows me to pursue both of my passions: solving problems and creating creative experiences. Because I used to answer a lot of math-related problems and wanted to continue engaging math in my future life, I chose this degree as my major because of the tight tie ... |
I never imagined throughout my life that I would finally discover my dream job which I have been searching for a long time while taking a bus.A few months ago, I was on a bus shuttering from my hometown to Yangon, going to the English academy I attend, which is located in the downtown area of the city. When I glanced o... | I never imagined throughout my life that I would finally discover my dream job which I have been searching for a long time while taking a bus. A few months ago, I was on a bus shuttering from my hometown to Yangon, going to the English academy I attend, which is located in the downtown area of the city. When I glanced ... |
Mount Holyoke, and its founder Mary Lyon, remind me of Lucille Ball: both pioneers, changemakers, and mavericks. The first female to head a major production company: the power a changemaker and maverick can impart continues to influence posterity. As Maty Lyon valued women's education and bolstering women, similarly, L... | Mount Holyoke, and its founder Mary Lyon, remind me of Lucille Ball: both pioneers, changemakers, and mavericks. The first female to head a major production company: the power a changemaker and maverick can impart continues to influence posterity. As Many Lyon valued women's education and bolstering women, similarly, L... |
But being brought in a family which is largely inclined towards teaching and biology related fields I had a great hold on conceptual things. But I don't say I wasn't in others. I actually found these subjects easy to grasp and understand and yet I didn't realize what I truly want. After entering the college, that is wh... | But being brought in a family which is largely inclined towards teaching and biology related fields I had a great hold on conceptual things. But I don't say I wasn't in others. I actually found these subjects easy to grasp and understand, and yet I didn't realize what I truly want. After entering the college, that is w... |
My Name is Khin, 22 years old Burmese from Myanmar, and I am on track to earn my Bachelor of Arts in French at University of Foreign Languages, Yangon. I am writing to apply for the scholarship program for Pusan National University offered by Gyeongnam Foreign Residents' Support Center. My educational aspirations consi... | My Name is Thin, 22 years old Burmese from Myanmar, and I am on track to earn my Bachelor of Arts in French at University of Foreign Languages, Yangon. I am writing to apply for the scholarship program for Pusan National University offered by Gangnam Foreign Residents' Support Center. My educational aspirations consist... |
My name is Marco Valdez, and I am currently a Senior at South Houston High School. I will pursue a bachelor's degree in Mechanical Engineering BS. I plan on attending Texas Tech and complete my education there. My goal is to become a Mechanical Engineer and be able to work for a big corporation like NASA or Tesla. Make... | My name is Marco Valdez, and I am currently a Senior at South Houston High School. I will pursue a bachelor's degree in Mechanical Engineering BS. I plan on attending Texas Tech and complete my education there. My goal is to become a Mechanical Engineer and be able to work for a big corporation like NASA or Tesla. Make... |
Health is one of the essential components of every human to strive in order to become a better person in the future. However, as part of the health sector, and as a Nurse, choosing a higher and more advanced qualification will ensure the benefits and development of the health system in terms of knowledge, skills and pr... | Health is one of the essential components of every human to strive in order to become a better person in the future. However, as part of the health sector, and as a Nurse, choosing a higher and more advanced qualification will ensure the benefits and development of the health system in terms of knowledge, skills and pr... |
My name is Pham Quang Nghi, I was born on June 29th, 2004, in Vung Tau City which is about 110 kilometers away from Ho Chi Minh City to the East. Currently, I am going to finish my study at Le Quy Don High School for the Gifted, majoring in Math in Vung Tau City. Today I am writing this letter to express my strong desi... | My name is Ham Huang GHI, I was born on June 29th, 2004, in Sung Tau City which is about 110 kilometers away from Ho Chi Minh City to the East. Currently, I am going to finish my study at Le Buy Don High School for the Gifted, majoring in Math in Sung Tau City. Today I am writing this letter to express my strong desire... |
PLEASE GIVE ME ANY SUGGESTION TO MAKE MY STATEMENT BETTERI wanted the statement to give heartfelt and explain the reason for my poor academics at the beginning 200 WORD Looking back, I visualize my setback as a leaky rowboat, navigating the voyage but also being paranoid about another leak. My journey has been eventful... | PLEASE GIVE ME ANY SUGGESTION TO MAKE MY STATEMENT BETTER wanted the statement to give heartfelt and explain the reason for my poor academics at the beginning 200 Words Looking back, I visualize my setback as a leaky rowboat, navigating the voyage but also being paranoid about another leak. My journey has been eventful... |
"Ta-dum." The familiar intro of a streaming service gave me comfort and a sense of relief. I finally had the time to tick a box in my seemingly unending series list. With my feet propped up, coffee, and a sandwich on my left, I am ready to binge-watch the series I promised to watch after finishing the grueling work and... | "Tandem." The familiar intro of a streaming service gave me comfort and a sense of relief. I finally had the time to tick a box in my seemingly unending series list. With my feet propped up, coffee, and a sandwich on my left, I am ready to binge-watch the series I promised to watch after finishing the grueling work and... |
I strongly believe that I deserve to participate in this scholarship as I am embedded with an urge and willingness to further acquire the fundamental knowledge of key computer science skills from programming languages, data analysis to software engineering and algorithms that are crucial in the technology industry. Fro... | I strongly believe that I deserve to participate in this scholarship as I am embedded with an urge and willingness to further acquire the fundamental knowledge of key computer science skills from programming languages, data analysis to software engineering and algorithms that are crucial in the technology industry. Fro... |
My brother is a misogynist. He believes that men are superior to women just for being men. He also believes that passing under a woman's sarong will cause him to lose their glory. Not only my brother, but also the majority of men in Myanmar, believe the same way. It is because of the male-dominated culture that has exi... | My brother is a misogynist. He believes that men are superior to women just for being men. He also believes that passing under a woman's sarong will cause him to lose their glory. Not only my brother, but also the majority of men in Myanmar, believe the same way. It is because of the male-dominated culture that has exi... |
After volunteering at a local hospital's TICU, I concluded I did not want to go into pre-med and become a surgeon. I learned from the volunteering experience that I did not have the emotional capacity to continuously see people at their weakest state. Nevertheless, my passion for contributing to health and medicine per... | After volunteering at a local hospital's ICU, I concluded I did not want to go into pre-med and become a surgeon. I learned from the volunteering experience that I did not have the emotional capacity to continuously see people at their weakest state. Nevertheless, my passion for contributing to health and medicine pers... |
I am keen to join the College of Global Arts at Ritsumeikan University to study, to be a journalist who shares the diverse culture to promote cross-cultural understanding. When I was in 10th grade, I had a great opportunity to create a documentary film about Rohingya refugees, and this experience was a life-changing mo... | I am keen to join the College of Global Arts at Ritsumeikan University to study, to be a journalist who shares the diverse culture to promote cross-cultural understanding. When I was in 10th grade, I had a great opportunity to create a documentary film about Rohingya refugees, and this experience was a life-changing mo... |
At the Lifeline youth residential treatment center, a frequent question my peers asked was, "It's called Magic?" At first, the simplest description for the isolated community I grew up in was, "It's an hour south of Sun Valley." However, the following fourteen months at Lifeline would teach me how to define my experien... | At the Lifeline youth residential treatment center, a frequent question my peers asked was, "It's called Magic?" At first, the simplest description for the isolated community I grew up in was, "It's an hour south of Sun Valley." However, the following fourteen months at Lifeline would teach me how to define my experien... |
To whom it may concern I am writing this letter to you to express my profound interest in a chance to study Economics at a Hungarian university through the aid of the Stipendium Hungaricum (SH) Scholarship. This once-in-a-lifetime opportunity will give me wings to reach new horizons of knowledge, which I will further u... | To whom it may concern I am writing this letter to you to express my profound interest in a chance to study Economics at a Hungarian university through the aid of the Stipendium Hungarian (SH) Scholarship. This once-in-a-lifetime opportunity will give me wings to reach new horizons of knowledge, which I will further us... |
The ARBUS and HBA programs both highly appeal to me as I wish to exhibit my leadership and problem-solving skills. I aspire to pursue a career as a chief HR officer, in which I can oversee strategic plans and training of a company; both fields will allow me to display my passion for leadership. The ARBUS program offers... | The ARIUS and HBA programs both highly appeal to me as I wish to exhibit my leadership and problem-solving skills. I aspire to pursue a career as a chief HR officer, in which I can oversee strategic plans and training of a company; both fields will allow me to display my passion for leadership. The ARIUS program offers... |
Prompt:Tell a story from your life, describing an experience that either demonstrates your character or helped to shape it. Essay: What hubris to believe that I was above the world. It was senior year. Everyone was stressing over college applications, but not me. I did not even have a specific college in mind. I just k... | Prompt:Tell a story from your life, describing an experience that either demonstrates your character or helped to shape it. Essay: What hubris to believe that I was above the world. It was senior year. Everyone was stressing over college applications, but not me. I did not even have a specific college in mind. I just k... |
Before coming to Korea:-As preparation for my studies in Korea, I have self-taught myself Hangul and some Basic phrases by using the Website of King Sejong Institute and Talk To Me In Korean and watching YouTube. But In order to achieve accurate language proficiency and possess in-depth knowledge of culture and languag... | Before coming to Korea:-As preparation for my studies in Korea, I have self-taught myself Hangul and some Basic phrases by using the Website of King Sejong Institute and Talk To Me In Korean and watching YouTube. But In order to achieve accurate language proficiency and possess in-depth knowledge of culture and languag... |
I've researched and seen what the admissions council usually go for and that is introducing your essay with a personal narrative then transitioning to your accomplishments where you finally answer the prompt. I can't speak for all but this was the layout I decided to choose. I would appreciate if I could get some point... | I've researched and seen what the admissions' council usually go for and that is introducing your essay with a personal narrative then transitioning to your accomplishments where you finally answer the prompt. I can't speak for all but this was the layout I decided to choose. Furthermore, I would appreciate if I could ... |
Please help me to correct mistakes. I did tons of research about a bachelor's degree in the Computer Engineering Program of Sejong university, and I strongly believe it would be a perfect match for me since Korea is one of the most technologically advanced countries. Furthermore, the Computer Engineering program at Sej... | Please help me to correct mistakes. I did tons of research about a bachelor's degree in the Computer Engineering Program of Sejong university, and I strongly believe it would be a perfect match for me since Korea is one of the most technologically advanced countries. Furthermore, the Computer Engineering program at Sej... |
"Why does a bowl of pho cost half as much as a cup of bubble tea while it is more nutritious and cooked sophisticatedly?" My cousin asked me when we went to a pho restaurant together around 6 years ago. Being a 12-year-old girl, I was unable to answer and the matter sunk into oblivion. A year later, I sold bubble tea t... | "Why does a bowl of pho cost half as much as a cup of bubble tea while it is more nutritious and cooked sophisticated?" My cousin asked me when we went to a pho restaurant together around 6 years ago. Being a 12-year-old girl, I was unable to answer, and the matter sunk into oblivion. A year later, I sold bubble tea to... |
The Oil and gas industry is lagging behind in the use of data for more profitable and efficient production; for data to be a true asset, it must be identified, aggregated, stored, analyzed and perfected hence, the need for data scientists and analysts. The Nigeria oil and gas industry provides more than 90% of the coun... | The Oil and gas industry is lagging behind in the use of data for more profitable and efficient production; for data to be a true asset, it must be identified, aggregated, stored, analyzed and perfected hence, the need for data scientists and analysts. The Nigeria oil and gas industry provides more than 90% of the coun... |
When I finally arrived, I couldn't wait for the orientation session to begin. Meeting the group, I've noticed to be the youngest among the volunteers; however, no one questioned my age or purpose of visit. Being in a completely unfamiliar city, I've spent a week feeling like Andrea Sachs while serving "café espresso," ... | When I finally arrived, I couldn't wait for the orientation session to begin. Meeting the group, I've noticed to be the youngest among the volunteers; however, no one questioned my age or purpose of visit. Being in a completely unfamiliar city, I've spent a week feeling like Andrea Sachs while serving "café espresso," ... |
Owing to the massive number of historical events that occurred in the past three years, I could not take a breath to acknowledge that these are my terminal years in school. Moreover, the fact that this is the twenty-first century yet man-made destruction occupies the glorious Mother Earth spreading like poison by a bar... | Owing to the massive number of historical events that occurred in the past three years, I could not take a breath to acknowledge that these are my terminal years in school. Moreover, the fact that this is the twenty-first century, yet man-made destruction occupies the glorious Mother Earth spreading like poison by a ba... |
I have an intuitive mind with a strong creative side to myself which manifests itself in different ways. My family and friends would describe me as a dreamer, always lost in his own world. I look at the world from my own perspective, finding patterns and relating ideas. It gives me immense joy in connecting ideas and t... | I have an intuitive mind with a strong creative side to myself which manifests itself in different ways. My family and friends would describe me as a dreamer, always lost in his own world. I look at the world from my own perspective, finding patterns and relating ideas. It gives me immense joy in connecting ideas and t... |
My first experience of viewing cells under a microscope was an examination of a human blood vessel in my AS Biology lab class. Squinting through the eyepiece, I was in disbelief over how sophisticated a supposedly simple tissue could be - cells of many different types carrying out their distinct roles in perfect harmon... | My first experience of viewing cells under a microscope was an examination of a human blood vessel in my AS Biology lab class. Squinting through the eyepiece, I was in disbelief over how sophisticated a supposedly simple tissue could be - cells of many types carrying out their distinct roles in perfect harmony. It didn... |
The two values that I try to uphold everyday are understanding and introspection. When I immigrated to Canada as a kid, I tended to stay quiet and observe how people acted. The main reason for this was because English was my second language. When I had trouble interpreting English, I turned to non-verbal cues as a way ... | The two values that I try to uphold every day are understanding and introspection. When I immigrated to Canada as a kid, I tended to stay quiet and observe how people acted. The main reason for this was because English was my second language. When I had trouble interpreting English, I turned to non-verbal cues as a way... |
One of the activities that meant the most to me was my involvement in the "International Space settlement Design Competition". I was involved in it for more than a year in my high school as part of my school team. We were required to propose the design, development, and operations planning of a settlement in space. I w... | One of the activities that meant the most to me was my involvement in the "International Space settlement Design Competition". I was involved in it for more than a year in my high school as part of my school team. We were required to propose the design, development, and operations planning of a settlement in space. I w... |
Self-improvement is one of the most important aspects in my life. I first began to develop a sense for self-improvement as my mother pushed me to try a variety of sports as a child. With each new sport came a desire to become the best I could be, and as I grew older, that desire drove me to continuously try new things.... | Self-improvement is one of the most important aspects in my life. I first began to develop a sense for self-improvement as my mother pushed me to try a variety of sports as a child. With each new sport came a desire to become the best I could be, and as I grew older, that desire drove me to continuously try new things.... |
Back to 2020, schools were closed due to the breakout of COVID-19. After an one-month class suspension, all schools in Hong Kong switched their lesson mode from face-to-face to online. As we were not required to open our cameras, I was always sleeping and playing mobile games at home, paying no attention to lessons. Ev... | Back to 2020, schools were closed due to the breakout of COVID-19. After a one-month class suspension, all schools in Hong Kong switched their lesson mode from face-to-face to online. As we were not required to open our cameras, I was always sleeping and playing mobile games at home, paying no attention to lessons. Eve... |
2020 was undoubtedly the roughest year of my life. I thankfully recovered from COVID healthily, but I became hypersensitive to everything around me - people, food, and especially noises. Eventually, I was tested. I was diagnosed with ADHD, a disorder that my friends and I would view as shameful and embarrassing. As Asi... | 2020 was undoubtedly the roughest year of my life. I thankfully recovered from COVID healthily, but I became hypersensitive to everything around me - people, food, and especially noises. Eventually, I was tested. I was diagnosed with ADHD, a disorder that my friends and I would view as shameful and embarrassing. As Asi... |
An important value that has been engrained in my mindset is community engagement. Involvement among my community and learning outside school's boundaries have been crucial to my development. Growing up in a foreign, modern city, I have always felt a sense of belonging because of the people who support me. Experiences s... | An important value that has been engrained in my mindset is community engagement. Involvement among my community and learning outside school's boundaries have been crucial to my development. Growing up in a foreign, modern city, I have always felt a sense of belonging because of the people who support me. Experiences s... |
I am proud of the fact that I am resilient. Having a competitive mindset faced me with many hardships. Thus, showing myself being brought down wont stop me from getting back up. I have always shown myself to people as a calm person who wants to listen and help people, rather than try to fix my own problems. My friends ... | I am proud of the fact that I am resilient. Having a competitive mindset faced me with many hardships. Thus, showing myself being brought down won't stop me from getting back up. I have always shown myself to people as a calm person who wants to listen and help people, rather than try to fix my own problems. My friends... |
I have an intuitive mind with a strong creative side to myself which manifests itself in different ways. My family and friends would describe me as a dreamer, always lost in his own world. I look at the world from my own perspective, finding patterns and relating ideas. It gives me immense joy in connecting ideas and t... | I have an intuitive mind with a strong creative side to myself which manifests itself in different ways. My family and friends would describe me as a dreamer, always lost in his own world. I look at the world from my own perspective, finding patterns and relating ideas. It gives me immense joy in connecting ideas and t... |
By my family, I would be described as audacious, by my friends, I would be described as authentic and by my teachers, I would be described as adaptable. However, this has not always been the case. As a primary school student, I was majorly focused on passing the humanities subjects in school and neglected mathematics b... | By my family, I would be described as audacious, by my friends, I would be described as authentic and by my teachers, I would be described as adaptable. However, this has not always been the case. As a primary school student, I was majorly focused on passing the humanities subjects in school and neglected mathematics b... |
I'm interested in attending a UWC college because I'm eager to gain new experiences that will enable me to grow into a mature and responsible person, as well as to collaborate with peers from different parts of the world. I believe studying in a much more diverse community than my current schools will help me open my e... | I'm interested in attending a UWC college because I'm eager to gain new experiences that will enable me to grow into a mature and responsible person, as well as to collaborate with peers from different parts of the world. I believe studying in a much more diverse community than my current schools will help me open my e... |
One thing essential to know about me is acne, but it's not the acne I am proud of, rather, it's the qualities I learned from acne experience that later became a part of me. From my acne experience, I learned to drink at least 3 liters of water everyday and I can proudly say the water I've consumed is as much as 20 bath... | One thing essential to know about me is acne, but it's not the acne I am proud of, rather, it's the qualities I learned from acne experience that later became a part of me. From my acne experience, I learned to drink at least 3 liters of water every day and I can proudly say the water I've consumed is as much as 20 bat... |
I started giving importance to self-respect only when I learned hard lessons of my life when I was frivolous and carefree. My grades started falling in my early high school days. This was a big blow to my own self-confidence and expectations. this was the time for self-introspection to find the purpose of my life. Inst... | I started giving importance to self-respect only when I learned hard lessons of my life when I was frivolous and carefree. My grades started falling in my early high school days. This was a big blow to my own self-confidence and expectations. This was the time for self-introspection to find the purpose of my life. Inst... |
my response : Adventure is a word that is commonly associated with daring ideas such as backpacking across Nepal or rock climbing up massive boulders. As a result, I don't blame my peers for not considering me an "adventurous" individual. Most people in my life would describe me as a reserved person who prefers to keep... | My response : Adventure is a word that is commonly associated with daring ideas such as backpacking across Nepal or rock climbing up massive boulders. As a result, I don't blame my peers for not considering me an "adventurous" individual. Most people in my life would describe me as a reserved person who prefers to keep... |
Greetings from New Delhi, India!!I am Aarav Chopra. I am the only child of my parents. My upbringing has been in a conservative, protected and yet modern atmosphere. This has helped me to develop a very balanced, grounded and affable personality. I am an eager learner and always strive to achieve what I desire. I have ... | Greetings from New Delhi, India!! I am Aarav Chopra. I am the only child of my parents. My upbringing has been in a conservative, protected and yet modern atmosphere. This has helped me to develop a very balanced, grounded and affable personality. I am an eager learner and always strive to achieve what I desire. I have... |
Hello hello, I need recommendations on an essay format that can help with expressing an activity - if anyone can recommend one that would be spectacular! I still have a lot to add, but I know I have a lot of flaws in my writing. If someone can thoroughly critique and provide a greater example on how to write an essay i... | Hello, I need recommendations on an essay format that can help with expressing an activity - if anyone can recommend one that would be spectacular! I still have a lot to add, but I know I have a lot of flaws in my writing. If someone can thoroughly critique and provide a greater example on how to write an essay in this... |
I need your help with proofreading and feedback on the flow of my essay! Thanks in advance! Here's my draft: The world would be blind if language were non-existent. And for me, words are companions for life. Choosing Wellesley #82 - Required Language course - I know the nuances of language will fulfill my love for writ... | I need your help with proofreading and feedback on the flow of my essay! Thanks in advance! Here's my draft: The world would be blind if language were non-existent. And for me, words are companions for life. Choosing Wellesley #82 - Required Language course - I know the nuances of language will fulfill my love for writ... |
The place we live in is a borderless world. We are all connected. Notwithstanding living in a small, underdeveloped, and outskirt village, I presume every opportunity that came up for everyone is equal. Nevertheless, the way an individual acknowledge every opportunity is different, including me. As a part of this borde... | The place we live in is a borderless world. We are all connected. Notwithstanding living in a small, underdeveloped, and outskirt village, I presume every opportunity that came up for everyone is equal. Nevertheless, the way an individual acknowledge every opportunity is different, including me. As a part of this borde... |
200-250 words I am a huge Formula 1 fan! For twenty-two weekends out of the year, I devote three hours to watch my favourite driver battle it out on track. I'm usually not an early bird, but I never miss any Formula 1 races, even if they are happening at five in the morning. I enjoy watching the incredible speeds of th... | 200-250 words I am a huge Formula 1 fan! For twenty-two weekends out of the year, I devote three hours to watch my favorite driver battle it out on track. I'm usually not an early bird, but I never miss any Formula 1 races, even if they are happening at five in the morning. I enjoy watching the incredible speeds of the... |
At MIT, we bring people together to better the lives of others. MIT students work to improve their communities in different ways, from tackling the world's biggest challenges to being a good friend. Describe one way in which you contributed to your community, whether in your family, the classroom, your neighborhood, et... | At MIT, we bring people together to better the lives of others. MIT students work to improve their communities in different ways, from tackling the world's biggest challenges to being a good friend. Describe one way in which you contributed to your community, whether in your family, the classroom, your neighborhood, et... |
200-250 words "Team 99000Z, please make your way towards the field." It was the Ontario provincial robotics championship and our team was being called to the field for our final placement match. My team and I had worked all year for this moment, and it came down to one last game. This was the make it or break it moment... | 200-250 words "Team 99000Z, please make your way towards the field." It was the Ontario provincial robotics championship and our team was being called to the field for our final placement match. My team and I had worked all year for this moment, and it came down to one last game. This was the make it or break it moment... |
As a child, I would walk hand in hand with my grandpa over the red sand of our family home. I would always take care to walk at his pace, pausing for unneeded rest whenever he did. He would tell me stories of his life, his childhood, even his short-lived political ambitions. One topic he strayed from, however, was that... | As a child, I would walk hand in hand with my grandpa over the red sand of our family home. I would always take care to walk at his pace, pausing for unneeded rest whenever he did. He would tell me stories of his life, his childhood, even his short-lived political ambitions. One topic he strayed from, however, was that... |
My first interest in popular culture and attempt to major in design started from movies. As a child, my parents were very busy and a movie night at the local cinema once in a while was our only leisure activity. However, it was joyful to experience different stories and cultures of the world from the screen and it made... | My first interest in popular culture and attempt to major in design started from movies. As a child, my parents were very busy and a movie night at the local cinema once in a while was our only leisure activity. However, it was joyful to experience different stories and cultures of the world from the screen, and it mad... |
Kindly help me to reduce the word limit and also give me suggestions (read: honest criticism) to improve my essay. Thank you :)The prompt of essay is in the title. Spending a major part of my life in a small town of the state Rajasthan- Alwar, I never had ample opportunities and life outside of school. Since, most of m... | Kindly help me to reduce the word limit and also give me suggestions (read: honest criticism) to improve my essay. Thank you :)The prompt of essay is in the title. Spending a major part of my life in a small town of the state Rajasthan- Altar, I never had ample opportunities and life outside of school. Since, most of m... |
I believe that my family and friends would describe me as an open and sincere person. Unfortunately, this honesty is not always perceived positively by others. However, I believe that everyone should be honest with each other. Also I'm definitely a good listener. My curious personality that allows me to paint my life c... | I believe that my family and friends would describe me as an open and sincere person. Unfortunately, this honesty is not always perceived positively by others. However, I believe that everyone should be honest with each other. Also, I'm definitely a good listener. My curious personality that allows me to paint my life ... |
"Ma, if I became like Albert Einstein, would you be proud of me?" My ten-year-old self asked. From my parents' seemingly strict expectations of good grades and extracurriculars, I thought I would hear a simple yes from my mom, but instead, I heard the complete opposite: "Einstein might have been a genius, but a peacefu... | "Ma, if I became like Albert Einstein, would you be proud of me?" My ten-year-old self asked. From my parents' seemingly strict expectations of good grades and extracurriculars, I thought I would hear a simple yes from my mom, but instead, I heard the complete opposite: "Einstein might have been a genius, but a peacefu... |
'The bird fights its way out of the egg. The egg is the world. Who would be born must first destroy the world.' The quote from Demian by Hermann Hesse directs the goal of my life. The 'egg' is a comfy place. However, if you do not endeavor to hatch from the egg, the shell will be cracked by external forces very soon. W... | 'The bird fights its way out of the egg. The egg is the world. Who would be born must first destroy the world.' The quote from Damian by Hermann Hesse directs the goal of my life. The 'egg' is a comfy place. However, if you do not endeavor to hatch from the egg, the shell will be cracked by external forces very soon. W... |
11 years old, running away from the taunts that were thrown at me by my classmates in an attempt to make me feel inferior, I ran into the girls bathroom and leaned against a stall as I made a frantic effort to calm my racing heart and hold back the building tears. As the words of my tormentors rang in my ears, efforts ... | 11 years old, running away from the taunts that were thrown at me by my classmates in an attempt to make me feel inferior, I ran into the girls bathroom and leaned against a stall as I made a frantic effort to calm my racing heart and hold back the building tears. As the words of my tormentors rang in my ears, efforts ... |
When I was one, I could not talk properly like the other kids. My mother was so worried that she brought me to a counselling program where I was taught intensively on how to speak. Finally, words formed and came out of those tiny lips of the two-years-old me. Nevertheless, I could not say the alphabet "R" properly, eve... | When I was one, I could not talk properly like the other kids. My mother was so worried that she brought me to a counselling program where I was taught intensively on how to speak. Finally, words formed and came out of those tiny lips of the two-years-old me. Nevertheless, I could not say the alphabet "R" properly, eve... |
Friends are an essential part of anyone's life. True friends provide an environment free of judgement so one can be completely themselves without the fear of being judged and give a reason to stay strong in life. They can change who you are, boost your happiness, reduce your stress, and help you be a better person by i... | Friends are an essential part of anyone's life. True friends provide an environment free of judgement, so one can be completely themselves without the fear of being judged and give a reason to stay strong in life. They can change who you are, boost your happiness, reduce your stress, and help you be a better person by ... |
Here in Korea, the meaning of the name is considered to influence one's life so people name their baby based on yin and yang theory rooted in Asian philosophy. My name 'Hyunseo' means 'spread the light', composed by my grandfather to light up this world. Like sunlight could permeate into everything and brighten them, I... | Here in Korea, the meaning of the name is considered to influence one's life, so people name their baby based on yin and yang theory rooted in Asian philosophy. My name 'House' means 'spread the light', composed by my grandfather to light up this world. Like sunlight could permeate into everything and brighten them, I ... |
The COVID-19 pandemic took away many activities we previously took for granted. Pre-pandemic, I was heavily involved with volunteer work at retirement homes and hospitals where I led a group of musicians in bringing music to those who were less fortunate. I was also given the opportunity to exercise my leadership skill... | The COVID-19 pandemic took away many activities we previously took for granted. Pre-pandemic, I was heavily involved with volunteer work at retirement homes and hospitals where I led a group of musicians in bringing music to those who were less fortunate. I was also given the opportunity to exercise my leadership skill... |
I grew up in a part of India where if you are good at academics you are expected to pursue a science program in university. In India, we have exams such as JEE and NEET which you need to clear with flying colors to be accepted into any excellent science program. The pressure of these exams starts building up from the d... | I grew up in a part of India where if you are good at academics you are expected to pursue a science program in university. In India, we have exams such as SEE and MEET which you need to clear with flying colors to be accepted into any excellent science program. The pressure of these exams starts building up from the d... |
Prompt-The University of Miami's official mascot is the ibis. Folklore maintains that the native marsh bird is the last to take shelter before a hurricane hits and the first to emerge once the storm passes, making it an apt symbol of courage and resilience. Considering your ability to control your own motivation and be... | Prompt-The University of Miami's official mascot is the ibis. Folklore maintains that the native marsh bird is the last to take shelter before a hurricane hits and the first to emerge once the storm passes, making it an apt symbol of courage and resilience. Considering your ability to control your own motivation and be... |
I am writing UBC personal profile and stuck with the given question.Any comments would be appreciated ! Thank youMy prompt:Truly value myself is the most important aspect to me. Back to 2019, having completed the high school admission exam with one of the highest scores, I went to school with satisfaction and confidenc... | I am writing UBC personal profile and stuck with the given question. Any comments would be appreciated ! Thank you prompt:Truly value myself is the most important aspect to me. Back to 2019, having completed the high school admission exam with one of the highest scores, I went to school with satisfaction and confidence... |
I applied to Waterloo's health science, software engineering and the business and computer science program to develop skills necessary for my future as a health professional. I love the idea of cooperating with like-minded individuals to enhance both the health prevention and health treatment sectors of healthcare thro... | I applied to Waterloo's health science, software engineering and the business and computer science program to develop skills necessary for my future as a health professional. I love the idea of cooperating with like-minded individuals to enhance both the health prevention and health treatment sectors of healthcare thro... |
I am going to apply for UWC 2022-2024. Here is an essay I wrote as my personal statement. Please review this and feel free to show the mistakes I've done. Since reading books is one of my favourite leisure activities, I could learn only a little of the increasingly diverse and multicultural world through books. That li... | I am going to apply for UWC 2022-2024. Here is an essay I wrote as my personal statement. Please review this and feel free to show the mistakes I've done. Since reading books is one of my favorite leisure activities, I could learn only a little of the increasingly diverse and multicultural world through books. That lit... |
"That's all for today. Don't forget to try all the practice!" I ended the class late gleefully. I gazed at my 11th graders' codes, considering their progress over the past five months. As the former school representative in the National High School Competition of Informatics, I volunteered myself as a mentor in the sch... | "That's all for today. Don't forget to try all the practice!" I ended the class late gleefully. I gazed at my 11th graders' codes, considering their progress over the past five months. As the former school representative in the National High School Competition of Informatics, I volunteered myself as a mentor in the sch... |
If I don't get the scholarship, I will be a little disappointed but, it will not be the end of the line for me. I will see if I can get a student loan to pay a part of my tuition fee which I can repay once I complete my course. Another option will be a part-time job. If none of these works out, I will pursue engineerin... | If I don't get the scholarship, I will be a little disappointed but, it will not be the end of the line for me. I will see if I can get a student loan to pay a part of my tuition fee which I can repay once I complete my course. Another option will be a part-time job. If none of these works out, I will pursue engineerin... |
For as long as I can remember, I have lived the life of a nomad. Travel, settle, repeat. While this may sound fascinating, I never felt like I belonged to any particular nation, culture, or community. So, in search of identity, I promised to relish every travel experience by adapting to new norms and practices, appreci... | For as long as I can remember, I have lived the life of a nomad. Travel, settle, repeat. While this may sound fascinating, I never felt like I belonged to any particular nation, culture, or community. So, in search of identity, I promised to relish every travel experience by adapting to new norms and practices, appreci... |
Ever since I was younger I have always been considered the "art kid". My older siblings being ivy league students, my younger sister being top of our high school, and then there's me the "art reject, artist, loner, outcast", it seemed to me that I never accomplished goals that they did. While "Creativity takes courage"... | Ever since I was younger I have always been considered the "art kid". My older siblings being Ivy League students, my younger sister being top of our high school, and then there's me the "art reject, artist, loner, outcast", it seemed to me that I never accomplished goals that they did. While "Creativity takes courage"... |
"The only source of knowledge is experience." This quote from Albert Einstein sums up my philosophy of learning as a student, which has been so important to me as it has shaped my confidence as a knower. COVID-19 virtual school wasn't stimulating my mind like in real life, and it made me realize I had to continue my ed... | "The only source of knowledge is experience." This quote from Albert Einstein sums up my philosophy of learning as a student, which has been so important to me as it has shaped my confidence as a knower. COVID-19 virtual school wasn't stimulating my mind like in real life, and it made me realize I had to continue my ed... |
Hey, just having a bit of trouble writing my AIF for waterloo, any advice would be appreciated. Please tell us about your educational goals, your interest in your chosen program(s), and your reasons for applying to the University of Waterloo. If you have applied to more than one program please discuss your interest in ... | Hey, just having a bit of trouble writing my AIF for Waterloo, any advice would be appreciated. Please tell us about your educational goals, your interest in your chosen program(s), and your reasons for applying to the University of Waterloo. If you have applied to more than one program please discuss your interest in ... |
In 2020, Ahead of my senior year I was elected as a head prefect of the Student Christian Assembly at my high school. I had a vision for the plans and direction the community would take. Unfortunately, my dreams were never able to reach completion due to the pandemic, and as a result we were unable to hold gatherings o... | In 2020, Ahead of my senior year I was elected as a head prefect of the Student Christian Assembly at my high school. I had a vision for the plans and direction the community would take. Unfortunately, my dreams were never able to reach completion due to the pandemic, and as a result we were unable to hold gatherings o... |
Out of everything, one of the activities that had been the most impactful to me; especially during the pandemic would be fitness. Having a skinny stature for as long as I could remember, suggestions to work out and eat more came naturally from friends and relatives, but never took them seriously. Just until the start o... | Out of everything, one of the activities that had been the most impactful to me; especially during the pandemic would be fitness. Having a skinny stature for as long as I could remember, suggestions to work out and eat more came naturally from friends and relatives, but never took them seriously. Just until the start o... |
After suffering from social anxiety ever since my early childhood, I was never an out-going person. I didn't like public speaking and always stayed inside my comfort zone. When entering high school I knew it was the time to start maturing and that I had to step out of my little zone. My sister pestered me for days to j... | After suffering from social anxiety ever since my early childhood, I was never an out-going person. I didn't like public speaking and always stayed inside my comfort zone. When entering high school I knew it was the time to start maturing and that I had to step out of my little zone. My sister pestered me for days to j... |
I have attended two Indonesian public high schools, junior and senior, and one thing that those institutions share in common is seniority. This habit is exemplified within the intra-school organizations and clubs, which I joined nonetheless. It is not that I am a hypocrite, but I have a goal to deter the seniority in t... | I have attended two Indonesian public high schools, junior and senior, and one thing that those institutions share in common is seniority. This habit is exemplified within the inter-school organizations and clubs, which I joined nonetheless. It is not that I am a hypocrite, but I have a goal to deter the seniority in t... |
I realized that being a student at a top university like NTU is not an easy thing. But I believe that I can graduate with my efforts to become the best version of myself. The best version of me is by staying committed to being a person with perseverance, resilience, integrity, and always having any goals with good inte... | I realized that being a student at a top university like ITU is not an easy thing. But I believe that I can graduate with my efforts to become the best version of myself. The best version of me is by staying committed to being a person with perseverance, resilience, integrity, and always having any goals with good inte... |
As they say "food is the ingredient that binds us together"; it teaches me in a variety of ways and serves as a medium through which I can engage with others. Food has also served as a piece of canvas on which I've been able to create and experiment out an array of innovative recipes in order to expand my flavor palett... | As they say "food is the ingredient that binds us together"; it teaches me in a variety of ways and serves as a medium through which I can engage with others. Food has also served as a piece of canvas on which I've been able to create and experiment out an array of innovative recipes in order to expand my flavor palett... |
I was always passionate about science. Although I love many other subjects such as math, physical education and language, science fascinates me the most. Whether it's learning about wildlife, energy or the human body, I developed an interest in science early on. My curiosity in science sparked when we learned about spa... | I was always passionate about science. Although I love many other subjects such as math, physical education and language, science fascinates me the most. Whether it's learning about wildlife, energy or the human body, I developed an interest in science early on. My curiosity in science sparked when we learned about spa... |
I am motivated by success no matter the subject. Whether it be an activity that I am ecstatic about or enjoy less so, I am driven by the idea that I can improve. I believe that keeping track of my goals helps me to stay motivated on my many various activities. My love for sports has driven me to pursue swimming. Leadin... | I am motivated by success no matter the subject. Whether it be an activity that I am ecstatic about or enjoy less so, I am driven by the idea that I can improve. I believe that keeping track of my goals helps me to stay motivated on my many various activities. My love for sports has driven me to pursue swimming. Leadin... |
I grew up in a six-person household where the channels on our television never left the Chinese drama station, and the air was always filled with the aroma of Chinese food. But as soon as I left home, I'd go to a standard suburban elementary school and play on the playground like any other American kid. So as a first-g... | I grew up in a six-person household where the channels on our television never left the Chinese drama station, and the air was always filled with the aroma of Chinese food. But as soon as I left home, I'd go to a standard suburban elementary school and play on the playground like any other American kid. So as a first-g... |
My family's favourite story about me is from when I was three years old. My older sister had just started kindergarten, and would often bring home books that she would practice reading. They think that I either thought it was very impressive, or I was a little bit jealous of the attention she was getting from it. Eithe... | My family's favorite story about me is from when I was three years old. My older sister had just started kindergarten, and would often bring home books that she would practice reading. They think that I either thought it was very impressive, or I was a little jealous of the attention she was getting from it. Either way... |
Here's the opening:The start of a complicated relationship between me and art began at the age of three. A small kid who piggybacks the floor and draws her future in colorful colors on a large sketchbook. The thread has continued so far. I always have been convinced of my future from the beginning, dreaming that I will... | Here's the opening:The start of a complicated relationship between me and art began at the age of three. A small kid who piggybacks the floor and draws her future in colorful colors on a large sketchbook. The thread has continued so far. I have always been convinced of my future from the beginning, dreaming that I will... |
My essay:I had an 'it's okay disease.' A disease that makes me think is okay with anything.Even when I was sick, heard talking behind my back, someone making mistakes to me, or someone discomforting me, I always said, "It's okay." Saying "it's okay" had nothing to do with my real heart. This was caused by the desire to... | My essay:I had an 'it's okay disease.' A disease that makes me think is okay with anything. Even when I was sick, heard talking behind my back, someone makes mistakes to me, or someone discomforting me, I always said, "It's okay." Saying "it's okay" had nothing to do with my real heart. This was caused by the desire to... |
As I stray away from the liveliness of childhood and my metabolism slows down, staying active is becoming increasingly important in my daily routine. My dad's major heart attack in 2020 was an important wake-up call for my family to focus on improving our physical well beings. For me, the wake-up call presented itself ... | As I stray away from the liveliness of childhood and my metabolism slows down, staying active is becoming increasingly important in my daily routine. My dad's major heart attack in 2020 was an important wake-up call for my family to focus on improving our physical well beings. For me, the wake-up call presented itself ... |
Prompt:Tell us about who you are.How would your family, friends andor members of your community describe you? If possible, please include something about yourself that you are most proud of and why. (1500 Characters) Hello, my name is Allan Hu. Some of my titles would be the youngest sibling of a family of four, a seco... | Prompt:Tell us about who you are. How would your family, friends ardor members of your community describe you? If possible, please include something about yourself that you are most proud of and why. (1500 Characters) Hello, my name is Allan HU. Some of my titles would be the youngest sibling of a family of four, a sec... |
My diagnosis with ADD came as a surprise not only for me, but more so for my family and friends. I have always appeared as a confident person who knows what she wants, and aims for it, As opposed to the disorganized nature of ADD patients. This responsible image of mine is what got me voted as class president in my fre... | My diagnosis with ADD came as a surprise not only for me, but more so for my family and friends. I have always appeared as a confident person who knows what she wants, and aims for it, As opposed to the disorganized nature of ADD patients. This responsible image of mine is what got me voted as class president in my fre... |
Hello, this is my essay for my UBC application. Any feedback would mean a lot to me, thank you in advance! In the eyes of my parents, I am an emerging young adult who is independent and ready to shoulder responsibilities. I would often step up to chores such as cleaning, dish-washing, and preparing and cooking entire m... | Hello, this is my essay for my UBC application. Any feedback would mean a lot to me, thank you in advance! In the eyes of my parents, I am an emerging young adult who is independent and ready to shoulder responsibilities. I would often step up to chores such as cleaning, dish-washing, and preparing and cooking entire m... |
Of the many things important to me, knowing my limits is the highest. In my earlier years of high school, classes did not feel very intensive, and as such I did not put in much effort in my work as I felt that I was doing enough. Over time, my grades slowly dipped as classes began to increase in difficulty. At first I ... | Of the many things important to me, knowing my limits is the highest. In my earlier years of high school, classes did not feel very intensive, and as such I did not put in much effort in my work as I felt that I was doing enough. Over time, my grades slowly dipped as classes began to increase in difficulty. At first, I... |
Many things are important to me, yet one that stood out to me was taking initiative. When I was younger, I used to be terrified of even just talking, because I feared humiliation and disapproval. Yet, by staying in my comfort zone, I was never able to progress as a person and lacked a sense of purpose. It wasn't until ... | Many things are important to me, yet one that stood out to me was taking initiative. When I was younger, I used to be terrified of even just talking, because I feared humiliation and disapproval. Yet, by staying in my comfort zone, I was never able to progress as a person and lacked a sense of purpose. It wasn't until ... |
This is my essay: It was four years ago when I was lying on my bed, desperately trying to find what I really liked and wanted to do in the future. At that moment, I could think about anything as I was feeling a lot of pressure from school and family as I didn't know what I really liked, the only thing I knew was that I... | This is my essay: It was four years ago when I was lying on my bed, desperately trying to find what I really liked and wanted to do in the future. At that moment, I could think about anything as I was feeling a lot of pressure from school and family as I didn't know what I really liked, the only thing I knew was that I... |
It was my freshman year, preparatory SAT day at a college campus, and the exam had just ended. I got a free pizza slice from the school and made my way out of the campus building with not too much difficulty. Once I was outside, the side of the street that I was on looked unfamiliar, and I wasn't sure which way to go t... | It was my freshman year, preparatory SAT day at a college campus, and the exam had just ended. I got a free pizza slice from the school and made my way out of the campus building with not too much difficulty. Once I was outside, the side of the street that I was on looked unfamiliar, and I wasn't sure which way to go t... |
Researching & learning about the Indian Stock Market, Hedge funds, IPOs, Stocks & Companies has always been my deep-rooted passion. Calculus and Algebra were two parts of mathematics that strangely clicked for me. It was incredible how derivation and integration transpired, I was drawn to the subject. And combi... | Researching camp; learning about the Indian Stock Market, Hedge funds, IPOs, Stocks camp; Companies has always been my deep-rooted passion. Calculus and Algebra were two parts of mathematics that strangely clicked for me. It was incredible how derivation and integration transpired, I was drawn to the subject. And combi... |
I am applying to nurse school and would like others to read my short answer response to get some feedback. I am not very good when it comes to things like this. So, please, bear with me. Prompt:** Describe your perceptions and attitude about nursing today.In your answer, identify current information about the field of ... | I am applying to nurse school and would like others to read my short answer response to get some feedback. I am not very good when it comes to things like this. So, please, bear with me. Prompt:** Describe your perceptions and attitude about nursing today. In your answer, identify current information about the field of... |
As I embark on this new journey I have tried to dig deep and truly understand myself. In this process I have realized that I have been living to fulfill the expectations of others. Growing up in a traditional kingdom, I thought that the only way to reciprocate my parents' love and support was to work hard. I therefore ... | As I embark on this new journey I have tried to dig deep and truly understand myself. In this process I have realized that I have been living to fulfill the expectations of others. Growing up in a traditional kingdom, I thought that the only way to reciprocate my parents' love and support was to work hard. I therefore ... |
the essay: Throughout my childhood, curiosity was my driving force. I never hesitated to ask questions on every possible matter and didn't worry how dumb they would make me sound. In third grade, I participated in a science fair and built a balloon-powered car that could carry three times its weight. I remember obsessi... | The essay: Throughout my childhood, curiosity was my driving force. I never hesitated to ask questions on every possible matter and didn't worry how dumb they would make me sound. In third grade, I participated in a science fair and built a balloon-powered car that could carry three times its weight. I remember obsessi... |
My desires became my fuel. The summer before ninth grade, my parents sold our house. As my feet dragged across my room while packing boxes, I reminisced about all the things I would miss most. Goodbye to the kitchen that helped create my favorite meals. Goodbye to the school where I met my dearest friends. Goodbye to m... | My desires became my fuel. The summer before ninth grade, my parents sold our house. As my feet dragged across my room while packing boxes, I reminisced about all the things I would miss most. Goodbye to the kitchen that helped create my favorite meals. Goodbye to the school where I met my dearest friends. Goodbye to m... |
hopefully this falls under prompt 5 on the common app. The creaking of floors. The chattering of small children. The conversations between adults. The faint smell of body odor and sweat. I hated it all. "Well, what do you think? Do you want to do it?" my mother asked me as I put on my shoes. Her voice was loud enough t... | Hopefully this falls under prompt 5 on the common app. The creaking of floors. The chattering of small children. The conversations between adults. The faint smell of body odor and sweat. I hated it all. "Well, what do you think? Do you want to do it?" my mother asked me as I put on my shoes. Her voice was loud enough t... |
1.Outline your motivation for choosing the Glocal programme:how it complements and develops your previous studies, how it relates to your potential future career path, how it relates to your personal and academic interests. 2. Explain why you think that you are a good candidate for the programme given your previous stu... | 1. Outline your motivation for choosing the Local program:how it complements and develops your previous studies, how it relates to your potential future career path, how it relates to your personal and academic interests. 2. Explain why you think that you are a good candidate for the program given your previous studies... |
I had fallen in love with computers the first time I played a video game on one. By the time I reached high school, I tried coding games on my own. From then I started to fall in love with the world of coding. I knew by then that if I do something when I grow up, it should involve computers. I come from Thrissur, a sle... | I had fallen in love with computers the first time I played a video game on one. By the time I reached high school, I tried coding games on my own. From then, I started to fall in love with the world of coding. I knew by then that if I do something when I grow up, it should involve computers. I come from Tissue, a slee... |
On a cold winter morning of 2017, when my teammates told me that they didn't want me on the school debate team anymore, my world crumbled into pieces. Debating had been my passion ever since I stepped into the clubroom in 4th grade. With every weekly session, every lone speech practice, or every show debate, I felt my ... | On a cold winter morning of 2017, when my teammates told me that they didn't want me on the school debate team anymore, my world crumbled into pieces. Debating had been my passion ever since I stepped into the clubroom in 4th grade. With every weekly session, every lone speech practice, or every show debate, I felt my ... |
My friends and family hold great trust in me and would describe me as a very supportive, hardworking, and helpful person. Commonly, they call me tech-savvy as any kind of technical support I always get it sorted. My family believes and says I don't give up in any circumstances and challenge myself to reach the desired ... | My friends and family hold great trust in me and would describe me as a very supportive, hardworking, and helpful person. Commonly, they call me tech-savvy as any kind of technical support I always get it sorted. My family believes and says I don't give up in any circumstances and challenge myself to reach the desired ... |
I was on the verge of giving up, extra hours, revisions, nothing was working. I had heard of Attention Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder (ADHD) but never realized its true gravity until 10th grade when I got to tutor a 5th grader diagnosed with it. Initially, I was unaware & assumed she either disliked studying or jus... | I was on the verge of giving up, extra hours, revisions, nothing was working. I had heard of Attention Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder (ADHD) but never realized its true gravity until 10th grade when I got to tutor a 5th grader diagnosed with it. Initially, I was unaware camp; assumed she either disliked studying or jus... |
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