essay_id,essay_set,essay,Content,Organization,Word Choice,Sentence Fluency,Conventions,Prompt Adherence,Language,Narrativity,prompt_and_rubric_source,source_essay,general_rubric_guideline_source,overall_score 16452,6,"In order to build the Empire State building, some Of the workers endured problems while constructing it. The engeineeres and architects consulted first with the experts. The obstacles the builders had to face were, one the height. It was a thousand feet and it was putting stress on the buildings frame. Wind pressure also added stress to the one thousand foot building. Another big obstacle was nature itself. The winds were constantly shifting to the violent air currents. Even when the mooring mast was tethered or tied up the back part of the ship would sway from the wind. In the end the author says or implies that it was never meant to be built because of all the problems that came with it.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9692,4,The authoR concludes the stoRy with that sentence b/c she wanted to explain to you that she will do this again when the hibiscus is back in season.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6677,3,"In the essay, “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit,” the setting had a major impact on the character. The cyclist was trying to get to Yosemite National Park, but on the way, he had some troubles, the fact that there was not much civilization affected the cyclist because he was not able to refill his water bottles, so he grew very thirsty. Also, the many hills and the fact that it is summer impacted him greatly because he became tired out more easily and could not pedal as fast. When it says, “A tar like substance oozed out Wouldn’t cool down,” it showed how he wasn’t able to drink. Also, when he passed the grape juice factory, it must have been torture to him since he was so thirsty. If he hadn’t taken the advice of the men in the first place he would have had a much shorter ride and would not have been so exhausted. The setting affected the cyclist a lot in this essay.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15769,6,"How safe is it to have a large dirigible @CAPS1 above thousands of civilians? The builders had many problems to face will attempting to allow the dirigibles to dock at the empire state building. For one thing the mast was not yet even said to be ready in this excerpt ""to fix a mast at such a height made it desireable to postponed to a later date."" The landing gear was also not yet ready or sure to work. The idea of using dirigibles over such a crowded area was not even said to be relevantly smart.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13262,5,The mood was to show it was a comftorble feeling. To show about a family and how a family would take care for you and what not to explain what lifestyle makes someone feel great to make the feel safe and not live in a life where it will just wither away from you. That is the mood I think the author is trying to set,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3389,2,"People should not take all the books out for the librarie. Beacuse other peolpe would probley like to look at those books also. If people start taking books out, all the book will be gone .So that would mean where would be no books form people to look at. So thats why there should be a law that you can only have a book out for a given period of time . That would help to kept all the books in the liberary. So if people just start talking the book for the liberary there wont be any book left in the liberary to check out. So there needs to be a law that says that you can check out a sarthen numbers of books at a time. And how long you can have the books for . If you dont bring the books back in a certain amount of time you will be charged. The amount will build up every day you dont bring ther books in. Also if you dont bay the bill you dont get to check out books until you bay the ammount. So that would be a good idea for people not to steal or take the books. About the Book, moives, and magzines that are the liberary. All the books ,moives and magzines should stay on the shelves. Because if you take out one you should take out all off them. Beacuse every one needs to see these thing in life even if it has some thing bad like a movie or a magzine it should stay on the shelves. So if a book,magzine,or movie gettes taken off the shelfes all of them need to be taken off the shelf .Just becauseit not fare to there author , beacuse they toke time to make what ever they did. If you get them mad thill stop making book for me and you to read. So thats what I think about the things you should do if you try to take books off the shelf in the liberary.But if its some thing really really bad mabey you should get it taken off the shelfs at the liberary or at any where they sell that book,moive and magzine.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4662,2,"When people think of a library they think of a quiet place to study and read. Teachers use the libraries for many different things. One thing they use it for is movies on certain topics. Another is for books on certain people or events. They even use it to get magazines for projects and to catch up on the world outside of school. So what is my opinion on offensive materials getting removed? I'll tell you what it is. Kids watch movies in class all the time. Some are not appropriate at times, but some are very insiteful and helpful. I think if the teacher watches the movie first and thinks that it is too bad for children in say elementary it should be banned from that schools library, but for high schoolers chances are they have heard or seen worse. So with saying that movies should stay in the libraries of high schools but not all should stay in the elementary's. Books are another good resource if used correctly. They help kids in history learn about old war hero's and past events. Some books should be kept behind the counter and only used for certain classes though. Like for instance books that tell specifics about drugs. They should be taken off the shelves , put behind the counter; and if someone really needs a book about them like for medicine purposes to become a doctor then all they have to do is ask. Magazines are good for a couple of different nice things. One thing is projects. If you have to do a project over something like food and cant use a computer, magazines are a great way to get good pictures. Another thing its commonly used for is just flat out entertainment. Like when you get bored of reading a book that you just picked out because of looks or if a book is too hard to read you could get a magazine. So in reality some things should be kept and others taken away. People spend lots of time in the library for many different things and that will never change. Movies are a good source of entertainment and that won't change either. So I guess i'm half and half on keeping or getting rid of offensive materials.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4728,2,"I do not think that there is a need to remove offensive materials from libraries. Some people @MONTH1 find these things offensive, but I think that others will be greatly offended if they remove these things. Take rap music for example. There are many people that think that the lyrics of those songs are just terrible and offensive. Other people think that rap music is amazing. I do not think rap is very good at all, but I would not go the extent of saying that rap songs should not be played on the radio, and that the @CAPS1 should not be sold in stores. The same thing could be said for these materials in the library. Some @MONTH1 find them offensive but others greatly apreciate it. Some people @MONTH1 be interested in these topics. Just like some people @MONTH1 be interested in fantasy or comedy. It would not be fair for libraries to remove these materails from the library, and deny the people that do like them the rite to rent these materials. Another factors is the maturity of the reader. If the person who is reading book or viewing movies that @MONTH1 be offensive is viewing them for clear interest then is no problem with it. But if the reader is not reading for interest, then there is a problem there. It all depends on the maturity that people have when they enter a library. The materials in libraries are there to give everyone a chance to find something that interests them. Just because someone else @MONTH1 find those materials offensive is no reasons to take them off the shelf. I can see why some parents @MONTH1 be upset that their kids @MONTH1 see some of the things in the library that @MONTH1 not be apropriate, but all the libraries that I have been to have a had a special area for kids materials. If the parents where woried about their kids seing some the questionable materials they could bring the kid to that area. I dont think that these materials that @MONTH1 seem offensive to some people should be removed from libraries. Everyone is going to be affended by something and it is not fare to deprive others of those materials even it is offensive to some.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13183,5,"In this memoir Narciso talks about his life. As @CAPS1 talk @CAPS1 always creates a @NUM1 creates a mood by talking about his environment. In paragraph @NUM2 it say, ""that ""family"" had nothing to do with being blood relative."" @CAPS1 created a good mood cause @CAPS1 knows @CAPS1 has a lot of friends.Secondly, Narciso creates a mood talking about his first friend. In paragraph @NUM3 it says, Alegria lived above us, and Alegria graced our kitchen tables for meals more often than not. Good mood for having a friend thats so @NUM4 creates a mood talking about his parents. In paragraph @NUM5 it says, ""My mother and fathe had come here with such courage, without any knowledge of the language or the culture. @CAPS1's in a good mood because his parents had alot of courage.Clearly Narciso creates a mood in the memoir.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1122,1,"I believe that computers have a strong negative effect on society but a stronger positive one. Computers these days are very advanced and allow you to talk to your friends, allow you to acess information more efficiently, and have increased our man power in scientific research. Almost every teen has a screen name that allows you to chat online with your friends. This function keeps kids in touch and active. Eventhough instant messaging can distract kids from their daily life it can also be amazingly helpful. Just last week a friend of mine had forgotten to write down their homework and easly contacted online. I was able to let them know @NUM1 a matter of seconds. Like wise, with this online communication you can also talk and and video chat as if you right there with your friends not everyday do you get to go hang out with your friends so this is an easy alternative. Not only is quick and easy it's free. Computers keep kids off their phones and from jucking up the bill and causing those loud annoying phone bill conversations how to limit your texting. The most important effect computers have on society is the gathering of information. The internet allows people to acess millions of websites and light speed. Every second of the day their is someone on the internet searching for date that they would have to go to the library to get. Computers are a key part in society and we depend on them without them we would all be lost. They provide an easier way to life that us lazy @CAPS1 need to survive. The internet keeps us updated and informed on whats going on all around the world without even going there. We need the internet and we couldn't acess it without computers. One of the largest aspects of life computers have helped us with is research. Computers have multiplied our man power giving us more organized way to store date. Recently I was watching a show where they had a computer testing items for @CAPS2 a process that would take a human weeks. They also help us be different and more creative people. With the computer came smaller more compact computers till they were able to fit in the palm of our hand. They have lead us to think we can do greater things in life and keep our earth safe and to stop damaging it as much. They're lead us to research the unknown areas of the world where @NUM2 years ago a scientist with a pad of paper didn't have dare to even think about. Computers have linked the world through communication and information and have exelled us to greater heights in understanding how we came to be. Overall society needs computers and they have and overwhelming positive affect on society.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1697,1,"Dear local newspaper editor, @CAPS1 you love haveing the enternet at your finger tips. Recently, it has been bought to my attention that some experts are concerned that people are spending too much time on their computers. I firmly believe that this is correct. My three arguments are its not healthy, the friends you meet up there are siber friends and bad @CAPS5 @MONTH1 occur. First of all, being on the computer too much is not healthy. This reminds me of my friend named @CAPS2. @CAPS2 used to be humerous, outgoing and play alot of sports. One @CAPS3 day, her mother bought her a laptop. This laptop was blue and white-her two faverite colors. She was on it all day and all night. She took it with her everywhere she went. Well, it got to the point whare she stopped the sports, gained some weight and the sadness creptped upon her. She was in a depresion mode. She went to the doctors and they told her that she had to give up the computer and play with it for only two days a week for five hours only. She listened to the doctor and it took her about three months to get back to the fun @CAPS2 she used to be. Being on the computer too much can harm you and the people around you. Second of all, the friends you meet on the enternet are called cyber friends. You don't know who they realy are, where they realy live, or their real age. They can tell you any thing they want because they know that that's a little fantasy world. That is mently not healthy. It is very important for human beings to be socialy active. Being on the computer too much can harm your brain also. Third of all, @CAPS5 @MONTH1 pop up. If you are the type of person who is on the computer every chance you get like becky, it is not good for you or the device. Being on the computer can harm even the computer. Well, you've read my arguments and ideas. Please take them into consideration.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15013,6,In the excerpt the builders had wanted dirigibles to dock at the top of the empire state building. They found that they couldn't do that because the winds would push the dirigibles in all different dirrections. And also there was a law that air crafts had to be a certain height in the air.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15117,6,"In the excerpt the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles. The reason why the builders faced obstacles was because ""architects could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof."" An example is ""A thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame."" The stress of the dirigible moor would make the buildings frame bend and become weak. That is just one obstacle that the builders faced, but there is many more.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12862,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is that they feel more responcible to help support themself more than anyone else dose as growing up From the young to older, and have been living off their own from being away from your families. I think the mood of the auther is that they feel good about themself and happy to have a better life from the past until now and learn more about themself as they're mood becomes happy and joyful about themself for ""having a better life."" ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4717,2,I think that no books should be taken away. I think that if a aduld or a child wants to look at something or read about something they should have the right to. If someone were to go to a public library that allowed people to listen to music and they cant because the song has curse words in it they should be allowed to. And if it bothers someone the bothered person can leave. If someone wants to look at a magazine and they can't because it is inapropiate who cares. And if people wanted to check out a movie at a library and they cant because it's to violent so the library doesn't have it. I think librarys should be able to have whatever inventory they want. And if it's to violent or if the music is to dirty just don't let children get a hold of it.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13395,5,"Narciso Rodriguez from Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives is non-fiction. The mood created by the author is strong because he loves his family for going to america. Love is a strag mood to show. He says in the story ""My parents always Kept their arms and their door open to many people we considered family, Knowing that they would do the same for us. That shows the authers and his parents mood.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13137,5,"In the memoir in ""@PERSON1 Rodriguez"" by @PERSON1, the overall mood of the storie is happy.The reason its happy is if you hear the tone how shes telling us. ""I was born into a simple house situated in a two-family, blonde brinck building in the *** section of Newark, New jersy. My young parents created our traditional Cuban home."" @CAPS1 sounds happy to be Cuban it what @CAPS1 is. thats what the mood of the memoir.Another reason it's happy is ""I learned the real defenition of family And for this I will never forget that house or its gracious neighborhood. @CAPS1 cares about his familey @CAPS1 now feel what his parents showed him thats why the overall mood is happy.In the memoir ""@PERSON1 Rodriguez"" by @PERSON1 the overall mood of the memoir is happy.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13379,5,"The mood created by the @CAPS1 indacates how family and happiness is the best thing, and how A home is were you feel safe and happy, not just for space, but safeness, Narciso made his home a good place for him and his family. He hade a place to call home.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15725,6,"The obstacles that builders faced while building the Empire State Building was, first the buildings structure was not strong enough, the winds were too strong, and the law. The buildings structure could not hold a @NUM1 foot dirigible. The winds would make the dirigible move, which could also ruin the frame of the building. Also the law said that the airships could not fly too low over a city. That was some of the obstacles that the workers faced while building the Empire State Building.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9893,4,"By ending the story in the way the author has in the short story “winter Hibiscus,“ the author provides a sympathetic understanding for the reader of seang at her struggle to live in another country & her sadness of wishing to be back home. I think the author was attempting to end the story with a strong feeling for a strong note of Saeng's personality to draw the reader back into what they had just read. For example, by repeating statement on the test saying “ I will take that test again,” the author gives us that understanding that Saeng has not given up & lets the reader know she will stand & live strong.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6036,3,"I think the features of the setting that affected the cyclist were the terrain “Flat road was replaced by short rolling hills” this shows that he is a warm and trobled by the change of the terrain. He also fells alone “I toiled on at some point tumbleweed crossed my path” he also. Though he was in a ghost town. “Summer time” rattled around in the dry honeycombs of my detorating brain"" he felt that he was slowly dying. He also though he was losing it, the sun had a great impact on him because he wiped his face to make sure he was no seeing a mirage. But through it all he had hopes the author also wants us to have hope and keep on going even though things dont look good keep moving foward never look back and alway's be positive and take advanage of your surrounding. This is the message the author tries to give",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9979,4,"I believe that the author ended the story with this paragraph to show the persistence of the main character. I believe this because in the beginning of the story when she is walking home, she states that she failed the drivers test. In the last paragraph, she states that after winter is over she will take the test again when her hibiscus blooms. Her persistence allows her to push through life as if she was a plant trying to survive the winter.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 588,1,"Dear the newspaper, Computers are great resources and are helpful in many ways. @CAPS1 we have the technology, why not use it? Computers give us simple yet very useful programs like @ORGANIZATION1 word or photoshop, outstanding abilities to look up any information you want, and keep in touch with far away relatives useing facebook or video chats like skype. Wouldn't it @CAPS1 you were just about to finish an essay for school when you mispelled a word and had to start all over?! Well this is what happened frequently when computers weren't around and you had to use a typewritter. Unlike typewriter, computers have programs such as michrosoft word, where @CAPS1 you make a simple mistake, all you have to do is press backspace. With programs like this, essays and flyers are extremly easy to make. There are also a lot of other programs like powerpoint, photoshop, or video-editing. These are real time. You can just put your camera chip into your computer and ""walaa"" instant editting. Programs that you can download make life a whole lot simpler and saves you a lot of time. Along with the programs to write a paper, you can use the internet and google to get the information! All you have to do is type in a shourt phrase and instantly get thousands of sites, all packed with information. And instead of spending ten minutes in a dictionary. com and find it in a split second. I took a tally and @NUM1 out of every @NUM2 kids use the internet at least once a day! Lets say you had a party coming up, but had nothing creative to cook for food. Just type in creative foods for a party"" and you will easily have hundreds of newe recipies to choose from. The internet is an extraordinary invention that is very simple and helpful to use. Antoher fantastic thing to use on a computer is social connections such as myspace, facebooks, or skype. This is a great way to catch up with old friends from highschool or college, or plan a big event while being relaxed at home. @CAPS1 you had soccer practice at night so you couldn't hang out with friends, but still had time to do a quick chat, this is perfect. Skype and other video chats are amazing. They are very convienent when you need to speak with someone all the way in @LOCATION1 for busieness and don't want to travel. All you have to to is open a link a ""bamm"" they're right there! These are great for buisnesses and long distance ralationships. I have an uncle and aunt who live in and we use skype to keep in touch. It a fantastic way to communicate acros the globe. Computers @MONTH1 make as ""look""lazy, but give us a lot. Saved time from their convenence to run around and get exersize. Computers have amazing programs that help us in all ways, internet for quick information, and social connections to keep in touch with family, friends and buisnesses. Computers are one of the most convenent things we have and I strongly suggest you would agree with me.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10023,4,"Its the start of a new life. She has a new new school and a new plant, Its is like she has a connection to the plant, when it grow she grows stronger and more confident. That’s when she said when they come back when the hibiscus is budding she will be ready for that test.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16231,6,"Some of the obstacles the builders of the Empire State building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there were safety, nature and the law. One of the greatest obstacle was safety. Since blimps needed to be lighter than air, most are filled with helium or hydrogen. ""Most dirigibles from outside the @LOCATION1 used hydrogen rather than helium and hydrogen is highly flammable."" This is a big obstacle because if the blimp is high off the ground of @CAPS1 and then catches on fire, that could end badly another obstacle was nature; due to violent air currents' which made buildings sway. This is also bad because if the blimp moves or the building sways into the building than one or the other could break. The last obstacle was the law, which was against 'airships flying too low over urban areas'. So if they did build the mast, it would be even illegal to get a dirigible close. So those are some obstacles builders faced in building the Empire State building to dock blimps.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12685,5,"In the memoir, the author creates a mood of love and community. In paragraph two the author describes his childhood home with words like traditional, passionate, and congregation. These words set the tone for the rest of the memoir in which love in helping the community are key themes. It gives me the feeling that I could walk into their home and be welcomed with open arms even as a complete stranger. These themes are reinforced in the last few sentences when the author ends speaking about his gracious neighborhood and how he learned to love.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16227,6,"to allow Dirigibles to @CAPS1 on the empire state @CAPS2 builders would have to face tough obstacles. One obstacle would be that technology was growing in the 1930's by the time they were @CAPS3 with the @ORGANIZATION1 and planes were invented. ""the as yet unsolved problem of mooring airships to a fixed mast at such a height made it Desirable to Postpone to a later date the finel installation of the landing gear."" this @CAPS4 proves that they already made technology to land Dirigibles Safely but, @CAPS5 to see if the mast really worked. This @CAPS6 that technology was invented @CAPS7 than the builders could even make the mast at the top of the empire State building. Later on the figured that a dirigible would be unsafe At the top of a mast becuse the wind would blow it arond and crash into the Building. It was @CAPS8 to begin with.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7412,3,The first town the cyclist came to was like a ghost town because there was nobody was there. The next town wasn’t any better because it was @NUM1 miles down the road. The cyclist faced some problems while on the journey. Some of these problems included snakes - The fact that he wos running out of water- the hill-and the condition of the road.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4748,2,"No, materials should not be removed from the libraries.First most of books,movies and,music are the best way to support difffernt things.They all have there type of way of convinicing you.There are many different ways to understand but those are certainly the best ways. Like a movie some people like to see things to understand them.Because it take times for some people to see instead of reading or listening.It take people to just seat and watch is a great way.Some people that look at a movie an a wrong way get the wrong type of thought about something which make it offensive to them. Like music is a great way to understand what someone is trying to say or get across.You have to take time out to really listen and here what they are taking about.If you here a song once and then you just take it a wrong way u never let your mind here what they said.Some people let one word or two make u think differnt about the song.So before u judge listen to the whole song. A book one of the worlds best way to understand were someone is comeing from.A book is like a short life.If judge a book bye its first couple paragraphs you would never get a meaning out of it.With a book you have to give it a chance to seek in your mind so that you do get an understanding.A book can tell u alot of things.So some people take it offensive. These types of materials should never be removed from labraries.This things are great ways to understand things.So if you take one thing offensive try another way maybe its a better way for people to understand it.Without this materials we would never understond,discovery anythong in are worl",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3906,2,"No Censorship Do you enjoy reading interesting books, watching superb movies, or listening to appealing music that some people don't approve of? Most people would answer yes to the question because anything that a person reads, watches, or listens to @MONTH1 be found offensive or crude to someone else. Certain materials in libraries should not be removed from shelves if they are found offensive because different people find different materials offensive, people sometimes specifically come to libraries to search out materials they can't find elsewhere, and if a person finds a material offensive, they don't have to keep reading, watching, or listening to it. The first reason reason why censorship shouldn't occur in libraries is because different people find different materials offensive. Each person is different, and people have all sorts of opinions on books, movies, magazines, music, etc. Also, several different ethnicities exist in the world and many nonfiction books educate people on different cultures around the world. The ethnicity of the people living in the culture @MONTH1 find what the authors of nonfiction books are writing about them offensive because the book is talking about something in their culture they wouldn't want the public hearing about. However, the public needs to be educated on the cultures of different people. Students do research in libraries for research projects and essays. Also, books pertaining to racism such as To @CAPS1 A @CAPS2 and books about slaves @MONTH1 be offensive to the race that is being victimized in the book. In contrast, some people @MONTH1 love the book because of the a good theme, symbolism, word usage, etc. So, who would be the judge of whether a material is offensive of not? If the person who is doing this for a certain library finds many materials in the library offensive, the whole library could close down because many materials that could have been popular were taken out of the library. Another reason why certain materials shouldn't be removed off shelves if they are found offensive is because sometimes people specifically come to libraries to search out materials they cannot find elsewhere. Libraries are the one place that people go if they are looking for that certain book or maybe even a movie they can't find at a video store. In my experience, there have been an infinite number of times where I have wanted to read a book I have heard about, and I've gone straight to the library and found it there. Also, because no video store exists in the town I live in, I go to the library for movies because I know they have a large selection. Some of the books and movies I or other people like @MONTH1 be found offensive to others, so if they were taken off of library shelves,I'm not sure if I would go to the library as often. A third reason why censorship shouldn't occur in libraries is because people don't have to read what they @MONTH1 find offensive. Everyone has the choice of what materials they acquire from a library, unless it's something they have to read for school. If a person hears about a book that @MONTH1 be found offensive to them, why would they read the book. Also, if a person accidentally checks out a book or watches a movie from the library that they find offensive, they can always just stop reading the book or watching the movie. Censorship shouldn't occur in libraries because everyone has different opinions. Libraries assume that if someone finds a material offensive, they'll just stop reading it. Also, if libraries take out all the materials anyone finds offensive, what will be left to read, watch, or listen to?",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6743,3,"The setting affects the cyclist in alot of ways. The first way is that he was riding in the middle of a desert in June. If he was riding in @LOCATION1, it woudn't be painfully hot. Also, the rolling hills probablly didnt help If it was mostly down hill, he would have been fine. Riding a bike up a hill when your tired is near impossible.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4324,2,"I think that any book or movie should have some warning sighns apon it, to insure that all peaople know what they are going to experience before reading or seeing anything. sSome movies or books read or watched, should have an age limit too. Some of the things people find offensive, other people @MONTH1 not and if taken all of the stuff out of movies or books @MONTH1 cause people not to go see or read as much movies or books. In alot of music some things might be offensive, but if you don't apriciate what they say in the song then dont listen to that group. There are some rap artist that say some things people might not like but, you dont have to listen to them there are alot more bands and diffrent kinds of music to choose from. It would b hard taken stuff out of movies and music like that because it might take alot of what the people want to see. In magazines alot of people including i like hearing the trooth about celebrities and interesting facts about people and movies, that alot of people @MONTH1 not know. If parents dont like there children reading those kinds of books have them go buy a set that they will enjoy haveing there kids read.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15247,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many problems in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. When it says in the passage, ""could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State building's flat roof,"" this means that the architects would have to modify and strengthen the building for a ""thousand-foot dirigible"" to land there. Over @MONEY1 of changes had to be made for this. Safety was another problem. Dirigibles from other countries used hydrogen instead of helium. Because hydrogen is highly flammable, downtown New York could have been destroyed by a large fire if a dirigible caught fire there. Nature itself was also a problem. ""Winds on top of the building were constantly shifting."" This would cause the dirigible to swivel around, which would be dangerous. The architects came in contact with many problems.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3774,2,"I disagree that certain material, books,movies, or magazines should be removed that are offensive to some from the shelves of libraries. There are three reasons why I argue this topic. One reason is that books, music, etc. that are inappropiate should not be in a section that a child would go and look for a book. A second reason is that for a child to check-out a book and the book is inappropiate, they should have identification to show that they are of age. The third reason I think that things like that should stay on shelves is because adults have books, movies, music,etc. for them for many reasons. Ther should be nothing inappropiate in a library that a child can get a hold of. A child should only have things appropiate that they can grab so parents do not have to be worried about the things they child hear, see, or read. There are some libraries that will let a child get a magazine or book, and let the child check the book or magazine out. This is where th problem begin. All libraries should identitify each child when they check-out a book, magazine, or music. that why movies are rated, so that a parent could what kind of movie their going to be watching. A parent should keep a close eye on what their child read or see. I think that things inappropiate should stay on shelves, but I also think it shoud stay in the adult section of the library. Childeren should not be able to go in the section for the adults. The inappropiate things on the shelves could be useful for the adults in some cases. There are some material that a adult @MONTH1 need to help in life. In conclusion, childeren should not be able to get a hold of inappropiate material in a library, all libraries should identify someone the inappropiate material,and adults should be able to have this type of material on shelves in libraries",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10426,4,"The author concluded this story with the paragraph because, Saeng is explaing to the reader’s that she will take the test again when the time is right. When things seem to be getting better she will retake the test. That is why the authour used that paragraph to conclude her story.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9183,4,because she is confused and is not yet youst to the country she is in how so she can concentrat on her test as soon as the flower will plown because she feels more like home she thinks that she will do better on the test,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9323,4,I think the author concludes the story with this paragraph because she failed her driving test the first time and she was saying to herself that she will take it again.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4187,2,"CENSORSHIP @CAPS1: @CAPS2 paper Do I believe the certain materials, such a book,music,movies,magazines,ect., should be removed from the shelves if the are found offensive.my opinion is the if some one wants to write a magazines or a book is okay because the are giveing there opinion know some people just have to say what they believe and some to fight for what they want not just censorship has there fight every one has one. Some materials like music,movies and magazines need to be censor because the kids how go to the libraries kids who are like @NUM1 @NUM2 grade or maybe smaller then that. We need to clean the libraries from thigs the kids are not old enough to see or to hear.Libraries are a place to study and to read a good book or maybe a magazine we have to censor the bad languge and the bad pictures. This can be very offensive for some parents beacuse the @MONTH1 talk about the color of another person or a bad language to offen the goverment. People don't have the actittud to stop with this bad songs how contain censorship see somepeople who write this they say the peolpe don't have the actittud to be or say what they want, i think the we need people like that to just point fingers and say thats the bad guy but enswer this what good have you done to clean the libraies. Censorship is just a small fight about removeding bad contains from the shelves this is just a call make your city a good place to live help the libraries help today change you future tomorrow make a differens",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3504,2,"I think they should remeove it if the publick thinks its offensive. I think it should be that way about every thing. If something is offending you then you should say something about it. Im not saying that it will be takin care of all the time but you might get lucky and someone might fix it so your not offened all the time. Growing up at home dad would always tell me if I didn't like something then don't do it, unless it was somethin that had to be done then I would have to do it. So when something happens that I don't like, I either change my ways or I aviode whatever it is. I rairly change my ways though. Some times that is a bad thing though, but who hasn't mad a mistake or two? This is really hard for me to right about beacuse I don't care what other people think. So I really don't get offened. I do know some people the get offened easy though. I try to stay away from them beacuse you have to watch what you say all the time. To me thats no fun, I mean come on dude you have to be able to take a joke. If more people were easy going then I wouldn't be writing this essa. I bet there would be a lot less droma to but I dont know. If you know of a book, movie, anything that will or might offened you, just dont read it again. It might not offened the next reader. They might really like the book or whatever it is. All you have to do is stay away from what ever it is that is bothering you. After a wile you will forget about it. I guess if it really really bothered you, and there was a lot more people that felt the same way about the same thing then yes remove it. If there is only a hand full of people saying they are offened then I would just tell them sorry but more people like it better so it will stay.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6248,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist by the hottnes of the deserts of California because the cyclist was sweating, and drinking his water bottles. Also when the cyclist saw the building, he thought he could rest and maybe get a ride to where he was going but, the building was abandoned years earlier so the cyclist couldn’t stop. These are some features of the setting that affect the cyclist.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9785,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because its a very good ending paragraph that grabs your attention a little bit. Also it shows that the girl is determined to pass her test, so that makes you think this is a determind story. This is why the author concluded the story with this paragraph.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12314,5,"There are few moods created. They are comfort, Love and sacrifice. Comfort because of the way @PERSON1 described his home, parents, and neigborhood families. Love because his parents loved him and each other very much, and they cared about what they did and their family. Sacrifice because his parents sacrificed their comforting home to move to @LOCATION1 for their son. That was difficult for them, but @ORGANIZATION1 appreciated that. He loves his parents what they did for him.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3390,2,"I believe that all the uncensored books, movies, music, and magazines in a library should be taken off the shelves and put into a single room in the library and be labeled as the @CAPS1 @CAPS2. The children that go into the library at most libraries have a space where its just kids books but when the kids go with their parents or someone that is older up to the teenager and @CAPS1 @CAPS2 they dont know what they are looking at when they just pick up a random book off of the shelf and/or rack. Some people @MONTH1 think that it shouldn't be like that because they are weary of who might see them go into a little room marked @CAPS1 @CAPS2. However, if you don't want anyone to see you go into that room you just simply don't go in it. So by secluding the @CAPS1 books, magazines, videos, etc. you can keep the children from just picking up any book that has uncensored pictures or grabbing a video that the parents @MONTH1 not look at and end up being an @CAPS1 film and then the kid then might want to keep seeing the stuff like that when he reaches puberty he will be eager to have sexual entercourse with a boy/girl. Having said that, i hope that you see how my idea of sectioning off the @CAPS1 stuff will keep them out of the @CAPS1 stuff and keep them from having sexual entercourse at as early of an age as thirteen. As far as music goes, there really isn't a way to completely keep kids from listening to music such as rap that has foul language and it sometimes talks about having sex and drugs and the kids think that the artist who wrote the song made it to be a big shot and they did drugs and had sex and look how they turned out. The best way, in my eyes, to keep kids from listening to rap is for their parents to not let them listen to it while they are with them. However, the other music like @CAPS5 @CAPS6 and @CAPS7 or even hip-hop rarely has any references to the topics of rap music. I could also argue that parents should watch out for their kids to be aware of the consequences of some of the actions they take due to these reasons and they should take the action of diciplining the kids for their actions",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9688,4,"I think that the author concludes the story with this paragraph is because Saeng feels like that will be the right time to take over her driving test over and when the hibiscus is budding. And another reason would be because the authors wants to show her determination,",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6899,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist in a larger way, almost resulting in a very sevior situation. The cyclist was in a desert. Like terria, which was not dinsely populated on his trail, there was a lack of fresh water supplys, and the tempatures is more extreme. The cyclist could easily have faintid from heatstroke, due to the lack of water and excessive heat and work that his was doing peatling. Had the area been more populated, he would have had more chances to stock up on water greatly indecriasing his risk of heat stroke. There was also the snakes which presentid danger for him, has he been bitting then he would be at least @NUM1 miles from the closet help which could proven fetal. Had the setting been, say a city park, on a populated country side, them thi setting would had provided exponeutaly loss prodioms and dangers for the cyclist.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10164,4,"Clearly From rending the story Winter @CAPS1, the author @CAPS2 this phrase “when they come Back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test Again” in the story because the passage relates to the title of the story Winter @CAPS1.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16084,6,"The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigables to dock there was that the stress of the dirigables load and wind pressure could have caused problems to the buildings foundation. A thousand-foot dirigble, held by a single cable tether. would add stress to the buildings frame.Safety was another issue, most dirigbles outside the United States used hydrogen, instead of helium. This is a problem because hydro gen is highly flammable. On May 6, 1937, the German dirigble Hindenburg was destroyed by fire in New Jersey. the accident would have been more dangerous in New York because the city is densely populated.Another reason why they faced problems to allow dirigables to dock is because there was an existing law against airships flying too close over urban areas. In December 1930, the @ORGANIZATION2 dirigble did attempt to reach the mooring mast but could not reach because of the winds, fearing that it may blow the dirigble onto sharp spires of other buildings. This would puncture the dirigbles shell.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9265,4,"Why the counclude the story saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, When the snows melt and geese return and this hibiscus is budding then I will will take that test again is to leave suspense. But he mean that saeng ate all the plant so next year she will have the test not to eat it. This is why the author ended the story with that.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1101,1,"Dear, @CAPS1 I am writting this article on computers to inferm you my oppinun on computers positive and negotive efects. The reason why computers are so succsesful is beacuse of some of the great imformation they. Such as directions to a place until you are going to or home imformation on a subject or a pearson. Althoug these all sound good any one can post imformation on the internet so some imformation misnt not all be accrate. Some reasons why the computer is bud is beacuse of signs wich are not safe and can give your pearsonal imformation to a and comeing back to bud you in the future. Also webite or pop up icon are not suttebul for younger kids and exposeing them to to mature for them. Lastly talking on the computer is apart of our everyday lives such as emails almost every american whita computer here. A email, this is a great to relie or. Also the new sorse of web witch giving you the ability to see peaple and into the computers wich is raipidly growing in the @LOCATION1 @CAPS2 all in this article this you my point of veiw on computers.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12642,5,"The mood created by the auther was happy, thoughtful, and very polite. Narciso talked about his family and his life! He also was talking about how he loved his family and what he does best like cooking and playing his Cuban music.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4453,2,"Children all around the world find themselves wandering through the library every day. These children are exploring the literature world to learn and grow. The library @CAPS2 a wonderful place with many genres of literature such as children books, nonfiction books, fiction books, adult books, movies, etc. There are certain genres for certain age groups, and there are a lot of materials in libraries that parents do @CAPS1 want their children to even hear the name. I think that it @CAPS2 normal for parents to feel this way but it @CAPS2 @CAPS1 neccesary. Children should have the right to explore the literature world however they want. Reading different types of literature @CAPS2 a terrific way of learning and library shelves should @CAPS1 be stripped of the books occupying the space. There are many different types of books, movies, magazines, and music on the shelves in a library. These are all great forms of literature and a way of learning different things. Although, there are a lot of parents who do @CAPS1 want there children 'exposed' so such materials. If a child want's to read a book, let he or she read it for crying out loud! Parents might say that it @CAPS2 'corrupting' their child but, books and music don't corrupt children, it's the environment and people around them that have said ability to cause such corruption. It @CAPS2 a very normal thing for a parent to be protective of his or her child, but to a certain extent. A parent @CAPS2 supposed to help their child grow and learn right from wrong. They have every right to protect their child from dangers in the world, but @CAPS1 to keep them from learning the art of literature. They're @CAPS1 supposed to sheild their child from all the faults the world has, even if it @CAPS2 a book. Literature in every form @CAPS2 a great way of learning. Libraries shouldn't have to strip the shelves of wonderful books crated in the literature world for one's entertainment or learning. If a child want's to read a book they should have every right to read that book. They should be able to explore however they desire.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12191,5,"The mood of the memoir is appreciation. I think it's this mood because in the final paragraph the author says, ""... I will never forget that house or it's gracious neighborhood or the many things I learned there about how to love."" @CAPS1 fact is, in paragraph @NUM1, @PERSON1 talks about how he kept thanking his parents for everything he had. He states, ""I've often told them that what they did is a much more courageous thing than I could have ever done."" I guess he is just very grateful for his parents, his childhood, everything and everyone he has ever met, had or done in his life. If I were in his shoes, I'd be grateful, too. This opened my eyes and now, I, too, am grateful for everything and everyone I have in my life.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13530,5,"The mood portrayed in Narciso Rodriguez's memoir is closeness. The first way in which the extreme closeness of Narciso's childhood is displayed in the memoir is through the way that, ""all of the cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship"" when, during the time period that this story is taking place in, the many different immigrants would never usualy even think of mingaling with each other. This shows that, in Narciso's youth nobody cared about race and every person in his neighbor hood was extremely close to the friendly people who surrounded them, regardless of ethnicity. The second form in which the tight bond between his literal family and his many neighbors is describing all of his aquaintances as ""family"" that have a close enough bond to each other to be able to show up at each others doors and immediatly be taken in and fed a meal that the Rodriguez family worked hard to procure. This insight into the early years of Narciso's life shows that he grew up with the understanding that ""...' family' had nothing to do with being a blood relative"" and that you should treat all of your friends as you would family. Finaly, and possibly the most extreme way that the @CAPS1 shoed their extrordinary closeness to their friends and relatives is by keeping their, ""... arms and their door open to the many people we considered a family..."" This willingness to give anyone they knew a place to stay and food to eat shows how extremly close they were to everyone the knew. Wether it be by always having their door open, to mixing between many races, or considering almost everyone family the Rodriguez family showed extreme closeness with the rest of human kind.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7668,3,"Different features of the settings affect the cyclist. The setting of the story, which is based in the desert has a negative affect on the character. “The desert land is baron, leaving him only with his small supply of water. During his journey he runs out of water causing him to lose contact with reality. The extreme heat in the desert causes him to begin to hallucinate. The cyclist begins to see a grape juice factory, which interrupts his trip. To his dismay, it turns out to be a no more than a mirage. The lengthy road also affected the trip. The length and roughness of the road had worn the cyclist down.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1299,1,"Dear @PERSON2, Have you ever noticed how different our society is today, even from just ten years ago? That's because of computers. Yes, it is true that computer give us advantages like messaging and information, but they also take away from some of the greater aspects of life: staying fit, enjoying nature, and spending time with family and friends. Without those, life would be horribly unbeneficial. While surfing the web @MONTH1 be fun, it has been proven unhealthy. ""if a person was to spend more than two and a half hours on the computer every @TIME1 for about a month they would see a sudden increase in their gain. And if they kept the behavior up, they could gain up to one third their initial body weight until medical help was provided,"" say @PERSON3, a specialist in obesity at @ORGANIZATION1. Also, @PERCENT1 of all computer users snack while online, which only increases weight gain even more. Unfortunately those that spend alot of time on the computer are not usually okay with exercising either. Instead of outing down just a half an hour out of their computer time to play with the dog, take a jog, or try some aerobics, computer lovers usually just stay in front of the screen. That's too bad, because it causes health problems for them and maybe even the generations after them. Nature, is being ignored @CAPS1, more than ever. @PERSON1 can recall the time when the trails @CAPS2 runs were overrun with people. ""@CAPS1"" @CAPS2 says ""They're being overrun with woods and. Those are harder to act rid of that people."" But it's live, the trails and that to be fuller nature lovers are numbers. Because of today's new technologies, especially computers, the beauty of nature is being almost completely passed by. Some worry if it will fade entirely and instead of trying to maintain what's left, well just let it do so. Hopefully though, the next generation of people will reconize this horrible mistakes. Doctors, @CAPS3, all people alike are seeing more and more how computers affect family life. How often do you eat dinner with the whole family. When you don't, where are you most of the time? At the computer? That's what I thought. When computers and other technologies are available there is much less of a chance that you will actually interact with family and friends. mrs @PERSON4, an @NUM1 grade teacher in @LOCATION1, noticed that her family spent less time together than ever before when each family member got a laptop. @CAPS2 believes this is pulling her family apart. Do you? As you can conclude, computers have an awful influence, on society: people do not take, the time to stay fit, nature is being completely ignored, and Family interaction rates are poor. Whaat can we do to fix this problem? Just set a little time aside daily to observe these aspects of life. This way, life with computers will be beneficial after all.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7514,3,"The features in the setting of ""Rough Road Ahead, Do not Exceed Posted Speed Limit"" affect the cyclist because the determine how easy or hard he ride is for the cyclist. For example. The land being hot, would enable him to die or heat struck without water, the land being dry means he doesn’t have a place to refill his water supply and the land being barren means to the man that if he didn’t be of heat stroke there is a chance he wouldn’t be found and wouldn’t survive. Another example of how the features of the setting offer the cyclist is in the story when the road gets rough and he sees the speed time sign his though are about here he is going a water depleating 12 mph. This shows that he features of the setting, namely the contour of the land and the roughness or he road make the journey a lot harder on the cyclist. The features of a setting could possibley be the biggest arrest on a cyclist, and whether they have a long hard journey in which they have to push themselves to the limit like in this story or a nice lersury ride.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16002,6,The obstacles the buliders had to go through was preety hard. It was hard because the building was so high up in the air. They needed special gear to do it. Al Smith had to wait for an answer before building the mast because it was dangerous. Over sixty thousand dollars had to be made to the building framwork. The other obsticals were to drop and let passengers on. Also to refull your dirigibles if you had one. And it was just to make the building bigger.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9571,4,"In my opinion, the author concludes the story by saying that she will retake the drivers test because not only will she take the drivers test again, but she will also be more comfortable in her life. The drivers test is not the main problem, it’s adapting to her new environment that is causing Saeng so much heartache. For example, in lines @NUM1 Saeng’s thought’s are ""A wave of loss so deep and strong stang Saeng‘s eyes now and swept over her “and” in the warm moist shelter of the greenhouse, Saeng brake down and wept.” This piches that Saeng is having trouble readjusting to her new life and is reminded of her old memories from where she used to live and cries because it’s gone. I think that failing her drivers test was just little thing that finally caused her to cry because of the stress, and when she said “and this hibiscus is budding, I will take that test again.” It means that she will overcome all that and move on.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16557,6,"The people who were attempting to allow dirigibles to dock at the Empire State went through many obstacles. They would first have to modify and strengthened the buildings frame to accommodate this new situation. The architects designed a shiny glass and chrome-nickel stainless steel tower that would be illuminated from inside, with a stepped-back design that imitated the overall shape of the building itself. After doing all of that work they then found out that the mast of the Empire State building would never work. The greatest reason was saftey. Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used Hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable. The biggest obstacle was nature itself. The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. The other practical reason why dirigibles could not moor at the empire state building was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. The law made it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area. By the late 1930's the idea of using the mooring mast for dirigibles and their passengers had quietly disappeared. Dirigibles instead of becoming the transportation of the future, had given way to airplanes.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3425,2,"I believe everyone has their own choice when it comes to taking a book off a shelf. You should know what your picking up. If you think it might be offensive to you, then set it back on the shelf. It's as easy as that. Taking offensive articles off shevles of libraries just because a couple of people are unhappy ruins everyones opportunity on maybe finding what they were looking for. Censorship in libraries is just uneeded. Everyone should be able to take care of themselves. Read the title before you pick up the book. It could give you a good hint on whether or not it might offend you. Children on the other hand should be overlooked by an adult just to make sure they dont pick up anything that should not be viewed as a child. Taking offensive articles off the shelves ruins good books for everyone else. Not everyone is offended by the same material. For some it @MONTH1 be pictures. For others it could just be words. But this offensive material happens in everyday life throughout the world. It just can not be avoided. So why take it out of libraries. If it's really offensive in any way put a warning sticker on the book. It will warn people that the book @MONTH1 contain material that @MONTH1 offend the reader of the book. It will benefit both sides of this argument. People will be less offended because they won't unexpectingly pick up a book and be offended. But the people that @MONTH1 enjoy reading the offensive books still can read them. Everyone has their own choice when it comes to picking up a book. You should have an idea of what your picking up. Just because you made a mistake and picked up an offensive article, why take it away from others that @MONTH1 enjoy reading them. Everyone is exposed to offensive material through everyday life. So why have censorship in libraries. It's not accomplishing anything.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4564,2,"Everyone has there own opinions and arguements about something. There are a lot of books that can be offensive to people in some ways. There can be over thousands of books in a library, and I find it difficult sometimes to find that right book that interests me. My personal opinion is that i do not think that books should be removed from a shelf even though it @MONTH1 offend someone. As I stated in the first paragraph, everyone has there own opinions. There are so many types of books out there from murderes, romance, mysteries, drugs, and many more. These books should be placed in seperate areas just as many books are. If books are taken off a shelf what does that mean to us people? Everyone has there own freedom. So if books are going to be moved from someone that's taking away from are individual freedom. There are more to books in a libray also. From books, movies, music, magazine, etc., can all of the have different types to them. I do think they should just be placed in different areas. I can see where people think that this can cause an influence to young children if they pick up something that is disturbing, but they should be with an adult. Adults know what is right from wrong than what children do. For example, whenever i walk into public places i hardly every see children just running around especially in libraries. Libraries are expected to be kept quiet and not out jumping around and screaming. The kids should be kept with there parent or an adult that way they can't grab something they shouldn't. I understand that some teenagers can be offended to drugs or killings, in magazines or books, but some people like reading about that kind of stuff. Does that mean we have the right to take it off the shelf because one is offended? To many think they have the right to do anything without negociating with others. People that do not like that kind of stuff should just put it back down and go on with what they were doing.I can understand if you think that restrictions should be put on some things because i will agree. There should be sections for teens, adults, and children. To me that does not mean we have to remove anything though from otheres for offending someone. Libraries can have an affect on your everyday life because of how calming and soothing it can be. You should be able to have freedom without removing anything from anyone. Taking away things does not mean your just taking away from one, it means your taking away from everyone. You can have your own censorship in libraries from your individual freedom. These are my personal views on why things should not be removed from shelves or anything else",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15789,6,"The worker faced many obsticals while building the Empire State Building. Sence Al Smith was trying to compete with the Chrysler Building for the tallest building he kept adding on to the Empire State Building. To make his building the tallest in the world he added the mooring mast. This mast would make the Empire State building 1,250 feet tall. The builders had to redesine the entier buildings sceleton. They had to make sure the Empire State Building could hold up the mast. The mast was made so that Dirigibles could land thire and people could get on and off it. ""The steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modified and strengthened."" The builders fixed the steel fram of the building with in two months. The building went on as planned. After awhile the people begin to see that the mas couldn't be used for dirigibles because of the violent wind currents at the top of the building.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12020,5,"The mood the author creates in the memoir is gratefulness. The author creates gratefulness by repeatedly saying what his parents gave him and that he is grateful for it. First he talks about how he is grateful his parents got him interested in cooking. In paragraph @NUM1 it says, ""My parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their... love of cooking that is still with me today (and for which I am eternally grateful)."" This shows the author is grateful for his parents showing him to love cooking. Another time the author is grateful is in paragraph @NUM2. It says, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" This shows the author is grateful for his parents' endurance to come to @LOCATION1. In conclusion, the mood the author creates in the memoir is gratefulness. He was grateful for his parents giving him all they could.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15085,6,"The builders that were attempting to build a dock on the Empire State Building, had to face many obstacles. First, the girigibles were similar to huge ballons, @CAPS1 they were composed with hydrogen and helium. In the expert it says, ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than, helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" (pg @NUM1.) @CAPS1, if a dirigible caught on fire while it was stationed near the Empire State building, it may also catch the Empire State Building on fire. Resulting in a hazardous environment for the employees, and passengers.Next, attempting to tie down a dirigibles to a building, is known to be illegal. On the expert it states, ""The other practical reason why dirigibles could not moor at the Empire State Building was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."". If anyone disobayed this law it may result in punishment; as a result, it would create a new obstacle the builders would have to deal with.Last but not least, the idea of docking airships to a building is extremely unsafe. ""The @CAPS2 Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted gives an excellent third reason why airships are unsafe, ""Fearing that the wind would blow the dirigibles onto the sharp spires of other buildings in the area, which would puncture the dirigible's shell."" If a disaster ever took place, many lifes would have been lost or severely injuried. Finally, the builders and architect would have an extremely hard time convincing high government officials to allw air ships to dock on the empire state building, because the bad certainly over powers the good.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7321,3,"Many things that involve settings can affect other things. In the “Do not exceed the posted speed limit” by Joe Kurmaskie, a cyclist is affected by the setting as he travels to Yosemite National park. “The water bottles contained only a few tantalizing sips. Wide rings of dried sweat circled my shirt, and the growing realization that I could drop from a heatstroke on a gorgeous day….” (kurmaskie @NUM1). The sertting from the day is affecting him very much and it is hard for him to continue. He is very tired and almost sick from the heat. The settings of this place are hurting to the cycleist and he wants to go home and away from the heat. The setting of this place effects the cyclist very much.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3560,2,"Do I think offensive reading materials should be taken off the shelves in libraries? No, books should not be taken out of libraries. If students go to school and they are in high school they pretty much already know what is going on around the world. Teens do talk about their lives so pretty much @CAPS1. High and @CAPS2 students are going to hear. If the parents are sending their child to school and they don't want them to hear about it then don't send them to school! In school they will hear verbal arguments and see fights. If the parents don't want them to hear about it from other kids than they tell them, they explain it to them. One way or another they will find out. It can come from the parents, their friends, teachers anybody. Teens do not care if your child is watching when they are fighting; they are not worried about that at that time. The saying 'one person ruins it all for everybody,' well thats because some teens need to grow up and act their age. If you can't act your age than you shouldn't be in the grade you are in. Kids and teens need to grow up if they can't read a book without being inmature about it than don't read it. If their parents let them watch movies that they think they are old enough to watch than don't take advantage of that. Taking books out of the libraries will not change anything. Kids will still fight and rough house. Yeah some books are a little outragous, but not all books. To be honest libraries should have sections of books depending on the age or grade they are in. High schoolers should be able to control reading about sex, drugs, or drinking. If they are not responsible to read that than they shouldn't get that book anyway. Songs made today can get a little out of hand. If your child listens to that kind of music with all the bad words, talking about sex, drugs, alchol. Than parents all you got to do is take those songs away. Teens that are mature shouldn't get punished just because inmature can't watch a movie, listen to sond, read a book or a magazine. It's not fair to those people. People that act their age should be able to read, watch the movie, or anything just because they can handle the situation better. So don't punish everybody just because of some inmature kids that ruin it for everybody",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12214,5,"The mood described by the author is homely. In the excerpt the author invites you into his own house, his own life. that creates a nice mood, descr ibing how everyone got along and that everyone .is. family.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10226,4,The author ended the story with that paragraph because she said that the flower helps her with the moving and remains her of her home town and that when the geese come back and the flower starts to blume she’ll know that she can pass that test. She is sad for failing the test but it doesn’t matter how many times you fail it sooner or later you will pass the test. She must feel comfortable taking the test again when spring comes along.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9133,4,"The last paragraph of the “Winter Hibiscus” reads “when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snow melts and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” The author ends with this statement to let the reader know that Saeng has hope and will continue to adjust to her new settling in the @LOCATION2 @CAPS1 the story, Saeng realizes that she is not as distant from her home in Vietnam as she believes. In the florists shops she sees “plants that she had not even realized she had known but had forgotten drew her back into her childhood worth. “The plants she grew up with exist in the @LOCATION2 as well. She fails “the test” by buying a winter hibiscus after breaking down crying, homesick. By the end of the story she recognizes that she is becoming more accustomed to her new life, which is “almost familiar to her now,” such as the geese flying overhead. The statement of the last paragraph means that by the spring, she hopes to no longer be homesick, and to think of the @LOCATION2 with its geese and winter hibiscuses as her home.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4409,2,"Censorship in libraries? A yes or a No? I believe that there should not be censorship in libraries. There are not many things 'offensive' or 'harmful' in most libraries in @LOCATION1. I dont see who would come up with such an abserd idea. To me there are just way to many ways for people to get offended. @MONTH1 I remind you that we almost changed our plege to the flag of our country by getting rid of the word 'god' all because some people dont believe in god. Now we are suppose to get rid of good books just because they are child friendly?! Think about all the amazing books, movies and magazines that would have to be removed from our libraries just because one person says, 'I find this book offensive' or says, 'I dont think this book is apporaite for my child.' @CAPS1 about the people that do like that book and now wont be able to read it anymore all beacuse of that one person? There are sections in libraries for a reason! Just put the naughty books in the eight-teen year or older section so younger kids dont see them. The people who want to get rid of so called dangerous books to childern make libraries sound like there porngrapic shops. Most libraries are not filled with horrible bad books that will cause there child to be mentaly scared forever. Hell there are really that mant books out there anyways. Now sometimes a bad book @MONTH1 end up in the kids section but that dose not mean we have to remove that book forever form all the other people who want to read that book. All librarie workers just have to make sure to put all books in there rightfull spots and nothing bad will happen. The bad books will be in the adult section and the child frendily books will be in another. Have some libabrie workers watching the area and make aure little kids dont go in the libabrie. This will prevent childern from seeing the bad books because they will be in the adult section. In conclusion I answer this question by saying no. There are just way to many good books that would have to be gone forever",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3523,2,"Does it ever come to mind when your child says they're going to the library to study, but in reality they could be going there to find books about murder, violence, or possibly helpful information. @DATE1 when searching through the library you never know what @CAPS3 will find on the shelves. Most of the topics of books, music, movies, or magazines are helpful. But there's always that one @CAPS2 that you don't want your child finding, or that one movie you just hope your child isn't watching! I strongly believe that the the types of topics like violence and murder should be taken off of the library shelves. When going to the library parents should be able to trust that their child is actually going there to study, not to look up bad books, movies, or magazines. Too many books and movies are showing that relying on violence is a good thing. For example when children are searching for a good book they aren't looking for something boring, they're looking for something that catches their eye. Most of these books resulting to violence. The more kids read about this, the more they think violence is okay. Also magazines like '@CAPS1 @CAPS2' or '@CAPS3 @CAPS2' are now showing stories of drugs use, teen pregnancy, or death of famous @CAPS3. @DATE1 our world has been increasing in the drug use of teens and adults, also the pregnancy rate of teens has went up dramatically in the past few years. These two things are not okay. I personally believe the reason these two topics have went up is because kids are thinking it's fine since they're reading about it in the new magazines, or seeing it on a tv, or reading about it in a book. Kids or teens are believing it's easy to have a child at such a young age, or using drugs is cool because all the hot famous @CAPS3 are using them, which is shown in the magazines and books. But what kids aren't understanding is that it's really not as easy or fun as the movies, books and magazines are making it sound. What happened to the library's that had information that was actually helpful in school? I understand that @CAPS3 are wanting to read about famous @CAPS3 and what's new with them. But when all of these types of books, magazines, and movies are put into our libraries it is limiting the amount of actual helpful information kids need for school or adults are needing for work. When I was younger, I would go to the library and I either went thier to study or to check out a good book. Not a book about violence, murder, or teen precnancy. Kids need to be able to rely on the libraries for a good book or information that will help them in school, not on topics that don't relate to school at all. As author, Katherine Paterson said, 'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf'. I believe she is correct, these types of books, magazines, and movies that we don't want our kids finding need to be removed from the shelves of our libraries @DATE1",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10273,4,"I think it was a good enough by Minfong Ho.Through out the story you feel somewhat happy,and somewhat sad,but always calm.You feel happy when they are talking about all the plants and when her mother accepts the plants when she bought. At first, when you think the mom is going to yell at her for buying that,after she failed her test.You feel bad for her but still calm mood and show the girl want give up,but just take her time.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9315,4," Tisaeng had failed her drivers test after she went to ""flour is it and bought” a plant it was the ""dok faeng – noi"", she had fond memories about the plant. She remembered it from Vietnam, and how it used to be everywhere all the time. She had bought “@CAPS1 hibiscus” as a comfort to herself. The last paragraph says,” “When they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snow melts and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take the test again.” Saeng figured out that things happen for a reason and opportunities occur over and over again. Just as the geese go south and @CAPS2 as the seasons change. She had decided she will retake the test next time she gets a change.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1749,1,"Dear newspaper, I think that computers are great for researching things like for a car or sereach for people places and thing. @ORGANIZATION1 are great because you keep in touch with you family and friends. Like you can email them webcam chat and you can instant message them.I think a lot of people should get into @ORGANIZATION1 because you can do everything on them. You can save you picture, download music, play games. People say that some people spend to much time on the @ORGANIZATION1 well i think they should because they should learn new and different things about different countrys city or even states. I don't think there is noting wrong about spending time on a @ORGANIZATION1.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 881,1,"Dear Newspaper, @CAPS1 being able to find the information of anything with only one hand. Computers benefit people because the can talk online with others. Also people have the advantage of learning about faraway places. Lastly you are able to find lots of information quickly and easily. Computers do benefit society. Furthermore, with computures people can talk online with others easily. All @ORGANIZATION1 students use the computer daily to video chat with friends or instant message parents! @ORGANIZATION2 discovered that computers keep families closer because they are able to see each other virtualy when someone is away. @PERCENT1 of @CAPS2 use their computers to talk with others online. One could see why computers are bad, but @CAPS5 they benefit a lot of people everyday. @CAPS1 walking into a room where people of all are learning about computers are helpful to @CAPS6 individual because the can learn about places. Computer says ""Computers are information in a compact "" @CAPS3 out of @CAPS4 people use the computer learn about far away places. The @LOCATION1 lives had found that using the computer to learn about far away places than using multiple , Some can use why books are to use, @CAPS5 omputers are. Lastly, computers are great because they teach @CAPS6 to have better, @PERCENT2 of people found their after using the computer for one haour. @PERSON2, @PERSON1, says ""The computer can help to develope stronger reflexes."" @CAPS6 could see why computer slow reflexes, but @CAPS5 they mae them better. Computers benefit society greatly. Computers help people talk online with others. Also people can learn about faraway places. Lastly the computer strengthens hand eye coordination",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4334,2,"Do I think that books, movies, music or magazines should be removed from the library? No I don't I think that should be removed only because if you remove them your probably going to lose more costumer's. I'm going to be honest here, most people like to read. I know I sometimes read to study and if they got rid of the books that I read to study. How would I study? Even teachers go to the library to study or to even get books, or maybe get books for there grand kids or there kids. Parents do the samething. People don't understand that music helps everybody some point in time. I know people who listen to music to help them consentriate on different things like homework, regular work, or even being stressed out. There are alot of different ways that music helps alot of people. If people decided to feel offensive over stuff like that then something is wrong with them because after all these years there have been no complaints. Honestly i have never got movies or magazine's from the lilbrary before. People do it for there kids or grand kids, I don't really see the big deal. Its not like they are watching anything bad. They mostly have kid movies not bad ones. Why would people want to take little thing like that from little kids? In a way that makes me mad because I like little kids they don't hurt anybody.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15210,6,"In the excerpt the @CAPS1 were faced with multiple issues on their theory. It took lots of time for people to begin realizing reality. For example, Airships had a law preventing them from getting to low to urban areas. Also they realized major would play a negative role. Wind would cause the @CAPS2 to swing around all Docked. They thought to way down the rear of the ship, but soon realized that is unsafe over many people below. They had heard of a @CAPS2 in New Jersey was Destroyed by fire, Due to its hydrogen, Also unsafe in New York with such a @ORGANIZATION1 population. Overall they began to realize saftey issues and how unpractical it was to do all of this.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4713,2,"Do I believe certain material, such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc., should be removed from shelves if they are found offensive? No, just because a book or song or magazine article or movie is offensive does not mean that we should have the right to take it off the shelves. Sure we have a right to remove that book but there are a lot things that are going to offend people. Just because someone comes across an offensive book at the library doesn't mean that they should have to go through so much work to get it removed off the shelf. Its not worth the trouble for just a book that you could just simply look past and look at other books. If it was possible for anyone to just take a book off a shelf because they thought it was offensive we would have a lot of empy book stores. Because face it people can and will be offended easily if something they believe, like religion, is being made fun of in a book that they had read about. We all get offended but just move on from it and find something different. We are not forced to read that book or listen to that song or look at the magazine. We have a choice and the choice can be to move on and read or look at something different, more positive, or go through the process to get it removed and taken off the shelf. You never know someone else might think that maybe that article in that magazine was benefitial or relating. So it should not be up to one person, but if a whole community has a problem with a book then I can see removing it can be an option",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16456,6,"In the process of building the empire state building the architects had many obstacles. One main obstacle was making the foundation strong enough. Another was the wind factor. They had many problems in the building of the Empire state building.In order for the dirigibles to dock on the Empire state Building they had to streghten, the whale foundation. If a dirigible docked before the whale building would twist and sway. Another problem was the wind. the wind coming off of other building would spin the dirigibles at high rates of speed.Even though they faced many obstacles they successfully completed the Empire State Building",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13486,5,The mood that was creatied by the author was a warm feeling because the text describe pride and gratefullness. Also it give a @CAPS1 and sense of a good family relationship. The author also puts feeling into his writting. Those are the feeling dat the author describes.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7139,3,"Features of the setting affect the cyclist in a great way His journey would not be as difficult if these factors had not crossed his path. Climate, location, and population all have an effect on the cyclist. In the story, it is told that the cyclist is in the dry climate in California, in the heat of June.Their is also a lack of water, some must pace his sips carefully. Therefore also few towns, making it hard to get good advice and supplies and supplies. The cyclsit also comes across a snake, making him affected by native wild life. The dry climate and lack of water affects him by having doubt. The cyclist is constantly worried about passing out and dying of dehydration. The cyclist also gets doubts when he sees the road signs reminding him how slow he is going. The snake also has a depressing effect about his dangers on his journey. All of these things in the setting affected the cyclist. His journey does teach you though, that trough determination you will be rewarded. You have to want things bad enough and put the effort into it. The author also teaches you to always have a positive attitude to get success.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12190,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir was grateful, happy, and thankful. The author was grateful because he wasn't asked to be born in america, hes parents immigranted to america so that Narciso can live a better life. Narciso was happy because he get to see both of his parents, his grandparents which lives in the basement of his house, and his aunts Bertha and Juanita and his cousins Arnold, Maria, and Rosemary. Narciso was thankful because he gets a home where he can sleep at, a family who loves him, and he could've ask for nothing better than the life he has now.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6794,3,The setting effected the cyclist because it was bumpy and had a lot of hills which means he has to work harder. Also because of the heat he was getting dehydrated in the story after the cyclist had Been rideing a long time it says “I eased past trying to keep my balance in my dehydrated state “(kurmaskie @NUM1). The cyclist had very little water for his long trip,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15257,6,"Many things went wrong while trying to allow dirigibles to dock ontop of the Empire State Building. First, allowing this dirigible to dock on top of the Empire State Building ""would add stress to the buildings frame"". -@CAPS1 @NUM1. These Dirigibles are highly flamable and over a very populated place like New York City could be very dangerous. The winds at the top of the building were ""constantly shifting due to violent air currents. Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast.""-@CAPS2 @NUM2. If lead weights were used they could fall from dirigible and kill civilians. The biggest obstacle was that a law against airships flying too low over urban areas. This seemed to be a good idea on paper but when actually attempted it was too unrealistic.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7510,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist in this story. First of all, in the story it says “…and the growing realization that I could drop from a heatstroke…” (@NUM1). This quote shows that it is extremely hot and it is affecting his riding. The narrarator also says, “I eased past trying to keep my balance in my dehydrated state”(@CAPS1 @NUM2). This quote is saying that he is dehydrated in is having trouble keeping balance on the rough terrain. In conclusion, the setting affected the cyclist in this story.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9892,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph to leave readers guessing and wondering what will be next. You can tell by the tone of the last paragraph, “When they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” The author seems to leave at tone of suspense.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10096,4,Because her school work was the whole reason as to why she was studying flowers in a green garden. And it is obvious she failed the test so when spring starts to show she will retake the test because the flowers will bloom and she can do more study to pass the test and not have to take it again. I get the feeling though she is also looking forward to the spring time coming back now an day so she can enjoy the flowers and the presents of growing and studying.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15734,6,"In the article ""The mooring mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted. The obstacle the builders of the empire state building faced in @CAPS1 to Allow dirigible to dock there because people they was not gonna be safety. ""The owner of the empire state building realized how much worse that accident could have been if it had taken place above a densely populated area such as downtown new york"". Another example why the builder faced in @CAPS1 to Allow dirigibles to dock there because ""open landing field could be weighted dow in in the back with lead weight, dangling high above pedestrians on the street was neither practical nor safe"". The empire states was not very safe. This is why the builders of the empire state building faced in @CAPS1 to allow dirigible to dock there.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6428,3,"The settings in the story affected the cyclist throughout the story with winding roads and hills peddling can already be tough, tiring, and challenging, with the rider having little to know way or the roads were ten times harder to deal with. And with no landmarks or places insight its hard to have confidence because theire is nothing to keep going for.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3394,2,"What is appropriate in libraries these days? The opinions differ throughout the variety of different people across @LOCATION1. Censorship has taken a turn in public libraries, but still has been strictly forbidden from school libraries. Personally, I think that there is a difference between vulger and inappropriate items in a public library versus a school library. A public library is a place for anyone and anywhere to come and find an item that they are interested in. As we all know, everyone is different and have their own interests, so they should be able to find the book, music, etc. for them. The problem is, how do the libraries keep these uncensored objects out of children's hands? The answer should be simple. For thought, maybe all public libraries should be broken up into sections, each with their own subject matter. These different sections could include Children's, @CAPS1, and many more different titles. This set up is often used in well known book stores and libraries such as '@CAPS2 and @CAPS3' and '@CAPS4'. Overall, censorship in public libraries does not need to be as strict as school libraries. School libraries are a whole different idea. School libraries are made to help assist the students' academic acheivement, nothing more and nothing less. However, I also think that the content in the school libraries also depends on the maturity of the students. For example, elementary and middle school libraries should have a stricter censorship than high school libraries. The students in high school should be mature enough to handle uncensored material without creating a huge scene, like we all know younger students would do. I have personally seen and witnessed a few so called 'inappropriate' books on the shelf at my high school library, but the readers of the book have been mature about reading it. I believe that some offensive and vulger items can be interesting and educational. It is all a part of growing up. The censorship in our libraries today vary from each library to the next. School libraries and public libraries are completely different places of literate and media content. I think that it is a person's own personal decision dealing with which library they go to. If a family with young children want to go to the library, the parents need to choose the appropriate areas in the building to search for the children. Therefore, there should be no problem in running across a 'bad' book. The author, @PERSON1, states, 'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf... And then we have no books left on the shelf for anyone.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9431,4,"The author concludes the story with that paragraph to make the reader want more. When an author ends the chapter of a story or an episode of a show it is always a good idea to use a cliffhanger to drag the audience along. In many stories have read this is used. In my @CAPS1, the @PERSON1 book it always ends with a cliff-hanger. Like in the end of the third book one of the soldiers is killed but you don’t find out by who until the next book.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 799,1,"Dear @CAPS1 or @ORGANIZATION2, local paper @CAPS2 @CAPS1 or @ORGANIZATION2 edioter of local @CAPS4 paper. I'm writing a letter to tell you about the effect of computer on people in a society. I think that computers help society learn and helps people to talks to others around the world. Computer help society learn about faraway areas of the world, to learn about the history of an area, and to study animals and habits unable to reach with out travel. Computer make @CAPS14 easier to learn about area that are hard to research like @PERSON1 and cliff of the @CAPS5 in @LOCATION1, @CAPS6 to learn about history of an area or cities of ancient @CAPS7 like @ORGANIZATION1 in @LOCATION2 of @CAPS5. Help study animals species and the habits they could home like the @CAPS9 @CAPS10 or the hasin in @CAPS9 or the species call the @CAPS12 @CAPS13. Computer help society learn about all this. Computer also help people talk to other around world like you can hold a confeti on you computer when you are home, @CAPS14 is easier to talk and ask questin with others as you are on vacation, and you don't have to pay to travel to a place to have a confess with others. You can hold a confess on your computer from home when you can't make to @CAPS14. @CAPS14's easier to talk and ask question about something important to your business. You can go on your computer and talk with other people without spending money to travel there. This how computer help people talk with others around the world. This how computers help socity learn and talk to other around the world. @CAPS1 or @ORGANIZATION2 edioter of local newspaper.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9981,4," In the story “Winter Hibiscus” the author @CAPS1 the most likely ends the story with this quote because he wants to show that she thinks of the Hibiscus as more than just a flowers, to Saeng it is also a memory. For Saeng the Winter Hibiscus is like story books, waiting to be read simply by smelling the flower it unlocks wonderful memories of precious time spent with her “ gentle grandmother” from her first home. @CAPS1 the is trying to use the flower to show the reader how much a simple object can trigger a memory, thought and so on. The last sentence clearly states, with evidence from the story, Saeng cares deeply about her past and so she can fit in with life today she must not forgot who she was. By keeping the hibiscus in her garden she can have a beautiful reminder of whose she came from. Therefore one is to believe this reasoning is the assumption as to why @CAPS1 the ended the story “Winter Hibiscus “ with the paragraph selected.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 696,1,"Dear editor of The @CAPS1, I believe that computers are good ideas for our community. If the library's closed and a students needs information, you can look it upon the internet. Also, you can talk with your friends if your phones not working. Computers can help people learn about the latest news if the television is getting pixecl. First of all, computers can help with research alot. Let's say it's ranning healthy, your car? out of gas and you need to go to the library before it closes. Just be easier to go on the computer and find a research site about your topic; no gas wasted, no sopping wet doing just you in a robe sipping hot choclate on the computer. Next, you can talk to friends all the way in another country without having to pay extra for a long distance call. And if yo udon't have unlimited minutes and you went to talk with someone for a long time, you'd be wasting valuable minutes and money! This is where computers come in. You can just open a chat window and talk away, just like that. Finally, you can look up the latest news and information on a search program, like @ORGANIZATION1. If your television broke and it'd take a week to fix, what if something happened that you needed to know about you could just go on the internet and look it up. Thank you for reading my ideas, editor. I hope you'll choose my article to post in your newspaper when the time comes.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15691,6,"A dirigible is not like a plane or a hot air balloon, it is filled with flamable gases, and to try to dock something that big on top of the worlds tallest building would be extremely dangerous too the urban town below and extremely dangerous for the workers.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1567,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, @DATE1, everywhere you look technology is being exercised and it is beneficial to many aspects in our lives @DATE1. Many engineers strive to improve on technologic devices popularity, while others use it in communicate or relax. study conducted by @ORGANIZATION2 university, the computer is the most largely operated machine. The computer positively contributes to our education, economy, and entertainment. As i mentioned before the computer is beneficial to our education. An example of this is the school i attend, middle school. Here at we have over @NUM1 computers in use throughout the school day. These computers help the students complete research papers, typed assignments and other teacher requirement papers. By using the computer to complete research papers students save hours of scanning through books in the library and money on reading books. In addition, computers teachers in organizing files and entering grades online so students can check their. This is beneficial considering the amount of and assignments graded each week. Moreover, a computer called the ""parent portal"" allows the students to stay connected with school events that would not be mentioned otherwise in all, computer are way of. Besides education computers touch upon our economy as well. Now, due to the wide variety of computer selection, a computer is affordable, starting at prices as low as sixty dollars! This is a positive aspect of the computer because currently the has been enduring the economy since the depression in the. Consequently, the reason has made families start to cut many useful technologe devices out of the. However, since the price of computers decreased purchase have stimulating. Also, the computer has mainly improved methods of. Instead of listening to a cd player you can download listen to while chatting online with friends. This is very helpful for last-minute plan changes, because for those who do not own a telephone, communication @MONTH1 be, negatively affecting your time of entertainment. In addition, children can use internet in order to play games to take that mind off of a hard day at school, or an adult's rough work computersin producing the you watch at home on the couch and the videogame you ordered off of ebay. From facebook and myspace, to and ""gone with the wind."" Computers create a relaxing entertainment opportunity.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7050,3,"Throughout his journey, the protagonist in the story encounters obstacles in the setting. First off, he is cycling in the hot, dry, desert. There is no civilization or natural water source, so he faces dehydration. Additionally, the terrain he was riding on proved difficult. He encountered rolling hills that took a lot of energy to ride up. There were even signs for “rough road ahead,” @CAPS1 obstacle was a mental obstacle. He came across an abandoned juice factory when he needed an occupied building. These were ironic and mentally frustating. The cyclist must have lost hope in @CAPS2 civilization after he found @NUM1 abandoned examples of civilization. This discouragement must have made his journey more mentally challenging.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 72,1,"Hello, I decided to write in to the paper on the topic of computers, and how they benefit society. Comuters are powerful machines, and can be used completing otherwise menial and boring tasks. They benefit people in many ways, like they are very useful in buissness, helpful in education, and connect friends and family together. Computers are uselful in buissness and are an extremely important tool in a common workplace today, and make work get done much more efficiently than if they didn't have computers. One reason Computers are so useful in the workplace is because computers can storee far more data that can be put on paper. Also, they can do jobs and processes very quickly, which is important in the workplace. They can also be used for sending important information quickly and without much trouble. These are all valid reasons comuters are beneficial in buissness, and help things get done. Computers are important today's schools and educational programs becasue they can help students work in a more efficient fashion. ""@PERCENT1 of all surveyed students said they would rather type a paper for school than write on by hand, and shows that they value them in their education."" said @PERSON2, a professor at @ORGANIZATION1. This shows that Computers are important to students, and are used their benefit. In addition to students writing papers, computers are being used by teachers and school systems for grading, attendance records, and more. The teachers at my school are using @CAPS1 @CAPS2, pieces of hardware that are directly connected to computers, and can be used instead of white @CAPS2, and I see that students are getting more involved in class, and focused, because this computer technology is being used. All of these @CAPS3 are reasons computers are helpful in educational proceeses, and should continue to be used. Many people want to be able talk to there friends and family when they are bored, and because of computers and social networking websites, and instant messaging programs, this is made much easier. ""@PERCENT2 of teens have at least one sacial networking site they visit on a regular basis."" said @PERSON1, a phycologist, who speciaizes in teens, This shows that people use these sites, and that they like them. Families that are separated because one @MONTH1 have moved out of the house recently might want to communicate with one another, and because of computers, they can. There are multiple ways that they could use their computers to keep in touch, like instant messaging systems mentioned before. Being able to communicate with one another makes theses people happy, and benefits society. Overall, being able to communicate through computers is an enjoyable thing for many people, and is important to society today. To conclude, computers contribute to society in ways that make it much better for everyone. Whether it's through helping buissnesses being more efficient, giving students the ability to work faster, and in a way they prefer, or if it's helping people stay in touch, computers are always benefiting society. These machines hardly ever slow people more thant manually doing the work would, and the positive influence they have far outweighs the bad they do.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13266,5,"The mood created by the author in this memoir is a exciting, partying like mood in the beginning because in the second paragraph he's saying, ""Passionate Cuban music filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen and endless celebrations, etc. Towards the end, the mood changed a bit into a grateful, sweet and loving mood because he says, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" The mood changed into a slowed kind of mood and explains why he is grateful for all of it. He says, ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" This sentences shows us anothe reason that at the end, the mood turned into a grateful, sweet and loving mood.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6909,3,"In my opinion the features of the selling affect the cyclist in many ways. For example, when he was talking abut the terair changing from long strat roads to shard winday one and the speed limit changing he said.he was doing a waterdepleting @NUM1 fuier sands like he is having a hard time, or doesn'twnt to go on.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 141,1,"Dear @PERSON3 of the @LOCATION1, I strongly believe that computers effect us in a positive way. Computers are advancing and so are their uses, computers are great and they are not our thought process or went to run around outside and play sports. Computers help us find and talk to relatives and friends they allow us to learn different things about farien places. They also are great for research! First and foremost computers are effecting us positively expesally when it comes to finding and talking to family and friends. My mom was adopted and @NUM1 years ago she really wanted to find her birth family, one year later her birth father found her on this website where you can locate family, she found her family and I now have two more @CAPS1, @PERSON1 and @PERSON2, and a cousin @PERSON4. I love them all very much. I would not have of been able to get to know them if it wasnt for the computer, speaking of communication, I was working like a dog on this big science prodject I had. we weren't able to do it in person and it @CAPS3 impossible for one person to three way four people. So we emailed our ideas and thoughts and were able to get the project done. ""@CAPS2 are never enough hours in the day!"" @CAPS3 something that @CAPS3 commonly said. Over @PERCENT1 of adults complain that @CAPS2 @CAPS3 never enough time in day. That @CAPS3 a statistic from @ORGANIZATION1. The computer allows you to multi task so you can be on your business call and email your mother so she know that you didn't forget her birthday. In addition, computers help us understand other countries and learn about their culture and how they are doing. @CAPS2 are many people who don't have tvs and they get their news from the internet. Also for projects, in @NUM2 grade I had to learn about @CAPS4, the country in @LOCATION2. it would take countless hours to find research in books, you will find a lot of stuff you dont need, but on the computer it @CAPS3 fast and easy. If you need to know something you can just type it in and, boom! You have it where as if you were usinf a book you would still be looking for what you need. Time @CAPS3 something that we can't afford to waste expessaly in this economy. Furthermore, computers are great for all kinds of research and directions. People who think that people spend too much time on the computer, and exersizing are not always right. I don't know about you, @PERSON3, but I am constantly looking up different exersizes to get a flat stomach. Most of my friends do it with me. I also look up directions, finding routs on maps are enfuriating and take for ever. Go on the computer the maps are always updated and you can get easy and fast directions! I don't know about you but I love things fast and easy. Going back to research, what about for solving crimes? Identifying people with finger prints fast so no one can get hurt. In conclusion computers effect us in possitive ways, more and are a great help to society, from locating people, to communication, and all the way to finding valuable and life changing information. I hope that you and I see eye to eye in this matter, advancing computers are our friends not the enemy.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3294,2,"I believe that if you hear or read something offensive they should stay for many reasons. I feel everyone should know the history of the world, whch means rascitism or being offended. I feel if you are reading a book or listening to music and you hear something offensive to you , just turn it off. You aren't being force to listen or read it, its your choice. Libraries should keep the materials cause the people of the world should know how it feels to be offended. I certainly don't like the feeling of being offended, but its something people go through life with. There @MONTH1 be people out there that probably disargree's with me, its just my oponion. You @MONTH1 go to the certain libraries in the world that doesn't allow certain people in because of their oponions on the selection of materials the library offers. I once heard a woman at a library talking about how she went to the police about someone writing offensive things towards her religion on the internet @CAPS1 happen to the person but, its the fact that she went to the police. She could have handle the sitiutation herself, by just comforting the person about it. I feel that the mintue she started to read it, she should have turned away or got off the website. It was her decision to keep reading it. I don't see why she should go to the police, if it was just the person's oponion. Libraries should keep the materials cause maybe someone wants to know the meaning of being offensive or being offend. Libraries shouldn't have to hide this topic from anybody. People are offensive because they were rasied or just born that way. Some people just have to deal with these people. They might not like it or @MONTH1 do somethings towards them in there lifetime but, they have to live with them. In the end, either if they want to or not libraries should keep certain materials out even if they are offensive towards people. Libraries shouldn't just change there ways for certain people that don't like the materials. They are plenty people of the world that want to learn more on the topic. These people shouldn't be stopped by the ones who don't like the topic. Its just apart of life",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3263,2,"Censorship of @CAPS1 of @CAPS2 'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf. But if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf -- that work I abhor -- then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us,' is a quote from Author, Katherine Paterson. She is saying that there are some books that most people would think to be a little graphic or shocking, but we can not take those books off the shelf because then eventually there would be no books left to read. I agree with her in the sense that we can not take certain books off the shelves in our library. We can not take them off the shelves because that would be taboo in many ways. It would be stepping into hot water because the people would be violating the authors freedom of the press, who would decide what material was right and wrong, and how far is too far when it comes to censorship. These are just a few of the many reasons this is wrong. Taking certain books of shelves would be against our constitution. The @CAPS3 @CAPS4 gives all @CAPS5 citizens the freedom of the press. This means that they can write anything that they want without having to worry about the government's or the citizens' opinions. If we start taking certain books off shelves of libraries because they @MONTH1 include a few controversial things we are violating there natural right. Which leads me to my next argument in if we do allow censorship, who should be in charge? So many people want to include their opinions on what is right and what is wrong. So, who are we supposed to believe? On person @MONTH1 think somthing is out of line, but the person standing next to them would think it is ordinary. That is what makes this country great. We are a mixture of many different ideas that work together for a common goal. If the government would assign someone to censoring books, magazines, or music, there would be a uproar. How can one person say if something is wrong? And if someone was allowed to censor things, what would be included? How far is to far? This is a hard question to ask. If we were to allow one person to judge things what should be included? Would the judgement stop at just books, movies, and music? Or would it expand to judgement of clothes and lifestyles? If we implement this system of censorship, our who lives would become one big judgement. Self expression would go out the window because people would be scared of being deemed 'inapropriate.' Our world would become a puzzle of trying to fit in and to not be noticed, rather than standing out and pushing the human race forward. There are always going to be those people who disagree with things. They find it out of place or offensive. What we have to realize is that everyone views things in different ways. We as people need to learn to accept something out of the ordinary, and try to understand where otheres are comming from. If we can do that our world would be a much better place",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3575,2,"Censorhship should play a major part in which books should enter and leave the library. Thats why I think that if a book, movie, magazine, or cd should deffinitly should be removed from the shelf if it is found offensive to atleast ten children. Now it would be asking too much to have the libraian read through all the books to make sure there is no bad language or anything else that a parent might not want their child to read about. So therefore a library should have a certain section that if a libraian thinks that there might be some bad language or refrence to drugs or alcohol then that book should go into that part of the library. I have found some books that have some pretty graphic material in them that I dont think a little kid should be reading but there was nothing I could do about it except take it up to the libraian. Movies would be a major thing that they would have to watch out for. Just because the movie has a title that dont seem that bad dont mean that there wont be any grapic images in that movie, or that there wont be any inappropriate language used at one point in the movie. Now since movies are alot easier to review and since they also have a rating then that should make it easier to tell if that movie should go on the shelves of a library or not. But there should deffinitly be a part in the library that if they did want to allow certain movies in there that would be inappropriate for little children then those movies should be put in that part of the library that has a door on it so the kids would know not to go in that room. Music would be another thing you would deffinitly have to watch out for because with each song could change how the languge is in that cd. So I think that the librarian should have to sit down and persoanlly listen to that cd before they decide to put it out on the shelves for others to be able to listen to. But personally i think that there should be no music allowed in libraries just because with every new cd album that an artist makes he could easily change how his wording is in the songs. So you just never know what the artist of the song is going to do with his music. One album can be perfectly fine and not have one cuss word on it, but then the next album that he or she makes could just be loaded with cuss words. Another possible way to prevent little kids from hearing or reading about inappropriate stuff is to have some of the books, magazines, cd's, or movies catagorized by age. As a child gets older he will be tought more about certain things. Then once he picks up that book and sees that its mentioned in the book it wont be that big of a shock to him or his parents. With the way things are today its almost impossible for a kid to pick something up and not read about drugs or violence. So if you were to go through and take everything off the shelf that mentioned drugs or violence then there would be nothing left on the shelfs for kids to listen to or read. Your not going to be able to catch every single movie, book, magazine, or cd that has something to do with violence or alcohol use. But you can take some of the stuff that has alot of that kind of stuff in it off the shelf. By just taking some of the materials off the shelf that contain stuff that @MONTH1 seem inappropriate for children will deffinitly make a big difference and it could possibly protect your child from reading across it someday when he or she reads a book and sees that or listens to a cd and hears the artist metion something about that. Game designers are now starting to make all their games around violene. So if you were to take all the games that have violence in them and take them off the shelf there would be no games left for kids to play. So there are just some things that contain violence that you just cant keep your child from seeing at one point in time. All the games have a rating on them so you should have an adult check that game rating before you let your child get that game. By doing that you will be able to somewhat controll what your child will see and it will also make it better because then you are not taking games that other kids might like off the shelf and making them no longer available. So I have pretty much covered about how who ever is in charge of the games, books, movies and cds should look them over and possibly listen or look at them just to see what they are like before they put them out on the shelf. You dont have to censor everything but there are deffinitly some things out there that should not be put out on the shelfs for little kids to look at or listen to. And if a little kid wants to get a game a parent should have to look at the game and the rating of the game to determine if that child is mature enough to handle what goes on in that game. But overall I personally dont think that they should just go through and ban everything from going on the shelfs it should be up to the child to determine if they can handle what that movie or book contains",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 261,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, I believe many people spend to much time on computers. It is okay to be on a computer for twenty minutes, to a half an hour. But one hour or more, is too long. People could get sucked in by playing adicting games. Also by online chatting survices like facebook, myspace, instant messaging, and more. Another way, I think someone could spend more time on a computer is working on a report. They might start it lost minute. These are just same of the many ways someone could be sucked into their computers. Have you ever hopped on the computer and played a game? Then you look at the time and its an hour later? Games are very adicting. you can play a game for hours and not notice how much time has passed by. Games are very fun, but they fry your brain. @PERCENT1 of the human population spends up to an average of two hours on a computer each day. I think, we should eliminate some games off the internent, so people can spend days exercising and hanging out with friends, not playing silly games. Have you ever started a conversation with someone and realized you have been talking for an hour and a half? And that you have homework? @PERCENT3 of teenages on average spend three hours each day chatting with friends on the internent. Facebook, myspace, instant messaging are all examples of this. It is okay for someone to talk to their friends, but you need to watch the time so you do not get carryied away. I think, we shoud cut down out use on these websites, so children and teenagers can get their homework done. Have you ever been assigned a report and wait till the last minute to get it started? Many teenagers do this. They wait and start their reports the day before their reports are due. They then, are stuck on the internent for hours trying to get it done. Which makes their grade lower then if they were to start it earlyier. @PERCENT2 of students wait till last minute to do their reports, on average, they spend over four hours on the computer. I think we should make sure that students start their report earlyier so it could bring up their grades. In conclusion i believe people have spent way to much time using computers, due to games, internent chatting, and reports being done last minute. I think if we elimate games off the internent, cut down use on internent chatting, and start reports earlyier, people will start exercising, hanging out with friends and family, get homework done and get higher grades.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 14976,6,"When building the Empire State Building, builders were faced with several obstacles in their attempts to have dirigibles dock there. The builders first had to ensure that the building was going to be able to support the dirigible. After they completed this issues relating to safety arose. It was very dangerous to because some air ballons were made out of hydrogen which were flammable. If their were any issues, New York's population could be in grave danger. The wind also was an issue ... because it was so shifty a dirigble would be heavy in the back. Dangling above new york was very dangerous. The last complications that affected the idea of docking the drigbles was ""an existing law against airships flying too low over urban area."" because of the law, safety and nature complications, builders were never able to successfully reach their goal of allowing dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16585,6,"There were many reasons that the mooring mast couldn't be used. The first reason is wind speeds. In fact ""in 1930, the @ORGANIZATION1 dirigible, Los Angeles, approached the mooring mast but could not get close enough to tie because of forceful winds."" @CAPS1 the dirigibles could not even get close enough to dock. Another reason was safety. In 1937 the German dirigible, Hindenburg, went down because of a fire. That situation could've been a lot worse if they dirigible went down on heavily populated areas, in which thousands of people might die. The last reason is that there is a law prohibiting airships flying too low over urban are urban areas. Therefore it would be illegal for a dirigible to get close enough to dock.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7707,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist; the author says he is in the California desert. This means that the cyclist must conserve water so he can stay hydrated for the trip. Also, there are many hills, as the author says, “over one crippling hills…” with a lot of hills to climb, the cyclist uses up more energy and will become dehydrated quickly, if he isn’t careful. Finally, there are many abandoned towns that are several miles apart from each other. This again affects how the cyclists uses his water, he thinks that there is a prospering town coming up, so he drinks his water, thinking he’ll get more soon. However, when he gets there, there is no water, and he must pedal seveal more miles to the next town with very little water. The setting is a great effect on how the cyclists act especially with no water.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4472,2,"Books are part of history no book should be censored. They show and teach us about history. If the book is based on true events nothing should be censored. Many books from the @DATE1's and earlier have words that younger children should not see yet. With how the human race is everyone is going to hear something bad or even see something. Its just like saying all websites should be cenerosed. A book that needs to be censored should not be in an @CAPS1 school. I would have to say any book that teaches a lesson or helps a teacher should be used no matter the content in it. This is why a teacher needs to read the book before assigning it the students. If he/she thinks the students will not act apporiate, then the book should not be used in the class room. A lot of books would be removed or cenersored from shelves. If you do not want to hear those words or see certain images you should not have gotten that book. Many people would be made mad if this did happen. I would be two because sometimes a whole chapter could be bad or in music a whole lyric could be bad. Many people are mad now, but everyone else would be mad if censerorship happened",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 14920,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles when attempting to allow dirigibles to dock. Firstly, the thousand foot dirigible would attach to the buildings by a single cable, adding stress to the frame of the building. The builders were forced to modify and strengthen the foundation to address the issue of stability. similarly, builders had to deal with the issue of wind pressure which were constantly shifing at heights of over @NUM1 feet in the air. The load of the dirigible swinging in the breeze would transmit pressure and stress onto the buildings foundation. This was a high safety concern, and pivotal to the decision that dirigibles could not dock at the empire state building. Lastly, builders were forced to face the law against airships flying too low over urban areas, making it illegal for dirigibles to even attempt to land on the mooring mast. The builders faced significant obstacles such as building weakness, safety, and law enforcement, that made attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on the Empire State's mooring mast, virtually impossible.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 986,1,"Dear local newspaper, @NUM1 out of @NUM2 students at @ORGANIZATION1 say that they spend most of their time on the computer. I think computers have a bad effect on people because they can cause safety issues, health issues, and ofcourse education issues. With all this new technology, teenagers aren't aware of their surroundings at all. On top of that, they're not aware of what's happening to them. Adults also do use the computer, but not as frequent as us teenagers. It's time now to realize what computers are doing to us and the world today. Computers can cause safety issues. Now more than ever people use where they talk to friends. But, what they don't know is that the person on the other side might not be what they think it is. Lately, on the news we hear of teenagers getting raped or kidnapped because of people who they were talking on the internet was not who they said they were. Bad people are always lurking on the internet, and we need to prevent them from getting in contact with the kids. But, even besides having bad people online, computers can with your privacy. It's possible for computers to give out your information to other people so, we really need to watch out. Computers though not only cause safety issues, but health issues also. Computers play a major part in destroying our health. About @PERCENT1 of @CAPS1 are overweight or obese. T.V's use to be the issue for people not excercising, but now computers are doing just the same. There are so many things to do on the computer that just doesn't make you bored. That there means that there is no way to from it. But, you need to get up and exercise and computers are preventing people from doing so. It's like it's hypnotizing us because we simply don't want to get up. Computers can also have an impact with your vision. I know that after a long time on the computer I have a massive headache because my eyes just hurt so bad. Also, computers can make people stop talking to each other verbally. Talking and interacting makes us have safe relationships with one another, but computers again are preventing this. Besides interfering with our computers do the same with education. Computers can really be bad with our education. Students now easily forget to do homework. There are so many distractions today that than of them whom people spend a long time on it, we forget to do other things that we're suppose to do simply becausewe're distracted. But, eventhough we forget our homework, we also @MONTH1 forget to study before a test. This would result in a in high grades. Computers shouldn't be distracting people, but instead helping them. I think it's not the people to not get distracted on the computer because it just has so many interesting features. For example, the internet, and websites like @CAPS2, @CAPS3 @CAPS4, etc. We have so many distractions in our that we don't need more! Computers really don't have a good effect on people. More and more people get computers everyday. They should know what its doing to them, and what's happening to the world around them go outside and enjoy nature? Maybe, go to the mall with friends and. There are a variety of things to do rather than staying glued to the computer the whole day. People need to stop being and open their eyes to see the effect computers have on people.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13301,5,"The author creates a verry good mood in the story. It is a mood of well-being and happiness in their family. I think the author has a verry good bond with his family. I think that because he talks about being with his family alot listening to Cuban Music and eating dinner together. He also appreciates his parents alot because they left cuba to come to the United States so he would have a better life. In paragraph @NUM1 he says ""I will always be greatful to my parents love and sacrifice"".",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15303,6,"Constructing anything is always a difficult taksk, but trying to construct the worlds tallest building and have dirigibles being able to dock there is even harder. The workers who were modifing the Empire State Building had nemerous obstacles that stood in their way when attempting to allow dirigibles to dock at the Empire State Building. The obstacle they could not controll was nature herself. The winds were said to be ""constantly shifting due to violent air currents,"" according to the excerpt wich made it difficult for dirigibles to dock there, and dangerous. Also another factor that was an obsticle for the constructors was the building itself. The structure of the building would have to be modified because the dirigible ""would add stress to the building's frame,"" so constructors wolud have to make the building support this tremendous stress. Another obsticle was safty because some dirigibles were filled with hydrogen which was extremely flamable and dangerous for the massive population on the ground. These are a few of the many obstacles faced when modifing the Empire State Building.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12948,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso @CAPS1"" by the Blueprints of Our Lives, the mood was happiness because he had his heritage, family and freinds, and the chance to make new lives in @LOCATION2. In paragraph @NUM1 it States ""Skills and love of cooking that is still with me today. Passionate cuban music"". This quote is releavant because it shows that @PERSON2 is happy of his heritage. In paragraph @NUM1 it states ""Family and freinds, and celebrations that encompassed them both."" This quote is relevant to my question because it shows that freinds and family made Narciso happy. In paragraph @NUM3 it States ""In the United States they had to start over entirely taking whatever jobs they can find."" This quote is releavant to my question because it shows that Narciso's family can make whatever they want out of their lives. That is the mood in the memoir ""@PERSON2 @CAPS1"" by Blueprints of Our Lives.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6560,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist by never accept travel advice from colletion of old timer who haven’t left there porches since carter was in office. After that because you don’t know if they are real collection or what. After because some people have not left there porches since carter was in office. I don’t know why people have not left there porches since carter was in office.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4692,2,"Is there a song that your parents wouldn't let you listen to when you were a child? When you sang this song did they yell at you and ground you because they had told you many times before that you weren't allowed to listen to it? How about a movie that you wanted to go watch because it was what everyone was talking about but it was rated @CAPS1 so you weren't allowed to watch it. That book on that shelf that you accidentally ran into while doing a research project. Containing inappropriate language and terms. There is much media and books that are out there that parents wouldn't want their children to read. But over all there is the government who censors things going on around the world. Censoring can have good and bad qualities. In my experience I've noticed that people that know less tend to be more happy than people who know more. But if you are able to read and or watch these censored materials you would see the idea from a certain point of view, and maybe agree with the person. Most news is about things that are bad, rarely any good news comes around. For example if something were to happen in @LOCATION1, where thousands of people were being used to test if lions liked to eat humans, the government would censor the news to the people in their country due to any reason. If there was movie that was made that was racist against @CAPS2 people the government would probably censor it. Things that look bad tend to be censored. I've noticed that people who read censored material feel special because they read or saw something that wasn't supposed to be known by the rest of the population. A lot more freedom of speech would occur if censored material wasn't censored. People also tend to become mad when they find out that material is being censored because they feel like something is being hidden for them, could be valuable information. In reading I have noticed that societies that practice censorship tend to have angry citizens. But in the other hand if they believe that it's for the good of the society then they accept the fact that it's not good for them. People also want to be given the right to make their own decisons. In a censored civilizaton they have no idea what is going on outside their borders and are usually clueless or being lied to by their government. Censorship can have good and bad qualities. People tend to be offended when material is censored, but it's probably for the best for them. Hidden information could be good and bad but mostly bad, most people want to know the truth rather than a lie. Censorship is just bad in general, people should have the right to make their own decisions on what they want to read or watch.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 11962,5,"In the memoir, ""Narciso Rodriguez"" by Narciso Rodriguez, Rodriguez created a mood of gratefullness toward his mother and father. Numerous times, he wanted to thank his mother and father. For example, ""I've often told them of my admiration for their strength and perseverance."" @PERSON1 is so grateful for his parents because they left Cuba to start a new life in @LOCATION1. They sacrificed leaving their friends and family behind. In the text, it says, ""They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life..."" His parents sacrificed so much just to give rodriguez a better life and thats why he creates the mood of gratefullness in his memoir.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15158,6,"The builders of the @ORGANIZATION1 many obstacles in order to allow dirigibles to dock there. To start off, there was a lack of suitable landing area. This was a tough obstacle because the builders needed to think of a place that extremely large dirigibles could land while in a crowded place like New York City. Next, was figuring out a safe way of getting the mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building. This was another tough obstacle because if the mast was just placed on the top of the building, it would add stress to the building's Frame, which is dangerous. Lastly, and most importantly, was the problem of nature. At the top of the building there were constantly shifting wings due to violent air currents. This was an extremely dangerous obstacle because the winds could cause the dirigibles to be constantly moving and shaking. Also, if they were weighted down by lead weights to prevent them from being affected by the wind, the weights would be dangling above pedestrians on the street. To allow dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building, the builders @ORGANIZATION1 many different obstacles.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3760,2,"There are so many resaons why taking a book, movie, or anything else off the shelves is wrong. If it is violent or sexual i can see why it shouldn't be on the shelves but if the reader doesn't like the book or movie, then don't read it or watch it find something else. If everyone took a book of the shelf that they didn't like then what would we have to read because everyone has a book or two that they don't like or think is offensive. Every book can't be perfect for that person. Everyone has there own veiws on books wether they like it or dislike it. If that book isn't what your looking for then put it back and stop reading it. There have been many of people say 'If you don't like it then don't listen to it'. They are excaclly right because if there is something that you can't stand to listen to or read and you do it anyway thats going to make you mad. Then your going to complain that it is on the shelfs and say it is bad and it shouldn't be on the shelves anymore. That is what starts all these things of people saying it is offensive. People know what they like and don't like, so if there is something that you don't like then don't listen to it or read it. It all comes down to common sence. We all have it we just need to start using it. That means if you like country music then don't listen to hard rock or rap because that isn't what you like so don't listen to it. Because if you listen to it then your like why is that stuff on the shevles for people to listen to it's bad for you it is puting bad thought into those teenager's heads. If eveyone sticks to doing what they like and don't worry about the other stuff then eveyone will be fine.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3033,2,"Why should we be more carefull of what we get at the libary? Libaries can have books with knowledge, fun, rommance, and action or adventure, but some can be desterbing and grusium. Kids a lot of times will pick books that have pornagerfy or grusium action. This causes the kids to act in different ways. They act hyper and mean to other people or even other children. They are sneeky and do things behind the parents back. Why is because they think they need to act this way because its cool, but they don't understand this makes them look very ugly. 'So take them out' is some of the parents are saying now a days. Even if we do take out all the books that can be bad for our children, there will not be a lot of books left. Because now a days all books have something that is bad for our mind. So why do we need to be more carefull with the books we put in our libary and the books we take out of our libary? It causes the world to change very fast. Now libarys are a great place for kids to learn. Books can teach them new things and expand their knowledge. The libary is where all kids that have reports or essays on important people come to. Some kids go there just to get a book to enjoy. From my point of view libary is one of my most favorites places to be. Any where there are books involved count me there. Having books causes our imagination to come out and take us on adventeres that some of us will never get to do. Sometimes books can cause things to happen in families. Some of them causes us to have nightmares or have very bad behavior. If we try to take out some of these books it will help the familes to come together, but also if we don't take out some of the books, it will cause things to go wild. Because people and kids think they need these books to survive in the world. Which really its just the books and ect... that causes our mind to picture things that make us think we need them. Other writing materials and even movies cause problems in this world today. Magazines can have girls with not much clothes on or other things that make boys minds wander. Movies are even worse because the picture is right there in front of their faces. I am not saying all magazines and movies are bad to our mind because they can also be helpful. Magazines can help us with research or just to now what is happening in this world today. They also can talk on many subjects like cooking, room decerating, on how to decerate your weddings and etc... Movies can help us research and also show us what happened back then. Like watching docromentries, they are on people or what happened in our past. We don't need to take every movie or magazine out, but some we can do without. So why do we need to be more carefull for what we put in libaries? It can cause us to have bad behavior or bad dreams. So how can we help to solve this problem? We can take out books, magazines, movies and etc... that are really bad for our mind. So it can help our children to grow up well behavied and mature. Also one more thing books, magazines, and movies can be a very good thing if we use it right. How do we know we got a good book? We find right books for us by following our heart and our instinkes",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7580,3,The setting adds a sense of ergancy. The cyclist is running out of water and he is the middle of the dessert. If he had been in the forest or the subburbs it would not be so grave. He talks about passing out and dieing. He exclaims it did n’t really matter. I was going to die and the birds were going to pick me clean.”,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3365,2,"Censorship in Libraries I know as well as everyone else does, that you can find almost anything, reading related, in the library. There is all different kinds of stuff in there. From children's books, to love stories and people's magazines, newspapers, movies, and music. Everyone is welcome in the library, of course, but is everyone aloud to look at whatever they want? I personally think it's a good idea to have all of this stuff in the library, for anyone, even though some of it's not very appropriate. For people who sit at home and don't have a library, maybe they want to know about something specific and the first place they would think about going is the library. Nobody can really help with what people @MONTH1 find in the library but i think it's a good idea to keep that kind of stuff in a public place. You could go on the internet to get whatever information you need, yeah, but, what if the internet doen't have what you're looking for? I like books better then internet myself. Anybody can put information on the computer, but atleast when it's in a book, it's true, because it has to be published and read by someone that wouldn't let a book with false information be sent out to the public. If the libraians are worried about underaged kids getting into books that they're not suppose to, then put it somewhere where they can't reach. Put the adult books in the adult section, and don't let the little kids go in that area. You could always put them up high too so the kids wouldn't even know they was there. All the libraries I've ever been to, had their own sections, the adults would go to their section, and the kids would go to their's. If the parents are afraid of what their kids will find, then keep them home and don't let them go to the library. Make your own at home, then you could put whatever books and magazines you want in there",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4015,2,"Books on shelfs are there for a reason 'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf. But if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf- that work I abhor- then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' Katherine Paterson wrote. The quote in short words for me means what should and should not be allowed for children and what they should learn as children. Libraries have non- fiction and fiction books as well as magazines, music and movies. I myself like to learn a little bit of everything but of course there is things that I dont like learning when I am too young. I like discovering things on my own. There is times where I do like discovering new things because I dont know when life ends. In other words I'm surrounded by reality and have to come out of the fantasy world. Magazines also just have a lot of trouble and sometimes, yes it's life but also its just dramatic things about people A library is a good place to learn lots of things. You can learn about the history of presidents, countries, important people music,etc. Honestly, the only thing I go there for, is to read and to check out books, but from books I have learned a lot. There is some material that shouldnt be read and discovered when your too young. Theres material that is too strong for some children and they should learn it as they grown not in a bunch. Libraries should have different stickers or labels on books for children and have a warning signs for their age. There is times where it is good to learn about life but you have to becareful because it @MONTH1 be to strong. There is books that teach you a lot. I have learned a lot from old books to new books. I don't think that the books should be removed, yes they @MONTH1 be strong, but is our owns choice to read it or not. There can be racist books, but they are there for a reason and it's not to make fun of people. Magazines also are sometimes good because they teach good things and keep you updated about whats going on around the world. There is also some magazines that just talk drama and criticize famous people. I dont think its important and to be showing other people's personal lives or criticizing it. That is deffinetly not good for children to learn at that age. Magazines shouldn't be removed because everyone else has a decision at what to read and what to look at. Music, at the library there is mostly music from like a centuries ago, but they were also great composers. No the music shouldn't be removed because everyone has a different taste in music. There's also new music, everyone has different taste and should choose what they want to listen to or who to listen to. Movies, are a big part of life, so I think. Theres a lot from them that I learn from. From slavery to the future, there are movies where I have learned a lot. There is also some videos that are rated @CAPS1, @NUM1, @CAPS2, etc. It is our choice to watch the movie without no one telling us if we should or not. There is different reasons why there are certain books, music, magazines, movies that offend people, but it also has a significance. Books are not racist so other people can be made fun of but to learn what they went through. I'm glad that I as I grow I know what to learn and when I'm to young to read something. I think it should be allowed because it's for everyone. I dont think nothing should be removed from shelves even if the material is offensive",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13522,5,"The mood Narciso Rodriguez creates is gratefullness. When I read this, I feel thankful like the author. Although his family had a good life in Cuba, they left to give their kids a better life. @CAPS1 the author's family hadn't left Cuba, I think the mood would be different. Then the author wouldn't think his parents were selfless (for that reason, anyway) @CAPS1 my parents did that for my siblings and me, I would want people to feel grateful as well. @PERSON1 understands how hard it was for his parents. Another mood could be guilt. I feel guilty when I read this because I don't always thank my parents or apreciate them. Narciso Rodriguez created a lot of moods in the memoir.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12468,5,"The author, Narciso Rodriguez, creates a passionate mood in his experiences of having a ""home"" rather than just a house, and how growing up in such a different community has shaped the man he has become today. Narciso is forever grateful for his parents' willingness to give up their good lives in Cuba and move to @LOCATION1 for the sake of him. The selflessness and thoughtful choices Narciso's mother and father made truly don't have words that are able to describe it. Narciso feels that you don't have to be related, of the same background or believe in the same things in order to be ""family."" The loving atmosphere of living in the neighborhood of Spanish, Cuban, and Italian immigrants was created by the feeling of coming together and having a good time, despite all of the differences. Narciso cherishes the memories he has kept of his childhood very much and will always admire his parents for the sacrifices they made for him.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3093,2,"If I owned or worked at a librarie, I would have books, music, movies and magazines that to many people are offensive. But I would not have the offensive books, music, movies, and magazines in the childrens area of the librarie.But I would have them in the adult area. @CAPS5 I would keep that type of books, music or movies might you ask? Well because the adult and older tenageers should be able to handle and act like adult when reading the book, watching the movie, listening to music. If the type of book, movie, or music is causing violent behavior around the town then i will completly remove the item from the shelf. Its that simple. If parents get mad and angree because of these books, movie, and music don't let your children watch, read, or listen to them. Pick out a childs book like @CAPS1 or @ORGANIZATION1, don't pick out a book from @PERSON1. Let your children read a book with lots of pictures and color. Watch @CAPS1 or @ORGANIZATION1 not @CAPS3 on a @CAPS4. My questions is, '@CAPS5 not let people read and watch something that they want even if it is offensive?' @CAPS6 people love watching the scary and offensive movie or listening to the rap music. People live in defferent worlds even though we all live in one. In my oppenion offensive books, music and movies should stay in libraries. Just little and younger kids shouls not read, watch or listen to them",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13113,5,"The author's mood that is created in the memoir is love and gratitude. The author expresses how thankful he is of his parents to live and grow up in the home they made for him. He says that he knows that family is not just blood related. He tells how his parents had open arms and doors to people in the community who needed help. Their home was filled with @CAPS1 music, food and love. They would have celebrations of his birthday's and people's arrival to the new country. There was this atmosphere of love and thankfulness in his life and that is expressed in this memoir.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7494,3,"The features of the setting in “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” by Joe Kurmaskie show that as the day goes on the cyclist becomes tired and wornout from his long ride through rough terrain trying to find his way back home then he saw some buildings down a hill and said “With what I believed was my last burst of energy, I maneuvered down the hill” (kurmakie @NUM1). After the rider gets home he says he is going to do it again.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 728,1,"Dear local newspaper did you know that the average person spends @NUM1 hours and @NUM2 minutes a day on the computer? This is why I think that people are spending ton much time on computers. If people spent less time on computers they would exersice more, be outdoors more and spend more time with their family and freind. If people were to spend less time out computers than they would exersize more. With the growingproblem of obesity in @ORGANIZATION2 less time on computers would help this. Tests show that the less time spent on computers the more time spent exersizing. And with @PERCENT1 of @LOCATION1 obese this world help that problem alot. I once had a freind who would allways be outside exersie and playing. Then he got a @CAPS1 acount and he started to be home on the computer all day and would never be exersizing. Less time on computers would also time outdoors. Result from a I took at my school say tahat @PERCENT2 people would go outside if they couldn't use their computer. And it more people are outside will notice how nature is and @PERSON1 says that use of the electricity in a house. So if everyone of it have a effect on if to turn off their computers they would spent more time with friend and family. that there are to freinds and family on programs like @CAPS2, @CAPS1 and it is talking face to. And you could also do like to the and you see people. use @ORGANIZATION1 but you would need and it. I would be alot easyer and less it you would get of the computer and talk to them face to face. This is why I think that people are spending to much time on their computer and it is having a effect on their life. If they were off the computer they would spend more time exersizing, more time helping the environment and more time socializing with their family and friends. So please @LOCATION1 stop using the computer all the time.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 389,1,"Dear newspaper, I've read your article about peoples opinion on the affects of computers. I believe that having computers are a very good thing. With them we can talk to others from far away, and fast. You can learn a lot too. It also teaches hand-eye coordination. My first reason why they are good is because you ran talk to others. Without computers it would be almost impossible to meet people from far away and talk to them so easily. They even have webcams so you can see each other. You can use @CAPS1, @CAPS2, webcams, or even a simple comment on facebook or myspace. @CAPS2 or webcams are the quichest and maybe even coolest way. Secondly you can learn Computers have so many websites that give out alot of information and resent too. It's muchn easier to get on the internet and type something in then look threw a bunch of books.The internet has dictionaries, news stations, weather, history and where you can find things. With all that you dont even need books. They even have maps and you can print out directions. My final reason is because it teaches hand-eye coordination. When you first start using computers your normally pretty young, and sometimes you don't always type the fastest. Computers have become so advanced that there are even touch-screen and wireless mases. So when you first start you normaly look down to see what your writing, later, adults want you to look at the screen when that becames easy you know that your hand-eye coordination has grown alot better then when you stated. In conclusion I think that computers are a good part of everyday life and that there not bad. They are an easy communication between people, help you learn, and teach good and fast hand-eye coordination in kids.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12680,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoroir is gentla and proudness. The author explains of how he felt of his parent that risk everything in order to give him a better future according to paragraph @NUM1. The author feels proud of being from Cuba through the whole memoroir. He feel proud of being Cuban by explaining the things he does and things that they share by his culture. Last but least he feels thankfulness according to paragraph @NUM2 becouse, through his parents and things from his country he learned what family really means, he says ""... I will never forget that house or its gracious neighborhood or the many things I learned there about how to love. I will never forget how my parents turn this simple house into a home"". Through the whole memoroir the auther show proudness of wher re he came from, from his parents, country, and his neighborhood.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4427,2,"What do you go to the library for? In earlier times libraries used to be the place where you went to study. They were no computers, and so you had to go look up your work in a educational book at the library. Is that truly what people are doing at the libraries now, or are people there to look at vulgar books, magazines, and movies? A library is meant to be the place where you can go to work in peace and have a helpful resource of educational books. But, now you can go to the library and be tempted to look at books you shouldn't be looking at. Instead you could be on the computer the whole time playing games of some sort. The possibilites are endless. People now could go to the library and check out a magazine, movie, or book on: pornagrophy, drugs, achlocol, or worse. Is that really what you want your kid to accidently pick up at the library? Presonally I myself witnessed a little kid pick up a porn magazine at the library, and his mom had to grab it very fast before he had the chance to look at the magazine. The library should not be used for this, and the treat of young kids accidently looking at these materials should not be happening in the library. The music some one could listen is also very bad, and your child could listen to that. Then what if they want to keep listening to it? Yes, the world does have a huge impact on what is put into the library; because, drugs, sex, scandals, and achlocol seem to be what most teenagers are intereseted in at some point in their young life. But a library is a community building and there is no stopping some one from coming in and easily getting these vuglar things. The thoughts of the youth is completely swayed after they watch, read, or listen to this. And, this needs to be controled. Women and children can find all of these materials offensive. These materials need to be censored more then what the are right now. Libraries should be a safe place where people can go to study or get a book, and not to be tempted to look at something they should not be looking at. Many people find this offensive. Yes, in the end libraries are a great place, but the people who do not use libraries for the right reasons are why these materials need to be censored at the libraries",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15139,6,"In the excerpt The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the builders faced many obstacles when attempting to build the Empire State Building for use of dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle that the architects and engineers faced was that ""most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium"" (@NUM1) this was very dangerous because hydrogen is highly flammable. Another obstacle that was faced was that ""the winds at the top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" (@NUM2) even though the dirigible would be tied down to the mooring mast ""the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast"" (@NUM2) Another problem due to the winds would be that ""the wind would blow the dirigible onto the sharp spires of other buildings in the area, which would puncture the dirigible's shell"" (@NUM4) A last example of an obstacle would be that there is a law stating that all ""airships flying too low over urban areas"" (@NUM4) was illegal. Even if there wasn't a law making it ""illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area"" (@NUM4) the attemption of even trying would be very dangerous to the people around and below it, and the building itself.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15236,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced a few obstacles while trying to build the mast. One problem was that there was a lot of pressure and stress that would be put on the building if a dirigible was to dock there. This was because of the high wind speeds and of the sheer size of the dirigible. The designers had to make over sixty thousand dollars worth of modifications to the building's framework to account for the pressure. Another obstacle was that there is a law against airships flying too low over urban areas. This meant that the dirigibles would not be allowed to even get close to the building, let alone dock on it. Eventually, these obstacles and other safety issues, such as hydrogen inside, the blimp being highly flammable, caused the idea to dissappear.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 362,1,"Newspaper, I feel that the use of computers is no big deal. it is a convienient way to communicate, it teaches young adults and adults social and life skills, and is no different than other addictions. These three reasons are why I feel the @ORGANIZATION1 is under-appreciated. My firsty reason why I feel that the @ORGANIZATION1 is under-appreciated is that some people think that less time is spend with family, but I talk to family, and friends everytime on the @ORGANIZATION1. It is a conveinient, fast, and for the most part safe way of communicating. When I need help with something, I sit at the @ORGANIZATION1 and fb chat someone, or if their not on, I e-mail them. I get my answer within a day. Also you can look up the answer online, the internet is a beautifully smart device. Also if you call someone versus chating on the @ORGANIZATION1 you @MONTH1 have no idea who they are, it is also much easier to trace a call then trace a @ORGANIZATION1 to a certain location. Communication is faster, safer, and more conveinient over the @ORGANIZATION1. My second reason for being @NUM1 is that it can help teach said and life skills. For example, did you know that on average, an adult will make @MONEY1 more if they know how to type good, and fast? The @ORGANIZATION1 serves many functions. Facebook, for example, is a social network, amny young adults can learn basic social skills by having a facebook. Social skills play a very important role when you are finding a job for the first time. If you have good social skills, your boss @MONTH1 like, and apreciate you more. Which can only lead to a promotion! Computers are very nifly to have around! my third, and final reason, for believing, with all respect, that @NUM2 people are blinded, is that people don't easily get addicted to the @ORGANIZATION1. It is very hard to become addicted to the @ORGANIZATION1. Only about @PERCENT3 of facebook users are addicted. Compared to an alcohol addiction, about @PERCENT1, or drug addiction, @PERCENT2, @ORGANIZATION1 addiction is microscopic, and not to mention, not deadly. The only similarity between the @ORGANIZATION1, and other deadlier addictions is that they are addicted, and @MONTH1 become grumpy if asked to stop. ""@ORGANIZATION1 addiction can be cured with a speedy recovery, and as long as you are on for an hour or less a day, there is nothing to worry about"" says @PERSON1, at the @NUM3.) @CAPS1 there you have it, computers use is not a major problem. It is a conveinent communication device, an effective way to learn social, and life skills, and is no huge major source of addiction. @CAPS1 there is nothing to worry about. Sit back and look it up on the internet if you don't believe me.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4351,2,"One could understand why some would wish to censor libraries and remove all rude, unwanted, or offensive forms of media from thier shelves. However, one must take into account that, as Katherine Paterson said, if one person has 'the right to remove that [a] book from the shelf...then you have exactly the same right and so does everyone else.' With that thought in mind, do we honestly think that censorship of libraries is a smart idea? If everyone was able to pick and choose which books to be taken off the shelf or which music to ban, then we would have nothing left. You simply cannot please everyone. Are there benefits? Of course there are benefits. One certainly wouldn't want one's child exposed to certain material at a young age. But one must not censor libraries! If one wishes, as a responsible parent, that their child keep away from a particular book or movie, they should take that matter into their own hands and not condemn the book off the shelf. By condemning the book, one condemns the author. As an @CAPS1, one has the freedom of speech, and this applies to media as well. The author has the right to author a book that some @MONTH1 view as offensive, and no one has the right to remove his or her right from the standing. Paper burns at @NUM1 degrees @CAPS2. In the classic novel by @PERSON2, @CAPS2 @NUM1, the protagonist struggles through life in a world antagonized by the banning and burning of books. The story takes place in the future, however, it contains an interesting undertone that hints at the possiblity that this 'future' @MONTH1 be nearer than first imagined. To be blunt, the protagonist's life is horrible, he lives in a world that bans books, yet he is quite the bibliophile. He is employed as a fireman, not to clear fires, but to create them. @PERSON2's firemen are responsible for the delicate task of book burning, which is a rather frequent occurance. However, with the main character's love for literature, how can he burn books? Throughout the novel, the character tries to come to terms with himself and attempts to put an end to the madness, only to be forced out of civilized society. The book is freightening, but an amazing read: it emphasizes the dire reality of censorship. It's everywhere. Now, one certainly doesn't need to worry about @PERSON2's futuristic hell, coming to life any time soon. But one should know the dangers of censorship. No one person has the right to remove a book from the shelves that they feel is offensive, let alone ban it entirely. The banning of books, is a banning of freedom. Freedom of speech, freedom of ideas, freedom of thought. Another disutopian world that comes to mind is the world of @ORGANIZATION1's @DATE1. Though, granted, our society is certainly not headed for that any time soon, if ever: it is still a valid point. Once some freedoms are removed, others will follow. Libraries should remain entirely intact, forever. Every person, every man, woman and child should have ample access to knowlede. Whether this knowledge be gained through books, magazines, movies or music, it needs to be readily avaliable. Instead of banning certain media, one should label said media with a warning. Parents should have enough sense to pay attention and thus, the problem is solved. Censorship is wrong, censorship is unnessesary, and there are a plethora of alternative means for protection against pottentially 'offensive' media. Thus, the case can rest with the knowledge that all forms of media need to availiable, no matter what the content",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9355,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph because at the end she realizes that the things that seemed strange before she had just realized as the seasons were changing and the plants. So the author put that paragraph at the end because in the spring she goes back to school to take the test again,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9545,4,The author decided to finish the story with that phrase to show that she will wait for her next year and do all this over again. She will be waiting for it and do all this over again. She will be waiting for it and prove that she can do it one more time and that she is used to live there now.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12018,5,"The @CAPS1 created by the author in this story is a couple different types of moods. One of those moods is a happy and good @CAPS1. One example of this is when the author states ""I Learned there about how to love. I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" That shows a good @CAPS1 because it is about loving. Next example of a happy or good @CAPS1 is when the story states ""Countless extended family members came and whent-and there was often someone staying with us temperally until they were able to get back on there feet."" This shows a happy @CAPS1 because they are welcoming people into there family. Another @CAPS1 in the story is sad. One example is when it says ""Could not afford to move into a moddest three room appartment"" This is a sad @CAPS1 because a you always want the best of for people and if there to poor to afford a good place and that is sad. Also it says ""They struggled both personally and financially. This is a sad @CAPS1 because they are haveing trouble getting by. There is more then @NUM1 @CAPS1 in this story, but the most import @CAPS1 I think is loving. A example of loving is when it states ""all thes cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship."" That line right there is showing love. That is the most importand @CAPS1 to know in this story, loving.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16425,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced multiple obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. For example, as mentioned in paragraph @NUM1, ""a thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame."" The difficulty in having stress from the dirigible's load and the wind pressure is that it would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation, which was nearly eleven hundred feet below. Wind was another obstacle that the builders had to overcome. The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. And even if the dirigible were to be tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around the mooring mast. Dirigibles moored in open fields could be weighted down in the back with lead weights, but using the led weights at the Empire State Building would not be safe, as they would dangle high above pedestrians on the street.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9446,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph because she wants to take the driving test in spring time. Spring time is a symbol of positive feelingsshe gets positive feelings from the blooming of the winter hibiscus.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12269,5,"The author created the mood of happiness that the authors parents went through such struggle, but in the end everything turned out fine because they have family. The author sets the tone of the struggle by describing the author's parents first home ""A furnished one-room apartment,"" and that ""racism was the norm and segregation prevaileel in the united States"" @CAPS1 explains how her family had a hard time with money and that people were racist to them because of teir background. But, ten @CAPS1 describes how @CAPS1 overcame the struggle of her parents and the racism by uniting with all the other immigrants living in their neiborood. ""Despite customs elsewhere , all of these cultures came together in greater solidarity and friendship"". This sets the tone that even though tere were many bad things going on, they overcame it. @CAPS1 also sets that mood when @CAPS1 describes her traditional home. @CAPS1 says there was great food, ""passionate cuban music"", and ""the congregation of family and friends"". This sentence makes the reader feel happiness that they could go through such bad times of leaving their homelands to a neiborhood full of friendship and happiness. The author sets the tone by it first descring harsh times, and then talking about how happy her home is becuse @CAPS1 had her family and friends. Overall, the author sets te tone of happiness That this family overcame struggle.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9389,4,"Minfong Ho included the last paragraph in the story because it alluded to the fact that saeng felt better and more confident when reminded of home. when saeng saw the hibiscus she got a feeling ""so intense, it was almost visceral.” The flower was creatively used by Ho. She said that the winter hibiscus is strong enough to make it through the cold months, which made the reader think after reading the last paragraph, that this flower must give saeng hope and confidence. Also, the geese make a V which I infured would mean Vietnam to saeng which is what the author is trying to get her reader to think. That is why “and the geese return.” is mentioned in the last paragraph. Minfong Ho wants her readers to realize that objects that make us more comfortable and happy are what make us strong and confident in the end. The author did a great job placing that last thought into the last paragraph because it perfectly sums up the lesson, and that is that you should do things when you feel confident and it feels like home to you. You @MONTH1 be small and fragile, but if you “plant” yourself you can thrive with confidence. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13312,5,"In the memoir, the author describes his home enviroment while growing up. As a child, his home has given off a very happy and loving mood. One in which was created again in this memoir. When describing the culinary and musical habits in his home as a child, I can feel the happiness that the moment had possessed. Also, I can feel the love between himself and his constantly growing family that surrounds his kitchen table @TIME1. So, to me, this memoir gives off a great mood. One filled with happiness, love, and loyalty. Also with unity and friendship as well.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6521,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist because he is going to be on the road a long time. The features of no buildings, no people and no cars, affect on the rider is that he feels helpless when he is low on water. The ghost town doesn’t help he because the old man told him about it and he thought he would be able to get more water. The grape juice factory affected him because he thought he would get a drink but it was abanded. This is how the features affect the cyclist.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3860,2,"Don't you hate when you come across a book that you wish was never written? I'm sure we all come to that point in our lives, constant readers, or not. Like a qoute i once read, 'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of children or any other children have taken off the shelf. But if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf then you also have exactly the same right and so does everone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' - Katherine Paterson, Author If you ask me, I think there should be a certain autority to these books. Maybe if we could make a petition and have at least @NUM1 people sign it then the book could be removed. All of this goes for music, movies, magazines, even bibles in librarys. I'm not saying we should make a law that says if one person dosen't like something then no body should have the right to have it. But as a public if enough people all agree we shouldn't have something then maybe its best that we dont. We all worry about our children, having to keep a constant eye on them making sure there not getting into something there not supposed to be in. Same goes with books and movies, even music and magazines nowadays, and for certain people, even bibles. Now dont get me wrong, I'm sure we all know that when a child goes to a library and trys to check out an 'inapropriate' book then the checkout counter will deny the child and take the book. But just think for a minute here, That doesnt meen the child cant go into the library find a book and just read it there. Theres also the senario where, mind me it @MONTH1 not be your child but with todays crime records then this is very probable, the child could grab a book, magazine, even a film and just steal it. In the long run there are many things we can do to prevent things like this from happening. There could be an adult section of the library, not just for '@CAPS1' rated books or films but just a place where we can keep all the books we dont think children should be reading. Still we should definately have the option to petition off books we don't think our children should be reading. Think what you will but this is my opinion of library censorship, hopefully its yours now too.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10121,4,"I believe the author concludes the story “Winter Hibiscus”, written by Minfong Ho, with “When they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snow melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again”, because she is trying to show how past memories can be transformed into hope and determination. After failing her driving test Saeng finds the Hibiscus, the memories of her home land and her grandmother consume her. She buys the plant and puts it in the vegetable garden. After she is done planting, Saeng sees a flock of Canada geese fly overhead. Using her memory of her old home and her family, applied to her new surroundings, Saeng vows to re-take the test, to try again. The author ends the story “Winter Hibiscus” with that paragraph to show that Saeng will not give up.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15989,6,"In the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted the builders faced obsticals in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building. An @CAPS1 the faced was A thosand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building held by a single cable tether, this added stress to the buildings frame. the stress of the blimps load add plus wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the buildings foundation. the steel frame of the Empire state building had to be strengthened to accommodate this.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6311,3,"The features of the setting effect the cyclist because it is a dessert. The dessert is very hot. I know this because in the story, he states that it feels around @NUM1 degrees. He struggled for water but couldn’t find any that was cool. He found a water pump that had ""a tar like substance oozed out, followed by blackish water feeling somewhere in the neighborhood of two hundred degrees.” This means it was hot and couldn’t find water.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12206,5,"The mood created by the author is welcoming. ""In 1961, I was born into this simple house, situated in a two-family, blond brick building in the iron bound section of Newark, New Jersey."" This gives the feeling of being welcomed because it makes me feel like we just saw Narciso Rodriguez's house and we are about to walk in. ""In our neighborhood, despite custums elsewhere, all of these cultures came together in great solitary and friendship."" This makes me feel welcome because it doesn't matter if you are different you are still family. ""Within its walls, my young parents created our traditional Cuban home, the very heart of which was the kitchen."" This gives me the feeling of being welcomed because it was imagery that makes me imagine and I'm able to picture this house, with brilliant smells and lovely cuban music playing. In conclusion, the mood of being welcomed is portrayed strongly throughout the memoir, especially when he is describing his home",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 5981,3,"I believe the features of the cyclist affected him because he was impatient and trustworthy he tock the old mens advice to take an hr of his time bay taking a short cat, if he would of stayed true to the mep he wouldn’t of almost ared of heat but his impatientress got the best of him so he took the shortcut. After his experence he new haes to stat ?? to the mep and not trust people who havent seen changes in the last few years. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6752,3,"The conditions that the bicyclist faced that affected his trip were various amount of things that could really screw your ride up. Some of the conditions were hot It was very hot and that makes it hard to think fast, move fast and make good decisions another would be there was lose gravel and that makes it tough to maneuver and you have to watch your speed. So he’s not going anywhere in a hurry. also there were lets of hills and that makes for an uncomfortable ride and a tiring one atthat. Adding to that he was fresh out of water and that can mean dehydration again bud judjment and even heat stroke or exoustion another bad thing is he was in the middle of nowhere so its not like he could stop. Some where we asks for a drink to, there was nothing around for miles. These things show how rough the rode was made because these conditions exsisted.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10377,4,"The author of “winter Hibiscus” concludes the story with “when they come back, in the spring, when the snow melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take the test again.”Saeng, because it creates the mood that Saeng is accepting the changes. Just like nature adapts to climate and location change, saeng seems to appreciate her situation and is deciding her situation and is deciding to make it a positive instead of a negative. The author is showing that if your having trouble, try again; through the main character, Saeng.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7694,3,"The features of the setting have a huge effect on the cyclist. There was a point in the story where he ran out of water ad he remembered that the old guys had sworn the next town was only eighteen miles down the rode. He was tired ad dehydrated but he thought he could make it along the road. So he started off and the two miles later the terrain changed and so did his outlook on this entire journey. “Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills. ""Sometimes life can be so cruel.” @CAPS1 hills took a lot out of him and he was now on a highway. Before this terrain change the rider is very positive and thinks he can do this easily. “I could make that!” But after the terrain change he looses hope and almost don’t make it. “It didn’t really matter. I was going to die and the birds would pick me clean.” It is obvious as you read that when the terrain becomes tough it has a huge negative effect on the cycilists.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7327,3,"The features of the setting that affect the cyclist are the conditions of the road and weather. he hit some bad and nasty water. along with other hazardous things, he also tried to ride through a desert where he had already drank all his bottles of water and had nothing left to drink, he was very dehydrated and had to drink nesles water. It was hard for him to keep going, being dehydrated so bad but he had to. at one point a big snake almost took up the entire road and he had to just ease his way on by it, his riding conditions were so bad, he thought he was going to die, he said the birds were going to eat him. The weather was so hot it was hard to go on, he finally found a bathroom, went inside it drank water from the sink and yellced to a man that told him the direction he wanted",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15919,6,"The builders of the Empire State building faced not so many but difficult obstacles. one of the obstacles were the crowded @CAPS1 they had for the dirigible. crowded @CAPS1 can cause the dirigible to hit or bump into another building if not pop the thing. The wind could also make the dirigible sway and hit another building. Another obstacle was the stress the building was having because the dirigible was tied to it. If the wind blew hard, the dirigible would put alot of tension on the building and something could go wrong.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3034,2,"Author Katherine Paterson once said, 'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf. But if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf--that work I abhor--then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' @CAPS1 quote is reflecting people wanting to rid of some of the literature, books, magazines, music, and movies in libraries, because they think that the material is inappropriate. If we got rid of all of the books from @CAPS1 world, we would have nothing left to learn from, and some of the main sources of entertainment would vanish. I believe that certain materials should not be replaced from the shelves, because the youth of today need to learn about the true past, people should learn about how cultures really are, authors and writers need to be able to express themselves, and parents should be able to control what they believe their children should and should not read. If it were not for books and novels from the past, the current generations would have no clue of what history was about. Children should be allowed to read books such as @ORGANIZATION1, The @CAPS2 @CAPS3, and @CAPS4 @CAPS5 in order to get a taste of how much times have changed. Stories from grandparents only take a person back about @NUM1 years; we need sources that can take us back thousands of years. Some families, such as an @CAPS6 @CAPS7 family, might get offended if their children are reading books that say things like 'nigger,' but that is our history. It is something we cannot change, and it is important for kids to know how things really were and how terrible people were treated. We also do not want today's youth making some of the terrible mistakes generations in the past made, so they need to be taught about the real but sometimes horrendous situations. Learning about different cultures would be another issue if books and movies were depleted. Money is not available these days to just travel to different countries and experience their culture. How is a young girl from a small town in @LOCATION2 supposed to find out how people in @LOCATION1 live their life? For all she knows, the people could be living in igloos. I believe that it is important for people to understand different cultures and religions in order to accept them in society. Movies can teach a lot about different countries, and books do a wonderful job as well. If they are gone, cultures would be misunderstood and forgotten. Also, authors and directors need to be able to express themselves. Every since people are young, they are taught that it is important to be unique and express their own style. Not every writer is going to want to write about butterflies and rainbows. There are people that love writing about violence, gore, and segregation. Those things are part of the world today and everyone needs to face that reality. Getting rid of all of those books from library shelves will not solve the problems; it would only cause people to not expect what might happen to them or @CAPS1 world. Now, some parents @MONTH1 have hard times when their young boy comes home from school with an offensive book, but parents should have control over their kids. If they have a problem with what their children are reading, then they should deal with that personally. They do not need to influence other people's lives by trying to get rid of the materials off of public libraries' shelves. Why people would even consider getting rid of history and learning materials about cultures and different subjects in @CAPS1 world is beyond me. It would be like asking someone to rewind time so that we would not have had slavery, depressions, world wars, and homicides. It is impossible to undo history, but we can learn about the things from the past in order to not make the same mistakes and things of the current world in order to be accepting and understanding. Books, magazines, movies, and music are wonderful. They represent self-expression and freedom of speech, so people should let them be an entertainment and learning source. Without them, we would be and have nothing",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12267,5,"The mood the author used in the memoir is showing how proud their family is. Narciso shows how greatful and proud she is that her parents would change cultures, language, and also find a new job so she could be born in @LOCATION1. The author also shows how close their family is. They have an extended family because they live with their grandparents. Narciso is very proud to live in the family she is, and grateful that her parents did all of that for her.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6770,3,The features of setting affect the cyclist in that a desert-like temperature and the terrain on which he must bike make him more prone to thirst and exhausting. The heat @MONTH1 cause the cyclist to dehydrate faster than normal. This is especially true in this case because of his lack of water. The cyclist might pass out or suffer a heat stroke. The terrain of rolling hills will tire out the cyclist quicker than if he were still on the flat road. His muscle will start to ocha and his body will need water and rest. The story would totaly change if the setting were different. If the cyclist were biking in the @DATE1 on a cold day in the mid @NUM1 he would not have a chance of suffering a heatstroke. There would be a significantly less chance of him becoming dehydrated. The setting is very important in every story and can change everything.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3366,2,"Should certain materials be removed from our library shelves just because it has uncensored materials inside of it? My opinion is no, actually heck no! Now don't get me wrong, but I'm not the type of person that likes reading materials like that all the time, but every once in a while there is a really good book or magazine I would like to read that is uncensored. The bad thing is that I am told I cannot just because it says something or shows a picture of something a teenager supposidly shouldn't be seeing. One of my main questions on this material is why are they allowed to show statues of the early roman times in our history books but not materials we hear and see on a daily bases? Half of the time the statues are of a naked person. I don't see why that is allowed but other materials about our times are not. We are in the time period were people are open that it doesn't bother them to see that stuff. Yes, some materials are not suited for teenagers my age, but honestly I hear offensive things all the time when I walk through the halls in my high school. Someone @MONTH1 have an opinion about how the material is offensive, but if its so offisive why do they bother even complaining or thinking about it. Yes, everyone has a right to their own opinion, but thats there opinion and that doesn't make them always right. That person can have there opinion but other people have opinions that might oppose the other persons opinion. Does that make them wrong? You will never know because everyone has there own and who knows whose opinion is right. Another statement I would like to just throw out there is that we teenagers are learning to make our own decisions because in the near future we are going to be adults and have to make those choices on our own. So, just let us choose if we would like to read material with uncensored things in it. It is our choice, why can't we just choose it without people telling us we cannot. I still do not see why it is such a big deal of reading uncensored material. Why can't they just allow the materials in our libraries. Don't make any decisions for us because we can do it ourselves, we are learning how to be more adult like, right?",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12519,5,"The mood of the memoir is generally happy. Narciso talks about how wonderful his home was growing up. Narciso speaks about the wonderful music and the food, he talks about his family's happiness and how that house he grew up in became his home. The mood is happy because it makes you feel the love he felt living with his parents in that home in New Jersey. To conclude the mood is happiness, proudness, fondness. It brings back the memory's of anyone's first home and love that was there",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3118,2,"All libraries are not good cause some people are going to library an getting on the computer getting on websit that the child find. The people need the computer for appicatetionfor job an the owner be wanting to get a card .That is uncause for in some term. Out of all kides canlearn from the library an do there work if need it's so much they can do that they can be there all week. All people from littler children to adult can still learn now today in the @NUM1 centrey . You can learn about your ancienty or about car crash or about or thing that are going on it the world . As like japaness or chin ,you can do so much from the library or from the books thats there.It's up to the family to get to know more about themself by the library .",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12484,5,"Your home @CAPS4 were you find happyness, joy and peace. Not only is home a @CAPS1 to be @CAPS2 but a @CAPS1 for family to be unified. In this @CAPS3, The author explains what it is to have a family and what it is and means. Joy and peace is the over all mode and thats what family @CAPS4 feel likeMany farmles in @LOCATION1 are immagrants and thats what makes up @LOCATION1. Many people stuggle to give education and happiness to there familys. They care about there familys future and would leave there hole life back in there home countries to give that to there Children and that is what familes @CAPS4 do.The author is great ful for what his parents have suffered so that he could get the good education here and not suffer as they did The mood is very calming and it describes what home and family @CAPS4 feel like.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4335,2,"Did you know that libraries contain books, movies, music, magazines, etc.? Yes ! They have it all, if you ever need something for research or a project just go there. But if there is something that you do not like, just keep going. I do not think that the books, music, movies, magazines, etc., should be removed from the shelves if they are found offensive. I think that if it is something that offends you then you should just keep going. That 'something' that might offend you, could be helpful to others. So, now you know if you ever see something that you don't like in the library just walk away. It could be helpful to you and others. If things offend you, how would the next person learn? They won't. Don't only think about your self, think about others in the situation also.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16436,6,"In the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by @ORGANIZATION2, the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock at the Empire state building. @PERSON1 says in the excerpt ""The one obstacle to their expanded use in New York City was the lack of a suitable landing area."" This shows that in order for the dirigibles to dock on the top of the Empire State Building, there must be enough landing space. If a mooring mast was added to the top of the building it would only allow dirigibles to anchor there for several hours, for refueling or service, and to let passengers off and on. One of the others practical reason why dirigibles could not moore at the Empire State building was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. The architects could also not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the building's flat roof. A thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, could add stress to the building's frame. So the builders of the Empire State Building did not allow the dirigibles to dock on top of thier building. Also because of everything that could happen to the building.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9495,4,The author concludes the story with this because she failed the test already and wanted to pass it nexttime So she doesn't make her mother dissapointed in her.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7445,3,"Well since the cyclist is in a desert and out of mother he is probably not going to be happy. The ""ghost towns"" aren't really a boost of confidence either. The rugged hills made him angry too. The heat affected him the most.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 60,1,"Dear @CAPS1, I, agree that computers are benefits society. The computers have positive effect on people like hand-eye coordination. I helps you learn about other country religios, and other thing. You can communicate, meet other people, and chat tru computers. Another positive fact about computer is that you can find all the information you need and fast. In other words is that computer help a lot of people.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9233,4,"He want to learn hibiscus spirits. Don't be afraid of fare. You just keep ahead, continuly to learn what you want, then you will success. like hibiscus has strong alive: fight with evironment. So, the author use this paragraph to conclude, the purpose is the Saeng will take this test again, like hibiscus will budding when spring's come",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4031,2,I dont thank so due to the fact that most libraries in towns and cities are open to the public. if the person or persons find the peice of material offending then they should pass the item. or they can skim over it. on the other hand the person or persons does have the right to freedom of speech but should not exceed their opinion above the level of the law. if music is played in the library that others do find offended then in my opinion yes they should and can speak up for their rights. books and magazines should be allowed in the public library even if they feel offended. this is due to the fact that it is a public library and there should be many many different kinds of books. this is because people hav different personalities which mean we wll like different things. that does not mean that others can not speak their opinion because like i said earlier every one in the united states of america has the right to speak what is on their mind even though it @MONTH1 not be what others want to hear they can still do it. well that is my opinion on what i think should happen.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 776,1,"Yes, I do think that we should continue useing computers because it helps us stay in contact with other countries around the world, it forms a balance, and it also makes life simpler. First of all, computers help us stay in contact with the other countries around the world. Without computers we would not be able to @CAPS1 or evan video message other countries about important events. Sencond, we have to balance computers and excersing and interacting with just sitting on the computer but computers can help us interact with family and friends by emailing or video chating can also help you stay in contact. Last useing computers makes life simpler like how its so much easier to write an @CAPS1 and not a letter and its easier to instant message someone then to call them also for school projects you can make your project look so much better by adding pictures and diffrent fonts just hand writing it. That why arents arent a waste at time because they help us stay in contact with the other countres, they form a balance and it also makes life simplier.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12547,5,"The author tries to set the mood to gratefulness. ""They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends, & careers in the country they loved."" ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love & sacrifice."" ""I've often told them of my admiration for there strength & perseverence.""",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 11883,5,"In the memoir the author created a mood by using details about the setting and the chareters, one of the mood that was in the story is friendship. In paragraph @NUM1, it says ""@CAPS1 graced our kitchen table for meals more often than not."" The author is explaining that he had family friends over to his house to eat almost every night. Another mood that is in the memoir is careing. In paragraph @NUM1, it says ""there was often someone staying with us temporarily until they were able to get back on their feet."" This shows that even though the authors family had a small home they let people stay with them untill they could leave. The last mood in the memoir is happiness. In paragraph @NUM3, it says ""I celebrated my first birthdays. Mood it was in the warmth of the kitchen in this humble house where a Cuban feast alwase filled the air."" The author explains how he had his birthday with his friends and family. These are only three of the main moods in the story.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12649,5,"Home is where the heart is, many of said this and many more have meant it. In the non-fictional memoir by @PERSON1 talks about the importance of family. Narciso pats many moods into the story and describes them with such grace. ""Friends and celebrations both, formed the backdrop to life in our warm home."" (paragraf @NUM1) This gives a sence that for him home was the safest and happiest place for him to be. ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open the the many people we considered family."" (paragraf @NUM2) This gives off the mood that his home was a very careing place and that anyone that they loved was cared for. ""It was here where I learned the real definition of 'family'."" (paragraf @NUM3). This sets the mood that he was never really alone that he had people with him at all times that cared and loved for him like he loved for them. ""My parents turned this simple house into a home."" (paragraf @NUM3)",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 11827,5,"In this memoir of Narciso Rodriguez, @PERSON3's life, the mood containing it all, was greatful, and showed how his parents gave him love through his whole life. Both his parents were born and raised in Cuba, and in 1956, they both moved to the United States. Starting their lives over again, and taking any job they could find. Then in 1961, @PERSON2, @CAPS1. was born. Both Parents raised him with love, and care, and introducing his Cuban background into his life. As @PERSON2, was telling his story, all readers could tell how greatful he was to have a family like he did. Also, as he shared his non-– blood related family, and the remembrence on how his parents' life changed by moving to @LOCATION2, he showed the respect he had towards them.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3414,2,"Certain materials, such as books, music, movies, or magazines, do not need to be removed from the shelves in libraries if they are found offensive. There are multiple reasons to back up this statement, including an accurate quote from author Katherine Paterson. People build their character through their reactions of how people treat them. For example, in life sombody @MONTH1 offend another person, but that does not mean the offender is going to dissapear after doing so. How does this relate to libraries you might ask? Books and movies do not need to be taken off of shelves in libraries if they are found offensive because there are a lot of things in the real world that are offensive. It is your choice in what you want to read, listen to, or watch. Just because you @MONTH1 have the option of checking out something you do not think is appropriate or is offensive, does not mean you have to check it out. Some people @MONTH1 enjoy reading or watching things that are offensive. You @MONTH1 be wanting to argue, 'But I don't want my children being exposed to such offensive materials.' That is why most public libraries are split into children and adult sections. If you happen to come across an offensive book in the childrens section, then do not let your child check that out. It is as simple as that. Trying to take the book off the shelf or complaining about it would only take up more time. The quote, 'All of us can think of a book that we hope our children or any other children have taken off the shelf. But if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf-that work I abhor-then you also have exactly the same right and so does everybody else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us', by Katherine Paterson, is a perfect example to conclude the reasons why books should not be taken off the shelf. She is saying that if one person is allowed to remove a book, then anybody else would be able to have that ablitiy as well. Therefore, a book that @MONTH1 not offend you at all could be taken off the shelf because somebody else does not approve of it. Eventually, there would be no books left. In conclusion, if there are books, music, movies, or magazines that offend you, simply do not check them out. You do not need to get rid of them because somebody else @MONTH1 want to check them out",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6639,3,The features of the setting that affect cyclist depends where they are located. In this story the feeling on “nothing and the desert around him and the heat gave him no hope”. It all depends on where you are cycling. “It didn’t really matter I was going to die.” This quote states his feelings on what was going on through his head while he was dieing of thirst. He felt nothing he was sure he was going to die until he found a sign of civilization that was near and he became better and his hope was raised.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15017,6,The building was big and beatful.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12979,5,"The main mood that is potrayed by the author is coziness or family, because his parents gave up everything and came to the United States so that Narciso could have a great childhood and he did. Narciso's parents turned a small apartment into a happy comforting place that people would go to for a happy reunion matter where they were from. The single force of staying over brought people together. That is how Narciso grew up with and with that was lucky and grateful.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13392,5,The mood projected by the auter is that of a nice and cozy place where the stayed and were always nicee. They let anyone into their home and kept eachother safer from the racists.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 450,1,"Dear Readers, I believe that spending time on the computer has its pros and cons. For the good things people are able to do research talk to people such as friends and family and also the computer can help you learn about anything you need to know about. I also think that there are some cons. People spend way to much time becomming distracted, you ignore your family without even knowing it and if you are just staring at a computer screen which can perminatly damage your eyes. I'm going to start with the good things about how computers have effects on people. The computer is great if you have to do research. If you need information on anything you can search it. Like if you have to do research on a certain project or subject the computer is the fastest way to get the information you need. Another good thing is that you have the capibility to talk to people such as friends and family. To me that is very important and I'm sure for you it is too. Thats what I believe a few of the good things are. Now, I'm going to talk about the bad things. I firmly believe that people are spending way too much time on the computer, without knowing how long has gone by! You just stare at the screen, which is not good for your eyes. It can perminatly damage them. One last thing I would like to mention, is that when you are on the computer they tend to ignore their friends and family which could be a big problem. These were just a few examples about how the computer has an effect on people.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3094,2,"Books, music, movies, and much more, being removed off of the self because no one liked them and find some of them offensive does not not mean to get rid of them. Many enjoy them, and could use them for shool research or topics for a class. First of all I know for a fact that some of the music my friends and I listen to would bother many other people, it was clearly our chioce to buy the music, book, or movie. We all have different opinions on what 'good' music or movies are. I can understand why some people would want us to get rid of it because of the foul language or racial slurs, but it is our money and our decision to buy it. Many teens take the music thing out of control and turn it up so loud that it will let @LOCATION1 hear it and with all the word and comments then make in the music I can see why adults don't want us to buy it. In respect for others I think we can turn down the radio, don't make comments to movies, and don't be immature with the books. Second, All the research and studying we have to do in school, it would be pointless to not be able to have books or magazines to do our research with. Now a days the students get to pick what they want to do a topic over and if they want to do that topic bad enough then I am pretty sure they have the material to look up the information on that subject. I do realize that it gets out of control with the music, movies, magazines, and books but we know when to settle down and grow up. Teens who are going to be immature about it does not deserve to have all those things. We just have to learn to use it with respect. Just getting them taken off the shelf would not be a good idea because some kids would actually use them for school believe it or not",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9222,4," The author concludes the story with the sentence, ’’when they come back Saeng vowed silently to her self in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again’’. The story tells us most of the hard times and obstictes Saeng has had to go through. The two major ones in this story were moving to a new placThe author concludes the story with the sentence, ’’When they come back Saeng vowed silently to her self in the spring,when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding,then I will take that test again.The story tells us most of the hard times and obstictes Saeng has had to go through.The two major ones in this story were moving to a new place,and failing her ariving test.Saeng had a hard time trying to overcome these events and others.So I think this sentence was put at the end so the readers could see that see was going to be ok, and overcome everything that happened.Know we know this special plant will help Saeng will future proplems. e, and failing her ariving test. Saeng had a hard time trying to overcome these events and others. so I think this sentence was put at the end so the readers could see that see was going to be ok, and overcome everything that happened know we know this special plant will help Saeng will future problems. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13461,5,"In this article, the authors mood seemed to be happy and good. For example he likes that his parents are selfish and hard working people and tried to make his life happy. He also liked how they would invite a lot of people to come over for a visit and how they treated them like family. He also likes how they tought him things that they know how to do such as cooking. His mood did seem to change when he talked about how in Cuba having a job was a bit eser then how it was in New Jersey. They tried to make as much as they could and his mood seemed to be a bit worried. His mood changed to be happy again when he menchened that he loves the way they treat their house like a real home.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 11907,5,I think the mood in this story was sad/happy. I think it was happy because it says he loved to cook And he thanked his parents for teaching him to cook. Also In paragraph @NUM1 Its a paragraph dedicated to his parents. I think it is sad because in paragraph @NUM2 it says his parents had very good Jobs but when they came to the united states they had to startover.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3708,2,"Everyone likes to watch movies, jam to some music, and get lost in an interesting book. Therefore everyone should be able to read, watch, or listen to what they want and the same things as other people are reading, listening to, and watching. Some things are needed to look up or look at if one is doing a project. Other people just @MONTH1 be entertained by certain peices of liturature, or music. In that case, why censor certain things that people are interested in, or even things to research, in libraries? Many people enjoy violent writing or gorey movies. Reading these things also amusses them. So why take away what they like? If a library takes certain books off of their shelves, then they could be taking away a type of literature that people are interested in. If one removes a book that twenty people take pleasure in reading, then thats twenty people that are not going to want to read anything else. People are different in many ways. That includes the variety of things humans are interested in. For example, things they are interested to read. Humans having a major differences in characteristics, meaning they don't enjoy all the same things. The articles, magazines, or movies @MONTH1 be not suited for schools or libraries, but if it's a topic people like, or if it's someone needs for a project, then there is no reason to get rid of it. Some books offten offend certain groups or races of people, but the book gets it uniqueness from what it says. Some books are writen in times of racisim. This shuold'nt make a book worth critisizing because that was the way things were said in that time. It allows the book to give off a feeling of living in the time is based in. On the other hand, some magazines are writen about horrible events and wars, but people find entertainment in reading about these events going on in the world. They want to know what is really happening across seas or even around home. Someone isn't able to know what's happening is no one lets him or her read the magazine. Authors and writers write these things for the entertainment of people who want to read them. Due to the wide veriety of interest people have, there are many different types of writings. People should'nt have their favorite book taken off shelves just to see that the guy right next to him found the book he loves. That just would'nt be fare. Libraries should put on the shelf what people write, so that others @MONTH1 enjoy them.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16294,6,"In the excerpt, ""The Mooring Mast,"" by @ORGANIZATION2, certain obstacles such as foundation support, nature, and safety challenged the building of the docking station for dirigibles. The first problem the architects faced was the docked dirigibles placing too much stress on the building. To combat this problem, drastic changes to the building would have to be made. ""The steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate this new situation."" (@CAPS1 @NUM1, @CAPS2 @NUM2) This change was stated to cost over sixty thousand dollars. Another obstacle the builders faced upon constructing the mooring mast, was nature. At this height, the wind currents are violent and unpredictable. Despite being tethered to the building, the dirigibles would spin and twist around the mass, an unsecure and dangerous aspect. Lastly, as the except claims the greatest reason for not being successful, the safety violations of the mast were too great. ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen... and hydrogen is highly flammable. When the German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by fire... the owners of the Empire State Building realized how much worse that accident would have been...above a densely populated area such as downtown New York."" (@CAPS1 @NUM3, @CAPS2 @NUM4) The moor provided severe risk to the safety of the people of New York. This problem served as a serious problem, thus serving as an obstacle for the builders of the mooring mass. The building's foundations, nature, and safety violations all served as problems for the builders creating the mooring mass.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1231,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, I think computers have good effects on people such as letting people talkto family or friends that live faraway. Computers also let you learn about different places and people around the world. My first reason is that computers let you learn about different places and people around the world. This helps you if you are going on vacation to foreign country you can learn where the test historical sights are and you can also learn where the best hotels are. If you have a project due on a foreign country you can search it up and it will give you all the data you need about it. My second reason is that computers let you talk to family or friends that live faraway. This helps you keep in touch so it doesn't seem like you don't know them any more. Computers can also let you talk to your friends that live faraway and if you want to hangout it would let you talk about which days are good for you and them.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3065,2,"From my own observations I do not beleive that any materials should be removed from libraries. All students have the right to read/learn about different subjects. Even if that includes some of them being offensive. Some subjects might be considerderd offensive, like the holocaust for example. If we didnt learn about what happened during that horrific time it could possibly happen again without us even knowing that it has happened before. But it is the students choice to read about that subject or to simply ignore it if it is cosidered offensive. In conclusion I do not beleive that materials in libraries should be censored or removed from shelves. People need to learn a little about everything that goes on in this world to be a better, more educated, well-rounded individual.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 8935,4,"The author ends the story with this conclusion to show that @PERSON1 is very passionate about connecting her life in the United States, to how life was in Vietnam and bringing them together somehow. In the story, @PERSON1 talks about how she misses home and how she is still trying to adapt to her new life away from the home she knew, when saeng says that she has failed the test and wants to take it again, she means that she wants to show that she can survive in the United States without disappointing her mother. When saeng spent @MONEY1 on a plant, her mom was in disbelief because Saeng knows how hard it is to survive. When the conclusion says,”I will take the test again,” it shows that Saeng is willing try to make it in the United States from Vietnam, proving that she can make a better life for herself and her family by working hard. While still keeping trditions in Vietnam alive. Saeng simply wanted to make her new home feel like Vietnam by buying a plant she knew her mother would like.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9279,4,"The author had concluded the story with the paragraph When they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again because the author wanted the reader to notice how the mother and the child bond with gardening. Between the different things that author has said about Saeng and Saeng’s mother. He as in the author shows a way they have bonded they being Saeng and Saeng’s mother which I think it was fairly neat they way the author had bid out this story. It was a fairly interesting story to it kept you guessing, on the end of year seat, wondering. But I enjoyed reading that story. I had also liked how the daughter and mother were so great friends. But it was a nice thing to see with the daughter and the mother being so in touch with each other. Also, in doing this the author has shown some of his ways of thinking. The author shows us he a great mind and a good way thinking. This author is telling us a great story of a girl and her mother it sounded very good to me. This story is a gardening story of a daughter and her mom moving from Vietnam and moving to the @ORGANIZATION1 to live out the rest of their lives.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16604,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced quite a few obstacles in making a dirigible docking stations. One of the main things was that there was a law in place that banned the use of low flying aircrafts in urban areas, like New York City. Another reason is that it was just not safe to dock these massive blimps that high. Almost @NUM1 hundred feet up the winds would have been very violent, and with the tailend of the dirigible not being fastened down, it was very likely that it could get spun around and end up tangled with the mast. Also it was not safe because many foreign blimps were filled with hydrogen which was highly flamable, and if an- accident similar to the Hindenburg with fire occurred over in urban place like New York City it could have been very tragic. Lastly in order to build the mast builders had to re inforce the frame of the building so that it could bear the stress that such a station would put on the structure.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3662,2,"Everyone has a favorite book. And some of us can't put it down once we read the first sentence. Then days later, the library takes it down and states that it's offensive to many people that have read it. Why should multiple people lose a good read just because someone doesn't like what they see? We're all trying to accomadate to everyone and their needs just to please them. Whatever they ask is done because we don't want a big scene. A majority of people think, 'That book is offensive! Take it down! Disgusting!'. But why? Everyone has a right to read what they want to read. No library should uphold to the needs of a minority about an 'offensive' book just because they say it's inappropriate. Who are we to judge what's good for everyone and what's not? Books are written for a reason, and that's to share the ideas of the author, not to corrupt society with their 'evil' and 'offensive' ideas that could potentially cause a child to rebel. That excuse is ridiculous. A parent should've taught their child to differentiate between right and wrong, and if they use the '@CAPS1 child will become a rebel if they read this!' excuse, then they're not confident in their childs capability, or the fact that they taught their child well. Also, it's not just the readers getting angry, it's the author. How bad would someone feel if they spent a year or two on a fantastic book, just to have it banned from library after library? Probably angry or upset. Authors have the right to write whatever they want. If they wish to talk about dragons and princesses, so be it. If they want to discuss why we see a full moon when we do? Go right ahead. No one can stop great books from being made and they certainly shouldn't be able to stop people from reading it. If someone is offended by a book, then don't read it, simple as that. Parents like to protect their children from harms way and bring them up as fine citizens of @LOCATION1. By having this desire, the parents do every little thing to make sure their son or daughter doesn't see, hear, or read anything inappropriate or 'bad'. This is just ridiculous. Controlling a childs life will just cause them to rebel more and more as they get older. Let children have a choice in what book they read, or the movie they watch. Parents need to teach their children right from wrong, and in doing so, letting them see, hear, or read whatever they want should be no problem. Without books, movies, and music, what would the world be like today? No one knows. Books are a great source of information, letting the author express themself as well. Movies are almost just as harmless, limits are needed, but overall? There should be no problem. Also, music allows the artist to bring out their side of creativity and emotion. Allowing that music, or movie, or book to be made, and then take it away is ridiculous. If it offends someone, then that person should just forget it, instead of taking it away from the people who love it and the person who made it.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9278,4,The author concludes this paragraph with the story because of the potintal of the hibiscus. So Saeng will go take the test again no matter she already took it and failed. She is like the hibiscuc. The hibiscus seems out of place and is determined to survive when the snow melts. So she will go take the test again and us the hibiscus as her modifation.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13201,5,"The mood of the auther might have been in a good mood. the auther might have been doing some of us own family, history and saw that his family did the same things as what they did in the story.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13583,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is a happy thankful mood. The why it is a happy thankful mood is for the reason why he talk's about his family and how they sacraficed so much just for him. For example; ""They came selflessly, as many immigrant's do, to give their children a better life, even though it ment leaving behind their families, friends, and careers in the country the loved. They struggled both personally and financially, braving the harsh northern winters while yearning for their native tropics and facing cultural hardship."" @CAPS1 thing is that he also learned what family really means. For example; ""I learned the real definition of ""family"". And for this, I will never forget that house or it's gracious neighborhood or the many thing's I learned there about how to love. I will never forget how my parent's turned this simple house into a home.""",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3178,2,"We all enjoy having the freedom to read, listen, and watch what we like. How would you feel if that freedom was taken away from you? Some people believe that censored books, music, movies, and magazines should be removed from libraries. I believe you should have the right to read, listen, and watch whatever you choose, but children should talk to their parents about it first if it is a censored material. We all know that not everything is okay for certain age groups to read, see, or listen to. That does not mean that the item should be removed completely though. Instead, the child should talk to a parent about the censored item. The parent can decide if the child is mature enough for the item. Also, if those materials are removed from libraries completely, someone that is mature enough to be reading, listening, or seeing it will not have a chance to. I remember when I was in middle school, I really wanted to read @PERSON1 novels that I saw at the library. My mother believed that I should not read those novels at that age. My mother and I worked out a compromise that I could read @PERSON1 novels that she approved of. She said when I was older, I could read any of @PERSON1's novels that I wanted. I found this compromise to be very fair. I knew that when I was old enough to read those novels, they would still be there on the shelf waiting for me. We should have the right to read, listen, and watch what we enjoy, but younger children or other age groups should be monitored. That does not mean we need to completely remove those materials from libraries though. When those children are old enough to read, watch, or listen to those materials, they should be able to go to the library, knowing it will be there on the shelf waiting for them.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13105,5,"The mood of the memoir is that he is growing up in the house with his Mother and father. His parents giving a hand to people who Need help. One explaination is when his parents moved here and left all of their friends & family in hopes to make a better life for him. Another is showing him about his culture threw music, cooking, celebrations and taking care of other people. His parents let people stay at their home when they Need to get on their feet. And by always having people over for dinner (Aunts, uncles, grandparents, cousins, @CAPS1 etc...).",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9128,4,"These are a few reasons why the author concluded the story this way. The first reason is that most of the story is written in the way of a serious and stright forward tone and ending the story with a quote or riddle. Makes the reader have to think about the conclusion. It would be the same if he just ended with what happened so he just added something that made you think a little more than a normal conclusion. The author ended the story with ""when they come back, saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and its hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again."" because it was different.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10595,4," The author of “Winter Hibiscus” decided to conclude the story in that way because she wanted to tie in the theme of new beginnings. Saeng is new to @LOCATION1 and has had a rough time fitting in. She misses everything about her old home, from her grandmother to the old plants there. Saeng fails her driving test, so she feels that all is lost. But the hibiscus plant helped her realize she has another chance. The hibiscus can survive the winter and bloom in the spring and that is what Saeng realizes she must do. The last paragraph said “In the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and the hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” Spring is the time for new beginnings: the geese return from the south, the flowers start to bloom, and Saeng can retake the driving test. In the last paragraph, Saeng realizes she wants a new beginning as well to be brought I the spring. In conclusion, the last paragraph ties the theme of new beginnings into the story. It shows @CAPS1 new realization and how the hibiscus inspired it. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4569,2,"Everyone has their own opinion about certain things in life. Maybe its politics; it could be a sports team. Everyone has a right to their own opinion. As for reading materials, the opinions could be endless and even painful to hear. Opinions of some books and media type materials are biased. People could often be offended by the materials that can be accessed through a public library. For instance, let's say a grandmother and her grandchild are at the public library. The grandchild picks up a self-help book and starts to read. Later the grandmother reads it and finds out it says everything opposite of what the grandchild was taught about life by herself and her parents. To the grandmother, @CAPS1 is offensive. Through observation, I have noticed when a person picks up 'an offensive book' and reads a little of it, they tend to put it right back where they found it. It obviously isn't hard to do. So why should a book be taken out of a library when all you have to do is set it down and leave it? The same goes for music, movies, and magazines. If you don't like the music, don't listen to it. If you don't think it would be a 'nice' movie, don't go out and see it. If the magazine seems raunchy, don't buy it. @PERSON1 said it well, that if we took all the offensive books off the shelf '...then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' @CAPS1 statement is as true as any statement could be. What would be left? Everyone has an opinion and likely someone will always find it offensive. Therefore offensive books and media should be allowed to stay on the shelves. Whether or not you find a book, movie, music, or magazine that is offensive, why fret over it? It's just easier to move on and forget it. Ignorance isn't all bad",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 11835,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is grateful and fortunate. Narciso Rodriguez talks about being so fortunate to have his parents and his heritage of being Cuban. From paragraph @NUM1, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" @CAPS1 is saying that @CAPS1 was so happy and lucky to have his parents as parents which is the main mood of the memoir.Another mood created by Narciso Rodriguez in his memoir is happiness. @CAPS1 makes the story happy by saying how great it was to grow up with his family. @CAPS1 also says that his family was a lot of people in his neighborhood as well. @CAPS1 is happy to have a great family. From paragraph @NUM2, ""Here, the innocence of childhood, the congregation family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the backdrop to life in our warm home.""@CAPS2 are two moods created by Rodriguez in his memoir.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1727,1,"@CAPS1 you want people to be over weight? @CAPS1 you wat our beautifal out doors to be ruined? And @CAPS1 you want familys to be distant because they are to pre @CAPS2? Statistics show that @PERCENT2 of familys dont talk because they are to preocupied with computar games. The issue to grapple with is @CAPS1 computars have an affect on people. Yes, I think that computars have a negitive affect on people based on the following reasons. People spent to much time on the computar and dont get enought exersize, they dont enjoy the nature that we have, and they dont inter act with there family and friends. People spent to much time on the computar and dont get enough exersize. Statistics show that @PERCENT3 of people that are over weight spend more time on the computar than on the track. I remember a time when I was over weight be cause I spent to much time on the computar. One day my mom took the computar ant threw it out the window and I had no chioce but to go outside and get some exersize. @CAPS1 you want kids to be over weight like I was? Many people dont get to enjoy the great out doors because they are to preocupied with the computar. Lisa, a volentere worker in @LOCATION1, says This feild used to be a vast array of plants and animal life, but now it is a waste land because of computars. No one had the time to worry of the natural wonder because they were to @CAPS2 with there computar animated jobs and didnt care what came of it. @CAPS1 you want this to happen to our country? @PERCENT4 of high technological places are dirty with very little plant life because the workers need to tend to the computars rather than the bushes. Some familys have a hard time talking about their dayly lifes becuse they spendin to much time on the computar and dont spend the time to talk and get to know each other. Statistics show that @PERCENT1 ofdevorces are related to not being able to have aconversation and with more technoligy on the way that number will grow. I remember that my parents got devorced because my dad spent more time on the computar than talking to me or my mom. Most people think that computars are good for research. Yes, but you are still cooped up in the house insted of in a big library with all the information you need. I think that computars have a negitive impact on people.""",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6968,3,"The author’s setting described a difficult terrain and harsh weather for bike riding. The author said that it was early summer which means it could be hot and uncomfortable weather for the cyclist. The author also that when the cyclist reached the first town, the sun began to heat down. That means the temperature is going to rise since the sun is getting stronger. Riding a bike in hot weather is very difficult because it takes a lot of effort and makes your body dehydrate faster because the heat makes you sweat which lowers your water retention. Another feature of the setting that the author described was the cyclist’s location. He was traveling through the high deserts of California. This gives you a sense of how much hotter it is since he’s traveling through deserts during early summer while the sun is high. After the first couple town, he starts to ride on short, rolling hills. Hills take a bigger toll on a person’s body because it takes more effort to pedal up a hill.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3441,2,"The library has many books, they would have anything that you could possibly imagine.The library is a great resource for any information. They have so much information that if you were to go to the library, you would be there all day. Libraries carry many different kinds of books. They would probably even carry a book perhaps on hats. There are libraries all around us and are very convienent. If a library carried misleading books, music, movies, or even magazines, I would have to say that they could get in a lot of trouble, especially if a magazine or a movie or any other source of information, would show anything that would affend someone in any way, then someone should tell the librarian or the manager and say this should not be on the shelf. When people go to the library they are exspecting clean reviews about the library. If a library were ment to carry offensive products it would not be called the library. The library is ment to be a quiet place where someone could go there and browse around maybe, or just go in and get what they need and come right on out . Most libraries are pretty peticular of what they should or should not put out on there shelves. If someone put something way out of the ordinary, and that person knows that they should not put the book on the shelf they should automatically be fired. In conclusion libraries are very nifty and important to the town or city. The only thing would be is to keep an eye out for any offensive books, music, and etc. You never know when they will be randomly out on the shelf, and if you happen to find one you should imediently tell the librarian or the libraries manager. The library @MONTH1 get in trouble and then again they @MONTH1 not",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10116,4,The paragraph shows that Saeng has a lot of feelings for her plants. She enjoys plants and she loves taking the time to spend with the plants. She means in that last paragraph that she cant wait for winter to leave so her plants will be budding and that she can enjoy her plants.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4197,2,"Opinion I don't think they should be removed because in books tell you what it is about in the back. Movies tell you what it is rated. It is mom's or dad's fault. They are the one how allow us to read it, watch it, listen to it, or even play it. if they don't want us learn it then they should't even get for us and the reason they get it for us is because kids are spollied. they want every little thing in the world and the parants are buying it for them to make them happy. The parants are not the only ones to blame. The kids are to blame to. They are the ones how want to go the rated @CAPS1 movies or get a rated @CAPS2 video games that have offensive language. kids also say offensive language to each other and suspect them to know what it means. The kids that heard the bad word will go to there parants and say 'what those that word mean'. It happen to me and I said those words to my parants. When I fist read, heard, and watched it and told my parants what it means I got hit for saying that word. I thought to my self that they want to hear that from me. I was mad that i ever said that word I wished I can go back in time and never say that to my parants that. I don't know why I kept on saying it over and over. i just couldn't get it out of my head. I got in trouble by saying it just because I heard that stupid word that i wished never heard. I heard it so many times I couldn't get out of my head it is like they knew what it ment but I knew they didn't know because they just said it randomly and I was preaty sure they didn't tell there parants because the one how told there parants got hit still woundering what it ment still having the red mark in there face thinking what they did wrong to deserve it. when I found out what it ment i never said it for a long time till someone got me so mad i started to say it again. Now the two opinions still stands how should we blame the parants or the kids, should we take down the stuff that is offensive to us so the kids will learn the bad words? The choose is yours not mine beacuse it was mine i would blame the kids and no we shouldn't take it down stuff that has offensive language because for a lot of us we don't find it offensive to us or others. Just consider this 'what you decide people will be against it no matter what'",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6455,3,"The features of the setting, or environment, in which the cyclist is in greatly affects him. First of all, after leaving the campground with directions from the older gentlemen, he enters an area that is greatly isolated. In paragraph @NUM1, he wrote, ""This place might have been a thriving little spot at one time but on @TIME1, it fit the traditonal definition of a ghost town. ""This state of being alone later affected the cyclist because his increasing dehydration was becoming dangerous; if he were to collapse, he would most likely die. This drove the cyclist to continue on in order to survive. Another aspect that affected him was the extremely hot temperature. In paragraph, he implies the weather is hot by telling the reader he is traveling through to California desert in June. The heat gives the cyclist another obstacle to overcome in his struggling to get to the next town for water. Lastly in paragraph @NUM2, he mention the terrain changes to gently rolling hills. This shows the physical and metaphorical obstacles must get over the heat and isolation, but must also find the mental drive and determination to carry on. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10146,4,She wrote that response to tell everyone that she will be ready but the time when spring comes. Then she take it and pass.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7266,3,"In the essay, “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” by Kurmaskie, the cyclist went through hard times, trying to get to Yosemite National Park. A cyclist is someone who tried their bike mostly all the time to get somewhere. First off the cyclist asked old men for directions to get to Yosemite National Park. The cyclist knew that was a mistake in the first place, but he had hope that maybe they knew what they were talking about. Seccondly on his trip, he came accrossed an “Ghost town” with nothing in sight but a bike snake. The cyclist became dehydrated and was running out of water, the only water he",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7041,3,"The features of the desert changed the way the speaker thought about his journey. When the road began the change, the speaker’s determination did too, “Flat road were replaced by short hills”. The terrain began to change and the speaker became doubtful of the old man that that directed him towards the shortcut. “I could drop from heat stroke on a gorgeous day in June simply because I listned to some gentlemen who hadn’t been off their porch in decades”. The heat in desert made the speaker thirsty causing him to drink all his water. There was no source of water therefore he decided to suckenc-stone. “I’d read once that sucking on stones helps take your mind off thirst”,. But the bumpy terrain didn’t allow him to do that. He hit a bump and swallowed the stone. The speaker began to panice, “I was going to die and the birds would pick me clean”. But luckily the author thoughts changed after he found a supply of water, the features did affect the cyclist very much.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12229,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is they had no problem finding a house. for example the author states ""My parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me they're rich culinary skills and love of cooking that is still with me today (and for which I am eternally greatful)."" This means that they are great cooks and have skills for cooking. ""Our landlord and his daughter, Alegria (my babysitter and first friend), lived above us."" Even though they first came to the @CAPS1. S they had no problem finding a home. ""It was in this simple house that my parents welcomed other refugees to celebrate their arrival to this country and where I celebrated my first birthdays."" This is saying his mom keeps the traditions with all the celebrations for new comers to the @LOCATION1",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3403,2,"Have you ever been to a library? Have you ever thought that some material from the libraries could and have been found offensive and wanted them to be removed from the library? I'm here to talk about the content of libraries and what we should do with them. Every time you walk into a library, you are surrounded with books and other learning or reading material. Yes this material is helpfull in finding things to pass the time or to help understand a certain subject, but some have been found offensive. Stories such as romance novels or vulgar horror and action stories have been viewed as innapropriet to some ages. These novels contain anything from brutal horror, to adult material, or foul language. Parents argue that these books should be removed from the libraries. I do not agree. I beleive that such books and novels can be a great help to the immagination of others and get the mind flowing. Yes i do agree that some novels are not age apropriate for young children, but that does'nt mean that they should be removed. I think that if people are so worried about their children reading these books that they should either go into the library with their child, or simply give the child a certain area that they are allowed to pick a book from. Another way of avoiding these wrightings getting into the wrong hands is to section off the more aggressive and adulterated books to a certain spot in the library and allow only age apropriate people inside. An age restriction of thirteen years and up would be a responsible decision. An age younger could be innapropriate for them, but any older and it could keep them from learning and expanding their mind to it's full potential. The point of this writing is to show that removing these books and novels from the libraries is not going to help anything. if anything it could hurt us by not allowing our minds to reach newer and higher limmets by learning and understanding the complexity of these novels. sectioning off these novels in an age apropriate area or having parental discression will help to keep the age correct for the books that they get",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13562,5,"The mood Created by the author is @CAPS1. I @CAPS5 this because you can tell that the narrator doesn't take anything for granted. I know this because the @CAPS2 parents was given a house, and since @CAPS8 was part of the family, it was her duty to make that house a home as much as possible with her parents. I Know this because it @CAPS7 it in @CAPS3 @NUM1, and @NUM2.The author also gives a @CAPS4 mood in this memoir. I @CAPS5 this because in @CAPS3 @NUM1, and @NUM4 it @CAPS7 that @CAPS8 is Cuban and italian, from Newark, New Jersey, and @CAPS8 seems to be @CAPS4 of who @CAPS8 is and where @CAPS12 from. I know all of this is true because its all in the text.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4628,2,"Should there be censorship in libraries? Many people will answer this question differently. I feel there should be absolutely no censorship in libraries. Allowing censorship in libaries is an intrusion of our rights. It contradicts freedom of the press. If someone wants there opinion to be read they should have that right. I also feel censorship in libraries goes against freedom of speach. What is writing, but written speach? If someone wants to say something, they should be able to say it. If a mute person wants to get a point out, they should be able to do so by writing. What some people @MONTH1 consider offensive, others @MONTH1 not. If someone finds it offensive, they should simply not read it",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7469,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist by getting dehydrated, getting tired, and by getting lost. After the cyclist was on the road for a while he had drank almost all of his water, but he still had a while to go before he got to his destination. He was going to try to find some where to stop so he could pick up more water but there was nothing around. He also got tired because he was out in the sun, had barley any water, and he didn’t know where he was going. One last example was that he was lost. There were no cars, buildings, or people. So if he were to get hurt or sick no one would have been able to help him. In conclusion, being dehydrated, tired and getting lost were the features of the setting affect the cyclist had.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9187,4,"The author most likely concludes this story with the quote because she has renewed hope. She was feeling really upset because she had failed the driving test and when she saw the hibiscus flower, she got even more emotional because she misses her home but when she sees the geese as she finishes planting the flower, she decides she’s going to try to retake the test next spring.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12801,5,"The mood of this article created by Narciso Rodriguez in ""The blueprints of our lives."" Is selfessness, admiration, gratitude, and thankfullness. In paragraph @NUM1 it takes about how his parents did his out of love, for her children, not for her. It also @CAPS1 the friend ship of all other imagrints trying to start lives in america. As it States in paragraph @NUM2. This article is fille d with love and respect for family and friends, that is what the atheur was saying.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12793,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is happy and warm. This is shown in two ways: the selflessness of the parents and the true meaning of family. Narciso Rodriguez, the author, is forever grateful to his parents for starting their lives over so he could live a good life in @LOCATION1 This is shown in paragraph @NUM1 when he explains that his parents loved Cuba but left so their children could have a better life in @LOCATION1. He gives his thanks to his parents in paragraph @NUM2. This feeling of gratefulness contributes to the warm, happy feel of the piece. Throughout the piece Narciso explains to us the true meaning of family ""'... family' had nothing to do with being a blood relative,"" he states in paragraph @NUM3. In paragraph @NUM4, he explains that family means those who care for and about you and stick by you no matter what. This feeling of family definitely helps to make the piece feel warm and happy.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12827,5,"I think the mood of author in the memoir is thankful, proud and happy. @PERSON1 is extremely thankful of what is has, disspite what has happened through his life. He is proud of his Cuban heritage and is still proud of it today. He listens to Cuban Music and cooks Cuban food. Also his is happy. In the memoir he has a very happy tone because is his proud and thankful. His parents were immigrants from Cuba and he still got the education he wanted, even though his parents went through tough times.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12005,5,"In this memoir there are many different moods that the auther tells you about. Happiness is a mood that the author tells you about. They are all happy because they can be together and have a grate time. Another mood is careing. her parents care about others and keep there doors open For them at all times. Love. Love is all around this house. They love all their Friends and Family and celebrate with then no matter what. They also show there love by leting people stay with them untill they can get back up onto there Feet. One mood in this memoir is courage, these two people show courage when they get here and they keep that Courage for a very long time. Expeshaly when they come from having such grate jobs to ones that arnt that great.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 631,1,"Dear Newspaper People, I think that the effects that computers have on us are good. You should agree. One reason why you should agree is because computers are like teachers. For example, you can go on websites that teach you all kinds of things like math. Also you can go on cyber school or take college classes online. Another reason why you should agree with me is because on computers we can communicate easier. On computers, you can e-mail and use a webcam to talk to people. You can also have a facebook or myspace to chat and learn more about people. last of all, computers are for our entertainment. On computers, there are lots of games to play that are free. Also online you can watch movies and listen to music. Last, you can have fun creating games and stuff to share with everyone. Without computers we wouldn't be able to do any of those things anymore. I think that it would really suck and tons would agree with me. That is why you should agree with me that we",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1282,1,"Dear newspaper editor, @PERCENT1 of @CAPS1 have and use computers everyday. Computers are killing us as a nation. We need to put a stop to this abuse of computers. Millions of parents and kids spend at least @NUM1 minutes a day on the computer. They are either working or playing. There are many @CAPS2 games and other types of games out on the internet. Kids use these as entertainment. But having an @NUM2 year old child playing a game with guns is certainly unnacceptable. Kids often get so caught up in playing these addictive games that they don't even think of playing sports or going outside. Therefore, the child loses much needed exercise and fresh air. This can lead to obesity or other weight issues. @PERCENT2 of @CAPS1 are already obese, so why keep these horrid games out there? The last thing @LOCATION1 needs is more kids becoming fat!! There are two ways to use a computer for good and for bad ways to use them for good can be for planning a vacation, or working at a job, or even to look at a child's grades online. But many kids and parents don't use computers for these reasons. Kids have been caught looking at porn, buying illegal drugs, hacking into systems and other criminal type things. The computer is a way to do things that you shouldn't, while keeping your identity hidden. For example, whever I sign-up for a website subscription so I can play a game, it asks me for personal information. It askes for my name, my address, my phone number and other things. So what my mother has taught me to do is to use false info. So a computer hacker or a fraud site can't steal my personal info. And who are we to know that people don't do this with illegal programs? Computers are dangerous to @LOCATION1's well-being. On top of obesity, there have been reported cases of a child or parent having a seizure, having the picture of a game implanted in their eyes because they don't take their eyes of the game. There has even been a case of where a chid went mad and killed his/her parents in rage. Computers turn kids and parents into wild beasts. Parents commonly try to get their children to stop playing certain games. In some cases, the parent destroys an account on a website or takes a computer away for a certain ammount of time. These actions from parents have caused kids to go mentally insane! Cases have been reported of smashing computers, doing bad in school, killing parents as I said earlier and in some cases suicide. So in conclusion, computers are a source of health issues, action issues and mental issues. If we want @LOCATION1 to be restored to the @LOCATION1 we all love, then we the people, must put a stop to this computer addiction!",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9553,4,"In the story ""Winter Hibiscus"" Saeng finds comfort in the plant after she failed her test. The plant reminds her of home and connects her with her past experiances. Even though she failed the test the first time she feels that if she studies and trys again she can pass. This connects to the Hibiscus because in the winter the plant dies but then come spring its pretty and blossoms again. Saeng feels a connection with the plants rebirth and feels she can start over again to and do well on the test. That is why the author includes the paragraph that Saeng vowes to take the test again when the spring comes and the hibiscus blossoms.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4680,2,"Censorship in Libraries Have you ever came across something in the library that makes you say, ' @CAPS1! That's inappropriate!' If so, I am sure your not alone. Just the other day I was in the library. There were posters up all around featuring a new movie now avalible for rental. I remembered seeing ads for this particular movie on television that looked rather repulsive. How could they allow this kind of thing on display like this? How does this affect the minds of our country's youth? My thought on this topic is clear, although I am sure I'd recieve some opposition from others, considering everyone has their own opinions on this matter. I do realize the library has age limits on rentals, but what about all these posters everywhere? You don't necessarily have to rent the material to be corrupted by it. I believe there should be a separate section for this kind of material. Another example of library rentals that can be harmful to developing minds are @CAPS2. New music sometimes contains lewd or inappropriate lyrics that have no place in the library. Even the covers of some @CAPS2 should be removed for the good of the public. It's interesting how these things just slide by the library. I once saw a young by renting a @CAPS4 that had the words 'parental advisory' right on the cover! No one stopped him. Books are the same way. Disturbing covers and titles are littered throughout the library. No one even cares to screen these books before they hit the shelves. So, when do you think someone's going to do something about censorship in libraries? It is hard to say, but I strongly believe it's up to protesters like us to stop this. I hope you'll join me in this epic battle for censorship, to keep our youth safe",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12076,5,The mood created by the author was grateful and happy. The author was explaining what the boy in the memoir was feeling and felt. The boy thought that his parents were really great and he thought that he could never be like them. He was also grateful that he had house and parents like you did. He admired his parents and what they did. He will never forget growing up and living in that house. The purpose of the author was to show you how grateful someone was of what there parents did when they immagrated from Cuba to @LOCATION1.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10502,4,I think the author concludes the story with this paragraph because the authore is trying to show the reader that she realized cares about the nature and loves It so because she is waiting for the spring and as soon as the spring comes she will take the test again. So in my opinion the author wants to show the readers that the character in story cares a lot about the natures baety.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7577,3,"There are many different features such as the weather, road condition, and how the person is feeling. The weather can effect if it is rain or weather the road are messed up he could get a flat. The way that the person is feeling is a big part on weather they try hard or they do not worry about it too much.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12758,5,"The mood is grateful, because it shows how grateful he is for his house and all the people that come over and be his family.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10031,4,"The author concluded ""Winter Hibiscus"" with this paragraph to emphasize a new life and new chances for the main character. The future setting of the paragraph, spring, symbolizes rebirth & another start from the cold, hard winter. The author takes this to heart including, more events which enhance this symbolized meaning. the author has uses structured choice to carry her toughts. Recreate, when to convey the theme of rebirth, the author uses words like ""the gesse return"" and ""take the test again"" which add to the importance at the home. Also, the literal action of the ""hibiscus is budding"" @CAPS1 rebirth. In winter the plant is dormant & less colorful, but in the spring the plant shows rebirth through about color in its buds. The author finally conveys the theme of rebirth by ending with this paragraph.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15129,6,The builders of the Empire State building faced many obstacles while building it One obstacle they hit was the dirigibles couldnt dock there because of no mooring mast When the architects and engineers built the building they put a flat roof which the Mooring Mast could not be placed on. They said that the frame of the Empire State building would have to be modified and strengthened to fix the situation. Another obstacle was they couldnt have a Rope holding the Mooring Mast up because the dirigibles wouldnt hold it up. Those are some obstacles the architechs went threw.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1528,1,Dear @PERSON1 I think myself that the computers could help u. With a lot of thing like my teacher gave my class some homework and we had to find facts about @CAPS1 @CAPS2 the @NUM1. And if it wasn't for the computer I wouldn't know nothing about @CAPS1 @CAPS2 the @NUM1. Plus the computer could help u find long lost family remembers because when my grandfather die my mother finded her sister on the computer. Plus on the computer I could find out about others states that I dont know about and the computer could teach u about a lot of thing my mother and teacher can't teach @CAPS5. Nah @CAPS6 just saying computers could teach u abt of things that people don't know about.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 413,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, In @CAPS2 opinion, computers are fantastic! Therefore, I believe computers have a great effect on peoples life. Three reasons to support @CAPS2 decision are many jobs use computers, instead of using a dictionary or thesaurus, you can just search it and it is a big help at home/around the house. @CAPS2 first reason is, that many jobs in the state, or nation use a computer. Statistically saying @NUM1 out of @NUM2 jobs in the state use a computer or technology relating to a computer hardware. If you honestly think about it, if you were a teacher, a factory employee, etc, you practicly wouldn't even be able to do your job without it. We have learned alot from the new inventions that came about in the past decade, or two. If we have learned anything in the past @NUM3 years, it would be the ""@CAPS1 the time you spend on the computer, but go on because you will learn some things you never know before."" @CAPS2 second reason is we have alot more useful search engines than @NUM3 years ago. In/around the @NUM5's, if you wanted to find information, the only resort was...books. Yes, I mean reading is great, but now having the computer is faster and easier. All you do is go to @ORGANIZATION2 and type in what you want to find. Then it comes up in about @NUM6 seconds with around @NUM7 links to websites to help you out. Just think, now theres no table of contents, just a link and a click! @CAPS2 third reason is it is a big help around the house/at home. In the state of @LOCATION1, about @PERCENT1 of people have a laptop or a computer in their home. But, this isn't a bad thing, because it can help with so many things. Including, help with the children, help with cooking, with organizing, anything! Let's say you don't know what time ""@CAPS3's"" friends birthday party starts, no worrys just ask his mom on @CAPS4! Or you need a recipe for dinner, find it on cooks.com. This makes life alot easier and puts a extraordinary effect on your life! In conclusion, having a computer in your life is great, because so many jobs use computers, theres so many searching things, and it is helpful at home. So, computers have a awesome effect on people's lives!!",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3652,2,"So you see a nice, old lady looking at one of many books throught a library, she chucks @CAPS4. You look at her, she looks at you, she walks away. You go and pick up the book, @CAPS4's about medical marijuana. She took offense to that? I don't really care what people gotta say, if @CAPS4's on the shelf, @CAPS4 stays on the shelf. I'm convincing librarians, readers, and everyone else that if you have offense to a book, magazine, movie, or anything you can find at a @CAPS1 library, shut your fat mouths. A library serves many purposes, one, @CAPS4's @CAPS1, itt's open to anyone and everyone. Two, if you have a library card, you can check out books, movies, music, etc. Three, if your walking down the road and 'gotta go,' you can stop right in and leave. What I'm trying to say is that nothing should be removed from any shelf at any library. Yeah, I mean there's a certain point at which you got to take charge, but even then you can have an adolescent room or what not. I think that if you take something off the shelf at a library, you can just taking away part of the heart. Let's say you have @NUM1 @CAPS1 libraries in your town, one library has one thing the other doesn't have. Someone riots and they get to take @CAPS4 off the shelf. Your never going to find that anywhere else unless you buy @CAPS4 off line. And sometimes, that can get a little pricey, especially since you can get @CAPS4 free at a library? But then again, I see where people are coming from to take certain materials off the shelfs. Say you gotta @NUM2-year old kid, and he walks up to you carrying a sex love book. What can you say about that? I mean in sounds corny but @CAPS4 can happen. Most parents just want to keep their kids in a safe, harmless enviroment. That's where they come in and say, 'I thought this was a @CAPS1 library?!' Then that's where @CAPS4 goes bad. After all that happens, people just accuse the librarians to @CAPS2 they got these books, movies, and music that's just bad for a young kid. But @CAPS4's not the librarians' fault, different people like different books, that's @CAPS2 a library has many, many choices when @CAPS4 comes to books. That's when the question comes up, '@CAPS2 don't we just have seperate rooms, for seperate books?' @CAPS3, that sounds good and all, but who's gonna pay for @CAPS4? Libraries get donated alot of their stuff, they are profitable, but then again a non-profitable resource. Libraries have been around for ages, most of them started out small and now are big. That's when the library gets donations, looks through them, and sells the books they don't want or need. They make money off that, that's when they start making seperate rooms. @CAPS4 sounds crazy, but @CAPS4 wouldn't cause a riot to go on about people. Therefore, people are happy, librarians happy, and most of all you are happy. You can find the book you want or need easy as one, two, three. All you gotta do is go to that certain room, look for @CAPS4, check @CAPS4 out and you got a nice book to be reading anytime. @CAPS4 sounds easier that looking @CAPS4 up, get the dewy decimal number, find the number. All in all, we shouldn't remove anything from a library shelf bevause @CAPS4 @MONTH1 be the only one in your town, maybe the only one in your state, maybe through the whole country. You never know. All I gotta say is, '@CAPS4's better to keep a book, than to forget a book.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7008,3,"The features of the setting affects the cyclist in many ways. The cyclist was in the middle of almost nowhere dehydrating. There were no signs for resting areas where you can find water fountans around. The cyclist put pebbles in there mouth to try forget about being thirsty. Her surroundings were bumpy so she swallowed one. She just kept going and her words were “I was going to die.” First the cyclist was in danger of dehydrating, and end her satisfaction. The cyclist made it alive as she saw Gary and Wilber’s Fish camp. Her setting was very clear until then. The cyclist was then relieved and made it alive.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13117,5,The mood that was created by the @CAPS1 is that no matter if your an immigrate or not one you could make friends and have family that you love still with you and could make some friends. Another mood that he talks about is tha his parents and how they love to cook together and are selflessness too.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15567,6,"Obstacles builders faced in constructing the Empire State Building to allow the attempt of a dirigible to dock were blind. The tuge and pull of the unforecast wind made the dock dangers for passangers and the buildings foundation. However, making such attemps were eleagl for dirigibles to fly over urban areas, incase of failer. Spires as well made the drop impossible for them to approach also in case of puncher. Spending sixty thousand on modification to moor mast on the @ORGANIZATION2 for the safe dock of dirigibles. The idea was lost to the creation of the mordern new airplane.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12590,5,"The mood created in the memoir could be of happiness, gratefulness and love. The author describes in the memoir how his parents left their country Cuba to give their children a better life even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends and careers in the country they love (@CAPS1 @NUM1). The author express gratefulness by saying his grateful for his culture and the sacrifice his parents did (@CAPS1 @NUM2). To conclude the author also express his feelings about the house he use to live, you learn the real definition of ""family"", he is really happy about the welcomes his parents use to do when other refugees arrival to this country. At the end the author says ""I will never forget how my parents turned the simple house into a home."" (@CAPS1 @NUM3).",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15714,6,"When builders attempted building a structure to allow dirigibles, or blimps, to dock on the Empire State Building in New York, they did not realize how many problems they would encounter. Upon designing the mast on top of the building, designers realized that if a dirigible was docked on to the building, it would add stress to the frame, and therefore, would have to modify the Empire State building's structure. To do this, sixty thousand dollars was needed, as well as more hours of labor. Another obstacle encountered was the fact that nature got in the way, and ""the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents"" (line @NUM1). It would be difficult to dock it to the building, because the dirigible would be constantly swaying due to wind, and passengers could not get on the blimp. Furthermore, blimps usually were moored in open fields, with the aid of lead weights to help weigh them down. If lead weights were introduced in New York City, where it was very populated, they could potentially fall while dangling in the air, endangering pedestrians. In conclusion, builders faced many obstacles while trying to achieve docking capability for dirigibles on the Empire State Building.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10462,4,I think when she take the test over it is going to be in the spring and She is going to try and pass it . But she did not want to cry in front of her mother . I think she is going to make it up to her and pass the test.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4507,2,"WE ALL DON'T THINK OF ANYTHING WHEN YOUR CHILDREN CHECK OUT BOOKS FROM THE LIBRARIES. BUT ON THE OTHER HAND, WE DO NOT WANT YOUR CHILDREN GETTING HOLD TO THE CENSORSHIP OF BAD BOOK, MOVIE, MUSIC OR MAGAZINES. PARENT DON'T WANT TO COME HOME AN THERE CHILD LEARN A NEW WORD FROM THE NEW BOOK OR MOVIE HE/SHE JUST CHECKED OUT FROM THE LIBARY, OR READING A MAGAZINE FROM THE LIBARY. IT MIGHT MAKES YOUR CHILDREN ATTITUDE CHANGE PUTTING BAD INFLEUNCE ON YOUR KID BECAUSE OF A TRIP TO THE LIBARY. SO THERE FOR THE CHILDREN SHOULD HAVE A SECTION WHERE THEY PICK OUT THERE BOOK AND THEY SHOULDN'T BE ABLE TO CHECK OUT THE CENSORSHIP BOOK. WE NEED TO MAKE SURE OUR CHILDREN BE MORE CONVINCED ABOUT THIS TOPIC.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 148,1,"I belive that computers benifit our society for many reasons. Computers have been around for many years now and everywere you go you usualy see one. That must meen people love then. These are so many uses and fun expeirences you can have with a computer. Computers make people happy and that makes for a better society because it is happier. they make people happy because you can play games like tetris, @CAPS1, and even cards. Compuer games make people happy because when ever they are bored and does nothing going on you can hop on the computer and play a game. Some of the awsome games featured on a computer are @CAPS1, cards, pinball and other great game. The computer makes for a happier home because as soon as kids get home from school they use it for games or chat with freinds. Another reason computers benifit society is because you can now pay bills and buy hings from the internet. When you pay bills or buy things over the internet have is no need to go out and waste money on gas so it makes people very happy when hey save money. It also saves on polution because if a car isn't going out there is less so computers are also saving society as well. My last reason that computers benifit society is they can make you smarter and make you do better in school by learning about often people or cultures. For example on my last research project for social studies I used the computer and got an A. this made me happy so in effect it makes society happy. Now you have my reasons why computers benifit the society. They make us happy, made us smarter, and make us a better society for it. I love computers and everybody else should too.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13368,5,"The mood in this memoir is happyness, love, and warmth. It is to be thankful for what you have and not what you want to have. Narciso was just happy to have such a loving family. Inside of Narciso's home it is very happy loving and warm. I think that the author is trying to make it seem like nothing matters as long as you have family. Overall the mood created by the author in the story is love.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15963,6,"This project towards ""transportation of the future"" for the Empire State Building was no easy task. One of the major obstacles was the ""stress to the building's frame"". The workers had to make over sixty thousand dollars worth of modifications to accommodate the dirigibles. This would strengthen the frame of the building so that the wind pressure would be ""transmitted all the way to the building's foundation"". Another issue with this mooring mast was the ""violent air currents"" that were ""constantly shifting"" the winds on the roof. This would cause the dirigible to swing around the building while it was docked. Allowing these giant aircrafts to ""dangle high above pedestrians on the street"" was ""neither practical nor safe. These obstacles caused the workers and architects to postpone the build.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9868,4,The author concludes this story because it shows her determination. It says that she will keep on attempting to make an adjustment to her life till she accepts her new home. It also says that as the buds grow so will she. But her more mentally then physically. And her taking the test again is meaning that she has faith in herself that she will mature and grow up to be a person who misses their home land but accepts the new home that they live in. That is why the author ended this way.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16550,6,"In the excerpt The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the builders faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock over the Empire State Building. If the builder's would want to dock the dirigibles they couldnt because there was no right area to land them. ""... in New York City was the lack of a suitable landing area"". Another obstacle was they would have to know the kind of weather because nature it's self can take control. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" The dirigibles if landed on the Empire State Building would be weighed down because in the back would lead weights so, it would weight it down. Another reason that it was an obstacle was because dirigibles used a gas of hydrogen rather than helium and the gas hydrogen is a highly flammable gas that can do a lot of harm if there are passengers present in the dirigibles and could be very dangerous for the Empire State Building.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9970,4,"I think the author concludes the story with this paragraph because he wants us to get the morle of the story. I said this idea because in the story he talks about orchids, lanno bushes, oleanders, elephant ear begonias, and bougainvillea vires surrounded her. It talks about how these flowers surrounded her to test her. Of her @CAPS1.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3203,2,"I believe that libraries should have more cencorship. Some books, magazines, and movies should be removed or grouped by age. From my own experiences of reading or seeing people read these books, I believe they should be removed because they influence violence, sexual activity, and drug use. Young children should not be exposed to those things yet. First, I think books that contain violence should be removed. I believe that children are the easiest people to influence. I also believe that violence is the worst thing to be influenced by. Violence in books can influence killing. Fighting and killing is not good. No young child should be able to check out about full of shooting and fighting. The book will make the kids think thats the right thing to do if they are able to check it out. Being influenced by violence will make you commit crimes. Reading a book is not worth going to jail for. Next, I believe that all sexual activity material should be removed from libraries. Sexual activity should not be exposed to children until it is time for them to start learning about it. For example, a young girl reading about teen pregnacy not being a problem. The reader will think that is what she is suppsed to do which is wrong. Books and magazines containing sexually explicit words should not be able to be viewed by young children. Those thing @MONTH1 influence kids to do things they should not even be thinking about doing. You can atleast sort them all in an adult section. Finally, drug use should not be issued in books to kids. children should not read or watch anything that are talking about drugs in a positive way. Unless it is about saying no to drugs and not using them, children should not read them at all. Drugs make people do things that their right mind don't want them to do. Children should say no to drugs and to books that are influencing the opposite. In coclusion, that is why I believe that we need censorship in our libraries. we need censorship because of viloence and drug use. Also becuse of sexual activity and many more things",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15096,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building taste some obstacles in attempting to have a dirigible dock. The dock would break the laws. The dock would also be a danger to the people below. It would also put a lot of stress to the frame of the building.""",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3260,2,"'@CAPS1, @CAPS1, @CAPS1 I like @CAPS4 @CAPS5 and I can not lie, when a girl walks in with an itty bitty waste and a round thing in your face you get sprung.' @CAPS2 song in itself depicts a rather provocative tone towards women and men. While '@CAPS3 a'las what sorrows can be seen over yonder' tells us that love can be found anywhere. Now look closly at both lymrics you will eventually see a connection in both. The rap song @CAPS4 @CAPS5 is about a man that finds love in large glutius maximi while the other says that love can be seen everywhere, and anywhere. To say that music, magazines, books, and more should be banned is to say that throwing an @CAPS6 flag on the floor is just okay. Well its not; banning books, music, etc. is just like cencoring someones imaginationa and creativity. It is just like the book @DATE1, where @CAPS4 @CAPS8 is watching, and that we are only based on what we are allowed to read, and even think. Taking away movies and books, is to not allow people to learn from their past. Take @CAPS9 @CAPS10 @CAPS11 for example, though that movie is rather gory and morbid, it still tells us of the horrors of the time during @CAPS12 @CAPS13 @NUM1 and that the past is never something that should be let go. Always remeber the past so you can learn from it. Had that movie been cencored or removed I personally would have never learned about the hardtimes of the @CAPS13 and what it can do to a persons soul and emotions. A book, magazine, movie, etc are all gateways to new worlds, where children can use their imagination and justify what their personality is. I can say that books and songs have saved lives. The other day a friend of mine was on the edge of suicide and was almost a squeeze away from pulling the trigger when I told him that what he was doing was wrong. I was @NUM2 at the time, and i rushed through my ipod to find a song '@CAPS14 to @CAPS15 a @CAPS16' by the @CAPS17. I basically read him the lyrics and he eventually put the idea of sucicide away. While yes, there aresongs & books like The @CAPS18 and the @CAPS19 that @MONTH1 have provoked people to do crazy things, even to kill. We stilll see more good being done and shown through reading and writing. Because they are all ways to express ourselves. A song can @CAPS15 a @CAPS16 as much as it can take one away. Even then we can that letting imagination flow is better than letting the imagination get cencored. If a book is seen as something unwanted or taken away, it will cause more harm in that it would be wanted more, it would be craved becasue it is an unreachable thing",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10403,4,I think the author writes this because whatever test she has to take she wasn’t ready for before but now whenever the geese return and the hibiscus return the she will be ready to take the test. Maybe she wasn’t mentally prepared. So inconclusion I think when she says the geese and the hibiscus return the she will take the test and maybe she wasn’t physicaly and mentally prepared for it. ,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6067,3,The features that affected the cyclist was plenty of things. One thing would be lack of water. In the text he said the pump gave water that taste like battery acid. Another one would be all the surroundings changed from what the old men sald and he got lost. When he was lost he had to have determination to find someone say that he could survive. ,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9376,4,The author might of concluded the story with this paragraph to show that Saeng isnt @CAPS1 to stop trying shes @CAPS1 to work harder. As she sees the Geese adapting she chooses to try. and make their wew home work out. After they disapear she picks herself up and says that shes @CAPS1 to try again. By doing this she is commiting herself to try @CAPS2 things t adapt to changes.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4099,2,"Libraries are community centers. Children and adults go to libraries to check out new books that could give them new experiences and information. If libraries took out books because they were inappropriate or offensive, then young adults and adults would never recieve those new experiences. Libraries require all sorts of books to make it a qualified library. If libraries censor their books, then other materials might start vanishing as well. Most young adults read about books that are about adventure, mystery, or love. A person could find a mystery book with a serial killer for a main character offensive, but you can't rewrite the book for one person; futhermore, take that book completely off the shelf. That book is public property. If the library took that mystery book off the shelf, then the library is taking away the experience of another young adult reading it. One teenager's thoughts do not account for other teenagers' thoughts. Libraries that take away offensive or inappropriate books might influence other multi-billion dollar industries to second guess their work. The movie industry, for example. The movie industry might second guess the directors or actors/actresses they are hiring. Actors and actresses have a large influence on many teenagers and children. Imagine if a child's favorite actor disappeared from future movies; that child would be left without a role model. The affects of censoring books and magazines go way beyond the libraries. Music artist might also be affected. Rappers curse and swear in their music because it is how they voice their opinions and personal experiences. For example, @ORGANIZATION1, a famous rapper. He curses in his music because it's how he shows his emotion in an event. If music publishers wouldn't publish him because his work is offensive, then he would lose his job and career. This is how people in today's society make their living; by providing entertainment to other people. Libraries have no right to take away any books from other children and adults. Authors know what they are writing. They write it because it shows emotions and feelings. It is the same thing with music artists and screen-play writers. If movies were all about unicorns the movie industry would fall apart quickly. Libraries, as a whole, need to think about the bigger picture before they extinguish books, experiences, thoughts, and hard work",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 656,1,"I believe that computers are a great help to society I believe this @CAPS3 when you don'@CAPS1 know something you could go on-line to look it up. Also if you are to sick or don'@CAPS1 have time to go out and buy things that you need from stores you can buy it on-line and have it @CAPS7 right to your door. My final reason is that computers can save paper buy having a lot of document on your computer. My first reason was that if you don'@CAPS1 know something you could look it up. A lot of times you could be watching @CAPS1.V. or talking with someone and you @CAPS4 wonder what something is or means. @CAPS6 instead of just letting whatever you didn'@CAPS1 know just pass on you could look it up on a computer and educate yourself and possibly others to. My next reason was that if you are to sick or don'@CAPS1 have the time to go out and buy things that you need from stores you can buy it on-line and have it @CAPS7 right to you door. This is a great help to the people who are to sick @CAPS3 sometimes they are @CAPS6 said they can'@CAPS1 leace there home @CAPS6 instead of starving to death they can have food or anything @CAPS7 to them if they just click a couple of buttons on the computer. Now, also this could help the people who are to busy to go to stores @CAPS3 right before they leave they could press some buttons and when they get home there stuff on sitting there for you. Back when my dad was a @CAPS2 and my mom was a vice-president of a drug producing company which sold oxy-cofin they had to have a grocery @CAPS5 ship foods to our house. They had to have this happen @CAPS3 they @CAPS4 worked long hours and they didn'@CAPS1 have the time to go to a grocery @CAPS5 @CAPS6 they had the food @CAPS7 to our house which was a huge help. My last and final reason is that computers can help save a lot of trees and paper. A big thing now is that we have to go green right, @CAPS6 instead of cutting down more trees we can just have all that on our computer which doesn'@CAPS1 we any paper. These are just some of the reasons why computers are a help to society. I could come up with many more ideas but can'@CAPS1 fit them just in this story, @CAPS6 finally rember people whole lives are on their computers.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10479,4,"In the short story “Winter Hibiscus” by Minfong Ho, the author conclude the story with that special paragraph in order to mutul Saeng’s game for wanting to be home but also to show that she is learning to overcome obstacles. Saeng wishes that she way in her homeland, and keeps up reffiring to it because she wants it back. “I mean, it’s not like the one we had at-at-,” Saeng continues to stumble because she doesn’t wish to mention home because it brought her to tears. In addition, were she mentions the “test”, it makes to her buyin a fake test.“It’s - it’s not a real one”. She refuses to buy a real one because it reminds her of the driving test and how sad she already is. The test reffs to both the plant and the driver’s test. Saeng also ends with this vow because the flower represent hope to her, ""... and this hibiscus is budding, I will take that test”. The emotions test of both of the situations she is is will allow her to be stronger. This vow at the end of the story shows her willing up to be strong and come through in the end.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15750,6,Well the dirigibles were airships flying to low over the city and over urban areas. Also the U.S @ORGANIZATION2 approached the mooring mast to tie up but the winds were to forceful. also a Goodyear Blimp Columbia. Attempted a publicity stunt where it tied up and deliver a bundle of newspapers.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3100,2,"I strongly disagree.I think that materials should don't be removed from the library.@CAPS1 all the materials are part of the library and for the school and for us too.All the materials, such as books, music, movies, and magazines, cd's. should don't be removed from the library.I got my own reasons that materials should don't be remove from the shelf. like sometimes i don't found any interesting things to do, so i go to my tiny library that i got in my house and i pick any book that i like.But when i don't like or i don't find any interesting book in my house, i go to the library to find some intresting books.But when the libraries or the school got offensive books, magazines, movies, ect., i think that offensive stuff shoul be remove from the library,@CAPS1 is not good for the children's, like when they want to read a book, like cartoon or animal book, and they don't find what they want they are going to get mad. And what about the parents the parents if they need to found some information about a book, or they just wanted to read and they found offensive stuff, the parents are going to get mad, not all the parents right but some parent will.and they maybe are not going to came back again.I never experience something like this in my life @CAPS1 in my school and the library that i go they don't have anything offensive or inapropiated. that's why a respect the people for the library and for the school, @CAPS1 they respec us too. tha's why i never go to places that i don't know.Supose i go to a library that i don't know and i bring my parent and my little brother right and this library have offensive materials, my parents are going to get mad with me, they are going to said that if i don't have respec, and that i bring my brother to a innapropiated place they are going to be mad with me, that i bring my family to a offensive place, and is not my foul right.And those are my opinions why",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1007,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, Computers these days have made positive changes to all of our every day lives. People have made beter connections with family and friends, and even have the ability to make new ones. While social networks are great and all, computers can also make work extremely easy and proffesional-looking. They can also perfect the skill of hand-eye coordination. But with that in mind, is the computer truly a harmful or helpful device? Sometimes we wonder where our long lost friends and relatives have gone and how they are. Well, with the computer and internet access, you can easily contact them through great social networks such as @CAPS1. I hear it all the time from everyone that reunions have been made, and friends have been reunited. And reuniting friends, you can also make new ones with a simple click of a button. Isn't making more friends and reconnecting so easy now? Computers nowadays offer wonderful software from @ORGANIZATION2 that can make making slideshows, projects, and reports far easier. I remember making a @CAPS2 with my best friend back when we were in @NUM1 grade. All we did was take the pictures, upload them to his laptop, and then we added captions to all of the pictures. We did an amazing, professional job on the project and received an A-. Though I understand that in the process of computer-usage, people hardly find time outdoors, the technological advance will enhance hand-eye coordination. Imagine this: You're up at bat in a baseball game. @NUM2 strikes and @NUM3 balls is your count. Everyone is cheering you on. The pitcher pitches the ball and wham! You swing that bat and hit yourself a homerun! Do you know what skill was used to hit that ball? That's right - hand-eye coordination. So now while everyone is wondering what sort of effect the computer has, remember how easy that work was for me. Also think back to that baseball player. You know, the one that hit the homerun using hand-eye coordination. But most importantly remember how easy it would be to contact the ones you love most and keep closest to you. The computer is a positive advance in society, and everyone should be assured so!",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7484,3,At first the terrain was fine and he confident. But when he reached the first town it looked like one of those ghoust towns in the movies. The next town didnt come up when he was told it would. The terrain was that of a desert no water for miles. But he stayed determind. And he made it to some water though.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3282,2,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3: @CAPS4 I am @PERSON1 and I have heard there has been a discussion about different things in libraries. And I would like to let you know what I think about the whole situation. There are many things like books, music, movies, magazines, etc. that people believe aren't appropriate. Many people have differnt opinions then other people. Everyone had a differnt point of view and sees things differently. Ecspecially when it comes to what is appropriate for kids. I believe if a child comes home with a book, movies, etc. and their parent does not approve the parent should go and tell the librarian about why she thinks it isn't appropriate. The librarian should listen to the parent and then take a look at it for herself and see what she thinks about it. And if she finds it not approprite then she has the right to take it off the shelf. If the parent comes in and talks to the librarian about why something is not apropriate and the librarian believes it is alright then maybe she needs to just put the book, movie, etc. in a different area of the library. Like if a little kid finds a book and the parent says its inappropriate the librarian could take that book out of the little kid section, and maybe put it in a older kid area. I have actaully had an experience with this. At my old school adults were always complaining about books they didn't think were appropriate. When the librarian told us, we were upset because us girls loved to read those books. The librarian at the time thought they were appropriate and really didn't want to take them out of the library. So she had a great idea. She took those books, the ones people were complaining about, and put them on their own special shelf behind her desk. If you wanted one of those books you had to talk to your parent or bring a note in saying that you were allowed to read the book. It was a really good idea, because if your parent wouldn't allow you to read them you weren't tempted to get one, and wouldnt even see them. And the people who were allowed and wanted to read them still could with no problem at all. Another idea I have is if you see a younger kid by older people books, movies, etc. go talk to them about why they are over there and, tell them that, that's not their age level material. Try to direct them over to their age level area, and try to find them a book, movie, etc they @MONTH1 be interested in. I believe that everyone has different opinions but just because one person complains it doesn't mean it has to ruin it for everyone. Just because one person doesn't like it doesn't mean everyone else does too. I think censorship should somewhat be in libraries, but not to the extreme. There should be many different topics in libraries so everyone enjoyes the stuff there. There should be action,adventure, humor, love, etc. Talk to people and see what they like. And just because one person complains, dont take it out right away because to another person they might love it. Thank you for taking your time to read my opinion, and I hope I helped",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10607,4,"The author states that idea because if you can not do it once do it again. First, if you take a test and cant pass it the first time do it again and you will be able to pass. For example, in the story Saeng could not pass a test so they could have let her take it again to see if she can pass it. Second, she could ask for help or use a book and study. For example, it will help you pass a lot easier if you study hard enough. That is what I think the statement means.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1129,1,"Dear local Newspaper, This eara are all about computers. Computers @CAPS1 a benefit to have. It increase the hand-eye coordination, talking skills and easy knolage. My first paragraph @CAPS1 about hand-eye coordination. This @CAPS1 a important skill because it helps with physical movements, using your hands for example. Studys have shown that @NUM1 out of the @NUM2 have improved hand-eye coordination. Also it help kids @CAPS1 that it stimulates the nerves in the hands and brain for kids that have had sergery on there hands. Last years study has shown that @PERCENT1 of kids have improved hand movement faster than regular therpy. Secondly. The importance of computers have been commucation like email or aim. This @CAPS1 great for penpals because it saves time for responses from mail and money because there @CAPS1 no mailing to places and when you email them there will be a fast responce. Also this will help people that are shy around people. A study has shown that @PERCENT2 of shy kids have increased the talkative skills in school. Also most talkative skills will help kids today with there confidence. Finaly, the computer @CAPS1 a helpful knolage tool to use. Most book will be more chalanging to find because there @CAPS1 allways extra information that @CAPS1 not needed and will take longer to find. With a computer all you need to do @CAPS1 to type in what info your looking up. ""@CAPS1 an easy sensation"" said time magazine. That was one great comment from time. In school however there are helpful tips that are making it eager and easyer to find with bookmarks that you can find that are faster because all there @CAPS1 to do @CAPS1 go up to bookmarks and find the websight and click and thats it. In conclusion the ecra of computers are becomingly more popular by the hour. And the benfit of the computer like hand-eye coordination, talkative skills and more and easy knolage.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3766,2,"Certain books, magazines or even music contains mature or graphic nature. The music will always have ratings, just like movies. They dont need to be deleted from a library unless it is an elementary school. Most language arts are sorted through out the library in an orderly fashion, so the younger children will only purchase there age level books, or art of choice. Music always contains warnings for the rating of the book. a child should never murchase a mature level book. books, movies, and music are all the same. they are made for certain types of audiance. If a movie is rated @CAPS1, then it is made for eighteen or older audiance. They are situated throughout the library for children, adults, and teens. The children just need to stay in there own age levels. If there is a mature or graphic book in a childrens library then that should cause conflict. any parent would agree with that statement. The only way these mature arts can be shared without conflict is through public libraries. public libraries that are divided to connect with all age groups",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12205,5,"In the memoir @ORGANIZATION1 gives a loving and caring mood to the readers. I think this because whe he describes certain things, like his parents, he would add a loving and caring feeling. In paragraph @NUM1 it says ""I will never foreget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" That sentence indicates how much he Loved his parents for doing that. Also in paragraph @NUM2 it says ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice"" that indicates how apriciative he was. Also this memoir gives a grateful and thankful mood because it makes you think about the people and family members that had loved and sacrificed for you. That is why I think the memoir @ORGANIZATION1 gives off loving and caring mood to the readers.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 11920,5,"During Narciso's life, growing up in a small house doesn't matter when you're surrounded by people you love. The author created the mood of happiness, love, achievement, and being proud. Narciso was very proud of his cuban heratige, as well has his brave parents, that created a beautiful home and life for him. The mood was also happy because it's a very happy story. There is love and achievement in the mood as well because Narciso loved his friends, family, neighborhood, home and childhood. The achievement was of his parents comming over to @LOCATION1 and starting a better life. Anyone would be happy with a childhood like that because being surrounded by the ones you love and being proud of you and your family is what is important.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3054,2,"Do you believe libraries should remove items some people find offensive? Do you find some items offensive and want libraries to remove them? @CAPS2 is a major problem that many people don't think about often before acting. Here are some situations many people run into: If one person finds a @CAPS1 offensive but no one else does, should @CAPS2 be removed? Many libraries contemplate whether or not they should remove an offensive item due to some peoples' opinions. This is because they know people like @CAPS2 and they know people don't; they wonder whether or not they should remove the item because a few people find @CAPS2 offensive, (this can range from books, music, movies, magazines, etc.). People often think they do what is best for everyone by asking the library staff to remove something they think is offensive. Honestly, they're only helping the people that want to have @CAPS2 removed and don't say anything, that is if the library removes the offensive item. If the library removes the offensive item, they @MONTH1 lose a customer, if they don't remove the item they @MONTH1 lose a customer. So they are faced with a dillemma, 'remove the item or don't remove the item?' @CAPS2's a tough decision to make especially when they @MONTH1 lose more than a few customers based on either choice. So what do they do? They @MONTH1 poll the customers and see what they think, they @MONTH1 do nothing at all, or they @MONTH1 remove the item to keep the person happy. The problem is what happens if @CAPS2's a friend who liked the item and you don't want to hurt their feelings because the item has been there forever and they love @CAPS2 so much, but can't afford to buy @CAPS2 at a store. What do you do then? People often don't want to think of other people's' feelings and/or the decisions they would have to face over something as small as 'an offensive' item, and they say things that they wouldn't normally say just to get said item 'out of their sight.' @CAPS3 is they just don't want to agknowladge other people's' choices, feelingings, opinions, etc. So what would you do if you found an offensive item at the library? Would you ask for @CAPS2 to be removed? Say nothing? @CAPS2 is your choice in the end, but not all people have the same tastes in books, music, movies, magazines, etc. that you do. So think about other people's' possible feelings, thoughts, opinions in mind before making a decision.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6648,3,"Each time the author comes to a point where the setting isn’t very appealing or helpful, he loses hope for reaching his destination or finding a nice place to rest and get some fresh water. For example, the text states, “one ramshackle shed, several rusty pumps, and a corral that couldn’t hold in the lamest mule greeted me. This sight was troubling” (Kurmaskie @NUM1). The author has a sort of negative, sarcastic tone at this point. This shows that he’s getting frustrated and losing some hope. He also mentions that the “sight was troubling” which shows how big of an affect the features around him or scenery can have.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12725,5,"I particularly enjoyed this memoir. The author did a fantastic job at creating a sense of love and comfort while telling his story. The first sentence that stuck out to me was in paragraph @NUM1: ""Passionate Cuban music (which I adore to this day) filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen."" To me, that sentence was all about making people feel comfortable and at home. It put out a sense of family in the story. The feeling of love was easily put into the story at paragraph @NUM2, when the author talked about his family. Especially where the author had said ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family, knowing that they would do the same for us. The family loved everybody, and used their love to help struggling people, or people who just wanted to visit, get back on their feet and stay in their home. This story was truly filled with dozens of examples of love and comfort, and I really enjoyed reading it.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13283,5,The mood of the memoir thatthe author istrying to create is happiness. As it saysin the story a love of cooking. The other thing is that the passionate Cuban music playing. This is why the mood is happy. Happy is the mood of the story because of what his parents did to get shelter and food. Heis also happy how his parents turned a simple house into a wonderful howe for everyone. Narciso isalso happy for what love and sacrifice his parents endured throughout the time of making their houseinto a home,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4562,2,"Censorship in libraries has been an issue among communities for as long as literature has been around. As expressed by Katherine Paterson, if one has the right to remove a book from the shelf that he or she deems unexceptable, then everyone has the right to remove books that he or she deem unexceptable. Everyone has an individual view of what is unexceptable, so that @MONTH1 leave no book to be left on the shelf. In saying this, if the government censors materials such as books, music, movies, and magazines, there is nothing to keep them from banning all that is there. There is bound to be someone that wants a certain thing to be censored, but the government @MONTH1 not see it a something to be censored. This brings up another question, what deems something unexceptable to be viewed? In my mind, this is a matter of opinion, so should we leave something like this in the government's hands to decide upon? I do not believe that books, music, movies, or magazines should ever be censored. It is the choice of the individual to read, listen, or watch a certain material. The government's opinion of whether something should be censored or not has changed over time. The novel, 'The @CAPS1 of @ORGANIZATION1' was onced censored and banned by the government for it contained language and scenes that were viewed as inappropriate for readers. If this work were to remain banned, this canon of american culture, the effect that it had on american literature to this day would have been lost. I see literature as another form of art. Art should never be censored, for the lack of it will halt all developments in our society. Artists are ones to take risks and so are writers. If people were not allowed to take risks, what would become of our society? Developments that have been made by researchers, inventors, artists, and writers were once possibly deemed as risk. Should we have censored them? Another instance under which censorship had had a negative affect on society and culture was during the @CAPS2 regime. Music, books, art, movies, everything was censored or banned under @CAPS3's rule. A whole generation was lost under his power, for they were deemed enexceptable just because he did not like them. Now, should we put the power of picking what is unexceptable into the hands of one group of people? Whole generations of books, music, etc. could be at stake under such principles. There should be no reason that we are not allowed to see, read, or listen to whatever we would like to as a nation. The government, with the ability to censor libraries, can hinder our exposure to ideas unknown to us. Lack of exposure is the cause of a society's ignorance of the world around it. Who will stop the government from censoring what could be the next major masterpiece in literature? Nothing stopped them from banning 'The @CAPS1 of @ORGANIZATION1,' so is there limit? This is the question one has to ask themselves, to keep the government from potentially cutting the nation off from future masterpieces.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16163,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many problems trying to allow dirigibles to dock on it. One problem was designing the building to be able to withstand the stress from a thousand-foot dirigible swinging around it in the wind. The builders needed to find a way to distribute the wind pressure all the way to the foundation. Another problem was the strong winds surrounding the building; when the navy tried to dock a dirigible on it, it kept being tossed about by the strong winds, this problem was never solved. A third problem was finding a way to actually dock the dirigible, this was quickly solved with a winch. A final problem was the fact that the dirigibles were so dangerous, and couldnt safly dock, as well as a law that prevented dirigibles from flying close to buildings, which was created for that reason.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15116,6,"In constructing the Empire State Building, builders faced multiple obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock atop the @CAPS1. One obstacle that constructors faced was modifications, ""The stress of the dirigibles load and wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the foundation."" With this obstacale contractors would need to reinforce the @CAPS1 of the frame and the foundation. And the obstacle as stated from the excerpt is ""most dirigibles from outside the United States use hydrogen rather than helium, which is flammable."" @CAPS2 that hydrogen is flammable it would not be good if a dirigible exploded over the streets of New York. Those are the obstacles contractors faced during the construction of the Empire State Building.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16180,6,"Acording to the excerpt from The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon @CAPS1 the builders of the Empire State Building faced obsticles in attempting to attache a dirigible mooring unit to the top of the building. In paragraph @NUM1, @CAPS1 says ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself."" and Then describes how harsh winds could render the mast unstable. Another obsticle in the making of the mast was a law stating derigibles could not fly under a certain altitude, The set altitude was higher then the building was tall. The last obsticle was safety, in paragraph @NUM2 @CAPS1 talks about how some blimps are filled with hydrogen, which is highly flammable. The effect of a blimp fire over a vastly populated area would be devistating. The mooring mast on the Empire State building was an ingeniose idea, but had to many obsticles to make it work.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15888,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced a lot of obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. A few of these problems included designing the mast and making sure that it was safe enough for dirigible to dock on. According to the excerpt, ""The steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate this new situation."" This meant that the builders would have to change the plan of how the building could be built to be able to hold the dirigibles. After they constructed a new layout for the building the conflict of safety came into play. Stated in paragraph @NUM1, ""The greatest reason was one of safety: Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly inflammable."" Another big safety issue was ""nature itself."" ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" The air currents made it so that they had to tie down the dirigible, but even then it is dangerous because it would be dangling over pedestrians on the street. The design and safety of the building both were big obstacles that the builders faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 462,1,"Dear @CAPS1, Technology has been advancing at a rapid rate for many years now making life much easier for everyday people. It helps out in many ways for example, to keep in touch with relatives, to learn new information and to keep you safe and updated. Computers are vital to everyday life and we need them. A huge purpose of computers is to keep in touch. With new programs like ""@CAPS2"" and ""@CAPS3"" and ""@CAPS4"", it leaves you with all sorts of new opportunities to keep in touch and have fun with your friends that were not previously available. Email as well, is a great taol to keep in touch with family that are far away opposed to the good'ol letter which @MONTH1 take a web in the mail. Another huge reason why we need computers today is to be able to reaserch foreign places and learn facts that without a computer you would never even heard of. With computers, it makes it possible to go online, look up the @ORGANIZATION1, research it and plan a flight there a week later. It is also a great tool to learn new things that he did not know previusly. It is a huge step up in the education process. Computers also provide us with extreme saftey and security as well as breaking news. Imagine how much simpler it would be to be able to be at home and go on the computer to check the best rout home opposed not and consequently sitting intinse. With modern day technology all that is possible. They add great saftey and protection to average people like you and me. In conclusions, hopefully your mind has been changed on the topic of computers, or if you already were in support, that as well is great. Now you are being asked to spread the word about how great computers are and how vital they are to ensuring a better future. I understand that some people do not enjoy electronics but it is up to you to set them straight! Computer save great tools for moving ahead and we should cheer, as them, not trash them.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15355,6,"Architects had to face many problems in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on the empire State building. The very first problem architects faced was adding a mooring mast to the building because they could not Simply just drop one on, they had to go back and re-support the whole skeleton of the building. Another problem is if the dirigible were to fail like the hindenburg it would plument in a ball of fire to a very populated city down below. The greatest problems architects had to face was nature itself There were violent winds constantly if a dirigible had been tethered down it would move violently and go @CAPS1 down on pedestrians down below, which is too much of a risk for the architects to take.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6183,3,"The terrain in “Do not exeed posted speed limit” by Joe Kurmaskie the cyclist had to cope with many difficulties. He was already lacking water from the anduous journey and then the enviroment turned against him. The narration states, “I noticed the terrain changing flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills.”(Kurmaskie @NUM1). This means the cyclist is going to put forth more energy to make it up these hills. Energy he barely has. This will drain almost all the energy the cyclist has. Another example is, “At some point, tumbleweeds crossed my path”(Kurmaskie @NUM1). This means that the cyclist is in the middle of nowhere with barely any water and energy, causing even more problems. In conclusion, the setting in, “Do not exceed posted speed limit” by Joe Kurmaskie caused many problems for the cyclist. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6205,3,The story “Do not exceed posted speed limit is about a cyclist who got bad direction to Yosemite National Park and has a depleeding water supply is extreme heat. He is doubtful that he will make is journey because he is dehydrated and dizzy.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6617,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist in many ways. The temperature in the area affect the way he drinks his water which leads him to thinking he is going to die because he is running out of water. The “towns” he comes to are so deserted he thinks he is going in the wrong direction. All the settings in the story also help him not to give up but keep on going. In conclusion even though he had to go through all that doubt he was going to be alive in the end he still went on and tried. In the end he did make it and all it was worth it.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 946,1,"According to the @ORGANIZATION1 govermant @PERCENT1 of @CAPS1 spend @NUM1 hours or more on a computer a day. A study shows @CAPS1 are't getting enough exercise, aren't spending enough time with fmaily, aren't enjoying their lives. Right now people would rather be on the computer then doing other stuff.Since more people have been using the computer those people heven't enough exercise. Now @PERCENT2 of @CAPS1 have gone obese since they have always been or the computers, @CAPS4 year a @CAPS6 was fit and healthy, but when a friend told him about a website within the @CAPS5 @NUM2 minutes. After @NUM1 months, the fit and healthy @CAPS6 became obese. The @CAPS6 would always have junk food when @CAPS7 was on the computer. when @DATE1 came, @CAPS7 tryed out for his school baseball team. @CAPS7 didn't make it because @CAPS7 was out of shape. After that happened, @CAPS7 went to his old ways by eating healthy and exercising. Now that @CAPS6 is in shape for any sport @CAPS7 plays. Next people aren't spending enough time with their families. A lot of jobs require people to be on the computer. When that happens a person will forget whats really important to them. A couple years ago, a @CAPS6 was going to have the biggest game of his life. It was the championship game. @CAPS7 was reminding his dad about it all. When the gone was about to start, the @CAPS6 looked into the crowd for his dad. @CAPS7 didn't see him at all. The @CAPS6 was just think his dad was. after the @CAPS5, @CAPS7 looked again, but now @CAPS7 was sad. His own dad wasn't at the game. His team @CAPS4 the game. Now his dad doesn't miss a thing since @CAPS7 doesn't go on the computer as often. Finally, people aren't enjoying their lives they would rather be on a computer than doing stuff they like. One @CAPS6 used to always play basketball with his friends when @CAPS7 started to go on the computers, everything changed people would ask him to play, but @CAPS7 would say no. The computer was the only things that mattered. When the @CAPS6 tryed out for his @CAPS8 school @CAPS7 didn't make it because @CAPS7 forgot how to play. When that happened, @CAPS7 stopped using the computer and went back to basketball. now when @CAPS7 tries out., @CAPS7 makes. It's now or never to decide either waste your life on a computer or live your life. I would rather live life than be on a computer.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12533,5,"The mood in the memoir is happyness, and friendship, and glory, an example is ""My parents always always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family, knowing that they would do the same for us. A feeling of friendship and honesty is ""it was a close-knit community of honest, hardworking immigrants who extended a hand to people who, while not necessarily their own kind, where clearly in need."" and that is the mood of the memoir.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13455,5,"In this memoir written by Narciso Rodriguez, he portrayed a very specific mood. This mood made me feel that I was there, or part of the story that he was telling. I felt this way because by familiarizing your readers with your characters, that makes writing the rest of the story a lot easier. For example, in paragraph two, I was able to get a sense of what his home and family life was like-especially with this line, ""Within its walls, my young parents created our traditional cuban home, the very heart of which was the kitchen."" @CAPS1 line that I felt was special to the story was, ""It was a close-knit community of honest, hardworking immigrants who extended a hand to people who... were clearly in need"" I liked this statement especially because it showed me, as the reader, how caring those people were. It also brightened the mood of the whole story. The overall mood of this memoir, I feel, was clearly depicted.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12712,5,"The memoir looks back on his childhood, with fondness, so I'd call the mood whistful. Yes, the author creates a whistful mood, by talking about his childhood home, friends and family. But... whistfulness only lasts until the end of paragraph @NUM1... after that it becomes a greatful mood, where he's giving out thanks and describing what his parents went through. If it is possible to have two moods, then this memoir does. The moods are both whistful and greatful. Yes.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16542,6,"A mooring mast could just be put on top of the Empire State Building. If thousand-foot dirigible more debt the top of the building, held by a cable tether, then it would add stress to the building's frame. The stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure have to be transmitted to the bottom of the building, which was eleven hundred feet below. The frame would have to be strengthened and modified, and this would cost over sixty thousand dollars. Nature itself was the greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast. The winds were shifting because of violent air currents on the top of the building. The back of a dirigible would swivel around and around the mooring mast. Lead weights weighted down dirigibles, but they wouldn't be safe at the Empire State Building because there are pedestrians below. These weights were used for open landing fields.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12616,5,"The mood created by the author in this memoir is love, and happiness. In the memoir the reader expresses the love and gratitude towards his parents. Not only did his parents love him; they quit their jobs and moved across the world just so they could give their son a better life. The authors parents risked so much for their son. The author states that he is very grateful for his parents, and that there is no way to express the love he feels for his parents. This memoir expresses the love, and gratitude in one's family, and how a little bit of caring can go a long way.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3964,2,"Is it offensive? Should people have the right to take down other people ideas? What do you think; I think so ? for centuries people have been writing,making video,and, all types of music. Some consider it a freedom of speech. Others might think of it as being rebellious or conspiracy. I believe @CAPS1 are exceptional writers and promising producers and artists. But not all medias are good. Over a vast amount of time young children have been influenced by medias such as:books,movies,music,etc...Its perfectly normal for many adults who have children to discriminate against certain media .But thats not all @CAPS1 are more cases than just children that are suffering theres also religon, race, gender, sexuality, and social groups. @CAPS1 should be a certain rules and certains laws that are against such wrong doings.But everyone is entiltled to @CAPS1 opinion.Hundreds of people are discreminated because of what they here and see in the medias.A life changing expierience for me was the movie The @CAPS2 @CAPS3. This could be considered offensive to lots of peolpe such as those of the african american decent or any other race that has suffered similar abuse. This is just a few issues with freedom of speech ,but @CAPS1 will always be disagreements and differennt views of oppinion.But I for one believe that theres just certain stuff that shoukdnt be allowed to be put out in to public media",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 11980,5,"This @CAPS1 shows a lot of different types of moods that oneper son can have towards friends, family, andyour heritage. Narciso Rodriguez explainsthat family is reallyall you need. Hisparents movedfrom Cuba tothe United States sotheir family, especially their kids, could have a good and successful life. Narciso is very grateful that his parents would put their past behind them and their family just sotheir kids could be better people. Whenhis parents firstmoved here they werestruggling both personally and financially. Whenthey camethey went to aneighborhood where there was mostly Spanish, Cuban, and Italian immigrants. In this memoir, it talks a great deal about family, ""Growing upin this environment instilled in me a great sense that 'family' had nothing to do with being a blood relative."" With different typesof heritages sitting around their table. they noticed that it was not just about who gave birth to you, and who istheir siblings and soon, but who helped you out through your life. Another type of mood that this memoir portrays isthat you have to be happy with who you areas aperson. ""My parents always kept their arms and their door opentothe many people we considered family. Knowing that theywould do the same for us."" This memoir's moodis mostly about love and who you will be proud about. They're setting atone that says you shouldn't be discouraged about who you are and where you come from, but to beproud about whoyouare asa person.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4487,2,"There a lot of things to life and sometimes we do need as much help as we can get. Sometimes people will do anything to get help or go anywhere to find it. Because when people feel lost it's the most scraest thing to a person. So they turn to reading books, listening to music, watching movies, also looking and reading magazins. But although thats not the best way you can go there times when you need to listen to your soul the most. Now there was a time when know one knew how to read or even was a loud to read. But now adays reading as taking over. If you can read you can do anything , you could be the one to run to whole world one day if you read things right. Books and magazins there are is not a big different between the two. Books can take you mind off some where that you have never seen before and places like the wild, @LOCATION2, @LOCATION1, @CAPS1's, and high up and trees. It teaches you @LOCATION1 thing but not every thing it teaches is good. Books can lie about whats about to happen to the world. Now magazing show you what all the starts are doing and how there living and what there house looks like and there money their begin home. There one thing you have to understand you can't always get scraed and thing what you reading is right you have to read your mind it see what it says about what you just read. When you hear your favtor song what do you or when you see your favtor movie? Do start dancing or do you cry when they break up, do you say I can sing like her or do you rein act the part in the movie. These things can help you or make you think about things you shouldn't do to people or even to yourself. Music can make you think about what your life has been throw or miss the person that has died because they listen to that one song so much. Music can talk you in to killing yourself drive you crazy, hurt your soul when hear what someone else has been throw. Its all about how you take the song when you first hear it and take the messages out of it. Movies show history and show you want happens to people when they do the wrong things what will happen to them. There could be a ican in the movie your watching and could want to be like him/her. But not everyone you see you shouldn't want to be like them. You have to be yourself at the end of the day. Because you wake up looking at you everyday and love you everyday and take care of you everyday. When it's all said and done you have to belive in yourself and not listen to what everyone is trying you. Go with you soul. Yes listening to it or read or even watching ir but just remember flow your deams and do what you love. So thants what I thing about music,books,movie and magazing listen but don't listen at the same tim",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10582,4,"The author is letting us /reader know that the give plans to do the same thing again next year when the show is all gone, when the geese come back and when etcs warm enough for the hibiscus flower to bud/bloom again! the author @MONTH1 also be concluding the sentence to show that this is the life the little give chose and she will keep up with new gardening till the next spring!",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9426,4,"In “winter Hibiscus” the author uses hibiscus flower to symbolize beauty in unexpected places, adapting to a new life, and Saeng's home country at the end of the story I think that the author realizes that even though she failed the test, everything is going to be okay. While looking at the hibiscus she remembers her old life, which she loved, and she is reminded of the natural beauty that can be found in a hibiscus flower. In life, I think every one should always remember that even though one @MONTH1 be disappointed at sometime, we have to keep in mind, the fact that life goes on. There will always be another chance, as long as you can find peace and beauty in something good.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9194,4,"She says that because she had failed to keep the tropical plant a live.She was disappointed in herself and so that why she said. In the spring, when the snow melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that tes t again. When she failed and her mother said it will be okay you can always try again.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9573,4,The author concludes the story with this because she is say that she is going to grow with the season chang. She is in a new country and just failed her drivers test. She feels down but the hibiscus reminds her of being back home. In the story @CAPS1 mother says “I’ve seen this kind blooming along the lake its strong enough to make it through the winter. I think that Saeng can relate to that because if the flower can make it in the winter tha she can make it in a new country.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7214,3,Well in the story Do Not Exceed Posted Speed limits by @PERSON1 the setting affects you because if you cant see any thing for miles and you are running out of water it has a sycological effect on you. You can start to panick like he did when it stoped in the old house and all that came out of the pump was battery acid. Also you don know exactly where you are so that also affects u because you don’t know where to go or if you should turn back or what. If I was this person the features around me would have a lot of effect on me. ,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9264,4,"In in Winter Hibiscus by Minfong Ho, the last paragraph is a vow by the main character (Saeng) to retake her driver’s test when spring comes and her hibiscus is budding. The author concludes the story with that paragraph because it gives a sense of hope to the sad story. It suggests that Saeng will be okay and will move past her longing for the country of her birth. “And in the war on moist shelter of the greenhouse, Saeng broke down and wept. “Saeng was so sad and miserable. All of the flowers reminded her home country. She was depressed and homesick. When she got home, she planted a hibiscus plant in the frozen ground when it would bloom in the spring it would represent a new life and another chance. It meant that Saeng would not give up. Minfong Ho concluded Winter Hibiscus on a positive note with the last paragraph.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 589,1,"Dear @LOCATION1, I believe that going on the computer has a positive effect on people. It is also true that some people are not getting enough exercise. To prevent not getting enough exercise we should play sports or have family activities to atleast get out of our house. Everybody needs to stop being lazy and get active. I think that an excerise day should be mode and turned into a tradition. It could be twice a year or more a month or whatever is picked as long as there is one day @LOCATION2 or even more than @LOCATION2 can exercise on.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9525,4,"The author concludes the story with this specific paragraph to sum up the realization and determination Saeng obtains. First of all, Saeng starts out upset after failing her test. When she sees the flower and goes to find it at a shop she is overwhelmed by this small reminder of her old home. That small flower made her realize how much she missed her old home and buying it becomes a nessesity for her. She probably felt that with that flower she would always have a little piece of home in this newer world. After realizing that memories are whats important and seeing that flower’s determination to survive a cold winter, she develops the determination to take the test again. She vows to do so because she has gained faith from the flower’s survival and her realization of important memories. All in all ,that ending paragraph reveals these specific messages",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9521,4,"Minfong Ho concluded the story with this because it shows Saeng‘s determination to pass the drivers test. The fact that she failed it made her feel bad, and brought out feelings of homesickness as did the familiar plant, but in this final paragraph she vows that she will overcome all her challenges of being in an unfimiliar place and pull herself together to accomplish her goal as did the winter hibiscus.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13271,5,"In the memoir, Narciso Rodriguez by Narciso Rodriguez, there are different moods created.One mood is @CAPS2. This memoir includes @CAPS2 because it reminds him about where he grew up and how comforting and loving his parents were. ""I will never forget that house or its gracious neighborhood where the many things I learned there about how to love."" @CAPS1 mood is love. ""I will never forget how my parents turn this simple house into a home."" This shows how much he loves his parents and how much he loved his home.The last mood is, grateful. Although they were poor and lived in a @NUM1-room apartment, they were extremely grateful for that. ""Here, the innocence of childhood, congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the backdrop to life in our warm home."" This shows how grateful they were.In this memoir, Narciso Rodriguez by Narciso Rodriguez, some different moods included are, @CAPS2, Love and being grateful for what you do have and not what you dont have.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1252,1,"To whom it @MONTH1 concern, @CAPS1. My name is @PERSON1. I have written in response to the letter sent to me on the topic of electronics. Computers, to be percise. To me, computers are helpful, yet extremely vile. These chunks of metal are expensive, unhealthy and degrading human learning capabilities. Computers have too many negaive features for me to cope with. Dell, @ORGANIZATION1, and so many other computer companies sell computers at ridiculously expensive prices. You buy one on sale and when you need your computer, @CAPS2!, malfunctions and problems assalt you. Now you have to call a repair man who will charge you even more money! Did you really spend your hard earned cash on a faulty hunk of trash? This is ridiculous. I went onto my computer yesterday and what do you think happened? It crashed! My six hundred dollar computer crashed! Computers are too expensive to have to keep. When I get rid of mine, I'm not getting another. Have you ever sat at your computer so long your eyes watered? Horrible to endure, that's not the only problem your computer can cause. Your health is at stake! When you sit at your computer working or playing instead of going out for a jog or exercise, your health degrades. Gaining weight, pink eye from staring at the screen, do I have to go on!? The very computer you @MONTH1 love can harm you. I say, get rid of that computer. Visit friends, family and aquaintances. Be active and stay healthy. Not for me, but for you. The next point I am about to say @MONTH1 shock, surprise, or scare you. Your computer is making you stupid. I can't say it nicely. Don't call me rude because it's true. I'll give you an example. A student receives a classic home work assignment. Define these three or four words. Easy right? Wrong, I'm afraid @NUM1 out of @NUM2 kids surveyed go home and use computers to retrieve the answers to homework. What if your child is cheating? What will happen to then? They could drop out of school early and live their lives as people who can't learn for themselves. Is that the world we want for kids? No! We should destroy the computers. Thank you for reading my paper. It was a pleasure as always to write to you. Have a nice day.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3349,2,"There are tons of books in the library that people @MONTH1 find offensive to young readers today. I think that these materials should not be removed from the shelves. People have a right to read what they choose to read. There are many reasons why I think these materials shouldn't be removed from the library. First of all, there are so many books that could be found as 'offensive.' @CAPS1 removing all of these offending books, you would basically be removing half the books in the library. Most young adult books have something to do with teens, drugs, violence, and other things that would come off as offensive. These books are usually the ones that teenagers read. Just because they're reading them doesn't mean their actions will be affected. These types of books are read for the purpose of entertainment and not meant to harm or offend anybody. Secondly, I think that people have a right to choose what they want to read, listen to, and watch. Books, music, movies, and magazines are sold for this purpose. Everyone has a different opinion and taste to what they like or dislike. Finally, I think that censoring what is put on the shelves would be a mistake. There are tons of great books or movies that could be found offensive and to take them off the shelf would make them less known. Children wouldn't know about them, and they could be missing out on some great stories. Everyone has an opinion, and watching out for your children is understandable. Censoring what is available at the library would make finding books harder for other people. Libraries are meant to have different types of material because everyone has a different taste.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7016,3,"The setting in the story “Do not exceed posted speed limit"" affects the cyclist because it’s a dry area in California in June. The cyclist really needs water which is the main thing affecting him besides the fact that he’s lost in a ghost town. Therefore, the lack of water and misleading directions are the main features displayed.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12095,5,"In the memoir Narciso Rodriguez, he feels a great amount of passion and love. He goes into detail about his culture, and says how much it means to him. He also feels love, love for his family and friend who were always there for him. He says That family goes further than blood.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7149,3,"In the short story, “Do Not Exceed Posted speed limit,” by Joe Kurmaskie, expresses the features of the setting like the lack of water, and can not find help to the end affects the cyclist in the story. During his time of need the cyclist says, “It didn’t really matter. I was going to die and the birds would pick me clean, leaving only some expensive outdoor gear and a diary with the last entry in praise old men their wisdom.” The cyclist has a lack of necessities in the features around him and is letting his pride fall down; giving up on hope. When the cyclist finds hope, “And drank deeply from the sink, I had an overwhelming urge to seek out Gary and Wilber, kiss them, and buy some bait.” The cyclist was astonished of what he had stumbled onto and appreciated that he was still alive. The cyclist should not have taken the old peoples advice for granted, but will now look onto people’s sense of directions.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3801,2,"There are some certain materials i think is affensive to childrens is book,music,movies an even magazines.Books have a lot of materials unsafe for children because they can get a hold to @CAPS1 books and other unsafe materials.Another thing is music, and even music videos has a lot of profanity in them.Movies such as @CAPS1 movies some children @MONTH1 watch them and reflect wat they have watched on tv.The next thing is magazines,has material such as appropreate pictures in them tats why they should take the books,music,movies and magazines off the shelf.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12744,5,Well first the authur feels happy and exsited but he also feels sad cause he is moving to @LOCATION1. In 1961 he was born but In that time he met a friend which was his Babysitter and she was his first friend she lived up stairs from them he has alot of family members but wen he moved to @LOCATION1 his mom and dad took his people that need a home Just until they can get back up on there feet he wants to see his grandparents that cant leave until 1970. But he told his mom and dad he will always be grateful to them for their love and sacrifice he often told them that what they did was much more courageous thing than he could have ever done he also often told them of his admiration for their strength and perseverance andt he thanked them,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7080,3,"The setting affected the character in ways that would usually affect people. When he got into the first town he had ran out of water to drink but the towns water he was in now tasted like battery acid so that’s not safe to drink. As he started to head out the scenery changed. “Not two miles into this next section of the ride, I noticed the terrain changing. Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills."" This is hinting at the fact that maybe this town he is going to @MONTH1 be abandoned or not used. He saw a huge rattle snake and tumbleweed. Which are usual signs of a desert. It was hard for him to keep his balance as he says, “trying to keep my balance in my dehydrated state.” He ended up getting to the point where he had to put rocks in his mouth to trick his mind that he wasnt thirsty anymore.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4573,2,"I strongly disagree with the idea of removing any materials from public shelfs. Books,magazines, and the rest of the materials are based on the author's and musician's experiences and their observations. With the population of readers in the @CAPS1 @CAPS2 I no that the removal of books for what they might contain would have a bad impact on the people as a hole. The world needs its materials. The writer of the book writes on his Observations and his own personal experiences in life. The @CAPS3 put so much into it why take it away cause someone doesn't like how part of it's worded. Movies that are considered bad probably just have a bad word or a scene where theres a little blood. Lots of people like to make a big deal out of nothing. I seriously think some parents think if their kid here a bad work or sees a little podle of blood that the kid is going to end up in jail. Then there is music. The public thinks that kids should not be exposed to music like rap and hip-hop. I agree with that, but I also don't see if its christain rap or its a clean song whats wrong with it. A musician is not just payed for his or her amazing skills with an instrument, but also with his or her way to connect with the listener. I truely don't see any reason for take any form of materials off the shelfs. The artist who produces it has a right to their own oppion. The public I feel makes a big deal out of nothing. The smallest problems don't name the material the way the reader hears the work of the artist",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3739,2,"Libraries in @LOCATION1 I am going to write a persuasive essay about what I think about some books and magazines that some people find offensive thing in the book. I dont think that just because it is offensive someone it should be taken off the shelf, because some people have different views over the book or magazine. So I am going to tell what I think over this subject. I think if someone dose'nt like whats in the book they should just not read it or something, because some people might find it interesting. People just need to stop being so selfish and start thinking about others. For example the author of the book or magazine some how relates to them, and they probably made it so other people could relate to them also. Thats why I think people should not argue about taking books off the shelf and start thinking of others. Thats what I think about people trying to take the books off the shelf. So whoever is reading this please take this in consideriation and relize that some people like different books than others. So don't start taking books off the shelf just because a few people find them offensive. So thats all I have to say about people that are trying to get them taken off the shelf because there offensive to them",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1736,1,"@ORGANIZATION2, @CAPS1 you imagine the kids in schools that you yourself run not being able to research on computers? Would you be okay with kids not having the option @ORGANIZATION3 typing their homework? Do you think the adolescence @ORGANIZATION3 @LOCATION2 would want to waste paper because @ORGANIZATION3 their messy handwriting and mistakes? I would hate to live like that, and I hate to live like that, and I know my peers would agree. This is just one @ORGANIZATION3 many reasons why computers have a positive effect on people. Other reaasons include, citizens @ORGANIZATION3 the world need an easier way to communicate with each other, and some people have to work at home. I know you as a @ORGANIZATION3 would not want to upset as many people as taking away computers would. First @ORGANIZATION3 all, think about the schools that the @ORGANIZATION1 runs. Now picture this; kids turning in eight page essays to their teachers, when typing it would have taken three. Imagine those kids the night before, scribbling words away with their cramped hands, typing to write as quickly as possible. These children have no computers, and therefore their teacher will have to take the time to try and comprehend the illegibal students' handwriting. I @CAPS1 almost see the kids screaming, their eyes darting around as they struggle to finish their high priority papers. If there were no computers, then this is what would happen to children. Also, students use computers for research; learning about different parts @ORGANIZATION3 the world. As a @ORGANIZATION1, I doubt you @CAPS1 say that research is a negative affect on school kids. I mean, unless you didn't want them to learn. Secondly, I want you to close your eyes. Think @ORGANIZATION3 yourself calling your best friend who lives in @LOCATION1. He does not pick up, so you walk to your clean, shiny black computer. You hear the clickety-clack @ORGANIZATION3 the keys as you write him a message, and the wooshing sound that your moniter maes when you press send. It is kind @ORGANIZATION3 amazing how advanced our technology is, how @CAPS1 you send a message from @LOCATION2 to @LOCATION1 in a matter @ORGANIZATION3 seconds. You couldn't possibly say that all the hard work put in to makng computers did not have a positive effect, could you? I know that I talk to my friends in @LOCATION3 all the time, but not on the telephoone. You see, my family does not have long distance calling, so if I didn't have a computer, I would never be able to talk to her. I know a lot @ORGANIZATION3 my friends have the same issue, and if not then the time difference between locatiions makes it hard to call people. Have you ever had this problem? Would you want the effect to be that you couldn't talk to some @ORGANIZATION3 your friends anymore? Most importantly, I would like to tell you a story. When @CAPS2 five, my daddy used to tuck me into bed every night. It was my favorite part @ORGANIZATION3 everyday. But then, when I was six, my dad got a job that required him to work late every night. He stopped coming home and tucking me in, and I didn't understand why, being as young as I was. I cried every night for three weeks. After those three weeks, my dad's boss told him that he could work from home... if he had a computer. His work gave him a computer, and he was back to tucking me in every night, and he still does now. If that wasn't a possible effect, then I don't know what is. Many people are able to work from home with computers, which is just another reason why computers are helpful to all citizens @ORGANIZATION3 the world. I'm you, a @ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION3, needs a computer to work. Although I @CAPS1 see why some people @MONTH1 oppose to computer, I completely and utterly disagree. Computers help people with working, learning, and even communication! People @MONTH1 think computers @MONTH1 cost too much, but you @CAPS1 find them for they almost any price range. I do agree that citizens should not spend too much time on the computer, but it still has a totally positive effect on people @ORGANIZATION3 the world. I know that a @ORGANIZATION3 @ORGANIZATION3 the @ORGANIZATION1 should agree.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4663,2,"My view opposes the open distribution of certain newspaper articles. There are certain articles, radio shows, and other sources of media that vividly describe certain things that happen in the news that I find not to be appropriate for some people to hear such as younger children, or people that don't agree with having to listen to things such as: bias reactions, opinions, and interpretations of these things. Open distribution of newspaper articles and things containing disturbing images ought to be censored. I recently seen photos of people who have been killed in the process of finding @LOCATION1. I find that these images @MONTH1 serve some importance to people interested, but for children who can look on their doorstep and look at the newspaper, can see horrifying images that some people @MONTH1 think they shouldn't be exposed to. Even as adults people don't necessarily agree with it. Adults @MONTH1 see what's in the news and @MONTH1 find it to be intriguing as it pertains to them or fairly disturbing, but as far as the protection and limited exposure their children @MONTH1 have, it @MONTH1 not be such a good thing for their kids to be hearing. I was in the car heading back from school one day, and my dad had just picked me up from school, and I casually switch the raido from am to fm as I always do when I get in the car, but I didn't hear the sudden outbreak of a top one hundred song as I had expected, I heard a woman asserting her opinion about the death of @LOCATION1 to a talk radio show host. The show had previously been recorded, and so after the woman had lashed out for being so angry about the whole thing, there was a review of other calls that other people had made in mad frustration about the womans' comments. She had said earlier that it was wrong to have killed somebody, in which the talk radio show host responded with the argument that it was okay for @LOCATION1 to kill thousands, but we can't kill him argument. The reviews that the other callers had made sort of disturbed me. The things that the callers were saying were very offensive towards the woman who had expressed her feelings. The other callers were saying that she needed to get out of our country, and were cursing at her. News like the death of @LOCATION1 isn't just violent in itself, but creates reactions that are very violent as well. Another instance when I was exposed to some information that @MONTH1 not have been well accepted by others was when we were having an assembly meeting at my school, and we watched a video about a protest that was against people of @CAPS1 belief. The whole problem with the protest was that the people of the @CAPS1 faith were born in @LOCATION3, and were meeting with representatives in order to help a poor community in @LOCATION2. Although they were making an effort to help the poor communities, and homeless people in @LOCATION2 there were people shouting at the im protest to leave, and to go back to where they came from. When people hear things about this in the news it can be very offensive, because although it @MONTH1 be happening on a complete opposite coast, it would be able to effect someone, it can easily effect someone who doesn't understand previous conflicts that would shape these peoples' opinions and @MONTH1 take that very offensively, because it is a very complex matter even though it is still very wrong. I believe that the material that is being exposed to people of all ages should be censored, because the material that is being openly distributed now isn't necessarily suitable for everyone, and some people @MONTH1 not want to hear about it, and want to avoid the news that is going around about certain topics that they @MONTH1 not be comfortable with",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10477,4,"The author concludes the story with the paragraph inorder to help the reader visualize a new beginning for the girl. A time to re-take the test and have the fresh new flowers to look upon. To watch the geese return. The geese are symbolic to her and the quest she had taken.. to her new home. The combination of the melting snow and the budding flowers lets the reader know of the bright fresh unclaimed future that is to come for the girl. The author uses the paragraph at the end inorder to explain more of what is to come, to enhance illustrations and capture the attentive audience. It is used to show a spirit in the girl. that allows us to see that she is like the flower, she is having trouble rooting/grasping on to the new lifestyle but there is always going to be a fresh/new time to continue on.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12552,5,The mood created by the auther in @CAPS1 is happy and thank full. one rezon that @CAPS2 is happy her mom and @CAPS3 that @CAPS2 had a good life and her mom and @CAPS3 helped,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10354,4,"In the story “Winter Hibiscus” by Minfong Ho, I think the ending paragraph is there to show that Saeng has not given up. She says, “When they come back…then I will take that test again.” She is talking about the hibiscus and the geese. The things that remind her of home. When the reminders of home come and give her strength, she will have the power to take the test. This shows that even though she has failed she will not give up and she will try again. I think that is the purpose of the paragraph. To show Saeng hasn't given up. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10195,4,In the story “Winter @CAPS1” the author was trying to saying that Saeng was from somewhere then where he is now. In the text It say’s “It was like walking into another world so he is there thinking like no boby know him except for him and him only.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4488,2,"I think that movies, and magazines should be censured to kids at the library. There are many reasons these things should be censured and in this paper I am going to explain why they should be censured. I am also going to give a few examples of some stuff that shouldn't be possible for kids to get. The main reason movies should be censured is because movies that are rated @CAPS1 are not only supposed to be rented by children but it wrong to rent these movies to them. I mean if there is a sex scene or something and your only like eight years old this would be awkward for the parents to explain what the actors are doing. I mean if you were a parent would you want to explain to your eight year what sex is. The next thing that I think should be censured at the library is magazines. I know three in perticular off the top of my head, and they are @CAPS2, @CAPS3, and @ORGANIZATION1. These three magazines talk about how to be better in bed. I really don't any kid, teenagers included should need to know how to be better in bed. They also have several unhealthy diets that teenagers might try. This could cause them to get very sick and if they're already skinny, they could possibly die. Well this pretty much sums up what I think about library contents being censured. I don't really think there are many books that are that bad for kids ears and eyes. I mean there are romances but I don't think any kid is going to last thru a whole romance, because they are pretty boring. Well I hope this will prevent libraries from letting kids get ahold of this kind of content",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15296,6,"In the excerpt The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, it describes many obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building had to face in order to allow dirigibles to dock there. The first obstacle they had to face was the constant change in nature and how it could affect the dirigibles. The dirigibles would ""swivel around"" because of the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" This could put pedestrians on the street in danger because the ship is on top moving and could be unstable. Another obstacle is safety. Outside the United States the dirigibles ""used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" Other countries ships could set on fire in the United States and put people in danger. Also the fact that the loading dock was more than 1,250 feet and loading off could be unstable because of the winds. The last obstacle faced was the ""existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas"". Therefore it was illegal to get the dirigibles close enough to the buildings safely. All these obstacles faced made the workers and planners realize this idea could not be achieved without harming anyone or putting people in danger.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 882,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 people use computers more? No they @CAPS2 not use computers more. Computers have many benefits to society but it also have many negitive effects on people who use them. People are spending more time on computers and less than exercising, enjoying nature, and interacting with family and friends. First, people spend less time exercising. Most athletes have to stay fit and healthy to play in there sport. I am a wrestler and a baseball player but if I don't spend some time a day working out or staying active. I will be out of shape and weaker once my match or next game come along. I'm sure olympic athletes work out and stay active daily so they can be stronger and faster than anybody else out there so I don't know why people sit at home on the computer all day. Second, people don't take the time to enjoy nature. Nature is one of the most beautiful things on this planet. Wether you hiking a mountain of a lake, nature is all around you. I personaly love to hunt and fish. I take the time every sumer, @DATE1, fall,and sometimes winter to go out, enjoy nature, and have fun, and so do many other people in the world. Everyone who sits at home on the computer can't enjoy this gift that we have been given. Third, people won't take the time to with family or friends. If you the computer all day ther you can't go out and be active with your friends, or go for a bike ride with you brother. If you are on the computer you on family friend time that could be being used as a fishing trip or a walk in the woods. If you don't spend time with your family because of something you're doing on the computer, then you just a person. You won't valueable thing that you have in life you r family and you @CAPS2 always be able to make time them. Finally, @CAPS2 people use computers more? No, they @CAPS2 not use computers more. Computers take time away from exercising, enjoying nature, and interacting with family and friends. There are good things about computers, but the less time you spend on them, the better it is for everyone.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3508,2,"In today's society it is easy to find small things that offend people wether it is politics or religion. The truth is no one is able to keep everyone happy. A major debate of today would be that of the media. Should people have the right to remove books, music, movies, or magazines from our shelves because they are found offensive to one person? The answer is no. Three important reasons support this answer: freedom of speech, freedom of the press, and knowing everyone can find something that is offensive. When @LOCATION1 was finally free from @CAPS1 a main goal was to have our freedom of speech. This was a huge achievement for the @ORGANIZATION1. Allowing people to remove matieral from our shelves would be breaking the one rule we worked so hard to gain. People today rely on being able to speak their minds to be apart of their government. Another law that @CAPS2's appriecate is, freedom of the press. Being allowed to write how they feel is what @LOCATION1 is practically based on. With out this wouldn't we be back into the old ways that @CAPS3 fought to change? This is a question you must think about when making this important decision. Finally a huge impact on this decision is knowing that everyone has an opinion on something. It is easy to find someone that is offened by the smallest of things. What happens when someone decideds to find the @CAPS4 offensive to their religion? Do we take it off the shelve and tell the @CAPS5 sorry? If we decided to allow this would there even be books, movies, music, or even magazines for us? It is easy to assume just to take a book off the shelve because it's offensive to you, but what happens when we allow this to everyone? That is why when coming to a decision on how we should handle this, it is going to take much more thinking than a couple of days. We must remember though the rights we are given as @CAPS3; the freedom of speech and the freedom of the press, and we must always think about how this is going to effect our later generations.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1098,1,"Dear local newspaper, @CAPS1 are several reason how computers have effect on people. My position is to convice the local newspaper why certain people @CAPS2't and @CAPS3 use computers. People getting caught up on the @CAPS4, or people not having enough money to explore the world, so they just be on the @CAPS4. In effect, people @CAPS2't waste their time on the @CAPS4 because you will get caught up. For example, my friend @PERSON1 stay on the computer more than @NUM1 hours. He tells me that his on a @CAPS5 line, hooking up with other people. He for gets about everybody. He's so on the @CAPS4. He stop going school, he gaining. Now he just a nobody. He just sit in front of his computer and do nothing. I feel like he just threw his life away just for some stupid @CAPS5 line. @CAPS8's not hard to find another in our city. @CAPS8's alot of beautiful young lady's out here to explore. Similary, people @CAPS2't waste their time on the @CAPS4 because you start losing time. For instance, you spend less time exercising, enjoying nature, and interacting with family and friends. People stop losing their focus on important, and start paying attention on other things like the, was a great person. She was so successful. She make tons of money. Until she start losing her her job. She stop cause she was so stock on facebook. Facebook is like a place for a friend @CAPS6 you could meet other people from different @CAPS7 you could just find people to date on that website. Facebook turn her life around. I remember her telling my mom how her life is so mess up now. How she got fired, how she don't pay her bill, and how she moving into a. Sometimes websites make lose focus on important thing in life. Consequently, certain people @CAPS3 use computer because the @CAPS4 help you with certain things. In summation, @CAPS8 help you find hotel or trip to go on with your friends or families. I love being on the @CAPS4. One time I sign up for this website that was called myspace. For moment I did got caught up on @CAPS8. Continue line.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10265,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph to show that Saeng will perservere through the winter and try to adapt to her new lifestyle. Moving to a new country / culture is extremely tough, and Saeng is bad, but she doesn’t give up on creating a new life in @LOCATION1. The concluding sentence, “in the spring, when the snow melt and the geese return and the hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test,” is one of determination and hope. The entire story Saeng was struggling with adapting to her non of and memory of her homeland give has a sense of security. The sentence wraps up her emotion and shows how strong she is @CAPS1 could easily give up on their driving test, but she won’t. It is a happy ending for somewhat of a sad story. Furthering the sentence shows Saeng’s dwoton the her plant. This hibiscus will survive and so will Saeng when the hibiscus blooms in the spring, so will Saeng. She will try as hard she can to fit in and enjoy her new life. That plant will help her through it by reminding her of vietnam us will as giving her a companion throughout the winter. The author would not have chosen a better conclusion for this story. The conclusion orggos to a new hope to perservere and sucede. As a result, the reader is test with a sense of pleasure and a good feeling torwards the story. This conclusion show how Saeng is adapting to changes info and hope to enjoy her new life in @LOCATION1.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16046,6,"Governer Al Smith of New York had a vision. He wanted to have a building constructed that would surpass the current tallest building in the world, The Chrysler Building. He succeeded in doing so. The Empire State Building was now the tallest building in the world at 1,250 feet. But there were more plans for this building. At the time, aviation pioneers had dreamed of travel by dirigible, and now a mooring mast was to be built at the top of the building for docking these airships. But what should have been a cautious project, turned out to be a dangerous one. There should have been a lot more precaution going into this project. Dirigibles could be very dangerous in a widely populated area like New York City. If the dirigible were to catch fire and explode, people could get hurt. And at such a high altitude, it is likely. People were just starting to understand the dangers of this project halfway into it, which is why it was called off do to lack of safety.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13153,5,"The mood created by the author in this memoir is generosity. Narciso Rodriguez, the author, talks about how much generosity his parents had. He says, ""My parents always kept their arm and their doors open to the many people we considered family."" ""They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends, and carrers in the country they loved."" In the memoir Narciso says that he will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice. His dad worked in a laboratory in Cuba and his mom had studied chemical engineering in Cuba. In the @CAPS1.S they had to start their lives over entirely, taking whatever work they could find. He says that this house was where I learned the real definition of family. He also says, ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" @CAPS2 @CAPS3 parents were generous, grateful, brave and had courage. We should all be grateful for what aour parents sacrifice for us or had sacrificed.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 919,1,"Dear @LOCATION1, I understand this focus situation, the effect of computers or our society people's reactions are less than about them & my question to is who? Computers a very good effect on our town's specify. Computers areaids in tracking hand-eye coordination. They give people the opportunity to look at things & talk to that it traveled here they wallets empty faster than the speed of it. @CAPS2 also have the ability to help people so things that an than a pig sty. Let me explain more these reasons. Computers are very good for our society because they are kids in tracking hand-eye coordination to kids & adults. Just to help you understand why in to teach hand-eye coordination, @CAPS2 are so many that help you learn but help you learn will get you. In foot ball catching helps to teach the skill but makes you up on the ground after being by someone potentially yourself. In baseball swinging at a pitch to teach his skill, but if the is very close to you it could how you for the if you do the ball could someone & hurt them, ability to day back. Computers are great way to this skill in a saw Even @CAPS1 @PERSON1 here in town says that he has seen an of kids with better hand eye coordination, due to do have a good our town? Well, computers let people to that. You can talk to relatives in far away places but to travel with this. I'm sure that you're wondering if I have I do have another reason. Computers have to samethings electronically so fast easily, make a look on computer's hard drives, @CAPS2 are so much more that ran be on a computer, that make a room empty. Before my famiy had a computer complete dedicated to papers files that your so important & that we could not lose. When up got picture, typed up paper, saved our was empty! I hope that this letter has proves to you computers effect on our society. Computers help and in the process of hand eye coordination. The help to thing happen but if done on real life could faster of they also help to electronically than a. So now, after this letter you go out i publish this telling every good effects of computers. Again I thank you for reading this letter.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3377,2,"I do not beleive that certain materials such as books, music,, movies, magazines and ect. should be remove, unless if it has nudity or a lot of cussing in the books. Because some books and movies are bad to show little kids. But i think we should have anything, that teaches you something in the labrary. plus people have to do reports and homework on some books, and if its about something with a little cussing and kinda graphic it should be ok. i think if the library have these kind of books, movies, music and magazines they should let you if you are a certain age or have a note from a teacher that you need that book, or some kind of rule that lets you choice any kind of book but with permission. The library's would have more people going if they had more books and better ones. Because most of the things that people like is in the books or movies that the library wont have. So it just depends on the situation. There is a lot of offensive things out there, it doesnt mean you can keep it away from people. They will find out anyways sooner or later. I think its unnessary for the libraries to do that. I always hate when i try to get something when you find out you have to be @NUM1 or older or have an adult with you. plus some people dont have computers or enternet excess, so they cant look up things easly. They have to drive down to the library to look something up and if you are lucky they might have the thing you are looking for at the library, but if they dont that sucks. So thats my opinion about have offensives things on the shelves.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10514,4,I think that the passage is trying to say the sum because in the passage. it says “in the spring when the snows melt and only the sun does that and the gees return hunting season and the hibiscus is budding then I will take that test again”. so @CAPS1 start in the spring so it has to be the sun in the spring time.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4525,2,"Libraries have books that are short, long, and everything in between. Their are good and bad books, but that all depends on the opinion of the reader. There is no reason that if someone is offended by a book in a library that it should be removed from the shelf. The books on a shelf in the library are there for everyone to read so if one is removed then someone else is missing the chance to have the experience of reading that very book. Would you have some food destroyed if it didn't taste any good to you? No, you wouldn't get it again. So why'd someone have the right to remove a book because they were offended it isn't right your views on something are only an opinion nothing more. Your views are not the same as @PERSON1's who lives down the street so by removing a book it is pushing your views on somone else. In conclusion, the books in question could be good or bad in the eyes of the next person to read it. Pushy people aren't normally liked by others. Books are meant to be read and interpreted by the reader. That is why no one person has the right to take it off the shelf.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9482,4,"The author of “Winter Hibiscus” concludes the story with the excerpt ""when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again” because it emphasizes Saeng pain to come to an unknown place and fail her first test but also emphasizes Saeng’s resolve to work hard after seeing a flower that resembled one from home. The flower itself is very important to Saeng, for example, the text reads “And besides it was yet another old friend. a small shrub with waxy leaves and dainty flowers with purplish petals and white centers.” This excerpt demonstrates Saeng’s love for her hometown through a flower that she knows grows back home. Another example is when Saeng told her mother the bad news “I-I failed the test” @CAPS1 attention instantly was drawn to the flower and her mother could only be good. In conclusion, the hibiscus flower is Saeng’s source of stength as it’s the only thing she knows in the united states. Saeng wants to show the same resolve on her test that the flower shows in the harsh winter.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15081,6,"The builders of the empire state building faced many obstacles in the idea of docking a dirigible to a building of such height. Dirigibles, mostly outside of the U.S., were made with hydrogen rather than helium. Hydrogen is extremely flamable gas which was very dangerous above a highly populated are such as downtown @LOCATION2. Safety was a major concern an accident like Hindenburg was something they do not want to risk. The ability of docking a lightweight flyer was also very difficut. With strong winds, after the tethor cable was attached, the back end of the air craft would be blown around making the aviator of the blimp hard to control. Also, a law stating aircrafts may not fly too low to the buildings was stated especially after the incodent of hindenburg in New Jersey. A blimp could possibly hit a spire of another building The reality of docking these lightweight aircrafts was a major saftey and difficult concern. These obstacles are what builders of the empire state building faced.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 11938,5,"In the memoir ""Home: The Blueprints Of Our Lives"" the author, Narciso Rodriguez, creates a very loving mood.When Narciso Rodriguez is talking about his home he writes, ""Within it's walls, my young parents created our traditional Cuban home, the very heart of which was my kitchen."" This shows his love for his kitchen. @PERSON2 shows his love for cooking when he writes, ""My parents both shared cooking duties and un wittingly passed on to me their rich culinory skills and a love for cooking that is still with me today."" @PERSON2 provides us the love that he has for his parents when he states, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" @CAPS1 @PERSON2 tells us that his parents were very loving when he writes, ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we consider family, knowing that they would do the same for us.""",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1743,1,"Dear local newspaper, I beileve that using computers is a good idea and will help people. So many people all over the world have computers. Computers are good because they help kids learn, communicate with others, and help teach responsibility. Please just listen to what I have to say. First, I beileve that computers help kids learn. If you buy computer games like a cooking game you can learn how to cook. Even if you buy the @PERSON1 you are still learning by taking care of them. There are so many good websites that you can go on like @ORGANIZATION1. People learn through playing new things and why not play with your favorite characters. Also, you can go on google and type in anything you want and it will give you the answer. You use a keyboard for all this so you also learn how to type. If your teacher gives you a homework assingment why not type it so you learn that skill. This is why computers are good for hearg kids learn. Secondly, you can communicate with others from around the word or just your friends. There is a thing called @CAPS1 or @ORGANIZATION2. You use a webcam and talk to anyone you want. There are also websites you can go on too communicate with people from all around the world. It is pretty cool because you don't have to travel there to talk to them. All of this stuff teaches you how people are different and no one person is the same. Peoples language could be different or there personality. So many communicating things make computers even better. Lastly, using computers helps teach responsibility. Kids who use internet know that poeple need privacy and that comes with responsibility because you should know that. If someone dosen't want to be bothered then don't bother them that has to do with privacy. Also, you learn to be nice on computers. If you video chatted you should definitely know to be nice and not be rude. That is how you get kicked off of these things. Another thing is people learn to take care of things a computer is worth a lot of money. Not everyone has one so you should be thankful for what you have. Don't brag, but just know you are privleged for a computer. These things are the reasons computers are good. So if you ever consider getting a computer the answer is yes because computers help kids learn, you can communicate with others, and you learn responsibility. Now you know computers are really good for kids not that bad.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16306,6,"There were many obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One example is that by adding the dirigible, it would add stress to the building. The frame of the Empire State Building would have to be changed due to the pressure that would be put on the building. All of the changes that would have to be made would add up to over sixty thousand dollars. Now, there would also be 102 floors. The top floor would be the boarding area as well as an observation area. One more thing they had done for the mooring masts was raise an American flag on top. All of these accommodations were made for the help of dirigibles docking on top of the Empire State building.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 560,1,"Dear @CAPS1 Newspaper, @CAPS2 though computers have many benefits, they also have many faults too. I believe that computers and the tecnology these days have many more negative features that positive. Some of those faults are it's bad for your eyes, don't spend as much time with family and excersising and the usage of going outside is less often used. Yeah, I get it that computers are very useful but they also kill your eyesight. If you haven't notested more and more kids have been getting glasses and contacts, due to the use of staring at a screen @CAPS2 day. I know more than @NUM1 kids that have glasses now, I also know that over @NUM2 parents I know now have glasses for the same exact reason. Using these computers is great for looking up your homeowrk, but if you stay on it for over an hour or @NUM3 a day you'll probibly become addicted to it and eventually you'd loose your eyesight. The usual time a kid spends on their laptop a night is about @NUM3 or @NUM5 hours and the time they spend with their family is maby an hour if the parent are lucky. Personally, I feel tecnollogy is the reason parents and kids are less connected. @CAPS2 the kids go on the computer is go on @CAPS3 or @CAPS4 and talk to friends that they see eceryday, so I don't find their friend, mostly the girls but why not just talk to them in school since you see them for @NUM6 hours everyday. The use of technology is being abused! the computers were invented for knoledge not scandeious ""webchats"" or ""@CAPS4 pages."" The world would be so much happier and mentally fit if we stuck to original idea of tecnology. Now kids don't even take a faststep outside their bedroom afterschool, its pointless! Most people even eat in their room so they can talk to people. So thats taking the parents time away from their kids. Now that you have read what I had to say about tecnology now a days, wouldn't you agree that it just takes time away from your actual life? I think it does and hope that you agree with me. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16511,6,"The obstacles the builders went through lallow dirigibles to dock there was that they wanted to put a mooring mast on the top of the Empire State buildings flat roof, but the problem was that the stress of the dirigible's load also the heavy wind pressure had to be transmitted to the buildings foundation, in which was about @NUM1 ft below. And since they had to do that The steel frame of the Empire State building would have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate the situation",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12556,5,"The author created many types of moods in this @CAPS10. At one point in the @CAPS1 he creates a sweet type of @CAPS6 by describing his home, him @CAPS2 and @CAPS3, how the kitchen was the heart of his house.At another point in the @CAPS1 the author created a @CAPS5 @CAPS6. He creates this @CAPS6 by telling the @CAPS7 about how his Family took everybody in. His Family Always helped their Friends and when family visited they always had a place to @CAPS8. He also created a sad tone by talking about how he'll never beable to express his gratitude twards his parents. Finally at the end of the @CAPS1 the author creates a sincere @CAPS6. He creates these sincere @CAPS6 by expressing his gratitude twards his parents for being so selfless.Those are ways the @CAPS6 changes during his @CAPS10.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 11951,5,"Reading this article expresses many different mood changing from the auther. While reading you can notice he's proud of his Cuban culter explaining how united his family has always been for as long as he can remember. Most important his so greatful to his parents for everything they've been through to see him sucuss in life and that's what I admire the most from the author. This story is giving thanks to his parents and his culture. He mood is mostly proud and thankful throughout the whole story. Like at the end when he says ""I learned the definition of ""family"", meaning his family was there for each other and and love was all over. This pasage made me realize everything my mother went through to see my brother and I success, so I can say I can relate to the auther.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10455,4,"The author concludes the story with that paragraph, because it shows Saeng will not give up. Saeng failed her drivers test and as she was walking home she found a hibiscus. It reminder her of her old home. Saeng goes to the green house or flowershop and buys one. When she returns she plants the hibiscus. The hibiscus is keeping her from giving up. When it starts budding, @PERSON1 will take the test again.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12689,5,"In the memoir ""@CAPS1 Rodriguez"" by Narciso Rodriguez, the mood created by @CAPS2 is shocking. First, on page @NUM1 paragraph @NUM2 Rodriguez wrote, ""I would not know my 'real' grandparents... leave Cuba."" Here, Rodriguez is talking about how she never meat @CAPS2 real grandparents until they left Cuba in 1970. This is important because early in the memoir she said @CAPS2 surrogate grandparents (Sergio, Edelmira) came to eat dinner. In conclusion, in the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" by Narciso Rodriguez, the mood created by @CAPS2 is shocking, @CAPS2 real grandparents come to @ORGANIZATION1 in 1970. She wanted to write this because she wanted to teach the reader to know the real deftion of family.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10152,4,"Thes Author, In the story “Winter Hibiscus"" concludes the story with the paragraph to show how often Saeng gets tested by her memories. Saeng has ""tested"" erlier in the story when she was in a flourist. Memories come rushing back to her like a flood and she tried to feel the same as she did long ago whe her grandmother was there, and she realized that things in her memories were long gone, so she wept. Saeng reported to her mother that she had failed the test, and bought the plant to try and comfort herself. Her mother was very understanding and accepted it. Saeng planted the habiscus and at the end says that ""In the spring when the snow melts, this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again"". Saeng knew seeing the flower again will make her cry, will make her memories come back, she will be re tested.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15371,6,"The architects had few problems. As said in @LOCATION1, stress from the Dirigibles Load was too much for The building. They would @CAPS1 over sixty thousand Dollars of modifications. Other Then That They @CAPS2 had to redesign And then make it.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16525,6,"In the excerpt the builders had many obstacles on how they could dock dirigibles on top of the Empire State Building. The first problem they had was because of the high winds. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents"" (@NUM1). This was a problem because the winds could cause the dirigibles to crash into the building releasing it's gases. The second obstacle they faced was making the building structure strong enough to tie down the dirigibles. ""The steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modifyed and strengthened to accommodate this new situation"" (@NUM2). This was a problem because if they did not strengthen the steel the dirigibles would weaken the building's structure. Those are the main two obstacles that the builders faced when building the Empire State Building @CAPS1 they could dock dirigibles.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 488,1,"Computers have little to no effect on people. In fact computers help us out a lot. They help us in find @CAPS1, medical, research and to tell weather or not you have cancer. The computers that people think of are machines that sit in a room and is used often but not for its purpose. People use it sometimes for entertainment not research. There aren't just those kind of computers. There are bigger more advanced computers that scientist use every day. @CAPS2 computers do have an effect on us, but in a good way. Most of the time those people playing games or music are kids who are bopard. They use it a little too often. I anly play with it on rainy days when I can't go outside and play. Humans use computers mainly because it makes life simpler, easier. @CAPS2, it does make life simpler, like for example instead of handwriting a report, you can type it or intead of searching everywhere in a book, you can go straight to the information. One last example is; when you want to stay updated on your favorite sport team, you don't have to go to their game you just have to go to their web site. In my opinion I say that @CAPS2, computers do have and effect on us but a good reason. I'm a sports fan so I play a lot of sports. I use the computer offer for fun and research. It dosen't have an effect on me. It dosen't effect at all because I still exercise a play with my friends very often, like everyday. There is no reason to why people can't use computers quite often. Computers don't have a positive effect sometime, but it doesn't have a negitive effect sometime either. I exercise, enjoy nature and interact with friends and family too. I also use the computer often. Experts shouldn't be concerned with people using computers too much.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 20,1,"Well computers can be a good or a bad thing. I don'@CAPS1 realy see @CAPS2 computers can be a bad thing for me. I also know @CAPS2 computers can or will help people all around the world. I think computers has positive effects on people like me. Computers teaches hand-eye coordination. It can help if you need to find out reasearch for a school project. You can create lots of things on computers like music, desiner @CAPS1-shirts, logos, banners and lots of other creative things. With computer you can look up available homes and apartments. You can even go online and fill out a job application and save trips to stores @CAPS2 cool is that!! Well im a regular person not rich not famous but computers provide lot of information people use today. Thats why I think that computers has a positive effects on people and you don'@CAPS1 have to be super smart to use one.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4256,2,I believe books are writen for a reason and the words in the book goes with the whole point of the book is the words in the book are ment to be in the book. But I am also the kind of person who sees words that are to offensive for people to read. But no by far I think not letting people read the books that has offensive wording in it is kinda off silly because the author ment for it to be in there and if you change one word you kind of are changing the whole book and whats its trying to say. But if some books are to offensive yes i believe it is good to not let people read but to take it off the market and exit the book and and try to resale it. But some people would be upset about the changes we make because they will think that the book is saying something different but its not it is just worded differently. But i believe in both not to stop letting people reading them and for them to stay on market. Why I think its good to let books like this go on books that had offensive wording in it yes its worng but its also worng for the people who dont see it as being a offensive. Am sure the author of any book that has offensive wording in it didnt mean for it to hurt you. Am i know in my heart that they are sorry for hurting you in anyway. But why I think they should stop is because some people would really have a hard time reading offensive wroding it could be about something that happend to them when they are little or just a word maybe they just dislike. But if they come across any word they dont like they should stop reading. I believe it is very unfare if they take a book away just because there might be one word someone dont like. But to others its does nothing to them. I think books that have a offensive wording should say somewhere like on the back of the book it should have a warning if it has any offensive working in it I think this would help out alot of people would start doing that. This is really kind of silly because a book is a book and you should alway read about the story on the back of the book and if its a offensive and you dont like it that tells you not to buy the book. Dont always buy a book by the cover because the cover could be with flowers on the front of it and the book might not be about flowers at all. I really feel like am on both sides,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7453,3,"THERE ARE VAST FEATURES IN THE SETTING THAT AFFECTS THE CYCLIST. IN SEVERAL WAYS ONE FEATURE WOULD BE THE “SUN BEGINNING TO HEAT DOWN,” AS THAT MADE THE CYCLIST HOT AND THIRSTY. THE THIRSTY-NESS REDUFROM HIM TO USE HIS LIMITED SUPPLY OF WATER. SO THE SUN WAS ABLE TO EFFECT HIM A COUPLE OF WAYS. ANOTHER FEATURE THAT CAUSED SOME PROBLEMS FOR THE CYCLIST WERE THE RUN DOWN “GHOST TOWNS” THAT CONSISTS OF “RAM-SHACKLE SHEDS” AND “SEVERAL RUSTY PUMPS.” THESE FEATURES LED THE CYCLIST TO FEEL HOPELESSNESS, AS WELL AS THE PROBLEM THAT THEY DIN’T HAVE ANY WATCH FOR THEM TO FEEL UP WITH AS HE BECAME DEHYDRATED. OBSTACLES SUCH AS “TUMBLEWEEDS” AND “PAVEMENT BLOCKING SNAKES” ALSO PLAYS A ROLE IN AFFECTING THE CYCLISTS AS HE MOVE ON THE “@NUM1 ROAD” ONLY DOING “12 MPH.” ONE FINAL, AND LAST OBSTACLE WAS THE TERRAIN HE RODE ON. THE OBSTACLE BEING A “LONG CROPPING HILL,” THIS MADE THE CYCLIST EXHAUSTED, AS HE USES MUCH ENERGY TO SUMMER THE HELL, HE WAS ??? ???? ??? ???",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12914,5,The mood created by the author memoir was upset to have to leave cuba but happy to be somewhere better. To have to leave memeries and friends and family is upsetting. Also its better because now their lives will get better. Everything they had befor they will soon have here. The mood created was upset but happy and excited.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9992,4,"The author ends the story with the sentence provided because , she as she was saying that when you and winter are over there be the time again to get there gardening back to the test with the plant she had planted. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16143,6,"Despite the pricey investments of sixty thousand dollars that needed to be put into the building for this project to become a reality, there were many more obstacles the builders of the empire state building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The greatest obstacle they faced was the safety of people; a dirigibles dangleing nearly @NUM1 feet above ground with the possibility of explosion and pedestrians below doesn't seem like the smartest idea. Another problem they faced was the stress that the dirigible-held on by only a single cable-would put on the buildings frame. With the wind blowing the dirigible around the load and pressure of it would have to be sent all the way to the base of the building about @NUM1 feet down. In order for this to work the builders would have to strengthen the steel frame of the building. Maybe the most difficult obstacle they faced was nature itself, strong wind streams above the building would have caused the dirigible to swing around once it was docked, as well as running the risk of being blown of course and into another building. And if they ever wanted this idea to work in the first place they should have checked the laws first; aircrafts were not allowed to fly that low over urban areas. Builders of this landing dock and the empire state building just faced too many obstacles.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 69,1,"Some people think it is a good idea and same do not. My opinion is that, I think that people spend a lot of time for good reasons. Here are three reasons why, @NUM1. grownups working, @NUM2. students learning how to type, and @NUM3. communicating with others. My first reason is that parents do a lot of work on computer. For example, they do taxes, paperwork, airline tickets, and the bank. And those are usually all done on the computer so it would be easier if people don't drive. My second reason is students need to learn how to type so they can email or even write on paper. It helps them build learning ability and also, so they can know how to sing the @ORGANIZATION1's. Computers are suppose to be fun for people of any age. My last reason is, communicating with others is a great skill to have so you can talk in person. Computers help because if you mess up of what your trying to say then you could just erase what your trying to say. And in person, you can't. Also you can make plans with one of your friend on something if they live really far or something like that. In my opinion. I think people should be able to go on the computers to do work, playgames, no sites, and many more other things to go on, only if you have a computer at home.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9533,4,I think this Author put this last paragraph in this story is to show everyone how determined she is to pass this test and how much it means to her to do it so that is what I think Why the Author Would put this in the story ,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13071,5,"In the memoir @PERSON1 from Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives there is a thankful and gracious mood. Talking about his parents immigrating, @PERSON1 says, ""They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life,"" This quote shows thanks because @PERSON1 is glad his parents immigrated to give him a better life. Another example of a gracious mood is in paragraph @NUM1, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" @PERSON1 shows his is gracious for what his parents did and how much they care about him. A final example of thanks is, ""It was here where I learned the real definition of ""family."" And for this, I will never forget that house or its gracious neighborhood."" @PERSON1 is thankful that he got the opportunity to grow up in such a great house and community. As you can see from these examples, the memoir had a very thankful and gracious mood to it.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16237,6,"@CAPS2 on the excerpt, there were many obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle was that the architects could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof."" This would cause stress on the building, so the ""steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modified and strengthened."" Another obstacle the architects faced was a concern of safety. In the excerpt it says, ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" @CAPS1 the greatest obstacle was ""nature itself."" On the top of the building, the winds were constantly shifting because of the violent air currents. In the excerpt it states, ""the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast."" @CAPS2 on the excerpt, these are the many obstacles faced by the architects.""",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7091,3,"Since the cyclist was really thirsty, the setting was not very appealing considering it was a desert. You could tell she was stressing because she was sweating and having a trouble time trying to pedal.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15803,6,"Throughout the excerpt, on trying to build the empire state building; the builders faced a lot of hard attempts trying to build the dock for the dirigibles. One major problem is that the dirigible was not able to land on the buildings flat roof. This was stated in paragraph @NUM1 of the excerpt. Another problem is that they had to design elevators and stairs for the passengers to travel to the top of the building to be able to get on the dirigible. Along with designing stairs they had to be able to build 102 floors just for the area where the blimp would land. This can be supported in paragraph 11 and @NUM2 of the reading. After trying to build the big building, the builders ran into major safety concers towards the end of the making. The builders did not think they would run into any problems or think of the safety.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1757,1,"I belive the reason why people use the computer so much is because most people might have to work on the comptuer or mabey even finish a project. But I understant the part when the artical said ""Some experts are concerned that people are spending to o much time on their computes and less exercising"". Mostly young teens use the computer at a earley age and become hooked, because there are so many things to do on the computer like download games for free and play with other. People around the world but you would think that anybody would play video game on the computer and have free time? NO! Most adults don't play games on the computer, they do work or reasearch an artical. But after that they'll continue doing their daily routine, but alot of teens are on the computer everyday and rarley get exercise. The internet has open alot of new enchanced technology, over the past few years you could search up old friends from mabey old schoold on the web or even chat with people who you don't know from all over the world. You could have an @NUM1 @CAPS1 and buy new song or new albums insted of going to a local store, or even shop online have have the cloths been brought to you. Over the years they would of never done that, and rent movies or buy them to have on your @CAPS2.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 856,1,"When you are using technology usually it is work related. A computer is used for work to write essays, make power points, and research, when people use them for facebook, myspace, @CAPS1, and other chat live oovoo and websites it is more for their pleasure. I only go on facebook when I am checking my schedule for hockey, most kids use it for talk. Then there is oovoo & online video chat used for talking with friends but why not just callem'up. When I think of facebook or oovoo, or even myspace it makes me think of inapropriate pictures kids, and adults post. I think that is very unhumane and that is very dangerous to post ot because once it's out there you'll never get it back. For instance I am always outsided hanginaround when it's warm out, during winter I can understand going on facebook, but during the @DATE1 there is no need just go outside and have fun. Kids wonder why they gain weight we'll if you'de get off your computer, and quit eating twinkies then you'll notice you just have to be active. some kids parents don't really give a flying faldoodle what their kids do all day. They don't care if their kid is @NUM1 lbs. at the age of @NUM2. They don't care if their kids are sitting on the computer eating all-day. If i could tell you what it must feel like to be a couch potato I would but I never go on the computer unless it is for homework. I used the computer just @TIME1 I typed up all of my homework except for my math. I didn't play one game, I didn't check email go on the internet or anything I just worked my hardest and got it done. I conclude this with the fact that using a computer is not a bad thing, using it repeatedly and not exercising is. A computer shouldn't need to be used for pleasure it's not created to do so it's created to keep your life simpler. People pay money to buy a expensive computer and motem and all that expensive technological accesories, to make their lives much simpler not anywhere in thes essay did I say to play games because it's not. Playing games can be done outside, it doesn't have to be inside, and definately doesn't have to be on a computer. To make everyones life easier kids, get off your lazy butts, get off the twinkies, and stop playing on the computer. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9778,4,The author concludes the story with that sentence a vowed to the flower. It’s just stating that Saeng will come back and try again next year & see if it works out with the hibiscus.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 538,1,"Do you think computers benifit us? I think they do. There are many way computers do and don't benifit us are a lot more use full then the way they don't. Like kids in school use an online text books. Also a lot of company's have websites so we can see what there about before we choose them for the job. We also use computers to look up directions to places we want to go so we don't get lost. School kids benifit from computers a lot because they would have to carry home tons of books but instead they just go on the computer to get the online book instead of carrying home @NUM1 really heavy books. I know I like to go on the computer better then carrying really heavy books home. Also when you look for a home decorator you just go on the computer and look up websites to see some of the work they have done. It helps out a lot becase than you don't have to figure of the hard way that the decorator is not good and end up spending a lot of money on a room you don't like. Also if you are looking for a job you can look up there website on the computer and avail them to see if you can get an interview rather then wasting your nature going there. I also use the computer to look up ways to get some where and it's a lot easier to do that then to start driving and get lost I know they have gps's now but they cost a lot more then some on a computer you can find out. I still think computers benifit us in many ways. Like using an online text book instead of carrying your huge textbooks home. Also using computers to look up websites or to search adresses, is a lot easier with computers. That is why I think computers benefit us.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3589,2,"Censorship is a growing problem is today's world of literature. Censoring does not always allow the author to thoroughly convey his or her ideas as they were originally intended to. Katherine Paterson says that if were all aloud to eliminate things that we thought were wrong, then there would be nothing left to be right about. Censoring leads to an ignorant, opinionless, and clueless society. In the novel '@CAPS1 @NUM1' censorship is one of the main themes of the story. Bradbury portrays the burning of books as the way of ending all controversial opinions. @PERSON3 finds that the burning of books has lead the society that he lives in to be ignorant of what is going on around them. The government has tried to rule out all causes of controversial opinions in hope that it would make for a happier society. When in reality, members of the world are not happy and are consistently showing the reader that they do not know how to be happy. @PERSON3 decides that he wants to learn, but he does not know how. The brain is a muscle, if it is not excercised correctly, it becomes weak and useless. So when he tries to memorize a part of the @CAPS2, he cannot retain what he has been reading. Such as trying to fill a sieve full of sand, he does not know how to learn. The members of this novels society are basically opinionless on what is happening in their world. What they are told on the television is thought of to be factual, and that is what they do all day. In school, kids are being fed fact after fact and are expected to agree with what they are being told with no questioning involved. In a normal society, learning leads to questioning. But for them there is no learning, just accepting. And acceptance leads to contentness, which in the end leads to unhappiness. The society in '@CAPS1 @NUM1' proves to be oblivious to everything that is going on in many different ways. To them, death is not a big deal. @PERSON2 was killed by a speeding car, and @PERSON4, @CAPS4 wife, was not even shocked to hear it. Another example is when @PERSON3 was running from the police, and a car full of rambunxious teenagers attempted to run him over just because they wanted to. At the end of the novel, @PERSON3 is walking along the railroad tracks with his new friends and the entire city is blown to dust by bombs dropped by fighter planes. The city had no idea that this was going to happen, they were clueless to the war that was going on around them everyday! A clueless society is a useless society, and in the end they were destroyed. Censorship lies within the hands of the viewer. Censorship has become such a big problem in the world when there are so many other things people should worry about. Reading about somebody doing drugs will not make a child want to do drugs, it crosses every teenagers mind atleast once. But instead of not allowing them to even realize that it is out there, parents should do what they signed up to do, teach your kids right from wrong and hope that you did it well.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13577,5,The mood in the memoir is peaceful and loving The reason why it is peaceful is because there is no fighting in this story at all. This story is loving because throughout the whole thing the only thing that I learned about was how to respect and love each other. There are many examples of this in paragraph @NUM1 and paragraph @NUM2. This is the tone of the story.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12845,5,The mood by the author in the memoir is touching because i feel like memory story. This story is telling yu how to be memorized about the story and it makes u cry a little bit. I kind the like it a little bit because its about cuban peoples. I think my father knows People from cuban and I think he knows their culture.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7536,3,"In the essay, the description of the setting was dry, hot, very open, and desserted. The description could suggest lonlieness, obviously. Even though the man was all alone and didn’t know where he was going, he still persisted. While he thought about “the cool pines and rushing rivers of Yosemite.” This thought kept him strong, so he kept trying.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16554,6,"Builders of the Empire State building faced many obstacles in attempting durables be able to dock there. Some of these obstacles weren't caused by the building it self, nature took part of it due to the forceful winds at the height of 1,250 feet it was hard for the pilots of the dirigibles to steer the ship close enough to tie it up. This situation occurred to the @ORGANIZATION2 dirigible ""Los Angeles"" fearing the wind would blow the ship onto Sharp edges or other buildings in the area. Witch would cause the shell to get punctured leading to a disaster the captain failed to attempt to reach the building on december 1930. Another obstacle builders faced was that an existing law against airships flying to low over urban areas witch would put civilians on the street at risk. Another obstacle was not a large enough dirible would put stress on the buildings frame.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7152,3,The features of the setting of were the cyclist are affect them very drastically. They need a water supply and if they don’t have one they might dehydrate or even die. They need shade trees because it keeps the sun from beaming down on them so hard. They also need to cycle when its not as hot outside so that just incase there water gets low there is a better chance of survival. It would be great if there was someone with you to help if you get hurt. There should be buildings near by just incase of an emergency. It might even be good to carry a cell phone.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16061,6,"The obstacles the builders would have to face would be things such as structural @CAPS1, and worrying about future technological advances. Even if they found out how to land a dirigible on the platform, what about advances on them or new transportation methods. The structural @CAPS1 was a quick fix, by reinforcing the supports to the building itself.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3292,2,"Katherine Paterson once said, 'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf. But if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf-that work I abhor-then so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' Katherine has a good view on the idea of censorship in libraries. Most books have ideas and topics that are offensive to one person or another. I believe that books that have something offensive in them should not be censored. An idea that is offensive to one person @MONTH1 not be offensice to the other, and vice versa. Someone who is pro life on the controversial issue of abortion @MONTH1 believe that a book about a teenage girl getting an abortion is offensive and against their beliefs. In truth, the author was just trying to convey how the teenage girl feels and what happens when you go through with something like that. Katherine Paterson said it well when she mentioned that no books would be left on the shelves. If every person felt threatened or was offended by just one book, libraries would have to close because no books would be left. Books on the topic of religion would definitely have to be censored as well because people of differing religions. The @CAPS1 @MONTH1 be offensive to someone of @CAPS2 religion, and because of that the @CAPS1 would not be able to be sold. If that happened there would be an ongoing battle about it. Books should not be censored because an idea that is offensive to one, @MONTH1 not be to another. If books were censored, literature would have an immediate downfall. When authors write books they are pouring their hearts out to us. If someone thinks their book is offensive and it gets censored, the author of the book would be even more offended. Their life's work could go into one book and just because a group of people do not like it, it gets taken off the shelves. I don't know about you but I would rather read a book with an interesting and maybe controversial topic than a book that seems to go nowhere. If censorship in libraries actually happened, many authors @MONTH1 say forget it and not even right anymore. It is very hard to write a book that pleases everyone. Also, attraction to literature would seize. People are not attracted to books that do not have a quality topic that gets them interested. Literature would have an immediate downfall if books were censored. If books were censored, the quality of learning would not be the same. Books are tools for learning and taking them away would be harmful to education. Some teenagers including me @MONTH1 find some of the material they read-even in school-to be offensive or have a touchy subject. I do admit that reading books for class is somewhat annoying at times, but it will help us in the future. These books have meaning, which is why they are picked by teachers for students to read. Something offensive like a cuss word is not going to keep someone from finding the meaning of the book. The quality of learning would not be the same if books were censored. A book can be offensive, yes, but one book is not going to ruin someone's life. An important thing to remember is that by taking a book off a shelf, or not playing music because of a few harmful words is like denying the creativity and compassion of an author or artist. One book that is offensive to one, @MONTH1 not be to another. If books were censored, literature would have an immediate downfall and the quality of learning would not be the same. For all of these reasons, censorship in libraries should not be allowed.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 625,1,"Wouldn't you agree that spending time on the computer takes away half of your life? Going on the computer can have a negative effect on you! Personally I think not going on the computer benefits you, @CAPS1's more time for your family, going outside, and staying healthy! Certainly going on the computer will mean less time for exercising. For example, lets say you went on the computer for an hour, that hour could have been used to go outside and stay fit! think about the choices here; you could either sit on a chair and play on the computer or take a nice run and burn a ton of calleries! Statistics show that @PERCENT1 of people that go on the computer instead of getting exercise, are in risk for health problems including obesity. As you can cleary see going on the computer really isnt the healthyiest choice to go. Most definatly going on a walk or enjoying nature is better than going on a computer. A girl named @PERSON1, from @LOCATION1 ""I love to enjoy the beuty of the outdoors that god gave to me I wish I knew that years ago while I was a lazy woman on the. If you just even look out your window to see this beautiful god created for us you would want to go out there and enjoy @CAPS1! Everyone wants to live like there dying or in other words live life to the fullest! in order to do that you have to see life and go out there and experance @CAPS1, not sit on a computer! Without a doubt this world is gorgeous and @CAPS1 is worth while to see the nature! Everyone knows that family comes before everything! For example, you might love the computer but that love should not over power your time you spent with your family! One day on a @DATE1 night @PERSON2 was on the computer and her mother called saying, ""@PERSON2 @CAPS1's time for dinner"", @PERSON2 ignored her mom and chose to go on the computer! Now you really cannot give up time with your friends and family since they are so important! I know with my heart and saw that my family means the world to me and everyone shown more time for each family member, not the computer! Its now or never to decide if computers benefit society or not! With no computers you could have so much free time for your friends and family if you could only imagine! Most importantly @CAPS1 will not only benefit you but @CAPS1 will mean a lot to your family so what are you waiting for? Get off the computer and spend some qulity time with your family!",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6722,3,"In the story “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” The man was riding a bike through rough lands. His adventure wouldn’t of been an adventure if he was just riding his bike an flat smooth element. The fact that the hills were steep, rocky and many hills is what made his bike ride what it was.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12518,5,"The mood of the memoir created by the author was that he was very greatful for what his family has done. I know this because throughout the memoir he would always say how much he appreciated how his parents made this house into a Cuban home. I also know that the mood of the memoir by the author is greatful because he said how he liked that his neighborhood had many different cultures such as Spanish and Italian. The author also said ""I will never forget how my parents turn this simple house into a home."" That is what I think the mood of this memoir is.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15305,6,"Builders faced many obstacles in attempting to allow Dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building. Between @CAPS1, saftey, and nature, there was no way this idea could ever work. Although the idea was good it was very impracticle. Saftey was a major problem with this idea. Most Dirigibles used hydrogen rather than helium which is more flammable. If the Dirigibles ever broke out into flames over New York City it would burn the whole place down and kill thousands. Nature was another big problem. The winds on top of the Empire State Building were shifting all the time. The ship would swivel around the moorings mast. The Dirigibles usually moored in fields and used black lead weights to weigh them down. The weights dangling above peoples heads was very dangerous. Building the mooring mast was very dangerous and impracticle. It never happened due to saftey and now serves as a tea and soda area for use of sight seers.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12894,5,"The mood in the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" he demenstrates a mood of love. @ORGANIZATION1 shows his love by telling his parents. In the @NUM1 paragraph he says ""I've often told them of my admiration for their strength and perseverance."" Here he shows his compassion for his parents because his parents left cuba and went to @LOCATION1 to start a new life. Also, they wanted a better education for their children so they left family, friends, everything behind so they could restart their life. Another way how Narciso shows love to his parent is by using what his parents did to him into his life. Narciso used the better education, to have a better life. Now he is a fashion designer. Therefore, in the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"", he shows a mood of love in the memoir.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 933,1,"Dear Newspaper, In think that computers are not good for the society. There are three reasons why I think this and these are the following; @CAPS1, people don't get to spend time with their family. Second, you can get misspell words using instant messenger. When your doing your homework you can get distrated by the computer. The @CAPS1 reason why computers are bad for the society is because people don't spend enough time with their family, I know I don't. I spend at least half my day staring at a screen when I could be outside walking my dog with friends. Furthermore, instant messenger is the most addicting. When I type something, I use abreveations for any word. The professor at @LOCATION1 says at least @PERCENT1 students spell abreveated words in tests. For example, if you wanted to spell ""what"" instead the @PERCENT1 would spell ""@CAPS2"". Finally, my last reason why I think computers are not good for society is because you can get distracted by it a lot. I know that because I am driven to the world of computers. When ever I do my homework. I can't keep my eyes off the screen. Therefore explains that computers are not good for society. In conclusion, computers keep you from spending time with your family, has students misspelling words, and distracting you from doing your homework. I hope you agree with me on this.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13444,5,"In the memoir Narciso Rodriguez by Narciso Rodriguez the author's mood is happy, @CAPS1 he says ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" And @CAPS1 he loves his family and friends. oh so dearly. He is also grateful to have a lot of his family members who are close to him. That could get together for dinner and a lot more. The author says ""It was in the warmth of the kitchen in this humble house where a Cuban feast (albeit a frugal Cuban feast) always filled the air with not just scent and music life and love.""As you can see in the memoir the author felt happy and grateful @CAPS1 of the love and sacrifice of his family.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6045,3,"The cyclist was well prepaired for his adventure however hot enuff for a change in senary. When the old men told him to take a difficult path and did his in tire setting changed for the worst. After this he was nearly over powered by devastating hills and dehydration was slowly creeping up on him as well. He had not nearly packed enuff water or supplies for a change such as that and he would regret it later. The Hills were steep and endless, and the sun was hot and mercilous mankind it even worse on him. This is how the change of setting affected the cyclist. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9266,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph. Forexample, It gives the Story a good and happe ending.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9506,4,"In the story, I believe Saeng is sad because she misses her home and the hibiscus flower. She ends the story off well because she can now have a since of peace with herself by waiting to take the test again. I believe that’s why she ended the story like she did so she doesn’t leave herself worried or angry. She can turn a negative attitude into a positive one when she says she will retake the test when the geese return and hibiscus is budding.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 843,1,"Alot of people would disagree that computers are benefiting people. But I think that computers are exremely helpful because they are a good way to learn, they are fun to use, and it's also a goodway to talk to old friends. I know there are some people who are on computers alot more than they should but still computers are very helpful. Computers are a very good way to learn because on a computer you could easily find out whi the @CAPS1 of @LOCATION1 is. But if you didn't use a computer and you went to a library it could take hours to find the right and find were in the book it is. You could also learn about news faster without writing for it to come on the news channel. Computers are a lot beter than having to drive to a library because with just a couple as clicks you could find what you want and be done. Computers are also fun because you can play little games on the internet that could easily take up on extra @NUM1 minutes that yu might have on a work break or before school. And even some games exercise your mind like solitare its fun but hard. But there are some games that people tend to over do because they go addicted. But most people haven't ever prayed a game like that or only play once in a while. Lastly computers are a good way to stay in touch with old friends because there are a lot of ways to talk to people online like say if when you were in high school your best friends moved away you sould still talk to people on a chat room were you can text. or a video chat were you actualy see them face to face. In conclusion I think computers are helpful because you can learn, play and talk to people. Computers are best all around helpful.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1273,1,"Dear newspaper, @CAPS1 the fresh air that cools your skin and the wind blowing through your hair while you are running side by side next to your best friend. And you think about the millions of people who spend their time chating on the computer. You also wonder about the amount of exercise those people would have, and would they be able to interact with friends and family members. Just think about your current lifestyle is it occupied with computers or is it free and wild? When you think about chatting to people do you think communicating in person or communicating by aim? I have surveyed friends and resulted with five out of ten go home and chat to friends online. This upset me because this half mainly had kids that did not play sports but yet they were very talkative, so in aim a problem I still have yet to find out. I asked question like ""what do you do at home?"", ""are you a computer geek?"". (@CAPS2 questions were only used to support my survey) The next time you are asked to chat online please decline before you to become obsessed with the computer. The amount of exercise a person gets depends on who it is. There are some who live on their computers like the @CAPS3 @CAPS4 (a comcast commercial) and some who don't know what a computer is (not commenting). I am here to teach about the benifits of exercising and not the un natural ways of a computer. Did you know people can loose weight by exercising? If you just pick up that old curling weight one curl is ten times as better then a click of a computer mouse dont believe me try it. Interacting with people is a big part of our life its how we get , give orders and its a lot faster type of communication then sending a email. Without interacting with one another we can suffer from depression. Depression can make people sick for example, my father, when @CAPS5 was divorsed the depression effected his body and mind. At the age of @NUM1 @CAPS5 got a rip in his small intestine that grew infecte and could have ended his life. I believe this was from lacks of communication and this happens everyday to everyone just open your eyes and relise what a computer can do to a man or woman. (@CAPS5 was remaried to bonnie and now carrys a scars on his belly). This is a movement that should change the opinion of many, do people spend to much time on computers? Just get outside and talk to your neibor see what they think. I relly hope you consider my argument.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6118,3,"As the features changed in the setting it becomes harder for the cyclist .At first the cyclist stoned off pretty easy .He had plat smooth roads to go through .He started out before the sun could to him.” The cool pines and rushing rivers of Yosemite my name written all it “He kept his mind off the sun and this helped him .Then, he got to a highway that made it kind of harder .I noticed the terrain changing. Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills “So he had to pedal harder and would tire him faster.” At some point, tumble weeds crossed my path. Trying to keep my balance in my dehydrated state “.By the tumble weeds that means he was in the desert during a hot period of time .So he had little water left and he was becoming dehydrated .This was a hard task for him to overcome .By the terrain changing it become harder for him.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12017,5,"The author created a calm mood. Everything he talks about is in the same tone. When he talks about the kitchen in his home, he also created a happy mood. He was calm while talking about the memories in his old home. He stayed calm when he talked about how caring his parents were. Overall, the whole writing is in a calm mood.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3519,2,"Some books are offensive to some people. But eveyrone has the right to read any book they want. I believe we shouldnt censor books that are found offensive in schools. If people find offensive from the beggining, find another book to read or talk to the teacher. I have had my experience with books who are offensive to me. Everyone has a book they have read that does that to them. But that same book i have read might be interesting to other people. Whatever doesnt @CAPS1 you makes you stronger, right? So don't take a book in a hurtful way. Books are meant to be read and some authors direct the book to certain people. I had poeple come up to me from our own school saying the books they read were a horrible experience. Specially when all they talk about is suicide and one of my best friends has trouble with that because of her dad. I told her to talk to her teacher and he changed the book for her. Thats all you have to do and not make anything big about it. I also read the book, 'To @CAPS1 a @CAPS2', which is censored in some states because its hurtful to some people. The story is about a white family trying to help an @CAPS3-@CAPS4 man who was accused of raped when he never commited such thing. That was not acceptable at the time and with all the evidence in the world they still couldn't help him. Its a great story about what black poeple went through in earlier years. And to think they would censor a story about a white lawyer trying to help someone who isn't his own race is inspiring to me, not offensive. He got harrased and his children got harrased but he still fought with all he had to save his deffendant. I am a @NUM1 year old boy who when he read this book knowing who had a heart and who didnt made me cry my eyes out. It's sad to know this book is censored in some states when this is defenitely one of the best books i have ever read and also the only one that got to me. It would be a great experience for anybody to read this book so even if it is censored where you live, go buy it and read it anyway. I feel the state assumes they are gonna offend people. They might not even test it anyways. They might just say its gonna offend this kinda people and thats it. How do they cokme up with it? Do they let everybody read it once? No, and they should just leave it whoever doesn't read it doesnt have to or they can talk with their teacher. Its not so hard to decide to censor something when its only your opinion. Thats why i would look into the opinion of others. All in all censorship shouldn't be allowed. It ruins the oppurtonity for people to read books they might find good and interesting to them. Let the kids read atleast in highschool when they are all almost adults so they can read whatever they want",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7033,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist by making his mood change. In the @LOCATION1, where it’s nice, shaded, and cool, he feels fairly good. He’s excited and ready to take on the adventure of a new path. His still in a good mood when he comes to the first town. As he moves on, and his water supply deplets, his mood sinks lower and he becomes more frustrated. In the ironic twist of fate that he finds a Welch’s Grape Juice, Factory, he is about to quit. He is dejected and almost ready to admit defeat. But he forces himself to go on, and when he finally reaches a place with water, his relief is mixed with wariness of the old man sitting on the porch. He will never take after for granted or advice from old men ever again.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4433,2,"Be a parent or responsible child if you are against censorship. Censorship is really unavoidable, and it should not be an issue. If you dont want to read the magazine, book or watch the movie then just dont watch it. Myriads amount of people avoid it every day if they dont want to see it, and many people do read and watch those bad types of movies. It is a personal choice and you dont have to be exposed to it if you dont want to. Those who are against censorship try some ways of keeping your children away from the bad or yourself, but dont try to remove it completly. One reason for censorship is because it provides hordes of information and expands your mind in different ways. The material or bad material you get out of it is your choice to read. but i think some of it is good for kids not so that they can be corrupted. It is so the kids can expand there imagination as well. However i do think children should wait until they are of certain age to read or watch this material until they are mature enough to seperate reality from fiction. Also it teaches good @CAPS1 that you might not have learned anywhere else. Numerous of these articles are about real life and what is going on today. I think it is great for kids and adults to know what is going on in the world. If you leave kids in darkness then you leave them with no right of an oponion. Any parent can tell there child that something is bad for them, but you can never really know unless you experience it for themselves. The can make up there own minds, and usually they do what is best. Another reason for censorship is that it can be an escape for some people. There are people who enjoy reading about fiction or tacky things in life. It keeps them going on a regular day basis. You never know what somebody enjoys doing. If somebody is having a bad day and they want to read or watch what they like and find out they are unable now there is a good chance poeple will be furious. If i was unable to do what I like to do i would probably be angry or depressed. It is not alway a ferocious topic. If you want to keep your children sheltered from it then fine, but the people who can handle it dont want it to be out of public access. Also keep it in libraries because if you dont want it dont give your kids library passes. However if you do, supervise them while they are there. It costs money to go out and buy books when you can just borrow them from the library. People who dont have money or dont want to own the books shouldnt have to go pay for them when it can be kept from whoever it needs to be kept from. The last reason for Censorship is it keeps people interested. It also teaches oodles of information. Not only does it entertain, but also there is so much vocab you pick up on from these books. I have personally learned most of my @CAPS1 from books, and i hardly had to pay for any of them. When you dont have the money to guy buy all the books you want the library has the same information for you, but its just more availiable rather than going to the store. Whoever finds it offensive thats fine. There is nobody forcing you to take these items off of the shelves, and its not there business what other people see either. If people really want to read these items they are going to one way or another banning them from one place is not going to remove censorship from our world. Children are already exposed to this in school and on telivision. They need to learn more than just appropriate material if they want to understand the real world.Censorship is viewed as good, bad, and neutral. Nobody is forcing you to view it, but on the other hand nobody can force you to stay away from it. Let people make there own decisions. If you keep complaining there will be numerous amounts of complaints right back at you. Censhorship should be taken as 'sticks and stones will break my bones , but words will never hurt me'. With that being said dont avoid the inevitable.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16284,6,"Allowing the dirigibles to dock at the Empire State Building took some obstacles. First, there was a lack of suitable landing area in New York City. To solve this, Al Smith added a mooring mast to the top of the Empire State Building. This would allow the dirigibles to anchor there for several hours for refueling, service, and to let passengers off and on.Another obstacle for allowing dirigibles to dock at the Empire State Building was the stress being added to the building's frame because of a one thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of a building held by a single cable tether. To accommodate the situation, the steel frame of the Empire State building would have to be strengthened and modified. Over Sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications had to be made to the building's framework. The final and greatest obstacle for successful use of the mooring mast was nature. The winds at the top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. Lead weights would be used to weight down dirigibles landed in open fields. But losing the lead weights at the Empire State building where they would be dangling high above pedestrians on the street was not very safe at all.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16296,6,"In the excerpt, The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted some obstacles the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there are the winds were too strong and most used hydrogen instead of helium which is very flammable. The way that the dirigibles would dock to the building was by a cord attached to the mast. The dirigibles would then be ""dangling high above pedestrians in the street."" (@NUM1). This was ""neither practical nor safe"" (@NUM1) This would not only endanger the pedestrians below but also the people on the dirigibles. The wind was so strong that it could throw it into a building. Most dirigibles fuel on hydrogen rather than helium, hydrogen is much more flammable. ""The German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by fire in Lakehurst, New Jersey."" (@NUM3) The owners of the Empire State building saw this as another huge problem because of how much worse it would be if one caught fire in densely populated New York.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 862,1,"Dear @PERSON1 editor, I think that the computers have both positive and negative effects, but more positive. For example, when people get home from work or school, they immedlatly go on the computer, to check email, do work, or to play games. I think that it's good to connect with friends and learn about the far away nature and people that we cant see, but too much of it will be bad. I know it will be bad because it can cause a lack of exercise and the computer can cut you off from your family and friends if you're on it too much, I think it's good to go on the computer for a limited amount of time each day, but also spend time outside with family and friends. The computer is good because of all the extrodinary things it offers and the things you can learn. I myself like to play video games on it like bubble spinner but at the same time I'll be on facebook, facebook lets me connect with friends and family while bubble spinner helps with hand-eye coordination, when projects came along I usually do all my research there, picking up information on each site. I also do all the writing on it too so it wont look messy but instead, clean and neat. The computer also offers video of pretty much anything on t.v. and otherwise, like youtube or google videos. The computer lets me see nature, talk to friends and family, and lets me see things, like videos, that twill never ever see in books. These show that the computer has a bigger positive impact than negative and we should take advantage of the new technology that we have and not let it go to waste. The computer is a nice outlit to come home and let yourself unwind to. People say that you don't get enough exercise but we have gym and recess at school and we become exhausted at work, which is enough exercise for the day. Computers are a nice device to have and are by far, used daily by almost everyone. So it can't be all that bad by depriving you from nature and family because it lets you see it anyway. The effects it has on people are good because of the knowledge and communication it brings. I hope you see my point of view.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 356,1,"Dear Newspaper, @CAPS1, I am on the computer alot. But I think it is one of the most addicting, time consuming inventions in todays society. Yes, computers have benefits such as talking to friends and family you don't see that often, doing school work, and gathering information. But in my oponion I the people should reduce their usage of computers. Sure, computers let you interact with friends in family via e-mail, or @CAPS2 messaging, or social networking websites such as @CAPS3 or @CAPS4. Guess what? You can easily communicate the old fashioned way with cell phones, or even writing a letter. See? There are alternitives for communication. Exercise is so important now a days, and people do not get enough of it. Did you know that obesity, has gone up @PERCENT1 since last year? Thats a fairly big percentage, and we don't want it to get any bigger. If people are wasting away, staring at their computer screen and not getting any sort or exercise in, the number will get bigger. Also, computers can cause all kinds of medical problems. For example, about a month ago my back was really bothering me. I went to the doctors and he told me one of the likley causes was leaning foward togo on my laptop. ""Computers can also cause vision problems and haedaches."" says specialist @CAPS5. Oz. We can prevent these issues if we take a stand against computers! We can limit our use to two or three times a week, and only use it for important reasons. I hope this really is an eye-opener to the negative effects computers have on us.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9851,4,Well I think the author concludes the story like that because he is showing her her attitude better known now she is changing so she is going to put her mind to whatever she has to do and she is going to take the test again with some pride and try in the spring when the snow goes away.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4634,2,"I do not believe that books, music, movies, or magazines should be removed from library shelves if they are found offensive. First, you have to consider what is offensive to most people, and who should be the people to determine if it should be sensored or not. People should be able to decide for themselves if they can or cannot get an item off of a shelf, because they might not even consider it offensive. If you are a parent, you have the right to not let your children watch or read certain materials, but you can't get it taken off the shelf because then it prohibits other people from being able to get that same material that they think is acceptable. Things that are offensive range from cussing all the way to extreme violence. Some people @MONTH1 not mind that there are a couple of bad words or a little violence, but others will find it very offensive. In my personal experience, I tend not to think that a little cussing is offensive, but I do know some people who balk even hearing one minor cuss word. Many movies nowadays are made up of content that is mildly offensive, but only if you take it seriously. The movies make fun of things that people might find offensive, which probably offends those people even more, but they do not have to watch it if they don't want that movie! It just depends on the person and what they have grown up around, or what they think is right or wrong. It is either your own responsiblity or a parents responsibility to determine whether the content of a book or movie is appropriate. Many times parents use the argument that children are too young to make the judgement on a book or movie, and that is very true. So most children movies and books are appropriate, and do not include content that children are not quite ready to handle. If you are older, then you can probably make the decision to read or watch something because it is more appropriate for your age. Many times you have already been exposed to the ideas prevalent in books in movies because those things are already in your life. It comes down to who the movie is for and what content you think is appropriate for their age. The idea about taking these books off the shelves would be disastarous. The reading lists in schools would have to be cut down because parents didn't approve, and the children would lose valuable knowledge that is in most literature. One person could want to rent out their favorite horror movie and suddenly it would not be there because a couple of people thought it was offensive. There would be nothing left in libraries if one person did not approve of something because then every item would have at least one person disapprove.I once read To @CAPS1 a @CAPS2, and our teacher told us that in another state this book had been banned because a couple of parents didn't like one or two things from the book. This book has many valuable ideas and lessons, and is considered a great piece of literature. These parents wanted the book to be banned from all schools, and all libraries all over the country, and that would be infringing on other people's rights of freedom of speech. The parents can say what they want about the book and not let their own child read it, but they cannot stop that opportunity for everyone else who wants to read the book. Taking it off the shelves would be taking off those ideas as well. Literature and every other movie and type of literature is what shapes a culture. There have been so many movements over time, many started with literature and it affected the culture and the people. Censorship would just take away a part of our culture, which would be devestating. You should look at your own life, and think about what you find offensive. Then step into someone else's shoes that does not think it is offensive, and see if it is worth it to take it all away from everyone. Almost everything could be considered offensive to at least one person, but it is your own resposiblity to decide whether it is appropriate for you or your child. The shelves should stay full of books, movies, music and magazines. It is our way of expressing freedom of speech, and that is an integral part of our country and our culture",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15621,6,"In the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" written by @ORGANIZATION2, the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. In paragraph @NUM1 under ""The Fate of the Mast"", the first line says ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself. Strong winds due to violent air currents would make it impossible to dock a dirigible on the Empire State Building. The wind would blow the dirigible off the mast into New York City. In paragraph @NUM2 under ""The Fate of the Mast"", a line states ""The other practical reason why dirigibles could not moor at the Empire State building was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" This law made it illegal for dirigibles and other aircraft to even fly in such and urban area like New York. One final obstacle is safety precautions. In paragraph @NUM3 a line states, ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium."" If a dirigible were to crash and it had this highly flammable gas it would create a massive disaster. Violent winds, laws, and safety precautions are all against the docking of dirigibles at the mooring mast.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 14863,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock. The steel frame of the Building needed to be modified and strengthened to make a place for dirigibles to dock. Also, over sixty thousand dollars worth of modifications had to be made. The last obstacle builders had was that a thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building would add stress to the buildings frame. It was not easy for builders to build a mooring mast on top of the highest building that was one thousand two hundred fifty feet, but the architects reached their point by designing the mooring mast.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 8877,4,Why the author concludes the story with this paragraph is because in the paragraph there is a lot said that is the main part of this story. For example all the names and talks about the seasons and there comparisions and differences and it talks abouts different buddings like when you get your mids your nuggets and headies of the plant. Because hibiscus is a new form of some nice @CAPS1.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 8984,4,"The auther ends with that paragraph to show how Saeng, like the budding Hibiscus, will get a new start in the spring and overcome obstacles.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6268,3,"As the cyclist begins his journey, he is confident & exited to have been offered new directions from some “old wise men” which promise a shortcut. This water supply is mediocre & attitude willed against the flat and hilly terrain, untill he realizes the directions are way off target. The cyclist was making his way to Yosemite when he came to the first “town” but it wasn't a town but more of a ghost dwelling. As he continued hoping the shortcut offered by the old “codgens” would actually materialize, he realized he was utterly alone in the hot desert wt a depleting water supply & dwindling spirit. He was disturbed that he had chosen to follow the advice from the older men and through his his pain & dispair, encouraged himself by deciding he would never listen to their type again. The cyclist felt skrewed over, yet through his will & determination, by rationing water & mentally choosing to cycle for each hill one at a time, he endured his physicall, emotional & mental trials and lived to learn the valuable lesson of never consulting old “ codgers” on mapping issues, because their information would most likely be out datted.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15334,6,"Attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building created many obstacles for its builders. Some of which weren't even discovered until finally attempting to do it.The first of the builders problems started with trying to prepare the actual building for the added stress that would be applied when having dirigibles try to dock. They spent @MONEY1 on modifications to reinforce the framework of the building. Then ""Rather than building a utilitarian mast without any ornamentation, the architects designed a shiny glass and chrome-nickel stainless steel tower..."" This created lots of unnecessary work for the workers, as well as made obstacles.There was also a lot of danger associated with docking dirigibles that the builders had to deal with. The violent changing air currents would require them to make the mast as sturdy as possible and account for the movement of the dirigibles. Finally the builders find out the biggest obstacle which is that it is legal for airships to fly that low over urban areas, so technically they weren't even allowed to do what they did. Thinking back on it, it is obvious to see that ""The mooring mast of the Empire State Building was destined to never fulfill its purpose...""",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9946,4,"The author concludes with this because she is determined to pass the driving test that she had previously failed. For example, She writes “she vowed silently to herself.” When you vow to do something it usually means that you are very determined to do something. Everything else that she says after that she really means it. Therefore, that is why the author concludes with this sentence, in order to show her devotion to her goal.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13451,5,The mood by Narciso Rodriguez in the memoir is happy. When the author talk about his or her memoirs it seemed like they felt happy having those memoirs to talk about. Like when the author talked about their parents and the house they live in and how it always made them remember like if they were still there. So if I was in the author's shoe's I would fell good about how I was raised by my parents to live in a better place even if that means giving up a lot of thing that mean a lot to you. That is what I think the author's mood is.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12714,5,the mood that the author created in the memoir was so sad and happy and they wer were interested are. I think that this memoir is a good one and I liked the tital of it Narciso Rodriguez.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9636,4,"Saeng is not comftorable in her sorryndings, and has not addapted to the changes from where she moved. She finds the hibiscus and choses to go buy it, because it reminds of her home in @LOCATION2. When she brings it home her mother seems shocked at first by the price saeng had paid, but is then more sympathetic when she realizes she misses @LOCATION2. Sheang says she is going to retake her test in the spring. She is also implying that she is going to change her attitude about living in @LOCATION1.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 967,1,"I Believe that computers have a positive effect on people. Computers are a relatively new invention, they have become very popular. Computers allo people to talk online with each other. They also allow students to complete homework assignments and important projects. Computers also allow people to store important files and pictures in places that won't get lost. Computers are helpful in so many ways, but these are just a few. Computers allow people online. whether @CAPS3's through email, instant messaging, or a video chat, computers peplace old and haved ways @ORGANIZATION1 communication. For example, instead @ORGANIZATION1 writing a letter to someone, mailinbg @CAPS3 to them, and having to wait two days for them to receive @CAPS3, email them! Obtain an email address, type a message, and click send. They will receive the message instantly, and even reply soon enough @PERSON1, president @ORGANIZATION1 the @ORGANIZATION1, says, ""Computers are an important part fo technology. People use them everyday."" @CAPS1 them everyday doesn't mean just for fun. @CAPS3 also helps with work. Three out @ORGANIZATION1 four adults who used computers say that they help them with their work and social status. Computers are a part @ORGANIZATION1 everyday life, and they can help with almost anything. Computers allow students to finish homework and projects quite fst. Instead @ORGANIZATION1 hand-writing that four-page essay on @PERSON2 @CAPS1 textbooks and use the internet for finding information. Computers also allow students to email teachers in case @ORGANIZATION1 missed classes and assignments. @CAPS4 @PERSON3, a student at @ORGANIZATION2 who had missed quite a few days @ORGANIZATION1 school, says, ""@CAPS2 I had to do was email my teachers, and they sent me @CAPS2 the homework assignment. I missed @CAPS3 was that easy."" @CAPS4's not the only one who agrees that computers are a big help. Millions @ORGANIZATION1 kids & adults agree. Computers not only let students write reports; they also allows them to save them for future uses. They also save important files and precious pictures. Everyone hates @CAPS3 when their camera or video camera breaks, and will their precious and wonderful memories are gone. Well, just save them to the computer, and they're there forever! @NUM1 out @ORGANIZATION1 @NUM2 people who store @CAPS2 their pictures in a computer agrees this is the best way to do @CAPS3. In conclusion, computers do have a positive effect on people. They allow people to talk online. do homework & projects, and store important files. I can assume that everyone agrees with me that computers are an important part @ORGANIZATION1 everyday life. We just woudn't be the world we are without them.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13227,5,"The author created a very warm, cheerful mood in the memoir, using a happy tone throughout the story. First, Narciso talked about his New Jersey home that was re-created with Cuban tradition. ""Passionate Cuban music (which I adore to this day) filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen."" As you can see, Narciso has a great admiration to his Cuban tradition and showed it through the warmth he provoked in this sentence. Next, Narciso stresses how regardless of mixed heritage, everyone in the neighborhood came together like family, which creates a happy, safe feeling in the reader. Lastly, the author created a mood of feeling touched in the reader by explaining how much sacrifice his parents made for him to have a good life. Narciso strongly represented the love of his parents in this sentence, which the reader can feel.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7629,3,One feature that effected the cyclist was the rolling hills. The “text states “ two miles into the section... I noticed the terrain changing…,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6681,3,"The cyclit of “Do not exceed posted speed limit”, was greatly affected by the setting of his bike ride, which caused him pain and displeasure. He travels in the high deserts of California in June, which he exaggerates that water there was “@NUM1 degers”. The great heat caused him to drink lots of water, depleting it much quicker than he would’ve wished. It also sopped the energy out of him, further complicating his ride. Along the way there is literally nothing there and he has nowhea to replenish his water supply. The hilly, rough terrain also calls for hard, tough peddling, sopping even more energy. The heat, terrain, and lack of places to stop combined for an awful ride for the cyclist of this story.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4738,2,"Dear reader, Do you believe that certain book, magazines, movie, and music should be removed from the shelves of libaries if they are found offensive? A lot of people in the world today are having this same question. Some parents think they should be removed, but others argue they should stay. I'm going to tell you what i think. As a citzen, I know some parents are arguing that certain magazines and books should be removed from the libary if they are found offensive. Well if they do that then there wouldn't be anything on the shelves in the libary would be shut down. I mean i see where some of the parents are coming from some of these things are offensive and not apporaite for children, but if you dont want your children to see it them keep them away from that section of the libary or don't bring them, you go get the book or magazine they want and then bring it back home for them. In the world today everything is offensive to someone in the world i mean everyone has there own thoughts on what they think is offensive and what they don't think is offensive. So eventually if you were to take everything offensive out of the libary it would be emptied out. I want you all to read this quote and really think about what the author is saying ' All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children have taken off the shelf. But if i have the right to remove that book from the shelf -that work i abhor- then you have the exact same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' (@PERSON1). I don't know about you, but this really sums it all up for me. The truth is you cant always do what you want, you just have to live with the way it is and try to make it better for yourself and your family. If you read this article and really listen and take into considertion what im saying i think you 'll find that it would be a lot easier for you to just act like the offensive books and magzines aren't there because if you try to get them taken out you wont even be able to go to the libary anymore. sincerly the one and only, @PERSON2",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15437,6,"The builders had to face many obstacles in attempting to allow dirgibles to dock at the empire state building but there were a couple main ones. The first main obstacle was that a thousand - foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the buildings frame. So with that they could not put the mooring mast on top of the building yet until they did some major adjustments. With that big problem the builders next obstacle was to design and build a shiny glass and chrome-nickel stainless stell tower that would be illuminated from inside, with a stepped back design that imitated the overall shape of the building itself. The last little obstacle the builders had to face was that the mast also had a skeleton of steel and was clad in stainless steel with glass windows that had to be built and put up. Those were some of the obstacles the builders had to face while trying to put a mooring mast on to of the Empire State building.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1779,1,"Dear @LOCATION1, *@CAPS1*. Now I hear my favorite @CAPS2 tunes. A few clicks here and type in a word and I am watching a funny episode of ""@CAPS3 of @CAPS4 #@NUM1"". I go to my @CAPS5 page and feel the cool keys under my fingertips as I send @CAPS7 to my friend in @LOCATION3. These are only some things I can do on my computer. As you can see I need my computer for many things. I am all for using computers and I think they are a useful resorce. But @CAPS6't stop now, I have many more reasons for using computors. Thier not all that bad. Primarily, if you want to save money on gas, @CAPS6't Use @CAPS7 @CAPS8!! I can't stress @CAPS7 enough to say that if you need to talk to a friend far away @CAPS6't drive and waste gas, or even waste money on long-distance calls. Go to @CAPS5, facebook, twitter, or something that will save you gas and money. Some people want to talk to thier friends in @LOCATION2 but they @CAPS6't have any of these computer sites. Pursuade them too!! Another issue some face is, ""You need to get out and excersize."" I have only one answer. Most people @CAPS6't know the right ways to excersize. Then, they end @CAPS8 hurting themselves. If they just went online and found out that they could do a painless, priceless, fun work out that is very effective then they would not get in so much physical and finantial trouble. Also, others complain that people need to @CAPS10 more out in nature. Well, I say, what if you encounter a wild animal that you know nothing about, or say you were lost for days and didn't know what you could or could not eat? LIke I @CAPS9 say, ""@CAPS9 @CAPS10 @CAPS11"" remember @ORGANIZATION1. FInally, if your doing a report or something formal, you want @CAPS7 to look nice, right? Well, @NUM2 out of @NUM3 people in the @LOCATION4 have messy handwriting and 9/@NUM3 teachers mistake words that are messily hand-writen. This shows that if you use a computor @CAPS7 will not only show the word you wrote but also correct @CAPS7 with spell check. In conclusion, there are many benefits to using a computor. Lets recap, computors can save money, time, and gas. Computars can provide useful information in the real world. They can also correct spelling mistakes as well as prevent mistakes in legibility. Act now!!! Show others that there are benifits to using computers, show them all the wonders of this amazing machine, That is not only a time waster but a life saver.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1372,1,"Dear @CAPS1 Local newspaper, I heard that you were concerd about people and how they use the computer to much. I think that computers are a good thing to have because many people use computers for school, work ect. I think that computers are good use, many people use it for research and resources. It is easier to use them, when you are going on vaction because you can check out how much hotels are, where resteraunts are, and what interesting places are there, instead of calling/driving around. Computers are good for school because I think books are harder/longer to use than computers. Also for questions you can go to one of the websites an you ask the question and many other people might answer the question your looking for. There also useful for work most people use computers for work. They can put there taxes/documents on there computers. Computers can be used just for fun too. There are chat; facebook games. I think that computers are useful for many things, but I also think that some people spend too much time on them too. Computers are great, but you should also use other things too like maps, book, ect. Many can spend @NUM1 hours on the computer facebooking and gaming. I think that it's important for people to go outside and hang out with friends. Alot of people spend there time on the computer during @DATE1 because its cold and sometimes snowing. I don't think that they should spend there whole time on the computer though because you dont just want to depend on electrictronics everytime. I think that computers should be used not alot in the @DATE2 because I think hanging out with friends and family are important and also the weather nice. I think that computers can be very useful with directions, work, school work but you shouldn't spend alot of time on them. Electronics arent everything in life. Thank you for taking your time reading this and I hope you do agree with me.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4770,2,"I personally think certain materials, such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc.; should not have to be removed from the shelves if they are found offensive. First of all how do we define offensive? Is it something that discrimnates a certain group of people? Is it something that creates negative attention? Is it something we don't like? Anybody can walk in a library and find something they did not like, but that does not automatically mean it is offensive. The national geographic magazine often has pictures of naked people and so does the @CAPS1 magazine. So which one would we have to put censorship on? The answer is we don't put one because this would start a big arguement of which is offensive and which is not.It would cause a conflict of two different sides. It is only offensive when we make it offensive. We do not have to look at something we don't like.We all have a choice and we can choose not to pick up something we might think is offensive. The @ORGANIZATION1 @MONTH1 not get along with the @CAPS2 but if both were in a library together with both of their holy books on the shelves, they cannot say one's book is offensive to another because it does not agree with theirs. We sometimes forget we have the ammendment that allows us to the freedom of speech and press. We @MONTH1 not like what one person publishes but it doesn't make their work offensive because it might be for a certain of group that likes it, which is not offensive to them.Everything in the library has a purpose and if it does not fit our purpose then there is no way it woud be offensive to us. The library is a place for books, music, movies, magazines, etc..We come to the library to check out books for a research in order to learn. We also go to the library to read the newest book of a series. Putting a censorship on these things would not enable us to do these. We can't finish our research project because someone thought one book was offensive or we can't listen to new album @CAPS3.Dre released because some people think the lyrics are too offensive. Putting a censorship would upset the general public more than not having a censorship because if everyone can check out what they want from the library then everyone is content",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16129,6,"The builders of the Empire State building faced many problems trying to make dirigibles able to dock there. One problem was that the blimps use hydrogen instead of helium to fly. ""Most dirigibles outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" The blimps were unable to be used because they were a major safety issue for the people being transported. Another obstacle was that the air currents were very rough at the top of the Empire State building. ""Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring asked, the back of the ship which swivel around and around the mooring mast."" Dirigibles are usually put down in open fields with the back ends can be put down with lead weights; the blimps dangling high above pedestrians was nether practical nor safe. The builders for the empire state building faced many obstacles.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9478,4,"The author ends the story with this paragraph because it shows she is not willing to give up on her new life. “I-I failed the test,” Saeng had failed her drivers test and was very unhappy. She also disliked her new home. “She was still too shaky to say at home” she missed her old home and she really wanted to give up. After talking to her mother, it renewed her hopes so the author uses this paragraph to signify that she still have hope in the end and when she is ready she will try again. “When the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take this test again.” ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16290,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced numerous problems dealing with the mooring mast. First of all, I would say safety was the number one issue. If the dirigible were to catch on fire, it could land on the main streets of New York City, posing a hazard to hundreds of pedestrians. Also, the weather was another factor. If it were too windy to fly all the time, then the mast would be a waste. When I read that they had to spend <@NUM1 to modify the building's framework,"" I started thinking of all the other things a town could do with @MONEY1. There was also an existing law that made it illegal for any airships to be even remotely close to the Empire State Building. Overall, the idea of the mooring mast was just a very poorly planned the idea.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12008,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir was very thankful. The author proved that it doesn't take the amount of money, or how big your house is to be happy. Sometimes its just the simple things. In paragraph @NUM1 it states, ""my parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family, knowing that they would do the same for us."" The author is showing the reader that even though they might not be family by blood, they still treat each other as if they were. In the last sentence of the memoir it reads, ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" This shows the reader that no house is a home without happy memories and great lessons learned.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4440,2,"Imagine a world where nearly every other book is banned for some reason or another. That world is not a world I want to live in. I believe that censorship in libraries is wrong. For three reasons, really, the first being that people have the right to any information that they desire to have. The second, people do not have the power to take opportunities away from other people. The last point I will make is that no information is bad information. Because we are in @LOCATION1, I asume that we are talking about censorship in @CAPS1 libraries. If that is the case, then I think that it is unconstituitional to ban any book, or censor any material. Censoring books is like putting a blind fold on whoever is reading the material; they don't see it for what it really is, or for what the intended purpose is. If the prompt does happen to be including foreign countries, then I think humans do not have the right to influence what other people read. This is idealistic, yes, and in a perfect world, all countires would have equal rights for everyone, regardless of race or gender. I think that people should see everything the way it is. If something is offensive, it's offensive. It's the person's choice whether or not they read or listen. That leads me to my last point, that no information can be bad information. Whether it is profane, or offensive in any way, there is always some kind of meaning behind it. From rappers like @PERSON2 and @CAPS2 @CAPS3, who I've found all of their songs have meaning, whether it's personal, or they are trying to send a message out to the people. There are books like @CAPS4 for @LOCATION2, by @ORGANIZATION1, which has recently been banned by some school libraries because of graphic scenes. The people who banned the book fail to realize that the book is not about those scenes. There is a much deeper message about guilt and grief, and redemption beneath it. Another, more famous book that was banned from school libraries is The @CAPS5 in the @CAPS6, by @PERSON1, which is a coming of age story about a boy. In conclusion, I don not think it is right to ban books or music from libraries. No one has the right to.There is always meaning within. The way an author writes a story or a piece of music always has meaning; they made the conscious decision to write it that way for a reason. By banning books, they are taking people's chances to grow and expand.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7450,3,"The setting had a bad affect on the author in many ways. One reason is that the heat of the setting caused the author become dehydrated. Dehydration is when your body begins to shut down due to lack of water. The setting also affected him by draining his confidence and making him seek out water. “I hung my head,” means that he was depressed. This proves that no matter who or what you follow there is always a possibility of death from any circumstances. Therefore this is how the author was affected by the setting he was biking @CAPS1.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7443,3,"THE FEATURES OF THE SETTING AFFECT THE CYCLIST BY IT BEING SO HOT OUTSIDE THAT HE COULD HAVE HAD PASSED OUT AND DIED. ALSO HE SAW A SNAKE THAT SCARED HIM TO DEATH BUT HE PASSED THE SNAKE. ALSO HE SAW A BUILDING THAT COULD PROBABLY HELP HIM BUT IT WAS ABANDONED,IT WAS A WELCH FACTORY THEN AS HE RUNS FURTHER DOWN HE SAW A FISH PLACE AND WENT TO THE BATHROOM TO GET SOME WATER then somebody asked him where he was going and they tined totzy him but he still had his map so he decided that he was going to use it instead of listening to other people.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 582,1,"With the click of a mouse, you can access the internet. Computers and internet are a recent innovation. You could probably find one in a common household. They've improved and gotten popular within the last twenty years. I believe they greatly benefit society. Computers provide an easy way to learn and communicate. Think about how life would be in the @DATE1 without computers. Different, right? I don't think I could have written such a great research paper without the use of a computer. The internet has many helpful sources; such as databases, encyclopedias, and articles. You can find information on almost any topic. The computer makes this easier for us to do. You can just search key words, and you have what you're looking for. Its faster than skimming through twenty books. Once you find what you're looking for, you can paste it into a @CAPS1 @CAPS2 document and print it. It's as easy as that. Another benefit of computers is communication. I have found this important over the last few years. A family that I have been close to my whole life had moved to @LOCATION1 due to jobs. Thanks to internet, I have been able to keep in touch with them. Im sure thousands of other people have been in the same situation. Whether it's on email, @ORGANIZATION1 instant messanger, or facebook, people can communicate with others all around the world. It's more convienent than having to time your phone calls so it's a good time for both of you. If we didn't have this connection with forgein countries, everyone’s lives would be different. Computers haven't just changed personal lives. They change the medical field too. This has greatly benefitted our society. Scientists and doctors find out new discoveries and what advances have been taking place. Doctors use computers to plan and perform surgery procedures. Computers have helped advance and improve the medical research and diagnosis. This saves the lives of many people. @PERCENT1 of tests that have taken place to research a dicsease use a computer of some sort to break it down. The technology of computers has benefitted today’s society and has helped people achieve great things. It keeps people all over the world connected and helps them learn. I hope that you see how computers have molded and helped the world today.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6332,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist in many ways. It made him tired thirsty and he was near exaustion.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15365,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced tremendous obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. First, new friends would have to include more money. Anything done so top of a building so large would have to be balanced by strengthening the foundation. According to paragraph @NUM1, ""over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications had to be made to the building's framework."" Another large obstacle the builders would have to deal with was finding a way to neutralize the violent wind currents atop the @DATE1 ft. building. Even if the front of the dirigible was anchored to the mooring, the back would be left to sway in the wind, Any accident or damage done to a dirigible over such a highly populated area such as downtown New York would have devastating results. In conclusion, the risks of allowing dirigibles to dock atop the Empire State Building outweighed the rewards. When dirigible travel became less practical, the plan was scrapped completely.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6746,3,"The feature of the setting is making the cyclist frustrated, thirsty, and confused. The features are making him frustrated by he thought he was going the right way where he really was going out.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12889,5,"The author created several different moods in this memoir. The main mood that the author was trying to creat was thankfulness. In paragraph @NUM1 it says,"" I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" This shows thankfulness because she's saying thank you to her parents and everything they have done for her. Also, she is thankful because she started to realize how hard her mom and dad had to work for the house and put food on the table. The main mood of the story is clearly thankfulness.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 14858,6,"In building the Empire State Building, the builders faced some problems in allowing dirigibles to dock there. Some of the obstacles that the builder faced were actually having a way for dirigibles to dock at about 1,250 feet above the ground. The strong air currents and changing in the wind direction also made it difficult for the piolots to steer the dirigibles close enough to the mast for docking. A final problem that the builders faced was a law that ""airships flying too low over urban areas"". (@NUM1). Which basically means that if it was docked at the Empire State building, then it would be too low to an urban aera and that's against the law.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12664,5,"The mood in this memoir is very happy. It kind of shows how lucky we are, by showing how greatful they are to be hear in @LOCATION1. The mood is also joyful.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9231,4,"The author ended the story with the last paragraph because spring time comes and geese return, shell feel better about herself so she can go and take the test again and focus more on the test .",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1132,1,"Dear Newspaper, I disagree that computers are important to people because they have research, online colleges, and online stores. Those are my top @NUM1 reasons and I'm going to give more details. My first main idea is that computers help students find important information help students find important information on a project. You can do on the wikepedia to help find information about the battle of @LOCATION1 and other important history. one example is I went to american history.com to find good information about @CAPS1 alley @CAPS2 and what happened there. People also look up a lot of stuff that involves school. You can get research about the earth and what happens to it. My second main idea is that computers are good for people is when you finish high school, you can go to college. Some colleges can be found on the internet and you can go to college at home on your computer. One example is my cousin. She goes to college on the internet because she has to take care of her two children. Whenever you watch television you see a commercial about online colleges because they are trying to tell you to go to school online. My third and final reason why computers are good for you people is that some stores have an online store where you can look at what they have in the store. Children like to go shopping alot but they can't go to the mall or the stores because you don't want to go. You can let them see what they want and buy it online than going to the stores. It can be shipped to your door without going anywhere. My mom sometimes orders from @CAPS3.C @CAPS4 so she doesn't have to go there. It gets shipped to our house in less than a week. There was my @NUM1 main reasons why people should have a computer. They can find research, online schools, and online shopping stores. This can help people understand computers.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9207,4,The author in @LOCATION1 this because it is shows what is is going to do to he her gain failed and this story a what she must do get just from the geese,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4491,2,"Throughout history their have always been those who have refuted the beliefs and ideals of others. Whether that be in @LOCATION1 when statues were censored by removing anything deemed offensive by the @CAPS1 church or the mass burning of books to preserve ideals that could invalidated through the clear spoken text. However this in not the @DATE1, women are not looked down upon anymore, science is not dillouted, and ideas are free throughout the world with the internet. So is it the libraries fault for providing uncensored content or is the parents fault, for not educating their children on the morality of such items? The modern library has very specific demographics for all items to which it posses. Movies over @CAPS2 attract both parents and teenagers alike, the music entices the teenagers, and the books and prior two media sources attract younger children. So how would it be fair to force a library to censor two of the things that earn the library the most money just so that kids don't read,watch or hear them. Plus libraries generally don't let young kids check out @CAPS3 rated movies or parental advisory @CAPS4. Some people however argue that books are the most dangerous thing to children and young adults. As books can raise ideas and strengthen them in a teens mind over the course of @NUM1 pages till parents end up with an anti-sematic teen with bad view on racism. So then why would that be the fault of the library as it merely provided one book that should not have affected that teen so much, had that teen had solid moral beliefs instilled in him or her from their parents. So if you find materials at a library offensive, or worry about your child going there, there's always an easy solution. Don't go their and don't let your child go their. However if you see the beauty in impurity that a library brings to a community and to a person as I do then don't allow the injustice to authors, songwriters, musicians, directors, and yourself occur.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1182,1,"Dear Newspaper @CAPS1, I believe computers and excelling technology benefits society because it can help with hand eye coordination, it will be an easy way to learn about faraway places and cultures, and your able to save and use your time more wisely. First of all every person needs hand-eye coordination, if you didn't you would either thore a ball in the comlplete other direction or you'll get hit in the face with it. Computers benefit childrens education too, they can help you discover and learn about far away places. For example if a student is studying @PERSON3 @LOCATION1 in their @CAPS2 @CAPS3 class, @PERSON1 in @CAPS4 class or maybe @PERSON2 in music class, instead of pulling out the old, dustty biography book it would be easier to look them up on a search engine. Lastly the computer benefits everyday working or stay at home parents because if you have to get in contact with a cetain person or business quickly you don't have to take the chance of having to go look in the phone book and the person or business isn't in it, just go to to @NUM1.com type in a last name or business name, so your all set. Also if your child is being a nuisance screaming and running around the house you can just set them up with an educational game so you can get your house-hold chores finished. Those are three of the most important reasons why I think computers benefit society. They are hand-eye coordination, learning techniques and saving everyday people time.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12930,5,"@PERSON1's parents came (or emmigrated) from Cuba into @LOCATION1, where they were not wealthy and many racial barriers stop them from getting good jobs. However, @PERSON1, who is writing the memoir, explain how they sacrificed it all so that @CAPS1 could have a better life and how much they help their neighbors and their family.Rodriguez writes a lot about how they always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we (they) considered family."" @CAPS1 emphasizes this mood, a mood of ""good @CAPS2"" and a neighborly love, how they treated everyone as family. The mood @CAPS1 creates is that where you find the good in a life where there might not be too much good.""",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 212,1,"I think that people are spending a lot of time on there computers and not enjoying nature and things. My reasons are that people don't do anything except surf the web, talk to other people all the time, and they site around eating junk and no exercise. Those are my three reasons. My first reason is people do is surf the web. There is over a million websites to go to. What people do is go to all of them look at things or buy something. The only thing they should be doing is homework or buisness. Also people play to many video games on the computer too. My second reason is that people go on @CAPS1 or @CAPS2 or use web cams. Those people could be on there for hours talking to people. Sometime those things are peoples life and all they do. I know someone who has a @CAPS1 and after school all they do is talk to people. They have friends on @CAPS1 but no friends in real life. My third reason is when people do go on all they do is eat junk food and get no exercise. Sometimes they eat potato chips and cookies and have soda. If you do that for week you will be very tired and sleepy. Also you can get very fat. Your body will be unhealthy and out of shape. Now that you have read my reasons, I hope you like them. My reasons where people don't do anything but surf the web, talk to other people all the time, and people eat junk food and get no exercise.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9942,4,"The author concludes the story with, “when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” for several reasons. One reason the author concludes the story with this paragraph is because the hibiscus flower will be adaptating to spring just like Saeng should to her new environment in the United States. Another reason is like the hibiscus budding, Saeng has began to grow older and much wiser of things allowing her to go back in the spring and hopefully pass the driving test. Lastly, in the text it says, “she realized that many of the things that she had thought of as strange before had become, through the quit repetition of season upon season, almost familiar to her now.” This shows Saeng is becoming familiar and at ease now of where she is living just how the hibiscus flower adapts to it's place with ease and gets use to seasons.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3386,2,"Have you ever imagined a @CAPS1 without movies or music to entertain you? A @CAPS1 that has no books to read or magazines to inform you upon the latest gossip and fashion? Well, if items are banned from being seen or read then there will be no creativity in the @CAPS1, there will soon be no books or magazines to read, no music to listen too, and no movies to watch, and you will not be able to express yourself or your opinions. I do not believe that certain materials should be removed from the shelves if they are found offensive. If the @CAPS1 is left without certain materials there will be no creativity. Everyone will be forced to think the same thoughts if they can't learn about other thoughts that are protrayed to be offensive. No one can read about a topic that they are interested in if it is banned, this will cease creative thinking by not allowing people to think differently. In the process of deciding what books are offensive and which are not offensive, all books will eventually be eliminated. Certain topics aren't liked by everyone and, as Katherine Paterson says, '...if I have the right to remove that book... so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' Paterson is exactly right too; if one person has the right to remove a book, so does everyone and this will cause everyone to take off that book that they dislike so much. Also, everyone likes different kinds of books and different topics, and this will cause less self expression because if someone doesn't like books about @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3 because they think it is offensive to @CAPS4, then there will be no books about @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3 on the shelves for anyone to learn about it. Everyone will turn out to be the same if they can't express themselves or their opinions. If a certain topic is banned for being discovered as a offensive topic then this will result in the thought being banned. If you can't read or watch a topic you shouldn't be able to think or talk of the topic either because you will offend someone. Also, if people can pick what books can be in a library, that will eventually be transferred over into other areas, such as clothing, food, thoughts, etc.. Eventually everyone will be wearing the same clothes, eating the same food, and thinking the same thoughts. I do not believe that certain materials should be exterminated from the shelves if they are found offensive. If specific materials are banned: creativity will be eliminated from our lives, eventually all materials will be banned, and we will all be the same by the lack of self expression. If you haven't ever thought about a @CAPS1 without books, moves, music or magazines; I hope you have learned how crule and boring the @CAPS1 would be without all of those materials.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3599,2,"Have you ever imagine goin to the libary and getting a magazine from the shelve and you find it offensive and you cant do anything about it? Well now you can say what ever you want because Katherine Paterson and me when to a libary together we pick out magazine from the shelve and it had alot of offensive stuffs we did not like. We went to the lady infront and she dint even knew this magazines where there. She got really mad and when back to the shelve and there where alot of magazines with offensive ritting, pictures and even comments. We got all of the magazined anf threw them away. In my own opin i think these kind of things thar are offensive like movies, music, and magazines should be remove. They should be remove because it a bad influence to the younth, and it gives them a picture in there head and they do it later or maybe say it to the plubic or even so it in there homes. They should be remove because its getting alot of people in to trouble and making them do what they see of it, this is getting to kids and they becoming more violent to there school, friends and even moms. We have to remove all of these offensive stuffs becasue we see these every where and its easy to find like in the movies it getting to the piont where you see naked girls in every movie. The parents have to do something about it to because they are the one who are buying them and then leaving it every where in the house and its easy for the children to find it. We have to be more care full about what we but or what we read because you can find it offensive and then your kids @MONTH1 read it and they would think another thing. So next time you buy or go some where and you find some thing offensive talk to the manager or the supervacer about taking it off. That why i think they should be remove",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6891,3,"The setting affected the cyclist in a harsh way. At first, the cyclist was fine and going strong, but soon after the first ""ghost town” he was getting weak. Then the cyclist had to face a few problems. For example he was running low on water. Also, he faced rough roads last, he faced snakes and abandonment. The cyclist had to face many obstacles, but in the end, he pulled through strong.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12271,5,"The mood in the memoir is loving. It is loving because the authors parent's let pretty much anyone in need, come to live in their house. They did this because they knew if they were in need other people would do that for them.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12170,5,"Fashion designer Narciso Rodriguez is a firm beiliever in friendship and family values. In a selection from Home: the Blueprints of Our Lives, he describes the mood, or the feeling created by an author, in his childhood one of family and people with helping hands. Narciso says that everybody in his neighbor hood were ""immigrants who extended a hand to people who, while not necessarily their own kind, were clearly in need."" This shows helpfulness espically in a time when racism and segregation were big in the States. Secondly, their was a sense of family in all of the people at Narciso's house. There was often people staying in his house because they temporarily needed a place to stay until they got back on their feet. The Rodriguez's beilieved these people would do the same thing for them in return. Finally, Narciso can not express how grateful he is to have the importance of friends and family put on him so early in his life. Without his parents stressing the fact that family is not only your blood relatives, he would never have beilived that family and helping hands were so important. A mood of family qualities and helpfulness pre vails in Narciso Rodriguez's memoir. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12211,5,"The mood in this memoir by Narciso Rodriguez's love. Love is the mood for many reasons. One reason is that Narciso's parents were very caring. ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family"" (paragraph @NUM1). Narciso's parents cared about everybody as if they were part of the family. Another reason the mood is love is because Narciso talks about how his parents were selfless. With courage they moved to @LOCATION1 without knowledge of the lanunguage or the culture."" They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends, and careers in the country they loved."" (paragraph @NUM2). @PERSON2's parents did everything out of pure love. Because of them @PERSON2 lived a life filled with happiness and love.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13132,5,"In the memoir by Narciso Rodriguez, the mood he created is gratitude. First, he is grateful to his family. For example he says, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice"" (@NUM1). From this, you can understand how much he appreciates what his parents have given him.Next, Narciso is grateful for being part of such a caring family. He says ""there is no way to express my gratitude for the spirit of generosity impressed upon me at such an early age"" (@NUM1). This quote explains how much his family taught him about being kind.Finally, is grateful to know such wonderful people. Narciso says, ""I will never forget that house or its gracious neighbors, or the many things I learned there about how to love' (@NUM3). To sum it all up, the mood Narciso Rodriguez created for his memoir is gratitude.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9957,4,"After reading ”Winter Hibiscus” by Minfong Ho. I believe Ho ended the story with that paragraph to support her idea of overcoming obstacles. First after failing her driving test, Saeng was very upset and didn’t know if she would ever pass it. But after seeing a hibiscus plant, it reminded her of her home in Vietnam which inspired her. Second, when she bought the plant, her mother was a little angry because it was expensive. But, after seeing how the plant brought joy to Saeng, her mother forgave her. Last when saeng was digging a hole to let the hibiscus grow, it inspired Saeng to take the test again because she overcame the obstacles of brining the plant home and letting it grow. Therefore, I believe Ho end “Winter Hibiscus”, to go along with her idea of overcoming obstacles.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1760,1,"I think we can all agree that computer usage is a very controversal issue. In my opinion, I believe that computers have a negative effect on people. For instance, it's not safe and children can get into all sorts of things on the internet. Also, people spend too much time in front the computer now a days, @CAPS1, its a major distraction and also a negetive effect on kids. school work. It's now or never! Do we dicide that computers have a negetive effect? You decide! Isn't every parents biggest concern the safety of their children? When on the internet, kids are capable of accessing anything and everything. Sometimes kids don't even look for bad things, they just pop up. Would you want your child veiwing things that you have no control over? Also, websites like @CAPS2.com one one of the greatest concerns when it comes to internet safety. Although you are supposed to be at least @NUM1 to have a @CAPS2, most kids lie about their age. Did you know that @NUM2 out of @NUM3 @CAPS2 users lie about their age? And it's not always a @NUM4 year old saying they are @NUM1, it could be a @NUM6 year old saying they're @NUM7! Not only do people lie about their age, they lie about who they are. Is this the kind of internet exposer you want for your children? Put a stop to this right now! More than @PERCENT1 of @CAPS3 are overweight and unhealthy. This is another negetive effect computers have on people. It's a gorgeous @DATE1 day. Bright blue skies, cotton candy cloulds, the sun is shining, and there's a nice warm breece. Perfect day to go out and get active, right? Wrong! None people would @CAPS5 be inside on the computer. Instead of going for a walk, people would @CAPS5 spend hours on facebook. This is a serious concern to our health. People don't exercise enough as it is, and then when you add computers, people will never get active! Instead of playing video games onlin, people need to be reminded that turning off the computer and playing a fun beighborhood game of baseball is just as fun and much more beneficial. This is just one step @CAPS3 need to take to get a healthier lifestyle. Wouldn't you agree? Did you know that kids that spend more time on computer are more likely to do poorly in school? Surely, if nothing else will convince you of the negetive effects of a computer this will @CAPS5 than coming home and doing homework, more time is spent in front of the computer. As a student, I will admit that the computer is a very tempting distraction and can easily pull a student away from their studies. You can't expect a child to make the right decision and tell their they have to go because they need to study. So you do! Take action now, or your child will definately suffer. The time has come to decide. Do you believe Computers have a negative effect on people? It's clear that the computer is not safe. Not to mention, too much time is spent on the computer instead of being active. Most importantly, computers will negetively affect children's grades. Don't wait another minute! Let's agree and do something about this!",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6775,3,"The setting was a hot desert in California that a biker got stuck in going to Yosemite National Park. These settings were hard on the cyclist. For example, he listened to some old people who led him the wrong way and could have had him killed. He was running out of water and his legs felt like they were going to break off. All of these troubles did affect his trust in old locals though. He learn that just because they are old and looks wise they have information probably older than the artifacts at a museum. Besides he has a trust map: He got a lot from this trip.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4444,2,well if one person has a right to something then it would only be fair for the other people to have a right for the same thing. That would be like having six kids in one room and for no reason at all just give three kids a cookiee and not the other three that wouldnt be right now would it. so if one person ones that book then another person wants that same book then they would have every right to grab that book and theres really nothing could say to them. i know how it feels not haveing the same right as every one else like one time my teacher gave my friend a piece of gum for no reason at all and i was mad because i didnt get a pieace i thought if he got a pieace of gum for no reason then the rest of us should get one for no reason. like said you give a right to one person then you should give that right to another person now i could under stand if three people were in volved in a fight and the third person was just standing there wactching the dont have the right to go to jail but the two that was phiscally fighting then they have every right to sit in jail and think about the fight now the third guy that was wacthing he dont have the right to keep in any videos of the fight and he sould get a tickect,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1356,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, Computers are a vey unique and advanced device. They give entetainment, pleasure, and knowledge for some people. I do not agree with the fact that computers are a good part of society. Although you do need computers. There are some reasons to which I am saying this. Typing s faster than hand writing and its neater. With all the different websites, you can advertise and buy important thing bat the internet and talk to people froma round the world. With all of these good reasons there should be an instant choice of it they're good or bad. But there is a main reason. It's areason that tells it is bad. Computers are for people. People had can't get off their write a hand written report or drive to the store to buy something. Not it. If computers never exiled, the world would no doubt be better all around place. There a lot of reason in which computers are bad. They hold information which can be hacked and by somebody thay you don't want to know something. Cyber bullying is a bad thing about computer. Another big is those stupid online games. People get addicted then they become lazy and eventually obese. So as I said before, part of society and should be. This would be of good importance to me if you took my letter into. Remember that computers can take advantage of your life and make you into you're not. make that descision I hope that you live a full life and enjoy reading my letter. P.S. Try not to get involved with any online games being in a nationwide disease. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16188,6,"In the excerpt from ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. ""The stress of the dirigibles load into the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation, which was nearly eleven hundred feet below"" is understood in paragraph nine. This was the biggest obstacle the builders had to face. The builders developed a plan of ""Rather than building a utilitarian mast without any ornamentation, the architects designed a shiny glass and chrome-nickel stainless steel tower that would be illuminated from the inside, with a stepped-back design that imitated the overall shape of the building itself. Although the mast was finished due to @CAPS1 Nature a new law no dirigibles has ever docked at the Empire State Building.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4313,2,"I think that we should remove certain things like movies, music and books should definitely be a debate because in these days people are doing things that they never done before. For an example music, music is a great cause of things that people motivate to do things and get really into the songs. They try to do the same things as what there favorite artist or actor does. I hear some songs and they talk about illegal things and I look around the world I hear children talking about those things and they tell there parents what is that ? But they just dont want to tell them the truth but once these kids get older they will know what it is and it will be there choice if they want to follow that path or think about something else. But about the people who are singing this, they're putting it in a way that is not bad you could do this all the time and enjoy it with out getting introuble and in reality these kids are blind and dont know what there getting them selves into. Also, many books have offensive language that kids read all the time but people dont even notice. That's how kids could get introuble in school because they learn a new word in some book they never read or cant even read cause there to young to understand but they do it anyways beacause of curiosity, they dont know what there doing. Thats a way how a child becomes bad cause person when he or she becomes older cause they learned things that they shouldnt have learned. I think that we as a good country should make sections into what people can read and cant read, and it should depend how old is the person. Some school librarys, have movies that kids could watch and it could be if your a elementry school, middle school etc. But some of these movies have offensive language and some appropriate scenes, that kids would want and learn how to do those type of things. Or how they see the actors in the movie and they curse and they think is cool cause there doing it as well. I think that elementry students should watch only pg movies, middle school pg @NUM1 and down, and for the high school, we should be able to see basically any movie, but in the same time I think most of the high school students have to be more mature, thats probably why we still dont have the priblige to see any movie cause peolpe dont know how to handle them selves. Finally, I really think they should minimum some movies, music and books cause kids are learning things they shouldnt be learning until they get older, and that those three things change the world in so many diffrent ways, some are good but most of them are bad, these are my opinions.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10060,4,"The author conclude the story with this paragraph to show that saeng is going to retake the test over when all these things happen. Saeng shows that she is not going to give up, and that she is going to keep trying. The hibiscus is a lucky charm to her to keep during the test to strive her to pass the test. In addition, the author also conclude the story with this paragraph to show saeng personal thoughts, and how she feels about this test. In the spring, when the snow melts and the geese return and the hibiscus is budding, is a indication that it time to give the test another try. In conclusion, the paragraph is a indication that saeng is never going to forget.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 725,1,"I think that computers have great affects on people. Computers are a good way to @CAPS1 intouch with people, @CAPS2 online, @CAPS3 jobs, and @CAPS3 information on @CAPS4 facts. Computers might not be good exercise @CAPS5 you but at helps you in life and it also keeps you organised @CAPS5 example it keeps files @CAPS5 buisneses and @CAPS5 people that are in the music industry computers makes beats @CAPS5 them and can also record @CAPS5 them. computers helps every one in all ages. It helps the younger kids in school where they have to write a @ORGANIZATION1 or have to do a project, and helps the elderly peope @CAPS5 their jobs. Computers alson helps you know what is going on in life, like on the veiws see who has been hurt or the weather. Truely the computers are realty good @CAPS5 every thing they help you do so and it is really amazing how technologie changes. If it werent @CAPS5 come veters I dont think some of us would be where we are today.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10540,4,"I believe that the author chose to conclude the story with that paragraph to illustrate the oevrall message of the story. That paragraph sums up the message of determination and overcoming obstacles. Saeng is coming from another country and is facing challenges not only in the garden, but in her life as well. She had to learn how to adjust to her new surroundings and never give up on what she wanted to accomplish. So, by saying ""in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again,” she truly shows her determination and how shes not afraid to overcome obstacles that will face her. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7315,3,"The features of the setting greatly affect this cyclist. At first he is fine riding along the old-timers “shortcut” as he states that “things began well enough. I rode into the morning with strong legs and a smile on my face.” But what he didn’t know was this was the beginning of a very rough day. He arrived at the first “town” which was a ghost town. He wasn’t overly worried yet but at about sixty miles in on his journey he came to a ramshackle shed, several rusty pumps, and a broken down corral. The cyclist explains how he had drank a lot of his water and was in need of some. He tried the pumps but he explains how “a far like substance oozed out, followed by brackish water feeling somewhere in the neighborhood of two hundred degrees.” A couple miles later he came to a highway sign that read ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: DO NOT EXCEED POSTED SPEED LIMIT. The cyclist continued on desperate for water. He even came across a snake. He was now fearing a heat stroke. He came to an abandoned grape juice factory and hung his head. The cyclist then was almost completely dehydrated from the long, tiring bike rid. The cyclist was sure he was going to die from dehydration or a heatstroke that this terrible ride had caused. He finally came to a shop a drank from the sink. So this ride was torturous due to the setting.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9398,4,"I think that the author concludes the story with that paragraph because Saeng is saying that she will try again. For example, despite failing her driving test she decides to take it over after having the experience of planting with her mother. It seems as if planting the hibiscus has gained her some confidence in striving to succeed once again. In the story it seemed that she was getting used to planting. For example, now that she has done something and accomplished that she knows that she can take the test again and accomplished that. In conclusion, that is why I think the author concluded with that paragraph.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1555,1,Computer can be used for anyting but sometimes people use it for illeagle things like music some music site are a illeagle and sometimes thing off the internet. People meet over the internet can be sometimes dangerous because some people lye about there age or put fake pictures of them.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12995,5,"the mood of the @CAPS1 in the article is like kind of happiness and @CAPS2, relax, and grateful. Because their grandparents are coming from Cuba. Narciso Rodriguez feels like being an immigrant from Cuba and making a family in the United States is hard. Because you have to start your whole life over so you can get a job and provide for your family. This is what I think the mood of the article is about in the memoir.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16465,6,"While constructing the Empire State Building the builders were faced with many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock. To begin, the dangers of allowing dirigibles that were made outside of the United States. May non-American dirigibles were made up of hydrogen which is much more flammable compared to the United States helium balloons. To avoid a repeat of the explosion of a dirigible Lüsted states, ""the owners of the Empire State Building realized how much worse the accident could have been if it had taken place above.. Downtown New York."" @CAPS1, the winds at the top of the building were to wild to attach a dirigible safely to the top. The author clarifies, ""Even if the dirigibles were thethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around... the back could be weighted down with lead weights, but using these was neither practical nor safe."" This shows that in order to have the ship still enough to be able to moor it was dangerous. Lastly, a law was passed making it impossible to fly close enough to the building to be able to moor. Marcia Amidon Lüsted says, ""An existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" This makes the possibility of landing a dirigibles on the Empire State Building illegal.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15664,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced several obstacles in their attempts to allow dirigibles to dock there. The first problem they faced was the issue of safety. Most dirigibles were fueled by hydrogen, which was highly flammable. This danger was shown by the Hindenburg disaster in New Jersey, and the owners of the building did not want to face a similar accident in a place as densely populated as New York. Another obstacle that arose was the fact that the violent wind at such an altitude would toss the back of the ship back and forth. This would not only be a technical hassle as it would also make it nearly impossible to get passengers in and out of the dirigible, and make it a frightening experience for anyone inside the ship as well. In addition, the ships could not be weighed down with lead weights as it would be too risky to have them dangling high above pedestrians. A final implication was that if dirigibles moored at the Empire State building, it would violate an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. Because of this, docking a ship there would be illegal which obviously way not helpful to the project. In the end, these obstacles were the key reasons that the endeavor failed. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3287,2,"Censorship in librarys could be useful so children and young people don't see what their parents don't want them to see. In the kids section, they have kid's books. In the adult section they have adult books. Those sections are there to keep children from reading or seeing things that @MONTH1 be what their parents don't want them seeing. But then again, a parent could bring their kids into those sections so they can find their books without leaving their child unattended. Completely taking books out of the library because they are offensive is not a good thing. It takes away certain literature that people might like reading. But then it also makes those people that want it censored uptight. I am a big reader so I have been to librarys many times but I never actually saw any material that was so bad I thought it needed to be taken out. If there was though, they should just make an alternative section for books, music, movies, and magazines that some people think should be put there. For example, some albums that contain offensive language or topics have '@CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3' stickers on them. It's simple enough to see these stickers so that you can put it in the alternative section of a library. People that like and want to listen to that can easily go to that section and pick it out. Books always have reviews, so people can tell if those are too @CAPS1 or not. The library staff could put those books in the alternative section. Movies always have ratings, so staff could put anything rated @CAPS4 or above on those shelves. Now I've never seen a bad magazine at a library before. I'm sure they would never have magazines such as '@CAPS5' or '@ORGANIZATION1' there. People wouldn't need to worry about magazines from my experience. That is my solution. Make an alternative section for all the offensive material in the library instead of taking it out completely. That takes away a lot of literature for the people that like that material. You couldn't take away movie classics like '@CAPS6' or '@CAPS7'. Those movies have been put on the highest of best film lists. Yes, they are rated @CAPS4 but no, that doesn't take away the fact that they are great movies. Don't take the material out. Just make a new section for it.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1066,1,"@ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS1 there is alot of talking and arguing about computers. Some say they are helpful to society and others say not. As for myself I am one of those on the side of which is for computers. I think the do alot less harm than good. First of all the hand-eye cordination of the user is mostly improved over a period of time, which helps withe learning musical instruments. Also it gives a great learning ability to people, particularly student. If there were computers, for a student to do a report he/she would have to read through an encyclopedia, which takes a great amount more time than plainly looking it up on the internet. Finaly computers are great for communicating with far-away friends or family. The first subject on my agenda is the hand-eye cordination skills. These skills are the ability to work with your hand and eyes simultaniously. There is a number of impacts these skills can make. The most apparent is musical instruments. If you are trying to learn a new song to be played on guitar you must move your fingers to the notes coresponding with the screen. Another place where hand-eye cordination comes in handy is sports. One sport where hand eye cordination makes a huge impact is in football. If the ball is thrown then the wide recever must watch the ball with his eyes and make sure he puts his hands in the best position to catch the ball. I am also going to argue the vost world of learning that is provided by computers. Lets just say someone asks you who was the @NUM1 president of the @ORGANIZATION2 where would you go to find that answer? I don't know about you but I am definatley going to look it up on google (internet search engine). Also schools @CAPS1 can ask alot more of their students because they have all this information at there desposal. Lastly I would like to cover the communications abilitys that the computer puts out there. First of all let say you have a very close friend move out-of-state"" how are you going to keep in touch. You could try using phones but yet the long-distance fees have sky-rocketed over the past @NUM2 years. Did you know that if you talk long distance for @NUM3 mins a day that would be over @NUM4 a month. in todays ecconmy you need to save money not talk it all away. The internet charges no additional fees for chatting no matter how far away you are from each-other. So hopefully my letter will be able to surposs ""@CAPS2'bama's failed health care bill"" to at least make it somewhere in the paper. People need to know the facts about computers before they try to argue about them.""",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3990,2,"Censorship is a tough topic to discuss. Everyone has different views on what is and isn't acceptable in libraries, because of the content in some books, music, movies, and magazines. When you start to censor what information is available to certain people, they get angry, and it can cause an uproar of protest. There should be an age limit on some materials however. So how can you tell what is okay for younger children and teens to view? For movies, music, and magazines, there are already limitations on how old you have to be to buy or rent them. With movies, the rule in libraries should be the same as anywhere else. It should be that you must be seventeen to get anything rated @CAPS1. I'm not sure what the age is to view unrated movies is, but for libraries it shoulld be the same as anything else. Anything else, should be open to all ages. Music is also a controversial material to censor. If a @CAPS2 has an explicit label on it, you should have to be eighteen to check it out. The reason being, is that some music can contain violent lyrics, and unless you are eighteen you shouldn't listen to it. When you hear music that is offensive to you, you must be smart enough to not listen to it. Anything any artist wants to say on a @CAPS2 can be recorded, and children should not be exposed to that until they are responsible enough to know what they should, and sometimes shouldn't be listening to. Printed materials are the hardest to censor. Personally, i don't believe any book should be kept from anyone. The only type of book that should be kept from some people is magazines. Once again, magazines can contain some graphic content, and should only be kept from anyone under eighteen. There are just some things kids shouldn't see, but if you are a legal adult, and want to read any kind of book, it should be available to you. With any of these materials, it should all be available to you in a library. It is a place to learn about how a writer, a movie director, a music artist, or magazine editor feels about the world. If we censor the material in a library, it is denying the public of the real world. Also, we would be revoking the right given to us of free speech. I do not make fun of books because I know whatever someone writes down, in their eyes, is the truth. It is an expression of self, and to stop someone's work from being available to the world, you are taking away the right of free speech.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7426,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist by the changes the occur while riding his bike. The cyclist began well with smily face, but then he changed because the condition of the road and the weather that was hot, also there was not any signal to show him where he was going and it was the correct way he was taking. Also, his bike flat needed to be replaced.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 11831,5,"The mood created in the memoir is happiness and gratitude. Narciso is grateful of his parents for moving to @LOCATION1, and still give him warm happy feeling of a house in Cuba. His parents passed down their culture to him and he is happy that they did. Narciso is glad to have lived in the home that they did, and all the opertunities that he had as a child. He is grateful that his family always got together and had a feast with cuban music, activities, and food. His parents gave up their jobs and had to Start their lives over entirely. Narciso is also grateful that he learned the real definition of ""family"". He is also very grateful to his parents for their love and sacrifice.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6055,3,In this story the cyclist is going through a desert of California. This is a reason why he is very limited on water supply. It is really hot which would cause him to drink a lot more water. He had started his journey in the morning so that the sun wasn’t as hot as it would be in the middle of the day. Then it started to get a lot more sonny. So with the sun comes more heat. The rider says “The sun was beginning to beat down.” This would help the readers realize what time a day it was and how hot it was. This was in the morning so he didn’t realize it but as it got into the afternoon he realized it and started to get dehydrated. ,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10404,4,"Authors chose their closing paragraphs carefully. The author chose to end their story with this paragraph because all of the stuff the actor has in the last paragraph represents something special in the characters eyes. There are resons the author chose to conclude the story with that paragraph. The authors chose of the ending paragraph is very important. The character says “this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again”. The hibiscus that she mentions represents the ability to overcome obsticles. In the story it is talking about the girl overcoming the failed test and retaking it. That is why the author concludes with that. The author also writes. “when the snow melts and the geese return” This to the character represents new beginings and chances. That gives the character the sense that next time around she will pass the test. The author adds that paragraph in the end to symbolize new beginnings and chances and the ability to over come obsticles. Authors choose their last paragraph for specific reasons. This author did as well. The author did it to symbolize things.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9800,4,In the story “winter @CAPS1” the author concludes the story with the last paragraph like that because when the season comes back around for budding she is going to be right back out there exsploring. She’s going to want to learn more about the hibiscus and what they do. And she can’t wait to start taking care of them as they start to bud. Thats why they ended the story with that paragraph.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9940,4,The author concludes the story with this because the hibiscus and Saeng are very similar. Also the narrator compares her to the geese returning. The geese returning represents her starting over at drivers school and doing it again. The hibiscus represents her staying strong in the winter and the come spring she builds up and goes and takes the test again. That is what the narrator choose to end the story that way.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10569,4,The reason the author concludes the story with this paragraph is because if the author trys it again it might work out a lot better now they know what they are doing. Also if they try it again then if it makes enough they can sell it and make money so they will keep doing it for years to come.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3182,2,"There are many diffrent people in this world, who have many diffrent oppions about books, music, movies, magazines, etc., @CAPS1 because one person dose not perticualy like horor movies, that dose not mean that movies stores should remove horor films from there shelves. as creepy as it @MONTH1 sound. there are many people in the world who are slasher film freeks. the live and breath scarry movies. I myself like @CAPS1 about eveything out there. i will read any book of listen to any type of music, it actualy widens my taste in certain materials. i feel like everyone should try new things. Say growing up your favorite books were @CAPS2 The @CAPS3. and you would like to shaire your childhood stories with your children. BUT @CAPS4, books stores took @CAPS2 The @CAPS3 off of their shelves because a tiger and a pig could never be friends. This is nonsince. many people like many diffrent things.there is no reason to only sell what you like. otherwise your busines will fail.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15879,6,"Though the idea to allow dirigibles to dock at the Empire State building was seriously considered, safety and reality made in an unrealistic feat. In order for the mooring mast to successfully hold a dirigible, over @MONEY1 worth of modifications had to be made to the framework of the building. Still @CAPS1 got in the way, the greatest being safety. Most dirigibles from outside the @LOCATION2 used hydrogen gas rather than helium, which is highly flammable. The owners of the Empire State building realized how bad a dirigible fire would be, and more so if it took place over the densely populated city of New York. Wind also was a serious factor that disassembled the idea. If the dirigible were to be tied to the mast, the back of the ship which swing around, and lead weights were out of the question. Blocks of lead hanging above pedestrians in the streets of New York was neither a practical nor safe idea. An additional obstacle was the existing law that would not allowed airships to fly low, or too close to urban areas. Even if it was attempted, ships would have a hard time docking because of forceful winds. These @CAPS1 were all stumbled across in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock at the building, an idea that is no longer considered.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4369,2,I tenik people us book from the mexcio that work you have book right when you hope our people right good is to inporto. I like book reading time when in my finallys happens. many people like riading to bookes much peopel go to bootseto and my finallyes so your right call me oo mas informsos rightes is book will be scorred faeni and school to book if s conventions is to have us structure help bfente from contesI racmios becaese is to helpo many people look to a special likes a show or party when it finally and pepole happens sometimresit is I reall book .....when I came school I not riadin nati so I go to my room my is riadin one book is to good for you so I riadin I like one book i go my have I riadin book so I when I go vacation I peck tow book so riadin in baocho....when back to school I like book riadin my finallys you like book yes why is good riadin I see my finally he to riadin one book to like to mach riadin ....,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1610,1,"Dear @CAPS1, I remember when I was younger my parents got two laptops for themselves. Internet use was always available, interaction of online chat. It was extremly exciting for them. On the other hand, I got to sit home and watch them have fun. I couldn't go outside, or hang out with friends just because I was stranded insided as they enjoyed the computer. I strongly feel as if computers do not benefit society. People spend too much time using the internet than exercising, nobody gets to enjoy the beauty of nature, and there is less interaction with family and friends. There are many holes being dog while computers one still being used and bought. Our society is just going downhill from here. People don't need to be sitting at home inside breathing reused air while using the computer. Proffessor @PERSON3, a health generalist, stated on @ORGANIZATION2 news that @PERCENT1 of all people around @LOCATION1 would rather be on the computer at home doing nothing than going outside and/or getting some kind of exercise. Could you imagine all of those unhealthy people not worriying about anything except their computer? the only thing computers do for us these days is abandon our free time. @CAPS2 waist @PERCENT2 of there spare time on their computer. If technology decreases there new games people play, and sites people use, it is likey for people to get out of the house and do something healthy for themselves. @PERSON1, owner of @ORGANIZATION1, said ""I have never seen in my entire life, so many people using there computers and internet. Its been quite sometimes when over one billion @CAPS2 are online on a typical weekend. "" @PERSON1 later mentions "" it's kind of depressing of how much time they spend on computers, than outside and enjoying nature."" Not only is excersicing time headed down the drain, but our used to be "" beautiful"" nature is as well. Many young kids these days are watching @CAPS3, they see computer game commercials there parents buy them the game, and all of a sudden they are on it @NUM1. Since adults aren't doing there part by idolizing these kids to persuade them to run around outside and do something healthy. The kids need to step up for a change! Did you know global warming is caused by the minimum density in the air? If we have almost to no children or adults running around outside, our world is not flowing too well. Hence our budget is low, and pollution is extremly off the wall; our nature is going from beatifu to less and lesser. @PERSON2, a government official has survey @NUM2 people from each state asking about how much time they spend weekly of just enjoying nature and roleizing the beaty of it. The survey reads one in every @NUM3 people thoughly breathe in the beauty for at least @NUM4 minuests, a week. I mean come on; that's pathetic. Maybe if we surely excluded computers and technology for a while, global warming won't be nessicary. I remember when I was about @NUM4 years old an I never once got to meet my other family besides my siblings. It was pretty sad because I'm always told I have a huge family that is very known to our town but I have no clue who they are ! this is all because technology was invented. Never once have I ever been outside and relaxed besides when I got on and off the bus for school. My parents stand me in my house as they use the computer. The other day I just found out what ""show"" is because my moms computer brake and now I am get introduced to my other family along with the freedom of going outside. Ever since my mom's computer brake she has lots of free time to spend with me. Technology ruined my childhood as a kid and without it you get to open up the real importance of life. Would you want to become obese, like through global warming, and/or to not interact with family or outside nature? Its sadi how @PERCENT3 of these reasonings are caused by the excessvive use of technology and computers. Let's just get rid of it all! Thank you for your time @CAPS1!",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16208,6,"In the building of the mast that was to be used to dock and refuel dirigibles the builders and arcitect @CAPS2 many daunting problems For one thing a simple mooring mast could not be placed on the roof of the Empire State Building. The mast would add to much stress to the buildings frame work and cause it to colapse, along with the imense wind power. Another problem was that ""most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather then helium to inflate there dirigibles. Unlike helium, hydrogen is highly Flammable. There was also a law that stated that airships could not @CAPS1 too low over urban areas One of the Final and most important reasons builders @CAPS2 obstacles was the constantly shifting wind due to violent air current. Even with the dirigibles tethered to the mooring mast the back end would swivel around the mast along with the wind.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7126,3,Some features of the setting that affect the cyclist is he is riding a bike through the dessert. He says “I was traveling through the high deserts of California in June.” So he was scortching hot peddling a bike. The road became bumpy and curry. A sign had said “Rough Road Ahead: Do not exceed posted Speed limit. The speed limit was @NUM1 and he was going @NUM2 so it must have been hard to get over all the bumps. The lastly he comes across and poisioness snake blocked the majority of the pavement infront of me.” So him dehydrated trying to get ground a snake would be terrifying. So on his @CAPS1 the setting doesn’t help him much. ,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15823,6,"They could not put a thousand - foot dirigible moored at the top of the building held by a single cable tether, it would add stress to the building's frame.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10341,4,He concludes that when it is spring he will take the test again. That will give her another chance to pass it. This will give her another chance to do what is right.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12659,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" is a clothing designer who grew up in @LOCATION1 with all different immagrets. The mood of it is that home isn't a physical space but relationships. ""Growing up in this enviornment instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relative."" (@NUM1). He had a: ""Close-Knit community of honest, hard working immigrants.."" (@NUM1). I think Narciso would be a clothing designer if he didnt grow up with these people.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3490,2,"The material that someone people believe shouln't be viewed by childern, I don't believe should be removed from the library shelves just for that reason. The library is not just for the children but also for the adults. Children are exposed to many things everyday that are not suited for them, whether it be in their home, at school, or even while their out in public. So why alter the library just for the children, when we don't even alter the public for them? I think if having certain material that isn't suitable for certain ages, then the children should be monitored closely on what they are pulling from shelves. By pulling something from a shelf just because a parent doesn't want their child to see, hear, or watch it, isn't right to the older people that come to the library. Another reason i don't agree with removing things is because, by removing items that are not suited for a child is like saying we should move the childrens things off of shelves, because the adults have no use for them. Their are always many ways to suit both the needs of a child and the needs of an adult in a library, and still keep the children from what they shouldn't read. Most children are so amused by their own materials in the library they are not worried about the adult things. If everything a parent didn't want their child to see ws pulled from the selves, then there would be no use for the older people to come to the library. Their only custmors left would be the children, and that wouldn't be much business, because the parent's wouldn't want to stay because they wouldn't have anything to entertain them for the toe being. There are always ways to make both side of the situatation fair. I just don't believe removing material not suited for children is the right thing to do.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6392,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist by making him tiered, scared, thirsty and cause him to worry. The setting was a hot California day in June and the cyclist was riding through the heat and over the hills and difficult terrain. The cyclist describes the land when he says, “Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills.” He also says, “Over one long, crippling hill.” As the cyclist gets further and further, he has more doubt. Fear and thirst start to get to him. He says, “It didn’t really matter. I was going to die and the birds would pick me clean.” When the cyclist finds the bait shop he has almost lost all hope. On his way to the shop he says, “Slowly gaining elevation while losing hope.” At the end, the setting makes the cyclist regain his strength as he sees the bait shop, when he sees it, he says, “Then, as easily as rounding a bend, my troubles, thirst and fear were all behind me.” The features of the setting put the cyclist in an unsteady ride of fear, hope and confidence",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 279,1,"Dear Newspaper, I believe that advances in technology have many positive effects, such as computers. Computers are great for people of all ages. Computers teach hand-eye coordination and allow people to learn information from all over the world. Lastly, computers allow people to communicate through internet. Advances in technology improve society and the over all way of life around the globe. Advances in technology are amazing. Computers show these advances greatly. With the simple use of a computer, one can learn great hand-eye coordination skills. Typing skills are a great example. Typing skills are needed by almost everyone in the world. Without computers, no one would have these skills. A young child can go on the computer, play a game, and learn basic typing and hand-eye coordination skills to jump start their coordination skills for the rest of their life. Advances in technology are great. These advances in computers can also allow people to learn worldwide information. Many times in school, students are asked to do a report on a different country. It would be very hard to do that report without a computer. The student would need to go through all different books to find specific information needed. With the internet, that project can get done a lot faster just by typing whatever you need to know. How about that family vacation you've always wanted to go on? Need an idea of where to go? Use the internet! All you need to do is type in vacation spots and click enter. Instantly, you will have hundreds of choices right in front of you. This makes life a lot simpler. Do you remember the last time your mom or dad went on a business trip and you couldn't talk to the because they were busy? there is a fix to this with internet. You can communicate with them through @CAPS1, @CAPS2 or both. Just hookup your @CAPS2 to the computer and instantly say good @TIME1, or hows it going. If you have a friend that you can instant message them. It is so easy that it will seem like you are standing right next to them on a matter of seconds. In conclusion, computers and advances in technology are great and can benefit everyone in the world computers tech hand-eye coordination, allow one to learn information from around the world, and allow communication through internet happen instantly. Writers and editors of the newspaper, please agree with me on this topic. Advances in technology can only add posotive effects to the way of life. Support advances in today's technology to help improve life for those of.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6755,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist greatly. There were hills and rocks, snakes and no buildings or people. The hills and rocks would make it much harder to to stay strong and be able to keep riding. The abandoned building and there being no people, could affect him emotionally. It would make him loose hope and the determination to keep going to find destination. He did not think he would get that after seeing a deserted town. After all, he did say, “It didn’t really matter. I was going to die … “(Kurmaskie).",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 840,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, I agree that computers do have a positive effect on people. I agree, because being on the computer teaches you hand-eye coordination, helps people learn about faraway places and people, and allows people to talk to other people. By being on the computer it helps teach people hand-eye coordination. So the computer help with hand- eye coordination by using the mouse and keyboard. For example, when you use a computer you dont need to look at your hands while you use the mouse. That helps with hand-eye coordination, because you can see where your hand is without looking. Another example is the keyboard, because while learning where all the keys are you memorize them. Then soon you can type with without looking. The computer also helps you to learn. When you go on the computer the thing people go on is the internet. On the internet people can find information about faraway places or people. So, because the computer has different links and websites, it helps kids and adults everywhere to get information fast. Without the computer everyone would have to go to a library, but what if they didnt have the right information? Then you would need to trace around everywhere to find a book. Thats why a computer is handy. Also, the computer allows people to stay in touch with others farther away. One example of this is that there are chat rooms or groups people can join. So, if a relative or friend is farther away from a more or if they are down the street, with chat rooms it makes talking easier. Also, by these chat rooms and groups it makes a lot of people happy knowing that they can still talk with an old friend or relative instead of loosing them from never seeing or talking to them. That is just another example why the computer has a positive effect. So, with the examples of the computer helping teach hand-eye coordination, makes obtaining information easier and of the many reasons and examples of the computer having a positive effect.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15983,6,"Based on ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the builders of the Empire State Building faced multiple obstacles in their attempts to allow dirigibles to anchor at the top of the building. A dirigible moored at the top of the building held by a single cable tether adds stress to the buildings frame, the architects needed to find a way to transmit the stress of the wind pressure and dirigibles load to the @ORGANIZATION1 foundation. Safety had played a major role in the fate of the mooring mast. Outside the United States most dirigibles used hydrogen rather than helium, hydrogen is highly flammable. If a dirigible was to catch fire above a densely populated area there would be disaster. The greatest obstacle to the use of the mooring mast was nature. Above the Empire State Building the wind was constantly shifting due to violent air currents, even if a dirigible was tethered to the mooring mast the back of the shape would still be unstable to land.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7682,3,"There are many features of the setting that affected the cyclist in ""Do not exceed the posted speed limit,"" The time of year affected the cyclist because it’s mid June, @CAPS1 the region affected the cyclist because mid June in arizona is extremely hot and try. If it was in a more northern state in @DATE1 or I, ll it wouldn’t be as bad and you world not have the dance of a heat struggles. @CAPS1 when the terrain changed from flat to hills this affected him because it made it harder for him the to ride. These are some features of the settings that affected the cyclist in ""Do not exceed the posted speed limit.""",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7488,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist when he was thirsty. “A sand blasted picture of a young boy pouring a refreshing glass of juice in his mouth could be seen.” This proves that the rider was thirsty because in the paragraph before this talks about him having a last burst of energy going down a hill. And he was also sweating a lot. And also wiping sweat from his eyes. ,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9757,4,The author concludes the story of the end because I think the author concludes the end of the story because he wants to kind of say I will be ready next year to sprout again he will be ready to test him to not cry and break down when he sees the plant to think of childhood memories he will be ready o,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6169,3,"The features of the setting in the essay “Do not exceed the posted speed limit” affected the cyclist in a negative way. The more and more he rode, he thought more negatively and had alot of doubt. The cyclist was not very confident, he thought he wouldn’t make it. For example, when the cyclist notices nothing in sight, his tone changes. “There was no one in sight, not a building, car, or structure of any kind. I began breaking the ride down into distances I could see on the horizon telling myself that if I could make it that far , I’d be fine”. He seemed unsure and a little nervous. As the journey continued, the cyclist loses hope it seems. “It didn’t really matter. I was going to die and the birds would pick me clean leaving only some expensive outdoor gear and a diary” He does not see himself finishing this journey the more and more he rides in the middle of nowhere with nothing to be seen except “Rough Road Ahead” signs. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 461,1,"Dear The Local Newspaper, I do @CAPS1 computers effect people. But in many different ways. Also, depending on how long you are on the computer for. In my opinion @CAPS1 computers are good, for many reasons. I will tell you some of the reasons why I @CAPS1 this. Hopefully, after you read this you'll @CAPS1 about it more. One reason computers are good, is the communication. @CAPS2 are many different web sites to go on and talk to friends and family. If you had a family member far away, this could be a good way to talk to them. This also is a way to see your friends with the latest technology you can videchat. Videochat is a way to see and hear your friends by a little camera. It is a very good way to keep intouch with people you know. Another reason is that you can get a lot of information from the computer @CAPS2 are so many websites that provide answers to all your questions. Websites like @ORGANIZATION1 and @ORGANIZATION2 recommend other sites to go resaerch. You can learn a lot from computers. The information provided on the computer can really teach everyone something. Lastly, a computer can help you with many things. Such as online classes, matchmakeing, jobs, and so much more. You can find things to do, by just typing it into the computer. The economy is very bad, but you can look for jobs. Then once they find one your interested in they'll tell you. It's a very good and helpful way for you, and it's so simple. Computers are an amazing, and new technology. They keep coming up with more and more. So why not use it? It can teach you something and help you. Also, to stay in touch with family and friends. Don't take it for advantage, but use it well. It's only a click of a button. I hope I made you all realize what a computer is really @CAPS2 for. Maybe, even changed your minds or gave you a different way of thinking about computers.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16625,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building were faced with many obstacles. Allowing dirigibles to dock on the mast would be too complex, which the builders did not realize at first. The most complex obstacle was how the builders were going to securely tie the blimp down without it not only spinning around, but from ripping the building out of its foundation. The constructors also had to worry about if it was safe or not and if it was permitted. Another major obstacle was that not only were the dirigibles too low to the ground to dock, but they were mostly made up of hydrogen instead of helium, which was very flammable. After all the hard work to be successful. Al Smith and his peers had to look out for the best interests of the people of New York.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12582,5,"There are many moods that the author creates in the story, ""Narciso Rodriguez"", from Home: The Blueprints of our lives. Some moods it creats are sad, brave, and thankfull. The author creats a sad mood in many ways. One way he creats a sad mood in the article is in paragraph @NUM1, he talks about how imigrants leave their families, friends and carrer, just to come to @LOCATION1 to do good and to lead your children in a good place. In paragraph @NUM2, he also says he will always be greatful to his @CAPS1. Leaving your freinds and families behind is a brave action.He also creates a sad mood when he says that all imigrants come selflessly to this country to give their children a better life. The author is showing that he knows how immigrants come to @LOCATION1. He also creates a sad mood by never talking about the good things.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9032,4,"The author concludes the story with thise paragraph so that we buy his comming book, or so that we get more exited.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15018,6,"It was unrealistic and also unsafe of engineers to think that they could have dirigibles dock on the building. One major problem with the idea that the dirigible would add stress to the building's frame. Also the weight of the dirigible and the wind pressure would cause a problem for the foundation. Another thing, dirigibles were made up of hydrogen which is highly flammable, and if one of the exploded it would have been a disaster for downtown New York. This is why the idea is neither practical or safe.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9085,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph in order to develop the theme and to project what the main character will do after she plants the hibiscus, I believe that the theme of this story is adjusting to changes in life and the author builds upon this theme in the final paragraph. In the ending paragraph, the author writes, “when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and the hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” The author demonstrates how Saeng learns to adjust when things change in her life. In this instance, Saeng fails her driver’s test and to deal with this setback, she buys a hibiscus to remind her of her homeland. The hibiscus symbolizes a new start test once the geese ??? (THIS @CAPS1 IS @CAPS2)",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 11881,5,"The mood in this memoir is heartwarming.This memoir is heartwarming because it's about her parents came from Cuba to the @CAPS1. S. It's nice how the blonde-brick house was better but still the same as the house their parents lived in. The Cuban music filled the air of the house like it was a house in Cuba. A house isn't a house untill you call it a home. That family has made that their home forever. Even though their family can't come down till 1970 they too will have a place to call home like Narciso Rodriguez did. Like he said in the memoir ""I will never forget how my parents turn this simple house into a home"".",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4361,2,"Are offensive materials offensive to everybody? Does everyone think the same material is offensive? Who is to say what is or is not offensive? Offensive material can be anything someone wants to think of. Children are going to see this material anyways, weither we take it away of not. Offensive material, such as cursing or rage, is a form of expression and of releaving stress. Such things can also show anger, hate, and depression. Children will see and hear offensive things anyways. Even as it is now, parents try to hid such things from their children. this makes them curious. They will do anything to understand it. Offensive things are part of everyday life. The more you hid it, the more children will seek it out. In movies, books, and music, this is a form of expression. it releaves stress, rage, and shows this so that @CAPS1 is a true picture of what is going on. People cannot imagion someone truly angery in a book when it says, '... and she says with grief and anger, 'You are wrong! You don't know what you have done!'...' You cannot show foreshadowing, or show the anger. You cannot see how a character truly feels. For example, '... and she says with grief and anger, 'You are wrong! You will parish! You don't know what you have done! Death will come!'...' @CAPS1, you have an idea of how the author will play out the story and how the character really feels. You can see the foreshadowing. The author could be saying that a good man has died, who was going to stop evil, or an evil man died, and people will revenge him. In such ways, this can show anger. Some people would find the example offensive or out of line. Cursing to me is not offensive. But, they show how the character, writer, or singer feels when it was written without it having to state it. Offensive material can also grief. This shows that someone is hurt by what has happened, amplifying the story. allowing the reader, watcher, or listener to expect more and want more. So the reader, watcher or listener would wait for more, and by the music, book, or movie. It puts intrest into the material. Only certain people can agree on something offensive. Such as family, friends, or a group of close people. But, it applies foreshadowing, intrest, anger, grief, and sometimes, passion. Your children will see it if they truly want to. So, why get rid of something that they will see anyways? Something that intersts them and makes them want to read more, watch or make movies, or listen to or make music. Why would something that, yes, is offensive to some, but would grab promote and keep some within it",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3312,2,"'@CAPS1', the woman shreaked as she had just received a fierce, sharp,and quick stab in the back by her abusive husband. This is the kind of violence children read about all around the @CAPS2. To think all of the innapropriate stuff children see around the @CAPS2 in television, the internet, and even what classmates are talking about isn't enough, well you are wrong. Some of the things you read and hear about in books are totally unacceptable. This is why books, and magazines need to be censored in libraries all around the @CAPS2. In our community library in @LOCATION1, @LOCATION2 we have magazines, in which case these magazines are very graphic. Kid's will read these over any learning or interesting book. Many kid's draw disrespectful things in them. As to think that wasn't ignorant enough they also rip them in half and do many other dismantling things to them. One of the reasons why I feel that the @CAPS2 has so much trouble with criminal people is kids feel these days that they are allowed to draw in books and rip them in half even though they aren't their property. Which allowes them to think they can do whatever they want. Kids read about crazy things that aren't necessaarily teaching you anything. Unless that is you want to learn about having a zombi apocalypse and zombies take over the @CAPS2. To have that in a school public library what is that teaching kid's? Absolutely nothing, but to teach them to take them home and show there little brother or sister a cuss word in the book is teaching them bad things. These are all some valid points as to censor or take out some of the leisurely reading books in the libraries, or to possibly censor some of the cussing. The last point I will be touching on this discussion is the loss of money that some of the schools have due to damaged books and stolen property. Also to mention all of the dirty pictures kid's draw in the magazines and books. Schools lose a great deal of money just to touch that point. They would save a much needed amount of money if they didn't let those books leave the classroom or school library. Kid's wouldn't be able to draw in them or steal them or even damage them and all the money they could save and put it towards something learn fulfilling. Well behaved children all around the @CAPS2 is what you can look forward to if you censor books and magazines all around the @CAPS2 in libraries. If you dont let them be taken out of the library how could kids possibly damage or steal or even draw in them. By not allowing kid's do do whatever they want and showing some authority lets kid's around the @CAPS2 know they need to show some respect. With all the money libraries and schools save they can put it towards something learn fulfilling. If you could please take the information i have given you and think about it, it would be greatly appreciated",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 932,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 and kids of any age at this society, are way to focused on the latest technology. One piece of equptment that is affecting peoples lives, is the computer. We need to get rid of this habbit and learn to do different activites! People are spending way to much time on computers and less time enjoying nature excersing, and need to interact with friends and family more take the time to agree with me as I confront you on how the computer is taking over our lives! Is time flying you by? Are you overwhelmed, at how life passes you so quickley? Well, if you answered yes, stop the computer madness and head on outside! Your no enjoying nature! Nature is as beautiful as a gorgeous scene of @CAPS3 @CAPS4 love oceans with pink sand. Who would want to miss this? @PERCENT1 of @CAPS2 complain that they rarely enjoy what life has to take on the outside of your house. Just think you won't be able to see the stupendous, the seasons changing, withought going outdoors. ""I want my @CAPS6, to experience the wide variety of nature as she grows old."" @CAPS5 of her daughter. Well, @MONTH1 I add, little @CAPS6 is not going to get much nature out of her, if she does not get her eyes unglued to the comuter screen! Yes, comuters, are very brilliant, and have lots to do, but if you want to be missing out on the new trees being discovered every day, be my guest! @PERCENT2 of all the population in the @LOCATION2 is overweight due to technology brought into our world. The greatest impart is the computer! high-paid physicians try and teach their parents at a young age, to go out and play sports - while excersing at the same time and nor to stay home and play videogames. Now you tell me, would you rather get a good healthy excersise, and have all the energy you need or would you like to slowy add on to your and gain issues as you the internet? I remember @DATE1, I grabred my nike hightops, and my pink ipod I started jogging at a slow while listening to my favorite song. Naturally by I felt amazing when my was complete going each day is as healthy as eating a bannana, @NUM1 apples, and cheese eery morning their healthy! ""@CAPS7 since technology has been a part of my life, my two daughters have not visited their grand parents in over @NUM1 years! This needs to step!"" @CAPS8 @PERSON1 to the press. Yes, comuters have ""online-talking"" devices such as @CAPS9, but if you are never going to spend quality time with family, this is a bad habbit. On @DATE3, @DATE2, my brother and I, were too busy on the computer, we missed a birthday party the family we are addicted to this device, and need to spend time with our loved ones. @PERCENT3 of all therapy computers have @CAPS2 into depresion and have been with their plains, due to the high amount of to do on this device and less time bonding with members of your Who would rather play on a old, gray, computer when you can have fun talking about you day and the game life with your family? @CAPS10's now a never! What will you choose? Do you agree that computers take over lives? If you try and prove me wrong just remember, nature is a big and many people are missing out on the advantage technology is taking over peoples excersing habbits, and many families are less bonding @CAPS10's up to you keep the population of @LOCATION1 in good hands!",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 508,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 since electricity was invented technology has developed at a rapid rate. Computers have gone from the size of a room to twelve inch flat screen monitors. In our modern day society computers are crucial tools that help organize files, do reasearch, and pleasurable online networking. Computers teach hand eye coordination, give people the ability to learn about far away places, and allow people to socialize online. Without computers wouldn't life be difficult? While routinely doing our everyday computer tasks seldom do we realize that we are writing which frequently over works nerves in the hand causing tendonitis or arthritis; typing on computers is quicker and less harmful to the hands. ""Hand eye coordination helps improve balance and athleticisniry."" said @PERSON1 the chief othopedic sergeon of @ORGANIZATION1. Some people beg to differ and believe spending not less time on the computer can contribute to lack of physical activity. There are several portible computer devices that can be brought outside to use while walking like a @CAPS3. Every since I was, ten years old I dreamed of going to @LOCATION1. Although I couldn't afford a plane ticket to @LOCATION1, I was able to use the internet to take virtual tours of the vibrant landscapes and ancient historic venues throughout the country. With the help of internet I was able to see a far away place and experience the country as if I was there. @PERSON2, the creator of an online webcom called @ORGANIZATION2. @PERSON2 created this computer system in order to allow people to connect all over the world by giving them the opportunity to see and speak to anyone they chosse to. I frequently use this program to talk to my sister at college. Through this program we can't socialize with as if she's at home and learn about her college experience.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 697,1,"Fairfield @CAPS1 @CAPS2 computers have a bad effect on people? Many people say ""yes"" and many say ""no."" @CAPS3 a matter of fact, computers @CAPS2 have a bad effect. People are very easily distracted on computers, it wastes time, and it causes stress. Many kids who @CAPS2 there homework on computers are very easily distracted. With computers come the internet, and with the internet comes games and social networking sites. Many kids would rather chat on facebook with a friend than @CAPS2 homework using an online book... including me. When I get home, I start using the online text book for my math class. But when I wait for it to load I get bored and go on online game website. After that I get too distracted on this addicting game called ""@CAPS6 @CAPS7 @NUM1."" And @NUM2 hours of playing online games I realized I have wasted a lot of time. I realized I have been wasting a lot of my math homework time lately with those online distracting game. And @PERCENT1 of my grade in math is homework I've gone from a @CAPS4 to a @CAPS5+. And why waste time on the computer. Outdoors are just @CAPS3 fun @CAPS3 ""@CAPS6 @CAPS7 @NUM1."" I'd rather be playing football with my friends than that dumb game. My parents have also realized that I've been wasting so much time on the computer they've blocked the internet. But distracting games that waste time also cause stress, which could be fatal. Imagine being in the hospital because of playing on the computer. Once while I was watching the @ORGANIZATION1, a man said @NUM4 people died because of playing on the computer for over @NUM2 days with little food or water. My parents also notice that me and my brother are grumpy after playing on the computer for so long. And I've been stressed lately. Overall, computers have a bad effect on people. Distracting games are a waste of time and cause stress. Hopefully people understand this message and you shouldn't play on computers for too long.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6546,3,"In the story, “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit,” the author tells a story about when he took advice from “old folks” and became lost. The setting greatly affected him and his journey, for example “tumbleweeds crossed my path, and a ridiculously large snake…” and a “crippling hill” these quotes explain that the setting was quite scary.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 903,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, I believe that people should stay with computers. I have three reasons for this issue and they are @CAPS1, @CAPS2 and @CAPS3. I think these reasons woul'd be a good for this issue because every human being can do these three this on a computer. One of the reasons why I think people should stay to computers is because they can learn. People can learn by using computers because if a child is in something like animals. They can go on the internet and look up what they need to find children can also learn on the computer by putting their jump stat first grade give in the drive. children can learn like this. My second reason why people should use stay to computers us @CAPS2. I think @CAPS2 because you can talk to your friends about. They can also talk about if they want to go some fun. For example same good exercise. Another reason why I think @CAPS2 is if your friend is explaining something to you, that your. I also think @CAPS2 can be had for other to a and. The last reason why I believe people should stick to computer is because people can discover different things on there these things can be had and some can be good. For example a good thing that I can discover is that if there is something wrong with my computer and I figure out how to fix this that would be good. And I will know about computers and man what to do. A bad thing about @CAPS3 the computer I can do is bringing up a virus. That know matter what I do I can't make it go away and the computer ends up being broken. Conclusion, Local newspaper this is why I believe that we should keep our computers. Because many people even young children can learn and they will end up remembering the things that they learn.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16332,6,"In the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by @ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS1 faced @CAPS2 of problems. One problem they had was the ""dirigible's load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted All the way to the Buildings foundation"" (@CAPS3. @NUM1). The @CAPS1 Had to modify and strengthen the building to Accommodate the new situation. The dirigible was @CAPS8 big that they could not even ancker the Back of it to the roof. The @CAPS1 Had A @CAPS6 time trying to figure out How the dirigibles would land Because the wind was @CAPS7 @CAPS8 @CAPS6 the pilot could not even controll the dirigible. The @CAPS1 Had to put another Sixty thousand Dollars into it because of the modifications. Al Smith was the one who thought of this Idea. then He realized it wouldn't work. @CAPS8 in the the @CAPS1 finish constructing it But the Dirigibles could not dock there.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 84,1,I think computers help people out because you can learn about at here thing like @CAPS1 you want a job you can look it up in the computers. Also @CAPS1 you have a problem they will help you out. @CAPS1 you what to go some where you could go and be on the computer and look how it is and @CAPS1 you like it you could go @CAPS1 not look some where else you what to go. I think it a great thing @CAPS1 you look for people in the computer because you could talk to them and see them it realy cool. You can look for coltures in your computer what you want to learn. Like @CAPS1 you have a favert person you what to know about you can look it up in the computer and she videos or you can look up different sites it really cool. There games you can play online there alot of game and fun game learning games. Math game science game different games you what. Also you can us othere people that are planing the game game as you. It realy cool. I think the computer isn't bad for people computer help them a lot.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6197,3,"In the story, “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” by Joe Kurmaskie the setting affects the cyclist. One setting that affected him was the first setting. I this setting he used up his water and it was hot. this affected the cyclist because he was starting to feel dehydrated and thought he was going to die. The text shoud this when it said “I could drop from heat stroke”, later when the cyclist came to an abandoned juice factory he thought about how thirsty he was. This affected him because usually when you think about thirst you get thirsty er. This also made him dis apointed. The finale setting affected him because he had finally got water and wasn’t thirsty. That is how the setting affected the cyclist.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4624,2,"Censorship in libraries is a very controversial topic that has conflicting views. One side, in favor of censorship, believes that some literary material contained within a library could be offensive to some, and that it should be removed or censored. The other side, in favor of free speech, believes that all literary material in a library should be kept, whether it is seen as offensive or not. Of these two sides of such a controversial issue, it is evident that censorship should not be instilled within libraries, because of the right to free speech, the true meanings and expressions must be upheld, and it would take the oppurtunity to read such a work truly from an interested reader. The first reason why the censorship of literary materials within a library is an unjust endeavor is because of the right to free speech. This right belongs to all citizens of @LOCATION1, and shouldn't be taken away because one person @MONTH1 think something is offensive. I have observed that many people will often attempt to steal this right from people, and this instillation of censorship will do just that to the authors. This is the first reason why the censorship of literary materials within a library is an unjust endeavor. The next reason why the censorship of literary materials within a library is an unjust endeavor is because this censorship @MONTH1 dull down the true meanings and expressive themes that literary works are meant to express. An example of a story that would suffer from censorship is the famous 'The @CAPS1 of @ORGANIZATION1.' Such a novel, though containing offensive language at times, would not read the same if such language was omitted and removed. Instead, @PERSON1's expressions within the story would be dulled down immensely and be nearly silenced. This is the next reason why the censorship of literary materials within a library is an unjust endeavor. The last reason why the censorship of literary materials within a library is an unjust endeavor is because it removes the availability of the book from an interested reader. Many times I have seen people blatantly have a tantrum over an offensive literary work. I have been offended by things that I have read before, and instead of demanding its removal and crying for a less offensive substitute, I simply either stopped reading the work or read through it anyways. A person must know that the use of offensive language within literary works rarely is intended to attack the reader, but rather to strongly get a point across. If a person finds the material too offensive to read, then they should simply stop and find a more suitable work. By remaining calm and passive about these things, it keeps the literary work on the shelves in its true form for other people who wish to read it.This is the last reason why the censorship of literary materials within a library is an unjust endeavor. It is clearly evident that the removal or censorship of literary works in a library is a bad idea as a whole. The decision to censor literary works would be bad because it would strip the author's right to free speech, it would dull down the author's true meanings and expressions, and it would remove the oppurtunity to read such a work from an interested person. The removal or censorship of literary works would be a terrible decision that all would regret in the years to come. This is why the removal or censorship of literary works in a library is an unjust endeavor.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1750,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, People all around the globe are using computers! Some people think this is a bad idea but I disagree. I believe that computers do have a positive effect on a persons life style. Computers help people stay in touch, computers are only getting better and they help kids in many ways. Computers definitly help people keep in touch. There is @CAPS1, myspace, twitter, facebook, email, and even video chat. For example, my cousin is in @LOCATION1 a sometimes we will go on the computer and talk to on video chat. Without this, we would have no communication with him. Many people around the world use computers to communicate. This is how people use computers to stay in touch. Also, computers are amazing now and they're only going to get better. If computers are so great now, just imagine what they will be like in @NUM1 or @NUM2 years. Plus, the more people buy and use computers the more company are going to want to invent new ones. As you can see computers are only going to get better. The last reason I would like to share with you today is that computers help kids tromendously. On average, about @PERCENT1 of kid in the @CAPS2.S use a computer every day. Kids use it to talk to friends, play games, do homework and to do many other things as well. Also, kids and adults just use computers if they need to know how to do something or even find places in their town. This is how kids are helped out by computers. As you can clearly see, computers are used all around the world for many different reasons. They help to stay in touch, they're only going to improve, and the help kids. Everyone is using computers, shouldn't you?",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6331,3,"The features of california and the fact that the cyclist was neave Yosemite made the terrain rugged and dangerous to the cyclist california has a very hot climate, and is neove a desert, so the need for water for the cyclist was much greater man if the had been cyclist in @LOCATION1. In the story, the cyclist had to travel through desert-like conditions with a limited water supply. The cyclist even mentioned in the story how many hours into the ride the land changed to “ short, rolling hills,” which would have made it harder to pedal, and making him work harder, in the story, he also mention how the sun was beating down on him, and that would alos serve as a factor thout helped deplete his hydration. Through all of the problem the cyclist faced nowever, he managed to stay determined, when other people faced with his problems might not have been able to make it through. Also, in the story you @MONTH1 notices that in the different stages of his struggle, the authours tone ananger from confidient , to unsure, to desser",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 14914,6,"Al Smith's dream of having airships dock atop the Empire @CAPS1 Building Was cut short by bitter reality. The idea failed parially due to the impracticality of docking a @DATE2 foot balloon filled with flamable gas to a city building. The mere size of this glimpse was astounding and this created many problems. Firstly The wind atop a skyscrapper is great and inconsitent. It is extremely difficult to dock to a building a seen when the Los Angeles tried to dock in @DATE1. The balloon was unable to dock due to potential damage it could cause to itself and the surrounding city. The blimps were also kept afloat by Hydrogen which due to its chemical nature is extremly flamable. Blimps had exploded in the past such as the Hindenburg. Engineers knew that if a similar accident occurred at the Empire state Building, substantial damage would have been done to the city and building itself. These impracticalities combined with the use of airplanes rather than blimps gaurenteed no blimps would ever be docked to the Empire State Building.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6895,3,"In the story the setting plays a big role in effecting the cyclist. The terrain was very hard at times such a big hills and windy torns. Also, there was no one around. no houses, buildings or people which made him fell alone and life he was going to die. The author describes the terrain in one part of the story “Over onelong, crippling hill a building came into view! This quote shows how the hills in the seting were very big and hard to get over. It also shows the significance of a single building and how excited he was to see it. In the story the author described many features from the setting which all greatly effected the cyclist.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7138,3,"The setting affected the cyclist because the condition of his surrounding it was hot so he got dehydrated more and needed more water. There were a lot of hills so he had to pedal harder and use more energy to get up the hills. There were no cars, building, smog, just nature. It was peaceful and relaxful ride on the bike thats the setting affects the cyclist.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6685,3,"The setting affected the cyclist because it was very hot and he didn’t have any more water also, there aren’t any towns that had good water in them, until he eventually arrived at this fishing comp. Due to his lack of water, he became dehydrated and really weak. “With what I believed was my last burst of energy, I maneuvered down the hill,” this quote shows that he was beginning to become dehydrated and losing his energy.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12237,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is a verry happy tone. The reasons that its a happy tone is because @CAPS1 tells about her Childhood hapily by talking about the unity of his invirorment and the happiiness, cuban food, and Cuban music that filled his home and that still fills his home today because he injoyes it so much.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4164,2,I go to the libbrary every @DATE1 of every week. Although I don't really read that much. I usualy get movies or music. If I do get a book to read its usualy a magazine or something for school. I don't think that books should be removed. If you don't read them it doesent mean that other people don't. If you don't like the book just ignore it and go on its simple as that. For instens if I found a book about @CAPS1 or about the @CAPS2 fathe I would not read it for my self but I would not take it down off of the shelf. Other people might want to read it. It's there choice to read it not mine. It's like the radio know. The radio plays songs and cuts out the curis words. I don't think that they should do that because it messies up the songs lyrics and it is going aginst the artists words. The artist sings the song but people chang his or her words. To me I don't think thats right. It's also like telivtion now. You see the movie in theaters or on @CAPS3 and they have bad language or bad seens in them. When you watch that same movie on telivtion they take out about @NUM1 minuts of the movie because of th bad seen or they cut out the languge. To me I think every thing should stay. I think if you don't want your kids to see it just block it but don't cut out parts from the movie it's not fair to the other people. If people don't like some music then just swich the radio station to another area on the radio. Theres no need to take the words out. Kids are going to pick the words up in school or off the streets any way. I also think seence we are having to pay so much taxes I think we should get the privilage to come home and watch movies on telivtion and relax,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9449,4,"I believe that the author ends because the author is showing that Saeng is determined to pass the test. ""She paused as she noticed the tearstains on her daughter's cheeks and her puffy eyes. ""(Ho) This quote shows that passing the test meant a lot to Saeng. She was crying because she couldn't help but buy the plant and fail the test. She didn't want to fail and showed her sadness by crying.” then I will take the test again.” (Ho) This quote shows that even though she failed, she is determined to pass the test and succeed. Failing hurt her greatly. so she can't wait to do it again and pass because she is determing to succeed. This is all important because Saeng shows that determination is the key to success and she is determined.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10255,4,It shows the importance of the Hibiscus to Saeng and her dedication to the flower. It is also stating that she will wait for next spring to admire the flower again.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3871,2,"Are there universally evil books that no one should read? Are good and bad no longer matters of opinion for the readers themselves? The answer is no. Censorship is a terrible practice masquerading as a boon. The right to read certain books should not be left to a conservative few, because everyone has their own opinion about everything. There is always something we can potentially learn from books, and it's never right to take that away. Freedom of speech should certainly come into play here as well, allowing the authors' words to be heard without interference from those who would dictate what we read. There is a reason libraries have many sections. They have to cater to the individual tastes of the masses, without regard to what other people find offensive. If one was to go through the library and burn every book they did not like, there would be scarcely anything left. Send in another person with different tastes, and then you have a completely empty library. It is far better to leave all the books alone so that everyone can find something to enjoy reading. Basically, there are bound to be people who have similar opinions to the author of just about anything, so allow the authors to share those opinions. Then we have the knowledge portion of the issue. Offensive material to one person might be what another person wants or needs to read, whether for recreation or class. There is much to be learned in the way of psychology and human nature from almost any writing. Perhaps a restricted section would be in order if the problem would involve corruption of innocent minds, but a full censor would never be necessary. Finally, there is an amendment in the @CAPS1 of @CAPS2 for preventing censorship. It is unconstitutional to restrict any form of expressive speech, whether it be books, movies, music, or magazines. And what is more restrictive to an author than to have their books banned? The greatest difference between our country and a totalitarian government is the simple freedom allowed in the @LOCATION1. If we start restricting that freedom, what are we then? In short, censorship is a harmful practice that should never be used. People all have their own opinions, all media can be learned from, and our freedom should not be restricted. The practice of censorship is what should truly be banned from the shelves.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 965,1,"Dear newspaper, @CAPS1 you want to learn good hand-eye coordination? @CAPS1 you want to have the ability to learn about far away places? And @CAPS1 you want to talk online with other people? If you said @CAPS3 to all of these questions then using a computer is the way to go! While using a computer you can @CAPS1 many things. You can look up a good healty recipe for your family or find a good relaxing place to @CAPS1 your daliy yoga. Although some people say that using a computer cuts down your time for exercising and enjoying nature, but it really doesn't. A recent poll was talking at the planet fitness in newington @CAPS2 and it showed that @PERCENT1 of the exercising people discovered planet fitness by the internet. @PERSON1 nature of the department of health and wellness said ""@PERCENT2 of my customers take online corses of exercising at home so that they don't have to be in public."" @CAPS3 i know it seems lazy to not go to a gym but, some people are terrified about what others think at them, so its I mean who doesn't want to exerise in the warning conforts of your own home and not have to go to a sweaty old gym? All right-minded people would stay at home and exersie from thier computer and not have to go to a sweaty and smelly gym. So its never. @CAPS1 you go to a sweaty old gym, or @CAPS1 you stay at your beautiful clean have with the inernet? Image, as soon as you get up in the well rested, instead of going to a yuchy gym you can stay home and enjoy a relaxing walk out in the comfort of your own home. Certently you care about your nose and want to be able to smell a nice warn apple one. But if you dont thats fine too. So don't go to a gym, stay at home and enjoy your day with your internet!!! I say stay at name and love your internet!!!",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 11929,5,"Home and family is the @CAPS1 one thing all of us love. The mood the author created was heartwarming and appreciation, because he explains how comftable his home is with everyone, together having a good time. Not only Just being together but being together: ""Growing up in this enviroment instilled in him a great sense that ""familly"" nothing to do with being a Blood relative.""Narciso Rodriguez show his appreciation for his parents he loved so much because they had to make an important change to give him a better life wiched he deseverd. They had made this change ""even though it meant leaving behind their families."" Such bravery they had.The author left us knowing his appreciation for his ""home"" with being grateful for his parents and his hispanic heritage.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6469,3,In the story the cyclist is afected by setting because in the @NUM1 paragraph it talks about him seeing the old water pump and how he was trying to get water out. At the end of the story he gets angry when he sees the old welches juice factory because he relizes that the old men didn’t know what they were talking about. Also at the end he is realived when he finds Gary and @ORGANIZATION1 because there is water there. ,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16212,6,"Allowing dirigibles to dock at the Empire State Building would have been completely different from anything before, but never continued because of obstacles. The builders faced issues such as safety issues, harnessing nature, and the law itself. The dirigibles presented safety issues including fire, which occurred and builders ""realized how much worse that accident could have been"" (¶ @NUM1) Another safety issue was keeping the blimps stabilized, which would have needed free hanging weights over the city. Yet another obstacle was the power of nature; it would have been nearly impossible to keep the dirigible in place. Because of the wind ""the back of the ship would swivel around... the mooring mast"" (¶ @NUM2). The new idea was a good one but the law also was against it, because of how low the blimp would be. As stated, ""This law would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building..."" (¶ @NUM3). The masting moor of the Empire State Building caused too many obstacles for the project to be completed. Although it would have opened new doors for means of travel there were too many safety violation for it to be worth while.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3822,2,"Libraries are often known for protecting our children and keeping an education atmosphere, however, you would be suprised the content our children @MONTH1 find in such a seemingly friendly place. With a simple library card, children could check out a boat-load of information that could be teaching them lessons you would not want them to learn. But nobody can be looking over thier child's shoulders all the time. The answer to this problem is strict censorship. Books are big, powerful, and a vast amount of information. Even though most parents believe publishing companies would intend on not letting children reading books that can be easily misunderstood, the truth is it's up to the library wether or not a book can be checked out. Most of the time, only adults can understand what the charaters in a book are going through. This @MONTH1 be because of the adult's extensively more experiences throughout their own life. Another comon belief is that seperating a library for the younger and older would solve this problem. The fact is, even if an adult checks a type of media from the older selection, this does not stop the younger child from witnessing or reading something as simple as a video or magazine at home. The only solution is to stop these materials from entering libraries and censoring the offensive, easily misunderstood media before it gets into the wrong hands. Libraries are great for research or school projects, but books and magazines that are inapropriate should never end up in the place built for an education experience for your kids. Censorship has to be inforced to help keep and maintain our libraries educational atmospher and keeping our children safe from offensive material",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3082,2,"NEWSPAPER @CAPS1 today im going to tell you what I think on offensive materials in libraries.Offensive materials such as books,magazines,music,movies are found in libraries to some people.But to others they can think its perfectly ok to have in a public place.Thinking somethings offensive is just an opinion and every person has a different look on things. The first thing I have to say about this topic is that these items should not just be taken off the shelves and thrown away.Some people can find these items very educational and they might be able to relate to that book that other people would say is offensive.And if offensive materials are really bothering some people and the libraries are getting alot of complaints they should just make a section in the library just for the offensive books,movies,ect.So people wont have to look at those offensive materials.Another thing is that libraries are a public place and they should have a wide range of books,movies,ect.Because not every one likes the same thing.People have different intrests and outlooks on different things.So people should just except the things that they might not be into because other people might be really into that.And dont always just think about yourself look at the big picture. So there are some of my thoughts and feelings on what I think about offensive materials in libraries.And I hope that you can see my point that im trying to get across.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9310,4,"In the story, “Winter Hibiscus”, ends by, “when they come back, saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” The author concludes that story with that quote because the author sees spring as a new beginning. The author knows to work hard and needs to starts over. For example, some students fail the second semester and look at winter as a new start.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1051,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, @CAPS1 society should have computers because it teaches you things that a school or job will never teach you, and it allows you to be in contact with your friends and family that you don't see a lot. I would like for you to appreciate my concern on how @CAPS1 society should have computers. First, we should have computers because it teaches us things that we might not have been taught before. I say this because if you wanna know about the @LOCATION1 more and the school or job doesn't teach you as much as you wanna know, then all you have to do is look up on the internet and theres a chance you gonna find it. @NUM1 people would rather have computers to look up things instead of not knowing that much about something at all. Next, we should have computers for @CAPS1 society because we could contact people online that we heven't spoke to. My opinion is that if you haven't to a friend or family member in a while you can talk to them online. Also, if they don't have a phone or if they do but it's long distance and you can't talk to long distance on your phone, you can tlak to them on or email each other, etc. Sample say if your phone isn't working and the only thing that's working is your computer you to it in contact with somebody. All you gotta do is talk to them online. Would you rather talk on the phone or computer. In conclusion, @CAPS1 society should have computers because we could learn about things more and we could chat with people. I would like for you to aprreciate my concern on having computers in @CAPS1 society.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9197,4,The author might of concluded the story with that sentence to show that she still cares about the test and not mostly about a meisly plant thats gonna die anyways. Also because she needs to pass the test and the author is putting in a getall that in the end the girl is gonna pass and not have to re-take that test all over again. but also he/she tells that because he/she wants us to know that it aint all about other things that are expensive in life but that school is really more important than anything basically.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10484,4,"The author most likely ends the story with Saeng vowing to take the test again, because he wants to show Saeng’s determination. For example, when she tells her mother that she failed the test her mother knew that it was hard for Saeng. Since it was a silent moment, her mother realized that yelling at her about the plant wasn’t a good idea. Saeng is kindof comparing herself to the plant. she @MONTH1 have thought, if this plant can make it through the winter and still keep growing, than she can make it through the test. Therefore, that is most likely why the author ended the story the way he did.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3584,2,"TAKING THE @CAPS1 TO @CAPS2 Everyone will read a book in their lifetime at some point in their life. The author cannot filter through the entire book to remove offensive language, racial remarks, slurs, etc. One offensive to a person @MONTH1 not be offensive to another. I strongly disagree that books should be removed if they are found offensive to a specific group, person, or community. Most books are organized in categories by maturity and genre. The reader should know where he/she stands among these categories, so they will not be offended. Maturity comes with understanding. Books are sorted by genre. Most, to all, times the @CAPS2 takes from the genre. The era of when the book takes place is also a key factor. When @CAPS2 an author must take this into consideration. If the setting of the book was in @NUM1 A.D. the author would not want to use grammar from the present day. The reader should be prompted on what books they @MONTH1 read before doing so. From one reader to another, taking the @CAPS1 on what we read is the real solution. Maturity comes with understanding. If the reader is mature enough to understand the @CAPS2 then the book corresponds with the age of that child. This is why I strongly agree that books shouldn't be removed from shelves if they are found offensive to one person, group, or community",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13487,5,"After reading the selection ""Narciso Rodriguez"" by @PERSON1 I have decided the as a child @PERSON1 seemed to have a very fun life. Also the memoir seemed to have a good mood to it. One thing that made the mood good with all the talking about parties. I like parties and thinking about parties during @CAPS1 makes it a little less @CAPS2 racking. Another thing that sets a good mood is a talk about how Narciso's parents are always upbeat and ready for any thing. The final thing that makes the selection have a very good mood is how Narciso talks about all his family and friends. When I think of good memories of my family and friends it always brings a smile to my face. Overall this memoir made me feel good and brightened my day.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7045,3,"In this paragraph I will explain how the features of the setting affect the cyclist. The setting affect the cyclist in ways such as weather, road structure, & animals. All things that the cyclist could not controll. Therefor affecting the cyclist while he rides through.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10575,4,"The author includes this paragraph inorder to show an end to the story and to show that Saeng has not given up. Ho wanted to show how the plant and the geese represented the continueation of Saeng’s life in the United States. The geese will come back and the Hibiscus will bud and flower, and Saeng will retake and hopefoly pass her diving test. This paragraph is not just a colosing but a new beginging of life for geasse, a Winter Hibiscus, and Saeng.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 596,1,"Dear, @CAPS1 @CAPS2 I think people need to see the realatey from computer's and the real world, they're a lot of people spending to much time on the computer and not spending enough time with there familys or doing things that are really important. While your on the computer your not getting any exsercise your not getting stronger your just sitting down. Thats one of the ways people get fat because there not moveing around just sitting down. When your on the computer all day everyday your missing out on whats happening with your family you miss out on every thing that's going on. I think people need to relax on spending time on the computer and get some exsercise or call one of your cousins brothers or even your mon and find out what really up because they are the ones that really matter! But you really can't tell people how long there allowed to spend on the computer you can only give an opinon and hope they listen.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10593,4,They conclude the story with that because the winter is over and spring is here and it will be beautiful again,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6767,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist. First since he was in a desert, the heat of the desert greatly dehydrated him on his journey to the parts. Also, the bumpy roads and rolling hills slowed the bike down to 12 mph since it was to extreme for him to handle at high speeds. When he sees the fist building because he fist is relived but soon after he loses all his hope because it is desserted. Even the old men that living in the area have an affect on the cyclist because they give him out-dated directions that almost @CAPS1 him. Because of this, he will probably rest first an old man’s short tentS again. This is how the features of the setting affected the cyclist.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1346,1,"Dear local newspaper from my point of view, computers are good to society and to the people because they help you communicate with people in other places or with your family or friends or meet with people from other country and you can become frinds. They are also good because they help to develop cordination on your hand with your eye, and they are helpful because you can buy things online. First of all I think that people who know how to use a computer can communicate with their family in other county or meet new people who then become friends with you and you can even meet them after you know them very well. You can even talk with your family through the computers and you won't spend that much money on expensive international phone calls. Secondly the computers are helpful because they help you cordinate your hand and your eye. This helps you because if you are a kid you have a big project; You will be able to finish it on time. From your point of view you can actually se were I'm going because after you finish the project you can go play with your friends and family on the patio or backyard. The hand cordination can help you develop mentally sight. Thirdly using computers is good because it helps you buy things online, the computer can help you buy thing like a clothes, shoes, cars, house and, many others, anything you need you can buy it online. In conclusion I think people should think about using computers more often either to buy things, to meet people or to cordinate body parts don't you agree with me?",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15141,6,"The obsticles The empire state building were The baloons being made out of flammable material, The wind blowing The dirigible around",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4292,2,"There should be a certain age bookshelf that only certain aged people are aloud to look at. It's like the adult section at the library. Theres no reason why they should be removed off of the shelves. I would understand if the little kids could come see the books and movies and be offended by it or scared but thats why you would make a certain section just for older more mature people. It would just depend on what offends people and what would make them offended. Some things could or would be bad to have little kids see them, but just make sure they couldnt get in the reach of young kids or not matured people. The only way i would say remove them if it was really offensive such as racism and things like that. Censorship in libraries in my opinion is a good thing. Just because the fact of some people might not like the things that would be in a library or things that they have in the library. So I would have to say yes on cersorship in the library.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15818,6,"In the excerpt, some obstacles they faced were that the building was the tallest in the world at 1,250 ft. like it says in paragraph @NUM1. Another problem they encountered was the dirigibles were unsafe. The Hindenburg, an event where a helium filled dirigible had caught fire, occured during construction. What if one of their dirigibles caught fire over New York. The whole idea of dirigibles was thought of as dangerous. Finally, there were laws saying that no aircraft could be that close to the city. The whole idea of the ""future of travel"" was very unliked and impractical.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6038,3,"The features of the setting effects the cyclist by the way that the auther started talking and how he sound at the beginning of the story. When they both at the picture he looks like hes cecilla ssing and then ceoos. To the story and goo continue ties reads. It doesn’t sound like he is enjoying his ride, because of the niuse he was down on the bumpy roads, sparkes, and the bor of counter tirst he doesn’t have. hes sacting time and sec from add perso doesn’t mic at all because there could hou old –timers and don’t know once thou are tailoring around her, to save, to goo shouldn’t take advice from them because goo could end its line this nidsnes transitin califend doesn’t and how feres how could now do it, to let some or therefore so be dehydrated.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3193,2,"Certain people beleive that offensive books, magazines, or music should be taken off of the shelves of libraries. I think that offensive books and music and media should not be taken off of the shelves. It is a persons own right to see certain things that are offensive if they choose to do so. It is also not another persons right to decide what other people can and cannot observe. If certain offensive things were taken off of the shelves of libraries such as music, books etc. the knowledge of people would be limited to only what the library or the government would want them to know and that is not right. It is someones personal decision wether or not they look at listen to or read offensive things. People shouldn't be sheltered by society and only know what is wanted for them to know. If libraries eliminated offensive media then people would be able to form their own oppinions and ideas. In some cases reading and knowing certain things that are offensive to some people should be known to the world. One case is how people should know about the holocaust in the @DATE1. Im shure reading about the holocaust is very affensive to copius amounts of people, but even though this history is disturbing and offensive people should know about it so that history does not repeat itself. The government and society does not have the right to decide what people take in. For example what if all of a certain type of music was eliminated from libraries, the internet, and tv; it would slowly dissolve out of existence. Certain things like reading about the times before racial equality, and such things as slavery are very offensive for people to read about. But these things must be read and heard and passed down through history so it isn't forgotten. The knowledge of offensive things should not be taken away from people by the libraries. Yes offensive things shouldnt be celebrated or looked upon as good but people should know. People in the world cant just know the good things or only what their society wants them to know, they also have to know about the bad things and offensive things that happen and have happened as well.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15798,6,"Trying to allow dirigibles dock on the Empire State building caused way to many obsticals for the builders. Dirigibles were up too one thousand feet long, this would make it realistically impossible for it to dock because the size of it would add stress to the buildings frame builders would have to reconstruct and make the frame stronger. Most non-@CAPS1 dirigibles are filled with hydrogen and not hellium which I highly flamable if cought fire pedestrians could be seriously hurt. Finding out later they an existing law about airships flying to low which would make it illegal for a dirigible to even fly near the Empire State building",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 11973,5,"In the memoir, Narciso Rodriguez, the author creates a mood, that is overall cheerful, warm, and happy. He does this through his word choice. ""passed on to me their rich culinary skills, and a love of cookig that is still with me today."" (par @NUM1). He decribes his parents cooking skills as ""rich"" and he describes his feelings toward cooking as positive. Another example of the mood he creates is how he describes his relationship with other people. ""all of these culture came together in great solidarity and friendship."" (par @NUM2). From this quote, you can tell that he has a very close relationship with all the people. Another example is when he says, ""always filled the air with not just scent and music, but life and love."" (par. @NUM3). You can feel the warmth of the room with the adjectives he uses. This is how the author creates the mood in the story.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12486,5,To me the mood of the author is happy. Thinks he's happy because in the article it talks about how he grow up and where he lived through his entire life. Also it talks about when Narciso Rodriguez arrived in the United States which was in 1956. Plus it talks about how he helped the poor people in his own country before he moved to the US. Narciso Rodriguez did alot of stuff to help his country survive before he left.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12663,5,The mood created by the author is that @PERSON1 is greatful for his education and growing up in @LOCATION1. Also his parents and they're cooking skills. The mood is love and greatfulness.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12852,5,"The author of this memoir created many moods. One mood that was felt is happiness because of the way Narciso Rodriguez described his home to be a place of childhood innocence, family, friends, and endless celebrations. Another mood is gratitude for I have never given up my friends, family, and home and Narciso Rodriguez's parents had to give up their friends, family, and home in Cuba to support Narciso. The last mood is admiration at the fact the Narciso Rodriguez and his friends and family could feel so happy even though racism and segregation were a part of the @PERSON2, along with the fact that they were going through financial trouble. In this memoir, Narciso Rodriguez made the readers feel many moods while telling his insperational story.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1300,1,"I do not beileve that computers benefit society. Kids can learn more but they spend too much time on line. When kids talk to people on line they don't know if it is really someone you know. There are techneral problems with them that deileate files. For these reasons is why computers do not benefit society. Kids spend too much time on computers. Computers do teach you more things, but they also have games. Children spend most of their time on games than studying. Chidren can get agressive when loss of exersise. Thats what is happening today. Kids are loosing exersise an are getting hevier. They can evan loose intrest. All they want to do is go on the computer. Kids talk to people, how do they know who they really are? People can make a fake e-mail adress and make a false account on @CAPS1 or @CAPS2-space. These people want children's personal information. Also if you are talking to someone that has a name of someone you know. The person just might be a freand. Like me. I was talking to @CAPS2 cousin on @CAPS1 (the account said his name) but it was his wife. That is why you need to be carful about what you say and who it is you are really talking to. Computers have virouses. When computers get virouses, they can deilete the files you want to save. If you had a video on the news you want to keep it. Youu put it under favorates, they you get a virouse that deleites the file. The video is how off the wedsite. Sometimes your computer doesn't bring you to the wed anymore. You how have to click alot of places to get there. For these resons is why computers are not benefical to society. Kids spend to much time on computers. Kids can talk to people they don't know on them. Computers have technical problems that delete files. Just remember there are many many more resons why computers are not benefical to society.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6250,3,"The cyclist surrounds did have an affect. In paragraph two the cyclist describes how “I enjoyed the serenity of an early-summer evening the."" To have a wonderful day to begin with was parably assurance even thing would be fine. Confidence was a factory for the beautiful weather as well as he knew a short cut. In paragraph @NUM1 the cyclist mentions how old men looked at his map and pointed out “this breezy jaunt.” The cyclist just thought his life got a little easier. Then in paragraph @NUM2 the cyclist comes upon the ""traditional definition of a ghost town."" This setting was nothing like the old men were talking about. ""Twenty miles up the road, i came to a fork of sorts."" In paragraph @NUM3, this caused confusion and worry. ""This sight was troubling."" ""I was traveling through the high deserts of California in June."" The cyclist was ""hitting my water bottles pretty regularly."" This setting made the cyclist uncomfortable as well as the ""two hundred degrees."" The cyclist then began puzzled and distraught. ""I notices the terrain changing"" in this quote the cyclist's settings @MONTH1 have caused confusion. But in the end the cyclist suceeded. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15758,6,"In building the empire state building, the builders faced many obstacles in the process of letting dirigibles moor at the mooring mast. In the article ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon @CAPS1 the author gives us examples as to what was difficult. One obstacle in the docking of dirigibles to the mast was safety for the people inside. The article says, ""The greatest reason was one of safety."" It then goes on to say ""Most dirigibles from out of the U.S used Hydrogen, Hydrogen is highly flammable."" another reason was nature. The author states ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" This would lead to unscure departure of passengers. The article also says ""Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel"" which shows unsafe air conditions. These are two obstacles that made landing at the mooring mast very difficult and soon made it impossible. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7576,3,"The cyclist is affected by the change in terrain from flat to hilly, the elderly men’s directions and most importantly his thirst. He tries to save what little water he has left for time when he really needs it. He looks for a place to cool off and get water, which he finally does in the end. He’s also a little bit angry and disappointed of the old men’s directions. He’s really going a lot more miles then he should be according to the directionsand he's beginning to wonder if they’ve lost it. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9664,4,The author concludes the story like this because she is going to come back and do the samething next year.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9774,4,"Explains why the author concludes the story with this paragraph. Cause it all make a little cent to concludes the story with this. Here why I think it does. The paragraph in the one of the main pieces to to the story. “In the spring, when the snows melt and after return,” all she say is is when the snow is gone and the grass come back, I will start planting again and she would be happy with it, “this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that again,” she went to put her plants up again and tests them to see how them over so she can do them even again. Saeng loved this plant so much that she can’t wait. But when it does she is going to plant a lot. That what the paragraph is saying Saeng is going to wait so he can plant a hibiscus. However, since she came to United States she loved the flower that very much.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13030,5,"In the memoir, ""@PERSON1,"" by Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives, The mood is set right from the beginning. The first thing said to Start the mood was, ""My parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their rich culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today (and for which I am extremely grateful.)"" This shows the author is grateful and happy. The memoir also said, ""Passionate Cuban music (which I adore to this day) filled the air mixing with the aromas of the kitchen."" This shows how the author is very proud. Also lastly the memoir mentions, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" This again saw how grateful the author is. In this passage the mood is set to be grateful, happy, and loving right from the start.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4094,2,"Inappropriate magazines in the reach of children?!? '@CAPS1 just not right', says reporter @PERSON1, 'I think that magazines, books, and other profanities should be out of the reach of children and only discussed when chosen by an adult'. Libraries in the present day need to overseer children when they are looking in the library. If children see something that they want with no guardian then they shouldn't get it, its just that simple. Although the books can seem inappropriate to some people they should not be taken off the shelves because older books help children learn about what happened in the earlier days, it teaches them some of the ways that we use now, and it shows real stories about people in modern day. For example some of the books about @ORGANIZATION1 connect some people as being to abrassive and mocking, but it just shows what happened long before there were laws for racism. The books about @NUM1 also come provacative to some people because they lost someone close during the bombing, the books teach the kids that not everyone is nice and cruel things happen to some good people.Books about peoples life are also in libraries talking about what happened to them as they were kids or how their parents died of cancer, the books teach the children that outcomes can turn out for the good or the bad. Some entertainment is not intended for kids to see, for example, pornography and provacative language. Pornography is thought to be an entertainment for adults, but many times it is just something that can scare kids at young ages if they do not know what is really happening. Also, provacative language in a book or on a cd is not something that kids should be listening to. However, they need to learn that if they hear those words they need to know not to say them so they don't get into trouble by their parents. Books of history are thought to be helpful when children are growing up. Most of the time that is correct, about @PERCENT1 of the children take in the information and use it to help them. However, there is @PERCENT2 of children out there that will just think of the information that they are being told as good things. @ORGANIZATION2 didn't just wake up one day and say im going to bomb the @CAPS2 @CAPS3 @CAPS4. His devious plans and clever mastermining took alot of time to plan out. People @MONTH1 object to children learning some things about history, but i think it is needed for every child to understand. Everyone needs to know about the ups and downs about their country and the others surrounding them. Children @MONTH1 not understand right now what is wrong with the economy, but they will soon learn when they are adults why people complain so much. Books about this stuff @MONTH1 come offensive to some people, but down the road books are used for many things, we still learn about people from hundreds of years ago. Children will soon learn of the harsh conditions and the reason why things happen. Without the books and the videos the future will never know what happened. Many young people @MONTH1 change words in books, but the books will always still have what really happened. @CAPS1 why i think that the libraries should keep the books on the shelves, just out of reach of the children",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12421,5,"I particullarly like this one beacous in this story the author sets a good happy, Cultural @CAPS1 to the story. I @CAPS2 the Culture and how you need to appreciate what you have. And it @CAPS2 what his parents Did for there Children @CAPS4 that they could have a better life in a new country.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3834,2,"Bad @CAPS1 @CAPS2 off yes, I do think think they should be removed if they are bad. If you wouldn't say it to your parents face when your at a younger age then you don't need to be listening to it or reading it. I would not want my younger kids reading or watching anything that they know they couldnt say to my face. There are so many things that little kids can see. Like at any @LOCATION1 or any where there are magazines with ladies in there bra and underwear and its the same thing with the guys. I dont think its right they should they them put up where it isn't so easy for the little ones to see. Those kind of things are justy going to get kids asking question that make the parents have to lie. Then theres kids watching tv and they have the stupid cartoons where the kids are on there cusing and talking aboout sex then your kid goes to that channel when your not around hear all these stupid stuff. Then their going to go tell there friends what they heard because they think its cool then all kinds of kids are hearing it. When you can just take channels like that off your tv and make everything easier. I think the worst is liking people sign about killing people and raping kids and all this and that. I would never let my kids listen to music like that i don't care how old they are. I also think that is where most of the stuff kids pick up are from the music they want to listen to its horrible. I would do anything to make it where kids coudnt listen to that stuff until their parents didnt care. I know my parents didnt like me listening to it when I was young and I see why now that im older and know what all of it means so i'm never going to let my kids listen to it when they are at a young age. In all that I hope that I made a good point and hope you feel the same way. Why let are kids listen to the stuff that hurts them and us in the longt run it just not worth the trouble letting them do what they want.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 482,1,"Dear @CAPS1 of Newspaper, @CAPS2 has been brought up to concern that computers are a mence to society. On the Computers are very helpfull. If one needed directions to a place or if one wanted to know how to do something @CAPS2 would show how to. They also can help you do things like read faster and hand eye corridnation. Computers are also a good form of entertianment. Those are some of the reasons computers are helpfull. First, computers can help find out how to do things. If there is evey somewhere far to go or there are many winding roads to get there you can use the computer. On the computer there are many maps that give detialed discriptions on how to get places. Specialist say that over @PERCENT1 veiwers get to their destianation. The due to lack of driving skills. Computers also help with instructions on how to make things. If there is a cake to be made the computer will have recipies to make @CAPS2. That also can help make projects. For example They show things about @CAPS3 mythology for making a @CAPS3 pat. The computer can help you, learn langues. There is software that can teach people languages just like books execpt that they have animated teachers to help speak the languege that one got directions to go to. Reading all the didn't langues can help you with normal reading. Another reason that computers are helpful is they can help people with reading. Did you know that @NUM1 out of @NUM2 americans have trouble reading. That wouldn't happen if they had computers. Almost everything on the computer has to be read so @CAPS2 gives a lot of practices. @CAPS2 also will improve hand eye corodination. When someone something they watch the screen not their hand. Also on microcoft word to type an essay you watch the screen not your fingers typing. There are many games on the computer for improving hand eye corrdination. The last reason that computers affect people is that they are enteritaining. One the internet there are many fun games for all ages. Some games they could watch videos one youtube there are many funny videos there. As you can see computers are helpfull in many ways. They will give directionn to places or help people with reading, Computers are entertianing and fun.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15197,6,"In the excerpt, The Mooring Mast by @ORGANIZATION2, the was obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow derigibles to dock there. One obsacle was that dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium. This was a problem because as it says in paragraph @NUM1, line four, ""hydrogen is highly flammable."" The geatest obstacle for builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigible to dock was nature itself. Nature itself would be an obstacle because ""dirigibles moored in open fields could be weighted down in the back with lead weighths, but using the at the Empire State Building, where they would be dangling high above pedestrians on the street, was neither practical nor safe."" This were some of the obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow derigibles to dock there.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7170,3,I believe the first photograph closely relates to the story ”As worry” because the authors son suffs a lot. And it shows what he and his friends @MONTH1 look like. Also it shows the surf boards emphasizing there surfers. That is what I believe about the first picture. The second are only relate a little cause it has a surfer surfing. So in conclusion the first photograph is moreaccurate to the story than the second photo.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7415,3,"The features of the settings affects the cyclist a lot in the passage called “Rough Road Ahead: Do not Exceed Posted Speed Limit”. Cyclist are in very good physical shape. They can cycle for along time; however, weather can affect the cyclist. This happened in the passage. The cyclist was determined and confident he could make this journey. “I would conserve my water and go inward for an hour or so- a test of my inner spirit. Even though he had confidence the features of the setting affected the cyclist. “Tumbleweeds crossed my path and a ridiculously large snake….”. “The water bottles contained only a few tantalizing sips”. The cyclist was tired and exhausted. The weather and terrain had worn him down. The weather can change my level of ability sometimes. I love to play basketball outside. When it is hot and humid out I can’t play as long. The features of a setting can clearly affect people.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7013,3,"The feature of the setting affected the cyclist tremendously. According to the text, the cyclist was confident he would make the eighteen miles until he passed through the flat round, that was replaced by short rolling hills. He said and I quoted “I toiledon” he sounds like it’s hopeless, that he wasn’t going to make it. As you can see the setting does effect the cyclist.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3969,2,"'Can I read this?' @CAPS1 a round the world have asked this or been asked this question. @CAPS1 have their own right to read what they want, but are the childern alound to? There are books that children or young adult should read and should not read. This @MONTH1 vary for it depends on age, and the way the reader will understand the content of the books. There are cursing, smut and @CAPS4 in books that for children should not read. In highschool there are some books like '@CAPS2 and @CAPS3' that has cursing in it. For highschoolers of @NUM1 or older will be alright to read. Highschoolers understand and has heard these words more than once before. If a teacher gives this book to a @NUM2 grader they would not understand the full potential it hold for the learning of it. Childern in that age range will not understand that the man is handicaped, then the childern would not understand the killing the handicaped man had done or why his friend killed him after it. Will a parent let a @NUM3 year old read a smut novel? This depend on the way the parent was raised and how the feel it will effect the childs development. An @PERSON1 book would not be approprent for a child of that age for the child does not, and will not understand the book it self. The book is more then just that one part of smut. There is a gothic and romanic was of writing to @PERSON1 books. A child of @NUM3 years old would not have developed the mature way of think of the book. @CAPS4! '@CAPS4 is not the answer.' Everyone has heard this saying. This say is said but its not followed. Young adults play video games, read books in school related to @CAPS4. '@ORGANIZATION1's don't @CAPS5' is a book of a colored teenagers going to a white school. This is a book giving the kids to see how things were. A child in elematenry would think its funny if a cartoon is played for them and someone gets hit. The children will is it a game and do not have enough background or maturity to under stand what is really happening and that it is wrong to do that. For just watching a tv show with hit or punch the child will think it is ok to do it. Over all there will be @CAPS4, cursing and smut novels out there. The thing it depends on the parents and maturity level of the person/child. There is a wrong and right way to do it but for @CAPS1 it not right to let some underage read a curse, voilents, or smut",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7364,3,"In the story the cyclist is on a bike ride to @LOCATION1. He has a new map is doing very well, until he asks these old men the best way to get there taking less time and by getting these faster a.k.a a short at. He takes there directions and feels good abut it. But soon things change, he experiences new terrain and it becomes much harder. The type of setting that he faces are steep hills, speed limits that he can’t exceed, dry hot temperature, and he has no water. All these features combine together to make the situation worse. While he is experiencing these things he feels like he is going to die and feels like giving up. But eventually he finds someone and doesn’t ask for directions. So the lession is don’t take directions from a stranger unless your willing to face the unexpected. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9934,4,"The find lines of the story, ""Winter Hibiscus,"" are meant to provide a glimpse into the near future, to show a change in Saeng's attitude. Up until this point Saeng had been lamenting her old country, and not adjusting well to her new one. The Hibiscus inspires her, and lets her know that the new country has many of the same things as her old country. In this last line, she comes to terms with her present situation. ""When the snows melts and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding,"" is a way of saying shes going to let a little time pass, and by taking her driver’s test again, she will begin her new life.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13573,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is very happy and warm. The author talks about how grateful Narciso Rodriguez is. Narciso also loves the home he grew up in. He also talks about all the people that live near him and how he loves them all like family. His parents are very good cooks, and they taught Narciso their rich culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with him today. His mood is very loving and caring, and its his family and how he adores them that is the mood created by the author in the memoir.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7683,3,"In rough raod ahead by Joe Kurmaskie the feature of the setting affected the cyclist. Because he was in the desert of California in June, he water supply was emicated and he came across a ghost town. His hope was dwindling because of this. He found a water pump that produced a tar like substance as a result the desert and the lack of water made him wish he was dead he decided never to take advice from strangers and to trust his map. That is how the feature affected the setting.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15095,6,"In the expert the builders of the Empire State Building faced a lot of obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there.The fabiric that they use for dirigibles is very lighter. ""Cotton frabric filled with hydrogen and helium to make them ligther than hair.They also imply that the architects did not try hard enough to solve the problems.""The mooring mast of the Empire State Building was destined to never fulfill it purpose...""",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16468,6,The builders of the empire State building faced alot of obstacles. One problem they had was when & if they landed getting an area for the people to get on and off. they had to make the platform bigger also. When the dirigibles landed it was because they needed more fuel @CAPS1 it would only be a couple hours they were stopped.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16070,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building were faced with many problems when attempting to make a mooring mast for Dirigibles. The frist major problem they came across was the biulding its self. It said ""The stress of the dirigibles load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the biuldings foundation."" The biulding being the tallest in the world could not take the pressure. They could possible made it strong but at high cost to something so @CAPS1 already. The architects next obstienle was saftey expessally in a highly populated area such as down town New York. They found the Dirigibles to be to dangerous and uncontroble in a city of towers. The normal processes of docking a Dirigible would have to complete change to acumulate. the mooring mast, soon laws were given to have airships stay away from areas of popurtion after the Hindenburg insodent. Yet some still dared to try and dock at the mast such as the Los Angeles and Columbia but the mast was never put to good use and shows the Problems with inovating things already @CAPS1 as the Empire State building.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 522,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, I have herad that you guys are deciding whether or not computers have a negative or positive impact on the society. In my opinion, I believe computers have a very negative impact not only to adults but mostly to students too. Computers in general can be distracting, very dangerous, and give people less time to excercise. Computers in total do not have a bad impact on people. Some people say computers are not distracting, well I say they are. Computers have varies websites such as @CAPS1 and @CAPS2 which can distract people from studying or even doing their homework. @CAPS1 and @CAPS2 are websites where you can chat with friends and see peoples pictures. These websites can be very interupptive when trying to do something important. For example, I am one of the biggest slackers when it comes to doing homework or studying. If I had to choose between doing homework or chatting on @CAPS1, I would choose @CAPS1. But if you actually think about, are these websites benefitting anybody. Homework and studying can actually benefit you in doing better can benefit you in your studies and ferther on in your life. In total, I believe computers are a big distarction. When people go on the computer they go on without worrying a little bit. They don't know the danger behind it. These dangerous computer have people on it called online predators. Online predators sit on the computers basically all day trying to harm others. One website in specific that I herad was very harmful is myspace. This website is even more dangerous then @CAPS1 or @CAPS2. Myspace is like @CAPS1 in a way but very dangerous. For instance, my mom told me that one of her friends daughter had a myspace and became friends with a guy she didn't know. Of course she didn't worry because according to her he seemed a nice guy so she gave him her number. Good thing her mom saw it, otherwise something bad would happend. He ended up being an online predator. Lastly, computer can make people unhealthy. People who stare on computers non-stop can make them not exercise. For example, not playing sports such as soccer, vollyball, and tennis. This is very unhealthy for people in our society because they can become obese and unhealthy. This is why computers can make you not exercise. In conclusion, computers can have a very negative effect on people. It can be very distracting, dangerous, and unhealthy for not exercising. In total, computers cannot have a bad impact on people.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6731,3,I think that the setting made him find more courage inside him self to save his water and go to the next town with out any water.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6735,3,"When riding a bike it @MONTH1 not seem to hard. For a cyclist every thing becomes more serious. The determination to win and be the best even if it kills you. In this essay he under estimates the dder cyclist. When really they are the people with more knowledge. Some of the things that @MONTH1 be hard for cyclist are the rough roads. Not only having a chance to be killed of dehydration or being ran over. Riding bike is really hard work when having to ride in hundred degree weather. Drinking drink after drink never having any water. No water and it being so hot could cause a heat stroke. As road get worse chances get higher tumble weeds and snakes in the way, he was determined to win. After all was said and he faced the horror that nature brought him he knew he was wrong wrong for them and the intelligants.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12142,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is grateful, happy, and loving his life.First of all, the mood created by the author in the memoir is grateful. Here is a quote from the text. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrafice.""@CAPS1, the mood created by the author in the memoir is happy. Here is evidence from the article. ""A Cuban feast always filled the air with not just scent and music but life and love.""@CAPS2, the mood created by the author in the memoir is loving his life. Here is a quote from the article. ""I will never forget that house or its gracious neighborhood or the many things I learned there about how to love.""In conclusion, my main point here is to show you how joyful Narciso is.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 493,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1 I belive that computers benifit society because it is a faster and easyer way to do thing such as. Communication, email helps comunicat with other people when you don't have time to talk on the phone at work or don't want to spend an hour on the phone. It is also faster than wating for them to anwer the phone and ther phone mite die. Or they wont answer and they need information fast. Another good thing about computers are looking up information like if you are going an atrip you can look up hotels find maps and plane tikets and see what the place will look like, or if you have a school project that you need to finish but you don't have time to read you go on the internet. If you have to look up a contry or a peresident or an animal or find picturs the internet has it all. Even bilding progects like plastering a wall bying a window or planting bilding a shed you can find direction and supplies you will need and the interent. Computer can even help someone at work like an arctech the can use computers to make a @NUM1 sketch of a bilding. Even for storing data like at the doctors ofice they keep you @CAPS1 in a computer. Or the goverment keeps secet @CAPS1 in computers. There ars still job like fixing computers bilding computers. This is why. I think computers are good for society becose without computers without computers same people want have a job and everything will be harder and be limited to sertan things like fast communication and work directions.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7442,3,"The The features of the setting effect the cyclist because the cyclist @CAPS1 challenging porblem face by the author. Forexample, I nottice the terrain changing. Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills. After I had erected the first few things, a large highway. That’s shows when he arrived, the road does not good and also large highway high of jumped.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 11897,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir was ""solidority."" because in paragraph @NUM1 it says ""My parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their non culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me to today (and for which I am eternally grateful). Passionate cuban music (which I adore to this day filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen."" also in paragraph @NUM2 it says. ""growing up in this enviroment instilled in me a great sense that ""family had nothing to do with being blood related."" This is now the mood created by the author was ""solidarity"".",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9923,4,The author concludes the story with that paragraph because it shows that character will retry what she failed. In the story the character loves gardening so when her favourite plant comes back she will retry to pass her test.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4399,2,"There are certain books that no child should ever read but in some libraries they don't care whats on there shelf. They don't care if a little kid starts reading a book full of cusswords and other profanity. As long as hes reading thats all that matters to them. Even though in libraries there are kid sections that doesn't mean he can't walk over and grab an @CAPS1 book or what ever he can get his hands on. When I was little I was always in the library and it was never hard to get a book with bad language. We even thought it was funny when ever the book had cursewords in it cause we would just repeat. I remember in school even books the teacher would read to us had cursewords and we would all laugh at it, even the teacher thought it was funny. But if we ever repeated that word while not reading it we would get sent down to the office. Even though we thought it was ok to say just because we read it out of a book. I do agree that books with bad language should never be on the shelf to where a kid can grab it. I think its fine to have cursewords in books when there in junior high but elementary school is to early. Those books are meant for adults only cause some books sound better with cursewords in them. My parents thought it was wrong when I would bring home a book from the library and it would be full of cursewords or slang. But they would never say anything to the library cause they know that I will be hearing these words all the time when I get older. Those are all the reasons why I think books with curse words should not be handed out to little kids.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 997,1,"Many families across the globe use computers, whether their from @LOCATION1, all the way to the deserts of @LOCATION2. However, believe that being on a computer can negative effects to you like lack of exercise, In @CAPS21 perspective. I can agree, with there, but I truly believe that computers can have a positive effect on society if used correctly. With computer on @CAPS21 side, I believe there are many positive effects towards computers, such as: there are many things to do, you can from the internet, and it is very entertaining. If you have a computer, I'm sure you can agree with me that there are tons of good things you can do. For example, I know of many online colleges. Ever heard of the commecial, ""@CAPS1 in your @CAPS2's?"" that is where students can got their @CAPS3.E.D and have a succesful carreer. Not only that, you can get discounts on many items just by shopping online. There are many shopping sites online, such as @ORGANIZATION1. Furthermore, many shops like @CAPS4 @CAPS5 have a catolog online, where you and effenly. Lastly, if you have close relatives or friends that live far away, there are many options today like @CAPS6, (@CAPS7 @CAPS8 @CAPS9). Webcam programs like which you see and talk to each other using a webcam and @CAPS10, where you can find your friends and check how their doing daily. These are all good reasons why computers are sucess in the economy. Some computers are used for entertainment. Online there are many @CAPS16 you can play, like @CAPS11's (@CAPS12 @CAPS13 Online @CAPS14-@CAPS15 @CAPS16) I play many of these, including @CAPS16 such as @CAPS17. I love these @CAPS16 because they are very amusing world. You watch many of your favorite movies watch funny obeses on the internet via @CAPS18. @CAPS18 is a world-wide used source where you can watch or upload videos so the world can see. A @CAPS18 video is ""@CAPS19 @CAPS20 @CAPS21 @CAPS22,"" a young boy gets bitten by his younger brother. This entertainment system is also a great way to use up time lik if you're bored. I can see how people be to it, but you just need to use it wisely and make a plan to use the computer maybe an hour a day. A computer also has many great sources you can learn from, like an online website that has fun @CAPS16 called @CAPS23. With this, you can play many fun @CAPS16 while learning about interesting facts about science. In @CAPS21 science class, we use this websites many times, to us learn about motion/gravity. You can also conduct research on the web, you with many projects. I know I use the web to with almost every project I have.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7476,3,"In “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not exceed posted speed limit,” the features of the setting affect the cyclist in many ways. One way it affected him is the towns were old and deserted. In the story he said “This place might have been a thriving little spot… but @CAPS1 it was a ghost town.” He could not get any water or any directions. The features of the setting affected the cyclist because the roads were bumby and there were many hills. “Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills.” @CAPS1 the cyclist had to use all his power to manuever over the hills. The third reason why the setting affected the cyclist was the weather and that it was a desert. “I was traveling through the deserts of California in June.” He was hot, sweaty and thirsty. He was also tired and desperate to find water and town that was not deserted. The features of the setting affected the cyclist in “Rough Road Ahead: Do not exceed Posted Speed Limit,” by the roads, deserted towns and the lack of water.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9475,4,"She concludes that paragraph with the story because she realy wants the people to realize that she is and and is always having fun. Also that she love where she at. Shes making in the world and she loves wathing flower, “geese return and this hibiscus is budding” that show that her favorite thing to do that she loves is flowers.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6587,3,"In the story “Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Limit” by Joe Kurmaskie there were many settings that affect the cyclist. One example would be when he came up to a water pump and he tried to get water out but water didn’t come out. “…working the handle of the rusted water pump with all my strength. A tar like substance oozed out….” (Kurmaskie). Another example is when he came across rolling hills, and the scaring heat, he also came across a snake that took up most of the pavement.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3529,2,"There are millions of books and other media in libraries all across the world. Millions of people read and listen to those materials every day. Some people @MONTH1 like certain books or media and dislike others. Many people dislike certain materials because of their content. Everyone has the right to read and watch what they want and not everyone will read or watch the same materials. Although some materials @MONTH1 be offensive, they should not be removed from the libraries. Books and other media should not be removed from library shelves because what some people find offensive does not offend other people. Everyone has a right to their own beliefs and opinions. If someone wants to read a book or watch a video, they should be able to. What is offensive and what is not is a personal choice and it all depends on that person's point of view. If someone thinks the content in a book, song, or movie is offensive, then they should not read or listen to it. Materials should not be removed from libraries because they can be used to learn history and other things that people should know about. Take, for example, the @CAPS1. There are thousands of books on the @CAPS1 and many movies as well. These materials should not be removed from library shelves because even though some people find them offensive, they can be used to teach people how horrible it was so that it does not happen again. People should inform themselves about something before they view it so that they are not offended by the content inside. Some content in history is very mature and should only be viewed by mature audiences. The offensive content should not be removed from libraries because it is usually in a mature section and it has a right to be there. Most content that some people find offensive is for adult audiences. There are not children's books that talk about things that parents would find offensive to their children. The content has a right to be there. If the author or publisher took the the time to create the work, then they should recieve credit for making it. In the @LOCATION1, there is freedom of speech and people should be able to say what they want to say. If the content is too offensive then it should be removed but only under special circumstances. The content in libraries, offensive or not, should not be removed. People can read or watch whatever they want. Many people have many different opinions on what should and should not be in libraries. The libraries are public and they are shared. No one person has the right to dictate what should and should not be in libraries. If it was not for libraries, the people in society would not be as smart as they are",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15926,6,Some obstacles the builders faced were too much stress to the buildings frame. It would have to transmit all the weight and pressure all the way to the building's foundation. Also there would only be one cable holding it in place. The cable was called a tether. Another obstacle would be an existing law saying that you cant moor your ship there because you are flying to low. In December 1930 the @ORGANIZATION1 dirigible tried parking there but they were affraid of the wind knocking it into another building. Therefor they went threw a few hard obstacles but in the end they fixed it and made it happen.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3890,2,"Why should books that some people enjoy to read be removed off of library shelves? That is ludacris. There are so many alternatives then to just take those certain books off the shelves completely. We all have seen or heard of books that are inapropriate to certain audiences. It is understandable that young children should not read or be associated with these kind of materials such as: books, magazines, poems, movies, songs. It is totally unnecessary for children to be reading such explicit material, but it is possible for us to prevent it. One way libraries throughout the nation can prevent this is by making a complete different libraries or have the explicit materials be located in the total opposite side of the library from the children's materials. I know that libraries tend to have opposite corners of the library dedicated to adult materials and childrens materials, but there should be more strict rules of kids being in the adult section. Another idea is to have parental permission on the child's own library card telling the librarian, when the child checks out a book, where in the library they can get a book. For example maybe the childs' parents only will allow him/her to get materials from the children's section in the library; therefore if that child wants a material from a different area of the library they cannot get it, unless his/her parents are their telling the librarian the child is allowed to get it. I know when i was a child and i couldn't do something that my parents were doing, it made me feel upset, but now that i look back i realize why they wanted me not to do what they were doing. They wanted me to be a child as long as possble. They knew if i was reading or listening inapropriate materials then i was growing up way too fast. I know that now and understand it now what they wanted for me. To conclude, lets keep those filthy books and magazines away from the younger kids. I don't want to see it get banned from the libraries or taken out of libraries; I just want to see parents stepping up to be parents and not letting their young children be exposed to that kind of thing. It isn't the libraries faults if people's children are being exposed to this explicit material; it's the parent's fault for letting it happen",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7522,3,"Excitement, desperation, and self-pitty are all feelings the cyclist had because of the setting. He was really excited to get to Yosemite park because of it peacefulness. He said, “the cool pines and rushing rivers of Yosemite are calling my name.” He wanted to get their because it was so hot. He started getting desperate for water, so he drank out of this hot water hole. “I tried a drop or two, tasted like battery acid.” He was running out of water so he got desperate for some. He started to have self-pitty on his self,” sometimes life can be so cruel,” he was feeling pitty on himself because he had such a long way to go still. These are all feeling the cyclist had because of the setting.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 902,1,"I think that computers help people in there everyday lives. They just make things so much easier. Computers help us to find information @CAPS2 we needed. Book hotels and airliners, they even allow us to interact with our friends. Yes it might take away times to do other things like exercising, but we can find out away to do both. Everyday I would go on the computer a little bit and then go outside for an hour to play basket ball. People just need to find a way to it out. Computers are good for if you need to find information about anything. All you need to do is type in what you want, and within seconds you have hundreds of different links for your desire. For example if you are in @CAPS1 school and you are deciding what college that you should go try the a great place that you can go to get information. People all over the world do that just about everyday. It is also a great place if you need information if you are doing a project in school and you need more info on your subject @CAPS2 I say it make things a lot easier there is no better example a reservation for a hotel or buying a plane ticket. Both of those things do on a computer because otherwise odds are you with of then. If we didn't have computers you would need to go to the hotel and get a room, and if there were no room you out of luck. On a computer it will say if they have any or not you would need to @CAPS3 tickets would have the exact same thing. Computer say @CAPS2 there are available flights to your destination and how much. So @CAPS2 you go to the airport you are not surprised. Another good reason why computer are good for people is that it helps your interact with your friends and family @CAPS2 you can't see them. There so many different ways you can do it to. On @CAPS4, @CAPS5, myspace. All the websites like that help you stay in touch with all of your friends. Even now they have somethings where you can actually see the person you are talking to over the computer. So if you have no chance of seeing each other anytime soon you can talk to them then. I even do that with my brother, he is in college and I dont see him that much so I just start chatting with him on the computer. Now those are some reasons on why I feel that computers are a great part of our lives. Thing like finding information and booking hotels, airplanes, ect. All help make our lives a lot easier at times. And talking with other people just makes us happy. Now I hope you see why computers are a good part of all of our lives.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7418,3,"The setting which is a desert in the summer affects the cyclist. For example, she caldn’t go as fast, “The speed limit was 55 mph. I was doing a water-depleting 12 mph,” so that affected his ability to find water. The setting was also really hot, so the cyclist had a hard time getting the water he needed to keep going. For example, “I pumped that handle for several minutes, but the water wouldn’t cool down.” @CAPS1 how the setting has got on to him, and he needs water badly. The desert setting also affects the cyclist mind. He believed he was seeing mirages and he was afraid he was going to swallow a stone because he might hit a bump. The desert setting affects the cyclist ability to function. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9938,4,Primarily why she said that was she was saying with time come s cause. She was basically saying in a while when things change again she believes that her performance could change as well. I depicted this by the idea you can tell that she is beginning to sit over missing her home in Vietnam and that is memory with time change comes along. That is a simple aspect of logic that with time comes chase. But I think as much I did properly interpret the aspect of what this is supposed to mean overall. But otherwise and finally I believed Saeng said this because time brings change.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9470,4,"From the story of the girl just moved from Vietnam to United @ORGANIZATION1. It will be hard for the girl to understand anything and anything can bring her memory back about Vietnam. The author concludes the story with this paragraph because she did fail the test and see wants to see the hibiscus is budding. “I-I failed the test,” Saeng said it to her mother. Her mother actually understand why it happen and she will let Saeng keep the hibiscus because it will make Saeng feel better. Saeng miss Vietnam a lot and will like to try her best to overcome obstacles.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15642,6,"Dirigibles were being hailed as the transportation of the future. They were much better than the balloons. In new York City, there was a lack of suitable landing areas for the dirigibles. Now this would be a good idea for the Empire State Building. Landing on the building would allow dirigibles to anchor there for several hours for refueling or other services. The architects could not just drop a mooring mast on top of the building. The dirigible is thousand-foot long. It would add stress to the building's frame. Engineers soon designed a shiny glass and chrome-nickel stainless steel tower. The mast had four wings at its corners. The building is now 102 floors. Floors @NUM1 and 102 were for the observation area to double as the boarding area for the dirigible passengers. Workers celebrate framing the entire building after two months. Now people lost their hope. It's because the mooring mast of the Empire State Building was never to fulfill its purpose. It was never safe nor practical. The buiders faces so many obstacles.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9195,4,I believe that why the author concludes the story with this paragraph is because she is telling the reader and herself In my point of view that once again she do work in the garden to see if it catches her interest. I believe that the author is trying to express this because in the beggining of the story the author shows no interest in the garden or any interest of the world around her. For example when she was supposed to buy just seeds for the garden she went and used some of her mother’s money to buy herself a big mac. So In conclusion I believe that what I wrote clearly states how the author feels and why she ended they story the way she did.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16069,6,"The fact that these dirigibles are so big and filled with hydrogen and helium the point at the top would have poped it. Also the Winds were always too high so they would never be able to connect the blimp to the building. Lastly the fact that the German dirigible, Hindenburg burned like that they were afraid for that to happen. Especially in a crowded area such as New York.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 979,1,"To whom it @MONTH1 concern, Computers can be a great asset to our society, but they are an even, bigger hindrance. People are wasting their days away on the computer. Hardly anyone goes out in exercise, or to enjoy nature. Perhaps the sea west effect is that hardly anyone interacts with their friends and family anymore. @CAPS2 you with their friends and family anymore. @CAPS2 you don't want to surromb to the computers. put down the mouse and go outside! Obesity in @LOCATION1 is at an all time high. Experts agree, that computers and other types of technology are to blame. People who spend a lot of time on the computer hardly ever exercise and that effects them negatively. These people have a shorter lifespan! They might not be around in twenty years to see their grand children grown up. Also, they have many medical problems. @PERSON1, an obesity expert, says, ""I have seen a positive correlation with the obesity rate and that of @CAPS1."" @CAPS1 can kill you! Obesity can also cause heart attacks and infertility! @CAPS2 you can avoid these diseases and health risks by getting off the computer, why wouldn't you? Using the computer is not a good price to pay for you health! Do you have fond childhood memories that involve nature? I know I do. Most people who spend too much time on the computer don't get the chance to make memories like that. Theyre too preoccupied with the computer to care. Many people won't ever see any of our national parks! Drew @PERSON2, a park ranger, says. ""In the past few years. we have had less visitors than ever before."" @CAPS2 people can't tear themselves away from the computer for even a minute to see the splendor of our national, there is obviously something wrong. Get off you computers and go outside! I share everything with my friends and family and try to spend as much time with them as possible. Almost all people who use the computer often say @PERCENT1 of the time, they use it as an excuse not to see friends and family. In reality, they don't want to leave it. As a society, we are becoming too dependent on technology supervisor says. ""I have seen as definite decline in family enrollment. We hardly ever see kids with friends and family hanging around"". She is right. Now is the time to stop using computers! Computers @MONTH1 not be totally to blame for the problems stated above. Maybe it's the people a though computers do contribute to the problem. @CAPS2 we didn't have computers, there would be more people out exercising, and enjoying nature. Memories would be when we hung around with friends and family. Now is the time to turn of the computer, and go outside. Call up a friend and take a stroll, @CAPS3 you do, know you can have fun withour computers.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16341,6,"Although the mooring mast due to hoist at the top of the Empire State Building was a well thought out plan, it provided some obstacles for builders. The biggest problem was safety. Most dirigibles used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is a highly flammable product. If an accident, such as fire, occurred at the Empire State mooring mast it wouldn't be safe to take place around millions of people such as New York City. Another factor affecting building was nature. The winds above were constantly shifting due to currents. The only way to tie down the dirigibles would be to use weights, but that would also be extremely unsafe to be hanging above a city of people. The last issue was an existing law that prevented airships from flying to low in urban areas. This law makes it illegal for ships to even attempt to tie to the building, therefore it made it nearly impossible for builders to work.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9577,4,"It is all most sping like he said show melting and geese return and hibiscus is buding. Grass is growing tree are buding, @CAPS1 are singing",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6814,3,"Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit.” an essay written by Joe Kurmaskie, is about a solo cyclist going on a journey to Yosemite National Park. So he listens to a group of old guys and ends up lost on rough road with no water, or relylittic supply of flat road was replaced by short rolling hills large highways lon jumped out at me. It read: ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: DO NOT EXCEED POSTED SPEED LIMIT.” The rough road made have to work harder want more water and just made things tougher more than what they already were.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6035,3,"In the story “Do not exceed posted speed limit"" the author Joe Kurmaskie tells you that there many things you have to go through before you get there. The example is when ""he stops and asks for directions to Yosemite state park"". Because he did what to get lost. When he had to and other towns. The next example is when he came to a rock in the road: And had to get water form a old rusted pump because he had really no water left in his water bottle",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1142,1,"Dear @PERSON1, @CAPS1 you know that @PERCENT1 of @CAPS2 spend to much time on their computers. I belive people should spend more time outside with their family. This can certainly lead to brain problems, hard time seeing and the biggest thing is death. First of all there are people with brain problems because they are on the computer to much. When they are out with their family they think of their computer. People stay on their computer for a non-stop amount of time. In a resent survey it showed that teenagers stay on the computers the most. Most people don't have a life outside their computer room. Most of all eye doctors have been getting call from parents. They are worried that their child/children have a hard time seeing. I interviewed an eye doctor and this is what he had to say, ""I had one child come into @CAPS3 office and he had the hardest time seeing"". He asked the kids mother why is he having a hard time seeing and she said, ""@CAPS3 son spends on average of three and a half hours on the computer."" The child had to get a pair of special glasses so that he could see better. These glasses aare really expensive. I have read about children and adults deing from using the computer to much. They have fried their brain from using the computer to much. Their brain tells them to do things that are illegal. For example: breaking in homes, killing people, and high sacking cars. I heard one kid used the computer to much that he started to kill people and got shot by a cop. The more people die from using the computer to much the higher the death toll will be. It is now or never @CAPS3 friends out there to work together on cutting down on how much we use the computer. I'm sure that no one wants to be part of the death toll until we really have to. It is time to go outside and have fun with your family. They miss spending time with you. So get off your butt and go outside. But wait, make sure you trun your computer off so that you are not temted to go back on it.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7354,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist’s attitude towards the old men. Since the cyclist listened to the old mens directions he was furious with himself. Seeing that the last attempt of direction had caused the cyclist to become nearly delicious, the setting had added severly to the problem. The beating sun and high desserts in California in the middle of June made the cyclist dehydrated and tired. When he come to a rusted water pump “black tar oozed out, you can picture the cyclist as furious and anxious and of course thirsty. The rough terrain and tumble weeds had caused the cyclist to feel skeptical of his decision to follow the old mens-directions.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3135,2,"Okay, to me, people are way to moral in the modern world, i was taught that if you have a problem keep it to yourself. Most of everyone know that censorship is a big deal but it doesnt have to be. I know that somethings are a little, risque, but getting this our their quicker would be a better solution. Your probably asking yourself, how in the world can this be a 'better solution'? Lets talk about children and this content, if you get this out there quicker and subtlely, the children wont see the need to find out what it is at a later age. If that was to happen the conseqences could be fatal, such as; fines, misdemenors, respect, reputation, and even some time in jail. Tell the kids about murder, drugs, sex, and crimes in general, they are twice as moldable then as they are when they are older. Taking them off our shelves will only make us a nicer community, yea i know what your thinking, why not do that? If more people in your community are nicer, when a real threat comes, whos gonna help? The @CAPS1? who knows, it takes a little bit for a squad car to get around, even longer if your in a city. In that time, some one could have died, been robbed and that same criminal gone. So, if we let this stay out on the shelves and so on, people will have the knowledge to see that using these to help people can be benifical. Anyways, what im trying to say is, if you take this away from us, people will become weaker, if you let it stay, people will learn from it and use it for good",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12723,5,"The mood created in this memoir is love and unity. (@CAPS1 @NUM1) ""... all of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship."" This means that they were close, loving, and unified. This memoir gave me the feeling that just a house is not a home until there is love. ""Passionate Cuban music filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen"". This also gives me the feeling of warmth and love.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3347,2,"Censorship in the world is getting worse everyday. Many people believe that some material is unsuitable. I believe that if it is unsuitable for others does not make it unsuitable for some. I believe people have the right to read,watch, or listen to what they want as long as it is not breaking any laws. I am torn on this topic because I am against censorship, but I am also for it when laws are being broken. I believe that people should have the right to read whatever they want. Granted, some people read very incriminating books that could get them in a lot of trouble, but not everyone should be punished for another persons mistake. Sometimes you hear about terrorist groups and other illegal groups, but usually they do not market to everyday people. I think that when it becomes a threat to the @LOCATION1 they should remove material. Another simple fact is that the constitution @LOCATION1 that we have the freedom of @CAPS1, which basically means we @MONTH1 print and read whatever we want. Many people depend on the constitution to make their lives seem safer and sometimes there is a book,article, movie, or a song that goes beyond our limits. I believe that some people use materials wrongly sometimes to get ahead and to make a name for themselves. I just think that people should write for the pure joy of it, not to persuade people to do something bad,or give bad thoughts or ideas. The government has the right to control what we partake in, but does that seem fair? I understand thier logic behind this matter, but just because it has offensive matter does not mean they should remove it from society. I believe that if people want to experience it they should be able to without wondering if it will gone the next day. If people do not agree with this 'offensive' matter, then they should not take part in it. This is a true enough statement that it just makes you wonder about their logic. So, does the government have the right to say what we can and cannot read? I don't believe so, but that is my opinion. I believe that people should read whatever they so choose to and should not think they are breaking laws for some 'offensive' material. Freedom of the @CAPS1 is what people have to look up to for the government, but how are people supposed to feel secure when they are reading a book, watching a movie, or listening to music that @MONTH1 be assumed 'offensive'.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 14946,6,"The builders of the Empire State building faced many challenges in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock at the mooring at the top of the building. The main challenge was caused by nature itself. The winds above the building were constantly blowing and shifting direction. This would cause any dirigible attempting to dock swing around and below in the wind, which poses many safty risks for passengers going on and off the zepplen. The dirigible could also puncture its frame on nearby buildings while attempting to dock, which also causes safty risks for people on the building and on the ground. Have a zepplen attatched to the building also made it structurally unstable and modifications had to be made the frame of the building to give it more support. In the end, the idea was dropped because it would never work and was unrealistic.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16305,6,"The builders of the Empire state building faced many problems in trying to allow dirigibles to dock at the top @CAPS1 ""The architects could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof."" @CAPS2 the designers had to find a way for the dirigible to dock at the top of the building. Even if they did find a way for it to dock though, ""a thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame."" This set the builders back again because even if they did find a way to dock the dirigible the Empire state building would need ""over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications."" Even though that's possible there ""was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" The builders faced many obstacles that set them back but they made a valiant attempt to see their dream come true.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13036,5,"Througout the story, Narciso Rodriguez shows examples of how grateful, loved, and unified his family felt with their struggles they had overcame and heritage they were proud of. Paragraph @NUM1 illustrates the fond memories Narciso has of his house and childhood. Paragraph @NUM2 displays Narciso's strong sense of family within his local @CAPS1 community. Paragraph @NUM3 explains Narciso's parents' rough journey from Cuba to @LOCATION1, and paragraph @NUM4, Narciso explains how grateful he is for his parents' hard work and determination for their children to have a good life. ""It was in the warmth of the kitchen in this humble house where a Cuban feast always filled the air with not just scent and music but life and love"" wraps up the whole article and shows how grateful and cared for Narciso feels for his warm, welcoming home celebrating life, love, and their Cuban culture.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15533,6,"The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock were very difficult. The builders had to modify and strengthen the building. The modifications were very expensive. ""Over sixty thousand dollars"". Another obstacle the builders faced were the winds on the top of the building. The winds on the top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. Even if the dirigible was tethered to the mooring mast the back of the ship would swivel around. Also, They faced the safety. Builders were affraid that a @CAPS1 would happen because the dirigibles refill of hydrogen is very flammable. ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" @CAPS2, Another reason was that the law against airships flying too low over urban areas. This law made it clear that the dock would never happen. Even though they were pretty high of the ground it was still effective. They couldnt even tied it up and secure it so it won't fall because it was still against the law This law made it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15526,6,"The building of the Empire State building was a project which faced many obstacles. Due to the additional plan of building a mooring mast at the top of the building, A series of challenges and possibilities were forced to be taken into consideration. Firstly, the addition of a mooring mast to the top of the building, would significantly weigh down the building, adding stress to its frame. Because of this, over @MONEY1 worth modifications would have to be made to enforc the building's frame and stabilize it is a whole. Laws and regulations about how high airships could hoover over urban areas also restricted the use of the mast as because the building was located in the middle of a city, a densely populated area with thousands of pedestrians below, it was clearly neither practical, nor safe. Furthermore, Nature itself was the greatest obstacle to the success of the mast as because many foreign dirigibles used hydrogen instead of helium, this risked a fire hazzard. Lastly, strong winds and violent air currents all in all prevented the construction of the mast, as using the top of the building as a dock for airships maybe just a bit far fetched.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3849,2,"Having offensive books and movies in a library shouldn't be allowed. If you were in a library and you saw a book or anything that you took offensive, more than likely someone else will find it offensive too. So, by eliminating the problem before anyone else sees it, will reduce problems before they even happen. Now, more then ever, you will find offensive things in libraries. More people get offended by lesser things now. One reason to have a censorship in libraries is that, if you had a child, would you want them going to the library and seeing derrogitory writings and movies? I would be very upset if my child had to see that. It's teaching them different values and it's teaching them that since it's in a library it must be okay to do out in the community. For example, if the library has a book or movie about doing drugs or anything sexual, they're going to look up to that and more then likely do those things, which they could end up harming themselves or others. If the goverment provides the taxes for the libraries, doesn't it show that our goverment doesn't care about the offensive items on the shelves? It gives them a bad name. If we look to our goverment for support and answers. How would we feel if they had no judgement about the offensive things in libraries? It would seem like they didn't care and that might cause panic throughout the country.Which would cause many more problems then needed. It would be a easier thing just to censor our libraries. If our libraries weren't consumed with negative and offensive literature, we would have a lot more room for things of greater value. We could have books and movies that are educational and will actually teach a person something. Rather than, lead them into making bad decisions. There are plenty of other sites and places you could get a book if you really wanted it. Not just the library has books. You could find one quite easily if you tried. If a library does have offensive things, I think they wouldn't have a large variety, so it would be a better decision just to look for it elsewhere, where you could find a larger quantity of the subject you are looking for. When I go to the library, I go there for educational books, not books that teach kids how to 'fill a bong' or 'different sex postitions.' I highly disagree and I think it's a negative outlook on our society by putting those things in our future generation's hands to read. So by putting censorship in our libraries, not only will calm down some of the problems that are re-occuring in our communities, it just might eliminate the problem completely.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13605,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from ""Home: The Blueprints of our lives"" the mood created by the author is that his parents were loving and caring. His parents were loving and caring because they made their house into a home. His parents were selfless and caring when they come to the United States. In paragraph @NUM1 it says ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrafice"". This shows his parents were loving and made sacrafices for their children to have a good life. In paragraph @NUM2 it says ""they struggled both personally and financially"". This shows they cared about their family because they sacraficed things to struggle & make their family happy. In conclusion, the mood is being caring and loving.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10239,4,"In the story “Winter Hibiscus” by Minfong Ho, I think the author concludes the story with this paragraph because it shows her determination. Saeng is having problems with both adjusting and adapting to the changes in her new life. we see an example of this when Saeng comes home with her flower, “she found that she was still too shaky to say the words at home, lest she burst into tears again.” we see that Saeng bought the flower because it made her feel securit. It was something from home that felt familiar to her and I believe thats why she included the story with this paragraph because next year she will have a sense of security and familiarity when taking the test because the experience she had will be making again.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13328,5,"This was a touching story of how this boy appreciates his family and parents so much. There is a mood through the story.Home to this boy is about family and relationships. He talks about how he liked the kitchen and cooking, just like his mother and father. That is a mood of happiness.The kitchen is why he loves. He talks about his Cuban culture and how he appreciates his parents bravery to come to @LOCATION1.The mood is mostly appreciation in the story. He is very appreciative.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10184,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph because is symbolizes the hope that things will get better. The author ends with hope because the flower symbolizes the girl and the girl saying that if the flower can survive the year. So can she. This symbolizes hope because the girl is realizing that it is going to take time before she can adapt to her new country but eventually she will. This is meaningful because the girl considers the day that she had to be horrible and that this statement ends the day on a good note. The girl spends the entire day wishing that she were back in her own country and missing her grandmother and friends. But this paragraph is the girl vowing a promise to her self that she will withstand the winter until spring and it will get better when she can take the test again. The entire story builds up to this turning point when Saeng realizes that she will make it through this struggle just like this flower will make it through the winter. Saeng realizes that it is going to take time for her to adapt to this new and strange country and the new lifestyle that she must adopt,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3305,2,"Why should books or other such ideas but lets get back to the subject. Should certain books be aloud to be in a libary. Cause if u dont have certain books you would have to read the same book over and over. But there are all kinds of books that you can pick you have history,poems,dramas,love,scary. But some are not aporpit for certain places. Certain music is ok but there are some that I would not aprove of. Like there rap its a bunch of people rymes. That people think up in there heads about life. Something that they want to express by telling raping. There is rock in roll alot of people did not care for it. When it was intruduces in the late @NUM1 but as time went on people started listening to it. But alot of people did not want there kids listening. To that back then they said it was devil music. But in this day in age alot of people still listen to rock n roll. Cause they were brought up on that kind of music. Movies there is a lot of diffent movies out there. There @NUM2 and rated @CAPS1 but alot of partents do not let there kids. Watch certain movies because they scare there kids. They are so ugly and gross that some people cant stand it. But there are shows for kids to there like a movie but a little shorter. Magazines just are a new thing that people are trying out. But mostly old people read magazines cause they have alot of time on there hands. But there are some people who cant get ehogh of magazines. Cause they want to buy every thing in the book. It catchs there eyes bye the way it looks . But there is all kinds of diffent magazines mucle, food ,cleaning, toys. But thats what I think about this kind . Of stuff it sucks people in but some cant get out. By the time they get out they are broke",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3945,2,"We all find things offensive, wether it be in a book, magazine, movie, cd, tv show, or a newspaper article. Libraries hold all of those items and somepeople @MONTH1 or @MONTH1 not want to remove the items that they think are offensive, but would that be right? If everyone went to the library and took everything that they thought was offensive off the shelves, we would have nothing left. Maybe writers should just cut down on things that are innapropriate, racist, or things that include foul language. Then not as many people would be offended and they would not have any problems with letting their children pick out books on their own. Although, it @MONTH1 not be the writers at fault here. It @MONTH1 be the readers. Some people should just stop taking everything so seriously, then they would not have to worry about things like what their children are reading. Yes most adult things now are innapropriate for children, but that's why it is for adults. Children have their own selection of books and movies. And parents need to realize that maybe they should take their kids to the childrens section. All types of entertainment are categorized by age and people should start paying more attention to that. If parents started watching what their kids do, then they would not be worrying about the reading or watching something they should not be. That is what parents are for, taking care of their children and some people do not do a very good job of that. If there is a book you read and it is something you do not want your child to read, it is probably something you read when you were older, so do not worry about it until they get to that age. And maybe then it would be ok of they read it, because they are old enough to realize right from wrong. Parents can not always control what their children do. And if they do by chance pick up the book their parents never wanted them to read, they @MONTH1 see it in a different way than their mother of father did and they @MONTH1 learn a very valuable lesson from it.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 345,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, Have you ever thought about all the intresting things you can do on computers such as call people, order groceries, and read books for school. Today it seems like the world is held together by technology and I think computers are at number one. ""@CAPS1 my older sister moved to @CAPS2 it was hard to keep intuch and see eachother, but we found out about @ORGANIZATION1, which is a site where people all over can add people and chat, call, or webcam eachother, so we do that everyday and it's like she never left home."" @PERSON2 says about the internet site @ORGANIZATION1. @CAPS4 sure @PERSON2 and a lot of others love their computers. Studies show that @NUM1 out of @NUM2 people get more done in the day online @PERSON1 says ""everyday my day is shortened because my @CAPS3 because while at work I can order my groceries and have them delivered by four o clock @CAPS1 I arive home from work I can make doctor apt, school apts and schedul meetings all with one touch/click where ever I go, instead of looking on the calander or picking up the phone. @PERCENT1 of couples today say they met online via twitter, facebook, myspace or aol. The internet is great for meeting new people because you @CAPS4 eachother and get to know one another or look at their profile pictures and things. You cand find peolple just like you online and after a while the two of you are friends. I have some of my best friends online through a mutual friend's page and it's a sucessful friendship today. Even schools took education to the web, with all books from a class avalible at home online. Students can even check grades online now and recieve comment from teachers. So now students are pushed to use the web at home and at school. I hope I have opened your mind a little to understand the internet is not all bad, and people spend so much time on them now because everything has moved to the web like school, stores, food, even tv you name it the web has it. Personaly I spend about an hour or two on the web chating, studying, watching tv. After I might go walk or play my @CAPS5 but i'll still conected to the web because the @CAPS5 picks up on wi-fi connections. So I think computers let you open up and connect with others and get other things done on the web. I hope by now you feel the same",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9026,4,The reason why I feel the authour ended the story with this paragraph is because she is showing how the charater has matured and how the charater grew in her circumstance. This shows that because you failed once doesn’t mean your going to fail again. Also it’s okay to feel out of place there is alway going to be a time in life where a new beginning is going to start so it is your choice to take that chance or be stuck in your own ways but the decision is always up to you.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9842,4,The author conclude this saying it to the story because he thought it would go because at valkay about how the hibisuse a yet budding in the winter & and how all at the geese will return to the home and stay there because they hate the winter. ,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1195,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3, @CAPS4 having everything known to man at your fingertips. @CAPS4 having an endless source of information in your own home. Wouldn’t you want all of this all the time? The question then is, do computers have positive effects on people? I strongly believe computers do benefit society. Firstly, computers teach you hand-eye coordination. The main way is by typing. When you type, you start of looking at the keys but eventually you memorize all the locations of the keys. Also, computer games teach hand-eye coordination. If you weren't looking at the screen, would it be possible to win the game? When computers teach you hand-eye coordination, you can use it for other things too. For example, you definitely need it in sports or more. Specifically, baseball. If you didn't have good hand-eye coordination, you wouldn't be able to catch the ball or be able to hit the ball when you swing. Hand-eye coordination very important. Secondly, computers give people the ability to form about places and people. When people are deciding when to get vacation, they go in the internet. What there is in do. Why would you travel in a place is you back. Many use the internet in research other countries. When the eight grade did reports their information. Eighty seven percent the internet. Finally; some people say computers take away from interaction with family and friends, but computers actually allow you to tell with other family and friends around the world. Wouldn't it be wonderful to with your loved ones in a different state of country? The main way of online communication is @CAPS5-mail or @CAPS6 @CAPS7. These allow you to send someone a message faster and easier. It is much easier in remember someone @CAPS5-mail address than it is a phone settle for just talking, when you can actually see the person? It would be like them being in the room with you. Computers are a great way to talk to someone. Why wait any longer? Computers are a great way to refine your hand-eye coordination skills. You can research Faraway people and places to see what life is like around the globe. Most importantly, you can communicate with family and friends online through @CAPS8, @CAPS5-mail, or @CAPS10. Definitely, computers benefit society. So go and share this information with other people to convince them that computers are positive.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12455,5,The author set a mood for this memoir. The mood he has set is love and kindness. The reason love and kindness is the mood because he says he loves his parents for self sacrifice so that he could grow up in the @CAPS1 of @CAPS2. The mood is of kindness too because he thinks his parents are kind for letting anyone into their door.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1481,1,"Dear Local @CAPS1 @CAPS2, I would wont computors because it benifits our society. It helps on learn about countries around the world and whats going on. For example if you wanted to no about it's sports, you can just type in name. Also a computer can help you with your education. If you were working on a homework assingment and you needed some help you can just go on the computor. It is also very benifial because student can have lots of fun playing games on the comput say like it's a cold rainy day and there is nothing to do, a kid can get some entertainment by going on the computer. It is also a good way to communicate with you friends. For example, facebook, @CAPS3, twitter, and email one all good sources of communication. Also it is good for if you have a xbox or a @NUM1 you need a computer you need to hook up a card to your computer so you can play online with your friend. It's good to have computors in school. Is teachers want some students to go on a website to learn something it is a very helpful source. It is also a good in source because in school if your working on this big project a computer can help you do it. I hope these one all good reason to have computer in our society, and it will benifit us in a number a differnt ways",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12322,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir. First, the mood of history is that the author wanted represent the history of a family that came to @LOCATION1. Second, the history is nice because the son of the family was born in the @LOCATION1, and the author tried to represent the nationality of a @CAPS1 that the parents are other nationality, they Know how to live with son.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4087,2,"Some people do not like the fact that there are books on the shelf that they consider offensive. People argue to get the corruptive books, magazines, movies off the shelves. The customers have the choice not to check out the material, it's not their place to try to get the object removed from the shelf. People that go to the library have the choice to read the book or not, if they have heard bad reviews about the book then they can just ignore it. The books on the shelves in public libraries are there for a reason, and its not to be taken off just because some people dont care for it. Reasons might be that the book goes against beliefs of religion, or just the way those people view things, but that still does not give them the right to remove the book from the shelf. Everybody has different likeings and tastes when it comes to books. Because a book is not up to one person's standards does not mean that it is not up to another person's. Beliefs and standards differ from person to person and that is why the likeing of books is different to most everybody. Most people are worried about their children reading the books that they find offensive. If your child is looking for books to read and they pick out one of the books you dont want them reading then tell them that the book is innapropriate. The kid will most likely listen to you and put the book back, that is a much better technique than trying to get the book removed. Removing a book from the shelf is completely unfair to the other people who visit the library. Everybody should have the right to read what they want and have the choice to ignore the books that they choose not to read. When looking for a book, magazine, movie, etc., and you run across one you find innapropriate then ignore it and continue with your day, it's as simple as that",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9724,4,In the story “winter Hibiscus” by Minfong Ho the character Saeng had many obstacles to overcome. In the end of the story Saeng vows to herself when winter is over she will take the test again. I think that the author ends the story like that to foreshadow the future for Saeng It seems like the author is trying to say Saeng will be taking time to adjust to her new lifestyle and focus on other things before she takes the test again. It also shows that Saeng has a lot of courage to complete what she has once failed. The perserverance in Saeng shows and will help her overcome many things in her new country. In the text when Saeng's mother starts to dig a hole she says “let me help mother.” This shows her love towards her mother and her care for the plant that represents her pastime. So in the end of the story adding the vow was a good way to show Saeng’s commitment.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16173,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building had hopes of making this building a dock for dirigibles but were faced with several obstacles. Starting in paragraph @NUM1 the aspiration of the mast on the Empire State Building made the plan seem well put together and it would soon become a reality. As the project progressed many details went looked over and when the dirigibles were ready to take action the plan was not something forageable. Stated in paragraph @NUM2, safety was a huge issue for the dirigibles made outside of the United States, because they contained the flamable gas hydrogen. This is a problem because of the fear of an accident occuring in a highly populated area. Another obsticle dirigibles faced while trying to have a dock on the Empire State Building was nature itself as presented in paragraph @NUM3. The winds on the top of the building had violent currents that were constantly shifting. The problem with the air would have the dirigibles constantly spinning around the building by its back end. This made it unsafe for passengers to get on and of and also the cargo. The greatest obstacle for dirigibles trying to dock on the Empire State Building is the existing law against flying too low over urban areas, which is found in paragraph @NUM4. By a dirigible docking it would be directly breaking the law.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13260,5,"In the memoir the author creates a mood. Narciso Rodriguez tells about their childhood, and their home. This creates a mood in the reader of being home and warmth of family and love.@CAPS1 this memoir gave a feeling of home, or being in the home of a Cuban family. Almost as if who ever was @CAPS1 it knew them. It gave a feeling of hospitality and love. For example in paragraph to the author talks about the home, food, music, etc. In the end of of the paragraph it said all those things formed the backdrop to life in our warm home.Throughout the memoir it speaks about family, friends, and neighbors. This gives a feel of hospitality, for example ""My parents always kept their arms and door open to the many people we considered family.""@CAPS1 this memoir creates a mood in the reader. Mostly of hospitality, but also of love, warmth, and friendship. As if you know the Rodriguez family, and you're entering their home.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10065,4,"I believe the author used that statement to end the story because by the end Saeng was ready to face her obstacles again, also it shows that she was apprechiating her new environment. The plant that Saeng purchased her mother stated that, “it’s strong enough to make it through the cold months here” @CAPS1 it’s telling Saeng if the plant can make it through the harsh conditions then just maybe you can make it through living in a new country. When Saeng relized that things had a repeation season upon season she must had reliced that she can do it too, and face the driving test again.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10262,4,Because planting flowers and wasting on the garden is @CAPS1 hobby. And without it she can’t think clearly or creating. So there fore waiting until they are back will make her happier also she able to do her work.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3138,2,"In libraries, there should not be censorship on materials considering that it's an individual's decision to read what they prefer. There is no appropriate standard on what makes a book offensive to a group, so it should be undetermined as to what makes a book offensive. In a public library, many children, who the books are censored for, are with their parents. Parents should make an independent choice on what they can allow their children to read. Letting society ban a book simply for the use of inappropriate materials is ridiculous. If an author spent time creating a story, it should be appreciated, and should not put on a list of no-nos. If a certain person doesn't like a book's reputation, all they have to do is not read it. Even in school systems, librarians are there to guide kids to read good books. If a child wants to read an inappropriate book, the librarian will most likely discourage him or her not to read it. In my experience, I wanted to read a book that my mother suggested to me, but as I went to the school library it turned out to be a censored book. Some parents believe children should be ignorant about offensive things written in books, but honestly many of the same ideas are exploited to them everyday on television and internet. So trying to shield your child from the bad things @MONTH1 be a great thing, but the efforts are usually failed attempts. It also never occurs to the people censoring the books, that some people can't afford to buy the books they want to read. The libraries, for some, are the main means for getting books. To conclude there is very little reason to ban a book from the shelves. Many of the books banned have important lessons that can be obtained through reading it. If a person doesn't like a book, the simplest thing to do is not to pick it up.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9075,4,"Minfong Ho concluded the story “Winter Hibiscus” with a strong paragraph to show the passion and will of Saeng in her new home to complete the test. When the closing sentences states that Saeng “vowed” to pass the test, it shows her determination to fight. This will could be from the memories of her grandmother and the flowers that reminded her so closely of her old home. Saengs courage to face her homesickness is the seed of the story, and by ending it with such a bold statement, Minfong Ho blooms this seemingly sad tale into a story of willpower and drive to pass her test. “Winter Hibiscus” is a passage of heartache, despair, and yerning for a past life. By closing the story with the uplifting promise from Saeng, Minfong Ho puts a happy ending to a possibly sad tale.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1583,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2 I think it's a good thing that people spend so much time on computers. One reason for this is when you type you learn hand-eye corrdination. Another reason computer time is a good time could be is it saves money on other things. The last reason is because you can do things in seconds on a computer that would normaly take hours. Hand-eye coordination is an importand thing: for example you're walking down the street when a baseball flys at you, your able to cach it because of all the time you have bin on the computer has taught you hand-eye coordination. Their are lots of ways to get it, like playing sports, writting, or just playing with your thumbs but learning to type is by far the best way because you'll use the skill while you'r a kids and an adult, @CAPS3 trouble paying your phone bill? Guss what you don't need a phone, why not use your computer to call people sensa its free. Also you wont really need a cell phone because you can do everything that can do quicker on a computer anwway. Last of all its harder for poeple to steel or you to lose a computer as to a cell phone. Have you ever got upset when treing to look for a peice of in formation in a book? Well you can be done with the hours of looking if you just use a computer, then you can get outside, and play games. Most of the time it takes me hours to do my homework, but is I had a computer it probly only take me minutes to do it. So for hand-eye coordination, having trouble with bills and it takeing to long to look thing up by other means I think its good that people spent and i hope you agree.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15016,6,"Some of the obstacles the builders of the Empire State building faced were the winds in the high altitudes, the laws that didn't allow airships to be so close to an urban area, the safety of the passengers, and the safety of the pedestrians below.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3963,2,"Many Libraries today have limits on what they can put on their shelves. Yes, their is offensive material out there in the world but, its just artists triing to make a name for themselves. If we start controlling each others thoughts, feelings, and artist ability where will that get our culture that is rapidly expanding? Libraries should not have the right to censor material. One way to appeal to everyones demands would be to divide the library into two major sections childrens and adults and then you could contiue dividing sections. Doing this would be cost-effective and adding a age limit in the adult section so no noisy children could get into there would be nice. It would help making finding a book easier for finding that right book. Censorship is defined as taking out a paticular item, thats either offensive to a certain group or is banned. If someone took out @PERSON2's @PERSON3 statue and other peices of work, we wouldnt get where we would be today. If you take out material you never know where it could go or lead someone. Censorship holds back many artists true potential. Limiting someones knowledge could hurt that persons chance at becoming something in this world. I have read many books that are both offensive in ways and other books about knowledge and intelligence and their is no difference. Many things interest different people. The author Katherine Paterson's quote explains this all to well if someone has a right to remove a book from the shelf than everyone has a right to remove a material off a shelve and so there would be no books left. Censoring something not only hurts the person who created it but hurts everyone else. Libraries should not censorship any material. Censoring material hurts everyones yearn for a open mind or a better understanding of something. As Katherine Paterson's quote goes 'All of us can think of a book that we hope none our children or any other children have taken off the shelf. But if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf---that work I abhor- then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' @CAPS1 explains that if one person has a right to take a material off a shelf than everyone else has that right. Censorship shouldnt be in libraries.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 579,1,"Dear, Newspaper I believe that the use of computer is so horrorable thing for the people of the world. I think this because they don't exercise enjoy the great outdoors and have good time with family and friends. When you are on the computer you are not exercising you body. This is a problem because @CAPS2 this ""no exercising"" thing does stop the life span could be greatly shorten. @CAPS1 @CAPS2 this doesn't stop more and more children will grow larger and not healthy. So the children care more about the internet the being healthy. @CAPS3 expert @PERSON1 said ""@PERCENT1 of children in school today are over @NUM1 pounds in grades @NUM2, when it should be only a average of @NUM3 pounds or less in grades @NUM2."" @CAPS1 @CAPS2 the computer craze does not stop kids will continue not to go out side and get to have some fun. Smart parensts are wanting their children to have fun in the back yard. @CAPS2 children are inside and not out side they with not get vitimans from the sun. The experts at @ORGANIZATION1 said ""@CAPS2 the children do not stop going on computers then they with never see the true beauty of the outdoors."" @CAPS3 you can see nature is some thing children need. Interacting with friends and family is important for everyone. Because @CAPS2 one family member is having a health problem and has to go to the hospital no one is there to be with them because they never talk to each other. One year I found out the my great grandmother died of cancer. I had no idea that she had cancer. And I wish I was at the hospital with her. But wasn't because me and her never talked. Don't let that kind of thing happen to you talk and have fun with you friends and family. So @CAPS3 you can see that the use of computers is horrorable because you life can end sooner, your children get fat, and you drift apart from you friends and family. So don't let this happen to anyone else. Tell everyone.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7082,3,"The cyclist is riding through the high deserts in California. In this environment everything looks the same for miles. The cyclist is dehydrated and is getting worse because he has no protection from the sun. It is hard for the cyclist to keep in good spirits because he is not even coming across any towns or sources of water. The cyclist says “About forty miles into the pedal, I arrived at the first ‘town.’ This place might have been a thriving little spot at one time- say before the last world war- but on that morning it fit the traditional definition of a ghost town.” This made the cyclist doubt the old timers directions. In the wide open desert, the cyclist was only coming across something after at least twenty miles. The heat, lack of water, and lack of civilization made the cyclist think he was “going to die and the birds would pick [him] clean. When the cyclist spots the abandoned Welch’s factory, the cyclist says they used what seemed to be their last bit of energy. The conditions affected the cyclist",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16034,6,"There were many obstacles that got in the way of landing dirigibles on the Empire State Building. Most of these had to do with the framework of the building and safety. Workers encountered obstacles with the new plan of mooring blimps even before they started constructing. To be able to support the air crafts, the frame of the building would have to be ""modified and strengthened,"" or else there was no way the building would stay standing. Safety was the main issue with fulfilling the plan to moor blimps to the Empire State Building. After everything was built and finished, it was soon realized that the ""mooring mast was destined to never fulfill its purpose"". Some reasons for this were because foreign dirigibles were made mostly of hydrogen, which is highly flammable and extremely unsafe. Also, just attaching a dirigible to the mast would be dangerous due to winds that were ""constantly shifting due to violent air currents"". Not only was unsafe to moor dirigibles to the tallest building in the world, but it was also illegal. Airships were not allowed to fly to low over populated areas. After the construction of the mooring mast, it was soon realized that would never be used.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7649,3,"In the essay by Joe Kurmaskie many obstacles are caused from the diffrent settings. For example, the hot temperature caused the character to get dehydrated. He recalled “ I eased past, trying to keep my balance in my dehydrated state. ” This caused the loss of determination, which led to him lossing his consciousness. The hills he had to cycle also effected him. They caused him to become tired and weak and to lose his determination, as well. Just like the temperature problem, the loss of determination could eventually make him lose consciousness. He said “ if it looked like i was going to lose consciousness for the last time.” ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10053,4,"I think the author ends the story like this becuose of Saeng's respect for the plant. Not only does she see the plant as a simple of her home but also as a symble of good luck. In the text she holds the plant in a very high value, having payed @NUM1 coins for it, So I think it ends like this to symbolize that Saeng believes that the best time to take the test is when the hibiscus is growing.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 943,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, Computers are a vital source for anyone's household. Many people have busy lives and having a computer at home make it easer. You can use it for research, organization, and business matters. I don’t know what I would do without one. Education is very important especially in our economy today. The computer makes work and studying fast and simple. When you need to research a topc for school there is always an endless library of information @CAPS6 you turn on the computer. You @CAPS7 get your information from books, and encyclopedias but it is rare that you always have time, to get to a local library. Also, @CAPS6 you have a project in school that you need to type, it is helpful to have a computer at home so you don't have to use at short. This way, you have more time to get extra from teachers @CAPS3 on instrument in the school band. I can imagine that my grades would be @CAPS6 i did have access to the internet of @CAPS4 @CAPS5 at home. Have you over pare or document and had an of her and happens @CAPS6 you own a computer you can backup @CAPS7 you imagine on essay five pages and organized is boring, biut you wouldn't think so @CAPS6 it saved you from hours worth of writing! For some people, having a computer @CAPS7 make you money, and who wouldn't like more money? You can run a business online and avoid the hastle of manting a @CAPS8 your own space or building to run your business can be quite expensive and time-consuming. Also, you can refrain from making a trip from the store by purchasing items online. Then, the item will be shipped to your door. You save time and money on gas by doing so. And thise days, any way to save money is a good one! By having a computer you can boost your education.Keep yourself organized, and save money. Although it has many recreational purposes as well, it also can be very helpful in your life. And besides, is perfectly fine, to go online to talk to your friends once in a while, isn't it?",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12476,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives, the mood created by the author in the memoir were happy and loveing. Happy is one of the moods because there are many happy memories in the memoir. ""... endless celebrations..."". Love is one of the moods because in a familey most of the time you love each other. ""I will always be grateful to my parent for their love and sacrifice."" @CAPS1 on the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez from Home: The @CAPS2 of Our Lives the moods created by the author in the memor were happy and loveing.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12551,5,The mood of this story is very happy because the author is describing his childhood memories and all the great times he had in his home. He says over and over that he loved his home when he was a kid and enjoyed hanging with his family. Also the mood of this story is very loving. The author talks about how he realized the true meaning of family in his house. Plus he talks about how much his parents sacrificed for him to be happy,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16044,6,"In the passage, The Mooring Mast, Marcia Amidon Lüsted discusses several adversities and obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced when attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One of their many obstacles they faced, was ""the lack of a suitable landing area. Dirigibles moored in open landing fields could be weighed down in the back with lead weights, but using these at the Empire State Building, where they would be dangling high above pedestrians on the street, was niether practical nor safe."" However before thinking of landing dirigibles, architects had to figure out a way to get the mooring mast on top of the building. They ""could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the building's flat roof."" @CAPS1 ""the steel frame of the building would have to be modified and strengthened."" Most of the problems were avoidable, except for that ""the winds on the top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents.""",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7123,3,The setting is in a California which isn’t really the coolest of places to be.[temperature],,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 331,1,"Dear @CAPS1, A recent study by scientists shows that too much sitting down, especially in front of computers is dagerous to health. This is only one reason why I think that, although they are useful, computers are not entirely beneficial to our society. The hinder us from excersising, interacting with nature, and spending time with family and friends. Excercising, as we all know, is necessary to remain as a fit and health human being. But how is this possible with some people going to work everyday and getting shut in their offices at their computers all day. Too much computer time even for kids, can lead to obesity and overweightness. Also, like I mentioned before scientists have concluded asked, that too much sitting is bad for you. It isn't how the body was built to work. If you have seen wave, one of @ORGANIZATION1's most recent movies, undertaking is easy. The humans in that movie, after relying on computers for so long, became obese and fat and had no muscle. This is an of course, but minor visions of this are going around the world. Going out do instead of sitting a computer is a sure way to healthy. The next thing that computers restrict us in is our ability to experience nature. Even simulations don't cut it. If you wanted to see a frog or of some other animal, can't just @ORGANIZATION2 it, look for it in the real. Developing a connection to nature can really nurture the use of that is and ill. Instead of exploring a computer, explore the world as we know it until it's or you're too old. Learn how to do somthing by. Instead of hiring someone to make at, make it yourself. Do it to learn it, sit at a computer website to hire someone! Get up and get outside! As you become more dependent on your computer, you become less dependent on family and friends. It causes there to be a lift between family members. Your family might not be able to help you when you're in need. If you're an adult, and you're on the computer all the time for something other than work, then your not supporting your family, you have no income, no life, and no future. Why would anyone do this to themselves? Imagine this!:You have nothing except your laptop. You're a , on and have family relations. Nobody wants to be that kind of loser living on the streets! You have nobody and nothing except for your computer, and you've wasted your life away. Too much time on your computer means that everyone suffers. To sum it all up, computers maybe, but every single cloud has a dark lining. Computers stop us from exercising, interacting with nature, and being with our families. So get outside!",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3615,2,"No because all people like to read different books. Some of the books that people want taken off bookshelves are considered to be part of history.Books help people advance in their reading skills and also help them find new things out. When I was in middle school I always liked to read @PERSON1 and @PERSON2 books. When I asked the librarian if they had any of their books they said no. They thought that kids in middle school shouldn't be reading books with cuss words in them and vilence. I don't think it should matter what kids read because you can't make a kid read something that he's not interested in because everybody is different all people like different types of books. Theres all kinds of books like for example theres mystery books, fiction books, non-fiction books, historical books, etc. The books you use in classrooms are considered books but there not books you read everyday. I think parents should take their kids to the public library to get a book.When I was in elementry and through junior high we had to take reading tests on the computer.In seventh and eighth grade we had to sit around the room and take a book and read it for part of the hour. We also a challenge in middle school to see which school could read the most. That was part of our grade in our english class. It was never a problem for me because i loved to read.Now there are some books that libraries should take off the shelves. For example any book that involves nudity or lots of vilance. Now thats just for kids that are under the age of thirteen. Now there isn't that many of books out there for little kids to read. Theres more adult books than little kids books.All I have to say is that watch what your kids read. Don't keep them from reading books because that will effect them later on in life. If they don't like to read persuade them to try it. I also think that more kids would read if they seen their relatives reading too. Just remember kids and adults of all ages reading is a good thing no matter what you decide to read.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 8982,4,"The authoR concludes the stoRy with this paRagRaph because he is saying that Saeng likes to do thing in the spring when she sees flowers gRowing because she feels like she is at home, so she feel moRe confident. about passing the test.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9613,4,"People have to adapt to different cultures if they move. They could do this in a variety of ways, including making new friends and adjusting to the area. However, when adjusting to a new area, you should still remember your past home as well. This is what Minfong Ho is trying to display in the ending paragraph of the story, ""Winter Hibiscus”. In the story, a teenage girl named Saeng moved from Vietnam to the @LOCATION2 She has various rememberances of her past home while visiting a plant store. She buys a plant that was common in Vietnam and plants it in her garden. The last paragraph of the story says “In the spring, when the snow melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that driving test again”. This shows Saeng’s desire to fit in with this culture, by taking the driving test, as well as remember her past, by keeping the flower. This last paragraph summarizes Saeng’s emotion for her old country as well as her determination to succeed here.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3497,2,"'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf.' @CAPS1 does that mean well I guess it means if their is a book on the shelf then they probly dont want their children to get a hold of it. Maybe there parents should look at the books first or maybe they should have taken it off the shelf. I think all books that have offensive stuff in them should be taken off the shelf.If I was going to take books off the shelf it would only be the offensive science fiction books. If @CAPS3 based on a true story and @CAPS3 offensive it should be heard anywise because @CAPS3 part of history. Everyone needs to hear it because @CAPS3 true. If I was going to take music off the shelf it would only be the ones with a lot of bad language. For movies children should only whach @CAPS2 rated movies and nothing else. For magazines children should not read magazines they should be taken off the shelfs.The experiences I had with all these things when I was a child was my parents never let me whach anything or listen with anything with bad language. But I could read any book I wanted to. It was in a book @CAPS3 not like I could onder stand @CAPS1 that bad ward ment.I think @PERSON1 saying is that she wants to keep all books on the shelf because she said 'you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' I think the point can go ether way because she says everyone has the same rights. And then she states that their wont be any books left for us. I think that means every book is bad if shes saying @CAPS1 i think shes saying.Their is a way to leave the books, music, movies, magazines, etc., on the shelfs. Like I sayed in the first pargraph there parents need to pay more attention to their children. And no @CAPS1 their reading. To sum it all up I say take them off the shelfs.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13521,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is a combonation of calm, nice, and happy. It could also be described as heavenly.Narciso reffers to his childhood like it was one happy dream. ""Here, the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and the endless celebrations that encompassed both, form the backdrop to life in our warm home"". He also mentions how greatful he is to his parents. ""I will always be greatful to my parents for their love and sacrifice"". One last fact that contributes to the mood of this memoir, is Narciso's view on family. ""Growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relative... In our neighborhood, despite customs elsewhere, all of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship"".From this excerpt it is clear that the author cherish this time, and would love to go back.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1551,1,"Dear local newspaper- I understand that computers are becoming more of a ""must have"" in peoples everyday life. I believe this is a great thing! If you're on the computer you type which helps improve peoples hand-eye coordination. Also, you can learn more about people, places, cultures and much more. Lastly, you can communicate online with other friends or even meet new people. To begin, I think having computers is a good idea because it helps people improve on their handeye coordination. My cousin @PERSON3, who is a big time baseball player, used to have trouble catching the when he was younger. He kept trying over and over again and never gave up. Then, for his birthday his parents bought him a computer! He was so excited, but when it came to typing papers, he wasn't the best. Not only did he practice baseball but also typing. His family realized that buying him that computer was of the best ideas. It improved his baseball career (by throwing and catching the ball) and increased his grades in school. However, @PERSON3 is not the only one that has gained hand eye coordination from computers. A recent study from yale college shows that @PERCENT1 of people that use the computer for atleast a month gains some sort of hand eye coordination. @PERSON1, a teacher of the computer class at high school states, ""@CAPS1 freshman that I get in my class tells me that computers have made their sports careers easier because they now have better hand eye coordination."" Computers have two things in one, you learn to type and help your hand eye coordination. Do you want you @CAPS3 to be lacking that positive ability in life? In addition, computers help you learn more about people, places and cultures. I heard a couple nights ago that @ORGANIZATION2 had an earthquake. I also learned about the powerplant explosion in @LOCATION2, @LOCATION1. How do I know all of this you ask? The front page on @CAPS2.com! But, i'm not the only one who has gained this knowledge from the internet, so many more have too. @ORGANIZATION1 took a poll about how many @CAPS3 use the computer to do research and @PERCENT2 answered that they did. Does the society really want to take away @CAPS3 knowledge of whats going on around us and our history? In conclusion, people can communicate with friends and relatives. This is great if you haven't seen them recently, or if you want to just stay in touch. For example, @PERSON4, mycousin, just found me on facebook. I haven't seen her for eight years abut now I talk to her all the time. We talk about visiting each other and how our family's are doing. But, you can also talk to your friends too. Studies show that @PERCENT3 of @CAPS3 between the ages of eleven and eighteen talk to their friends over facebook on a daily basis. Dr. @PERSON2, a teen psychiatrist, says ""I think this is a great idea for @CAPS3 to communicate with other @CAPS3 through the computer. It gives them the chance to interact in a different way."" @CAPS3 have such a good lifestyle for them, do you want to feel guilty for ruining that? Finally, people have perfect opportunities right in front of them. Computers help improve hand eye coordination and helps you learn. It also lets people interact with others in a different way. Do you think that these golden ideas are bad for our society?",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 824,1,"Dear editor, I hear you are looking for your citizens opinion in if computers are bad or good. @CAPS1 opinion is computers are bad. I think computers are bad in three ways and I want to express them to your and hopefully persuade you into going towards @CAPS1 side. Smell nice out to day. I can smell flowers, the grass, and many more, @CAPS1 first reason why computers are bad is if you use the computer to much you don't see enough of enjoying nature. Nature is beautiful, it has @CAPS2, green grass, rainbows (sometimes). You can make a walk of in the moons and just be yourself and be by yourself. In other words nature is very nice and you should set out and enjoy it. If you don't enjoy nature it might be no late, because soon it become and rainy and then, yes fem has flabberlasting colors, but what comes after fall, winter. Winter is not nice, it is cold. You work, because you need to shovel the drive way and your car off and that can get very tire some. The goof of is you can get those chorse. Oh not that make me to. @CAPS1 next reason why computers are bad. When was a good smile run. @CAPS1 next reason why I think computers are bad is spend all working and no time exersing. Excersing is a very fun thing to do, you fel to go outside. Hang with friends, any many shore. Exercise is a main way of staying healthy. don't you can really get unhealthy, and sick and his dies, die i have a friend whom nothing use. The computer his body rest weaker and weaker so exercise ias am main piece of staing healthy. there are many ways to health you can bike, run, walk, rog canate, climb a mountain, etc. The posibilitys are endless while exercesing in the park you never knew you can meet. car's fast say your friend, ""yo sup man,"" ""not, you"" ""not much, just fiding around for some exercise"" ""same here, same here"" see you never know who you can meet in the park now that was @CAPS1 friend. he is alwasys here, out how as you think, yep in the same park. I wouldn't have met him if i was insine on the computer. Like i said be what was @CAPS1 friend. But since I come here every day i can meet a new friend every day maybe. So @CAPS1 last reason why I think the computer is bad is because you don't get enough interacting time with friends and family. I love @CAPS1 family but I interact with them. If they are exercising who if i am here on the computer. no one can. In conclusion I think the computer are bad because you can not get enought time exercising, enjoying nature, and spending @CAPS3 time with family and friends.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 25,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 off, I beileve that computers are very helpfull to many people by looking up information, or talking to friends. Although many kids should be spending their time outside, the computer is a well-occupied environment that helps kids learn and interact with others. I believe kids should have the right to stay on the computer as long as they desire. Although, they should always make time go outside, hang out with friends, ect. The computer @MONTH1 be fun but its always important to get outside and enjoy nature. Another reason why students should not spend all their time on the computer is because of their health. If a child gets addicted to the computer it will affect how he interacts with other and @MONTH1 do serious damage to their brain. Although, I believe children should have the right on the computer, it's always important to spend time outside enjoying nature. Another reason why I think children should have the right to the computer is because of the information they learn and discover. Many kids grow up to have a career in computer makings or program designing. Some kids @MONTH1 have their education online or to teach others. The computer is a non-stop generation of intelligence based to help people learn, play and discover. Many people have dream to one day build a computer or make new programs. All students should have the right to spend time on the computer but also to save time to spend outside and with friends. Everyone has their own perspective on how they think and if staying on the computer all day is a good thing. I do not think kids should do this because it might affect their health and how other think of them.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3888,2,"Should offenive material be censored? No, censoring books, music, movies, magazines, etc. takes away from our freedom as an american citizen. If you think books should be censored, then think about this. Would they take 'hell' or 'damned' out of the bible because those words are considered offensive? I do not think so, those words give power to the book. @CAPS1 books, considered offensive, are an insigh to history and culture. Taking away these books will limit education. Books should not be censored. I very resent and much talked about case of censorship is the popular book '@ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1.' The book tells the story of a young white boy running off with an older black man. In the story, the word 'nigger' is used frequently. A lot of people were offended by the using of this word, so they republished a new version of the book, replacing 'nigger' with 'slave.' @CAPS1 people were happy with the word change, but others felt that by censoring the word they were taking away a very vital part of the story. I agree with the latter statement. The story's setting was back when black people were slaves and known as niggers. I agree that the word nigger carries a heavy connotaion, but that is the purpose of using the word. The author used it so that the reader could get a feel for what life was like back then. When thinking about the coming generations, who will not know about slavery or black oppression, the book gives a raw insight into how life was for a black man. The word itself is a symbolism of slavery, without it, the book is not as powerful. Censorship is a fine line, and everybody has a different place where they draw that line. The story of @ORGANIZATION1 is just one example of censorship. On television, nudity and language is censored when dubbed inappropriate. It should be up to the parent to decide which books there child should read, which magazines they should buy, and which television programs they should watch. If the parent sees the book as offensive or think that there child should not read it, then they should be the ones who makes sure their child does not read it. The books should not be taken of the shelf because they will entertain and educate other children or parents. Books should not be censored, if a person does not think the book is appropriate, then they do not have to read it.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10257,4,"When the author concluded the narrative by when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and the hibiscus is budding, then I will take test again demonstrates the ability to overcome obstacles, finding comfort in a time of disappointment, and her connection to her past experiences. First, it demostrates the ability to overcome obstacles because they are obstacles in everyone lives, and you don’t have a choice to conquer them because there are unlimited. So the hibiscus flower represents the obsticles and the weather represent time because weather is stopping the flower to bloom and bloosom. Secondly, it also represent the finding of comfot in a time of disappointment because when you have going through an obstacle you would find disappointment there lingering. However she knows that the hibiscus will be coming back and she have the awareness of the obstacles coming back. Finally, it asserts her connection to her past experience because she is trapped in a world that she is not familiar with, which would make her an alien. She capture the sense of being out of place, because you can relate that the hiatcus flower would be her because she is eccentric and different from the rest of the people in her environment she is trying to adapt her way of living and trying to survive in the world, like when she was in her own country.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6460,3,"In the @CAPS1 ""Do not Exceed Posted Speed limit"" many ways affect the cyclist. Three of those things are heat, lack of water, mud its anything town. The heat affects him because he gets extremely hot and tired. For example the text states."" I could die form a heatstroke on a gergeous day in June."" this shows that it was extremly hot. The cyclist had a lack of water and was very thirsty. For example it states in the text."" I eased past, trying to keep my balance in my dehydrated state."" This shows that he was very thirsty from lack of water. The last way the setting affects the cyclist is when he goes into a town and tieds it empty. The text states,"" on that morning it fit the traditional detinition at a ghost town."" This show that he expected it to be there so he could rest but it wasn't like it was appare to be things all show how the setting affected th cyclist.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3919,2,"Libraries are a source of information. They provide us with valuable research, entertainment, and cold hard facts. Therefore, I do not believe that libraries should have to censor the books that are supplied for the citizens to check out. Everyone is faced with choices in life. Some are more difficult than others and will have a greater impact on your life. We decide if we want to wear the black shirt or the grey shirt, the blue shorts or the brown shorts. Everyday we have choices. We also have choices at a library. If we see a book with a title that sounds like @CAPS2 might be offensive, then we should just walk past @CAPS2. Most libraries are organized and the book sections are clearly stated. Common sense would tell us that this section might contain offensive material. We have the choice on whether or not we check out a book that might offend us or not. If @CAPS2 does offend us, then @CAPS2's our own fault. The second reason libraries should not censor what books they provide goes right along with the choices we make in life. No one forces us to check out this book or that book. @CAPS2's a choice. No one puts a gun to our head and says, '@CAPS1 this book or you will die.' @CAPS2 just doesn't happen like that. No one forces us to @CAPS1 something we don't want to. @CAPS2's all up to you and how you feel about the book. Different subjects offend different people. I'm not offended by a curse word here or there, however; I am offended by sex related instances that often occur in movies or books. I make my own choice to not watch or @CAPS1 those kinds of materials. Since everyone is different, the sex related instances might not offend another group of people and they might see @CAPS2 as perfectly fine to watch or @CAPS1. Different subjects offend different people and taking away a book or movie because @CAPS2 offends one person should not happen. If libraries were to start censoring what materials they put on the shelf, I believe many people would be upset. Who would decide what is offensive and not offensive? @CAPS2 would upset too many customers and the use of libraries would probably dwindle. When you are in charge of censoring what goes on the shelf many problems come into play. Do you count different religions offensive because they blaspheme another religion's god? Do you count a certain work of fiction offensive because @CAPS2 contains one curse word in the whole book? There is no way to properly censor all your books without upsetting customers. I'm not saying that libraries should be allowed to show every magazine known to man. Some are obviously worse than others; but, when @CAPS2 comes to books and movies, the people know what they are checking out and know what they will find offensive. There are too many people in this world to try and censor the materials libraries display. Libraries should not censor the materials they display",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7048,3,The features of the setting is very important for cyclist. If the setting is wrong they could be in many danger. It is really important to have a clear setting.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7281,3,"In the story “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” by Joe Kurmaskie the features of the setting affects the cyclist by draining him of energy, he is sweating so much, he keeps on drinking his water and slowly finishes it and still has a long ride ahead of him. “The water bottles contained only a few tantalizing sips.”(Kurmaskie’s) since is was so hot the cyclist was thirsty and drank all of his water. It was a warm day and he needed to stay hydrated.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4454,2,Well people should be able to get whatever they want if there an adult kids should not but what can you do. It wouldnt be right to take away things that people like.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10537,4,I think he put this in here because. I think he’s trying to say when the snow melts just forget bout the first time. And when the geese return it your @NUM1 chance. Then the hibiscus budding is you get passed what you were trying to do.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 66,1,"Wouldnt it be great to use computers in everyday life? In this country we can. You can use it to talk to people you never thought you would see again. Looking at places far away is always an option. You can even simply use it to help with homework essays. Locating and researching, even going to different countries, even different continents is possible to do on the computer. You can buy plan tickets. reserve rooms, even reserve tables at resturants in different countries by just a few clicks. Another thing is, you can research countries, towns, and cities with google instead of having to go out and get books. Reading about and talking to people from different countries is always an option. Being able to talk. and read about people and go to countries just by a clicking a button is pretty amazing. Computers also allow us to talk and communicate to people when there is no other way. The computers give people the ability to talk and see people they they the would never communicate with anymore. An example of this is my father hadn't see his father since he was two, but he started communicating with him and we were able to see him and chat with him through web chat. So these web chatting websites; ooVoo, facebook, myspce, skype, etc, is allowing people to reconnect. This advantage is allowing friendships and relationships to continue, is that really bad? Computers can help people with their homework and essays. For instint, they can type and print their essays instead of having to write it on paper. This helps because first it makes their, it also can be changed quicker and easier. They also can get information about what they are studying quickly and more efficiently. Instead of searching for a word in a big dictionary they can use an online dictionary and just have to type in the word. Online dictionary also have prounociation help and different langages. This helps so much so they can get their work done and exercise, enjoy nature, or interact with family and friends. I hope you will take my opinion seriously and think about it is using computers for daily needs really that bad?",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3300,2,"Censorship in liraries, in my opinion is over-rated. Everywhere you hear of book, music, magazines, and movies being offensive or degrading, but does that mean that they should be taken off the shelves of our public libraries, or out of book stores? I say no because, future generations need to know of the material, it @MONTH1 not always be offensive, and the public libraries have no right to tell us what we can, and cannot read. Some say that our future generations will be greatly shorted of knowledge, or become naive because of this lack of knowledge. I say this is because of the censorship in libraries. Katherine paterson once said 'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other chilren have taken off the shelf. But if i have the right to remove that book from the shelf-that work I abhor-then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. An then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' So if they're taking books off the shelve because they find them offensive, then there will be so many books gone, that the kids will not have a broder view as so many people are lucky to have today. Everyone has a different oppinion about everything, including what's offensive and what's not. If one person see's a book as being offensive, that doesn't necessarily mean that someone else will also. I've heard of teachers not letting the students see pictures of The @CAPS1, because the think it's offensive. Not everyone agrees with that. The @CAPS1 is a big part in history and it being catorgorized as offensive is wrong, it's not the only thing in history that is bad. If they start taking out big parts of history, it will be long lost and forgotten. Lastly i believe that the libraries should not be able to tell us what we can and cannot read. We have the right to choose what we want to read, if we think that it's bad and shouldn't be reading it, then we won't read it. But that doesn't mean they should take out the book because one person finds it offesive. Someone else might want to read it. I think that people are mature enough to pick what they read, and as for children their parents are the one's that could pick for them. With so many different oppinions it's hard to decide what to do about censorship, I believe that if it's offensive maybe they should have a special section for explicit media and reading. Maybe then people wouldn't be offended by it. Just because one person doesn't like it doesn't mean another wouldn't either.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16510,6,"In this excerpt the builders of the Empire State Building faced obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The architects had trouble with putting the moor mast on top of the building. ""The architects could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof."" The mooring mast would have stressed the building. Because of the stress from the dirigible's load and wind pressure would have to strengthen and modify the whole building which cost over sixty thousand dollars. So they build a shiny glass and chrome-nickel stainless steel tower. Those were the obstacles in making a moor mast.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4358,2,"We all have our favorite books and some we like others @MONTH1 not. Have you ever walked into the library in hope of finding your all time favorite book that you nearly forgot about, or maby a book a friend recomended to you? What happens when you get there and the book has been censored? Most books we see in our public or school libraries are are bookes that are well liked or are favorites of many. Books open a new world to everyone and should not be taken away. To begin, I will explain some problems in our libraries. Some people believe the books and magazines in our libraries should be censored and removed from the shelves because it could be offensive to some people because of racial shurs or comments. This is a big problem because most books written years ago took place long ago like @PERSON1 for example, @MONTH1 be considered offensive but, this book gives a glimpse of what was going on in this time period and without it some people would never know what happened and we couldn't learn from those mistakes and make better choices in the future. Some books that are censored have great educational value. Everyone has there prefrence on books and what some say should be taken away because of what they think others @MONTH1 not. If all books that are bad or offencive were taken off the shelves then eventually we would have no books left. We have the right to read any book out there no matter how horrendus it @MONTH1 be, besides you can go to church and read worse things that are being censored out of our libraries. If we couldn't read some books like many classics it would take educational value away from us all. Think about all the books we have read and learned from that have the possibility of being censored. Before someone gets into a book they should read the informational part on the back to see what it is about before they start to read something not suited for them. I believe that no book should be censored and should have the freedom to sit on a shelf and be read by anyone who wants to read it. Being censored is not protecting anyone it only makes things worse. If someone feels offended then they shouldn't read it, it's their choice to pick it up or not. Hopefully I have persuaded you that no book should be censored and everyone has the right to read what they want",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10062,4,I guess she felt that it was a good way to unit all up,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 519,1,"Dear Readers, Computers have a large presence in the world today. Most people in the @LOCATION1 have at least one and the number grows still. These computers are bad for people. They cost a lot of money cause people to stop exercising and become unhealthy, and teach children that things come easy in life. Computers cost a lot of money. Between buying one, purchasing hardware and protection, and paying for maintanence, they are very expensive. Dr. @PERSON2, a computer science expert, claims, ""The average computer costs @MONEY1. There is then hardware that needs to be bought and replaced, along with antivirus programs and other protection. Now we could be talking about @MONEY2 at the very least. With yearly maintanence costing about @MONEY3 per year, you can see how expensive these machines really are."" @CAPS1 out of every ten computer owners in a recent survey stated that they had to service their computers within the last three months. Thats a lot of many going toward fixing computers. But computers don't just cause money problems, there are health issues too. Computers take a lot of time away from people. When a computer is used, the user doesn't move around or exercise. Computers are making people unhealthy. The obesity number in the @LOCATION1 has skyrocketed, but it's not just food, Some experts are now contributing computer use to lack of exercise, and therefore, obesity. Dr. @DR1 @CAPS2 says, ""@CAPS3 matter what you're doing on a computer, be it games or education, you would be better off outside, moving around, getting exercise. A recent study shows that @NUM1 out of @NUM2 families who purchased a computer in the last year have halved their exercise and play time. There are health problems created by computers, but they also teach the next generation that things come very easily. Computers are an excellent source of knowledge, but that could be a problem. It is a quite easy to find something out, or research a topic using a computer. Before computers became popular, people had to work and look for @CAPS4. Now that it is so easy, children @MONTH1 begin to think things come easily in life. @PERSON1, a pediatric psycologist, says, ""The mind of a child works in a such a way, that most things they encounter are absorted and become normal. If a child becomes use to the ease of searching an item on a computer, he will expect all things to be equally simple. If they are not he @MONTH1 become frustated and not be able to do what is needed."" @NUM3 out of @NUM4 poll takers agree that finding @CAPS4 on the computer is quite easy. What are the children of the world being taught? Life is easy, a false statement. Computer use is a growing problem. It costs ridiculous amounts of money, causes health problmes, and poisons the minds of children to believe that life is an easy thing. Computers are bad for the people of the world, they take our money, our health and the minds of our children.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13361,5,"In this memoir, the author created a proud and glad mood.The author, Narciso Rodriguez, showed how proud he was of his family and home through his memoir. His parents left their home in order to make a better life for him and for that he is extremely proud and grateful. His parents also allowed other immigrants to stay with them temporarily. In paragraph @NUM1 he says, ""what They did was a much more courageous thing then I could have ever done.""Narciso shows how glad he was that he got to grow up where he did. He had his parents, as well as all of his neighbors, which he considered his family. Though his apartment wasn't the nicest place to live, it was his home. He was happy there and always had people around him who loved and cared for him. In paragraph @NUM2 he says, ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home.Narciso shows his proud and glad feelings through his memoir.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7620,3,In the story the setting affected the cyclist all through the story till he arrived at body and wilbers fish camp. As the man rides his bike for a while he is of but as he road into the first town it seemed to be a ghost town. As he pedal on “ The sun was beginning to beat down but I barely noticed it“. At that time the wheater is affecting him a lot but he keeps Yosemite cool pines and rushing rivers in his head He also only had only a few tantalizing sips left in his water bottle while going up a big hill.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 302,1,"Dear @CAPS1 times, @CAPS2 you think computers benefit society? Well I think so! There are countless reasons why computers are both resourceful and helpful. Many citizens in our own community of watertown think computers are a great resource for many things while others disagree with this completely. Computers can benefit society because you can learn many new things on the internet, also you can interact with your friends and family, and lastly there are many applications used for business. On both a computer and the internet there are more than @NUM1 million things you can learn. When you are struggling with homework a computer is a great resource. You can quickly open @CAPS3.com and search any topic at any time. For example, if you did not know a conversion it is easily found on the internet. Another thing you can be taught or informed about is news. There are websites such as nytimes.com and cnn.com that give you daily news. I personally use these websites weekly. On the computer you can find vacation sports you want to learn about and go to. When my family was planning our trip to @ORGANIZATION1 in @LOCATION1 we used the computer constantly. In the end, computers can teach you many things. Secondly you can interact with people on the internet in many ways. These include social networking websites, webchat and email. Social networking websites are a great way to connect to family members and friends from the past. Websites that were created for this include: facebook, myspace, and twitter. These free websites let you add friends, send messages, and post pictures. Web chatting is a way to video people. You can personally see someone from acroos the @ORGANIZATION1 from your webcam. Lastly, emailing is a great way to inform people. You can write a visual letter to one of your friends. In conclusion, the computer is one excellent way to interact. Lastly, the computer is used for business. An application called microsoft office is used in countless bussinesses, microsoft office word, powerpoint, excel and @CAPS4. Each of these are used to plan, sell, present, manage, and write about products. Microsoft is something you should download in the near future. Business also use webchatting, as I previously state, for conference calls. A production company can be face to face with a company from china without being in the room with them. This makes it much easier than to fly half way across the @ORGANIZATION1. Finally, computers are used when manufacturing a product in or at a business. Work sites such as @CAPS5 companies use computers to control their machines. I know that the @ORGANIZATION2 factory uses computers in their factory due to the fact that I watche the show unwrapped about them on @CAPS5 @CAPS6. In the end computers are a necessary item in a business. In conslusion, computers have a great affect on people. The can teach people many new and exciting things they did not know. Also, connect humans with each from half way across the @ORGANIZATION1. Lastly, businesses would not run well without a computer. Computers can benefit society because you can learn many new things on the internet. Also you can interact with your friends and family, and there are many applications used for business. If I were an expert I would have nothing to worry about concerning computers. They are a magnificent thing. @CAPS2 you have the same belief and understanding as me?",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7586,3,"The features of the setting did not help the cyclist on his trip. First of all he was in the desert on a bike! Which helped him dehydrate faster. Secondly, the ‘towns’ around the way had been abandoned, leaving no place to get more water and no place to ask for directions. Lastly there were no other people around so if the cyclist was to get into trouble, he wouldn't be able to find help. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15317,6,"The empire State building builders faced a couple of Problems of docking dirigibles to the mooring mast. Some, I don't even know, @CAPS5 I'll just buildup from here & @CAPS1 what @NUM1. The dirigible. Now I never learned about the @CAPS2 of a zeppelin, but I do know one thing. Do @CAPS7 get out from the front, or sides? I @NUM2. The mast itself. This thing was a failure from the @CAPS3. (don't question why I chose Something else for one of the multi-@CAPS4 questions). The reason why is that @CAPS5 many things could go wrong. This thing can @ORGANIZATION1, & @CAPS6 fall off unless @CAPS7 do something really special for forging a building this high.Overall, it's been a long while, anyways these problems, & Several others that I forgot to mention for obvious reasons are @CAPS6 the reason why we don't use zeppelins as much anymore...",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16446,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles dock there. One problem was that they had to strengthen the rest of the building in order to put the mast at the top. This process would be very costly, the author says ""over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications had to be made to the building's framework."" Another problem in the attempt of allowing dirigibles to dock there was the winds at the top of the building. The air currents were very violent that high up. ""Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast,"" therefore it would not be safe for people on the streets of the city. Finally, the laws of the city interfered with the plan for the mooring mast. The law said that it was illegal for an airship to fly too low over urban areas. If the dirigible was able to dock on the mooring mast, it would be breaking this law. The builders of the Empire State Building faced many problems, and their plan never actually followed through.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3603,2,"I am neutral on this subject because it does not matter to me whether they put new books, movies, music cds, or magazines on their shelves or if they take them off. Also it does not matter to me if I have to pay for the things that I check out from the library. Also it does not matter at all if I had to pay a late fee for the books that I checked out from the library. Also I do not care about any noises that go on in the library. Also it does not matter to me what kind of books they have in the library. Also it would not matter to me how the library is run. Also I would not care if I had to be quiet in the library it would not matter to me. Also I would not care how long that I would stay in the library. Also it would not matter to me if I walked or drove or rode my bike to the library. Also I would not care if the policy in the library was not the right way to run it. Also if I got kicked out of the library I would just go to another one. Finally, it would not matter to me if I got ten books or movies from the library I would not care. Thoma",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16062,6,"There were many obstacles faced by the builders in the creation of the mast. One obstacle was the building's flat roof. A dirigible that was moored to the building by a single cable, would cause stress for the building's frame to be stressed. Due to this the builders had to modify and strengthen the frame to solve this obstacle. Another problem was that other countries still used hydrogen and an explosion over New York would be devastating.One of the greatest obstacles was ""nature itself."" Winds at the top were constantly changing. The back of the ship would move around the mooring mast. They had to solve this in a safe manner. In fields the back of a dirigible would be weighed down by lead, but this could not be done. It would be unsafe to allow the lead to dangle over civilians' heads. On top of all these obstacles, there was a law against airships flying too low over urban areas. In the end the mooring mast was a failure because not all these obstacles could be solved and fixed.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 242,1,"Dear Newspaper, In our town, more people are on the computer each day. Some people state that you can do a lot on the computer and talk to people. But, I believe that our town should not support advances in technology. You will have more time to exercise, talk to family and friends in person and to take part in different activities around the town. Do you want to be overweight and not be in shape? Well, if you sit at the computer all day every day, you will become like that. ""I think exercise shoud be a part of everybody's day,"" @CAPS1 teacher @PERSON1 from @LOCATION1 stated. You would be so attatched to your computer, that you wouldn't work out. In the state of @LOCATION1, it is proven that @PERCENT1 of residents are overweight from not exercising and @PERCENT2 are overweight by not eating properly. This shows more people in @LOCATION1 don't exercise than not eating properly. @CAPS4 wants to be overweight and you can change that! More people each year make facebook and @CAPS2 @CAPS3. Some kids in school are on the internet all day talking to friends who live down the street. Students refuse to talk to their friend on the phone. Instead, they do it online. ""@CAPS4 can understand their tone of the message sent,"" @PERSON3 stated. You could interpret it in different ways. When you are on the phone, it is a quick and easy way to communicate not waiting for somebody to type back. If you are a person who is always on the computer, plan a get together with your friend to talk in real life. Sidewalk sales, clubs, sports teams, holiday stroll, these are events that every town offers! Instead of sitting dreaming of being on the team, go out and do it! Each town cares about its residents and want them to have fun. That is why towns offer these activities. ""@CAPS5 want to make the town interasting and everybody to know each other,"" says @CAPS6 @CAPS7 @PERSON2. If you participate in these activities, you will meet other kids your age around the town. If your town offers all of these activities, they are helping you out. Being out helping the town is way better than sitting in your house on the computer! In many ways both advancing technology or not, why be inside doing nothing but talking to people? Go and talk to them in real life. Being in shape, talking to people in real life and activities your town offers is the way to go. Thank you for your concern",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1452,1,"Dear @PERSON4, I strongly believe that use of computer is beneficial to the community. One reason I feel this way is that computers can improve hand-eye coordination and other skills. These computers provide access to games helpful in @ORGANIZATION2 training. In fact, @ORGANIZATION2, in @LOCATION1, @CAPS1, just began using these games as part of their training this @DATE1. Instructors report that @ORGANIZATION2 skills in trainees and students are far better than in years past. Additionally, computer games can improve reflexes. Two years ago, a man named @PERSON3, @NUM1 years old, fell onto the train tracks just as a train was coming by. Through extra-ordinary reflexes he managed to leap out of the way, saving his life. When asked how he did @CAPS5, he said he had been playing computer games since he was @NUM2 years old. These games also make you more intelligent. The @ORGANIZATION1's @DATE2 study reports that brains were @PERCENT1 more active after use of computers. The researchers achieved this data by attaching electrolytes to the patient's brain both before and after using the computer. @CAPS5 is for these reasons that computers improve hand-eye coordination and other skills. Another reason for why computers are beneficial is that they allow you to talk online. They even allow you to communicate with your family who live far away, strengthening your relationships. I recently got back in touch with my cousin who moved to @LOCATION3. Letters were too expensive and took too long, but email and skype provide us with a great alternative. These computers also improve social skills. @PERSON1, resident here in town, says, ""I love using computers because I can talk to my friends whenever I want, and I feel like @CAPS5 really helps us communicate."" Who wouldn't love a machine that provides a service like that? These computers can even improve your mood. In a test done by @ORGANIZATION3 in @DATE3, @NUM3 people were put in seperate rooms with personal computers for @NUM4 hour. Afterwards, @PERCENT2 said they felt an improvement in their mood. Computers are great because they allow you to talk online. Finally, computers allow you to learn about other places. Virtual tours are becoming more and more common today. Infact, at @CAPS2.org, you can take virtual tours of over @NUM5 different countries, including @LOCATION5, @LOCATION4, @LOCATION2, and @LOCATION6. You can also learn about other cultures and their traditions through online videos at youtube.com and articles at wikipedia.org, the free encyclopedia. You can even learn new recipes. Celebrity chef extraordinare @PERSON2 not only posts all her recipes online at mstewart.com, but she even finds some of them! In a recent interview by @CAPS3 magazine, when asked where she's found some of her best recipes, including her famous @CAPS4 chocolate cake, @PERSON2 admits she found most of them online, saying, ""@CAPS5's a powerful resource that more people should use. Al @CAPS6 currently owns the world's best cookbook!"" @CAPS5 is because of this that computers allow you to learn about other place. Thank you for your time, and I hope you take what I have said into consideration. @CAPS5 is for all of these reasons I strongly believe computers are beneficial to the community.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6499,3,The features that effect the cyclist are that he is riding his bike in the desert and doesnt have any water. That effects his journey because he is dehydrated so he needs to find water fast so it is making him get to Yosemite slower because he needs to find water. That is a feature that affects the cyclist,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 353,1,To the computers people technology is a good thing to have. If we do not have technology then we can not call no one. We wiil not have computers to go online. We can not talk to my family or friends. People us technology for they jobs like people that work for cars they need computers to see if the cars if old. That is why will need technology. People need technology for a lot of thin have technology to us. Computers is the big thing because we need to look up a lot of things online we need computers to test on. We call people with technology you us computers to go online on google.com that is why we need technology. so we can call people.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15281,6,"While attempting to allow dirigibles to dock at the Empire State building the workers faced many obstacles. One of the obstacles was safety. While the dirigible, or zeppelin, was docked its body would sway in the breeze. This lead to a question of safety for the passengers getting on and off. Also there was no safe way to weigh the dirigible down, like when the dirigible lands in a field. Any weights used would be hanging over pedestrians. Another obstacle was the law prohibiting airships flying low over urban areas This law made it illegal for dirigibles to dock or approach the area The main obstacle was nature itself. There are very violent winds at the top of the Empire State Building which would cause the dirigible to sway. Docking at the Empire State Building was too complicated for the idea to be completed.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13199,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir was thankful @CAPS1 and happyness. He was so greatful for his parents, and how they gave up their whole lives in cuba just to come to america for there kids benefit. They had a good life in cuba, they had good paying jobs, and they had a nice home, and a nice huge family there and i bet they didn't want to leave. but it was something they had to do for their kids benefits. So they moved to america, and they left their home and their good paying jobs, and they also most importantly left their family. that im sure they are going to miss like crazy. In this passage he (the author) was the most thankfull boy ever, and he was thankfull for his parents sacrifice and how they came to this country with such courage and NO knowlage of the language of the culture. but they came to give their children a better life even if it ment leaving behind their family, friends, and carreers in the country.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15547,6,"In the excerpt, ' The Mooring Mast' I Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the constructors of the empire state building faced many obstacles while trying to create a docking place on such a tall building. Obstacles a law against airships flying to low and nature itself made it hard to create such a place in paragraph @NUM1, it says ' The other practical Reason why dirigibles could not more at the Empire State Building was an existing law against airships flying to low over urban areas."" There was alReady a strong argument on building the mast but Al Smith ignored it. This law made it illigal for ship to ever tie up to the building. In paragraph @NUM2, the author tells why nature was a problem she says ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents"" Already the @CAPS1 is showing signs of the danger ahead if they pursued the idea any farther. Drigibles moored in open landing fields and could be weighed down by lead weights. However, using these in the Empire State Building where they would be dangling in the air wasn't practical nor safe. All those Reasons contribute to the Reason why docking wasn't allowed.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15761,6,"Based on the excerpt, ""The Mooring Mast"" by @ORGANIZATION2, the builders of the Empire State building faced the obstacles of the use of hydrogen in dirigibles in which is highly flammable, nature itself, and an existing law in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there.It stated in paragraph @NUM1 of the excerpt, most dirigibles outside the united state used hydrogen, which is very flammable. Realizing that this kind of happening above an outrageously populated area such as New York City would be extremely dangerous. To explicate. ""when the German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by fire in Lakehurst, New Jersey, on May 6, 1937, the owners of the Empire State Building realized how much worse that accident would have been if it had taken place above a densely populated area such as downtown New York"".However, the greatest obstale was nature itself. At the top of the building, the winds were constantly shifting. which was certainly not safe. For example, ""Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast."" The builders soon realized that this issue could unfortunately, not be resolved.Lastly, a more apparent obsticle that the builders faced was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. This would make it illegal for the ships to even approach the area.The obstacles of the use of hydrogen, nature itself, and an existing law, made it impossible for Al Smith's plan to become realistic.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9388,4,"I think the author ended this story with this conclusion because, every one should have fresh starts, or second chances. I guess the author was leaving in a message stating if you fail once you should at least try again. When Saeng failed the test it seems as though her self-esteem lowered, and her mother tried cheering her up, and eventually she realized it will be bad giving up and not trying again with a fresh start.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6679,3,"As he began his journey, he had full confidence in the directions given given to him by the old men. After he came to the first town and there was no water, he rode on. After he found an “ramshackle shed” he became troubled , as he “had been “hitting“ his “water bottles regularly“ and was traveling through the “desert of California in June” and was running low on water. Coming to a place where he saw a building over hills, he “manuevered” his way down, only to find it long deserted and himself close to despair. He was desparate for water he needed it soon. Finally, he came upon “@CAPS1 and Wilber’s Fish Camp” and quenched his thirst, and was relieved. Then on he wised up, and took no more directions from old men who knew little to nothing about cycling.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12911,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from Home: Blueprints of our lives, the speaker shows many moods. The moods of gratefulness and happiness from his life.The speaker is very grateful through out the whole memoir. But the speaker is most grateful for his family and oppertunity to come to @LOCATION1. It says, ""'I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice.'"" This shows that he is very grateful because he's saying that if his parents were not willing to sacrifice things he would not have been able to go to @LOCATION1 for a better life. He also tell us that his parents left their friends, family, jobs and homes to come to @LOCATION1 for a better life for their children.The speaker also shows happiness. He says, ""'countless extended family members came and went.'"" This shows he was surronded by people he loved and that made him happy. It also said that they would help people out, spend time with the comunity and have people for dinner all the time. This also shows he was happy because he was spending time with so many family members and friends. These are example of the moods that author created in the memoir.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6259,3,"When cycling or doing any outdoor sport, the setting matters greatly. If its cold you need a jacket. Hot you need water. Depending on how secure it could be life or death. It could be realy hilly and you might get tired, and if you have no water you could die. Also it depends if its in a city burbed, small town, desert, highway all these factors play a huge roll in cycling",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9891,4,The reason why the author concludes the story with this paragraph is to let the readers know that how Saeng @CAPS1 about the hibiscus. I thinks the author concludes this because he his telling the reader that the hibiscus gives saeng goodluck and with this good luck She will past the test. In the story it tells us how much saeng adores the plant For example when she got to the hibiscus She reached out and toched a petal gently. It Felt smooth and cool. Thats why the author use thal paragraph at the end to indicate how Saeng @CAPS1 and how it make her feel confident.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13061,5,"I think the mood was happy and @CAPS1. Because They @CAPS2. The boy Loved his parents. They had to leave theirs friends. Some family there and They would miss them, but the parents wanted a better life for thier children. They were @CAPS1. to Move.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7700,3,"The cyclist in this essay is trying to go to Yosemite National Park. He feels confident in him making it, not realizing what is up ahead. First comes the windy roads. As he goes along his confidence starts to wither away. The desert hits him like a boulder because he is running short on water and needs to rest. The extreme heat just makes everything worse. “Not the miley into this heat section of the ride, I noticed the terrain changing. Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills. “This shows that the cyclist did not expect to meet this kind of terrain and is over whollmed by it. The one thing he never does is give up. This is important because as he went along, just before hagon up, he found a place to get water and to relax. “Then, as easily as running about, my troubles thirst, and nor were all behind me” This shows that he was strong and determined to survive and he finally found what he needed and it made happy and have a will to live. Everyone in life needs to be determined.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 2984,2,"How @CAPS4 you feel if your favorite book was taken off the shelves of your school or public library? I, along with many other students, @CAPS4 find this discouraging and distastrous, so I do not believe that censorship should affect books that are on the shelves. Otherwise, a demolished love of reading, crushed individuality, and separated population @MONTH1 be born. Like the beloved @PERSON2 @PERSON2 series by @PERSON1, many books and series are being taken out of libraries' collections due to people in society finding them offensive. In this case, the world of witchcraft in which this story blooms is against some religious beliefs; therefore, some individuals within a religion campaign to have these books banned. Fortunately, none of the libraries I visit, with their eclectic collections, had banned this series, or I @CAPS4 not have the strong thirst for literature as I do now. All books have the potential to pull a student into the wonderful world of reading, like @PERSON2 did for me, so taking away books that are most likely to spark an interest or start a firework of creativity @CAPS4 not only affect this generation, but the futures of all. If this censorhip was to be allowed, who is to say what all could be censored? Who @CAPS4 be the final judge as to what books @CAPS4 be banned? It @CAPS4 all come down to power and who was willing enough to take it. This struggle to be on top has the possibility of seperating people apart like political parties. Disagreements could turn into debates, and those could turn into fights. It can be concluded that people are stubborn for their beliefs, and to have someone choose what everyone is allowed to believe @CAPS4 be wrong. For instance, it @CAPS4 be like an @CAPS1 forcing a @CAPS2 to not believe in @CAPS3; a vegetarian commanding that meat can no longer be eaten; a woman taking away men's voting rights. Censorship @CAPS4 lead to the disrespect of other's opinions, and disrespect is never a beneficial thing. Each and every person has a different opinion on what is offensive or not, so to censor books @CAPS4 be to censor all individual mentality. Without each person's unique thoughts and beliefs, the world @CAPS4 become similiarly vapid and dull. Differences in beliefs is what adds variety to the population and what makes a person special; additionally, free thought is a right all people should have. If someone was to limit the mental, literary stimulants that are out in the world, the amount of creativity and individuality @CAPS4 decrease. To conclude, censorship @CAPS4 be a disrespect to individuality, personal beliefs, and the overall joy of reading a good book. Just because one might not believe in what a story says, it does not mean that the piece of literature should be forbidden. No one is being forced to read the books that grace the hundreds of shelves in a library, so if someone is offended, simply do not read it. So how @CAPS4 you feel if your favorite book was gone from all libraries? Disrespected? That is how I @CAPS4 feel",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3307,2,Durning school one day all of our teachers told the class that most of the books in the libary is going to be took off the shelves. But our class don't want that to happen. All the teachers told us that some people parents has been complaning about what there kids are reading. I thank that most the the books that are in the libary is good for the kids to look at because thats what they like annd they like to learn about what would like to have or do someday. I also thank that it is a good thing that kids are wanting to learn about what they want to do later in life. Later in life when I have kids I would like them to dream about what they want to do in there life. So if that means that they want to go to school and look at magazines all day and make sure that thats what he wants to do thats fine with me. So if the teachers want the books off the shelves they can but I don't think that the kids are going to try much if they cant be what they want to be later in there life time. I know that if they did that to my kids that I know I would buy them all the magazines thay want so they can learn what they want to do in life. So if they take all the books off the shelves I know that all the kids parents are probley going to get mad because thats what messes up the kids dreams. Know when the kids what to read the schools is taking all the good books off the shelves none of the kids are going to know what they want to do in there later life. A good thing to do is to let the studends vote and see what the what to do about taking the books off the shelves. I bet most of the students in this world would say to keep them on the shelves because they like to read and look at pictures. That means that they want to be something when they grow up. I hope that my kid whats to be something that he likes to do when he grows up. I will help any kid as much as I can with there dreams. There is two things that are going to happen. One is that the school is going to take the books off the shelves and the students are not doing to try in school and they might not know what they want to be. Or they might just give up on it all. And I know that know one whats that to happen. The second thing is that the schools is going to keep the books on the shelves and the students are going to want to read them more. Also they will probley know want whey want to do later in there life time. If I could pick what to do I would keep the books on the shelves and make the kid happy,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7090,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist because on page @NUM1 it talk about how the cyclist had to go down a hill then find a factory for juice. Like if the cyclist don’t find any building he would of kept the hill and wasted the little bit of energy for actaire.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1259,1,"To whomever this @MONTH1 concern, @CAPS1 your life without a laptop or a desktop computer. It would be hectic right? How will you keep up with your email or type of the articles for this very newspaper? Even though some people @MONTH1 believe that computers are taking away from exercise, enjoying nature, and spending time with family and friends, computers do have a positive effect on us. The list of reasons why is endless but three that stand out are you can communicate with people in other states or countries, it's more interesting to learn from a website than a textbook, and eventually @CAPS2 will be computerized anyway. Am I right? Have your old teachers ever assigned you a pen pal in another state or country? If yes, didn't you have to, write letters? Then, you had to wait at least @NUM1 weeks before your pen pal wrote back. If you had used computers, you would've gotten a response back within days. I know many parents and other adults @MONTH1 think that e-mails are a waste of energy but actually they're faster than letters will ever be. Has your daughter or son ever told you that reading from a textbook is boring? Yes? No? That's where computers come in. It's much more interesting to use the internet than reading from a book. I understand that some students can read from a book and retain all of the facts that they've learned from that one book but various students learn differently than that. If a student learns from the internet, they're more likely to remember it because they won't be put to sleep by the boredom of a textbook. Many people have mentioned and some statistics show that by at least @DATE1, @CAPS2 will be computerized. Do you seriously want to be the last one left behind? I wouldn't I understand that you are a person who likes to keep up with the current events so why not use your computer more often? When they say @CAPS2, they mean @CAPS2. They even have @CAPS3 tools on computer. So I want you to take a survey of how many people find computers effective and you'll be surprised. Many people will say the same that I've said. The choice is yours, which side are you on? Thank you.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1024,1,"You are the @NUM1 visitor, click here to get your prize! That is normal thing that will @CAPS4 up on computers, they can give you viruses, and people can get your personal information. That is one reason computers are bad. On top @DATE1 that, ""@CAPS1 @DATE1 computers more than @NUM2 kids are obducted each day!"" says @CAPS2 @CAPS3 @DATE1 the missing child agency. They get obducted @CAPS1 kids go on @CAPS6 rooms and get themselves into trouble. On another note we rely on computers to much, it not healthy for us. ""@CAPS4 up ads cause many problems,"" says @ORGANIZATION1 @CAPS2 @CAPS5. More than @PERCENT1 @DATE1 people in the world have computers. This was from a world wide poll in @DATE1. More than @PERCENT2 @DATE1 that is kids. When kids are on computers they always click on the @CAPS4 up ads. These ads cause catastropic problems! Peoples computers get viruses, identities get stolen, and credit card information gets found out. Therefore with those things happening you are going to yell at your kids, but you can't blame them they just thought they were going to get a free xbox @NUM3. Now that I have told you about @CAPS4 ups let me tell you about chating. Chating on computer is just a bomb waiting to be set off. ""@CAPS6 rooms are the main why. Now that I have told you about chating let me tell you about how people rely on them to much. Instead @DATE1 looking up what a book was about, just read it! Everyone thinks a computer is the answer to every problem when in reality @PERCENT3 @DATE1 the things on the internet are false, says Technology @CAPS7 a magazine that deals with the disadvantages @DATE1 technology. I remember when I needed to know if my flight to @LOCATION1 was cancled, so I went on google and looked it up. The website I went on said it was cancled but later when I called the airport just to make sure it had been they said it took off when it was scheduled to! And instead @DATE1 an e-mail just send a letter! Do you want your kids obducted @CAPS1 fo @CAPS6 rooms? @DATE1 course not, and do you want to miss your flight for vacation? No I dont think so, computers are very bad and are used to often. No one wants their identity stolen @CAPS1 @DATE1 some @CAPS4 up ad. We need to do things on our own more often and stop relying on computers to do everything for us!",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4572,2,Alot of people are offeneded by things that are uncenored. Some peopole think they should be censored and others think it should not. Its all a matter of opinion. I dont think anything should be censored because it takes away from the freedom of speech. With censorship one can not fully express there self or opinion. that is way nothing should be censored,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12313,5,"In the memoir of Narciso Rodriguez is a nonstalgic mood is created from his memories. The mood is created by his parents and where he lives. One way the mood is nonstalgic is he's grateful towards his parents. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice. I've often told them that what they did was much more courageous thing than I could have ever done"" (@CAPS1 @NUM1). By being grateful towards his parents, he is helping the nonstalgic mood grow. Also, where he live helps the mood. ""And for this, I will never forget that house or its gracious neighborhood or the many things I learned there about how to love. I will never forget how my parents turn this simple house into a home those"" (@CAPS1 @NUM2). Since his parents turned his house, to a home he will never forget what they did for him, making this memoir more nonstalgic. In the memoir of Narciso Rodriguez, he creates a nonstalgic mood from the memories of his past.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 366,1,"Computers, Computers, Computers, its all we hear about today. New websites, chatrooms, games and much more. I agree with the experts who think that we should spend more time outdoors with friends and family. Computers take over peoples lives, you don't know who is looking you up on facebook or @CAPS4 and know you can do almost anything on them. Lunch...,@CAPS1...,@CAPS2...,@CAPS3....Computers are taking over our lives. Believe it or not some people bring computers everywhere they go and once you get on that @CAPS3 chances are you won't be getting of it for a while because you keep clicking and keep finding new stuff. I do have to say computers are a cool device but there has to be a limit. We can not be on the @CAPS3 @NUM1 looking up what @PERSON1 said to @PERSON2... You got to come back to earth and spend time with your family. The @CAPS3 might be a cool device but that does not meen that it is safe to post stuff about you on. Facebook & @CAPS4, probably two of the most dangerous sites to be on. Anybody could just type in @PERSON1 and get @NUM2 maches and find you eventhough you don't know them. People are not always as they say they are. People could say taht they are a @NUM3 year old. Just leaving college when it's really a @NUM4 year old @CAPS6 just getting ready to enter the senior center. Don't trust anybody. Now and days you don't even have to leave your house. You can shop, talk, @CAPS5 taxes, bills, and have a vurtual life on the @CAPS3. Pretty soon @CAPS6 kind as a human will become all together through the @CAPS3. Some computers probally have a smarter system then same humans do. What I am saying is limit your time to the @CAPS3 or thats where you will be spending it all. Know you know that I think that computers need to be seen less throughout the human day. Also that they are taking over our lives, are dargerous, and you don't even have to leave your house to make a living. I hope you take my thoughts into consideration. Thank you.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9337,4,The author ends the story this way to wrap everything up. The author incorporated nature and descriptions of it. This was so the reader would get an image in their head of how “Beautiful or calming” spring supposively is.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6984,3,"The setting affect of a cyclist can be petty complicated. So many things has to be prepared for you to be a successful cyclist. First up have to be prepared for the weather. For example when there is serious weather conditions like rain,snow you have to careful of ley roads.Also they have to be prepared for is long riais. Some naes might be from @NUM1 miles the have to bring plenty of food and water. Also anothe affects that a cyclist has to tase is the condition of the bike. For instance he/she has to make sure the bikes are in good condition and is going cooperate. Also if work need's to be done to the bike then the bike can be worked on.Also another affect of a cyclist is the cyclist is in shape. For instance if the cyclist is in shape he/she is able to ride for a long period of time. Finally another affects is the cyclist has to know where he/she is going. For instance the man in the story didn't know where to go so thats an important keypoint.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16209,6,"There are many obstacles the builders of the Empire State building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. one issue was the stress the dirigible would add to the building. over sixty thousand dollars modifications had to be made to the buildings framework. Also, most dirigibles contained hydrogen which is highly flammable and dangerouss. Another dangerous aspect is that this huge piece of material would be dangling high above pedestrians, as opposed to there much safer usual landing of open fields. Lastly, there was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas, which would also cause docking issues.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 8974,4,"In the story “Winter Hibiscus” by Minfong ho, the ending includes the hibiscus budding and retaking the test to make a connection between the two. The geese are also included in the end to show the new country she has adapted to because she recognizes when the geese come and go. The budding of the hibiscus is to her much more than just a flower. It shows the rejuvenation of new life within her just as flowers tend to bud in the spring. That is also why she chooses to take the test because her “budding” will occur in the spring, and she will have newly born confidence for the upcoming test. That is why the geese, hibiscus, and the test are all included in the end of the story to show the connection between her past home and adaptation to a new lifestyle.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4277,2,"'The @CAPS1 in the @CAPS2', 'The @CAPS3 @CAPS4', 'The @CAPS5 of @PERSON2'. Do these titles sound familiar? They should, beause these are only a tiny fraction of the @CAPS3 literary masterpeices that people have enjoyed since their publications. These wonderful books also share another characteristic, they have all been banned from certain libraries across the country and around the world. When a child goes off to school ecah day, his or her parents are left to think that he or she will be getting a quality education that meets the stadards of their own core values and morals. But certain parents @MONTH1 become outraged when they see the books shelved on schools library shelves that they see as wrong, and don't want their precious children exposed to such immoral concepts that go against their idea of what is right. In all reality though, how is this helping anyone? By keeping a student away from a book or subject, the person causing the censorship is limiting what that student can learn. By censoring things people are not only kept from ideas that might shock them, but also from ideas that might make them think. If a person cannot think for themselves, they cannot draw their own conclusions on things. When one cannot think for oneself or make decisios for oneself, how can this person be considered a free individual. Infamous dictators, such as @PERSON1, burned books to keep his citizens from thinking what he did not want them to think. By banning a book in a school library, a parent is also keeping their child from thinking what they do not want them to think. And when you want a book out of a shool library you are ot only keepig your child from reading this book, but everyone who goes to the school from reading the book. How is that fair? So instead of wanting certain books to be off the shelves of your childs school, I say this. Teach your children to be careful in what they read. If you don't wan them to read 'The @CAPS1 in the @CAPS2' tell them not to read that book. Tell your children to follow the moral guidelines you want them to follow, and if certain books keep them from having their own thoughs instead of yours, just tell them not to look, and don't bother everyoe else about it",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1486,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3, I understand that more and more people use computers, and that can have a good side and a bad one. Do you go on the computer for hours every day? That could be bad. I believe computers are good thing, but only if they are used properly. Hopefully when I'm done, you'll see where I'm coming from on this matters. Everyone is on the computer these days. The problem is, many people are on way too much. They say they are working on hand-eye coordination, but in reality they are wasting away their lives on a chair. They do not communicate as much with the rest of the household and that does not make a big, happy family. They say they are getting important information, but in truth, they might just be getting false information and viruses. Bad people are out there, and one might hack into your computer and ruin your day. Things like @CAPS4 @CAPS5 and @CAPS6 could have people that want to find out all about you so they can hurt you. Yes, being on the computer definitely has a bad side. But there is a good side as well. That is, as long as you are not on too much. It does improve hand-eye coordination, if you play the right games. And it can teach you things, too. Many websites have true information about place or things so you don't need to see it to know about it. You can be helpful. It is also an easy way to purchase items. You can just order them. Most importantly, you can have fun. So, what is your side on this argument? Do you think way too many people are on the computer. Or do you think computers can be great, as long as you're careful? I, for one, pick the latter one. What about you?",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6889,3,"The setting in “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” greatly affected the cyclist in the story. “Not two miles into this next reaction of ride, I noticed the terrain changing. Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills” (kurmaskie). the cyclist is travelling through hot, dry California in the middle of June without much water left. The fact that he now has to travel up and down short hills is going to make him even more tired, because going over hills requires more energy, than flat riding. This energy, loss coupled with the cyclist lack of water causes him to become even more miserable. The setting of this story greatly affected the cyclist.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12097,5,I think the mood is a very happy great full mood. the speaker seams very happy of her live and how it was growing up. Narciso seems very greatful of her parent and every body around her and her whole life growing up. Also about how her neighbor hood was. How every body was happy and were all firends and how there were a lot of imagrants in her neighborhood.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1323,1,"Dear, @CAPS1-@ORGANIZATION1 Computers... they are sometimes bad and sometimes good they're like people. Computers are helpful on finding information, making your work less difficult. But at the same time there not so healthy to you and your family. Computers have so much information that the news paper in the future will no longer be known. Newspaper will no longer be thrown at your front porch. Because of computers instead of getting info of what happen yesterday in what area you live with the computer you can find out what intersting things happen yesterday in the whole world. But thanks to computers life is one step easier if someone had a science project. About as an example cells and with that computer it will help a lot more than you think no need to write all slopy just type of cell's were you can find in the internet, print done it just makes life way easier than just writing drawing finding info of cells in book that waste good time to go outside and play with friends and family. Computer like I said are sometimes bad like people and it also like a drug. Because look at computers when people go on website like, myspace, twitter, facebook, communicating website or game website, theres whay to much to name. Its a drug cause you to stay on it day to night you'll get stuck to it and can't get enough of it and some people won't stop and it hurts there family, friend and especially health, like drugs they cause all the same thing. I think I proved my point of why computers are sometimes bad and sometimes good like people.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4102,2,"I believe that the children of today should be able to read, and learn the same things that our parents have learned in the past. Learning things through the same teachings, books, movies... etc. Learning things this way would be better then taking out cussing, swaring and certain detailed writing, because if you took all that away its like lieing about history, and what really happend. Should the children of today be deprived of the truth? Would you want your children going to school everyday and learning things from a text book that were twisted around just so that it was apropriate and non offencive? Think about it... Were you deprived of learning history when you were in school? I didn't think so, so why start now? Say your child is going to be reading '@ORGANIZATION1' in @CAPS1 class today. Would you want to ruin a classic book by taking the '@CAPS2' word and the word 'slave' out of the book? Depriving them of how there use to be slave owners, slaves, and racial comments? Depriving them of actual history? Would you also deprive them from learning about wars, revolutions, and mass killings just to make learning apropriate? No. I wouldn't. I would want my children learning anything and everything about world history. I do not think that there should be censorship in libraries",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9738,4,"In the short story ""Winter Hibiscus"" by Minfong Ho, the author concludes with a paragraph explaining when the character, Saeng will take her driving test again. She says she will ""when the snow melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding."" I think the author concludes with this paragraph because it shows that saeng has new. found hope. For example, since she has moved from Vietnam, she has been very homesick. ""She found that she was still too shaky to say the words 'at home,' lest she burst into tears again."" But when she finds a hibiscus plant, it reminds her of her homeland. ""Back home it just grew wild, jutting out from the cracks in brick walls or between tiled roofs."" Saeng even buys the hibiscus to plant in her garden in her new home. By having the hibiscus plant with her, it gave her memories of her old life and strength to continue with her new one. The plant gives her strength to try for her driving test again. By concluding with that paragraph, it shows Saeng's change in emotions from depressed to hopeful and it also shows the strength that the hibiscus plant gives her.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12234,5,"The mood that is described in this story is love. Why did I pick love? I picked love because in the story it says a lot of stuff about family and Cuba and home (Cuba, is where the love (family) is. In this story is states that his love comes from his family and love comes from every family and @PERSON1's loves his family he says it alot in the story.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7202,3,"In the essay “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit,” the cyclistis affected by his surrounding. At first the man starts out at a reservoir camp ground. His confidence is high, and he is ready to continue his adventure. As the day went on and all he could find was abondoned buildings he began to worry a bit water running low he come upon “one ram shackled shed, several rusty pumps” no sign of life. He realiced that his trip was going to be rough. The environment and risk of death gave him the determination he needed to push forward. Although he was fearful of death from dehydration, he knew “travelling through the high deserts of California in June” his only chances of survival was to keep going. The mans surroundings were what had pushed him to keep biking until he found the fish camp. If he had not been so aware of his surroundings he might have given up, but not making it out of the desert to “the cool pines and rushing rivers of Yosemite” would be to devastating",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13390,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from ""Home: The Blueprints of our Lives,"" the mood is portrayed as very cheerful, warm, and happy. The way that the author described his home and early years provided an image of a large happy family throughout the passage. For example, in paragraph @NUM1 it states ""Here, the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the backdrop to life in our warm home."" This portrays the image that life in the author's home was friendly and loving. Another example is in paragraph @NUM2 where it says ""countless extended family members came and went - and there was often someone staying with us temporarily until they were able to get back on their feet."" This means that their family was very close and would always look out for eachother. So in conclusion, the mood in this memoir is portrayed as very happy, upbeat, and loving.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4744,2,"I THINK THAT IF A BOOK IS FOUND OFFINSIVE THEN YOU SHOULDN'T READ IT. CAUSE WHAT IF SOMEONE ELSE LIKES THE BOOK, THEY HAVE THE RIGHT TO READ THAT BOOK . MAYBE IT'S AN INSPIRATION TO THEM,MAYBE IT WILL DRIVE THEM TO ACCOMPLISH SOMETHING THEY WANT IN THIER LIFE. WHEN SOMEONE WALKS INTO A LIBRARY NO ONE CAN TELL THEM WHAT TO GET THEY MAKE THAT DECISION THEMSELVES, SO WHEN A BOOK OFFENDS YOU MAYBE YOU SHOULD WRIGHT TO THE AUTHER AND TALK TO HIM\HER. ABOUT THEIR BOOK. THINGS YOU COULD ACCOMPLISH BY WRIGHTING THE AUTHOR IS A LETTER IN THE MAIL STATEING THAT HE OR SHE IS SORRY FOR HURTING YOU WITH THEIR BOOK ,ANOTHER IS MAYBE A VISIT FROM THE AUTHOR IN PERSONSON TO TELL YOU THAT HE OR SHE IS SORRY FOR THE PAIN THAT HE OR SHE BOOK BROUGHT YOU. THAT'S WHAT I THINK. ALSO NO I DON'T THINK THAT THE BOOK/ BOOKS SHOULD BE TAKEN OFF THE SHELVESCAUSE MAYBE JUST MAYBE IT WILL MOTIVATE SOMEONE ELSE INSTEAD OF PUTTING THEM DOWN. THE END.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12811,5,"the mood created in the memoir were all different. they talk about there family, friend, and how they turned a apartment into a place called home. they talk about there cultures and wat they do for fun with friends, and family. He also talked about sad moments and happy moments he didnt get to know his real grandparents until 1970 when they were allowed to leave cuba in paragraph @NUM1.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15474,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The first obstacle they had to overcome was that if a dirigibles, which could reach up to a thousand feet in length, was moored to the tops of the building it would add stress to the building's frame. This meant the steel frame of the building had to be strengthened and modified to deal with the added stress. The cost of the modifications was over sixty thousand dollars. The next challenge was discovered after the building was finished. This was the fact that having dirigibles moor at the Empire State Building was unsafe. This first reason why it is unsafe is that most dirigibles, not from the United States, used hydrogen into helium and hydrogen is highly flammable. This meant an accident like that of the Hindenburg could happen above the highly populated downtown area of New York. Another problem that arose after the construction was that the shifting winds on top of the building were too violent for the dirigible, which would swivel around the mooring mast. All these challenges along with an existing law they did not allow airships to fly too low over urban areas were the obstacles faced by the builders of the Empire State Building and is why only one dirigible was ever moored there.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10093,4,"The author ends the story this way because Saeng feels a sence of comfort with the hibiscus flower. The flower reminds her of her homeland with her grandmother. According to the story “the familiar frogrence filled her lungs, and Saeng could almost feel the light strands of her grandmothers long gray hair.” you can also tell she misses her homeland but always keeps it close to her heart whereever she goes. The text states that, “it was yet another old friend, a small shrub with waxy leaves and dainty flowers with purplish petals and white centers.” She seems to be very close with nature and all of its desirable traits. When she failed the test she bought her “@CAPS1 Malik” flower, as a sence of comfort. They both decided to plant it in their garden and while doing so, Saeng received a huge boost of confidence to retake the test. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 14871,6,"Builders of the Empire State Building faced obstacles when attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. A one thousand-foot dirigible, attached to a single cable tether, would add stress to the buildings framed if the dirigible was placed at the top of the building. The buildings frame would have to be strengthened and modified to accommodate the situation. Over @MONEY1 worth of modifications would have to be installed into the framework. some other obstacles builders faced was the safety. The dirigibles ran on hydrogen which is flammable. Another obstacle was the weather. The winds shifted at the top of the Empire State building were shifting due to violent air currents. One last obstacle was an existing law that airships could not fly too low over urban areas. The idea of a dirigible quietly disappeared.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1336,1,"Dear local newspaper, A question that recently came to my attention is people are spending to much time on the computer, and if this is a good thing, I believe that computers are a good electronic item to have. I think this because, it helps people learn. Also, people can keep in touch with their friends even if they I've in a different country. In addition, it can help people or students be @CAPS1 please consider this in our newspaper. Would you like students/people to have internet and searches that can help them learn? The answer is ""yes"". Having to computers can help students to learn. They can go onto @LOCATION2 and type in any question they want to be answered. Picture this a child has a question that she wants answered, but she is embarrased to ask her parents. She can simply type the question in on her computer and get hundreds of answers. There is nobody in the world that knows everything, but there are computers that do. Computers can give you the answer to any question. When my mom was little she didn't have access to a computer all the time. @CAPS1 when she had a question she would have to ask somebody she know. If they didn't know the answer than she couldn't know the answer. If more people had computers then they would the to questions. Computers are a good way to keep in touch with people. These are @CAPS4 programs such as @CAPS2, @CAPS3, aim, ect.. My dad owns a buisness and needs to be in touch with people for seven @CAPS1 he around his iphone to talk to them by email. It helps my dad know when pappers and whos asking on what. I asked ten adults if they think everyone should have to a computer and ten out of ten said ""yes."" @CAPS4 people think that friends and family important and should stay with them every and a while. I have a friend who lives in @LOCATION1, but I cant contact her with my phone because are doesnt me and her talk on @CAPS2 all the time. @CAPS1 if people dont own phones then you can still stay in contact with computers. if they far away. Do you have perfect handwriting? The answer is probably no. People use @ORGANIZATION1 all the time because there handwriting isn't Computers help people stay clean and tidy. Computers have of folders and programs to store information you need. This all stays next all on the computer. My friend just get a computer for her office. Before she got it one hand everything and kep them all her desk in a mess. She had filled with pappers. But after she got a computer she typed everything neatly and kept all her pappers in the folders of her computer. She was @CAPS1 neat and clean that she got promoted. My friends moms changed because she got a computer. She became and cleaner. Picture this you are overwhelmed by all the papers on your desk. You dont know what papper is what. Well if you had a computer you could type eerything and keep them in your computer files. also @PERCENT1 of adults staying is good. I know you the local newspaper, have a very hard job and decision to make. I beileve that computers are good and helpful. Because they can help people find information they need. Also, they can keep people in touch with buisness workers, friend, students, family, ect. In addition, computers can help people get neat and clean. @CAPS1 please consider puting my essay in the Newspaper.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 236,1,"Dear newspaper people I think computers are good because wat if I have a family member that gose out of town and you want to stay in tuch and I dont have a phone then I can go-on a chatting web sight and stay in with them. When @CAPS1 bored I go on google to look up and pichers and play some games. You can look up one think and find something elsa, but it will cech your eyes. Computers are good were ever you go, it can look up for a project for school. Bur ween you are in school it can help you with spelling, and if u got to know wat contrey has the most people the @CAPS2 will find the ancer as fast as a snap. Computers are advanceing every year. Seart the @CAPS2 was just a screan and a mouse, now we got laptops that you can tack every were. People can get exercis if thay want and thay can enjoy nature thay can bring a laptop. But when you are exercising then you can go right to youtube and lison to some musick and wach funny videos. And thats whay I think computers are good.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10508,4,"The author concluded the story with the paragraph because it shows that everything and everyone can make it through a tough time. This paragraph acts as a final positive message to readers. The text say, “when they come back... I will take that test again”. This quote shows that Saeng can see herself as one of the geese or the budding hibiscus plants. She knows that her “winter” is her test and that when she is ready, she’ll be able to take the test again and be successful. The budding of the hibiscus represents the time when she’ll be prepared to take the test. Though she is having a tough tine now, she'll be able to get through it and make another attempt. This paragraph is at the end because it brings together the purpose of the hibiscus. Without saying this, the readers would have never gotten this message, instead, they would believe that the role of the hibiscus was to serve as a connection to Saeng’s past. In conclusion, this positive paragraph was included to show readers that everyone can balance back from a bad situation.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3654,2,"In my opinion I believe all types of material should be allowed in libraries. If someone takes offense to a particular topic or section they dont have to read it. Not just certain types of genre and themes or magazines. Everyones different meaning they have differents personalities and views on what they like. I think libraries such actually expand thier variety of books. Libraries that don't cater to a persons desires or interests , what would make them want to stay? Libraries should be filled with all sorts of subjects appealing to everyone. Just like how they have an adult and children section. Everyone has a place were that feel like they belong. Even if some people get offended. A person can get offended anywhere not just by a certain magazine or some music style. I do believe if there is a certain line of respect of course. Nothing should get to out of line were it's an issue with a numerous amount of consumers complaining about the same topic. You can tell if a certain section or material is crossing the line. Each section should be written to speak the truth but also in a respectful manner. In the times that I've been to the library there @MONTH1 be some things that I don't agree with how certain things are certain ways. But then I see a person really enjoying their time at the library. I know when I go I always find my style of music that appeals to me. Not just the same thing everywhere I go. Theres always a choices, different options and more things I can learn about. Keeping all the materials like books, music, movies, etc is a way to appeal for everyone. I person should have their opinion and the choice to be able to read what they like. There will always be a certain movie or book you don't care for ,but others might. If everyone told what they like and don't like about a certain book. Where's the variety? What books will be left? Everyone has their on thoughts on what they like, if theres a topic you don't like you probably know least about it. And the library is a good way to search and find information about anything",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6026,3,"In the story many different settings affected the author in many different ways. In the very beginning of his journey he came across a ghost town. He reacted to the features of this setting with humor and hope. “I chuckled, checked my water supply, and moved on."" He still has hope that he would end up safe and in the right place. The next setting was an abandoned shed with a water pump and a fork in the rode. He grew worried when he saw that no near town was still in sight. “This sight was troubling” when the features of the next setting caught his eye he was desperate and devastated. “At some point, tumble weed crossed my path and a ridiculously large snake” He was on rough terrain in the middle of the desert with little water, when he reached the abandoned @CAPS1’s factory all his hope was lost and when he was planning his death. “I was going to die and the birds would pick me clean."" @CAPS2, when he reached the fish camp, he was relieved ""I had overwhelming urge to seek out Gary and Wilber, Kiss them and buy some bait.” He was overjoyed and overwhelmed because he had survived. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 99,1,"Dear @CAPS1: Have you been sent a photo of a @NUM1 year old child with no clothes on? Well, if you have this is called sexting. It can be put on the computer or any type of device. People should stop using Computers more because it can lead to bad things like sexting from teens, bad for the younger kids, and teens could be, talking to someone they don't know. Lexi @NUM1, says that ""she has goting facebook texts to her cell phone of other teenage kids that are excuset"". @PERCENT1 of @LOCATION1 population teenagers have @CAPS2, @CAPS3 and @CAPS4 chat. Any of these websites can ford photos to their mobile device. This has goting out of the hand and what ever is on the computer now will be on forever. More childern under the age of @NUM3 years old are on the computer know. Where there are chat rooms were they can interact with others. For example, @PERSON1 is a childerns game that has a chating interaction, were you can talk to who ever. But, we you create this @PERSON1 you child has to give a parents email address were they have to read the following terms to chose for their child. But, most parents don't even read it . @PERCENT2 of these parents just agree to these terms and don't even read them. @PERSON2, was followed home from soccer practice when a man about @NUM4"" and around the age of @NUM5 said ""@PERSON2 come get some candy"" @PERSON2 said ""how do you know my name""? ""@CAPS5 said cause I play with you all the time"" @PERSON2 quickly ran home and @CAPS5 told his parents. @PERSON2 plays on @CAPS6 another intraction game and told this stranger @CAPS5 lives in @LOCATION2 field and @CAPS5 goes to @LOCATION2 @CAPS7. Giving strangers you information they can trace you down and find the street you live on. We need to keep our children safe and off of the computers more so sexting, and young children stay off, so kidnapping stops. Help @LOCATION1, @CAPS8 to become a safe place for our childern.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3467,2,"Censorship 'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other chldren have taken off the shef. But if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf -that work I abhor -then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' @CAPS1 was quoted from an author named Katherine Paterson. I don't believe certain materials such as books should be removed from shelves under any circumstances. Everyone is entitled to their own opinion about certain materials. If books are removed from the shelves due to censorship, than what is the point of writing or even reading books? If people continue to remove books because they're found to be offensive, then there won't be any books left to read. I have seen many offensive books. Whether it had something to do with religious beliefs or even revealing too much sexual content, I'm sure it's offensive to someone somewhere. Books are written by authors who believe they have the right to express themselves through writing. If you are to take away or ban a certain book from the shelf, than what would the author who wrote the book think? @CAPS1 world is full of offensive and rather disturbing books. It can't be right to just get rid of those things because they bother us. Everyone has the right to read any book they want to. Just because it offends one person, doesn't mean it offends everyone. I believe censorship is unnessesary. What gives anyone the right to remove or change something because it's inappropriate? I have personally read a few books that I wouldn't want little kids to read but that doesn't mean I should remove it from the shelves. Perhaps, somebody else has been waiting to find that book. If I did remove it than I'm restricting others from experiencing the joys of reading that book. Censorship in general is wrong. Everyone is entitled to their own beliefs and different ways of expressing themselves. I don't believe anyone has the right to take something, that someone has worked on for so long to make, and remove it because they find it offensive. There will always be something out there that you won't approve of. Just because you don't approve of it doesn't mean everybody doesn't approve. Authors write books for a reason, musicians write music for a reason, people make movies and magazines for a reason. What gives anyone the right to take something that somebody made and ban it from the rest of the world because it's offensive? Books are there to help us become more educated and more open minded towards different thoughts and ideas. We shouldn't just ban them because they offend certain people. If you don't like a book because it offends you, than don't read it. It's just that simple. If people continue to remove books because they're offensive, then there won't be any books left to read.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15638,6,They faced challanges such as how to get the dirigibles to anchor on the building. There was really no safe way to do it. They also sayed the gas that keeps it floating is highly flamable. So it was like one big safty concern.In reality they ended up realizing its too dangerouse for them to do. If they took the chance and something went wrong innocent people could die.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 804,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, The effects computers have an people are not good. They can cause many problems in your life. When your on a computer, are you running? No, your just sitting there; using the computer involves very little movement. You need to be jumping around, dancing, walking with your friends, something! You can gain a lot of weight by sitting down and using the computer all day. Another problem that computers give you is being non social. You can get addicted to a game or something like facebook/@CAPS1 and be on there all the time. You wont talk to your friends as much at school or hang out with them because all you want to do is go on the computer. You are always thinking about just that and no other things in life. Computers can also be very dangerous. If you are on something where you are talking to people you don't know, they can find out things about you and can do to you. It's not at all to talk to people you don't know online. These are or the many problems computers cause. Trust me, I got addicted to a game before.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 690,1,"Dear @LOCATION1 @CAPS1, I believe that computers do benefit society. People are able to read, shop, and play online. This makes life easier for many people. Buying books that you would like to read can get expensive. With the internet, people are able to read almost any book right on their computer. In a recent survey, it was found that people who read books online save an additional @MONEY1 a year more than people who buy books. People can also read things like newspaper online. If there is snow on the ground, and people are unable to get their newspaper, they can read it online. This way they will know if a newspaper is still good, and continue buying it, including the @LOCATION1 @CAPS1. Additionally, people are able to shop online. Sometime, someone @MONTH1 have been an accident injuring them, and they are stuck at home. If it is a child, their parents will be unable to go to the store because they will be caring for the child. They can simply go on the computer and have food and other necessities delivered to them. People can also do this if they have a busy lifestyle with work or school. @PERSON1, a physician, told me that people who shop online have @PERCENT1 less stress than people who go to the store for the same items. He said that is is because they do not need to worry about taking much time out of their schedule to shop. Moreover, the computer is a good way to quictly play games. Young children can be very loud and energetic. Parents can just let them play games and read on the computer. Little kids love just the fact of being on the computer, and letting them go on can keep quiet and occupied for a while. Even just typing is interesting for younger kids. For older kids, there are many games that can play. Action, strategy, puzzles, and many more. They can also play against people around the world. The computer is fun for everyone. So in conclusion the computer is a very good place to go shopping, read books, and play games. Computers greatly help families of today.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 108,1,"I saw in one of the news papers I got in the mail that had an overnight for people to state their opinion on kids computer useage. I took the idea of waiting this letter. Multiple people do have to use computers for multiple things. Such as: homework assignments such as essays, sometimes peoples family members go off to was but can't use cell phones, also online job alpications. To start off with, kids have homework assignment right? Most of the time people have to do essays. I ask my mom lots of times if I can do an essay for school, she say, ""why don't you stay after to do it?"" @CAPS1 have lives so they can't stay after, also at school the computers don't let you go on most websites unlike at home which does. That's mostly one main reasons kids use computers alot. Next,, some family members go off to war. Normally for safly and privacy, they wont let the soldiers life their cellphones, but for other reasons they can use their computers. Usually your family members know that you have a computer and want to contact you so that they to know their ok so they don't have to for two years. So, the base they ace at you can talk to them over video mail. I have an @CAPS2 that went to @ORGANIZATION1 and is now in @LOCATION2, and we sometimes talk to him over chat when he was in @LOCATION1. Lastly, job aplications. Most of the time people are home bound but need a job. Tons of @CAPS3 commertials show avertisements for jobs online. This is good for all types for people, homebound, elderly, ect. But mostly its good because they sometimes let you have your own business and you get good pay still. In conclution, Some people don't go online just to be online they actually are doing something such as talking to their loved ones that they wont see for along period of time, also school assignments. Plus, if people don't know people very well how do they know if they're active or not kids, and adults, should still be able to use computers when ever they want.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4188,2,"I do believe that certain materials should be taken of the shelves if they are found offensive. I think children should only be able to read certain books cause, some books say things should know until they get older.Some books, music, movies , magazines should be removed if offensive. I think they shouldnt make some kids movies , books, music like that for little kids. They put to many things they should not in kids movies. The movie the @CAPS1 they should not let kids watch that movie its not a movie i would let my kids see until they was older.The reason why is cause it has alot of bad language in it . It is about these guys who take ruphies. This guy cheats on his girlfriend, and it is just not a movie that i would let my kids watch.There are people getting drunk in the movie . they do stupied things.They try to make it look like its a good thing to do and that it is so fun to do all those things. I just think that is not a movie to let kids watch. Some music has to much bad language in it. I think they should make better songs for kids. Songs that really mean something or about someone. Most of these songs they sing now is about dumb things that do not mean anything.I think some magazines are okay to read but some just talk about actors. Like @PERSON1 I read one time about here doing something that was bad, and she should not be doing. I think it depends on what the magazine is and what it talks about in it. I believe that if they are offensive they should be taken of the shelves. I also think that if they are not offensive and do not talk about bad things kids should be able to see them or read them. If they did that kids would not talk and do things like they do today.That kids would not try to stell and things like they do in these movies they see it happen or there friends do it. So they think it is cool for them to go out and do things like that but, it is not.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7604,3,"As the author cycles through this shortcut, he is in a very dangerous setting. As said in the poem, he is in the high deserts of California in June. A desert makes the heat unberable for the cyclist. Its just sun, sand, and him. Then it tells the month summer of course makes the temperatures for the cyclist about @NUM1 almost maybe even hotter. This could cause him to drink plenty of water and almost lose all of his water supply. “The water bottle contained only a few tantalizing sips.” Then there is the distance of his ride. The author is always saying “About @NUM2 miles” or “Twenty miles up the road.” All of this hard work can cause heatstroke & kill him.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4169,2,"Teachers in schools do their best to make sure the material that children and young adults read and see in school is appropriate for their certain age group. Parents also make the effort to censor what their kids read, watch, and listen to as a way of keeping them innocent. At a point in a young adults life, this feeling of censorship wears off, and the teenager decides to read, watch, and listen to whatever they want to. This is how it goes in most cases, but is this strong feeling of public censorship too old fashioned for todays society? In my opinion, yes. Censorship, to a certain extent, should not be in present in libraries. There will always be something that one person finds in appropriate while another finds it to be perfectly fine. When I was younger we would sometimes watch movies in the after school program I attended. One movie, @CAPS1 @CAPS2 specifically, created conflict. While my mother was fine with me watching the movie, some of the other kids were not allowed to because their parents did not find the movie appropriate. Because of this one parent family all the kids in the program had to watch a differnt movie that everyone's parents were okay with. As @PERSON1 said eventually 'we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' If libraries restricted material based on what people found offensive, there would be nothing left; people can find offensive material in almost any material in this century. It is the way our culture is. I am not saying it is right, but someone else might think so and that person has a right to go to a library and get a book that they find perfectly fine. In the @ORGANIZATION1 censorship has almost never been present. It is part of what is great about this country. People can speak, believe, and read what they want without the government interfering. This is not true in a lot of places and we should value that as @CAPS3, not complain about it. The government has no right constitutionally to censor material put in public, there can be age restrictions, but to completely cut the material out would go against this countrie's policy of freedom. I agree that age restrictions are okay, but I believe it is untimately up to the parents of a child what they want their child to watch or read. Overall, the censorship issue is a little bit of a grey area. In my opinion our country is about freedom and censorship is not exactly upholding the constitution. People can believe what they want, but the issue will be hard to conclude. Everyone has a different view on something, that is what started this issue in the first place. When everyone learns to get along, maybe then can this problem be solved",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1060,1,"Dear local newspaper, @CAPS1 a place where they are all on computers all day long, everyday. I don’t think computers are a benefit to society because you get less time exercising, less time enjoying nature, and you spend less time with family and friends. Computers are not a benefit to society. To begin, computers are not a benefit to society because it gives you less and less time exercise. And wouldn’t you want to go exercise and lose weight. Other than just sitting around on your new computer and having your brain being wrecked out by it. @PERSON1 said that @PERCENT1 of people that get a new computer spend @NUM1 minutes more than what time they usually spend on it. Next, is that you could be outside enjoying nature. New @CAPS2 @CAPS3 Newspaper said that they are worried that it too many people got a good computer that no body would be outside enjoying what left of nature. Because sooner or later there wont be any trees left in the world and humans would became extinct for eternity. Lastly, is that you wont be spending any time with your family or friends. Like when I got x-box live, I couldn’t get off of it. I was addicted to it. And when my family got our new computer, my older sister couldn’t get off of it. She would spend all day and all night on it. Now, if parents take the computer away from kids they will have more time to exercises more time to enjoy nature, and more time with family and friends. Computers are not good toward society.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9552,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph inorder to show Saeng’s determination. It is also relating the drivers test to the hibiscus plant. It is saying that when everything else starts coming to life, she will also accomplish something. She needs the motivation of her surroundings to push her. Throughout the story, Saeng is affected by her surroundings. For example, when she’s in the greenhouse, it takes her back to her childhood, “It was like walking into another world. A hot, most world exploding with greenery.... Plants that she had not even realized she had known but had forgotten drew her back to into her childhood world.”",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4759,2,"Today in the media there are many things that can be found offensive. Movies, books, songs and magizines are a few examples of where someone might find something offensive. I believe that whatever is put into the media has a purpose. If someone thinks that something is offensive I think that they should just take what they find offensive away from themselves and not take it away from everyone else also. When a song artist comes up with a song there is a reason for why they put what they do in their songs. Sometimes they do it to get a point across to the audience. When someone finds a movie offensive there is a reason for why it is the way it is; it's to get a point across. If people find the movie offensive they just simply shouldn't subject themselves to it. If they don't watch the movie they won't have anything to be offended about. Certain books in libraries are found offensive to some people just because they don't agree with what is in them. If there is something in a book that you don't agree with you don't just take the book off the shelf and throw it away. Other people might injoy reading that book. If the book is thrown away no one will have the chance to read it besides the person who threw it away. I do not believe that media that is found offensive to some of the public shouyld be removed. Not everyone finds certain things offinsive in the media. Again, everything that is put onto the market and into the media has a purpose; it's purpose is to get a point across to others.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12398,5,"In the memoir, @PERSON1 by @PERSON2 the mood he created was being grateful.The mood the author @PERSON1 had in the memoir was grateful. He was very grateful that his parents loved and sacrifice thier carrers for him.He learned the real definition of a ""family"". On paragraph @NUM1 Narciso says ""I will never forget that house or its gracious neighborhood or the many things I learned there about how to love."" Narciso's mood he's being grateful about the unity he had at the place he called Home. With many diverse immigrants mostly Spanish, Cuban and a few Italian people.In conclusion, Narciso Rodriguez was very grateful about the oppurtunities that was left for him. Now he's a international clothing designer. He will never forget the days he had in the traditional Cuban Home.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6354,3,IIn the essay the features of the cycleist affect the setting because the readers wouldnt have thought that he was in that bad of danger if he hadnt of been going through the desert. When the cyclist got to the grape factory he stated that he was almost dehydrated. And then when he got to the bait shop he drank from the faucet.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1021,1,"I think that it is fine that people spend a lot of time on the computer instead of having time to exercise, enjoy nature and interact with family and friends because it is the persons choice to either stay on the computer all day or go outside. Computers affect peoples lives in good ways and bad ways. People stay inside all day and do nothing besides sit there and just click buttons. Good ways is that it educates you in many ways because @CAPS1 your on the computer watching or reading interesting things you could end up learning something before you learn it in school. Its good to go on the computer for a little a bit but @CAPS1 your on it all day then you could have no exercise and become lazy and fat. But @CAPS1 you go outside sometimes you wont have to worry because you are getting exercise that helps out your body. I think computers are a great way to have fun. You can chat with your friends, @CAPS1 you have a webcam you can video chat with friends. A cmputer is a great way for communication. Millions of people use a computer for working at their @CAPS2. Without computers life would be ten times harder for people in this world. People like accountants use computer for there job. They store data into the computer to remember things @CAPS1 you couldn't write it down on a piece of paper, People also make websites on the internet to help educate, like @CAPS1 you type in a word it could give you a definition, People also make @CAPS4 engines, @CAPS4 engines are some engine on a website that searches for things you type in. @CAPS1 you type in something you will get what you were looking for. My whole point of explaining this is that its the peoples choice @CAPS1 they would like to be on all the time. Because computers and internet connections arn't free. It doesn't even do anything bad to your brain. It mostly educates it. People even go to school online they learn and study on things that are on the internet. Plus you could get @CAPS2 at places for working with computers, You could make programs, and anything you would want. So my statement here is that its okay to spend alot of time on your computer instead of exercizing going to see friends and family and enjoy nature. I think that computers are fine and it doesn't matter how long your on it, it just depends @CAPS1 your learning and not playing games all day and being lazy and get fat.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15469,6,"Based on the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, there were many factors in the way of dirigibles docking at the mooring mast. When the German dirigible ""Hindenburg"" went up in flames in New Jersey the owners of the Empire State building realized quote how much worse the accident could have been if it had taken place about a densely populated area such as downtown New York."" (paragraph @NUM1). Another obstacle was the existing law against low-flying airships in urban areas. This law makes is so that it is ""illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area"" (paragraph @NUM2). The greatest obstacle of all however, was mother nature. The winds that high in the sky were ""constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" This would cause the back of the ship to swivel around and would be unsafe to passengers and pedestrians on the street below. All of these factors contributed to the project never being fulfilled in New York.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10392,4,"The author concludes “Winter Hibiscus” with the paragraph because it continues the theme of adjusting to changes in life. In the story, Saeng has come to the United States from Vietnam and it is quite a change. Also changed are the plants. The hibiscus reminds Saeng of Vietnam, but it is different. The mother in the story says, “Its flowers aren’t as pretty, but it’s strong enough to make it through the cold winter months here, this winter hibiscus. “The hibiscus also relates to the theme because it is able to adjust to changes. The final paragraph talks about snow melting, geese returning and the hibiscus budding. These are all changes the author uses to connect to the theme. This adds more understanding to the story’s message. Additionally, the tone of the last paragraph is hopeful, which gives the reader a positive feeling. The tone adds to the theme of the story.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13630,5,"The mood created @CAPS3 the author, Narciso Rodriguez in the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from Home: The Blueprints of our Lives is Love and @CAPS2. Love is shown in this excerpt @CAPS3 how grateful he is for his parents and how he feels about then. In paragraph @NUM1 he says ""@CAPS1 often told them that what they did was a much more courageous thing than i could have ever done."" @CAPS2 is shown @CAPS3 the Way, Narciso described the house he grew up in. Stated in paragraph @NUM2 that ""Here, in innocence of childhood, the congregation the family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the backdrop to life in our warm home."" Love and @CAPS2 is expressed all throughout this memoir and I stated just a few examples of it.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4201,2,"Libraries hold more than just books, magazines, and movies... They hold history. With out any doubt, there is offensive material printed on numerous pages spread through out the thousands of books and magazines a library holds. Some find this terrible, but I on the other hand, completly disagree. Every book has a different story to tell, and everyone comprehends the content differently so I think libraries shouldn't take out offensive material from their shelves. What's really considered offensive? This question would be very hard to answer because everyone has a different veiw, different opinons, and a different background. Some would say violence, drugs, gangs, and sexual situations are offensive... While others consider religion, beliefs, traditions, and morals offensive. With all the different veiws on what someone finds offensive, a library would have to almost completly clean their shelves just to remove a small porportion of it. There's many sections in a library, from fiction to children stories. If there is an area for 'children books,' and 'adult books,' @CAPS1 can't there be one for materials some readers would find offensive? Libraries could even mark a book if it held something offensive.This would settle many conflicts! If a reader chooses to read a book that was marked with offensive content, they would have no right to get upset. Limiting our libraries shelves is unthinkable. If someone got offended by what they read, they could put the book down just as fast as they picked it up. A public library is a public place, where many people go... so if one person gets offended by something they read or saw, doesn't mean the next person will. Bottom line is, no book should be taking away because someone couldn't handle what was being sad. 'If I have the right to remove that book from the shelf - that work I abhor - then you have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' @CAPS2 everyone's veiw on offensive material is different, eliminating it would be hard. One person found this book offensive, so it's gone... The library would be pointless. The shelves would empty, because the loss of many phenomenal books. People do get offended, that's just life... I don't think that they should be able to take a book away from everyone just because of one person's opinon on it",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15027,6,"One of the obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced was that the construction of the mooring mast would add stress to the building due to its height. The architects, however, were able to design a special type of stainless steel that would be illuminated from the inside and provide support. Another obstacle was that the dirigibles used hydrogen instead of helium, and having such an airship with flammable gas nearby civilization was considered unreasonable. Thus, a law was passed that forbid the transportation of dirigibles close to the public. Nature was also against the architects, and so posed a safety hazard when high-speed winds attempted to @CAPS1 the dirigibles from the sky while being weighed down with lead weights. In the end, the mooring mast on the Empire State Building was never used due to these issues.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12676,5,"I think the mood of the passage @ORGANIZATION1 by The Blueprints of our Lives is a very @CAPS1 mood because in the passage it @CAPS6 ""I've thanked them repeatedly"" I believe this meas that @CAPS2 is thank full that her parents provided him/her with a good home. Another reason I think that the mood of the @CAPS3 is @CAPS1 because in the story the @CAPS3 @CAPS6 ""I will never forget new my parents turned his Simple house into a home I think this means that the @CAPS3 is @CAPS8 and that is the mood I believe the article is about.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10449,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because it shows Saeng wants to take the test again, but she wants to take the test again when everything else good and happy returns like the plant and the geese. This is true because Saeng says ""When they (geese) come back… and this hibiscus is budding I will take the test."" This shows her maturity and happiness and happiness. She wants to do something hard and maybe even not fun when everything else returns and is happy. Just as when she came, she was sad, but when the geese and plant comes back she wants to help them through this and make them happy too. This way they all can be happy at the same time.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4023,2,"In my experience some music is just too offensive. They use words that should not be heard by certain people and especially certain ages. Even the magazines have things that are just way too inappropriate for some people. Some of the movies they put out these days are just horrifying to see. The fact that they put these things in a library shocks me greatly. One day I was babysitting a little girl and I had taken her to the library. There was a @CAPS1 on a shelf and she put it in her @CAPS1 player. It was making very sexual references and had many curse words in it. I was mortified that the little girl had to hear those words at such a young age. As soon as I put my ear to her head phones, I turned it off immediately. They should really watch @CAPS4 music they put put out to the public because if I hadn't of been with her, she might have picked up on some of those words. I don't think @CAPS3 would want anyone listening to that kind of language at any age really. It disciminates woman and gives young children ideas in their heads of sexual activities. One other thing they put out in libraries i don't agree with is magazines that are a little too mature. I went to the library one day with a friend of mine and i picked up a @ORGANIZATION1 magazine. I was flipping around and I saw all these revealing pictures and I was thinking to myself, '@CAPS4 if a yooung cjild picked up this magazine when no one was looking?' That would be a horrible experience for a young child to have. I've read somewhere that things children see at a young age, have a great effect on who they will become. If this is true I certainly thing we should censor @CAPS4 we out out in our public libraries and be careful if we take our children to the library. We should make sure the next generation doesn't see certain things that we have. We should also monitor the movies the watch and keep a close eye on the things they read",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 310,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION3, In a pole conducted by the @ORGANIZATION2 (@CAPS1) @PERCENT1 @ORGANIZATION1 people agreed that computers are a easier way to research than going to a library. Over the @DATE1 few years it has become a growing debate as to wheather computers are a benifit to socity or not. Today in america over @PERCENT2 @ORGANIZATION1 all people own a computer, according to the @ORGANIZATION1 are most definatly a benifit to today's socity for the reasons that it allows better and easier world comunications, makes text and information, more redily avalible to the public and allows the advancements in technology that are nessesary. Communication is a vital part @ORGANIZATION1 america and the world in this day and age. Communication is souly run by the commputer. @CAPS3 computers provide better and faster communication. They are also far more reliable. In the @DATE2's if you wanted to speech with some one who is far away you would have to send a letter. Along with sending a letter is the risks that it will not get there. it will be stolen in the mail and @ORGANIZATION1 course the time that it would take to ge there. All @CAPS3 are solved in todays email and instant messiging (@CAPS2), @CAPS3 are relible, cant be stolen, and can go across the globe in seconds. Computers are not only a way for communication but also one @ORGANIZATION1 the most prominate ways to research, @CAPS4 the internet people would need to go to the library and run the risk @ORGANIZATION1 the book not being there or the library being closed. Through the internet all the information @ORGANIZATION1 the world is available @NUM1./ Computers are also the former in todays technological advances. Computers allow us to have inventions that run there self so human operation is not nessisary. this same technology saves lives every day and alows us to create @ORGANIZATION3 better technology. As you can see computers are the greatest technology created in the @DATE1 and allows faster and more relible communication, is the greatest library the world has ever known, and allows for the creation @ORGANIZATION1 even more advanced technologies. Computers are an extreme benifit to socity and nessisary in this @ORGANIZATION3 era.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15436,6,"The empire state building's construction workers attempted to build a dirigible dock on top of the world's tallest building but many problems occured during the process. In order to have a dirigible dock on the top of the building the building would have to withstand its weight. ""The steel frame of the empire state building would have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate this situation. over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications had to be made to the buildings framework."" (@CAPS2 @NUM1)"" The 102 story floor building was predicted to be a success and predicted to become the new age of aviation travel. Another obsitcle that the workers faced was realizing that dirigibles outside the @CAPS1 were highly flammable because they contain hydrogen. It would be disastrous if one caught on fire on the top of the building in New York City. ""The greatest obsticale to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature its self."" (@CAPS2 @NUM2)."" There are very strong and violent winds at the top of the building, the blimp could become a hazard if it was blown out of control A blimp hovering over hundreds of pedestrians in the city of New York is a definite hazard. There is also a law forbidding aircraft flying to low over populated areas. Having a mooring dock was a good idea but it was never really practicol or safe, many bad things could of happened if it was actually working.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7608,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist in a very harmful way. The hot temperature and boiling sun made the author hot and took his energy away quicker. The emptiness of the setting can make a person lose hope of finding any civilization. The narrator said, “It was a sad, hopeless laugh, mind you...”(Kurmaskie @NUM1). That is not the last of the harmful setting, the dry desert air has the biggest impact on his llife. The dry air makes him more thirsty for water he doesn’t have making him dehydrate faster. The narrator saids, “I was traveling through the high deserts of California in June” (Kurmaskie @NUM1). The lonely and dreadful features of the setting the cyclist was part of made it so much worse that he had no water.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15933,6,"The builders of the @ORGANIZATION1 thought that they had a great idea and that they were pioneers. They soon realized that there were some problems with their ideas. One major problem was safety. As noted in paragraph @NUM1, most @LOCATION3 dirigibles used hydrogen, which was highly flammable. New York is one of the biggest cities in the United States, and it was far too densely populated to take that risk. Another problem was wind. At those heights, the wind currents were unpredictable and winds reached high speed. If the dirigible were to be blown around while in the downtown area and were to hit a spire of the building, there would certainly be quite a few casualties. After the risks and rewards were balanced, they realized it just wasn't worth it.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15080,6,"There are many reasons Why the builder's faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. In paragraph @NUM1 the excerpt states that most dirigibles from outside of the United states use hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable. The hydrogen can cause a fire and destroy the Empire State building and can destroy downtown New York. Another reason why the builder's faced obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there is because it was against the law. In paragraph @NUM2 the exerpt states there was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. This could be dangerous to the citizens of downtown New York.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1751,1,"Dear local newspaper, I strongly belive that computers don't benefit society as much as people think. I think that nature can provide all of the same qualatys than any computer can. A computure can not provide fitness, real interactions with friends of family, or experience in the real world. Did you know that @PERCENT1 of children in @LOCATION2 are overweight because of a lack of exercising? Acording to @CAPS1 @PERSON1. a @ORGANIZATION2 and @ORGANIZATION1, computer systems are the leading cause of a lack of exercise. So why would a system that leads to obesity be considered a benefit to sociaty? Anotherthing on that topic is that overweight children that spend @NUM1 hours. Put off healthy activatys such as basketball or tennis wich also leaves them socialy behind and lacking he healthy experiences wich leads me to my next point. People think that computers know everything, but the truth is that their are vary little things you can experience on a computer. For example you @MONTH1 read about world war @CAPS2 but you realy know what people were thinking or what the combat fealt like? A computer can not teach you how to feal only a real life experience can do so. Many if you were deployed to an army write in @LOCATION1. You would know what its like to be in war. but playing a game or reading an article don't provide experience. My @NUM2 explamation for how computers are not the greatest affect on scociaty is true life interactions with your family and friends. Their is only one true way to see family or friends and that is personally. People claim that they talk to their friends and family over the @CAPS3 all the time but the only why to be satisfied is by seeing them for real for example a romantic relationship would fail if the only way they communicated was threw the @CAPS3. Unlike most relationships that sucseed. I hope my letter to your newspaper will get peoples attention, I would apretiate it if you joined my cause and help protect scociaty from dangerous computure technology that could cause, obesity, bad relations, and inexperience.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15681,6,"Based on the excerpt, there were many obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The first obstacle is described in paragraph @NUM1, ""A thousand foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would and stress to the building's frame."" This means that they would need to strength the whole building. If they didn't the building would maybe fall over. The next obstacle is described in paragraph @NUM2, ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself."" This means that the wind is so strong up there, it would take a while to land safely. Also, that the wind could cause the dirigible to fly away. The @CAPS1 obstacle is described in paragraph @NUM3, ""The other practical reason why dirigibles could not moor at the Empire State Building was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. ""This means they could be a target to destroy the building. Another thing, is that if it ever fell it would kill a lot of people. These obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there were not overcome and the project was cancelled.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9087,4,Saeng did not give up on herself. She said she would take it over again then she might pass it. You will not always pass on your first try it takes a while sometime. Saeng encourage you to never to give up just cause you did not get it on your first time. She also builds confidence in herself. That’s why the author concluded the story that way.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12967,5,"In the memoir this is how the author created the mood, he tells of how his parents lived in a house where it was very poor at that time. His parents immigrated to @LOCATION1 where Narciso was born. he was raised in the ghetto. When he was living here it was during the time of racism and segregation. Narciso didnt know his real grandparents until 1970 when they were allowed to leave cuba. This was how the author created the mood.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9644,4,"There are many reasons the narrator could have ended with this paragraph. One reason it's the start of the winter so hibiscus won't return until spring. Also, it’s the end of the story so it’s a good way to end it because it’s the ending of the hibiscus and the ending of the story. The last paragraph also kind of summarizes up the story and it’s short and sweet. Which makes it a great ending to the story. It’s not like most endings to a story so it’s unique. Because most stories aren’t about nature. In conclusion, there are many reasons the narrator could have choose to end the story with this paragraph.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6853,3,"When the man began cycling he thought that this was going to be an easy for ride. For example in paragraph @NUM1 he says “Things began well enough. I rode into the morning with strong legs and a smile on my face.” As he got further he realized that he was in the middle of nowhere. The scenery was getting more and more empty. There was eventually nothing. The scenery was putting down his hope of ever getting out of the desert. For example: In paragraph @NUM2 it states, “a large highway sign jumped out of me. It read: Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit.” He realized this was going to be hard. He had to travel in bumpy roads and pass snakes without getting bit. The scenery created a sense of hopeless because it was abandoned. When he saw the bait shop, his spirits lifted and he was now hopeful and relieved.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1438,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, @CAPS3't it about time we start thinking more about the digital age. Computers has contributed so much to society for many years and up to this point I don't believe the world would be able to function without it.Some people say that computers @CAPS3't good for society but do they really believe that computers gave us the internet, email, most jobs depend on the internet, even games, and many more let me explain. First of all without computers there would be no internet and without that many jobs would fail. Most jobs need the internet to work like architects need the computer to design buildings and houses. Almost every office has computers for many different reasons. Writers need the computers to wright books, if they were hand writen some people might not be able to read it, so if there was no computers thousands of people would loose their jobs. My mothers works on a computer she would loose her job. Not only that but we need computers for school. If I had to write a paper on a person it would be almost impossible to do without looking up information about him on the internet. Also with writing a paper, some teachers only exept typed papers. How are we suppost to do that if we didn't have computers that makes home work a lot easier. Lastly, computers lets us explore new places. Goole @LOCATION1 is a map of every place on @LOCATION1 that we can see. If you need to find out where something is you can always count on the internet. If you need direction you can print them out off the internet. Also if you need to find out what somthing means instead of using an dictionary use the computer. Now can you see how much the computer benefits society. Some people say that other people take too long on the computer but you don't have to. I don't know any one that uses the computer for more then work or school.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6280,3,"The features surrounding the cyclist effect him greatly. All he has around him are hills, rough terraine, sand + tumble weeds. These features leave him thinking he will die because there is no life around him. Everything is dry + vivid + thats how it makes him feel. The old, rusty water pump shows that it hasn’t been used in ages + the black tar pumped out is no help to his negative thought of life.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15540,6,"In The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, she describes the obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced when attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. In paragraph Four it says, ""The one obstacle to their expanded use in New York City was the lack of a suitable landing area."" This would mean that there was not much room for the dirigibles when it was not in year. In paragraph sixteen it says, ""The U.S Navy dirigible Los Angeles approach to the mooring mast but could not get close enough to tie up because of forceful winds"". This means that weather could make traveling dirigibles very dangerous.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9153,4,"I think the author chose to end the story the way he did because it shows determination to pass the test. The test was to be able to make the garden graw. You know this because it says “in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again."" This shows that the test she look had to do with spring and the budding of flowers and that she is trying to grow something. In this story, they mention her helping her mother in the garden. So I think when the plants didn’t grow, she wanted to try again. That’s why I think they chose to end with the statement saying about taking the test again in the spring.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 370,1,"Computers are becoming a household item in the @LOCATION1 and around the world. There is a problem through, because some people believe that computers don't benefit society. In my opinion, computers are a @CAPS9 thing for our everyday lives. The internet allows us to communicate with friends, family, and more people around the globe! Its various programs help keep files and other things of that nature organized and updated. Finally, computers are a @CAPS9 resource when researching for projects, reports, homework, or anything else that requires information to complete. The world is a large place with many people, places, regions, and countries. Families sometimes move far away from their families and friends, so they want to keep in contact. Post is a very slow and costly service, while the internet is cheaper and quicker! IM's, @CAPS1 @CAPS2, use one of these fast and cheap ways. They allow you to send a message and receive a message on any day, at anytime, in any place with little of no hassle involved. Another way is to use websites like @CAPS3 and @CAPS4, which allow you to update your ""status"" on your wall so everyone on your friends list can see or comment on. The final and last way is by using a webcam, which enables you to see the person on the other end of the ""call"" and you can also hear their voices. This is the best way, in my opinion, because instead of sending text and pictures they can explain everything in their own way with no limit on how much they can say. Many people have noticed that the world is not an organized place. Computers help organize it with their many applications and programs like @ORGANIZATION1 apps, @CAPS5, and document folders. @ORGANIZATION1 is a chain of apps for everything from writing documents to making spreadsheets to making presentations and even to making fliers for special events. These apps are the basic to starting up a business or promoting an invention. @CAPS5 mainly centers on keeping information stored an organized in files however you wish and is @CAPS9 for quick access to them. My parents and other adults I know always say ""organization is the key to success"", so @CAPS5 definetly helps. The final and most basic way that computers help for organization are document folders. These little things come in handy when you need to save something quickly bu want to keep it organized. All you have to do is name it, click save, and bada bing bada boom you're done! Most importantly, computers come in handy when researching for projects or something else that requires lots of up-to-date information. Books will take a few days and you only have @NUM1 days to research, create, and organize your project and data. What are you gonna do now? You could hand it in late, but then you'll yet in trouble. Here is where the fast and reliable internet comes in if you need to know the difference between @PERSON2 and @PERSON1, use the search engine @ORGANIZATION2. If you have a question about the @CAPS7 @CAPS8, use @LOCATION2. Anything at all that you @MONTH1 need is at the tips of your fingers, with a little help from your computer and internet of course. In conclusion, I would like to state that computers aren't a good thing for society, they are a @CAPS9 thing for civilization! From communicating with friends and family around the world to organizing our everyday lives and helping us research important topics, the internet and computers are a @CAPS9 way to help out our lives in my opinion. Wouldn't you agree with me?",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9490,4,The author concluded this paragraph in the story because it was showing that there are geese that hang around the garden around the spring time.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10285,4,@PERSON1 go to the top and then over the hill.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9922,4,"Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, saeng vowed don't really like to talk. Saeng liked to be by her self sometimes. When spring come it was a different story. Saeng loved the spring and @DATE2. She would play outside all day every day. Saeng was just a nice girl",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 372,1,"Dear newspaper, I think computers have a good effect on people. Computers are very helpful to many it gives them an education, and they can interact with many people. Computers can be very helpful to many people. Working with computers can give people extremly well hand-eye coordination. Dr. @PERSON4 said, ""In recent surveys and tests, I have noticed a major increase with hand-eye coordination of @PERCENT1 all thanks to computers. ""Computers is also a way that people can learn to type in a recent survey at @ORGANIZATION1, @NUM1-more students know to type, thanks to computers. Computers can be very helpful to business people with creating power points. Instead of making a really big poster board for @CAPS2 @CAPS1 project, I made a power point instead that was so much easier. Computers can be very helpful to many people. Computers are used in many schools to help teach students about new things. For example, students can learn about interesting places that they never knew about. ""@CAPS2 friends is moving to @LOCATION1 and she has no idea what it's like, or where it is. So, we looked it up on the internet and found out so much cool stuff about it, "" says @PERSON5 computers can also teach students about new cultures. At @CAPS3 @ORGANIZATION2, @ORGANIZATION2, @PERCENT2 of the students learned about @NUM2 new cultures in one year, thanks to computers. Not only can computers tell people about interesting places, but interesting people. I never knew that president @PERSON2 had @NUM3 brothers, and gre up in @LOCATION2, did you? Computers can be used in schools to help teach students about new things. Computers are used by many people to interact with another. using computers is an easy way to talk with friends. Using instant messenger is free! Now parents don't have to pay annoying phone bills anymore! In a recent survey done in the town of @CAPS4 @CAPS5, @PERCENT3 of the people there thought that using computers to talk to friends was alot easier. Computers can help people meet new people online. Habe you ever heard of the dating sites? Well, this is what @PERSON1 has to say about it, ""@CAPS6 wonderful! @CAPS2 husband and I met online and we have been together for @NUM4 years."" @CAPS7 you have a faw away cousin and if you call or write them a letter it's too expensive? Well now you don's have to worry about that anymore because talking to distant relatives online is free! ""@CAPS6 so much easier talking to people online."" says @PERSON3. Computers can be used to interact with another. Computers have a very good effect on people. They are helpful, can be used to give education, and they can be used to interact with another.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3513,2,"In libraries, is censorship truly needed? I believe there should be some censorship to some extent. Libraries are usually pretty good at sorting things. I mean, they do use the @ORGANIZATION1 in every library I've been in. But even when they do sort the books, music, and magazines by topic, there's always something offensive that can fit in that topic as well. I remember as a child of seven or eight going to the library all the time with my mother. I realized I was getting too old for the 'kiddy book section,' so I ventured forth to places I've never been before. Any isle of books was open to anyone, I felt that I had the world in the palm of my hand. Most of the books were too mature of a read for me anyways, butt I still looked through them all. I mean, it was something very new to me; almost like an adventure. Then, I came across the music. There were so many inappropriate titles, cover-arts, and even names of bands. But this perked my curiosity. I remember thinking to myself, 'were books this way too?' I soon found out yes, they were. There were even doctor books with graphic images. The worst were books with cuss words that I found. Innocence in the library was gone. I think libraries should have a different section for older, more mature people; not including children. Some people loves books, and will open any book just to read or look at the pictures. Libraries need to realize that. I was once that little kid who opened the wrong book, at the wrong time. In conclusion, I think libraries should have at least some censorship. I understand that people enjoy the books and music that once terrored me, but I think there should be something done about it",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7333,3,"There are many features of the setting that would affect the pedalists. “Flat road was replaced by short rolling hills “(kurmaskie @NUM1) shows the change of terrain. Hills must be traveled up to get to the other side and that takes much time and eneegy, especially for bike riders. “high deserats of California in June “(kurmaskie @NUM1) shows heat. Heat makes it harder for most people to concentrate and causes people to heat overheated when exerting much force at once. These two co",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 961,1,"Dear @LOCATION1, Have you ever found yourself thinking about the computer, or wishing you were on it? I heard you were looking to see if computers have negitive or positive effects on society. I feel that it is a negative effect because of less time exercising littele time with family or friends, and is very it's easy to became addicted to. Exercising, a very important thing for a healthy body and mind @CAPS1 have a hard enough time finding time to do this. So instead of that free time to exercise, they will probably be on facebook. Also the maintenance of the computer will take away time for exercising. Just @DATE1, my computer got a virus I had to get fixed and that took for ever. That time while I fixed it could have been valiuble exercising time. Another key point to look at is obesity. We should be up and moving not just setting and staring at a computer for @NUM1 hours at a time. I love to spend time with my friends and family. I mean who doesn't right? Computers only away from that kids well be on facebook instant of eating a nice meal with thier family. My @CAPS2 always told me stays of the (and stupid) things he @CAPS2 with his friend. Now wkids just @CAPS3 easy. We will never have the social our parents I feel if is very important to spend time with and family because you never find when your going to lose them. Addiction is a serious matter. being addicted to the computer is too. Our generation is so dependant on computers. For example, in the car with the @CAPS4. You just plug it in and it ells you where go. What happens when it braker? You will have know idea where to go because you never learned how to read a map. or what if your computer brakes? You will have to send a better by mail kids had be typing instead of writing. that skill would be lost and you would have to learn it again. As you can see, addition is a no laughing matter. Once again I must streach the negative affect of computers to. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6689,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist in many ways. One way is that the hot sun makes the cyclist dehydrated and since there is no water sources around the cyclist is not getting any water. The rough terrain makes the cyclist tired.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13552,5,"In the memoir from ""Home: Blueprints of our lives"" by Narciso Rodriguez, the author stretches the importance of family. The mood that Narciso Rodriguez creates is a comfortable, loving, homey feeling. He states that he grows up learning that ""family has nothing to do with being a blood relative"". He says that his family welcomed everybody. Strangers that needed help, neighbors, and extended family. He creates a loving mood when he said he lived in a ""close-knit community"". He also says ""These cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship."" @CAPS1, when @PERSON2 says ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home,"" you can sense his appreciation and feel the comforting atmosphere. Those were the moods I felt while reading this memoir by, Narciso Rodriguez.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7670,3,A response that explains how the feature of the setting affected the cyclist. Would be that in the setting in the setting affected cyclist because for one the features of setting was based on something else. So that would be a reason how it would be affected. Because they're is differences in the stories.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16124,6,"Al Smith's plan to add two hundred and fifty feet of height onto the Empire State Building by attaching a resting stop for traveling blimps was plaussible in theory, but as it was put in motion the workers had to face multiple obstacles that ultimately made the attempt unsuccessful. The easiest and the only fixable obstacle was the issue of the added stress the blimp put on the building's frame. The whole building had to be strengthed to adjust to the pressure, but the workers eventually got the construction done. However, the biggest thing that hindered the mooring mast from being successful was nature itself. The winds that high in the air were constantly shifting violently, so even if the dirigible had been attached to the mast, the back of it would swivel around uncontrollably. Unfortunately because they would have landed high in the air, using lead weights the control the back of the aircraft was impractical. The prevention of natures problems is not possible, and similarly nothing could have been done to fix the issue of unsafety. Most blimps outside of the @LOCATION2 used a more flammable gas inside of them, and landing a dirigible that could catch on fire high above New York City was an extremely dangerous idea. There was nothing the workers could have done to solve other countrie's blimp composition. Finally, if nothing else, there were solid laws that made it illegal to ever have anything tied up so low over and urban area. Obviously, this obstacle couldn't have been overcome without waiting years and a lot of legal business. Placing the mooring mast on the Empire State Building with hope to land dirigibles seemed good, but during the actual process many obstacles were presented, most of which had no solution. In the end, the hope to ""equipp [the building] for an age of transportation,"" had to be given up.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16048,6,"The Empire State Building was always very famous and well-known, but did want more attention. Governor of New York, Al Smith, tried to allow dirigibles to dock on the building for transportation. He was encouraged it would work and actually went through with building it. The builders went through many obstacles trying to make it possible.To make this dream possible the builders would have to modify and strengthen the building. This would not be cheap, ""over sixty thousand dollars worth of modifications had to be made to the building's framework."" It would be very expensive. The builders designed a ""shiny glass and chrome-nickel stainless steel tower."" Also the mast would have four wings of all all corners. The builders designed observation areas and even elevators and baggage areas. They had it all planned out and raised an American flag at the top. Unfortunately, nobody considered all the dangers of docking dirigibles. All the builders work never went through. They tried to dock two but it did not work out. The building turned into the world's highest soda fountain and tea garden for sightseers.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1305,1,"Dear @CAPS1: A @CAPS2. Can you believe that this tiny piece of technology is influencing our everyday life? The question upon many people is, do computers give a possitive or negative effect on people? In my opinion, although computers help with certain everyday life, I think that it gives one negative effects. I have many reasons for this belief, but the three most important are going to be stated. First of all, people are to busy on their computers that they spend less time. People are also in busy with there computers that they spend less and less time enjoying nature. Last but most importantly, people are so caught up with technology, they barely spend time with freinds and family. So, in my opinion, I think people should get technology, and the real world. Have you ever walked down the street and saw someone the size of a boulder? well it isn't a good sight is it? My point is, that can happen to you let me change that to everyone in the world. Nowadays, people are spending less and less time exercising, but instead sitting at home on the computer, or slouched on the couch with a laptop. People are ignoring their health and instead staying on the computer. I for one, know how hard it is to resist playing the computer, but you shouldn't let a tiny @CAPS2 take over your mind and now your future. Nature. The most wonderful thing in the world I say the second most wonderful to technology. Have you ever turned on the t.v. and see nature its beauty? Well you can thank and global warming for that. When people use computers they burning fuel which harms our environment. People are technology they don't care about their and surroundings. If I was a I would say, ""@CAPS3 less computers and @CAPS3 more green!"" @CAPS4..... it's luxury of having a family. Family and friends , it's most important thing. Sue to computers, many people are family and friends. For example: @CAPS5: @CAPS6 want to go ride bikes? John: @CAPS7. I want to play my computer. Kids and adults was single-handed. In my opnion family most important, unlike a piece of metal that has a screen In conclusion, I think that computers of a regular effect on people, life you people by it. People are spending less time with their health and exercising advance in technology. They are all spending less time at the park big or simply just enjoying nature's beauty. Most importantly, there is less interacting with friends and family. But, this is just my opinion, it won't mean anything if you don't agree. I consideration.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1357,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2 editor, I have recently seen on the channel @NUM1 news that you want to know about the. Computers have on people. In the past, everyone has computers and gets knowledge from them. @PERCENT1 of the @CAPS3 surveyed at the @CAPS3 @CAPS4 agree computers are helpful to us. In my opinion, computers have a positive effect on people. The first reason is computers teach hand eye coordination. Without this coordination, people would not survive. The users be over very quickly. The computer makes us use these muscles so we can live happily. @PERCENT1 of the @CAPS3 recently took a survey at the @CAPS3 @CAPS4, agree computers are the main source of hand eye coordination. Dr. @DR1 expert in relationship to humans said, ""People without computers cant do what others can. They are unable to have fast reaction time."" To sum it up computers help with hand eye coordination. The second reason is computers allow us to learn about far away places. when you can't look up and learn about places, you are not about them. You're lucky if you know when in the world they are. Computers allow you to look up those places. You can look into going there for vacation or doing a report. @PERCENT2 of the adults who surveyed at the public library said the computers help. They are full of so much more information than books. To sum it up, computers allow you to learn about far away places. The third reason is computers allow you to talk online to people. This extends your friend ships with people. You can talk on the computer, not just at school. It also allows you meet new and different people. You can talk to people in @LOCATION1 that you couldn't talk to without computers. Computers allow you to open up the to all people. @PERCENT1 of parents who took a poll in @ORGANIZATION1 say they want their children to learn about different cultures. They need the computer for that task. To sum it up, computers allow you to talk online to people. In conclusion, computers have a positive effect on people. The reasons are to teach hand eye coordination, learn about faraway places, and talk to people online. I strongly urge you to look at any point of view closely. This decision is now up to you. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9650,4,"At the end of the short start “Winter Hibiscus,” Saeng says “when they comeback, in the spring, when the snow melts and the geese return and the hibiscus is budding then I will take that test again."" When she says this she is refering to her drivers test she says she will take the test again because she is reminded that her family didnt give up they moved to @LOCATION1 for a fresh start “plant she had forgotten drew her back to her childhood world. “She sees these flowers after failing which reminds her that she never given up before. So she wont now other. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3946,2,"When going to a library you expect to see various books, movies, music, magazines, and maybe other items. If a person is looking for a book that maybe could be offensive to a race, culture, religion, or etc., they should still be able to check out that book. Libraries shouldnt be able to control those situtations, because it's a persons choice or adults choice to read those kinds of stories. In our country we are allowed to express our opinion by the @CAPS1. The @CAPS1 includes free speech which insures that anyone can express their personal feelings or their opinion on certain matters. If a person would want to check out a book that could offended another individual technically by the law they have the right to do so. I'm not condoning that someone should read books, listen to music, or even watch movies that could be hateful or cruel, but by the law its ok for people to want to read, listen, or watch those works. Libraries are government funded organizations. Therefore meaning they dont have the right to disregard these works. The government pays for the books that are purchased into the library. This means they need books that people would want to read, and be interested in even though some gruops of people might not agree its there job. I'm not encouraging reading these novels or listening to offensive music, but as citizens of the @LOCATION1 we are allowed to listen to what we want, and read anything we want, because thats what our country is meant to stand for freedom. When I think of @LOCATION2 i think freedom, and i have to say I'm proud our country stands for that, and we should stand for that freedom even when it comes to the small things in life",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9369,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph to show the growth or hope that Saeng has that she will be comfortable in the United States. When she said “I-I failed the test,” I took it as failing the test to see if she got over her country and if ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15481,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles when they attempted to allow dirigibles (blimps) to dock there. The greatest obsticle was nature itself. With violent changing winds and climate, it made it extremely hard to tie dirigibles down to the mooring mast. The other main reason why dirigibles could not moor on the Empire State Building was the existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. The dirigibles will never be tied down to the moor because it would break the law. Safety was also a big reason why the dirigibles could not be tied down to the moor. Dirigibles outside of the @LOCATION2 used hydrogen rather than helium to fill their dirigibles. The hydrogen is very flammable so people feared if it were to catch fire over a busy city like New York, all hell would let loose. These were a few examples of the struggles faced by the builders of the Empire State Building.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16327,6,"Many obstacles were established for the workers, in allowing dirigibles dock on the Empire State Building. At first they thought they knew what they were doing, they were wrong. The workers first obstacle was to make docking at the Empire State building safe. However it was hard to make that happen because it was above civilians and if it ever dropped the resolt would be extremely serious. The second obstacle that got in their way was the wind pressure. It would of caused an un reliable support of the mast which would screw up the docking of the dirigible. Finally the dirigible is the last peice to the puzzle with disaster. In the section The Fate of The Mast it gives that the dirigible is run on hydrogen which is extremely flammable. Just that sentence alone establishes that it is not safe for the enviroment. By far many obstacles got in the way of the process of the mast. But docking was a whole different idea. Many obstacles had gotten in the way of the builders in attempting dirigibles to dock there.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12093,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is love. I think the mood is love because he talks about the love and support his whole family had. One example is when he says ""They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends, and careers in the country they loved."" To me that is saying how his parents loved him so much (even though he was not born yet) that they sacrificed everything they had for their children. That is why I think the mood is love.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12918,5,"The mood created in the memoir is very loving and caring and it shows appreciation to the authors parents. The author (@ORGANIZATION1) explains how it was for him as a kid and his ""family"" doesn't always mean a blood relative. He describes the household as being very humble and always had open arms and welcomed others. He also says that it wasn't about the size of the home or how expensive it was, it was about the people inside it and how close they were and the memories they shared. All in all through this memoir @PERSON1 (the author) shows that he is very appreciative of his family and wouldn't change how we grew up and thanks his ""family"" for impressing the spirit of generosity upon him in an early age.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9788,4,"The last paragraph of “Winter Hibiscus” describes determination and the growth of a person. Saeng says that when “this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” Just as the hibiscus blooms Saeng will bloom forth and strive through the winter to try and succeed in passing her test. Saeng concludes by saying this as a realization that she can’t be sad forever. She must be determined in order to pass the test. The next season will be a sort of renewal, starting fresh and coming out beautiful as does a hibiscus in bloom.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 960,1,"Dear Newspaper, Computers are not a benfit for us because we spent to much time on them not every one has a computer and they cost of a computer. Every one dosen't know how to use it. If we timed many hours we spend on the computer people would be amazed at what they sound. People spend looking up random things when they could be outside rideing biks or going sur awalk. And you cant do that with a computer. Not everyone hase a computer because that cost so much @MONEY1 a bacik computer can cost upwards of @NUM1 and more and thats @MONEY1 sur ther computer. Then you have to pay sur the internet witch can so sur @NUM2 a month. And you have to pay for surton aps like (windos, microsoft ect.) The bill on a computer up outer a while and people dont relize that when they are payings for the internet they arnt getting allot what the cable com sars they on giving you. Not every are knows how to use a computer lik older adults dont know how to really know use the full ptonole of a computer. Because they never learnd how to use computer. In this is the computer arnt a hose help for our society.Coose of the time and the cost and the knolage on computers.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10279,4,"The author concludes the story with that because she is determined to succeed in @LOCATION1. She misses her homeland and everything there: gardens, grandparents etc. For example , she walked into the flowershop she smells the flowers like she used to back home. She then smelled a flower that reminded her of her grandmothers “long gray hair, freshly washed …” But by saying that last sentence she said that when the hibiscus budded next winter she will take the test that she failed again.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7599,3,"The features of the environmental setting is affecting the cyclist. A setting is a certain time and place an event is taking place along with the setting their are features, which is the background description basically giving away additional information about the subject or idea. The features along with the setting are intefering with the cyclist by the hot temperature in Lodi, California making the cyclist or biker hotter than usualier as he heads in the wrong direction closer and nearer to the hot blazen scroaching desert. In addition to this he is running out of water and is beginning to get more and more exhausted from the heat plus he is starting to lose consciousness along with getting dehydrated. This is a major problem for the character because he is losing his sense of direction and because of this he is getting more panickly as his supply of water is running extremely low. A instance of the environmental setting affecting the cyclist is “I eased past, trying to keep my balance in my dehydrated state. The water bottle contained only a few tantalizing sips. Wide rings of dried sweet circled my skirt, and the growing realization that I could drop from heartstroke on a gorgeous in June ""(Joe Kurmaskie, @NUM1)."" @CAPS1 example is “This sight was troubling. I had been hitting my water bottles pretty regularly and I was travelling through the high deserts of California in June “(Joe Kurmaskie, @NUM2)”. The hotness and heat had also increased the character’s confidence in himself as he was getting more and more panickly. A instance of this is “I began breaking the ride down into distances. I could see on the horizon, telling myself that if I could make it this far, I’d be fine “(Joe Kurmaskie, @NUM1). In conclusion, the hot setting in California had affected the cyclist in a number of ways it had exhasted his water supply and this caused him to become exhausted, dehydrated, and making him lose his logically sense to make decisions however his loss of sense of direction also gave him more self confidence as he stirved to the roads and serves town that was about twenty miles away in order to get water so that he @MONTH1 survive.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7307,3,"The setting of a situation can affect a person both mentally and physically. This is evident in @PERSON1 “Do not Exceed Posted speed Limit.” The cyclist is unaffected, for the most part until the directions he was given by “a collection of old timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in office.” takes him over terrain not suitable for biking. Prior to following the men’s directions, the setting was enjoyable a made for an easy ride a reader knows this because the cyclist is confident. For example, he says “The sun was beginning to beat down, but I barely noticed it. The cool pines and rushing rivers of yosemite had my name written all over them.” This confidence begins to depleat as the cycling gets harder. For example, the cyclist says “sometimes life can feel so cruel.” after he hits rolling hills and a sign warning of rough road and not exceeding the speed limit. The cyclist became disappointed and wanted to give up because he couldn’t even reach that limit. However, he’s determined and pushes through to reach a shop. This gives a sense of satisfaction and confidence. So in conclusion setting can have a powerful affect on mood or motivation.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13175,5,"The author creates a peaceful mood in the memoir. Its peaceful because you can just picture the admiration in his voice when he talks about his family. One reason he loves his family is because, ""my parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family, knowing they would do the same."" This means that their family always watched out for one another and protected everyone when they needed help. Another reason he loves his family, his parents specifically, is because they did so much for the author. ""They came selflessly to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends, and careers in the country they love."" This means that even though everything they have known is in Cuba, they wanted their children to have better lives and chances to be happy, so they left everything and moved on. These are some examples as to why the author has set a peaceful mood in the memoir.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4761,2,Offensive things should be taken off for many reason that will be explained later on. Things in magazines shoud be appropriate for people to see. The first reason why they should be removed from the shelves is it might be offending to someone important like the president of the @ORGANIZATION1 or the @CAPS1 of your state. If the subjects in the reading material are offensive to someone they should say something to defend themselves. If they don't speak up no one will think to change anything. What I don't understand is why people would let that ridiculous stuff be put in the magazines and music and movies anyway.Even though movies are kind of different. Movies are mostly just made up ideas that people come up with. So if people are offended it is just pretend to begin with. Offending things in books well the author probably has a reason for it. It might be something that is offending yet people need to know this in case it has to do with someone you know.For example in the Newspaper I read an article about our current president. @PERSON1 was being question about his birth certificate. People did not believe that he was born in @LOCATION1. I personally think he was in fact born in the @CAPS2.S . But of course they did see his certificate that proved he was a member so that mess should be dropped and forgotton. It was uncalled for to begin with. I wonder what was going through his head when someone asked him that question. I'm sure someone would have seen it before he even became president.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7272,3,"The feature of the setting including the conditions, weather, and amount of water can possibly decide the life or death of the cyclist. The conditions such as hills, and rocky roads can decied a future for a cyclist because if the rocky roads turn you off balance you could fall down a hill and give yourself an injury or possibly die. For example, in the short-story it says, “over one long crippling hill, a building came into view” This shows the conditions in which the cyclist had to deal with. In addition, the weather and amount os water can also decide the future. “The water bottles contained only a few tantalizing sips. Wide rings of sweat circled my shirt, and the growing realization that I could drop from heatstroke.” This shows us that if the cyclist gets dehydrated enough he could pass out and no one would find him in the desert. In addition, the heat isn’t helping him out any once he could die without anyone knowing. These reasons show us a cyclist needs to make sure they have enough water and the conditons and weather is right so they don’t make a life-threating choice.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6555,3,A response that explains how the features of setting affect the cyclist by getting wrong dirachion The old man. One features when tough an ghost town. The old people in the didn’t know they were tell him. It made it haede for nam because that more harder roads and lesort water. He almost died.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 975,1,"Computers are a common household item these days. Due to how much computers are able to do, most people spend a lot more time on the computer than they should, and it is affecting our society. Computers can be very helpful, when trying to find information on a topic, but some people take it too far. Some people, their jobs are on computers. Others like teenager will do gaming or have instant messengers, which sometimes takes away from outside activities. Another situation with computers is that adults can get really into online gambling which is terrible for a person to do even at a casino, but now they can do it from their living room couch. Computers can also keep you in from outside, to get fresh air and sunlight. Computers are bad in someways but good in others. Sometimes computers are a pefect resource. When your history teacher assigns you a @NUM1 page essay on the civil war and you have no idea what happend in the civil war. In this case computers are good. Or your boss could tell you to find the amount of teen deaths in car accidents due to cellphones. Computers seem like a perfect resource. So far you've learned computers have their highs and lows but if computer time was limited then people would be able to do more stuff outside, or read a book. Some people might abuse computers others might not but if computer time was just limited I belive, that a lot of things would be different in our society today.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4304,2,"In every school or library many people see books that are inappropriate for their taste. Everyone has their own opinion, and what might seem offensive to you, @MONTH1 be something that someone might want to know about. So should we take the books that only the majority of the people think are offensive off the shelves, or should we keep them anyways? Here is what I believe we should do. Books are meant for learning and for pleasure not to try to offend anyone. They each have their own purpose and there was a reason for why they were written. There are tons of books out there that many people dont like, but that doesn't mean someone else doesn't. We should keep the books in the schools and in libraries, because @MONTH1 be they might help someone in a way and if they weren't there, how would that person get help if nothing else was avalible? One thing we can do is categorize the books by the genre, so that way people know what they are looking for. Many people find these books that are 'offensive' because they come across them randomly. If each book was put into a certain category then that incedent wouldn't happen. It also helps keep everything organized that way. So when you go into the library you know what you are looking for, you can just go right to that section and not look at anything else that @MONTH1 be offensive to you. Keeping books on shelves is what all libraries and schools intend to do. That is the main reason for libraries. They help you learn and get information about things that maybe you can't get anywhere else. If every library took off the books each person complained about what the point in having the library? There would be nothing left. In all, everyone is entitled to their opinion and has a right to think that a book is offensive, but the reality is that it was written for a reason. If the library or the person who published it thought it was going to be a big deal, they probably wouldnt have put it out there for the world to see. So keeep the books on the shelves",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13066,5,The memoir of the author were of is house as a kid. and How it was made In to a home for him and his famaliy,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9295,4,"This shows that she has not givven up and is going to try hard to adopte and do well in this new land. It leavs a sad story off with a happy ending. The hibiscus is a sigh of hope and so is spring, this makes the en time thing be fkor, without this part the story would be a sad one, but with it is one of hope. The way that the rest of the story is told is as if this is a turning point or an end to the en time boot. It is on resa lution without a resolution.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 11902,5,The mood in this memoir is heritage love and family love. This is showed by the author when he writes about his home and how we learn to love there. All the friendships he had and family moments made him love his home. He show the warmth and love for his family and home.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10631,4,"The author concludes the story with this sentence because she wanted to make a comparison between flowers and the test. To finish with this shows she will try season after season just like geese come back every year. Since she tries to make a??? Shows she hasn’t given up she will keep trying year after year. Also, it says that this girl is determined and she won’t stop trying till she gets it right. Next, this last paragraph can tell you about the whole story. Lastly, I think it gives a feeling for the whole story.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4272,2,"Do I believe that certain materials, suck as books, movies, magazines, etc., should be removed from the shelves if they are found offensive? No I do not believe this statement for many reasons. If anybody cold take books off the shelves in the libraries, there would no longer be any use for libraries, students in school will have a harder time learning about certian topics in the world, it would defeat the purpus of having the ability of freedom of speech, we could easily avoid this problem if needed. One reason I believe that taking books off the shelves is because, if we all have the right to take books we find offensive there would no longer be any books no the shelves. This would limit us the ability for students to learn about many important topics in the world. Just the other day I heard a lady telling her daughter that she was not going to allow her to go to school the day they have 'the talk', (sex education for students in grade six), because she thought she was too young to learn about that area of education. Yes, that @MONTH1 be true, but it also means that her daughter is not going to know about the many diseases you can get from underage, and or unpretected sex. This @MONTH1 lead her daughter to having sex at a young age and getting pregnate, or some kind of disease, that could have easily been prevented with a little education from library books, or a class at school. Another reason I do not believe in the right of taking books from the shelves is because, when we are taking these books off the shelves, we are taking someones very hard work and just throwing it into the trash. In my opinion it is very disrespectful to the authors, and anybody else who was involved in writing those books. Just because you do not agree with what they are writing does not mean you can just throw it away. This would being defeating the purpose of haveing freedom of speech. Taking those books off the shelves is basically telling the authors that they are not aloud to write about what they want and publish it. It is also telling them that they are not allow to state thier oppinion. This problem could easily be avoided if needed. For example, those books, music pieces, movies, magizines, etc., could be put in a seprate section of the library, and only make it availble to adults of a certain age. Have the books, and other writing pieces rated in the same way that movies are. This would be a very simple and effective way to solve this problem. Like I mentioned earlier I strongly disagree with giving citizens the right to take certain materials, suck as books, movies, music, magazines, ect., off the shelves if you or anyone else find them offensive. It could effect the community in many ways, it is very rude and disrespectful to the autor of that piece of writing, and there are simple solutions to this problem",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4768,2,"Books, movies, magazines, music, etc., make up a huge part of our entertainment system in our lives today. Whether it be informational or just purely for entertainment, many forms of entertainment are found in your local library today, whereas in the past most libraries only contained books. Although, our entertainment today is much different then it was back then and will be much different than it will be in the future. In today's society books, magazines, music, movies, and so on can be found in your local library, and contain many different types of material. Some material could be informational about our solar system or about the human body. Other material could be a fiction story filled with action, horror, or love. Some material could also be filled with true, life changing, and inspritaional storries. Which ever it @MONTH1 be, these types of things @MONTH1 come off as offensive to some people more than others and @MONTH1 not be apporpriate for younger ages. Certain books, movies, magaizines, music, ect., containing offensive, inappropriate, or rude material shouldn't be banned from libraries, just because those younger than adults should not read them, or becuase those who dislike the material believe that that material does not belong in the library. Generally most libraries are quite large and organized into various sections throughout the building. One area might be for fiction books and another for non-fiction books, another area could be for childrens books, and another for magazines, movies, music, ect., all based on different types and genres. Simply do this for those materials that should only be read by adults and not for children or teens. Take the books that @MONTH1 contain offensive material, or @MONTH1 be inappropriate for those younger than adults and place them in their own divided section in the library. When a book from that section is being checked out merely ask for an @CAPS1 from the person checking that book out to make sure that they are of age. This can also apply to movies, magazines, music, and so on that are placed in that section. Some materials found in libraries that @MONTH1 be offensive to one person @MONTH1 not be offensive to others. Taking those offensive materials out of the library won't benefit everyone and @MONTH1 disappoint some of the people who don't find that material offensive. Placing these certain materials in their own section is the best way to go to benefit everyone. As you can see just because one person @MONTH1 find certain material in magazines, books, music, movies, ect., offensive, rude, or inappropriate, doesn't mean that everyone else does. It also doesn't mean you should completely take out and get rid of all the materials that are found to contain offensive or innapropraite material. Dividing those specific materials into their own section, and regulating who @MONTH1 check them out is really the best way to go. It benefits everyone at best so that those who want to read that material can still go to their library and check out that book, magazine, and so on, and those who wish to not have anything to do with that certain material don't have to worry about finding material that is offensive or inappropriate, because they will be in their own divided section",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9441,4,"The author of the Winter Hibiscus concludes the story with the paragraph to show the connection between the hibiscus and @CAPS1. The hibiscus has to survive the winter until spring were it can bloom and became big and beautiful. @CAPS1 is connecting to the flower and saying she can make it through her obstacles that come with the change in enviroment if the flower can deal with being confined in a plastic container and surviving the weather. She feels that right now she's likes the Hibiscus. She’s trapped because the area is alien to her and she has to adjust. Just as the container is alien to the flower because it’s used to being free. But once it’s planted, it will become a part of it's surroundings and grow. And once she accepts the change and becomes willing to start over, she will begin to grow and that will cause her driving test to be easier. In conclusion, this is the reason the author concluded the paragraph with this sentence.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 11974,5,"In this memoir, the author touches upon serious facts while giving the memoir a fun and happy mood. For example, in paragraph @NUM1 they talked about how others who aren't even related to them come to do different activities with them, while still touching upon a serious topic about how his real grandparents weren't allowed to leave Cuba until 1970. The author also shows how even though they struggled and went through hardships in their home in the @LOCATION2, they were still able to keep their Cuban culture going along with the music they played and food. He portrays a mood that shows you can be happy no matter what the hardships you endure.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4137,2,"In the @LOCATION1 @DATE1, there consists of many libraries that are available to the public with an interminable amount of information. All of this information gives us many opportunities in life to discover new courses and paths to take. Byt what if some of this information has a bad influence in our world? What if some of this information changed the persective of peoples' lives, and who people are? Libraries do contain offensive and provokative books, movies, and other things that can possibly be hurtful to the behavior standpoint of all human beings. Censorship in libraries should be established and set because the people in the @LOCATION1 come from many different places making the @LOCATION1 very diverse. One thing in a book @MONTH1 not be offensive to one individual although it could be for someone else. Magazines, movies, books, etc. should be examined and determined whether it is appropriate for people at certain @CAPS1 whether by building a child section for books and movies and such, or having knowledgable assistance to help what people are looking for. Sections in libraries organizes the library providing and easier access to where things are located. In libraries, there are search engines to help people find information in a particular location. The benefit of having sections divided depending on people's @CAPS1 is that it seperates the mature section from the immature section appose to having both in one. Children normally have a seperate section for children books while older and more mature adults or teenagers have a section to gather their important information from. An example of a bad situation would be if their was a book located in the childrens section that spoke about drugs and alcohol. The children that scrutinized that book would be confused because they do not understand what drugs and alcohol are. They could learn bad things about it and children tend to think they are invisible drawing them to try anything or everything that could possibly be life-taking. This is common sense. Sections in libraries do help establish a sense of organization, although personal assistance would be helpful as well. Personal assistance and help on finding information in libraries is very helpful although they must be mature, understand, and know that their are books in libraries that could be about offensive material. Asssistance can help us determine if the person that is looking for information about something and there is inappropriate stuff inside the book, the assistant can let the person know about it. Because there is an interminable amount of information, I believe that there will be books left on the shelf for many people to learn about. Everytime I visit a library, there are always books on the shelves, and when I ask for assistance, they help me find what I am looking for. They warn me about offensive or provokative imagery and such and help me with upmost respect. Assistance can help prevent any sort of confusion with books, movies, etc. Assistants are ready to help people find what they are looking for and warn the people and are knowledgable about the offensive things that are in each book, movie, etc. Personally, I believe that freedom of speech comes into play in libraries. Writers and authors write about information that is fact or also opinion, and typically people learn about subjects that people enjoy or want to discover. Censorship in libraries is necessary to let people know about it, although assistance do not have the right to not let anyone read a particular book because it is inappropriate or provokative. Everyone in the @LOCATION1 has the right to read whatevery they please. Some measures must take place for example towards minors because otherwise it could lead to issues or disasters, but there should not be a law that prohibits a child from reading something. There is no such thing as a book that should be thrown out because every word that comes out out of peoples' mouthes are useful no matter how rediculous it is. Even if it is the most rediculous thing you ever heard, that particular person that said something made you think about it and that thought process helped you make a decision in your life that was next to come. This would be more on opinion based writing. In factual righting, it is something that remains in peoples' heads and is saved into the brain like a word document. This document that is saved can be changed and saved again even if the knowledge is offensive. Offensive factual information is hurtful to some although it is fact meaning it happened or is true.This brings me to my persepective on the matter that I think there should be a sense of censorship within reason although everyone has the right to read whatever they please because there is a never ending amount of information in the world and that information, including opinion, would make the shelves be empty from books",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15957,6,"Based on the excerpt, there were a few obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One reason was that ""most dirigibles from outside the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" The owners of the Empire State building realized that if a dirigible was destroyed by fire over a density populated area like New York, there could have been a huge acadent One of the greatest obstacles however was nature itself. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast."" When the dirigibles would try to dock, they sometimes could not even get close to the building because of the strong winds By having the dirigibles hanging over pedestrians on the streets of New York, it was considered unpractical and unsafe. Due to mother nature and safety reasons, the builders of the Empire State building faced a few problems in allowing dirigibles to dock there",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3438,2,"The books in the libraries that I have read so far dont seem like they would be offensive to anyone and I havn't really listen to the music in the libraries or watch the movies and the magazines seem fine to. That doesnt mean that there isn't any of those that can be offensive to other people but if there is then I think that they should take them out of the libraries but I think if someone found something like that they would probably just put it back and not go there again. If they took out every book, music, movies, and magazines that people thought were offensive then I bet alot of them would be out and that wouldnt be fair to other people because maybe they want or listen or read or watch them and they would be really mad if they found out they was taken out because other peoplr thought they were offensive. Some people would probably understand that some of those could hurt someones feelings or be offensive to other people but then theres other ones that dont care. I think that some of them should be taken out if they are really bad and I wouldn't want other little kids reading them and gettin their feelings hurt or anything but if there not that bad then I don't they should be gone and I don't think people would really care if those stayed in them. If thiers ones that are really bad and if they stayed in the libraries then probably no one would want to come back to the libraries and sooner or later less and less people would stop going. So the best thing to probably do is just take them out and keep the people that keep going in the libraries because alot of people enjoy reading and thats what they do for fun and they would be really upset if they couldnt go no more over something that stupid",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1018,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, @CAPS1 back a couple decades ago, before computers existed. What do you see? There were children outside exercising, playing with friends, and living somewhat danger-free lives then came the computer. Computers are driving the next generation to a dangerous life of staring at an assortment of pixers all day longels well as ruining any civilized relationships you had. I strangly believe that computers have a negative affect on society. Did you know that as tha number of computers sold increases the obesity rate has gone up @PERCENT1 since computers came into our lives why? Because people spend way too much time on and not enough time exercising! Computers another affect of the long hours spent in front of screen is a decrease in eyesight ability. My family friend, @PERSON2 had to get glasses because his eyes were damaged by the computer. ""I'm worried about my daughter's eyes...she stares at that screen for hours on end!"" @CAPS2 @PERSON3, a concerned parent at @ORGANIZATION1. How could something so harmful possibly be good for our society? Speaking of hurtful, the internet is very unsafe. Predators surf the web, looking for young, innocent people to meet and most likely abuse @PERCENT2 of parents much been monitoring their children's computer usage parents are unaware that the internet makes it easy to talk to anybody in the world, from @LOCATION1 to @LOCATION2! Monitoring would also come in handy when it comes to innapropriate videos, pictures, and discussions on the internet. It is so easy to be surfing the web and fall upon things you should not be seeing! Lastly, people easily get caught up in being hidden behind a computer, and say mean, hurtful things that would never be said to one's face! these unfortunate factors cause many of the issues between people today. Speaking of which, computers have a very negative affect on relationships nowadays. As I mentioned earlier, so many fights happen through computer communications. Even if online conversations are friendly, they get people accustomed to making people ""@CAPS3"" through a computer, not face to face. After being in a computer-oriented friendship, people tend to forget how to act face to face and find personal meetings awkward. @PERSON1, an eighth grader at @ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS4, ""I can't @CAPS5 only talking through computers, never being civilized with other human beings! Unfortunately, that is where computers are leading us to..."" @CAPS5 never seeing your best friend in person , only through technology! It @MONTH1 not even be your friend. It could be a dangerous poser! This is yet another problem...through the internet, you @MONTH1 not even know who such relationships are with! It could be fake, and you'd have no idea. Spending all day rolling away in front of a computer, putting yourself and relationships in danger is, unfortunately, the effect of computers. Computers are not worth the terrible consequences civilization must face. I @CAPS6 urge you to stop the advances in technology now, before it is too late! Make the change today.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10213,4,"The author concluded the last paragraph in the story ""winter Hibiscus"" to say that the narrator ""Saeng"" isn’t given up on her driving test",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15349,6,"The builders faced many obstacles while building the mooring mast on the Empire State Building. One thing was just simply the building would not have been strong enough to hold the dirigibles weight. Due to that fact that, they had to strengthen all the framework on the entire building. They had to put in sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications to its framework. Also having the right equipment on the dirigibles served as a problem. The dirigibles didn't have the right docking tools to dock on this newly built mooring mast. The back of the dirigibles could also be swung back and forth when docked which also served as a issue When it came to docking. Another problem was most dirigibles outside of the United States used hydrogen which was highly flammable and they didn't want something that could easily catch fire near the building like that",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3480,2,"Is it understandable to have some books restricted to people because of their age? No it is not the whole situation of wether or not libraries should have things such as movies, books, and cds restricted to certain people due to there age should not be an issue. My reasoning on that is not because of how it @MONTH1 influence people in a bad way. Then again it @MONTH1 influence them in a fantastic way. Thats how people find out who they are such as, what their interested in, what they like, and what they want to do. If it wasnt for establishments such as libraries most people would be the same as the others and not have a sense of character to themselves. People would be to similar and have little to no differences to themselves from others. People should be aware of some of the content in books. Just not to the point were those areas become restricted to certain age groups. Movies and cds are more understandable do to the actual graphic violence and language that some musicans and actors @MONTH1 use. Except in a book its not what other people are doing and saying its what you yourself is reading and how you yourself is interperating it. It takes more than what some people are doing and saying to reflect on what your reading and how your reading it. Thats why the whole situation of wether or not libraries certain things such as movies, books, and cds restricted to a certain age group, but instead having the ares labeled on what the category is to know before looking. So therefor that is my views and beleifs on why or why not libraries should be restricted to certain people.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9604,4,"The author’s conclusion explains her feels. The authors conclusion saids to me ""when the snow melts and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test"" again"", what means is that she is a newoman. For example, taking the test means that she will change. Also what it means is that she ready to take on new thing. For instance, the test to her is getting ready to take on a new thing. Thats what I got from the conclusion. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15899,6,"There were some great obstacles for the dirigibles to be able to land and dock on the Empire State Building. At first the idea was great and staggering people's mind, but when the mast was being built the people realized it would not work. The first problem for the dirigble the law for airships to be so low over urban areas which makes it illegal for the ship to even be that close The second problem was ""the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents (paragraph @NUM1)"" which means it would be very dangerous for the passengers to be comming on and off board of the dirigible. The last problem is that foreign dirigibles use hydrogen which is flammable and to put it over a dencely populated area could cause horrific damage. These precautions would have to be taken which were obstacles for The Empire State Building.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1414,1,"Dear @CAPS1, More and more people use computers, but not everyone agrees that this benefits society. I support advantages in technology and believe that computers have a positive effect on people. Computers give people the ability to learn about faraway places and people, they allow you to talk to people online, and you can play games games that can help you with your school-work. Do you believe that computers give people the ability to learn about faraway people and places? You can use google.com and look up different cultures and find out how the stuff they do is different from us and what kind of food they eat. For example, in @LOCATION1, they sit on the floor @CAPS2 they eat. We get to sit at a table on our dining rooms or kitchens. @PERCENT1 of people in would floor. Surely, computers allow you @CAPS2 my cousin on the computer and @CAPS3 important to note that, on computers you can play games that can help you with your school-work. You can go on sites that you on your @CAPS4. Show you how your body works for @CAPS5, and tell you about the revolutionary war for @CAPS6 @CAPS7. These sites are not boring. This a whole lot of fun! Whoever thought that learning would be fun? I sure didnt. The time is now! Just think that people are spending too much time on their computers and less time exercising, enjoying nature, and interacting with family and friends because no matter what, people will always have time for that.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16358,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building came upon some problems when putting in the dock for dirigibles. First, the sheer height of the building makes catching the dirigibles dangerous because of the tower's structure @CAPS1, If the dirigible was to crash, it would be falling onto a big citie's streets. Finally, most dirigibles were filled with hydrogen and that is highly flammable. That is why the mooring mast was dangerous.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 254,1,"I walked into my living room. I saw my brother on the computer talking to his friends on facebook. I thought to my self he's always on the computer never for any school reason. People always says we don't need computers I personaly agree with the statement. In the town @ORGANIZATION1 everybody mostly has computers. Without a computer to look up for content things, you have to go to the library and check out a bank. Just the other @DATE1 my friend @PERSON1 went to the library and checked out a book about the @CAPS1 culter. He loved that book he read it @DATE1 in and @DATE1 out, he read it for a book report on different culters. When he handed it into the teacher the @DATE1, when he reached the classroom the teacher looked @CAPS2 happy when she gave him back his test he had an @NUM1. He didn't use the internet your computers not mobile like a book if you wanted to learn about something while your traveling in you car you can't plug your computer in and use it unlike a book. Also books are usually funnier to read. Not haveing a computer can conclude to a lot more things like exercising. While my brother is inside all @DATE1 me and my friends are outside playing football, basketball, baseball, soccer, kirkball, and dogeball. We are very thin because @CAPS3 what we do almost every @DATE1. Unlike my brother were he is obeast because @CAPS3 all he done were before he had the computer he was as thin as us. It is also unhealth to be on the computer all @DATE1 because that can lead to staying update at night, don lead to missing the bus, and also lead to bad grades. Where when we are done with are gaine we whatch a little t.v.. then go to sleep to regain our energy we usually have atleast @NUM2 hrs. of sleep ever @DATE1 which lets us make it through school. We also make the right choses in food to eat to have more energy such as fruit and vegitibales. Were my brother eats all the junk food which helped lead to obesity. Not having a computer can help you spend more time with your family. When we go out to eat my brother is always in a push to get back on to the computer dosen't let us enjoy our food. He usually is @CAPS2 much in a rush he picks off of other people's @CAPS2 they would be finished faster, when every one wants to enjoy then food. When we want to go out to the movies my brother stays home on the computer. Even if we buy a movie and whatch it at home he won't whatch it with us he's on the computer. It really makes my mom, dad, brothers, and sisters mad that he won't do any thing but play on the computer. Even when are whole family gose out side to play a sport he won't come out and play. It's like he's not part of the familiy anymore. Its like he forgot we were even @CAPS3 the reason why I think computes should be in the state of @LOCATION1. If can lead to and relly bad grades. @CAPS2 if you want your kids healthier, better grades, and spend more time with your family then ethier sell your computer or This is happening all over the world.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1258,1,"Dear readers, On the current debate of the effects of computers, I believe they strongly benefit all people. For example on some computers a business software can be incorporated, allowing a meeting to be help over the computers. Not only is it convienent, but this saves money. Also, computers come with built in programs that can help keep track of you expenses. These are simple and save lots of time. Plus, computers also help you stay in touch with friends. Even if they are @NUM1 miles away you can click a button and have a live video chat! First off, the business software on new computers are out of this world. You can make a brochure of sales and expenses, all with an easy stroke on the mouse. This is a cheaper and greener way of presenting ideas. Furthermore, on the computer you and all you clients can hold a conference call. Doing this allows you to relax and multitask while your computer is feeding you coverage of the call in crystal-clear sound. Normally a phone would have to be glued to you ear but now you hands free. Another time where computers are handy is at tax time. Tired of running around your house to find you car bill from three months ago? Well, with a spreadsheet software like @ORGANIZATION1, taxes can be calculated in along with their name, so when you take the taxes to tax consultant, everything is organized. Using these tools cut down an stress and leaves you less frustrated. And even better, you can buy a tax program for you computer, so you never have to leave your couch! Think about, paying somebody to count your taxes year after year, when you can save a fortune and do it yourself. Above all, computers help you connect with old friends who have moved away or parted ways earlier in life. Now, the internet contains many social networking sites, such as @CAPS1, @CAPS2, and @CAPS3 where you can reunite with lost pals. These networks also offering access to photosharing and chat, so everybody can see how your family is and vice versa. Along with this is video chatting, where you can have face to face conversation with somebody even on the other side of the world. This is totally private, so it isn't dangerous to say names of family members or their locations. The internet truly is an amazing tool! To conclude, the internet holds a very strong role in our daily lives. Not only can we see who man the @ORGANIZATION2 game, but it also has interactive business softwares as well. Never again will work be so difficult. Also, the computer has programs to help you manage expenses, keeping you on top of your game. Finally, it is also helpful for all the tools that can be used to interact with friends thousands of miles away. I believe the computer is critical for success and happiness in life. It's a new age, let's adapt to it.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1204,1,"To @CAPS1 @CAPS6 @MONTH1 concern: @CAPS2 I have been informed that you had the idea that more and more people use computers, but not everyone agrees that this benefits the society. I strongly disagree, I think that computers have a positive effect on people. Having computers teach hand-eye coordination, give people the ability to learn about @CAPS3 and faraway places and even allow people to talk online with friends or family. Don't you want your children to grow up with great hand-eye coordinatio? More than @PERCENT1 parents voted yes. As shown in many statistics, adults and children that use the computer for an hour or more a day have better hand-eye coordination than a normal adult or child that only uses @CAPS6 once a week. By using the computer for more than one hour a day your typing becomes quicker and your reactions increase. Not only does typing quicker effect your computer techniques but @CAPS6 also helps you outside of your home like in sports. For exsample, if you play the sport baseball, the speed of your pitch will increase over @PERCENT2 if you use the computer for over a hour a day! If your a batter your racation to the pitch will also increase by over @PERCENT2! Just by using computer. Is time running out for your @CAPS3 project to be do? Without computers, you wouldn't get the information you need quick enough. Dr. @DR1 from @ORGANIZATION1 state ""You can get the same information on people other countries, and @CAPS3 from the computer as you can . By using the computer you get the as a book and easy. In addition, you have to buy books to get their information unlike computers where they dont you look up the you and in expensive, dont settle for less get the best! Over @PERCENT3 of @CAPS4 have old friends of family out of the state that they would still like to keep in touch with. By having a computer you can chat with them through your webcam! Instead of calling them up or sending them an email you could chat with them and still see them in the flesh! Several computer owners say, ""@CAPS5 like your actually hanging out with them!"" @CAPS6 takes over @NUM1 days at least to recieve a letter back or an email from them if they live faraway with computers @CAPS5 instant ! Wouldn't you like to talk to friends and family every day instead of waiting around for a call, email, or letter? I think yes. All in all , having computers is a great investment. I would also like to point out that without computers you wouldn't beable to talk with friends/family online, get better hand-eye cordination, or even have the ability to learn about @CAPS3 in just a click of a button! Isn't this what you want? ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16512,6,"Some of the obstacles facing the builders was if they were to add on the mooring mast they would have to strengthen the building integrity. This is necessary because once the mast goes the wind, pressure would have been transmitted all the way down to its foundation. More floors would have to be added to house elevators and stairs to a ticket and laggage area. They had to find a way to attach the mooring mast to the foundation, which is nearly @NUM1 feet below.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6883,3,Setting very much affects the cyclist and now he feels. If he was in a bad setting then he would most likely be in a bad mood. Mood is highly affected by the general setting. In the essay “rough road ahead: do not exceed posted speed limit” the cyclist feels very confiedent of himself and the setting helps to boost that confiedence and andorence.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 217,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, I agree that computers have a positive effect on people. You learn hand - eye coordination, you don't have to step out to go to the library and it can improve social skills. Continue reading to find out why. Computers, we use them everyday. They are teaching us something. We @MONTH1 not even realize it, but they are teaching us hand-eye coordination. We type something and we use our eyes to look at the screen and then our hands to type, one mistake and automatically our hand fix it. Or maybe when we are playing games online, the same thing applies. Our eyes are looking, while our hands are fast at work over the keyboard. Hand-eye Coordination is a skill you need on sports, and I believe that computers, since we spend time on them are the quick way to learn that skill. Next, how many student's parents work? My parents do. Something it becomes difficult to walk to the library, not everyone lives in walking distance to one. That's when a computer helps. If you have a project to do, but your parents work, you can just @ORGANIZATION1 it up, you might even get more information, then what you can get in the library. Hows that? you ask. Well, for an example, @CAPS1 you had to do a project on @CAPS2. Let's just say, you managed to go to a library, but apparently there were only @NUM1 books on @CAPS2, out of which @NUM2 were checked out. You can always check it out from another library, but that might not come soon enough, on a survey @PERCENT1 of students said this has happened to them, but the computer saved them. So what else did they say? HELLO @ORGANIZATION1! Last but not least, a computer improves your social skils. When I first moved here I was a very shy person. When I made a @CAPS3, I @CAPS4 talking to people who go to my school. I even became friends with them. I'm not saying that you should just stop talking to people in person, and use @CAPS3, @CAPS6, @CAPS7, or @CAPS8 and communicate. @CAPS9 I am saying is that if you start talking to them online, you know them a little, then when you talk in person you will see you have alot in common, with that person, and soon you can become friends. Another thing, that is somewhat related to this. I have many friends living in @LOCATION1, and many cousins in @LOCATION3, @LOCATION2, @CAPS9 over. We @CAPS9 know, you can't travel @CAPS9 the time, sometimes you can't even get to see them. Thats @CAPS10 social networks help. You can keep in touch, plus @CAPS11.S. not even waste minutes on you phone. Can it get better? In conclusion, Computers have a very positive effect on people. From improving hand-eye coordination, to not stepping out to go to the library, and getting that project done in time with a A+ as a grade, to improving your socia skills. Even see the data collected. Thank you for taking your time and effort to read this, I hope it has persuaded many people.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15032,6,"Various obstacles came up in this excerpt. This building of the mooring mast simply went from a dream to more of a way to win a record for the world's tallest building. The greatest obstacle they faced was the issue of safety. In paragraph @NUM1 it reads ""Most dirigibles used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" @CAPS1, an obstacle faced was the danger of the dirigible being destroyed by fire while trying to dock on the Empire State Building which would cause a large amount of destruction in New York. The builders, also faced the problem of nature itself. The violent air currents at these heights would cause the dirigible to swerve around the mooring mast. The builders also faced a legal issue stating in paragraph @NUM2 ""an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas"". @CAPS1, the dirigibles were never going to be allowed to fly so close to the Empire State Building anyway. These were the obstacles faced by the builders.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15186,6,"Whenever architectural work is put in act, thoughts of the potential consequences should be thought out beforehand. In ""The Mooring Mast,"" the builders of the Empire State Building faced several obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The blimps consist of dangerous chemicals and, ""most dirigibles from outside the United States used hydrogen rather than helium,"" and hydrogen is extremely flammable. A possibility of flames could result in a ruined building, and even worse, a destroyed city. Although fires were a problem to consider, ""the greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself."" This building is extremely high in the sky, therefore the winds get quite brutal. If a blimp was tied to the mast, the back of the ship continuously swivel and ruin the fabric of the aircraft. A mooring mast was just not a bright idea for a large city like New York. The population was too large, and the area was too crowded. The obstacles the architects faced were serious, and they helped the team to kill the idea of allowing dirigibles to dock at the Empire State Building.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7047,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist because if is very hot and is summertime. The cyclist wouldn’t have gotten so tired and exhausted if he wasn’t in a “ghost town”, with the, “sun beggining to beat down”. It was in @CAPS1 for nia during June so it was. Very hot, the water was also @NUM1 degrees! The text as states there were rolling hills and tumble weeds, so it must have been a desert kind of area. The trip was also a very long one, “about forty miles into the petal”, causing him to be tired. As you can see the setting was an area with no people, and it was very hot.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6440,3,"In the beginning the cyclist was ready to go and happy. By the time he got half way there he was “losing hope”. It was very hot and he was simple alone. By the end, he was relieved because not only did he find water, he found an easier way to get to Yosemite. The first old group of men didn’t help, but the second man did.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9763,4,"The author ends the story with this paragraph because the season is over. For example it is starting in the winter the hibiscuses are dying. Also she is leaving and wont come back till she can plant flowers again in the spring, and she will come back again when she takes the test over again. In conclusion that is why the author ends the story with this paragraph.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15485,6,"In ""The Mooring Mast"" by @PERSON1 there are many reasons that a proper, working Mast was impossible. there were natural reasons and mechanical reasons. As well as time and safety. Nature played a key role in this project. The winds around the building ""were constantly shifting"" because of the location of the building. When the to blimps attempted to go near to test it out One was too unstable to dock and the other through paper down a rope ""after this stunt the idea of the mooring mast was shelved."" @CAPS1 replaced the blimps over time and blimps wher flammable and dangerouse. Also, flying at that hight is illegal.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 8928,4,"I think the author finish the story with this paragraph for the following reasons. Saeng really means she will take the test in spring. I say that because she says when the snow melt and geese return meaning next spring she will take the test again. She is saying with confidence because she started to add more. For example, she added “hibiscus is budding.” Saeng is determined to past the test just by what she is saying. This is why it was the last paragraph and what she meant by it.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 847,1,"@ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS1 not advance in technology?"" asks four year old @PERSON2. There are countless reasons, people are spending way too much time on the technology we have already such as the computer. @CAPS9 of wasting time on this device, people arent excersicing, enjoying nature, and spending quality time with their friends and family. When you are on the computer for one hour, how many calories do you think you're burning? According to a study done at @ORGANIZATION2, one of the best colleges in the world, you're only burning @NUM1 calories. To maintain a healthy weight, you must burn at least @NUM1,000 calories a day! The average citizen in @LOCATION2, @LOCATION1 spends @NUM3 hours on the computer so that's @NUM4 calories. Even if they did aerobic excersize for the rest of the day, they couldn't burn enough calories @CAPS9 you can only burn @NUM5 calories an hour at the average aerobics class. If people can't maintain a healthy weight, they became obese, if they are obese they can get heart attacks, and if they have a heart attack, they could die! @PERCENT2 of the obese population in the @LOCATION4 die from a heart attack. With out a doubt, computers are like poison, if you use it, you'll get sick - but if you use to much, you'll die. Imagine - birds chirping up in the trees, deer sipping water out of a nice cold pond. In the distance, a fox playfully chases a butterfly. If you are in @PERCENT2 of @CAPS2 who have actually seen something like this with your own eyes you're lucky. ""@CAPS3 fellow @CAPS2, I painfully state this fact. The rainforest in @LOCATION3 is being cutdown as we speak. This is @CAPS9 the @CAPS5 never go out and smell fresh air & see how beautiful the rainforest really is. We must stop them!"" pleads former @CAPS6 @PERSON3 in an internationally televised speach. Too bad only @NUM6 out of every @NUM7 @CAPS2 could relate to kid message. @PERCENT3 of @CAPS2 have never gone out into nature. @CAPS9 of this, people are saying who cares about nature & the rain forest? ""@CAPS9 of this, the rainforest is mercilessly being destroyed and animals are loosing their homes. When a pool was given to the @PERCENT3 of people who don't ever go outside to ejoy nature @PERCENT1 of them responded that it was @CAPS9 they are too busy spending time on the computer. The computer is a monster - it's killing our planet."" I love @CAPS3 mommy. I @CAPS10 her everyday before dinner,"" sadly states eight year old, @PERSON1. Using computers kills time that could be spent with your loved ones, even if you are communicating with them on the computer. A @NUM5 year old cancer patient, @ORGANIZATION3 was on his death bed what he wished that he could change about his life, he answerd, ""I wish that I didn't use the computers as much I got to know @CAPS3 family & friends better! @ORGANIZATION3 died lates that day. Do you want to carry around that heavy of a burden with you until your death? No, you don't. In a drug rehab the @ORGANIZATION4 asked the patients @CAPS1 they started drugs in the first in the first place, @PERCENT4 answered that it was @CAPS9 they didn't feel love by their families. After they answered, they were asked @CAPS1 they didn't feel love, @PERCENT5 of them answered @CAPS9 the people that they love were to busy on the computers. Unless you want to put one of your love ones' in the hospital do not use the computers. Obviously, computers are aweful technological devices. Yes, they do help with coordination, but would you rather be fast, not enjoy family & nature, but be able to catch a ball or be healthy, loved, and loving?""",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16262,6,"The builders of the @ORGANIZATION1 many obstacals when attempting to allow dirigibles to dock. A thousand-foot dirigible at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether would put stress on the buildings fam. The steel frame of the building would have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate this new situation. Over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications had to be made to the building's framework. Theese are the obstacals they had to @ORGANIZATION1.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 241,1,"Dear local @ORGANIZATION1 @CAPS1 of @LOCATION1, latly I have been noticing that some of the citizens of @ORGANIZATION1 have been using computers and laptops for a good amount of three the some people to the say @CAPS2 is a waste of time they could enjoying with family and friends with friends and family far away. @CAPS2 helps with research and learn @ORGANIZATION1 thnigs and @CAPS2 help with relaxing people. modern time and the people who disagree enjoy Some family and friends lives far away and you cant talk to them in person. There is always calling them or writing them a letter hot email, facebook, and @ORGANIZATION2 are easier and to use. When you call you dont know if your them there phones bissy, or they a bad @CAPS2 takes long and you @CAPS2 better to stay and send on and know you didn't @CAPS2 helps in advertisment and sales. Sometimes maybe unrealible because anybody can change anything on the site. Not all things online are like that though. Stay away from scares and things, they will came Some people find the internet @CAPS2 could be there from work or sites. There are fun games and to talk to In research the internet helps @PERCENT1 of people relax and calm down after a long @CAPS5, when on the computer or laptop which helps with stress. Computers can help in many ways. There are other realiable things. Plus where ever you go you will find the internet.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9039,4,"The last sentence of a story is usually the most meaningfull. I believe the author ended the story this way for many reasons. For example, I think the author did this to leave the reader with a strong sense of determination. The story quotes, “I will take that test again.” By use of the word will, the author shows the girls determination. She didn’t say she would try to, she said she will, without a doubt. I also think the author ended this way to emphasize the theme of new begginigs. The story quotes, “when they come back... in the spring... I will take that test again. This shows that in spring, the new begginig of life she will take the test. This is why I believe the author ended the story this way.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 221,1,"Some people @MONTH1 think that computers take up too much time for the important things. But really everything you would like to know is right there. You can learn about nature, cool websites even history. Here are my reasons on the effect on computers. First, you can learn so much about nature online. You can view many types of animals and study them. Learn about plant and the effect they have on life. Also, you can learn about many things on @LOCATION1 and how its changing. Secondly, there are many coll websites you can join. Theres games you can play to keep you occupied during the day. You can even chat online with friends or maybe find long lost friends. School sites are available for students of some studying or help. Lastly, computers show you so much about history. People who things and world famous people from back then compared to famous people now. Most important of all, the life changing story about and how it changes peoples life today. I hope I've you enough to agree with me. As you can see computers have many resources you can learn from learning websites and history arent even half of them. Think about! Thank you for listening",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9397,4,"I think that the author concludes the story like that because @MONTH1 be she’s saying that by that time she’ll be ready to take the test again. Another way of thinking is that @MONTH1 be by that time when that happens in spring she would be preprared and more confident of herself. @MONTH1 be the author was trying to say that just like the begining of a new springs, it would be a new beginning for her.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 8869,4,"The story ended with the author saying, ""when they come back, saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again."" The author concludes the story with this paragraph because Saeng is upset about spending @NUM1 on a plant that she had felt was different than the plant at home. She is stating that she is not going to take the test of buying one again until the geese return and the Hibiscus budds.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4581,2,"@CAPS2, I do believe that book, music, mvies, magazines, etc., should be removed from shelves if they are taken offensive. Poeple should not be putting stuff out there if they are making others feel not happy about what they do. Althought, we might think that putting stuff in papers and on movies, don't hurt people. Well guess what they do @CAPS1 of all, movies that have stuff to deal with sexual relationships. For example, gender marrage, they say that people should not marry the same sex. They make fun of them because they are not like others and they can take that very offensive. Very little people like being with the same sex. By us putting them in book, on movies, or making song to make them feel offensive is not the best way to go. Another one is about special needs, movie or book that have to deal with people putting down others that have special problems. Although, they don't show that thier sad it don't mean that we didn't offened them in a way. Families that have a special needs child, sister, brother, mom or dad don't like it very much when someone outs something out there about their problem that they @MONTH1 have. Also, they will feel really upset and sometimes can get mad for that. Most importantly, books or movies making fun of people that don't have a lot of stuff. It's not their fault that they don't have the money to buy stuff like others. For example, a nice house or nice clothes, most families have problems trying to pay rent and do other bills if only one parent is working. A lot of parents that work are gettin laid off are not even gettin paid for it. Worst of all, a famliy member (like someone who lives in the house) @MONTH1 have to go to the hospital and whe you go to the hopstial you have to pay for the bills. Some families are in and out of the hospital year after year and they don't have the money to pay for new stuff for the house or the people who live in it. In conclusion, @CAPS2. i do believe that they shoukd take certain books, movies, mafazines, ect., off the shelves because they can be taken offensive. We don't know how rude it is to have something out there that makes fun of someone in a way until it's to late. Many people really don't like it when they see something out there thats offensive to them. They don't know how to react about it and they get frustrated",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15625,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many challenges with docking airships one of the most obveouse reasons was the danger of docking at such high altitudes. If an accident accured like a fire, the entire area would be in danger. The modifications made to the building itself were big enough, without needing any more additional work done. The most import reason would be manoverability. The strong winds made it difficult and almost impossable to control the blimp, never less dock it. The @ORGANIZATION2 law even banned aircraft of any type flying so low.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 278,1,"Dear local newspaper, I think that computers effect people in a positive way. Computers increases our knowlage, lets us communicate with our friends and family, teaches us hand-eye coordination, and lets us see our news faster. Computers are enjoyable, great pieces of technology. Even though sitting down looking at your computer screen is not very interactive, computers increase our knowlage. Computers have all these websites that are full of great information. You can look up anything you would like to learn about and find exactly what you want. Going to the library for a book on your report would consume extra time. Instead you can look up the facts you need online. Computers also let us communicate with family and friends. Calling someone or sending a letter costs money, but sending on email to someone does not. Many people have family and friends that live far away from them. Through computers they can talk to them as long as they want at no expense. You can also see each other through a webcam. Which you can attach to your computer if it has not have in one allready. Another reason why computers are useful is because they help with hand-eye coordination. Computers require you to type, which is a great skill. While working out an essay by hand is tiring and boring you can type up the essay on you computer. Typing takes to get good at but is very helpful. Finally Computers help us get our news foster. When major things happen, such as the earthquake in @LOCATION1 it was all over the internet before the news. In conclusion computers are very useful and help us increase our knowlage, communicate with people, help us with hand-eye coordination, and lets us see our news faster. But most importantly computers are fun!",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6052,3,"How the setting of the place effects the cyclist is for one its to dry a cyclist would be ridy for haurst shouldn’t be in a place that’s dry.Like in the story it says “I was travelling through the high parts of California in June” meaning it was really hot and dry.Second would be the animals there dangerous.A cyclist should be riding in a place with diamond back snakes it says in the text “I toiled on.At some point,tumbleweeds crossed my path t a ridiculously larger skilt it really did look like adiamond back” which if it really has one would be really dangerous & cyclist should not be riding in that type of dangerous places no matter what type there are.That is how the settings of the surrandings effect the cyclist & how can it’s a bad place for them to ride.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7585,3,The setting affected the cyclist by making him very hot. He said he started sucking on stones because he heard that if you suck on stones it makes you not thirsty. He also said he might hit a bump and swallow one of the rocks. He said he wanted to swallow the rocks. The reason for that was that he was so hot. He didn’t even no where he was goin.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15270,6,"Obstacles that the builders of the Empire state building were, They had planned for dirigibles to tie to the mast could not because the way of the height of the building was @CAPS1 high dirigibles would not be able to keep @CAPS2 while unloading. For example in paragraph @NUM1 it says ""the goodyear blim columbia, attempted a publicity stunt Where it would it tie up and deliever a bundle of newspapers"", ""Because the complete dirigible mooring equipment had Never been installed, a worker atop the mooring mast would have to catch the bundle of newspapers on a rope dangling from the blimp"". other obstacles were, that dirigibles outside the united states had hydrogen in them Instead of helium, and hydrogen was very flammable.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4605,2,"Hello I am kristin, I am here to tell you why we should take some magazines out of our public libraries. Now I dont know if you have heard about @CAPS1 the magazine or @CAPS2 magazine. But I have and I also use to read them. In some of thouse issues are sex tips. Now if I was a mother and my child ran up to me beging me to let them cheek that thing out I would look at them and say no. They dont need to undestand sex untill they are in there teens or atleast thirteen or fourteen. A child shouldnt be able to even go near that area they should only be able to go near the children's section. Some parents think like me and agree with the fact that a child shouldn't learn about sex. But others are like why not they are going to know about it in @CAPS3 @CAPS4 and when they are married also. There are also some other things that need out of a librarie. Some music might not be the best choice for a young child. Like for example rap music. It has allot of cussing in it and talking about sex. Some of the things said in a rap song are shorty let me rind you like a huricain. Thats just like saying hey chick lets do it for the heck of it. Thats not what I want my kid to listen to. I want my child to listen to stuff that says hey lets go outside and camp or duck duck gusse. Some movies are okay to watch with your kids as long as its not over @NUM1. But if it is they can't watch it. I'll give you another example my little neice is probubly around the age of ten or so. She watche's @CAPS5 @CAPS6 but only with her parents inthe same room as her. She can not watch it by herself or she will get grounded. This is why some of the stuff should be taken out of our public Libraries",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13040,5,"Narciso creats a mood that shows family ties and unity within his community. By showing the way that each member of the community are willing to help each other gives a positive and freindly mood to the memoir. Also, he shows how members of the community treat each other as family regardless of race or ethnicity. This gives the the memoir a loving and accepting mood to it.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3862,2,"Libraries are a place for everyone; from young children, to the eldery, therefore there is material to suite all ages. When you go to a library you assume that no matter what kind of book you are wanting to read, they will have it. From personal prefrences, to school research projects, libraries should have it all right? Well some libraries want to take that concept away. A library has books on nearly all subjects. That is because of the individual differences of the people that go to the library. Someone of an extremist religion group could be going there to read on something of their religion. If a strict @CAPS1 would happen to find a book on the extreme religion they could be offended. That situation could go both ways though. Because of the individuality of people and different beliefs and customs we are all going to appreciate and depreciate all different kinds of literature. Most of the libraries are big enough to be sorted into sections. There are sections for young adults, mature adults, children, non fiction, fiction, science fiction, and so on. If a child ventures off to the mature adult section and flips through the pages of a book that is above their maturity level, then that is the childs fault. The mature people who can handle the content of more adult-orientated books shouldn't be punished by the library removing all books of that content because a child didn't stay in their designated area. With different cultural beliefs comes different beliefs and views of everyday things. Some readers could strongly disagree with a book and others could recommend it to all of their friends and family. One book to one person could mean something totally different to another. It could be understandable if there were books about sex, for example, right next to the childrens' books, but that isn't the case in most libraries. Libraries could even have a restricted section that warns readers about the content of material in the books in that specific area. Books in libraries are wrote for multiple kinds of people. Age, gender, religion, maturity, race, political beliefs, and so on will all effect the way you take to a book. Whether or not a book appeals to you is about your beliefs, values, or customs. With that being said, why would a library take away books that only a certain percentage of people will disagree with? Taking away books of a certain subject could upset people that like that type of book or it could even pertain to their everyday lives. A library is a place of knowlegde. It is filled with facts, beliefs, theories, and opinions of people. Wouldn't removing someones opportunity to read into a subject be revoking the author and their freedom of speech? Just because of a controversial subject or mature topic shouldn't mean that people shouldn't be allowed to read it. If people could only read certain literature that someone else is deciding whether or not it is okay to read, then where is their freedom? A library is a place for everyone. It has all different kinds of books for all different kinds of people. A libraries interior could be arranged to that the young children aren't going to find a book about sex near their kid books. Taking away certain books pertaining to controversial subjects isn't fair to those who don't disagree with that topic. A library should be a place of balance. A place where someone could read on anything they want to, not what certain people think they should or shouldn't read",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15669,6,"Based on the excerpt, some obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced on letting things dock there was the law against air ships, safety and nature. There was a law that said that air craft's weren't allowed to fly that low. ""This law would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building."" Also it was unsafe due to the hydrogen in the dirigibles. ""Most dirigibles from outside the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" Nature was a factor because of the high winds. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" Due to the obstacles that the engineers never thought of, the Empire wtate building never became a dirigible landing.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4142,2,Everyone has their favorite music they listen to or their favorite book to read even if it does offend a certain group or type of people. People do still read or listen to it. And the people who write the books or write the lyrics for a song are just expressing themselves. I believe that anything offfensive should'nt be censored because it's a way that people can express themselves. I listen to music all the time as long a I like the way it sounds. It doesn't really matter to me what the lyrics say and im pretty sure that goes for alot of people. But there are some songs out there that people feel they can relate to so they actually listen to what the song is saying. I don't really read alot because im picky about the books that I do read. That's not the case for everyone though. Alot of people like to read because it makes them feel like the book takes them to a different world. It's an escape for them from everyday life. Which I can understand why someone would want to escape. Movies are like books but you get a visual of whats going on. Which makes it more entertaining than a book. So more people would rather watch a movie. But the movies don't have all the details that the book has so the books are more fulfilling. And just because someone doesn't like a movie doesn't mean that there isn't someone out there who does because there is. So my conclusion is that everyone is different they like different things and dislike different things. But just because someone doesn't like something doesnt mean that someone else wont like it. Like i said everyone is different. So why can't the materials they read or watch be different as well?,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1612,1,"Dear Newspaper, @CAPS1 do @CAPS5 do when @CAPS5 need to write a report? Or talk to a buisness partner, friend, or family? @CAPS3 computers help us do all of that. The eletronic wonder improves are lives everyday. Yet some people refuse to accept computers are now apart of every day life. Computers help us communicate, research different topics, and have just plain fun things to do. Computers make it easy to communicate. Things like ""@CAPS2"" and ""facebook"" let us talk with each other. Some @MONTH1 contest ""@CAPS3, use a phone or go out."" @CAPS1 if they're away on a trip, or live thousands of miles away? With computers everything is easier. Computers allow us to reserch topics @CAPS5 need for classes or work. ""@CAPS5 can get alot of detailed information from thousands of sites. Sceptics might ask the question ""@CAPS6 not go to a library."" Some of us might prefer to stay at home. Another reason is, that it maybe snowy, or the library is closed. @CAPS1 ever the reason, computers make reserch fast and easy. Computers also fulfill a great need to entertain ourselfs. Games sites like ""facebook"" have become very popular. They can provide us with emotional release from the everyday world. A pontential argument might you ""@CAPS6 go outside?"" The weather could for bad and your sick. Computers are fun, education and a communication wonder. should find the good in computers and @CAPS1 they could do for there.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16307,6,"The designers of the Empire State Building faced many challenges in the attempt to allow dirigibles to dock on it's peak. ""The greatest reason was safety"" (para @NUM1). The dirigibles were dangerous. Strong winds could blow them in different directions, possibly hitting the building. And if there was a crash, the debris would rain upon New York City. Since there was wind, they would have to use lead weights to hold a dirigible in place. However above the city this would be ""neither practical nor safe"" (para @NUM2). Finally, there was a law prohibiting airships from flying low over urban areas. This would cause the docking to be illegal. For these reasons, the builders of the Empire State building faced challenges allowing blimps, or dirigibles, to dock on the building.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16588,6,"In ""The Mooring Mast"" by @ORGANIZATION2, the builders of the Empire State Building faced obstacles when trying to allow dirigibles to dock on it. These obstacles took precaution of safety, nature itself, and the law. The first obstacle was one of safety. ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States use hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" Owners of the Empire State Building realized that if a dirigible was destroyed by fire, it would cause a huge accident. Also, this accident would be devastating because it'd take place over the densely populated area of downtown New York. In addition, ""the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" These would cause the back of the ship to swivel around the mooring mast. Dirigibles that are moored in open fields use weights to be weighed down. Yet, these can't be used on top of the Empire State Building because they'd be dangling about walking pedestrians which is dangerous. Lastly, a major obstacle faced when attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on the building was the ""existing law against airships to fly too low over urban areas."" @CAPS1, this would make it illegal for a ship to tie to the building or even approach the area. Overall, the obstacles faced when trying to allow dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building lead to the disappearance of this idea altogether.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3398,2,"Do you feel that some material should just not be allowed in libraries? Censorship in libraries are a touchy subject. Many people with young children believe that some books should just not be allowed in the libraries, while others believe that because it is a book, no matter what, it should be allowed to be in the library. Who knows, someone @MONTH1 need to write a paper over that certain 'touchy' book. I think, personally, that as long as the book is in a proper section, it sould be okay for a person, of the right age, to be able to get that book or other material. The libraries should have a certain area for children's books and another area for adult or teenage level reading or material. This way, there is a less likely hood that a young child will end up getting a book with material for an adult or teenager. The library in the town that I live in has a clearly marked area for children and teenagers. This way, young children are not going to be looking for their favorite book with a book over something many adults should not even be reading. If people are concerned about someone being to young to read or view the material, the library can also put an age restriciton on the material. This way anyone who is under the age limit will not be able to get the material. The people who are of proper age will be able to get the material, however. Libraries are very important sources for studing in many people's lives. If people did not have a library, they @MONTH1 not be able to research a paper, or something else, that they need to get finished. I feel if people do not like the material that they see in their local library, then they should just not look at it or borrow the material from the library. I do feel, however, that little children should not be given even the slightest chance to stuble upon a book with disturbing material. There, in my opinion, needs to be a room with said materials that children have, in no way, access to. This way, children are not able to access the material, but they are still able to go into the library without their parents feeling that the children @MONTH1 see something unsuitable for them. I feel that those people who love reading should be able to go into a library, and not be afraid of if they are going to see a book containing material they believe to be unsuitable. I also feel that if I need to research something that is deemed, by others, to be offensive, I should somehow be able to research my subject. Also, if I was the author of a book that was said to be 'bad,' i would not want my book to be taken away, so that no one could read it, or study and learn from it. I do not think that censorship is something that people should take lightly. We all have the freedom of speech, so why not let the authors of the materials have that same freedom. There are procautions that parents and people who do not want to see this literature can take. Total censorship, I feel, would not allow for people to broaden their minds. If people just take procautions, there is no need for total censorship of materials, that someone worked very hard on for everyone to see",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15320,6,"In the excerpt The Mooring Mast by @ORGANIZATION2, the builders of the Empire State Building are faced with several obstacles on they attempt to allow dirigibles to dock there. The first obstacle they encountered was designing a mooring mast that could with hold the stress of the dirigible's load. In stanza @NUM1 the author writes, ""A thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the buildings frame."" @CAPS1, the steel frame of the Empire state building would have to be modified and strengthened to ameliorate this problem. Next, the greatest obstacle they faced was the strong winds on top of the building. In stanza @NUM2, it say, ""Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast."" This arrived as a huge problem as the architects could not weigh down the back of the ship because it could endanger pedestrians. Lastly, in stanza @NUM3 it states there is ""an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" @CAPS1, it would be illegal for the dirigibles to tie up to the empire state building or even come close to the area. Due to these three obstacles the plan of using a mooring mast became an idea of the past.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7593,3,"IIn the story I read the setting is a big factor to the affect of the cyclist for example it talks about how the cyclist see’s the sign that says, “Rough road ahead! Do not exceed posted speed limit.” So the cyclist has to be cautious",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4106,2,"Read, @CAPS1, and @CAPS2 ? Books, music, and movies all have a meaning and a purpose to them. In our spare time, we all enjoy to read, @CAPS1, and @CAPS2 the things that let us do so. These things keeps us all occupied when theres alot of time to spare. The library is a place where you can go read in peace and @CAPS1 to music with no distractions or anything, but there are somethings that are not cut out for the library. People find books at the library that they find very interesting and decides to check them out, but little do they know what the book and/or magazine has in it. Books come in all different genres and so do music and movies. And we all have our own views in what type of genre we enjoy listening, reading or watching. Genre comes in all kind of different types. For example, theres only one certain type of book for a child and which at the library should be picked out for a child to read and a child only. Theres also books for grown adults and adults only and once checked out, it should be kept from a childs hand or vision. Because children could see the wrong things and things might get out of hand. All readings, music, or movies that have explicit or uncensored graphics or words should personally have their own section in the library. In this case, nothing bad could happen and everything is in place with everything else. Honestly all media actually should have their own section. For example, all kids media should be in one section and all adult media should be in another section. All books should be left on the shelves of every library, only because one knows what should be read and what shouldn't be read. A kids desired book is a childrens book with color and picture while on the other hand, an adult has their own type of selection. So books should stay where they belong and not tooken down from any self, that also goes for, movies, music, or any other media",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12601,5,"In the article ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from Home: The Blueprints of our Lives, the mood created by the author in the memoir was happy, but sometimes sad. The author made sure that the mood went along with the words in the story. The words were happy and sometimes sad. The mood in the beginning of story was sad, but then it got happier as the story went on. This was the mood created by the author in the memoir.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7428,3,"The setting of the cyclist clearly influences his mood. From the beginning to end, the outside world reflects the tormils in his head. This is evident in the beginning reservoir, empty desert, hills the Welch factory, & finally the fish camp. The reservoir is a heven, @NUM1 safe ground that contains everything the men needs. He is feeling optimistic, ready & eager to follow advice of old men. He first hits a ghost town, which is foreshadowing a dangerous future. He passes through still with a level head. He comes to a water pump that gives him battery acid. This is wher the mood shifts. He suddenly describes his setting as “the high deserts of California.” The sun is boiling down & water is running low. His hopes start to drop. When the “flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills,” it reflects the turmoil in his head. The terrain is harder the chances of his survival lessons. When he crosses a snake, it suggest even more despair. It finally climaxes at the Welch factory. How ironic, it is an abandoned juice factory. This is lost hope. When he finally arrives at the fish camp, he is relieved to be alive & is uplifted. The cyclist has made it. It is clear the setting has affected the cyclist.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3607,2,"In libraries and bookstores worldwide books are written and published with subject matter ranging from odd or inappropriate, to serious or violent. These books are written to target emotions in the reader that spark excitement and humor, horror and empathy among many others. However, though these books are made for a specific purpose, it is sometimes unclear as to how the book is appropriate for the eyes of a young reader, or even a mature reader. These books appear unappealing and offensive. However, though they don't appeal to you as a reader, how could this book be censored without the unanimous disapproval of everyone? Censorship of these books is unjust because of the right of free speech and press, because all subjects are deserving of being written, and most importantly because target audiences deserve books written in their interest regardless of their approval. The first reason that their should be no censorship of novels and works of literature is because writers deserve the freedoms of speech and press. They are aloud to voice their own opinions and write about the subject matter that they are most interested in. Though many times they have used subject matter that is highly provocative or inappropriate, they still have the capacity and the legal ability to write about what they wish. To stop them from writing their own opinionated stories is similar to the censorship of books in nazi @LOCATION1. Millions of books were burned and hundreds, if not thousands of writers were executed for conveying opinions in their work that conflicted with the ideas of their government. Even though there are books not written for all ages they are still deserving of a reader. The next reason that books should not have censorship is because new ideas cover topics that have never been discussed. Books and stories are meant to push the mark of what has been written and what can be written. The variety of literature is the reason why it is so popular. For thousands of years, written text has been a way to understand and connect with cultures and people through written language. And though stories @MONTH1 not be written in a manner that would be appropriate for a child, it doesn't mean that the story shouldn't be written or read. Its use should simply be monitored so that only those capable of accepting or understanding its message are capable of reading it. Lastly, censorship is simply unjust because without it there is a better chance to discuss and attempt to describe stories that target a vast crowd of people. Though the materials found in a story @MONTH1 be horrific to a parent, it @MONTH1 be a preferred form of literature for a different group of people. And to limit the literary subjects that people prefer could be parallelled with limiting a person's voice of opinion. It simply isn't reasonable to allow only a single category of work, with only a few varieties of messages, for only a select group of people. Variety is what seperates a person's opinions, and makes their being different than another's. Therefore, censorship of literature should not be enforced. Writing topics should be open to all people, because whether they are offensive or not they convey a purpose. And because writers have the right to illustrate their points through a literal medium, there should never be a limit on these rights. That is why censorship should never be able to remove a piece of literature from any shelf.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6628,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist a great deal. The landscape was hard to ride on, there was intense heat & little water. As a result, it was a long trip and he had a difficult time reaching his destination.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13073,5,"In this memoir, there are many moods created by the author. One major mood in this memoir is love, and loving. In paragraph @NUM1, ""... the many things I learned there about how to love,"" and also, ""... not just scent and music but life and love."" A second major mood in this memoir is warth. In paragraph @NUM1, ""it was in the warmth of the kitchen..."" And third, a major mood in this memoir is gratefullness and being grateful of what we have. In paragraph @NUM3, ""and for which I am externally grateful,"" and in paragraph @NUM4, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" These are just some examples of moods created by the author in this memoir.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9418,4,"I think the reason why the author ended the story with this “when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding. Then I will take that test again.” paragraph because like this the plant didn’t have a fight chance for survival in the winter and was same with the girl when she took her driving test but in spring the plant has chance bloom so she has a chance to pass the test because because there time and place for everything.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10021,4,I think that the author concludes the story with that paragraph because know matter what she said or did she had to git the flower because it remids her of where she used to live and how It was there so she stared to cry and the test was not to buy the flower and not to cry and that in th spring she is going to grow her own flower. That is what I think the test is about.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7131,3,"The cyclist, Joe Kurmaskie, had a rough time traveling to Yosemite @ORGANIZATION1’l Park. Granted he was misled, but if the conditions of the terrain and if the climate were working for him it wouldve made life a whole lot easier. Not only was it hot, being in a desert in California in June, but he only had one water bottle. One water bottle @MONTH1 have lasted a little longer if it was a straight shot through, but it wasn’t. The roads went up, down, there were hills, there were towns-ghost towns at that. The only water he could pump from the pump was scalding hot and tasted acidic. Also, he wouldn’t have lost as much energy if it was a straight shot. It’s easy to say that he literally roughed it, having to resort to putting rocks in his mouth to circulate saliva. All in all, he was very determined to work through the very unfortunate conditions he had working against him, and very lucky to survive it. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 766,1,"Dear @CAPS1, Have you ever used a computer to do anything besides buisness? Well if not then when you are not busy you should try it. The effects computers have on people is that it's a lot of fun to go on and play, helpful with mostly anything, and you can find just about anything from websites on clothing to maps to the store location. There are three reasons why you should agree with me and these reasons are people have the right to choose what they want to, in this weather it's a little bit to cold to go out and enjoy nature, lastly they can interact with friends and familys online on a website. People have the right to choose what they do because the goverment can't choose for you since they're busy with other more important stuff. Also in the constitution it states that the goverment can't choose for us while we have the power to think. In this weather it's cold to go out, plus nature is so much better in the @DATE1 and the @DATE2 where it's not to hot to cold and thats when the sun is good thats when people should enjoy nature. With all the technology in todays world it's better to take advantage of the technology in this world, also the technology we have is helping people like generators because in old times people didn't have generators. So I hope this letter has changed your opinion and thank you for reading it.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15041,6,The @CAPS1 of the Empire State building faced many Problems when attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. Some of the problems are some blimps are filled with hydrogen wich is highly flammable. If a blimp with hydrogen in it exploded over @LOCATION1 that would not turn out so good For people in New York City. Those people could die. Also one one blimp exploded in New Jersey the blimp had hydrogen in it. So when that happened they thought a lot about the docking station and only to allow blimps with helium in them to dock there.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 8976,4,I think the author concludes the story with this paragraph cause. Saeng didn’t think the winter hibiscus was In the ground now and that when she got back all of her plants was gone do to the snow so she said she will take that test again meaning she will start back to the first steps of her plants and flowers.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 357,1,"Dear local newspaper, I am writing to you because computers are affecting humans in many ways. Some can be terrible, and others not so bad. Many average people are now staying inside all day on the computer playing games, or on facebook and other interactive websites such as twitter and @CAPS1. This crisis is interfering with school, work, or excersize. More and more people each day are not getting enough exercize or work done. We have to stop this devastating pandemic! People who are staying inside all day arn't as healthy as they were before. There immune system making the risk of getting sick greater. This can cause people in severe positions or even death. @CAPS4 you stay inside all day every day, the computer will be so addicting it will take over you and make it more important. In order to maintain healthy you have to eat right and good in riding a bike. @CAPS2 someone is inside on the computer frequently, they arn't @CAPS2 you're addicted to something like watching t.v. or playing @CAPS3, @CAPS4 you are addicted to the it can also interfere with family events, sports. @CAPS2 youre on the computer you forget about homework, grades drastically making you go to summer school, or even repeating a grade. Also @CAPS2 you don't prepare for sports it can make you not play up to your potential. This is why computers are affecting every day people. There are more reasons how people are being affected by computers, but these are the most common.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3787,2,I think that all books that are found offensive or sexual shouldn't be taken off the shelves completely. I just think that they should be placed in a certain section of the library where kids should not be at or not allowed to go in like a section only for adults. I think if a kis see something they think is interestiong and will teach them something they didnt know before they're going to pick it up no matter what unless someone steps in and tells them not to. I dont think kids should be exposed to all of that and some kids are getting ahead were they shouldn't be in life. If a kid decides to try and check out a book like that either they shall have an i.d. or there parent should be with them comfirming they are able to check out that book. Many children I think are already exposed to things they shouldn't be around and books like that would just make it all worse. Some books send out really bad messages but then again that's only for adults to read it should be kept out of the way of children. Some kids could live in a fanasy world and have a split personality or something off of things like that and it could really affect someone badly. If a parent wants there kid to have the book or dont mind anything about it then that's there choice they have permission. I know I wouldnt want my kids around that untill they were @NUM1 years of age or older but I know some parents dont really care alot about it. So my best solution for this problem is to keep those books and things out of the reach of children or have a specific age limit.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12701,5,The mood created by the author in the memoir is very happy because the atsmothsphere is filled with family and friends also joy and happyness. The considered everyone family even though the times were not the greatest for everyone also his parents gave up a lot so he could have a good life in @LOCATION1. He is very grateful for his parents bringing him to @LOCATION1 so he could have a good life even though had to leave their life in Cuba to come here for him. This is the mood created by the author in the memoir.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16517,6,1.) dirigibles were being hailed as the transportation of the @NUM1.) they had a top speed of @NUM2 miles plus cruise at @NUM3 miles per @NUM4.) Some were as long as @NUM5 feet.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4654,2,BooksI think that every book in the world should be on the shelf. because if it is afencive then dont read it. it is alot beter if u can go read eny book u wat to. and if thy dont have that book then i gess u gota go get it somwere else and some people wouldnt go thrue all that trouble for a book. Wich means they wont know as much as they wanted to or could known. we need smat people to know as much as there potential and as they wat and can posibly know. But books are books not every body reads alot of books. lets say u wanted to know somthin about a truck wat do u do u go find a book about it or get online or ask sombody that knows. How would enybody know enything about it if the person that bilt the truck didnt write a book telling u about the truck. You would haft to take it apart and find out your self wich isn't verry easy at all. and if u mest up thats not good. but if u had a book to go bye it makes thing alot simpler most of the time. This is one of the reasons every book should be on the shelf. so that if u need to know somthing and u want to learn u can read about it. And find out wat u want to know. Reading is one of the best ways to find out wat u are looking for so that way nobody is telling u wrong. Plus books are just good to read Movies all movies should be there to because every bodie has the right to wach eny movie they want. Inles they arnt of age. and if no parent haft to say its ok for them to wach it. If it afends u dont wach it. Magizines @CAPS1 are good to i read alot of magizins u can find alot about enything in a magizine. so ya the are good,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7173,3,"The cyclist in “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” by @PERSON1 suffers from some hardship while riding through the desert. The features of the setting affected the cyclist by having no water to drink because it was a desert there was no vegetation that means there is no water so he was becoming dehydrated. Also the setting of the towns he went to had no living organisms or people so he also couldn’t quench his thirst there. In one town there was a spiket but the water was gross and hasn’t been pumped in a while. Then he comes to the Welch’s juice factory which was abandoned and from there he thought he was done for but then he finally come to a shop were there are bathrooms were he drinks water from the sink and he is relieved. Also the rocky roads affected him because he barely had any water left, and rocky tent to take more strength and endurance.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4030,2,"I believe that certain materials that seem offensive to certain people should stay on the shelves. I feel like as though its on that person whether they choose to read or listen to the material or not. I have also been in this position where I came cross an article that upset me. Also I have had an arguement once with someone who found what I was listening to was offensive to them. Once when I was reading a paper on that was making fun of my town that I grew up in. The paper said how my town was filled with rednecks and that many people there were not very educated and not intelligent. This upest me and made me feel ashamed for living there. But I thought more and more that this article was someone elses opinion. That just because they wrote that article, doesn't make it true. This arguement went out of hand. She had her opinion and I also had mine. My friend came by my house one day to hang out and do some homework. While we were in my room I turned on my favorite artists cd. I listened to rock music at the time and loved how talented the artist was. My friend went to my sterio and turned it off. She told me she didnt like it and that it was offensive music. So after that we pretty much argued the whole time. I finally said that I feel its great music and I shouldnt have to stop listening to it. We had a deal that while she was there I wouldnt listen to it, I felt I would respect her feelings. Over the past years I have observed that more people are taking what others have to say or sing about to heart. When an author writes a story or an article, they are putting their opinion into it. Sometimes they are typing the facts and also what they feel is write to say. I mean if it is on the shelf and dislike it, dont pick it up and read it.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10323,4,"The author of this story was smart to end it by saying she will take the test again in the spring, when every thing bloms. This girl just failed her driving test she dose not want to take it right away. The blomming of the hibiscus symbolizes her old life at her old home and it is also symbolizing a new start when it bloms. This will give her the confodence to pass her driving test and make he excited to get a new start on the year. ""Spring is when the snows melt and geese return”. This quote from this paragraph states that the snow will melt away and the geese will come back home, just like she wants to go home and fells contible, at home you are contible. The author ended this story of this girl, Saeng, with hope and drive to do what she wants to do. That is why it was smart to end the story like they ended it. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3039,2,"I think that everyones opinion is different about some books getting removed from the library. Do I believe that certian books should be removed from the library: yes and no. The reason why I choose yes and no is because some books are helpful to others for there class and their research for whatever class they need it for. Another reason why I say no is because of the fact, if the book offense you then dont read the book or think about what is says just leave it alone. The other reason why I picked yes is because if it shows some hurtful words in there towards other thats refering to the people thats its talking about then yes it needs to be removed before others start using thoes kinds of hurtfuls words to the piers or thier elders. If the book contains racial slurs to different races then yes they need to removed asap. If others get ahold of these kinda books then everyone would use them agianst each other which in relsult of that would cause an outbreak of fights people aruging with each other, just pure hate between thoes people using it agianst the different races. These are my opinions of removing some books that contains hurtful things or meaning in them that can contain voilence in them or call another person out of thier name or race",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3770,2,"Censorship is a very sensitive topic. Everyone has to deal with censroship whether it is directly or indirectly. There have been many complaints and arguments involving the government regarding acts of censorship throughout the past. If censorship were to be equal for everyone, there would be nothing left in the world to be censored. Censorship is a major subject when dealing with books, newspaper articles, movies, and other literary subjects. The writer or director must be able to create an interesting topic or story line while at the same time keeping it appropriate for most audiences. If everyone were to censor one piece of literature or film that offended them in a certain way, then everything in life would be censored in one way or another. No matter what, there will always be a certain situation in which one person in the world will be offended by. Censorship is wrong, especially in the @LOCATION1; the @LOCATION1 citizens are granted the freedom of speech and the freedom of press. With an understanding of these basic freedoms, one would think that censorship is against the law considering it is one of the five basic freedoms granted to @LOCATION1 citizens. Censorship is wrong because it violates at least two of the five basic freedoms granted to all @LOCATION1 citizens. There should be absolutely no censorship when dealing with books, movies, and newspaper articles, because they all deal with the freedom of speech, or the freedom of press. If the act of censorship begins to expand, everything we know today will become censored in some manner just because one person would find it offensive. Some citizens @MONTH1 argue that censorship is a positive thing because it filters out all of the inappropriate, offensive, and derrogatory language and situations from our nation's youth, but from a teenager's standpoint, the children will find out about such situations and language use regardless. There is no point in hiding the truth from anyone, because no matter what they will find out eventually. We need to push for less censorship in the @LOCATION1, because if we want to keep our five basic freedoms of life granted to us by the first amendmant, then we need to fight back censorship and remove it completely from our society",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10395,4,"I thinks that the author concludes the story with the given paragraph to show that she is similar to the hibiscus and geese. First, the geese and hibiscus both have a goal, which is to survive the winters. Geese fly south for the winter to stay warm. This is similar to Saeng worse thing both moved to a different environment where they must adapt. Also, Saeng must experience winter along with the hibiscus. The hibiscus needs tobe strong, to overcome winter, from this, it shows Saeng is like her hibiscus because she needs to be strong to overcome the test. If her hibiscus can overcome it’s test, winter then she can survive to cangner her own.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15182,6,"In ""The Mooring Mast"", by @ORGANIZATION2 it revealed many problems with docking dirigibles on top of the Empire State Building. Al Smith, the Architect working on the Empire State Building thought the mooring mast would go up with no problems. Architects soon realized that the mooring mast would add stress to the buildings frame work and cost @MONEY1 in modifications. After seeing what happened to the German dirigible ""Hindenburg"" in Lakehurst, Architects soon realized that having dirigibles filled with highly-flamable hydrogen over the densely populated New York City wasn't a good idea. Nature itself would not allow the mooring mass to be built.There was such violent air currents at the one thousand and fifty foot tall @ORGANIZATION1 altitude that made Architects aware that this idea couldn't be upheld. The dirigible would swivel around because it couldn't be weighed down like in open landing fields. They couldnt use these weights because having weights suspended over pedestrians heads was neither practical nor safe. There is also a law against airships flying too low over urban areas. This would make it illegal to try and dock a dirigible on top of the Empire State Building. In the end, the idea of having dirigibles dock on the Empire State Building and become the new way of modern transportation was soon abolished.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3344,2,"Offensive media is everywhere. From books to music lyrics, our culture embraces us with it. Children that see inappropriate media can pick up bad behavior. This can then lead to a child having a hard time associating with his peers. Adults are also affected by inappropriate media if they see their favorite celebrity or any other role model use inappropriate behavior. This could make an adult emotionally unhealthy and they @MONTH1 become violent or depressed. Finally, our world could be better if offensive media were abolished altogether. People's lives could be enriched with good, clean entertainment instead of being corrupted with inappropriate media. One can clearly see that offensive media must be pulled from our country's libraries immediatley. Inappropriate media is surrounding us daily, including children. What children see they imitate, even in the first couple years of their lives. So if they hear a swear word on t.v or see someone doing drugs, they @MONTH1 imitate it. Clearly this is inappropriate behavior for a child. If the child is exposed to inappropriate media, for a long period of time, they @MONTH1 think that it is ok to use it in everyday life. Their social skills and mind is being corrupted because of offensive media. Libraries should pull inappropriate media off of their shelves because it can corrupt a child's mind. Another reason why libraries should pull off offensive media is because adults can pick up different offensive habits as well. Just as children can pick up the offensive habit of swearing , so can adults if they are exposed to it for a long period of time. Besides swearing, adults can also think that killing someone is ok because they saw it in a movie. They could then pick up a violent weapon and try to kill someone if they are angry. This is not a healthy way to express your feelings towards someone if they are making you angry. Our country's libraries should pull off inappropriate media from their shelves because it can turn adults into being emotionally unhealthy. Finally , inappropriate media should be pulled off library shelves because our world could be a better place without it. Media is one of the root causes of why people act the way they do. If they see their favorite celebrity getting arrested for a @CAPS1 in a magazine, they @MONTH1 think that it is ok to drink and drive. Another example is if people read about someone doing drugs in a book, they @MONTH1 want to try and experiment with drugs themselves. This can lead to people doing crazy things that can be harmful to other lives around them. Offensive media is almost anywhere. When children see inappropriate media , they @MONTH1 think that it is ok to imitate it. Adults, when exposed to enough offensive media, can pick up nasty habits like swearing, killing or doing drugs which , inturn , can lead to to being emotionally unhealthy. With out inappropriate media on our library shelves, our world would be a better place. We would have less conflict, less deaths ,and better lives that are enriched, not corrupted , with quality media. Millions of lives could be made better if libraries pulled off inappropriate media from their shelves",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12507,5,"Narciso Rodriguez creates a grateful and appreciative mood in this memoir. When he talks about his friends being like his family it makes people grateful for their close friends that they have. While reading this many people probably became more appreciative for what their parents did and provided for them.""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice.""(paragraph @NUM1) This quote @MONTH1 make some wonder if they are grateful for what their parents did for them.While reading people @MONTH1 also reflect on if they lived in a home with people they love around them or a house.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9849,4,"The author concludes the story with the paragraph, “When they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, the I will take the test again.” She does this to end in hope of taking the test again and doing good. Also the author ends it this way because Saeng is believing in herself so she made a vowe to do something. Hopefully that will encourage her more and also motivate her.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10157,4,"In the story “winter Hibiscus” by Minfong Ho the author concludes the story with that paragraph for many reasons. She puts in examples from the story that could help find these reasons. One reason is that we know she wont give up. In the story she says “Then I will take the test again.” It tells us that she will keep trying and is determined to do so. Another reason is that she’s trying to tell us that there is a future for the hibiscus. How is when she says “…and this hibiscus is budding,” that the hibiscus has a chance to change and get use to its surroundings, just like the girl in the story will be doing. Last reason is that it tells us that she is and will be doing her best. When she says “she realized that many of the things that she had thought were strange…, almost familiar to her now,” @CAPS1 trying to get use to her surroundings and now realizes she can. In the story there are many reasons to suspect shy she ended the story with that paragraph. She gives examples in the story that makes many people get many",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9846,4,"THE AUTHOR MUST LIKELY INTENDED TO SHOW THE HOPEFUL ENLIGHTENMENT OF SAENG'S COMPLEX DILEMMA. IN THE PHRASE, ""WHEN THEY COME BACK"" THE AUTHOR MUST LIKELY REFERS TO THE HIBISCUS FLOWERS THAT REPRESENT THE FOND MEMORIES OF HER HOMELAND. THE AUTHOR ILLUSTRATES SAENG'S STRUGGLE ADAPTING TO HER NEW LIFE THROUGH A “TEST” OF PLANTING THE BUDS JUST AS SHE HAD DONE BACK HOME WITH HER GRANDMOTHER. THIS TEST REPRESENTS THE ACHIEVEMENT OF ADAPTATION TO HER NEW LIFE. FOR THAT REASON, THE AUTHOR CONCLUDED HER STORY WITH THE PARAGRAPH INDICATING SAENG WILL INDEED TAKE THAT TEST AGAIN.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13053,5,"The feeling in this article when it talks about family is love, peace, happiness, and gratefulness. Narciso understands that his parents left everything in Cuba for him. @CAPS1 could tell that his parents love him very much and @CAPS1 is grateful for that. In paragraph @NUM1 @CAPS1 states, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" @CAPS1 has the opportunity to be born in @LOCATION1 and having a better life. Narciso also learned that @CAPS1 could love a non blood relative because they could be his family too. There were many people that were like family to him. @CAPS1 loved them and they were happy spending time with each other. In this memoir the mood would most likely be happy and loving.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7198,3,"The setting in the short story “Rough road ahead: do not exceed posted speed limit” by Joe Kurmaskie is troubling to the cyclist “One ramshackleshed, several rusty pumps, and a corral that couldn’t hold in the tamest mule greeted me,” made him troubled that he was in the middle of nowhere. The quote, “Not two miles into this next section of the ride, I noticed the terrain changing, flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills,” shows that he was troubled by having to go over the hills. As you can see the setting was very influental to the cyclist.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15640,6,"The biggest obstacle the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock. It was ""The winds on top of the building were contently shifting due to violent air currents."" Due to the wind currents dirigibles would not be able for to stay still to allow the passengers to get off of the dirigiblel. They once tryed this. ""In December 1930, the @ORGANIZATION2 dirigible los Angeles approached the moorning mast but could not get close enouh to tie up bacase of forceful winds."" If the winds blue strong eneogh it could @CAPS1 the dirigible into a sharp object. After this atempd there was an; ""The building was an existing low against airships flying too low over urban areas."" ""It would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building."" @CAPS2 any dirigibles could never tie up the the building because of this new law. The biggest obstacle was the winds. The winds were because it's put tremondos stress on the building.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13373,5,"In this memoir the mood varies. In paragraphs three and four it was a ""giving"" mood, for example explained in paragraph four ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family, knowing they would do the same for us."" It shows right in the sentence that they gave people in need what they needed in difficult times. In paragraphs six and seven the mood was thankful and happy for the sacrifice his parents gave for him. Because of her future. In paragraphs one and two the mood is happy and comfy because she is happy about her home, her family and the love she has been given in her life. These are the various moods in the memoir.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4620,2,"I beleive censorship is a good thing; to an extent. I think that censorship deals with an age group and the permission of the parent(s) or guardian(s). If a consumer is the age of twelve and under; then the consumer should buy the censored books and etc., but, if you are thirteen and above you should be able to buy product uncensored. Some people do not like censored products because they feel it takes away from that particular thing. Music, for example, alot of people get angry when the song lyrics on a @CAPS1 are censored. It does not allow the people to get the full effect of the music and the 'message' that the artist or band is sending. With books; people get upset because they cannot get the full aspect of the book. Censoring a book is like taking away part of a masterpiece. Some books should be censored like alot of romance novels; those get pretty graphic and go into alot of detail with sexual themes and content. I do not think those books should be on the shelves. In magazines; it depends on the type of magazine the consumer is reading. If a person is reading a politcal magazine; those magazines do not put all of the true facts and details into them for certain reasons. If a person is reading a hunting or fishing magazine; then they can put in all the facts on the guns, calls, lures, and stories they want and do not have to censor them. Movies, on the other hand, are censored on certain channels. If you are watching a movie on a @CAPS2 network like @ORGANIZATION2 or @CAPS3; those channels censor movies. If you watch movies on @ORGANIZATION1 or @CAPS4 they do not censor the movies because those are movie channels only. That is also why movies have ratings. R is for restricted to people under seventeen (without an adult present) , @NUM1 is for people of the ages sixteen and under without an adult. and @CAPS5 and @CAPS6 are fine for any age group. All in all; censorship depends on what age group the consumer is in really. If you are still in elementary school you probably should not be able to buy uncensored products; if you are thirteen to about fifteen, you should be able to buy the product with permission from an adult, and if you are sixteen and older you should be able to buy the products uncensored with out an adult present because you know you can handle the 'offensive' matierial",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 179,1,"Dear @CAPS1, You @MONTH1 have heard that there are up-sides and down-sides to using a computer. There are many more up-sides though. For example, you can communicate with people, conduct business, and you can use it to learn. A computer is a big need in today's growing technological advances. Communication is not as easy to do by phone anymore because people are always busy and on the computer. You can use computers to meet people from different countries. By doing this we can learn what life is like for them. Through social networks, such as @CAPS2 and @CAPS3, we can make plans with friends. Computers are an important communication technology. Today most business is conducted over the internet or on a computer. The @CAPS4 @CAPS5 is all computerized today, and that is a major trade way today. A lot of business transactions and presentations are done out on a computer for maximum efficiency. Computers allow us to conduct business with foreign countries without having to go there. Computers are a huge advancement in business. Computers help us learn a lot about, just about, everything. Search engines let us type in keywords and find multiple websites on that topic. Computers let us research so we get correct information with just a click. This research can be used to write essays in school. Computers help us to learn in school and outside of it. A computer is a huge technological advancement with many uses. It @MONTH1 have a few down-sides, but it has many more up-sides. Computers allow you to communicate, conduct business, and learn. Life would be much slower without a computer to speed things up.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9643,4,"The author ends the story with “When they come back, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again” For many good reasons. Some reasons are, that she will keep moving on and adapting to her new life in Canada. She is going to change her way of life and try to fit in with her new culture. She is also going to have to relive the memory of her grandmother again and wants to handle it better. “ A wave of loss so deep and strong that it stung Saeng’s eye now swept over her.” She wants to be able to handle the loss better. The author wants to emphasize that the story is not yet over. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3875,2,"Censorship is one of many important issues facing the world today. Many argue that materials considered offensive are damaging to society, and should not be tolerated. Others believe that freedom of speech is a universal right that should extend to any and all forms of human expression. The issue is further complicated by the concept of what is and is not appropriate for children. Are there materials that are acceptable for adults, but not kids? Questions such as this have plagued humanity for hundreds of years, and there is no simple solution. Today, so many people think of censorship as a bad word. In fact, there is nothin inherently wrong with the concept of censorship. It is only when people begin to abuse their power and censor materials that should not be censored that problems arise. For example, many countries have restrictions on selling and owning copies of '@PERSON2,' the book that @PERSON1 wrote as a sort of mission statement for @LOCATION1. While many of the ideas contained within the book are horribly offensive, it still should not be censored. People have the right to read the book and form their own opinions on @PERSON1's teachings, it is not the government's place to decide for them. While oppressive dictatorship and mass-murder are crimes, reading about them is not. There are few materials available that should rightfully be censored and taken out of adult hands. If someone understands what they are reading, and are able to form an educated opinion on the material, then nobody has the right to stop them from expanding their knowledge, or expressing themself by creating similar material. However, the issue changes completely when one considers children. If adults want to view pornography, or read accounts of extreme violence, that is their business. However, those concepts are obviously inappropriate for children, and any decent parent wouldn't want their young kids filling their heads with such things. Children need to be slowly and gently introduced to these concepts so they can fully understand them. In the case of children, careful censorship is necessary for healthy development. When it comes to libraries, there are very few materials that should be banned. If libraries are meant to be places of learning, then one has no right to limit the information they contain. However, that does not mean there should not be any limitations. Libraries should offer a children's section, as many do, that would contain materials only appropriate for youngsters. Then, it becomes the parents' responsibilty to ensure that their child stays in that section. When a parent believes the child is ready to explore the adult section, they are free to take their kid there. This system gives parents the ability to keep their children away from harmful material, without taking it out of the hands of adults. Many would argue that unsupervised children could gain access to inappropriate material, but that is really an issue that needs to be handled by parents, not the library. After all, it's better that a few kids see something they shouldn't have than all adults have to read censored material. In conclusion, censorship is a concept that has its place in society, but must be used very carefully. When the goal is to protect people, especially children, from harmful material, it can be used sparingly. However, when those in power use censorship to attack ideas they disagree with, it becomes a form of oppression. Above all else, people must be free to educate themselves, form their own opinions, and express themselves. If someone doesn't like a piece of material, they can leave it alone, but they should never try to take it out of someone else's hands",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3239,2,"I strongly believe that books with offensive things should be pulled out the library. It not okay for you too say one thing and something your child found in the library say it okay. what if you were talking to your kids about not smoke and how it bad for them and could potentially kill them, would you like you child to say that i can smoke because all this character in the book are smoking? No that not right it just pure wrong. They shouldn't allow those kinds of books, music, movies, or magazine in the library. In high school we were told by our parents that we should not smoke do drugs or anything like that. Sometimes it might be hard to believe the things your parents talked to you about and how harmful they are to you and your body and would lead you to a trouble life down the road. Movie we watch today talk about doing drugs and how cool they are and how they had fun driving a stolen car. it wrong to talk about them that way because it get teens to think it okay for them to do it and nothing bad is going to happen. The media does a bad job of showing teens it not right to do the things they see on tv. The library set a bad example by allowing those kinds of books to sit on the shelves and think it okay for people to read them and not take it offensive. I was reading a book that was talking about how they think it okay to act rascist aganist other people and say mean thing and call them bad name. I really took that offensive because i wouldnt like someone calling me name and saying bad things about me because they think it okay to say things like that and act that way. If books say all those things and the readers actually believe them, then we might have a problem in our hands because some people would take offensive to it and cause a big issue over a small book and some readers might think its okay and cause even a big issue between people who take it offensive and people who dont take it offensive. There are those people out there who think that it okay for those kind of books to be in the library and other people who think it wrong and offensive. My personal view is that i think it wrong to have those kind of books at the library. We tell people how it wrong to do bad things and how we hate certain things that are offensive to us, but it say that in the book that it alright for those thing to be happening or it right to use those foul language. I just think it personal wrong to say those kind of things in movies. music, books,or magazines are okay to be in the library yet alone in the people it self.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6973,3,"The setting is described by the author, were very challenging for three reasons, distance, water and the heat. All of these only occurred to multiply the effects of the others. As time had went on, the cyclist grew tired from the heat. In one sentence the effect of the heat were clearly described by the cyclist",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4688,2,"Yes, there are a lot of books out there that have graphic and sexual phrases, and there are alot of concernd parents out there that are worried about what the libraries are possibly letting their kids read. One good idea would be to put age limit signs in certain areas on the libraries, that dosent neccisarrly mean that the kid is goin to listen to that sign. We all know for a fact that pornagraphy will stay away from libraries and stay were they are at right now so thats not an issue the parents should worry about. I think the libraries should be broken onto sections. Theres a kid section, a teen section, and a adult section, but i don't think that the adult section should be to far off the teen section because when we say adult books or magazines everybody expects it to be one thing, porn. It should still be some type of book with some kind of censorship to it. There should be doors blocking each entrance to each section of books, and to get to them you to show the librarian some proof of age to be able to get into those sections, except the kid section. The kid section is a section that all kids can use, because we know that that section of books would be harmless to kids. I think that with that kind of security it would let parents to be able to be less stressed and worried for their childs safety and insecurity of the mind. There are tons of other ideas to explore to be able to try and keep books with some kind of censorship but most of them are off the wall and rediculus. I think that musoc and movies shouldn't even be in libraries just leave those to other stores it's better to let stores deal with that than libraries. The librarian probably dosen't even know half the cds that probably get checked out anyways. So it's best if you don't have those in there at all. Give some thought to these ideas that I just sprong at you. I personally think that having doors blocking to get to certain books would be a great plan to use, because it would block access to these areas from certain kids. Some other parents or people might have ideas of there own and it would be great to hear them or have some kind of bullitun about them around the city ofr town",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16080,6,"The builders of the empire State building faced many obstacles in the making of the mast. The first obstacle was that of the buildings stability. The excerpt states ""The steel frame of the empire State building would have to be modified and strengthened"". This shows that in order for the mast to even be built the structure of the entire building would need to be altered to accomidate the use of the mast. The second obstacle they faced, in the actual use of the mast, was nature. In hopes of docking the dirigibles to the mast, mother nature would not allow it, as it @CAPS1 in the excerpt, ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" They also warned that with those air currents the passengers would not make it off of th dirigible safely due to the end of the dirigible floating rapidly undocked. They feared that if they docked the end it would be unsafe to the pedestrians below just as the helium in the dirigible would of as well.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12502,5,"The mood created by the author was greatfulness and happiness. When the author was talking about his parents and his culture he said ""and for which I am extremely greatful"" ""Which I adored to this day."" The author discribed his charector in such a way you could easily tell he was a greatful and happy person.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 966,1,"Dear the daily newspaper crew, I have seen some of your own disagree about using computers. I for one believe that using a comenter really isn't that bad. For example, the computer is actually good for education. Many use them to create @NUM1 images of things for schoolprojects or science fair projects. I use these machines to play video games on to cure my boredum like most young teens and children do. Unlike most people I dont stay on it forever. I usually play for a couple hours. There are some downsides to having computer in the house. For one the machines use up load of energy in the house making the electric bill rise and @DATE1. On some websites there are people who try to be a stalker like the website my space and twitter but on the bright side these who try to be a stalker usually instantly get caught and put in jail. Computers actually have a positive effect on the mind and movements. For example children who have computers learn how to fly a kite or for themselves with their parents watching and they learn hand-eye. Many children who play sports that have computers actually manage to catch a ball faster than usual. So you see computers are not that bad. So please think of what will happen to children if computers are banned.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15958,6,"In paragraph 6 it said ""New York City was the lack of a suitable Landing space"" Another obstanke in paragraph @NUM1 was the Nature it self the winds was push the dirigible around in the back of it. The other obstakle was in paragraph @NUM2 the existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. These are the problem that the Empire builders faced",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4395,2,I think that your parents should have to sign a peice of paper saying that it is ok or its not ok for the person to go to that side of the library. It is up to the parents and the way there kids will handle it. On one side of the library it would be more geared to a more mature audience no pornagraphic material of course but stuff that wouldnt be considered @NUM1. Kids fifteen and and older would understand. They might also have to have an adult with them. On the other side of the library it would be more of a childrens area with child storys. It would be targeted for more kids that are fourteen years and younger would like. There would have to be some one in the dividing line being shown the pass that says its ok or not. It would be a little difficult but it would satisfy both parties. It is up to the parent to decide if it is ok for there children to read a certain content of language and description. The child must be at least @NUM2 in order to get a pass from the parent though. I deffinately agree with Katherine Paterson eventually your kids will find out what all those things are. I would rather have my kids learn from a book and ask me then find it out on the streets where they could end up getting hurt or in trouble with the law. Or even going to a party and end up doing something that might kill them.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6346,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclists in a big way because roads had bottles in then that could have caused him to get really hurt. Also, the water he was drinking was streaming and tasted like battery acid. Then came some rolling hills which would be another big challenge for him. The setting was pretty baron for the cyclist because he also come across a snake. Last, he thought he saw some mirages that tells me that the climate is extreme for the cyclists. That’s how the setting affects the cyclists.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7366,3,"The settings affect the cyclist in many ways on the way to Yosemite. Well for one when he took the shortcut, one thing that already made it difficult was that it was June, and he’s out in the desert. Also it says how he went to a couple towns that were deserted so there was no way to replenish his water. It says, “I pumped that handle for several minutes, but the water wouldn’t cool down. When I tried a drop or two, it had the flavor of battery acid.” @CAPS1 thing about his setting that changed was the hills. But once he came to a bait shop, the old man asks him if he knows the best way to get to Yosemite, and he responds, “yes- sir: I own a very good map.” @CAPS2 by this he’s understood that the best way to travel anywhere is the path or road he knows because he’ll know what to expect. This is how the setting changed.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16362,6,"It was very difficult for the builders of the Empire State Building to allow dirigibles to dock there. They had to face many obstacles along the way. One obstacle was that they kept trying to make the building higher. Al Smith was very competitive with the architect who was constructing the Chrysler Building which was also in New York City. Smith wanted it larger and by extending it, it became more dangerous and difficult to allow docks up there. Another obstacle was the weather at the top of the building. The winds at that height were very rigorous and with a highly populated area, they did not want an accident to occur. Allowing docs up on the Empire State Building was very dangerous.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15861,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many problems in attempting to dock dirigibles on the mast. One major problem was that the original Empire State Building, ""...could not simply drop a mooring mast,"" on the top of the building because the ""...single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame. The stress of the dirigibles load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation..."" Over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications had to be made to the building's frame work. One reason dirigibles were never docked on the mooring mast was due to ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air current."" This makes it impossible for dirigibles to even approach the mass without being impaled by other buildings. There was also, ""...an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" This made it illegal to even dock airships on top of the Empire State Building. Dirigibles contain hydrogen which is ""highly flammable."" If the Hindenburg incident had taken place in New York, the accident would have been ""much worse."" These reasons contributed to the builders' problems, and explain why the mooring mast was never used.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6564,3,"Nature has an affect on everyone, even when they don’t think it does. Expecially for cyclist traveling anywhere or everywhere. In “Do not exceed Posted Speed Limit” by Joe Kurmaskie is a perfect example about settings laffect people like cyclist. When you’re riding your bike as actually cross country transportation, you have to know what your doing and where you’re going. The cyclist in this story decided to take advice from older fellows and ends up going the wrong route for a cyclist because at these “town” they had no water, because they weren’t towns to begin with, not anymore atleast. If you don’t have any water like this guy did hills could kill you. And in any case, you have to know what to do for example.” l gathered a few pebbles and struck them in my mouth. I’d read once that sucking on stones help take your mind off thrist” This guy knew a little bit of survival tips. If he’d gone all that way without standing up yo his thrist and those hills, he probably would have had some kind of stroke. That is just a few way that setting could harm you. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1461,1,"I would agree because computers do help people with other things like vacations sights, jobs, presents and shoping. So many uses for the computer. But creators of the computer are worried that people are spending to much time on the computer. Mainly its about conserners and users, most of those people complain that their having no time with their family and friends. You never know if the users are looking up vacation trips for both friends and familys. The things that conserners dont get is that the computer can teach you alot of things, history, mathmatics, science experiments and many more. Computers are also used in schools to help students with their work, even teachers use the computer for grades. It is true about people not going outside geting some fresh air or even taking a walk in the park. They cant keep themselfs on the computer for like @NUM1 hours, its just crazy. So i would go with both sides. Its just better to enjoy life then just look up things that you dont really need to. You should only need to go on like paying bills, and furneture for your house. Thats why the computer was invented.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6509,3,"The cyclist is effected by the setting in “Rough Road Ahead"" because the road is a place and if it is rough or unknown, its a direct effect on the traveler, who is the cyclist. If it is a hill then the cyclist would have to climb it. In the text it said , “over a long crippling hill,” the crippiling hill part stresses that the setting is a hill.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10127,4,"The author of “Winter Hibiscus” included the last paragraph to convey to readers that she will be moving on, but still remembering her old country. Before finding the flower, the author terribly missed her old country. ""It’s-it’s not a real one, ‘Saeng mumbled. 'I mean not like the kind we had at-at’ she found that she was still too shaky to say the words at home, last she burst into tears again."" She missed her home in the other country and was having trouble getting past it. The author could not accept her new country as home yet. Saeng, the hibiscus flower brought back memories of her old country, making it even more difficult to move on.” One of the blossoms had fallen off, and carefully Saeng picked it up and smelled it. Saeng could almost feel the light strands of her grandmother’s long gray hair, freshly washed, as she combed it out with the fine-toothed buffalo-horn comb."" The flower was too much of a memory. She finally had something from home that she could hold. “Gently, she closed her palm around it and held it tight. That, at least, she could hold onto.” The author now had a solid thing to remind her of home. This was the first step to finally moving on. Now Saeng needed some time to get use to her new country. “Almost reluctantly, she realized that many things that she had thought of as strange before had become almost familiar to her now.” Saeng needed just a little more time, almost like a hibernation. She decided once the hibiscus came out of hibernation, and was ready to bloom, she would be ready to accept her new country and move on. Saeng decide the time between fail and spring would be long enough to adjust to her new life. By taking the test, Saeng will be moving on. The author included this last paragraph so that readers can infer that Saeng will take the last steps towards acceptance of her new country and move on by taking the test, although she will look back on her old country through the winter hibiscus.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12068,5,"In the memoir, ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives. Narciso projects a very greatful, thankful + optimistic mood. Every sentence, he thanks a specific person for bringing such greatness to his life. In paragraph six, Narciso says, ""I will always be greatful to my parents for their love and sacrifice,"" and it shows that Narciso is very greatful towards his parents, for bringing him to @LOCATION1, and him being who he is today, + who he was. Narciso also projected off a happy and thankful tone. He felt that his life was made so much better in @LOCATION1, than it wouldve or could've been in Cuba. Lastly, Narciso appears to be optimistic. Although he came from a little two-family home, he was still very hopeful about how his life would be better in @LOCATION1, and thanks his parents for their generous sacrifice. In the memoir, ""Narciso Rodriguez,"" Narciso appears to be a grateful, thankful + optomistic man.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13581,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is happiness, unity, and caring. ""The congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the back drop to life in our warm house."" The author shows that he likes his house and enjoys how it is, ""family had nothing to do with being blood relative. saying that all can be family as long as you care about each other."" Close-knit community""shows unity. ""@CAPS1 get families get back on their feet."" shows caring. she enjoyed doing this It made her happy. That is how the author in the memoir made the mood of happiness, unity, and caring.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9368,4,"The reason why the author concluded the story with that paragraph was because at basically explained everything You needed to know for the ending. It basically explains that she is willing to take the time to study for the test she had previously taken and did not pass and wants to take it again once spring arrives. For example, the geese had left for the winter. and once they return in the spring, she will take the test over again, in conclusion, the author concludes the story with this paragraph because it best explains the ending of the story.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12345,5,The author is telling us a story about a kid that Just came to the United States. He is only @NUM1 years old & he likes it. A man named narciso @PERSON1 is a memoir to all the people.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 753,1,"Dear, local newspaper I agree with @CAPS1 that computers are not good because of different reasons such as putting a person's health in danger for not excersicing much or making people spend more time on a computer than interact with family & friends and sadly also it causes people to change there attitudes and ways of being. But if you wanna hear more than you will just have to read on. There are plenty consequences that people have for spending too much time on the computer, such as people getting addicted to watching certain things or addicted to watching certain things or simply get addicted to the computer itself. Plenty of people now a days, have to wear glasses and probably most of them have to wear them because of too much computer, and it must be really bad having to wear glasses the rest of your life. Also too much computer is bad for a person's health because they're giving more time to a computer than spending that time excercising. I believe people should spend more time interacting with family & friends because it can also make you lose your friends and/or family because your not giving them the time they need & friends and family are one of the most important things in a person's life. And last but not least. too much computer can change a person such as changing their manners, the way they speak, and there attitides. Well I've giving you reasons why I think computers are not good such as, putting health in danger, changing a person's life, and causin them to lose family & friends now is up to you the rest.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1578,1,"Dear, @LOCATION1 @ORGANIZATION1 I think that although computers are very helpful to socity. Thire also paseing a problem to it for example people are out there that adicted to computers and will in a dark area for hours just on the computer also its not helping the fact that there obessity in @LOCATION2 I explain that to you but any ways this thing that teaching are youth could very much hurt them. Computer junkies what are they? A computer junkie is someone who woke up in the morning at @TIME1 and and stay on it for a good past @NUM1 hours this is a problem that @PERCENT1 of are @CAPS1 youth have topic @MONTH1 be not be big to but it is a problem must know my brothers addict to his laptop he spends hours in his bedroom watching anime japanise cartoons and not eating anything the whole day. Never leaves his room and my mom get so tired of trying to drag him out of his room she just quit and it gets annoying after a while a little computer isnt bad but alot is. Obeasity is a growing problem in are nation and computers arent helping infact computers are making matters worse by having items being shiped to them of in extent of the obesse person getting up used and leaving of they could lose a little wieght and now you can order offline and have it deliverd to your door @CAPS2 @CAPS3 market such as @CAPS4 @CAPS5 domino @CAPS4 and @LOCATION3 jade have been a part of this issue stop online @CAPS3 ordering. The computer is a great way to learn about things but it also a great way to become a junkie and fat:",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10623,4,"In the short story “Winter Hibiscus” Saeng decides to retake failed driver’s test in the spring. She does so because she is comforted on the moderate weather of the spring. It reminds her of home, and Saeng is very closely attached to home. It reminds me of all the places I’ve been and how I still remember my favorite one. Like Saeng, I buy objects that remind me of my old home Saeng’s commitment to her old home makes me feel less different when I miss my old home.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10312,4,"I think the author ended the story with that sentence because every winter all or most plants die off, and during the spring the would have to start all over in growing this plant.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 80,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 name is @PERSON1 and I do not believe that computers are very beneficial to our society. Computers donot benefit us because they are stoping many people @CAPS3 exercising and healthy life, playing sports, and enjoying the outdoors. Computers are stoping many people, particular the younger generations, @CAPS3 exercising. Now a days instead of bitting the gym many people are home on the computer talking to friends or playing computer games. As a result many people are not as healthy as they should be. It's also recorded that any person who is on the computer for large amounts of times are hurting thier eyes, resulting in an increase of people wearing glasses. If people were to go and start doing things besides the computer they will live a happier, healthier, and better life. Unfortunatly, many young people are not getting in to play sports. During this decade many sports games have come out for the computer. Now instead of pushing themselves to work hard for aspact, kids ethier play with no heart or dont play at all. The reason for this is because they can instead work extremly hard on thier custom @CAPS4 or @ORGANIZATION1 teams in @PERSON2 or @NUM1. Also the computer is not the only electronic stoping kids @CAPS3 playing sports, xbox, playstation, xbox @NUM2, psp, @NUM3, gamecube and gameboy are some of the few console systems that play games that distract kids. I myself, had been caught thinking more about on xbox game then @CAPS2 own hackey game! not olny are these electronics pulling kids in like magnets but the parents are they are alarming thier kids to play video games or stay on the computer for hours on end. Many of us dont know what its truly like to go outside and camp. do not to spend time with thier family. I came @CAPS3 on @CAPS5 family and many @CAPS5 families are very close, so its natural to be doing things with @CAPS2 father or brother or whole or cousin. However not to many families are as close as so they do not do something togther. If some fathers took thier sons fishing or camping, it would get them away @CAPS3 computers and the father/son band will become stronger. These are @CAPS2 reason sir and they should be thought over far quite sometime. Just remember that many people need to exercise, many play sports, and many families got to exprience the outdoors.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10245,4,The author concludes the story with that quote for one main reason. That reason is that it shows that the girl has hope. In a story one of the best qualities a character can have is hope because it makes the reader interested and helps provide a good morale for the Story. That is why the author concludes the story with that quote.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 714,1,"How much of your free time daily to you spend on the computer? It is proven that people too to fifteen years old spend an average of @NUM1 - @NUM2 hours of their free time on a computer. People age sixteen to forty-eight spend @NUM1 - @NUM4 hours of free time daily on their computer. Too much time on the computer can interfere with physical activities, social time, and health issues. Computers have some good advantages here and there but mostly result in a negative effect. In this post decade, the percentage of exercise was gone down and computer bills have gone up. Americans have now spent most of the time web surfing, playing online games, and interacting with online chat rooms. After school, kids go home and turn their computer on instead of going outside running and playing. More people across the country have gained weight due to unhealthy food and no physical exercise. Many local sports have lost teammates due to lack of desire for physical activities because of computers. Many people have stopped going out with friends and family due to going on the computer. The that runs through @CAPS1 minds these days is 'why go out to talk to my friends, when I can talk them online?' I think the opposite. Get out of the gloomy house and go out to see my friends. I don't even go online within every days. I check online for homework and in online shopping twenty minutes. Computers have a major effect on social lives like going out and being confident to meet new people. Lastly, health issues are raising rapidly! The reason we now have shows on @CAPS2 about people with weight and health problems can relate very much so back to the negative effect on people. Like @CAPS3 @CAPS4, and the obese have shown how people gain weight. I think at least @PERCENT1 of these people spend to much time on the computer and not exercising. Eating @PERSON1's then goint home to play online games will definately increase health issues like weight, organs being unhealthy, muscles not functioning properly, and eye and brain damage from starring at a mouse and screen nonstop. People should stop spending so much time on the computer and get outside or get active because computer use does have a negative effect. It interferes with social time, health, and physical activities. Get up and prevent the negative effects of computers.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13435,5,"The mood created in Rodriguez's memoir is one of gratefulness + happiness. There are supporting feelings such as coziness + friendlyness but Rodriguez himself most exhibits gratefulness. In paragraph @NUM1, there is a great catalogue of gratefulness to the social skills that were passed down to him. When in paragraph @NUM2 he talks about their cuban feast, a small one perhaps but with true love + life. You get a true sense of the gratefulness Rodriguez displays for his parents not because of who they are or how much money they have or what they give him (materialistically), but being genuinely grateful of the nature + kindness bestowed to him.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7568,3,"The setting of “Rough Road Ahead: Do not exceed the Speed Limit” effects the cyclist in many was. The words “high deserts of California in June,” from the story show that it is very hot and dry. The cyclist get's very tired and in the desert there aren't big ponds to get water out of, so if you don’t have water you don’t have anything. Also the cyclist suffers the pain a difficulty of having to drive on, over and down rough terrain. In the story it is said there was a sign that said “Rough Road Ahead.” There were also obsticals such as tumbleweeds and snakes he had to get around. The dry, rough, dangerous setting put the cyclist life in danger, but because of dedication he got through it.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 11843,5,"In this memoir, the author creates a mood. The mood is love. The author loves his parents for all the things they sacraficed to come to @LOCATION1. He really appreciates everything they've done for him and he is really grateful.The author describes the ""warmth"" of his kitchen. How it's filled with love and culture. The great aroma of their parents cooking and the music from his culture, he loves it.The author also describes how his family is @CAPS1 close, and their friends to. The love that they got for each other. The memoir says ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we consider family, knowing that they would do the same for us."" @CAPS1 they considered people who weren't really family... Family. They helped each other out, family and friends, that's what creates the mood to be love.@CAPS1, in this memoir, the author creates a mood and its LOVE.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16491,6,"The Empire State Building was to be the tallest building ever made. At the top, was to be an accesable docking station for dirigibles called mooring masts. The idea of haveing a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building caused the whole building to be modified. It costed over sixty thousand dollars in modifications to accommodate the mooring mast. This project was the first of its kind and had many obsticles like the modifications. Some of those obsticles included the violent air currents and constant change in wind direction on top of the building. With the wind changes, the dirigible could swing around and hit the building or other buildings and fall on the densely populated New York City below. The solution to this was to tie lead bricks to the tail of the dirigible like what is used in the feilds when they land. Although the bricks keep the tail from moveing around, having them hang over a thousand feet above pedestrians was not save. In the end the idea of docking dirigibles on the Empire State Building was disbanded due to many problems that could arise.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 759,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, I have heard the concern of many scientists about computers. Computers have brought us into the @DATE1 and have improved our society but they are harming our childrens health and education. Because of computers, children and adults around the world are spending less time with family and friends, they are not enjoying athletic activities and they are having health problems. Because of an increase in technology, children and adults are not spending time with their families. The computers are ruining family connections. For example, a study at @ORGANIZATION1 showed that families with more computers in their houses communicated less. The children are talking to their friends online or are going on social networking sites instead of talking in person to their family members. Also, computers are making it very hard for families to have meals together. When the children are on the computer, they do not want to leave. This obsetion with the technology is making it harder for families to grow moved and of were more succesful in school. The computers are children from a better education. Athletic activities are also suffering been so of @PERSON1, fresh air more children They will be on websites all day insted of being on a. Sports teams because of computers. The electricity that runs computers of this radiation. Being exposed to this could lead to brain damage or possible death. When my aunt bought a computer for the first time, she complained about massive headaches that kept returning. This was caused by the radiation emitted from the computer. Another health risk is obesity. When children sit in front of a computer for many hours, they have an increase in apetite. These children eat because they have nothing better to do. While on the computer, the users eat and will gain weight because of the loss of exercise. They could become obese and possibly get diabetes. Therefore, there is less communication in families, a loss of excersise, and health concerns caused by the computers. The consequences of misusing this technology are devastating and could be life thretening. Thus, I urge you to do whatever is possible to use the computer less or face the consequences that come with it.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9672,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph because she means she will go back after winter to take care of it. The author puts this at the ending paragraph because he is telling how much she cares about this plant cause she takes care of it because it reminds her of her hometown. So that is the reason she takes such good care of it so she will have something with her to remind her of her home.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13250,5,"In ""Narciso Rodriguez"" by Narciso Rodriguez a happy, loving and grateful mood is created. Narciso writes ""Growing up in this enviroment instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relative."" @CAPS1 loves the people that @CAPS1 calls his family, even if they aren't really related. @CAPS1 talks about Alegria, his first friend, and Sergio and it Edelmira, his surrogate grandparents. Narciso aknowledges the fact that his parents left behind their old life and came to @LOCATION3 for him. @CAPS1 says, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" @CAPS1 knows that his parents care about him more than they can ever express. Narciso knows that his neighborhood was a huge part of his life and proves it by writing ""I will never forget that house or its gracious neighborhood or the many things I learned there about how to love."" I think that overall it is an upbeat article about a man's past, where she learned the defenition of love, and how grateful @CAPS1 is to those who taught him it.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12692,5,"The mood of this memoir is grateful and content. The author @CAPS2 this mood with his quotes that @CAPS1 puts in. ""I was born into this simple house, situated in a two-family, blond-brick building in the ironbound section of Newark, New Jersey."" That @CAPS2 that the author did not care that much about house looks, price or its location. ""It was here where I learned the real definition of family... [that it] had nothing to do with being a blood relative."" @CAPS1 is grateful for all the people that @CAPS1 now considers his ""family"". Also, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice... they came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life"". That @CAPS2 right in the quote that @CAPS1 is feeling grateful! The author also puts some phrases in parentheses, just to add a bit more, ""(after which I eternally grateful)"", ""(which I adore to this day)"". Those show @CAPS1 is happy and grateful with his life, and last this next quote @CAPS2 that his ""family"" members were all grateful for each other. ""It was a close-knit community of honest, hardworking immigrants who extended a hand to people who, while not necissarily their own kind, were clearly in need"".",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9333,4,My response is that if is about winter so realy it is going to be about witer walking around having fun and all them thing.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6284,3,"After the cyclist spoke to the “old timers who hadn’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in office,” his confidence in them began to ware. He entered the desert happy, hopeful and determined. As his water reservoir began to disappear, and he approached the sight of the old shed, canal and a couple water pump, he began to feel touched. He made an attempt to get the water from the pumps and it was hot and “tested like battery acid”. As he rode on, his confidence only faded more. He travelled through the desert and “ridiculously large snake” and was running low on water. Finally he saw a building in the distance, which ironically enlights was an abandoned juice factory a sign featuring a left sipping on some succulent icy liquid teased ruin, and he began to lose hope. He didn’t think he would make it to his destination or anywhere else for that matter. Although after approaching the old factory, he came across a bait shop where his hope and energy was founded.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6047,3,"The features of setting really effects the cyclist because of the condition. For example, the weather, it is hot, it will slow the person down. And if it’s perfect that will let the person go at regular speed. And the roads, if the road is bumpy that will slow them down. And if its smooth that will speed them up. See, it really does depend on the condition.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16463,6,"It was unfortunate that such a great idea was never able to succeed. The builders of the Empire State building faced with many difficulties when trying to allow dirigibles to dock on the building. First they had to design the Mask which sounds like a long and complicated process. Everything seemed as if it was going to work out. Builders started construction. After two months of construction, the mooring mast was not able to fulfill its purpose for several reasons. hydrogen is highly flammible and to dangerous to use in such a highly populated area. Things such as wind and nature itself would have made this wonderful idea impossible. There were laws that would have never allowed for this to happen anyway. If builders and planners had done better research they would have found this project to have been impossible before going through all the intense construction.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3948,2,"Many people like different books, music, movies, and magazines. Some people take offense to them. Others do not. For me I dont. I do not believe that certain materials such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc, should be removed from the shelves because there are different types for different types of people. If a person took offense from a book or magazine I believe that person should just put it back. If books that offended people couldn't be on the shelves there would be no books on the shelves because I'm sure there's atleast one person in the world that would take offense to each book. There are o lot of people in the world after all. For music there's different types also. There's rap, country, rock, pop and many more. For example if someone likes rap but not country that person has a choice to listen to rap and not country. If that person doesn't like country though it shouldn't be removed because others @MONTH1 like country and want to listen to it. For movies there are many different types. There's horror, comedy, romance and many more. That's why at the theater there's different rooms for different movies. People always have a choice. Many people like different books, music, movies, and magazines. Some people take offense to them although some don't. Every person is different. People like different things. That is, in my opinion, the beauty of human nature",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12623,5,"The mood created in the memoir was very greatful because of @PERSON1's family that nearly gave everything up to have a wonderful life in New Jersey. He was grateful for the talents his parents passed on such as cooking and loved the heritage they had like their interest in Cuban Music. @PERSON1 must've been very grateful to be surrounded by so many loving people like his ""@CAPS1 lord and his daughter, @PERSON2 (my baby sitter and first friend)...(who) graced our Kitchen table for meals more often than not""",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6306,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist because, it is hot, and dry in the California desert when you are on a bicycle, hot and dry with bad directions, and in a desert is bad. It was a long distance ride, in the burning hot sun, with little water, and he thought he was going to die because there was nothing insight. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15277,6,"In the excerpt from ""The Mooring Mast,"" by @ORGANIZATION2, the builders faced many problems in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One main problem was that, ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" This could be a serious problem if the dirigible burst into flames and fire rained down on, ""a densely populated area such as downtown New York."" Another obstacle to the creation of the mooring mast was the wind, which, ""were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" The dirigibles would have to be, ""weighted down with lead weights... where they would be dangling high above pedestrians on the street."" This would be, ""neither practical nor safe."" because the weights could fall and kill people. The final obstacle for building a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building, ""was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. This would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area."" The builders of the mooring mast faced many problems, ""that should have been apparent before it was ever constructed.""",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15943,6,The builders of the Empire State building faced several challenges in the completion of the landing dock for dirigibles. The first problem was the frame of the building. The frame was not strong enough to support the dirigibles when docked so the had to reinforce the frame to withstand the strain the dirigibles would present. The next problem was lack of a suitable landing area They decided to put an anchor on the top of the building to secure the dirigibles when docked. The anchor was a winch at the top of the building but the violent winds at the top of the building would not allow the pilot of the dirigible to get close enough to the ancor because of fear that the dirigible might be speard by a nearby building. Another reason why the dirigibles could not be docked on the top of the Empire State building is because of a law against airships flying too low over urban areas. A couple of attempts have been made but to this day nobody has successfully docked a dirigible on top of the Empire State building. ,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1652,1,"Dear local news paper, @CAPS1 computers is a good idea because every developed country uses computers. Also they @CAPS2 learning, fertileze comunication, and are comercialy implortant. Computors also make life easier for many people. Computers @CAPS2 learning by let vast of information being available. I personaly find out about many world events just by bringing up yahoo.com. Computers alow me to learn about new @NUM1, learning about cultures all over the world can be done by computers. The last way computers @CAPS2 learning is by informing us about everyday thing like to get a stain out, how to pronounce a word, how to make a new dish, and much more. Computers are also crucial to communictaion. We use computers to talk to our freinds on facebook. You can also meet new people useing a pc. Everyone uses computer so you can basicly meet enyone. The last reason computers are important is for the commercial stand point computer help alot of small bussness out by letting than be known. Domestic seller and huge companies can compette for the same customer. Furthermore the internet generates alot money for people becausethey can use it as a cyber billboard. In conclusion the computer is usefull because of learning, communication, and comercial. Therefore the computer should be supported and not looked down upon.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7506,3,A cyclist can only travel as fast as slow as he pedals. If the setting is a humid sunny day he can’t go to fast due to his lung capacity. If it is a warm but windy day he has to wath his speed to keep from getting hurt. Basically unless the weather is nice or safe enough he will go fast. But his safty care first so it depend on the weather mostly but also the time of the day. If it is night [dark] the reflectors must be put on to keep from getting it.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9068,4,The author concludes the story like this because the seasons are changing and there finising there cycle and starting a new one. Thus I think this is a good way to end a story like this because I kinda sets a mood and a feel at the end of the story.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7566,3,"On the way to @CAPS1 the cyclist was riding through dry, hot weather in rough terrain. This was making him tired and dehydrated. Half way throgh his journey he couldn't see anything for miles. That must of been discouraging. All the way there he was dehydrated and when he found water it was @NUM1 degrees @CAPS2 because of the heat.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4241,2,"Censorship in libraries? Is it a problem? Should we fix this 'problem' or is it for the good? People of different culture, background, and life could be profound by these articles in readings. Can these books be offensive? They could be offensive to some but to others only educational. Statements have been made all over the world of people speaking on what they believe is right or wrong. How many people believe that censorship in libraries is really offensive and should be removed from libraries? Who really are the victims when books and magazines are being thrown off the shelves? The author of that specific article that's who. If it is said that every reading that comes off offensive should be taken off the shelves, then what would be left on them. Some people @MONTH1 take romances being offensive or comedy or horror. Romance could be hurtful to someone only because they maybe just got out of an relationship, or comedy because they are miserable and don't know how to laugh anymore or know what happiness is. Who knows? Opinions such as these would be only terrible for business but also terrible for the educational and history part of life itself. People of different races and cultures @MONTH1 have another opinion on the situation of censorship. From all over the world there are cultures spreading throughout. Born into a religion could be a huge affect on what their outcome is on a book, magazine, or a movie. Movies of past experiences or massacres that happened to a cultrue @MONTH1 be difficult for some people of that culture to take in. The normal response to a movie such as that would be to become angry or frustrated. Only for others it is an oppertunity to learn what those people went through and grieve for the loss of the people during that time. To support the people who made it through those heart breaking times and become a friend to them and learn more about them, their culture, and way of life. Have you seen protests arouse before you? Anywhere in the world? On television, hear it on the radio, or see it in the newspaper. Everyone has most likely seen this type of protest or attack on the opinion of another person. There have been protest in the past of the freedoms of a person or even race. If everyone begins to complain and argue of what is being put on shelves in libraries. What will come of our world? What will we know about the past? What will we begin to predict for the future? Anyone, and even I can make observations of the acts going on around us. In my experience, I have seen of attacks being struck upon people who only put a picture in the newspaper, or a small article spoke out on television. Who are we to say that everything needs to be removed off the shelves in libraries? These are just people who have been hurt and don't want to relive that experience. Overall, my opinion on if censorship in libraries should be extinguished. I believe the answer is no, every person in the world is going to be upset, hurt, or broken about something at least a million times in their life time from now on. Whether it be in books, music, movies, magazines, or anything else. They just need to understand that without any one person's culture that there would be no history of life before us",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12294,5,"The mood created by the arthur in the memoir is to never forget what home is if you ever move away or you grow up and you move. its okay because you will have better memories there at your new house and also if you have the nastest house, you can always make it into the cleanest house it just takes time, and effort. Everyone can do it. It don't matter what you look like or anything, and what you house looks like you still are you.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3689,2,"NO, I do not think that books, music, magizines and etc. should be removed from the shelves if found offensive. Books help people in many ways. Music helps people find their activity in many ways. Also magizines helps people do things thats meant to be done. The reason I said books help people is because it furthers one knowledge to understand things better. It also hepls one vocabulary more stronger than it once was. Last but not least it helps people become more focused and when saying that I mean that it makes you understand how to be focused on the main idea and the whole concept of the book. When people read and they don't understand what they are reading, they look further to try and understand the words they misunderstood which is good because you will learn alot more then you thought you did. Music is also a very good thing to use because it make people calm when they have had an long stressful day at work, school, doctor, or etc. Music also helps you look into your creativity which means you want to do more things such as dance, sing, or some even start to paint. When im tired and I have had a long day , I like to go home and lay down and listen to music and that is because I feel relaxed and more calmer. Last but not least, magizines. Magizines gives you alot of information that one @MONTH1 be seeking for. Just say that you were looking for a recipe and you don't have an computer and you have magizines, you can look and a magizine and see when was this recipe effective and by whom it was wrote. Also if you were to want to order some things such as shoes, clothes, perfume fragrances, lotions and some even order house hold things if needed. When I look in a magizine,I like to order shoes or even just compare the prices of something store bought or the magizine price. There are many different things you can look foward to when looking in a magizine. So take my advive and try it because sometimes what your'e looking for can be right in your library. With all that being sad books, music, and magizines can be very helpful to you and any body else. Books are very helpful when it comes to essays or etc. Music is very useful when youv'e had a long day at your place of buisness or etc. Magizines are very self explanatory when it comes to food, clothing, shoes, topics , essays ,cars ,houses or etc. When you have a question or a concern or maybe even a doubt you can go to your nearest own personal library and borrow or read a book, magizine or listen to a little music. All these things can be helpful and all you have to do is take in it and take advantage of free information that is given to you. All of these things can help you in a way",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 791,1,"@ORGANIZATION1, my name is @PERSON1 and i just want to tell you that we should stop using computers because we get no exercise, we barely go outside and we don't even or talks to our friends or family any more. Local newspaper i think that we should have computer but not because many people aren't doing anything. Many people aren't exercising because their taking on facebook or playing games. Many children aren't even going outside and seeing nature and playing. Many families are all on computers and they are not spending any family time together gofly kites. What im saying is that yeah people like computers and go and talk to there friends and play games but its destroying the parents and and even families. i don't think have computers. Also local newspaper we need to go and the @DATE1 and go doesn't happen. many children go they're on the computer. many parents go hiking, camping, swimming and lots of other stuff but they that anymore. These people need to get a change. What im talking you guys is take the computer away or. One last thing local newspaper is that many kids and children and parents need to have more time. Maybe if and parents weren't all they they would pick that might be sick or ill. Maybe they might go out somewhere to have two together like lake or six flags. many parents that they get computer because it's so fun so they. Many people world complain about it. So i think everybody should be off computers. i think we shouldn't have computer society because you get no exercise, you barely go outside and see nature and you hang out or talk with friends and family so i think computers gone now.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16068,6,"The builders of the Empire state Building faced numerous technical and safety problems in creating the building's dirigible mooring mast. First off, a dirigible moored to the mast by just one cable would put enormous stress to the frame of the building The building's frame had to be strengthened first to allow such a project. When the mast was finished, several other problems prevented its use. The mast was designed to make the building a center of travel, but most dirigibles from other countries used hydrogen to fly, instead of helium. Earlier, the German blimp Hindenburg had been destroyed because hydrogen was so flammable. It was realized that such a disaster would be much more catastrophic should it happen over a densely populated city like New York. Also, blimps moored to the mast would be blown around by violent winds, possibly pushing them into nearby buildings. The lead weights normally used to prevent this would have had to be left dangling over pedestrians, a major safety issue- @CAPS1, there was a law prohibiting dirigibles from flying too low over urban settlements, making use of the mast illegal. These problems doomed the mooring mast project from the start.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12962,5,"He creates a calming outgoing mood for the @CAPS1 he makes The reader feel, smell and hear the cuban, Spanish influence around him in his home. The feeling inside his home is warm and bright the soothing viberant hispanic vibe that run's through the @CAPS1 brings a great feeling to the reader.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12508,5,"In the story Narciso Rodriguez by The blueprints of our lives, the author's mood in this story is very happy, generous, and humble. The author is so happy that she is moving to a new, and bigger house. This one she can actually call home. And very generous because her parents moved for her education. and to get good money to make us happy. The girl's parents welcome anyone into their home as family, and thats why she loves them too. But I have to say she's mostly grateful. Because her parent's are doing every thing to make her happy, and they even have to accept getting a job they dont even like. And for their love and sacrifice. And that's what mood the author feel's in the story.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15003,6,"In the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted there are many obstacles that the builders stumble across. Many people would have a hard time with creating the docs for the dirigibles for the Empire State Building. One major obstacle that the builders had was ""The one obstacle to their expanded use in New York City was the lack of a suitable landing area."" Another obstacle that they could come across is that the dirigibles could take to long to fuel up and could cause a jam with other dirigibles. Even though they had this huge obstacle they managed to get their way and they found a way to actually use the dirigibles without any types of problems.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 702,1,"My opinion about the effects of computers is that computers do help you but people should not us the computer to lot because people should exercise, interacting with family and enjoy nature. Exercising is more important than a computers because it will make you health, you will not be sick so much. Interacting with family is more important than a computers because the @MONTH1 help you have friend but not a family's help you when you help and maybe that friend in the computer is maybe not real that is why it is important to interacting with family. And the last thing that is more important than a computers is enjoying nature. It is fun because you are not bored. You be outside, you will not think about the computer because you will be enjoying so much. My opinion is that computers should only be us to see your mail or to learn something you want to find out in the computer.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9631,4,"The author used ""when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again” because its resembling that her mother is refreshing, waking, and restoring its self. And Saeng said she would retake the driving test when that happens. She was really sad she failed. “I – I failed the test” She seemed to be embarrassed + sad. So that last paragraph does a good job describing what Saeng is going to do. She is going to look on the bright side of things and restore her self to come back and pass the test",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12309,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez,"" by Narciso Rodriguez, there is a specific mood created. The mood is proud, because the author goes on about how amazing their parents are & how inviting the house was. In the memoir it says, ""Within its walls, my young parents created our traditional Cuban home, the very heart of which was the kitchen. My parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their rich culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today (and for which I am eternally grateful)."" The author talks about how his/her home was full of Cuban culture and how great Cuban food is. The author also says, ""Growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relative... In our neighborhood, despite customs elsewhere, all of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship."" The author is grateful and proud because her parents welcomed with open arms people of all types. The author was also proud that he/she was so close with neighbors that they were like relatives. This is why the mood created in the memoir is proud.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12232,5,"The mood in the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" by @PERSON1 is very cozy and welcomeing. Inside the @PERSON1 home the @CAPS1 describes a cozy and friendly atmospher. ""Here, the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed bot, formed the backdrop to life in our warm home"". This quote shows how cozy or ""warm"" their home is. In the memoir he also explains how welcome people are and that everyone in the Apartment building was friends or even family! ""Growing up in this environment instilled in me the great sence that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relative."" This quote means that in his welcomeing home friends were also concidered his family. Narciso Rodriguez had a wonderful @CAPS2 to grow up in.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7644,3,"The cyclist was begging to feel that death was coming his way as he continued withought a building in sight. This made him grow histerical over the situation, and still have enough energy to feel sorry for himself. Then when he finally did see a building he thought it was a mirage.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16165,6,"In The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, two architects play ""battleship"" with each of their dirigibles, competing for most height. However, when building these ""enormously steel-framed balloons"", the architects didn't realize the obstacles that they would have to face during this process. The biggest reason was for safety precautions. Since most dirigibles were made of hydrogen, they were highly flammable. This, they said, could have been worse than the German Hindenburg, which was demolished by fire in New Jersey in 1937. However, the best obstacle to use of the mast was nature. The winds caused the mast's to be clanging above human beings, which was not practical or safe.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15921,6,"From the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"", There were multiple obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced. In attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One of the obstacles the builders faced was the agianst airships flying too low over urban areas. The law would make it illegal for ship to ever tie up to the building or ever approach the area. Another obstacle the builders faced was forceful winds. ""The U.S. Navy dirigible Los Angeles approached The mooring mast but could not get close enough To tie up because of forceful winds."" The greatest obstacle was the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to the violent air currents. The back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast. The last obstacle was the dirigible wasn't safe to have dangling high about pedestrians.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10451,4,"The author concludes the story with that paragraph because she wanted to show that Saeng doesn’t give up and that nature gives @CAPS1 strength. The conclusion shows that Saeng doesn’t give up by saying that she is going to take the test again, even though she failed it earlier that day. Also, it shows that nature gives Saeng strength by saying that Saeng will take the test again when the geese return, when hibiscus buds and when the snow melts in spring nature gives her strength because it reminds her of where they used to live and her grandmother. In conclusion, the author concluded the story with that paragraph to show that Saeng is not a quitter, and that nature gives her strength and confidence.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4174,2,"I feel that censorship in libraries is not needed. There are ways around your child having to be subjected to certain things you don't want them to be subjected to. If you don't want your child to witness certain types of material that is on you, not the libraries. We have libraries for the sole purpose of variety what is the point in having a library if you can't find what you want because it has offended someone. There are ways around completely taking certain things off the shelf if they are that explicet then they can be put in a section just for adults. No I do not belive certain materials should be removed from the shelves if they are found offensive. One reason why it is not necessary to take certain things off the shelf is if you don't want your child to read or see certain things okay that's fine then watch them and see what they try to pick up and read or watch. Your child doesn't have to anything if you don't want them to. It's like saying I don't like this telivision show I never want my child to see it well what are the odds that telivision show is going to stop playing just becase your not happy with the violents,drug use,language, ect. The odds are extremely unlikely. When you don't want you child to see that certain show what do you do you watch them and keep them from watrching it so why should there be any differance when it comes to the books they are subjected to in a library. Another reason would be the sole purpose of a libray is to give variety to the people a place where there is something for everyone. Just because you think something is horrible and no one should read, hear, or see doesn't mean that some one else won't like it, it could be someone else's favorite book,magazine,cd, or movie. One oppinion shouldn't count for so much. If you don't like a book,movie,magazine, cd or agree with the content fine your entitled to your own oppinion then don't check it out no one is making you. If they took something off the self everytime they got a complaint about it there would be nothing left. If they were about to try and accomidate everyone they @MONTH1 as well just give up and close all libraries down all around the world because there will be nothing left on the selves. Also instead of taking them completly off the shelf if they are that explicet maybe make an eightteen and older section. It would solve a lot of problems. Yes I agree that there are a select few books,magazines,movies,ect. that younger people should not be subjected to, but as and adult you should be able to read,watch,and hear whatever you want. That right shouldn't be taken away just because there are children that come to libraries. Every library I have ever been to there are certain sections and if your child stays in the section where there type of books are then they should be fine. Aside from that though an eightteen and older section would solve a lot of conflict. No I do not belive certain material should be taken off the selves if they are found offensive. There are way to many ways around having to take the books completely off the selves. I don't want to go to a library one day and there be literally nothing left because they took a book off the self every time someone had a problem with it. There is absolutly no reason why we can't figure spomething out to make everyone happy and I think that having the eightteen and older section would be a good start. For the whole i don't want my child to be sujected to those kinds of things then keep your child away for those kinds of things nobody is forcing them to read anything you don't want them to",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3179,2,"Do you believe that certian materials, such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc., should be removed from the shelves if they are found offensive? No, no i do not. it is one thing to censor a book or movie, but to completley remove it is another. I feel like authors, artists, musicians, and writers should have the freedom to write and say what they want. Regardless of who is reading it. I feel like censorship is wrong. Authors should be able to feel free to express there thoughts and feelings about a subject or topic in any way they like. some times storys cannot be explained or told the way it needs to be without certain words. Wether those words be good or bad i feel like with out them the book that is being read is not all of what it could of been. in my oppionion censorship takes away from certain values or qualitys the book could of had with the original context still in it. and to me that is not fair. its not fair to the author. and is most certainly not fair to the reader who is reading the book. I know from my personal expierences with reading books that 'yes' i have read books that have had bad language in them. but just because a book has one or two bad words in it does not mean that it should be completley taken off the shelf. For example the book '@CAPS1' @CAPS2: @PERSON1 was an amazing book. I probably enjoyed that book more than i have any other book that i have ever read in my entire life. But that book would not be nearly as good as it was with it being scensored or taken off the shelf for that matter. All i am trying to get at is that good books with bad language should not be censored just because of some of the words it has in it. because that is getting away from what the over all message is about. Your almost taking the words out of context when you do this. Do i believe that certain materials, such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc., should be removed from the shelf if they are found offensive? No i do not. Neither should you",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12807,5,"The overall mood created by the author in the memoir was courage, and perseverance. First, Narciso Rodriguez's parents traveled to the United States with absolutely nothing; they had no money or background information about the @PERSON2 In paragraph @NUM1, Narciso states, ""My mother and father had come to this country with such courage, without any knowledge of the language or the culture."" Narciso's parents would bravely step into a new world where they didn't know anyone, they couldn't communicate with anyone, and they didn't really have any ideas as to what was going on. The Rodriguez's also persevered through the @CAPS1 challenges of racism and segregation, here in this country. In paragraph @NUM2, he states, ""at a time when overt racism was the norm and segregation prevailed..."" @CAPS1, Narciso's parents had to get through problems with people, and they also had to fight through the mental challenges, due to racism. Lastly, in paragraph @NUM1, Narciso says that his parents were always ""braving the harsh winters while yearning for their native tropics and facing cultural hardships."" His parents had the courage to persevere through new weather and financial struggles. The overall moods that Narciso Rodriguez created for me were bravery and perseverance.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3277,2,"Censorship is a tricky concept. It is a word that can ban music from stores, books from shelves, and movies from theaters. Katherine Paterson, an author, said that if all things reading or listening materials were removed, nothing would be left. I thoroughly agree with that statement. If someone finds one aspect of a work offensive, that does not qualify for the work to be banned or discarded. I believe offensive material should not be removed because of the following reasons: it suppresses the feelings of the author, nothing will be left on the shelves, and there is no defining line on what is or is not offensive. Now, I understand there is a vast amount of people who are against my position. I assure them that I understand those feelings. Some audiences feel that the removal of offensive material is good because it shields the ears of those who cannot handle the verbage or context. Others @MONTH1 feel that sensitive audiences @MONTH1 not be comfortable with the text. In addtion, many people believe that exposing people to violent, risky, and material with dangerous habits will evoke the same behavior in young children. Though these are all valid opinions, they are not enough to automatically think that it is okay to throw it off the shelves. Contrary to the opinions of others, I believe one reason @CAPS6 material should be kept on the shelves because if it is not on the shelves, the the thoughts and feelings of the writer will be suppressed. For instance, the book 'To @CAPS1 a @CAPS2' was banned for a long time. Harper @CAPS3's book, @MONTH1 have had some slurs we @MONTH1 find offensive today. However, that is the way people in that time spoke. Who are we to fault the people of the @DATE1 and @DATE2 for how that articulate words? By banning 'To @CAPS1 a @CAPS2' for the time frame that it was banned, generations were robbed of the powerful and beautiful meaning of the entire book. That meaning was that you cannot punish the innocent because they have done nothing wrong. The same for done for @CAPS6 book. @CAPS6 one reason why I believe that should stay on the shelves. Next, works of literature and music should stay on the shelves because as Katherine Paterson said if everyone removes a book, '...then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' @CAPS6 is very true. Many books have been on the banned book list. For instance there is 'To @CAPS1 a @CAPS2,' '@CAPS9 in the @CAPS10,' '@PERSON2,' and the like. What book will be removed from the shelves next? Once society is relieved of all literature, the next step will be music. Look at the singer/songwriter @PERSON3. He made some very sexually themed music. When people bought his records in the @DATE3, they had to be covered or placed in brown papered bags. They @MONTH1 be considered censorship, but that is one step away from being banned. His record company refused to produce his music under his name because of the scandalous lyrics. Because of that, @PERSON3 has changes his name to an unpronouncable symbol. What will be next? Finally, my last reason for why offensive material should not be removed is because who is to say whether or not something is offensive? A novel or song @MONTH1 be pleasing to @NUM1 people, but should it be extinguished from the record store or library because of one person? I do not think so. There are many words and concepts that have not be socially accepted of the centuries. However, those same appalling concepts have become accepted if not an uncommon habit. If @CAPS6 'offensive material' is given time, it will become unoffensive in the years to come. For all the reasons I have stated, I do not agree with removing anything off the shelves because something finds it to unacceptable if not offensive. If everything is removed because of an opinion, the world of the arts will be no more. Then, we as people will wonder what will be left of us. We will be nothing more than a mass of narrow-minded and ignorant individuals who know nothing about books, music, magazines, movies, etc. Now, I pose @CAPS6 question to you: If all was deemed offensive material, what would be left?",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9740,4,"“In the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and the hibisus is budding, then I will take that test again” Saeng thinks to herself. Saeng finds herself in a new place were she has no friends. She finds comfort in a plant shop one day when she comes apon a Hibiscus flower. The flower calms her spierit and helps her beguin to adjust to the changes in her life at this time.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15162,6,"In the excerpt ""the Mooring Mast"", the author @ORGANIZATION2 explains some of the obstacles that the builders had to face in their attemp of allowing dirigibles dock on the mast of the Empire State Building.First of all, the dirigibles were big and heavy and needed space to land. @ORGANIZATION2 stated that ""some were... the same length as four blocks in New York City."" If the builders wanted to @CAPS1 dirigibles on top of the building, they would need a lot of space to build a big landing platform for a safe landing.Secondly, the decided that they could not land dirigibles on a flat roof and decided to tie it with a cable tether. The authors says ""the architects could not simply drop the mooring mast on top of the... flat roof."" They realized that the weight of the dirigible would deform the buildings structure and that the strong winds could cause damages down to the foundation of the building.In conclusion, the workers faced many obstacles in order for them to @CAPS1 dirigibles on top of the State holding.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12400,5,"The mood the author created was a peaceful mood. She was bringing up good memories of her past life in her home. She was saying how she was eternally greatful for everything her parents gave her and taught her. Her parents tought her much about her heritage when she was young and kind, she lived in a very diverse area growing up there were Spanish, @CAPS1, and @CAPS2. There were times of racism and violence. The overall mood she created in this memoir was sad, happy and peaceful.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15659,6,"The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced constructing a correct mooring mast for the zepplins, and concerning the safety of the people in the city. They also had to account for the weather and how it may have affected the blimps. The builders had to add on more floors to the building and strengthen it's base so that the mast could work properly and stay stable. then they ruled out using weights to anchor the blimps in place because the people on the street below. Also the chemicals in the blimp were highly flamable and put people around at risk. Sometimes the winds were too strong for the blimps to get close enough without being punctured. The builders were faced with impossible obstacles to overcome",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16175,6,"Based on the excerpt, ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted,to obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock where nature and the law against airships flying too low over urban areas. The greatest obstacle builders faced was nature. ""The winds of the top of the building constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" Also the back of the ships would force the dirigible to spin around from the forceful winds. Then using lead weights in the Empire State Building, they would be dangling high above people on the streets below and it is not safe. The next obstacle is that a law existed against airships flying too low over urban areas. This made dirigibles illegal to fly over to the building.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4626,2,"Reading is something people choose to do for their own entertainment, for their enjoyment, to gain personal knowledge and many other reasons. Reading should not be restricted by any means. If a person has an interest in a book, they should be able to read it if they so choose. I believe that censorship within a library is not something that should be done. For a person to be able to take away another persons right to read a book of his or her choice, is mind boggling. I know that some books can be pretty desciptive and graphic but these boundaries sould be set within a home. If a parent doesn't want their child reading a book don't take in out on the entire community. It's not fair to everyone else. If you personally don't find entertainment or enjoyment out of a book that you consider offensive, there are many other alternative books to read. Nobody is forcing you to be miserable and read a book you don't like, that is why there are many sections in a library. The sections in a library range from mystery to romance, so find a different book and leave the offensive ones to people who like to read them. That way you are happy and so is everyone else. Libraries are places people visit to check out and read books. Usually a person chooses a book because of the cover or a friend has requested you to read it. If libraries start to remove books from the shelves then there won't be any left for the rest of us to read. Not only will there be no more books but there also won't be anymore libraries for people to go to. Just because a few people think that there are some offensive words, scenes and or other ideas in a book doesn't mean that it is right to take away the privilidge of another person to read it. If you have a problem with it, don't read it. It's that simple. Don't make other book readers suffer because of one persons opinion.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4505,2,"Hey my name is @PERSON1 and I have some things to talk about that people need to hear. I think that libraries are a good thing for people of all ages but, there are some books in the library that are not made for children to read or evan see. They should at least put them in a seprate part of the library. I had an experince like this once. I was about to leave to go to the library when my little brother asked if he could come with me. I didnt want to take him but I couldnt say no to him. He got his shoes on and he ran to the door, he was so excited. We pulled up to the library and he took off running to the doors. I chased after him, when I caught him I told him that he couldnt run away from me like that. We went inside, it was a giant library. He went to find a book to look at and I went to find a good book to read. I found one that looked very interesting I got it and started to read it. Then @CAPS1 ran to me and said I should go take a look at the book he was looking at, so I went with him to go see the book. He handed it to me and I just lost it, the book was not a children book at all. I was one of the worst book that I have ever seen, we left the library and never came back. I think that books that are bad for children should be in there own section in the library. This section should be for grown ups only and that no children are aloud in there. This is what I think sould be done to all libraries",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6288,3,"The setting in “Rough Road Ahead: Do not exceed posted speed limit,” affected the cyclist greatly. For starters it says he was “traveling through the high desserts” which is never a safe thing. He had been drinking he water regularly but the temperature was rising. He was, “trying to keep balance in my dehydrated state.” From lack of water because the terrain had altered his water into “A far like substance” The setting of the story was cruel to the cyclist.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1304,1,"Would you like to discover new things and explore amazing mysteries around the world? Do you love to have friends overseas? Do you want to relax and do something fun after @ORGANIZATION1? Advanced technology today allows you to do almost everything that would have been considered impossible @DATE1 decades @DATE1. We need to decide whether computers have positive or negative effect on people. I firmly believe computers gives society many benefits and opportunities. Who would disagree that computers are devoted to educational purposes? Computer experts have invented countless programs that make @ORGANIZATION1 easier for kids. For example, @CAPS1 helps you with essays and reports. With her program teachers wouldn't hurt their eyes trying to read sloppy hand written compositions from students @ORGANIZATION2 helps you organize and calculate, @ORGANIZATION3 gives you the @ORGANIZATION3 to create dynamic presentations. Many schools have a computer lab for students to complete their @ORGANIZATION1 tasks. @ORGANIZATION1 has also aquired convenient-sized laptops to help students do their projects and take test. That saves a lot of paper and a lot of trees! Furthermore, many colleges offer their courses online. You can obtain a college degree right at your house without going anywhere. Education has never been so easy, thanks to our advanced network and computers. It is very important to mention the entertainment benefits of computers. I have notices many teens play cool games on the net. They seem to greatly enjoy this opportunity. It in an ideal way to relax after a stressful way getting on the computer and listening to the newest songs. Some websites after downloadable songs for free so you don't need to worry about the financial part. Moreover you can watch movies online anytime, form wide section such as horror, romance, comedy, fantasy or even children films. No more movie tickets, no more driving in the theater. Without a doubt computers can put a single on everyone's face with its entertainment benefits. Many people feel that computers both kids and adults always from their social life, but actually, computers give them a chance to communicate with other people around the world. Ten @DATE1 @DATE1, who would have thought that they could chat and talk directly with same one a thousand miles @DATE1, with no mail or telephone or whats over? I came to the @LOCATION1 @DATE1. I am extremely grateful to computers because I can keep in touch with my friends and relatives. I can just send them pictures of the snowy winter sceneries here through just a minute. How much easier could it get? computers definitely improve communication and brings people closer. Let's not wait any longer. Computers have endless positive effects and should be popularizeas. They help you learn have fun and communicate with people faraway. Above and beyond all that new technology makes the earth a greener place by saving paper and trees. Don't sit here and wait educate people about the benefits of computers today.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13172,5,"Home is where the heart is, and nothing says that more than in the memoir Home: The Blueprints of My life. In the memoir, it talks about family and that where ever your heart is, is where your home is. The memior and gives a tingling and loving mood. It makes us feel happy and feel loving, especially in a few sections.First, when the author talked about what his familly did at home, it made theworld slow down and think about the family. Narcisoc (the author and narrator) said in paragraph two, ""endless celebrations and that encompassed both, formed the back drop to our life in our warm home"". This made a picture of a happy and laughing family like in the movies about the holidays.Second, Narciso said how united they all were. This painted a mood of unity and care. In paragraph four @PERSON1 recalled, ""My parents always kept thier arms and thier door open to the many people we considered family, knowing that they would do the same for us"". The makes the reader think of friendship and hope in trouble times.The mood that came was loving and that tingling feeling of hope. Most people can't find that feeling anymore, especially in these tough times. What most people do know is that and home is not a building, it's a santurary.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1458,1,"Due to an on going debattle about weither or not computers benefit society I am writing to you to inform you of my opinion on this mater. I believe that computers have more of a benefit than they do a draw back. I believe this because. First of all, computer bring about online communication. Also computers advance and enhance learning, had to mention that computers advance emloyment. As I mentioned, computers bring about online communications. Now after reading this there must be one side running thru your head define this well online communication, include social networkinjg sites litre facebook and twitter and not to forget my space. This also includes email and blogs and some chat sites. Okay enough of that But how do these things inventions iprove our lives. These inventions allow long distance communication bringing people ""closer together."" @CAPS1 example, my uncle lives in @LOCATION1. And thru facebook, my mother can speak with him any time she wishes and over from their relatives. So online communication @MONTH1 be very nessary @CAPS1 same. Also you could use email to communicate with others although it travels slower than other of electronic communication. Besides, I mentioned learinig. Computers can improve learning in a variety of ways. Computers improve learning because they speed the flow of information to the students can go to such places and a school websites to findout more on a particular occuring at the school. @CAPS1 example, I go on my school's website to retreve nightly homewrok assignments and read the next day's daily annocments. Teachers might post helpfel hints on homework and @MONTH1 a detailed explanation of the assignment. Also computers can improve learning by assiting with research projects @CAPS1 example a couple of weeks ago my health class was information car our illegal drug project. So with the information, made of wide variety of brouchers from it.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 11887,5,"The mood the author created in the memoir is a roller coaster. It goes up and down. At the beginning of this story, it was quit deppressing. It's basically just Rodriguez describing the crummy quarters he lived in. But, as the story progresses, it is filled with happiness and even though living conditions werent all that great, he still had fun. In the end, home is about relationships rather than physical space.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3485,2,"I do not believe books, music, and magazines should be removed from shelves. Wherever you go in the world, whether you like it or not, your going to come in contact with things you don't find appropriate or you think are offensive. @TIME1 world is far from perfect. One reason i don't belive they should be removed is because it would be unconstitutional. The freedon of speech and the press was not ment to be tampered with. If a specific library thinks their articles are innapropriate, an easy solution would be to put these articles in a certain section of the library and warn people what they are. The main reason I don't believe books, music, and magazines should be removed from the shelves is becuase the world is a nasty place and books are the least of your concerns. Kids can't be sheltered their whole lifes, they need to face reality and books are a good source of that. Kids these days are resiliant and can handle 'innapropriate' content. Parents need to face the fact that their kids are going to be exposed to offensive things in @TIME1 imperfect world of ours. It's just a natural part of growing up. Another contributing factor is that it would be unconstitutional to remove books and other articles from the shelves of @LOCATION1's libraries. When the amendments freedom of speech and press were written down they were intended to stay there. They are not guidlines that can be looked over, they are rules set in stone for @TIME1 great country. People to @TIME1 for freedom over much bigger issues than books. Who are we to tell people what they can and can't write down. People's natural opinions can't and shouldn't be governed. I think it would be a crime against @LOCATION1 to censor things in libraries. My final reason for not censoring libraries is that it all boils down to the people running the library. If they think some of their articles are profound and innapropriate, meerly isolate them to a certain section of the library and put a warning for people to see. If people don't want to be offended they simply have to just stay away from these sections. Take responsibilty for what is in these libraries that is apparently so offending and put them in their own area and stay away from them, do not take them out completely, because who knows someone @MONTH1 want that offending book. These are all supporting opinions why I personally do not belive libraries should be censored. @TIME1 world is far from perfect and it's not going to become perfect by censoring libraries. Plus @TIME1 act would be completely unconstitutional. Finally all the libraries have to do is exile these articles to certain areas of the libraries and slap a warning on them. If libraries were censored there would be a lot of missing information in @TIME1 world because there are many things in @TIME1 world that are 'offensive' to atleast someone",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6379,3,"In Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit, the features of the setting are devastating to the cyclists condition. ""@CAPS1 through the high desert of California"" is surely never an easy task to begin with. Without proper hydration, people often suffer heatstrokes or pass out, sometimes even perishing, it is entirely worse for this cyclist because of the effort he is exerting, pedaling over “short, rolling hills.” Even worse, the trail a few very old, eccentric men set run on doesn’t do much in the way of nuping with a depleted water supply. The first town the cyclist comes across easily splits “the traditional definition of a ghost town” and the only other water pump he comes to emits only sewage and incredibly hot brackish water. Therefore, the heat is only made worse by the look of water on the cyclist path. This combination of features in then setting causes a great deal of distress to the cycling, and almost pushing him to death.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6097,3,The cyclist went on a rough journey and he was explaning how tiering it was and difficult it was for him going from town to town having to diel with lack of water poisonous snakes and the condition of the road.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7157,3,The setting of the cyclist’s journey effected him because if he was a tot desert in california. This effected him because he had to ride a bike throug it and he heat took a lot out of him. He didn’t have a lot of water because there were no rivers or water supply because of the desert surrounding him. At the end he finds a store which affects him because he gets a cool drink and same supplies which helped him. So in the end his surroundings destroyed him and then relieved him.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15241,6,"The concept of a docking mast for the Empire State Building met with failure because of a variety of reasons. One of the major problems was that it was directly over the downtown area of New York City which is very densely populated. After the Hindenburg fire in New Jersey, ""the owners... realized how much worse the accident could have been if it had taken place over a densely populated area.""The second major obstacle was controlling a dirigible in the often violent winds at the top of the tower. It was the practice at the time to control the back of the dirigible with lead weights but over a civilian area this was ""neither practical nor safe.""Another important reason why the builders faced obstacles was the already existing law that prohibited low-flying aircraft over cities. Despite the two dirigibles that approached the mooring mast, neither managed to allow passengers to disembark, and the idea was ""quietly dropped"" as it should have been. There were too many obstacles for it to succeed.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6757,3,"The features of the setting greatly affected the cyclist in this story. First, when he got to the road sign that said “Rough Road Ahead” he was already low on water, but that made things much worse. The rough road made it harder for him to pedal; therefore, he was working harder and getting thirsty. Also, when he stopped at the old Welch’s Grape Juice Factory, he noticed some pebbles on the ground and shoved them in his mouth. “I’d read once that sucking on stones helps take your mind off thirst by allowing spit you have left to circulate”. Lastly, “GARY AND WILBER’S FISH CAMP”, could possibly have saved the cyclist’s life. He stopped there and finally got a well deserved drink of water to settle his dehydration and fear. The setting and features severly affected the cyclist throughout his journey. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10188,4,"The authar concludes the story with the paragraph they because it shows saeng determination and her overcoming her obstacles of being new in a country. With all of the doubts saeng had right after her test it is very big of her to come to this conclusion of retaking the test, “Here, let me help you mother,she offered” (HO). With her mom comforting her and telling her it is @CAPS1, gives saeng the boost she needs to help her mother and think to herself that she can’t let just one thing hold her back in life. the support saeng has she will definetly pass the test the next time.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1072,1,"Dear editor, @CAPS1 you think that people spending a lot of time on the computer is good, I don't. People should get more exercize. Also they don't get enough fresh air. Finnaly they don't spend enough time with family and friends. Now we have to determin weather people should spend a lot of time on the computers. Those people who spend alot of time on the computer could be going outside everyday to get exersize. Some parents got their kids hooked on playing on the computer all day instead of going out side to get exersize. They could ride bikes, scooters, play basket ball, wiffle ball. They can also go swimming play, sports, and go to a play ground. Finnally they could go for a long walk on the beach. People need to get fresh air instead of being on the computer all day. They can go sit on the beach for awile, go outside to watch their kids play or watch their games like baseball or basket ball, or they can go outside just to be outsides. They can go sit on their porch to wait for their kids to get off the bus from school. Those people who love to play on the computor don't spend enough time with their family or friends. They could go visit their family more often, go out for lunch with their frinds. Also they can spend more time doing things with their kids. Even though there is a chat on the computer it is nice to talk to your friends in person. The time has come to decide weather people spending a lot of time on the computer is a bad thing or not. They don't ge enough exersize every day. They also don't get enough freshair. Finally they spend time with their friends and family. So now you need to write a letter to your local newspaper telling them which you are choosing.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7439,3,"In the “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” by Joe Kurmaskie, the features of the setting affect the main characters, the cyclist. After he first journied from the house where he met the old men, he rode over much flat desert terrain, where the sun beat down and dehydrated him. Soon, though the terrain changed. “Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills.” This tests his endurance even more as he has to maneuver down the hills while dehydrated and ready to collapse from exhaustion.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1553,1,"Dear local newpaper: @CAPS1 you being the local newspaper, you have the power to say how you feel about the effects computers give to people. I believe that computers give great effects to people because it teaches hand-eye coordination, gives people the ability to learn about far away places, and it allows you to talk to people. In all, @PERCENT1 of people agree with my idea about computers. Firstly, using computers teaches people about hand-eye coordination. For example, my grandmother told me that she knows how to use her hands and eyes well because of using the computer. This is because she types and researches information all day long. In all, computers are designed to help your eyes and hands to focus more. Secondly, computers have a lot of interesting information on faraway places. @PERSON1 from @ORGANIZATION1 quotes, ""I always use computers for my work because it helps me learn about many new things. @CAPS2, it lets my wife and I search details about a trip we want to go on."" @CAPS2, the people agree with what @PERSON1 stated. However, people @MONTH1 say that computers give the wrong information many times, but if you find a wonderful website, it will never lie to you. Thirly, if you use computers it will let you talk online or video chat with friends or family all over the world. How this benefits you is because if you have not seen your relatives in ages and you cannot buy a ticket to visit them, then video chat. It has gotten people so much closer and you see the world in a whole different way. @CAPS2, instead of wasting all your cell phone minutes, go buy a laptop or computer with a camera on it so you can video chat. Lastly, taking to people and being active in other peoples life is important. In conclusion, you will have great eye coordination, you will be able to research faraway places, and you will always be allowed to video chat or talk to family online. @CAPS2, I want you to tell the whole world that computers are useful and people use them everyday without a problem. Lastly, you will have the best feeling ever if you make everyone smile by knowing you believe that spending time on the computer can teach you a lot!",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9127,4,"In the short story ’’Winter Hibiscus,’’ by Minfong Ho, a teenage girl fails a driving test but vows to take it again in the spring. The story was ended like this to show that the girl will have a new beginning. For example, ‘’When they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, When the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again’’(HO). The hibiscus is what makes her feel as though she is connected to her homeland. So if the hibiscus is budding it is starting a new beginning she feels that she will be able to do the same. This is why the story ends like that. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12864,5,"The mood the author created in the memoir was happy and joyful. The author explains were he lived as a child very vividly. from the air mixed with the aromas of cuban food to to cuban music the author still loves today. It seems like he had a good childhood. He says his parent were selfless and took in refugees in their home. It gives this story a warm feel like it could almost be your mom or dad. He make the story very personal with all the family members he explains. His parent, did the very best they could for their family. That is how the mood is set.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 774,1,"Did you know that computers are the number @NUM1 selling electronic device in the world? I think that computers are only making our soceity a smarter and more inteligent place. Also computers help old time friends and family keep in touch. Finnaly I think they are helping are society because computers teach great hand-eye coordination. Studies have shown that @PERCENT1 of the people growing up with computers at home have a high paying job! Computers are very intelligent pieces of equipment and if you know how to use a computer you will most likley hae a high paying carreer. Also mostly every job from doctor to police officer to casheer at a store all involve computers and to go those jobs you must know how to work a computer. This is only one of the many reasons I think computers will benifit our soceity. Secondly, I think that this price of technology benifits soceity because it keep family, friends and workers in touch. Have you ever had a time where you think back and wish you could see your old high school friends or even family living. Far away, @CAPS1 computers are one of the most popular ways to do so with all the new websites like @CAPS2, twitter or even your old email website people are keeping in touch all over the world. Another way computers help old time friends keep touch with the new video camera in the computer, family, friends and workers can actually see each other from different parts of the world. A simple message though one of these websites will make someones day and could even make yours. Finnaly I think that computers benifit our soceity because they teach hand eye coordination other life skills. How do you think people can shoot a gun so and so quickly or how do you think a baseball player can swing at such a perfect time. All these things revolve around hand-eye coordination which is best learned by computers. Also people can save lives by just a type about a hurricane, tornado anything but if they do not know how to work a computer many people can get injured or die. These are only three of the many reasons I think computers benifit our soceity. So think twice about the negative comments people say about computers.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10357,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because she wants to show how some some people vowed silently because the don’t want to express themselves. Also maybe because they are not very mistful of people even themself. One day I was like that I didn’t want to talk to anybody. All I want to do is sit in my room and think. Think about my life were I am going to go after i die. I just woulnd sit in my room in the dark wondering if in my room in the dark wondering if I would come back in another body or will my soul roam the earth. But think I starting think that I am a kid, I got a wonderful like a head of me. I when I get to the one where I need to think about then I would . So I started talking to everybody again",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16288,6,"In the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted the builders faced quite a few problems. They faced on constructing the building. They didn't know if they could built it all. They also faced a bad climate, and faced on how much did the dirigibles weighted and if they can hold it. On paragraph fourteen it says ""Dirigibles moored in open landing fields could be weighted down in the back with lead weights."" These are a few things that the workers had to face",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4079,2,"There are many books, music, movies, and magezines in the world. Some are humorous, historic, or romantic, however some are offensive in some way. People @MONTH1 get offended when they read or listen to certain things, but does that mean that those things should be removed from the shelf? Some people @MONTH1 find something offensive while another person does not, therefore the music, books, movies, or magazines should not be removed from the shelves. If a person thinks that a song should be removed from the shelf and it does get removed, what about the person who did not find it offensive? People are intitled to their own thoughts and feelings, however that doesn't mean that one person's feelings are better than someone else's. If everyone tried to make everyone happy then there wouldn't be a lot of options to chose from in the library. If one person finds something offensive in a book, another person might find another book that is offensive, and it goes on until there aren't any books left. With entertainment it is hard to please everyone. No matter what it is there will always be at least one person who doesn't like it. This, however, does not mean that it should be removed from shelves. If one person does find it offensive then there is most likely someone else who doesn't. The people who don't find something offensive want to be satisfied, too. It is impossible to please everyone, so what should be done? If someone finds something offensive, they shouldn't read or listen to it. People can chose to quit listening to a song, quit watching a movie, or quit reading a book or magazine that they @MONTH1 find offensive. They have the right and freedom to not pay any attention to it. This way the person who isn't offened can still enjoy their choices of entertainment at the library. If I find something offensive I try not to pay attention to it. There are many books or songs that I do find offensive, so I just avoid those. By avoiding these books or songs I don't offend anyone else by taking away something that they might enjoy. I still am satisfied and so are they. The library workers know what they are doing. If the library takes away a book because some people find it offensive then they might be offending those people who didn't find it offensive by basically saying that their morals are better than yours. A library should take a book or magazine out if it feels necessary, but not to please certain customers becuase then they aren't pleasing the other customers and could offend them. People have the right to voice there feelings but that doesn't mean that they are always right and that certain things should be changed because of them. It is impossible to make everyone completely satsified but there are compromises. The libraries shouldn't remove things off their shelves but should give more options that won't be offensive, and people should avoid the things that they find offensive",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12385,5,The mood created in the memoir is a happy and caring and also sometimes sad. It was happy when he got together with family members but caring when his family let random strangers stay with them until they got on there feet it was sad When he couldne see his grandparents till they got permission from cuba.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13085,5,"The mood created by Narciso Rodriguez in this memoir. Is a very happy and grateful mood. It is happy because in paragraph @NUM1 it says ""Here, the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, Formed the backdrop to life and are warm home. It is grateful because he says in paragraph @NUM2 ""They came selflessly as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life, even though it means leaving behind their families, friends, and careers in the country they loved. In paragraph @NUM3 it says ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrafice. This is the mood created in this excerpt.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 659,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, Computers are a great way to learn about the world and its people. Computers can teach people about things that are forien to them. Computers keep people intouch, all over the world. Computers also come in handy when something needs to be looked up right away. Computers are very helpful when it comes to learning. They can teach you things that most books cant, such as hand eye coordination also about the current populations of countrys and cities. Also, computers gives you the opportunity to see pictures of places and people that you couldn't find in books or photo albums or newspapers. They also help in schools when projects are asigned. Kids can use computers to find information they need quickly. Kids can also use computer to wright essays or print pictures for projects. Computers are definately a staple for learning & education. Computers are also great for comunication. People can chat with one another on networking sites such as @CAPS1, facebook, myspace, and twitter. On these sites people can send messages to their friends a leaking them of something or chat with their friends to see whats to keep in touch with family and friends, on the computer. Family members can e-mail each other to inform them of an event or news. I have actually had an experience with e-mail that was very helpful my family members and I had been speaking of traveling to block island and two days before we were going to leave we recived on email from the owner of the house we were going to stay at stating that all phone lines were down and part of the house was ruined due to a storm. If it werent for computers we would have been in a sick situation. Computers also come in handy in times of need or confusion. People can check their local weather forecasts to see of the weather will effect their plans. Also if someone doesn't know where a house or store is located they cab quickly look it up on the computer. Finaly if something is unavailable on a store people can shop for it online and can buy what they need, and have it shaped to their door step. Computers have helped this country grow and prosper. Why bother to go aginst them when they benafit society so much? Computers are helping the world become a better educated, connected, and informed world.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3147,2,IN MY OPINION I THINK THAT SOME BOOKS PROBABLY SHOULD BE REMOVED FROM THE SHELVES IF SOME OF THE BOOKS AREW FOUND OFFENSIVE. SOME OF THE MOVIES AND BOOKS PEOPLE FIND OFFENSIVE CAN BE PRETTY BAD AND SAY NASTY THINGS AND STUFF LIKE THAT. SOME MUSIC CAN BE PRETTY OFFENSIVE TOO BECAUSE IT CAN SAY NASTY THINGS AND THINGS LIKE THAT BUT NOT ALL MUSIC IS BAD.. IT DEPENDS ON THE KIND OF MUSIC YOU LIKE TO LISTEN TO IF IT SAYS NASTY THINGS BECAUSE THERE IS MANY DIFFERENT TYPES OF MUSIC TO LISTEN TOO.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4269,2,"Censorship in libraries differ in certain areas. I personally love reading, and like all kinds of books. And I know that there are some books that I have read that my parents would not aprove of. But has that ever stopped me? Not exactly. I think that after a certain age, people should be aloud to read whatever they want. I mean, if I ever thought I could not be mature enough to read a certain book. Then I will not get or read the book, it is that simple. As far as music, movies, and magazines go that could be a different story. Music is for the most part like a book, just using a different one of your senses. And it is listened to, not read. Movies should be judged a little more carefully in my eyes, because movies are like show and tell. That could easily go wrong if children, teens, etc take it more than just a movie. I think all things should not be judged by assumption. Everyone has different opinions and likes. So, therefore material should not be removed from shelves, if there are people that like/support what the book, movie, or music has to offer.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1327,1,"Dear @CAPS1, I am writing to express my opinion on computers benefit to society. I believe that computers are very useful tools for learning and communication, but people today over use that power. You know what I mean @NUM1 gamers, @CAPS2 and @CAPS3 addicts. Or those who will do anything just to spend time on the computer. People like the @CAPS4 do not spend much time with family members, or friends, or even just outside. They do not get enough exercise, and frankly, abusing computers is not good for your life, physically or socially. Some people are working all day, leaving early in the morning and getting back late, so that they rarely spend time with those they love. But if you are hooked on the computer, as so many of us are, you @MONTH1 just not spend enough time with family and friends. Using a computer isn't exactly a social thing. One person with a mouse, a keyboard, and a monitor. You @MONTH1 say ""@CAPS5, but there are also online social networks."" @CAPS5, but how often do you even see those people in real life? Computers can take precious time away from you that you could be sharing with your family and friends. That certainly does not benefit society. A major fault in computers is that you have to be indoors. So you cannot be online chatting, or playing a game, or checking your email, outside while enjoying the beauty of the outdoors. Sure you could use a laptop outside but are you really enjoying the outdoors? Computers and outdoors go together like chocolate milk and fillet mignon - not well. That is the reason why pine tree's don't have outlets (although now you never know what they'll do next). Another side effect - that goes allong with the aforementioned statement about computers and outdoors - of computers is the lack of exercise. Once again, it is rather difficult to use a computer and jump rope at the same time. When you live as a computer vegetable, your not getting enough exercise as you could or would be. Another reason computers could lower your quality of life. Now, really, if you use the computer sparingly, and only when you needed to, or when it is nessecary you would really have none at these ""side effects."" But face it, the ruth is, computers can be addicting. Wether it's waiting for a friend to come online or your trying to get to level @NUM2 of ""@CAPS7 @CAPS8"", they can get you hooked. The idea of this article is not to prevent you from using computers, but to make sure you use them like you eat double fudge brownies with walnuts and cream cheese frosting-springly. So, now you know, computers when used to much, at obsesive amounts, are similar to drugs in the way that they are so addicting. As long as you use them correctly, they are a very, very valuable tool to be used, but over used, can be problem causing, and even prevent you from spending time with family and friends, getting exercise and even spending time outdoors. I know you certainly will agree.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16613,6,"While constructing the Empire State Building, the builders were faced with many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there One such obstacle that the builders had overcome was the law that prevented airships (i.e. plains or dirigibles) from flying too low over urban areas. In paragraph @NUM1, we learn that ""[this law] would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area."" Another obstacle the building crew of the Empire State Building was faced with when constructing the mooring mast was nature itself. Because of the violent wind currents near the top of the building, the way the wind blew constantly changed, causing a great difficulty for any dirigible to connect to the mast properly. In paragraph @NUM2, we are told about how if it were possible to connect the mast to a dirigible that the back would swing. ""Dirigibles moored in open landing fields could be weighed down in the back with lead weights, but using these at the Empire State Building, where they would be dangling high above pedestrians on the Street, was neither practical or safe."" Because there were too many obstacles with not enough safe options, the mooring mast project were shut down; proving that during its construction its builders were faced with too many obstacles.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15512,6,"On December 11, 1929, Al Smith Announced that the Empire State building would be reaching the height of 1,250 feet; taller then the previous largest building, the Chrysler Building. Smith made the building taller by adding a top or a hat. John @CAPS1 described this as ""[The top of the empire State Building] would be more than an ornament... The empire state building would be equipped for an age of transportation that was then only the dream of a few aviation pioneers"" (pg 1). This dream consisted of having a mooring mass at the top of the building to dock dirigible, or blimbs. However, many obsticles emerged the more they began to plan this, such as the amount of stress it would add to the buildings frame, the use of hydrogen opposed to helium, and simply nature itself. ""A thousand-foot drigible held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the buildings frame... The Empire State building would have to... [have] over @MONEY1 worth of modifications (pg @NUM1). ""Most diribles from outside of the U.S used hydrogen... and hydrogen is highly flammable (pg @NUM1)"". ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents... they would be dangling high above pedestrians... that was neither safe nor practical""",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9616,4,"The author concludes this story with that paragraph to explain how she already took the test and it is now winter, she will retake the test again when all of the flowers and plants come back to life and start again. Saeng wants to take the test again to show her mother that she can pass it, she bought a plant called. dorl Faeng-noi for nineteen dollars to help her mother not be disapointed. However mother was disapointed that she spent that much money on a plant. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1500,1,"Dear local Newspaper editor, More and more people are using computers, but not everyone thinks that is such a good idea. Those who support advances in technology believe that computers have a positive effect on people. Other experts disagree. I think that computers do have a positive effect on people because they let you learn about anything all over the world, they let you talk online with other people, and teach hand eye coordination. I think that computers are very helpful. Dont you love having the oppritunity to research anything from any part of the world that you want to learn about? I'm sure that everyone who has a computer does. With computers, you can use search engines like, google, yahoo, ask, and so many more. I know that computers help me with research all the time when I do projects or write papers for school. The internet is a great, reliable that you cango to when researching a topic for shcool or even just looking for an answer to a simple question. My next reason is that computers let you talk to other people online. Things like facebook, email, myspace, and web-caming all let you communicate with people anywhere in the world. For example, I have an aunt that lives in @LOCATION1, and on christmas me and my family used my cousins webcam to see her and talk to her when we couldnt be with her on a special holiday. Also, things like facebook and myspace let you put up pictures and chat with friends and family all over the world. My last reason why I think computers have a positve effect on people is that playing on the computer is a good leisure time activity. There are all kinds of fun games you can play, and some even let you compete with other people around the world. For example, internet checkers is a game that lets you compete against someone else. There are so many websites that let you pick games you want to play out of a huge selection. Its obvious that computers have a positive effect on people for research, talking to friends & family and leisure activities. I hope you agree with me!",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9524,4,I believe the author uses this as the last paragraph because it tells of how Saeng wants to overcome and be strong even though. She misses her home. For example Saeng believed that since she cried when she saw the hibibiscus plant she failed and she believes she will get stronger over time. ,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7334,3,"The different settings of the cyclist affected him by how he felt when he rode the bike on the rode. He was well excited and happy that he is going on the ride and how he truly felt about how he rode the bike real fast through the short cut. And how he came over a long, crippling hill he was riding real fast. So unfortunately he was riding fast non stop and how he came through the whole road with relief. He felt so free and how he when he came over hills that are tall and large. But he mostly believed he could find his way at the end. He said it himself he always stuck in the future. So he’s keeping his future and his wisdom to himself. He thought he was gonna die but all he had to do is ask for a little push. But different things did affect the cyclist by doing the impossible of his very bright future.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7026,3,"The setting in the essay “Rough Road Ahead” makes the bikers travel a very difficult challenge that he has to overcome. When the “flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills,” the biker must use more energy to peddl up the hills. This made it hard on him to overcome his exauhtion of physical endurance. Also, he states that he was “traveling through the high desert of California in June” this weather is very hot and dry, therefor causing him to quickly run low on water. And, because he was in the desert, there was no sign of towns or people or salvation of any type. These conditions made it hard on the biker because he knew if he dropped from dehydration, no one would be around to save him. In conclution, these hard conditions challenged the bike a great deal.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12312,5,"The @CAPS1 is trying to make the reader understand Narciso Rodriguez feelings by describing how little Narciso had grown up with and how hard it must have been for him to live in that type of enviroment and home. for example ""In 1961 i was born into this simple house, situated two-family, blond brick building in the Ironbound section of Newark, New Jersey."" This quote @CAPS4 how even from his early days being as a child Narciso was still living in poor enviroments and did not have much at all. The @CAPS1 @CAPS4 the unhappiness in the Rodriguez family and how they are struggling to make everything better @CAPS2 the end of the memior the @CAPS1 @CAPS4 the happiness and how proud the family is because they are now doing a lot better then they were before. for example ""I will never forget how my parents turned a house into a home"". Again this grate @CAPS4 how proud they are to be living in a much better place and enviroment, And had to struggle to get where they are now",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15026,6,"When the builders of the Empire State Building were attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there, they had great intentions but faced some obstacles along the way. This job was not an easy thing to accomplish, it's not as simple as it might sound. If the builders added a thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, it would add stress to the buildings frame. All of the stress would be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation, so they would have to modify and strengthen the steel. This would cost over @MONEY1, and thats a lot. The greatest obstacle was nature itself, the wind up at the top was constantly shifting. This wouldn't be safe either. There was also a law against airships driving too low and this would enable them from being able to dock. Also since other dirigibles from other countries used hydrogen instead of helium, it could easily cause a fire. The main obsticle for the builders was saftey when they were building this, there were many unsafe outcomes so it was too risky to construct.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 255,1,"Dear Newspaper editor, Computers have been a great advancement in technology, but some people think otherwise. It is a great thing to have some people say but others think it is a hazard to health. I think it is an excellent thing to have. I have come up with @NUM1 reasons to support my opinion. Computers help you keep in touch with distant friends and/or family, they assist you in research, and they even let you do shopping. Firstly, if you have any relatives or friends that live far away computers have websites such as aol or facebook & myspace that you can use to keep in touch with them. Most of them are free to create an account so you don't need to worry about monthly bills for them. So this is a lot better than driving and paying gas for visiting. Computers even have webcams for video chat. With video chat you can see each other & talk at the same time, thats amazing. Secondly, you can search the web for research. If you have a project and you need more information than books give you then just use google or ask.com. You can easily find the details and information you need. All this takes is just a couple minutes, which is alot better than reading for an hour or time. Lastly, if you really want something or need it just shop online. For example if you are a really cool toy that you want to buy for your daughter or son, but its not for sale in stores then buy it off the internet. They even ship your item fast. I like buying off the internet. When I really wanted a bike I saw my mom end up getting it for my birthday. In conclusion, computers are very handy. If you need information, talk to someone, or buy something its got it. I use computers a lot. I think they are very great to have.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4033,2,"As @CAPS1, we are entitled to both freedom of speech and freedom of the press. However, these rights are somewhat suppressed in the censorship of media at libraries. I can understand why libraries feel that they need to ban certain works; there are many children that frequent libraries, and having explicit content could deter parents from allowing them to visit. Surely, though, the media in question could be placed in a seperate area, off-limits to anyone under a certain age. Even if someone gets their hands on one of these works, safeguards could be used at the front desk to keep them from borrowing the material. Their library card would show their age, and the worker would not allow them to check out the work if they were too young. Furthermore, I trust in people's common sense. If they believe that a book or movie will be too adult for them, they will avoid checking it out of the library. Parents, as well, will surely not allow their children to borrow risque material. Information is open to those that search for it, and the knowledge it brings prevents unwanted results. There are those that want this content banned because it does not conform to their morals, but this is really just setting restrictions on other's freedoms. They @MONTH1 think it is too explicit, but another @MONTH1 not. That other person might want to use the material, but because of restrictions set by the first person, the borrowing of the work becomes prohibited. It seems that if the first doesn't agree with the material, they could just let it be, and not bring others into the dispute. People know their limits and generally make sure they don't cross them. I think this conflict represents the @CAPS2 way of life in itself. When a disagreement arises, no matter what the topic, one group of people wants to basically control what everyone else can or cannot do. They organize protests, sign petitions, etc. True, people do protest laws, and with good reason. However, there really is no need to argue over petty issues that could easily be avoided if people were to just use common sense to reach a consensus. I think this censorship issue is a prime example of that. When it comes to these kinds of debates, we need to learn that we can't be too quick to place restrictions; that we should leave others to do what they think is best for themselves. The best course of action is to leave others alone concerning simple things such as this, and to avoid placing any restrictions on anyone's works, rights, and freedom. To paraphrase @ORGANIZATION1, I @MONTH1 not agree with what you say, but I will fight to the death your right to say it.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9801,4,"There are many reasons this paragraph is included. It shows the flower will emotionally encourage her when it is budding, because it will remind her of home. This is shown when she says “a blossom of two would have blown into the well” It reminds her of her homeland. It also is to show she is adapting to her new home. when the geese flew by she said”she realized that many things that she thought of as strange before had become, almost familiar to her now.” This shows how she is adapting and is now enjoying her new life. This final paragraph is important because it shows how her life is changing.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9758,4,"Saeng buys a winter hibiscus to plant in the garden and to remind her of her homeland. She has failed some sort of test and is upset over it. Her mother feels bad for her so she doesn’t get upset that the hibiscus cost @MONEY1. After planting the hibiscus Saeng says to herself, ….In the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, I will take that test again. The author uses this paragraph to make you think about whether or not Saeng will fail or pass the test again. It also makes you wonder about what kind of test since the author says “hibiscus is budding”, and “the geese return”, It must be a test that you can only take once a year. because she says that “In the spring"" she will take the test again.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13021,5,"The mood created by the author in this memoir is love, happiness, and self lessness. The of the memoir that emphasized the mood of love was when the author mentioned that, ""It was here where I learned the true defonition of family. I will never forget that house or its gracious neighbor hood or the many things I learned there about how to love."" The mood for that exerpt was love because it explains how much he cared for his family and neighbors. There were many exerpts in this memoir that gave the mood selfless ness, As such, ""They came self lessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends, and careers, in the country they love."" This indacates selflessness by explaining how they left behind their jobs, family, and friends, all to give their children what was best for them. The overall mood of the story was happy because it explained their happiness, struggle, courage, good outcome, and beloved memories.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10574,4,"The author includes this in the paragraph to simply be sarcastic for you to know that it is almost impossible for Saeng to take the test afresh. I say this because she was being very sarcastic meaning she’s not going to take the test. For example, if someone were to tell me take a test and I said whenever @LOCATION1 is president again, then I’ll take the test. That would be very sarcastic meaning that it wont happen and I’m not taking the test, instead of just saying No. The author included that just to let you know that the chances of her taking the test is very low. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13499,5,"Based on the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from Home: The Blueprints of our Lives by: Narciso Rodriguez, @CAPS1 designer. The mood created by the author in memoir is happy. You can tell that the mood is happy because throughout the memoir the author tells about all the good times that they had in their house in Newark, New Jersey. The author tells about how her family would always come over to her house and have dinner there. He/@CAPS2 also tells about how their was always cuban music and cuban food. They used to have fun at that house. That's how you can tell that the mood is happy.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4671,2,"I think that certain things in libraries should be taken off shelves if found offensive but not all. One of these things is anything that undermines or degrades one's religious beliefs. Another thing could be anything involving racial stereotypes or obvious racial comments. Having anything containing this could spark conflict within or outside of the library. Another thing that could be, but not entirely, removed from library material could be books that express violent or criminal acts. This type of material should only be given to an older audience. I think that anything that contains slander or judgement on another person's religious beliefs should be removed from library shelves. As time goes on people are taking religion more and more serious. With that being said I don't think anyone would want to read a book or watch a movie in which the things they believe in being made fun of or rejected. It @MONTH1 not seem like harmful material at first glance, but your opinion @MONTH1 change when your customers come back angry and frustrated about what they read and saw. It would be a better choice to avoid this conflict with your customers and keep this material out of your library, unless you want to deal with complaints and costant arguments. Another thing that needs to be removed is racial material. Racism has been one the worlds largest problems, it affects us all no matter who it's against. Picture a book in your library that calls all black teens a problem or a book that says all arabians dangerous, racist isn't it? Now imagine if your customers were of one of those two ethnicities, it's not a good picture at all. Keeping these stereotypes and harmful sayings off library shelves is a great business choice and will keep all customers happy. The last thing we want is for a customer to say 'those people are racist!'. Lastly I think books that express violent and criminal acts should be censored from minors. Kids always follow what they hear or what they see. Since they're still in that stage where they rarely do things in their own way they @MONTH1 mimic or copy things they see. Another problem that surrounds this is peer pressure which will get more and more children commiting these acts. If this is to happen many parents will become outraged and blame the libraries for relaeasing this material to children. So the best choice would be to keep this material away from minors, if it is contained within your library",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12102,5,"The mood that the author created in the memoir was grateful and happy for what he had. The author values relationships and he is grateful to have his "" family"". He says, ""Growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relative. Quite the contrary, our neighborhood was made up of mostly spanish, cuban, and Italian immigrants at a time when overt racism was the norm and segregation prevailed in the @LOCATION1"" In other words he is saying that he is lucky to have what he has, a ""family"". Being lucky for what you have also is a synonym for grateful, meaning that the mood of this memoir was grateful. He also said that his family kept an open door and open arms, showing that they would give some of what they had to other people, showing that they knew that others had less, and that they were grateful for what they had. Mood, means tone or a feeling, so the mood of this was grateful and happy.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9503,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because Saeng is given a small glimmer of hope by the winter hibiscus. The hibiscus reminds her of her homeland, Vietnam, which pleases her. Also, the fact that the hibiscus she purchases can survive winter, unlike the hibiscus of her homeland, symbolizes Saeng’s determination to adapt to her new country. The future of the hibiscus symbolizes Saeng’s survival and adaptation to her new country, which will include her retaking her driving test.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7201,3,The setting effected the cyclist severly. Biking in the desert following outdated directions nearly got him killed. He also came across several broken down factories and towns causing more dismay. However he came across a last stop that saved his life.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3808,2,"I do not believe that books that are considered offensive should be removed from public libraries. I could understand if it was school libraries that were in question, because of the fact that some of the materials that these extremely explicit books contain is not for a child to be reading. I feel as if these certain materials can be helpful to seeeing other peoples point of views on certain subjects. Though books this material can be called offensive, to certain people this is there culture and how they live. What would happen if every book that was considered offinsive was actually removed for book shelves? Some of the most interesting books that I have ever picked up have been controversial. The eye-opening world of these books is amazing. The fact that I can read about other peoples life, and their everyday struggle is astounding to me. If we all made a huge decision based off of one persons opinion, then our world would be a mess. Therefore, if all of these 'offensive' books were to be removed, then what is left to read. I want to read something that is going to grab my attention, and make me want to keep reading. I do not think that i would have that type of experience if these books were removed.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 139,1,"Dear, @ORGANIZATION1, I think computers do have a positive affect on people but I don't think because of computers is the reason people don't exercise or enjoy nature. People make their own choices in life. The computer is just there. If somebody chooses to be on the computer instead of spending time with their family well thats their choice and problem not the computers. Me for example I love working and playing on the computer. Even though I'm on the computer I still do things like talk to my family, I play basketball, and I chill with my homies. Now thats my choice to do all of that. I can easily just sit up in my room and be on the computer all the time. It's nothing wrong with doing that because that is my choice in life. Nobody should be able to tell you to get off the computer because that is your choice in life. If you want to be on the computer instead of going outside thats your choice. Only you know what is best for you.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9358,4,"The author concludes the story with this ending paragraph because. It combine the two inpefect situations. When she said when they come back Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring when the snow melt and the gese return and this hibiscus is budding then I will take test again. She will prove her point and abbreviated the situation.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4711,2,"Censorship in the @CAPS1 @CAPS2, what is offensive to some @MONTH1 not be to others. So how do we know when expressing ourselves in an artistic manner that we've gone to far? We don't and thats why censorship is such a controversial topic. In the music industry recently there has been messages in songs and music videos that aren't the best suited for teenagers. Being a teenager is a time of constant turmoil in one's life, you are required to make decisions that will define you as a person. When songs out there are about drug use and other crimes teens see them as cool things and follow along cause they see them as everyday activities that can do no harm but little do they know that they are wrecking their life by doing this, so I somewhat agree with censorship in that kind of thing. In literature and art things take a more serious tone than in music and other media. With literature it's about conveying ones thoughts and feelings about a story or other subject. In art you express yourself vissually on a canvas or abstractly through other materials and forms, but in both ways you express your feelings and emotins. So censoring these would in turn censor one voice and emotions. When you take away a man's voice and emotions you are left with an empty shell of a person who will never know life to the fullest. As time has changed I have found that people have also changed. When @PERSON1 uses the '@CAPS3-word' in some of his literary works it didn't offend people at the time, but now times have changed. Now it's not ok that @PERSON1 used this word but on the other hand it's ok for rappers and others to say it every other word in their music. so how do we know what's offensive and what's not? well it's all from the reader, listener, or viewer's point of view. These days parents try to sheild their children from the outside world and make it seem that it's all rainbows and butterflies by censoring things the children might be subject to read, hear, or see in their day to day lives. This does not solve the problems in the world there will always be war, crime, and death no matter how hard we try to stop it as long as there's 'good' there will always be 'bad'. All loyalties aside in my honest opinion I believe censorship in the @CAPS1 is a bad idea and will never work to solve actual problems with the world. It will just cover them up just like the dialouge or image they so badly want to go away.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12458,5,"The auther creates a very comfortable and happy mood. In the text, it says, ""within it's walls, my young parents parents created our traditional cuban home, the very heart of which was the kitchen."" This suggests that many of the good memories Narciso had were in his kitchen. The text also says, ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family..."" This suggests that Narciso's parents were very caring people, and gave their home a very friendly and welcoming feel. Overall, the author describes the home of Narciso and his family in a very joyful way.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16113,6,"In the excerpt called ""The Mooring Mast, by Marcia Amidon Lüsted on pages 1, @NUM1, @NUM2, @NUM3. She is basicly explainning the obstacles of the builders of the Empire State Building and how it faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. Examples are on page 1. ""They said that the empire State Building would be more than ornamental, more than a spire or dome or a pyramid put there to add a desired few feet to the height of the building or to mask something as mundane as a water tank.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6672,3,"Varias faetures of the setting affect the journey and mooble if the cyclist in the text. The first feature of the setting that affect the cyclist is the desert. He is “traveling through the high deserts of California in June” , and this is making him really thirsty. “[He] had been hitting [his] water bottles pretty regularly “because of this. He later runs out of water, and becomes hopeless. He becomes hopelee because there is no building or establishments anywere in sight. Therefore no water and there isn’t a place to get any water. Another feature of the setting that affects him is the people that gave him directions. They told him abait a shoutcut, and he listened. This through everything off, and he was left with despair. Another feature is the Gary and Wilber’s fish camp.This lead him to sicocss of finding water. This affected his mood because he had hope again. In conlusio, many of the features of the setting affected his mood in many ways.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10429,4,"In the story “Winter Hibiscus” by Minfong Ho, the author concludes the paragraph in that way to convey the determination and new found motivation Saeng found by buying the familiar plant. Although she failed her test, finding a plant that reminded her of her home and her grandmother instilled motivation in her to try the test again, she wanted to make her new home in a new country workout for the better, no matter what. “She lifted her head and watched as their distinctive u was etched against the evening sky ...” the author included details about the geese to represent moving on. The geese will go, and come back, just like Saeng. She failed the test the first time, but getting the plant and seeing the birds motivated her to try again. “Almost reluctantly she realized that many of the things that she thought of as strange before had become ...familiar to her.” The geese were one of the things mentioned that has become very familiar to her, in her new home. Concluding the stay with a bit about the geese conveys to the reader that she is slowly but surely learning how to adapt to her strange new home. Finding the plant helped her, because it was already familiar to her. “Saeng felt a shock of recognition so intense, it was almost visceral. ‘@CAPS1, Saeng said.’ “After failing her driver’s test, walking into the florist’s shop and finding that plant comforted her. It made this new place feel closer to home than it did at first. The geese had become familiar over time, and finding the plant was simply comforting. Concluding the story that way showed the reader that she was adapting and learning to deal with a tough situation in a comforting way. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3124,2,"Have you ever been offended by a movie, book, song, or magazine? Did you have a choice on whether or not you watched and/or read the item? The question that seems to be of intrest to people is should these items that are offensive be taken off the shelves. I don't think they should. I am sure that you could ask anyone if they have ever been offended by a movie, book, or magazine and all of them could give an example. I doubt they ever watched the movie again and if they did it obviously wasn't that bad. If something offends you, don't read or watch it. If you don't want your kids watching something, don't let them. You can make that desicion. No one is making you watch or read any of that. I know I have watched a movie or two that I probably shouldn't have. I've even read some books that are not the best, but I choose to read them. No one forced the act on me. Some of you @MONTH1 ask, '@CAPS1 about at school?' If a teacher assigns a book to read and your child does not feel comfortable with it, then take it up with the teacher. They will be more than understanding and possibly give your child a different book. They might even explain why he or she is having the class read the book and why the children need to be exposed to this type of literature. There are always going to be offensive books and movies out there. If you take out all the books in a library that has offended someone at one point in time, you probably wouldn't have much of a library left. The shelves would be bare. You have a choice to read or watch something. If it is offensive don't watch it. Everyone has different views on that book or movie. It @MONTH1 be offensive to you, but to the next person it might be a really good show. I don't think offensive books, magazines, music, or movies should be taken off the shelves.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1250,1,"Dear The @CAPS1 newspaper, @CAPS2 in front of a @CAPS3 @CAPS1 after @CAPS1. Oh, how much you want to just relax in the natural free air, but with all the advances in technology you feel it's your job to always be updated. I believe that advances in technology have had a negative affect on people. People aren't exercising interacting with family and friends in person, or having the ability to enjoy nature. Exercising means getting your hear to pound, your body to sweat and me because of endorprimes that ultimately make you feel better. @CAPS2 in front of a @CAPS3 all @CAPS1 does not support you with the natural urge to exercise. People who support advances in technology say, ""@CAPS3 are able to teach you hand-eye coordination."" @CAPS4, coordination is important but your body as a whole should also be put with account as well @PERSON1, voted # @NUM1 cardiologist in world says, ""more and more people are suffering from heart disease & attacks every year!"" be goes on to say, ""many links have been theorized to this on going problem, But none seem to up as well as my theory. I believe peoples lives have been overcome by technology. More and more cases have samt to the people being addicted to their computers. Its unbelieveable but, @CAPS5 individuals have a @PERCENT2 higher chance of developing heart disease!! There are many healthier things you can absorp yourself in. Like tennis for example In tennis you have to develop hand-eye coordination in order to hit the ball. Correctly. Tennis also increase your heart rate & burn fat cells, to help you lose weight. Statistics show that @NUM2 out of @NUM3 people say tennis have actually made them more confident. This is because when people are able to have the determination to lose weight and head healthier , they feel they can can over the world. Isn't this the attitude everyone needs? Nature is all over and helps us are even if @CAPS4 don't notice. Like trees, they take in @NUM4) and release oxygen. Oxygen is key to life. Trees also are home to many living organisms. Like the saumel woodpecker or even owl. They all rely on trees to survive. But, if you are on the @CAPS3 @NUM5' hours a @CAPS1 @DATE1 you @MONTH1 not realize the nature and . Nature is a beautiful thing that over @PERCENT3 of peoploe say they enjoy relaxing outside, listening to birds singing morningsongs or a dear minding their own business feeding with their young watching. But, advances in technology also ruin this time belance of nature. Technology needs a power source, google, for example states to the press that,"" our business surely enjoys nature but needs to also run their corporation"". They go on to say.""we get our energy from oil and coal"" @CAPS5 according, to scientists like boy say that , oil primary source for big corporations. It is for but they don't keep in mind the fact over a million each year because . And ! that deplleats me protection we get from our ozone layer. Speeding the development of climate change. ""without advances in technology we @MONTH1 have a better and safer earth generations to come. Oh sure, says sue sarcastically. But since you texting her you don't know what and ask out her . If not for advances in technology people could make me right decisions. @PERCENT4 of texters say they have miss interpreted others texts. this means bad decisions all accross the world. @PERCENT1 also say have particifated in same of sexting like ther sending peictures a language. Underage children are participating in illegal activity because of advances in technology chief crimes head of the police department in @ORGANIZATION1 says that ever since the invention of the cell phone with the ability to send pictures & text he has need @NUM6 more cases on child pornography. @PERCENT5 of @CAPS5 people are under the age of without me advances of technology for cellphones this wouldn't even be possible for minors. Advances in cellular device has also kept families farmer & farmer apart. @PERCENT6 of parents sya that their children have had me some appreciation & lease that they had before they recieved cell phones. And @PERCENT1 of kids wine have cell phones say they don't think they need their family interaction anymore. Do you believe this is the message to be school to future generations? I thank you for reading this article and I hope you are now experiencing the other side of the debate children need to interact with their families more, enjoy nature and start exercising. This is impossible to do with the advances of technologe.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10172,4,The author concludes the story with this to show that saeng won’t give up. It is possible to adapt and try to love whats around you. Saeng struggled to get out “I-I failed the test” and couldn’t say “at home” this shows her insecurity and lonleiness for the new world around her and by saying she will try again in the spring gives the reader hope that she will adapt and love her surroundings. She goes through an expirence today that old life and comparing it to the one she is living in now they have some simalarities and because she will try again in the spring means she has decided to go to give a new place a chance.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 16289,6,The obstacals he had was that the problems where never really solved and that had caused problems with the wind.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4534,2,"Have you ever just read a book or a magazine that you just despised and thought that if that book was taken off of the shelf then it would save many people from a waste of time? Or have you ever read a book or heard a song that was not offensive to you, but to other people it might be offensive to their race or gender? A lot of people run into this problem and personally, I have ran into that problem, but that doesn't mean it needs to be taken off of the shelf. If everybody in the world goes to a library and grabs one book off of their own local library shelf to go and throw away, just one, that they absolutely despise because of their own personal reason or just because they didn't like it, there would barely be any books left! If somebody has a problem with the material in a book, magazine, or song, then don't read it or listen to it. Other people @MONTH1 like reading about that topic, or like that kind of music. I understand that some books @MONTH1 be offensive to some people, but do not read it if you take it to offense. Books about slavery @MONTH1 be offensive to some people, but that is history and some people might like learning about that subject, or @MONTH1 even need that information for a research project. There are also many books on the @CAPS1, some people @MONTH1 find that offensive, or @MONTH1 not want their kids reading about that, but that is history. It's a time period in the past and it @MONTH1 be something a high school student is doing a research paper over. I have done a research paper over the @CAPS1 and I have read some very mature material that younger kids @MONTH1 not need to learn about right now, but I would not suggest to take every book over the @CAPS1 off of the shelves at our local library. There are many different reasons for reading a book and if you want to read a book for enjoyment and you end up reading one that you find offensive, then choose a different topic to read about because some people @MONTH1 like reading about that topic. Just because a person doesn't like a book or the topic the book covers does not give anyone the right to take the book off of the shelf because they feel that it is sending a bad message to younger kids or might be offending to some people. If people do not want their kids reading about that topic then tell them when they go to check a book out at the library not to get a book over that topic. If it becomes too big of a deal to where people begin to find a lot of books that offend them or other people, then suggest for the library to have a list of the books and their topics. Each library could be required to have a list of books, and have the suggested age of the readers beside it, or there could be different sections of the library. One section for kids, one section for teenagers, one section for adults, and one section for middle aged people. Also, if it absolutely needs to happen, each library can have computers to where you can look up the book and see what that book is about. This will give you an idea of what the book is about before you read it so if there is a certain topic that offends you then you can go ahead and find another book and find out what that one is about. This would help many people not read books that offend them and it would help them find a book that is more suitable for what they want to read about. Songs are a whole other subject. An artist or songwriter will write, rap, and sing songs about what they want. If people find the profanity in the song offensive, then do not listen to it. There is no way that you can tell a song writer not to sing or rap about what they want, and stores are going to sell albums that give them business. If people do not want their kids around that kind of language or message that the song is giving off then they can just tell their kids not to listen to it, because artists are going to write songs, rap songs, and sing songs about what is going to make them money, and that is just a fact.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12057,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives, the mood created by the author in the memoir is together the family is organized. My parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their rich culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today"" the parents really are together thing how to organized the family. That is the mood that is created by the author in the memoir.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10366,4,"The auther concludes the story with this paragraph for a few reasons. first, The test is important to Saeng so that she can prove to herself that she is able to pass it. Ending with this paragraph also gives the reader some suspense as to wheather Saeng will pass or even go to take the test again. Lastly, this paragraph shows Saeng’s personality traits. It shows that she is persistent, determined, and strong willed.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1781,1,"Mom!!! Did you know that the human body has only one liver!!!, @CAPS1 I didn't where did you find out, on the computer. I recently heard that some experts are concerned that people are spending too much time on their computers and less time exercising, and enjoying nature. I dont think that they should be concerned because the computer leave's people with an open mind and teach people new thing. So the computer does a lot for people, give's them the chance to learn new thing, a chance to chat with friends far away, and also expand your mind of travel. Computers can do a lot for a person's life of know'lleage. Just yesterday I found out that the human body can not survive without its liver. The computer also helped me with my strugle's in math, even though that's what the teacher is for she is not always their, like when I am home or away on vacation and I just want to remember so thing's in math. Its also help's people who want to know new launage's such as @CAPS2, @CAPS3, and @CAPS4. So you see a computer has a big affect on a person's life. Two days ago I did a video chat with my grandparents back in @LOCATION2 it was great. After six year's not seeing my grandparents they really changed, and I was starting to forget what they looked like. I never knew that a computer could do a video chat from so far away I was surprised. I dont know why you experts are so concerned about computer taking away people's live's look what it has done for my family. I know that if one of you experts family member went away for a long time you would miss them and want to talk. Some people's love to video chat like people in the army because they get the chance to see their love one's. A two-way ticket to @LOCATION3, To see all those beautiful sight's and taste their wonderful food's look at that waterfall where is that, In @LOCATION4, @LOCATION1 now I have to go their. The computer has shone me places that I have neve sene before. The computer is a wonderful thing. So dont be concerned about us and what we do on the computer. In conclusion dont listen to the experts they dont know what their talking about, for all we know they use the computer more than we do. The compute can touch you new thing, give you the chance to chat with family and friends far away, and open your mind on travel. The computer is not a bad thing all it's doing is making life a little better step by step.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 14890,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced some obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles dock there. Some of these obstacles had easy solutions, but some of them were really hard to solve.One obstacle they had was the dirigible on top of the building being hold by a cable tether only would cause stress to the building's frame. In order to solve this problem they needed to make modifications that would cost around six thousand dollars. This wasn't the only problem, there was a law that prohibited airships flying too low over urban areas. This law made it illegal to get close to this area or even try to get tie up to the building. Adding to this, the most difficult obstacle the architects faced was nature, and this problem was hard to solve and also hard to control.All this obstacles they faced lead them to give up for now & wait to see if later with more technology the could finally make this dream come true.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12104,5,"In this memoir the author creats a mood of grattitude. To support a claim like this I will provide evidence. It says in the article that ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice. This clearly shows how the author is trying to creat a mood of gratitude. His gratitude is being showed towards his parents. Also it says that They came selflessly as many immigrants do to give there children a better life. This shows how the family leaves there comfort to a troublesome life for there children, thus making the children very greatful. The mood created by the author is gratefullness and is shown throw out the whole memoir.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 14838,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The first obstacle they faced was the existing law against airships flying too low in urban areas. This made it illegal for the dirigible to tie up on the building. Another obstacle faced in allowing dirigibles to dock was safety. Most dirigibles used hydrogen which was highly flammable. If a dirigible caught fire over the densely populated area of New York, there would be a good chance that many people would be hurt. A final obstacle faced was ""nature itself."" The winds on the top of the Empire State building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. Even though a dirigible would be attached to the mooring mast, the back of it would move around the mooring mast in a dangerous way. Many obstacles were faced by the workers of the Empire State Building in order to allow a dirigible to dock there.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3395,2,"The Author should be the judge on whether or not they want there book censored. I believe that libraries shouldnt have to take out books with offensive language. If the author likes how it was originally made, then thats how they would like to present it. It would be taking away a Right in the @CAPS1. If you were to write a book and somebody says you cant put a certain word. That isnt up to the public to make a decision. Its almost like rewriting history. It would be like having someone take out a word in the @ORGANIZATION1. If any word is changed it is a incorrect @ORGANIZATION1. It just changes the entire subject. You cannot reword whats been written. Public views are starting to take over the world. Instead of letting the facts be the facts people want to adjust things so it is less offensive. Next thing you know there will be a replaced word for slavery. Slavery is a strong, bold word that represents a horrible thing. If somebody switched that word it could lead to it happening again. I say with all my heart that people need to respect what has been written and leave it that way or dont read it",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9436,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because it provides closure to both Saeng and the story. Saeng was upset about the fact that she failed her test, but towards the end of the story she realizes that things happen, and sometimes we have no control over what happens, but you’ve also got to pick yourself up again if what happens, knocks you down. When seeing the geese and the hibiscus, she realizes that everyone and everything has to adapt to something new all the time. Saeng might have failed her driving test because they drive differently in Vietnam, so she will have to adopt to the way we drive here, along with all our rule and laws. This is why the author concludes the paragraph in that way.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10321,4,"I think the author concluded the story with this statement because to me it sounds like it’s going to be a new start for her-self in the spring. She talks abouts how when the hibiscus starts budding, the snows, is gone and its spring that when she’ll retake the test. To me it seems like when the hibiscus “comes back to life’’. Its having like a second chance and she desrves one also. When its bright out again and things start looking out again and things starts looking good she’ll feel good about taking the test over again. How she ended it to me was good. You just have to read into it and try to understand what she is actually saying. So practically she’s stating once everything “come back to life” then she’ll feel like she will pass it next time. Now she can be prepared.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9706,4,Thes basically say that he will be around again just like the geese always come back.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9509,4,"They author must have put this in the story to show change. For all giving things is we give we do e them we replemise the author. People dont think about the small damages, there nuste comrade with the big changes. The small ones count the turnig sioteero & I have to bind as for. On top of that the old anges to drive. We all go through harsh big & small, but we need to over come them all",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7221,3,"The setting sffects the cyclist by the need and comfort of riding down with no infrastructure around or people that most be the best mood nice and colun no cars and just him and the beautiful sky to ride with, like if there is infrastructure he must have to watch for people, cars and just have to day to streetsigns and act. So thats outing the feature of the setting would affect the cyclsit.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12505,5,"In the memoir, ""Narciso Rodriguez"" the author does a great job creating the mood. One example of how the author creates the mood is, when the author says ""my parents created our traditional Cuban home, the very heart of which was the kitchen."" That creates a mood of happiness and love. That's because the author shows it by saying created our traditional Cuban home. Making the family feel back at home made them feel happy. Also the author makes the mood of the passage ""My parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their rich culinary skills and love of cooking that is still with me today. The author creates the mood as happy and gratefulness. The author shows it by saying love of cooking. Also by saying which is still with me today and I am grateful. Also in this memoir the mood is shown by gratefulness by the line, I will always be grateful to my parents. Lastly, the author creates a mood bravery and caring. It says ""my mother and father had come to this country with such courage."" That line shows they were brave and willing to try something new, they cared for their child. That is how the mood is created by the author.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9725,4,The author puts that excerpt into the text to show the reader that she had made a mistake an will fix it in the future. I believe the other put it in for that reason because in the text Saeng began to cry when she admitted to her mother that she failed the test. This shows that she was really upset by the fact she failed an hopes to improve in the near future. Another reason why I believe ‘the author concludes the story like this is to lead the reader on to believe Saeng is going to get over beign home sick.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 11849,5,"The mood created by the author of the memoir is cozy and family oriented. From the very beginning, the author describes the home as more of a way of life than a physical space. The author's ""parents created our traditional Cuban home, part of which was the kitchen"" (@NUM1). Here, the home is described even more as a part of the family, less is a building. To enhance the feeling of family, the author includes stories of hospitality: ""My parents always kept their arms and their door to the many people he considered family"" (@NUM2). Hospitality is one of the best qualities you need to make a house a home and the author really stretches that. The mood created by the author of the memoir is cozy and family oriented.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3857,2,"I think that some material should be removed from the shelves if they are racist or contain unsightly images. But that brings up the question about racism almost all of the classic books have some form of racism in them such as To @CAPS1 a @CAPS2 @CAPS3 that book uses the @CAPS4 word to describe african americans, but when that book was published that was common talk now people look at you like you have just murdered there first born child if youu were to use that word. For the most part though books are not all that offensive at least none of the books I read. I know that there are books and magazines such as playboy and maxim that are offensive to women and have probably cause a lot of breakups and divorces, but they have laws on who are able to buy things like that. I know that kids still have a way of owning magazines like that but they are a small percentage of the kids. I know that during @CAPS5 @CAPS6 @CAPS7 over in germany many books were banded because they had something to do with catholicism or something that @PERSON3 believed was bad and not what he believed was the perfect race. I know that for a short time alot of what @PERSON2 wrote was banned for using the @CAPS4 word but people have to realize that when @PERSON2 was alive that was everyday laungage. As for me being catholic there is a codex of forbidden books that is a list of books that I am not supposed to read as a good catholic. I have no idea what those books are and what got them on this list but they must be very rude and vulgar to be on this list. I can see how some of those books could be banned. As for music I think that the only music that should be banned is the kind of music that talks about killing police officers and hurting the people that are trying to make our country a safer place. I know that all of this rap genre is what my generation is into even though I dont see why kids like that kind of music. I also think that music produced by the arian brotherhood should not be allowed in libraries because there music is overtly racist. I dont think that movies shouyld be banned form the libraries because of violence or anytning of that nature. I do think that the movie should be banned if it contians anything of the nature of pornagraphy but they do not let those kinds of movie in the libraries anyway so they are a step ahead of me. I do have to agree with Katherine Paterson on what she said that if I have those rights then everyone else does to and there will be no books on the shelves because someone will find that offensive then someone else will find something else offensive and soon eventually there will be no books left on the library shelves. My view of what I think is offensive is very relaxed compared to other's I do not get offended at a lot of things",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9269,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph in order to end the story on an optimistic note. Saeng’s problem is her “wave of loss” that sweeps over her during her memories of her home country. This entire story deals with Saeng’s depressing struggle with finding joy in her life in a new, unfamiliar and seemingly unwelcoming country. This feeling of loss and loneliness is magnified by the test then Saeng failed. After a story of such depression, the author shows @CAPS1 newly found confidence and optimism by ending the story with this paragraph.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7663,3,"In “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit”, the author faces many obstacles because of the different terrain changes on his journey to Yosemite National Park. Taking advice from a group of old men, he headed to his first stop. The old men said he would see a town but what he really saw was a sort of ruined ""ghost"" town. Then he came to a fork in the road and was running out of water. He had been riding on flat road when the terrain dramatically changed. It became hilly and very inconsistent. This sudden change in terrain caused him to get more tired, thirsty, and hot. The cyclist then came to a huge hill and, using his last bit of energy, rode down. He was exhausted. All the terrain changes not only changed the cyclist’s physical state, but his mood and determination as well. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 19,1,I aegre waf the evansmant ov tnachnolage. The evansmant ov tnachnolige is being to halp fined a kohar froi alnsas. Tnanchnolage waf ont ot we wod not go to the moon. Tnachnologe evans as we maech at. The people are in tnacholege to the frchr fror the good ov live. Famas invanyor ues tnacholage leki lena orde dvanse and his fling mashine. Tnachologe is the grat,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3482,2,"All libraries have books for all readers no matter the age. The books on the shelf are arranged or should be arranged in alphabetical order with the last name of the author first. I think that some, but not all, reading materials such as books, music, mvies, should be removed due to some of the graphics in each reading material. Every bookshelf should be arranged by age difference and spread apart from the other books and or bookshelfs. If a child would be in the appropriate isle for there age styled books, less children would pick up the wrong book. If children would understand to listen and follow dircections on where to find there specific age appropriate books, less accidents of children taking the wrong book from the bookshelf would occur. If children would take the wrong age appropriate book off the bookshelf, I would think that their parent(s) would be responsible and take it back and get the right book for their child(s). If parents would be responsible for taking action, their child should understand that they are taking the wrong book from the bookshelf. Wouldn't children understand that if their parent has to take the wrong book back, that they would learn not to do it again? I think that some, but not all, reading materials such as books, music, movies, and magazines should be removed due to some of the graphical features in each reading material. The books on each bookshelf are or should be arranged in alphabetical order with the last name of the author first. All libraries have books for all readers no matter the age.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10102,4,"The author concludes the story of the paragraph because, the author would like to finish the last sentence of the story. Also at the last of the paragraph is when she is visualizing and putting her effort to the hibiscus. Therefore, her thoughts are appreciated to the plant. The author wanted more evidence to the story. For example, when it said, in the spring, when the snow melt and the geese ruturn and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again. It includes the winter time for the plant. Also, the @DATE2 and spring the plant comes back, which the character saeng will get it back, and visit it.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 404,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, The effects computers have on people as posotive I say that it is posotive because what if your in a rush, and you don't know if you need your rain boots or not? Check the computer! I say that it is posotive because without the computer how would most offices run their buisness? It's too much of a pain to keep everything on files. Especially in schools because the teachers don't keep their grades for students in a filing cabinet! They keep them on the computer, @CAPS1 they'd need a huge filing cabinet. I could understand why some peole think computers have a bad effect on people. They might think that it takes away time from nature, friends and family. But so many people take their laptops to the local park to sit under a tree on warm days and go on the computer there. Especially students do this, they do their homework under the leaves to help them relax. Also, people whose family or friends live in other states, they @MONTH1 not have the house number, or they don't have time for a long conversation, they can e-mail them, or use social networking like facebook, or myspace to look on their profile pages and say a quck, ""@CAPS2, how are you doing?"" Local shop owner @PERSON1 says, ""I barely have time for myself! So when I want to say @CAPS2 to my sister in @LOCATION1, I usually say hello on facebook because I know how she loves to talk my ear off!"" I remember one morning, when I was rushing before school, I had no idea what type of outfit to wear. I checked the local news casting website for the weather forecast and thank god I did! I would have gotten stock in downpour without an umbrella! Computers are also good for if you want to catch up on any news, or just relax and play some games you can. So, if your wondering about the weather to see if today will be a good day to sit under the trees in the park & catch up on typing that report with your partner, then go ahead. But don't forget to e-mail her and ask her first, since you lost her phone number.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 10027,4,"I think that the author concludes the story with this paragraph because, it shows that if that type of flower could bloom in different places and go through natural changes than so can she. To me the flower is a symbol to the author that encourages her to keep trying. No matter if you have to start all over and doing it again. It’s just this time you will know and would have learned from the past mistakes. Just as a flower blooms one spring it dies in the winter and then comes again in the spring. That’s the same as Saeng failing that test that year she can go back next time and take it again. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 666,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @ORGANIZATION2, I believe that computers have a positive affect on people who use them. Because they teach hand eye coordination, give us the ability to learn about far away people and places and allow us to chat online with people. @CAPS3 first reason of why I think computers have a positive affect on people is that they teach hand eye coordination. For example, we need to use our hand-eye coordination skills when we type to @CAPS2 the letters. This helps us increase our Hand eye coordination because it helps us think about what letters we are typing, @CAPS2 the letters on the keyboard, and push them. Also when we type long passages it increase our hand eye coordination becaue we get used to wrighting the long paragraphs and we become more familiar with where the letters are on the keyboard and our speed increases,which means we can get more work done in a shorter time. Believe it or not @PERSON1 free of the @ORGANIZATION1 hospital took a survey that showed @NUM1 people who type essays instead of wrighting them by hand, have a greater hand eye coordination skill. Computers also allow us to learn about far away people and places. For example computers make it easier to reaserch far away people and places. Useing a computer can help us understand and learn about people and places withought a trip to the library. Also computers allow us to @CAPS2 us to @CAPS2 more info about recent events that have just around the world. Also computers make it faster to reserch topics because looking for a book in those big libraries can be stressfull, not to mention dificult. Also informat on a computer can never be checked out or not availible like library books. Lastly you have information right at our fingerries so you will never have to leave youre house, @CAPS3 last reason is that computers allwo us to chat online with other people. This can help us because it allows us to talk to friends and family from around the world. Also it helps us talk to our parents if theyre away or if you're on a camping trip. Chating on a computer is a great way to make friends with people you dont know and block people you dont want talking to you. So in a sence you can be in controll of your friendships and who youre friends with. Computers are the greatist advance in technology sence the wheel and they have helped so many people.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15651,6,"Based on the article ""The Mooring Mast"" written by @ORGANIZATION2, the Empire State Building faced many obstacles. There are three main reasons why the @CAPS1. S.B. was not used for the purpose it was constructed for. The point of the @CAPS1.S.B. was so that dirigibles can stop and refuel. Dirigibles is an old word for Blimps. The obstacle the @CAPS1.S.B. had to over come were modifications, nature, and the law. They had to pay @MONEY1 in modifications on the @CAPS1.S.B. for the framework. The second was nature, the winds would make the back of the Dirigibles move around, they wanted to put weights on the back of them but that was not safe. Last but not least the law, the dirigibles cant be as low as the @CAPS1.S.B. because its too low and they cant fly low over urban areas.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3819,2,"The author Katherine Paterson makes a very good point when she states that there are books on the shelf that poeple wish that there kids or even there on self did not read or that people wish they did not read. But if your were to take away ever book someone found offensive there would be hardly any books left in this world. There will always be one person that finds a book that they do not like because of tone the author uses or if they do not like what they call eachother. People all have there own mind sit to away that they want to live or how they want there kids to live. Having books taken off the shelf because people do not like them would result in having no more books on our shelves. I feel like if there books on the shelves about kids drinking then have bad effects on there life cause they did drink then maybe the kid reading it would stop drinking or not even try drinking. The books about getting raped and them not telling becasue they are afriad of what would happening. Then in the long run telling after they get pregant or injured from it. Them saying that they wish they would have told might help the kids that this happened to or this might happen to might help them feel so relief and tell someone and save themself. Books like these should not get taken off the shelf because one person does not like it, in the long run if they did take it off some could get hurt or not know what to do and it couls be all that one person that did not like it fault. How would you feel if you did that to someone. Maryrin @CAPS1 is a good Author that shows how something that you @MONTH1 think is good but truns out to be really bad. Her books focus a lot on how girls need to watch what they are doing to keep themselves safe. I have a friend that have parents that do not like the music on her ipod. So she had to take it off. Well with taking it off she made @CAPS2 of the songs that they did not like. She drives so they music is always playing on the radio while she drives so she can listen to the songs that she does not have on her ipod. That is just one example of how you will always get around listening to what you want to hear. Music will always be out there. There will always be songs that poeple do not like. Either due to there religion or even if they do not like the words used. But even if they stop putting songs on the radio there is still internet out there and people can just get there songs from there. There are songs out there that should not be out there but the more someone tries to push the songs out of the world and out of people listening to them the more some kids or even adults are going to try to listen to them. In the world today there are always a good and a bad song that is the same. Artics now always have a bad song that they would have to make into a good song. That is just how the songs go. That is just how they use there brains. No one can stop them. Not even the people that publish the songs and put then on the radio. In the long run of things the more people try to stop things from not being in this world the more people are going to try to get them. It is a very bad idea to take the books off of shelves and take music off of the radio. People need to hear what bad things can happen when you do not listen to someone. A kid @MONTH1 grow up knowing not to talk to people they do not know but never really understand what bad could come out of it. But when they read a book about a kid there age getting kidnapped they @MONTH1 understand more clearly on the whys in life. So if I can say so myself I think that it is a very bad idea for books to be taken off the shelf because one mother or two dads think that book is not good for thier little girl or there teenage son. They need to read it for themself and find out what really could happen if they did something like that. Keep the books on the self. Keep playing the some music. Let your kids or grandchildren find out the danger on there own rather then you just keep telling them. I am a teenage girl and I would rather read about it then having my parents tell me over and over agian. So keep the books on the shelves. That the radio play. Just be safe in doing it.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13198,5,"The mood the author created in the memoir was very happy and thankful. He grew up in a traditional Cuban home where his parents cooked and he was able to get a great sense of ""family"". Not just blood relatives but everyone who would do the same as them. There was no racism within their neighborhood. They all came togather Many people, and the for dinner everynight. His parents loved him and sacrificed a lot for him. His simple house was a home. These things created the happy and thankful mood",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7320,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist in the story “Rough Road Ahead” by Joe Kurmaskie. The downhill land format helped him in a way because he wouldn’t have to use strength and pedal as hard without having as much water in his body. When he came to a pump, it was rusty with tar oozing out followed by hot brackish water flavored like battery acid. The dryness of the dessert had a bad affect on the cyclist because he wasn’t able to get to the Yosemite water until the end. The breeze of the wind had a positive affect because it helped to cool him down. The features of the setting in the story “Rough Road Ahead” by Joe Kurmaskie affect the cyclist.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12415,5,"The author sets many moods for the reader in his memoir from Home: The Blueprints of our Lives. The first and most dominant mood is a sense of family or friendship. The author constantly describes how his family's generosity made his apartment into a friendly place with the constant coming and going of relatives, distant and close. Next the author installed a sense of warmth. The very idea of this family moving from cuba into this three room apartment for their son really gives any reader some sense of warmth. Finally the author gives us a Sense of culture. As early as paragraph @NUM1 the author writes...""My parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their rich culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today (and for which I am eternally grateful. Passionate Cuban music (which I still adore today) filled the air..."" In these ways, the author reaches out to his readers with the mood of friendship, warmth, and culture to give us a taste of his life with his adoring parents in this small three room house he called home.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6589,3,"The setting in the story was hot. The biker was sweating a lot. The whole town was empty. He pasted empty buildings. Their were rivers and big hills that he had to ride through. As it says about the buildings, “somehow, I climbed away from the abandoned factory of juices and dreams, slowly gaining elevation while losing hope.” The setting would affect the cyclist because their was no one in the town. Also, their was high hills.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 13575,5,"The author gave the memoir the feeling of happiness, gratefulness, and the feeling of family. The memoir makes you feel like you are at the kitchen table, listening to Cuban music.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12136,5,"The mood in this memior is Warmth and comforting.Narcis talks about how is family is still rich in cuture and open to anyone who needs a family.in paragraph @NUM1 Narciso decribles his ""family"" that lives/visits often.Clearly, their home is open with a warm heart.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12853,5,I think the mood in this storie was mostly happy and grateful. Because he loved living there with his parents and having family members around and being able to learn about his heritage. And learn about all the cooking. He seems to have had a very nice childhood and has always thanked his parents for that. they gave up everything to go to america to raise him and he seens very grateful.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 12149,5,"In the memoir the author creates a homey mood. he shows us the smells and tastes of the food, he shows love from his parents, and he shows grattitude for what he has.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 119,1,"Dear People of @LOCATION2, @CAPS1 many hours a day do you spend being active? Now answer me this, @CAPS1 much time do you spend on you computer? To many @CAPS2 today are sitting down in front of a computer, laptop, ecetra, while not enough are lacing up their shoes for a jog. Computers are ruining us, they deter our social skills, damage our health and cause us to be lazy. They are unbenificial to our society. To start with, millions of people sign up for @CAPS3, @CAPS4, and other website like these to reconnect with people. Do you realize what this means? Now no one has to get in a car and go visit any one else. There is no longer a need to interact with other life forms, nor is there a want to. Lets say there's a woman sitting on her couch. All of a sudden her face lights up with the thought of her friend @PERSON1. She gets up to go start the car, but hey eye catches on the computer. She bites her lip, trying to decide wether to go see her, or have an online chat. Feeling lazy, she sits down. Do you really want that happening to everyone? To late it already has. Moving along, i'd like to take a moment to talk about our health. As most of us knows, fresh air is good for us. Imagine this, you're walking through the woods on a trail. The crisp, cool air, tickles you skin, and breathing it in just makes you smile. Your entire body feels energized from the treking. With passels of days like this ahead, you can'@CAPS7 wait. Now imagine this, your sitting in front of a computer, in a hot, stuffy room. You back aches from being in this posistion so long. Plus you think your getting a cold and you have migrane. You'd get off, but you have another app request. You @CAPS6'@CAPS7 feel like moving back to reality which do you prefer? Above and beyond all this, there's exercise to worry about. I mean, when's the last time that you yourself went on a bike ride? I'm sure you know that it's good for your body if you exercise, but your to busy on the computer. I think it's safe to say that half of @LOCATION1 would rather update their @CAPS4 than get up and move. It's crucial to our health that we get active. To sum up, alot of us are pondering wether or not to spend more time on the compuer. Well here's you answer, ""@CAPS6'@CAPS7."" Not enough people are interacting now a days, their spending the best years of their lifes stuffed up in a house, and most importantly, let's face it, their getting fat. Computers are taking over our lives it's now, or never, make the change to a better and more satisying lifestyle. Please @LOCATION1, turn off the computer.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6302,3,"The feature of the setting affect the cyclist in many ways. When in the essay it states, “The sun was beginning to beat down” This shows that this affects how he feels when he is cycling through the road and this can affect his ability to keep cycling while the sun ??? him hard. Also when he states “I was doing a water-depleting 12 mph,” this shows he was also dehydrated once goin, very slow because of the ammount of heat and lack of water that affected his ability to keep cycling in the area.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 726,1,"Dear the @ORGANIZATION1, @PERSON1 studied that @PERCENT1 of people believe computers have a positive effec on people. You can stay in touch with realtives. Also you can entertain you over long trips. Computers have positive effects on people. Computers let you stay in otuch with realtives keep up with friens and are a good of entertainment. If you have distant realtives you can keep in touch. Video chatting lets you see someone and talk to them practically face to face from thousands of miles away. If you are sad and need to talk to somebody you are a few clicks away from being cheered up. Also if you are in the army and have a @ORGANIZATION1 baby you can watch as they take their first steps or say their. Video chatting used only way to stay in touch but also you just talk even wihtout a computer. Aim and @CAPS1 let you see whats goign on with your friends that you might see everyday or once a year at @DATE2 camp. @CAPS1 lets you keep in touch with everything thats going on with things like status updates. Aim lets youtalk with just your keyboard whre you type messages to poeple. Mabey you want to go in to town with a friends just send them a message by @CAPS1 or aim. Computers a onley for staying in touch though you can stay while you travel around. COmputers let you do so much to stay entertained over long rides or even rides. If you want to watch a movie just put in a dise or even rent on off itunes or netflicks. If you want to listen to a song download it in seconds and listen to your. Also you can even play video games on your computer. Just buy the game install it and then play. Computers are a great thing during down time and have positive effects on people. Computers let you keep in touch with family stay up to date with friends and are an excelent source of entertainment long trips or downtime. Computers are the lightbulb of the @DATE1.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4041,2,"Books @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3 @CAPS4 your in a library its many book that children decide to read that @MONTH1 not be suited for their @CAPS3. Many parents allow their kids to read those type of books so they're use to it now. But some book aren't for children @CAPS3. Now and days kids are more mature and knowledgeable and can read on higher levels. @CAPS4 kids go to the library they look for book that catch their attention. Some books that are out shouldn't be out and thats my opinion. Most authors write about things such as sex, drugs, and other bad thing. @CAPS4 a child looks at things like that they get ideas about what the book is talking about and try those things they read. Im not saying that all kids read books and decide to try all the things that they read, but most will. Some kids minmic off certain things they hear, see and even read. Kids are always going to look up to other people so what they see you do they will try to do it. I beleive that things like books that kids should'nt read should be put away. Books should be taken off the shelves and put in places where only adults could get them. Just like video games only a certain age group could play the game because of the things they do in the game. The things kids see they soon try out. They should also make it where you rate a book like you rate movies, video games and other things. All books aren't bad for children @CAPS3 but some are. I notice that many parents don't care about what their kids read as long as they're reading. People should'nt think that way because its alot of crule people in this world. I even seen on the news where it was an author who wrote a book about how he killed a lady. So many teens read that book and found it interesting. And it even gave young boys ideas about killing people or girl friends. That book should be in the hands of someone with a mature mind that really knows right from wrong. Its parents out in this world that wouldn't allow their kids to read books that have bad things in them. Most parents find it offensive that book stores or other places sell these type of books to their children. The things authors talk about in their books and what they include no @CAPS5 should read. Books that aren't good for certain age groups or that have inaproprate things in it should be removed from the shelves. But certain people interpret the words different and veiw it different. Its many books out in this world that most parents or grandparents hope their kids or grandkids never take off the shelf. But its going to keep going on until someone speaks up.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6572,3,"Many features of the setting affected the cyclist. First, the heat was the main part of nature that threw him off. It caused him to go dehiderated because lack of water and he went kind of dilerious. He thought he was seeing things and his vision was distorted. Next, the water he had to come across in the pump was un drinkable because of the tarlike substance coming out of it and the degree of water he said it was, which was @NUM1 degree. Lastly, the Welch’s factory that he came across was teasing him in in the way that he couldn’t have the liquids he needed and the little boy advertised on the building was drinking his refreshed Welch’s juice. Not only did the cyclist get off track because the directions, the setting made his bike adventure to Yosemite even more unbearable.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 8888,4,"In the story, “Winter Hibiscus”, the author ends with the last specified paragraph, “When they came back…then I will take that test again.” because it leaves many un-answered questions the reader might have. The reader then might want to read her next piece of work. Basically, the last paragraph drows attention to the reader. many of the unanswered questions revolve around, “I failed the test.”. We also do not know “her gentle grandmother”, “mrs.Lambert”, and “home”. Another reason the author might end the story with that paragraph is to have a effect on the reader. The reader is left to only assume and imagine what things are to come. Will she pass the test? Will she go home? What will happen? All we know is, ”when the snow melts, and the geese return and the hibiscus is budding, then I will take the test again.” most likely the author ended the story with the paragraph for dramatic effect for the reader. This is why, I believe the author of “Winter Hibiscus” ended with the specified paragraph.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3889,2,"Imagine @CAPS1, you are in the library looking for a book to read, to when your son or daughter runs up to you holding a magazine of questionable nature. What do you do? A library should not have inapporiate items on the shelves. Censoring libraries is something to protect you and your family. Libraries should be censored so that way everyone can enjoy themselves. The first reason I thing that libraries should be censored is because of the children that go there. Children are curious and they are always attracted to things that are colorful and different. An example I have of @CAPS1 is my baby sister. She wanted to go to the zoo instead of the museum because as she said 'I want to see the animals, not a boring statue. I can see those anytime around town.' @CAPS1 is showing that children want to see different things and if they were to go to the library and see the same items then there is not anything to worry about. The first time they see something of questionable nature they would want it because it is new. The second reason that libraries should be censored is that sometimes not all of the items in the library are put in the right place. Say that you wanted to watch a movie that sounded really good and you checked it out at the library, went home, put it in, and find out it is not the movie you thought it was. What if you rented that movie for a party and had guests over? Would that not embarrass you? Well something like that happened to my cousin but she got a @LOCATION1. She was embarrassed for weeks after it happened. All of that embarrassment could have been prevented if the libraries had to be censored. The third reason that libraries should be censored is that sometimes seeing certain material in a library can be rather offensive. Would you be offended by seeing something like that? I know that I would. I would not want anyone to be offended like that. When I was little I went to the mall with my grandmother. We were trying to buy a new pair of jeans for me. I got offended when the salesperson said that I 'looked fat' in the jeans I had picked. I know what it is like to be offended and people should take other peoples' feeling into account before they offend. While some people thing that inapporite material is fine to have in a library I believe that they should find other places for it. Think of your family and how much you love them. Think of what not having a censor on the libraries can cause. Do you want to be responsible for not doing anything to help? Try to find ways to get stricter laws on censoring libraries",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 4225,2,"I believe that the books, music, movies, magazines should be removed if they are really offensive. Just because it's offensive to one person doesn't mean that it would be to another person. Any movie you watch could be offensive to one person or two but, not everyone. So I would say no to taking the offensive things off the shelfs because, who is really going to be offened by and are they really offened by this matter or aspect. Also, I believe that some people might lie about if they are offened by it just so that they will take it off the self. Maybe, there is a movie for example, that there is a lot of bad words, I could see them being able to take that off the self because, a lot of people don't like those words to be used and thats understandable. If they are just taking it off the self tho for one little thing I don't think that should be aloud. I think that if that person is getting offened by what a book said or a movie said then don't read it or don't watch it. No body is forcing you to watch or read a book that you don't want to. Reading and watching a certain movie is all up to you not what others say. I believe that this really has to go down to what the persons beliefs are. Maybe they go to church every day which means that they probably aren't going to be watching the movie ' @CAPS1 @CAPS2.' They are going to pick a movie more suitiable to their life style and what their use to. Maybe they had a friend that suggested that they should watch a movie and they did, they might have taking offensivness to that, but that was also there choice they didn't have to watch it. If this was the case to take a book, movie, music out because someone was offened then there would be nothing left. Are you saying that you would listen to everyone if they came in to get a book and then came back and said ' this book offened me, I want you to take it off the self.' I'm sorry but, I'm having a hard time believing that your going to listen to every single person that comes in a says that. Also, @CAPS3 do you know it was offensive to them are you going to have them show you what was the problem with this book? My guess is no because you don't want to deal with that many people about one or two maybe even five books. I'm not saying that people don't get offened by somethings that books and movies say but, your going to have a lot more then just one person come in and say that there are more then just one book or movie. so then there would be no books left. What if you have someone come in and they request that they have a certain movie and you say ' @CAPS4, I'm sorry we had to take that movie off the self because, it offened someone.' I have a feeling that person is not going to be happy and you will have some explaining to do. Also, what if a person comes in and asks for something and you tell them that you had to take it down and they say that it was a very nice movie are you going to listen to them also if you listen to one person don't you think that its fair if you listen to the other person also that likes the movie. I am a person that believes theres two parts to every story. So, therefore, I think that you should listen to both sides or keep what you have if that person wants to take it off the self then do it but, if someone asks for that specific one then I would let them have it because that isn't going to hurt the person that got offened by the book or movie is it. Therefore, I think that they should keep the books, movies and music all on the seleves unless more then one person complains then it would be a different story.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9325,4,"The author concluded the story “Winter Hibiscus “ the way she did because she wanted to show saeng ‘s determination at one point in the story, the author wrote, “she was still too shaky to say the words at home “. Saeng really missed her old life and her old country. She often wonders when she will be able to go back to it and enjoy herself, because she still has trouble adjusting to her new life. When the author concluded the story, it was done so that saeng could be shown as a person who would not easily give up. Although she’d had previous trouble, the end of the story gives new hope for saeng to adjust to her new surroundings. Also, when saeng fails the test, the ending sentence gives newhopes saeng told her mother,”I failed the test “, and she was really down on herself when she said so. The closing sentence gives new hope to saeng and the reader, that she will work header and do better in the spring. The author shows saeng’s determination to rise above failure and create a niche of her own in life. In all, the closing sentence in “winter Hibiscus” is used to show saeng’s determination.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3553,2,"Libraries have always had interesting materials, such as, books, music, movies, and magazines, and there always will be. Libraries are one of the best places to find those materials. I do not believe that libraries should have to remove those materials from their shelves because maybe some people find them interesting? Thats all that libraries like are people interested in reading their books. If some people find different books offensive then they shouldn't go near those books. If they have a complaint then they should just keep it to themselves and not ruin the chance for others to check them out. Libraries shouldn't have to take certain material out of there shelves because some people don't like them, its your choice to read that book, nobody is making you read something that makes you feel uncomfortable. Now say if there were a numerous amount of people that take offense to the materials in the library, then the library could decide whether they want to or not, but they still dont need to be told what to do. Its their business and they decide what materials stay and which ones go. If I was one of those who took offense to a book in the library then i would just keep it to myself. I wouldn't like to go through all of that trouble of arguing and complaining just becouse of one book. Think of others before you think of yourself sometimes and what their interests are. Thats less trouble you will have to go through later on in life.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 8934,4,The author is saying that she’s not doing nothing intell it is a nice day outside. Also she want it to be not that cold but not that not for she can come out and play with her children. Then she said she will take her test again for a nice day outside for her.,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 7375,3,"In the story “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Speed limit” by Joe Kurmaskie the different aspects of the setting effect the cyclist in several ways. When he first begins he doesn’t even notice how hot it is and he says, “the ran was beginning to beat down, but I barely noticed it.” His mood starts to change very quickly. Soon he drinks most of his water of becomes increasingly tired. He finds a water pump which irriates him when he realize the water tastes like “battery acid.” As he continues he sees a snake which he could swear was a diamond back so he slowly goes by out. When he notices a factory he uses his last bit of energy to reach it only to be discouraged when he finds it abandone. His spirits finally rise when he finds a store and drinks a good amount of water.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 842,1,"@CAPS1. The computer is a wonderful thing! However the effects it has on people can be bad. Think of it this way, it has magnetic forces that pull people to it and keep them @CAPS3 for hours. These magnetic forces keep people from exercising, stops them from spending time with family and friends and most importantly if they aren't being careful they can get into some cyber danger. I spoke with the @CAPS2 of @PERSON2 and he said @CAPS3 are so many people on their computers, people aren't getting enough exercise!"" @CAPS4 people dont get enough exercise their bodies expand and become obese. This happens a lot to average people. The @CAPS2 and I thought up some great ideas while I was @CAPS3 and we think for one week in @DATE1 we are going to live without any electricity! Computers are very use-full, they help spread important information around fast and make it easy to talk to friends and family. Even though you are talking to them you are not learning any new social skills. Typing on the computer is a lot different from talking in person. Usually you would type ""u"" instead of ""you"" or ""r"" instead of ""are"". Talking over the computer is great!"" says @PERSON1, ""But actually seeing my family and talking talking to them is way better."" @CAPS6, @CAPS7, @CAPS8, and way more sights websites can put you in cyber danger! Cyber danger is @CAPS4 you get in trouble on the computer. This can happen @CAPS4 you put up bad pictures of yourself or other people, @CAPS4 you talk to someone you have never met before, or you say something really mean to that girl you don't like. Those situations can all put you in a really tough place. Even if you have a webpage and you put it on private @CAPS3 is always a way to get in. @CAPS3 is also something called cyber bullying. Cyber bullying is @CAPS4 you get bullyed or are bullying another person over the computer. Don't think that no one will know @CAPS3 are ways to track down coversations between people. I really hope you all take this into account @CAPS4 you think about sitting at your computer! Go outside, spend time with your family and friends, and be careful from cyber danger! ""@NUM1"" bye!""",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9586,4,The author concludes this paragraph in the story because thats when she starts growing plants again & she wants to start over again,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1418,1,"Dear Newspaper, I am writing to you @DATE1 because think computers really effect people in a bad way. I say this becuause @CAPS1 you go on the internet you do not get that much excirse. You also don't get good grades at all! That's bad thing. Plus when on a computer there are some really wierd people. I really want you guys to hear out my story. Go outside! @CAPS3 mom I'm on the computer! @CAPS1 your on the computer to much you want want to get exersce. @CAPS1 you don't get excise you won't be healthy! you want get excise. Also you will obese you don't want that! For instance when your in gym class you want to be healthy. So you can and you will get a good grade. Do you want a bad grades? That sums it up on. You got an @CAPS2! On your report card? When you spend alot of your time on a computer then you will get addicted. @CAPS1 you get addicted then you will not do your homework then your grades will drop. You will get bad grades in school. Then you have a possibilty to stay back. Plus then the parents to flipout on. This is one of my reasons why computers effect people in a bad way! When you go on the computer you have @CAPS3 clue who you are talking to unless your thier friends. There has been very many cases that kids getting stolen because of facebook and myspace. @CAPS1 your kid goes on those websites than your kids' always at danger! There are cyber and they could find out where you live that information about you. For instance there was a case on myspace that a kid thought she was talking to a @NUM1 year old boy she was really talking to a @NUM2 something year old guy. Then the girl went missing for about weeks. That was. So you can never trust a computer. When you take a real good look at computers you will see they are just @CAPS3 good. All my reasons before. They are you will not get nearly the amount of you are supose to. Your grade will plummet down @CAPS1 you stay on the computer and they trick you. So even know you can communicate with your friends. Its just not worth it.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 15094,6,"Based on the excerpt from the Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in building the mooring mast. For example, there was actually a law that prohibited exactly what the builders wanted. The law said that airships could not fly too low over city areas. The mooring mast on the Empire State Building would directly violate that law when the ships come in to dock. Another problem the builders faced was the danger surrounding the airships that would be docking there. The airships, called dirigibles, were like giant balloons and could pop if they touched something sharp enough. The Empire State Building was surrounded by other extremely tall buildings and most of them had long spires on top. Therefore, if the dirigible bumps one of these spires, it could pop and go plummeting to the ground. This presented another problem. Had an airship popped in New York City, it could've killed a large number of people not only in it, but on the ground. During the time of building, the Hindenburg crashed into fields, killing all of it's passengers. The builders thought what the consequences would be if that had happened in the city. This was the final straw for the builders as they abandoned their lofty goal, because of too many problems.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 3828,2,"To begin with, a woman might read a book about wifes and find it offense. But it was her choice to pick up the book and read it. Should it be taken off the shelf? No why should it. Different people have different perpectives on what they're reading. Not all people feel the same way. Samething goes for music, movies, magazines, etc. They might see a naked picture of someone in a magazine and not like it. It was there choice to pick it up and read it. No one held a gun to there head and said 'read the book etc.' @CAPS1, why should a book, etc., be taken off the shelf if one person doesn't like it? You still have the rest of the population who might love it, some might just like it, and the ones who don't. You can't just think about that one person you have to consider everybody esle. If that person finds that book, etc., offensive then they should have chosen wisely the first time and/or never should have chose what they did. It's there own fault. For my conclusion, nothing should be taken off the shelf if its offensive just don't read the book and etc. Another person might read it and like it. Some people who finds things offensive are maybe looking at it in the wrong way. Keep the book etc., on the shelf if they take it off then sooner or later they will take everything off the shelf for being offensive. Then what we will be able to read or listen too",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9021,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph to show the importance of new beginnings and to accentuate the theme in the story. The theme is that one must overcome hardships and seek new beginnings. The springtime is a representation of a new beginning. So, the new beginning of spring will allow her to start all over again on the drivers’ test. Also, the author uses the paragraph to show the symbolic qualities of everyday things. Just how the hibiscus reminded her of home life, the geese will remind her of springtime.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 1067,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 people have computers, and @CAPS2 people use them. It's been brought to my attension that the government is worried about people using them to much. Well I think you can't use a computer too much. They offer so @CAPS2 things such as information, communication, and life skills. That doesn't too bad. Informaiton is something we as humans live for. Also in @CAPS2 schools and jobs you need to know a variaty of unusual facts. Where can you learn these? Computers of course! When @PERSON1 (my teacher) gives us a research paper on walt disney, we use computers to find our information. With out the computer, I wouldn't know walt disney died before disney world opened. That clearly shows one of the @CAPS2 things we need computers for. Communication is another aspect of our lives. With a computer you can have @MONEY1 ways to comunicate. Yes some of these way can be dangerous but, @CAPS2 are safe. When I was in @NUM1 grade my teacher ms.casserelle set up a classwide email for us. This allowed us to email another school. This farm of online communication was perfectly safe. As long as the person using these forms of communication is sem-responsible nothing can go wrong. Where can you go wrong with that? Did you know that @PERCENT1 of your life skills can and are learned on computers? As a matter-a-fact your job involves a computer! One life skill you can learn is how to type. As I stated earlier research papers need computers, well it's not just for the information. You have to type them too. Most jobs in our world need the computer for something or other. Can you think of a job that doesn't require one at all? Ididnt think so. Information, communication, and life skills are all important to our human nature. Ithink computers are important to humans. Wether you admit it or not everything we do involves a computer to some degree. Can you spend @CAPS2 countless hours on a computer? Yes, but you need to. you need to.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 611,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, I have @NUM1 reasons why computers effects have on people. First, computers are not good for your eyes. Second, the reason why people get on computers a lot. Third, there are so much games and places to go like myspace, facebook and even twitter and much more. Keep on reading so I could tell you all about my three reasons. First of all, computers are not good for your eyes because computers are like @CAPS3's is the something but not really because computer as more information and @CAPS3 dont really got so much information you could browse for. My second reason is that the more people be on computers the more blind they could get just for being on the computers for a hour or more. Third, some people dont even dare if they be on ocmputer they wont they might think that just becaus ethey wear gasses they wont get blinder but they are wrong they will get more blinder. As you reading you will find out my second reason fro being to much in the computer. My second reason, is that why people get in computers alot well peopel get on computers just to their or do their taxes but that is not good because just because your doing your bills or your taxes you to alot of information that people in other countries or state could get without you knowing , second is that people or get on computers to pay their bills or do their taxes they also get on the computer to maybe order something or buy a ticket to fly to a place they want to go like a vacation place or a business trip. my third reason is that they not only buy or order things but thet get in websites that will make their lives better like meeting soembody special or something else. As you keep reading you will find out my third reason for being to much and so long in the computers. My third reason, is that their are alot of activities to do in the computer for a example myspace, facebook and twitter are the most popular website that people get in just to meet new people and talk to old friends. In conclusion, people should not be on computer too much because of their health and their privacy and also to be sure not to meet strange people. ",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 9146,4,"In the story “Winter Hibiscus” it has an unusual ending. There are many reason why the author decided to end the story this way. First, the girl failed the test which made her go into silien, when he agreed to take the test over it is a sigh of the will to suvive, and it shows that she is trying at he goal until she got it. Finnaly the ending could represent a new beging like when the snow melts away and changes winter into spring. This is what the ending of “Winter Hibiscus” means and this is why the author concluded it this way.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html, 6709,3,"In the story the author says, “The sun was beginning to beat down trying to keep my balance in my dehydrated state,” This gives you the idea that the heat is getting to him and is steadily depleting his water supply. At ore point he almost gives him self up to despair and dies of dehydration. It seems that he will never reach his good and he will continue to suffer in the grueling heat. I could almost feel the sweat and heat that the cyclist was feeling. Also, I could almost feel the lump in my throat when he says, “with any luck I’d hit a bump and lodge a pebble in my throat.” The heat definitely effects this mans cycling in a bad way. He was exhausted and could not go on without water.",,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,