essay_id,essay_set,essay,Content,Organization,Word Choice,Sentence Fluency,Conventions,Prompt Adherence,Language,Narrativity,prompt_and_rubric_source,source_essay,general_rubric_guideline_source,overall_score
7077,3,"The setting affects the cyclist because he is faced with roadways he is unsure of the weather is hot and dry and there are wild animals. The text states,",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
16146,6,the builder of the empire State Building faced obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there because they had to plan out how it would what they would need to use for it to dock there. What kinds of material would be needed in this project and how it would work. Before actually putting it all together.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
9321,4,"She end, the story with that because the flower gives her strength. It gives her hope and reminds her of home. At her home they were every where, she had to buy this one. She planted it so it can grow through winter. After winter the flower gets huge and she passes her driver test. For reward her mom get her a real Vietnam flower.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
10464,4,"The reason the author concludes the story with that paragraph is because he is showing that she will not give up and she will do it when she is ready to. The reason I say this is because she is doing the test when she wants to, when she feels comfortable. Those are the reasons I belive that the author ended the story with that paragraph.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
10360,4,The reason why is so you get the feeling that Saeng feels about gardening. She is praying for spring to come so she can do it over again. She like to watch plants grow and become something that you can eat. That is way the Author concluded the story with this paragraph.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
8937,4,"The author had concluded her paragraph like this for emotion. This last paragraph gives emotion to know she can’t garden do to winter. In the winter time all of her plants die for the season. 'The, author is just saying saeng is coming back. After the snow, frosts and cold weather is gone Saeng will come next season so she can continue with her gardening, plants and soil. As said “I will take the test again"" saeng.  Meaning saeng will come back and take the test of effort with her gardening and her mother next time/ next season when her starts to grow again.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
3598,2,"Reading it is a joy to some and a pain to others. Do I think objects in the library with offensive details should be cleaned up or taken off the shelves? There are some things that could be censored, and others that wouldn't be worth using if it was censored. However, yes I do believe that there are items in the library that could be censored. I am going to tell you why they should be censored, and what should be censored.     The types of items in the library that shouldn't be cleaned up.  A perfect example of those items are historical documentaries or historical books they have no other way to get the information needed across to the reader or viewer. There are other types of library items in the library that could be censored. Like there are some magazines and movies that show uncensored scenes or pages that are not need to make a view across if there even is a view to get across. I think a movie, book, or a magazine should only be uncensored if it is trying to get a point across. If there are uncensored items not getting a point across then they have no business being in the library.      As people can see library there are circumstances where a book, movie, or magazine uncensored is very useful in getting information. There are more circumstances where a library item does not need uncensored details because it is just offensive. If you ask me if I think censorship is important in libraries than I would have to say yes and no. I just gave you some reasons why I would say that. The next time you are in the library looking for a book ask your self one question is it to offensive to be important.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
13377,5,"In the memoir of Narciso Rodriguez, he gives a mood throughout it. I think that if is that home is really where the heart lies and blooms. Paragraph two states, ""the congregation of family and friends... formed the backdrop to life in our warm home.' In paragraph seven, 'It was in this simple house my parents welcomed other refugees to celebrate their arrival to this country.' Rodriguez wrapped it all up with what really showed what the mood was, 'I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home,' in paragraph seven.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9304,4,"The author might conclude the story with this because it shows that the girl had confidence that when the flower blooms she will be able to pass. Back at her home land that flower mean't alot to her and it still does. But it seems like this flower gives her hope and pride. She used to pick it with her grandmother and put it in her hair. So when she sees the flower, she will think of her grandmother and that will motivate her to keep going. The flower is strong and can stand through winter weather, so the girl is determinded that when the flower blooms, she will be able to past the test.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
12193,5,"The author shows many moods while writing this memoir, like gratitude, happiness, and love. The main mood in this memoir however is gratitude. @ORGANIZATION1 is very grateful for everything his parents have ever done for him and he loves them with all his heart. Also he is grateful for how they always made him safe. In the last sentence Narciso says, ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."", what this means is that he is greatful for the life he had. So he will never forget the gratitude that fills him up inside.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
12559,5,Narciso mood in the @CAPS1 is him growing UP in Cuba and then moveing to the US. When he is in the @CAPS2.S he finds a house and later in the @CAPS1 he and his famliy makes the house into a home. The @CAPS1 is also about in explaning how is life is like what he dose like cooking for his famliy and what he dose in his free time.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
17,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, I belive that computers have a negative effect on peoples lives. I belive this because who spend to much time on the computer don't get out as much as they should, don't spend enough time with their family, and the computer can't do everything. My first reason is I belive that people need to get out more. When they don't get out, they don't exersise and that is very unhealthy. Instead of watching the games or the scores they should get out and play the game. I also belive that they should enjoy nature because I feel like they are wasting the beauty of nature all around them. We wouldn't want to waste our abilities and privalges would we? Another reason is that they do not spend enough time with family. If you have family near you, then you should take advantage of that and interact with one another. You can have fun with your family by playing games. You can also have fun by just hanging out, which boost your social skills and the computer can't always do that, which brings me to my next point. The computer can't do everything, so take advantage of what you have now. Some computer time is fine, but it can be very dangerous by getting addictted to it. The computer @MONTH1 have lots of information, but there is nothing that you can't find in a book. Your computer can't love your dog, so there is a reason why we should get off the computer. There are pleanty of other things that you can do that you can't do on the computer, including sports, taking care of family, and any of your hobbys. Remember that the computer @MONTH1 be great from time to time, but it can not live your life for you. That is why I belive that we should spend less time on the computer, and more time getting out, and having fun with family, and that the the computer can't do everything.",4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
1119,1,"Currently, there has been a debate on whether or not computers benefit society. Some people, say that computers enable internet conversations between friends, and computers pass off information about faraway places and people. However, I tend to believe that the computer is not necessary. People exploit most of their time on comptuers, reducing their exercise time. Not many pay attention to nature, and instead of talking to friends in the internet, why not meet them at the park? Many people who use their computers reducing their metabolism. This is one reason why the @LOCATION1.A has the highest obesity rates in the world. In addition, the less you exercise, the less healthy you will be, and the more pair you'll recieve, you will feel more tense if your muscles are not exercise. If we, as @CAPS1, continue to lack exercise, there won't be many possibilities for us in the future. Isn't it difficult to know that people pay too much attention to the computer when there are endangered species in nature? Pandas! polar bears, whales of different types, and other creatures all need our help to fight this extinction problem. Unfortunately, we pay much of our attention on the computer, with consideration, as humans, we make things possible, so we should help creatures in need to survive for generations. Perhaps we @MONTH1 learn more about these creatures if we take time off of the computer to do so. Perhaps we will find nature more interesting. Why do we have text messaging in our computers if we have the ability to talk to our frinds in a park? We have the freedom of speech in the @LOCATION1. Our families need help occasionally, but sometime we're not available. While reducing our social life, our computer hours are becoming more important, and are distracting what's mos important. In conclusion, computers hours, you must think about what can be done for nature, for your health, and for your family and friends.",5.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
3586,2,"Everyone person can think of something that we did not like or want to see. If you were offended by that one thing, do you think you should have the right to have it taken away or banned? Or what if you liked the choice of what the place had, but someone else didn't? Should they have the right to take it away just because they don't approve?                                            What if @NUM1 people came into a library with  @NUM2 books, magazines, music and movies, and @NUM3 of them did not like any part of the library and wanted every book, magazine, music, and movie taken out? Even if the @NUM4 others loved what they saw? Do you think it's fair just because some people do not approve, that they get to pick? I do not think it would be fair for just one person to be able to have the right to do that. If something is that offensive to that many people, they should be mature enough to ignore what they see and find what they like.                                                                 If someone did not like your house and said I don't want to see it should they have to demolish it just like nothing?                The world would have never ending chaos if people had too much power to change things. It could only get worse.              I have encountered problems between people that do not agree on throwing out or keeping it. One solution could be just move it to a different area where if certain people would like to look at the item they could, otherwise have  separate parts of a room that are divided into all ranges.                                       If you read this and think to yourself about how many different options you have to get along and not have to worry about offending people you will realize that no certain person should be able to take that one thing that you would like to keep to enjoy and be happy.",4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
1089,1,"Dear @CAPS1, I have same questions for you and I was hoping you could answer them. I was wandering. Do you have any computers in your house, if so how many? Also, do you like using the computer? I am trying to figure out how many people don't use computers because. I want to ask them how do they survive without one!? Computers are essential to our present day lives. Everything in the world is in one computer. You can talk, email, even see people through a computer because now adays everyone has a videcam hooked onto their computer. I want to tell you all of the great things computers do not make our lives so much easier. People are always looking for a way to get in touch with someone like if your phone is dead, how are you going to tell your friend what time your going to meet at that place? You can easily just text her from the computer. You can either use your screen-name to text someone or just go on verizon, at&t, sprine... etc.com and text people from there. It would save you from standing your friend up and feeling guilty about it. Has there ever been a time where you needed number, but you couldn't find your telephone book? It sure has happened to me, but you know what I do? I go on the computer and go on yellow pages.com and just look up the restraunt/place on the website. It's as simple as that. You can look up almost anything on the computer, prices, places, facts, anything! Most of the time the true facts will always be there. Computers help you a lot if you need help on histicoral, scientific, and @CAPS2 facts. Computers help us everyday. People need them for communication, telephone numbers, or facts about anything. Most of someones life can be saved to the computer. If you have bad handwriting, then you could just type up your paper and hand it in all nice and neat. Like I said before computers are esstential to our present day lives @CAPS3 reading this, I bet you'll agree.",3.0,3.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
15980,6,"Based on the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by @PERSON1, builders of the Empire State building faced many problems. Their first problem was; ""[t]he architects could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of... the flat roof"". The weight of the mast would make the framework crumble, so the builders had to modifie and strengthen the steel frame of the empire state building. Secondly, most foreign dirigibles were highly flamable making it highly dangerous for on two moor overapopulated New York city. Also nature itself was a problem. The winds at the top of the building were just so strong it'd be dangerous to moor there. And finally, the law against dirigibles flying too low over urban areas. The mooring mast atop of the Empire State building was a good idea but it was very dangerous, highly unlikely and against the law.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
8866,4,The author ended the story with this paragraph because it shows change. The snow is melting represents change from cold to warm. The geese returning represents a new life as in coming back to something semi–new. Just like the author is going back to drivers ed. The hibiscus is budding represents growth. The author will be older and more knolageble and more skilled than before.,3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
4616,2,"I thnk the censorship in libraries @CAPS1 quite abominomal. I think there should be no censorship, it @CAPS1 for the parents to decide what children can an cannot watch. I think if something @CAPS1 found offensive, then don't watch it, it's as simple as that. If you don't want your children to watch anything offensive or rude, then don't let them.     What I think offensive, @CAPS1 when something @CAPS1 removed off shelves. I think kids, though not yung kids, perhaps @NUM1 and up, should be able to watch and listen to what they want. I think certain things that people find offensive, are only offensive to those kind of people. It @MONTH1 not be offensive to someone else, so don't take that particular movie, or song out of libraries.A good example of this would be the book, To @CAPS2 A @CAPS4. It has been banned and then unbanned from many school libraries, because of its vulgar words and references to rape. i think that @CAPS1 unfair because , wether we like it or not, children @NUM1 and over will most definatly hear rude and offensive things anyways.      I think books, or movies, or music, that have curse words, @CAPS1 a part of life, because most adults curse. And taking those things away from a library @CAPS1 taking it away from adults as well as kids. It @CAPS1 for the parents to decide when their kids hear these things, if at any time. I also believe that using ' offensive' remarks, @CAPS1 just another part of our history. Take To @CAPS2 A @CAPS4 for instance, back in that time, it was common for black people to talk slang, and common for men to curse when mad. That @CAPS1 just how people are and were.      Taking those things off the shelves, will not protect adolescents from hearing them. I think they have rights to hear it if they want, and there parents have rights enough to let them. I think songs that have words bleeped out over the radio @CAPS1 pointless because you teenager will know what they say anyway. I think having books banned @CAPS1 a not wise thing to do, because it just makes kids want to hear the word more than usual.     Basically we have rights to hear and read those things. Taking away the things we have rights to, @CAPS1 taking away our freedom and free will. If parents don't want to have their children read or hear those things, then they need to supervise what they read or listen to. It doesnt't make snese to single out a particular book, or song, that @CAPS1 just like singling out all songs and books",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
4209,2,"The ideas conveyed by literature, music, and movies are an art.  They cannot be explained in any other way than themselves, and if we take away the right to produce or the right to sell these masterpieces, then the world loses something of itself.     Censorship is the underlying problem to many things.  It takes away the expression of human thought and emotion- emotions like greed, love, fear, and the ability to empathize that are conveyed in books and films.  If people think it's offensive, they simply can't take the truth.       Many people can only express themselves in their art- and art can be very real.  So real that we don't think that it's possible.  We don't want to believe something like 'The @CAPS1' could happen.  'The @CAPS1' is a short story in which kids get together and rob an old man's home.  Because this man is very rich, he has lots of material wealth.  Then they burn down the house with the man's belongings still in it.  Needless to say, this story has been banned from many schools and libraries.  But what many don't understand is why would the kids burn down the house.  Many think that the kids just want to see it burn, to destroy what is so cherished, or that the love of material things is making us greedy.  It is this that makes us think, and therein lies the problems with censorship.  If we censor something that makes us think this hard about who we are and what we do here, then we begin to lose ourselves.     The loss of books has been seen throughout history.  Most prominantly, the nazi regime.  In the beginning of their control of power, they banned certain books that went against the nazi ideals.  The censorship escalated into the nazis burning books in large piles. This communal burning would make it easier to control the public mindset.  The movement swelled and the  @CAPS3 people soon developed a national pride and goal.  By the @DATE1's, nearly every @CAPS3 who could read had read '@CAPS5 @CAPS6'.  The censorship had turned into an all-out war on classical literature and the promotion of nazi ideas.  That was how @CAPS7 was actually voted in.  Many don't realize, but the @CAPS8 actually did vote @CAPS7 to be leader.  Now that the nazis had destroyed the publics ideals, they were replaced with the nazi's own.     The banning of media can only lead to a general lack of self knowledge.  The human mindset can only be expressed through the art which the human creates.  If we try to explain it, we soon get lost in our words.  The use of verbal and visual examples is the only way we learn who we are.  Censorship has never ended in something good- only the promotion of something bad.  If we let our media get banned, we lose the right to have ideas of our own.",5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
9857,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph because this is what the story was all about. Saeng saw what happens in the winter and when it comes back around she trys to memorize it so that she can no what will happen.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
15779,6,"There were Several obsticles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One reason was one of sefty. ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" If an accident would occur above a densely populated area, such as New York, it would be catastrophic. Another obsticle was nature itself. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. Even if the dirigibles were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast."" Another obsticle the builders had was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
16442,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One problem was ""the fact that the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" (@CAPS1 @NUM1) That would make it hard for the dirigibles to be tethered to the mast. Annother problem they faced was the ""existing laws against airships flying too low over urban areas"" (@CAPS1 @NUM2) Also the equipment used to to dock the airships haden't even been installed.",1.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
13440,5,"The mood in this memoir is gratitude. Narciso is so greatfull and proud to have grown up where he did and have the family he had ""In our neighborhood despite customs  elsewhere, all of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship."" Narciso is telling the readers that even thogh the people in his neighborhood were all different, they were still family. ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" This quote tells you that even though things were ruff he still is gratefull for all the opertunities his parents gave him.",2.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
1738,1,"Dear readers, People around the world are starting to use computers now more, often, but theirs also people that dont agree that it benefits society, @CAPS1 not one of those people. I agree that this benefits society. One reason why I agree is because sometimes theirs teens and even adults that can chat online with their friends if they cant contact them in any other way. Another reason is because in all school teacher give their students project to do over vacation or weekends, for the projects they can look for information in the computer. The last reason is because computers can give ability to learn more about things they didnt know before. In my opinion I agree with computers benefiting society. Teens, kids and even adults would like to talk with their friends so they can get on the computer and chat with them if theirs no other way to contact them, @CAPS2 easy. You only have to @NUM1) get in the computer, @NUM2) get into a site were you know your friend might be @NUM3) log in or register in if you never been into that site @NUM4) last but not least look @NUM4 your friend to chat will teachers always give their students work for example like projects. Kids also do projects on weekends or vacation and so you dont have to go to a library to check out a book you could always get on the computer and look for the information you need their. Computers give you abilitys to learn information you didnt know before for example if your bored and you dont got nothing to do get in the computer and look up information about things like nature, books your looking for etc. I agree with computers benefiting society but not everyone, @NUM3 reason why I agree is kids can chat online with their friends, look up information for projects and find information they never knew about, what do you think @CAPS1 I right or wrong.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
16322,6,"In the excerpt Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock their. One obstacle was, many modifications had to be made to the buildings framework. the dirigible's load and wind pressure would have to be transmitted to buildings foundation. Another reason builders face many obstacles is, most dirigibles used hydrogen rather than helium. This would be very dangerous if a fire occured especilly in a highly populated area. Another reason is due to violent air currents the back of a dirigible would swivel around the mooring mast. As it says on page @NUM1, paragraph @NUM2 the dirigible would dangel above pedestrians on the street which isnt practical or safe. Lastly, an existing law against airships flying to low over urban areas and it is illegal for dirigibles to tie up to the building or even approach the building. In conclusion builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock their.",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
6536,3,"Heat, water supply, energy-all are features of setting that can affect a cyclist. First, is heat. When it is too warm out it makes it more difficult, and more inconvenient to ride. Second, is your water supply. If you are riding, and begin to run low on water, your in trouble. The author describes, “The water bottles contained only a few tantalizing sips”. If you arn’t prepared enough for your cycling journey, it will be extremely inconvenient when you run out of supplies. Lastly, is energy. If you run out of energy while cycling, you have nothing. Your energy is what keeps you moving and motivated. “With what I believe, was my last burst of energy, I maneuvered down the hill,” the author describes. When you are out of energy, your ride is over. all of these aspects are important to have before deciding to go on a cycling journey.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
10414,4,This paragraph is a good way to end the story because it relates to the test. The narrator says she will try again in the spring. ,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
13389,5,"The mood of this memoir is the importance of family. @ORGANIZATION1 says in the beginning how much he loves his cuban culture and heritage. For example, ""my parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me there rich culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today (and for which I am eternally grateful). Passionate Cuban music (which I adore to this day) filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen."" Narciso Rodriguez enjoyed his ethnicity very much. Him and his family were always very open and welcoming to other people. ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family, Knowing that they would do the same for us.""  Narciso also became close to other immigrants that were not blood-related to him. ""Growing up in this envirement instilled me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relative. Quite the contrary, our neighberhood was made up of mostly Spanish, Cuban, and Italian immigrants."" Narciso was close to many people who he considered family.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
9996,4,I think the author concludes the story with this paragraph for many reasons.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
1424,1,"Dear @CAPS1, I belive that computers benefits the people of today. The invention of the computer had helped people to send messages and information to each other, helped students with school and allows children to have something to do when they can't go outside. Let me explain. The computer had created easier way for people to send messages and information to one and other. Before the invention of the computer, the only way to pass on information was by mail or phone. The computer sped up this process. In fact, people had recived information about @PERCENT1 faster with the invention of the computer. I was once able to send my friend an email about getting the homework faster than writing him a letter. Clearly, computers made it easier for people to comunicate with each other. Also, computers help students with school. Before the computer, a student had to use a type writer to type their papers. Using a typewriter, when they made mistakes which was on, they had to start all over. It;s a completely different story now. In fact, a study done by the board of ed. shows students write papers so faster and better with a computer rather than a typewriter. I remeber my grandfather told me about how he typed papers. It took him about an hour he typed papers. It took him about an hour and a half to write a paper on a typewriter, while the longest it took him was a half an hour on a computer. As you can see computers have helped students all across the . Lastly, computers supply kids with things to do while they can't go out side to enjoy nature. Many people would that kids would go on their computer when they were able to go outside. A study done by the @CAPS2-obesity shows that @PERCENT2 of kids would rather be outside playing and excersising than in their house on their computer. But sometimes, during certain weather conditions, kids aren't able to go outside, so they myt entertain themselves indeers. A study done by @ORGANIZATION1 shows that mere the @PERCENT3 of kids go on their computer when they can't be outside. If suddenly those kids lost their computer privleges, many of them will have little to entertain themselves with. Clearly, the computer occupies the time of kids who can't go outside. In conclusion, the computer has enormouse benifits on society. It allows people to send messages and information faster, helps students whith school, and gives kids something to do when they can't be outside. I hope that this letter had convinced you of the benefits of computers.",5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,22.0
10628,4,"The Author concludes that, when the geese come back she will take the test because she believes she will be more ready for the test then it will be easier in the spring. This will give her more time to learn & study & hopefully her head will be more focused instead of thinking about her home. It will be easier to complete the drivers test in spring. She feels bad like she let her mother down for failing it, “I just stared at the hibiscus,” this tells that she felt to ashamed to even look at her mother. So next spring she wants to make her mom happy & pass cause she will be ready.",2.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
3207,2,"Should certain books, movies, magazines, music, etc., should be removed from shelves if they are found to be offensive. Books, movies, magazines, music are made to relay a message, express a point of veiw, or to perhaps state an oppionion, of which everyone has a different point of veiw.     No, books, movies, magazines, music, etc., should not be simply taken off of the shelves or out of stores. All of the previously listed things are rated. Movies are rated @CAPS1 through @CAPS2, books are rated child through adult, and music if explicit has a parental advisery sticker, so just follow the ratings. IF a four-year old tried to buy two tickets to see a rated @CAPS2 movie the theater would not sell him the tickets because he is not yet off age. People @MONTH1 bring the point of maybe a child picks up a adult book or magazine in a store and begins to look at it and read it. The solution to that problem is simple create a seperate room in stores that sell these items and label the room adult section. Have cameras near by so if a yongster feels brave enough to tempt fate they will be caught or just put a desk out front of the adult section and require an i.d. for entrance. These are still books which are expressions of a persons dreams, hope, desires, fantasies, and heart, they should not be denied there dream because a person deems it unfit. And most apparent if it offends you dont read it.     Simply follow the rating rules. Take necesary precations. If all of these rules are followed then buisnesses and libraries should have no probles keeping everybody safe and happy.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
4598,2,"To whom it @MONTH1 concern:          As time goes on in this ever-expanding world of ours, it seems that one thing that is constantly being fought and argued is censorship. Censorship allows things in our world that are viewed as 'offensive' to be comprimised.     People these days though. must be getting offended much more easily these days, because it seems that media is censored more than it ever has been. I for one, am sick of having the 'veil over the eyes' as it were. Most censorship in this country is run through programs our government has established, censorship shouldn't be up to a organization, but instead to the person viewing it. In other words, why should other people decide what is most pleasant for us to watch? Nobody knows you better than yourself, so why shouldn't you decide?      Why should censorship exsist in our media if it doesn't exsist in our everyday lives? There are plenty of things people see that they regret seeing, it's all in how you take it. No matter who it is, people are going to see things they don't want to see, that's just life.      Censorship denies our rights as @CAPS1 citizens to have the right for free speech. If you don't like something you're seeing, then look away yourself",3.0,2.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
369,1,"Do you use a computer? Is there one at your house? Well, the average household owns two computers, but this isn't good, @CAPS2 computers are taking valuable time away from hobbies, nature, and real-life. First, computers take time away from hobbies and friends. Some of my friends spend @NUM1 hours on the computer a day that they could be playing. a sport or hanging out. Also, the computers become the center of their lives. People ask me "" @CAPS1 weren't you online @TIME1?"" and i answer ""@CAPS2 i have a life that doesn't revolve around @CAPS3."" @CAPS4, the computer takes time away from nature. People dont acknowledge the beauty of the outdoor. Now that our lives are so orderly, we need the wilderness even more than @CAPS2 it helps us to appreciate ourselves more and appreciate how special our planet computer take all that away! Third, computers take us away from real-life. Some people dont know how to have a face-to-face conversation, they only know how to communicate by email or @CAPS5. I acknoowledge that getting away from real life can be relaxing but some people dont know which side the stomp goes on a letter. It @MONTH1 old-fashioned, but i believe people put their heart something you can't do by email. In conclusion, computers take time away from real-life, nature and your hobbies. Plus, you can get arthritis in your hands if you type to much.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
49,1,"Dear local newspaper, I am writing this letter to you to show on how people get effected from computers. It effects people very well and teaches people many things for just one technology. Computers effects many people for what it does. Computers have many advantages that people learn very quickly. Many people love computers. It is one of the most best inventions to everyone around the world. They teach positive things for people to learn. Computer even have a positive effect on people across the world. They teach many things for people to learn and that have already learned. Such as, hand-eye cordination. When you type up words it teaches you to see better with your eyes. Computers also, give people the ability to see, understand, and gives information about people across the world. Celebraties are very popular on computers or other technologies. Computers help you learn things better than any other technologies. Anything you can get on any other technologies. There is a guarantee of you will find it on your computer. Computers are just like other technologies but in some categories they're much better than the others. Computers are very important in life because without computers we would not learn how to communicate with each other. If we did not have phones to use to call someone. On the computer if you go online you can maybe talk to someone by their email address. You can talk to someone that you have not talk to in years. You can look images or videos that you haven't seen in years. On computers, you can find out information from news that week of or even the day of. In conclusion all I say is that without computers in this world. What would it be like? Most technologies that are not as good computers will be popular without computers. I wonder what it will be like?",3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
15449,6,"The Empire State Building faced many obstacles trying to allow dirigibles to dock there. Dirigibles are blimps. The first obstacle for the Empire State Building with just the size. The Empire State building was very competive with the Chrysler Building. Some oppinions were ""The mooring mast of the Empire State Building was destined to never fulfill its purpast, for reasons that should have been apparent before it was ever constructed. There was also the obstacle to their expanded use in New York City was the lack of a suitable landing area. They added a mooring mast. There was many trials and tribulates making the Empire State building.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,1.0
8896,4,"The auther concludes with that paragraph because. it shows that despite her sorrow and discomfort, Saeng is able to remain hopeful. In the story, Saeng sees a hibiscus which makes her very homesick for her native country of Vietnam. The reader also leans that she failed a test and feels at of place. However, the hibiscus symbolizes hope and comfort. The auther chooses to conclude with that paragraph because despite Saeng’s hardships, the hibiscus helps her realize that she can overcome he obstacles and be hopeful of the future.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
6953,3,"The setting in the story “Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” really goes against the cycilist and his journey. This is because in the places he goes there is no water and if there is it is really hot or bad water. For example, on page @NUM1 it says, “a tarlike substance oozed out, but the water wouldn’t cool down,” This explains how bad the water was when the cycilist was there.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
15148,6,"Al Smith had a great idea. When he thought he was going to have a dirigible station dock on top of the world's tallest building. He had great creativity and wanted to use his building to full potential. Although there were many problems to this idea. One was the urban area below, many people lived in downtown New York City and it would be against the law to have zeppelins flying above the populated area. Another important problem was the intense winds that were harsh and made it very hard to dock on the building. There were many obstacles in the way of fulfilling Al Smith's dream for the Empire State Building to dock dirigibles on the top of the building.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
6933,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist because they started to mess with her mind. She didn’t knew where she was and on hip of that got lost. Whether you see nothing around. You or alot around you, you’re going to feel scared. They have the same affect. In the authors case, she was cycling and didn’t/couldn’t and water. This is an over whelming feeling because you can die from dehydration. She then kept cycling and saw nothing. “no one insight; not a building, car, or structure of any kind.” That is alatining no water or people around, as if you are going to be just left to die. These settings would affect anyone who came across them. They dffinately affected the cyclist because she was by herself, and on her dvun. Plus, all she had was a map, her bike and an empty water bottle.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
3874,2,"Almost everyone in this world reads. Many people have to read almost every day, people @MONTH1 not realize it but they do. Reading is just a part of life If you dont know how to read you are most likely to not be sucessful. Even if you know how to read a little bit, if you just the knew the basic words people would probally fine but people deffinatly need to know how to read. No, I do not think they should take anything off the shelf.     Why would they take anything off the shelf? If anyone finds it offensive they should simally not read it. Just because it offends them other people @MONTH1 find it interesting. If peolpe just started taking books off the shelf because they were offended by them, who knows how many books we would have left. people can  be offended in the most easiest ways. We could have no books on the shelf because almost every book out there can offend someone in a way.The same thing with moives, moives can offende people justr the same as books. I think moives would offend more than a book would.     In conclusion, Books, movies or anything of that matter should not be took off the shelf because it offended someone. Many people get offended in this word way to easy. One person @MONTH1 love a book and another person hate it. Just because you hate it does not mean it should be tooken off the shelfs",2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
1658,1,"Dear Local Newspaper,… I believe that computers have a negitive affect on people today. I believe this because computers cause people to be less active, most people would want to be at home on their computers then out side doing activities. I also belive computers restrict people who talk through it to show emotion. People should be out with each other when they talk not talking throught a machien. Finally if people were not on the computer as much they would bring down the obesity rate of the contry if everyone just stoped using technology for a while and wen outside. Every day at least once or twice or somtimes even more people use the computer for hours on end. People today have so many options of things to do on the internet: @CAPS1, @CAPS2, ooVoo, and alot more. @NUM1 out of @NUM2 people say they ""need"" to check these everyday but they really dont. What they do ""need"" to do is to stop using computers as much and go out side! Furthermore, people all around the world communicate thought the computer. I talk to my friends all the time thought the computer"" says @PERSON1, ""@CAPS3 the easiest way"". Now it @MONTH1 be the easiest way but @CAPS3 also the most boring, I mean really do you want to talk like a robot or with emotion like a person? Computers dont give you the chance to show emotion, this means people need to go out, hans out, and mabye even call each other to talk. At least you getting up to get the phone. Finally, @CAPS4 is one of the most obese places in the whole world. People are sitting on the computer everyday, eating, and not moving at all and gaining weight. Do you really want to be a known as the ""fat country""? I dont think so. People should restrict computer usage among themselves to a of an hour even less if you can. To restate, I beleve that computers have a negitive affect on todays people aroung the world. Computers cause people to be less active. less emotionn in a conversation, and cause people to be obese. So please help me fight to put more people outside and make people more active, sounds like a pretty good cause huh?",3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
7397,3,The features of the setting effected the cyclist. The setting was a desert in California making it VERY hot outside. The hills were hard to climb and there were dangers all around such as poisonous snakes. Not just this was terrain hard to move around on but the path was thickest. “@CAPS1 weeds crossed my path and a ridiculously large snake.” This made it harder for the cyclist to reach his destination.,2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
9998,4,"When she moved to america she saw all the beautiful flowers that were out in the spring she saw a blossom that caught her attention it was called hibiscus. She felt it could with it that she went to the florist to see if they had it. Back were she could they grew wild, jittering out from the cracks in ceizors walls the blossom remind her of her grandmother its long gray hair freshly wased",1.0,,,,,1.0,0.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,3.0
6840,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist by making him hot and thristy most of his way. As he rode he started to get tired slowly and he got work and more thirsty. He drank his water at first with out thinking to much or it, but as he went on he slowly found himselfs trying to conseve it. By the time he got to the second wild town the will he was so thirsty and tired thathe thought it might of been a ""death"" So he wiped the sweat from his eyes."" to make sure it wasn't a mirage. The only time people see mirages is when the are hot,tired, and about to kill for some water. This is what the cyclist was like after his long jouney to Yosemite National Park with the directions given by old men.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
418,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION2, @CAPS1 name us @PERSON1 from @LOCATION3, @LOCATION2. I thought it would benefit your opinion on the effects @ORGANIZATION1 computer usage throughout the @LOCATION1 if you heard from a young teen. This would help you because at @CAPS1 age people are dependent on computers! they can be entertained by online games, communicate with friends and family and receive news about what is happening around the world. Although some people do not always benefit by having a computer, most @ORGANIZATION1 the time people are satisfied, and do benefit from the use @ORGANIZATION1 computers. First off, people are affected by computers in a positive way because they can be entertained whether it is playing online games, or participating in a fantasy sports league. Although I just mentioned two non-educational examples, there are many educatiional websites on the internet which children can learn from. In @CAPS1 personal life I can name so many examples @ORGANIZATION1 entetainment. I use such as @CAPS2, which is an online game website, or fantasy football teams I am involved in. Another example @ORGANIZATION1 entertainment is when @CAPS1 younger brother. Parker goes on leaving websites. He will play on these websites for hours. Although he is sloveling infront @ORGANIZATION1 a computer screen he is learning. Also, expert say that children in the throughout the world learn more from the computer then from a textbook, or hearing information from a teacher. They say this because a computer screen catches peoples attention. Learning is a major priority and if it means putting a child infront @ORGANIZATION1 a computer for an hour will improve this, then that is what will happen. @CAPS1 next reason why effect @ORGANIZATION1 computers on people is positive, is because it helps people communicated with friends or family. @CAPS1 brother is attending college at @ORGANIZATION1 and since we do not see him often. our family will video chat with him over a program called @ORGANIZATION4. Because @ORGANIZATION1 this program we are able to stay in touch. An online poll was put out on @DATE1 which asked how people regularly talk to friends, or family. Sixty-three percent @ORGANIZATION1 the votes showed that people communicate over the computer most @ORGANIZATION1 the time. Thirty-two percent said over the phone and about sixteen percent said in person. this shows how much people communicate over the computer using, facebook, @CAPS3 @CAPS4, and much more. I would say that the computer is a good effect ion people when used this way. Lastly, computers help people receive news about what is happening around the world. On the computer at @CAPS1 house, everytime I open the internet there is breaking news about the war in @LOCATION6 devistation on @LOCATION5, and much more. Alsom a few months ago a class at @ORGANIZATION3 made a pie-chart and discovered how their classmates find out world news. Fifty-six percent said they foud out their news from computers. Not only is it @ORGANIZATION3 students but most people get news from the internet. Just the other night at dinner our waiter was from @LOCATION4 and he said he received all @ORGANIZATION1 his news about his hometown from the internet. As you can see many people use the internet on their computers to receive news and information. It is easy to tell that the effect computers have on people is positive because @ORGANIZATION1 the reasons I have stated above; people can be entertained, they can communicate with family and friends, and @MONTH1 recieve news about what's happening around the world. Like I said on the first paragraph, not all the effects are positive but most @ORGANIZATION1 them are!",6.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,26.0
1121,1,In my opinion i think that computers help people. It helps them with imformation that they @MONTH1 need. It can also help learn a lot of things.,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
6224,3,"The features of the setting affect cyclist in many was it was like a crazy maze, the road he was own, and him not really knowing were he was going didn’t help him, or not having enough water. This is how the features of the setting affect the cyclist.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
4214,2,"People of all ages have the right to read any material that they want @CAPS1 or other family members @MONTH1 tell their children not to read about a certain topic. Those children will either listen to their @CAPS1 or not. If these children do not listen, we need to do something about it. We need to have rules in libraries. Children do not need bad influences in thier lives.Adults have the right to keep children away from this information.     Leaders of a library have many different sections in their library. Children and adults both have thier own sections as well as teens. These groups of people have a right to choose what material it is that they want to read, watch, or listen to. I believe that if we make the sections have an age limit we can prevent children from finding bad information. Right now, children can read this information at any time. Adults can eliminate it.     Children in libraries should be supervized. Too many books are about drugs, sex, or pregnancy. Reading this material @MONTH1 give off bad information to a child. Children are not old enough to be learning about sex. @CAPS1 should be the first to tell thier child about sex. Young children know about drugs and know that those drugs are harmful. Children learn about drugs in movies, books, and can hear about them in music. Many books deal with pregnacy as well. Learning about pregnancy make them think how that women got pregnant with a child. Those children then start to ask other adults and children.      Children can also read or listen about gun violence. Children read about gangs and think that it is cool. They then want to play with toy guns and pretend that they are in a gang. This information is very harmful and should not be allowed to children. After some children read about it they get thier friends involved. This information can spread across the school. Violence is very harmful for children.     Librarians are not in control of the material people wish to read. If that library has offensive material it is their job not to let that material get into a young persons hands. They should be able to have strict limits on age apropriate material. If a child tries to check out a book and it seems to be over their age limit, they should not be allowed to have the book. The sections that they @MONTH1 find harmful information should be closed to young children. Children in libraries should be supervized. Books about drugs, sex, or pregnacy @MONTH1 not be allowed for children to read. Violence in books seem to spread across schools. Adults can help prevent harmful information from all children.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
15216,6,"The builders of the Empire State building faced many obstacles in allowing dirigibles to dock. For example the building had to be reframed because its original frame could not support the weight of a dirigible on top it. Also the materials inside dirigibles are highly flammable so an accident above an urban area thats highly popuated would have been costly/fatal. Another obstacle was the wind, since the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents the dirigible would be swiveling around and unstable, thus making the idea for docking dirigibles on top of the empire state building unpractical and unsafe.",2.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
7040,3,"The features of the setting in the essay, “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted speed limit” affect the cyclist. As the cyclist rides to his destination, he encounters obstacles and views his surroundings. The author gives the starting setting in the second paragraph as “a reservoir campground outside of lodi, California an early. Summer evening.” The reader is informed that the temperatures are not in summers in California. This gives the cyclist his main conflict, the lack of water. With temperatures being high, it is easier to become quickly dehydrated. The author stated, “The sun was beginning to beat down and I was traveling through the high deserts of California in June. Also, to cyclist encounters a ridiculously large” snake in the middle of the rode. The reader is aware that there are many conflicts which one can encounter while cycling. There are finally many features of the setting that let the cyclist know where he currently is, and the place where he wants to be most, the cool pines and rushing rivers of Yosemite.” @CAPS1 the essay, the cyclist is determined to reach Yosemite, and although he faces troubles, he doesn’t give up and is relieved when he finally receives water.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
985,1,"Dear @CAPS1, "" Computers are great! They do so much for my family and me, i can't live without a computer."" @CAPS2 my many local in the town of @LOCATION1. For me, computers are a place to have fun with all the different applications. But they can also be used for researching anything you can imagine. I also think tha computer is important because it is where businessmen do their job. My favorite part about the computer are applications like @CAPS3, @CAPS4, @CAPS5, and so many more. These apps. are great because on @CAPS5, you can talk to your friends if you don't have a cellphone, or talk to friends that live in another state, @CAPS3. Easily my most favorite application, because I get to talk to my friends, look at pictures of them, see who they are dating, and so many other endless possibilities, You can also play and download games onto your computer. It's always very fun to do things on the computer that you enjoy, and not have to research all the time. The second thing on the computer, is research. Researching can be fun and boring, however you look at it, But researching is educational, and I asked a mother with a @NUM1 year old, a @NUM2 year-old, and a @NUM3 yearl-old and she said ""The most important thing to me on the computer is researching. Its's fun, enjoyable, and most importantly, educational!"" The best thing about researching is that, there are endless amounts of websitees that have information for us to look at, and enjoy. People that work and have jobs, are mostly the ones on the computer, and a lot of them ar researching while working. People that work, are th ones that are basically on the computer @NUM4. Businessmen, designers, etc.... The computers are mostly used by workers for e-mail. My father is always on the computer, checking e-mails, typing something for this boss; and even talking on a video conference. There are endless possibilities for workers because foe some of them, computers are their jobs. Computers, in my opinion, they'are one of the best things created. They are the best because they ahve amazing apps. for me to have fun on. But they also provide an educational opportunity through research. And they are great for people with jobs. I don't think there is any person that can live without one of these technological beauties.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
15727,6,"The @CAPS1 of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles. By allowing the dirigibles to dock there, They had to build @CAPS2 planfronts on the side of the building, which means that they would be putting there life's in danger. They also had to deal with the electrical  problems within and without the building. The @CAPS1 on the outsides of the building would have to deal with the strong wind currents. They also have to make sure that the electrical system was working properly. If there were to be a stark of any sort of Fire, the hydrogen and helium were extremely flameable, and if a wire were too short, it could like the whole dirigible aflame and it would blow up.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
6077,3,"The settings affect the cyclists for many reasons. One, if the setting is nice, the rider can concentrate on the scenery not on only pain they are having. also, if the setting isn’t very nice, the rider would probably concentrate more on the pain than they would the scenery. another thing is if the setting is very hilly & the rider has to drive over it, it @MONTH1 not feel the greatest. The cyclist would get even more pain than before plus the cyclist could could get dehydrated faster, the setting really does affect the cyclist.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
7440,3,"Hot, @CAPS1, @CAPS2-all are the features of the setting that affect the cyclist. First, the hot days with not a lot of water to drink. He will get dehydrated. Also, there is no one around to help him if he gets lost. Joe Kurmaskie explains “there was no one in sight, not a building, car, or structur of any kind. Finally the creature was a large snake that came along on road. So he had to move around it.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
16368,6,"They faced many problems when trying to dock there. It should never have been made in the first place. To many things were predictable. They had no landing gear, The wind was too great a factore, and the Ships couldent get close enough to The mast to dock.The people creating This over looked the possibility of it not working and only looked torde building it. They had no landing gears what so ever so it was hard to steady it and dock it. The wind was unpredictable and swung the balloon around. The biggest thing was when they slowed it down and had no wind it still couldent get close enough to dock. Those are The @CAPS1 problems they faced.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
13330,5,"In the memoir Narciso Rodriguez, Narciso created a few moods that are very relatable, yet make you think. One mood is happiness. This reading feels happy from the beginning to hand because it shows how Narciso went through his life, and what he loves about his childhood paragraph @NUM1 says ""my parents both shared cooking duties and unwillingly passed onto me their rich culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today. Passionate Cuban music filled the air mixing with the aromas of the kitchen."" These sentences show he loved the environment he lived in, and what was in his home, which made him happy.Narciso also created a mysterious mood. This mood made you think about your home, and what the word 'family' really means. Narciso's family was a great, big, loving group of people-many of whom were not even related. Paragraph @NUM2 says ""my parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family, knowing they would do the same for us."" This shows thier consideration of family was large, and inspiring.The main mood in this memoir from Narciso is gratefulness. Narciso is grateful for many things, especially being able to live his life the way he did. He is mostly grateful to his parents, as paragraph @NUM3 says ""I will always be grateful to my parents for thier love and sacrifice."" Narciso's main mood is gratefullness because he is grateful toward everyone & everything that made his life good, and made him what he is now.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
6823,3,The setting affects the cyclist because the heat and no humanity makes him so crazy. If he was in a place like @LOCATION2. It would be just the heat because there are people every were in @LOCATION2 @LOCATION2. If he was in @LOCATION1 it would be the severe temperature drop and no humanity and he would probably die.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
1537,1,"My opinion on computers is that I think it's a good idea for people to go on computers. I think this way because if you haven't seen someone for so many years then you got a chance to see that person or talk to that person through the computer. Computers are also good because if you have a project to do from school then you could get good information based on what project you have to do. I like to go on the computer to talk to my friends that I haven't seen a while you could also meet new people and make friends. If there wasn't computers then we would have to look through a lot of books for information, or go all the way to the bank to check your account balance, this is why I think computers are good ideas. On the computer you could see workouts to get fit we don't only have to go to the gym. My dad gose on the computer to talk to his sisters, or play games with other people arount the world. Another example I could use is my mom she talks to her family in @LOCATION1 and in other places too. If there wasn't computer's we couldn't our tests, we couldn't get information. I think computers are very good ideas, cause it's good when you got to pay your bills too. We could interact with friend and familys online too thats what a lot of tenns and aults do if there was a rainyday or if its snowing and we don't go the chance to see our friends or relitives. For some people they think it's not a good idea because some people get addicted to the computers, but there is so much that you could do that the computer won't get you board. Thats why I think that computers are a good idea and that they are very important.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
6885,3,That the cyclist is steyetling down up totally end steep within when to get to his destination of the town settle out are taken mean yesterday. The condition in hand and hurry some when and have one his body.  ,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
12037,5,"The mood in this memoir seems to be a grateful tone. The reason I say that is because Narciso says how grateful he was to have parents that left everything behind so that he could have a better life. He also sounded grateful when he talked about the Spanish, Cuban, and Italian people in his neighborhood would work together instead of being racist to each other. He also mentioned that he learned the meaning of ""family"" while living in that house. By ""family"" he didn't mean blood relative Family. What he means by family is everyone that would come into his apartment and everyone in the building was family too. The mood he has while writing the memoir is grateful.",4.0,,,,,4.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
9303,4,I think the author includes this to show the determination to pass this test no matter what.,1.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
6019,3,The setting effects the cyclist because he is in the desert with no water and doesnt know where he is going. The old men on the porch gave him wrong directions now he is lost in the desert. The cyclist find the will power to keep on moving and he finds help along the way. He finds another old man there that offer him directions but he says he has a map,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
15059,6,"In this @CAPS1 ""The Mooring Mast"" by @ORGANIZATION1 the builder of the empire State building faced many @CAPS2 during the building of the Empire State building.The @CAPS3 obstacle would be the wind. Because The building was so high And the more up the more Air and wind they had to stop landing or Drop off the dirigible. A dirigible is also a ballon or blump but there different because the dirigibles can be controlled by pappellers. Another reason was the @CAPS4 equpment. They didnt have the right equipment to dock the dirigible. So they @CAPS5 from letting them dock there ever again. They also @CAPS6 to stop it because it's over hundreds of civilians and if something goes @CAPS4 the balloon could fall on the civilizians.Those Are the reasons Why in the @CAPS1-""The Mooring Mast"" by @ORGANIZATION1 had to face problems with docking ballons.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
9469,4,"The author includes this scentence, “When they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again,” to show her determination. She is determined to pass the test. Even if she is facing problems adapting to @LOCATION1 she wents to sucseed here. So she will wait a year and then try again when she is better prepared.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
723,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, I would like to notify your business that computers benefit society. Computers allow people to talk to friends and family, they are important resources for many jobs as well as school work, and they allow people to learn and store information. Computers are one of the biggest advances we have in technology. First and foremost, computers allow people to talk to friends and family. I like to go on the computer, mostly because I'm able to speak with my friends. Computers are a good way to talk to friends that you @MONTH1 not see often or just to talk at the appropriate time. I have a facebook and I always talk to my friends about events happining in school or school work. For instance, last month I sprained my ankle and I stayed home from school for one day. So I went on facebook at around @TIME1, when everyone was home from school and my friend told me what was for homework that night. So, now because of our computers I could catch up on the work that I missed that day of school. Also, if you have family that lives far away or someone in college you can send them an email to keep in touch. My cousin is in college right now and I always talk to him on the computer to see how he is doing. For example, we always talk about sports we are involved with during that time of year. As you can see, computers are a great way to keep in touch with family and talk to friends. Secondly, computers are a big part of many peoples lives because many jobs involve computers; as well as school. Computers are a very useful piece of technology because people use computers for paying bills, jobs and more. For example, my dad tests computer programs as a job. The programs are constructed, then corrected and revised, then finally sent out all over the world. If people weren't allowed to use computers then many people would lose their jobs and many families would be in huge debt. Also, children do a lot of school work on the computer. For example, I take spanish and I earn culture points for my class by answering a question on the computer. Studies show that over @PERCENT1 of children use computers for some sort of school work. Computers are a big part of the working society today. Finally, computers allow people to learn about different places around the world. The computer holds a lot of valuble information. There is facts and fasinating pictures about different countries. It also shows people around the world the culture, style, language and many more facts about places around the world. For instance, my uncle was on the computer one day and he was looking at places in @LOCATION1 and after a long hard thinking process him and his family moved there and they still live there to this day. Computers inspire people to learn and see different places and @MONTH1 lead them to something important one day. In conclusion, I feel very strongly about how positive computers are to society today. I know that you will feel the same way because computers have so much to offer.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
4637,2,"censorship     No,i dont think they should take certin book off the shelves, there are alot of thing out there that can be found offensive; gangs, politics, race, even school that small children go to.      I can understand wanting to shelter your children, but you cant keep them from every thing. Inner cities have gangs that right awfal words on trains, building, and about anything they possible can. an you cant just take that off the shelf.     Politics can be the worst, during presidentual elections they are always bring up there color of skin, and about everything they can find out about the other person. All of your kids watch this on tv.     Race wars can get bad, people all around the world are fighting just because the color of there skin. You cant him them from it either, its an on going battle that will never be one and it will keep getting worse.     I cant speak for other schools but mine has a lot of little problems; little kids cussing, the older kids fighting, then there are the people that try to do good in school and get picked on for it.      You cant hide you kids for ever, sooner or later they will find out about these problems. If you want to help your kids keep them off the streets because reading it in a book is alot better than them seeing it in the real world. You have to prepare them for the problems ahead, and if you dont then they might  get hurt alot worse than the little words in a book or a magazines or movies.",2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
9353,4,"In the story “Winter Hibiscus”, I think that the author concludes the story in “when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snow melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is dudding, then I will take that test again” because she has made Saeng feel that if that hibiscus can restart and make new flowers the Saeng should do the same. Therefore thats why the author added that quet to the end of the story",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
3697,2,"I belive that certain materials should not be removed from the shelves if they are found to be  offensive.  The main reason I say that is becuase there are not just postive things in this world ,but there are alot of negitves also.  It is very important for children to learn and understand the things that are going on in the world they live in reguardless if they are good or bad.  Everyone is going to have to learn about the things going on around them sooner or later ,so it is better to find it out as a child rather then later on in life when you might not have someone there to explain it all to you.       I understand, there are some age limits that should be inforced becuase of some of the fowl nature of them. Though at some point and time before a child becomes an adult they should know most of the basics of life no matter how positive or negitive. Children should not be shelter at a young age to just young adult things because they need to know what else is out there in the world.  For example, children should be taught that there really are bad people in the world.  If they dont understand that something bad could happen to them beucase they did not know the dangers around them because they never learned it.       When I was younger it was required to know other people out side of your race or religion beucase not just your race or religon is in this world.  Also we learned the diffrence between good and bad choices.  If us children did not learn that at an early age many of them would be in some very rough situations today.     On the other hand there is an extent the children need to learn also.  For example, say you buy a video game for your child ,but make sure you inforce to them that killing and shooting is not something that they should be doing out in the real world.  Make sure you teach them the diffrence between really and fakeness.  That is a main reason why kids today do not have self control becuase of the things they learn off of video games.     Now a days on @CAPS1 there are people being preasured by the media to act out of there charater just to get attation.  They are publicsizing sexual and inapproprate things for child to be learning about at a young age ,but they need to be aware that its out there and it is bad.  In magazines they will destorte famous peoples bodies to make them look like something they are not to make people feel like they are not good enough.  Children sould be taught that not eveything they see, hear ,and read are not always right or true.  With todays media and materials it is easy to know the diffrence between right and wrong ,but they put it out there as if one person is doing it it is ok for everyone to be doing it.  In most cases it is not until that person understand all of the facts about it and can make rashanal dessicions on there own and on there own time.     Children now a days will get  presured by media, magazines ,and sometimes by peers.  The media is telling them to do something that is not neccessarliy right ,but is popular.  You should not teach you children off of things like that it will make them want to do things without thinking or considering what is really going on.  With todays magazines, the writers will make people look like something they really are not just to make them look good.  That is not fair to readers, the person that is being expoused, or the author themself.   Finally, with peer pressure today kids will see something off of television and try it then try and get there friends to do it even though they know it is not the right thing to do.  I belive that children, when they are faced with delimia's like these, should know right from wrong with the trouble they are faceing.  If they know nothing about it they need to walk away or learn how to say no reguardless of how hard it might be.      In conclusion, I believe that the children now a days that are exposed to any type of offensive things should know the meaning behind it.  Also they should know the right ways to haddle it when they are put in certain situations.  Lastly, I believe kids should know what is going on around them so when they grow up they know how to fend for themselves ,and not be counting on someone else to tell them baisc things that are going on in the world around them.",3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
9008,4,"The author concludes this story with the promise Saeng made to herself to take the test again, come springtime, because Saeng is having trouble adapting to her new home, and she won’t give up on fitting in after only one failure. Remembering her home and that she will never be able to return are painful thoughts to Saeng and memories of it help her cope with her loss. The hibiscus and other familiar flowers she found comforted her, because they reminded her of home. At springtime when the geese return and the hibiscus starts blooming, Saeng will feel ready again to take the test, the spring represents the chance for another try, and a new beginning.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
9729,4,"The author brought out the paragraph ""when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again"", to portray the theme of the story. Saeng used the hibiscus for hope in her life. The author also uses the choice of words or diction to explain the way Saeng lived her life depending on a flower. The paragraph also explains the way her culture is depending on the theme of the story.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
743,1,"To use computors, or not to. That is the question. Hundreds of millions of people use computors in their daily life today, but some believe that using computors does not benefit society. It is my firm beleif that they do. Computors provide entertainment, a way to interact with people, and a nearly endless expand of knowledge. Without them, we would quickly find life to be much harder and less fun to navigate. Have you ever been in your house on a rainy day just sitting around bored because there is nothing on @CAPS1? Well I have on many ocations. When that happens, all you have to do is turn on the computer and you have endless choices at your fingertips. You can go on game sites and play thousands of different games. (this can also help improve your hand-eye coordination). You can also watch movies or @CAPS1 shows that you missed or want to watch again. You can even go on sites such as fanfiction.net, and read or write your own stories! Another reason why computers benifit society is that they help you interact with people. You can keep in touch with far away family members and friends using webcams email, and chat sites without the bill that would come with talking on the phone. You can also meet new people from different countries and become their. That way you learn about different ways of life and cultures. You can also quickly contact people in an emergency get updates on events, and comunicate with your teacher if you have a question about your homework. Lastly, and maybe even most importantly, computers are on enormous source of knowledge. Say you wanted to learn how to start a campfire, you could just search, ""how make fire"" a google and @NUM1 matches would be found seconds. Also, if you were asigned a project for school, you could do all of your research easily from your computor, then type the whole thing up on a word document. You can even get a college degree online if you wished. And if you want to find a resturant that specializesin @CAPS2 cooking, you can find one close to you, get directions to it, look at the menu, see the prices get the restaurant's history, cud find reveiws for it all on one magnificent little choice: your computer. So you see, computors benifit society greatly. In fact I don't think we could live without them. They provide us with entertainment, an easy way to interact with people, and a huge source of information. Now, to all of you people who still think computors are bad; I'd like to see you lost a week without using one.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
3535,2,"Censorship in libraries is an inportant thing in schools and in the public. It is inportant beause some of movies, books, and magizines have a bigger influince on the kids then most people think. Like some of the really gory movies the are always people in the movie gettin cut up or shoot. Do you really think that some kids dont think about hat stuff. Somtimes the kids can get it in there head that they can do what they see or read.     Like in the movie @LOCATION1 @CAPS1 they are beating up and killing people just because they are colored. And some kids @MONTH1 think that that is ok. And they can go down to there librarie and just get it off the shelf and check it out and go home and watch it. Now if you r using it as a thing to teach kid that it was the way things use to be and that it is wrong then that is ok. You can teach your kids all you want just make sure that it is the wright thing.     And some magazines that are in the schools or in the public librarie are just not the kind of thing that kids should not be looking at. Like the gun magazines or the hunting magazines the just show that it is ok to carie a gun were ever they go. And the hunting magazines just show that you can go out and shoot stuff. And some kids @MONTH1 be confused that you need a lisense to do all of that. You have to at least put and age limmiet of some stuff.     Go's the sameway with some of the books they always start out good and then the just turn into a big mess of gor and vileance. Like the spere it started out with a group of people going under water to explore a ship. And they find a big shpere and they go in it and get these powers and they imagin it and it comes true. Well when a kid reads that they @MONTH1 think that they can do that and they start imaging that they can eather hurt or really do some damage to someone. And then when they find out that it wont work they @MONTH1 do it to them themselves.     So it just come to show that you should censor some of the stuff that you have in your libraries and if you can take them out then at least put and age limite on them",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
182,1,"Dear local newspaper, I think more people shouldn't spent time on their computer. The reasons why I think this is because people should spend time with their family and friends, second they need to exercis more, and last go outside enjoy nature. My first reason is that people that have computers stay in their rooms all day and don't get fresh air. They need to go out and enjoy nature. People who love animals and like to study animals should go out and get fresh air watch the animals study them. Haveing a computer is you could study animals like that is ok but you dont want to got stuck on the computers. go outside and watch them instead of looking at the computer screen. My second reason is that people do get more exercis. People are getting fat because they are sitting at the computer and not doing any movement. Peple are becoming lazy every day because they are on the computers @NUM1. Is you like to be on the computer and study go for a walk, run, joy, or ride a bike to the get some so a while. My last reason is that more people need to interact with their friends and family. People should get off the computer and make some plans with their family.Have a get together with your family and go places and chill. People who be on the computers don't spend time with there family dont know whats going on around them. Some people go into depresion because they are on the computers not enough time with family. These ar my reason why i think that we shouldn't be on the computers. We should spend more time with friends family or go outside, and enjoy nature.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
4053,2,"Coming from a teenager, @CAPS1 offensive books, magazines and movies should be removed from a local library. A library is a place to go relax and read. Most books and movies are filled with sex,gang violence, and drugs. In my generation sex, durgs and, gang violence seem to be high at risk everywhere. Books are suppose to be about learning. Offensive books and movies set bad habit on younger children.These are the reasons offensive books movies and also magazine should be removed from our local libraries.         Sex, gang violence, and drugs seem to appear everywhere in my generation. Whenever you open your magazine you find different topics, but they all deal with either sex, drugs, or violence. Children should never be exposed to that type of  offensive behavor. You should be able to open a magazine and   learn somthing brand new.    Books are good for reseach paper and other school project, but sometimes you cant find what you are looking for because of other topics. Reason you cant find what your looking for is because every book or magazine you look threw is covred with  the topic you dont want. As a teenager each book I look at its always about sex or gang violence.     If younger children, countiued to read about bad topics, it will create a bad habit on that child. They say you are involved  with what you read. Bad habit could lead to many things, such as killing, smoking , and pregnacy's. Thats why all parents should have guidence over there children.     Being who I am , there should never be any offensive books, movies, and magazine in a local library. Offensive books and movies can cause many problems. It drive children where they sont need to be, and you wont be able to learn if you have to many bad habit. there should only be book and movies where you a re able to learn something in your local library.",3.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
4657,2,"Some children take books off the shelf that some old people can't read now a days. Some people taken books off and taken them and broken, take pages off of them",1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
1596,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, I agree that computers had a positive effect on people. They teach hand-eye coordination give the ability to learn about faraway places and people and allow people to talk online with other people. More people should see computers as a positive effect on people. Spending time on a computer is a great way to enhance your hand-eye coordination. It also teaches you how to type fast. Typing is an important skill that you need for most jobs. It is so important that have throuhout school teaching us how to type. we also use hand-eye coordination is loaded and. You have to keep your eye on the and move your arms and hands to hit the. Computers are helpful in many ways. Have you ever about what looks like or what would be found on it? With a computer you can. Comuputers give people the ability to learn about faraway places and people. You can get pictures some important cities and places, and some knowledge on the people who lies there. Yes, you would do this in a social studies look buts is much easier and faster online. Computers save time and make your life easier. Computers are learning more and more advanced everyday. They give you the oppurtunity to talk with people online whether the world the street. In order to do this you need a web. They are sold in computer stores and some are already installed into the computer. Being able to talk with people online is a really great thing. Its a fast way to learn about that person and maybe about them if they one from a different country. Its almost like a pen pal last your in a computer. People are saying that computers have a negative effect on people. They say people are spanding to much time an computer and not on exercise. They also say that they are not interacting with family and friends. All of these things should be. All you have to do is manage your time. Or not all day on the computer. If you do this thinks everyone will say that computer your positive effect and are one of the last invention created. I would like to thanks all f the reader for there time and hope hat you all support me and my ideas.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
790,1,"Wouldn't you say that having a computer in your house is helpful? It provides useful information to everyone. It can be used for personal use, such as for talking to friends. If there is a child in the house they might have to search something up on the internet for school. If you need directions to a place or you want to find out more about a specific person, a computer can help you. If you have a child who likes to run up the phone bill because they like to talk to their friends just tell them to use a computer! These are so many ways communication can be made through a computer such as @CAPS1, @CAPS2, @CAPS3, @CAPS4 @CAPS5, @CAPS6, and even email! If you need to make quick plans maybe for a movie with a couple of friends just send them an email or a message on @CAPS2. Now, an @CAPS1 you can text people right from your computer! If you're afraid someone might not get the email in time, just enter their cell phone number on @CAPS1 and a text. It's free too! Now that our world has become more technologically advanced schools often tend to tell students to look something up on a computer or maybe to do a homework assignment posted on their webpage. If a child does not have a computer at home this will. Make it hard for them to do their homework. Also, if a perent decides to start a business from have a computer would be required to cant up profits and to talk with customers. A computer can also make signs for a business or business cards. Need directions to a restaurant? Or maybe a local gym? A computer can help you find directions to almost @CAPS10 plan on earth. @ORGANIZATION1 @CAPS11 is a reliable website to get directions. You can also learn about specific people if you type in their name in @ORGANIZATION1. If you need someone phone number but don't have a phone book you can use @CAPS12 pages to help you. So, now I hope you can see that computers effect people in a positive way. They help you keep in touch with friends and save you money. They help students learn more and could possibly help you start your own business from your home. If you need directions or help finding a phone number, a computer can help in multiple ways. Having a computer could make you have draw perspective of everything.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
10214,4,"At the end of the story, winter Hibiscus, the author's concluding paragraph shows many of the aspects of the story in a summary, Saeng is determined to go back to the drivers test and is open to a new beginning. The author used these concluding words in the paragraph to express the hope in Saeng of a better beginning and to show her determination to pass the drivers test. The author ties the objects in-a story to represent this determination and new beginning. For example, the hibiscus is a reminder of her glorious home, spring is the time she picks because it is a new beginning, and the geese returning show the determination of her and her to resolve to become new and better.",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
16576,6,"In the passage, The Mooring Mast by @ORGANIZATION2, the obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there are out lined. These obstacles were safety, nature, and law, Safety was an obstacle because the passengers on the dirigibles would be put in danger. This is evident in the line, ""...dirigibles from outside of the @LOCATION1 used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" The dirigibles could have blown up, as many have in the past. Nature was an obstacle because the dirigibles could have a hard time attaching to the mast if the weather is un desirable. This is supported in the quotation, ""...winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" The wind could cause the dirigibles to move around uncontrollably, which wouldn't be very safe for anyone. There was a law against airships in urban areas that was an obstacle. This law is explained in the quotation, ""this law would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area."" This law made it unnecessary to have the mooring mast, as it could not be legally used. The obstacles outlined in the passage The Mooring Mast by @ORGANIZATION2, allowed the architects to avoid wasting funds on something that wouldn't be profitable.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
15843,6,"In Downtown New York, Al Smith and his builders faced many obstacles in building and docking his dirigible on top of the mooring mast which had come to a failure by the end. The reason he planned to dock in New York because that's where most passengers would be at the location, where Smith would see it would be a success. The dirigibles are made ""with enormous steel-framed balloon with envelopes of cotton fabric filled with hydrogen and helium"" (paragraph @NUM1), at the time that Smith wasn't thinking, ""hydrogen is highly flammable"" (paragraph @NUM2) as well as the cotton fabric would catch on fire also; it is a dangerous hazard if any incident would have been in a ""densely populated area."" Another obstacle they dealed with was the ""dirigibles could not more at the Empire State Building was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas"" (paragraph @NUM3) since it was illegal to dock the dirigibles in low areas, it couldn't happen for Smith, and the size of the dirigible, it's too long to not able to crash into one of the other buildings. Not only that but ""the mooring mast could not get close enough to tie up because of forceful winds. Fearing that the wind would blow the dirigible onto sharp spires of the building in the area"" (paragraph @NUM3) and it would most likely to happen since there are many buildings closely to one another in New York. With all these problems that they had faced through; failed; the dirigibles wasn't the future transportation by Al Smith, all of his plan's failed by the end.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
12966,5,"I beleive the mood that sets off in the beggining of the story is how in her house cuban music and great aroma's From @CAPS1's @CAPS2 through the air, I also think that it gives picture of laughter and happiness, And I think that throughout the story @CAPS3 tells that @CAPS3 relizes through spending time with community that his parents are teaching him, Just because someone isn't blood related dosent mean they can't be lik family as said in the package, There teaching him that It Is also people that love you and care about you. As @CAPS3 continues through the passage It says that his family is all ways open to take care of people that they love and need help. @CAPS3 soon relizes that all his family gave up from their old lives was so that they could provide a nice home for him and teach him a valuable lesson in Life the true meaning of family.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
3659,2,"Censorship in the libraries. Do you think that we should be able to take movies, magizens, and books off the shelf. There are many different arguments about this subject.     I believe if they put the books, movies, and other stuff on the shelf than it should be able to be read by children and others. They need tho learn about everything thats out there in this world. because if they don't learn about this now than they will never know about all of this when they get older. I think that it is cridical for our youth to know about it.     Some people @MONTH1 say that we are two young to be looking at that stuff but the younger you find out about it the better of you will be when you get older.      So that is my input on the situation. the younger you are you can learn more about the stuff",2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
818,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 you think computers are bad for society. It came to my attention that many people are concerned that computers are not very good in my opinion I think computers are They help typeing skills. Computers are also very helpful with and crofing pictures, and they make it to find information. First of all, computer are very helpful with typing skills. Other people doesn't use computers takes six years to @CAPS3 younger people like young skills use very quickly. Actuly @PERCENT1 of teens can type in a minutes Who takes @NUM1 minutes. Computers have a great effect on many people with their typeing skills. Computers makes it so copier with so many pictures editing and many more, editing pictures from a expensive digital @CAPS2 it for free on your computer? A computers makes it and it through a lack of information to just computer and find it faster. The computer you can look for information make faster. For example you have to @CAPS2 a project on @CAPS4. Instead of going to the library and spending more on a book about @CAPS4 you can go on google.com and type in @CAPS4. So much information and so much faster. Get with the program computers are in. In conclusion, I think computers is a great invention. They make it easier to find information and typing skills. Also they make it so much easier to crop and edit photos, please take my suggestions sereusly.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
15907,6,"The architects didn't realize how many potential problems the mooring mast would bring until it had failed. The greatest reason why the dirigibles couldn't land was purely safety complications. Many dirigibles at the time used hydrogen rather than helium, which is highly flammable. Another main reason was nature itself. The winds on top of the building were very violent and could easily push a dirigible in the wrong direction. Before these problems, there was an already existing law against the flying of airships too low over urban areas. Dirigibles could not dock at the Empire State building because it was unsafe and illegal.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
12261,5,"The author, Narciso Rodriguez, uses detailed descriptions of her childhood to create a warm, gentle, and grateful mood in the passage The memoir begins with Rodriguez explaining her Cuban heritage and how big of a role that played in her life This creates an idea of pride and love for who you are. Narcisco goes on to say how her parents were ways welcoming and inviting and how they sacrificied basically their whole life so they could make a better life for their children. In the final paragraphs the author expresses pure graditutity for everything her parents have given up and done. In one line Rodriguez praises parents when she thanks them again saying, ""there is no way to express my gratitude for the spirit of generosity and the demonstration of how important family and friends are."" All of these details contribute to the overall mood of the memoir.",4.0,,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
1673,1,"Everyone will agree that using computers is also a good choice because you do meet people you don't know. Also you learn more stuff you don't know. Not only that but, u can also learn more about technology. Most people would say that, meeting people is good because you can have fun talking and getting to know people. Also, people would want to learn about other people cultures. Some people would want to know some personal, buiseness about peopl. Even people want to know where are some people from. People like to kno",2.0,2.0,2.0,1.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
9038,4,"The author concludes this story in the paragraph to show that saeng wont stop, just because she faild one first time. It also shows that she is not going to let certaint things keep her down.",1.0,,,,,1.0,0.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,3.0
16282,6,The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles. The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself. Because The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. Also because the Empire State Building have's an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas.,1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
6694,3,"The different settings in the essay/ writing affect the cyclist because of how old and hopeless they look. I think this because when the cyclist stops at the first town, he’s looking around expecting to find a quaint, bustling little place, but instead he finds these abandoned, decimated old houses. And if you yourself can picture being in his situation, then you can imagine how discouraging and almost frightening that must be. As the cyclist continues for a few more miles, he’s becoming slowly dehydrated, and finally sees a building. At first, he thinks this building is a mirage; he was wrong, but for him in this situation it was worse- an old juice factory, right when point you kind of get the feeling that every things turning against you and that there’s no hope left. But when he finds the fishing camp, his entire perspective of things changes, and he just feels so thankful to have been saved.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
8972,4,"In the story “Winter Hibiscus” by Minfong Ho the main character Saeng and her mother, moved from their homeland to this new place, where everything was different. she was having a very hard time adapting to this new place, and Saeng failed an importian test. She had been very discouraged by this, and she was trying to remind herself of being at home. She bought the winter Hibiscus to remind her of home, but when she was planting it she became very determined to try and adapt, by taking the test, when the hibiscus would bud. The author is concluding by there being hope, and determination for Saeng to adapt to her new home.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
4769,2,"I believe that certain materials should not be removed from the shelves due to censorship.Different sections in the libary should be offerd.Everyone has differnt oppions on what they like to read or watch.You should do what you want at your own risk.I think the censorship should not affect the libary.      The libary should offer differnt sections, therefore a kids side, a teenage side, and an adult side. The kids side should offer books that only kids should see by age group.The kids should not have to worry about censorship becuase they should not be offered any thing that an libarian would not want them to see and they should only be able to checkout things from their side of the libary.     A teen side should not have censorship because alot of kids know many things that they should not so it would not effect them as much.Books that teengers read are most likely to have foul language and inapropiate things. Teenagers when they read or see things does not really influenece them as much. Music that teenagers listen to they already know what most of the songs are talking about so why offer only censored music at libraries? Why would you want to try to remove something when it is already known?   An adult side should not have censorship, adults should be able to read, watch, and look at mostly anything.Adults are the ones who see it and heard it all. It would be pointless to get rid of things on the sheleves.. They already know of allot of things. Why get rid of books that others @MONTH1 read. It is a libary so it should just offer things that would increase intellegence not decrease it.     The censorship is pointless, you should do what you want at your own risk.Things in movies,books,magazines are that are of the world. Why try to block out negative things when there all around you. If someone finds something affensive then let it be there are many things affensive in today's society.You pick up what you want to read and make the choice on your own. If your capable of reading it or if it is the right decision check it out.You enter the libary at your own risk and choose what criteria or selection your going to choose.     The libary is full of differnt oppions and allot of differnt likes and dislikes.If you should not be looking at something then it is your oppion to take what you want out of it. Everyone enjoys differnt things like, movies,books, magazines, and music. If the libary had a censorship they would loose allot of matrials all due to oppions of people that did not care about others oppions.Everyone enjoys differnt things and wants a wide varitey of the things they like. The libary is where you go when you need  books, movies, and etc. Why close someones oppion of  book selections, what if that is the only type of selection, or book they like to read.     I believe that the censorship should not affect the libary.The libary should offer differnt sections  for certain age groups.The books and magazinges and music at the libary should all be at your own risk to checkout them. Everyone has differnt oppions at the libary. The censorship would be a bad decison if they did go through with this decison.. The libary would not offer as many things and most liekly less things would be getting checkedout. Therefore I do think that the cenosorship should not remove books on the shelves at libraries",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
4291,2,"Censorship, @CAPS1 or @CAPS2?          I can understand why libraries would decide to keep certain books off their shelves. Libraries are a place for learning and work. If you were sitting near someone at a public library who was reading smut you could feel awkward.      Although some people @MONTH1 find certain items unoffensive, other @MONTH1 disagree. Imagine you are a mother with a young child who decided to wonder through the library. Your child finds a magazine. It's '@CAPS3'. Not something that you are going to want to explain to your child. If the library were to have not kept the magazine, it never would have happened. Libraries are a public place that should be taken seriously.    If people really want to find something that is inappropriate they can find it somewhere else. The modern world today makes it easy for people to find just about anything without a large hassle. Therefore it should be fine to keep certain materials out of our libraries.      How can people take libraries seriously if there are dirty books, or books with rude language, and scandalous themes. If you are trying to get work done or learn and there are distracting items on the shelves then it @MONTH1 make things more difficult. Libraries are serious places and should be treated as such.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
15741,6,"The obstacles the builders faced in building the Empire State Building were nature. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" ""Dirigibles moored in open landing fields could be weighted down in the back with lead weights, but using these at the Empire State Building, where they would be dangling high above pedestrians on the street, was neither practical nor safe."" The size was a problem along with how high they were in the sky. ""A thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame."" @CAPS1 were the obstacles.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
15036,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced a few obstacles when attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The biggest obstacle was finding a safe way to do it. New York City is a very densely populated area so any type of accident would be horrific, as the owners realized in @CAPS2 @NUM1, ""When the German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by fire in Lakehurst, New Jersey, on May 6, 1937, the owners of the empire state building realized how much worse that accident couldve been if it had taken place above a densely populated area such as @CAPS1."" Another obstacle was nature itself. The wind at the top of the building was too strong as it says in @CAPS2 @NUM2, ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currants. Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around the mooring mast."" Safety was clearly the biggest concern",2.0,,,,,2.0,4.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
12906,5,The author that wrote this put this in a sad or good memeries.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
4540,2,"Throughout the history of literature, many books have been banned from public libraries and shelves. They are all somehow offensive to certain people, but not to all. Even some books that include magic and fiction have been expelled from some societies, simply because of certain religions and cultural backgrounds. I believe that there should never be a piece of literature completely banned from public eye.     When a book is banned, a piece of history is removed from others' sight. A book that @MONTH1 have been banned in the @DATE1 could not have been read by my mother or father. My future children and I could also never be able to read it. Materials that are removed from the public are generally removed because of one specific group which complains about its content.     When I was about eight years old, I remember seeing on the news that people in @LOCATION1 and other @CAPS1 @CAPS2 countries were burning books from the @CAPS3 @CAPS4 series, only because it contained magic and ridiculous fiction. Maybe they were being burned because the @CAPS5 looked down upon its story and its fictional stories, but that does not mean it should be banned from the libraries. The @CAPS3 @CAPS4 series is one of the most popular pieces of literature of my generation, and generations after mine should be able to enjoy it as much as we did.     Before the beginning of @CAPS8 @CAPS9 @CAPS10, the @CAPS11 were starting to be discriminated against. They were treated as sub-humans, like in this example. There was a night in @DATE2 called @CAPS12, when radical @CAPS13 and @CAPS14 supporters burned @CAPS11' houses, stores, and even books. Some of those books could have been the only copies, yet the @ORGANIZATION1 let their hate overcome them and destroyed the pieces of @CAPS16 literature. Because the @ORGANIZATION1 found the @CAPS16 work offensive, the generations after @CAPS8 @CAPS9 @CAPS10 can never read the books burned during @CAPS12.     In Katherine Paterson's quote, she says, 'But if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf -- that work I abhor -- then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' I believe she is correct in this quote. If literature keeps being censored, there will be none left for future generations to enjoy. No literature should be censored, not even the most radical, magical, or fictional. If censorship continues, the future of literature is doomed.",4.0,5.0,6.0,6.0,6.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,27.0
1307,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS1 posission on the computer contraversy issue is that computers are good and so vital in todays everyday world. Computers are a good way to communicat, they are most people main source of info and buisnesses use computers for various importanat task as well. Computers are a great way to comunicate. You can @CAPS2 with your friends, email your peers and now there are website you can go on where you can talk to your friends or a stranger. Being human I do sometimes forget @CAPS1 homework or school asignments. In that situation I would just go on @CAPS1 computer and @CAPS2 a friend asking them for the assignment. Its quick easy and it works. There are also websites where you can talk and connect with other people who share the same interests as you. Its a good way to make an online friends. The computer goes beyond just allowing you to talk enables you to connect with people no matter where you are. Do you ever have a question that you instantly want or the to? Just go to ""google"" or ""@CAPS4"", tpye in your question and recieve an immediatly. AHve a reaserch paper due on @PERSON1? You can do all of your reaserch online. There are thousands of website loaded with information can anything and evrything. Youc an enter yout topic a search engine and find hundreds of sources that way. You can easily fine information any subject you want, or find the name of that song you just heard on the using your computer. COmputer are used in buisness environment too. Computers are used for getting messages to different people in the. They are also used to create and presernt presentations marketing campains and now product ideas, also many companies use the internet as a source of advertiring and need the bublicity to sell their. So the computer is necessary for to function as well. So in conclusion computers are not over used, they are just used for so many things that at some point every one will nead one. They are a good way to communicate, an important and main source of info and they are also used in buisness environments too.",4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
10482,4,"I am guessing the author adds this paragraph to tell the reader that when all of the beauty returns, she will try to get used to new thing again.",1.0,,,,,1.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
7664,3,"The setting affect the cyclist in many ways. ""The journey nass make an snake this quote and that there made it seem like he is in the middle of know were and is ulcoming no plass because the man on the pourch said it would not be to far. The first town also was empty and when saw the town he was excited to go and feel a little out when he got closer he realized that the town has been abandoned this whole time so he was forced to keep going out the empty town made him feel almost hopless. In his attempts to make it to that next town, that how the setting mos affected the cyclist in the way that it did.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
4147,2,"Should certaine materials on shelves that are offensive be removed from shelves? I believe that certaine materials, such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc., that are offensive to people should not be removed from shelves. These materials are taken in perspective by all different kinds of people.     Offensive materials should not be taken off of shelves because something that is offensive to one person @MONTH1 not be offensive to another person. People take things differently than other people might. For example, a lady might find a book to be disturbimg or offensive, while the man next to her can find that same book interesting and useful to him. Not one person is the same so not everybody will take offense to the same thing.     I also believe that if someone does not like the object that they are offended by then they do not have to look, purchase, or give attention to that object that is there on the shelve. He or she is not forced to buy, read, or watch what is offending them. The material that is offending that person is not purposley put there to offend them, it is there for people who are interested in it so that they can enjoy theresleves in whatever it is that they might be doing.     Therefore I do not think that materials that are offensive should be taken off of shelves. People have the right to things that they enjoy. A material should not be taken off of a shelve just because one person is offended by it. Different people have their own perspective of things and opinion of how things.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
12632,5,"In this memoir, the mood created by the author was heartwarming and apperciative. There were so many parts to this story that made me feel so warm and made me want to say ""aw"". For example, in paragraph @NUM1 where it states, ""was a close-knit community of honest, hard working immigrants who extended a hand to people, not nessecarly of their own kind, were clearly in need"". This line showed me how much love there must've been. Also, that everyone cared about everyone else. When the author is showing how her parents left their country to come to @LOCATION1, you can tell how grateful the author is this is shown extremely clear in paragraph @NUM2 where it states ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice.I think this story made me realize that you need to apperciate what others do for you. This author was so greatful for her parents, and that is shown very clearly in this memoir.",3.0,,,,,3.0,4.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
1176,1,"Dear newspaper I hear the more and more people use computers and I think thats so awesome because people talk online with other people. @CAPS5 they teach you how to use a computer. It gives people the ability to learn about faraway places and people. Computers it the more advanced technology so its @CAPS1 the people is using it. I love to be in the computer all day because I always enter to @CAPS2 and talk online. @CAPS4 example some people like to talk with a family member the is not in the @LOCATION1 so they communicate from the computer. Sometimes I talk online with my cousin in @LOCATION2 because I have @NUM1 years I dont see her. So I think talk online or using the computer is important. @CAPS4 example even grandma have @CAPS3 and she talks online with her family members. I think the using the computer is not a bad benefit because it helps you be in communication with your family or friends. That is why I think the people is wrong saying the or is not. Secondly, it teach you hand-eye coordination my grandma is old but computer and @CAPS4 example my grandma a nice hand eye coordination because when she goes to the letters she just ress and all she is correct. think computers have a effect on people. It @CAPS5 helps people write better and better. @CAPS4 example I love and when it write I dont need to go to other I write king of @CAPS5 the helps me with my eye and hand @CAPS6 is the it helps you find faraway places and people. @CAPS4 example on @ORGANIZATION1 you find what ever street you want. It @CAPS5 help you find in the computer about people. @CAPS4 example if I have a project I find the information on @ORGANIZATION1 about people or places. The computer is really helpful because you could find pictures of places and information of people. I think is a positive effect on people. Finally, I think the computers are great benefits society. One reason is the you could talk online with people. @CAPS5 it teach you hand-eye and the helps your brain and sight. It @CAPS5 helps you at your hand movements. @CAPS6 reason is the give people the ability to learn about faraway places and people. @CAPS4 example I have a project in @CAPS7 and I have to learn and search about forensic doctor and I search everything on the computer. I think the computers help your brain think more and computers are advanced technology. So I think their benefits our society.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
674,1,"Dear @CAPS1 of @ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS2 you think our excersizing and being in nature is becoming less and less? I don't think so in my opinion. I think computers is a positive effect because it can help you connect with other people from different parts of the world. Learn different stuff or how to's to make life easier. Be in-touch with far-away relatives. First of all, I believe computers is a positive effect because you can connect with people from different parts of the world. You can talk about thier culture. About how the, whats thier tradition of marriage or etc. The schools, and ask them questions. Secondly, I believe computers is a positive effect because you can learn stuff from it and how to's to make life easier. Because you can learn it easier with different under standing it better so you. Study from the to's to get school. Thirdly, I believe computer is a positive effects far away relative. If you talk to them in a long time wondering how there doing what they life. When we meet up catch. In conclusion, technology will basically help you in the future well. The marvolous computer will help you be in-touch with really good familys and friends. Now its time to @CAPS3! because the fancy technology will be here till years too come!",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
1406,1,"Dear local Newspaper, In my opinion computers have a good effect on people because people can communicate with each other, learn on the computer and mostly people can shop online. Overall think computers have a positive effect on people. Wow! Finally got to chat with my cousin from california communicating on the computer is great because you save money the because you dont have to pay a phone bill. Also most companys use email to chat between co-workers. Dr. @DR1 a  scientists say co-work who communicate are actually safer because they dont have to  anywhere and they can stay home. Today these are so many social networking sites people can improve their mental health and cause there selp esteem by talking to people on a daily basis. Lastly all this communicating is great because you dont have to travel to communicate with someone   the world is more eco-friendly. Wow! There are over I  information sites on the computer. On the computer you can also use programs to make graphs and tables to show data. Mrs. Can says if you show inpormation on the computer like using graphs you will increase how much you know by @PERCENT2. Another great thing is in order to learn you dont have to read books which saves paper and many most op the databases with informatrion are free on you save money and also it takes only seconds to find inpormation you want. On average it takes @NUM1 seconds to find information. Finally the computer is a great place to find information and enlighten yourself. Shoping on the computer, that must be immposible not with todays computers, shoping on the computer is great because you save time not having to travel to the , consumer reports says you can save @PERCENT1 op the cost up the product ip you buy on line because over @NUM2 stores have online sales with the technology have today you can compare pries op an item by visit clicking a button's then you dont have to spend extra going to both . On line product renews have bcome very popular becasue you can hear other people opinion about the product. In the end online shoping is great because you can save money compare  and on many great things. In conclusion computer have helped a lot to people because you can shop online communicate and learn , overall computer have really changed lives for most citizen",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
11957,5,"The mood created by the author, Narciso Rodriguez, is clear in the memoir. You can sense throughout the whole story that he is completely grateful to his parents for the love they gave him, and their home life.                 In paragraph @NUM1, it says ""Within its walls, my young parents created our traditional Cuban home, the very heart of which was the kitchen"". Rodriguez is ""eternally grateful"" for his parents who ""unwittingly passed on to meet their rich culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today"". They always had Passionate Cuban music that filled the air ""Mixing with kitchen aromas."" At the end of paragraph @NUM1, he says ""Here, the innocence of childhood, congregation of family + friends, and endless celebrations form the backdrop to life in our warm home. I will never forget how my parents turned this house into a home.""",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
76,1,"Dear local newspaper, @CAPS1 best friend, @LOCATION2, was once a nerd with no hand-eye coordination, @CAPS2, he started to use a computer and now he has better hand-eye coordination than me. Computer not only teaches hand-eye coordination, but @CAPS3 gives people the ability to learn about far away places and people,and millons people to talk on line with other people. @CAPS1 friend wasn't the only person who learn hand-eye coordination. About @PERCENT1 of people learn hand-eyes coordination using a computer. @CAPS3 might takes some month to learn, but once a child knows @CAPS3, they will be outside for hours. Who would not want to learn hand-eye coordination? In addition, computer gives people the ability to learn about far away places and people. Computer engineer, @PERSON1, says, ""@NUM1 in every @NUM2 people learn about places and people threw the internet."" @CAPS3 will take a few hours, but you will be educated. Why would someone think we are spending too much time in the internet if we are being educated? Addionally, don't you have a friend who live more than @NUM3 miles away from you? If you do, @CAPS2 a computer will solve your problem of communication. @CAPS1 friend, @LOCATION1, lives @NUM4 miles away from me. We communicate using hotmail, yahoo, and facebook. The best thing of all is that is free unlike a telephone. Futhermore, computer specialist, @PERSON2, says, ""I learned hand-eye coordination using a computer. Most importantly, i was able to hand in @CAPS1 essay on time because of the information a computer provides and i was able to communicate with @CAPS1 family."" I didn't want to tell you this, but i was also a nerd with no hand-eye coordination and i learned just like @LOCATION2 learned. We aren't spending too much time, we are just being educated.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
1276,1,"Dear editor I agree that people do spend to much time on their computers. An if you read this you would see my reasons why. One of them will be about exercising. The two others will be about your friends and family. So read my reasons and by the end I hope I made my point. All right like I said first we will talk about what the lack of exercise because of always being on the computer. Did you know that from being on the computer all the time you lose focus on exercising anymore? Of you eating an @CAPS1 not exercising, because your worried about the computer. The weight that you put on you know just doesn't burn off by themselves. So by you not burning off that fat you just keep gaining and gaining. By the time you know it you'll be over weigh and wish you didn't spend all that time on that computer. How that I'm explaining about your of exercise. Where going to talk about your you bring on the computer all you would with your family. For example your family would want to go out but you say no because of that computer @CAPS1 parents would @CAPS1 they would because your lack of communication with the family. I've got my two reasons across let me get my third. Of you bing on that computer you have been adicted, but you just don't lose contact with family, but also with friends. You loving that computer so much you probably quite all your like the basketball, softball, and more teams because you thought it took to much of your computer time. In the end you would lose probably alot of frienships. @CAPS1 your boyfriend or girlfriend would dump you. So now that you read this I hope I got my point out to you, about what a computer can do to you in the end.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
7524,3,The way the feature of the setting affected the cyclist is that  its in June in the middle of the desert. Also he was given wrong,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
9033,4,"In this story theauther deicides to end the story with this paragraphe, ""when they come back, saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is buding, then I willtake that test agien."" because she wants to take the test when every thing is isanters, de forexample she wants everything she likes in her nuforment such as the flowers, the geese and the whether. Another reason why I say the author ends the story with that paragragh because she wants to be, ua eviorment like the one that she was in her home country forexemple there was no snow it was like sping time all ver around. This is why I say that the auther ended the story with that paragraph.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
16266,6,"When the architects behind the mooring Mast of the Empire State Building first began there work in designing it, they did not take into account the @CAPS1 that they would have to overcome to dock a dirigible. In the excerpt it States that the mooring mast was not originally part of the design structure for the Empire State Building: however the stresses it would cause in docking a dirigible ""would have to be transmitted all the way to the buildings foundation."" This means that the builders would need to design Some way of doing this when the building was already begun. Other @CAPS1 included those of safety. The exerpt tells that ""most dirigibles from outside the U.S. used hydrogen"" which is more flammable than helium. This combined with the fact that there really was no way of securing the tale of a dirigible moored at the mast could cause an accident @CAPS2 to that of the Hindenburg over a ""densely populated area Such as downtown New York""",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
4133,2,"With the world having a wide variation of cultures, languages, beliefs, and races, there is no doubt that different subjects will be offensive to some and not to others. Books, songs, magazines, and movies all have purposes as to why they were created. This @MONTH1 be to entertain, inform, or persuade. People use libraries as a source to see these works. Many people use libraries every day to research or simply to gain knowledge for fun. My opinion is that any type of material, no matter what it contains, should be able to be found on a library shelf. A library is a place where one should be able to find a book, cd, video, or magazine or any subject that interests them.     If our libraries took out every item that was offensive to someone, there would simply be no library. Any item you read or listen to will have a word, sentence, or meaning that will offend a person in some way. This is because many of the items you will find will be in some way biased. The way an author tries to entertain @MONTH1 offend you if they use a certain language with a certain tone. Persuasion is also biased towards one side and you @MONTH1 not agree with the side the author chooses. The same goes with informing. You @MONTH1 think the author needed to address a certain point more than he or she did. All of these purposes of writing will be offensive to someone. I once was in a library and read a magazine talking bad about teenage drivers. The article was obviously biased and did not have any teen sources to prove that not all teen drivers are bad. This article deeply offended me, but I am glad I read it and saw a different point of view. Not everyone wants to see the different points to a story, but if you happen to run across one of these items that offend you, you can simply put it back down on the shelf. You are not required to read or listen to any item that you do not want to see or hear. However, there is going to be someone who needs to use that item for personal knowledge or for research. This is why all items need to be available to the public. If someone does find an item offensive though, they should be able to request that a label be put on the item to further warn other readers. Likewise, if there is an item rated '@CAPS1' there needs to be an age limit set to protect our young readers and listeners. With these changes set, our libraries could make everyone happy.     With libraries being found in most communities, there is going to be discussion on the contents of the items they carry. While you @MONTH1 like a book, I @MONTH1 find it offensive. Even though I @MONTH1 have a problem with an item, it still needs to be able to be accessed by all people. The point of a library is to carry items which will benefit the public. It is the right of any human to be able to go to a library and be able to read about any subject he or she wants. Any item, whether biased or not, should be able to be found on the shelves of a library. Those who do not agree with or want to read an item should simply stay away from that section and choose a different item which interests him. We need to be able to go to a library and find what we need or want to see or hear. This is how a library serves a community",5.0,5.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
4063,2,"Freedom of speech is a keen aspect in @LOCATION1 and thats what made our country flourish through many years. In the constitution it states that there is freedom of the press, which means that if something is written that might affend some people, then they have to deal with it. Some might say that some material is offensive, which sometimes it is. However I do not think that the books, magazines, etc. should be taken off the shelfs due to the feelings of another persons thoughts.     In @LOCATION1 over the years things have become more exceptable in media and books.  The rights have always been there but not fully practised. There have been book burnings, banned books, and even people being killed for there writings. For many years it went on until @LOCATION1 changed its way of thinking to a broader more open perepective. Though it still goes on I think that it is very closed minded. In some cases people blamed books that had nothing to do with killing someone, for the reason why they commited a murder.I do think there is a limit to how you distibute certain books and magazines. They shouldnt sell a book about death,poverty,or sex at a public school.      We all have diffrent things we like to read and write about. So why shoud we be taken away from because somone thinks its to offensive. I think not, if you dont like it then put it down and let someone pick it up who will read it. With my own experience i have seen bad people do what is expected of them , bad things. And they try to blame it on a book, story, or @CAPS1 show they had seen. Thats just a easy way out of a situation. I have read and saw very intense things in my life but does that make me want to do  bad things, no!      I know i cant speak for everyone when I say that books, magazines etc. or not harmful. But think about it like this wouldn't sometimes the person reading the stories figure they could learn and embrace from it rather then go out and do what the character did in the story? Reading opens up new things and is scientificly proven to make you smarter in the long run. The more you read the more awareness and knowledge you gain ,and just becuase you read a book about something doesn't mean you support it. It could maybe mean that you want to learn about it so you can understand it more.",3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
15884,6,"The builders of the empire state building had to face alot of obsticles to try to get dirgibles to land there. One of those obsticles was making ""changes to existing Plans for the building's stelfame"". Another thing was nature the winds would not let a blimp land there. But the greatest reason was safety: ""Most dirigables from outside the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flamable"".",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
15500,6,"The builders have faced many obstacles, from laws to future disasters. There were several problems with the design and location of the mooring mast One problem was that ""the winds on top of the building, were constantly shifting."" Even though the architects adjusted the design of the mast, it was still too dangerous to land a blimp.Another major problem, was the dirigibles themselves They were filled with combustable hydrogen. If a blimp was to catch fire, like the Hindenburg, the debris would fall on the pedestrians' below. The last problem was a law that prevented ""airships flying too low over urban areas.""In conclusion, due to laws, the dirigibles and nature, the mooring mast was not used.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
6738,3,"In the story, “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit,” by Joe Kurmaskie, the cyclist experiences dehydration on his journey. The cyclist takes directions from older guys who look like they haven’t left their porches in ages. He takes their advice and he then sukkers in the long run because he cannot find water and it is a hot @DATE1. He hikes uphills in the heating sun and fears a heat stroke. There was no sight, not a building, car.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
7610,3,"The cyclist is affected by the features of the setting. The cyclists has been pedaling his bike in the direction that the old men told him to go to get to Yosemite. Soon he is out of water and very tired and he believes he will die soon. But then he finds a fish camp, goes in the bathroom to revive himself. when he comes out a man is sittiNg on the porch. The author gets directios from him and is happy that he is on the right track again.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
3975,2,"I do believe that libraries should censor certain materials. Some things like music and magazines have bad language and racey pictures in them. Some parents might not want there kids to be exposed to this. Some parents might not know what their child is looking at in the library and wants them to be safer. The easiest way to prevent children from listening to innappropiate music or looking at offensive books is to take them off the shelves.     Some children go to the library without adult supervision and have freedom to check out whatever book they want. The child could easily pick out an innopropiate book and read it because there is no parent there to guide them. There is nobody to tell them what is wrong and right so some kids might not know. Thats why some books and music should be removed.      If you do not remove innappropiate books and music from the shelves you would have to have an attendent. The attendent would have to walk and around and check out what each individual kid is doing. It would be a lot of busy work and the libriarians are aready busy enough. Nobody really wants to do that so the simplier solution is to just remove the books and music from the shelves.      Another opition if you do want to keep the music and books on the shelves is to have an age limit on the books and music to check them out. If this were done it would still lead to problems like kids reading the books at the library but never checking hem out. This is an easy way to get around the system. A child could easily ask an older friend to check the book out for them, so they could read it later. This is another example of how easy it would be to get around that system.      Therefore, the easiest way to aviod problems with books and music is to remove them from the shelves. If this were done it is harder for the children to get the innopropriate books and music. If somebody needed to check out an innappropiate book for any reason, they could go someplace else. This is the best and most efficient way to protect and keep everyone safe",5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
6473,3,"There are many features in the setting that affect the cycleist, one of which is that he is in the middle of California riding his bike in the sun with a limited ammount of water. It affects the cyclist because he almost collapses from heatstroke and lack of water. That is how the features of the setting affect the cyclist.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
3619,2,"Thoughts of @CAPS1    I feel as though offensive literary pieces should be able to be taken from libraries. If a piece of @CAPS1 is particularly offensive; the piece should not be displayed. From my own experience, controversy is the reason that books are stricken from libraries. All of my experience, observations, and reading have told me one thing. That one thing being, pieces of @CAPS1 are taken away because of their offensiveness.     From the experience that I have had with books that cause controversy, I have noticed myself not liking the book. I believe that is the reason people do not like certain books in libraries. Coming from someone who does not particularly like reading. I feel as though reading something that offends me puts me in a state of mind as though I would not like to read any longer. All of my experiences seem to point to not reading books that cause distress or controversy.     Of all that I have observed, I have found similar things as my experiences. I have seen people, classmates in particular, that do not desire to read because they feel that a novel has offended them. Though my observations @MONTH1 seem one-sided. I truly have observed more lack of reading due to controversy than the increasing of reading due to controversy. All of my observations seem to point to supporting the revocation of 'banned books'.     The piece that I have noticed most prominent to this topic that I have read would most definetly be @CAPS2 @NUM1. In said novel society has outlawed all books. The story seems to heavily favor those who wish to read controversial novels, though we can take something from reading this book. The reading of this novel can be interpreted to favor my argument, as people lived happily without controversial books. Granted not all people did, but that is because of certain variables. From stories, such as the three little pig and the big bad wolf, we can understand how poorly the concept of controversiality is drawn. For instance, I was mortified hearing that the first time. I have never had the interest of hearing it again, as I felt that the story is not politically correct.     Pieces of @CAPS1 are taken away because of their offensive properties. If someone has no interest in reading a book because of the thoughts maintained inside of the text; the book must be stripped from the public. As it would only make sense to try to keep the peace. I for one support the cause to remove books from public places due to controversiality.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
11858,5,"The mood created by the author in ""Narciso Rodriguez""is very calm and happy. The author This very calm and cool. There are no loud or emphasized parts. It is also very happy. It describes a family growing and getting to love each other. Also frends and more family having happy times having celebrations. The happiest line was the last, ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple little house into a home."" It also has a very loving tone to it. Anything about a family coming together is loving.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
13513,5,The @CAPS1 Created @CAPS2 The @CAPS3 in this story is A very strong And happy @CAPS4 @CAPS5 They @CAPS6 From Cuba to A @CAPS7 @CAPS8 the United States And They were hoping For A Better life For there kids then The life that they had And @CAPS9 why the @CAPS1 was happy.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
3378,2,"People believe that censorship is impotant in Libraries. They believe that things should not be released if they have a bad subject matter. They feel that it is sending a bad message to children and teaching them horrible things to do and say. I disagree with them on this and these are the reasons why.     I feel that books/music/movies/magazines shouldn't be taken off the shelf is they have cuss words inside, i feel that they should continue to sell them even if they have bad words inside. I feel this way because there are alot of horrible things in this world. Children have to learn that, and i feel like cussing or anything of that subject matter isnt that big of a deal there is so much more to worry about then a couple of bad words children read and listen to. I listen to music that has cuss words on the inside and i also read books with bad words and it doesnt infulence me in any kind of way. So we shouldn't always try to control every one we should just let them be on the shelfs and let them or there parents decide if it's innaporpate or not.in conclusion i feel again that they should be on the shelfs and people should be allowed to listen/read whatever they want to. if it doesnt harm anyone or themselfs then let it go on and happen. let them do what they want to",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
13148,5,"The mood of the memoir I believe to be grateful or enspioring. Narciso's parents are imigrants from Cuba who live in a rasict community and are working to be able to support there kids. They are great parents to Narciso and provide him with basic nacessidies. They feed him, and buy him clothes. Narciso is very kind and thankful for the trouble his mother and father go through and he is also very considerate to try to help them when they need it. The mood is grateful because that is how Narciso feels toworrds his parents.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
16451,6,"The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there was cost, and saftey. The steel frame of the building would have to be modified, strengthened to fix this new situation and it would cost over @MONEY1. Another obstacle was that most of the countries outside the u.s. use hydrogen which is highly flammable. Another obsacle was ""The winds on top of the building where constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" this made it unsafe. These where some of the mayjor obstacles they had to go through",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
14994,6,"The obstacles that builders faced in making the Empire State Building a docking point reached the greatest problems. Obstacles come in all forms, depending on the size of the goal. The goal's size was immense so the range was in its greatest. The problems were law, nature, safety, and the point of docking.Firstly, the main problem was the location. ""The stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation, which was nearly eleven hundred feet below."" This would have not only tore down the entire building but send it crashing down onto pedestrians within the range of eleven hundred feet it the direction it was hauled. Secondly, instead of helium, dirigibles used hydrogen instead, ""and hydrogen is highly flammable."" This put a safety issue, especially over a highly populated urban area, like New York. Thirdly, the building was so high, it intercepted higher forces of wind. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" This could have made a dirigibles strain against the building or fresh against the mooring point. Lastly, law prevented all ""airships flying too low over urban areas."" As high as the Empire State Building was it was too close the public.Overall, the builders were impacient and that created obstacles in allowing dirigibles to dock at the Empire State Building. They made the goal so large, it caused the obstacles to reach their range of difficulty. The purpose of the Empire State Building may be a failure, but it still is the tallest building constructed.",4.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
11882,5,"The mood that the author has is, and happy. I know this because @CAPS1 talks about his family and friends and his @CAPS3. @CAPS1 starts to tell us about his first friend @PERSON1 and how they lived above him. ""@PERSON1 my babysitter and my first friend lived above us and @PERSON1 graced our table for meals more often than not."" @CAPS1 @CAPS2 how it was to make his first friend. @CAPS1 also went on to explane how his parents made the house and how @CAPS3 will stay there forever. ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" @CAPS1 is really greatful and his mood is happy and calm. Because hes talking about how his family started and how @CAPS1 met his friends.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
3879,2,i think censorship is stupid when it comes to putting it on adult show's. i can see why they put it on the kid's show's.. but like really?you guys will put that stuff on good movies? or song's!? what has ever happened to freedom of speech?,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
9760,4,"The author concludes the story “Winter Hibiscus” with “When they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snow melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” The author ends with this promise or commitment because it shows hope and determination. Saeng vowing to herself “I will take that test again,” shows her determination and unwillingness to fail. That is enough to bring hope to someone who has failed and wants another chance. This paragraph also sums up and displays Saeng’s good character. It shows Saeng’s strength because even though she failed the first time she was going to put herself through the pain of trying again to succeed. To fail and try again shows great inner strength. The author also ends with this paragraph because “when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding.” brings everything back full circle. It holds the promise of Spring and better things to come with it. There are many reasons why the author concludes the story with ”when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.”",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
4299,2,"If you take offense to certian things, you shouldn't read the peices of literature that make you feel like that. Ask some of your friends or research the book/magazine before you read it. Sometimes the front can be decieving so make sure you read the description first.     Many people that read certain things @MONTH1 take them the wrong way and think they say something they dont really mean. Which is why they take offense to it, but the more you understand a peice of literature the less you are offended. You should try to at least accept some of what the book/magazine says just incase you need it in the future.     You @MONTH1 get upset when you read something for the first time, and @MONTH1 not notice that it could help you when you think about it. Thinking about things is a great way to learn how to deal with being offended, just look from both points of view. They both could have good ideas and functions to them.     Try avoiding them if you are still offended by them, don't read a lot of book/magazines that have offensive things in them. Ignore the adds on the television or computers that have more than what you need to know in them or if they make you feel uncomfortable watching them. If you read them it could make you feel worse or make you mad. Sometimes they can even make you stess a little.     If you are really offended by something the best thing you could do is avoid it. Avoiding something helps you to not read them or think about them. This works for a lot of situations not just this one, so if you need to get away from the stress just ignore them.",2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
6946,3,"The setting in “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not @CAPS1 Posted Speed Limit definitely affected the author. The cyclist states, ""Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills"" (Kurmaskie @NUM1). The cyclist probably found it more difficult to navigate  through the ""hills"" as opposed to the ""Flat roads,"" making him more quickly tired. The speaker states, “I could drop from heatstroke” (Kurmaskie @NUM2). The speaker is implying that it is so hot outside that he could faint from a ‘heatstroke’ which could slow him down. The speaker also states,""water feeling somewhere in the neighborhood of two hundred degrees""(Kurmaskie @NUM3). The author did not have any good water to drink, because it was so hot outside, which affected him in that he was dehydrated. Many aspects of the setting affected the cyclist.  ",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
1402,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, I think that computers are both a good and a bad thing. Computers allow use to play games, and learn about almost anything. But computers cannot simulate fresh air and exercise. Computers allow people to play a wide variety of games. People can play chess, solatire, and a great deal other games like that. Computers also allow us to play a very wide variaty of online games. I can think of at least three different sites that have online games. Each site having at least @NUM1 different games! Hundreds of thousands of people play online games everyday! What would they do if we didn't have the computer to play those games? We can also search any topic from a computer anywhere. This is a amazing thing to be able to do. Imagine if nobody had a computer how would we research so much of our knowledge? Yes there are but using a computer is so much more faster. Plus you can print thing out on a computer with a book you have to copy important down. But you can highlight the important. How much could ? No matter how much computer do they @MONTH1 be but it is kids getting bigger and bigger all because they long. Computers are amazing and society benefits from them by a lot. But just like everything computers have their downside. So please inform adults and kids about the goodness of computers, but also warn them about the bad things that could happen if you spend to much time on the computer and outside.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
16286,6,"There were many obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle was the fact that they needed a mooring mast so that the dirigibles could anchor, but they couldn't drop a mooring mast on the flat surface of the Empire State Building's roof. It would put too much stress to the building. This problem cost over sixty thousand dollars. Another obstacle was safety precautions. The dirigibles were mostly filled with highly flammable hydrogen. If a dirigible was to catch on fire, then the whole Empire State Building would be destroyed, including everyone in it. It also wasn't safe because strong, violent winds could blow and detach the dirigible, causing danger to pedestrians below. One other obstacle that the builders faced was the existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. If they tried to anchor a dirigible on the Empire State Building, it would be illegal. Due to all of these obstacles not getting results, the whole idea has disappeared.",4.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
12012,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is like a mellowish mood. Almost like a fun loving feeling. The author had literally put himself into the memoir as I read. Paragraph two, had used parentheses several times within the text. The parentheses had given the author's look into his reality. Which had helped to create a calm mellow feel. Over all the mood was fairley simple, fun. In the last sentence it stated that the author had said ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" It had basically described that the family did not have much, but made the best of what they did have. The last sentence had made the whole memoir have a calm mellowish feel. In conclusion, the author in the memoir had created a mellow feeling throughout the whole memoir.",1.0,,,,,1.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
12220,5,"The mood in the memoir is basicly showing love, happiness, and friendship. The way that the mood shows love is in @CAPS1 @NUM1 and @NUM2. In @CAPS1 @NUM1 is says Alegria graced our kitchen table for meals more often than not. In @CAPS1 @NUM2 it talks about how his parent welcome refugees to celebrate their arrival to @LOCATION1. Happiness was shown throughout the story. And friendship was shown as well The way that friendship was shown by his parents keeping their door open to whom who did not have a home. But let them stay in their home until their back on he or she is back on there feet, and considerd part of the family.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
13416,5,"The mood the author creates in the memoir shows a soothing and grateful memory of the authors home and relatives. The author creates a peaceful tone representing calmness, comfort, and happiness displayed in his memories.One example of the authors way of creating a comfy and peaceful mood is in paragraph @NUM1 ""Passionate Cuban music filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen. Here, the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the backdrop to life in our warm home."" @CAPS1 two sentences give a deep and warm thought of family and friends along with comforting images of kitchens and sweet aromas of cooking. This type of writing gives the reader a calm mood based on the comforting words, used in the sentence such as passionate, aromas, innocence, and warmAnother example is in paragraph @NUM2 where the author displays happiness and shows his gratfulness for having family and what his family has done for him. This adds to the mood in the memoir by representing how great family is and how much it can mean to people.Overall the author uses calming and strong words to get his images and feelings through in the memoir. Because of this he was able to create a peaceful, and comfortable mood while expressing his love for family and friends.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
12813,5,"While reading Narciso Rodriguez I felt a certain mood. the mood was very serious and grateful. In the memoir Narciso said, ""I will always be thankful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" this shows he is thankful for all his parents Did to make him the man he is today. He also writes, ""Growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relative."" That statement is a serious thought that clearly came from the heart. It shows he has love for anyone who comes close to him. to add, ""My mother and father had come to this country with such courage."" that says that he thinks about his parents and having heart, and courage, and that is both serousness and gratefulness. In closing I would like to say Narciso Rodriguez is a very grateful and serious man.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
14906,6,"Builders had many promblems with allowing dirigibles to dock at the Empire State Building. First of all in @CAPS1 @NUM1 the author exsplains that ""A thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would only add stress to the buildings frame"". Builders with that would have to construct the building to make it more stable. Also there were cases that outside the United States they use Hydrogen other then helium. Hydrogen is very flamible, and because new york is so populated it would not be safe to podestrions. Seeing this you can tell that builders had to many promblems coming from such an ""easy"" thing.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
13294,5,"Throughout the memoir, a very thankful and happy mood is shown. Narciso was raised in @LOCATION1, and knew why his parents had moved from Cuba, despite their love for the culture and weather. ""They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life."" This quote shows Narciso's understanding of how much his parents gave up for him. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrafice."" This shows how happy and thankful he has been throughout his life because he was given the chance to grow up in @LOCATION1. ""I've often told them of my admireation for their strength and perseverance."" Narciso's parents gave up alot to give him a better life, and he shows he will always be greatful for what they have done.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
16518,6,"In the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the author describes the obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigible (blimps) to dock there. The original purpose of the mast was to serve as a landing spot for dirigibles, also known as blimps.     In paragraph 6 the author states ""The one obstacle to their expanded use in New York City was the lack of a suitable landing area. Al Smith saw an opportunity for his Empire State Building: A mooring mast added to the top of the building would allow dirigibles to anchor there for several hours for refuling or service, and let passengers off and on."" That's one obstacle of his company. In paragraph @NUM1 it says ""the mooring mast and made changes to the existing plans for the buildings skeleton, construction proceeded as planned."" The buildings structure didn't really help the dirigibles much.",0.0,,,,,0.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
15039,6,"There were obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. For example, on the excerpt is says, ""A mooring mast added to the top of the building would allow dirigibles to anchor there for several hours for refueling or service, and to let passengers off and on."" This shows that builders had to build a mooring mast to have some time for refueling or service and have people get off and on safe.Another example from the excerpt is when it says, ""The body of the dirigible could swing in the breeze, and yet passengers could safely get on and off the dirigible by walking down a gangplank to an open observation platform."" This shows that the builders build a gangplank for people can walk up or down the gangplank safe from the dirigible.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
9071,4,"The author chooses to end this story like this for many reasons. Throughout the story, the author gives you hints of Saeng being homesick. He relates this to the flower being strong enough to survive the winter months. Meaning she’ll survive also. Although the flower isn’t the same as she had at home, change is inevitable and atleast she could hold on to that. So I believe the author decides to end the story with this to say just like the plant she’ll survive and try to adjust in the spring also like her driving test.     ",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
10373,4,"I think author concludes the with this paragraph because she wants to not give up. For example, he wants to show  us never give up at anything even if you fail. Therefore, that’s why he ends like that.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
12716,5,"In this memoir the mood was created Narciso and his family. @PERSON2 family, created the mood by bring all of the family together in thier old home in Cuba and thier new home in @LOCATION1. @PERSON2 brought the mood is this memoir by loveing his family and telling them every day that he is thankful of everything that they did for him whan he was just a child to when he is grown up. Also @PERSON2 family took people in whan thay had nowhere to go and they stayed with them until they got back on thier feet.",2.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
15313,6,"When the builders of the Empire State Building envisioned leading dirigibles moor at the top, there were some critical flaws. For one thing, a thousand foot dirigible moored to such a small focal point with the wind pressure and its own load would exert enormous pressure on the building's frame (p. @NUM1). This could potentially lead to the building's collapse is due to the strain. Another reason was at such high altitudes, the wind is quite violent and would sway the back of the dirigible over thousands of pedestrians below, which is neither ""... practical nor safe."" (p. @NUM2). If something went wrong, the dirigible could take out another building or worse: fall. A more practical, legal obstacle was a law against the presence of airships over cities. A dirigible mooring to a mast, even at that height, was illegal (p. @NUM3). Therefore, with so many obstacles it was deemed impractical to use the Empire State Building as a high-altitude dock.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
716,1,"Dear @CAPS1, Everyone love computers right? Those computers can help us with anything. They also give people facts about faraway places. And not only that but if you have someone that live's away, you can chat with them online! What would this world be with no computers. First of all, I would like to talk about how computer can help us with anything. Computers can give us picture of places, you can watch videos, and even see movies for free! Also you can check the weather, and if going to an airport you can check the flight time or if it has been canceled or not. There is just so many things that the computer can help us with! Now, it can also give you facts opinions, pictures, videos, and movies about faraway places. Like one time I was going to @LOCATION1 to visit but there was a terrible storm over there so the flight was canceled and I went on the computer and checked and it told me that it was canceled. Also if you somewhere faraway you can watch videos about that place. They also have maps to guide you through the way. And not only that but you can also check the highway for traffic so you wouldn't be stuck there. Wow imagine living without a computer! Third of all, if you can chat online with your friends or family! If you miss someone or you just want to talk there is websites that let you do that. Like @CAPS2, @CAPS3, and @CAPS4! And you also see the person if you attach a camera to you computer, it's called video-chatting. And you can do this anyone, anywhere, at any time! In conclusion, all of this can only be done with a computer. Helping you with anything. Giving people facts about faraway places. And, you can talk online. There's many more but for you to know that you'll need to go to the store and get yourself a computer!",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
15294,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow the dirigibles to land there. The most prominent obstacle was that posed by nature, which was that there was always a constant change in wind direction, so the dirigibles would not be able to land safely. The architects thought that heavy weights could be put onto the ends of the blimps, but they then realized that that would not be safe for pedestrians walking below Also, the building had to be a ceetain number of feet high, in order for the airship height rule to be eliminated. If it was not an something exploded, the heavily populated city of New York would be in grave danger. In theory, the mast for dirigibles was a revolutionary idea, but in reality it just wouldn't work.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
12619,5,"One of the moods in the memoir was greatful. Narciso greatful to have parents who gave up so much to make a good life for him. Also he is greatful because his parents showed him how important family and friends are. This means that he was greatful to have parents who cared enough to give up things they loved for people they loved. Another mood is peaceful because Narciso loved the Cuban music they listen to. Narciso had people over all the time, the kitchen was always being used. He says ""family had nothing to do with being a blood relative. I mean his house was a peaceful and a safe place. Everyone was always at his house. His parents ""always kept their arms and their door open to the many people the considered family."" the last mood I thought was happy. Narciso was always happy because his family helped so many people. Also he loved that his parents thought them so many things. I mean that he always had something to do. He was always happy to be around family and friends.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
12053,5,"He/she makes you try to be sad, I dont even know if this is real but it didnt work.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
12994,5,"In the memoir, ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives, the author creates a mood in the memior in many ways. For example, the author is in a loving mood of the begging of the memior. In paragraph two, he says ""...a love of cooking that is still with me today."" In addition, the author is in a caring mood at the middle of the memior. In paragraph four, ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we consider family"". Lastly, the author is in sed mood neer the end. In paragraph @NUM1, he says ""They struggled both personally and financially..."" In conclusion, the auther creates a mood in the memior in many ways.",2.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
12055,5,"In the memoir the mood that the author created is the memoir can be @CAPS1 in two ways. first was happy for being created and being able to use america's beautifulfriendlyness. ""Growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to a blood relative."" @CAPS2 was that knowing that if you have hope anything can be achived. ""I will never foreget how my parents turned this simple house into a home.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
335,1,"Dear @CITY1 @ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS1 if I was with or aganist people using computers. But I thought about it I decided that i was aganist using computers. For the same reasons, safety stop education, sites that are not appropriate to see. I know many people @MONTH1 think how come using a computer is not safe. Well eventhough you are not talking to someone in person and only on the computer what you do over computer is not safe. The reason why is because most of the time there would be thats thirty and we be like @NUM1, @DATE1 and I use those ages because kids are age be the man one on @CAPS2 myspace, but he can be like thirty and we be like @NUM1 - @DATE1 and us not knowing he comes on myspace or @CAPS2 put another picture up there of young did we start thinking to him meet up and something had happend. For example my friend who was on myspace was talking to a fourty-one year old and then they met up but she did not know his age and she was rapped. Not everybody is true over the computer. Education is very important even for adults and children. Bieng on the computer is not going to bring are education up is going to brings down. The reason why this is most @DATE1 threw @NUM3 come home from school put there hookbag down eat and then do straight on myspace, @CAPS2, @CAPS5 instead of studying, reading, doing their homework. Eventhough those websites do help you learn but only about for myspace, read messages on @CAPS2 look at people comments on @CAPS5. Like for example I would go and instead of me learning new I am bieng and learning new information. Learning brings achievement, a computer brings not succeeding. There is not much I can say about sites thats not appropriate all I can say is watch what you on and see on myspace cause you might just but into something you not suppose to such as raped that went on. Be careful.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
88,1,"Dear Newspaper, ""@CAPS1 no!' I forgot the deffinition to this homework problem and I don’t have my notes. Now, in this situation a computer would be very helpful to just type in the word and get a whole bunch of results. This is why I believe having access to a computer at all times is very helpfull because you can find information that you've been needing. You can get in touch with a friend if you need to or just to talk to lostly if you are just sitting around and having nothing to do you can just go on the computer and discover things you @MONTH1 not have known. Having access to a computer is a real and very helpfull because if your just having a conversation with someone and you forget a name of an important fact you want to tell them, you can always just look it up. For me, a lot of the times I just need information about maybe a sports player of facts about a famous event. Since our technology is so up to date the computer is right there sitting with many of the helpfull facts we would like to know. Friends are a big part of my life and I love just to talk to them and see how they are doing. Again, our technology is so advanced now that there is a bunch of websites where we can talk and see how we are doing. A big reason why being able to talk to friends and family is helpful is for taking to people that are very far away and the ones you dont normally see. On a computer you can talk to people from not only all over the @CAPS2.S.A but even in other countrys! Finally, the times I find having a computer around me most helpfull is when I am just bored with nothing to do! I can just visit a whole bunch of educational websites on things I @MONTH1 have learned in school or wanted to learn. On the internet there are many things to keep you occupied like games or ou can even watch movies from your home onto the computer! If you have a computer around your house you should not be bored because there is many things you can be doing or even learning! Having a computer around your house is so helpfull, you can have fun but your even learning how to be good with technology at the same time. Computers are the future and its a good one. So I suggest you pick one up and just have a blast, you wont be sorry.",4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,23.0
13305,5,"The mood set was a happy mood. As Narciso Rodriguez looked back on his life in @LOCATION1. He describes all the great experiences he had and the house he once lived in. He is also grateful because his parents gave up almost everything to provide him with a better life. He says ""I will never forget that house or its gracious neighborhood or the many things I learned there about how to love. He is so grateful and happy that his parents loved him so much to trade thier lives in, so he could live in @LOCATION1",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
7096,3,"The setting in the story “Do not exceed posted speed limit” reflect upon the cyclist. In the story a cyclist is riding his bike and takes directions from some old men. Later he realizes the old men probably had no idea that things change overtime. He says “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left their porches since carter was in office.”(Kurmaskie @NUM1). The cyclist takes the old-timers “shortcut” and it takes forever to reach his destination. At the end he reaches his campsite and another person askes him for directions. This time the cyclist says “Yes, sir! I own a very good map,” and “I’d always stick to it in the future.” The cyclist’s message is to follow a map, something you know is right, not a person that @MONTH1 be lying or irresponsible.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
6539,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist because the hills made it hard for him to ride his bike up and he was afraid of the grass becase it was tall and scary looking.,0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,1.0
816,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, I am a student at @ORGANIZATION3 middle school in @CAPS3 @CAPS4 @CAPS5 @CAPS6 recently you produced an article about computers where good or bad people I write today to say that computers are beneficial to people everywhere. This is true because computers help people with things hand eye coordination to learning advances to our schools finally it helps people communicate with ease, @CAPS7 plase consider the following. First of all computers help hand eye coordination greatly in the long run. This is true because people playing games on the computers got more skillful with using ther hands and eyes together. @ORGANIZATION1 ullodhers from @ORGANIZATION4 @LOCATION1 ""Computers help hand eye coordination @PERCENT1 more than putting your son or daughter on the football team"" @CAPS8 computer games could help kids get more acurate with there skills or that of any sport. @CAPS7 now you know why computers help people develop better hand eye coordination. Secondly Computers help people learn new things. Although people might think to be false it is indeed true. @ORGANIZATION1 a recent study at @ORGANIZATION2 shows that @PERCENT2 of schools in @CAPS6 use computers for research.Finally recently had a paper about @PERSON2 and The only scorce I thought of was wikipedia on the internet because it is faster than searching for a book about him. @CAPS7 now you understand the computer is a helpful learning tests. Finally the computer is a great way to communicate online. It is better than @CAPS10 because it is faster and more than calling someone up and talking for. @CAPS8 it is alot cheper than @CAPS10 because you just have @NUM1 payment a-month unlike phone. Where it starts to add up. Inract @PERSON1 or the @ORGANIZATION2 of @LOCATION1 in a recent study that ""@CAPS10 are absolete now, with the internet peope can chat at lignning speed"". Finally using e-mail or facebook is @CAPS7 much better than phone tag on facebook you know where you can chat with. @CAPS7 thats my reasons that the computer is good for communicating. @CAPS7 now you see that computers are nessecery because they develop hand eye coordination, they @CAPS8 help people learn and finally they are a great way to communicate.",4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
12963,5,"From the reading ""Narciso Rodriguez from Home: The Blueprints of our Lives"", by Narciso Rodriguez set a certain a mood throughout the whole entire reading. That mood is happy and friendly. They based their lives on family and happiness inside their home. He said that ""My parents always kept their arms and their doors open."" this shows that if family or friends needed help they were there for them. It also stated people in your family don't have to be blood related and that many people where welcome to eat dinner with them. This shows how nice and how well the neighborhood got along. They would also surround themselves with Cuban food and music show that they where proud of who they were and that they made their new home a nice and piecefull environment.",2.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
6849,3,"In the essay, “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” by Joe Kurmaskie, the setting greatly affected the cyclist. In this story, the cyclist is heading for Yosemite National Park, thinking it wise, he accepts directions from a group of eccentric old men. He begins his journey confidently on flat terrain and with a large supply of water. The first of three promised towns had been resigned to that of a ghost town. The second offered only water that slightly resembled battery acid. The cyclist soon becomes exhausted from lack of water and having to cross the now hilly terrain. He barely makes it to the third town to realize that the juice factory was out of business. The cyclist becomes sure that he is going to die of lack of water when he stumbles across a bait store. If it hadn’t been so hot, if the “towns” along the way had offered better resources and if the terrain hadn’t been so hilly, the cyclist would have had a very enjoyable ride. All of the affore mentioned factors of the setting greatly affected the cyclist.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
1484,1,"Over @PERCENT1 of the @ORGANIZATION1 owns at least one computer in their house. Computers benefit society because they help the earth, and are a fast way to spread important information. Also you can talk with friends and family on computers. We have been told that some people think were spending too much time on the computer. Yes, but we need these machines to survive. News @CAPS1 took a pull and said ""more than half of @LOCATION1 schools are now using computers to put homework on to save paper"". @CAPS3 we start useing computers to do things that we ushelly use paper for we would be saving millions of trees. For example you can send an email insted of snail mail, the mail would go faster and save paper! People who care about the earth make websites on the computer to inform people how to @CAPS2 just to see each otherthey could mail and talk all they want. Also @CAPS3 you like to use cellphone alot the waves kill apoximately @NUM1 bees a year. @CAPS3 you chatted with your freinds it would save bees lives. The first snow day we my parents forgot to check the schools website and I was out in snow @CAPS3 we didn't computers this would happen to every little students an snow @NUM2 @CAPS3 there was a storm and you. I'v went out the is another place you can check' to get the weather and keep your family safe. @CAPS3 there was a hurricane and the power like birthdays and weddings your computer has a calendar on it that tells you wherever you write something on it. @ORGANIZATION1 citizens spend over @MONEY1 a year on phone bills. You can talk to freinds and family on the computer and save thousands. When parents don't have phones they rely on computers to comunicate with people. Have your kinds ever had a freind who for away and your kinds spend hours to them? Well they can talk and see each other while on video chat and it will feel like still here. Its now or never citizens of newtown! You know computers, help the earth there a fast way to spend information, and they let you talk and see your freinds online. So get up and write our local news paper telling them why computers benefit our society.",3.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
15279,6,"In the excerpt there were obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock their. Al Smith saw an opportunity by adding a mooring mast to the top of the building allowing dirigibles to ancher there for several hours for refueling or service, and to let passengers on and off. With this idea the architects and engineers of the Empire State Building had to consult with experts, by taking tours of the equipment and mooring operations at the U.S. Naval Air Station. The architects also met with the president of a recently formed airship transport company that planned to offer dirigible service across the pacific Ocean. Now as you can see the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles to allow dirigibles to dock there.",0.0,,,,,0.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,3.0
6249,3,"Several features of the setting that affected the cyclist were time of year, the desert land, the lack of civilization, the lack of resources – especially water, and the rugged characteristics of the land. The cyclist was traveling during the summer time, which was the hottest time of the year. He was also traveling through the deserts which create an even hotter climate. “I was traveling through the high deserts of California in June,” was a quote from the selection that tells us this. If he had been traveling in the @DATE2, for example, he @MONTH1 have been more comfortable. Throughout his trip, the author does not after come desert civilization. He runs into a deserted factory and miles of land without people. The fact that he is traveling through desert terrain also helps us realize that water is scarce. He has trouble finding a place to get water. This made the trip extra hard and discouraging. “I was going to die” he says. As he travels farther, the land also becomes harder to travel on. “Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills” this characteristic is a setting, like the others, negatively affects the cyclist by making his journey harder.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9205,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph to show maybe by this time she will be comfortable with her new home. I know this because when I moved i didn’t like it because I didn’t have many friend but in like a year or two I was fine because I had a lot of friend. This is like Saeng because she misses her old home because she keeps talking about it then crying for example, when see saw the plant it was the one she had at her old home and she started crying because she missed it. In conclusion that is why he put that at the end of the story.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
15729,6,"Based on the excerpt the builders of the Empire State Building were faced with many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. Some of the obstacles were safty factors and nature its self.Safty was a big obstacle in this plan for a morning mast because the dirigibles use hydrogen to float these big ships. Hydrogen is highly flammable and the owners of the Empire State Building relized how bad it would be if the dirigibles were to cech of fire over a highly populated city like New York. ""Most dirigibles from outside the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable. When the German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by fire in Lakehurst, New Jersey, May 6, 1937, the owners relized how much worse that accident could have been in New York.""The greatest obstacle was nature. Humans couldn't control wind and ontop of the building they were constantly changeing makeing it hard to dock. ""The winds ontop of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" The mooring mast couldn't be done.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
11990,5,"In the memoir of Narciso Rodriguez, the fashion designer from Newark, New Jersey. Narciso talks about his Cuban family living in an apparpment with many other races. This presents a mood of happiness. The first way the mood presents happiness, is when @CAPS1 talks about his kitchen ""Passionate Cuban music, filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen."" (@NUM1) this shows that it was very happy and exciting in their kitchen. Another way is when @PERSON1 talks about his parents @CAPS2 ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrafice"" (@NUM2) This presents a happy mood because he is grateful for what his parents have done. Finally, the last way is when @PERSON1 concludes the memoir, ""warmth of the kitchen in this humble house where a cuban feast alway filled the air, with not just the sent but life and love."" (@NUM3) This shows the happy times they had together. As you can see. The mood that is presented, is happiness",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
3839,2,"I am writing to the newspaper, about removing certain materials, such as books, music, movies, magazines, and more. I dont think this should be allowed. I dont think it would be far to others.     I'm going to give you three reasons why you shouldn't let people just remove stuff like that off of shelves. @CAPS1 first reason is that, what if you had a child and wanted he or she to see the same movie or book you did when you were little? But they took it off the shelves. That would be sad and you would want them to see the movie or book you did but they cant. Like what Katherine Paterson said 'All of us think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf.'     @CAPS1 seceond reason is, what if you and a wife or husband had a favorite song, but they took it off the shelves? That would be devistating, it would just break your heart. Well I know it would me if it was are wedding song.      The last reason and @CAPS1 favorite reason is, you just have your own opion. Everyone has thier own opion, if you dont want to see them or look at them just dont do it. It's as easy as that, just try to ignor it. It's really not your problem to worry about.     Those are just three reasons why you should not let people remove anything off of any shelves. Like what Katherine Paterson said 'But if i have the right to remove that book from the shelf- that work I abhor- then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' @CAPS2 if we let this happen everyone will take avanege of it. That is why I am @CAPS2 no to letting people remove anything off of any shelves",3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
13613,5,In the story memoir the author created a couple of different mood to decribe the story.      The first mood was greatfullness. The author described greatfullness tword the parents when the author was discribing selflessness caring of the parants when they made the disision to move to @LOCATION1 to give them a better life. The last mood discribed by the author was happyness. The author discribed happiness in the story when it was discribing the parents making everyone feel at home These are the differend moods discribed in the story by the author.,2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
4175,2,"Libraries            @CAPS1 are many libraries throughout the @LOCATION1 that stock their shelves with materials such as books, magazines, music and movies. Libraries do have a purpose I must say, having a library gives out the information that you can't find elsewhere. Just think @CAPS1's a huge variety of everything you might need all in one place. Certain materials such as magazines and movies that are rated @CAPS2 for instance, should be placed elsewhere on the shelves immediately. If you'd like to rent them you @MONTH1 ask for assistance, and go from @CAPS1. Children of all ages step foot in your library and are bound to come across unneccessary information.  In my own perspective @CAPS1 should be an adult section, where only adults above a certain age should be aloud in or be able to check out. By keeping such materials shown or on display, @MONTH1 cause children to engage in dangerous or unsafe actions. As for music, it can go both ways. Music is more of a lifestyle, some people can't live without it. Adults in this day and age 'need music to survive' is what they commonly say. If your library decides to take these materials off the shelf, people @MONTH1 be turned away and your library @MONTH1 lose buisness.What is a library if you don't have music, books, magazines and movies? An empty room. Certain materials that are not appropriate for people of all ages should be placed high up, or in their own area where not everyone is aloud at. Taking away such materials @MONTH1 cause alot of grief. Just reorganize and make libraries enviornmentally safe so everyone is welcomed and @CAPS1 will be no complications",3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
9092,4,What l think the author was talking abount snow and it was add outside for the bays matter and snow started to melted.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
16374,6,"Al Smith had a vision; to create a site for modern travel. Smith faced many obstacles and persisted with hard efforts in attempt to bring his vision to life. The stress of a thousand foot dirigible would have been to much pressure for the original framework of the Empire State Building. Over @MONEY1 worth of changes had to be made to strengthen the buildings framework. In addition the builders had designed a mast the would be rocket-shaped, made with aluminum, which could accomadate the mooring arm, and the control machienery would be in the shaft; housing elevators and stairs for passengers on the dirigible. Another obstacle they had to face was the lack of floors that would serve as a boarding area for the passengers. They had begun to build additinoal floors with a glassed-in observation area and a boarding area. Although the mooring mast for the dirigibles was a fiasco, Al Smith and many architects tried to make all the modifications they could have to fulfill Smith's vision for what he thought was the Empire State Building's destiny",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
15430,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building were challenged the obstacles of construction, safety, and nature that did not allow dirigibles to dock there. These dirigibles or blimps were large balloons that were capable of carrying passengers but needed a great landing area. In order for dirigibles to be used as transportation, architects needed to design a suitable mooring mast. However, the weight and pressure of a blimp on a mast would cause a large amount of stress to the building's frame. The builders of the Empire State building were faced with producing ""over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications"" to the building's framework. Not only was attempting blimps to dock there a lot of work and very costly, builders were challenge with safety issues. As experienced to the German blimp ""Hindenburg,"" dirigibles that use hydrogen are ""highly flammable."" If any incident occurred over the Empire State building in New York, involving a dirigible, it would affect the enormous population in the area by killing so many lives. Flying too low over the city was another challenge to safety that a law would make illegal and unsuccessful for blimps to be used. Lastly, nature was an obstacle the builders faced in docking dirigibles. At mast times, the ""forceful winds"" would cause the back of the ship swivel which could lead to it hitting the sharp spires and be punctured. Lead weights were also not safe when dangling over pedestrians. These obstacles made it difficult to create gear that would allow dirigibles to dock on the building.",4.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
1331,1,"Computers were built to help the people make tasks easier and quicker. Since then, they have been updated over and over untill what they are today. Computers are a part of most peoples everydaylives, and essential to most bussiness.But the common question in our society is, are computers really benefitting us? My answer is yes. Computers do many things for us. They teach us hand-eye coordinatin, give us the ability to research effectivly, and recently, became a great way of communication, @CAPS1's are definately benefitting us. One reason why computers help us is by teaching hand-eye coordination. In a magazine I read, one expect, (@PERSON1) said that leading to type without looking is a great way of improving reflexes. The speed that you type is improved with practice. Another way it improves hand-eye coordination is by learning to click and react to different things effectively. I often on being ammused by playing games on the computer. These games usually are hard, but with my improving hand-eye coordination, I am learning how to play these games well. My father always tells me to learn my way through a computer because they are our future, soon, mostly everything will be done by them with the improving technokolgy, it is impossible for it not to be benificial to our society. Our home computers have been great at teaching me thing like hand-eye coordination. Another reason why computers are great is by making that tough history paper, just a click away. My garndfather always tells me how easy I have it. Instead of going to the @CAPS2 and having to pick out a book, I just go to google and have an entire search engine infront of me. When we go into highschool we will need a computer to suceed. To keep our essays organized, our research effective, and the clear to read typing right infront of us. My brother tells me that having a computer is the best investment has ever made. Last year, we had a science assignment to figure out how our heart beats faster. This way very easy considering I typed it in and had hundreds of ways to increase my pulse rate. Computers have changed the way we research and finish school works. The last reason why computers are fantastic is beacuse they make communication just a click away. A couple weeks ago, my coach emailed us that our gametime has changed. This doesn't seem like a big thing, but without his @CAPS1, we would've missed the game. My cousin @CAPS3 is from @LOCATION1. Me and him meet only once a year. With that limited time, we can't really get out what we need to. Recently, i bought a webcam and have been chatting with him on it every week. It is almost like he's with me. All the girls in our school can't get enough of me. So I get home after sports, go on, and theres always enough of me to go around. Webcamming is a great way of communication. With all the new computer going on sale and new appliances coming no one knows when it will stop. Well, the question still lingere, are computers benificial to our society? The answer @MONTH1 never come about, but at least for me, improving hand-eye, researching being a breeze, and communication just waiting for me is a pretty sweet deal. So for now, I stand by the opinion that computers are great, and extremely useful to everyone.",4.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
478,1,"Computers are used everywhere, for thousands of different things. Many of @LOCATION1 spend hours glued to our computer screen everyday. Being very reliant on your computer is not always good for you. @DATE1 too many people spend countless hours on their computers, rather than doing other activities. Therefore, computers are not the best way to spend your time because you get less excersize, your school grades can lower, and your communication skills will weaken. First, when spending days on your keyboard you will have less time to run or play with your friends. In the @LOCATION1 @DATE1, many more people are becoming obese, creating unhealthy genes to be passed on. Perhaps a reason for this is that too many people can just sit on their laptops to shop, see movies, and even to get a college education. Less and less people go for walks because they would rather be on @CAPS1 or @ORGANIZATION1. Without the constant use of computers there would be more free time for people to get outside, or play sports. Secondly, many kids and teens are attached to their laptop, and bring it everywhere with them. So, rather than studying for their tests, they could be on @CAPS1 or @ORGANIZATION1. Must chose to go on @CAPS1 or @ORGANIZATION1 rather than opening their books. Plus, spending so many hours on a computer. less time to do their homework, so they just begin to not do any of it. Computers take away their time that could be used towards getting a college education, why waste them? Lastly, why talk on the phone or in person when you can just send them an e-mail or chat online with them? Many people @DATE1 are staying inside on their laptops to talk to a person rather than doing it face to face. This can cause a lack of communication skills, something that might sound good online, could sound absolutely terrible in the ""real"" world. This loss of skill, could lead to a generation of more cyber talk rather than @CAPS3. In conclusion, why spend so many hours on the computer when you could be outside, or hanging out with friends? Personally I'd prefer to go and do something rather than being stuck inside on a computer.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
7624,3,"In the essay “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed @CAPS1,” the setting is used to alter the cyclists mood and as a reflection of his situation. For example, the statement “the cool pines and rushing river of Yosemite had my name written all over them” helps describe the cyclist situation. The idea of lush, cool water vegetation gives the @CAPS4 hope during his increasinlgly hellish trip. The beauty of that setting also reflects on the comfort that would come from reaching Yosemite; the good setting equal a good out come. Later on, the cyclist comes across “one ramshackle shed, several rusts pump, and a corral that couldn’t hold in the lamest make.” This is a depressing setting symbolizing a complete loss of hope. And inteact at this point the cyclist becomes troubles to his situation. While pedaling through desert, the cyclist becomes even more factory when tumble seed, which is always a symbol of a deserted area, cones by. The nile of setting to affect and mirror mood is nothing new. There are many examples of this literary technique throughout history. For example, in his story “The @CAPS2 of @CAPS3 @PERSON1.” @CAPS4 @PERSON1 was a deslated land filled wild beast to symbolize and cause @PERSON2 to change his personalith surrounded by uncivilized people and creating @PERSON2 tears of his clothes and hunt like a dog. The setting of a desert in the uncultured. Part of colonial simultaneously cause and reflects on this change. The setting in the essay “Do Not Exceed posted Speed Limit” is used as an important for character development.  ",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
6421,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist because it just looks like he is on the highway as in the desert riding his motorcycle or bike and it does look like hes coming or going on a vacation and because of the way hes riding it it seems hes going real fast as about to fall.,0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,1.0
12873,5,"This memoir really sets of mood of love and comfort. It does this when he tells us that his parents immigrated just for him. Than it keeps that mood going when he tells us about all the people that come over regularly for dinner. His parents loved him and made a great inviorment for him like he said, they ""made a house a home""",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
15401,6,"The builders didn't have a suitable landing area for the Dirigible, and if the Dirigible were to land on the Empire State Building's flat roof would add stress to the building. Money was one of the big issues the builders faced. In paragraph @NUM1 its saying that the greatest obstact was nature, The heavy winds on top of the building were shifting due to the violent air current. for the Dirigible itself would be swivel around the mooring mast, and for the safety of the people as well. Another obsticle was the law, that flying too low over urban areas were not allowed.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
6764,3,"Each new feature of the setting in the essay entilled, “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit,” by Joe Kurmaskie, affects the cyclist in some way. For example, in the text , when the narrator stated that he had to avoid a “ ridiculously large snake “crossing the road, he became more aware of his surroundings and almost seemed to forget how thirsty he was until he finally abided the large reptile. Also in the text, when, “over one long, crippling hill, a building came into view,” hope was replenished into the cyclist. This hope allowed the narrator to because more tenacious about his journey in order to arrive at the old building. Eighther for better or worse, a few feature of the setting arrives and affects the cyclist every step of his journey.  ",1.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
9081,4,"The author ends with this paragraph because it symbolizes a new beggining, Saeng says, “I – I failed the test.” She is also really sad, she is making a commitment to get a fresh start on life, just like how the world does every spring. The theme of the story is when life seems hard take a new approach. She intends to retake the drivers test.",2.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
3397,2,"One person's strong negative opinion effects everyone else.  That doesn't seem logical or fair.  A library is a sanctuary for people to go read their favorite books for free, containing books from all types of genres.  There is a book for everyone in the library; it's a matter of finding it.  Therefore, finding a book offensive or unsuitable does not give one the right to take that privaledge away from everyone else.     Books have a way of putting our mind at ease, whether that's because it's an escape or measured on how enjoyable it is to read.  Books found offensive to one person could have a completely different impact on the next reader; some @MONTH1 even find the books relatable.  For example, if there was a scene that one reader thought was too graphic or horrific for other readers, there @MONTH1 be someone out there who would find this scene enjoyable because they can relate to it.  People who aren't capable of relating to such a scene would only find it as inappropriate and try to remove it from another's reach.  One person's opinion is not of any more importance than the next person's.     The book '@CAPS1' is a professionally written, fictional novel that has been praised for it's quality, hence the numerous awards won.  Although, this book contains a rape scene and numerous other inappropriate events that this woman was succumbed to throughout her life.  Even so, it is still on the list of suggested college level reads for @CAPS2 @CAPS3 @CAPS4 classes.  It is disappointing to think that people nowadays focus on the graphic scenes in a novel, versus the exceptional writing style.  If all readers were able to look past the surface amoung these scenes, less books would be contemplated on shelf removal.  One person's negative interpretation of a novel effects everyone else's right concerning the censorship in libraries.     Readers are fully warned beforhand of the maturity of the contents.  The books are ranked, critiqued, summarized (back cover summary), and even sorted in a library.  If one finds a book offensive, look in a different section.  Books are sorted by genre for that reason as well; different genres apeal to different people.  This applies to the maturity of the reader as well.  Books are sorted according to what appeals to what age.  If you find a book offensive, instead of having it removed from the shelf altogether, look in a section for younger peoples, or a different genre completely.  If someone finds the book offensive, the fault is not of the book being there, but of the person being in the wrong section.     The main problem concerning book censorship in libraries is not the content, but how the interpretations differenciate towards such content.  On this issue, the other readers' opinions on specific books being removed are being significantly overlooked.  For one to complain about a book's contents automatically give someone else the right to protect the book's contents.  For libraries to remove books in order of censorship is viewed as favoritism and is completely against the rights @LOCATION1 has stood for",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
11999,5,"The mood created by the authar was warmthness. He was so @CAPS1 toward his family moving @CAPS2, he also cared for his parents alot and what they had done for their family. I know this because ""I will never forget how my parents turn to the simple house into a home"".",1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
6815,3,"The settings of your environment always seem to affect your mood. Take for instance the cycler. In the beginning he had a positive attitude but once he arrived at the first town his attitude started to go down from there. He explains describes the town as maybe at one point being a thriving spot, “but on that morning it fit the traditional definition of a ghost town.” Ghost towns come across very old, run down and dull. That affected the cyclist because by it not being like the old men said he was becoming doubtful, which in turn doesn’t give you the same motivation as when he started. Then when he get to what is suppose to be water and a, “tar like substance oozed out.” That makes him nevers and mad because he isn’t sure he will make it. But his attitude changes as soon as he sees the store. The setting becomes positive and so does he. So, the setting does effect the cyclists mood and attitude.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
1577,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, @CAPS3 people haved used a computer to learn new things such as cultures. Computers effect people in so @CAPS3 positive ways. They changed the way people think and how they look at the world. Experts even say how computers change the way they act at home and in the public. @CAPS6 also helps speical learn how to read and spell. A lot of people have used computers to learn different cultures. Which has helped are society in @CAPS3 ways. By edcuting youth so they don't make mistakes such as racial ways. Computers helped people learn things besides racial ways in the past but also about there own culture. Which has been proven by @ORGANIZATION1 news. People state that computers have made citizens lose there daily exercis. But people don't only use the computer to study they also use @CAPS6 to find different @CAPS4 different diets and ways to strech there body so they won't hurt themselfs, less than @PERCENT1 studied that the computer diets and different if themselfs to in The @CAPS5 times has said, ""The computer not only help our fitness, but also help stay in know our @CAPS6 keeps our world by one little click. And @CAPS6 gets there in less then a minute. So as you can see computers haved changed not on society but also the world. Thats how big of an impact @CAPS6 has had.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
899,1,"Dear newspaper, @CAPS1't you love to go in your computer? @CAPS1't you get a lot done on them? Well I think they have a positive effect on people. I strongly agree that computers have a positive effect on our society. These are my three reasons; you can chat online with friends and family, help people do research on projects, and help people get there jobs done in everyday life. So please, local newspaper keep reading and I will change your mind about computers effects on people. Do you have family or friends who @CAPS1't live around here that you want to keep in touch with? Using the computer for email or a chat site like facebook will do that. I have cousins who live in @LOCATION2. The only way my family can keep in touch with them not spending money is email. My mom and her sister are sending emails to each other all the time. If you ask me I think that is a positive effect computers have. Have you ever researched anything using a computer? I knew I have! For a school project in @CAPS2 I had to research about @LOCATION1. I did all my research on the computer. I got an A+! I would not have gotten that grade if I did not use the computer to do research. Do you use a computer in your job? Well even if you @CAPS1't I know a lot of people who do. For example, my dad uses a computer for almost the whole day he is at work. He is a @CAPS3 @CAPS4 which means he managed portfolios. He has to use @ORGANIZATION1 to check on the stock chart. Another example is my mom, teacher, she has using the computer to email parents if the student need help or up. So as you can see computers have good effect on our society. These are my reasons : you can chat online with friends and family, helps people do research on projects, and helps people do research on projects, and helps people get there jobs done in everyday life. I hope you agree that computers have a positive effect on our society. Say yes to computers good effect!",3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
4090,2,"I believe that if there are books, music, movies, or magazines that offends you. People shouldn't be able to disarm that material off of the shelf. If it's there children they're worried about just teach them from staying away from adult section. Also, some people don't like foul language but thats there opinion. Than we wouldn't have any material left in the library if everyone had the rights to disarm offensive material. 'And then we have no books left on the shelf for any us' (Paterson).     If it's your children your worried about seeing censorship in libraries but, you don't mind it just have them stay in the kids section reading books. You could just go a day where you want to go by yourself so you don't have to worry about your kids spotting any censorship. Before checking the material out skim through it make sure there is nothing offensive for your child.      Many people don't like foul language but, that's there opinion. It doesn't bother me because it gives the book a little taste and it's more interesting. Helps you understand what the reader is feeling upon someone or thing. Sometimes it helps show what mood the reader has in the story.     Finally, if everyone had the right to disarm all the offensive materials, we wouldn't have anything left. This could effect peoples education and reading skills. Some of that material is peoples hobbies they wouldn't be able to do what they like anymore.     'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off of the shelf '(Paterson). It's an easy fix just teach your children from right and wrong. Would you rather have your children have a good education or not know how to read? Many people dislike foul language but it could make the book better. I don't know what I would do if there was no more books. Well these are examples of why people shouldn't have the rights to disarm material off of the shelf if it offends them. What would you do if you had something you loved taken away from you?",3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
12861,5,"So the mood of this memoir is @CAPS1, Struggle or not so good and @CAPS2. In the @CAPS3 it telling you all about His parent and alot more about His parent's. Next is talk about Being born in a simple house and that way @CAPS1 mood there to. So @CAPS4 the end of the memoire @CAPS5 startes to talk about the @CAPS6 things like not Be able to find the kind or jod they deserved and that not that much @CAPS6 thing @CAPS5 talk But But in the end @CAPS5 @CAPS10 the definition of @CAPS11 and that mood is alsome. Then @CAPS5 learne there about love in the simple house and to never forgot how my Parents turned the simple house to a home. So the mood is a mix of @CAPS1, @CAPS6 time's and the alsomeness and more.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9329,4,"The author of the story ends it with a very interesting paragraph. This paragraph talks about over coming obstacles and is telling the reader to try again. It is important to never give up and to keep trying until you sucede. In the story Saeng had just moved away from Vietnam she really missed it, and on top of it saeng failed her drivers test. She was really upset. She saw a group of geese flying above her and said when they come back in the spring and my new plant starts to grow I will retake my drivers test. Geese have to overcome the cold by flying south for the winter. The cold weather is an obstacle for them. Also her new plant can't grow until its warm. Her plant has to over come being small until it can bud in the spring. People face obstacles all the time. You have to keep trying inorder to get around them.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
10129,4,"The author ended the story with an unconcluded ending. What I mean is the author wrote so that he could keep readers interested so that they would want to read his other books. Also, with an ending of that sort it kind of leaves room for improving and room for a sequal.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
14877,6,"The builders had a very hard time because of where it was located, and how the dirigible was to dock. Their first problem was the fact that it was so tall, it was hard to work on. Another problem was the fact that the blimp would be pulling in on the building, so it had to be reinforced. The final problems that made them most an unreliable choice, were the wind conditions and the fact that the tail end of the blimp could swing freely. These all contributed to make the mast on the Empire State Building a bad idea.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
795,1,"To whom it @MONTH1 concern: I think computers have a great effect on people. Computers are useful for homework, it allows you to keep in touch with out of state family, you can also look up direction and information to a place. Computers are good for last minute situations. Computers are very useful for homework because when you type a report it looks more professial. While you type a report you can also research on your project at the same time. In some cases there are people who write very slappy to a paint where he or she cannot read his own writing nor can a teacher. A sloppy writer can use the computer to make his or her paper neat. If a child or parent cannot go to the library for some reason they can use their computer at home. If you are a parent at home busy with kids and need to do work; there's no need to go anywhere stay home and use your computer. If a child is absent from school you can go to the school's website and find out the homework. Do you have out of state family you wish to talk to? If so wouldn't you want to be a able to talk to them without a expensive phonebill? A majority of people would say yes. Using the computer to keep touch with family is not so expensive at all! Some examples are aim, emails, and other networks and they don't cast money at all its free. When there's a day you have nothing to do, don't you just want to go somewhere for fun? Don't you want to do something just to get out of the house? Well if there's a last minute decision or situation the computers there to help. Before you go somewhere and you want know a little more go on the computers. Not only will you get information on the place you can also get directions. Now you can go somewhere instead of staying home bored. In conclusion, computers do have a great effect on people. It can be useful to both adults and children. Teachers can calculate students averages easier and faster and children can do their homework efficiently. You can also keep in touch with friends. Overall computers are useful.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
6013,3,The setting of the story affected the cyclist by making him dehydrated which could lead to a heatstroke. “I could drop from a heatstroke” this shows that it was hot out and he was feeling bad if he could have dropped from a heatstroke.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
15221,6,"The idea of dirigibles being able to dock at such an altitude to begin with was foolish. First off trying to tie a thousand-foot dirigible to a building by a single tether adds huge stress to the building's frame. They were able to fix that problem, but the main issue they couldn't fix was mother nature. The wind speed at that height is incredibly violent and would cause the ship to swivel around and around the mooring mast. Overall the project was just doomed to fail from the start.",1.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
1653,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, Have you ever spent more than an hour at once on the computer? Computers have a negative affect on people! You could be damaging your sight, time should be spent playing outside, and it'll make it harder to talk to people in person. Do your eyes tend to hurt when your finally off the computer? Whether or not you playing games or typing articles your eyes @MONTH1 strain to keep up with a small font on a website. I remember the time when I read an online novel and my whole body was ready to go and play. Except for my eyes. Instead of playing sports games on the computer you should get up and play one outside! When your on a computer, your most-likely indoors. Did you knew a person should be be outside for at least @NUM1 minutes to get there vitamin @CAPS3. Your net sustaining the right amount of vitamins you need daily, at a computer screen. Do you ever find it easier to talk to someone on the computer, than it is in person? Your not the only person that thinks that way. If you get off of the computer and talk to one face to face you can improve your social skills. At first it wont be easy but its worth it in the long run. By now you know that computers aren't really giving off a positive effect. There hurting your vision, limiting your outdoor activity time and making it harder to talk to people in person. So come on put down the mouse down and find something ""hands on"" to do!",3.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
14891,6,"When they build the Empire State Building they faced obstacles building it. An obstacle they faced was that they wanted to make it as high and as safe as possible. The way the architetures wanted to make it the tallest building in the world was by putting a mooring mast on the top of the building. A mooring mast is basically a dock for dirigibles (blimps). This was dangerous. It was because the Mast could snap at such a high altitude and plumate to the ground or snap, and dangle high above the street. ""... The Government people in washington are figuring on some way of mooring airships to this mast,"" says Al Smith four year term governor of New York. Although it may look nice, its not the safest idea.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
15341,6,"The main problem in the original design of the mooring mast was that ""the architects could'nt just drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof. A thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame. The stress of the dirigible's load & the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the buildings foundation."" Another obstacle the builders faced with the construction of the mast could be another example of the German dirigible ""Hindenburg"". With some dirigibles using the highly flammable hydrogen instead of helium another ""Hindenburg accident"" could prove to be fatal in a ""highly populated area such as downtown New York."" @CAPS1 perhaps the greatest obstacle would be ""nature itself."" The high force winds on top of the empire state building would cause the dirigible to swivel around the mooring mast. Although the dirigibles could be weighted down, the weights would be hanging over pedestrians, which ""was neither practical nor safe.""",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
12984,5,"In the memoir, Narciso Rodriguez, from Home: The blue prints of our lives by Narciso Rodriguez, Narciso explains the mood of his home. One way is in para graph @NUM1 when he says ""Passionate Cuban music filled the air, mixed with the aromas of the Kitchen"". This @CAPS1 the mood of family. It gives you this sense of a warm family.Another way is in paragraph @NUM2. He says ""My parents always Kept their arms open to the many people we considered family"". This gives a loving and caring feeling. It also gives the sense of family.The last way Narciso explains the mood is in paragraph @NUM3. In this paragraph he just gives an overall warm and inviting mood. He says how appriciative of his parents he is. He really @CAPS1 the mood to be thank ful of everything they have done. These are a few ways Narciso @CAPS1 the mood of the memoir.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
6921,3,"Poor directions heat, and lack of water affect the cyclist in the story. At the beginning of the story, the cyclist is confident in the directions which would, “slice away hours from my ride to Yosemite National Park.”  As the story progresses, the cyclist is no longer so confident. The “heat of the California, June day causes him to be fluent in drinking water.” I had been hitting my water bottle pretty regularly, and I was travelling through the high deserts of California in June.” This lack of water is a big problem for the cyclist, so big that he was near heat stroke. “I eased past, trying to keep my balance in my dehydrated state. The water bottles contained only a few tantalizing sips.” He braved the elements and forced himself on, with hopes that any source of water would reveal itself to him. His perseverance paid off. “Then , as easily as rounding a bend, my troubles, thirst, and fear were all behind me. The cyclist had found a barst shop and recteved water.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
15946,6,"In the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" the builders found many obstacles on the way to allow dirigibles to dock on top of the empire state building Some of those obstacles were as follow. The main concern was the safety of the passenger boarding and unboarding as well as the people below The concern for the people below was how the dirigible sometimes was floating with hydrogen instead of helium. Hydrogen is highly flammable. So they didn't want chances of the dirigible blowing up. Another main concern was there was an ""exsiting law over airships flying to low over urban areas"" (par @NUM1) The dirigible floated with the air and being as long as @NUM2 ft. the back of the dirigible where it wasn't securely fastened would circle around the mooring from the high wind currents. The winds were shifting all the time so it was a very big safety issue. Another obstacle was the dirigible docking, was mainly put into place because of jealousy. The man was jealous because his competition Al Smith was catching up with him before the idea of dirigible came to mind.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
12897,5,The mood created by the author in the memoir. The mood that the author was happiness. When example of happiness was that his parents passed on their culinary skills and a love of cooking.  Another example of happiness was that aromas from the kitchen mixed with Cuban music filled the air. The last example was that he grateful for his parents sacrifice and love.,1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
9371,4,"Saeng wanted to show that she was strong and determined. She wanted to make the best of things with what she had. She had lost a lot of hope with the big move to another country. The winter made her sad longing even more for home. She bought the flower to, in a sence, bring her back home. When the spring comes, she will bud with the flower and take the test again. This is her new home with new hibiscus. After all, winter is no time for a flower.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
7345,3,"The feature of the setting affected the cyclist because if there is a rough road ahead your just going to have to be able and to handle the up and downs, bumps. The author was scared that he was gonna die and that the birds were gonna pick his bones clean.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
10105,4,"I believe that the author left this as the last thing the reader will read, so it will be a message. In the story this girl has now moved to this totally new environment and new culture. The only thing she knew of was a flower that grew wild where she lived. This little vow to herself was a message to not give up. Keep on going and if you open your mind to new things who knows what you can experience and learn. So this girl didnt just give up. Her plant was like a representation of a new beginning. When her plant starts over then so will I. Also it can be a representation of her life itself. I say a new begging because in the text, it says,",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
4571,2,"When you go to library, you @MONTH1 have a lot choice about reading books, watching movies or listening music, and sometimes you might have offensive words or abusive langauge that is not appropriate for you children. Students must the right to remove the book from the library if he or she gets offended, or sometimes if there is a student who has came from a different @CAPS2 and they might get offeneded by the movies or music that are in the library.      Books are most commonly used in the library. In those books, there are some book that are offensive to some student, and if one student find something offensive, he should have the right to remove the book from the library shelve. Many students like fiction books, which are true story but it might have some kind of offensive language or something that the student is feeling racist to him. School or any public library should remove books that contains inappropriate words that are not good for the kids to learn in their life.      Music is also one of the important thing that is carried in any school library or any public library. Most common type of music that you can find in the library is @CAPS1, @CAPS2, or @CAPS3 music. Most of the times those kinds of music might not carry and bad words, racistism or any offensive language, but some of the songs might carry something that is not apporpriate for school use. Those kinds of music must be remove from any school library or any public library.      Movies are also carried in some library, but not every library carries a movie. Some of the movies might have blood scenes, abusive language, which might not be apporpriate for some childrens who are at school. You should check the rating of the movie that you are checking out of the library or if you are watching it at home or any other places. Movies might carry some kind of rasictism in them.     Library is a good source for reading books, listening to music, or watching a movie. While you are reading a book or watching a movie, you might find words which might not be apporpriate for yourself or for students who read those books. These movies, books or music can carry abusive language or something that is rasict to some people who came from a different @CAPS2. Student should have the right to remove something that is not apporpriate in school use, such as, books, music and movies, if they contain something that is not suppose to be in it, you should remove it",3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
4667,2,"Censorship in librarys can be a positive and negative thing. I think this because there can be somethings that you @MONTH1 not want your children to read. But there also can be things that you do want them to read. Age groups can play a big role in censorship because there are things that you dont want to see a kid reading when he or she is young. But if it is censored then they will not even be able to read it when they get older. It all depends on what kind of things are in the books, music, movies, and magazines.     If you find something offensive that you read in a book or saw in a magazine to some people that @MONTH1 not be offensive at all. This is why I think that the censorship can be good and bad. I am sure that there @MONTH1 be somethings that you have read that wasn't offensive to you but it @MONTH1 still be offensive to others. Censorship in my opinion can be a good thing when the things that are in the book, movie, magazine, and music are not true and that @MONTH1 be offensive to more than a small group. Lets say that there are two books written about the same true topic. The first books material is very well written and @MONTH1 have offensive material in it here and there. The second book is also well written but @MONTH1 not all be there the whole story @MONTH1 not be the same as what happened because they censored it because it can't be in the library. Which would you rather read? Personally I would rather read the book that @MONTH1 have some offensive material but has the complete story of what happend.     Say you were the writer of a book and it took you a long time of hard work and dedication to finish the book and get it published. Would you want your book to be on the shelf at the library? I know I would but if your writing about something that happend in your life that could have been offensive to others they @MONTH1 not allow that book on the shelf of a library. If the things that are in the book are true or are in real life. Than why show your children a book that isn't true? Im not saying go get your child a war book and have them read it when they are very young. When reading a book that someone spent a long time and lots of hard work on you are looking into their perspective. Maybe there perspective of what happend is alot different than yours, but that can be a good thing. Even with the offensive material books, movies, magazines, and music can still be good to some people and bad to others.     I have went to librarys and found books that I was interested in and I think that some of them could be found offensive to others. If the contents of the book, movie, magazine, and the music are not true and can be found offensive then sure that should be censored. But if it is censored it should only be for a certain age group. I have also went and got books at the library that have true stories that can be found offensive by some people, but that doesn't mean it should be censored. A book that @MONTH1 have material in them that could be 'bad' for some people. That does not mean that after they read it they are going to go start using the same offensive language that could be in the book. It all depends on the persons perspective if they find a book offensive or that has some 'bad' material in it then don't read it, and find something that you wouldnt find offensive.     Overall the things that we read, watch, and listen to @MONTH1 not all be bad even if it has some offensive material in it. To some it can be bad to others it can be part of their life. If I had a story to tell and I spent a long time working on it. I would want it to be read, seen, and heard. Censorship @MONTH1 be good for some and bad for others. If you are a person that allways likes a happy ending then maybe censorship is good. But if you want the whole story that can be non-fiction or fiction then censorship is not for you.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
12363,5,"Throughout the story, the author put in details, explained things, and painted pictures in your mind all to set the mood for the story. A few different moods went on in the story but one of the most important was loving. not only was because of how close his neighborhood and family was, but because of the overall bond and unity they had shared but also because the parents ""turned this simple house into a home.""The author had also stated ""always filled the air with not just scent and music, but life and love."" This passage just completely revealed how much love had been in the air, even through those hard times. It also showed the importance of your loved ones and how you need them in your life.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
7406,3,The setting of this short story affects the cyclist by making him dehydrated and dies. Also in the setting he found the abandon factory which makes him feel hopeless. If the setting was elsewhere then this setting he would have felt different as he didn’t  meet the people  of the reserve he could have been in the better roads than the old roads he was in,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
16210,6,"The biggest obsticle was safely. The foriegn dirigibles use Hydrogen (@NUM1) gas as a means to fly but hydrogen gas is highly flamable. The owners of the Empire State Building were consernd because of what happened to the German dirigible, Hindenburg, over Lakehurst, @LOCATION2. The Hindenburg bursted into flames and in less than one minute there was no dirigible, just some charred scrap metal. If this incident were to happen in a highly populated area like downtown New York City it would create a high number of casualties and fatalities.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,3.0
16078,6,There would have been multiple obstacles when allowing a dirigibles to dock a the top of the empire state building. One it may get very densely populated with taller buildings. Since they had never made one before something could go wrong And last like the Hindenburg another disaster like that could happen but This time in a densly populated city,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
13579,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is made up of happeness, love, and lastly respect for his parents, whitch shows how the mood is actually peaceful. In the memoir the author stated memeries of his neighborhood that was good. The authors stated about how the cultures formed together, helped each other and worked hard to make a living as well is a future for their kids, which shows his respect for his friends and family. The author states his gratitude toward the hard ships his parents went through for him and for the dream of a better tomorrow.",2.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
4550,2,"Alot of things can be found offensive now days, but that does not mean you take it away from others who enjoy it. Everyone has their own view, and opinon on things. For the things people find offensive I believe they should just simply stay away from it.     No, I do not believe certain materials should be removed from the library shelves. Somethings people @MONTH1 find offensive others might enjoy. Its simple, if it comes to the point were people are causing problems then maybe that will be up to the people that work in the libraries. Yes, there @MONTH1 be alot of things that people take offensive, but that dose not mean take away the things others @MONTH1 enjoy. I have been to many libraries in my life. I have not really seen anything offensive, but I have seen some books and movies for adults only. Honestly in my eyes its simple, if there is something you find offensive just stay away from it, because others @MONTH1 enjoy it.     Its not up to me weather the materials should be removed from the library shelves. Although I do believe that people who find things offensive should just stay away from it. You have to take things into consideration before jumping straight into conclusions.",2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
873,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, I think that having a computer is a very positive. I know that teenagers are on the computer a lot, but if it really bother the parents, why do they have computers in their houses? @CAPS3, I can tell you @NUM1 reason why. They are good sources of information, its a good way to talk with your friends and it gives you information about places that you might not know about. Primarily, I would like to say that computer are a fantastic source of information. They can tell you anything! This is also helpful because if you are working on a project, and your mom cant you to get books at library, then there you go! A computer is just a simpler way to look up information. Did you know, that @PERCENT1 of parents who got their family a computer do not regret their desicion? Thats almost all the parents in @LOCATION2! @CAPS6 as you can see, it would help kids with whatever they are studying. Secondly, we teenagers today use computers to talk with our friends @ORGANIZATION1 email @CAPS3, I think this is alot better than sending @CAPS4! Why would you wait letter from your cousin @LOCATION1. When you can talk to them in seconds! And it do paper if you just @CAPS5 to buy I would like to say that having like this one time, I was work my we were looking for a hotel to stay in when we went to we ended up finding a great hotel, for a cheap You can also go on map guest if you @CAPS5 to someone. @CAPS6 for all the people out there who dont computers are important have would you to In conclusion, I think that having a computeer is a very important thing for @NUM1 reson they are very good book source they help us communicate with friends and for every information on for @CAPS6 imleaving the opinion with you hopefully you will learn something than better and pick the right ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
15828,6,"well, since this one obstacle in their expanded use in New York City was the lack of landing area For the dirigibles. So, Al Smith decided to add a mooring mast on top of the Empire State building to allow these dirigibles to anchor there to get gas for several hours and also service. And to let the passengers on and off there also. The Dirigibles were docked by an electric winch, which hauled in a line From the front of ship then tied to the Mast. But, then yet the electric winch cable would cause stress to the building frame. The stress of these Dirigibles load and the wind pressure would transmitte all the way to the building's Foundation. The steel Frame of the building should be strengthened or modified to accommodate this new situation.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
12048,5,"The memoir's mood is a sense of happiness because its talking about a place where neighbors are like family and everyone is very close. Like how Sergio and @PERSON1 became his surrogate grandparents, when they were people who lived in the basement appartment. Alegria, his first friend normally ate dinner with them. The whole memoir is about how his parents showed him the meaning of family and to be open to friends and neighbors.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
13325,5,"The main mood through out this entire excerpt from Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives is one of thanks. Through out the excerpt, @ORGANIZATION1 about and explains about how his parents struggled in the US for their children. In his house, as it is said in paragraph @NUM1, ""My young parents created our traditional cuban home"" @CAPS1 loved everything about that home. Also his family. Not blood relatives just family. His family was made up of the entire community in a time, as discribed in paragraph @NUM2, ""When overt racism was the norm and segregation prevailed in the @LOCATION1."" @CAPS1 is most thankful of his parents. In paragraph @NUM3 it discribes ""They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life... They struggled bothe personally and financially... My parents had to accept that they might not be able to find the kind of jobs they deserved"" His parents gave up everything for his current life and Narciso is forever greatful.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
15,1,"Dear, In this world today we should have everyone useing computers. Computers have a positive effect on people. They teach hand-eye coordination, give people the ability to learn about faraway places and people, and even allow people to talk online with other people. Today computers are like the worlds biggest book of knowledge. everything you need to know is in a computer. You can look up faraway places, and zap theres everything you need to know write in front of you. Computers are fast and easy, everyone can use them. Today kids are so addicted to computers everyday they are on them. There are so many websites that kids and teens go on, like @CAPS1, and facebook ect. on these websites kids as young as ten years old are chatting with friends and putting up pictures. Thers is also webchat websites that allow you to use a webcame and talk to people anywhere in the world. Computers are a great way to get in touch with people. Everyone should have a computer in there home today.",3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
3797,2,"Censorship has become a major part of the media now-a-days. It is everywhere: books, movies, songs, and television shows. The government is trying to make the children of @DATE1 less corrupt, but they will end up learning everything that is censored for their friends and peers anyways. I feel censorship is a waste of time for the government. Children learn mature information sooner than they should in @DATE1's society.     Censorship should be more for the media children and young teens pay attention to. It should not be put into more mature movies and music, such as movies with adult content and rap. Those are more of items for grown up and teenagers than for children. If parents allow their children to listen to and watch that certain media, then they must feel their children are mature enough and know enough to not be majorly effected by it. Censorship also ruins the quality of books, music, and movies.     Certain words help to better express people and their views. If they can not use the specific word they feel describes them the best, it tends to ruin the quality of their character. People cannot be themselves when they have to watch what they say and are looked down upon because of their choice of language. I, myself, am very free with my language and the inappropriate and vulgar things I say. They are just a part of my nature and help me to be more expressive of myself. There are probably better, more appropriate words to use when I am in public, but then I would not feel like I am being quite myself. I think censorship is corrupting our society.     The government is trying to control us with censorship. I am not one of those paranoid people that thinks the government is out to get them. This just happens to be one of my opinions of censorship. We should get rid of it. It is changing the way people are and the way they feel they can act around others. People have to be careful of what they say, and I feel that makes speaking and attempting to express yourself so much more challenging. Censorship should be stopped before it ruins the quality of all the media.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
3539,2,"Author Katherine Paterson proclaims, 'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children have taken off the shelf. But if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf - that work i abhor - then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' A controversial issue in today's society are people's conflicting views on censorship in libraries. Many types of books, magazines, music, movies, and much more have been banned from being put on the shelves of libraries because of their content. From personal experience, observations, and reading of the issue censorship should not be allowed in libraries.     The shelves of libraries will soon be empty if censorship continues. Certain readings, and types of entertainment have already begun to disappear one by one. It is understandable if one person does not agree with the material being placed into these books, but why should they ruin the entertainment for everyone else? From my own experience, people in my elementary school were not able to enjoy reading a popular series of books at that time period. Since I went to a @CAPS1 school, the priest at the corresponding church during that time decided he did not agree with the content in this certain series of books. As a result, he took charge and made the staff of the school remove those books from our school library, and no student was allowed to come to school with one of those types of books. If it had been up to him, he would have decided to go ahead and take out all those books from everywhere in the world. Just because one individual does not agree on the content of that book, they should not be able to have the power to banish the lovely leisure for the rest of the population.     Authors and artists of books, movies, and music have the freedom to put into them whatever they choose. It should not be up to their audience to decide whether or not it is appropriate. The concept is quite simple; if the reader or viewer does not think they would agree with the work, then they should not spend their time to read or view the pieces at hand. Just because they might not completely think what the content entails is necessarily appropriate, someone else might enjoy it. Censorship is wrong for this very reason. The creators of their work are most likely proud of what they have accomplished and would like their audience to enjoy it to. The audience they are trying to appeal to @MONTH1 not have the same taste in style as someone who the work was not necessarily meant to have their own opinion on the matter. Books should not be able to be taken out of libraries because what one person might think is not appropriate to be placed into public, another person @MONTH1 enjoy thouroughly. Likewise, if the content of a work of literature does not appeal to an individual then it should just simply not be read by that person. As humans, there is the freedom of choice as to what people would like to read, and what they would not like to indulge in. So make the correct choice in deciding what you want to read, and do not ruin the enjoyment for many others.     In a great deal of different types of literature censorship is touched on by the authors. For example, in the popular prize-winning novel, @CAPS2 @NUM1, books are burned, or 'censored' because they contain information people should not be aware of in that period of time. However, in today's world books are a major type of entertainment and are important in the knowledge of everyone. Books provide so much information on almost every subject known to human-kind that it would be such a dramatic loss if now books were burned if caught reading one. Paterson does point out that everyone has a right to their own opinion of this matter, but if people do not take the right approach to solving this situation, there will be no books left on library shelves for several generations after to enjoy for themselves. Every individual has their own right to be able to read books and absorb all the wonders and knowledge they contain.     As a result of the growing awareness of censorship in today's libraries, people @MONTH1 never be able to enjoy certain types of books, movies, music, and magazines. From my own past experiences on this situation I know how wrong it is to take away someone's own privelage to enjoy types of literature. People should not have a say whether something is appropriate or not to be taken out of libraries. If the individual does not simply agree with the specific content of the work then they need to accept it and move on instead of causing millions of others to not enjoy it. Also, from different types of reading, censorship has definitely become a serious issue, but it should be abolished. Keep the books that are on library shelves now for many generations to come and enjoy for themselves",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
16499,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced several problems in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. To begin, the architects were unable to just drop the mooring mast on top of the building's flat roof. This was due to the fact that a dirigible held by a cable would add stress to the building's frame. Though this was an obstacle, the architects spent over @MONEY1 on modifications to the frame to remedy the problem.Another major problem with the idea of the mooring mast was general safety. First off, most foreign dirigibles use hydrogen, as compared to helium, to stay aloft. This problem lay within the fact that hydrogen was highly flammable, and after the Hindenburg catastrophe in 1937, architects became concerned that the same accident could occur over downtown @LOCATION1.In addition, the mast idea proved unsafe due to violent wind currents. To keep from blowing around, dirigibles needed lead weights, which couldn't be allowed to dangle over busy city streets. In conclusion, a final obstacle was a law that prevented airships from flying too low over urban a city. This made it legal for all airships to tie up or ******** this area. Those were the obstacles facing the architects.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
6266,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist because he was in a forest. This was a bumpy trip with a lot of troubles along the way. This was along trip. But he made it tough with a story to tell in the end.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
7055,3,"There are many ways that the features affect the cyclist. One is that he is already scared to go up this really big hill. Another is that he is going up this big hill its hot, there snakes, hes scared and tired. Almost all of his energy is gone. He just wants to stop he is determined to go up this hill. He also knows that it cant be that bad because he can just relax al the way back down.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
1297,1,"Dear @CAPS1-republican, @CAPS2 do benifit society in a positive way, but they also have a negative affect. Computers allow people to chat/voice chat/video chat with family members in other countries that would be very expensive or impossible over the phone. They also provide learning experiences with many resources at your finger tips. One posotive affect of computers is that they allow you to connect with people around the world. Programs like skype and allow you to video/voice/ chat to people around the world at no cost. Doing such the phone would be very expensive. It gives you the opportunity to see family members you rarely see. Another positive effect of using computers is the resource and information provides too you. The internet has just about every piece of information possible. Doing a research paper go to wikipedia and topics you'l find information. The internet can prove to be helpful. The @CAPS2 offers you many good mind/puzzle games that you could not ordinarily do. There are alot ;of good things on the internet. Many things that help get your mind flowing. Cant afford the newspaper? Read articles and stories right on the internet. The last reason I believe @CAPS2 have a positive affect on people is because it replace. Many people, instead of going to the @CAPS3 will go to the @CAPS2. No matter what are you doing, you are usually doing more on the @CAPS2 than on the @ORGANIZATION1. That is why I think computers make a posotive affect on people. Computers are sure to be our future. You can play games, voice/video chat and even read the newspaper.",3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
7246,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist since it is affecting her condition. She needs water to survive, and the next town is very far away. So she could possibly pass out without brake, and the hot temperatures. “When I tried a draper I was, it had the flavor of battery acid” (Kurmaskie @NUM1). If she doesn’t find water soon, it will affect herb condition. Also, the features of the setting affects her determination. When she knows that she needs to find a town. she works harder. ""i would conserve my water go inward for an hour or so atleast or my inner spirit""(@NUM1). She would try her hardest to make smart moves, and make it to a town, as fast as possible. She works harder since she knows without water, her life is in danger. Now, things could get even rougher.",1.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
1267,1,"In my opinion i think computers have a positive effect on people. Computers allow you to communicate will people from anywhere in the world. You can learn about different places much faster than you would if you read a book. Also many more jobs want people with computer skills. It is also fun and educational. Can you imagine how much harder it would be to communicate with someone who lives in, lets say @LOCATION1. It would be a lot harder, dont you think? Well thanks to computers it is as easy as turning on your computer. Many teachers enjoy doing activities with penpals. That would be a lot harder if you had to write letters. It would also cost a lot more money to call. Also, if you were looking for specific information about florida it is alot easier on a computer. You just type in what it is you are looking for, rather than reading through tons of books, in which case you might not even find what you are looking for. Also the computer has millions of iinformation. The computer also has various pictures which is also good. Another good reason is that many more jobs these days want to hire someone who knows how to work with computers. You can do a lot more things on a computer that you cant do on a piece of paper. For example make animated movies and video games. These things have evolved over the years thanks to computers. Finally my last reason, its not only educational its also fun. Sure you can research information and do you rhomework on the computer, but you can also play games. Computers can do all sorts of different things. Computers can be programed to have simulations for jobs like policemen ambulance drivers, and doctors. These are all things that save lives. That is why i think computers have a positive effect on people. Without computers our country probably wouldn't be as evolved as it is today.",5.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
12891,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is nostalgic, warm, and thankful. In the memoir the author explains the importance of family, recounts his experiences with family, and thanks his family for all the important life lesson they have taught him. In paragraph two the author says: ""Here, the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the backdrop to life in our warm home."" This excerpt conveys a feeling of nostalgia and warmth as the author praises his childhood home. In paragraph three the author says: ""In our neighborhood, despite customs elsewhere, all of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship."" This sentence also makes the reader feel nostalgic and warm because the author really gives the reader a sense of his childhood community's unity and love. In paragraph five the author says: ""My mother and father had come to this country with such courage, without any knowledge of the language or the culture."" In this sentence the author really conveys his @CAPS1 of thanks of his parents to the reader as he praises them. In paragraph six the author says: ""But, in reality, there is no way to express my gratitude for the spirit of generosity impressed upon me at such an early age and the demonstration of how important Family and Friends are."" And later in paragraph seven: ""It was here where I learned the real definition of 'Family'. And for this, I will never forget that house or its gracious neighborhood or the many things I learned there about how to love."" These excerpts really sum up the author's @CAPS1 about family. They explained to the reader how really important Family is and how thankful the author is for his family and all the life lessons they have taught him. These excerpts really convey the @CAPS1 of nostalgia, warmth, and thankfulness to the reader.",4.0,,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
4588,2,"Most movies, magazines, music, and books are considered offensive to at least one person in this world.  These materials often fall victim to censorship and are challenged daily to be banned, especially books.  Mothers and fathers do have the right to prohibit such materials, but they do not have the right to ban them from all the world's children.  Whatever the reasoning should be censorship is wrong.  It restricts the @ORGANIZATION1 of the writer, the @ORGANIZATION1 of the reader, and, as Katherine Paterson well put it, would result in 'no books left on the shelf for any of us.'     @CAPS1 to the @ORGANIZATION1 everyone has the freedom of speech and the freedom of press.  This does not exempt writers or artist who occasionally, or more than occasionally, include explicit content in their works.  In every book there a message the writer is tyring to tell his or her audience.  How they go about getting that message across is their own business, and they have all @ORGANIZATION1 to do so in anyway they @MONTH1 wish.   People who wish not to see the writer's message have the right not to.  But when they fear the message and try to stop anyone else from seeing or hearing it, then they are violating the @ORGANIZATION1 of the writer by telling them they cannot include the offensive material.  Most writer's include this material for a reason.  For example, swear words, such as the ones argued in @PERSON2, often times show the characters' traits and also improve the setting.  During those times, people did call @CAPS2 @CAPS3 by explicit names, even those who were in no way prejudice.  That was the way of life for them and the author was simply trying to show that to the reader.  By censoring the word from text, people were, in a way, covering up the history of the @CAPS4 @CAPS5.            Every person over the age of eighteen has the right to read anything they wish.  They are no longer under the commands of their legal gaurdians and in no way are under the command of other children's parents.  Parents who prefer their own children not to see or listen to certain materials have the right to censor the materials away from their children.  On the other hand, they have no right to tell their neighbors what and what not their children can see.  Every parent has different rules and guidelines for their children, and this is their right.  They @MONTH1 believe that it is important for their children to be exposed to these certain materials early on in life so that they can learn right from wrong from the very start.  It is possible that they even might not care.  Whatever the cause @MONTH1 be they have the right to expose their children to anything they see appropriate.  For example, @PERSON3 is an author who has been challenged throughout her entire career.  Many of her books include the topic of menstration, which many parents found inappropriate for their grade school children to read.  Therefore, those parents brought the books to the attention of the school board, who quickly removed the books from its library shelves.  Many parents, librarians, and teachers were upset by this and argued that the topic was not at all harmful.  In fourth grade girls are required to watch a video on the topic of puberty and in fifth grade many girls begin to go through these changes themselves.  So how is it inappropriate for them to read fictional books that include the topic?  Many parents believe it is not and even encouraged their children to read the books, but the other parents who found it offensive reuined these parents' children's right to read.       Therefore, in the long-run, censorship is wrong.  It restrict the @ORGANIZATION1 of the audience and of the writer, which prevents growing experiences for both.  If everyone was to ban one book they found offensive, the world  would be without any books and become quite dull.  No one would be able to read and no one would be able to express themselves freely.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
13428,5,"The mood of the author and the memoir was happy. He or she seemed proud of everything about theirselves. He or she didn't let anyone stand in their way of their culture, home, and parents. For example the author said ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" When i read that last sentence of the whole memoir I understood what feeling the author was getting. He or she was in all kinds of moods. Some was happy, some was grateful, and some was exciting. The mood the author was in made me realize that I need to appreciate what I got. In my home, in my school, everywhere and everyone around me. The mood of the author in the memoir was grateful. and happy.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
4457,2,"Censorship in libraries should not be allowed.  People should have the choice to read or watch whatever they want to.  Just becuase one person finds a book offensive doesn't mean that another person will also find it offensive.  The libray's need to let the community deem what they find offensive or not.     Some parents say that they do not want bad or certain materials in the library becuase their children might read it.  If parents are that concerned about what their children see, then  they should sit down with their child and discuss why they should not be able to read or watch that type of material.  Parents should be able to make their children understand why they shouldn't read or watch the certain material instead of accusing the library's themselves just for having the material.       If some books or movies are deemed very offensive by public, then they should be placed in a special area.  This special area should be clearly marked with a sign that says '@CAPS1 content' and should only be able to be viewed by adults.  This would solve many problems such as children being able to check out certain materials.  Doing this would grant the people who wish to see this type of material access to the material.  This would also solve a problem becuase it would be in a back corner or area that not many people go to so children will not very easily see it.       The best solution to this problem would still allow the library's to put certain material that are found offensive in their library's.  But instead put age restrictions to being able to check out the material and also putting it in a differnet section of the library than the normal material",3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
15676,6,"In @DATE1, the Empire State Building was constructed and would be used to house a new form of travel. The mooring mast, constructed at the top of the building would be used to dock one-thousand foot dirigibles; the future of travel. In theory, the blimp would be docked at the mast, using an electric winch, but in reality, there was no safe way of doing so at such a high altitude. Another challenge faced was the highly flammable gas, hydrogen, which was used. One lit match could send the steel frame plummeting to the earth below. The soft fabric which covered the steel frame could easily be punctured, which was unsuitable for an urban area.The men constructing the blimp either looked over, or forgot the elements of nature which restricted this project. At the peak of the building, winds reached high velocities, and shifted directions rapidly which would have rapped the dirigible around the mast. The greatest obstacle was the law, restricting airships from flying too low over New York's growing urban civilization. In the Empire State Building's history, one blimp has attempted to simulated dock, and another has performed a newspaper stunt. Any man his right mind would see that this project was doomed before it had begun.",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
1217,1,I think having computers are good because you can use it to find places. Another reasons why its good is that you can talk to your friends from the computer. You can play all types of different games and get pictures and its is good to do your homework. That is why computers are good and we need them. First reason that we need computers is that it can be a map for us. Also we could look at places we never saw before and if you want to get some where you can go the computer to do that.,2.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
6908,3,The setting was the main affect on the cyclist. He said it was hot and that he was lost. The cyclist had no clue were he was going and it was hot out side. He seemed very strest and that only made it worse for him. He was thirsty from all riding and the heat so he trys to get water from a water pump. The water that was in it was horable. He called it a “substance” it had a flavor of battery acid. “If he were not lost and if it were cool outside he would have water and he would not be so upset. The setting of a hot and lost place had a huge impact on the cyclist.     ,1.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
7516,3,"The cyclist was riding in some rough, dry and abandoned terrain that made his journey almost fatal. He described it as, “In the high deserts of California in June.” It was dry, lifeless and hot The sun was beating on him and he needed to frequently drink water, but he was running out. The empty towns were what he was wanting on for fresh water, but they’d been very abandoned. This made his journey very dangerous. He could’ve fallen off at any time because of heat stroke He would’ve died right then and there. His sweat was drying in the heat and there was no way for him to cool off in the lifeless desert: lifeless and dry. He had to enhance these extreme. Ironical conditions for miles on end, just to find some water. It was all that a desert is and all that a home shouldn’t go through.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
7012,3,The features of the setting greatly affect the cyclist. The author is getting worn out and is rapidly running out of water. He “was traveling through the high deserts of California in June. This shows how the setting is causing him to become greatly exhausted.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
16013,6,"To allow dirigibles to dock at the Empire State Building, the @CAPS1 had many obstacles to face. Some of the obstacles were there a morning mast could not be simply dropped and a thousand foot dirigible moored at the top. would add stress to the buildings frame."" The architechs couldn not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof."" The greatest obstacle to the mooring mast was nature itself. The @CAPS1 of the Empire State Building had obstacles to face.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,1.0
12603,5,"The mood created by the memoir created by the author @PERSON1 is that he is a clothing designer that is internationally recognized by the world and he offered his definition of ""family"". It is a heart warming story about him and what he calls his one and only ""family"".",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
12290,5,"In the memoir Narciso Rodriguez The auther makes the mood seem fermiluar and loving. He created a mood very uplifting and loving as if to say your childhood and family is the heart of your home.                                           In paragraph two the author states that he had lived in a home were celibrations, that formed a backdrop to life in his warm home. What the auther means is, family and friends made the home feel enviting and comterable. The author also explans restating from paragraph four ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family, knowing that they would do the same for us."" This scentence explains that even if there friends and family had no were to go, they were always welcome in their home.    This memoir creats a very loving mood. In the last paragraph the author explains that home is were he learned the real definition of family and love.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
13247,5,The @CAPS1 created a warm and welcoming feeling. They explained they're Parents troubles in the past and how they over came them. This shows courage. They describe their heritage and culture which shows confidence and honor. The @CAPS1 did a great @CAPS2 creating a comforting feeling.,1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
3751,2,"Let your mind wander to a place of peace and tranquility. You are in a world of endless possiblities. To each side of you lies a vast collection of diverse adventures and anecdotes. You are in a library where each book holds the key to a door of knowledge and adventure. Looking for an adventure of your own, you drift down each section searching for the one suitable to your liking. Turning the corner, your eyes suddenly glance over to some books and magazines with provocative and inappropriate pictures on them that are blatantly out in the open for anyone to gaze upon. Quickly turning your eyes from the unfortunate meeting of offensive pictures, you race down the hallway to a different section. You think to yourself how unecessary those images were, now scarred into your mind. In most libraries, you will find anything you are looking for that can be contained within the confines of a book. I believe that because libraries are used by everyone of all different ages, races, and genders, that some censorship should be put into effect.       Some of the content found in libraries should be censored due to a diverse group of people in the world with different views, opinions, and morals. This censorship is @CAPS1 narrowed down to just inappropriate images, but religious, political, and cultural innuendo as well. Censorship should be evident in all sections of the library. I do @CAPS1 think that certain books should necessarily be removed from the shelf because of violation of rights to speech which includes written speech as well. I do, however, think that they should be sectioned off and clearly marked to warn unwanting eyes and ears of the material found there.     Libraries are one of the number one resources when researching, reading, or gaining information and knowledge. Most everyone has used, uses, or will use a library in their life. This includes children and families. Children do @CAPS1 need to be experiencing, learning about, or exposed to some of the content and material found in libraries. I do @CAPS1 think the books should be removed from the shelves, but put somewhere else where a child could @CAPS1 find it. Children have rapidly developing minds and are sometimes defined by the images that they are exposed to. Something a child sees is more commonly and easily remembered for a longer time than if an adult would see that. This shows that it is @CAPS1 good for a child to see such offensive things. Censorship, in regard to moving the books to a new location where a child can @CAPS1 stumble upon it, is the best choice.     Another reason that I believe that the books should @CAPS1 be removed completely, but rather taken somewhere else in the library, is because that everyone has the right to express their opinions and feelings toward a subject. Also, others have the right to express their opinions toward another's thoughts. Just because you find something offensive doesn't give you the right to take that away from someone. I think that if a person so desires such things and feels the need to read about them, then they have the right and the choice to do that. Although, people who do @CAPS1 want to see that should also have the choice to have that somewhere where they will @CAPS1 come across it. This is why the books should @CAPS1 be out in the open for all to see, but taken to a secluded section.     In conclusion, the best solution when dealing with offensive material found in libraries is to @CAPS1 remove it completely, but section it off from everything else and allow exclusive access to only those who so desire such material. Everyone should have a choice and a right to see or @CAPS1 to see certain material they might find offensive. In doing so, the library, I believe, will become a better environment to all those who wish to access and use it. More people will use it and the library will then appeal to everyone.",6.0,6.0,5.0,6.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,28.0
6458,3,"The features in the setting of this story affect the cyclist very much so. Throughout this story this poor person has to get lost and end up in the middle of nowhere. By her being out her cycle was being affected. She was just trying to get somewhere and get things done, but of course she didn’t. She kept moving on down. This story was very good and showed that she cared and wanted it bad.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
12447,5,"The mood created by the author is very happy and grateful throughout the memoir. It is very interesting also, when he's talking about when his parents first bought the house and how happy they were in 1961 when they made their home into a traditional Cuban home, ""Within it's walls, my young parents created our traditional Cuban home, the very heart of which was the kitchen."" (@CAPS1 @NUM1) In that @CAPS1 he also says how he got his culinary skills from his parents and that he was grateful for it. He also says, ""My mother and father had come to this country with such courage, without any knowledge of the language or the culture. They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their child a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends, and careers in the country they loved."" (@CAPS1 @NUM2) @CAPS3 you can tell a lot about his parents by those two sentences. @NUM3. They care about their children @NUM1.) They're not selfish @NUM5.) They're not afraid to make sacrifices and @NUM6.) They can adjust to new things and new surroundings. @CAPS3 by everything I have said the mood throughout the memoir was happy, kind, caring and many moods similar to those. The same moods came everyone that was mentioned in the memoir.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
14901,6,The greatest abstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself. There were high violent air currents causing the building to constantly shift. It was neither practical nor safe.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
9454,4,"The author concludes the story with that paragraph I think to say that when the hibiscus start to grow back she will be back at what she started. I think that is why because she says “In the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is building, then I will take that test again.”",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
7460,3,The conditions that the cyclist was in was very horid as he continued on his ride he got hotter and hotter hoping to find water after he finished of his last bit. Taking advices from an old man was and his last decision he made.,1.0,,,,,1.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
7674,3,When riding a bike the features around you can affect the cyclist. Some things that can affect the cyclist are weather and scenery. If the weather is cold and rainy the cyclist would not want to be riding. The dangers of riding when the weather conditions are bad will make the cyclist second guest: riding or not. If the weather is extremely hot the cyclist will get dehydrated quicker and even more exhasted. The scenery can also affect the cyclist. When a cyclist is riding and all he/she sees is a desert then they might have doubts on where there going. If there are abandon buildings everywhere the cyclist @MONTH1 become frighten and want to head back of lose hope as shown in the story “Do not exceed the speed limit” when he gets over a hill and begins to think that he will never make it to Yosemite. Many things can affect the cyclist.,1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
15854,6,"The excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by @ORGANIZATION2 describes the creation of The Mooring Mast, and its purpose to extending the height of the Empire State Building. Although during the 1930's the concern of the Mooring Mast serving as a docking area for drigibles, also known as today as blimps. After the 85th floor frame was built and the skeleton of the mast of steel and stainless steel glass windows, issues concerning the landing drigibles arose within the public.There were @NUM1 major reasons why the Mooring Mast of the Empire State Building was never really completed. One reason was because of safety. The excerpt explains how dirigibles from outside of U.S used hydrogen instead of helium. And, using hydrogen is extremely flammable. They used the example of the German diriglie Hindenburg being destroyed b/c it was on fire in @LOCATION1.Second reason was the problem of wind currents. Winds were extremely violent. Dirigibles would move and sway alot b/c of the strong winds. And the moving dirigibles being that they were at least @DATE2 ft long dangled high above urban areas which wasn't safe at all for people walking under it.Thirdly was the issue of it being against the law for airships to fly too low over urban areas was also a safety hazard for people. It would be illegal for dirigibles to be tied up on mooring mast above cities filled w/people risking that it might fall onto people.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
7421,3,"The cyclist was riding in the hot, desert. This made him thirsties and less active. The story says, ""The water bottles contained only a few tantalizing sips. Wide rings of dried sweat circled my shirt.""",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
10500,4,It means that she want to do it all over again. It the girl comfort zone - So that is what she does when she upset. That is what the story and the phase mean.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
11960,5,"In this excerpt, Narciso Rodriguez describes his childhood home and extended ""family."" The mood of this duration is very warm and happy. Narciso speaks of his childhood home with only love and affection. @CAPS1's eternally grateful to his parents for turning ""... this simple house into a home."" @CAPS1 speakes admirably of his parents and the sacrifices and hard work they went through to even get to @LOCATION1, and @CAPS1 is so thankful they did. @CAPS1 also speakes lovingly of his ""extended family"" and describes his neighborhood. ""In our neighborhood..., all these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship."" This loving, supporting ""family"" made Narciso who is is today and made him appreciate the fact that ""' family' had nothing to do with being a blood relative."" But instead is composed of those whom you love and who love you.",3.0,,,,,3.0,4.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
16633,6,"You want me to tell you what they had to go through in attempt to allow dirigibles dock there?! Well to tell you the truth they had to go thourgh a lot, like ""one obstacle the lack of a suitable landing area"", also another ""obstacle I would have to say is nature""! let me tell you why I picked these to obstacles. Keep reading! They want to dock the dirigibles at the empire state building. I say want because there plan did not work to many things was wrong. like the fact that they said ""one obstacle was the lack of a suitable landing"" they couldnt find a good landing area for the dirigibles with out something bad happening. another ""obstacle they had was nature"" I say nature because if the wind blew it can blow away some people. So those are my main obstacles that they had to go through @CAPS1 to allow the dirigibles dock there.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
12562,5,In the quick story @PERSON1 the auther shows a mood of gratitude and appreciation for what her parents have done throughout their lives. They have gone through tough moments but they kept moving on to make their lifes and their child's life easy and good,0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
15424,6,"The @CAPS1 who made the Mooring mast faced many obstacals when trying to get dirigibles to dock. Some were safty, nature its self, and pre existing laws. ""Most dirigibles from outside the United states used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" The greatest obstacal was nature. Winds at the top were always changing and could make the dirigibles crash to the mast. An existing law prevented airships to fly too low in urban cities. For all the work the @CAPS1 put into the mast it could never live up to its potential.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
9590,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph to show Saeng’s determination despite her sadness. She misses Vietnam, but she will take the test again next year. The author’s choice of words in the concluding paragraph convey a sense of hope and something to look forward to. In the story, Saeng is disapointed in herself for failing the test, but buying the plant helps her because it reminds her of home. The idea that Saeng is persistant and the hopeful tone of the story are expressed in this final paragraph.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
12522,5,"The mood which Narciso Rodriguez showed in the memoir was thankful and grateful to his mother and father for their love and sacrifice they went through when he was growing up. He was very thankful for their giving arms to anyone who needed them and for their warm attitudes and teachings of what family really defines. Narciso learned this deffinition from his parents, family is or can be anyone important to you and they do not have to be blood related such as a neighbor with a different culture. He is also very grateful for his parents unselfishness by moving to @LOCATION1 for his education not even putting the thought of work in their head. Narciso's mood is represented in every sentence in this memoir written, he was very lucky to have had such a great childhood and ""family"" which he realizes and will be grateful and thankful for everything anyone ever did to help him grow up to who he is now for the rest of his life.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
6334,3,"The features of the setting affects the cyclist by letting the author have hope . When he came across a sign which read ""Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit, his hope was faint because he was doing a water-depleting @NUM1 per hour. Because of the rate of the water, he felt life was cruel sometimes and he thought that he was at the point of losing water. Also when he came across the tumbleweeds and the large snake he tried to avoid them. If he would have been bitten he would have died. Finally because of the heat he might have also did from the heatsroke ""wide signs  of   dried""       ",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
11994,5,"The mood is happy, proud, and grateful. Happy because he loved his family, his culture, and his home. ""In our neighborhood, dispite customs elsewhere, all of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship. Narciso was proud and grateful to his parents because they gave up everything to come to the United States to give their family a better life. Without knowing alot about this new country, they struggled to overcome problems. Narciso is grateful to his parents for living their life to start over. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice.""",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
1726,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS1 you know that @NUM1 in every @NUM2 @CAPS2 families own a computer? Computers can be helpful if you need to write an essay for school, but when it comes to family vs. computer the average kid will usually pick the computer. Computers are taking away family time, exercise privledges, and time spent on school on school work. ""@PERSON3, get off the computer and come play '@CAPS3' with us!"" @CAPS4 mom's will say this to childeren at least once as week, the answer that is @CAPS4 common is ""@CAPS5!"" @CAPS6 childeren from the ages of @NUM3 to @NUM4 would rather spend time on the computer weather it's playing games or talking with friends. This is on issue that needs attention. Families should start to spend more time together instead of hanging out in front of a screen. My friend @PERSON1 has a little brother that is always playing games on the computer. Whenever @PERSON1 wants to play hide and go seek with him he always finds a way out of playing with @PERSON1 play computer. Aport from spending time with family computers take away @CAPS6 kids exercise privlidges. One example is that last week it snowed and I wanted my neigbor @PERSON2 to come outside and have a snowball fight with me but, she said had to finish a level on a computer game and it was realy important. This proves that it takes away time outside alone with exercise. A walk in the park with friends sounds relaxing to @CAPS4 people except for @CAPS4 teenagers would rather talk to their friends using a computer instead of actualy spending time with them. Lastly if time is being spent staring at a screen. When does homework got done? I took a survey recently among the eighth grade and the results showed that @PERCENT1 of the people that don't do their homework are due to spending too much time on the computer. In my science class a boy named @CAPS7 never does his homework. I asked him why one day and he says it was because he was talking to his girlfriend who also never does her homework because she always has something to do on the computer. @CAPS5 time spent with family, @CAPS5 exercise getting done, @CAPS5 time to play outside, and missing homework assignment are alot to sacrifice for ""@CAPS8 one more level."" I you want to help me get childeren not spend so much time on computer, write on artical on this important issue in one of your newspaper and please consider my ideas.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
1748,1,"Dear local newspaper: I strongly feel that computer technology has a neagtive affect on the people of our society. People of our society are spending to much time on computers, and not enough time exersizing and interacting with family and friends. By starting now we can make a difference in the lives of thousands. First off I would like to say that it is imporitive that we exersize daily. If we don't fit exersizing into our day to day schedual, we are potentally putting our health on the line. Activities such as taking a dog for a walk, riding a bike, or taking a nice jog through the park are just a few ways to help your physical fitness. Also taking part in extracuricular activities can play a major part in exersize. This not only helps physically, but it helps mentally too. Finnally another method of exersizing is to play a part in your local community service projects. Exersizing every day is just one way to keep you active and off the computer. Lastly, interacting with family and friends can help you stay off the computer. Playing games is one way that can help you stay connected with your family. This can bring you closer to the people you love, and help them get to know you a little better. Furthermore you can play with your friends, and in the process develops social skills. Who knows developing social skills could help you in the future. Plus, by interacting with family and friends you can learn to be relaxed and let your life take its natural source. This is another helpful technique that can improve the quality of your life and keep you from the temptation of being on the computer. In conclusion techniques like exersizing and interacting with family and friends can help you stay off the computer. By working together and trying these methods, the computer can be eliminated from our daily rutines.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
9622,4,The  last  paragraph of the story.” Winter Hibiscus by Minfong  Ho is important to the story. The last paragraph leaves a definite ending so the  reader  knows  exactly what is going to happen  in the future.  This  paragraph is a very significant ending to the story because it represent s symbols in the story. The author concludes the hibiscus is important to her. Along with the hibiscus it also shows that the  geese  and the melting of the snow represent a fresh  start  and a new  beginning . These symbols  are  important  to her in that they  give  her a chance to start over and she sees that in the  winter  hibiscus.,3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
15588,6,"The builders of the empire state building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. First it was illegal to have an aircraft flying too close to a city ""was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas"". Another obstacle was the buildings structure if the blimp had docked there would be stress on the building ""would add stress to the buildings Frame"". The last obstacle was the wind would push the blimp around every which way when docked on the tower ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents""",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
6210,3,"In the story “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” the features of the setting effect the cyclist. They effect the cyclist’s confidence, and hope. I say this because through out the story he sees things that would consern other people like the towns that are suppose to be the best end up “Ghost towns” and the road from flat to hills. Yet he continues on and then says “what I believed was my last burst of energy,” “I was going to die.” The cyclist dosent think he can continue but manages to keep going hoping that the next horizon to see a building or something. Hope saved his life because if he knew he could not continue that he could die.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
3233,2,"Censorship     In a library there are a plethora of books to choose from. Books ranging from children's to difficult adult ones. It's nice to know that you have many options and freedom to pick whatever book you would like to read. Censorship is the censoring of a piece of material so it is not legally or publically available. If a book was censored because of the contents inside it would bring into question other books or media related to it.     I believe that if books, magazines, movies, etc. were censored in a library the material wouldn't have a chance to be exposed to people. Some people write books and songs to express themselves or make money. If a book is taken out of a library other libraries will have to remove it also, and other libraries won't buy it. Some people just wish to get there thoughts out and share their message with other people. Censorship in a way stops the flow of what people learn.      Another part about censorship is where to draw the line on what is offensive enough to be censored. If a book is removed from the library for its contents, people will look into as to why it was removed. It gets people thinking as to what other books are also offensive. The reason why one book is removed could relate to another book and could get that one to be removed also. Since censorship is probably mostly opinion, there is no clear boundary as to what can sit on the shelf and what can't.     With censorship you are only stripping the freedom of press away from people. If a publishing company accepts a piece of media only to have is censored later on, this might mean we need new publishers, or that they are also interested in getting what people have to say out into the world. The boundary for censorship is very opinionated and should not be dictated by a single group. When one book is taken down it only brings other ones into question. Those are my beliefs about censorship in the library",2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
3510,2,"I belive that thier should @CAPS3 be sesorship because we live in @LOCATION1,@CAPS1 belive in freedom and I do to, sensorship is @CAPS3 the way.my thoughts about people that find  a book offensive slould @CAPS3 read the book if thay heard it was a bad book or thay dident like the way the cover looks thats thier problem dont ruin it for everyone els that likes the book.say if two people found a book offensive an five people liked the book dose that mean that it should be removed.What if you where one of thos five people and your favorite book was gone and you asked why and the librariean said 'well two people flaged the book for being offensive so it was removed '@CAPS2 @CAPS3 a book person but one time in school we read a book as a class called farenhite @NUM1 I thought it was a good book for its time,  I head that some people wanted to ban the book and some people did.Two words for thos people @CAPS3 cool.I think if you walk into a librarie you sould expect to see alot of different ideas because thats freedom and the woulds @CAPS3 pefect.So what @CAPS2 saying is thay should come up with a new system for librareis if a majority of people flag book offensive and thay dont want their kids seeing it then thay sould seperate thos books,movies,magazines,ets., from erery thing els @CAPS3 remove them.A message to thos people -If you are one of thos people that finds a picifice book ofensive you should know where thay are and stay out of that side of the librareie.thats my thoughts and views on sesorship in libraries.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
7132,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist in many ways For example, the fact that he is pedaling a bike “through the high deserts of California in June, make the intensity level of the story very high. If it would have been @DATE1 and there was a nice breeze it would be different.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
1361,1,"In modern society, @CAPS3 is rare that you come across someone who doesn't know how to basicly operate a computer. According to the statistics project known on youtube as ""shift happens"", most children in the @LOCATION1, @PERCENT1 in facts, have used a computer by age four. While @CAPS3 can be debated that computers are bad, i firmly disagree. Computers are one of the best technological advances the human race has made. they have helped education, reconnecting, and are even at times good for the environment. I wonder why people disagree, and i hope that after reading this, you will too. At my schoo, there are three computer labs, each with about twenty five computers, a library with twenty computers, and each teacher has two computers in their classroom. Wheni look at these amounts and addit to what i know about computers in other @CAPS1 schools, @CAPS3 is clear to me that computers have helped the education system. Many teachers can have students research projects with the click of a button. There are websites where students who were out from school can get their assignments for the next day. Also, teachers can put their grade books in their had drive. This saves paper and ensures accuracy in the final grade. As a student, i think that computers have greatly improved schools in many ways, but mostly in those above. At one point or another in life, we are all older and want to reconnect with our old friends. Thanks to computers, the process of reconnecting is much easier. There are social networks such as facebook, twitter, and @CAPS2, that are valuable for finding your friend from @DATE1 camp. Let's say you have been connected with someone, and you've just found out that you got a promotion. You want to call, but you don't know the hone number, but you know the email address. Email messages send instantly to anywhere. (And while you're at @CAPS3, ask for a phone number!) @CAPS3's always great to talk with old friends. Computers have helped @LOCATION1 make that easier. My friend recently purchased a sony laptop. She liked not only the features, but that @CAPS3 was an energystar, or eco-friendly. Now a days, computers have been made green in the battle for the environment. Paper is saved with online encylopedias, newspapers, journals, etc. Not only that but computers are needing less and less electricity. You save green and are green! Today's society is helping mother nature not only in our actions, but in computers too. In my opinion, computers are helping @LOCATION1, not hurting @LOCATION1. They have assisted education, social reconnecting and the environment. We must look kindly upon the advancement and miracle invention known as the computer.",6.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,26.0
12065,5,"The mood created in the memoir is the feeling of Cuban culture and the @CAPS1's home. The feeling could be described as homey. In paragraph @NUM1, this is where the @CAPS1 first introduces the custom of his house. And how it is. The @CAPS1 describes his house as simple with cuban music and the scent of cuban food flowing through it. The feeling that the @CAPS1 uses to describe his house is the feeling that the whole memoir had. The house kinda flooded the memior with it's feelings. Also this memior didn't only show cuban feeling it also gave of family vibes (like how a family is happy and together) It expressed how the @CAPS1 was close to his family",1.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
1078,1,"Dear @CAPS1: you recently posed a question in you Newspaper. The @CAPS2 yourk @CAPS3, asking if the readers were for or against technology. I support computers because they give one opportunity to learn about different people all over the world and their culture, they save massive ammounts of time in today's hustle-bustle society, and you can talk to people online via certain computer programs. With a computer one can learn scores of information about foreign countries and their culture. I read an article in the @CAPS4 @CAPS3 about a man who was participating in a church program in which a foreign citizan would come to @LOCATION2 for a while to make friends and learn about the @LOCATION1. This man, @PERSON1, was assigned a from the farms of @CAPS6 who had never been out of the fields. @PERSON1 thought @CAPS13 would be nice to welcome her in his house with a familiar setting. Unfortunatley, he knew nothing about @CAPS6. he did have a computer though which he quickly retreated to so he could learn everything about her home. When the woman stepped into his door, @CAPS8 was eastastic to feel like @CAPS8 was home again. @CAPS8 ended up staying with @PERSON1 and getting married. If he had not charmed her with his knowledge from the computer. @CAPS8 might not have stayed and had a wonderful life with him. Also, @PERSON2 from @ORGANIZATION2 says that language students such as spanish and french have @PERCENT1 higher success rate if they have a computer to learn more about the countries. He says the average grade for kids with a computer is an A. but the average grade for kids @CAPS15 a computer is a @CAPS9+. Therefore, having a computer to learn about faraway places and people can ensure happiness and succes in the future. Computer also save a massive ammount of time. In the school Newspaper, @PERSON6 told about her homework problem. ""@CAPS10 night i had @CAPS11 homework. I had vocals @CAPS8 is a galore to deal with. I had to look up @CAPS10 word in the huge dictionary, I was failing @CAPS11 because i just didn't have the time for my homework! Then my family bought me a computer, @CAPS13 was so nice using the online dictionary. I could finish my homework in @NUM1 minutes compared to @NUM2 hours! I was finally doing well in @CAPS11."" @CAPS15 her computer, @PERSON6 would have to have and @CAPS11 @NUM2. @CAPS8 would have just kept failing @CAPS15 her time-saving computer. ALso, @PERSON3 says that @PERCENT2 of people get to work faster when they look up traffic reports on the computer instead of listening in the radio. He says that @PERCENT3 of people get a because their boss is so impressed with their consistent timing. As you can see, time is a valuable thing which computers can help save. Finally, computer allow one to talk online. A student once had the misfortune to break one of his vertabrae. The doctor told him that he would not be able to participate in school for a. The student, @PERSON5, came up with a plan to speak to his teachers via his laptop and webcam. Everyday, the teachers would give @PERSON5 an update over his computer. When he finally marched back into school, @PERSON5 barely had any work to make up because his teacher bad interacted with him over the computer. @CAPS15 his computer, @PERSON5 would have a month's worth of work and learning to make up which would have been overwhelming. Also, @PERSON4 of @ORGANIZATION1 says that students that communicate with their families during college have better relationshops after college. Obviously, being able to talk to some are over the computer is a useful thing to have. In conclusion, having a family computer is a very good thing. Not only does @CAPS13 allow people to learn about places other than their home, @CAPS13 also gives us more time and allow us to talk to other withour ever leaving the comfort on home. I recommend that everyone who wants an easier life should invest in a computer.",6.0,5.0,6.0,6.0,6.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,29.0
7116,3,"In the essay “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit,” the features of the setting affects the cyclist in many ways. One thing is the water. There is little water and it is boiling hot. He took some taste of it. He said “It tasted like battery acide.” To me if the water is hot don’t taste it. Another thing is the land. The land went from straight to hilly. That started slowing him down. Last, is the day time. It started turning dark and he was still biking. He wanted to get as far as he could.",2.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
15218,6,The architects and builders of the Empire State Building ran into a few problems when searching for a way to allow dirigibles to dock there. The architects knew they couldn't simply drop a mooring mast on the @ORGANIZATION1 roof because it would be able to support it. The architects also knew that if they attached the dirigible to the mooring mast with a single cable tether would only add stress to the frame. To fix this problem the @ORGANIZATION1 steel frame would need to be modified and strengthened to support the mooring mast and dirigible.,1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
158,1,"Dear newspaper, @CAPS1 some beleive computers do not benefil society, I do. Computers help buisnesses thrive, keep people people aware of what is going on in the world, and allow people to stay in touch with each other. Computers greatly benefit small and large buisnesses across the world. Imagine all the jobs at each buisnesses without a computer. Buisnesses would be unreliable because no instant contact would mean it might take a long time for products to be assembled and shipped. Any buisness owner would cringe at the idea of running of buisness without a computer. When surveyed, @NUM1 out of @NUM2 buisness owners and workers would prefer a computers assistance at work. Almost every modern day buisness relies on at least one computer. For example, companies that mass - produce their products often rely on computers to do jobs more precisely than a worker. Sometimes computer operated robots do dangerous jobs so workers are not at risk. Buisness also need computers to quickly recieve and send information to other buisnesses and people. Buisnesses are not the only need for computers. People use computers as much if not more, than buisnesses. People like you and me use computers to keep in touch with friend and people we know. Thanks to websites like @CAPS2 and e-mail people can easily stay in touch. Families use computers to plan get-togethers. Friends use computers to keep contact after grade school or if they do not live nearby. With computers, anyone that is anywhere can be in constant contact with anyone else. People also like to know news imediately. Without computers it would be alot harder to contact the rest of the world. Imagine a natural disaster accuring and not knowing about it right away. In that case we could not send aid to the area. With the recent earthquakes in @LOCATION1 and @LOCATION2. Knowledge about the rest of the world is even more important. Newspapers provide news and information but a day or two late and they often use computers to aquire that information. Eighty-seven percent of scientists agree that recieving information would be a lot harder.",5.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,23.0
1288,1,"I believe that computers have a positive effect on people. The three reasons I think this, is because computers enhance our hand-eye coordination, they give us the ability to research and find out information about a certain topic. They also allow us to communicate with people who we are not able to see very often. Computers, in fact, increase our hand-eye coordination. The usage of both the screen and the keyboard allow us to look only at tha sceen while typing on the keyboard. Hand-eye coordination is an important skill to have when excersising by playing sports or working out, which is also important and very good for our bodies. If you want in to apply for a job in, for example, an office, and you started stumbling and acting clumsy, then you @MONTH1 be looked at differently if you were organized and knew what your doing. This is why hand-eye coordination is important to people. Computers also have the amazing ability to search the world wide web. This gives us the ability to make millions of searches for any given topic. For example, In fifth grade I did a research project on @LOCATION2. Without all the useful information I found on the computer. I would have never been able to learn evrything I did. As most of the world already knows, there was a devestating earthquake in the small country of @LOCATION4. Computers was one of the ways that helped spread the word and get everyone to start helping and sending supplies and food to the victims. Also, if a family is thinking about going somewhere for a vacation, they can take care of most of the help on the computer. They could buy flight tickets, book a room at the hotel, and even get a rental car for when they land. This is what my family did on our vacation to @LOCATION1 and everything turned out perfectly all thanks to the computer and being able to do everything online. This is how the computer can help you research any topic. Lastly, you can use the computer to communicate with people that live far away and you rareley ever see. For example, my grandparents live in @LOCATION3, so I use video chat to talk to them since I only get the chance to see them one every two or three years. Also when my dad goes on buisness trips to other states or even something out of the country, we use instant messaging or video chat to keep in touch. Lastly, if you have friends or family who are fighting for america in @LOCATION5 right now, you can also use a video chat to communicate with them. So these are all my reasons why I believe computers have a positive effect on people. They help with hand-eye coordination, they give us the ability to research and find information on any topic through the internet, and lastly, the allow us to communicate with people who we are not able to see very often. These are my reasons and I hope you agree with me that computers have a positive effect on people today.",5.0,6.0,6.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,27.0
472,1,"@ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS1 technology majors support that the use of computers have a positive effect on people and I agree with them. I believe the use of computers are a necesity for social interaction, homework, research, and are a great source of entertainment on a rainy day. After a long day at school @CAPS1 teens go from the bus, to the front door, to their computer chair. In fact, @PERCENT1 of must teens do so. Odds are they're logging into facebook, myspace, formspring, @ORGANIZATION2, @CAPS2, and other socially interactive websites. With good time management I actually find these websites important. I think facebook and e-mail and @CAPS3 @CAPS4 ( @CAPS5) are a great way to be socially interactive. It's also a great way to keep in touch with long distance family or friends. I go to @DATE1 camp and have made friends I call my family. Some of them being across the ocean in @LOCATION2. Seeing as how I can't make long distance calls which would cost way too much money, facebook is a geat alternative to keep in touch. @CAPS1 of my family also live far away. For example, my aunt, uncle and cousin in @LOCATION1. My aunt just had a baby, meaning I have a new cousin which I'm not able to see in person yet so seeing pictures on facebook instead of spending money on envolopes, stamps and picture prints is really awesome @CAPS1 homework given out in school requires a computer. Three out of five homework assignments are on the computer. Whether it be taking a twenty question test to defining a word the computer is a schoolwork necesity. In school now many projects are assigned meaning we need the computer and internet. We use powerpoint and other microsoft documents whether it be typing an essay or creating a powerpoint slideshow. We need the internet for research to get the information we need, to suceed. Aside from interacting with other humans and researching and typing the computer holds many more wonders. Many people believe people are spending way too much time on the computer. While this @MONTH1 be true for some people it is not true for @CAPS1. Many people are concerned children are becoming lazy but in a recent vote @NUM1 out of @NUM2 mothers said they'd radther see their children playing and interacting on the computer then being a couch patato and watching @CAPS6. On a rainy day the computer can be a great alternative. You can slide in a @CAPS7 and watch a movie or play a game or even research something new and learn about it. @NUM3 out of @NUM2 @CAPS8 have at least two computers in the house for a reason. They're important to @CAPS1 people everyday lives. The computer is a great way to keep in touch with family and friends. You also need to computer for school almost all the time and on a rainy day its a great alternative then being lazy a watching @CAPS6 while your eyes fall asleep. I do believe computers have a positive effect on people.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
3014,2,"There are many types of materials in the library to entertain you. Some of these materials @MONTH1 be books, magazines, movies, and music. Each person has their own type of information and genres that they like. For example, most teenage girls love to read young romance stories, and about young peoples' lives; @CAPS1 people like informational books. Everyone is different in their own way. The material they choose to read is their own choice.           How would you feel if one of your favorite books or magazine were taken off the shelves of all the libraries? You would probably wonder why such a thing would happen. Well, some people would like to argue about how some of the information that is contained in such materials are offensive or innapropriate. They want these types of things to be taken off the shelves. But is it their decision to say that some things offend people?                       Everyone has their own opinion and can make their own choice on what they want to read or what they do not want to read. In my opinion, these types of materials should stay on the shelves. It is simple, if you do not like a certain genre of magazines or books, do not read them. If you hear someones music, and it sounds completely awful to you, then just walk away or listen to your own music. Theres a new movie out about how the world is going to end, and you disbelieve in the fact that the world will not end that way, do not go and see it.      Some parents do not want their children to know about some of the things that are out there in the world, which is completely understandable. But, everyone has rights to what they want to know and what they do not want to know. If everyone had a right to take away some books that they think are not appropriate, do you think there would be any books left? The thing is, is that in today's society, people want to do what they want and think what they want. Some people do not agree with most things, but that is something they will have to face, because not everyone can be happy",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
3374,2,"Have you ever found a book offensive? Many people can say they have. They might not agree on the point of the book or certain viewpoints in the text. When this happens, people stop reading the book and other books in the same category. Certain materials should not be removed from shelves if they are found offending to certain people. Everyone has opinions, what would be left without books?     At my public library, citizens of my city can request certain books, movies, music, or magazines to be put on the shelves. We are very blessed to have this available because if someone cannot afford cerain books, they can always rely on the library. Many people have been very thankful for this system.      If certain people at the library do not want to order certain books requested by citizens because they find them offensive, what would happen? More people would stop going to the library because there would be no materials sparking their interest. Everyone is titled to their own opinions. Just because one person does not approve of a book does not mean that book should not be offered at the library. There are thousands and thousands of books on display at the public library, that does not mean you have to read all of them. There are also many different genres of novels, movies, music, and magazines. Everyone has interests in different types. If people all liked the same things, would not life be boring?     In conclusion, certain materials should not be removed from the shelves of libraries is they are found offending to certain people. Everyone is titled to their own opinions. If a specific book is requested and one person finds it offending, the book should stay in the library. There are many different genres of books, music, movies, and magazines. Imagine if the library did not have a certain type of novel you enjoyed, would you continue to go?",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
13310,5,The mood created by the author is a proud mood. He is proud of his culture the way he lived and how his parents were caring people. His parents always kept there arms and doors open for people to get back on there feet,1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
16471,6,"When designing the Empire State Building, architect Al Smith had the idea of futuristic Dirigible travel in mind. However, he faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock at this giant building, as described in The Mooring Mast. Mooring a dirigible to the top of it ""... would add stress to the building's frame."" In order to allow dirigibles to dock, Smith had to modify the buildings frame: transmitting pressure all the way down to the foundation. Smith also faced the issue of foreign balloons; most of which used the highly flammable hydrogen, Instead of helium. A fire caused by a dirigible docked to the Empire State Building would rapidy spread to the city. Smith found that nature caused problems as well. Due to the changing winds atop the building, ""... the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast,"" @CAPS1 pedestrians. Because of all these obstacles, the idea of a dirigible mooring was given up, but the mast remains today. ",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
6825,3,"Joe Kurmaskie’s “Rough Road ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” tells how a cyclist takes directions from older men who don’t tell him correctly the way to get to Yosemite, so the cyclist ends up lost with hardly any water. Features of the setting such as the terrain and the sun affect the cyclist in the story. The sun was very hot on a summers day and without water makes it even difficult to keep moving because he was so hot and thirsty. @PERSON2, “The sun was beginning to beat down… I was traveling through the high deserts of California in June” (Kurmaskie @NUM1). The terrain was also bumpy and rough to travel on. The sun and the terrain can affect the cyclist very much when out on a hot day in the summer.",2.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
3223,2,"There are different types of books, movies, magnazines, and tape recorders in libraries. Books can be fiction or nonfiction. However, books or any other items can be offensive to people but to others it is just a book to read. So therefore, libraries should not remove books or any other items from the shelf.      Who picks out the books, movies, magnazines, and tape recorders? The answer is the customers at the library. The authors of the books or items did not. The authors gave the decision to choice between books or items. No one can blame the authors. Also, there are different kinds and different types of writtters or artists. Writters and artists took their time for completing a novel or series for us to read or hear. People should not take it seriously about books or other source because it can be nonfiction are fiction.      My next example why libraries should not remove items off the shelf is it might offensed someone but not to others. For example slavery can offensed a colored person but to others it is just a historical event. People need to know what happened in the past with historical events. People need to read the introduction before checking out the book to know if they like it or not. Therefore, people should not try to remove it.                    If a child checks out a book and their parents let them, it is the parents fault. It is there fault because parents let their child check the items out. Also, if a person has a problem with books or any other sources then complain but the libraries should not remove it from the shelf. Like I said before, one person might not like the book or other source but another person might like it.           Libraries are for people to check out books or other sources, and not to remove books or other source off the shelves.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
13081,5,"The mood of the memoir is very appreciative and grateful. The mood of the memoir is very appreciate and grateful because the author is looking back on how his parents turned a three room appartment into a home. I know this because in paragraph @NUM1 the author writes ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" This supports the mood of the memoir because the author is grateful to his parents for teaching him what a home really is. Also the mood of the memoir is very appreciative and grateful because the author tells of how his community was a family. I know this because in paragraph @NUM2 the author writes ""In our neighborhood, despite customs elsewhere, all of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship."" This supports the mood of the memoir because the authors appreciative of the atmosphere of the place that he grew up in. Another reason the mood of the memoir is very appreciative and grateful is that the author understands his parents hardships. I know this because in paragraph @NUM3 the author writes ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" This supports the mood of the memoir because the author appreciates the fact that his parents gave up so much to make a better life for him. The mood of the memoir is shown in many ways.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
14887,6,"Thraghat The process of attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on the Empire state building the builders faced many obstacles. The first obstacle that the bilders faced when attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there occurred in the actual ""building"" process. Because the mast wald add to much stress to the frame of the building if simply attached to its flat roof, the buldas had to reconstruct the steel frame of the building in order to safely place the mast on top, a very expensive and time consuming project. Another obstacle that the builders faced when attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on the Empire state building had to to with nature itself. Because the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting the back of the ship wald swivel around the mooring mast which was very unsafe. The laws against airships flying too low over urban areas also proved to be an obstacle because the Ships would never be able to actually approach the area. In conclusion, the builders faced many obstacles during construction for the dirigibles.",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
7277,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist by making him thirsty and him thinking he is lost and going to die. The cyclist got information from an old guy that has not been off his porch for years. Just when the cyclist thought he was lost he saw “Gary and Wilber’s fish camp-if you want bait for the big ones, were your best bet!” The cyclist went in and got water, and the old man asked him if he wanted to know where to go, but this time he said no.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
6739,3,"The setting will either effect the cyclist in a good way or a bad way. In the story “Rough Road Ahead” by Joe Kurmaskie it affects the cyclist in a bad way and a good way. In the story, it continues to talk about lack of water. “When I tried a drop or two it had the flavor of battery @NUM1). This shows that the heat made the water warm, so it did not cool him down. But a good way it affect them is pebbles. ""I read once that sucking on stones helps take your mind off thirst by allowing what spit you have left to @NUM2). This shows that even though he has no water the pebbles can make him less thirsty. This is how the setting affects the cyclist. In good way and a bad way.",2.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
3126,2,"Real life is rated @CAPS1 so why pretend it's not? If a library feels that if a book is too graphic, a movie too violent or that music to agressive then its their own choice to remove it or not. It is true that that it's pointless to try and censor the lives of kids and teenagers.Explicit content is all around not only in the media and literature. The never ending game of shielding this generations teenagers and children is already finished.     In this point in time, the main focus of alot of movies and music and books is something violent, agressive, inapproiate, or explicit. The idea of removing these things from library shelves is pointless. The will always be violence and crime in todays world along with excessive swares and cuss words all around. It's exceptable that some parents don't want their children reading,watching or listening to something they don't or wouldn't approve of but even if the kids are protected and home out in the world sometimes the parents wont be there.     Libraries are public places, and a percent of the audience would be upset, frusterated or angr if the books, music or movies they liked were no longer avalable due to the cencorship. It @MONTH1 seem as if viewing, reading or listening to something violent or explicit, would have an effect on the listener. On the streets, at school, at the park and more places children and teens will be exposed to this type or explicit language so attempting to cencor it in their reading and viewing matterial is just pointless.        In my experence I have grown up and been around people who have grown up listening to violent music, watching graphic movies and more explicit material and not been effected. I saw my first rated @CAPS1 movie when i was nine, so parents can give thier kids somewhat of an age but at one point trying to cencor anything is a waste of time. With schools now teaching their students the positives of being abstinent and the sexual deseases, students are more likely to refrain despite what they see in movies, read about, or listen to. Any child exposed to the internet could be subject to all kinds of inapproite material, explicit canotent, bad language, cuss words, and disturbing images.     Real life is rated @CAPS1 so why pretend it's not? Trying to block the explicity and violence in the world is an endless battle. Certain things @MONTH1 go over the line, but others are just renactments and previews of whats really going on in this world.Why would you hinder the real world away from children and teenagers? Movies have a rating and music @CAPS4 have an explicit content label so people should know whats approiate for themselves. The first sware word a child hears probably wasnt in a song or movie and was probably somewhere in the real world.",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
16421,6,"There were many obstacles that stood in the way of the of allowing dirigibles to dock there. The layout of how the mast would be used was not carefully thought out. One reason is because must dirigibles used hydrogen rather than helium, which was highly flammable. Due to the fact the dirigible would be relatively in close proximity with the pedestrians and other buildings, it would be unwise to use the mast. In addition there was an existing law stating that the dirigible could not fly low in urban areas, which it would do just that if it attached to the mast. Also, the force of the wind could spin the back of the dirigible, causing it to go around and around the mast. The solution would be to put heavy blocks in the back that could cause it to fall on top of the pedestrians. Overall, there were many reasons why it was unreasonable to allow dirigibles to dock there.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
12875,5,"Throughout the memoir Narciso Rodriguez the author creates many different moods. As a ready I got a large variaty of moods from the author. Such as sorrow for the family and what they went through, pitty for the children and how they watched their parents struggle for them, yet at the same time they benefited from watching because it made them stronger. Though throughout the memoir, among all the of the other moods that are potraid, there is the mood of eternal gratefulness. The fact that the parents went through so much just for their kids to have a better times and a promising future is beyond the relm of words. Words do not exist that can describe how amazing those parents are to do what they did. This is the mood, and moods, that are potraid in this memoir.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
12494,5,"The mood in the memoir by @PERSON1 his family, and how not all family members are blood relitives. Narciso grew up in a house filled with culture and love. His ""young parents created a traditional Cuban home…"" that Narciso would grow up in. Throughout his memoir, Rodriguez talks about ""the real definition of 'family.' "" @CAPS1 explains how it there were people of no relation who were considered family. His parents would keep ""their arms and the door open to the people we considered family, knowing that they would do the same for us."" Narciso Rodriguez tells of his home were @CAPS1 learned that a family is a group of people who care for one another, and that is the mood in his memoir.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
9546,4,the author conclude this story like that to show a new beginning in the spring. Like how flowers bloom and bud in spring she will become a new better person. that why the author conclude the story like this.,1.0,,,,,1.0,0.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,3.0
12355,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir of Narciso Rodriguez is gratefulness. The mood created by the author in the memior of Narciso Rodriguez is gratefull. The author's memior is grateful especially according to paragraphs five, six, and seven. Paragraph five talks about how grateful he is for his mother and father to come to the United States with such courage, without having any knowledge of the language or of the culture. ""The faith that this struggle would them and their children to better times drove them to endure these hard times."" ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice"" is what starts off paragraph six. The author explains how he has been telling his parents of how much more courageous their plan was then his would have ever been. The author also says how he admired how much strength and perseverance his parents had and how he has thanked them repeatedly. His parent taught him two lessons with out telling him, but with their lives, ""and these teachings have been the basis of my life"", the author states. Finally in the last paragraph the very last sentence says ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" which ultimately shows how grateful Narciso Rodriguez truly is.",4.0,,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
7706,3,"The setting greatly affects the cyclist trying to get to Yosemite National Park. First of all, the cyclist says he’s in Lodi, California on a “gorgeous day in June.” It’s very hot in California in June, so the biker is affected by the weather because he could die of heatstroke. Also, he is in the middle of the desert , where he faces tumbleweeds crossing his path a large snake that are possible poisonous in the way. That puts him in more despair, because he could get hurt by a wild animal, or run out of water with no place to go get more ! So the setting mostly negatively affects the cyclist.",1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9504,4,"The author concludes her story with this statement for many reasons. First the Hibiscus will be strong again when the wind stops blowing. therefore, Saeng will be strong too. Also, Saeng is giving herself time to adjust and get used to her new surroundings. She is setting a real goal for herself. Saeng is identifieng with the flower. It gives her comfort, and brings back valuable memories of the things she loved and the things that made her happy, like her home country, and her grandmother.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
6903,3,"On the cyclists rideto Yosemite National Park he encouters a lot of hardships due to the setting hes around and the advice given by oldmen. The cyclist riding his bike in the middle of June in the deserts of california isnt good to begin with adding to cyclist dehydration state. He first come to encouters ''one ramshackle shed, several rusty pumps, and a corral that couldn`t hold in the lament mule'' By that description oF his lecatracy it seems as if he might be in ghost town by himself almost could strand him. He described the terrain with “short, rolling hils.'' and ''over one long, crippling hill.'' This shows some of the obstacle that he had to go through in a bike, just to get to Yosemite National Park. He @CAPS1 realized once he encounterd these Features oF the terrain that he was oFF track and needed to find help. After his survival of his surroundings For as long as he could go, @CAPS1 gets help at a real camp. That is how the settings of the story play role in the cyclist epidemic.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
12293,5,"In the memoir, the author created a mood. The mood was a very good one that shows everyone that reads it, that the human race can be genuinely kind and helpful. No matter what race you are or where you come from, you don't have to be blood related to be ""family"" and we can all extend a hand to the people that need the most help. The author's parents gave him great love and sacrificed alot for him; @CAPS1 is very thankful to them for that. @CAPS1 tells them that what they did was a much more courageous thing then @CAPS1 could've ever done and @CAPS1 has great admiration for their strength and perseverance. Being an immagrant you have to be unselfish because most parents do it to give their children a better life. The author learned the real definition of ""family"" and for that, @CAPS1 said @CAPS1'll never forget that house or the many things about how to love. In the memoir, it creates a peaceful mood.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
494,1,"Dear Newspaper, @CAPS1 generation has grown up with the complex technology called computers. I have learned over the years of using them, that they aren't as helpful as the seem. They can cause an addiction, and create numerous distractions. First of all. many doctors say that computers cause ""the new depression."" The internet is where most of this takes place though. For most teenagers, having a facebook, myspace, or formspring is not unusual. I know from personal experiences, that some people abuse these social networks and use them as another way to bully people. So therefore, not only do you get made fun of in school, but now, people can make fun of you in cyberspace.. This is the main reason that people become socially depressed. There is almost no way to escape it and all of their anxiouty really starts to get to them. Addiction to computers is also a very negative impact. Many people go on the internet and are so fascinated that, that is how they spend their free time. About @PERCENT1 of people say that they are addicted. From @CAPS1 experience with using the internet. I know that there is always something that pulls you back in. You know that you are on addict when you spend more than an hour a day on the computer. Parents always say that it is a self-control issue but many adults have the same problem. They have just started to be able to use the computers, so many times they go through a phase or addiction. Furthermore, this addiction problem would be totaly gotten rid of it we stopped using computers. Finally, computers also create many distractions to students. When students sit down to type their papers they also, many times, have another at the same time. Therefore they are getting barely any work done. Social networks only just make this even worse. Constantly chatting with someone can cause tou to loose track of time. Also, when you try to multitask with the internet. Therefore causing grades to go down or not complete home work on time. All and all, this is an issue that can be easily avoided by eliminating computers. In conclusion, computers do not help us. They cause social depression, which cause people to have anxiouty problems. They cause addiction, which end up taking over peoples lives. They create divertion that make concentrating hard. I feel that computers have negative affects and they should be gotten rid of completely!",4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
15194,6,The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there were: The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself. The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. Even if the dirigible was tethered to the mooring mast the back of the ship would swivel around the mooring mast. United States used hydrogen rather than helium and hydrogen is highly flammable.,1.0,,,,,1.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
1016,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, More and more people use commputers, but not everyone agrees that this benefits society and I am one of theose people, that does not agree. I disagree, because is your on the computer all day you'll forget bout things. For example, you will forget to exercise, you will forget nature, you will also forget to interact with your friends and family. I promise you if you keep on reading you will understand and realize my point of view. People soend to much time on the computer, and they don't exercise like they should. Exerising is very important, that helps you with . Exercising helps you grow. it makes you stronger. If your on the computer all day then, you'll exercise and develop right. Another reason, I think its such a lead idea is you do not get to enjoy nature. When your on your computer you can not go on an hike in the woods. You can not go on camping trip. You can not do the thing, in the pleasant air of nature. The last reason but defenitly not the least you will forget to interact with your friends and family. That is so important because a computer could do a lot. It could teach you a lot but it canot do it you and @MONTH1 I love you. Only youre family and friends could do that. Hopfully you under and realize my point of view. People should stop doing this you forget to exercise nature and to spend time with you friends and family. All I got to now thank you for the oppurtunity to listen to my idea.",4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
1433,1,"Dear local newspaper I think that the effects that computers have on people are that some people become very adictive to them, because some people spend lot of time in the computer doing noting because they just spend their money buying things that they don't need. I also think that computers affect people in the way that they don't spend lot of time with their family. The effects that computers have on people is that some people can't stop using them even if they want. People become very adictive to computers because they spend almost all their time in there. People don't exercise no more because they spend all their time on the computer, shoping things that they don't need they just buy them because they like them. The effects that computers have on people are that some people just to be talking to their friend on myspace. His facebook and other websites that are not good for them. I think that the effects that computers have on people are that they take away people's time because some people spend lot of time on the computers, living their family's alone without spending time with them. Computers take away peoples time because they don't spend time exercising or playing out side with friends or brothers or go to a park to spend same time with their family or have a contact with family and invite some friends to come over to have some good time instead of being in the computer all day without doing nothing. Computer's take away time or love for your family and they make you spend the time that you don't have. The effect's that computers have on people are bad because people can't stop using them even if the wanted to because they are all ready adictive to them. People can't stop using them because in the computers you could do lot's of things like shoping talk to friends and visit websites that have very interesting things from other countries that are very beutiful but some people can't stop using them because they go to play games or because they are down loding music from websites that they don't have to. In conclusion i think that the effects that computers have on people are very bad because some people spend lot of time on them and they even spend the time that they don't have and the time they need. I also think that computers affect people because they don't spend time with their family sharing good things. The effects that computers also have are that people can't step using them because they are adictive to them.",3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
4764,2,"Debates are a main part of our society today. Everyone has an opinion on how things should be in the world, and no one is necessarily right. Books that show how other cultures behave, that to the people being described in the book @MONTH1 seem offensive, are important because we as people need to absorb as much as we can about other cultures. Our businesses are in other countries, many people living in @LOCATION1 speak multiple languages, and people have the right to read things that @MONTH1 in fact be offensive to a race of people.       Businesses thrive in other countries. A lot of our countries income is from our factories and companies in other countries. @LOCATION2 is a place where much business happens for the @ORGANIZATION2. If we, as @CAPS1, can't learn about the @CAPS2, how can we learn their business methods and way of life? To the @CAPS2, these books @MONTH1 be offensive, but to us they are learning tools descirbing @CAPS2 culture.     Being bilingual is a trend that millions of people adhere to. High schools require that we learn some foreign language, even if it is only the basics. The schools do this so that we can go to other countries in the work force. Learning about their language and habits comes from books. The mexican population might not like the way we depict them in our stories, but this is necessary to learn about them.     In the @ORGANIZATION1, there are all kinds of freedoms that we as @CAPS1 use freely. Freedom of speech says that we can say whatever we want when we live in @LOCATION1. Books are not excluded from this rule. I'm sure that other countries have offensive books about us. It's a common theme around the globe.      Businesses thrive in foreign countries, so we must be able to read some books about them, even if they seem offensive. Learning new things is something that every school teaches and there should be no limit to what we can learn. If a book has vulgar language and sexual scenes, it should be taken out of the children's section of the library, not banned completely. This is the same case with other populations of people. They cannot take offense to what we have to say, because worse has been said about them than what we can possibly put in a book. Learning is a necessary tool in our society and nothing should be restricted.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
6374,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist because he thought he packed enough water so he began on his way he drank most of his water less than half way to his destination. He didn’t realize how hot it was until he got down to his last couple of sips of water. He started to become dehydrated he rembered the old men said that the next town was abait eighteen miles away so he kept on going when he reached the town there was nothing to drink just an old run down factory. He took same rocks and sucked on them, he went over a bump had swallowed it. He said to him self next time he would just go by what the map said everything he had gone past on the way had been run down and abandoned. Finaly he reached a bait shop and when inside the bathroom and got some water.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
8930,4,In this story Saeng shows her mother how pasionate she is with planting and her pasionate for plants. The author includes the paragraph in the story so that it can show how the charact Saeng feels about her planting. One reason why this shows that she has passion for planting is because it says “I will try this test again” meaning that if she is doing something that she enjoys doing then she will try it again and again until she is fully pleased.,0.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
12163,5,"The author creates a loving, and caring mood. He makes it feel that you too could be invited into their home with open arms. That if you are feeling down they would pick you right up with a warm meal and a cozzy bead. He describes that they left Cuba to come to the land of oppertunities. That this family is filled with the most important thing needed to survive, @CAPS1.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
12560,5,"@PERSON1 is a memoir of family memories growing up in an immigrant neighborhood. Throughout the reading Narciso created a very grateful and excited mood. One example of this was when he said that he was forever grateful of his families Cuban cooking.Another example of this mood was when he was getting excited over the fact that his whole immigrants neighborhood was lending out a helping hand even if you had a different @NUM1  also portrayed greatfulness by how that even though he hasn't met his real grandparents, that someone in the neighborhood supplanted them and treated @PERSON1 like a grand-child. That is the mood that @PERSON1 showed in his memoir of his family.",2.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
16317,6,"The obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow the dirigibles to dock were very difficult. difficult. One difficulty that they had was that the mooring mast nature it self. When the dirigibles would come to the building, the winds on the top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air current, and the only way that they could moor is if the weighted down the back, and using them at the Empire State Building won't be practical or safe, with pedestrians below you.Another obstacle that the builders had was an existing law. the law was against airships flying to low over urban areas. This law would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building, or even approach the area. this was an obstacle because they didn't have much to do about this since it's a government thing holding them back.These are just some obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow the dirigibles to dock.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
287,1,"Dear The @CAPS1 @CAPS2, Your resources, your entertainment, even your communication with people might be fading. @CAPS8 you know a large portion of people think this @PERSON2 is harming our society. Well I will say I think they don't understand these benifit that computers bring us. Computer act like teachers teaching us without us even knowing it. Hand-eye coordination is a perfect example. Plus, we use computers to learn about places we might want to travel to, or have a conversation with frinds or family living ways away tromus. Computers is an extrodarny piece or technology. First, I like to say everything that you do physically uses hand-eye coordination. Making dinner, riding a bike, driving a car etc. And unfortiunitly not @CAPS6 people are the best at hand-eye coordination. One of @CAPS7 friends, @PERSON1, had horriable hand eye coordination. So for his birthday I decided an getting him a computer. It's been @NUM1 month since his he had his computer and @CAPS8 he was trying to hit a baseball at his sons party, he moneged to hit the ball @NUM2 out of @NUM3 where he used to hit it @NUM1 or @NUM5 out of @NUM6. @PERCENT2 is a termendous increase in only @NUM1 month! Just something @CAPS8 simple @CAPS8 a computer improved @CAPS7 friends hand-eye coordination a termendous amount. Secondly, the computer can help you learn about far away places @CAPS8 the @LOCATION1 or @LOCATION4. Do you really want to travel up to the icey cold, and piercing winds of the @LOCATION1 just to learn about it? For some I'd say like that but what if you cant travel up the @LOCATION1 due to money or flying conditions. I want to be able to study about polar bears and the glaciers without needing to worry. A statics from the @CAPS3 @CAPS4 of @CAPS5 states ""@PERCENT2 of people wpould love to experience the thrill and excitement of the @ORGANIZATION1 lights. But out of those @PERCENT2 only @PERCENT3 said they'd actually travel to @LOCATION2 to see them"". So you can see that @PERCENT4 of those people wouldn't go whether it be due to money or the cold. Thery @CAPS6 said thats why they love the computer. They can experience the @ORGANIZATION1 lights without needing to travel into the bitter cold.Lastly, that better thing to do on the computer than with family you've never met before or don't get to see them. The editor for the @LOCATION3 Local states ""@CAPS7 parents live over @NUM8 miles away. I rarly get to tell to them now because I can't afford to travel that distance ofter. So I use @CAPS7 computer, @CAPS7 parents and I now communicate @PERCENT1 more than we used to. I love the computer it helps keep me close to @CAPS7 loved ones."" @CAPS8 you can tell, thanks to the computer we talk @PERCENT1 more to his parents than he used to! In conclusion, the computer is a gracous device that is extremely benifital to people. The computer teaches us hand-eye coordination, lets us learn about places we other wise would never learn about, and to have conversations with friends or family that we generally dont get to see often. Now you go out and make anyone that says computers are a horrible inventions you tell them exactly why computers are so important!",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
332,1,"Imagine a world without computers chaos in war, even the cluter on your desk. The chat you're having with you bestfriend on aim wouldn't happening. The report on @LOCATION1 might not get done because all the books were checked out, in fact we wouldn't have noble or any space program without computers. I know of this happened I wouldn't be happy. Compaines almost relys on technology you can't just send a letter and have @CAPS2 at the office in five minutes. Communication through the computer is very popular. @PERCENT1 of the world use aim or another chat service, in a studie done by a @CAPS1 professor @NUM1 out of every student doesn't talk to family on aim service a quote from the professor said ""@CAPS2 a good thing to stay in touch with their familys as wel as keeping up to date on curent events. @CAPS5 computers are taken away information is gone. Its all lost in some pile of papers. @DATE1 time my computers crashed and I had a report due but all the books were gone. That report was done @DATE1 when they were fixed. Now thanks to the new computer @CAPS3 @PERCENT2 more organized a nasa is running on mars. Nasa runs completely by computers. Look what they have given us today. @PERCENT3 of all household aplienses come from nasas work. A coment from nasa imply @PERSON1 ""@CAPS4 would be no cars or phones without use, their coumputes to."" @CAPS5 thats true are they going to take away cars and phones as well. We need you the people to dicide. The people who made this country what @CAPS2 is to dicide do think we shouldn't have coumpters. I don't and neather should you.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
10498,4,"The last paragraph in, ‘’Winter Hibiscus,’’ was add because the author want to show that she feels bad because she did not pass the test. She feels disapointed because her mom is disapointed in her and knows she can pass it. While she stares at the Hibiscus then the geese flying in the air, she thinks that she does have a chance in passing the test. Now that she is determined to take the test, she is going to take it at the same time in the next year and she believes she is going to pass it.    ",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
6357,3,The features of the setting affected the cyclist because he was biking up hills in extreme heat. He also had a short water supplyl while head in the wrong direction.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
13620,5,"The mood set in this memoir by the author, was greatfullness, and it seemed to be thanking his Family for such a loving childhood. It also seems @CAPS1 misses it. ""I was born into this simple house"" @CAPS1 says ""within it's walls, my young parents created our traditional cuban home."" @CAPS1 was very comfortable in his home and @CAPS1 loved it. It seems as thogh the excerpt was made to thank those who @CAPS1 lived with. As it says in paragraph @NUM1 ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" @CAPS2 the excerpt @CAPS1 explains how caring, and generous his family and neighbors were."" My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family, knowing they would do the same for us."" The author tells about his neighbor making delicious meals all the time, and their dinner table consisted of many neighbors, and blood relatives. The author had a very close relationship with his neighbors.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
7625,3,"The features of the essay explain how the features of the setting affect the cyclist for many reasons. When the author writes tumbleweeds crossed my path” it shows that he is most likely in the middle of nowhere. This is true because tumbleweeds are usually signs in movies and t.v. shows that the place is deserted. Also, when the author writes” the growing realization that I could drop from heatstroke” and when he writes “a ridiculously large snake” show the growing danger that he is getting himself into. This is true because the snakes could get a tany time or he could just collapse from the lack of water and die. Lastly, the name of the store is revelant because it is a fish bait store and he is thirsty. This is revelant because fish live in water and he is thirsty and seeing the sign relieves him completely. Therefore, the features of this essay explain how the features of the setting affect the cyclist.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
12189,5,The mood was a little sad at certian times and greatful at others. It was sade that they have to leave Cuba and start all over agin. It was greatful becase they hade family that loved them and cared for them.,1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
3868,2,"Whose to say what is appropriate for whom? whose to judge right and wrong for anyone? It depends on a point of view like most things. The sheltered must learn one day, and if kids learn now about the truth, such as, not to stick forks in outlets, then they won't be as curious when they are older. Being sheltered is not always a good thing and censor ship of what we read, watch, or listen to is ridculous, and disrespectful to authors.          In matters of censorship, I find it to be pointless. Censorship doesn't prevent your kids from learning about anything, except mother won't let me watch that. it just keeps your kids more curious and more obligated to hide things from you and like they cannot ask you questions or be open and honest with you. Causes children to go behind your back more and when they're in trouble they'll as if your they're last place where they can ask for help, where you should be they're first resort.         No, I do not believe that libraries should censor anything. Its altering a authors work. How would it feel if you had written something and it had been published and was in the library and didn't like something about it so they decided to just bleep it out or not allow certain people to read it? I believe censorship should be illegal not required.          Sheltering things from kids prevents them from maturing, and discovering the real world. The idea that the world has no evil, or hiding the evil from your children will in most cases cause them to rebel and in other cases leave them unprepared for the future and the real world. Wouldn't you rather be able to help your kids and teach them about things instead of tell them that everything is perfect and only bad people use that kind of language. Or make them feel like a bad person for do something your grandparents did when they were young?      I conclude that censorship is injust, unfair, and is the real wrong. Not the profanity or the violence that will one day be apart of their life in some way. You don't go through everyday in the 'real world' with a mindset of there's nothing wrong in this world. Or everything is censored and everything is controlled  I believe censorship is just another way of controlling the mind through nuture",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
2993,2,"Dear Newspaper,     @CAPS1 would you feel if someone wrote a book about @CAPS1 bad the newspapers are, and the tore you down so bad no one wanted to touch another newspaper? Think about it if something is found offensive should it be avalible for thousdands and thousands of other people to read? I believe that certain materials such as books, music,movies,ect. that are found offensive should not be allowed to be removed from a libraries book shelves, let alone even be on the shelves.     Now lets just think about this for a moment.What if a sexist book fell into the hands of an inocent childs hands that could just read enough to get through the book? That child could end up living that kind of life that the book protays. If I were a parentt I know for a fact I would never want my children exposed to harmful reading materials until they know right from wrong, and have a clear judgement on it.     Or from another perspective what if that  one book, about @CAPS1 black people are bad and nasty, fell into the wrong hands for this purpose lets say a drunken, old fashioned man. Who just so happens to think we should continue slavery. That one book could stimulate this white mans thoughts and he could try to put his thoughts into action. Throwing what that book says about black people in a young black womans face. Then continues ,after seeing what that alone has done to her, rapes and beats her. Only to let her live and make her his own whore or slave for aslong as shes living. Can you imagan this world when @CAPS2 only knows @CAPS1 bad this woman is hurting. @CAPS2 is the only one who know @CAPS1 long she will deal with the pain.Before she stops fighting for her life.     Just think all that I have told you about, gave you examples of all started with that one single book.The offensive book towards sexists and towards black people. these are all reasons for those book to be ban from libraries or at least glued to the shelves.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
521,1,"I believe that people should enjoy nature more than computes. I say this because computers can sometimes get addicting. The people who are addicted will only know about stuf on the internet. people need exersise. They will not get exursise by sitting in front of an computer all day. Computers are addicting. The people who spent most of their time on the computer are the people who are addicted. When they get addicted they will probly fail in school because they do not do their homework. Don't you hate it when you feel week and tierd? Well that is how the people who sit at computers all day feel like alot! @CAPS1 people whant to stay healthy then they should get some exersise daily insted of sitting in front of a computer all day. Alot of people get annoyed when they dont know about stuff when it happens. Most of the people who do that are the people who are mostly on the computers. I say that because the people who are mostly on the computers only know about things when it is on the computer. That is why I strongly believe that people spend to much time on computers rather than. This is because firstly computers get addicting, secondly people need exersise @CAPS1 they want to be and stay healthy lastly @CAPS1 people like to know things the only way they will find out is on the computer",2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
9770,4,"The reason why the author of the story ended the story like that is because after all the hard time that plant went through, it will still bad at the end of the winter. The author said that the plant will take that test again that test is surviving through the could winter and blunming at the end of the winter",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
3979,2,"Kids today have a whole lot of options of books they can or cannot read in the schools library. The things they cannot read are censored. School systems have good reasons why they censor some book, and I agree with the cooperation. The facts on why books are censored in a school campus is to much racil slurs, profanity, and unaproperit situations.     How many schools have books that have racism in it. Racism happens in books all the time. In fact one out of fifty books contain racism. The big book is '@PERSON1' fin by @PERSON2. It recently got banned from schools all over the @LOCATION1.     People all around the world are trying to teach their kids what to say and what not to say. Kids pick up some bad language from the books they read. Even though some of these books still lay on the shelves of the schools. It is up to the kids not to read them.     Uniproperit situations is why schools only order some sports illustrated magazines. The school librarians don't want the kids looking at any nudity or violent scences in the books. Do you say to blame them?     I believe that the schools and parents are doing the right things. It is up to the kids to make the decision to listen or not listen to their parents. I believe censorship is a great thing for @CAPS1 youth.",3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
4278,2,"Certain books should be removed from, the library because of the materials an  the stuff they show to younger children. One reason they should thake those books of is because some of the are racist against some cultures. Another reason is that some of the books or movies etc., would have things in them that young children shouldnt be looking at or reading. A final reason is that some books just shouldnt be in the librayies at all.     The first reason was that the books should be taken out of the library is because their racist. They should take them off because they can teach young children the wrong things. Also they can teach the children how to treat people different because their reading those books from hte library. They would also get  he wrong idea about peopple  and different cultures.     Second reason why they should get rid of that bad stuff in the libraries is because they would have things in their that young children should not be wacthing or reading. Like they shouldnt have movies with killing and drug dealing or about drinking or anything a child shouldnt be looking at. It gives the children the wrong idea and they will think its okay becasue they seen it in the movies or read it in a book.     Final reason is that they shouldnt just have those things in a library at all or should just have place for where the young kids cant use them. Or they would need a parent or sombody thats eightteen so they wouldnt be able to just get these bad books or movies.     In conclusion libraries shouldnt have books or music or magazines or movies in them at all. They give kids wrong ideas an make them think that its cool or the right thing to do cause they saw it in a movie or read it in a book. That doesnt make it the right thing to do thats why they should get rid of that stuff.",3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
215,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION2, I am expressing my concern to you about the side effect new technologies, such as computers have an humans. Computers impact humans in a harmful manner because people are spending too much @ORGANIZATION1 their quality time on their computers which additionally leads to less time spent doing exercise. People also do not get to spend as much as their days outdoors and interacting with friends and family. Firstly, people are spending too much @ORGANIZATION1 their time surfing the net. Study show that an average @CAPS1 spends in total @NUM1 hours a day on the computer, almost double what they should be spending on it. Dr. @DR1 from the @CAPS1 technology society, says' that if this increases @ORGANIZATION1 time spent on the internet, continues for more years, most @CAPS3 will completly lose contact with family and friends outside @ORGANIZATION1 the social computer network. The average weight @ORGANIZATION1 a @NUM2 year old has increased from @NUM3 pounds in @DATE1, to @NUM4 pounds today. Statistics show that the main caus for this dramatic increase in weight is due to the acessive amount @ORGANIZATION1 time spent on computers in addition @CAPS4 do not have as much time to exercise. Teenagers need to exercise three times a week for thirty minutes each. @CAPS5 the average adolescent only spend ten minutes a week exercising not including gym. All @ORGANIZATION1 these numbers must change and a way to start would be losing the computer because people are spending too much time on them and less time exercising. Secondly, comuters are effecting the people get to go outside and enjoy nature. Form my personal experience nature is a beautiful thing to be apart @ORGANIZATION1 @CAPS5 now adays I spend way too much time on social networks such as facebook, my space and @CAPS6 others. How often do you go outside to take a walk, fo for a bike ride or something else? A study done by @PERSON2 shows that the average person living in @LOCATION1 have only spent a total @ORGANIZATION1 @NUM5 days outside in the past two years after reciving their new computer. This must change people need to enjoy what this world has to offer. Thirdly, computers have effected the interaction between family and friends. ""@CAPS6 people hav only been interacting with family at mandatory times such as school meetings."" says @ORGANIZATION1. Family and friends are a major importance in everyones lives. I love to sit down and talk with my mom over a steaming cup @ORGANIZATION1 hot chocolate. @PERCENT1 @ORGANIZATION1 people now a days do not spend anytime with family and @PERCENT2 @ORGANIZATION1 people use computers to interact with friends. It is vitally important that people stop using computers because ""before you know it you will have lost all communication with family and friends"" says @PERSON1 from I.U.M Computers help people lose communication and interaction with fmily and friends. In conclusion, I urge you to make the right desion by quitting using computers and in return will be a much happier and stronger individual. Computers impact humans in a terrible way because people spend too much time on them leading to a lack in exercise, time spent outside and in addition interaction between friends and family. Sorry about the lack @ORGANIZATION1 organization towards the end, I ran out @ORGANIZATION1 space. Please excuse the mess. Thank you.",5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
6023,3,"The three most important features of the setting that effect the cyclist are the ground he is traveling, the towns he passes, and the availability of water. The ground the cyclist is riding over is important because the rougher the terrain, and the more hills there are, the more energy he must use, and the less distance he can travel. @PERSON1 is riding fine until he must travel the rolling hills which consume his energy, ehausts his water, and causes dividing hope. As he approaches towns, his hope increases but soon fades due to the realization that the town will be unable of giving him relief. When he pumps out water that tastes like “battery acid,” his hope once again diminishes. As he sees the bait and tackle shop, he knows he can make it there and that when he gets there he can recover. These three features are what effects the cyclist the most.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
8871,4,The author would conclude the story with that paragraph because she failed the test before and she wants to pass it. It makes you wonder if she will pass it or not.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
6028,3,"The features of setting affect the cyclist. It was hard arrived at the first town for author. For example “Rough Road Ahead: Do not Exceed Posted Speed Limit.” The road that author was ridding, it was rough. @CAPS1 example is “Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills.” All the road was hills and rough. Than “The water bottle contained only a few tontalizing sips.” @CAPS1 doesn’t have that much water. That was really hard.",0.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,3.0
342,1,"Dear editor: More and more people use computers, but not everyone agrees that that benefits society. As editor of the newspaper, you have the power to inform people about situations. In my opinion computers are desperately in need because of the following: the computers give people the ability to learn about faraway places, people, and weather, they allow people to talk online with others, and many jobs use computers. Do you want a more economically advanced state? First of all the computer gives people the ability to learn about far away places, people, and the weather. I have an uncle named @PERSON1, that has @NUM1 little girls. Every day in the morning before school @PERSON1 checks on the weather, on his computer to make sure it is safe to go school. However, one day forgot to check the weather on his computer and took his kids to school. Little did he know the roads were extremely icey. Sadly @PERSON1 and his daughters got in a car accident and two of girls broke a few bones. As you can see, the weather the computer world have saved him a trip to the emergency room. Next, the computer allows you to talk online with other people. Dr. @DR1 from @CAPS1 states says that, ""chating online with others (@CAPS2) is the best way to stay in touch with others from your old school, camp and many other places."" I highly agree because adults can stay in touch with freinds from middle school. Also @PERCENT1 of students say that they usually go online to study or get the pages for homework. I believe that chating online to study for tests is a fantastic idea because it will help the students to get better grades. Some parents say that that is a way to study and a waste of time. However teachers say that ever since @CAPS2 was invented the students grades were skyrocketing. Finally most jobs today use computers. For example my dad works for @ORGANIZATION1 and the computer helps him communicate with clients all over the world. Also the chat can translate the language, thus it makes it much easier than talking on the phone. Also the teachers use computers to put grades from students in. This makes the teachers job much easier because it averages all of the grades. The computer revolutionise the jobs of people. In conclusion the computer has a positive effect on people because it gives people the ability to learn about faraway places, people, and weather, allows people to talk online with other people, and many jobs use computers. I urge you to support me by writing a positive article on computer and how the help the society. Please take my idea into consideration.",5.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
15372,6,"In the short story, ""The Mooring Mast,"" there were obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles dock there. One problem was that the dirigible's load and the wind pressure on the building's foundation. ""The stress of the dirigible's load into the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation, which was nearly eleven hundred feet below. The steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate this new situation."" @CAPS1, this was a big obstacle for the landing process of the dirigibles.Another problem they had was that dirigibles use hydrogen, and hydrogen is highly flammable. If it had caught fire, it would not have been good for a populated city. ""The Mooring Mast  of the Empire State Building was destined never to fulfill it's purpose. Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" If the dirigible caught the building on fire, many people's lives would be in complete danger. In conclusion, the Mooring Mast did not work out for many reasons, but safety and the dirigible's load and wind pressure on the building's foundation were two big obstacles for allowing dirigibles to dock.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
6173,3,Some features of the setting setting that affected the cyclist were signs that had speed limits. The sign affected the speed of the cyclist. Another feature was a hill on the route. This affected the cyclist by making him tired because he said “I wipe the sweat from my eyes.”,1.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,3.0
12772,5,They author makes a mood like is other in this memoir. He creates a mood in which enstills @CAPS1 and praise for his parents. He tries to express his @CAPS1 to his parents in words but can't because of all the great times. He makes a mood of happiness in which will last for ever in his memories and the Kitchen.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
16022,6,"The obstacles builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock they are making sure they dont bump into other buildings, and they use rope to drop down the papers. They are trying to make sure that the dirigibles do not pop if it touches the buildings. It is also trying to keep the dirigibles away so they don't get to close and thats why they are droping the papers down with ropes @CAPS1 if they built a little tunnel so the dirigibles can go in they won't have to worry about them getting popped if they touch a building.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
925,1,"To whom it @MONTH1 concern, I was sitting at home when I have realized this has to come to an end! The computer bissness has taken my mother and my stepfather away from me, I mean when they are on facebook they are in a whole nother galaxcey. The family spends no time together what so ever. Also, they argue, dont sleep and again, we don't spend anytime together! Not spending time with family isn't a good thing. Social activity is good for everyone. Even if the time spending is not with family, socializum is a very important rollplay in use. On the other hand arguing isn't. Arguing just decreases the social time spent. Arguing in my family causes friction to the point where we become unsocial and turn to a computer. Now if were arguing about the computer then we have a huge problem. The arguing will never end! Not sleeping is my biggest concern though, when they are up all nite on that stupid thing, oh gosh don't get me started. I believe they don't have good days during the day when in school. Actually I know they don't because they are day. Computers cause my parents to use up family time, fight, and not sleep, they spend more time on the personal computer than I'm a! @CITY1 @PERSON1, I think we have a problem. A very big one!",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
1571,1,"In my own opinion I think that people should get less time on computers more time exercising, enjoying, nature, and interacting with family and friends. If people spend time on computers they will not get off and be stuck on computers then spending time like going to the park, or the mall. For my second opinion that people should not get off of computers because it they ever leave somewhere far they are not to be able to contact you. If you on the computer you could get a computer that say's a free labtop then you could take it far like: On a airplane to north carolina, or virginia, or wasington @ORGANIZATION1, or a party, or a road trip, or on a ferry boat to the long island sound. For my third opinion that I agree people should not be off of computer because they might plan a trip to a far away place or a new house, or planing a anerveriry, or a new spot for a hunny moon a gorgest place like ona peek hill or at a hotel with a bed shape like a heart. For my fourth paragraph that I agree that people should not be off of computers that the count a location than person house or a location where they might be for that particular spot where that person is. For the fifth paragraph that I agree that people should not be able to get off of computers. I tell you why planning a birthday party for there child, or going to someone house for a visit like to tennessee. Or going to @CAPS2 @CAPS3 to see a basketball team and @CAPS1.S a another team and they are call @CAPS2 @CAPS3 lakers us caverlars. My conclusion is that people should not to be able to get off of computer.",3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
3516,2,"Books are gateways to other worlds.  Today there are books on almost any topic anybody could dream of.  People use books to forget their troubles and take a trip to somewhere outside of themselves.  Now the content of some books are not always appropriate.  Schools try to provide books that appeal to all audiences, but that ability is being impaired by books being banned from shelves.  Students then can't read a book simply because someone else didn't appprove of the content.  That is unfair and should be stopped.  Students should have the right to make choose what they want to read, yet some people want to take that right away from students.  Students, are also able to make choices on what's appropriate for them to read.  If lawmakers give in to the complaints of a few people it could hinder a students rights and make students believe that they are not trusted.     The content of what goes into a book is up to the author.  The books someone decides to read is up to that particular reader.  Sometimes authors go into extensive detail to get their point across or have a book with very mature content in them.  Now some people think that because a book is inappropriate in their views then it shouldn't be avalivable to read at all.  This is unfair not only to any potiental reader of that book, but also the author who worked hard to write that book.  Students are smarter than many people give them credit for.  They know what they should and shouldn't be reading, but if the choice of what they read is left up to other people they feel betrayed and untrusted.      Students have as many rights as people who don't go to school.  If books are being taken of shelves based on a few people opinions then their rights are being infringed upon by the people who deemed it inappropriate.  Now the students freedom to choose what they want to read is gone, and all that remains is books choosen worthy by other people.  Rights are something guarenteed to students as the enter school, buty now rights are slowly being taken away from students.  The right to choose what book they read is one that should not be taken.  As author Katherine Paterson said, 'If I have the right to remove a book from the shelf, that work that i abhor, then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.'  If one person says they think a book should be taken away, then another person wants another book taken away, until the point where no books are left then how will students ever get to read?     Books are essential to a students growth into adulthood.  If people gain the right to take books off shelves then music, movies, magazines will all get taken off shelves too.  Books are for any reader that decides they want to go to that world.  Students have the right to choose what books they read, as well as the ability to know what they should read.  Books should remain where they belong, in schools on the shelves.",4.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
16566,6,"Architects based in New York tried very hard to build a successful mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building, to dock dirigibles for several hours for refueling or service purposes and to allow passengers on and off the blimp. While building, Architects faced some challenging obstacles that destroyed the chances of the mooring mast to open and become usable. A dirigible moored at the top of the Empire State Building only held by one cable tether would cause tension on the building's frame. The weight and wind pressure would need to be transferred to the buildings foundation. About over @MONEY1 of modifications would need to be made to the buildings framework. Another obstacle was the roof. ""When the building had been framed to the 85th floor, the roof had to be completed before the framing for the mooring mast could take place,"" wrote @PERSON1 in her article 'The Mooring Mast.' The greatest obstacle however was nature itself. Violent air currents caused the winds to change nonstop causeing the blimp to swivel around the mooring mast. The only solution would be to weigh down the back of the craft with lead weights, but the risk was to much. Last but not least there was a line New York against airships flying to low over urban areas. The law made it illegal for a blimp to even approach the Empire State building. As a result of not being able to use the mooring mast for dirigibles to station, the rooms set aside were turned into the world's highest soda fountain and a tea garden for tourist and sightseers. By the late 1930s dirigibles had become transportation of the past, and airplanes had made their way to the front of the crowd.",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
12952,5,"The mood in this memoir I think would be happiness because his parents gave him happiness by being there all the homieness. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" This show how much they've done for him and he has apreciated. Overall this is reconizing that family and happiness are unified.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
3176,2,"Hello, my name is @CAPS1 and I think that books, newspapers, and magazines being censored should be done but shouldn't. When I say that I mean that some books dealing with adventure or romance might have parts that need to be censored, but thats how the author made the book. It was meant to catch your attention right off the first sentence of the story.      I believe that sometimes magazines need to be censored because they are promoting bad habits for people all across the @LOCATION1 and other people around the world. Magazines in my opinion should be censored. Now some make it to where there less inaproperate which is somewhat a good thing, but others pretty much just let it slide and figure it will raise the sales by how ever much percent they want it to be considering what they put in the magazine.      I feel that books should stay on the shelf however. Some people feel that the 'censored' parts of the story are really what catches there attention. I myself have never had an expirence in this field because im not one to be a strong reader, but knowing how other people are, I would suggest that we censor some things, but not all.     People write books all the time dealing with something that has happened in their lifetime or something from their imagination. So we can't really help what people think about and what some people write down to be published in a book. For some readers, it is a very interesting story or passage being read from the back cover of the book, while others just want the book gone from there neighborhood library or out of their house. It all really depends on the reader.      If I could, there would be things I would censor, but not in books. It was their idea to put it in the story but some things need to be left unsaid. Some readers appriciate it, while others do not. It is really their choice to read the book and if its not appealing to them they can simply put it back on the shelf and find another close to it. I just feel that some magazines should be censored. Constantly, you see swimsuit models and 'sexual appeal' in magazines everyday when you enter the grocery store or library. I just do not think it is right for little kids to see that when there looking for a @CAPS2 @CAPS3 book or a book about their favorite animal.      Another reason to censor magazines would be because of some religious views on what people see when they look at the magazine. People everyday become @CAPS4 and being right with @CAPS5, so people will take offense to some of the disturbing images in magazines. I myself as a @CAPS6 take offense to some of these magazines, promoting being perfect and having the life sucked out of you as you read each passage.      As I have said, I am to the understanding of the books having what they have in them, because of the authors imagination, but some magazines just need to be thrown off the shelf",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
6942,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist in many ways. For one, his body heat raised a good bit. They don’t come out and say it, but they do say, ”The sun was beginning to beat down.” We all know that it your out side when it’s hot, you get hot too. It also probably added to his dehydryeon. As a long distance running, I know what the sun will do to you during a hot day. That is how the setting affect the cyclist.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
13029,5,The mood the @CAPS1 created was a mood of happiness and gratitude. The @CAPS1 States how he will always be grateful for what his parents did for him. He also stated that he admired them and honestly could never repay them for everything they did This shows how the @CAPS1 @CAPS4 how his parents worked so hard to make his life better. He is forever greatful.,2.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
12475,5,The son in the family is always happy in the memoire. All he talks about is how greatfull he is for his parents @CAPS1. Everyone is happy and having a good time.,1.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
3380,2,"No, I do not believe certain materials should be removed from the shelves in libraries if they are found offensive. You have the right to either read what you see or keep moving and read what you want to. Certain books, movies, magazines, etc. shouldn't be removed just because someone else doesn't like it.     If someone of a certain belief sees something offensive to them or their religion, then they have an option to not read or look at it. Something that someone might find offensive might be interesting to someone else or they might have to do an report or project on it. There's no need to discrimanate against a book or movie just because a certain religion group or someone as an individual doesn't approve of it.     It's an public library that has materials on display for the public! Any and everybody can come and read any and everything they please. A library is open to the public which means people of differenrent races, beliefs, religions etc., is going to come through and it's a possibilty that they're going to see something offensive or that they don't like. They have the option of either picking it up and reading it or the option of not paying it any attention and ignoreing it.     The choice is theirs to either let someone elses's opinion actually bother them or not let their opinion matter at all and just keep doing their own thing. People have to be strong enough to rise above all the negetivity and keep doing thier thing and keep believing in what they believe in. It doesn't matter if someone hates or have hateful things to say about you or your perticular. Don't pay them no mind at all.     I know you think censorship should be in public libraries, but that isn't fair to the people that are maybe being offended but they don't have to read it if they don't want to. They need to learn that in life there's going to be people that don't like. Even peoplr that @MONTH1 have hurtful or hateful comments to say about you. Learn to be strong enough to stand tall in what you believe in and don't let haters or other peoples opinions bring you down",3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
78,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, @CAPS1 opinion for using ""too much"" computer time is an outrage. I think people should have more ideas. Such as as exercise, socialize with family and friends, and lastly, ""you time"" which means to do whatever you would like to do indoors BUT @CAPS2 computers. For excersice you can do any sport that you like outside. For @CAPS3 and spending time with family and friends you can have a nice family reunion at their house @CAPS5 just ""hangout with your friends. Four ""you time you can draw, @CAPS5 read a book. Their is a lot of ideas instead of ""computer time @CAPS6 the time!"" With exercising can go outside and play sport such as basketball, soccer @CAPS5 baseball, etc. You could even play hide and seek with your friends @CAPS5 even tag. Anything that keeps you moving out of the house ins tead of using computers! If you exercise everyday such as ""workout"" to get fit you will definatelly manage that instead of using ""computer time"". Exercising is a good idea ins tead of using ""computer time!"" @CAPS3 with family and friends is a good use instead of ""computer time because you can finally have the time to spend time with then like talk to them, play games @CAPS5 eat dinner together. That's called ""@CAPS3"" Your family @CAPS5 friends will love to spend time together by eating dinner together and have a nice conversation. You could also play any board games such as ""monopoly"" too. With your friends you ran go to the movies, have a sleepover @CAPS5 play outside. Many good little ideas to do with family and friends instead of using ""computer time."" The last idea for ins tead of using ""computer time"" lis doing ""you time indoors. WARNING! But @CAPS2 computer time! You could do something quite like draw a nice picture. That's something nice and quite to do instead of using ""computer time."" @CAPS5 you could even read a book too. Maybe you have to catch up on your nightly reading for language arts and you want start reading your goal book. If you choose to do ""you time, you will definately manage to undo that useless ""computer time!"" @CAPS6 of these ""ideas"" for not using the computer is very easy. It's not healthey to sit around the computer @CAPS6 day! Instead you can exercise. You could also socialize with family and friends. Lastly, do ""you time. but don't use a computer!!! If you want to achieve a goal you can mange that!!!",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
6487,3,"In the selection “Do not exceed posted speed limit” there are a lot of great details of the area around the cyclist. In the text, it makes it clear that the route the cyclist is traveling is very deserted when the drinking water was explained as oozing out and tasting like battery acid, you can tell that people hadn’t been there in awhile. Also, being informed that he was traveling through a desert, in June. I am able to understand how thirsty he is. Also, he is traveling for miles over a rough terrain and “crippling hills,” according to the text, so he has to be ovely exhausted. I could understand why he was so upset with getting wrong directions based on the troubles he encounters when he finally reaches the camp and drinks water, you too are glad he has reached somewhere that wasn’t empty and deserted.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9671,4,"The author concludes the story with the paragraph -“ when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take the test again.” (@NUM1) because she feels that when the hibiscus blooms she can too bloom by passing the test. Also Saeng is relating herself to the hibiscus. “Its’ flower arn’t as pretty, but it’s strong enough to make it throu in here, this winter hibiscus.” (@NUM1) Her mother is trying to tell her she can be strong also. She too can make it through the cold months. “like the geese she lifted her head and watched as their distinctive V was etered against the evening sky, slowly fading into the distance.” (@NUM1) Just like the geese Saeng is realizing to be proud of herself and there will be other chances. Don’t always doubt yourself becase they will be other chances. Don’t be afraid to try again.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
7151,3,The setting in the story was the “high deserts of California in June.” At first the cyclist had seemed really confident and excited about his journey. It was during it that had changed his mind. The cyclist was running low on his water supply's so he stops and pumps water from this water pump but all he gets is this acid taste. So he is on his way to the nearest town which is @NUM1 miles away and he thinks he can make it. So he is heading towards the nearest town when the terrain starts changing. It changes from flat road to short rolling hills. During this time the cyclist starts loosing hope. He thinks that he is going to die of dehydration and the birds are going to pick him apart. Then when he thought he couldn’t make it he saw a sign that said “Gary and @CAPS1 fish camp” He ran into the shop and took long drinks from the sink in the bathroom and when he went out of the store an older gentle men asked him if he needed help and he said no I have a really good map. The thot temperature and rolling hills have a negative effect on the cyclist. I mean he goes from being confident to thinking he is seeing mirages and dieing. It states in the story “I wiped the sweat from my eyes to make sure it wasn’t a mirage” and “I was going to die and the birds would pick me clean” So this brought self doubting behavior. ,2.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
15352,6,"There were many problems with the designing of the dirigible docking system. The first of these problems comes from the practicality of the consept. The winds created by the updrafts in the cities are violent and making landing a blimp too risky, ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" Another obsticale that was faced was the strutural design. The Empire State Building was not originally designed to moor blimps, and modifying the building to do so was expensive, ""over @NUM1 doolars' worth of modifications,"" The final obsticale was the fact that there were laws in place stopping airships from flying too low over buildings, ""... an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" These impracticalities prooved to be challenging obsticales",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
12141,5,"The mood described in this memoir is mostly about love, unity, and culture. In love he shows that his parents immigrated mostly to give his children a better future. This is described in paragraph @NUM1.In unity it shows that in their neighborhood most of the immigrants were always having feasts and being really close to each other. This is explained in paragraph @NUM2 where it says, ""In our neighborhood, despite customs elsewhere, all of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship."". His parents taught him how to cook food from his country and also to dance to Cuban Music as it says in paragraph @NUM3. These are the types of mood described in the memoir.",2.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
14879,6,"There were many problems with allowing dirigibles to land on top of the Empire State Building. When designing the mast they realized that with the weight of the dirible, the buildings frame would have stress. (paragraph @NUM1) They also noticed that the diribles from other countries used hydrogen and not helium. Hydrogen is highly flammable. (paragraph @NUM2). A factor of building the mast that was out of the builders control was nature. The winds at the top of the building were constantly shifting. (paragraph @NUM3). Law was also a problem when wanting to construct the mast. There was a law against airships flying to low over urban areas. (paragraph @NUM4). With the factors of weight, gas, nature, and law the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
9567,4,"The author ended the story with that specific quote because it shows the grasp in understanding the beauty & marvels of nature. Saeng spent a lot of money to buy a distinct flower called dok faeng-nol. Saeng was taking a driver's test a liscence but was failing it, and during her test she found that plant. Ashamed that she failed the test, she still showed her mother the flower she found, which was not like the one at home. Her mother is pleased with the flowers and understands that Saeng failed her test. Her mother said about the flower, “Its flowers aren’t as pretty, but it’s strong enough to make it through the cold months here, this winter hibiscus. That what matters that was a figurative speech that there's hope for Saeng to pass her test again when she her learned more refined and is ready to try again. And with the geese flying away for the winter and coming back in the spring signifies a fresh new start at success.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
9860,4,"The author uses this paragraph because it works perfectly as an end. Wit  this saeng tell @LOCATION1 that all the snow is gone she will take the test again. If one read   now between the lives it   says more than just this. She really likes the hibiscus and when the hibiscus goes back to life in the spring, she will have new energy to take the test again. From her experience with the hibiscus we can see that this plant really influent her. Because this  plant reminds  her so much of her old home.  Also we can see that everything and everybody should get a second chance. In her case it is the test she wants to take again. Also in the spring she lives a couple month in the @LOCATION1 and she will adjust herself to this new situation. At the moment she is just homesick, even if her home is the @LOCATION1 now. So the hibiscus is good for her, it is some think she can hold onto from her old home… ",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
12656,5,"In the memoir the mood created by the author is gratefullness. I know this because in the memoir it says, ""But, in reality, theres is no way to express my gratitude for the spirit of generosity impressed upon me at such an early age and the demonstration of how important family and friends are."" This evidence shows how Narciso Rodriguez was grateful which is the mood of the memoir. His parents taught him how to love his culture, (and for which I am eternally grateful)."" The way the author puts the words and uses them shows the mood of the memoir is grateful.",2.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
4602,2,"How many of you out there absolutely love to read? Well, im going to be the first to confess that I do not prefer reading. Meanwhile, whether or not I prefer or differ readings of all types, I despise of any negative books. Censoring books is very important in today's lifestyle. One can make an inference by looking at the cover of a book. The cover oftens creates a vivid image and will usually promote a general idea. Let's look at some reasons why I feel that graphic or offensive books should be removed from book shelves.          What about the younger children who like to read? Although kids have a wild imaginaion, authors should't fill their heads with too many crazy ideas. First of all, kids now days either grab a book from the shelf and show interest very quickly, or automatically assume it's not for them. Furthermore, when a kid comes across a very offensive book it could hurt there feelings. Books are supposed to provide eductional information or be entertaining. They should not be dirty, nor discouraging towards certain people.           More importantly, how many different races are there here in @LOCATION1, or even all around the world? Many different races take interest in new books to learn new ways. When they come across books that are not teaching for all races or are actknowledging bad examples on thier kind, they feel discouraged. Whether it's a movie, magazine, books, or even a song, never should it be offensive towards anyone. When authors, publishers, song writers, or movie producers release these items, they do not think of the surroundings. Thier main concept is to entertain, but sometimes entertainment can be quite bashful.           Most importantly, if it contains sexual gestures it should be removed without debate. It's offensive to parents with young children who visit libraries. A public library which is open to all, should have sections for books, movies, cd's or magazines that are too vivid. There's a wide range of books laying around and one @MONTH1 come across one that is strongly offensive. I believe they should have a word in whether or not the book belongs on the shelf or not. I've not experienced it yet, but believe me it could happen anytime in our world today. If i was a parent I wouldn't encourage sexual magazines or books being shown at a public library.      Finally, during this debate older or more dirty minded people will counterargue this topic. Who says children should be allowed in the adult sections? Why are the discouraged people reading books that are setting bad examples? Those are some of the questions you will here for those who counter what I've written today. Adults should be allowed there own personal section for adultlike books, movies, or magazines. Kids under age should stick to searching for books in areas or fields that will provide interest for them.      In conclusion, those who counterargue could be on the winning side, however I still believe offensive books should be removed from shelves. Book lovers all around the world want enteratinment, but in good ways. The younger children of our time right now need to be influenced the proper way. Furthermore, there is no better way to help improve society than by removing offensive and noninfluential books from libraries. Lets make an inference and say, if we work to remove these offensive books, younger children will become more educated.",4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
1172,1,"More and more people use computers, but not everyone agrees that this benefits society. I feel that those people that think computers do not benefit society, are right. I feel this way because people need to start exercising it more, and interact with family and friends. Also, should enjoy life. Please read on to read in detail, as to why I feel this way. Firstly, those who are always on the computer need to exercise more, they need to exercise to stay healthy and strong. If they don't, they will most likely eat more and gain a lot of unwanted fat. Also, some of them don't even exercise at all. Secondly, they don't interact with their family and friends as much. Those people tend to probably argue with their family because they had to get off of computer. When you fight with people you want to gey away from it so you go back to the computer. It's not healthy to be on the computer for long periods at a time. Lastly, they should enjoy life. See the world through their own eyes. Party with friends and family. Go to college and do something with their lives. They need to enjoy things how they originally were without any computers, ipods, or even cellphones. In conclusion, the reasons I feel this why are because people need to exercise more, and interact with family and friends. Also, they need to enjoy life. I hope you understand as to why I feel this way.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
316,1,"To whom it @MONTH1 concern, Computers are beneficial to society. They promote learning, coordination, and even general welfare. It is true that computers @MONTH1 be detrimental to a person's health, affecting the amount of exercise and interaction a person gets, but the positive effects of computers more than make up for this. People learn much of what they know from the computer. Among an infinite number of things a person can learn from them are definitions new words, scientific theories, algebraic equations, history, law, any number of languages, and much more. Computers, when used for learning, can teach people things they @MONTH1 learn in school, but on their own time, computers exercise the brain, and teach it to think beyond the bounddries of ""@NUM1."" They also teach the brain how to better direct the body to face i'ts needs. Coordination can be very hand for some people, and this can be a problem. Without coordination, people wouldn't be able to catch a ball, avoid certain dangers, or even stand. To help improve this people need practice. They can get this practice from exercise catching ball, threading a needle, or using a computer. Using the mouse on a computer can help with hand-eye coordination in that it forces the brain to direct the mouse to a certain place on the screen, in order to accomplish what is needed to be done. At first, this process @MONTH1 be excrutiatingly slow, but over time, as the brain gets practice at this coordination improves and the process speeds up @CAPS1, the person will be able to use the computer faster and more efficiently. This will help them play games, learn, or even help people when they are in need. Helping people is very important in this day an age. That's why it is important for people to find out news quickly so that they can help. Computers allow this. For example, on the day of the deadly earthquake in @LOCATION1, most of the world found out within the hour from computers. News sites broadcast its social networking sites such as @CAPS2 talked about it, and people talked to each other online about it. This rapid spread of the news saved many lives in @LOCATION1 as people immediately dropped what they were doing and rushed to help. Computers affect people in that they help to send out news and stories causing them to want to help people. Many websites also are adept at donating money while playing a game. For example, www.freenke.org is a site that donates @NUM2 grains of rice for every question answered correctly, and they have donated over @NUM3 @CAPS3 grains of rice. Obviously, computers and sites like these have to have a positive effect on the world. Overall, one would think that computers have a mostly positive effect on the world. Despite limiting exercise, they encourage learning, and the exercise of the brain. Computers also help people with their coordination, which is very important. Finally, computers promote a world where people want to help each other, and a world where people keep up with current events, whether they like it or not. Thank you, editor, for considering my side on the positive effects computers have on the world.",4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
12635,5,"In the story ""Narciso Rodriguez From Home: ""The Blueprints of Our Lives. In the story the little girl lives in a one bedroom apartment and she doesn't call at home untill she move's into a three bedroom apartment they maybe she will call it home. She doesn't really know adout love & to be kinda Also, to care about people. But at the end of the story she knows adout love she say's ""I will nevere forget how my parents turned this simple house into a hom"".",2.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
4567,2,"Many people claim that certain books should be allowed on @CAPS1 shelves.  They claim that these books can be offensive to some and, therefore, should not be read.  These books are known as '@CAPS2 Books.'  @CAPS3, librarians, and public officials have gone too far in thinking they should have the right to choose who reads certain books and who does not.     In the novel To @CAPS4 a @CAPS5, the author uses many words and descriptions that people find are very offensive.  These words, however, are essential to the setting of the novel.  The author is not claiming that she personally feels that @CAPS6 @CAPS7 should be described in the way that they are, but a racist individual, such as @PERSON3 or many people during the time period, would not hesitate to describe them in such a way.  The novel, To @CAPS4 a @CAPS9, is a great way for people to understand the history of the @CAPS10.  Without the descriptions in the novels, a piece of history would unknown to many.     The novel, @PERSON4 in the @CAPS11, attempts to delve into the life of a pubescent, whiney, teenager.  The author, @PERSON2, uses many curses in the dialogue between characters.  The charachters, however, are high school boys that live at a boarding school.  To water down the language or to make the novel 'kid friendly' would make it impossible to describe the true nature of the characters.  The novel also contains multiple references to sexual situations.  These situations, although offensive to some, are necessary to show the progression of plot as well as the changing charachter traits of the protagonist, @PERSON1.     Literature is not the only medium being targetted by those trying to completely censor libraries.  Music, movies, magazines, and videogames are being targeted as well.  In many cases, certain materials should not be viewed by young children or those who lack the maturity to handle them.  It should be remembered that it is the @CAPS3 responsibility to censor materials for their children.  Instances of violence, prejudice, and death are a diurnal occurence.  @CAPS1 patrons should not be shielded from these occurrences.     In conclusion, many times it is necessary for an author to use words or descriptions that are offensive to many. Librarians should not be given control over which materials reach the shelves in libraries.  Libraries should present a wide variety of books, movies, etc. to the public.  If libraries do this, it becomes the responsiblity of either the @CAPS3 or the individual to pick out books that are within personal boundaries",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
2988,2,"Have you seen a magazine, book, movies, etc., that are found affensive? What experiences did you have? Here is my opinion on if I think that those books should be removed or not.       I have noticed that some movies are affensive to other people. Like for an example, the @CAPS1 movies, books is about @CAPS2 and some people don't believe in them or they don't like the movie so I do kind of see no point of making a movie that is about someone that is not real. However, some movies are okay for some people and their age. The movies that are rated '@CAPS3' are for the people who shouldn't be watching it yet like kids under the age.      Magazines though do have some type of thing that I think that is affensive to other people. Like, I don't remember the name of them but they would have sections that would talk bad about another person like one of the kids would talk about the president or something like that. So I think some magazines should be removed off the shelves.      The books however, I don't see a reason why to have them removed off the shelves. I don't think the books seem to be affensive as much as graphical. There could be some books out there that might be affensive to people though, like the ones that talk about a family that has no money or talk bad about them. For an example, you would be able to find a book and read it and find out that it is talking bout things that you don't want to know yet or want to know.      So as you can see I have made an opinion on what they should do either keep the books, magazines, or movies off the shelf. But then I do see it the other way to. Some of us do like those kind of movies or book or even magazines and think that is very cool or interesting",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
12549,5,"The author creats a mood in the memoir that is a fantastic to feel and it is called happness. In the memoir she creats the mood of happness by tell us about all her happy, loving, memores. One is how her younger parents pasted @CAPS1 the cuban cultur, music, food, and more. Another one is how her parent cared about others so they help family and friends into they got back on their feet and how she does the same. Also she was happy about the non selfleness her parents had she said they allways put her and others ahead of them they did ever thing for her.Happness is one of the best moods to be In No matter where you are because @CAPS2 you are happy others are happy too it also making you and others feeel good.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
4619,2,"Materials, such as books, music, magazines, etc., should be removed from the shelves if they are found offensive! It's a public library. Not many people would like to find something that seems to hurt or harm them in any way.      Libraries are for people to come in and should be expected to enjoy something, whether it be a book, movie or magazine. When people come in looking for some good information about something, they look forward to finding good tips, and not being let down. Example, with something possibly about someone being racist. That's dissapointment to some. Noone should have to walk in and find something that offenses them. It's not fair.     Now, to parents with children. Would you like for your child going into a library that is allowed to look wherever their little heart desires, and they come upon porn or just anything that would be a bad influence on them? I highly doubt it. Unless, you just don't care about what your kid reads these days, but to the ones who want their child having a good education, well, you understand my statement.     It's just not fair to the ones who go to a library expected to be satisfied, but instead are let down. It does them no good, and it could make your community look bad. Libraries are to help people with information, fun facts, and all around good resources. So, please put the bad books, music, magazines, etc. away!",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
8868,4,The reason the author concludes the story with this paragraph is because the author wanted to tell about about when saeng will take the test again. The author told the time with the season of the spring. In spring all the snows were melted and the geese and hibiscus has budding. And this paragraped make the reader to understand easyer. This is why the author include this paragraph in the story. ,2.0,,,,,1.0,0.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
12168,5,"I think the overall mood created by the author, is comfort. For example, in paragraph @NUM1, the author writes, ""Passionate Cuban music filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen."" the author tries to set the scene and give the reader a good sense of what growing up in his home was like.Also, the fact that they took relatives in and helped them get their lives back together again is comforting. In paragraph @NUM2, he writes, ""Countless extended family members came and went-and there was often someone staying with us temporarily until they were able to get back on their feet."" the family knew that their family would do the same for them if they ever needed somewhere to stay.Finally, the amount of love and caring in the house is very strong. Paragraph @NUM3 is all about how much the author cares about his parents and is very grateful to them. the comforting sense of a home is very important to Narciso Rodriguez, the author, and also his very large family.",2.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
412,1,"Dear @CAPS1, I beleive that using computers is a good thing. They can help you learn about subjects of places you think are interesting you don't know about. They can help save the environment. These are the reasons why I think using computers is a good thing. First, they can help you learn about new subjects. Say you are doing a report for school on the @ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1 of the @CAPS2, but you didn't know any thing about them. You could just go sit at your computer, enter ""@ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1 of the @CAPS2"" in a google search, and press enter. There you here hundreds even thousands of entries about the @ORGANIZATION1. You could sit forever and learn all about these magnificent creations. You can learn about any subject on a computer, at anytime. You could even learn about a computer and all of its history! Seond, they can help save the environment. People are always using paper and paper comes from trees. When we cut down trees we are harming our environment. We are depleeting our oxygen supply and destroying habitats of animals and insects. If everybody used computers, we would be using less paper. We could use to send documents and papers, we could bring to tax appointments and pair suits. Computers could even be used for school work. The teacher could asign the homework email it to the student the student could fill it out and email it back. Sure we would still have to use paper for somethings, but we would be using in way less. People could also use less fossil. We could talk via the internet and things like skype to communicate witness waring to and burn. Thirdly, computers could help us advance into the. Computers can help find ways to do many things such as better medical treatments, more efficient travel and even every day life. We could find better ways to treat serious medical conditions with the help of computers. We could find ways to treat cancers and maybe even the common cold. Computers could also hep us find more efficient way. They could help find a mroe efficient feel, efficient of it could help make a teleportation device. It could also help us explore deeper into space and find more planets and galaxies. Computers could also help us with our every day life. When you get up in the @TIME1, imagein being able to screen and being able to have a hot shower, your breakfast and your work equipment all ready within five minutes. That really would be the future of computers. Those are all of any reasons for having computers from school reasearch to space and beyond.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
6865,3,"The cyclist had a couple of affects in his journy. One of them was he hills the it was a problem because it used most of his energy and slowed him down. The other one was water, the lack of water. If the had enerf water he would have gotten a boost that would have kept him going.",1.0,,,,,1.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
12157,5,"Happiness is the mood described in the memoir of Narciso Rodriguez. Shown throughout the memoir that he is happy about the choice that his Parents had to make for him. The outcome of that is success. Also an example of one time the writer has shown happiness about his parents are the culture that he comes from showing that he is cuban and that he is proud to be what he is. As in the memoir says both his parents had come to america away from their good life to give more opportunities to their child. They had lost their Jobs and didn't know where to go, had no @CAPS1, But they were willing to do anything so it would benefit their child. The writer is very grateful for that because if that didn't happen he wouldn't be here, so appreciating everything his parents did for him this shows some of the things going on in his life.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
13194,5,"The over all mood created by the author in the memoir is gratitude. A quote from paragraph @NUM1 is, ""Here, the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations that expressed both, formed the backdrop to life in our warm home."" This quote shows that Narciso grew up in a very warm and happy home and he is very happy and grateful for that.  Another quote is, ""I've often told them that what they did was much more courageous than I could have ever done."" paragraph @NUM2 This shows that his parents must have done something very hard and gave up a lot to give him to have a good life. A quote from paragraph @NUM3 is, ""It was here where I learned the real definition of ""family"". And for this, I will never forget that house or its gracious neighborhood for the many things I learned there about love."" This shows that he is so grateful to his parents for teaching him so much about life, love, and family that he would have never known if it weren't for them.",3.0,,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
9173,4,When the snow melts & the geese return then mean its almost spring.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
3721,2,"The belief of certain materials, such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc., should be removed from shelves if they are offensive, depends on the situation the material is relating to. If one wants to see these type of resources, then he/she must be mature enough to withstand it. It all depends on where the material is at in the library and what situation it's in. If it is in the children's area, I highly suggest that it should be removed from there, since it's clear that a child should not process this type of information. If it's in the teen section, then the person must be mature enough to take this sort of inappropriate matter or just leave it be. In the adult section however, there should be no argument of any sort because it is obvious that the person must be fully mature to take in this sort of material.      One example on why this sort of aspect on whether or not inappropriate material should be removed are the comic books called '@CAPS1 tales' or '@CAPS2 the @ORGANIZATION1'. These type of materials have some from inappropriate to disturbing events in the books, but have been distributed to the teen section. Now from ages @NUM1 years of age usually spend their time there and would likely read this type of information. Some teens would be horrified of looking through these books and others would be fascinated by it. It varies through the people and what type of material they would like to read. It all depends on the situation where this material is distributed in.      Another example on whether or not inappropraite material should be taken out of the shelves is how movies are put in situations. There was once a time, a young lady around her early teens who wanted to check out a type of movie in which she have never saw before. So once she checked it out, she watched it with her parents and saw some uneasy sections during this movie. The person should have thought this through before jumping into the situation. If the person was mature enough to go through this matter, it would have been fine; but she was young still and so it made the matter worse.     Whether or not inappropriate material should be removed from shelves depends on how and where the material is distributed and so it shows that one person can change the difference in the situation.Therefore whether this type of material should be taken off the shelves depends, once again, on the situation it is at",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
1397,1,"My is people should go only on the computer if they really have to do something such as type a reports, check your e-mail etc. Whats the point of going on the computers if all your going to do is play games that gets boring to me. I go on the computer to to my friends and check email and stuff and then i go outside to play. You should only be on the computer for @NUM1 minutes a day then go get some exercise. If you stay on the computer all day you will smell, get fat, get lazy, and no one wents these things. These are the things you should have. You can play basketball, go on a bike ride, with some friends, go swimming, I do this type of stuff every day and I am in good shape because of it. I stay healthy and fit I dont sit on the computer all day on a sunny day. You become more if you go more it gives you a chance to hang out with some neighborhood kids. When I get home every day I do my homework then I go outside and play, then later I go on the computer for @NUM1 minutes then @CAPS1 done and I go to bed and the same thing the next day. So everyone agree with me because you knew I am right.",3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
16056,6,"Architects and builders faced several obstacles when attempting to build the empire state building and allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle they faced was S keeping a safe environment. Dirigibles that are fueled by hydrogen are prone to be destroyed by fire. One example of this is in paragraph @NUM1, ""the German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by fire in Lakehurst, New Jersey."" Another major obstacle was high wind speeds and violent air currents. These made dangerous because the back of the ship would be swung around the mooring mast. Lastly, another obstacle that they faced was a law. In paragraph @NUM2, it says, ""an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" This law would keep dirigibles from being able to ever dock there or even fly in the general area. All of these obstacles could not be overcome so in the end the mooring mast was not successful.",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
1197,1,"Dear, Local Newspaper I think that it would be better if people get outside to get so exercise and enjoy nature to interacte with there family and friends. If you get out with your family and friends maybe more teens and adults would be in better shape and more healthly. Say we jump out of bed, gets some breakfast and head to the park to gets an excrize with your family and friends. Alot of family and friends i think spend way to much time on the computers or there labtops because if they are on the computer to long then they will not want to go outside and get excrise with there friends. More and more people use the computer. But not everybody agrees on this statement. What I think it would be better to solve the problem and have everybody get outside and get some freshair with family and friends. But some people don't think that is the right thing to go. People that think those who support advances in technology believe that computers have a positive effect on people. Well I don't think that is the way to go because you need to get outside to get some. Freshair with people. But if you want to go on the computer you can but I think it should be only for a little bit then because some people have a bissness that they have to work on when they are at work. Sometimes people have to work on there computer every day so if that is the case they I think they should be alouded to use the labtop or computer. But if you are a teen you should only go on if you have to f you needing the internent or writeing a paper. But if you going to go on to just go on to just talk to friend then that is a waste of time in somebody life. Well at least my life it is. I think as a teen you shold be to work on studying on doing your homework instead of being on the computer because I think it would be better to make sure your grade are not making you fail in your school carvee in life. So that is why it is best to make sure you aren't on the computer all the time talking to your friends on the computer all day because it could make you fail in life. I would only go on for a little bit to talk to your friends. That is why I think it is not right to spend all your time on the computer. Jump outside and in goal the outside weather with friends and family meabers. I hope teen and adult get outside from now on because it would be better for allof us and everybody would be heathly. If they tri this program. If you tri this program it will really work to all of you tri proise it will work and you will be heathly and not feel bad about yourself.",3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
12249,5,He is very greatfull to live in @LOCATION1 and even with all the racism he still found ways to have fun and enjoy life.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
7275,3,"In the begining of the story, a young cyclist sets out on a long journy to Yosemite national park. Along  his ride he meets some old but confident men. They tell him a new rout wich “was to slice away hours” from his ride the setting was excedingly hot @DATE1. He was supposed to encounter a few thriving towns along the way the first was a “baren ghost town” the next had water “the flavor of battery acid, then he came to an abanded welches grape juice factory. The author navigated through a very trying setting until he reached a baite shop. The advice that he gives to his readers is to stick to your guns & don’t let old timers try and change your mind.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
10190,4,"The author concludes the story this way with a quote that says she will get another try at something. Many authors end stories at a diff way because it makes the reader wants to go on to a sequal or the next story, and I really adds a twist to the ending. Also another reason a author would end like that is because they want you to work your imagination so you picture what happens next. Using this is effective because you know what has happened and It make the reader wonder if she  fails or succeeds the next time around.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
16394,6,"The obstacle that the builders of the Empire State Building face in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there were the winds on top of the Empire State Building. This is because in paragraph @NUM1 it states that ""the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" This promblem would make the dirigibles Swivel around in the air. Another obstacle is that the dirigibles had is that it uses hydrogen and Helium which is highly flammable.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
10589,4,"Saeng in not only just dissappointed from failing her drivers test, she is also upset and missing her home of Vietnam. Walking home she spots a little piece of Vietnam right there in the united states. She buy the beautiful winter hibiscus, or saebba, to remind her of her past. The end of this story combines the two different, countries, cultures and almost worlds her life is from. When she says, “when they come back”, she is referring to the geese. To her the geese symbolize her life  in life in @LOCATION2 and how she has became accustom to it. The hibiscus is also a symbol of her life. It is a symbol of her life and past in Vietnam.It brings back memories and buying that plant was like getting a little piece of home. When the “hibiscus is budding” then she will attempt the test again. When this little piece of home gets bigger then she will try again. When she is more stable in the @CAPS1 culture, get still has a firm grasp of her own, then she will be ready.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
15319,6,The building had a steel framed body up to @NUM1 floors the glass windows to the 102nd floor. They had to also had to upgrade the building because the stress that gets put on from the blimps.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
15088,6,"In the passage ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the obstacles builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there are brought out. The author brings our ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself"". The climate and winds were constantly changing at the height of the building. The back of the dirigibles would then swivel which could very well be dangerous. Also the builders had to take into account the fact ""most dirigibles... used hydrogen rather than helium, & hydrogen is highly flammable."" The Empire State Building is in the middle of New York, a highly populated State. The explosion of a dirigible at the top of the Building would be very dangerous & would lose a lot of lives. The builders of the Empire State Building under went many challenges in trying to allow Dirigibles to dock.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
15159,6,"Based on the excerpt, builders faced many problems in allowing dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building. First, safety would be a large problem. Back then, most dirigibles used hydrogen (which is highly flammable) instead of helium to power them. This means that if there was a malfunction such as a fire, not only with the dirigible burst into flames, but the Empire State Building could too. Another obstacle builders had to confront was mother nature. According to paragraph @NUM1 of the reading, the location of the Empire State building has ""violent air currents"" with shifting winds. This problem would cause the dirigible to not stay stable. Although solutions like lead weights being hung from the back of the dirigible were offered, this only lead to more problems. If the lead weight fell, where would it land? The answer would be in the streets of @ORGANIZATION2 where pedestrians could be harmed. The final obstacle builders would have had to get through if they continued their plans for the dirigibles would be a law. The law stated (according to the reading) that airships could not fly too low over urban areas. So in theory, all of the plans the builders of this concoction had to be put to rest due to the governments law. In conclusion, many problems arose as building, and plans to make the ""Dirigible dock"" were made.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
10158,4,"The author of ""winter Hibiscus"" concludes the story determined to pass the test after the winter is over and the flower is budding. This shows the correction between the plant and the narrator and the hardships of each. The winter represents an obstacle for the flower, but it will live through it to thrive in the spring. This gives the author confidence that she too can make it through her hardships to thrive. Another hardship that she and the hibiscus both @CAPS1 is being ""root bound."" The author misses her home oF Vietnam very much. However, both oF them must and will adOpt to their new environments..",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
9537,4,Because they wanted to get it done with so they made the end like the first part of the story I like the part when the birds came back they got some of the flower come back to them.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
10012,4,"The author ends the story by saying “when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snow melts and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take the test again.” she chooses to end like this to show the change of the mood throughout the story. When she gets home her mother “noticed the tear staie on her daughter’s cheeks and her puffy eyes.” Saeng felt sad and out of place in the beginning of the story but by the end she felt happy and optimistic. ",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
581,1,"Are computers benefiting society? I believe that computers are actually not benifiting society. In this article I will explain how you will recieve less time exersising, less time with your family and friends, and less time enjoying nature just by being on you computers to much. If you are one of those people that love to be on the computer as much as you can? Well, think of it this way. You spend so much time on the computer that you recieve little or no exercise! Everyone needs to recieve a little bit of exercise in order to fit and healthy. Our country's obesity level has gone up since our high-tech computers have come out. I believe that this is one main reasons of obesity. This is a major concern in our high-tech, computer society today. Besides you recieving less exercise, you will also recieve less time with your family and friends. I understand with your family could talk to them on facebook but you need interaction by talking face to face. This is one of our basic needs as an individual. Your family is going to be by your side no matter what. But you need to build a strong relationship with your family in order for them to be there for you. This is only going to happen if you interact face to face with them. The same thing goes for friends. This is another nacessity for basic needs!!!! Everyone should have some relationship. Lastly, everyone needs to enjoy nature! It is a beautiful sight that everyone needs to expirence. Being trapped inside the house to be on your computer is a terrible thing to do. The beauties of nature are amanding everybody but @NUM1 of people don't take the opportunity to enjoy it. Being outside and enjoying yourself is a big thing for your body to survive. You need to sook up the powerful rays of the sun and have a life changing look around nature. But @CAPS1 of this will happen if you stay on your computer @NUM2. In conclusion, computers are not benifiting society. People recieve little or no exercise, interaction with friends of family, and a chance to enjoy nature. Everyone nedds to have these needs instead of fucusing all on the computer.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
6581,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist because the cyclist is tired and thirsty already. The features include a desert like setting of California, it is extremely hot, there are no signs of civilization in sight, and the roads are like hills that always were throughout the desert. On top of those facts the cyclist is dehydrating because his water suposely has diminished. ",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
3096,2,"I belive that they need to keep every thing and gain more. Their is so much to luearn about. The more information you have the better. I for one think that they need to put more magazines on the stands so you can have more information. Thow you can not trust every thing in one, You can still find many facts about what your wanting to learn about. On the other hand, Children should not be able to reach or see some of this. I could teach our children stuff that they are not yet ready to learn about. The fact is they need to have people watching the stuff so kids wont get in it and we can still lurean and find out new things. Not everything should be hidden. The more you know could just save the world.",1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
1246,1,"Dear @LOCATION1 Newspaper, @CAPS1 my name is @PERSON1. I'm go to @ORGANIZATION1 in @LOCATION1. I'm in @NUM1 grade. I'm writing this letter to you to tell you my opinion if technology believe that technology have positive effect on people. My opinial is that computer are good. Keep reading to change people lifes in <@NUM2 @LOCATION1</@CAPS2>. My first reason is computer teach you hand eye coordination. For example when I was in @NUM3 grade I would go to the libary in my @ORGANIZATION1. She had a website named @CAPS3 To learn. It to help you to learn how to learn without looking at the keyboard. My second reason compute give people ability to learn about faraway places and people. For example when I was in @NUM4 grade in @CAPS4 @CAPS5 I had to write about @CAPS6. And I want on @ORGANIZATION2. I found wonderful pictures of @CAPS7. And I saw how they live. I watched a @CAPS8 specail like @NUM5 weeks ago it said @PERCENT1 of people would use @ORGANIZATION2 to look up people number and mor personal things. My third reason give people the ability to learn about faraway place and people. For example when want to talk to my cousin that live in @LOCATION3. I would go on the internet and talk to them on webcam. I clould talk to them. I read in a artice like a month ago. That @PERCENT1 of people use the computer to chart with people. In conclustion, some people might say some experts are concerned people are spending to much time and less exercing enjoying friends and family. However, being on the computer is way sdfyer than go outside. More kids or people would be salfy. Next you should post this out on you news paper.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
15405,6,"The obstacles that builders faced at the empire State Building in attempting to allow dirigibles dock there are. The possible dangers of having something fall on them. The hydrogen is highley flamable so the dirigible could blow up and ingor any one aroud it. The empire state building may not be strong enough to withstand the the moving of the @CAPS1 the back side moveing so much from the dangorouse winds, so the @CAPS1 could possibly pull off part of the building and could @CAPS2 nearby pedastrians.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
11844,5,"The author of this memoir created a mood about family. ""They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends, and careers in the country the loved,"" this quote tells that the mood created by the author makes the reader realize how hard their pareents work to give their children a better life and education. ""It was here where I learned the real definition of ""family"","" this also makes the reader feel like there is a lot more to a family then what it @MONTH1 seem. That family gives one life and teaches love. ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home,"" this quote tells that home is not just a place where one @MONTH1 live, but that it is about relationships that are created there. These were some of the moods created by the author in the memoir.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
8931,4,"The authors concludes that in the paragraph. I think he concluded that in these because it shows alot of confidence about her. For example when she said, “then I will take that test again”. It sounded very confident and made it where she can want to try if she or he fails the first time.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
9659,4,In the story “ Winter Hibiscus” by Minfong Ho the author ends the story in a well mannered carhoined. The author ended with that paragraph to show that Saeng was not going to persuade even though for away from home. She is in a down was spiral at the beginning of the story she had failed a test and the hibiscus test her feeling nostalgic. When she got home her mother greeted her with kinds words kind of acting as an anti-depressent by making her food will not peppers and bitter melons. This kind of made Saeng see the good in life causing her not to give up and be confident that she will pass the test.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
12555,5,"In the memoir, Narciso Rodriguez describes his family factually, as well as loving and inviting. In paragraph two, Narciso tells how his family interacted in their house. ""In 1961, I was born into this simple house, situated in a two-family, blond-brick building in the Ironbound section of Newark, New Jersey."" Here, Narciso lists the facts about his childhood. The memories he shared with his family during that time makes the mood for loving. ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family, knowing that they would do the same for us."" His parents shared their love and compassion with everyone else, and that is what Narciso is grateful for; for the love and sacrifices his parents made for him. The powerful words he uses in the last two paragraphs puts the memoir into a mood of love and perhaps even sadness. The word he uses can tell they are from the heart, the memories of @CAPS1 parents as well as the rest of his family, influenced his life, and he learned the true meaning of family.",3.0,,,,,3.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
4741,2,"I belive that offensive books should be taken off the shelf. Some books are offensive and some are inaproprate. The libarian could get rid of the books, so the little kids can'@CAPS2 get the inaproprate book. Movies that are rate '@CAPS1' and above should be removed. Anything that has an 'A' rating should be removed, the libaries are a public place to rent and return, buy or sell, or to trade movies, books, and etc. Keeping the books that are safe for kids is important for their mental health.     Anything inaproprate could be censored by a black marker. The old libuary I used to go to, had all the slang, cus-words, and etc, all marked out with a black sharpie. Some of the movies were thrown out of the rating '@CAPS2' to all the above, the magazines, had marks on the pages also, censored the slag in the magazine. The music at the libuary was blocked, some music was not blocked, and the rest were the censored part of the songs. The librares should do the same like the old one did.",2.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,1.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
346,1,"Dear @LOCATION1, @CAPS1 a teanger growing up in this technologic era @MONEY1 society, I think computers are more harmful than helpful. I presume that books are better resources, people can find fun in other ways and that computers can be dangerous and cause health problems. @CAPS1 a well-read newspaper, your stand on this subject will influence the minds @MONEY1 many. I know computers can help find information, but personally, I believe that books are better resources. Anyone can write and post an article on the internet, even if what they are saying is not true at all. People can lie and say they are a doctor in their @NUM1's when they are really a @NUM2 year old working at @ORGANIZATION1. On the computer, you can never be sure who to believe, but with books you know what you're reading is accurate. The information on the computer, (that's true) you can find a book. Sure, the computer @MONTH1 be the quicker or ""easy way @CAPS6 "" in some cases, but maybe what people need is a challenge. It seems that because @MONEY1 the growing technology, every generation gets lazier and lazier, and less and less into books and it's time for that to stop. Also, people can find fun in many other ways not involving a computer. Many people use social networking sites to connect with their friends, such @CAPS1 @CAPS2, @CAPS3 and @CAPS4, but on those, you can't tell if that person is really who they say they are or not. If you want to talk to your friends, why not call them or more modernly, text them? That way you can be sure @MONEY1 who you are talking to. Too many teens nowadays hide @CAPS6 in their rooms and play games on their computers and spend less and less time with their families. What happend to playing cards and board games with your family? It's much more enjoyable, in my opinion if you play the game for real and not virtually. You can also go outside and get some fresh air, instead @MONEY1 that muggy smell in your room because you're so busy on the computer, you forgot to @CAPS5 the laundry. Plus, if kids have to start handwriting their papers that would improve their handwriting, because they wouldn't get the simplicity @MONEY1 typing. Besides, some kids don't have access to computers, anyways and you have to handwrite your @ORGANIZATION2's, so why not? Lastly computers can be dangerous and/or harmful to health. The use @MONEY1 social networks allows kids to put all their information @CAPS6 there, for anyone to see. This can lead to bad things, like being stalked or kidnapped. The internet also carries many innapropriate images and websites, that youngsters, or anybody, really, should be looking at also staring at a computer screen for hours on end is very bad for your eyes and can cause very serious vision problems in the long run. Plus, I'm sure you've heard how many typists are more prone to arthritis or any problems with pain or loss @MONEY1 the use @MONEY1 their fingers because @MONEY1 the movement @MONEY1 your fingers when you are typing. Getting rif @MONEY1 computers will help to impact peoples' well- being-in a positive manner. While many people enjoy the use @MONEY1 computers, there is really not that great @MONEY1 a need for them. Books are better resources, you can find fun in many other ways, and they can be dangerous/harmful to health. Why spend hundreds or @MONEY1 on a tool that is not even necessary? Don't let the media fool you or pull you in with their tricks, scams, or gimmicks to get you buy one, and next time you go to turn on your computers, thinks "" @CAPS5 I really need this or is there a better way to achieve what I need to get done or what I want to @CAPS5?"" because, more than likely there will be a better way. So, sometimes it's better to say ""@CAPS6 with the new ways @MONEY1 doing things technologically in with old ways @MONEY1 doing things manually.",6.0,5.0,6.0,6.0,6.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,29.0
9461,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph because he want the ourtose to think about what he said to want to read more. For example I was reading a book that end in a quesiton and I wanted to read more of what the answer to the quesition is. Another example is that I was reading another book and that was ending in a stentment So I want to read anther book that they have but they don't have One so I don't know how the story ended. Thats why the end stories like that so they can make you read another book with the ending.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
3367,2,"@NUM1ed     The censorship of certain media is such a controversial topic. Whether a certain piece of material is considered offensive and should be censored or not is more often opinionated rather than logically opposed, because it really does all come down to someone's opinion on this matter. It is too difficult for most people to step in someone else's shoes or be persuaded from a viewpoint different from their own or even escape pressures from the general public to consider something else. Things get censored for a lot of reasons, too! Sometimes they're just so intentionally offensive that perhaps the author or producer wants it to be censored or would appreciate the controversy, or that a new view or opinion is so radical and against a majority of the population that it is just considered offensive for being so different. Well, when does someone have a right to take a song off the air or pull a book permanently from a shelf?     The first thing that needs to be contemplated is if something is offensive or not. There are extremes to pieces of media where one sometimes must ask, '@CAPS1 were they thinking when they made that?' A movie being so outrageously graphic or violent is a fine example (although the same thing can happen in books, just with words instead of pictures). At the same time though, whether or not something you might think as unnecessary gore in a film might just be @CAPS1 I'm excited to see when I go to the cinema - it's all opinionated!          Another interesting thought is that somebody might come up with a revolutionary, radical scientific theory and write a whole novel or film a documentary explaining it all, but certain groups of people might claim that it is offensive to them. However, we might investigate into that theory ourselves and not be offended in the slightest. This is understandable though, people grow up in an environment that has its own set of ethics and principles, and people will honestly believe them and probably stick with those fundamentals throughout their lifetime. If you go against someone's beliefs that they hold so dear like that, they would of course be offensive to them. Does that mean that the something should be censored just because it offends a couple of groups in a population?     Whether or not something is to be torn from the access of the public is left up to the opinions of the general public themselves. The opinion of the public is created by the current time, trends, ethics, and problems that are going on. When something goes against too many of those things, people get upset. If most people are upset by something, it will probably start disappearing from sight. It's bad for business, and libraries are losing customers already due to most people not having an urge to read anymore with all of the stuff that you can do otherwise. Certain things can just put a bad taste in your mouth, and if someone gets that too often when they go to a library, they probably won't go there anymore.     So when it comes down to censorship in libraries, or anywhere, its just a bunch of opinions. If the general public does not like something, it will stop showing up. Certain books or other pieces of media are asking for the controversy that many subjects bring, while others are just unintentionally going against certain groups of people. People's beliefs are determined by where they grew up and when, and they'll hold on to those things for their lifetime. If something goes against those, people will be offended, and if enough people are upset, it gets taken away",3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
15255,6,"From the story the Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the builders faced huge problems when they tried to make it accessable for dirigibles to land. One major factor was the winds at such high altitude, ""The winds on top of building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" The builders not only had to think of a way for the ships to be secure and not low around, but also needed a way to support the weight of the dirigible because of the already heavy building. These are only some of the great problems the builders needed to deal with.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
15755,6,The Empire State Building faced alot promblems before it came out as an @ORGANIZATION1.  They scared that other people will destroy this Building.  So the reduced the dirigibles to dock there. They wanted their city to become a famous city and get more money. And other problem the some people didn't care and postpone to later.,0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,1.0
12258,5,The mood of this memoir is a good one. It describes how a house is not the same as a home (last sentence in memoir) and how family is more than just blood relatives.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
12945,5,"In the memoir, the author emphasized a very specific mood. She greatly emphasized warmth and safety. By warmth, she meant that you were always surrounded by loved ones. It meant something you'll always remember, because it's such a remarkable feeling. By stressing this warmth, it meant that it created memories. The other part of this mood was safety. The explanation of the safety was that you're surrounded by people that care about you, and there's no one to judge you, no one to hurt you, and you're safe from any dangers. I personally love the mood of this story because it's something I long for each @DATE1 down thecape. In conclusion, the mood of the memoir is very clear.",1.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
13601,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is a nice ""homie"" feeling. The author tries to let you know a home is more than physical walls it is a place for relationships are made. ""The congregation of family and friends."" The is is signifagant because all of the good times an celebrations occurred with the people he loved in his home. The author tries to show the love and affection throughout his home. ""always filled the air with not just sent in music but life and love."" The author shows the love that goes on throughout his home.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
10396,4,"The author of “Winter Hibiscus” includes “when they come back in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take the test again because it shows that she can adapt to change and still can think about her old country too. An example of how she can keep her old country alive in her life is” But she had grown up eating it and, she admitted to herself, much perferred it to a Big Mac.” This shows that she can still eat the foods she ate back at her old home and try new things at her new home. In conclusion the excerpt shows that the author can put both cultures together and be happy.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
7227,3,There are many ways that a cyclist will be affected and one of these are the setting. The setting affects them because if it is short smooth setting the ride will be easy. But if it is long bumpy rough roads it will be harder to control the bike which means that the cyclist’s job will be harden this is how a cyclist is affected by his or her settings.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
16151,6,"One of the obstacles builder's faced was nature itself. The @CAPS1 States ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" Another obstacle the buillders faced was that ""there was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" The @CAPS1 states ""This law will make it illegal for a ship to ever be tied up to the building.""",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
4340,2,"Censorship for the future kids of america.    Personally i have read some disturbing books also watched some grotesque and twisted, disturbing rated @CAPS1 movies. Not even talking about all the messed up music ive heard so far in my lifetime.    What it comes down to is alot of the music today is about sex, drugs, money, and violent crimes and gangs. The movies have a rating system which helps out for little kids. Books any one can get from a public library and some are about murder, rape, gang, violence, and all the horrable reality of the devilsh deeds in the world.    I personally dont have a kid but if i had a kid and he read a book that was bad or heard a dirty song with some of those lyrics and if he watched a rated @CAPS1 movie i would wanna file a complaint because thats not how i want my kid growing up. With a twisted mind and a vocabulary of a little punk with curse words every ten seconds coming out his mouth. Also i would'nt want my kid kissing his mom with that kind of stuff coming out his mouth.    But the @ORGANIZATION1 needs to keep all that stuff away from kids until there old enough to go get it on there own like they need to be @NUM1 to go see a rated @CAPS1 movie. That is how it should have always been.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
7555,3,The settings effects the cyclist because in California it could be really hot sometimes. The cyclist could dehydrate on a long trip and pass out really get hurt. Also there are a lot of hills which could be really hard on the cyclist.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
4640,2,"Taking books off a shelf at libraries because someone thinks they are offensive? I dont think that is right. Thats just what one person thinks and other people I'm sure won't think the same way. Just because one person think something is offensive and should be taken off that shelf doesn't mean that some kid couldn't learn from that book. Also with music, movies, and magazines, well that you can get that everywhere else so why is it such a bad thing to have it a library?   A lot of kids go to libraries to find books they need for school and if people are taking books off the shelf that they need, then how are they supposed to get their work done? Im sure there are people out there that would say the books they need are something they shouldn't be leaning yet, but we are going to have to learn about it sometime, so why not now?   Taking away music? kids can just get on the internet and get that just as easy and most kids are doing it in ways that could get them in trouble. So having music at libraries is just giving them a free way to get it.   Magazines you could just go to a store and get but a lot of kids probably don't have the money to buy them so having them at a libraries would give them a way to be able to see them. As long as it is stuff that kids can see then i don't see what is wrong with libraries having them there.   So i think taking books, music, magazies, and movies away form libraries isn't a very good thing to do. Maybe they could make an adult area and if someone tells them they think a book should go in there then they can look over it and see if it should. I can see some stuff getting taken away but not very much and if you take all that away from a library then you dont really have much of a library anymore.",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
16416,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow drigibles to dock there. For one, most drigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable, so it could explode. For instance, on May 6, 1937 the German drigible Hindenburg was destroyed by fire in Lakehurst, New Jersey. There is no predicting that that could never happen again. The greatest obstacle in attempting drigibles to dock there was nature itself. The winds on the top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents and even if it was tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around the mooring mast. Drigibles moored in open landing fields could be weighted down in the back with lead weights, but using them at the Empire State Building, where they would be dangling high above pedestrians on the streets wasn't practical and not safe. Another reason is because there was a law against airships flying too low over urban areas, due to fear over the wind, blowing the drigible in to other buildings in the area which would puncture the drigible's shell and cause a lot of damage.",3.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
1483,1,"To: @CAPS1 this letter concerns, Computers are apart of our daily life. You can do many things on them such as play games, watch videos, search the web, and even communicate with people from all over the world. They are very useful for people who go to school bacause you can complete and save work for your classes. Sure maybe some people are addicted to the computer but others use it only when they need to. Computers have a massive affect on some peoples life. Sitting around on the computer all day can be harmful but informative in many ways. One of the informative ways is that you learn new information every time you log on. That is why I think the computer has a great effect on people.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
1635,1,"Computers are today a common havar hold item and some people think its bad for socity when in reality its our most useful tool nowadays. It supply's an easy access to information along with preparing skills for future generations. And giving from lifes sometimes to cruel days through gamming. Before computers world spend hours in books and find what there looking for. The computer solves this. This non as simple as typing what ou need to know and hiting the enter key. This improves grades for children and life for adult solving a into the without leving your home and allowing news like yourself to spread into at the moment it's known. It also creates an interactive place for anyone in the world with thing like and or question and answers this allows us not only yo ask opinions and compare responses but to get statistics that @MONTH1 help us make life altering decions. Not only it supply info it also prepare our for the world. With things like children around the world and I social and decion making skills. It also them like web and design as well as simplier things like management and tougher things like business. Along with all that though it gives love an copy. Online video gaming is today a huge maker in which allows people not only for new as they do anything from dance, build, fight, smithe teilor, and so. And this infact @NUM1 of games are ages @NUM2. It also improves at the same time hand eye cordination. So when you have a ruff day tents to brings people happyness. So computers all neccity and put your mind to hard work but @MONTH1 you your dreams with a little well limit!!",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
15940,6,"When Al Smith first had his idea to build a mast on which to dock dirigibles, it started out as friendly competition. However, nobody predicted the obstacles that would be encountered while trying to execute the plan. One of these obstacles was simply that it was unsafe. Dirigibles used hydrogen, which is very flammable. If there was an accident the results would be devastating in places populated as New York City. Another obstacle was the wind. The wind currents at the top of the building shifted constantly, making the dirigible swing from side to side, which was dangerous for passengers. One more obstacle was the fact that there was a law that prohibited airships from flying below a certain height in cities. Clearly, many obstacles were encountered, and the mast never ended up serving its intended purpose.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
6310,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist in many ways because it’s almost like the background and theme of the cyclist The features used in this story are mostly about the background in which he is going and the sites of where he is. He’s showing the reader of how much he needs somewhere to go and also now much he’s indespair at the time. When he says “It was sad, hopeless laugh, mind you, but atleast I still had the energy to feel sorry for myself.” In this quote he is saying that he @MONTH1 be tired and physically not be in his best shape but atleast he knows he’s not in a good shape and he knows he’s in trouble, but he can still laugh it off and aware but he keeps trying anyways. This text in my opinion is showing many different ideas such as hope, awareness, and ability and courage to realize you need help but go on anyways to prove to yourself you can finish what you wanted and planned to do.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
15022,6,"Based on the information given in the excerpt, there are multiple obstacles they couldn't have been overcome by the builders of the empire state building. Between the winds, problems with ancoring, risk of Fire and sharp spires, there were also legal issues that would first have to be bested.One thing the builders of the Empire State building hadn't considered was the wind current. Because the dirigibles were primarilly huge propelled balloons, the wind could push them around, and at 1,250 Feet, there isn't very much around to slow or block the wind. They also didn't think about the @CAPS1 that hydrogen, a key gas involved with lifting dirigibles, was very Flammable and if one was to ascend in @CAPS2, dozens or maybe even hundreds of people bellow would be doomed.More problems the architects face were the sharp spires atop many of the buildings around. If a pilot were to lose control of the bimp, then it would cause @MONEY1 of damage to the city.Lastly, a new law was undergoing a legislation process. It prohibited the flying of any air travel bellow a certain Feet in residential areas.",2.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
978,1,"Dear Readers, @CAPS1 you imagine not talking to distant friends, only knowing about your town, or even failing @CAPS5 you didn’t ha a @CAPS3? I know I couldn’t. Some of the great benefits of having a @CAPS3 are talking online with friends, learning about new places and things everywhere, and being able study for and tests from the internet. First, being able to talk to distant friends and relatives is now passive with the @CAPS3. Facts show show that @PERCENT1 of families in the @LOCATION1 have distant friends with @CAPS2, now all of these people can tlk to each other! Ill never forget the time that my close freinds moved, but i was still able to talk to him @CAPS5 of the @CAPS3. Second, the @CAPS3 allows you to learn about new places and things all around the world. I never would have I know about some of the places I've been to if it was for comoputer, @ORGANIZATION1 stated that the @CAPS3 expert @PERSON1 says ""@CAPS3 are the reason we have in much without @CAPS3 wouldn't know about the places."" @CAPS4, it is now possible study without @CAPS5 of the @CAPS3, @CAPS6 can be done on the internet online. I'll never forget the that I forget my book, but I @CAPS1 still study @CAPS5 of the online book. In conclusion the @CAPS3 has benifits to you, like interacting with friends online, learning about new places, and being able to study. Computers are just end all-around benifits.",3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
15656,6,"The builders of the empire state building faced alot of trouble and confusion in the attempt to let allow dirigibles to dock there. This had never been done before @CAPS1 they didnt know what to expect, except for a mooring mast. At first Al smith and his builders thought this was an amazing idea, technology of the future, but things werent that easy. They faced complications with the @ORGANIZATION1 with there research on dirigibles. It was a complicated process because it was @CAPS1 high up in the air, and there was alot of practicing involved. Next was the alterations made to the building, the building wasnt strong enough to hold the dirigible @CAPS1 they make @MONEY1 worth of changes. They finally realized this was an unsafe idea, and it wouldnt be good with the highly flamable hielium, @CAPS1 they were back to square 1. Then the government gave them a law that said no airships flying to low at or over urban areas, wich would make it illegal for the dirigibles to tie up to the empire state building. And the top floors were turned into soda fountain.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9775,4,Because to her it is the best time to do things cause all the happy memories return along with the geese and hibiscus.,0.0,,,,,1.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,1.0
4753,2,"I know that some people find some books offensive mean cruel or racist but most of the time people write @CAPS4 beacuase its what they feel or what people want to read. Books are a privlige and we should be able to use that privledge. People need to learn that its ok that books are sometimes are a little harsh. The @CAPS1 is not the most friendly place ever and books can help convay that with less hurt then  experencing @CAPS4 first hand.   I know that all books should be left on the shelfs becuase just because its offensive to someone doesnt mean that you should take @CAPS4 off. For every book someone will find @CAPS4 offensive because of somthing. If the cause is if its offensive then all books should be gone. If someone took the time to go out and write and book and make sure that everything about @CAPS4 is correct then why should we stop them from letting people read @CAPS4. They have a right to write @CAPS4 and we have a right to read @CAPS4 and no one should take that right away. If someone wrote a book on the hollocost people are very offended by that but they dont try to get ride of @CAPS4. so why should any book be different because its not a big event like @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3. Its just seem so upserd that people who go to such lengths to get rid of a book just because they are offended by @CAPS4. I think they just need to suck @CAPS4 up and move on. if they dont like @CAPS4 then dont read @CAPS4. Someone who wants to can so do not take that away from the people that want to read @CAPS4.      I remember a time when someone wanted to read a book in are library and they said,'oh you cant read that because @CAPS4 was found to offencive.' @CAPS4 made me uphald that they would deciede how someone els feels about a book. @CAPS4 makes me so angry that they get to dicied how someone els feels about a book. they must be magic becuase I did not know that they know how someone els feels about a book or anything for that matter. we do have books here that are kept behind the librarians desk that if you really wanted to read that book its behind her desk. and im ok with that beacuse at least they have @CAPS4 for people to read if they really wanted to. This is what i think should happen if they have books that they think is too offensive to people. At least try to give an effert to perserve are right as citizens of the @ORGANIZATION1.     Lets throw an other aspect here about money. the book that you want so badly gone from a library was most likely payed by you, the tax payer. So you and a lot of others payed for this book and now you want to wast that money. That is just insane that you would want to wast that money after @CAPS4 being payed for. This just make me want to say wow do you really want to be that upset about a book. Does @CAPS4 make you feel better that you got all worked up over a book and now its gone. Well good for you mission accomplished. All you did was get worked up and you wasted money. People just need to relize the bigger picture not just themselfs but others. In them taking down a book because you were offended, offends me. This offends me a large amount because now you ruined somthing that was not nessisary to be taken down.     This is how I feel about this subject. I am very upset that people would do this and go to such lengths to ban a book away from a library. If you wrote a book and people did this to you how would you feel. I know that you would feel like dirt that someone would do this to your hard work. People need to just calm down and smell the roses and forget about things that do not matter. Stand back and think for a second and say,'will this really effect me if i get this book taken off the shelf.' @CAPS4 also make me mad that the libary bought the book and now its gone so did the money just go to waist becuase the book is just gone. This is how I feel on the matter of getting ride of books.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
10347,4,"The Author concudes this story with paragraph because She loves her garden. She concudes it because the story is about then and their garden and it eventually turns cold leaving them nothing to do untill Spring. Itsuggest they have strong feelings For what they do as it says ""in In spring when the snow nelts and the gese return and this hibiscus budding"" hears she wants to take the tst to overcome and prove She can take care of her Garden.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
7191,3,In the essay “Do Not Exceed posted Speed Limit” the setting affected the cyclist sense of direction. The cyclist knew where he was going and how to get there but the old men told him their “short-cut.” It ruined his own sense of direction because he was taking out-dated directions from “old-timers that hadn’t left their porches since Carter was in office.” That is how the setting affected the cyclist in the's essay.,1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
1698,1,"Computers, Computers, Computers! That’s the first thing a teenager does right when they get home from school. Teenagers just can't wait to chat with their friends on facebook and instant message. There are a lot of positive and negative things about computers. In these paragraphs below I am going to give you my opinion, tell you how people can manage there time better and the effects it can have. My @CAPS1 experience with computers is that they have @CAPS3 much information but sometimes it can be too much. Today, a lot of children and teenagers are getting bullied. People can send horrible messages to someone. They rather do it on the computer because they don't have to say it to there faces. that is one thing that I don't live about computers is that people can get harrased. Other then that I think the computer is a great resource for learning about things and also connecting with people from your past. Not a lot of @CAPS2 want to see there child coming straight home from school and go right to the computer @CAPS2 have to be strict with there child when it comes to computers. They need to manage there time @CAPS3 they can alson do there homework, after school activities etc.... Studies have shown that children who go on the computer every single day for more than two hours are most timely to see their grades drop. That's why if you mange your time it wouldn't be a problem. You want your child to have a balance in there life, @CAPS3 manage the time where they are not all day long. There are positive things about the computer and as well as negative things. The computer is a great way to research people you are learning about in school and find people from your past for example, facebook is a great way to stay connected to your old buddies. Google is also a great tool because you can type in anything and it wil give you a hundred websites to chose from a negative effect about it is that people are likely to say things on it to other people that they wouldn't dare to beg to there face. It also prevents you from doing other things because you get @CAPS3 consumed about the computer you forget your main priorietees. In these paragraphs I gave you my opion on computers and how there are posotive and negative things about them. I also explainted how it can taking up your time with your main priorities in life and how to manage your time wisely. The computer is a great tool but don't get take to much advantage of it because it is not a priority.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
9489,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph because she wants to show saeng’s determination to survive and be happy in her new home. Although she isn’t happy with her purchase she is trying to make it seem more homey. When  she says “will take that test again”she shows how she wants her surroundings to be comfortable. By ending with this paragraph it also shows a strongness in seasons. As it saeng will start over and try again with her life. She is content for the moment but is planning to please herself and her mother again in the spring. This paragraph also serves as a promise to discover a new way to live and make friends. The  plant is like a symbol of how she is going to change she is going to investigate and pass her own test proving she diserves to be happy and make herself feel at home.,2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
12019,5,The mood created by the author was that how in the beggining it was a medium normal tune because he was Just describing who he was and where he lived and what his life was like. Then towards the medium and end in changed alot in my perspective. That it changed to a sad tone because not That his life was hard also how gratful he was. And how his Parents seemed like great people. for everything they did with him. That I got This answer by the beggining and ending of the story of how sad his life was but he seemed to make the best of things and said he had a good time and or everything he did. Thats my opinion and answer to the story.,1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
3259,2,"I dont see any reason why to take books off the shelves. If someone doesnt like a book, then they dont have to read it. Books are ment to entertain or inform people. There are books that talk about black people in a bad manner, but they still need to be out there so that people will know. Libraries are out to make money thats all. Let them make money, they can sell whatever they want.      If I had a library I would sell just about anything i could. people will: watch, listen, read anything. So why not sell it or rent it out. It's a honest way of making money.",2.0,2.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
6791,3,"There are many features of the setting that effect the cyclist. One feature is that it is getting hotter and it will eventually effect him. The line “I wiped the sweat from my eyes to make sure it wasn’t a mirge.” shows that the heat  might be starting to effect him. Another feature is that he is in the desert and running low on water. The line “I had been hitting my water bottles pretty regularly” shows that he is drinking a lot of water and is running low. Another feature is that he is riding in the high deserts of California in June. The story says “and I was traveling through the high deserts of California in June.” Not only is it in June, but it adds heat because he is also in a desert. There is no doubt he will get dehydrated. Those are some of the many features that effect the cyclist.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
9263,4,"In the story ‘’Winter Hibiscus,‘’ the author ends the story with Saeng ‘s thoughts. The thought of trying the test when the hibiscus starts budding ties the story together. The story is mainly about how she looks for a flower and the memories it brings. But she wouldn’t have gone to the shop if she passed the test. This creates a full understanding of the test and hibiscus. It also shows the importance of the hibiscus. Both Saeng and the flower must adapt to survive and are out of place. Saeng was from Vietnam and the flower was from a shop, both were moved from where they belong to a new place.In some ways Saeng is the flower. She must adapt to her home to survive. The flower, outside in the cold, must adapt to its surroundings in order to survive. When she knows the flower survived the harsh winter, she will realize that she can survive living in @LOCATION2. This would make her feel strong and focused. ",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
15135,6,"In the the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in the attempt to allow dirigibles to dock there. The architects had to acomidate a lot of thing to allow dirigibles to dock at The mooring mast. For example In @CAPS1 @NUM1 it says ""The steelframe of the Empire State Building would have to modify and strengthen to accommodate this new situation"". Also in @CAPS1 @NUM2 it says ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was natur itself. The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents"". These factores and many more where the reason the mooring mast was never poot to use do to the feer of safty and law.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
709,1,"Dear Newspaper, @NUM1 percents of jobs @CAPS9 day use computers. The invention of computers have change our world in a positive way. Our society needs @CAPS1. @CAPS1 help our world @CAPS9 by teaching about faraway places and their cultures, uniting our world with new techniques of talking and helping workers to have a better job. Let's go on. ""@CAPS1 is the best electronic tool created by the world"" @CAPS5 @PERSON4 a profesor in @ORGANIZATION2. Today the world works by @CAPS1, as @CAPS1 grow! Our culture was loosing territory but as years past cultures and @CAPS1 started to work together. ""@CAPS2 you want to know about a culture just go to the internet"" @CAPS5 a teache from @CAPS3. Culture is really imporant for our world because is what we were before technologi exist @PERCENT1 of the world culture can be found in the internet or in our computers. @PERCENT2 of people @CAPS2 they need to do a research they don't go the country to do their research instead the first thing they think is the @CAPS1 because they can find what they need at any time. Let's continued. @PERCENT3 of people agree that the invention of computers helped our nations to be closer. @CAPS9 days you can talk through the @CAPS1 with a person in @LOCATION2 without needing to go to @LOCATION2. ""The creation of @CAPS1 created a new revolution of way of communicating"" @CAPS5 @PERSON1 a young student of @ORGANIZATION2. ""@CAPS4 of my internatinal calls I do by using a computess, and there are so many ways of talking, also is so easy."" @CAPS5 a mother of a student in @CAPS3. Computers are use @PERCENT4 more than cell phones because is cheaper, ""@CAPS7 true you can see the change of our nation, is the best thing a human created"" @CAPS5 the professor at @ORGANIZATION1. Lets go farther on. Did you know that @PERCENT4 of our jobs in the @ORGANIZATION3 is mostly about using a computers. Even engeneers use computers an example is @LOCATION1 @CAPS8. the engeneer. Awarded by the president @PERSON3. He @CAPS5 that ""@PERCENT5 of his job is using a @CAPS1. Statistic proved that @CAPS2 you know how to use a @CAPS1 you a higher opurtunity that a wage higher than the avage you would received when you do not know anything about @CAPS1. Another statistic should that @CAPS2 you know and use computers you would live longer and happier. @NUM2 @ORGANIZATION2 student agreed that his friend have better jobs @CAPS2 they know how to use computers. ""Computers helped young adults to have a better oportunity in life"" @CAPS5 the teacher of @ORGANIZATION4. ""@CAPS9 days is esential to know how to use @CAPS1"" @CAPS5 @PERSON2 a teacher of @CAPS3. @CAPS1 helped the world to change in better way. Let finished up. @CAPS1 is a tool that @CAPS4 of our nations used. @CAPS1 helped to learn about new cultures of other countries, also the new ways you talk to someone around the world in the conviniant of your house just by using a computers and ""the handy @CAPS7 can be to know how to use @CAPS1 when you are applying to a job. @CAPS1 had made us a better world. Don't forget without computers we be who we are.",5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
3829,2,"There is much censorship that occurs in the world. Music on the radio, television shows, or the internet is all censored. In todays society the library is a forgotten wonder to most, making it a secluded world. The library is a place were one's mind can explore and discover as much as it wants. The library should not be a place of restricted discovery, like on the televsion or the internet, censorship in libraries should be non-existant. People learn from books; books with happy endings, and sad endings, and gruesome endings, are all able to provide lessons for the reader.     Many say that history repeats itself. Therefore history is taught in schools so that the bad events that occurred in history can be prevented. This is the same for the books that are on library shelves. When reading a book, the reader is able to experience the lifes of the characters as if they are living with the characters. Through the experiences of the characters, the reader gets to observe all the things done wrong and right by that character without acually living the experience. By the end of the book the reader will have knew views on life, and will try to not make the same mistakes as the characters in the book.      A major fear among the parents is the inappropriate language or scenes that @MONTH1 be described in books. To be blatantly honest, there is foul language and inappopriate doings in this world. It is much better to have it discovered gradually through reading and maybe a couple of life experiences, then to have it all thrown in ones face at one moment. The censoring that occurs on the radio and television is fine, just when someone wants to improve themselves by reading, they should be able to read whatever they feel.     A library is a place of wonderous learning, but if there is censorship, it restricts ones learning. Through reading one is able to experience life without the consequences of experienceing life. All books are able to be learned from, and they should all have the opportunity to be learned from.",4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
6599,3,"First, by accepting the old mens’ advice, the cyclist was setting himself up for some hardships that he would, easily have avoided by using his map. He first encounters a “ghost town”, lifeless and most importantly, waterless. Then, he encounters a pump that gives out water tasting like “battery acid”. Next he rides past a “Rough Road Ahead” sign; not the most encouraging thing on his journey. To add to the despair, he has to manever his way past a tempting yet empty juice factory. Finally, the parched cyclist arrives at “Gary and Wilber’s Fish Camp. “To him, this simple bait shop was like  beacon of hope from food himself.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
7065,3,"The features of the setting  affect the cyclist in many ways. The setting was a dry California desert, for if it had been a busting city, the events in the story would have not happened. The author asked a group of old men for directions to Yosemite National Park, and , “like a foolish yuuth,” folluwed their advice. Everything started out fine until he reached the second town. He –ans almost dehydrated and “in an ironic twist” he reached on abandoned grape juice foctary. Almost all hope was lost for him until he rounded the bend and came across his new hope: “Gary and Wilber’s Fish camp-if you wont bait pur the big ones, we’re your best bet “ in He end he learned tostick to a map instead of old people who “haven’t left the confines of their purchess,hce carter was ,h office”",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
12690,5,"The mood created by the author is a loveing and careing mood. in the second paragraph he describes the the house as having the rich culinary cooking of his paroents the passionate cuban music filled in the air the aromas of the kitchen in there warm home. he tells that in there house they have feast also the many immigrants they invite into there house until they can leave by them self or fine a place to live. he describes family has nothing to do with blood relatives every body in there neiborhood is family and they care for each other and care for any of the people who need help at the end he says ""I will never foget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" he tells how they taught him love and real defination of family he describes there house as being a Warm house. ",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
796,1,"Isn't it great getting a refreshing when your outside? Wouldn't you experiences the rush of jumping into the crashing waves of the @LOCATION1 instead of sitting inside, gazing at pictures of the @LOCATION1? You might think that computers are helping society today, but you are wrong. The human race has survived over hundreds of years without computers and we can survive hundreds more. Computers are helping society become more and more lazy. We can get just as much information out of books if we try our best. Hand-eye coordination is important, and we can get it though activities, such as football, and tennis. We can also get it from activities! Drawing, reading, and even playing an instrument can all improve hand-eye coordination while letting you explore your creative side. Some people believe that computers teach hand-eye coordination, and it can but there are better ways to get it. It would take longer to get it from a computer than an activity. Many people like to travel in all different places of the world, but going to a foreign area with no knowledge don't smart at all. So what do you do? Go the most convinient source, internet. But what if I told you that any person could put anything on the internet? You could be getting info on @LOCATION3 when you think you're getting info on @LOCATION2. The most reliable source would be from a book. Reading is very powerful, especially if you're reading from a good source. Kids lately have been making lives on the internet. The only way they communicate is through online chat. Chatting online can/should never replace time in person with friends. Relationships with others online is never real. We're using our knowledge of how to communicate with others. The internet isn't worth it. So as you can see computers are no good. Thank you.",4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
9735,4,"The author added the story in with this paragraph for a lot reasons and to make the story longer, and two to show that even if you screw up the first time you can still try again.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
13537,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir Narciso Rodriguez is caring, loving, happiness, and being grateful.                                           These moods are all created because Narciso loves his parents and his home. Also, his culture.Narciso has a mood that is caring because he cares about his home and his parents. He is also happy to have a loving home and parents who love and care about him. Narciso is grateful for his loving home and his loving parents.The author created these moods because they are specific memoirs of his life and he feels all of these moods for the house that he has and for the parents that he loves. Narciso feels all these moods, and he will ""never forget how his parents turned their simple house into a home.""",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
4724,2,"I belive that every one has thier right to thier own opinion.  If a parrent does not think that thier kid should do some thing dont let them. It kind of reminds me of how people are aginst hunting if you dont like it dont do it.     If every one would express thier own opinion the world would be alot better place.  If I dont like @PERSON1 and I tell @PERSON1 i dont like him @PERSON1 knows I dont like him so he wont talk to me any more.  So in a bigger picture if @LOCATION1 tells @LOCATION2 that we dont like thim they will not try to make friends with us any more.  so if everyone would speak thier mind the world would be alot better.     If a parent does not like some thing like a type of music, movie, or even book and they express that to thier kid they will learn that that thing is bad.  My dad tought me that it was fine to kill animals only if I am willing to eat them so that seams fine with me but other people might not think its right.  So I belive that if your not a hipocrite and live as you teach your kids to that your kids will listen to you.     As I have said before my dad tought me that its fine to kill animals if I am willing or going to eat them.  I find one exception to this rule cyotes (we have alot of cyotes where i live at and they can be a pest).  I belive that that is about the only exception to the rule because cyotes are problem animals in this area.     So if you dont want your kids watching rated @CAPS1 movies then block them on tv. Its the same thing with the other things like the magazines, books and music.",2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
16153,6,"As it was the idea of a dirigibles dock was quite far fetched THe first problem thay encountered was that having a thousand foot long dirigible attached to the empire state building would cause a great strain on the buildings framework, @CAPS1 they would have to change the structure of the entire building to strengthen its framework. The largest problem was a matter of safety. Dirigibles use hydrogen which is extremely flammable, also the author states ""the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents"" making the idea of a dirigibles dock extremly to risky. They should have been spotted before so much money was put into making this dock.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
16100,6,"in the excerpt The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted there were many obstacles that builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there One of the problems was that a huge dirigible held the top of the building held by a single cable would have stressed to the rest of the building. in order to make the tower half of the building more stable they would have to spend sixty thousand dollars on modifications @CAPS1 nature was a key issue the winds were unpredictable because of violent air currents and even if the dirigibles were tied to the mast, the back would swivel around @CAPS2 large dirigibles dangling above pedestrians was not safe. Another reason as to why dirigibles could not be docked at the top of the Empire State Building was because there was a law not allowing airships to fly so low over urban areas. This law would make it illegal to ever dock ships there. overall, these were some of the obstacles faced well building the Empire State Building",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
3498,2,"In a library it's censorship should be conrtolled by the people that go to that library. If it is a public library then the visitors should have the right to choose what books go on the shelf. The libraries should not take books off the shelf due to the beliefs of one person, no the libraries should take all the books and give them a rateing once they have that only the reader should decide if the book, music, movies, magazines, etc, are offensive to them.     Of course there are some books that adults @MONTH1 not wish their child to read and then they should talk to the librarian and set a boundry of what rateing of book their child can check out. Organizing the books this way anbody can read anything they want to though there are the books they don't want to read or even see on the shelf, they need to stop a minute and realize that one of the books they like someone else might not want on the shelf.     In the end the books that are on the shelf are the choice of the library because they are the people that purchase the books. so to prevent a power struggle this way a comittee should be set up to decide what books to purchase. you will still have to deal with people not wanting a certain kind of book, but those people will just have to deal with it.     The books on the libraries banned book list should be in the libray also, the books are just books weather you read them or not is your choice. The one exception to this should be at school libraries because it is the schools money purchasing the books the administration or the school board should choose which books go in the library.     In short my veiw of book censorship is that, the library will choose the books that go into the library. To make things easier the books should have a rateing system that would be the national standard for all public libraries. Like I stated previously the books are just books its your choice to read them",4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
7154,3,"The setting affected the cyclist: due to the changes in terrain. A rough spot for the cyclist was when the terrain changed from a flat stretch to rolling hills. The author wrote, “I tolld on""(Kurmaskie @NUM1). The cyclist was pushing through the rough and it was not an easy stretch to get through. Another place in the cyclist's trip that was difficult was when he saw the abandoned juice factory. The narration states, “over one long, crippling hill, a building came into view""(Kurmaskie @NUM1). The context clues that provide information that it wasn't easy are the words ""long"" and ""crippling."" @CAPS1 of those words provide feelings of being drug on through the rough setting of the cyclist's trip.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
6233,3,"The setting of the cyclist was harsh, the weather was too intense to be cycling your heart out all day  .",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
6404,3,"In the essay “Rough Road Ahead : Do Not @CAPS1 Posted Speed Limit,”  by Joe Kurmaskie”  the features of the setting affects the cyclist. Dehydration caused by heat could not enough water caused the cyclist to sweat and to feel nautious. “wide rings of dried sweat circled my shirt, and the growing realization that I could drop from a heatstroke, caused me to laugh. In this quote he is thinking about all the bad and horrible things that could happen to him because he is already in an bad state. In conclusion, this is how the features of the setting affects the cyclist.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
3381,2,"I do not think that books should be taken off shelves just because it's offensive or because others don't like it. If everyone took the books, music, and movies off the shelves that they didn't like, then all that would be left would be empty bookshelves.     I believe that the library was a right to keep whatever they want on the shelves. Some @MONTH1 say that the library has inapproprite books to check out, or they don't want their kids to pick up a book they don't like and read it. I think that's why the library has the shelves marked in sections for example, adult, young adult, children, and referance.      I've never seen a book that was offensive to me in a libray, which brings me to another point. Everyone has a opinion, if a book is offensive to you it might not be offensive to someone else. For example say that you saw a book on animal mating and you thought it was a bad book for the libary to have because, little kids might pick it up. Well that is your opinion because, if a biology teacher seen a book like that then they might want to check it out.      Another thing is that the library has certain book for a reason. Say that there is a book in the library that is about slaves, this book might be offensive to @CAPS1 @CAPS2 but, this book is there to inform people about slavery. What is offensive to some isn't offensive to others.     In conclusion, I believe that books should not be taken off library shelves just because it is offensive to you. Everyone just has to remember that people have their own opinions about things and you just have to deal with it. That's why I think that books should not be tooken off shelves",4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
1706,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, I think computers have a good effect on people and not a bad effect. I think this for three reasons. My first reason is that they relieve stress. Without a computer in my opinion things would be a lot more stressful. With a computer you can easily look things up without wasting time or being stressed out by having to look for something. My second reason for thinking computers have a good effect on people is technology. Without technology things would be so much harder. Without computers it would be harder to neatly type assignments, print out pictures, and getting information. If we didn't have technology as in computers I think a lot or things would go wrong. My third reason for thinking computers have a good impact on people is that without them factories would crash. i say this because if you think about it could in a factory is ran by some type of computer. Without that computer telling the machines what to do everything practically wouldn't work! without the computer everything would become so time consuming that no one would want to get the work done. These are my three reasons why I think computers have a good effect on people.",3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
13466,5,"The mood created by the author in this memoir is comforting. His memoir shows his past life and how he felt about it. Cuban music filled the air, tables of Cuban feasts, different kinds of people interacting, all that is the mood he's trying to express about his life through his memoir. He's also showing his appreciation for his parent for making sacrafices for him so he could have more opportunities and education. He's also being very descriptive about his childhood and showing the type of life he had and what he and his parents had to go through when they came to @LOCATION1 and how they don't want people going through the same thing as them so they helped Immigrants who needed support.",1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
15539,6,"Based on the excerpt, the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle was that United States dirigibles used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable. If the dirigible was ever destroyed by fire above a densely populated area like downtown New York the accident could be very dangerous. One of the grestest obstacle of using the mooring mast was nature itself. The author says ""The winds on top of building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast."" Dangling lead weights to weigh it down over pedestrians on the streets was niether practical nor safe. The Mooring Mast by @ORGANIZATION2 tells a few obstacles the builders had to face to allow dirigibles to dock the Empire State Building.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
14919,6,"In order to allow dirigibles to dock on the roof of the empire state building, the workers would have to go through a series of tasks such as, strengthening the steel frame, and designing a sturdy mast. If the frame were not strong enough, then the building would simply colapse. More than sixty thousand dollars was spent on restructuring the frame. Also with high-speed winds the mast would have be incredibly sturdy, otherwise the dirigible would not stay in one place. After the Hindenburg disaster, people realized how unsafe these dirigibles really were, and so the idea would was found not only unsafe but it illegal. In conclusion, not a single blimp would ever be docked, nor will one ever.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
16135,6,The obstacles the builders had to face were very big obstacles. One of them being the Mooring Mast it's self. The building which wasn't strong enough to hold an airship with it's original design. So the building had to be Modified and Strengthened to accommodate this situation. They would add a rocket shaped tower built out shiny glass and chrome-nickel Stainless steel. This tower would illuminate from the inside. Which would bump the building from @NUM1 floors to 102 floors . I got all this information from paragraphs @NUM2.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
10376,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because she is saying that when the flowers come back in the spring, and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding after winter, she will garden them again.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
16064,6,"First, there was no way to anchor any dirigibles. They couldn't make the back stable, only if they added lead weights; that wasn't a good idea above a crowded street. Second, there were laws in place stating that a dirigible couldn't fly that close to buildings. Also, when the German blimp Hindenburg was destroyed by fire near a New Jersey naval base, people thought ""... how much worse that accident could have been if it had taken place above a densely populated area such as downtown New York."" @CAPS1, the wind that high up was too fierce and strong for a blimp to even get close to the building. All in all it was a bad idea.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
10350,4,"The author concludes the story with optimism and hope for the future. She finishes her story with “when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take the test again. By concluding the story in that way it helps demonstrate the hope the hibiscus plant brought to her after she failed her drivers test. The hibiscus the helped give Saeng one step closer to adapting to her new home. It says in the story Almost reluctantly, she realized that many of the things that she had thought of strange before, through the quit repition of season upon season, almost femiliar to her now.”  In the way the author ends the story it helps give inspiration for a new beginning and new season.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
199,1,"@ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS1, click, clack that the sound @ORGANIZATION2 computer keys being hit right now. Computers are everywhere these days, even in the poorest places like @LOCATION3. In @LOCATION2. Dreadful, humble, time conservative computers are taking away the meaning and enjoyments @ORGANIZATION2 life that are offered to us. Computers are our sourse @CAPS5 infromation, and time @CAPS5 liesure these days, but we are fogetting that there is a life away from them as well such as having family time, and taking walks in the beautiful, nature. To much use @ORGANIZATION2 a computer is leading to aweful health. Computers can cause many fatal problems such as seeing and vision problems, and obisity, due to the fact that you sit all day and @CAPS2't work out. Computers are like mind, and body eaters the slowly take away from you and let you cry, and weap @CAPS5 the rest @ORGANIZATION2 your life, @CAPS2't you agree? Do you know the @ORGANIZATION2 says that the second biggest leading cause @ORGANIZATION2 obisity is computer? Yes that is true! I have experinced problem. While growing up. When I was @NUM1 I was adictied to the computer. Day and night my eyes were guled to the computer screen. I had nothing on my mind except @CAPS5 computer, my mom got mad at me and yelled at me to get away from it, but I didn't. Slowly, slowly I started to put on heavy, awful faton myself, and later I found out I was over weight @CAPS5 my age. To this day I have not lost the weight I put on from using the computer, and I am sure others are to. Obesity just doesn't happen from eating to much. It also happens from not doing any cardio activities, which the computer stps us from doing. So basically the computer is unhealth. As said by @PERCENT1 @ORGANIZATION2 people from the state @ORGANIZATION2 @LOCATION1. Time consuming computers, are taking away family time from many family these days. Do you know that @PERCENT2 @ORGANIZATION2 families aren't getting to spend the time with each other as the wish, reason being computers? Kids are on the computer playing games, moms finding a resipe online to make @CAPS5 dinner, and dad is buying another stock online. Yes that happens a lot, insded @ORGANIZATION2 doing those things they could be doing something else, but no computer work is more important. My family used to spend a lot @ORGANIZATION2 time together, but because @ORGANIZATION2 the computer I never get to do anything with my family now. Do you know the time health @ORGANIZATION2 @ORGANIZATION2 say kids who spend time with their family are bound to become more better parents than who @CAPS2't spend time with family. I bet you are a really good family man/women and spend time with please take these computers away and make families come together once again. @LOCATION1 has the most beautiful nature ever, the birds, the animals, the @DATE1 times and the fall time. If anyone ever wants to see nature they should come to @LOCATION1, but the sad thing is that the people @ORGANIZATION2 @LOCATION1 aren't appriating nature themselves because they are do busy with things such as computers. I know one time we went to a comp out, and we were ready @CAPS5 nature and this boy brings his computer, and wouldn't you know it the whole got people forgot about nature and played with the boys computer. So many people missed out on the nature and the beautiful animals seen one the such as yellow @CAPS3 through that time was amazing and it is very unfortunet that many people missed out on that event. People these days are once again not apricating nature, which one day they will regret, because @ORGANIZATION2 the fact the one day you @MONTH1 not be around to enjoy this got given @CAPS2't let the computer tell you what to do lets be the boss and @CAPS5 ourself. It is now or never the decision is in your hand, make the right decision and say no to computers. Go out their enjoy nature, spend time with you family, and get healthy. Be the smart, and well educated people. (I know you are) and tell the world to not getting told by the computer @ORGANIZATION2 what you can, and cant do, be the boss control. Yes computers are fun, giving, but is bad. Say no to computers if you @CAPS2't you will regret it.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
13258,5,"The mood is nice, happiness and joyfulness. He talks about how his most treasured memories are at his old home with his parents and family and friends. He talks about all of the fun they had like feasts seeing alot of family all of the time and how he has so much fun.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
4035,2,"Readers of the @ORGANIZATION1,     Censorship in libraries should never be an issue. It is a very simple concept. Obviously, no one wants their children being exposed to inappropriate reading material or movies. If a child wishes to visit the public library, their parents shouldn't have to worry about what their children will be looking at there. A library should be a family-friendly place where children can get together for story time, or where college students can study. I remember going to the library all the time when I was younger. I would read a different story every week with a large group of kids in the community. It was something I enjoyed doing. Don't you want your community library to be a place where children can learn and enjoy themselves?     Unfortunately, some libraries do have offensive reading material, movies, music, etc. It is the responsibility of the library employees to put these offensive materials in the adult reading section of the building. Parents should tell their children that the adult section is off-limits, and the library employees should keep children from every being in that restricted area. These items @MONTH1 be offensive to some people, and they @MONTH1 be too inappropriate for children. However, there are some readers who have the right to look at these materials if they want. That's why they shouldn't be taken off of the shelves completely, just removed from the rest of the books, music, movies, etc.      I am not one to deny anyone their rights. Even though I don't personally see the need for offensive reading materials in a public library, that doesn't mean that someone else shouldn't get to view these items. All in all, we have to be fair. Would you want someone taking away your right to do something you like to do because they find it offensive? No, nobody wants that. However, we still have to be reasonable about it. If there are going to be adult reading materials in a community library, they have to be in an area where children aren't allowed. It's just common courtesy, and everyone has to cooperate. This is why censorship in libraries should never be an issue. I hope that you can see it my way, and help me in fixing this issue once and for all.                                             Sincerely,                                                  @LOCATION1",5.0,5.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
9681,4,I think the author concludes the story with that paragraph because at the end is talking of a new begining. Also what it’s going to be at the new begining she says that she is going to take the test again.,0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,1.0
16168,6,"The Empire State Building was designed to be the tallest building in the World. Al Smith's plans were to make it taller than the new Chrysler Building, but when a @NUM1-foot tall spire was added to the top, the Empire State Building was going to come in second. To overcome this first obstace in building the tower, Smith decided to change the idea for the tower and add his own spire: a mooring mast for dirigibles. Using the tower as an anchor for dirigible balloons, or zeppelins, Smith added another 250 feet to the tower. But to continue with the plan, Smith had to face the obstacle of supporting a floating blimp more than @NUM2 feet above the ground. Smith had the entire building frame modified and strengthened before the building was finished. Smith's final obstacle was one he couldn't control: the weather. The winds at the top of the building were too harsh, so the dirigible idea was scrapped, but Al Smith's tower had made it to the world's tallest building.",1.0,,,,,1.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
16255,6,"The future of transportation is a matter that any architect has discussed at one point. Whether reality is taken into account, that is another subject. Al Smith had the challenge of make the dream of docking dirigibles, into a reality. Although Smith had high hopes for the project, many obstacles stood in the way of the construction of the dock. One problem is stated in paragraph fourteen, ""the greatest obstacle to a sucsesful use of the mooring mast was nature itself."" Wind power was not taken into account at the time, and neither was the fact that thousands of people in downtown New York are put in danger. In conclusion, dirigibles soon became much more useless with the spark of the airplane and soon died along with the dreams of the mooring mast.Another problem that stood in the way was a law stating, that airships cannot fly to close to urban areas. This destroyed any plans of the mast because not only was it risky to build, but it was also illegal. What was once a glimphs of the future soon turned into nothing as @PERSON1 finally confronted the public in saying that the construction will be post-poned. The future of transportation took a sharp blow, but with the new succession of the airplane, anything seemed possible.",1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
3671,2,"Should books, movies, magazines etc., be removed from shelves if they are found offensive. No, because all you have to do is ignore it or not pay any attention to it and it shouldn't bother you that much. Most people might look at something and think it is interesting like something that happened on the news lately and was published on newspapers or put on the internet. For example, the @LOCATION1 story, that has been on the news for the past week, people think that it is awesome that he is was finally found and killed. If people found that offensive that might be because they don't know what he did or wasn't around when it happened.     If they took down stuff that was offensive then we would have nothing interesting to read. If someone found a movie that was racist the don't get it, just put it back and find something else like a romance or a comedy. Everybody could use a laugh every once and a while. For music if your friend recommends something to you, check it out on the internet first to see if it is any good, if not then tell them no and that you find it offensive. If they were a true friend then they would understand and perhaps make it up to you with something else.      Magazines, from what I know don't really have anything offensive in them. The only thing the have a some pictures, gossip, facts, and some stories that might peak your interest. Books might have something things that you find offensive but, if you like the book so much you might as well finish it. If you found a book that you really like then read through it a bit or check it out on the internet to see what is about. Out of all the books I have read, I have found none of them offensive they were all good books, books that i would probably read again if I wanted to, but I won't, because I'm lazy.      Newspapers are interesting to read and might have little to none offensive remarks in them. Some might pertain to blacks or mexicans, something like that. Well I haven't read any like that yet but, I have heard somethings about it. In the newspapers there might be little comics or gags that would probably be more offensive than anything in the newspapers. I think that if you find something offensive then just ignore it and move on to something else instead  of throwing a fit about it because that wouldn't do well at all.",3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
3899,2,"Walking in to the library and looking for a good book or magazine to read, you run into some of those disgusting books that are offensive to some people. Some people think they should be removed from the shelves, and I am one of them. Are you?     There are some books, magazines, movies, and ect., that we all run into that have very bad language, racism, bad religious talking, and even some about sex. Nobody needs to be reading those kind of books, it is bad for our minds and is very offensive to some people. A lot of people do not like to hear curse words or see them. Seeing those words in a book will make that person think wrong things about the library and put the wrong words in their head. Then there are those books about racism and that is the worst topic to most people. If someone came across that in a book, it would hurt their feelings and they would not want to finish that book. Their are others that are very religious and if they come across something that is wrong about their religion the will be very offended.      There are a few ways that the library could handle the books that offend people. The librarian could think about putting a warning sign up and seperating those books, magazines, and etc., into their own section for people that do get offended by those things know where they are and know not to look there. Or inside the front cover the librarian could put a warning note on there to show the person that there are some things in there that @MONTH1 offend someone. It would be very helpful to so many people!      In every library you won't see that all the books are perfectly good. We all know that there are going to be some bad things in books, but there are some books that are way too inapropriate and those books can be removed. There are just way too many people that get offended while reading the books they want to read. Let's put a stop to it.     In conclusion, many of the libraries around are going to have the kind of books that offend some people. There can be a stop to that by removing them from the shelves or at least warning others about the things in the books, magazines, and all the other entertainment people like these days. It would be amazing to know that all the people that love to read will not be offended by what they are reading!",4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
760,1,"Computers are great, they can help you with anything you need. You can shop on then, pay bills, even book a flight to go on vacation, but people are spending too much time on them. They should only spend a certain amount of time on them and not all day. Many people are spending more than enough time on the computer People ran often stay on the computer for hours and not even relize it, they stay up all @TIME1 doing work, or playing games. @TIME1 a while it will eventually take a toll on the body. Because @CAPS2 you are on the machine all day then you are using little to no energy at all. So then you spend @CAPS1 nights in bed tossing and turning. Then that leeds to feelings horrible in the @TIME2, @CAPS2 you do it @TIME1 it is going to have a bad effect on your body. I believe that people who spend all their time on the computer will eventually get overweight. @CAPS2 you are sitting in a chair all day then you get no exercise what so ever. Then when you eat you don't burn off the calories so that leeds to people gaining wait and becoming over wait from that your body becomes very unhealthy and will most likely leed to health issues. When people are on the computer they end up ignoring nature. They miss out on being in the wonderful warmth of the @CAPS3 @CAPS4, or going out and playing in the snow and making @CAPS5, forts, or having a @CAPS6 fight. They even miss out on just going outside and talking a walk the reason is because they are @CAPS7 @CAPS8 inside their house with their fare glued to the computer. Being on the computer takes a lot out on the body. It can cause health problems and even problems in general. So people should just spend a part of their day on the computer. The other part of the day they should be outside, walking around, maybe playing with pets, children or friends. As long as they're out of there chair and not on the computer and getting some exercise.",4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
6604,3,The setting in the begining of the story is flat an easy but as the path becomes unfamiliar it turns into many hills & turns. This effects the cyclist a lot because he was low on water & was begining to become dehydrated.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
3745,2,"Yes! i believe that because such as books had alots of informtionsalso when listen musice i feel like so sweet like i maen i'm so happy... when i read the magazines i know about the world something about people and animlas about... @NUM1 i belive that because musice is good for listening..when you listen musice everyday you know what they mean then you will be know the mean, first i'm listen american musice i feeled like crazy now i know how to listen musice...Yes! i belive that because the magazines is good for reading .one think when i caome american i feel like so sad because i don't no anyboday also i don't no how to read magazines that's why, and two month later i have new friend then they teach me how to speak @CAPS1 and they teached me how to read magazines @NUM2 yers later  i got alots of friends in school my teacher told me kabee don't worry about to learn speak @CAPS1 when you come school everyday you will be speak @CAPS3 very well then  i'm studies everyday for learn speak @CAPS3   now i can speak @CAPS3 very well at @CAPS4 i love all teacher because they are teached me how to speak @CAPS3 that's why...",1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
12310,5,"The mood of the story is happy. Everyone spend time with their family, having fun together, celebrating together would give you a happy feeling of what a family is. It's like how the family in the story moved to the United States, they first doesn't know anyone, they haver no friends. They are living in an apartment that has one room, but years later, they moved to a @NUM1-room apartment. There live a family with a borned baby above them. the baby is the job for the main character (baby sitter) and also the main character's first friend. To the main character, friendships and home is very important to him. If there's no friendships and home, there will be no love. These taught the main character how to love and how to care about someone. else. The main character said friendship and home is the basis in his life, he understand without letting his parents teach him. When you have friendship, home, and love, everything will be perfect for you. All you need is a support from your family. You will be always happy and feel very lucky that you have all of these things.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
16516,6,The obstacles the builders faced with the mooring mast was the winds and the gases used in non-@CAPS1 dirigibles. The wind was a problem because that high up the dirigibles' back would swivle around the mooring mast. The gases used was a problem because out of country zeppelins used hydrogen which was highly flammable which would be bad if the zeppelin went up in flames over the densely populated New York.,2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
6911,3,"The setting of this story affects the cyclist alot. I think the setting was supposed to be most like a run-down out of dated town which didnt help him when he was lost. The town is out of date and hot. Which bring another problem, the cyclist was dehydrating because he didnt have enough water. He would hilusinate and see things that werent there. He become very tired in the hot sun. So the setttling in this short stories effected the cyclist in many ways.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
16559,6,"The obstacles the builders of the Empire state Building faced in attempting to allow dirigles to dock there was because the dirigibles were docked by means of an electric winch, which hauled in a line from the front of the ship and then tied it to a mast. the architects could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
6993,3,"The cyclist was trying to get to Yosemite National Park. The cyclist was riding through the deserts in June. The cyclist barely had water at the end of the stony. A lot of buidings were abandoned, right when he needed water. That is how the setting affected him.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
15695,6,"In the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted there were many obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigible to dock there. The dirigibles also called blimps were very big, this was a problem because they were to large and could not get to the building and ""most dirigible outside the United States used hydrogen rather than helium and hydrogen is highly flammable"" (par. @NUM1) This is bad because an accident could occur and the blimp could explode right over the city and hurt thousands of people The winds above the building were sometimes violent and it was hard for dirigibles to reach it, ""Even if the dirigible tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast."" (par. @NUM2) It was difficult attempting to allow dirigibles dock the Empire State Building. The purpose in which the top of the building was created could not be used because it was to dangerous.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
6511,3,"There were many features in the setting that affected the cyclist. One was the extreme heat during the June heat in California. The speaker said that he could have died from heatstroke. The rough road was also a problem for the cyclist. The bumps, hills and wildlife affected the cyclist’s journey. The thing that most affected him was the lack of water. It was such a problem that he had to suck on stones to take his mind off thirst. As you can see, these problems in the story affected the speaker’s journey to Yosemite National Park.",2.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
13252,5,I feel like the mood in the memoir is being grateful for your family for many reasons.      My first reason is Narciso's parents came to @LOCATION1 from Cuba just to make sure that there kids will have a good life.       Another reason is his parents did hard labor and worked really hard to make he a good life. They also made there house feel like a home for their son.            There are alot of thing Narciso is grateful.,3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
277,1,"Dear @LOCATION2 press, I wonder if you know that @PERCENT1 of people out of @NUM1 surveyed by the university out @LOCATION1 agreed that using lap tops and computers had a very good benefit on their life? I agree that computers benefit society and every day lifes. With a computer, you can interact with people all around the world, they can help with school work, and make every day life eaiser. Five years ago I had to move from @LOCATION4 to @LOCATION3. We had to leave all of our family and friends behind. However, with this great tecnology, we could e-mail them. Instant message them, and video chat with them, instead on having to face out money to make long distance calls. Theres many people out their like me. Who have friends and family far away, weather its family in different countries, old school mates and camp friends using a computer is a great way to keep in touch with one another. Using a computer can also more life easier. Moms taking care of their kids might not be able to go to @CAPS1 & @CAPS2 with one kid not wanting to get off his video games, the other watching their favorite @CAPS3 show. Thankfully that man and go online, pick the food that she and the quantity and she can get someone to deliver it. That mother also might not be able to get out and go shopping. So with her computer she can go to her favorite stores website and pick the clothes she wants. And then when @CAPS4 comes, a computer can be great not to worry about not having enough time to go and. A computers just have life that much simpiler!. Statistics how or people help online instant or going in. ""Computers are great, I can homework and know that if they to write planner than they we to and out. If, they can and more of information on the computer from @CAPS5.com, then they could find in their local library. You can find almost anything with search engins on your computer! Some people do disagree with the use of computers, or some also believe that some people abuse the benefit of computers and spend to much time on it and not exercising and enjoying nature enough. This is true, not as long as you stay reasonable with usage or your computer, it benefits you in many ways. Like I said, its great for keeping connections between people, simpling everyday life, and research for school.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
33,1,"Dear, @ORGANIZATION1 I think the effects that computers do on people are really positive. Computers can be used for all sorts of things. Examples like finding things out about history. People that changed the world and other information. Computers give the power for children to learn. For example, their are lots of websites that offer online tutoring or good ways to help you pass school. Other positive way is online dateing sites. You can meet new people and is a good way to make life even better. Popular sites like @CAPS1, @CAPS2, @CAPS3, and so on make a good way to keep in touch with friends from your past, or even make new ones. But the most that I think thats the best in my opinion is going to school online. Once your done with colloge and you are a nuse, for an example you can get a higher degree like a registered nurse then being a @ORGANIZATION2. I think computers has a positive effect on people.",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
10591,4,"The reason why the authour concluded the story with this paragraph because when Saeng saw the geese she knew that when spring comes back around she would be ready to get different flowers. Also she thinks back to when she was in her homeland she could see when the flower s grew up from the ground. Although now that she is in the city she thinks the flowers will blossom like the ones back home where she misses alot. Lastly, she describes the flowers as her friends. She also remembers the “Madagascar periwinkle” growing wild out from the cracks in brick walls or tiled roofs. Basically the authour says that she is ready to look for other plants that she remembers from her homeland.  ",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,3.0
4531,2,"Book Censorship     Censorship in libraries are a major problem in the @LOCATION1. The question is, 'Should we have a age limit on what people can check out?' Or another question is, '@CAPS1 did they let my child check that out?' @CAPS2 are very commonly asked questions, and should have attention put toward them.     In my oponion, books should have a age limit on them. My reasoning is becuase, kids under @NUM1 years of age should have a place where they can find good books for thier age group. There are plently of books out there for all age groups. A kid under @NUM1, should not be able to check out a book, magazine, movie, or music that has offensive language, racial slurs, or dirty behivor from the character, or artist.      Another reason @CAPS1 libraries should have a age limit on things you can check out, is becuase kids can get the wrong idea. Lets say, a book has a statment in it that says '@CAPS3, I went to my bestfreind's house and drank alcohol.' @CAPS4 would be somthing that a child should not able able to read. It would give the child the wrong idea in what they 'could' be doing.     The age limits for book shelves should be as followed:@CAPS5 @NUM3 @NUM4 @NUM5 @NUM6 @NUM1-@CAPS6     @CAPS7 the books in @CAPS2 age groups would probably help stop the refrain on parents worrying about what their kid is reading. Plus, it would help the kid in deciding on what to read. I really think that @CAPS7 books in @CAPS2 age groups, will stop the commotion.     Censorship is a major problem in the @LOCATION1. With everything I have listed, I am pretty sure that the questions, 'Should we have a age limit on what people can check out?' and '@CAPS1 did they let my child check that out?' with be answered. Age groups on books, is a great idea.",3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
1358,1,"@CITY1 @CAPS1, Computers are very helpful devices. Life would be very hard without them. Not only are the helpful, but they are fun and easy to use! I believe that computers have a great effect on people because you can keep in touch with family and friends, go on school websites and use search engines. Friends and family are extremely important in peoples lives. Computers can help you keep in touch with them! the @NUM1 applications that I mostly use are @ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS2, and @CAPS3. @ORGANIZATION1 is a free online application that you can download to your computer, add your friends, and video chat! using this, I keep in touch with my @CAPS4, my friend who moved, and even a friend from @LOCATION2! @CAPS2 (@ORGANIZATION3 instant messeger) is where you can send messages to friends and get instant replies! It is just like text messaging, only through computers. Lastly, @CAPS3 is a website where you can add friends from all around the world! I am friends with tons of family that I don't get to see very often, a friend who moved to @LOCATION3, and many other people that have moves! @CAPS3, @CAPS2, and @ORGANIZATION1 are great ways to keep in touch with other people! When you are home sick from school and need to make up school work, instead of calling a friend from each of your classes, go to the school's webpage! All teachers should have their own website that you can get from there. On their pages, they should have posted homework, quizzes/tests schedule, favorite links, projects, and their e-mail address. I find this very helpful because even if you don't understand you homework, you can e-mail you teacher! Not only do school website have teachers pages, but they also have lunch menus, events coming up, the school address and phone number, and many more! School could be a lot more difficult without a website. Do you ever have a question but nobody has the answer to it? www.Google.com has the answer to everything! you can find webpages, videos, pictures, translators, etc. Google is not the only search engine on the internet, there is also @CAPS6, @ORGANIZATION2!, @LOCATION4, @CAPS7, @LOCATION1, etc. These can all help you find answers, pictures, videos and many more! I often use these to find pictures for a school project, webpages for research, translators to check my spanish homework and videos to show my friends! if we did not have search engines, life would be a lot harder. Computers, as you can tell, are extremely helpful, easy, and fun to use. People love them and use them all the time. I hope that you agree with computers having a great effect on people! Staying in touch with family and friends, having a good education, and finding answers within a click is the easiest way to go!",5.0,5.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
11996,5,"In this excerpt from the book ""Home: the blue prints of our lives"" Narciso Rodriguez describes his first home in @LOCATION1. The feeling of this story is first loving with how @CAPS1 explains his parents sacrifice ""they-came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends, and careers in the country they loved."" This story also gave a feeling of closeness and how ""family had nothing to do with being a blood relative' @CAPS1 and his family opened up there house to many people. This story also gave a warm feeling by the story of his family celebrating together in paragraph seven. Overall the story had a happy mood to it showing love, kindness, and what a family should be like",2.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
3210,2,"You gotta admit, although you would like your kids to have freedom, @CAPS3 all of them are responsible enough to handle @CAPS1. You could blabber in their ear all day about '@CAPS1's responsible to do this and @CAPS3 do this.' and they will go out and do @CAPS1 anyways. Trust me, I'm a teenager. I know. So there are certin things that you have to take away from them in order to keep them from getting distracted on what @CAPS2 matters in their teenage years. And that is schoolwork.     If school systems allowed there to be offensive or innapropriate materials on their shelves, I just know kids would find themselves to be...well... 'distracted'. And when I say innapropriate, I don't only mean on sexual terms, I mean for school. You would like to think that they would possibly save @CAPS1 for when they checked out and went home and did their work first but, like I stated before, kids are going to do what they want. And what they want to do is @PERCENT1 of the time @CAPS3 schoolwork. They would rather just sit down, crack open a magazine, and let their eyes glaze over at the sights of celebrities and new scandals.      School work is a very important thing in teenagers lives, and I feel that when they are in school they should stay focused on schoolwork and activities. If they wanted to have free time to go and read magazines, they should do @CAPS1 at home. Offensive books should @CAPS3 be there to only distract the teenager from school. @CAPS1's unneccesary. But with public libraries, @CAPS1's a whole new story.     I beleive that nothing should be censored from a public library because people go their on their own free will. I know I personaly go there for research and for the sheer joy of reading, as do many other people. @CAPS1's your choice if you are responsible enough to keep focused on work or get distracted because @CAPS3 only do teenagers go there, but adults do too. @CAPS1 is unacceptable for there to be only educational books because who knows what your there for? The library is for people to go and read, whether @CAPS1's just for the heck of @CAPS1 or for school.     @CAPS3 everyone is responsible. Especially @CAPS3 teenagers. So that's why I personally beleive offensive or innapropriate materials should @CAPS3 be allowed in school libraries, but allwowed in public libraries. Although equal rights and freedom in necessary, schoolwork is too important to let kids get distracted from @CAPS1. @CAPS1 is the key to their future",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
14940,6,"Although the idea for turning the mast at the top of the Empire State building into a docking area for dirigibles was a highly clever idea, it was not a very safe one at all. One ""reason why dirigibles could not moor the Empire State Building was an existing law against airships flying to low over urban areas. This law left the idea of the mast as a failure before construction even began, but the workers failed to notice this law. Another obstacle that added difficulty to the construction was how much pressure having the dirigibles moored to the building added to the base of the building. This caused another @MONEY1 to be spent trying to fix this problem. A third factor that made the idea of setting up a mast even more difficult came straight from nature itself. The winds that high off the ground made manuvering the dirigible in such a small space very difficult. This was proven when ""In December 1930, the U.S Navy Dirigible' Los Angeles' approach the mooring mast but could not get close enough to tie up because of forceful winds.",3.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
1510,1,"I personally believe that computersdo benefit society in a lot of ways. It can give you all the information you need with just a click of a button, entertainment is easy to find by searching the internet, and most importantly, it improves communication between people. One way computers benefit society is, by making it easier for everyone to get information about something. This is needed, especially in school. It can help kids get their information about the person they are writing about in their report.Getting information easily on the internet can also help people in other ways. What if someone needed to get the hospital's phone number in case of an emergency? He can use the computer to help him find that phone number. Another way computers benefit society is by allowing us to get any form of entertainment easily. This is what majority of the people in our society rely on. Alot of people use the computer to play games, listen to music, and watch online videos. If someone was bored right now, he or she could use the computer to play fun games. What if that person thought it was a little quiet in his or her room? He or she could then use the computer to listen to music. Without computers we would probably be really bored for the rest of our lives. Finally, and most importantly, computers help improve communication between people. This is probably what everyone uses the computer for. Now you can send electronic mail to your friends in just seconds, post and view pictures of your family or relatives and you can even use an instant messanger to write to your friend and get messages from your friend in the fastest speed possible! Without computers, communication between others would be very hard. As you can see, computers can give you information easily, entertainment is not hard to find, and it can even improve communication between people around our society and the world.! Computers are very helpful to us and improves everything about the way we live.",4.0,5.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,23.0
13554,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is a very satisfactory mood. The author uses a satisfactory tone, too, especially when the author is explaining what a family is. Near the end of the memoir it has a very satisfactory mood, partly because it is near the end and they are ending the memoir, and also it is explaining what a family is. The mood of the memoir is also interesting because the author uses information of Narciso Rodriguez's life to help explain what a family is. The mood created by the author in the memoir is very satisfactory and interesting.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
6852,3,"The cyclist in “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed @CAPS1” was riding through the California dessert in June. This dry, bare setting made it impossible to find any source of water. The only time that this cyclist found water was when it @NUM1 and tasting of battery acid. There was nowhere for him to find water for miles. This lack of water and scorching heat made him travel slow and wearily. He even says that he could only go 12 mph in a 55 mph zone. By taking the advise of the old men and taking a “short cut”, the cyclist past through ghost towns with no water. This “short cut” prolonged his trip, most likely by hours If he had gone through populated area despite the fact that it is a longer path, there would have been more water to drink, which would allow him to go faster. The dry, hot setting of the old men’s “short cut” made this cyclist’s trip last much longer than nessiarry.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
1339,1,"would you rather read six books to get that one recipie, or would you rather look it up in less than ten minutes? I think computers have an positive effect on people you can learn about places you want you need in minutes and you can talk to your friends inline Computers have a good effect on people because, you can learn about places you want to wish this @DATE1. For example, @PERSON5 wanted to wish @LOCATION2 this @DATE1 but when he looked online he saw how @LOCATION2 just had an earthquake so he changed his plans this @DATE1. @CAPS1, @PERSON2 said ""I wanted to go to @LOCATION3 this @DATE1 but I know about it, so I searched on google and figure thatb this @DATE1 I will go to @LOCATION3"" that is one positive thing computers effect on people because you can learn about places you want to visit in the @DATE1. Computers have a positive effect on people because you can @CAPS1 find what you need in minutes. For example. @PERSON3 was looking for a cake recipie, he was looking many cook books but find it, so he took thru his labtop and found it in under five minutes, @CAPS1, computer experts @PERSON1 said ""@CAPS2 of rooming thru books and books for information you nead why not go to the and the truxt me its much"" @CAPS3, computers have a good effect on people because you can talk to your friends online, for example, @PERSON6 said ""I moved from @CAPS4 to @LOCATION1 and I was sad to leave my bestfriend but knod how I can talk to her on @CAPS5."" @CAPS1, @PERSON4 was in bed sick and coudnt go ourside to visit his friends so he kelf intouch with them on @CAPS7. Computers have a positive effect on people because you can learn about places you want to visit this @DATE1. You can find what you need in minutes, and you can talk to your friends online just remember even computer report @PERSON1 said "" me its much easier""",5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
13346,5,"The mood described by the auther was warm and full of happiness. In the memoir, the auther @ORGANIZATION1 talks about the importance of his family Which always brings a comforting feeling. He Shared that he ""was born into a two-family blond-brick building in the Ironbound section of Newark, New jersey"" but that it did not matter where he lived but who he lived with. The mood you get when you read this memoir is mixed because Of the way he describes his parents life, his life and his home. When he says ""the innocence of Childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the backdrop to life in our warm home"" he is talking about how close they all are and that, that is what matters, when you read that you feel the comfort, happiness, joy and compassion that he feels toward his life, his parent and everyone around him.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
10309,4,The girl is determend to win. She wen’t and took a test for a flower and she did not pass and she went back sad and emoshond she told her grandmother that these flowers are not like the ones at-at she cold not say at home because it took too much pain and her grandmother said they are not like the real wones.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
10447,4,"I think the author concludes the story with that paragraph to show a new beginning. The geese are comming back to restart their life there, the hibiscus will be blooming, and she will re-take the test. At the beggining Saeng was depressed about having to leave her old country and grandmother. Saeng began to feel “A wave of loss so deep and strong that it stung Saeng’s eyes now swept over her”. She remembered how some of these plants grew wild in bushes or between cracks in the sidewalk. Saeng saying what she did in the last paragraph is her. showing that she found comfort and confidence in the hibiscus. Memories of the past showed her the way and now she is going to retake her drivers test.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
4726,2,"Every single person has there own beliefs and disbeliefs when it comes to books, music or anything in life for that matter. What @MONTH1 be a bad and vulgar book in our opinion @MONTH1 not be bad in others opinionated views. Everyone will have there own views about a book, music, movies, or magazines. That's why censorship is good in a public place like a library. Does that mean we're saying that you can't like what you want to like, listen to what you want to lisetn to, or watch what you want to watch in your own home? No, by censoring all that in public places like librarys or say video stores your helping fight a lot of trouble and concerns that could happen in the future.          Then again censoring movies, music, books, and magazines in a library could also be a bad thing. Not everyone is going to like the same things or be interested in all the same movies or books. At the same time though we can't censor every single thing someone doesn't like. By removing something because one parent has a complaint over their child watching, or reading a book they thought was too 'vulgar' then your giving that right to any parent that complains about their child doing that. It's not the librarys responsibility to watch over everyones child, to make sure they watch and read what their parents want them to. Kids will be kids and they'll do what they want to do.          By censoring and taking things off shelfs of librarys your not preventing them from watching a movie they shouldn't be seeing, or reading about book they're not supposed to be reading. Censoring librarys is just like censoring words in movies, by doing that it's not stopping your child from hearing or learing vulgar language. Children now in this day and age hear more vulgar words in school then they do in movies and television.       What does the word offensive really mean to a person? Everyone has their own opinion on whats offensive and whats not. Like i said, everyone has there own opinions and views on life and everything in it. You can't remove everything off the shelfs because one parent doesn't think it's right for their child or other children to be seeing, looking at, or listening to. We all have freedom to look at what we want and listen to the kind of music we feel like listening to. By taking things off the shelfs that maybe other people like oppose to others then your taking that right away as a @CAPS1 citizen. Censoring on some things like, sex scenes in movies, or maybe vulgar language in music is alright in my opinion. Taking books off the shelf because you don't like the way its written or you don't like the person who wrote it, or you don't like the kind of language the author decided to use in it isn't alright to me, you're pushing the limit on that one. Books teach kids things everyday, books give children imagination. By taking books off shelfs i think you're hurting a childs ability to grow.      Censoring is a good and bad thing. It could hurt children or it could help their ability to grow. Censoring some things are a good thing, but like i said not everything with vulgar language should be censored, or vulgar scences. Sometimes in order to grow and live in this world children need to read and see the things we as people but in books and movies",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
9995,4,The author concludes the story with a paragraph taking the test again to show that the narrator @MONTH1 be upset about being in a new place but she will keep trying. The narrator gets upset when she knows the hibiscus is not like the one's from her old home. This upsets her because she probably misses things that she was used to before. The author uses that paragraph to show the narrator is strong and won’t give up on making things the way they were but also showing that she'll try to adapt to her new home. The author does this to show that you should keep trying at something that you love. The narrator will keep trying when the geese fly back and the hibiscus is budding. So the author is saying try if you fail and set goals to never give up.,3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
4190,2,"@CAPS1 us? @CAPS1 now? Those questions just might be flashing through your head right now.  The reason @CAPS1 I am writing to you today is to give you my point of view on the censorship in the worlds libraries today.  In this context hopefully I will be able to enlighten you on the subject, also with the questions of '@CAPS1 us?', and '@CAPS1 now?'.     Censorship, what does that mean to you?  To me that means censoring many things in the world to protect it from children who are under the age, not people who are old enough to handle inapropiate things.  In todays libraries there are many uncensored things, that happen to be in the adult section of the libraries.  Things such as books, movies, and magazines should not be removed from the adult section, also labeled as the uncensored section, if that is where they rightfully belong.  Now you are probably wondering, @CAPS1 us.     In today's world many people want to protect their children from harmful things, such as uncensored materials. @CAPS1 us?  In the world today there are so many laws, regulations, and even authorities protecting our rights. Now many people want to try to get around the government protecting our rights.  Many want to protect their youth from some of the so called 'harmful' things in society.  Today you can try to create a law or bill that @MONTH1 make it through the government, now some of them are trying to remove the uncensored material.         @CAPS1 now?  Throught the years the world has changed, everything has become easier to have access to.  Now one thing they think they @MONTH1 be able to do is remove the adult section of the libraries if enough people stand to fight for it, it will not happen.  There is an adult section for adults not children, people need to realize that.       In the end, the adult section needs to stay in our libraries. Some of the material in the section is not always bad, sometimes it contains material over war, and recessions.  When people are of age they are allowed to enter the areas, not any younger.  Don't punish the rest of the world for one libraries mistake of letting children have access to adult material, make the children realize it wasn't their area to be in.  Then many parents @MONTH1 see it's not just some of the world, that the whole world is exactly the same way. The books, music, magazines, and etc., need to stay where they are",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
15885,6,"In the excerpt, ""The Mooring Mast,"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle was in paragraph 6, the excerpt says, ""one obstacle to their expanded use in New York City was the lack of a suitable landing area."" This means that the architects needed to build enough area to land the dirigibles, precisely and carefully. Another obstacle was in paragraph @NUM1, which said, ""the greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself."" This is explaining that the outcome of nature can be predicted, but it cannot be controlled. The amount of ""violent air currents"" can disturb the landing of dirigibles and it is ""neither practical nor safe"" for the dirigibles to dangle high above the pedestrians that are on the street. Unfortunately, Al Smith's plan to able the dirigibles to moor at the Empire State Building was unsuccessful. There was a law stated in paragraph @NUM2, that made ""it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approached the area"". Instead of using the mooring mast, the dirigibles gave way to airplanes.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
14909,6,"The builders of the empire state building faced many obstacles. In the excerpt said ""the mooring mast of the empire state building was destined to fail."" A somehow unseen obstacle was the fact that ""most dirigibles from outside the United States used hydrogen instead of helium"" which is a much more unstable gas and if a dirigible caught fire and went down over New York many civilians would be killed or wounded. Another obstacle the builders faced was ""the winds at the top of the building were constantly shifting."" This would make it very difficult to ancor a dirigible down to the mast and as the excerpt said they could not use lead weights hanging from the underside of the dirigible because they would be hanging over citizens below. Those are the problems faced by the builders of the empire state building.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
4096,2,"What is @CAPS1, @CAPS1 is whay made this country the who we are today! There are manny ways people can exspress them self in todays world, and it just so happens the art of writing acting and art are a huge part to the way people exspress them self. Because all of us are different and have our different veiws on the subjuct. Im not going to preach to you about what is right and what is wrong. im just going to share a few prior exspereances. Now all of theas were from being in a libraries. Some of them in smaller towns, others in the hart of a larger city. There is evean a story of a man and wife, in the suburbs of a larger city. It is also amazing to see what is exsepted in differeant parts of our country.      Well it all started when I was sitting at a small table in the back of the @LOCATION1 librarie. It was a small groupe of friends and we were all working on our reaserch papers. But we then saw a man and a woman, what I proseaved as husband and wife. They were looking at the magazines on the shelf directly infront of us. As he picked up a @CAPS2 @CAPS3 magazin she looked over to him and proclamed, that is so derogitory against woman. So he put it down and walked out. Wandering what was so bad about this magazin I walked over to the rack to see a woman standing in her underware with a classic car. About a mounth later I was walking in my local librare droping off some books for my mom. Instantly when opening the door I hear to people having a heated conversation about the painting they had hanging on the back wall, in the adult section. Wich was of a woman with her chest exsposed, now mind you this was not a modern painting it was rather old, with the paint slowly  pealing off. Now that painting was there for manny years with out any one saying any thing and that was the argument made by the head librarean. There were manny people standing in the area that this was taking place, and manny of them were not evean willing to hear what the woman had to say, because the painting turned out to be very famous and has been there since before some of the middle aged people in there could reamber.      As you can see there are manny differant veiws on what is exsepted in the modern time. Advertizement is all over and manny magazines use peoples bodys to draw people to their add, so they can try to sell their product. I belive there should be a line drawn when it comes to that kind of addvertzing. They @MONTH1 have to come to a agreement that each magazine should say if it contains the kind of adult content like that. if they were to make this a law they should have to put it right in the front cover so you know if you pic that magazine up, you are at risk of seeing things like that. altho when it comes to a painting of times before the @DATE1 and people had grown up in that same area for years and have been seeing this painting since they were yong too, I do not think that painting should have been taken off the wall. There is a fine line when it comes to the information being exseptible or not that is why I do belive there should be some kind of rating system whith the book and etc",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
9582,4,The author concludes this story with this paragraph because the flower is told about all through the story and the author puts when the hubiscius is budding then I will take that test again.,0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,1.0
4240,2,"I think they souldnt be pulled off the shelves because everyone has different opions . one person @MONTH1 think a book is offensive but the next @MONTH1 not. Some people @MONTH1 think any books with god or jesus in the are offensive but that @MONTH1 just be because it is not there religion. If every person took off a book that they thought was offensive  there would be no books left. Because people think differently. Or some @MONTH1 not like the @PERSON1 books because of the violence and goryness but to some people those are there favorite books, so that would be unfair to the ones who like the books that others dont. There are many books out there that not everybodys gonna like the difference is how you think and what you think is right and wrong",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,1.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
12920,5,"The author created a very positive and optimistic mood in the memoir. He talked about how his fascinating Cuban culture was portrayed throughout his home. The author said, ""passion Cuban music (which I adore to this day) filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen."" This quote shows his love and pride for his culture. In the memoir, the author also tells about his extreme thankfulness towards his parents. He admired their courage. Narciso felt that his parents did all they could to give their family a good life and that they were successful. Narciso said, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" This shows that he has a genuine appreciation for what they did. He believed that family is everyone that you love and are close to, not just blood relatives. Narciso considered his community to be one giant family. This memoir had an upbeat tone due to the positivity and optimism of the author.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
7290,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist because depending on how the setting is, is how much skill they need. Like if their going down hill then they really only need to know how to control the bike. If their going up a mountain with lots of bumps they need to have some skill. Usually if their riding in a shady area then the wear clothes to keep them cool. But if their going to be in the sun the they need to wear light clothes. The setting affects the rider very much.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,1.0
15680,6,"The  builders of the Empire State Building faced many problems in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. A @NUM1 foot dirigible would add stress to the buildings Frame. Most dirigibles out of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium. Hydrogen is highly flammable. The acciedent of Hindenburg also raised alarm. Hindenburg set fire on Lakehurst in New Jersey. This showed the builders how much worse the acciedent could have been if it had happened over a densely populated area, such as New York. Another factor were the wind currents. They were constantly @CAPS1. This would cause the back Of the dirigible to sway and move about. There was also a preexisting law stating that airships could not fly too low over urban areas. These are some of the reasons obstacles the builders fased in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building.",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
16618,6,"In the @CAPS1, the docking of dirigibles had many issues. One, boarding passengers would be very difficult as the dirigible will @CAPS2 from a gust of wind. Second, the gases used to make afloat are highly flammable, and explode quite easily.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
7370,3,"Some things that affected the cyclist was the terrain changing into a flat road that was replace by short, rolling hills. Then he came to a rough road. Another obstacle from the cyclist was the tar-like substance that came out the rusted water pump followed by brackish water feeling somewhere of @NUM1 hundred degrees. Everytime he pumped it wouldn’t cool down and the water tasted like battery acid. He was hitting his water bottle regularly that is why he needed new water. The cyclist was travelling through the high deserts of California and the sun was starting to beat down so he was dehydrated. The snake blocked the pavement in front of him that looked like diamond back.  ",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
15777,6,"Many obstacles occured for the builers of the Empire State building and allowing dirigibles to dock there. One of these obstacles was the mooring mast itself. The winds on top of the Empire State Building were constantly shifting and if the dirigible was tied to the mooring mass it would swivel around the mooring mast. Another obstacle the builders experienced during this process was the already existing law not allowing airships to fly too low over urban areas. Due to the fact that the Empire State building was in New York, an urban area, the dirigable idea would have most likely never worked. The dirigable was unable to fulfill its destiny and the obstacles the builders faced were the main reasons.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
1091,1,"Dear editor of the @CAPS1 @CAPS2, People say that technology is affecting everybody left and right. Computers actively help us with our daily lives. It helps us do project for school, let us understand culture around the world, and gives us the ability to talk and connect with friends and family everywhere. Our shool makes us do tons of project and the computer is our main course. If you want to go somewhere far away, you're most likely to research it, and then plan on going. It is also might be used to talk with friends on facebook, twitter, and @CAPS3. Computers help us learn and communicate. To start off, as an eight grades, we are prepared to go to high school. Fortunately, it means we do projects, reports, and research on the computer. The computer enables us to find information for a project, or construct a diagram or data table for a survey. Many people use this method for jobs. People do reports on celebrities and famous people from history. Books can't always give the information you are looking for, so they look up that persons name, and they will find our hundred of web sites that give information and photographs of that person. In addition to, computers let you book flights, buy, tax rates. Sometimes, people don't always to go and drive to a local car, so they go online to a website that sells, and they are able to look at all of the features of the car, the price, and mileage. The only way you can get tickets is if you go onto the internet. They have websites that let book whatever kind of flights you want. It can be to go to florida, or it can be a flight to @LOCATION1. If you also how the economy is doing, you can look up tax rates and how find out how much our country is in debt. You can even find out how much an average family pays - every year. Computers can be very they resourceful at @CAPS2. It gives capability to do more than you can imagine. Most importantly, computers have created a way for you talk to friends and family around the globe. Facebook and twitter are the new things of the century. Facebook and twitter let you talk to friends, post photos and talk about your personal life. They have a new thing now where you can play lifestyle games. @CAPS3 is not as popular anymore and doesn't have as many cool things. It only let's you talk to friends and that's why no one uses it anymore. People want to be able to do more than just talk. It comes to my attention that computers have over time. Computers these days enable you to talk with friends, do research and projects, and let you book flights and buy cars. Our school's curriculum has many projects and reports. They can be done only by the help of a computer. You can research people and places and or get pictures. You can also book flights for far away trips and buy cars and other items off the internet. We even have the capability to talk with friends on facebook and twitter. Computers have a positive influence on people.",4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,23.0
683,1,"Do you ever have time to read? Do you ever spend time with your family? Or do you ever have time to go outside? Well, if you don't, it's because you spend to much time on the computer. Computers are bad for society. And I will show you why. There are many great activities you can do such as reading a book. Instead of reading on the computer, read a novel, you can ask your parents to drive you to the library. I understant that if you need to do research you can do it on the computer but in the library there are all sorts of books such as fiction, nonfiction, science books and many more. Every intelligent citizen would @CAPS1 that computer @MONTH1 have wrong information. I remember when I was doing a project on @ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS2 of @CAPS3 music. I used the computer to research who killed her and it said that a man killed her. I went to the library and checked out a book on her and it said that a woman killed her actually. In addition books help you get more accurate facts. Every caring, loving human cares about spending time with their family. How can you spend more time with your family? Well, you can visit some cousins on the weekends. Your family can make parties. I recall having a party for my baby brother's baptism, everyone came. I got to see my aunts, and cousins that I didn't see in years. I understand that if you have a far away relative you would use the computer to chat with them or see them on webcam, but why not take a vacation were they live and go by car, that would bring the family even closer. I @CAPS1 what that is like. My family lives in @LOCATION2 and I visit them every year. We have family reunions, maybe your family can do that too. As a result, family is important, so don't let the computer ruin yours. Do you ever go outside anymore? Is the computer getting in your way? You have to check your e-mail, reply, go on your @CAPS4, its hungry, you have to do your daily activities. What about your health? Getting fresh air can be good. These are many great things you can do outside. For example, you can jump rope, go to the park, go swimming, play in the snow and many more. I remember the time my cousin came over and we went to the park. We stayed these until the park closed. It was very entertaining. Every citizen in @LOCATION1 wants to be healthy. Going outside can help you, run through the woods, or even jump roping is outside and excersizing. In addition just going outside can do more. Now is the time. Why wait another minute? You can either be all alone on the computer or be outside, or be with your family, even the library isn't lonely. Computers are a bad habit, even though we might need them, its better safe, then sorry to do it the old fashion way.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
10328,4,The author concluded the story in the paragraph. She doesn’t want Saeng vows the whole room to herself where it’s quite when she is taking the test.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
6113,3,"The setting easily can affect the cyclist in many ways. The area in which the cyclist was in the seemed to be abandoned which doesn’t give a well thinking to this person . If a town was abandoned or a road was, automatically then won’t be any noticable building structures for a while. Also, the and and shape of the road seemed to be very dangerous for the cyclist not only because of the narrow and rocky path but because of the wildlife. In the text, it says how a diamond back snake, poisoness was directly infront of the cyclist. That example explains on how the wildlife might exceed to more dangerous creature. Finally, the temperature, whether it was hot or cold he cyclist was limited to water & being completely dehydrated was a huge caution for the cyclist. The conditions of the setting of the setting the cyclist was in became a disadvantage for him.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
12824,5,"The mood created by the author is very greatfull and thankful. The author shows how greatful and thankful they are in this memoir When they said, ""I will always be greatful to my parents for their love and sacrifice. I've often told them what they did was a much more courageous thing that I could have ever done. I've often told them of my admiration for their Strength and perseverance and I've thanked them repeatedly. But, in reality, there is no way to express my gratitude for the spirit of generosity impressed upon me at such an early age and the demonstration of how important family and friends are. These are two lessons that my parents did not just tell me. They showed me With their lives, and those teachings have been the base of my life.""- In my conclusion this is why I think the authors mood in the story is very thankful and greatful.",2.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
750,1,"Yes, I agree with the concern that expert have. I say this because its true people get on the computer for a long time and forget about their family, there is also all kinds of danger online, and lastly your brain is not getting enough work out. Don't you think all of this is true? Well, then if you still don't believe me I'll prove it to you. First, people get addicted to the computer they forget about there family. Insted of beign on the computer just looking for stuff like myspace or facebook, but they should spend time with their families playing games like @CAPS1, @CAPS2, or @CAPS3. I say this from a personal expirience, it wasn't me it was my cousin @PERSON1 he got addicted to the computer so much that everytime his family tried to do something fun together they would always end up fighting because he didn't want to go. Secondly, people can be facing major danger online, for example when you got to those chat sessions where you meet people supposley your age, but it might not always be that way everytime on the news you see stories where old people try act like @NUM1 year olds, but they aren't they just want to do bad stuff. So you can be facing a lot of dangerd online. Lastly, by beign on the computer your not letting your brain get the good workout or exersice it needs. Your just letting it be there, but instead you can be reading a book or do a word seach puzzle; these are all good idea for making your brain exersice. On a recent research experts say that people spend time reading and exersicing their brains do very good on test, but people who spend most of the time in the computer fail test. So don't you think I'm right? Don't you think that if you spend to much time on a computer you have less time with your family. You can be facing serious danger, and your brain is not getting the exercise it needs. Did I convinced you yet?",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
13168,5,"The mood created by @ORGANIZATION1 in the memoir was a peaceful, loving mood. Narciso says that his @NUM1 room home usually had someon staying there temporarily until they could get back on their feet. In Narciso's neighborhood despite customs, all cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship.",0.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
5984,3,The cyclist was riding through a tower when he stopped for directions. These old men told him to take a short cut and he did and got lost. He was in a ghost town in the desert. In conclusion the desert is hot.,0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
4328,2,"No, the books and etc. should not be moved ,because anybody can be interested in them. Someone could come in the library looking for any of them items and can't find it because the library removed them.      First, there will be no reason for removing the books from the library unless more new books and etc. are coming in. Everyone is into different materials, books and stuff. That's why I say do not remove the items. People might come in the library looking for a book that they want. If that person can find it they might complain, or take there bussiness else where. Then the library could start losing bussiness.     Second, if they library start losing bussines it might be forced to close down.Then if the library close down the people who come there often won't have no place to study or work or nothing. What if those people don't have transportation they will not be able to get to another library. The owner of the library can lose money if it close down, because everyone don't have computer's and books at home. They can come do there research and rent books.     Third, some people go to the library for peace and quiet, and the library is there only place. Little children go to the library looking for books and etc. to and if they can't find the book they want they might start crying. If they start crying people who are working can be disturbed. Then that person or people who are disturbed might leave and never come back and thats money lost. Students school's might not have the book they are looking for, and they come to the library and the library don't have it that student won't have a book.     In conclusion, these are some reason and examples why I don't believe the books and etc. should be taken out of the library. Someone can be really interested in them items and they come to the library search for them and can't find them.",2.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
1565,1,"Dear, local newspaper people @CAPS1's lot of computer that have help us with are planet. Like not letting us dive are cars for stuff. Learninging was easyer for every one with computers too. Then have comunications with people with computers. We should hate a box the has information in it, we should be glad we have something like that in are home. Why we don't need-in us cars sometimes if you have a computer. Like some people have desided that can have @CAPS1 own busniss so they us the computer to make one. Then if you don't want to waste time driveing to buy a te-shirt you can just go on the computer and buy one. Next the more we drive the more polution git in are atmisphier. If we did not have computers are planet will get @PERCENT1 more pulluted. Each year. Now do you want that to happen to the world? Last, we wont be wasting gas on are cars because we are using computers. If the computer was taken away people will still choose the lasy way and just drive cars. Learning is easyer for every one with computers like we don't have to look in a book to find something. Then @CAPS1 different learning programs to teach us a different language. Like for lots of people have college for people who did not. Last, it can help us do are homework if we have on it. I realy my second brain, it has . Now lot of. Third, communication are going to be a hole lot with computers. Say you dont have and you to send a lot. The computer to help you, it will allow you to talk to, then you can talk to other people like the japaness who know english so you now how @CAPS1 life is to yours. You can ask people question. Or just for fun you can play mind game with other people. I got to do alot of chating with my old friend by this and I miss them but if the only way I can talk to them with out my parents yelling at me bacause the phone bill is so high. The greater or go of a computer make us know we don't have do that many stuff. Like polute are air. Then we can learn fast without a book. Last, to alow us to talk to my old friend, so can every one beleve me that the computer is not that bad.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
10306,4,The author concludes the story with that paragraph because she is not giving up and she will take test agin and the stelent will grow agin in the @DATE1.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
6153,3,The affect of the setting are two old timers sitting on their front porch out in the desert since carter was in office. It was starting to become daylight and he  had to walk @NUM1 miles to get to the next town. So he gets on a bike and rides to the next town. The speed limit is 55 miles per hour and he  was going 12 miles per hour just like the waterflow. He was riding up and down rolling hills. He finally got to the next town to live.,0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
9480,4,I think that the concluding paragraph means after everything   else   important and what is meant to happen happens then she will take the test because its  basically the last  thing has to happen and I think she will pass it because it meant to happen.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
1766,1,"Man has always been interested in technology. Computers are just one part. I think that computers have a positive effect on people. They teach hand eye coordination, saves trees, and allows people to learn about everything. Hand-eye coordination is a key part in our every day lives. Driving a car or writting all invile hand-eye coordination. I remember a few years ago I didn't have a great hand-eye coordination I had trouble catching a ball. Now days I spend up to on hour and a half on the computers. I have noticed my hand get neater and I can catch a balls with ease now. Do you want to be the one to crash your car because you have bad hand-eye coordination? Computers not only increase your hand-eye coordination they save trees too. Using a computer dosn't need any paper. You can read and write with out using a single sheet of paper. Since the computer @PERCENT1 of tree cutting has stopped. Saving trees help us stay alive. Trees put out the oxegyn that we breath in. Some say that computers are causing people to spend less time enjoying nature. I think that if it wasn't for computers we wouldn't have much nature to enjoy anyway. Lastly computer help people all around the world learn about almost anything. I scince kid, the head scientist says that ""with the computer we are able to toll the world of our discoveries much."" @CAPS1. @PERSON1 say ""@CAPS2 many people are laying had their die to the computer, they learn @CAPS2 many nutrition facts from the health sites"". Thanks to the computer we found a doctor to help my dad get fixed. The average people can learn about non average things any day. There are even dictionarys on the internet with many diffent translations that you would normily need about @NUM1 books to do. The computer is one of the greatest techlonagicly advances to this day. It has help our world is @CAPS2 many different ways too. Hand-eye coordination is @CAPS2 important and is preserving our environment. If you don't have knowledge you cant get anywhere in life. Our whole world senses is. ",3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
15196,6,"The main obstacle in allowing dirigibles to dock at the Empire State building's Mooring Mast was safety. ""Most dirigibles... used hydrogen... and hydrogen is highly flammable."" ""The owners... realized how much worse that accident could have been if it had taken place above downtown New York."" If an accident were to happen with a dirigible it would be putting hundreds of people's lives at risk. That is why this idea was unpractical and unsafe.Another obstacle in allowing dirigibles to moor at the Empire State Building's mast was nature itself. ""The winds on top were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" This would cause the back of the ship to swivel around the mast. Lead weights could be used, but that was neither practical nor safe where they would be dangling high above pedestrians.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
10348,4,At this time she vowed to retake a test cause of how the flowers will always come and go but her grades will be there only one time for her school work. Instead  she rather garden then do school work.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
12305,5,"The mood in the @ORGANIZATION1 is displayed as happieness and appreciation. Narciso understands how much his parents had given up for him by moving from Cuba to @LOCATION1. They also have always stood by his side and made sure there was only positive attitudes around him. He appreciates this so much he ends the @ORGANIZATION1 saying ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home"". by this he is saying it was a house that could shelter you, but a home is somewhere you want to be with family where you feel safe and comfortable. The happieness comes from the appreciation because you cant appreciat something and it doesn't make you make a little bit happier. his happieness is also portrayed in paragraph @NUM1 where he starts by saying ""I will always be greatfull to my parents for their love and sacrifice"".",2.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
14991,6,"During the Building of the Mast, the builders faced many obstacles in allowing dirigibles to dock there. The @CAPS1 obstacle was the building itself. By adding the mast lots of stress would be added to the buildings frame and therefore strengthening modifications had to take place before the mast was erected. Another problem was how to tether the Blimp properly since they are generally landed in wide open fields which allowed for wieghts to be place in the front and back of the blimp, they could be secured properly. But since the blimp was going to be attached to a mast, there was no way to secure the back of the blimp and therefore no safe way to tie the blimp down. And finally the last problem builders faced was the how to even get the blimp docked. Since there was such high winds on top of the building there was no feasible way to dock the blimp in less it was perfect weather. Ultimately all those problems made it so the mast could never be used.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
15465,6,"The main obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there stemmed from the bad location. The dirigibles would be docking 1,250 feet above one of the busiest cities in the world. This would create three problems for the docking of the dirigibles. The first problem is hydrogen is what was used in dirigibles and it is extremely flammable. If a dirigible were to explode above downtown New York many people would be killed. This means not many people are going to want the dirigibles docking there. If the Empire State Building had not been above such a densely populated area they may have not had this problem. The next difficulty would be the fact that at that altitude in New York City there are violent wind currents that are always changing. This makes it hard for the conductors to dock the dirigible and it also could possibly cause the dirigible to hit something and pop. So again the dirigible is falling into downtown New York and killing many people. This is another reason it was a bad location. It needed to be in a place where there were more stable wind currents. The final obstacle was there was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. This meant that even if the other to factor disappear there was a law the builders should have known about that forbade their plans. Like the author said the Empire State Building was destined to never fulfill its purpose.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
9947,4,"The author of the story, Winter Hibiscus, concluded the story with that pharagraph because the author wanted to show that Saeng is finally going to start getting used to her new home. She won’t spend so much time dreaming about her past. “And in the warm moist shelter of the greenhouse, Saeng broke down and wept.” I believe that thats what she needed to get on with her life.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
5986,3,"The essay “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” describes a man’s bicycle ride through California. Now, California is very hot during the summer, which is when the cyclist is riding. This setting greatly affects the man’s journey. It made it very difficult for him to finish his ride. He drank most of his water in the beginning of his ride so he gets very dehydrated. The text states, “The water bottles contained only a few tantalizing sips.” As you can see the setting makes this man’s bikeride very hard.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
4543,2,"People @MONTH1 have a certain reason to take something off the shelves like books, magazines, @CAPS1, etc. Whether those reasons be personal or professional it rather important. Some @MONTH1 find the material offensive to themself. Others might find it inappropriate to have something like that available to the younger generation. And writing or music could be thought of as unneccessary and irrelevant.     The world holds many things that can be found offensive to someone. That someone could be an educated person or a high school dropout. Out of all of the stuff in the world someone is going to find something offensive to them or other people. It can be a phrase that an author uses or the name of a song. But to take something away from the people is not right and shouldn't be allowed unless it is highly offensive. They could choose to stay away from that sort of thing. Unless the offender is very public and offends pratically everyone, should it then be removed.     Other material could just be blatantly inappropriate for some to have access to. If there was a book on how to rob a bank or how to make cocaine then it should be removed because that would cause problems that could have never happened. People might learn how to do those things anyway but by allowing that to be public information would be like starting a fire that will get widely out of hand. Of course, anyone can get the notion to do something from anything they read but that is how they interpret it.     Some things out there are just inappropriate for the world and all the people on it. If you listen to a @CAPS2 and they singer or rapper starts using profanity and disrespecting a race or gender when they haven't done anything to anyone it would be unneccessary. Something like that should not be allowed in the first place and it is bad enough to be done to another singer but to talk about a race or culture in inexcusable. Or if a writer writes a story about someone, for example who just recently saved peoples lives, saying they were a horrible person and did terrible things to people when they only a little about the person and heard barely any of the story.     In conclusion, in certain instances the people should have the right to take away something that is extremely offensive not just to them but to a large amount of people.Or if the material can cause problems that should not have started. And if the writing or music is inappropriate to a race or culture should it be removed. Everyone has their rights and if writing, music, and videos are putting them down they should have the right for it to be taken from access.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
15693,6,The builders of the empire state building @CAPS3 many different obstacles in trying to allow dirigibles to dock there. The @CAPS1 @CAPS2 was to be able to design the mast without having to reconstruct a big part of the building. Also a big aspect of it was that they had to face was to be able to make it safe. These big dirigibles can be very flammable and having something that major in a very populated city like new york would be very risky and unsafe. The last problem they @CAPS3 was nature. Of course you canot change nature so this was a problem was there since the beggining but was probably overlooked or never even thought about. So this really never would of been able to suscesfuly work without any problems.,2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
10610,4,"The author of the story “Winter Hibiscus"" concludes the story with the motivational paragraph  because he/she wants to show the reeder that  Saeng is determined to adapt to her new life and home and overcome common  obstacles like a driver's test. Saeng had a hard time coping with her problem so she bought a hibiscus because it reminded her of home. I think that the line “and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take the test again."" from the last paragraph is a symbol for growing up and overcoming obstacles. The conclusion for the story is a nice ending.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
16015,6,"The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced by attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there were harsh. The builders, in theory, thought everything would work perfectly. They had to face that they did not do enough to see if there would be any problems with having the dirigibles dock there. As I read I noticed the building never fulfilled it's purpose. This was because most dirigibles from outside of the united states used hydrogen, not helium, hydrogen is very flammable. On May 6, 1937, the owners of the Empire State Building realized how much worse a fire could have been if it were to happen above a densely populated area such as downtown New York. So in reality this idea was not safe and the builders had to go through building it, having it all done. Then realizing the idea was not pursuable.",1.0,,,,,1.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
12633,5,"Narciso Rodriguez is very gracious and compassionate, and he will never forget the monumentous risk his parents made to leave everything behind to come to @LOCATION1 so he could have a better life. Narciso recalls how his parents had to take any job they could and ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family, knowing that they would do the same for us."" This past @DATE1 I was in @LOCATION2, @LOCATION3 and I had to stay with this family. This family was great to me, and I will never forget their uncany attitudes to give me whatever I want. When I read this passage this family immediatly popped into my mind. Narciso's mood is unbelievably grateful to levels most people don't have the chance to experience. Narciso will never forget his parents and the sacrifice they made for him.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
6150,3,"In the story, Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit, by Joe Kurmaskie, the cyclist faced many obstacles. For example, he had to get directions to Yosemite National Park, but the directions were from elder men, whose information was out of date. In addition, the cyclist had to decide which way to take when there was a fork in the road. He chose a path the old men said would have a town nearly eighteen miles down the road. Furthermore, the cyclist ran into flat roads that went to rolling hills, snakes blocking his path, and a dehydration state that could’ve killed him. In conclusion, this man overcame obstacles to get to Yosemite National Park.",2.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
6016,3,"The narrator in this story goes through a tough journey insisting of hope, challenge physical pain, despair, and relief. All of these are further developed by the settings where they take place, For example after taking advice from old men at a campsite, he is on his way through the deserts of California. If he had been almost anywhere else, his journey could have been much better. He could have gotten more reliable advice, or had been in a place where the towns were not miles and miles apart. Also, at one point he reaches a snake on the road. This could symbolize a decision, which was to go and how it will affect the outcome of his trip, or perhaps the decisions he had already made. To take advice from strangers and better yet he should use it. The irony continues as he becomes dehydrated and the flat land turns hilly. If that weren’t to happen he could have been more successful and healthy on his trip. The setting in this men’s story are necessary for if to have plot line and have the humour it possesses. If he were in the city, for example, he would not get lost and stranded, and therefore would have no story.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9258,4,"Mingfong Ho concludes “Winter Hibiscus” with the paragraph,”when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and the hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again."" This ending paragraph shows that Saeng will not give up in her struggle to adapt in this new place. Saeng has been going throug hard times; moving to the United States and failing her driver’s test. In the greenhouse Saeng even breaks down and crys. The hibiscus flower that saeng bought cost the family a lot of money, but to Saeng it was very important. This flower represented hope. When the flower buds again it would be the right time to take her driver’s test. The flower also represents adapting to a new place. As Saeng  adapts to the United States, the hibiscus adapts to the new garden. ",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
11833,5,"In Narciso Rodriguez's memoir from ""Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives"" he/she incorporated love and passion into the mood. You can tell this by how fondly and strongly Narciso talks about some things. ""Here, the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the backdrop to life in our warm houses."" In this one sentence alone, you could feel Narciso's passion and love for this home of the their's. Narciso puts a great deal of love and thankfulness into paragraph @NUM1 and @NUM2 when talking about his/her parents. ""It was here where I learned the real definition of 'family'... I will never forget how my parents turned the simple house into a home."" These two sentences are most likely the strongest in Narciso's memoir, these two are also the ones filled with the most passion and meaning. As you can see, in Narciso Rodriguez's memoir from ""Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives"", the mood Narciso puts in it is love and passion. ",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
9520,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph for many reasons. The first reason is to show that Saeng is determined young girl. By vowing to take the “test” again, she shows she is determined and not giving up. Another reason is because the author wanted to ampasize the importance of the idea of Saeng personality.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
9699,4,"The author, Minfong Ho, concludes the story with Saeng vowing to take the test in the spring when the geese return, the snow melts, and the hibiscus is budding. This is done to symbolize the many things that Saeng learnt. For example, she learnt she has to adjust to changes in her life and becoming familiar to the new things. The geese and snow she admits are the things that were “strange before [and] had become familiar to her now”. The hibiscus also represents something and has a reason for being included in the last paragraph. It represents the ability to overcome obstacles, connection to the past, and comfort when needed. The last paragraph symbolizes many things, and if you look into it deeply, you will learn what Saeng learnt.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
6401,3,"In the essay the cyclist is riding in the desert. It is extremely hot out because it’s June and that causes alot of problems for him. He said that since it was so hot he was afaid of getting dihydrated. Also he explains that the roads were getting hilly, which would have caused him to work harder, meaning he was lossing my water.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
15937,6,"Based on the excerpt, ""The Mooring Mast"" by @ORGANIZATION3 the builders of the Empire State Building faced several obstacles in an attempt to allow dirigibles, or blimps, to dock there. One reason that it was difficult to allow dirigibles to dock on the Empire State building was safety issues. According to Marcia Amidon Lüsted, ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" With New York City and its dense population that is a risk that cannot be taken. Another obstacle faced by the architects of the Empire State Building was nature itself. The start of paragraph @NUM1 states, ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" With high winds the dirigible, even tethered to the mast, would swivel around the mooring mast. Another difficulty in docking the dirigibles was according to the excerpt in paragraph @NUM2, ""an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" Due to this law it would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area. A final obstacle the builders faced was the advancement with airplanes and that made it difficult for dirigibles to be the prime source of aeronautical transportation. Even though the builders spent a lot of time and effort in making the Empire State Building a national @CAPS1, which it is, they neglected many potential problems with the mooring mast which led to it never accomplish its full potential.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
4120,2,"I believe that there are many books in a library that should not be avalible to everybody that goes into a public library. Yes there are some very offincive items in a library, such as a book about racism to african americans. No, that person who takes offince in those itmes does not have to be around them or even go into the library at all. The library is open to any and or everybody.      Lets suppose you have a young child, and you take him/her to the public library with you. As your looking for a book the child reaches to the highest book that he/she can reach, pulls it off the shelf and it lands on the floor open. You look down to see what had happened and you see the book lying there with an inappropriate picture right infront of your child. Thats your own fault, not the librarys.     Although many times its not the librarys fault where certain books are at, you should be more responsible and check out the area in which you are looking.      I think there should be a select area for which the 'inappropriate material' should be kept. And for a person to get into the select area they must show a membership type of identification, and sign a waver saying the material they have checked out will cause no trouble nor take offince to anybody in which the customer is around.     And that is my view on this subject.",2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
4323,2,"Should there be cenorship in the Libraries or not? Many people have there own personal view on this subject. Everyone should know their own boundaries of what they know is appropriate to look at and what isn't. Libraries shouldn't have to remove books and etc. that they themselves have purchased to get. Now they want them cenored? i don't think that is very right.          Libraries should take all the cenored material and make a part of the library where the customers can't see from the main section and it would be open to the customers who would like to go in that specific section to check out a book or anything else that @MONTH1 apply to that section. The library was build for anyone who just wanted to go to a place to escape the troubles of their own world and just go sit in a library and read. Not everyone goes to the library for a book, some go to listen to music, some go to read a magazine, well whatever it is for the libraries can't take out the material that people go there just go get. How do they expect customers to come back if they're taking material out of the library? The internet and @CAPS1 is way more offensive than material in a library so what gives them the right to say get all your offensive inappropriate material out of the library. If libraries have to do that then so should all the other entertainment industries.     Finally every library should have their own control over what they think is best for their own facility. My opinion says we should just move the material else where in the building, in it's own little wing or something. Where people could if they would like to go in and check something out but if people didn't want to go in they sure don't have to. Everyone has thier own personal opinion on this subject, and well i gave you mine",4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
12529,5,"I think that the main mood created by the author in the memoir was love. But love branched out into gratitude and hospitality. Love is shown a lot through family in this memoir. The love of the authors parents is shown in paragraph @NUM1, when it says ""They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life..."" Love from the author's parents is shown again in paragraph @NUM1 when it says ""The faith that this struggle would leave them and their children to better living drove them to endure these hard times."" These two quotes show the love that the author's parents showed towards their children. A mood of hospitality was also shown in this memoir a lot. In paragraph @NUM3, it shows hospitality by saying ""it was a close-knit community of... immigrants who extended a hand to people who, while not necessarily their own kind, were clearly in need."" This shows the hospitality of the neighborhood and how caring it was. The other mood that the author created in the memoir was gratitude in paragraph @NUM4, this is shown. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice. I've often told him that what they did was a much more courageous thing than I could have ever done. I've often told them of my admiration for their strength and perseverance, and I've thanked them repeatedly."" This quote shows how massively grateful the author is toward her parents. These are the ways that the author shows the mood in the memoir. ",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
8941,4,"The author ends the story the way she did to show how Saeng and the hibiscus plant are a like and how Saeng will overcome her obstacle when the plant overcomes its obstacle. Saeng’s obstacle is adjusting to her new life and the first step in that is passing her driver’s test. The reader knows she has to pass because Saeng tells her mother , “I-I failed the @NUM1]. The hibiscus must make it through the winter, it also has to adjust to new surrounding to survive, just like Saeng. The mother says to Saeng,”… but its strong enough to make it through the cold month here, this winter hibiscus.Thats what matter “[@NUM2]. So,if the winter hibiscus’ job, or hurdle that it has to jump,it to make it, to stay alive during the winter months, then its job will be done in the spring. The author ends the story with Saeng telling herself, “… in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again”[@NUM2]. If Saeng’s obstacle is completing, and passing the driver’s test, and she passes in the spring, right as the hibiscus passes it’s “test” , the symbolism between the two, showing a determined spirits to adopt, will grow deeper because that will adopt and pass their obstacle at the same time.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
3555,2,"If you saw a book on the shelf of your library that took offense to you in some way or another how would you react? Would you simply pass the book by and go on searching for another, or would you be so taken by it that you demanded it be removed from the shelves immediately? Every school, public library,  movie theatre, magazine stand, and any form of media in this world will do or say one thing or another that someone is not going to like. It could be in a magazine in the do and don'ts section and you get slightly offended because you do something that is on the don't list or something about a specific race. Everyone, one time in their life, has been accidentally hurt by other peoples words and publishings in the world, but I do not think that is ever going to stop.     All forms of media are for learning and entertainment purposees. These things out there in the world are not for one specific group of people, they are for everyone. Every individual person has their own opinion and not everyone else is going to agree with that person. Just because one person does not agree with which hairstyle is hot right now doesn't mean that they should take it out of their magazines for all of their viewers. To me, that is just ridicolous.      So, say you stumbled across a book about the @ORGANIZATION1 in the library and you are a person from negro descent. Would you get offended? Or, say you were watching a show that was talking about slavery a hundred years ago, would that anger you? If I were a person of negro descent it wouldn't make me mad at all, because it is just history, history that happened a long time ago that does not pertain to me. We could not toss those books out anyways because without those history books at school we couldn't learn about our history. History is important to everyone and if we didn't learn about it and they did toss those books out how would we prevent history from repeating itself?     When I was a young child my father used to hit my mother, so my mother takes offense to anything in the media that has to deal with abuse. I tried to have my mother watch a movie with me called '@CAPS1'. The movie is about a girl who is abused by her mother and has her father's babies and she finally gets out of it and betters her and her childrens lives. My mom said that she couldn't watch it with me because, 'it hit too close to home.'      Everyone is going to become offended in their life by the media. The media does not look at you as a whole, just as a population of people. When one person doesn't like something it doesn't mean it should be taken out or erased from history, it should just be rewritten or refilmed. You cannot control what everyone else says or does in books or movies, you have to just be in control of how you look upon it as. That is what I choose to do and I would say it is working out great.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
1767,1,"Guaranteed, @NUM1 years from now we will still be using computers they are probably talking to friends, doing research on something or are typing up something for @ORGANIZATION1. Computers are wonderful and let us do so many things that we can't do by ourselves. Without computers life as we know it would probably be way different. Firstly, computers let us talk to our friends and family. Allowing us to communicate to one another without us leaving the safety of our homes. See, just recently a girl in @CAPS1 went over her friends' home to do their homework together. When they were done the girl tried to walk home, and she was never seen again. With computers we can do homework with our friends without leaving our homes. Clearly, without computers life as we know it would be way different. Secondly, computers let us do research about stuff we don't know about. Allowing us to do projects without having to look in old books that maybe not have the info. you're looking for if it was to search @ORGANIZATION1 it would give me a map pointing out it's location and the schools website where I can find out my homework for that night. As you can see the computer allows ud to do things that would take us far more longer to do regularly. Without a doubt, without computers life as we know it would probably be way different @CAPS2, Computers allow us to do homework on it wether it's research or just typing something up, it lets us do more capable things. Most of our daily homework is on the computer. Just @DATE1 we had to type a prompt up on vending machines in our @ORGANIZATION1. So far in @NUM2 grade almost every night our homework is on the @CAPS3 if we were to forget to write down our homework we would have another to get this information. Obviously, without computers life as we know it would be way different. Furthermore, computers are on advancement in technology that this uses constantly. Computers let us look up valuable info. on things around the world. They let us talk to friends and family around the world. They @CAPS3 help us achieve great things in @ORGANIZATION1, wether it be homework or classwork. Without them it would take double to triple the amount of time to do something without them. Finally, I believe that people who are against them just haven't used them in the correct manner.",4.0,5.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
4520,2,"Censorship          Should certain materials (books, music, movies, magazines, etc.,) be removed from the shelves if they are found offensive? I think it depends on how offensive the material actually is. If it is something very provacative or racist or advanced beyond the years of the people who have access to it, then it shouldn't be allowed. Or, the materials should be restricted or placed in a special section that only certain people have access to. It depends on the level of intelligence, maturity, and age of the people who have access to these materials.          I don't think these materials should be removed, but restricted. Some of it should be left up to the school or library, but it is also a responsibility of the parents. If a child has permission to access a certain material, then they should be allowed to if their guardian thinks it is appropriate. Sometimes the guardians views @MONTH1 not be the same as a the library or schools, but it's mostly up to the guardian. Schools and libraries can't really argue with people's morals or intelligence.           Over all, I don't think materials such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc., should be removed unless it has been deemed necessary by a group of people that includes parents, teachers and/or school board memebers, and/or library staff. Just because one mom thinks a book is innapropriate for her child, doesn't mean it should be banned from another. Everyone has a different opinion and idea of what's acceptable, therefore it isn't fair for everyone to have to go by the idea of only one person.                If you don't want your child to have access to a certain material, then simply don't let them access it. If you think it's not an appropriate material for any child to access, you can express that, but others @MONTH1 not agree. Materials considered innapropriate by a respectable group should be restricted or have a warning on them, but not a ban.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
761,1,"Dear local newspaper, Computers are a usefull tool when doing a school report or something to that effect but, @CAPS2 we really need thoes computers. When using a computer for a school project @CAPS3 can be a hassel. One of many problems people are fased with while using a computer are freazing, when doing a project and your computer frezz's @CAPS3 can be verry time consumming. Another problem is pop up's, pop up's can couse virouses, and when you computer gets a virous, @CAPS3 leads to becoming very slow. Witch leads us to are next problem slowness, when a computer becomes slow @CAPS3 is verry a digital. There are several problems and risks that come with a computer. One health problem is that you can become a hermet and stay inside all day because your too attached to the computer. Another problem is that you can become verry obease because your not getting any physical exersise. One risks of using a computer is that you could end up getting an fassebook, @CAPS1, or myspase, and meating some one who is protending to be some one there not and get abducted by a molester! There are other alternations you could make instead of using an computer. One alternation is that you could go to the local library and cheak out books on your topick that your wanting information on. Another alternation is to ask teachor if she/he could leand you a class text book. But the main aternation is computer to old fashon books! So now @CAPS3's your choice,""@CAPS2 we realy need computers or can we live with out them?"" @CAPS3's your choice!",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
485,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3, I believe that computers have a negative affect on people. Computers have caused problems where kids do not do any types of physical activity which deprives them of their daily needed exercise. Also, children spend so much time on the computer, they don't get a chance to enjoy the outdoors. Another effect computers have on kids is that @CAPS6 stops them from spending time with family and friends. I don't know how people can sit on a computer all day without moving around. First, kids don't get enough exercise because the spend too much time on a computer. We know almost everybody has a computer even I do, but @CAPS6 doesn't mean @CAPS6 has to be used @NUM1. I am a athlete and I enjoy being on the computer, but I don't use @CAPS6 every second I can. Doctors always reccomend everyone to get a least an hour of exercise everyday. Most people don't do that. They would be the kind of people who uses the computer or a different electronic a lot. That is also causing childhood obesity. If all you do is sit on the computer all day, your going to be someday. But people need to get off the computer and do something like a sport or even a game like. If you don't exercise you wont enjoy the outdoors. Second, people are not enjoying the outdoor. If somebody likes to play sports they shouldn't don't on @CAPS4 for three hours instead they invite a couple of friends to lay same basketball. Even walking home from school with a friend is a good way to be outside. People @MONTH1 think during the winter there is nothing to do. Have a snowhall fight with some friends and enjoy your selves. Nobody should feel embarrassed even if you wanted to play tag with a friend but you're @NUM2. Just get outside and do something. There are millions of things to do that isn't going on a computer. You're a kid so long that you have to enjoy your selves now before your serious with you life. Lastly when you're not outside you're not enjoying yourself with your friends or family. People are spending too much time on the computer and less with friends or family. You're not hanging out with you friend if you are chatting on @CAPS4. Is @CAPS6 so hard to tell them online ""@CAPS5 @NUM3 come @NUM3 my house."" @CAPS6 takes two seconds. Then in no time you will be hanging out with your friend. I don't understand why is @CAPS6 some embarrassing to be with your family. Mydad and I like to go and play basketball or ping pong with each other. We don't care becaue we have fun. Find something your parents like to do and see if you like @CAPS6. @CAPS6 isn't hard to say to a friend or parent, ""@CAPS5 to do something.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
12580,5,"In the memoir there were actually two main moods. The first mood and most prominant mood was joy and happyness. Because throught the memoir the reader learns about the writers family and how greatfull the writer was for her family. An example of this is when the writer wrote: ""I will always be greatful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" But joy is not the only mood in the memoir, because though the memoir is mostly about positive things, the reader still has to remember that this is a memoir. Meaning this was only written because Narciso Rodriguez passed away. Therefor sadness is also a mood in this memoir. In the end, the joyfull mood sort of covers the depressing one, but to really get a sense of where the writer is coming from the reader most consider both these moods.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
12066,5,The mood by the author in the memories.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
4636,2,"People should have a right to listen, read, and watch whatever they want. It is people's own choice to what they read, watch, or listen to. They will not be able to change that person by taking out offensive movies or books. They will only go somewhere else and do it.      People have a right to read, listen to, and watch what they feel is good for them. If others find that offensive then that is their problem. People make their own decisions and that is their right. I feel that if you tell someone that they can not do a certain thing that will only make them want to do it more.      Taking offensive books, music, movies, and magazines will not solve a problem that our society has with being offensive to others, it will only mask it. Taking them out will not all of a sudden make people stop being offensive to others, they just won't do it in libraries.            Every book, music or movie will be offensive to some other person and if we take all the offensive stuff out there will be nothing left to read. It is just something that we will have to deal with. So I do not agree with censorship in libraries.      It will only take away our right to read and view what we want but also it will take away all the offensive movies and books we have; which is almost every book. Everyone feels that one book or another if offensive to them and if we take away those books we will have nothing left in our libraries",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
9766,4,"The author concludes the story with that paragraph because it shows how sometimes you have to wait till the time right for you to try again... For example, In the book it says “Madagascar periwinkle, its tag announced, “How strang to see it in apat,” Back home it just grew wild jutting out from the cracks in brick walls or between roofs.” This shows that anything can be done when the time is right.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
9519,4,"The author concludes the story with that paragraph because it shows that Saeng can over come her weaknesses and succeed in her newhome. What the @CAPS1 “In the spring, when the snows melt and geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” It means she’ll try the @CAPS2 Test again try new test to make her like wheres she’s at and what she can @CAPS3 from it.",1.0,,,,,1.0,0.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,3.0
12974,5,"on paragraph @NUM1 in the article it say's ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice. I've often told them that what they did was a much more courageous thing than I could have ever done."" I think that the mood the auther is creating in the memoir is happyness because Narciso is very geatful to his parents.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
14875,6,Obstacles the bulders faced was if they put a Mooring @CAPS1 At the top of the building it will Add stress to the building and they would have to modify the building to support the mooring @CAPS1. Another @CAPS2 they @CAPS3 is safty Most @CAPS4 Are Filled with Hydrogen which Are Highly Flammable. If there was A Fire it could @CAPS5 @CAPS6 of people Due to the fact its A Densely Populated Area. Nature Itself Also seems to @CAPS7 A @CAPS2 the winds Above the building were very Violent. then theirs the law where Airships can @CAPS9 Low Above urban areas.,2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
6103,3,"During the passage “Do not exceed speed limit”, the cyclist endures many hardships. One of those countless hardships was the setting that he was in. while he was lost, thirsty, and exhausted, he remained all the while in “The high deserts of California in June”. This shows that the temperature most of been unbearable. This would cause the cyclist to tire out and dehydrate faster than usual. Also, the surface he was riding on had many steep hills, as it is said when he says “over one long, crippling hill,” This shows that the hills took a lot of energy to get up. And finally, the author says that “There was no one in sight, not a building, car, or structure of any kind."" This shows that if he needed help, there was no one around to lend him a hand. That is how the setting affected the cyclist in a negative way.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
3806,2,"Many people, after reading a book, listening to a song, watching a movie or reading a magazine have found themselves upset or disturbed by that peice of media and feel that it should be removed from the shelf they found it on. I feel that since everyone has their own definition of offensive and disturbing, that libraries and media centers should separate such materials from other books, magazines or @CAPS1.      My opinion is that not everyone will find the same things disturbing or offensive. It depends on that person's background, religion and personal beliefs. I do not that think books, magazines or @CAPS1 shoulds have to be banned from library shelves just because that particular person finds that peice of material offensive. If they find it so disturbing then they should discontinue reading that book or magazine, or listening to that @CAPS3.       One person should not be able to make the choice of keeping a certain book or magazine on the shelf because somewhere out there, I'm sure there is someone who does not find it offensive. The partial point of writing a book or song is to express one's opinion of a topic and if the reader or listener does not approve of their opinion, then they should respect that director or author's thoughts and move on. If a library or media center contains inapropriate books, magazines or moviees, they should create special areas or shelves to keep such material. This area could be created for adult or mature readers, viewers or listeners. I also think that books and other peices of media of such inapropriateness should have a label regarding its offensive or explicit content.     If someone finds a song, book, or magazine article offensive or disturbing; I do not think that a single person has the right to have it removed from the public and that there are other ways to keep such material out of a reader or listener's hand, that @MONTH1 not know about its possible offensiveness. If warning signs are shown, then the reader or listener should realize that they are taking the risk of being offended or disturbed. If such measures are taken, I think they will keep all readers, viewers and listeners pleased.",5.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,22.0
16319,6,"In the excerpt @ORGANIZATION2, written by @ORGANIZATION1, The builders of the empire State building face obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock There, ""one obstacle to their expanded use in New York City was the lack of suitable landing areas."" (paragraph 6). If the Dirigibles can't lead it could cause destruction and could be very dangerous to people. In paragraph @NUM1 Al Smith says, It's on level all right no kidding wer'e working on the thing right now."" This shows the readers that the way he words things sounds almost unreliable. When constructing the idea of Dirigibles a mooring mast had to be added to the top of the building to allow passengers on and off. However This idea was unsafe. ""Dirigibles moored in open landing fields could be weighted down in the back with lead weights, but using Empire State building, where they would be dangling high above pedestrians on street was neither practical nor safe."" (paragraph @NUM2). This unsafe why would the build something harmful to others. In the excerpt The Mooring Mast written by @ORGANIZATION1. The builders have a hard time constructing the dirigibles.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
12571,5,"In the memoir, the author doesn't just describe the journey to @LOCATION1 and the house he lived in. He gives a in depth and warm description of his life in @LOCATION1 and the relationships he made. He also spends some time talking about the selflessness of his parents and what they do to make the new immigrants feel welcome in this new place.The author sets the mood that makes people wanna read this if they are feeling sad and they just want to get a warm, cozy feeling from it. I think the mood in this gives off a sence of being selfless, but also coming together when all are segregated and form unity. When you turn segregation into unity then good things are bound to happen. The authors says this in his memoir: ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" The mood of this story really shows you that the world doesn't have to be a cold, heartless place.If we do as they do, we can all live in unity.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
13249,5,the mood created by the author in the memoir would be sad because he is remembering a really good time in his life and he knows it wont happen again but at the same time he is happy for having a good childhood and misses the good times and he is feeling greatful for his parents hard work when things looked bad thats how I think the authors mood would be in this memoir.,1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
13241,5,"The author created a mood of warmth and happiness. By talking about his parents cultural cooking and music gave a feeling of home. His parents graciously taking in people when things weren't going well for them, created a mood of the unity and friendship, along with the love for extended family. The author also creates a grateful mood through his parents' love and sacrifice, as well as there struggle to make there lives better. This also showed perseverance because Narciso's parents couldn't even speak english but they made it through that and created a wonderful life for their family.",1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
3439,2,"I think that most books, magazines or any kind of reading material that has offensive stuff to people are ok. Many people needs to read them and see what they are about. I think people take little things such as, curse words, or if the book or magizine is talking about drugs people take offensve.          I don't think there is one book out there that doesn't have a curse word in it. Many people complain about small things like that when the reading material could be a lot worse than it is. I have read many books that have inappropriate words in them.     I had a situation once when the title of the book sounded great and when I started reading it it had a lot of curse words in it. I guess thats just how it is now a days. You honestly cannot find a book without atleast one bad word in it. People just need to learn to get over the fact that many offensive things are found in many different reading materials.     I do not think that the books, music, movie, magizines etc. should be removed from the shelves. It could be interesting to someone else but not you. Many people have different oppinions about different kinds of things and I think it should just be left up to that person weather or not they read, listen or even look at certain kind of reading material.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
4305,2,"Going to the library is always a struggle when someone is faced with so many different genres of books. That isnt the only choice they are faced with either. There is music and magazines too. Just within the books, there are so many different subjects and catagories between kids books,  biographies, autobiographies, etc. On top of that there are alot of different types of music to fit everyones different styles. Some people might say that some of the books and/or music could be found offensive or not appropriate. But out of all the meterial in the library, I don't think there should be a problem with staying away from a the things that you might find offensive. Therefore I do not think that certain books or music should be kept away from the shelves due to a few self opinions.      There are multiple different books in a library and just because one might find one book offensive doesnt mean that the book should be pulled off the shelves. The reason being is that someone else could find that book as a good resource and @MONTH1 need it for something they are doing. People should know what they are looking for at the library and if they think that a book @MONTH1 be offensive then they could keep their self from checking out that book.      This problem is similar to others around the world. For example, when you go to the mall there are shops that you know you like and go to, and you stay away from the ones that you dont like or @MONTH1 find offensive due to the items they sell. That doesnt mean that store should be banned from the mall. Thats because some people might find that store interesting and want to purchase some of thier items. I think the same reasoning goes for different books and meterial at the library.     A way that a library could adress this problem with out pulling theses books from the shelves is maybe taking a survey from thier local visitors in thier town by asking them what they think on some of the different genres of books and different styles of music. After taking this survey the library then could seperate these items into different catagories or sections within the library. This could help this problem tremendously due to the fact people could stay away from those sections that they might find offensive and find what they are looking for alot easier.      I know when I sit down and read im not always caught reading the most popular subjects. I like to read subjects such as murder files, drug bust, biographies, and autobiographies. And then when it comes to music I listen to a wide variety of music such as hip-hop, country, alternative, rock, etc. Some people @MONTH1 find that wierd and unusual but it just goes to show that not everyone wants to read and listen to the same thing. Therefore the library should keep the wide selection of different meterial and keep everyone happy",4.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
7433,3,"In the story, these are many elements that affected the cyclist in his journey.The first features of the setting that affects him is the old water pump, which did not work, and when it did the water from it lasted horrible. The next obstacles on his journey was rough terrain. ""Flat road  was replaced by short rolling hills,"" was how he described it. When the narrator finally finds a building, it turns out to be  abandoned. Eventually he finds a  town and rest after his long journey, and learns his lesson from before not to take advice from people he doesn’t know.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
386,1,"Dear Newspaper, I believe that computers have a positive effect on people. I believe this because we can talk to people in different countries in a quarter of a second, we can send e-mails to other people, and finally we can go to @LOCATION1, ask @CAPS1 question and get an instant reply. First, we can talk to people in different countries. Did you ever have a relative go on vacation in a foreigh country and have no way of calling them to see if everything is okay? Lets say for instance that they brought their laptops but for at their cellphones. Then, the only way we can contact them is by e-mail. Even if your just happens in you can keep in touch through email. You can even a computer so you can video chat, and not have to wait to get your reply. Next, we can send e-mails to other people. Have you ever set somebody a letter by mail and had to wait two to three days for a reply? Sometimes, your letter is even lost, and these is no way of finding out. Well with e-mail, the wait time of your reply depends on how fast the person whom you are talking to types and most people I know can type a reply in @NUM1 to @NUM2 seconds. I believe that is a from two to three cars. With e-mail those is an eghty three percent chance that your email will not be lost. If for some reason it is lost, there will be a message sent to you telling you that your message was lost and that you need to sent a new message. But most likely chances are that your message wil reach its destination. can go to @LOCATION1, ask @CAPS1 question and get an instant reply. Were you ever wondering about something and the answer was on the tip of your tongue but you just cant think of it? If so you probably would be smart to go to @LOCATION1. You can ask @CAPS1 question and get an instant reply. And I mean @CAPS1 question you can ask questions from wat the price of is in @LOCATION2, to what an is. If you wanted to you could ask math questions as well, such as what is the square root of pi, and what is @NUM3. From @LOCATION1 to myspace the internet is full of information that can have a positive effect on people. This is why I think that the has a positive effect on people, we can talk to people different countries we can send e-mails, and we can ask all sorts of questions.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
38,1,"Dear local Newspaper, @CAPS1 in the society we live in, more and more people are using computer including me. The computor in my opinion has to be one of the best inventions ever. The bad part is that these ""exports"" think spending time on the computer is a bad idea when they fail to see the good in computers. Student can use computers to get information on almost about anything, you could use computer to talk to friend and family members, and you confuse it as a navigator to find directions to a certain location if you cant find your way or if your lost. One of the best things about computers is that you can find various amounts of information. That opition is useful for children that attend school , looking to find information for a certain project they need to finish. You can also use the information on the computer to study if your textbook isnt doing you only good. Also if a student is looking for a job in their local area they look on the internet for jobs needing employees. Computers also can be used for communication. You could have a long lost realtive you havent spoken to in a while, you can easily find him on the internet. Online communicating is also good for chatting with schoolmates if you forgot the homework or need help with homework. Im not a big fan of this but online chatting can be use for online dating if your to lazy to go out. One of my favorite options on the computer is that you can use it to navigate a certain location you want to go to. Lets just say you forgot where a relatives house is you can easily type in your address and his address and easily get directions. You can use this method for almost anywhere you want to go. If this did not convince you that that a computer is a great piece of technology, then your crazy. The computers is like a magical box that can be used for anything so I advice you get one.",3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
12627,5,"The mood in the memoir of the life of Narciso Rodriguez is mostly how the bonds between him and his parents, and everyone around them got them through tough times. In @CAPS1 @NUM1 he states that in their neighborhood ""cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship"" And how ""immigrants extended helping hands to people, who were not only their own kind, but who needed a helping hand."" The author says that in his community many different cultures came together and help each other through racism, and other tough times. He says that ""family"" isn't just those you are related to blood, but those who are close to your heart.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
1209,1,"Computers have many effects on people these days. Most of them are very good effects that can lead you to become more self-confident. Computers can educate people, from learning about some ancient person to doing school projects. Also computers entertain people too. Lastly it can even increase you chances of finding a job or helping out your job. For most people education is very important to but since kids don't stay in school @NUM1 they use the computer to teach to kids kids can learn about other places. This benefits us because we're learning something and growing out our knowledge. Also kids can do their projects. For example writing on essay, their science fair project and so on. Lastly kids can learn about people from other times. For example famous musicians long ago, celebrities, legends, hall of famers etc. People always look for some kind of entertainment and the first place they ever go is the computer. Everyone likes enetertainment and the computer in the the best plan. They could play a variety of games. Games from the past or gaems from the future. There is also a whole bunch of : multiplayer, figure, castle defense, shnaler sports, racing, acade, and so on. Another fun thing to do is interact with friends online or even talk to any family don't live near you. Lastly, you could watch funny videos, sad videos and music videos. Another that computers effect people is their of finding or help on their . the computer can teach people what they will do on their job, and what to expect. Also, it can let you search for jobs. In your. Finally, it can help them for allowing them to a web page. In conclusions computers have people. It can increase their education, give them entertainment, and even help out on their job, or help them find a job.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
12420,5,"In the memoir the author obviously seems to be grateful and thankful because he states it multiple times in the passage. When he is recalling all the memories he had it proves to be a warm and happy mood. The cookings skills that his parents passed on to him he says that he's grateful for and passionate Cuban music he says that he still adores to this day. The author also states that there's not only a sense of family in being a blood relative but in the neighborhood as well. All the different cultures of his neighborhood; Spanish, Cuban and Italian came together in a great solidarity and friendship. The author is so thankful in fact that he's actually told his parents that he could have never done something as courageous as they did. The mood of the memoir is so strong in a positive way because he also writes that there is no way for him to express his gratitude for the spirit of generosity impressed upon him at such an early age. To wrap up his memoir he mentions that he will never forget how his parents turned a simple house into a home.",4.0,,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
9238,4, The author ends the story with this paragraph to show Saeng’s resolution. Her family had left a lot behind in Vietnam. She had the memory of her grandmother and hibiscus. edge. In the @LOCATION2 they are struggling as implied by the mothers reaction at the cost. The hibiscus she bought was away to comfort her. She thinks that if the plant can put up with the harsh winter environment she can do despite the differences in the @LOCATION2 and passing the drivers exam is something that many do and is a way to get used to her surroundings / fit in.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
9879,4,"Maybe the author wrote that as the last sentence or paragraph because in the story she did something and failed at it, so she wants to do it again.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
6930,3,"The complex features of the setting affect the cyclist negatively throughout this story. His trip goes from bad to worse as he progresses to Yosemite. After taking directions from the “old codgers,” the author attempts the shortcut, but is dissapointed. He arrives at the first town but it is completely deserted. He rubbed it off though, and kept “the cool pines and rushing rivers of Yosemite,” as his motivation. He pedaled on, but began to run out of water when he arrived at a well, he found the water to be inedible, and continued. Just as if things couldn’t get any worse his trail was getting rougher, and his water supply was low. The cyclist was becoming dehydrated, and began to lose hope. He became even more of a pessimist when “a ridiculously large snake- blocked the majority of the pavement…” He kept going, and excitedly pedaled toward a building, but found it to be abandoned. He even put rocks in his mouth to help his dehydration. When he finally found the fish camp, he was relieved. All the obstacles he prospered through were worth in the end.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
14840,6,The builders of the Empire @CAPS1 Building were faced with obstacles while attempting to allow derigibles to dock there. The architects realized they could not put the mooring mast on top of the building without modifying and strengthening the steel frame of the building. The stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure would add too much weight to the framework which could cause it to collapse. They strengthened the framework from the bottom of the building to the top before putting the shiny glass and chrome-nickel stainless steel tower on the top of the building. The builders were faced with these obstacles but they were successful in completing their goal. The mooring mast is not used as a docking station but it is still looked at as the final peice that makes the Empire State Building stand out above all buildings in downtown New York City.,1.0,,,,,1.0,4.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
9052,4,"I believe the author of “winter Hibiscus” used this for the last paragraph because it is saying when she sees that hibiscus it will give her memories of home again which will bring encouragement for the test. “The geese symbolize Saeng's determination to pass the test and try like the new country. Saeng explains, “she lifted her head and watched as their distinctive I was etched against the evening sky, slowly fading into the @NUM1) this quote creates a vivid image in my mind that lets me know Saeng will really go and take that test when she has encouragement from not only the geese but the hibiscus also.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
12929,5,"The author creates a very warm happy welcoming feeling by describing how friends and family are always visiting and how happy the family is all the time. The author Narciso Rodriguez never mentions any bad times and shows how kind everyone is. This quote from the memoir proves that Narciso is creating a good mood throughout the story.""The innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the backdrop to life in our warm home."" This quote i think shows very well that the author is creating a happy mood in his memoir.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
9494,4,"I think the author ends the story with this paragraph for many reasons. One reason is because It leaves you knowing that Saeng will never give up tring. Another reason is that something as simple as a flower can encourage someone to keep going even if they have nothing to go for. Saeng says that flower is something so important, that working harder will encourage her to keep doing the best she can. The author leaves you with this sentence because it is very powerful and brings Saeng courage.  ",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
6626,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist in many ways.For example, he was in the california desert in June.The heat and lack of water can cause people to become dehydrated,passout or even die.There are not many sources of water in the deserts.The terrain didn’t help him much either, hills use a lot of energy and  made him perspore,causing him to lose flood from his body. The cyclist was greatly affected by the features of the setting.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
4049,2,"I do not believe that such things as book, music, movies, magazines,etc., should be removed from libraries.      First, books can be used as monumental learning sources for kids, teenagers, and adults. Just because a book talks about the @CAPS1 and @CAPS9 dying @MONTH1 be a little inappropriate for some age groups but not for teenagers and adults. Also books give a message about how times use to be. Take a book that refers to slavery and what they use to call black @CAPS9 back then. Just because it has some words that are frowned upon does not mean that kids and @CAPS9 shouldn't know about it and where it came from so they won't go around affending @CAPS9 and they don't even know what the word means.      Next, movies now some movies shouldn't be played for certain age groups and I understand that, but movies like @CAPS2 and To @CAPS3 a @CAPS4 @CAPS5 are teaching us our @ORGANIZATION1 and how far we've come from being segregated and the disrespect of each others race. Also movies gives a more visual way of what things were like so we can kind of get a interactive way on how things look like and how you can relate the book to the movie. Movies also make points, some state if we don't do anything about pollution this is whats going to happen. So movies are definetly a stay on my list.     In addition, a big factor of @CAPS6 and @ORGANIZATION1 is music. I could see how some music could be bad but also some artist talk  about how it really is tough where they come from and how music is a get away for them. Plus, music isn't hurting anybody. We learn how music was in the @DATE1 and compare it to music now. We also learn how music evolves from one thing to another, kind of creating off of itself. Music has the power to say things and communicate with @CAPS9 and make statements that could only be made by music. For example, take somebody giving a speech about what they feel or what they think. Now take that speech put it in a song form and I guarantee that more @CAPS9 capture the message and take it into there grasp on how they could help the cause. Especially if it is by their favorite artist. Say your favorite artist is @CAPS7 @PERSON1, now wouldn't you rather listen to @CAPS7 @PERSON1 make a statement about life or a political view rather than a song like that by @ORGANIZATION2. So music is most definetly staying on the list because it has the power to move @CAPS9, make you feel different ways, and look at things you've never seen in away before.     Last, magazines, some Magazines are just inappropriate.  Now I'm pretty sure that you will not be seing those magazines on shelves of a library so nobody should be worried about that. Now some magazines like @CAPS9 and @CAPS10 @CAPS11 are just there for fun and they are not hurting anybody because its just pictures and honestly no child would read the words of a interview with a famous person. So magazines are harmless to in a library and are only there to stay up on current events and to inform @CAPS9 on if a new discovery was made or whats going on in the @ORGANIZATION1.     In conclusion, I do not believe that things such as books, music, movies, and magazines should be removed from library shelves anywhere.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
3993,2,I do not think they should be removed at all. They show a persons opinion on something. We can't just disregard it because we dont like what its saying. Thats like us saying black people aren't allowed here because we don't like how you look. Or just anyone that we dont like how they look.     I think anyone who wants to speak their mind should be able to without having to worry about censorship. I @MONTH1 not agree with all the statements they bring up but they should have a fair chance like anyone else would. You should restrict to age accordingly to content so you don't have little kids reading about stuff they really shouldn't be.     I could get a book removed because it offends me. Well then I could get a franchise closed because it offends me. People are offened by little things and should jut except the fact that other people have different opinions. It's just like judging a person for their race. They have differnt morales and values and you can't just change that in a person.     Like if you don't like this article just don't read it. Don't say other people can't read it because of your views. I don't think there should be censorship.,3.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
7240,3,"How the features of the setting affected the cyclist in the story, “Do Not Exceed Posted Limit”, were very dangerous to his life. The cyclist was traveling to the Yosemite National Park on a hot @DATE1. The cyclist traveled miles after miles on his bike only to past by deserted towns, “This place might have been thriving little spot...a ghost town.” The terrain was threatening because after twenty two miles or so, the cyclist had to overcome, “short rolling hills”, which would use more energy and make his thirst for water even stronger. The cyclist was out of water and the hot day was not helping. After a grueling journey, the cyclist used all the strength he had to go to a local bait shop and drank from the sink after the trechorous environment he was exposed to. The features of the setting in the story, “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” were life threatening and almost killed the cyclist, due to lack of water and the terrain he overcome.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
6741,3,"Early in the morning, the cyclist is eager and ready to face the adventurous path that had been mapped out by the older travelers. He hardly noticed the “sun was beginning to beat down.” He was calm and was looking forward to the “cool pines and rushing rivers of Yosemite.” Never once did he imagine what he had gotten himself into. As he began to approach the desert, he noticed he was running low on water. The strenuous activity of biking combine d with the scorching heat of the desert began to take effect. The cyclist was so desperate for water that he had to put pebbles into his mouth. He had once read, “that sucking on stones helps take your mind off thirst by allowing what spit you have left to circulate.” The cyclist was hoping for a way out of the misery he had come across. Dehydration took it’s toll, and he felt hallucinations. He was beginning to lose hope. The heat and the hills and the lack of water had the greatest affect on the cyclist. Had he not been riding through a hilly desert one afternoon in June, he would have been fine.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
673,1,"Dear local newspaper, @CAPS1 my opinion on this is that people do use computer's a lot! Some people don’t care about exercising, or enjoying nature, maybe people dont even have friends so they spent a lot of there time on the computer because they have no life or maybe they just go on websites that are addictive. For example @CAPS2.com, people/kids have one of those? They chat with friends or maybe even boyfriends. Enyways thats my opinion. Another opinion is that I think people should not spend most of there time on the computer. I think that because people should be having fun, socializing with people, and living there life! So this is what I I think, my opinion about ""Computers"".",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
9658,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because it sums everything up and solves the conflict of her failing her driver's test. When Saeng said ""… I will take that test again"" it showed that she is determined to pass the tes and will try again. Since the conflict is solved there you pretty much have to introduce a new conflict to keep the story going so the author just ends it. This excerpt from the last paragraph also incorporates Saeng difficultly to that geese because just as geese faces hardships getting her driver lisense. But also like the geese she will go back her face hardships again. ",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
12653,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is happy and grateful. He is grateful that his parents give up everything that they had just to give him a better life. In the memoir it says: ""They came selflessly as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends, careers, and the country they loved."" he is happy because he has an opportunity to have a better life and that he learned the real defition of family. In conclusion the mood for this memoir is happy and grateful.",2.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
15054,6,"They ran into a few problems when it @CAPS1 to building this. They realized after that it wasnt that smart or that safe to have a dirigible hanging by a 102 floor building just by one cable tether. Another problem they ran into was the fact that they couldnt control mother nature. If it was a really windy day out it would be hard to keep it steady. And if there wasnt enough support on the building frames, then it could potentially collapse.",1.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
922,1,"To whom it @MONTH1 concern, @CAPS1 more people are getting involved with using the computer while I think that is great other don't. I believe that using a computer is a good thing because technology is going to progress and computers will be the base, also computers are safer now because or privacy options and virus block. Finally, computers help you gather knowledge that no one book could tell you. Although technology is progressing computers are only the basics. Sooner or later everything will be based on computers like, jobs, school, and ever the medical field. Jobs will have more computers and touch screen devises because they are easier and more technologicly advanced. As for school @CAPS1 students have to take computer classes to learn how to write brouchures and make websites. The medical field is now using more advanced ultrasounds that take the image and make it there dementional. So, if everything is changing around you why do you want to be stick in the past? Although, some people are worried about internet saftey and viruses, there are ways that those can be limited. As for social networking sites don't set it up for the whole world to see. Set it up for only your friends to see. Also, make sure you know who your friends are. As for viruses, don't go on websites that cause viruses. Also, you can get a virus blocker that helps eliminate them. The computer also helps to give you and get you knowledge. You can learn about cocrent civilizations. Or modern day without taking a step out of your house. Also the internet has vertual simulations so you can experence what it was like in other coultures, in other time pericals. Computers give you knowledge that help you through your life especially if you don't have a library. Even though some people disagree computers are the base of technology, safe, and full of knowledge I do. Yes, they do have some flaws but they are a great learning tool.",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
3564,2,"There are a ton of books out in the world that have a deep meaning and a sense of compasion. But, other books can have mean or hateful affects on the person who is reading it. Censorship, taking books, movies, magazine, etc. off the shelves so a person cannot read or watch them, is a very positive thing.       In many cases censorship is a great thing. It protects young readers from being exposed to hateful things at such a young age. In libraires, the librarian should censor the books for younger people so they do not read the awful and hurtful things the book is saying.      Like books, music, movies, and magazines should be censored, too. Some music has a very catchy beat to it and could get stuck in a young persons head. This @MONTH1 cause an effect on that child and they @MONTH1 start to act like that or want to become like the person the song is describing.      Movies should also be censored. When I was little, my parents did a good job of censoring things that were bad for me to watch at that age. I barly had any nightmares because I was never exposed to that kind of writing when I was a child. On the other hand, my friend's parents were not the best at censorship and allowed her to watch or read whatever she wanted. She had many of nightmares from the movies or books that she read.      Now since I am older my parents are starting to let me watch and read more censored things. In my experiences with this type of material, I have had some nightmares and have personly been offened by some books. Although, censored books @MONTH1 have a great story behind them, the material that supports it can cause a dispute between different people who have different beliefs.      Thousands of books are censored each year. Many of them have to do with different religions or races that people  have different opinions on. Libraries need to censor books to protect the iniscent minds of young childern",3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
15525,6,"There were many obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The obstacles were safety, nature, and laws.Most foreign dirigibles used hydrogen which is highly flammable instead of helium. If a dirigible were to catch on fire above a very populated the city the outcome would be bad.The winds that high were very violent. There was no way to keep a dirigible still, even though the front is hooked to the building the back would swing. It was not safe.There was a law prohibiting airships from flying too low over urban areas. It was illegal to fly close to the building or to dock at it.The builders of the Empire state Building faced many obstacles in trying to allow dirigibles to dock there.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
16145,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to dock dirigibles there. One of the obstacles they faced was safety, because the dirigibles were filled with hydrogen. ""Most dirigibles from outside the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable"" (¶ @NUM1). If the dirigible burst into flames in New York, a lot of people would die. Another obstacle was nature itself. The winds were violent on top of the building. ""Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast"" (¶ @NUM2). This would have been very dangerous. A third obstacle was the law, which was impossible to get around. There ""was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas"" (¶ @NUM3). Although this was broken twice, it was still illegal to dock dirigibles at that low height. As a cause of all these obstacles, the idea to dock dirigibles at the Empire State Building was scrapped.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
6893,3,The conditions of the enviroment as well as the road can majory effect the cyclist. For example If some one was riding a bike in warm wheather on flat land it would not take major determination to pedal. On the other hand if it is hot and rough paths and hilly roads the biker colud dehidrate and it takes much more effort to get up and over the hill. Those five the conditions of the enviroment effect a cyclist greatly.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
13003,5,A mood for the memoir would be redeaming. It would be a redeaming mood because it talks about strugles like being an immagrent and being poor. It also talks about how a community that is going through the same strugles can come together and help each other out. The author also mentions how her parents sacrificed a lot to help her acomplish what she has become today. Since there are tradteties that help the author lead to success it would be a redeaming mood.,2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
12940,5,"In the memoir, Narciso Rodriguez, from Home: the Blueprints of Our Lives, The mood of the author created is Grateful, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice"" Narciso says in paragraph @NUM1 first sentence.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
1212,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, @CAPS1 home computers is a good thing for many reasons. One reason is because people can use computers to learn about other countries and people. People can also use computers to type and save paper. Also, people can use computers to talk to people living close or far away from you. Finally, computers can save paper by replacing books. One @MONEY1 the most important reasons why people need computers is because computers can help you learn about and research other things going on in the world. If a student needs to research a country and write a paper about it for school, it is much easier and faster to use a computer than to look through a textbook.Computers are also better and faster than a textbook if you want to know more about a person or a culture. Using computers to type are also faster than writing a paper. Using a computer can save time and money when it comes to typing a paper. When you are typing a paper, you don't have to worry about @CAPS1 handwriting or breaking your pencil. You also don't have to worry abut spelling something wrong because computers can check you spelling and grammar. What you are writting a paper you have in about all @MONEY1 these problems and more. You also have to spend money on pencils and other writting suppplies. Computers also saved people @MONEY1 becase they didn't need to buy paper to make textbooks. Computers also evolved how people can communicate with each other. Before computers were invented, you couldn't talk to people in other countries unless you paid to use a phone or sent them mail. Now, you can send instant mail which saves days @MONEY1 time and paper. You can also use webcams to talk to family members and people you don't know. That can save you a lot @MONEY1 money because you don't have to pay money for postage stamps, phone calls, or plane rides to visit them. Those are some @MONEY1 the best reasons why @CAPS1 a home computer is better than not @CAPS1 one. A home computer can save you time when you want to research a country, person, or culture. They can save you money because you don't have to buy postage stamps, pay for phone calls, or pay for plane rides to visit someone from a different state or country. Computers also help save paper because you no longer need to make large textbooks or use a different price @MONEY1 paper when you make a writting mistake.",5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,23.0
7129,3,"The setting of the essay “Do not exceed posted speed limit,"" is very dry, sandy, hot, and deserted. On his way to Yosemite he takes a “short cut"" from so he do me through the desert. When he first leaves its in a hot and flat part of the desert. His mood is high and her has confidence. “Things began well enough. I rode into the morning with strong legs and a smile of my face.” With this he arrives at the first “town” but hes wasn’t worried he had bad plenty of water he moves on. The terrain starts working against him in his search for water, “Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills a large high way sign jumped out at he. It read: Rough Road Ahead : Do not Exceed posted speed limit.” This lowers his confidence, especially because everything is deserted and if he has a heat stroke no one would he around to find him. He keeps up his determination we he sees the factory yet he moves on. When he see the first comp he is overwhelmed  with relief and the terrain flattens out again. When asked if he need direction he say he has his own map so he can keep stick to the terrain he knows is rest. He can keep his hopes for himself and follow a true set of directions.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
10390,4,The author include the last paragraph because Saeng is not going to give up. and she will try again. I think Saeng bought the flower because she had them at her home land and it will help her. For example Saeng started to cry because she miss her homeland.,0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
15272,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles while attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The first problem was the stress on the building's frame, the building required over sixty thousand dollars worth of modifications to fix this. Also the back end of the dirigible would swing freely in the strong wind, this is usualy fixed by attaching a lead weight to the back in the fields where they usualy land but dangling that over a city is a very dangerous. Anothe problem is the law stating no aircraft flying to low over urban areas. Finaly dirigibles never caught on. So the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles In their attemt to make a dirigible docking station.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
12543,5,"The mood created by the @CAPS1 in the memoir is by in paragraph @NUM1 it say's ""Growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense The ""family"" had Nothing to do with being a blood relative."" and in paragraph @NUM2 it say's ""it was in the warmth of the kitchen in this humble house where a Cuban feast (albeit a frugal Cuban feast) always filled the air with Not just scent and music but life and love It was here where I Learned The real definition of ""family."" These are the mood created by The @CAPS1 in the memoir. ",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
16343,6,"The building wasn't designed to carry the extra weight of having a dirigible attach to the top. And the dirigibles had to have weights drop from the back to keep it in place, that wouldnt be very safe have lead weights dangle over @NUM1 feet in the air. The mast was built out of Glass which could have been dangerous if a dirigible couldnt stop and went straight into the tower. Also the electronic winching stations didn't seem like they would work to well.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
12215,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is a grateful one. Because it is telling you what his experience in life was, and what his parents were like. It is also my opinion that they liked where they were. One reason is because they liked to cook all the time. Another reason is that they liked to have fun with their son One last reason is because they had a son. Their @CAPS1 name was @PERSON1.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
10571,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because It show what Saeng will be doing and If she will go to school. Saeng didn't want to go school because she will wait For the snow to melt ond the geese return and this hibiscus is bucking, and prefers gardening to school. and garden remind For about her homeland. For @CAPS1 Saeng dug out hole and carefully lowered the winter hibiscus into it. The thing that made her thing about her homeland was the beating of eggs against a bowl, the sizzle of hot oil in the pan, The pungent smell of better melon wafled out. Another @CAPS1 she went over to the corner of the vegetable patch and started to dig a hole in the ground, that show she care about the garden.",1.0,,,,,1.0,0.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,3.0
12044,5,"The mood of the author is a very gental yet very happy tone. The reason it's gental is because he's describing how he grew up and what his life was like. To some people, they could just blab all day, but to most they have to dig through memories so that they can get the sceen just right. For example, ""Within its walls, my young parents created our traditional Cuban home, the very heart of which was the kitchen.""     @CAPS1 the parts were the mood was very happy was probably parts that he could remember the most with detail. For example, ""My parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their rich culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today."" The reason that he could remember this more clearly is because he probably cooks for his family using his parents resipies.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
9170,4,"The whole story about Saeng buying the hibiscus is in response to her failing the driving test. This crushed her. She wants to be reminded of her old homeland where she did not read to past the driving lessons. So she goes to a green house to find plants that are similar to the ones she used to have in her homeland. She does this to try to make herself feel better but still “in the warm moist shelter of the greenhouse, Saeng broke down and wept.” Saeng feels she failed and the hibiscus gives her hope and memories of her old country. Her mom clearly sees and understands this when she doesn’t yell at Saeng for spending @NUM1$ on the plant. “I’m glad you got it,” Saeng’s mom says because she knows it comforts her daughter. Together the plant the hibiscus. By doing this they are planting Saeng’s hope to grow, not only to pass the driving test but to make it in the new country. *The story ends with those lines because Saeng decides if the hibiscus will grow then so will she. She will be ready to face the driving test with hope and support and because she adapted. *The hibiscus, although it is not the one she had in the old country, she knows they can adapt to their surroundings and so the plant has in the new country. The plant will grow if it can adapt. Saeng can grow if she adapts to this new country.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
10064,4,The author concludes the story with that paragraph because it shows he determination. In the spring it will be hard for the hibiscus to survive because its a winter hibiscus and it also has determination.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
12748,5,"There is a warmth kind of family mood in this memoir, @PERSON1. This mood is portrayed in many ways. One way the mood is portrayed is by telling us about @PERSON1's parents. And how there home is always open or how theres always ton of people at the dinner table. Another way they portrayed this mood is by @PERSON1 stating ""there is no way to express my gratitude for the spirit of generosity.... the demonstration of how important my friends and family are. This is how they show the warmth kind of family mood in this memoir, @PERSON1.",2.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
1609,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, @CAPS3 the years computers have gotten faster smaller smarter, these advances have led to mankind as we know it advancing, but the effects that come with @MONTH1 be non profitable to the youth of the computer world. Some common effects computers have on people, mostly children are, preventing kids to play outside, tbe active, computers prevent people from using their immagination they also are a waste of time. Everyday a child across america will use the same old exuse, ""no mom, im not on facebook, im doing my @CAPS4 report"", while infact they haven't even started it, or they hours ago are now goofing around on line, but ask your self. ""did this happen thirty years ago? no your parents who grew up then were thrilled to an outside when thire assignments were compleated. They could not wait to get on that flaming red bike t go play ball with joey. Kids these days are becoming less active t egar to play outside f people blame obbisity on genetics while it probbly should be blamed on computers, sucking children to them. Because kids never want to leave the side of their beloved computer to go outside they are using less + less of their immagination. parents tell storys of when they would watch the one new episode of their favorite show + what whole week the kids in the neighborhood would take roles + act it out. but do you see that every day in this generation not at all. No one that or imaginn any thing new about it with friends to make it more fun they only move onto the wii five minuets later to play a smashing ballons game. Computers just up all of your time the average kid will spend up to four hours on the computer just falling around with no purpose. Wasting the time they could be improving homework or walking the dog the time is not bring donated to a good source. it is not being effective most times. they say computers are the now generation but dose that mean that the now generation must be, lazy, unimmaginitive, and not care what their time is put towards. Most people will say no we are not but you offer a nine year old to play on the computer or, oh say go outside! You would be ignorant to think they would go out to play. People want to move forward but can we not make a compromise?",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
12056,5,"In this memoir author creates a very specific mood that is the Same throughout the memoir. The mood of this memoir was a comforting and happy mood. One way that this mood was @CAPS1 was that they talked how their enviorment Showed a great sense of family and when I think of family I see the mood as comforting and happy. ""Growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense that family had nothing to do with being a blood relative"". This showed the mood because his family always took in people and made them feel welcomed @CAPS2 reason the mood was comforting and happy was that it talked about how all of the people were nice and kind to everyone they met. ""It was a close nit community of honest hardworking immigrants who extend a hand to people who, while not necessarily their own kind, were Clearly in need"". This is how the memoir showed a happy and comforting mood.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
1725,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, @CAPS3 a world where nobody has any hand-eye coordination @CAPS6 they try to cath a ball it slips away. There are no friendships or communication with other countries. Is this really what you want? Computers do have positive effects on people. For example, they help with hand-eye coordination, give people the ability to learn about faraway places and people, and even allow people to talk online with other people. Computers have a positive effect on people and the society. First, hand eye-coordination is not something that all people have. However, you can make it better by using computers and that is a fact. Computers @CAPS4 said that computer help @PERCENT1 of @CAPS5 with their hand-eye coordination. For example, my mom used to have horrible hand-eye coordination but now that she uses a computer and it is much better. Oprah said, “ @CAPS6 I was young I couldn’t catch a ball but now that I’m older and using computers I’m the best.” @NUM1 out @NUM2 people agree that computer help hand-eye coordination. Next, computers help other people learn about faraway places. For example, if we didn’t have computers people wouldn’t travel to @LOCATION1. @PERCENT1 of @CAPS5 agree that they would never travel if it weren’t for computers it is a fact that people use the internet to learn about other countries for educational purposes. Www.exploretheworld.org wrote that @PERCENT2 of the people who use the website are students. Computers help other people learn about far away places. Finally, computers allow people to talk online. @PERCENT3 of people on facebook have at least one friend who live out of this country. It is a fact that countries are better allies @CAPS6 their people get along.Www.internationalfriendships.com wrote that they have over @NUM3 users who talk with people from other countries for example, my friend’s mother was born in @LOCATION2 and she talks online with many of her friends. Dr @PERSON1 said,”@CAPS8 friendships are the best kind because you learn about other cultures.” Computers are a wonderful way to talk to other people. Now @CAPS3 a world where every country got along because of online friendships. Where adults could play a game of baseball because they got their hand eye-coordination back. Where students could learn about distant places they didn’t know existed. Does't that sound great? Computers teach hand-eye coordination, give people the ability to learn about faraway people and places and allow people to talk online. So @CAPS1 @CAPS2 computers do benefit the society.",4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,23.0
1623,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, @CAPS3 people these days rely too much on technology. Everywhere you go you usually see somebody on a phone, texting, on a computer or plugged into an ipod. These people are not necisarily bad, but they are under the control of technology. Computers for example, are in the eyes of most people, fast, easy and fun, but they also pose as a problem. Even though it seems like everybody has a computer, not everybody does. Also people become way to dependent on such matchines that they can become addicted to them. Computers @MONTH1 also seem like they work @PERCENT1 of the time, but they can also be very unrelyable. Just off the top of your head, how @CAPS3 people do you know that use @CAPS4 or @CAPS5? A lot I'm sure. Now multiply that number by itself for all the people they know and multiply it again and so forth. That number shows that, @CAPS6, over @NUM1 million people use these. Now what are the chances that if you sent a friend a message one of these programs (with the @NUM1 million + people on is) that the server will be @PERCENT1 relaible and your pal recieves the information he needs? My point is that, what if somthing important came up that required your friends help, and you could not reach him because of a fault in the system? What would happen You could be at a hospital for a ride home for an hour longer than it should have taken. Another problem is what if you needed a computer, and you specially needed him/her? If they did have one then You have you did it in @NUM3 minutes but how else could you contact them? You could try to call, but what if they are outside and are playing with his/her dog? Also these days if you are really grateful for somthing you go on google and type in virtual thank you cards. If the person gets it then they will be happy, but probly much more so if in the mail they got a handmade real thank you card. My final reason that computers hurt us more than they help is addiction. Like I said in my first paragraph, everywhere you go you see somebody wired into an electronic device. People no longer go outside and play cowboys and @CAPS7 because now all they have to do is hit paly. I will admit I too use my computer quite a bit but at least I budget my time so I can also go outside and play a while. Obeisity also branches from overuse of electronics along with @CAPS3 other products.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
13597,5,"The mood created @CAPS1 the author in the memoir is a positive and grateful mood for his home, and his parents. One example of the mood created @CAPS1 the author is in paragraph @NUM1 when he says, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" The author is once again stating how thankful he is that his parents came to @LOCATION1. Another example of the mood of the story, is in paragraph @NUM2 when the auther states, ""They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life..."" A final example of the mood created @CAPS1 the author, is when in paragraph @NUM3 he says, ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" @CAPS1 saying this quote he means he is grateful for his parents sacrefice to come to @LOCATION1, but also being able to be raised in the traditional Cuban way. He also means that he had many great memories growing up in this home, and how they bonded together with their multi-racial neighbor's to battle through the tough times. The memoir has a very positive, happy and chearful mood about the Cuban family.",2.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
6488,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist because the he was traveling through a hot place at a hot time of year and didn’t have much water. In the text it says “I was traveling the high desserts of California in June.” The deserts are always hot and June is a very hot month. The cyclist was getting thirsty quicker from the heat and wasn’t able to drink much because he had limited water.,1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
6069,3,"The features of the setting affect the the cyclist by giving him obstacles to overcome when he had to go down the winding hills, he would have to slow down so he could manuver the hills and not lose control of the bike. The heat he was facing would cause tiredness and dehydration. If exposed to the sun and heat long enough you can get a sunburn or suffer a heat stroke. A heat stroke can be fatal to anyone, especially those with heart problems. Dehydration also can be fatal. If the cyclist does not see any buildings, he would not be able to tell where he is and he might get lost because of it. Getting lost will also lead to dehydration, tiredness, and heat stroke.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
7053,3,"The hot, dry, desert setting affects the cyclist in many different ways, “I was traveling through the high deserts of California in June” (@NUM1). The cyclist is very hot. He was thirsty but, “A tarlike substance ooted out, followed by brakish water feeling somewhere in the neighborhood of zoo (@NUM2). The water was barely even water, so he didn’t have much to drink until the next town. “Flat road was replaced by short, rolling  hills” (@NUM3). Flat road is much easier to bike on then hills. He was thirstier and more tired after biking on hills “A sandblasted picture of a young boy pouring a refreshing glass of juice in his mouth could still be seen” (@NUM4) on an old welchs grape fruit factory. This makes the cyclist envicus of the young boy. It also discourages him. In conclusion, the water being bad, the terrain change. the picture of the young boy, and the fact that the cyclist drinks a lot makes him tired, hot, envious, and generally exausted.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
10495,4,I think the author concludes the story with that paragraph because she failed the test so over the winter they don’t get hibiscus but over the spring when they get again the hibiscus she will try to take the taste again so she can pass it,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
9185,4,"The author concludes the story by saying that when the geese come back in the spring then she will try to pass the test. So say that if at first you don’t sucede, try try again. Also the author concludes with that to show that Saeng has been in the @LOCATION2 for some years and that she still misses her home back in Vietnam.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,1.0
16521,6,"The @CAPS1 faced arguments,confusment, tufe Time Building it.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
437,1,"@ORGANIZATION1, In my opinion, the effects of computers are not good. Many people spend too much time on their computers and less time exercising. People are on their computers so much that they dont enjoy nature anymore. Also, they aren't interacting with family and friends that much. I think that computers are becoming an issue. @NUM1 out of @NUM2 people in my school agree that they hardly exersize any more because they are always on their computers. For example, @NUM3 year old @CAPS1 used to go to the gym everyday before she got her own computer. Now every afternoon she finds herself in front of the computer monitor. If it wasn't for computers, I'm sure kids would be outside getting exersize. Computers are a serious issue. Have you ever found yourself in front of the computer screen, on a beautiful day outside? I have, and while I was on the computer I could have been outside enjoying nature. I think it would be best if you unplugged those computers for a day and just went outside and got some fresh air! If everybody keeps this habit of staying on your computers all day and not going outside, we might turn into a world of couch potatos! Im sure you dont want that. Lastly, I remember multiple times I said I would do something with my dad but I didnt because I was on the computer. Many people can agree with me. Instead of going out to interact with your friends many are just instant messaging them. The internet is amazing, but I think everyone forgot the joy of going out with friends and family. So get off those computers and call a friend. In conclusion, the effects of computers are bad. Many people are spending too much time on their computers and have less time exersising. They are on so much they dont enjoy nature anymore. Also, they aren't interacting with friends and family. I think after reading this you can see computers arent good.",4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,23.0
7563,3,"In the narrative ""Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit"" by Joe Kurmaskie, the cyclist was affected in a deadly negative way by the setting. The cyclist is travelling through “The high deserts of California in June.” It was hot, so hot the infact, that the author realized he could “drop from heatstroke” at anytime. This unbearable heat, coupled with the “crippling” hilly terrain was enough to reduce the cyclist to a stale of severe dehydration. Obviously not exactig a positive effect. The swelting heat and merciless hills of the setting would not be quite so awful if there had been locations to stop, rest and replenish the eyeishes diverting water supply. However, “There was no one in sight, not a building, or a structure of any kind” The cyclist was incomplete isolation for over @NUM1 miles of arid desert, the sweating sun heating down upon him as he toiled up steep unyielding hills clearly the setting was affecting the cyclist in horribly negative way.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
16091,6,"In ""The Mooring Mast"" by @ORGANIZATION1, there were many obstacles the builders of the Empire State building were faced with in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. There were obstacles such as the fact that if a dirigible were tied to the building by a single tether it would ""add stress to the building's frame."" To fix the problem, over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications had to be made to the building. Another problem was that some dirigibles used hydrogen rather than helium. Hydrogen is highly flammable which would be very dangerous to have over a densely populated area. The ""greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself."" By this, Lüsted means that there are many violent air currents at the top of the building, meaning that the ship would swivel around and around. To make sure this would not happen, lead wieghts would have to be used which would not be practical or safe to have ""dangling high above pedestrians."" In the end, people realized there were far too many problems involved in the use of a mooring mast at the top of the Empire State building.",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
9452,4,"In the story, “Winter Hibiscus"", by Minfong Ho, the author concludes the story with a paragraph with Saeng vowing she will take the test again in the spring. Minfong used this paragraph because it means never give up, even if you fail the first time. For example, Saeng just failed her drivers test but after buying the Hibiscus and taking deeper into things she realized she shouldn’t give up.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
3693,2,"I understand how some people @MONTH1 get offended by some things they @MONTH1 watch or they might read but that doesn't mean that other people shouldn't be able to know about it because one person doesn't like it. It's kind of a matter of opinion of whether it is offensive or not.      I myself have never really read or watched anything that was completely uncalled for. On just about every movie or music album that is produced they rate it so that you can know who should be watching this movie and who shouldn't. If the movie was made with somekind of offensive parts to it then they put with the rating that yes, their is some rude language and things like that. So just because somebody didn't read close enough to see that their might be something they don't like in the movie shouldn't cause everyone else to not be able to see that particular movie.     Personally I don't find books to be the greatest things but I am sure of that some books or magazines do tend to have something rude or crude in them but it's not always horrible. If someone thinks that the book @MONTH1 be inapproiate for some readers then they could tell a person in charge in the library that maybe they should only be letting certain people be reading that book because of the content. You shouldn't have to throw a book off a shelf because one or two people thought bad about it.     If it was me choosing whether or not to take movies, books, magazines, etc off of the shelfs I wouldn't. I say this because @PERCENT1 of the time things have been rated or in someway approved to be put on general store shelfs. People can simply read details on the back and see that it's not going to bother them in a way or that it could be offensive and they shouldn't be purchasing. If someone complained about a new cd or movie that I personally wanted to see or listen to and it was taken off shelfs I would be upset about it because it probley wouldn't even offened me at all. So no, i completely disagree with the idea of movies or books and music having to stop sales because two or three people were offended by it's content",3.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
13119,5,The mood in this memior is happiness because she was so happy that his parents have moved to a bigger apartment then they previously had. She was happy that the landlords daughter was nice and always set the table for them. Sometimes his aunt and cousins would go over and eat at the table as well. He explained that the landlord's daughter was his first friend and she was also his babysitter. He also explained his friendship was happiness.,1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
6848,3,"this story is set in the hot in the hot desert in June and the character is a cyclist trying to get to a National Park. the setting affects the cyclist because the hotter it is the more water you need to keep you hydrated, but the man is alone in the desert. This quote “about forty miles in the pedal I arrived as my first “town”. The place might have been a thriving little syos as one time”. This quote shows how deserted the desert is and how as he rides there is nobody around no where to re-hydrate no where to get drecionsn he was alone.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
8867,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph of, “Winter Hibiscus”, because it takes us back to things that happened in the story. Saeng failed the test before. In the spring the hibiscus will be budding again. Saeng realized that many of the things she thought were strange, were almost familiar to her now. The calls of the snow geese were almost familiar to her. The snow melting will tell her that it is now spring. Some of the things that might happen as a result of spring coming might be that @PERSON1 will past the test. Her mother will be proud of her. Also, Saeng will start to become a customed to her new country and her new surrounding and stopremenising about her life back in Vietnam.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9963,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph, “When they com back, Saeng vowed silently to hersef, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, Then I will take that test again”. I believe the author concluded the story like this because it shows that the hibiscus represented to Saeng a new beginning and to restart what she had failed. When Saeng saw the hibiscus after failing her driving test, it gave her com fort in a time of disappointment, connection to her past experiences, and the abilities she could overcome her obstacles. Therefore, when the narrator says, “when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again"", This implies a new beginning so the hibiscus is representing Saeng. This is why I think the author concludes the story with this paragraph.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
10458,4,Cause every thing that is in this paragraph is in the story somewere. So it really intwines to gether. She learns to adapt to her new home land as dose the plant.  ,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
9004,4,"I think the author concludes the story with that statement because the audience can then compare saeng and the hibiscus. After reading that statement, I realized saeng and the hibiscus are alike because they are both going to make it through and come out on top, (Saeng getting her license and the hibiscus bidding) @CAPS1 the author might have ended the story with that statement because it shows that saeng is committed to working toward her goal and won’t give up. “Saeng  vowed silently to herself, “I will take that test again”, Finally I think  the author concluded the story with that statement because it gives the audience the satisfaction of knowing what is going to happen to saeng but leaving a little mystery for the audience to fill in how  they want. For example, I know saeng is going to take the test again and I believe she will pass it, @CAPS2, another person reading it might believe she failed again and had to retake it again.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9579,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph, “When they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself in the spring, when the snows melt & the geese return & this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again,” so that the audience has something to think about, it gives the story a little more of a dramatic effect.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,1.0
15713,6,"Marcia Amidon Lüsted, in her excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"", describes the obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigables to dock there. One obstacle they would have to faced was realized during the designing of the mast that would be put on top of the building for docking. ""The architects could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof."" (¶ @NUM1) They found that a dirigible docked on top of the building would add too much stress to the building's fram. Therefore, their first obstacle was to make modifications that would strengthen the building's framework. However, as Lüsted points out in paragraph @NUM2, ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself."" Due to rough air currents at the top of the building, the winds would constantly be shifting making even a dirigible tethered to the mast sway around. Another issue was the question of how to weight the dirigables down. In open landing fields, they would weight dirigables down with lead weights. Using extremely heavy weights while being above hundreds of people on the streets would not be acceptable. In conclusion, as one can see, the builders of the Empire State building faced many obstacles in trying to allow dirigables to dock there.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
12001,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir was like hapeness and he had a lot of emotion. Because he really loves his mother, and father and his baby sister. There is lots of emotion because Narciso talks about how he lives were he lives and how long he lived in a one-room apartment. The hapeness part is When he says I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home that was realy a happy and sad memory.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
4050,2,"Somethings on the shelfs in books stores and other places can be very offensive. I think having cuss words in music and sexualy things can be offensive to women. I do listen to some music but noting like that becasue I think it should not be in music and books. One day I Think the @CAPS1.S.A will be ran by a woman.      @CAPS3 is noting wrong with that. Woman have the same rights as @CAPS2 do. @CAPS3 is some people that think woman are just @CAPS3 slaves, that is dead wrong. Woman and @CAPS2 are the same no matter what people say.      Katherine Paterson as the right idea though. It would be great if the law would state that if you think something is offensive you should be able to take it off the shelf and throw it away, but some people would say other because @CAPS3 is some people out @CAPS3 who just care about them selfs and acted what ever way they want to so they can act or make them selfs feel better than they are. @CAPS3 are some kids who like to look and go though magazines and see all that bad thing they think that those people are cool so they teaches them how to acted and do bad things, That it why i think we should be able to take it off the shelfs     @CAPS3 was this one day I was in @CAPS4-mart just looking around and I saw a magazines with some movie star holding her three kids. The title of the magazine was superstar. It really hurt to see those three kids on the cover becasue one day they @MONTH1 not be like @CAPS3 parents and have all the money in the world.      It @MONTH1 seem really stupid these days that some people would care this much, I really think deep down that its life and we all need to get over our selfs becasue we can not all be right and have all the same feelings for life.          All my life I have thought about this subject cause it seems like now days its all about the money, what @CAPS3 wear and what type of car or truck they drive. It seems really stupid but when i see someone who drives a new car worth @MONEY1 it really makes me think about how someone as the money for this car and everything else.",2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
44,1,"People are spending too much time on computers. People that spend to much time on the computer do not have time to interact with family or friends. People spened to much time on the computer. The kids that spend time on the computer get bad grades. They also get tired every easy. First of all people spend to much time on the computer. @PERCENT1 of kids spend @NUM1 to @NUM2 hours on the computer. I once spent @NUM3 hours on my computer on @CAPS1. A lot of kids go on @CAPS1, @CAPS2 and iTunes. My friend spent @NUM4 hours on those websites. People spend way to long on the computer. Another reason, kids that spend time on the computer get bad grades. @PERCENT2 of kids that spend a lot of time on the computer forget to study for test. Once I spent all night on the computer and the next day I failed a test. Kids forget to do homework to. My friend was having so much fun on the computer he forget to do his homework. Kids should get off the computer and worry about school. My final reason, kids get tired from being on the computer for so long. @PERCENT3 of kids get so tired they can't do anything once they get off the computer. I got so tired from being on the computer for so long I took a nap. @PERCENT4 of kids forget they made plans after school. One kid was so tired he blow the plans off that he made with his friends. Kids need to get away from the computer. In conclusion, kids spend to much time on computers. People spend to much time on computer. Kid end up getting bad grade because they spend time on the computer. Aslo, kids get tired very quickly from being on the computer. Something has to be done about this.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
109,1,"Dear editor, @CAPS1 name is @PERSON1, and I believe that computers are a benefit to the world, and people as well. I say this because lots of people can talk to family of friends long distance. Also the computer can teach you lots of thing. Finally it makes you more social. In @CAPS1 strong opinion computers are better for the world. Firstly, many people can talk long distance with family of friends. You have web cam and that allows you to chat and see the person. Also @CAPS2 is another site where you can talk to friends and then you can have a lot and put pictures of yourself and even videos, even though you can talk on the phone and do all this but on the phone it costs money for a plan. When you use a computer it is completely free. Secondly, the computer teaches you things that help you later on in life, and it let's you know things as well. The computer people made programs that can computers and more really cool. The programs teach you how to type, it is called type to learn or type for fun. Also they have programs that let you know how to read. It is great for kids because they need to know these things any ways. Finally, the computer makes you more social. This is because you have @CAPS2 and it let's you know things that happen in school or out of school. You can talk to people on @CAPS2 or email each other and have a conversation with them. You can also meet new people from other places and have a good relationship with them. You have friends with and know who they are and won't need to figure it out. So, this is why I believe that having a computer is a good idea, and good to have. You can talk to people long distance. The computer teaches you things for life. Finally it makes you more social with people. So in @CAPS1 strong opinion it is a good idea to have a computer.",3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
12094,5,"The memoir Narciso Rodriguez from The blue prints of our lives, there is a mood. The mood is very happy and positive and friends and family like, for example they just moved from cuba away from family just for his better life. Also it very helping and sellflly becuse even though ther friends and family were in cuba to parnts moved to New Jersey for a new lif for the kide and make a home. this is the mood of the memoir Narciso Rodriguez.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
15829,6,"The builders faced many challenging obstacles to allow dirigibles to dock at the top of the empire state building. The builders first talked about such as Al Smith to try to make the Empire State building the tallest building in the state, so it would be a great forefront for travelers, and they got it up high to @NUM1 feet. But now there obstacle was to have a dirigible reach the top point of the empire state building. Al Smith wanted for the top of the empire state building to be a landing area, where they could go refueling for hours, or service, and to let passengers on or off the dirigible. So that was one of the obstacles that the builders had to face, to make it work.",0.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,3.0
5992,3,"The features of the setting in “Rough Road Ahead:Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit,” by Joe kurmaksie,greatly affect the cyclist and put him through many hardships that he probably could have avoided.The old cotagers told him about a path they thought was right,but was hard and did not get him to the right place.The features of the setting are described as “flat road was replaced by short rolling hills.”",1.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
1041,1,"I think that people shouldnt use the computer's that much because it make's you want to be on it and on it day. Like yea you can play games on it and talk to people like other people you use of lec see I can understand that but the other people around you like that live's with you people that on the computer all day can spend time with there family and friends and to other places then going to look at them on the computer's I mean like to see other people that you see on the computer like chat or like webcam on the computer, you can maybe go see in a other state and go visited them. then being on the computer people that always on the computer should get out because there never going to do things is they are always on the computer, like when @CAPS1 on the computer @CAPS1 on it for a hour are so the I do things with family and friends, but not all the time that @CAPS1 on it, like i understand if you work on the computer at work and then finishing things at home for your work, but once in a you get to spend some time with family and friends, not @CAPS4 be on it all the time. Some people @CAPS4 come home and @CAPS4 go on the computer and that how people get lazy the start getting fat because they @CAPS4 go on the it and maybe stop to eat and back on the computer, then when they get off of it they will eb all tierd and stuff not feeling like going anywere @CAPS4 to sleep or like if they had sometimes to do after they would be all lazy an not wanted to do anything at all, that why people should get out more and do thing withe there family and friends to have fun withe there like.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
6641,3,"I would think even riding a bike for so long can be bad for the behind. But also good exercising especially for the legs all the strength you get from the muscle. To know where you going could take forever. But I do know what they would have to face all types of weather, but as long as you have gear on no harm could come to you.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
1582,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, I @CAPS3't you agree that computers benefit society? I sure do. I find my computer benefits the society because you can interact with others online. Its easy to find entertainment and @CAPS4 is extremely helpful and profitable. Now you @MONTH1 not beleive computers are "" Society friendly"" but I am here to argue that statement. Now, one thing I love about computers is now easily you can interact with people whether they're miles away or right in your neighborhood, you could chat with them in the push of a button. For instance, my friends all have the infamous? Facebook account. All I have to do is go online, click my chat box and click their name and then @CAPS5! were talking. And the better part is you @CAPS3't have to share any personal details ( @CAPS6 @CAPS7, phone number etc..) to chat on facebook. Wow wasn''t that easy? Did you ever turned on your @CAPS8. scanned through channels and say ""@CAPS9 goods on @CAPS8?"" @CAPS11, with a computer. theres always something to watch. Whethe @CAPS4 old a new, fake a real, live or not, the computer has many things tool/ watch. You could pull up your @CAPS12 browser and go on @CAPS13 (A video site) and watch their wonderful variety of filling. There are atleast @NUM1 million videos on @CAPS13 and @NUM2 being watched/uploded per day. Infact the ""@CAPS14"" views @NUM3+ video a day without noticing @CAPS4. If your looking for stand up, you could type in ""@CAPS15 @CAPS16! If you're looking to action, you type in chan . Basically, the computer and the bad wide web things to do. Now, @CAPS17 stating those two things, @CAPS4 has come to my attention that the computer is also extremely helpful. Say if you have an extremely big test/report due tomorrow, you can study for @CAPS4 online. You can go on google and type in your projects subject and get over @NUM4 results in a fraction of a second depending on your bandwidth. Now, the computer is also profitable. Did you know the two people who made google are dirt rich? They made more than the @ORGANIZATION1 and the company @ORGANIZATION1 makes the mostly used computer system. So once again, the computer is extremely helpful and profitable. This is exactly why I beleive the computer benefits the society. The computer lets you interact with other, keeps you entertained and is very helpful and profitable. So quite frankly, you should beleive that the computer is society benefitcial. Thank you for your time.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
15690,6,"What the builders are faced with while trying to allow dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building, one of them was nature. The winds at the top of the building were always shifting cause of violent air currents. Even if they were able to tie the front of the dirigibles to the building the cable that is holding it will cause pressure to the building. They only way you could have the building not have pressure on it was to modify the building so it can get stronger that would cost over sixty thousand dollars. Even if they were able to get around all these obstacles there is a law against airships flying to low over the city. So either way it would not have been able to happen.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
16082,6,"In the excerpt from, ""The Mooring Mast"", the author, Marcia Amidon Lüsted, explains how the spire of the Empire State Building was originally meant to be used as a mooring mast. This purpose of the spire was never to be fulfilled because of the numerous problems and obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. Some of the biggest problems that the builders faced were unpredictable and violent winds, the use of hydrogen in dirigibles, and air laws. The winds posed to be a problem because even though the front of the dirigible would be tethered to the mast belonged back side would be allowed to swing freely in the wind which could cause it to crash into another moored dirigible. The winds also would make just getting to the Empire a hazardous job. The use of hydrogen was a problem because hydrogen is a volatile gas in the sense that it explodes, which would be very dangerous over a densely populated area. Lastly, the air laws were a problem because the United States has a law that prohibits airships from flying too low over urban areas, which would make a mooring at the Empire State Building illegal.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
12216,5,"What is the mood, created by the author in the memoir? The mood created by the author in the memoir would be loving/warmth. The fact that Narciso's parents would take people in, until they can get back on their feet. ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we concidered family, knowing that they would do the same for us."" Narciso's parents moved to another country to give their children a better life. The sacrificed everything everything leaving their families, friends, and career. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice. I've often told them that what they did was a much more courageous thing I could have ever done."" The home that they are in now is very special to Narciso. Basically, his first everything was done there. ""I will never forget how my parents turned the simple house into a home."" The mood created by the author made me feel grateful for what I have in life.",2.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
228,1,"Dear people from the newspaper, I am concerned that people take too much time on the computer because it could cause trouble, voilence, & illegal crimes. First, I am concerned that people spend too much time on the computer because it couses trouble, in @DATE2, @PERCENT1 @DATE1 people in the @LOCATION1, do bad stuff like starting rumors, & saying bad stuff about people they dispise, in the @DATE1, @PERCENT2 @DATE1 teens form ages @NUM1 were envolven with the rumor spreading. This would be bad for all children. All these reasons will lead to the @NUM2 below. Secondly, I am concerned that people spend too much time on the computer because it couses voilence, because @DATE1 the reasons started in the @NUM3 paragraph, if all this continues, then it @MONTH1 & lead to voilence, in @DATE1 @NUM4 people died from all the crimes online. @NUM5 threats were found online from big websites like @CAPS1, @CAPS2 & @CAPS3. Lastly, I am concerned that people spend too much time on the computer because it could lead to illegal crimes, In @DATE3 a girl was talking to a boy online then when they decided to meet, he shot & killed her. It turned out he was just a person who lied about who he was online, @CAPS4 on a website online, a group @DATE1 men were talking about now much they hated kids so they decided to shot them @ their bus stops. Thank god that the police caught them before they were to do the crime In conclusion, I am concenred that people are spending too much time on the computer because it causes trouble, voilence, & illegal crimes. This @CAPS5 like totally needs to stop before everyone is addicted to spreading rumors. Thank you for your time in reading this letter",3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
231,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 people find the clicking and clacking of computers a nuscense. What they don't realize is thay are helping the youths lives and making them easier and they could be doing the same for them. This is why computers have a very good effect on people. First off computers arn't a bad thing if they are just helping people get to know each other better. You always see ad's for dating websites and other things like that. Did you know that @PERCENT1 of couples meet online. Thats a lot and to think they would have never if it wern't for computers. Second of all computers provide a tremendous amount of entertainment. There are over @NUM1 on computer games online. @CAPS2 of them are free too. I bet almost every kids has played a game on the internet before. Think about it your child could be out getting in trouble or be nice and safe at home playing on the computer. You are probably thinking, computers sound so childish and infantile. Well computers arn't just fun and games. They provide a lot of information. They are very useful for teens in school for projects, but they benefit adults in many ways too. It provides information on vacations, hotels, ext. Also computers now have videos all over on how to do things like how to and other useful information. So as you can see computers arn't just a pain. They help bring people together, provide entertainment and have very useful information. Think about it. A computer might save your life one day. Computers help peoples every day lives and they could be helping yours.",5.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,23.0
1043,1,"Dear local newspaper, @CAPS1 name is @PERSON1 and @CAPS2 writing to talk to you about how computers benefit society. Did you know that @NUM1 out of @NUM2 homes have at least @NUM3 computer in their home? Well who wouldnt! Computers let you learn more because you can research more, its quicker than having to go and look things up in the library, and with tools like @CAPS3 and facebook you can talk to people you normally dont get to see. Computers let you learn more because of the internet. With the internet you can use websites like google, @LOCATION1 and @LOCATION2. When you look stuff upon these websites and many others you can get valuable information that can get you ahead in life. For example, if I was looking up a chocolate chip recipe and I tried different things to make it unique then sold it, just think that life changed with one click on the computer. Also if I had to research a topic for @CAPS1 history project then I would go onto the computer, to google and then type in @CAPS1 topic and be overwelmed by getting the info that I needed and got an at on the project thats how computers help you learn more. Computers are very quick I can make @NUM4 powerpoints slides @CAPS6 with useful information in the time it would take me to go to the library, find a good book and write enough information to make powerpoint slide: on overage @PERCENT1 of people turn to the computer to find useful information. When I was doing @CAPS1 social studies project @TIME1 I had to find out what the @CAPS4 flag looked like. So, instead of trying to possibly find a book on the library. I just hopped on google and clicked images and clicked images and typed in @CAPS4 flag. Within seconds @CAPS1 screen was @CAPS6 with real and edited pictures of the @CAPS4 flag. It is amazing how fast information can travel from the world wide web to your computer. So would you rather be stuck in a library looking up information forever or out enjoying your life because you saved all that time by going on the computer? Have you ever heard of facebook, myspace, @CAPS3, or twitter? Well they are all great ways to communicate with people using the computer. When I am @CAPS3 or facebook I can talk to people that I might not get to see all the time one of @CAPS1 friend from camp lives in @CAPS10 so I dont get to see her alot so with the wonderful invention of facebook I could talk to her all the time. Just think without the computer facebook would have never been invented so I would have most likely lost touch with a good friend. Also when I go on the computer. I have the option signing onto something called @CAPS3 or email. With this I can talk to people and get wacky emails. That would happen if the computer wasnt invented. So dont you want information to be easier to research? Quicker to find out information. And talk to friends more easily. Well lets make it @NUM2 out of @NUM2 homes that have a computer and help benefit society by doing your part and just getting what you need on the computer then enjoying life. Just imagine how much time you are saving by using the computer.",5.0,5.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
6510,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist because there is mo water, hills, and deserts. When the cyclists saw water a wanting to jump in all he thought about was water that they lack like battery acid.Then the hills slowed him down from the water. The desert just made him want water even more. That are some features of the settings that affected the cyclist.",1.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
9623,4,Saeng was very distrout knowing that she didn’t passed the test the test and to her she felt as though it was a let down or disappointment. This sentence shows the ambition and determination that Saeng has so that she will be able to pass this test.,1.0,,,,,1.0,0.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,3.0
9930,4,she said it because she didn’t do what she was sopose to so she said she failed her mother was mad for a second but then stopped she said I love it and asked if she wanted something to eat so the went inside but she took the task as a test so she said next time I will do it right.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
10007,4,"The author concluded the story with the paragraph because it shows that Saeng was not prepare for this test, because she was not accustom to the place, but after seeing the plants that reminded her of home, and knowing that the spring time is when more will blossom, she will be ready to take the test over.",1.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
12318,5,"The mood creatd by the author in the memoir is a happy, loving, and thankful mood. Passionate Cuban music filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen. This is saying that there was a fun vibe in his house when he was growing up which makes you feel happy. ""Growing up in this environment it instilled in me a greate sense that 'family' had nothing to do with being a blood relative."" Here he is talking about the fact that he loves his family, even if he isn't a blood relative with them, that puts me in a loving mood. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" What he was saying was he was grateful to his parents for what they did for him so that makes me feel thankful for my parents. That was the mood I felt created by the author in the memoir.",2.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
12464,5,The @CAPS1 mood in this memoir is loving and thankful and calm. @CAPS2 is just in a verey good mood @CAPS2 is trying to show his gratitude to his parents for what they have done and given up for him. They made a simple little house into a great home for everyone. They gave up great jobs for him so the could move to america. Him saying that @CAPS2 can't even show How grateful @CAPS2 is in that ther selfless shows his thankful and loving mood,1.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
12324,5,"The mood created by the @CAPS1 in this memoir is mostly grateful through the memoir. It's grateful well because the @CAPS1 talks about how thankful he is that he has such loving Parents who risked sacrifised their Jobs, and @CAPS2 everything they had back in Cuba to go to the united states where they did not know the language, had no money, and at the moment no shelter. I know it is grateful because the @CAPS1 clearly says ""I will always be grateful to my Parents For their love and Sacrifice."" this pin-points the mood as well as throughout the excerpt the @CAPS1 speaks about his gratefulness to his Parents. In conclusion the mood to wards the article I think happens to be grateful.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
1518,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3, Computers are a helpful advantage in the @CAPS4's life. It offers and contributes many ideas and actions. Computers help people find a nice spot to travel. Also it helps people meet or make @CAPS1 friends. A computer is another way for people to get thier hand-eye cordination better. Computers are very helpfull in a humans life. Computers are usefull when trying to explore @CAPS1 places. One can book a flight anywhere in a matter of minits on a computer. How else would it be possible to travel somplace far away without booking a flight on a computer. Next, computers help learn about different coltures. Once one has booked reservations to a certain travel spot on thier computer, they will learn much about the unfamiliar land they have went to. My family has gone to many different areas around the world. The trips would not have been possible without help researching and making flights with the computers. The computer makes it possible to experience to territorys. It is a key item when someone is looking to travel. A computer is emensly important when trying to communicate with friends. People can meet and make friends very simply using websites such as facebook on the computer. Facebook creats friendship very easily. I recently waited to get to know a students better. I looked him up on facebook and now we are aqetances. Next, programs on the computers such as A.I.M. help people communicate about anything such as homework to other personal topics. Lastly, if one wants to get to know another better he or she can look at thier blog. They @MONTH1 start to talk and become good friends. Computers are usfull when trying to comunicate or find friends. Computers not only help with travel and friends but it also helps with ones hand eye cordination. Typing letters while looking at a screen is using the hand eye coordination. This action can help with sports. For example in baseball one must have a good hand eye cordination to help catch and hit the ball. Secondly, with hand eye cordination getting better with the computer. it helps kids fit in. If one has good hand eye cordination they can play sports are make friends. If one becomes good with hand eye cordination and typeing they will be able to get a job writing for a newspaper or a book. Hand eye cordination and typing with computers can lead to a succesfull life. Computers in an @CAPS5 life can help in the long run. It will help with travel plans, friends, and hand eye cordination.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
350,1,"Dear local newspaper, @CAPS1 you imagine a world without computers? Well I @CAPS1't because I think computers are great. First of all if you have a computer you @CAPS1 meet new people. Second you @CAPS1 do projects on them or homework if you need to. Lastly in a computer you @CAPS1 basically find out anything you want to know. Read ahead and discover why I think computers are great. Who doesn't like meeting new people, because I do. If you wanted to get new friends or find anyone who go to your school and you might not now you @CAPS1 look them up on your computer. Also if you had nobody to talk to one time you @CAPS1 go on the computer and try to meet new people. I know I do that all the time. Lastly it doesn't hurt anymore to make friends or talk to people online. it's actually fun once you try it. So that's why I think one reason that computers are great is because of the people you meet. Second reason why computers are great is because if you have to print something or make a project a computer @CAPS1 help. My science teacher always wants assignments printed and how @CAPS1 I do that with out a computer. Also if one day you forgot your homwork or any assignments just ask a friend online of if you have a school website look on it. Therefore computers are great because all assignments look ,better when they are printed. My last reason is because on a computer you @CAPS1 pretty much look for anything. For example, say you wanted to find a place to go to and you didn't have a adress or anything, you @CAPS1 always check on the computer. Also if their is a problem or something with you house, car, bills, or anything you @CAPS1 always see if you @CAPS1 get any hekp on internet. Lastly if you wanted to buy anything and you could't find it any stare you @CAPS1 just get it online. So basically like I said you @CAPS1 do anything. In conclusion I think omputers have a great effect on life. First you @CAPS1 meet how people or friends. Second you @CAPS1 do projects or homework. Lastly you @CAPS1 basically do anything on a computer. So that's why I think computers are great and they @CAPS1 help alot in life instead of hurting anyone.",4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
896,1,"Dear local Newspaper, This is a letter about how I feel about the effects of computers. I think computers are great you can, interact with family and friends, learn about things going on around the world, and it could help you with school work. First I would like to say that you can interact with family and friends. You can just go on facebook, @CAPS1, or,myspace and talk, send pics, and comment on other peoples things. There are many groups you can join too, wich allows you to talk to other people and meet new friends. You can also interact with your family if they have a facebook or @CAPS1. The second reason why computers are not bad is because that there are many websites that you can find different information like science, math, history and all that kind of stuff. There are alot of different topics you can learn. You can find information from the weather to where your family history comes from. My last reasoning for thinking this way is that many kids do their homework on computers and if people are saying that computers are bad than the parents are not going to allow them to use the computer for educational purposes like homework and projects. There are many other reason why computers have a positive effects of people. But interacting with family and friends, learning about things around the world and your education depends on computers.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
9191,4,The author concludes the story with that ending paragraph like that because when the spring comes back she going to try again. When I was reading this story it’s says in the story that her mother had asked her “What happened.” And the Saeng said “I- I failed the test”. So I am predicting that her mother is going to help her more with her studying and with her gardening. When the snow melts and Saeng vowed to herself that this time she work harder and past the test.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
15441,6,While building the Empire state building people had to go through some obstacle to have it the way they want. They wanted Dirigibles to be able land/bord on the Empire state building. One of there obstacles was the use in New York City and a lack of suitable landing area. The other obstacle was a good one. The use of Dirigibles for the mooring mast was successful.,0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
9044,4,"In the story “Winter Hibiscus” by Minfong Ho. The author expresses how the girl believes with her memories and once she changes and adapts to the culture that’s when she will have the courage to re take the test she failed that day. Saeng misses her home so much and she can’t grasp that their are similarities between her new home to her old home. “She realized that many of the things that she had thought of as strange before had become, through the quiet repetition of season upon season, almost familar to her now”. Saeng didn’t want to expect the move but noticeing that she won’t forget any memories she starts to take on new memories. At first everything was so different now she is starting to remember things about her new home which is a sign of comfort to her. “She found that she was still too shaky to say the words at home, lest she burst into tears again."" With Saeng’s feelings of the change the ending paragraph lets the reader know that there is hope for moving on her knew home. She is gradually starting to gain confidence and she knows when she does she can take her test an succeed at it. The author shows how good change can be if your willing to adapt. Everything might not always be as perfect as you know it to be but your courage will make a happy home with new and old memories, As Saeng starts to relize during the last paragraph.",2.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
1075,1,"Dear readers, I right to you today about the effects of computer usage. I feel that there are some positive and some negative effects from using the computer. You can talk to people, and you can get work done, but if you are at this to much you'll be starting to gain bad health and miss other things in life. Throughout the computer, there is many ways to communicate with others, which is an amazing thing. Whether it be through a game, typing or real chatting, it's very important to talk to people and this makes things much easier than going out nad talking to people face to face. For, example penpals, over the years people have written letters to their penpals, but know you can send it over mail and email doesn't cost any money, just type up your letter click a button and done. Another positive point about computers is that you're able to get work done on it. From work for a business to school work, it doesn't matter. You bear of people using computers to do work all of the time. Why do you think there are computer labs at school or desks with computers in offices. Computers have become advanced and the easiest thing to get things done with. Presentations, essays, graphs, anything. A concern I have of the computer is that people are becoming to addicted to computers. Many younger people are overusing computers wich leads to bad health. When people sit in front of a computer screen all day only getting up to grab something to eat, people will because obese. To stall healthy people need to be outside and exercise. We need to make rules to keep people out in the open out to give the generation a healthy life. So, I have mixed feelings about computers. They can be amazing for a while but only for a while. And if you can't see this open your eyes",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
6076,3,"There are @NUM1 features of the setting that affects the cyclist on his journey. There is a lack of water, in the middle of nowhere, and nobody’s there. Due to lack of water, this feature really affects the cyclist. He will need water in all to move and get through his journey. Water is the main thing he should have. He could end up getting dehydrated and might cause him to die right in the middle of the street. Therefore water is one feature that affects the cyclist.  Furthermore he’s in the middle of nowhere. There is no buildings or nothing around, not even gas stations so where it is can stop and if he had money he would be able to buy about @NUM2 or @NUM3 bottles of water and maybe even a few snacks. That is another feature that will affect him. Lastly nobody’s around town in able to help him out or anything. Let’s say that he gets lost and he’ll need direction to get wherever he’s going well there’s nobody around in able to help him get around or anything. In conclusion those are the @NUM1 main features that will defentily affect the cyclist. ",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
3329,2,"I do belive that certain stuff should be removed from the libraries like stuff that little kids should not be able to see. They should be in the other room to where you have to have like a id to get in. They should make sure about this cause you dont want your little son looking at like playboy. I know i dont.     Little kids should not be reading books with alot of swearing and evrything cause no kid needs to act like that. It bothers them they could get in trouble with school and at home.     Yes it @MONTH1 be true that adults like to read about sex, and drugs but do we really want our kids reading the same stuff that we read. Some people just need to think about what they just leaving out in the librarys because little kids loves to see new stuff all the time.     So next time you working at the library or just there vistiing you might wanna watch where you put stuff at cause little kids will see it.",2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
15613,6,"Based on the excerpt, The Mooring Mast, obstacles for the builders of the Empire State Building were presented because dirigibles were to dock there. The first obstacle was safety because most dirigibles from outside of the @LOCATION3 were filled with hydrogen which is very flammable compared to helium. The builders were concerned because on May 6, 1937 the German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by fire, since it was filled by hydrogen, in Lakehurst, New Jersey. The second obstacle was nature: ""The winds... were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around the mooring mast"" (paragraph @NUM1). This meant that passengers could not get off safely and the dirigible could hit anything in the vicinity if swung a wrong way. The last obstacle was an existing law against airships fly too low over urban areas which means that it was illegal for a ship to tie up to a building or approach the area. Therefore, the builders of the Empire State Building who attempted to allow dirigibles to dock there were presented many obsticles as shown by the excerpt, The Mooring Mast.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
12192,5,The mood created by the @CAPS1 in the memoir is very sensative way. And what I mean by that in paragrap @NUM1 and @NUM2 it sound's like the @CAPS1 is getting real emotional. It say's in paragraph @NUM1 I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and scrifice.,1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
3314,2,"People all judge things differently. Thats why I feel that libraries should keep those kinds of books. What @MONTH1 be found as a offenisve book to one person might not to another one. If there are people saying that the certain books are offensive, then they should take them out of the library. You shouldn't take one book out because one person thinks it is offensive.          What might be offensive to one person @MONTH1 interest another. The person that doesn't think it is, should have the right to read the book. That would be taking the rights for people away because a person finds it offensive. The person might find the book useful because they want to learn about the topic more. They will never get to learn about it if they take the book out because one person finds it offensive or doesn't like it.           I personally like watching movies or reading books that are thrilling and @MONTH1 have some violence in them. If the library took these books or movies out because a mother saw her son or daughter read or waching then it would be wrong. The mother would be taking away what I like to read and watch. Thats not fair at all. A way to solve this issue is to have certain areas for each type of age group; therefore, they would be watching or reading types of things acceptable for their age group.          I understand the fact that some people take things offensively. Also that they don't want their children to pick up a book or movie that isn't acceptable for their age group. They have to understand though that sometime people like those type of things, and they are taking it away from the people who enjoy them. It is like taking rights away from people because they don't agree with what is happening. It wouldn't be right at all to take those books out of the library.                     All people have different views about things. You can't change a thing if one person doesn't like it. People have rights to pick up a book if they want to or not. Not everyone is the same, so not all people are going to think the same way. I like things that some people might not like, that is just how human nature is",3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
13202,5,"The mood is warm, happy nice. His parents were open with warm hearts, kindness to anybody in trouble. The would have people over and stay with them as long as they like.",1.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
1194,1,"Letter to the @CAPS1 I disagree with the so-called ""experts"" that claim that computers could have negative effects on people. The idea that you socialize less with family and friends is a pathetic arguement. Social networking sites like @CAPS2 or @CAPS3 allow @CAPS22 with all your friends @CAPS4 and other online games help you met new people that could be hundreds of miles away from you! Twiter is good when you just want to say something quick like ""@CAPS5 to @LOCATION1"". @CAPS18 allows you to talk to friends, comment on their videos, and subscribe to them, plus it provides hours of entertainment without a fee. Computers also can provide fun games and entertain users. There are many free games, like @PERSON1, that have endless possibilities. @PERSON1 @PERSON1 (made by @CAPS6) claims to be the most popular @CAPS7 (@CAPS8 @CAPS9 Online @CAPS10-playing @CAPS11) on the web. You can level up combat skills: attack, defence, strength, ranged, and magic. Or you can level up skills like wood cutting, prayer, farming, fishing, mining, and cooking. @PERSON1, like most @CAPS4, has quests, with varying difficulties. For example, for one quest you have to kill a demon, but for another, just find a missing cat. There are over @NUM1 quests, and there are never fewer than @NUM2 people playing at a time. Some other notable @CAPS13 games are @ORGANIZATION1 @CAPS14: @CAPS15, @CAPS16 of @CAPS17, @ORGANIZATION2, @LOCATION2, and @ORGANIZATION1. As you can see, the computer has an impressive list of entertaining @CAPS11 for all ages, not to mention sites like @CAPS18 or addicting games. Computers don't really affect exercising. That's a personal choice, so you have to choose between @CAPS2 or the basketball court. It's like saying that before we had computers or video @CAPS11 consoles, that a @CAPS20 board stopped kids from exercising. The computer doesn't actually stop us from exercising. It's our minds that do, and our judgement. If you have bad judgement, you'd stay inside all day tweeting and @CAPS21. With a good strong mind and willpower, you can overcome a bad decision and play sports or go to the gym. All it takes is good judgement. Just to recap what I've said, @CAPS22 is plenty on computers and there are many choices on how to do it. Many sites amuse us, and we should make use of that. Not to mention you can buy games like @CAPS16 of @CAPS17 or @ORGANIZATION1 @CAPS14: @CAPS15 for your @CAPS13! Computers don't actually hinder exercising, all it takes is good judgement to get off that chair and exercise.",4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,23.0
3748,2,"Should certain books and magazines be removed from the shelves if found offensive ? YES! Children shouldnt be exposed to certain things. Some books and magazines are to explict for children at certain ages. Children should read books that meet their age group. If children read books that are inapporiate for their age they might start to act out that way. Parents should try and remove all books that are offense to their children because that can have a real bad affect on them. Children at a certain age group should read books thats on their level and apporiate for them.          Certain books, magazines, music, and movies are to explict for kids these days. I think they should all be blocked and out of children reach. If children started to listen inapporiate music and read offense books it might affect the way they act. Children shouldnt be exposed to things that might brain wash them. If kids start toread horrible book and listen to bad music imagine what affect it might have on them in the world we live in today!     I think parents should try and do all they can to keep certain things out of the reach of their children. Parents should protest and call meetings to make sure libraries are taking inapporiate things off the shelves for kids. Parents should want to keep kids far away form certain things that @MONTH1 appear offense. It will mean that they'll doing their job as a good parent.      Sometimes kids wont always agree with what the parent might say but they hav to realize it could be whats best for them. Parents shouldn't always want to be their child friend because, sometimes kids would run over you. I know from personal exprience because sometimes peoplecan take kindness for weakness! Being a parent you should already be prepared for things like this.     In conclusion explict magazines, books, and music should really be taken off the shelves from kids. It might expose children somethings that isnt always good for them",3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
7551,3,"The many features of the setting affected the cyclist in many different ways. The beauty of nature around him affected him by making him laugh. In the essay, it says, “ on a gorgeous day in June caused him to laugh.” This shows, despite what happened, he was might are on a nice day outside giving him an optimistic attitude. Also, the beating sun affected him in a different way. It caused him to sweat and almost die of dehydration. “ growing realization that l could drop from heatstroke ” This shows that he was tensely aware that he could die from the suns might. So, the settings around the cyclist affected him in different ways.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
14984,6,"The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there was for many differents reasons. One of them is the wether, ""the greatest obstacle to sucessful use of the mooring mast was nature itself. The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents"". The second one is that they have a law aganist airships, ""was an existing law aganist airships flying too low over urban areas"". The also have have the problem is that the dirigible will be dangling high above people reads, ""...they would be dangling high above pedestrians on the street, was neither practical nor safe"". This is some of the problems that they have.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
7242,3,"The features of the setting affects the cyclist in the story. In the story, it says, “The water bottles contained only a few tantalizing sips. I could drop from a heatstroke.“ This statement clearly says that where the cyclist was riding, water was very hard to find and scare. He is talking about how he will die if he doesn’t get water. Another example is that there are no buildings around and is deserted with no one around and many hills and roads. In the story it says, “the terrain changing flat road was replaced by short rolling hills. This means that he was partially all by himself and he had no one to go to.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
3296,2,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1 ,           I dissagre with removing materials from the library. I personally do not think it is the libraries fault if someone is offened by books, movies , music or magazines etc. If they did not like the book or movie it is their fault for picking it in the first place. Children who are under the age of thirteen should not be able to watch movies that are not for them , they should not be seeing those bad movies or scary movies at such a young age.     I  want the libraries to think this over ; because it is not fair to adults or older children. Movies that are funny entertain children daily ; some children even quote movies and make other children laugh. I know for a fact us teens watch funny movies to make our rough day turn into a better day , well that is what I do at least. There are some movies out there that are just so funny , I could quote ever line of it.     Music on the other hand is very important to teens these days. It is always enjoyable to me. I love music without it I'm not quite sure where I would be in this world. I love many  different kinds of music , most of it is very fun to listen to. I'm not a big fan of rock , you would not see me picking that up from the library.Us teens love music , we use music for pretty much everything. We dance to it , sing to it , workout to it , and most of all we just enjoy it.      Books are always important , even though I do not like to read that often I still like to read books that interest me. For example you would not see me reading a scary book , because it would just remind me of the movie , and I would have nightmares. The books that interest me the most are fiction books. My two favorite books are A @CAPS1 To @CAPS2, and The @CAPS3 @CAPS4. Both of those books are by the author @PERSON1. I love all of his books but these ones are the best.      Please re think your decission about getting rid of the bad music , books , and  movies. @CAPS2 it is not the libraries fault it is the people who are borrowing them. If they do not like it then they should have never taken it home in the first place. I say we just let it be, and let people be happy",4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
6441,3,"In the story “Do not Exceed Posted Speed Limit,"" the features of the setting affect the cyclist, it say this because the cyclist enables us of what is going around him and he feels about it. It says, “one ramshack shed, several rusty pumps and a coral that couldn’t hold the lamest mule greated me. The author goes on to say that it troubled him. Actually that made the author scared that maybe he was all alone in the desert with ghost town. The unplanned that the roads were rusty where the speed limit was 55 mph since he barely had any water he was going 12 mph. This tells me, he’s troubled and confused about the surrounding ways, because it all desert seem light it became the author is slowly loosing hope on the travels further and further. I think it’s the same week people that as soon as trouble comes; or looks like it’s among they start losing hope and their better judgment, and life seems a lot harder.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
13536,5,"In the memoir, ""@PERSON1"" from Home: The @CAPS1 prints of our Lives the mood created by the author is that he wasn't happy moving to @LOCATION1 at first but after being in a home with his loving family he liked it. Even though he had to work and he was an immaigrant he was happy. The only reason he was happy was because he was with his family and thats what is important to him. He was from Cuba and immigrated from Cuba to @LOCATION1. The mood of the story is not happy, happy, and sad. this is what the mood created by the auther is.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
15378,6,"The builders of the Empire State building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One of the problems was that a thousand-foot dirigible held by a single cable tether would add stress to the frame. The obstacle they went through was to make the frame stronger. In paragraph @NUM1 it states the obstacle they went through to make the building stronger. ""the architects designed a shiny glass and chrome-nickel stainless steel tower."" and ""The rocket-shaped mast would have four wings at its corners.""Other obstacles they went through was making sure the mooring mast was tall enough, and in paragraph @NUM2 Smith says, ""people in Washington are figuring on some safe way of mooring airships to this mast.""",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
9302,4,"“When they come back,Saeng vowed silently to herself .in the spring ,when the snow melt and the geese return and his hibiscus is budding ,then I will take the test again “.So which mean when they come back she has to make a test up ,so they don’t have to worry about it later.But  on there trip they seen a lot of different thing ,the soil was cold and hard they couldn’t much with it.She though it was walking into another world ,hot, moist world exploding with with greenery @CAPS1  frends and ones of shades and shapes grew in seemingly random profusion .And beside it was yet another old  friend a small shrub with waxy leaves and the dainty flower with the purplish petals and white centers .It was already dusk when Saeng reach home ,the wind was blowing hard tearing off last remants of green in the chicory weeds that grew thre the crack of the sidwak .So @CAPS2 to they saw a lot of thing on their trip.So saw thing  they never  seen before like the wed growin therw the sidewalk.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
11976,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is depressing. I think that because it talks about his parents getting immigrated and then the end is sort of happy, because his parents turned it into a home.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
16174,6,"There were multiple obstacles that made the idea of docking dirigibles foolhardy from the start. ""When the German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by fire..."" (@CAPS1 @NUM1) the idea of such a volatile object over the population became far more of a threat than a luxury. Lead weights needed to support the craft could not be supplied, and would also prove to be hazardous. Given the Empire State Building's nature, the modifications became hasselsome and added unnecessary difficulty. The winds at that altitude would also provide docking issues and instability. Finally, the airplane overtook the blimp, because it could travel faster and hold the same, if not more, number of people in a small area. Blimps became dangerous and cumbersome, and would not benefit New York as Al Smith had hoped.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
7022,3,The features of the setting effect the cyclist is many different ways. One way is the hilly terrain makes him work harder and wears him out. Since the cyclist is getting worn out he needs to drink more and more water. Now that he’s drinking more water his running out of it faster and wanting more and more of it. Then when he starts to use less water to conserve it until he gets to the next town he starts to become dehydrated and more tired and he starts to feel weak. Also because the terrain is hilly his legs are working harder to go up the hills and his legs become tired. It also starts to get hotter and he gets thirsty more often. That is how the setting affects the cyclist.,2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
16502,6,"Based on the excerpt, the obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there were, the one obstacle to thier expanded use in New York City was the lack of a suitable landing area, also saw a opportunity for his Empire State Building to have a mooring mast added to the top of the building that would allow dirigibles to anchor there for several hours for refueling or service, or to let passengers off and on. Also dirigibles were docked by means of an electric winch, which hauled in a line from the front of the ship and then tied it to a mast. In conclusion, these are the obstacles which the builders of the Empire State Building faced, to allow dirigibles to be docked.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
10427,4,"In the story Winter Hibiscus written by @CAPS1 Ho. The narrarator goes to a greenhouse that has many flowers but one in perticular catches her eye. A ''winter'' Hibiscus plant. This plant reminds her of her homeland and everything that used to take place there this plant also reminds her of  her grandmother's long silkly gray hair and how she used to watch her dry it in the sun and then she would help her knot it up into a ton with a bud of this plant in it. The author ends the story with this because it counters her statement when she say ""I-I failed the test."" and the end of this passage  says  ""..., then I will take the test again"".",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
12130,5,"The mood the author created in the memoir was calm, @CAPS1 saying ""Here, the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the backdrop to life in our warm house."" she gives off a calm relaxed feeling. And makes us portra a peaceful setting.",0.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
15259,6,"the builders of the Empire State Building faced various obstacles and challenges in allowing dirigibles to dock there, including how to attach the mast and how to move people between the dirigible and the building. In order to attach the mast where the dirigibles would land, the builders could not simply fasten it with the cable teather to the top of the building. This would ""add stress to the building's frame"" with the combined pressure of the dirigibles load and the wind pressure. Therefore, the builders had to get the pressure down into the ground by strengthening and altering the building's steel frame.Another obstacle the builder's faced was the challenge of transporting people and luggage from the building to a dirigible floating in the air. The dirigibles would only be tethered by their front ends, but gondola, where the passengers rode, was located underneath the dirigible. this meant the construction of ""a gangplank to an open observation platform"" from which the people and luggage had to be moved @NUM1 floor by a special elevator. Although the builders of the Empire State Building faced various obstacles in building the mast, the one they really should have considered was the dager and impracticalness of docking dirigibles @NUM2 stories over New York City.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
10468,4,The author concluded this paragraph in this story because I think that he is tring to tell the reader a message. The author is tring to say that if a plant can mak it through the cold winter then she can pass her driver’s test. That is why I think the author included that paragraph. ,2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9015,4,The author concluded the story with this paragraph because she can not wait until spring because her plant will budd and it will remind her of her home land again. She can not wait to take the test in spring because she would have been alsole to stayed and she @MONTH1 pass the test in the spring because she did not pass it the first time she toke the test. Maybe she concluded the story with this paragraph because she @MONTH1 like the spring and she can not wait for it to come.    ,0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,1.0
37,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS1 has been brought to my attention that some people feel that computers are bad for us. Some people say that they are a distraction to our physicaland mental health. Although I can see how some people would think this, I believe that computers are a good benifit to all society. I believe this because computers can help people learn, stay intach with friends or family that live faraway, and stay orginized. Sometimes people are on the computer, learning and they don't even know @CAPS1. Simply by visiting the @ORGANIZATION2 homepage, you automaticly see the news feeds of things happening around the world. Other times people go online diliberatly to learn. If someone is thinking about going to @LOCATION1 then they would probably go on the internet to learn about @CAPS1. Simply by searching equadore many choices will pop up you climate, sesonal weather, hotel options, and other farts. But thats not the only way people are learning on the internet. Now, many college students have the option of taking their lessons online. This is because some students like calm quietness or own house the distractions of sitting in class. Friends could be a big distraction in class, but how can you stay intouch with your friends if they moved away? I remember in second grade my bestfriend, @LOCATION2, move away. I was so sad. I badey ever talked to her, but then one day our parents set us up on a vidio chat! I felt like I was right their with her! This was great, and I though about how many people could use this to talk to relatives or friends. Another great way to stay intouch into friends and family is through e-mail. By writing a message and sending @CAPS1 can make staying in touch so easey, and your personal wants can chat and emails are a easey thing to send world wide. So many people love to type on a keyboard as well, but so many different papers that you type could be lost. I, for me, hate clutter, and I have so many school binders for papers to be lost in. This is why I take great advantage of typing my paper every chance I get. My computer keeps me orginiced because I could never loose my work. File save, is an idiot proof way to keep all your files in a safe place. Then all you have to do is press print to get a hard copy. I am sure that many people love using their computer for the same reason. Also, I myself am a much faster typer than I am writer so my work is a lot needey on the computer. As you can see their are plenty of reasons why using a computer is goof for our society you can learn, stay intouch with friends and family, and stay orginiced. Many people, could agree with me. Don't you?",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
4432,2,"Do I think that certain books, music, movies, magazines should be removed from our librarys. No i dont think they should be removed, they could be placed in another part of the library away from all the other books that aren't offensive.     If they did decide to remove these books are kids would have a hard time learning about the truth. Book publishers put only what they want are kids to learn. Most of the time they leave out bits and pecies about what really happened. So if they took the offensive books, music, movies, and magazines out, a lot of kids would just go home everyday and sit around or cause trouble. From my own experience, I enjoyed reading, listening, and watching the offensive materials they want to take out of our librarys. So if you don't like the offensive materials then don't even look at them, that will solve your problem, and teach your children that to.     Overall I think they should keep the offensive materials. If people still complain, move it to another part of the library, in seperate room or somethin of that kind. This should solve the problem of kids reading, listening, and watching these kinds of things.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
15783,6,"The builders of the Empire State building faced many obstacles when they tried to build a mast to allow dirigibles to dock there. First of all, some dirigibles were highly flamable because they use hydrogen instead of helium. A German dirigible named Hindenburg was destroyed due to a fire and once the Empire State Building noticed how much worse it could've been in a higher populated place like New York, their hopes went down a little bit. Another obstacle was one that couldnt be fixed, because it was caused by nature. It was the violent winds. The excerpt stated ""Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast."" The only solution was to put lead weights in the back, but then they would be hanging over pedestrians, which is definatly not safe. The last thing that stopped them was a law that was against any airships the flew too low in urban areas. All in all, the builders faced too many obstacles to build a mast for dirigibles",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
4198,2,"Libraries across the world are facing the obstacle of censorship. Censorship has become a bigger deal in this day and age. @CAPS4 can effect books, music, movies, magazines, and many more. This posts the question is censorship a good thing or is @CAPS4 bad?      Censorship allows certain books to be removed from the shelves of a library if a certain person finds the book to be offensive. Everyone has there own opinion about things so why should that effect what we are allowed to learn? What one person finds offensive could be perfectly fine with everyone else. Plus you are not being forced to @CAPS3 something you @CAPS1'@CAPS2 want to. If you find @CAPS4 ofensive then one solution is very easy, @CAPS1'@CAPS2 @CAPS3 @CAPS4!     Censorship not only effects the learner, @CAPS4 effects the writer. Censorship takes away the one thing a writer has, there freedom of speech. Writers create books, music, and magazine articles to voice there thoughts on topics, to show others how they see the world, and to show what might happened to them in their life. Because writers do this, @CAPS4 makes a connection with the reader that they can understand and relate too. Writers have a choice what they want to convey to the world and they should be given the privalge to do so.      Even if you are able to put a censorship on books and music at a library, you can'@CAPS2 censor the internet. The internet has become a place where anyone around the world can find websites that they like, where there are books, music, magazines, and even shopping stores. A library is a public library just like the internet is public too. Anyone should be able to acess @CAPS4 and enjoy what they like.      Putting censorship on things is almost equivilent to not letting a teacher teach because of there nationality or not letting our president give a speech because he is @CAPS5. Censorship is based on a opinion someone has. @CAPS4 shouldn'@CAPS2 effect the learners or the writers. Censorship holds back the voice of society and the thoughts of everyday people. Censorship should not even exist",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
9466,4,"Authors sometimes use intisting sentences as there concludy sentence that you @MONTH1 have a hard time understding. In the story “Winter Hibiscus” The author concludes her story by saying “when they come back. Saeng vowed siletly to herself, iN the sprng, when the snows melt and the gesse return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” The author says this to show that Saeng is not ready to gardam yet and needs to lean more. The mother is verry disapointed in the daghter for buying a plant that is very expensve and shows her inexperience in that buying thigs because of your fodings is wrong. This is showed wha they say “I paid over Nineteen dollars for it."" ” You what?” She also, says “ @CAPS1 facing. Na where did you gott that"" showing her suprise of the expensve beutiful plant. Authes use those paragraphs and sentences to show or recap the story. The Author of “winter hibiscus” @CAPS2 her story with the paragraph because Saeng shuld Not hav boght the plant bascal a hav emotions and that she shall try agan Next year to not mess up.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
951,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, I agree with the experts when they say people are spending too much time on the computers. The reason for this is that one, people don't get enough exercise. Two, new websites have been made and people want to see how @CAPS1 works. Three, more and more teenage kids have the new technology. Their on @CAPS1 all the time, and don't realize their not spending any time with their family. Now that you know that lets move on to my first reason. First of all, people are spending a lot of time on the computer they don't have time to go outside and exercise, More people probably figure they don't need to go outside. Really they do, @CAPS1's important that they get their body moving and blood flowing through their body. Another thing is that we don't always need to get the answers off the computer. @CAPS1's east to find friend and play a game with them. Find something to do other than play games on the computer. Now that you know let's move on the second reason. Second of all, the computer network came up with new ideas for the computer. They now have facebook. More and more people use facebook now. This right here shows us they won't get out and play, this also means most kids won't do their homework. Another thing is that either parents set a time on the computer or they take @CAPS1 a way. Their is just so much amount of time you can be on the computer for and not get bored. Now that you know that lets move on to the last reason. Third of all, I would like to say people are spending more time on the computer than with their own family. The reason I say this is because @CAPS1 is important to spend as much time with family and friends instead of being on the computer @NUM1. We need to know also what's going on in our daily life. Another thing is that our family is way better than some game on the computer go outside with you family and play a game of wiffle ball. Now that you know that lets moves on to the conclusion. In conclusion, You have read an essay talking about how people spend more time on the computer rather than go outside to exersice, new website to keep them on longer, and not spending enough time with their family and friends. @CAPS1 is important to have a time limite on the computer and get up and moving. Don't be a lazy couch potato and sit on the computer all day get out and spend time with you family and friends, I hope you agree with me. ",5.0,5.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
6363,3,"The features of the setting effect the cyclist in, “Do not Exceed posted speed Limit.” By changing him physically. He was in the California desert in the middle of June without any water left. This was taking a physical toll on him. His physical effect was making him feel hopeless as well. He says, “It was a sad hopeless laugh mind you, but at least l still had the energy to feel sorry for myself."" So the way he was suffering from dehydration physically effected his emotional state because he felt as though there was nothing he could do. Had he been in another place, for example @LOCATION2, where it does not get newly a shot as soo thon California, he would not have been suffering from dehydration, as have been in such an isolated place. His cycling could be compared to the climbers who were lost in the snow storm in @LOCATION3. Instead of dehydration and heat strone, however they suffered from hypothermia. Had they been on a different mountain, there would have been no snow storm and they would be fine. The outcome of this story and the climbers was determined by their setting.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
1625,1,"I belive that computer technology is a positive effect on people. I think this because it can teach you how to type faster, learn about far away places, and talk to people online. Here are some reasons why. My first reason is because the computer can teach you how to type faster. For example, for the use of your fast writting you can get a good job/career and can have a future in your life. Another example, is because you can type e-mails faster and don't need to type slow. Last example, is that you can improve you typeing skills and become a better typer. My second reason is because you can learn about far away places. For example, you can learn about other countries and how it's different from our country and how their alike. Another example, is you can use it for projects, get all your information and be prepare for a great project. Last example, is you can always learn something everyday from your computer, like news, weather etc. My third reason is because the computer allows you to communicate with other people. For example, you can talk to your friends and family to check in on them and see how their doing. Another example, is when your bored you can always talk to someone on the computer and have fun with it. Last example, is you can talk to your friends and plan when to hang out and go outside and get fresh air, That way you don't have to be in your house all day. That's why I think that computer technology is a good idea because it can teach you how to type faster, learn about far away places, and allows you to talk to people online. I hope you agree with me also, and should think that computer technology is a good idea for everyday for lots of reasons.",5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,22.0
15847,6,"In the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"", the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock. For one just letting a thousand foot drigibles land on the top of a building was a huge obstacle.. By having the dirigible on the building held on by one cable tether was bad. So the builder had to work on the steel frame of the building so that the dirigible wouldn't add so much stress to the building. That was a huge obstacles the builders of the Empire State building had to face.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
4538,2,"Do you believe in hiding books and movies that are over @CAPS1? Do you think that children can control themselves with offensive behavor? Have you ever seen a child watch a scary movie that was @CAPS2 @CAPS3? Why do you think that most parents block that kind of viewings from their young children? I believe that materials such as books, music, movies, and magazines should be removed from the shelves from children, if they are found offensive.       I fully agree with adults not letting children watch that new scary movie or that action book their brother is reading. I think they should consider the effects that come with watching or reading certain things. Children at young ages still have their innocence. You don't want your child having nightmares because you let them watch a over @CAPS1 rating movie. You would feel guilty if the child has problems for the rest of their life.      You have to make a choice on whether the it's comfortable for them to view what their watching or reading! It's important to hid them so the child can not get ahold to them. Be wise of the kind of movies and books you leave around the library. You should have a section for children in libraries. You should have all the materials that a child should be interested in. It should be colorful and playful as possible.      I used to watch this girl named @CAPS5. I was babysitting her one night, while her parents were at the movies. I brung a movie to watch, when @CAPS5 fell asleep. So once the clock turned to @NUM1, I put her to sleep. But little did I know she woke up and @ORGANIZATION1 me watching this horror film called @ORGANIZATION1. It gushed blood everywhere and she started to sceam! I thought I had secured her in her bedroom, to go to sleep but to my surprise she was still woke! I rushed over to her and put her back to sleep. hoping she didn't have any nightmares.     Please be curtious to the things youlet children read or see. You have to think of the effects of what's going to happen to the child later in life. I know you think that it's not that harmful to children, but it can really mess up their minds and actions forever. So I hope I have persuaded you to follow my advice and pull them over @CAPS1 movies and books off the shelves for the safety of the children",4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
6368,3,"A cyclist is a bike rider. They can be in groups of diffrent people or they can be a solo cyclist. Some cyclist go for a few miles riding there bikes some can go for more like @NUM1 miles, some go over hills, go trow water they do alot with what they do. They have alot of time on there hards to ride a bike that far.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
6619,3,"I think that there were many things contributing to the cyclists state at the end of the story. First, there was the fact of time. He was cycling in June which is very hot due to it is summer. Second, he was cycling through California which is warm even in early @DATE1. And third he was traveling through the deserts. So if you put all of that together. He was cycling on a hot June day in the deserts of California. These @NUM1 things all contributed to the characters state. He went through dead towns in his search for water and found an old well pump with extremely hot water, that tasted like battery acid. He drank to much water at the begining which left him with just spit toward the end. He was lucky to find a fish camp in the middle of nowhere and to have found water. The three things made him drink too much water at first and barely left him with enough.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
5979,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist in a negative way. He was in the desert, which is dry and hot. “I was traveling through the high deserts of California in June.""(Kurmaskie @NUM1). Also, the  temperature was hot and made every thing around him hot, “brackish water faling somewhere in the neighborhood of two hundred degrees"" (Kurmaskie @NUM1). Since he was in the desert, there was no escape from the sun. The text  states, “The sun was beginning to beat down”(Kurmaskie @NUM3). The cyclist was all alone in the road with none around him either so into he passed out, no one could help him. “ and the growing realization that I could drop from heatstroke on a gorgous day in June”(Kurmaskie @NUM1). ""About forty miles into the pedal, I arrived at the first ‘town’ but on that morning it fit the traditional definition of a ghost town."" (Kurmaskie @NUM3). Thesettings that the cyclist was riding in wasn't good ones and so they negativly affected him; causing him to be dehydrated and tiredin the end.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
15763,6,"The builders faced many obstacles in attempting to ensure that dirigibles could dock at the Empire State Building. For example, the first problem that arose was construction of the mast atop the building. According to the excerpt, ""A thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame."" From this you immediately know that the frame of the Empire State Building would have to be properly modified in order for the dirigible to safely and successfully dock at the mast. Another minor issue was making the whole construction look decorative. ""... the architects designed a shiny glass and chrome-nickel stainless steel tower that would be illuminated from inside..."" @CAPS1, ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself."" @CAPS2, the winds at that altitude would have been to unstable for a dirigible to dock. The problem is that the winds could potentially ""swing"" the rear of the dirigible around the mast, which is extremely dangerous and risky.",1.0,,,,,1.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
3286,2,"There are people out there that think somethings should be taken off the shelves or not even made. But thats their decision and not everyone should listen to it or just try to do it. I think things that are offensive should and shouldn't be taken off. They should because it might offend someone and it shouldn't beacuse then people can read or see it or even listen to it if its music and then know more about it and then they might not do the same things. So people do have a choice on what should be banned or not but they also have a choice on if they want to read it or not too. They might not want their kids to read it but their kids will still hear the same things somewhere else also.     I think they shouldn't be taken off because no matter what they do or what they say, stuff will still be out there in the world that people think are offensive and you just cant stop all of it. I listen to a lot of music when I drive to school and most of it is rap music. Yes, most of it is ofensive to girls and stuff but thats just music, it doesn't mean its true or anything. People have the choice to not listen to it or not read about it. If they think it is offensive to them or to anyone else or just not like it, they have thr right to just avoid it and not look at it. People want to just change everything and make sure things are perfect and nothing bad is in the world. But no matter what you try to do, something bad will be out there waiting for you. You just got to know how to avoid it. Avoiding things that you don't like would be a lot easier then just taking all the time you have to to try to get something banned off of a shelf. You should keep it on the shelf for the people who want to actually read it or just want to read it to see what its all about. When I read or listen to something thats offensive and I don't like it. I will just turn it off or not read it anymore. Not try to get it banned because that takes to much time. People should just not worry about what is being said or written and try to get it banned becuase another book will be out again and it will be the same.     So as you can see I think the material that is written should just stay as it is and people can have their choice on if they want to read it or not. If they do and they think its offensive then thats their fault for reading it when they know its gonna offend them. And for the people who don't read it, they are doing it because they know it will offend them. So not reading something that you don't like will be better in the end because then nothing will be banned and maybe nothing else will be made in the process of it being banned. So nothing should be banned and just keep it and everything will still be the same. We might not want our kids to read something bad but they will one day so why not just get it done and over with in the benginging.",4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
9051,4,"The author concludes the story, ”Winter Hibiscus,” with that paragraph because it sums up everything the hibiscus has given Saeng for strength and courage. Just like the hibiscus, Saeng felt out of place in this new country and the hibiscus helps her realize the importance in adapting to her survival in order to live happily. She can’t alway be dwelling in the past but learn to like where she lives now. Therefore, when the author writes, “In the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again,” it is a direct symbol of Saeng budding or opening her mind to the @CAPS1 ways, like learning to drive. ",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
12332,5,"A) The mood that was created in this memoir was a basic mood. It wasn't a happy or sad in was a flat mood, because Its talking about how their in debt needed to move the kid lost all of his friends. The kid can't attend school because they can't afford any type of education. so that is why its a basic or flat mood. I also belive its a basic mood because it says that ""kids have to do a lot of the work"" because They are the youngest and the older can't do that work or they will get hurt. Towards the end It gets to a happy mood because it say ""my parents will always be there for me.""",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
923,1,"Dear @PERSON1, Experts are concerned about the use of computers. They say that they spend hours on the computer and less time exercising enjoying nature, and interacting with family and friends. I agree. While people use the computers, they don’t interact and meet new friends in person. They stay inside and don't get excersise, and kids might talk with strangers. When we use computers we chat with friends online and don't really interact with others. We meet new friends and chat online and never meet them and socialize, so that is one disadvantage of a computer. Another problem is lack of exercise. While we are on the computer we spend a lot of time and sometimes causes us to even forget to exercise. Then we slowly begin to get unhealthy. Another major problem of computers is talking or chatting with strangers. Some might meet some random people online and give them personal info. Kids might even meet with some of the strangers they talked to online and get hurt! well thank you for reading my opinions about computers. I hope you take them into consideration. Kids and even adults dont interact with freinds, lack exercise, and give personal information to strangers.",2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
7106,3,"He was affected by lack of water, the hills, snake in the way and the condition of the road.” The water bottles contained only a  few tantalizing sips. ” This quote explains how the lack of water was a problem. The hills affected him by they were “crippling"". The snake it was long ways on the road and he didn’t know how to get passed it . Finally the   roads were rough and you should go  over the speed limit of 55 mph. So he was affect in a lot of different ways not just one.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
8953,4,The author concludes the story the way that they did to signify that the girl will not give up trying to pass her test and will adapt to her new found home and make it what her home in Vietnam was to her. The girl is remeniscent of her past life and wishes to go back and have the life she had in her home country. When she is  ,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
9204,4,"The girl, Saeng , seems to be attached to nature and enjoy it when the spring comes like she said, a new natural intenill start and she will be motivated to take the test that she failed again. The author most likely finished with this paragraph to show that there will be hope for Saeng and she will do what she has to do to have comfortably in her new home country. The whole story talks about how she is still unsatisfied with her new home but it would be cut to and the stay with new chances and a new life, which they did using springtime to show this.",1.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
312,1,"Dear, @LOCATION1 @CAPS1 I think the use of computers are good, here are some reasons why? My first reason is you can find stuff online. My second reason is you can have fun. My last reason is you can make @LOCATION1 friends. I will write @NUM1 paragrahs explaining my reasons. Going back to my introduction my first reason was you can find stuff online. If you can't find a job you can go online and find some. If you want to go to college but you have no time you can take classes online. Those are my details to support my reason. My second reason was the computers are so fun. To me they are fun because when you are bored you can play games. If you are not a game person you can play servays. Or you can find out facts. That how I can back up my second reason. My third reason was you can meet @LOCATION1 people. You can meet @LOCATION1 people be search them up if you are trying to find a old friend. Or there is social networking such as myspace, facebooks, twitter etc which you can meet @LOCATION1 people. Mostly everyone would like to meet @LOCATION1 people. To end this story my @NUM2 reason was yo can find stuff online, my second reason was you can have fun. My last reason was you can meet @LOCATION1 people.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
13296,5,"The mood of the auther is suttle but at the same time kinda depresed. The way the narator sounds to me is that he or she is in a bad mood. But sometimes its not in a bad mood, its in a suttle mood.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
9386,4,"The author concludes the story this ways for a few reasons. One reason is that she will have more experience with her new country. She only left her homeland a few months before so in about six more months she will be more knowledgable about the ways of the new country. This will make her more capable of passing the @CAPS1 Ed test. Also in the spring is when the flower will be beautiful again and this will give her new-found strength that will cause her to pass. The few months time will allow the author time to mentally and physically prepare for the exam. Mentally, she will be able to study and learn all she needs to know. And physically she will age which will also teach her new things.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
9739,4,"The author concludes the last paragraph of the story because she already knew that she should not be afraid of trying a new life or new environment. For example, in the story, the mother says, “It’s flowers aren’t pretty, but its strong enough to make it through the cold months ???, this winter hibiscus. “It shows that the mother wants saeng to learn that saeng should be strong even I times of difficult. Another example is, when the narrator says, “she realized that many of the things that she had thought of as strange before become, throught the quiet repition of season upon season…” It shows that saeng realized that the new place that she’s leaving right now is almost the same as their old home – In conclusion, the last paragraph tells that saeng should face the new reality of the world. She should be  strong and follow the flow of life.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
764,1,"Dear local Newspaper, To my understanding computers have been putting a bad effect on people of all ages. In my opinion staying on the computer all day can cause you to miss out on outdoor activities. Also if you sit on a chair all day, honestly what will happen to you? You will become less active. In past experiences I have learned that if you get interested in computer game it will come very addicting. Computer put negative affects on people of all and I think we should stop and think about what we are doing. Most likely if you stay on the computer all day you will indeed on activities such as sports. @CAPS2 example @PERCENT1 of americans play soccer. In the beatiful fall when the leaves are beatifully changing you will miss out on playing soccer and the beaty of the leaves because of the computer you can't get your eyes off of. Another breathtaking adventure that you @MONTH1 miss out on is hiking. Hiking can be amazing when you get to the top and you see on the houses that have people like you (cach potatoes) sitting inside on the computer. Simple activities can be lost because of an addicting game you call fun. The computer is like a cause and effect. You @MONTH1 think you just playing farm town or chating on facebook, but in feture you will be missing out on the beauty of nature and sports. To connect @CAPS1's with missing out on sports because of the computer that will cause you to become over weight. A recent study showed that @PERCENT2 of children are obeased because of computer games. You @MONTH1 be thinking how, but I have a friend named named, @PERSON1 and he used to love to play out side and play sports until came out @CAPS2 the computer. Now he way @NUM1 pounds and he is only @NUM2. Honestly sitting in a chair all day will cause you to not be active and gain weight. Do you want this to happen to you? Help me tell others how computers cause a negative effect on others. Lastly playing on the compter or chatting with friends on @ORGANIZATION1 can cause you to @CAPS2 example if your talking to your girlfriend in spain who is there @CAPS2 callage I garentee your going to put off school work, @CAPS3 and other @CAPS4 that need to be done. In the end it will end up being time @CAPS2 bed and you got nothing done weather it was because you were trying to get to level @NUM3 or talking with your girlfriend you will have nothing accomplished. If your not yet a resent scientific study reported that six hours on the computer per day @CAPS2 one week can @CAPS5 your vision from a @NUM4 @NUM4 to @NUM6 @NUM6. If you keep it up now it @MONTH1 not seem bad but @NUM8 hours looking at the computer can kill your eyes. Would you rather be blind or not use the computer because or what could happen? All in all the computer is a bad thing such as useful piece of technology can cause you to miss out on events such as sports. Also it leads to being overweight sense your not getting active. Finally the computer is bad @CAPS2 your eyes and can cause you to procastonate. Help me help yourself avoid all of these bad effects caused from the computer.",4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
10302,4,"The story is somewhat sad. The girl misses her homeland. She is also sad because she failed her driving test. The author I think ends the story with the girl saying she will take the test again, to show that even though she is sad about her country and failing she is not going to give up. Failing a test especially a driving test stinks. Your very excited to get it but then you don’t. So the author is trying to show that despite the girls sadness she will not give up. The girl is going to keep trying until she finally passes. Also the author probably wanted to leave on a more positive note you usually don’t want to leave a story sad with no solution. So she said she would try the test again. There were many reasons why the author ended the way she did but above are the more obvious.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
4082,2,"Dear sir or mam,      Have you or someone in your family ever read a book, magazine, or watched a movie that was taken to be offensive? Do you or that person think that it would make a difference if that one book, book or movie was removed from the shelves? Would removing every  book, cd, movie or magazine  from shelves that were to have a great or small amount of racism, violence, bad language and other inappropriate things be helping the community? Do you believe that its everyone's decision whether or not those things should be removed from the shelves?     I believe that alot of people in our community have read a book in their lifetime that they considered to be the slightest bit offensive to them. I bet people all over the world have read offensive books. But the only types of people that those books, movies or magazines would affect would be teenagers and kids. But at the time they wouldn't see it as offensive, they would think that it was cool and interesting and they would want to read or watch it over and over again until they were to get bored of it then they would gone back the library and get another one.           I think in a way it would and would not make a difference whether or not they were removed from the shelves. Because if only that one book, movie or magazine was removed from the shelves then the person that got it removed would move on from that book,magazine or movie and find plenty more of them that would be more or equally offensive. If every people were to remove every book that they were to find offensive then other people who would enjoy them that certain thing wouldn't beable to obtain it.If everyonewere to find all kinds different books, movies or magazines offensive and got them removed from the shelves then their wouldn't be very much left for the community.     In conclusion I believe that every individual has their opinion and own way of thinking when it comes to what is and is not offensive. I think it is not just up to them on what should be on the shelves in a library, but the communities choice. If someone wants a good book,magazine, or movie they should ask suggestions from a friend or family member on what they should get. If they can't get any suggestions on what they should get they should just what they think is interesting ignore the offensive parts",3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
15679,6,"To have a building built Over @NUM1 ft. tall and expect dirigibles/blimbs be able to dock there is dangerous and has many obstacles around it. First, the weather is not always nice. If you have a windy day the blimb is going to sway back and forth over thousands of pedestrians in New York. Putting lead blocks in the back would be very dangerous. you have lead in the back swaying with thousands of people underneath you. Secondly, most blimbs outside of the U.S. used hydrogen rather than helium. Hydrogen is very flammabe, and could destroy a whole building if the fire spread... Finally, blimbs could not moor at the Empire State building if it is against the law for an airship to hover to low to urban areas. Those are many reasons why blimps could not moor at the Empire State building.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
11891,5,"In this memoir the mood created by the author is gratefulness, happiness and unity. This is noticeable in many different ways such as when Narciso says, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" This shows gratefulness Narciso per trays to his parents for giving up their life in Cuba. Another example of mood in this memoir is when Narciso states ""Here in the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations...."" This passage shows happiness in Narciso's home. It is evident by the tone used by the author that these were happy times. Lastly when Narciso says, ""In our neighborhood despite customs elsewhere, all of these cultures came together."" This shows unity in the story despite the different races of people who lived around Narciso. This is how happiness, gratefulness, and unity created a mood in this memoir.",2.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
4376,2,"Going to the library is one of the best ways to explore new things. Some items are not appropriate for everyone though. Certain books, movies, magazines, and music should not be accessed by everyone. Having an adult only section would be a way to solve this problem.     Removing certain materials from the library would not be in good interest. Any popular material should be available at the library. Many best selling books would be wrong for children to read, but they would be perfectly fine for adults. That doesn't mean these books need to be taken out of the library. Children should be restricted from viewing the explicit materials though. Having a section in the library from which only adults can rent the items, would remove this problem. People under @NUM1 should also be restrained from looking through these materials. Having a childrens' section in the libray would also keep them away from adult materials. The library needs to make itself user friendly.                People who frequent the library often pick up a book, not knowing what it holds. When inappropriate material is inside a child might innocently read into or see something they are not supposed to. Parents should not have to worry about their kids seeing inappropriate pictures or text. They should feel safe letting their children look through all the books at the library. Library workers should also make sure the adult materials stay in the hands of adults. Allowing children and their parents to feel safe and welcome is an important part of the library.      Taking adult materials out of the libray is not a good idea. It would lower its popularity. Everyone has different interests, and they want to research them at the library. The safety of children is also important. Making sure children cannot reach these materials is a concern. Having separate adult and children sections could solve this problem. Not allowing anyone under @NUM1 to check out explicit materials would also help. Keeping the libray full of information but still safe for children is the ideal situation",3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
9952,4,"The author ends with this because of what the hibiscus means to saeng. To her it is a symbol of strength and comfort. And she knows that if the hibiscus can survive the snow and the cold weather of the winter, she knows that she will not fail either. To her, the hibiscus is a symbol of herself and if it survives, she knows that she too can survive. She is also going to take the test again when the hibiscud are budding since it reminds her of her homeland and comforts her. Then even if she fails she will still be happy since her favorite plant is budding. I also think the author concludes the story this way, because both the plant and Saeng are going to have to overcome obstacles. The plant must survive the winter and come back in the spring. While Saeng must pass her driver’s test. Finally I think the author ended this way because of what the plant means to Saeng. If it survives she knows that she too will survive, and life goes on.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
6844,3,"The features setting in the story “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” are very important to the cyclist. In this story, the setting really affected the cyclist because it was in California which is a really hot place during the summer. The cyclist had problems because of the weather and on the shortness of water. Since there was a shortness of water he had to conserve it which slowed him down because he couldn’t ride as much. Although there was a cool wind and a river from Yosemite he had to pass quickly down the hill so he had even more problems. This is why the settings of the story really affected the cyclist and how much he could ride.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
8891,4,"By ending the story with the idea of retaking a test in the spring, the author sets a feeling of starting fresh and perservering . for example , when the author says” when the snow melts and the geese return and the hibiscus is budding ,”she show the idea of starting a fresh new life in the spring by returning to their home and the hibiscus is starting fresh by  budding again. This is why spring is when saeng wants to start fresh and retake the test. The paragraph also shows that saeng, like the hibiscus, is perservering. The hibiscus is perservering by making it through the winter and blooming again while saeng   is perservering by retaking the test. The author ends with this paragraph to show that saeng is not going to give up. ",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9098,4,"The author chose to conclude the paragraph with the sentence ""when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring , when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again."" because it shows how the strenghth of the hibiscus is related to Saeng's strenghth. In the story, after failing her drivers test, Saeng @CAPS1 comfort in a hibiscus native to her country. when she gets home her mother says “I’ve seen this kind blooming along the lake. Its flowers aren't as pretty, but its strong enough to make it through the cold months here."" This shows that saeng is faltiering in her new foriegn country. The end quote sums up that saeng @CAPS1 strenghth in the strenghth of the flowers. almost thinking if flower can survive in a land away from its home, why can't I?""",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
7261,3,"The setting affect the cyclist in many gruding and harsh was. First, the lack of civilization contributes to an uneasy feeling and an inability to refill his water bottle. Second, the heat and uphill bottles are taking their tollon both aplists physical and mental strength. Third, his water bottle is emptying at an alarming late due to his third and relentless heat. In paragraph four die exospodent cyclist reaches the first ''town.'' This place @MONTH1 have been a striving spell but on that morning it fit the traditional definition of ghost down.” @CAPS1 he came to house with a rusty water pump, which sped out brackish, near boiling water, which did not support the porched cyclist, physically, on mentally.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
15535,6,"According to the excerpt from @ORGANIZATION2's ""The Mooring Mast"", the builders of the Empire State Building faced obstacles while attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. When Al Smith was first planning the structure and use of the mass, he seems to be overambitious. In paragraph @NUM1, the reader gets the sense of how competitive Smith was, which is a quality that can get in the way of practicality. Smith's determination to have the Empire State Building be the tallest was an obstacle because it was what first initiated the idea of the mooring mast. Although it is made clear to the section ""Designing the Mast"" that a lot of planning went into the building of the mast, the extra effort needed for this was an obstacle as well. The mast delayed completing the whole building and as @PERSON1 says in paragraph @NUM2, the mast caused unsolved problems and postponements. A significant reason to the failure of the mast was the issue of safety because the dirigibles were highly flammable. As it also says in paragraph @NUM3, ""the greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself."" These both show the impracticality of the installment of a dirigible dock, revealing the largest obstacles the builders faced. Because ambition was more important than practicality in the building of the mooring mast, the builders of the Empire State Building faced obstacles and failed.",1.0,,,,,1.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
12628,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is happiness. Narciso is remembering all the great times he had in his house. His parents are very friendly and welcoming and treat everyone like family. In paragraph @NUM1 it says, ""my mother and father had come to this country with such courage, without knowledge of the language or the culture."" This is what happiness really is. Narciso and his whole family have such a great attitude and just want to be friends with everyone. ",2.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
12558,5,The mood from the auther her Life was very good @CAPS1 @CAPS2 in a simlpe house cuba. @CAPS1 Do alot of fun thing with her family. her grateful parents their Love sacrifice and I've often @CAPS1 Told then that what did was so much courageous and her parents told her that the early age the demonstarat how important family and friend are.,2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
15415,6,"In the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by @ORGANIZATION2, the author described the obstacles the builders of the empire state Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. An architect named Al Smith was a four-term governor of New York who headed efforts to construct the Empire State Building after his years in office. He imagined the top of the Building to be a ""higher Calling"". He pictured it to be equipped for an age of transportation that was then the only dream of avation pioneers. It seemed possible in his eyes, till the obstacles turned up. The first obstacle that struck, was the lack of suitable area in New York City. They would have to clear about four blocks in the bussy city! The architects and engineers of the Empire State Building consulted with experts, but it didn't plan out too well. Over sixty thousand dollars worth of modifications had to be made to the buildings framework. The building would now be 102 floors, with a glassed-in observation area on the 101st floor. In the end, The greatest Obstacle was just nature itself.",0.0,,,,,0.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
3077,2,"It seems you cannot always make everyone happy. No matter what, someone is offended or upset over something. This holds true with everything- including media. Whether it be a book, movie, or a song, someone somewhere will be unhappy with it for some reason. Though this is true, it certainly does not mean you can take that media away from those who enjoy it. The @CAPS1 @CAPS2 of the @LOCATION1 @LOCATION1 @CAPS3 @LOCATION1 that all people are granted freedom of speech and freedom of press. Would taking 'offensive' material off of shelves not take away from this right so clearly and intently given to us? Not only that, but does sheltering the public and making us all believe the world is a place without bias, prejudice, or slander really help us in the grand scheme of things? Pretending that the world is perfect ensures that future generations of the world will be devestated by reality once they get out in the real world and realize everything is not perfect and nice and unbiased all the time.     My ninth grade year in high school, I read 'To @CAPS4 A @CAPS5' by @PERSON1. This book demonstrates the harsh prejudice that used to be normal in the @LOCATION4 during the earlier years of the @LOCATION1. This book could certainly be considered offensive by a person living in the southern @LOCATION1; one could say this book steriotypes people in the @LOCATION4. One could also say this book is offensive because of the language it uses. African-@CAPS6 could be offended by the explicit rascist comments and names within the pages. Despite this, 'To @CAPS4 A @CAPS5' is considered a classic and is praised and tought throughout the @LOCATION1 and the rest of the world. I grew from reading @PERSON1's masterpiece- it tought me a lot about where the @LOCATION1 has been and how far it has come with acceptance of other races. You learn from your mistakes, they say. Therefore, we can learn from the media's mistakes. We can grow as people from being offended or having offensive material brought to our attention. We can stop history from repeating itsself by being well-informed.     Theology is a huge matter of dispute among all cultures; @CAPS9 or @CAPS10'ite, @LOCATION2, @CAPS11, @LOCATION3, @LOCATION5, @CAPS12. Any book store you walk into, you can find a bible or a book on atheism or even '@ORGANIZATION1,' which focuses on @CAPS13. Any music store you walk into, you can find bands that bash the ideas of religion, but you can also find theistic worship bands or meditating music. Just the same, any movie theater or movie store you visit could supply movies with anti-theistic or pro-theistic themes.Taking such things off of the shelves because one work could be offensive to a group of people could limit another's options to explore theology and find out what suits them. It could limit one's exploration of interests. It could very well take away from one's personal growth.     In any case, it is unfair to take something that could be considered offensive to one person away from another just for the sake of being nice and having discretion. Putting a ban on certain works could harm the flow of society. Putting a ban on certain works could limit one's awareness of the world around them or the history they could potentially be inspired by, it could limit the expansion of one's intellect, it could take away from one's exploration of interests or the search of who they really are or want to be. It is best to just keep things the way they are- free.",5.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
12797,5,"The author of the memoir creates a very loving, peaceful, and happy mood in the story. It is always saying that his house was always filled with friends and family. This gives the story a very loving mood and shows how they are all there for each other. Also, in paragraph @NUM1 it says, ""Here, the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the backdrop to lif in our warm home."" This sentence shows that the home is very loving and warm. Lastly, the mood that Narciso has throughout the memoir is very greatful. He is always saying how much he appreciates what his parents did by moving to @LOCATION1 to create a better life for him. That is the mood of the memoir throughout the whole passage.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
4289,2,"As a small child I remember my mom reading me stories to put my to sleep. There was always one book that I remember the most named, 'A light in the @CAPS1' by @PERSON1. As i was walking into my public library the other day i was looking at the books that had been cenored because it encouraged, the following; mistreating parents, offensive language, bad habits, and other things. I was mad that this book had, essentally, been erased from all of children literature just because a few people @CAPS2 that it gives a bad message. Think about it though, when you are a child either having a book read to you, or reading one yourself do you honestly pay attention to such small details?    I do not think that books and music should not be censored, because society does a good job of thinking and figuring out what is acceptable and what is not. I understand the idea of warning labels, but i feel that censorship is too far. In the example I used in the paragraph above, that actually happened to me. So, i do not think that things should be censored just because a small group of people think that it is inappropriate. Even when i read that book today i do not see any of the reasons that were listed in the book. Therefor beleive that it was unjustly censored, meaning that a really good book will never reach the eyes and ears of child that deserve to hear and read it.     Over the years many things have been censored, some had an actual reason, others maybe were looked at and censored because somebody did not like how they read the book. the point is, is that people should have a choice of what they can get from their public or school library. Maybe, they should just give an idea saying that there is potentailly inapprapriate materail in that certain book and should not be read to or by a certain age group. when you look back to your childhood and think of all the books that were read to you that you enjoyed, how many of those books have been cesored for reasons that make no sense? That is the primary reason why I believe there should not be any censorship",4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
12155,5,"The mood created by the author was one of happiness, love, and caring. Not only does it show in his style, but the author also gives details that really create the vibe. In paragraph @NUM1, the author describes the food as ""rich culinary skills and love of cooking,"" and the music as ""passionate Cuban music...mixing with the aromas of the kitchen."" This creates a homely affect to the scene, along with the paragraph about the many ""family members"" that came over for meals. The author describes this and explains that this was all possible, despite the nation's racism, because his parents worked hard to get where they were for the faith that their children would have a better life than they had. With all of the details, the author creates a loving, cultural affect can only be found with great family and friends.",2.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
4389,2,"I think that no source of knowledge should taken off any shelf in any librairy because a few people think it's offensive. In my own personal opinion someone could find a book offensive and another person could think it is reasonable. People can't make the judgment to say this is offensive to me so therefore it's offensive to everyone who reads it. Some of the best books on our shevles are the ones that @MONTH1 be offensive.     Some books are racist; Of @CAPS1 and @CAPS2 for example has some racist and sexist comments and remarks. If everyone got mad about that then a very good book wouldn't be read by the people who are going to run the country when i'm older. I know that all the older books would be gone to and then no one would know about what happened in the @NUM1's. Also some of the @ORGANIZATION1 shows people watch are ten times worse then the books people read,if you find a book offensive don't read it!     When i hear about a book being offensive it makes me want to read it. It gives the book charactor and makes it humorouse. We can't just have the same old books talking about the same old things because that gets boring after a while. Sometimes from thoughs books you even learn something about your self that makes you wonder if i didn't read this book would i still have found this out. Sometimes it brings out the best in people and thats the best part about reading a book like that.     Libraries are a place to go and look at all the books you could ever think of reading and no one should be able to take that away from people. I want my kids to be able to have the same options that i had growing up plus all the new books coming out. If you ask me it's just not right to take away someone elses choice of knowledge. Thats my personal opinion on taking books off the shelves of public libraries.",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
3186,2,"No, I would not think it would be the right thing to do. To just take a book off the shelf just because one person or a small amount of people think that one book is offensive to them. Its not only one person to decide that. People or some people would like to vote or have a meeting about taking a book or books off the shelf cause it's offensive to them.Just because one person finds that book or books offensive doesn't mean that they should have the right to just throw the book away. Thier could be many people out thier that really like that book or those books, and they wouldn't be able to enjoy them anymore. All because one person or a few other people don't like the book.Yes their are books out thier that a lot of people don't like but that still don't give one person to throw the book out, all because they don't like that book or that seires of a book. No one should have the right to just take a book that they don't like out of a libary and throw it out because they don't like it. Their could be a smart little boy or girl that likes that book and because that one person threw it away because they don't like it, now that little boy or girl won't get to read their favorite book. Thats why I don't think books that some one thinks is offensive should be taken out of a libary. Because theirs always some one out their that likes that one book that you might want to throw away. If you think the book is that offensive to you just stay away from that area of the libary and don't think about that book",3.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,1.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
6831,3,"After reading “Do not Exceed Posted Limit” I have seen how the scene of an area can effect your mood and attitude around things. In this story, the main character is a cyclist who takes the advice of a few old men sitting in a poseh who tell him a bad shortcut. As he is riding, he comes across some hills. Those hills really affected him physically he gets tired from peddling up and down continually. “that mood” was replaced by short, moving hills.” The cyclist could not er nuertecy tried everything, not showing how long he have to continue going up and down. There at one point he says, “@CAPS1 can feel so cruel.” There, he is upset because a road sign come up through acid tough roads, and told him not to exceed 55 miles per hour when he was fully going 12 miles per hour. This can be viewed as metaphorical also. When you take a short cut in life, there are always consciences as you decide to drop out of high school is go on how with your journal, where is always the posibility of is not working, and where you cry with no diploma ?? and he gets a job",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
6951,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist because It give it more life. More meaning and make I fun to read.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
669,1,"@ORGANIZATION1, I am writing this letter to inform you about the Use of computers. Computers can be fun and interesting, But, people are spending to much time on the computer. @CAPS3 opinion is you should spend time interacting with people in your society, your family, and friends. I also think that @CAPS2 is easy to get addicted to the computer, I should @CAPS1 I was a person that spent @CAPS3 time @NUM1 on the computer and @CAPS2 wasn't good. You should be safe on the computer because now and days @CAPS2's dangerous @CAPS2 is appalling that people spend More time on the computer than with ther own Family. Don't you agree? Well you shoud, your society, family, and friend should be the most important thing to you. You shouldn't be spending your whole day on the computer, you should be interacting with the people around you. Now and days you will see plenty of people on the computer and not spending time with there family. That shouldn't be going on. Although the computer is fun and interesting you will have people around you the wisher to spend time with you. You should think about this because this is happening to much in the world. @PERCENT1 of the people in @CAPS3 school say their addicted to the computer, and @PERCENT2 of the people in @CAPS3 community say their addicted to the computer too. Those are very high numbers don't you think? This is terrible and should stop going on. The computer is like a drug, you can get on the computer one time, then your just going to want to stay on ti everyday all day. The first time you get on the computer you will be addicted to @CAPS2 right away. I'm not saying you should never get on the computer, but be sure you won't get too addicted to @CAPS2 because @CAPS2 can happen very easily. @CAPS3 mother always sayed be safe on the computer"". At first I didn't really @CAPS1 what she meant, but now I @CAPS1. What ever you do on the computer will stay their and be saved no matter how you try to delete @CAPS2. So, you should be safe and don't put any thing on the computer if you would want anyone else to see @CAPS2. Anyone can see what you put so you should be safe. Kids are meeting people they don't @CAPS1 and try to meet them. So you should watch out because the computer is the only place @CAPS7 you can lie. Now you should understand @CAPS7 im coming from. You should now agree with me and under stand that people should spend more time you don't get addicted and be safe.""",4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
16204,6,The builders faced some problems such as weather conditions. The winds were violent from changing wind currents. Another was the law of how close an aircraft could be to a building. Another problem was the building had to be strong enough to hold a blimp in place. The builders would have to strengthen the buildings skeleton in order for it to work. This they did. Another problem is some foreign Blimps are made with hydrogen. This makes them highly flamable. With others made of helium. The hydrogen could catch fire and fall onto pedestrians. These are the problems they faced.,3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
12548,5,"The mood in the memoir doesn't change alot. Narciso Rodriguez mood is happy in the end because @CAPS1 says ""I will never forget that house or its gracious neighborhood or the many things I learned there about how to love."" @CAPS1 also says ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" @CAPS2 there I think Narciso is happy. The mood is mostly calm & happy because @CAPS1 telling the courage his parents had. Thats the mood the author gave.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
4220,2,"Libraries are ment for all types of books, movies, music, magazines. It gives you a variety of things to look at or even check out. An offensive book or movie or even music shouldnt be taken off the shelf just because it has a few bad things in it. People @MONTH1 or @MONTH1 not agree with this, but everyone is entitled to their own opinion. Through my own experiences, observations, and the reading I will help and explain my own opinion in why i dont think offensive books, movies,music, and magazines should not be taken off the shelf.     If a book is offensive it does not deserve to be taken off the shelf. Somebody most likley worked hard on that book so it could be put on to the shelf. If you find a book offensive it should be put off into a different section that tells you in head of time what books are in that section. I have not had any real experiences with this but I know people are awear of what are in the books before they're put onto the shelf and would therefore not put anything offensive next to a childrens book. Same thing with music and @CAPS1's. Music is music and it is there to be listened too. People like all types of music and have their favorite bands so if they dont like certain bands because they swear or whatever doesn't mean that album deserves to be taken off the shelf. @CAPS1's usually have the rating on the front so if it is not appropriate for your age than dont pick it up. If it has nudity or sexual content it will tell you or be put in a different section. For instance at my old library where I used to live in @LOCATION1, @LOCATION2 they would put all rated @CAPS2 movies into a different section and if you were going to check it out you would have to be @NUM1 or older or have a parent with you. It is really all up to the person, they could either make the right choice or the wrong choice. It's not the libraries fault if you pick up an offensive book because well, you should have some common sense.          The libraries shouldnt have to take offensive things off the shelfs because some people lack common sense or just dont know what they are doing. They could make more of an effort too kind of seperate bad from good, wrong from right, and even appropriate to non appropriate. But it is usually all up to the person making that decesion.                                                             - @PERSON1",4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
3742,2,"Libraries are a place where anyone can find books to read, on any topic they choose.  This is a right that should stay in the reader's hands, and not the library's.  Every person can read about whatever topics they please, and those working at libraries should not have an influence on which books peole read.     Censorship of books is competely unneccessary.  If somebody wants to read about a specific topic, then they have the right to.  Reading a book that is offensive to the reader is the reader's choice; nobody forced them to read it.  Upon finding a book that is offensive, the reader then can make that decision, and not read the book.  Though just because this one reader finds this book offensive, does not mean a different person would, and this different person has the right to read this book if they choose.     Finding a book offensive is a simply an opinion, and has no factual evidence.  So who has the right to say whether a book is offensive or not?  Just because somebody running a library belives a book to be offensive or innappropriate, does not mean the book should be taken off the shelf.  There is no one person who can say whether or not a book is offensive.     Other items such as music, movies, or magazines also should not be censored, though some of them are already.  Movies for example, are all rated, and this therfore gives the viewer the choice of what level of movie they would like to watch.  The viewer should not expect to check out a rated '@CAPS1' movie, and see no material with foul language, violence, or other 'offensive' subjects.  By choosing a higher rated movie, the viewer is making their own choice of what they see, and so the librarians should not take it upon themselves to take away these films.  It is simply not thier responsibility.     Music also is rated, and if thought neccessary, has a parental warning label, telling the listener that this album has explicit content.  Though just as with movies or books, everybody has the right to listen to whichever music they please, and should not have to search at places other than a library, because the librarian thought the music to be innappropriate.     Magazines @MONTH1 not be rated, but this does not mean the library should make the executive decision to rate them, and get rid of the ones found to be 'offensive'.  As mentioned several times above, it is the reader's choice to view material; not the librarian's.     Whether the material is books, music, movies, or magazines, the consumer has the right to read, listen to, or view whatever they please, without the influence of librarians.  Each person has their own say of what material they choose to consume, and nobody else has the right to tell them otherwise.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
6137,3,"The features of the setting affects the cyclist because the worst the features get the more he wants water. For example, in the essay it said at some point, tumbleweeds crossed my path and a ridiculous large snake blocked the majority of the pavement in front of me when I think of tumbleweeds I think of dryness because it is like dry grass and when I think of snakes I think of heat because that is the time for snakes to come out when ot gets hot. So the cyclist was thinking about dryness of his throat and the dryness of his sorrounding making him want water. Another feature is when he seen a sandblasted picture of a young boy pouring a refreshing glass of juice into his mouth probably making the cyclist wishing he could have that cold refreshing drink.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
10521,4,"The story ands with that paragraph because Saeng believes next spring when her new hibiscus is born she will have good luck to pass her driving test. It is a good way to end the story because the hibiscus was not involved in her life before she took the drivers test. Now she beleives that on her next driving test she will have the connection to her past experiences, ability to overcome obstacles, and comfort in a time of disappointment. Which Saeng thinks can help her pass the test.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
547,1,"Dear @CAPS1, I @CAPS2 that computers has benefits to society. First, it gives and teaches you social skills. Next, computers can help you learn new things online. Finally, computers also teach you hand-eye coordination. In the following you will see why I @CAPS2 computers have its benefits to the society. First, computers has its benefits to society because it can teach or give you the social skills you need. On a computer you can interact with others from around the world and make new friends. Therefore, you can learn about their culture and what they do in their country. Also, you can talk and interact with family that does not live with you or is not with you in the moment. So as you can see, Computers has its benefits because it can teach you social skills. Next the benefits it has to society is people can learn things online. for example, you can learn how to use a computer if you don't already know how. Also, you could play online learning games for free or buy a @CAPS3 with more options for learning. Another example is you can look up recent or past events you want to know about and research it. So as you can see, Computers benefit society because you can learn all types of things online. Finally, computers how its benefits because it teaches you hand-eye coordination. for example, you can find all types of games using hand-eye coordination using the mouse and keyboard. Also if you just want time to go by you can use the computer as entertainment by chatting with other and playing games. Believe it or not, you can find boat loads of jobs that uses a computer for any of these also as you can see computers have its benefits because it teaches you hand-eye coordination and gives you some free-time entertainment. In conclusion, computers have its benefits to the social community. First, it helps you learn your social skills. Next, you can learn about any subject online for free if your not the one paying the internet bill finally, it benefits you by teaching you hand-eye coordination. So as you can see, I @CAPS2 that computers benefits society in plenty of ways.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
15737,6,"The obstacles the builder of the Empire State building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there, was noticing that the dirigibles would be unsafly dangling high above pedestrians on the Street. There were many risk when landing the huge dirigibles and also a law against airships flying too low over urban areas. This law made it illegal for a ship to even approach the area. Famous and important dirigibles had lots of trouble with their landing like for example on December 1930, the U.S Navy dirigible Los Angeles approached the mooring mask but could not get close enough because of forceful winds. The dirigible could move uncontrolably and crash into the Sharp Spires on other buildings around it. In @CAPS1 of becoming the of transportation of the future, dirigibles had given way to airplanes.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
6199,3,"The features of the setting effected the cyclist very much. For example, the sun was beginning to beat down. Another example, I was hitting my water bottles pretty regularly. The setting were hot and dry. It effected the cyclist very much. It was to the point of dying.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
479,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, Some people are debating whether advances in technology, such as computers, are benefitial to our daily life. I think that computers are a good addition to life for a few reasons. For one, information and knowledge are at your fingertips. It takes merely seconds to know anything you want or need to. Email, @CAPS2, @CAPS1, etc. can be labeled as wasteful or dangerous. New friends can be made everyday. Lastly, there can be limits set so no more worrying about to much time spent on the computers. One of the reasons computers can be benefitial to our daily life is what it can give us. Knowledge is just seconds away. Anything you might be interested in learning is all on the web. Homework, school projects, and even work need information that isn't found anywhere else. The library is a great place to find what you're looking for, but if you're in a hurry and need what you're looking for quick, there is the online encyclopedia, world book, etc.Technology is becoming a huge part of our life today, many opinions are up in the air about it. If, there's one thing everyone can agree on, it's fast and can make daily tasks easier. Ordering clothes, books, movies, tickets for trips and more all can be done online. That's not all the computer has to offer. Friends/family are a necessary part of life, but they're not always living right around the corner. They @MONTH1 live on the other side of the state, country, even world! @CAPS2, @CAPS1, email, etc. can allow you to connect with anybody around the world at anytime. E-mail has been around longer than other websites like @CAPS2 and myspce which allow you to keep daily tabs on them. @CAPS1 or ichat allows you to instantely talk to anybody that you want. These websites can't replace being together in person, but it can help keep in touch for the meanwhile. Some are worried about spending too much time face to face with the screen, there is even something to prevent that. Time spent inside on the computer is becoming a problem. Not enough exersise or time spent outside can be unhealthy. Time limits can fix this problem. A certain amount of time can be plugged in. When there's @NUM1 minutes left, it gives you a warning. That way more time can be spent outside in the open, and less inside staring at the screen all day. Many different opinions about whether computers belong in our life have been shared. I believe they're a beneficial part of our life. They allow you information at the touch of your fingers, access to friends/family, plus there's time limits. In this day/age, the computer is something we can't live without.",6.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,26.0
128,1,"@ORGANIZATION1, In my opinion computers can be entertaining and educational, but should not replace everyday living. Therefore I think that computers harm people and effect them in ways they do not realize. Three reasons that support my decision are the difference between reality and fantacy, family and friends, and your health. Many children and young adults are vulnerable to the assumtion that everything you see on the computer is true. Well, as some find out it is everything but that. The addictive games and electronic features lead you to believe that the people or @CAPS1 @CAPS2 you see are real life situations and activities. Computers are showing kids the wrong mind frame they need to be in. It affects school work and how they behave. They need to be in the right state of mind and get back to reality. Your family and friends have always been there for you. By your side even through your worst. Unfourtunetly, this addiction to the computer has brought you farther away from them. They are not happy with the way you treat them. They want a change so you can enjoy life again. Interact with a human being, not some graphic designed computer picture. That's all it is anyway, and that picture isn't going to be there for you. Your family and friends last longer than that. Your body is special and your health is important. A computer @MONTH1 suggest exercise but you are not going to really do it. You know that and the people who make computer sites know that. Your going to stay there and burn your eyes out from looking at a screen all day. It is not healthy for you or anyone else. Moving you fingers and pushing buttons is not exercise. Your already sitting anyway, so you are not doing anything helpful to yourself. You need to go outside and breathe in air and be in nature. Run around or play a bill game, but not on the computer. In conclusion, you can see how a computer can effect a person. Not only do they mistake fantacy and reality as the same thing, but you lose interaction with your friends and loved ones. Your health is also at risk when you spend hours staring and not moving anything but maybe two fingers. Please consider the risks and believe the facts because honestly, we are losing the chance to live and enjoy the world.",4.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,22.0
6533,3,"The features of the setting take their toll on the unfortunate cyclist. For example.” I was travelling through the high deserts of California in June.” The deserts of California especially in June are hot and dry and caused the cyclist to use much of his water supply, very quickly. As he “toiled” on, the terrain features became even more trying,” over one long, crippling hill…”By this time the cyclist barely had enough energy to make it over a hill from all the wear and tear his body was put through by the features of his setting.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
6220,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist in many ways. Like he was in a desert, no one to give him good information, no towns close by that are still running, it was a hot summer day, no water near by. These affected the cyclist because they made him not sweaty, dry mouth, no energy, and he was having alot of doubt that he was not going to make his journey alive. In the story they cyclist said, ''I picked up some pebble and put them in my mouth. With my luer. I'd hit a bump and lodge one in my throat. It didn’t really matter. I was going to die. ''When he said that he showed alot of doubt. Everytime he got to a town or bulding it was abandoned. He saw an abandoned  building witch was ironically a Welch's Grape Juice factory and bottling plant. That made him even more thirstier. Thats how the features affected the cyclist.",1.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
8924,4,"The author chose to conclude the story with that paragraph to show that the girl had adapted to her new country. Saeng missed her home. It was hard for her to say her country’s home without crying. ""It’s not like the wind we had at-at-."" She also spent @MONEY1 on a plant because it remind her of back at home. One could inter she adapted because she was familiar with the season change and it states when the geese return she is going to take the test again.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
12240,5,"The author creates moods in the memoir that seem to be possitive. The first mood that is shown is a loving mood. In paragraph three is states, ""All of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship."" This shows when all the immigrants came to @LOCATION1 they would descriminated they all came together and became a family.Another mood that is created is careness. Narciso Rodriguez's parents showed so much love and support towards him. Paragraph five says, ""They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life."" This quote shows that even before Narciso was born his parents were thinking about them. Narciso's parents wanted their child to have a good life. A final mood would be happiness. Narciso is very happy and has alot of gratitude for his parents. Narciso quotes, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice. By Narciso saying that it shows how much he loves his parents and how happy he is living in @LOCATION1. The author creates different moods throughout the entire excerpt.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
15156,6,"In the excerpt, there where many obstacles the builders of the empire state building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The problems where that the dirigible being ""held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame"", and the wind pressure wouldn't help either, as stated in @CAPS1 @NUM1. Another issue was that, as said in @CAPS1 @NUM2, ""most dirigibles from outside of the united states used hydrogen rather than helium"",... ""hydrogen is highly flammable"", Also in the @CAPS1 @NUM2, ""The owners of the empire state building realized how much worse,"" a accident could be ""if it had taken place above a densely populated area such as down town New York. These are the problems the builders faced.",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
3188,2,"I think that they should remove books, and take away more stuff from the kids now a days, because they are getting worse in worse like everyday, i think they should move the @NUM1 to @NUM2, so atleast they are old enough to read, hear, or watch whatever they want, but they should go through and do a self-check on everything that they put out  in the stores.They should also have different parts in a library so that the little ones dont get to the adult section, such as adult books, that have stuff in them about sex, drugs, or anything else that falls under that catagory. I have @NUM3 little brothers, and they are @NUM4, @NUM5, @NUM6. They know more stuff then my parents, and its because now a days kids pick up on stuff a lot more easier. So i say we as in the @LOCATION1 citizens need to watch out on how we put stuff out there that the kids can get a hold of.          When i was growing-up i didnt know as much as my little brothers do today, and that is because everyday they are coming out with something else everyday that can effect our kids, brothers, or whoever. I also do think the schools should have a class about the stuff that kids are experiencing in todays life, in like elementary school, so that when they get older they will already know about the drugs, or the sex life. Kids also remember stuff a lot more when they are growing up, so if we put it in there heads at a really really young age, they will remember it. Im not saying that kids will stop doing what they are doing, but atleast the percent population will go down, and parents will be a lot more happier. I also think that parents should stop lying to there kids about sex, making up stories so that there kid wont know, they need to stop doing that because they are going to find out about it sooner or later, so why not now? they whould be more aware of the real life in how it is out there, so all the parents out there should not lie to there kids about the sex life.                So thats what my person input is on the situation. I wish this would change sooner or later before the world becomes a big mess.",2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
6716,3,"The setting in the story ""Rough road ahead” plays a great role on the characters journey. Some features that are mentioned in the story are heat, rough road, long crippling hills and a abandoned Grape Juice Factory. The heat in the story drives the cyclist into a dying thirst. @CAPS1 does her best to conserve her water through out the trip but the dry dessert heat doesn’t allow it. Then comes the rough road ahead. The cyclist trys to keep a steady and secure pass as @CAPS1 peddels along the bumps and breaks in the road. The long crippling hills are next in line the cyclist has to use all her energy to work up the hill. @CAPS1 wipes the sweat from her eyes to make sure its not a mirage and then @CAPS1 see’s it the abandoned factory. This is where the cyclist loses all hope for if @CAPS1 doesn’t receive water soon @CAPS1 is sure to be eaten by the birds. “Then, and easily as rounding a band, my troubles, thirst, and fear were all behind me. Gary and Wilber Fish Camp.” @CAPS1 rushed to the bathroom to drink the refreshing water to the sink pride and accomplishment overwhelm her.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
15809,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced obstacles when attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle was that most dirigibles outside the U.S. used hydrogen, which is highly flammable. With downtown New York being a densely populated area, that wouldn't be such a great idea.Another obstacle they had to face was the weather itself. The Empire State Building was very high so it got really windy. The winds on the top of the building were constantly changing due to violent air currents.They also weren't thinking about the government when they were building the mooring mast. There was a law stateing that airships couldn't fly to low to urban areas. It would be illegal if a ship even tried using the mooring mast.",3.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
12561,5,"I think the mood of the memoir is overall positive. The charactor is always complimenting his parents and is always telling him he admires ""their strength and perseverance."" @CAPS1 of the memoir is the child complimenting the parents and culitur. Narciso strongly adores him family.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
15514,6,The builders faced many obstacles while building a mast for dirigibles on the Empire State building. One was that the had to strengthen the foundation so that all the stress on the buildings structure wouldn't tear it apart. Also the fact it was impractical for a dirigible mast because shifting currents and winds would either make it impossible to land or would circle the blimp around and hit buildings. The workers faced these obstacles and finally realized that they couldn't do it.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
4317,2,"I beleive that all materials should be allowed in libraries, because we all have the right to choose what we want to read, listen to and watch. Even if people banned some books from the libray, other people would find a way to get them. we as the people of aAmerica have the right to live freely, which also includes the right to read freely.      As for music and movies i think we have let ourselves go a little too far. We have made pornography an easily obtainable thing, and music that promotes sex, drugs, violence, and alcohol. The only thing keeping us from pure evil is the @ORGANIZATION1 and their ratings on movies, music, and television.     With magazines its a little more complicated than the others, maga zines have their own set of standards. We all know about @CAPS1, @PERSON1, and @CAPS2, but think about all of the magazines that we dont see. The ones that stay behind closed doors and rarely ever come out.",2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
15225,6,"Allowing a dirigibles to dock upon the top of the Empire State Building, would leave architects faced with challenging sinerio's. Adding a thousand foot dirigible onto the top of the building would add stress to the frame. A single cable tether to the blimp would not help the stress. ""The stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation."" (Lüsted. @NUM1) The frame of the Building would have to be modified to accommodate this new situation. The greatest reason why it was never fully constructed was Because of safety. Most dirigibles outside the U. S used hydrogen rather than helium. ""When the German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by fire... The owners realized how much worse have it been taking place above a densely populated area."" (Lüsted. @NUM2). This makes travel out side the @LOCATION1 with dirigibles more difficult. Nature itself was a great obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast. The back of the ship will swivel around and around the mast cause of winds. ""The winds on top of the building shifts due to violent air currents."" (Lüsted, @NUM3). This wasn't practical nor safe. These obstacles leaves builders faced with unrealized challenges to over come.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
6423,3,The setting of the story affected the cyclist by changing his mood. At the strat he had can eidance which died once he got into the barren dessert but picked up when  he round a rest stop. A prime example to how he started leds and a smile on my face “to” and the growing realization that I could dropping heartstroke on a gorgeous day in June becaused listen to some gentelmen who hadn’t been off their perch in decades “ to” I had an over welming urse to seek out Gary and wilber kiss them and buy some bait. “ The over all mood ox the story is based off how the authour feels.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
1451,1,"Dear local newspaper, I think that computers have a positive effect on people because it helps them learn about foreign places, it allows them to connect with family and friends that live far away, and it helps them with their jobs. Computers help people learn about foreign places. Before my uncle went to @LOCATION4, he wanted to learn about their culture. He went on the computer and researched @CAPS1 culture, so that he can be prepared. How would you feel if you went another country and knew nothing about it? What if you were to go to that country and do something that was disrespectful to their culture, but you didn't know because you didn't do research on it? I know I would feel bad. Now some people might say that you can read a book on that country, but not everyone has time to sit and read a book. Computers make the world a little smaller and helps us learn about each other. I think that's pretty positive. Don't you? People connect with each other through the computer. More than @PERCENT1 of people who move away from their family and friends reconnect with them through computers. Nowadays there are social networking sites, like @CAPS2, @CAPS3, and @CAPS4, that gives people the chance to contact a family or friend that lives far away. When I moved to @LOCATION1 from @LOCATION2, I thought that I was never going to see my best friend again. But then, I got a @CAPS3 and found her on there. I was very estatic. We swapped numbers and addresses. Now everyday I talk to her on the computer. Also, the only way I talk to my aunty, who lives in @LOCATION3, is by the computer. I can't talk to her on the phone because that would run my phone bill up. Another reason that computers are positive is that is helps people find their biological parents or siblings. It brings them together and helps them reconnect with each other. Computers help people with their job. Anybody who is a @CAPS6 of a company has a laptop. It helps them store data, files, and important information. Computers are essential to these people. Also, it helps them keep track of their company if they go on a vacation. How would you feel if you owned a company and went on a vacation, but you couldn't keep track of it because you didn't have a computer. Computers have a positive effect on people because it helps learn about places, talk to their family, and keep track of their job.",5.0,6.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,26.0
874,1,"Almost every family has access to a computer. They have become a part of life and a way to be a part of life outside of your house, even if you have to stay at home. Computers are a source of vast knowledge from millions of sources. They have already caused exponential advancement. Overall, computers have a positive effect. on a rainy day, @NUM1 students will spend time on their computers. out of those students, @PERCENT1 will be on sites such as A.I.M.(@CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3), @CAPS4, @CAPS5, or @ORGANIZATION2. Even if they can't use their phone or get out of the house, they can communicate with friends, old and new. Teens and adults use the @CAPS6 to talk in friends they haven't seen for up to @NUM2 years. People will talk to eachother more, building more relationships and better conversational skills. Over @NUM3 of the sites used by teens are based on @CAPS8 networking. To be able to easily have a conversation with someone miles away is a sign of tremendous advancement. @ORGANIZATION1 is a multi-million dollar company. @PERSON1, a for @ORGANIZATION1, says that sites like @ORGANIZATION1 have skyrocketed in popularity over the @DATE1. More and more people are putting down their @PERSON2 dictionary to type the word into @LOCATION1, where it is accompanied by a pronunciation and found more easily. Students use computers for information on school reports in @CAPS7, @CAPS8 @CAPS9, @CAPS10, or @CAPS11. Information can be found in any subject. There was a survey taken to see which is used more often, books with a specific subject or computers for information or various subjects. Computers are used overwhelmingly more often. They're quicker than books and it's easier to search for a of resource an the @CAPS6. And say sight of particular interest or exceptionally usefull can be added to your favorites. Computers are more practical than books. Pictures of scientific laboratories where space shuttles are sent to the moon have @NUM4 main component computers. Adds from @ORGANIZATION3 show that they're computers are getting smaller and smaller. There's a laptop that will fit in an envelope and a handheld touch screen computer that can almost fit in your pocket. You can type papers and assignments so they're more ledgible. Computers can even score tests. Advancement is centered around computers. Before computers, so many things we do now would seem impossible. But computers open up a realm of possibilities. Typing is faster then hand-writing in some cases and papers can be saved electronically. If our country keeps advancing at the rate, than it is possible to have computers that do maindain chores such as taking out the trash or washing the dishes. There can be computers that talk bark to you like a real conversation. People can learn more and more information and personally advance in intelligence. I look at a computer and think of progress. There are points of computers that are not ideal, but overall, computers are benefitial to society. In a computer, you have access to friends old and new and information from millions of sources. Most of all, computers represent progress and advancement I see no direct harm from computers.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
16133,6,"There were many obstacles builders needed to face to make it possible for dirigibles to dock at the Empire State Building. First was the stress that would be put on the entire building if a dirigible was attached to a mast at the top. ""The stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way through to the building's foundation, which was nearly eleven hundred feet below."" (@NUM1) This problem was easily solved by strengthening the frame of the building. Another major problem was the wind 1,250 feet in the air the wind blows very hard and violently. ""Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast."" (@NUM2) The wind combined with the fact that a dirigible was filled with hydrogen made a bad combination. Hyrogen is a very combustible gas and if a dirigible ran into the building and there was a spark the entire mass of the ship would be enflamed.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
12225,5,"@ORGANIZATION1 tells the story of his childhood and the feel good-times of his family"" in a small house in Newark. Rodriguez shares a unique happy feeling with this excerpt; the feeling of great memories that have been strengthened with each day. The phrases he uses to help describe the house like ""passionate Cuban music filled the air"" and ""the congregation of family"" established this vibrant and happy feeling of the welcoming household he grew up in. The excerpt furthers these feelings when the author tells about how much his parents gave when they themselves had little of their own. The description of these selfless attitudes and ways helps paint a beautiful portrait of a family, with ""extended family"" also, forgetting their troubles and enjoying every second they spend together in a lively kitchen. As the author goes on to tell how grateful he is for his parents and wonderful, warm childhood, it provides a serene and a down-to-earth honesty from the author. The excerpt recreates a feel good time of a carefree life and worryless days that provide a wonderful atmosphere for the reader.""",4.0,,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
9453,4,"The author concludes with this sentence for emphasis. It takes Saeng’s mind off of the flower and she focuses on her test. By waiting until next spring to take the test it gives her something to look forward to. This statement also shows that you should never give up on anything that you do. The author ends on a good note explaining this, The last paragraph is also a break from the rest of the story and from what Saeng‘s was just doing. It is Saeng’s last and final thoughts.",1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
14836,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles while attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. one obstacle was that the dirigible would have to be held by a single cable tether. This would add stress to the building's frame in order to make the frame or sturdy, there was modifications to the building's framework which cost over sixty thousand dollars. Another obstacle the builders faced was the dirigible's use of hydrogen which is highly flammable. Since New York was a densely populated area, this would not work out well. The dirigibles would also have to be weighted down in the back with lead weights. In order to do so, the lead weights would end up dangling high above pedestrians on the street which was a safety issue one last obstacle the builders faced was the law against airships flying too low over urban areas. This law made it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or approach the area.",4.0,,,,,4.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
15570,6,The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there was a mooring mast would add to much stress to the building's frame. The steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate this new situation. The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. There was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas,2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
6674,3,"That explains how the features of the setting affect the cyclsit. Is because some people don’t care about there features. Every body are working for a good feature but, others they @CAPS1 still from people who work. Everyday to have a new features.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
9696,4,I believe he used this as the ending to ensure that she was strong and she would do whatever it took to perservere.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
13251,5,"The book Home: The Blueprints of our Lives by Narciso Rodriguez, the memoir describes of her home and how grateful she was towards it. The author was gratefu her parents work toward the house because of how much time the parents had used in order to make the auther at her homeland. The declorations in the home were amazingly done to perfection. ""My young parents creates our traditional Cuban home, the very heart of which was the kitchen"" (paragraph @NUM1). Shows how much love, time, sacerfice her parent put through to achieve such amazment. It is hard in order to turn ""one simple house into a home."" (paragraph @NUM2).",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
15127,6,"In the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"", builders of the Empire State Building face obstacles in attempting to allow dirigible's to dock there. The main obstacle was the lack of a suitable landing area. Dirigibles need a large area to land. Al Smith said to add a mooring mast to the top of the building and that would allowed a dirigible to land for several hours. During the time of land the dirigible may get ""refueling or service, and to let passengers on and off."" Passengers could get off and on the dirigible safely by walking down a gangplank to the open platform. Architects had trouble putting a mooring mast on the top of the Empire State Building's flat roof because they were afraid that the load of the dirigible and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted. Dirigibles had trouble with saftly, most of dirigibles use hydroge instead of helium, but hydrogen was highly flammable. The greatest obstacle of mooring mast was nature itself, wind were high due to violent air currents, and it would not be safe for dirigibles. The practical reason why dirigibles weren't allow to moor at @ORGANIZATION2 was law agaist airship flying too low. The idea of dirigible was given away to airplanes. The obstacles the builders of @ORGANIZATION3 faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there was solved.",4.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
3783,2,"Does censorship really helf or setback our libraries? Does it try to mask @CAPS7 really might be happening in this world or does it try to make you feel all happy about this horrendous place that you live in? To one person a book could be very offensive and to their neighbor it could have a whole new, opposite meaning. Its all in perspective.     Personally, i think that taking out some of the 'offensive' book in libraries could be a diaster. In one book that we read this year in my @CAPS1 class was '@CAPS2 @NUM1'. This book was all about a distopia where people burnt books who didn't send the right message to society. People were numb to feelings and that could be the outcome of censorship in the libraries around the @LOCATION1. Libraries are a place that sparks imangination for all ages and if you censor things out then how is that suppose to happen?     Looking at books in the past that were defied as 'offensive' and taken off of the shelves at libraries and banned to read in @CAPS1 class at school, were mostly about womens rights and @CAPS3 @CAPS4. Some of then just had bad words in them and others about dystopias. If you took out all af those books that pertained to these topics how many books would you ave left? And for that matter, my best friend is an @CAPS3 @CAPS6 girl and we both have equal rights now and we both have jobs so @CAPS7 is the big deal with living in the past? Theres is also the fact that it is innevitable to get away from cursing everywhere you go. All along the streets, in schools and sometimes even in church. So if you are around it in real life then why can't you read about it?     Now when people who are all for the cenorship in libraries say something to the affect of ' @CAPS7 about the children, i dont want them reading a book that i think is offensive,' i say then cenor them. Its your own choice on how you raise your kids but other parents think that you should have an imagination instead of the same old, same old. Its good to have a varity of things to read that doesn't limit the brain.      All in all, i think people who would want to censor books are crazy and it could potentually be taken way out of hand and then a distpoia society would form. Children should not be dissillusioned on @CAPS7 the world is and could be. Think about that next time that you think a book could arise tension between people and think are you taking away rights of other",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
1485,1,"Dear local newspaper, did you know that just about @PERCENT1 of the people in the @LOCATION1 have computers and use them daily. I am one of those people and I don't get how people ar saying that computers are destroying our country, yeah I know that we spend a little less time with family and friends but computers help as help monitor weather and natrual disasters like torndos and hurricans, they give us a chance to see far away places and learn more about the world and we can talk with other people. Computers are way important in our world because we can monitor natrual @CAPS1 such as tornados, hurricancs, and earthquakes without this technology over @PERCENT2 more people will die from these @CAPS1 without computers because the will less or no warning about the situation. Over @PERCENT3 of kids in the @CAPS2.S go to school and with computers the kids get a better chance to learn absent the world and society. Kids should know what is going on in the world, or you could be a adult just browsing the web loking for information. My point is tons of people all around the world computers to learn. My last reason is to teach kids to type and to have hand eye cordination when kids get older and when we get @CAPS3 they are gonna need to learn how to type. So odds are if you don't know how to type you won't get very far but there in the real world. To conclude my statement im gonna go over my three reasons why we need computers first to track natrual disasters. Second to leern about far away places, and our society. Third to teach childeren hand eye cordination and to to type so they can get @CAPS3. This is why the @CAPS2.S realy needs computers.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
13442,5,"Narciso Rodriguez's memoir creates and overall mood of love and compassion for family and shows the strength of his own family. Narcisco explains that his parents love of cooking and willingness to let other people in ""instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood realative."" Also, this memior shows people facing hardships. Narciso explains his neighborhood, and family overcame racism together. This sets the mood that they love eachother. Lastly, this memior shows love and sacrifice. Narciso explains that his parents ""struggled both personally and financially."" during their move to @LOCATION1. But Narciso's parents still showed him to love. From his parents, Narciso has learned to love, and for that he admires his parents.",3.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
10042,4,"I think the author concludes this paragraph in this story to describe how grown up Saeng is now since it doesn’t look like she leaves with her mom anymore. To the author probably wants to emphasize the reader @CAPS1 of Saeng, now on for she probably leave since she doesn't leave with her mom anymore. In what happen was just her past and will be memorable to Saeng.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
3559,2,"Well today i am going to talk to you about censorship in books, Music, Movies, an Magazines  in your libraries, because some of them can be pretty grafic on some of the things they talk about or do in a story. But yes some of them can be more grafic than others, but that doesnt mean you have to take them off the self. Ya not everyone is into a sexual book but there are some people out there that like to read about that stuff. But some people like to read about murders an gangs selling drugs and thats fine. Its like this everyone has their own taste on what they like. it can be a novel, @ORGANIZATION1. Sports, @CAPS1,  just a true story that has happen to someone, an etc. thats just the part of the world. how would it be if everyone liked the same things. pretty boring right yeah deffentally.  So therefore i dont think books should be takin off the shelfs. it could be the next best story for somebody. you never know.     Now with music yes your so called rap today is music that your kids should not listen to. All they talks about is sex, drugs, achole, an etc. But that desnt give you the right to take them off the shelf thats what some people like to listen too. but there is some music out there that dont just talk about that. there is the oldies, country, jazz, hip hop, an etc. but for the most part all music is good its just some of them are better than others, lets take country for instents ya it talks about some sex, an some achole but thats not the whole song they manly talk about country boys an the things they do or have happened to them over time, an they are pretty much right. So all music is good, but without music i dont think the world would be a very nice place. people listen to music all the time. when working out, at work, driving, or just siting at home. So there are some good music an bad muic you make the call.     But with movies there are some movies made just for that reason its all call intertainment for adults. which yes is kinda pointless, but its there an prolly wont ever leave. there are movies made for sex, drugs, an achole. thats just the part of life, everything is not perfect. So in that matter you gota tell your children about this stuff in stop them from watching it at a younge age. because i think it is taking a big role in teen pregnecy, beacuse it they see it an hey it looks fun we shoud try it, and sexual content is so easy to get. its all over the web an etc. its like drugs they are so easy to get. there are meth labs all over for meth. an there is weed all arund. you just gota tell your kids what they can watch an cant. Disney, @ORGANIZATION2, an @CAPS2. are all great shows for kids. so parents be the boss about that stuff.     Now we get to Magazines. there are millions of magazines all aound the world, they are one thing that will never leave this world. they carry news, intertainment, comics, or tips on how to do somethng. thats what is going to be in this world till the world ends. But yes take with caution there are some magazines out there that your children should never look at till adults. but that doesent make them bad people injoy looking at them kinda magazines thats just what people like. its not like your going to stop your son from looking at a @CAPS3. or your daughter from looking at porn. its all apart of life. but you can stop it from happening at a younge age. you just gota get it clear to your child to not look at this stuff till your older. but you cant stop everything. But all i am trying to say is yes there is some bad things out there an their is alot of good things to. but that doesnt give you the right to remove them",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
12467,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir was, powerful, @CAPS1, and appreciative. The first mood created by the author in the memoir was powerful. ""My mother and father came to this country with such courage"" The second mood created by the auther in The memoir was @CAPS2 ful. ""The congregation of family and friends and end less celebration. The last mood created by the author was appreciative. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrefice"". In conclusion the moods created by the author in the memoir were powerful, @CAPS1 and apprective.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
16273,6,When the empire state building was faced with @CAPS1 a dirigible docking station they encountered many Problems. The first @CAPS2 the @CAPS3 encountered was the wind. The wind over a thousand feet in the air is never going to be @CAPS4. Once they got the dirigible @CAPS5 to the tower there would be no way they Could keep it still enough to refule and let passangers on or off the dirigible. The Second @CAPS2 they ran into was helium is flammable. If somehow that helium @CAPS7 fire it would be @CAPS8 in such a Place as downtown New York. The third and final reason is it is illegal to have an aircraft that low in a city. There was no way this was going to work out so they stopped moving forward on this @CAPS9.,2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
402,1,"Dear local Newspaper, I think that computers have a exellent benefit for people. First family friends can communicate from a far distance. Secondly typing on the computer gives people good hand and eye cordnation. Thirdly they give people the ability to learn about faraway places. Lastly it gives student a chance to research a topic they are learning about. Well @CAPS1 do you think? Researcher @PERSON1 said that almost @PERCENT1 of family's live faraway from eachother. computers give the ability for familys to communicate wether its aim or a webcam chat. Also out of the @PERCENT1 of familys that live faraway from each other @PERCENT2 use the computer to comunicate. Hand and eye cordination, some people type without looking and some people are really slow. Typing on a computer give the great hand and eye cordination. Good hand and eye cordination could be used for many things. For example, playing sports or even a simple task like throwing something in the trash. Lastly, have you ever wanted to learn about a place faraway from you live or have you ever researched a topic for school? Well I have. Computer give people the ability to learn about places faraway. For example in the third grade I had to research hammer head sharks. Don't teacher always ask their student to look up a word or a topic on the computer? As I have said before I think computers have a benifit on people. I hope that my three reasons of contacting family and friend and hand and eye cordnation and lastly researching has made you think it a good thing too. Thank you for taking time to read @CAPS1 I had to say and I hope you take it into concideration.",4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
13508,5,"The mood created in the memoir, ""Narciso Rodriguez"" made me feel like I was in their kitchen eating Cuban food, and listen to music. Also, he told the life of a cuban immigrant. My grandfather followed the same path. He was a young boy when his family immigrated from Cuba. But he worked his hardest and became a very succesful man. This story completely reminds me of him and since I have some background with this, I know this ""mood"" and it speaks to me. The memoir really shows, ""The @CAPS1 @CAPS2."" a person coming here with close to nothing and become a very succesful person. Finally, the mood he created shows that if you put your mind too it you could accomplish anything. Also, it shows the mood created in a typical cuban home.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
6127,3,"The features of the setting in the story affected the cyclist a lot. In the morning when he began his trip, he was eager and determined to get to his destination. Although it took him forty miles to get   the first “town”, he didn’t seem to mind. “The cool pires and rushing rivers of Yosemite had my name written all over them,” is what crossed his mind once the sun began to beat down. Meaning that he   didn’t mind or wasn’t   troubled   by it  at the time. But the farther his trip went, the hotter, and less water supply he had left. Once he passed a couple of “troubling sights”, because they were abandoned and no one   was around, he began to worry. The cyclist got to the point that he stated to suck on pebbtes, in order to circulate the last spit he had in his mouth. In his desperation he finally saw a sign for hope that gave him strength in order to continue on. When he arrived at GARY AND @CAPS1’S FISH CAMP,  his   emotions, and mind changed from begin lugubvious, to becoming thankful.",2.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
16336,6,"There were many obstacles the builders of the Empire state building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. A couple of those obstacles are one, the stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure. This is happening because ""the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the buildings foundation"" Which means they would have to go nearly eleven hundred feet below. Another obstacle is They figured out that ""the mooring mast of the empire state building was destined to never fulfill its purpose."" The reasons for this is because it should have been apparent before was ever constructed. Those are just a couple of many obstacles the builders of the empire state building faced.",0.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
12640,5,"The @CAPS1 is trying to set a mood. The mood is inviting and how a family can over come difcultys together. ""parents welcomed other refugees to celebrate their arrival to the countrie."" That is showing how open and caring the family is.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
1373,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3, I think computers are benefitial to society even though some people don't because they give us a means of communication, computers give us the ability to learn about forein people or places, and computers help businesses in so many ways. Computers are a most have in a society. Computers give us a means of communication such as @CAPS4, @CAPS5, @CAPS6-mail, and so much more. Without the computer, families who live far away from each other can talk with a push of a button. @CAPS5 lets us talk to our friends after school and plan what we are going to do that night. Long distance calls cost money and it is not worth @MONEY1 a call if you call every couple of days. Communication has evolved so much in the past @NUM1 years. Computers are just the bigginning. That is why computers are benefitial to communication. Computers give us the ability to look up facts about forein places and people in a matter of minutes. We could look up who was the @CAPS7 of @LOCATION1 in the would get multiple sites on the @CAPS7. Computers help us expand our learning capabilities and give us a chance to learn things that normally we wouldn't. That is another reason why computers are very benefitial to the society. The last reason that supports the fact the computers are benefitial to the society is because computers help keep much of data. Work data and they help @PERCENT1 of businesses we file reports communicate with other branches of that company. I learned in class that in the job were much more difficult than they are today because of technology. Some people think that using computers deprives people of going out and exercising. It only takes @NUM2 minutes ti check your @CAPS6-mail, or look up something. Computers are benefitial to society because without computers, our lives would be much more complicated.",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
6507,3,"The features of the setting affect the authors dispotion as well as his ability to complete the journey, thus creating an obstacle the author must overcome. At the end of the paragraph five the author writes that “I was traveling through the high deserts of California.” This setting is important because it adds a sense of urgency to his trip when he starts to run low on water. This is similair to when I was backpacking and a bear got most of our food. Our normal backpacking trip had become more of a game of survival. So, the water issue was clearly the main point of of conflict that the author presented in the setting. He also writes that “Not two miles into this next section of the ride, I noticed the terrain changing. Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills.” This aspect of the setting also affects the cyclist because it makes it much harder for him to progress than if it was a downhill road. In short, the setting of the story presents the main points of conflict to the author and thus was essential to the essay.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
132,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, I understand that the idea of advances in technology benefiting society is a very controversal topic. However, I support these advances in technology and I believe that computers have a positive effect on people. They allow friends and family who live far away from each other to communicate and stay in touch. Computers @CAPS7 allow easy access to the news and online textbooks which provides an enourmous amount of benifits to today's society. In the long run, doing more things by computer instead of on paper will save billions of trees! @CAPS7, computers teach us hand-eye coordination which is a tremenciously important skill. These advances in technology are extremely benefitial to our society and should be taken advantage of! ""@CAPS1, @CAPS1!"" @CAPS3 computer wails as I recieve a video call from @CAPS3 cousin, @PERSON4. The advantage in technology has provided many new ways for @CAPS3 family and I to communicate with each other. @CAPS3 cousins and I rarely see one another, but computers make it possible for us to stay connected. Four out of five teenagers would agree that without computers or technological advances, their long-distance relationships with family and friends wouldn't be possible. For example; I go on oovoo once a week to video chat with @CAPS3 cousin whom I only see on holidays. Teen @CAPS4, @PERSON2 says: ""Technology such as computers and cell phones are great for teens, but it should be monitored and not used excessively."" Computers are great for keeping in touch with family and friends at a distance! Next, computers allow easy access to the news and online textbooks. @CAPS5 more people took advantage of this, we could sace millions of trees and have a healthier environment. Environmentalist, @PERSON3 says: ""@CAPS5 more schools switched to online textbooks they would end up saving thousands of dollars that can be put elsewhere."" I agree, @CAPS3 friend @PERSON1 says. ""@CAPS5 we didnt have to take home so many textbooks everyday, I might not have scoliousis!"" @CAPS7, computers allow quick access to the news, so we can find out about accidents right away instead of waiting for the newspaper to come. @CAPS7, computers help children develop hand-eye coordination, which is a very important skill. Computer activities keep our brain excercising and @MONTH1 even help us hit more accurately next baseball season! Three out of five kids at @ORGANIZATION2 say that @CAPS5 they didn't have a computer growing up, they wouldn't be as good at their sport. Computers are an extremely useful recource for many things that we need to take advantages of!",6.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,26.0
4054,2,"The @CAPS1,     I read an intresting @CAPS2 the other day by Katherine Paterson an author. The @CAPS2 said 'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf. But if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf- the work I abhor- then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.'      I believe that people should not have the right to take matieral such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc. of the shelf of a library, or anywhere else those items are displayed. So I agree %@NUM1 with Paterson because people have their own opions. Some stuff @MONTH1 be more offensive than others to different people. I have observed people, and were all different so why should our thoughts be to? The answer is yes they should be different. But it is pretty simple if you find a book, song, movie, or magazine that you find offensive or distasteful then put it back another person might find it intresting.      I want to know the thoughts of my fellow citizens about what Paterson has said. I am asking for your help to do so. I would like you to put the @CAPS2 in The @CAPS1 and hear what people have to say about it. Thank You for accepting my @CAPS4.                                                                      @PERSON2",3.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
13188,5,The mood created by the author in the memoir was happiness and how he wrote his feelings of being cuban. For example she was saying that she will never forget how my parents turned the simple house into a home. The author feel really happy of being cuban and celebrating her cultures in the United @ORGANIZATION1.,0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
9372,4,Saeng did get the feel that she called fil in and. Buying something that could help her but also have her missing were she from. And with her mother get a little mad about it because the prags she pay for. It @CAPS1 vowed silently to herself in the spring that she take the test again.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
12492,5,"In this memoir by @PERSON1, he explains and recalls the home he grew up in. He talks about the small little @NUM1 room house and explains how his parents made it home like. The mood Rodriguez created is sort of reminisant/wistful mood of his days as a kid in the house. He talks about, how his parents ""... both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me there are rich culinary skills and love of cooking..."" (@NUM2 2.@NUM1-5). This sort of sets up the mood of the narrator being reminisant and grateful of his life as a kid.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
12705,5,"I think the mood created by the author was gratefulness towards his parents. Narciso Rodriguez wants to tell his parents how very special they are to him and how much he thanks them for what they did for him. In this memoir, Narciso Rodriguez says that ""I've often told them of my admiration for their strength and perseverance, and I've thanked them repeatedly."" I think that in this memoir, Narciso wants the reader to understand how he feels about his family. He wants to tell us about what they did for him. Narciso thanks his parents for their sacrifice and I think by telling us his story, the mood that was created was gratefulness towards the parents who made him a 'home.'",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
6874,3,"The cyclist should have never taken the advice from the older men. The map would have been a lot safer and easier. People seem to always look for a shortcut, including myself. He could have died from heat stroke and lack of water. He did have perseverance though he never gave up and that is what saved him. Being in that situation and setting I would have given up.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
12579,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is happiness and greatfulness Here are my three reasons why I think that First of all, Narciso is proud of the way @CAPS2 lives and who @CAPS2 is. It all began, starting with his parents, they are immagrants. ""In 1961, I was born into this simple house.""@CAPS1 of all, @CAPS2 cherished every moment @CAPS2 lived. @CAPS2 is grateful for all the things his parents did for him and everyone else. ""my parents always kept their arms and their doors open to the many people we consider family"".Finally, His parents migrated from cuba. They are known as immagrents because they was not born in america, and narciso is proud and honestly happy for them. Thats why I think the mood created by the author in the memoir is happiness and greatfulness.",3.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
6620,3,The features affects the setting of the cyclist because in some ways they through you off a little with others lines and then will get confused of what their acually talking about. The littlest thing that could through you off is the line when it says before the last world war. That kind off through me off alittle.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
3910,2,"Do you think that books, music, magazines, movies should be removed form a libraries shelf?     A libarys should carry every kind of book, movie, Magazines, Music etc.  The reason that a libary should carry every thing is because say a farmer wants to come in and get a book over cattle and some city person says that its no use and throws it away the farmer is outta luck or say the oppiset would happen.  Another reason would be a persons tasted some people like romance and some like action etc so if they dont carry one type someone will get mad about it and stop going. Say if @PERSON2 dose not like viloence so they take it off the shelf and @PERSON1 dont like chick flicks etc what would that leve in a libary no one would have anything to read and they would close the libary down because there would only be a few books.  The movies and magazines i would say carry anything that was approperat and if it was rated @CAPS1 you had to be @NUM1 to rent it then the person would be a adult. There is different cultures out there that only like certon thing so what are they going to do make seperate libarys so that each culture will be happy or just build one big libary and the ones that dont like just leve the book or whatever there.  Altmentley its up to the parent to tech there chiled noy yo pick up the bad items if there not liked by a certin family or cultuer.  If they would get rid of the stuff one person didnt like it would loss custmers and make others mad so in my eyes its better to have one person mad becaues a libary carryes a certian type of item then to loss custmers and make @NUM2 people or even two to make one person happy when it is as simple as dont pick it up.     So altimently we can not make everyone happy so just look over the items you do not like teach your childern not to bring them home and move on in life and dont start a problem",3.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
4404,2,"Tuff @CAPS1 for a little @CAPS2      Censorship is a problem we are faced with today. I believe there are certain instances where censorship is necessary, but I also feel it must be kept in check. Thats why i have a great deal of reespect for organizations and industries that try and stop or put of censorship media untill your more mature and responsible enough to handle it.         The most common categories where censorship is not all right in my world are, books and music. A lot of book are very well writen and fabulous to read, but in history or racial, and more cultural books they use words/terms that are offensive to me and a lot of other people to.      Also, the main cause in thius is music. In today's society, nearly every person has an ipod and downloaded onto that ipod is music. Im not saying all music is terribly bad, but in most cases i hear about every word in the book and race topics. Rappers are setting bad examples for young adolecents like myself, who pose with guns and have marijuna and crack. Why do they do this? Just to mkae themselves more popular. That is hurting our education and making us think we shyould be criminals.      I in my opinion enjoy magazines and tru informative facts from professional reporters. Tghe reporters are on the citizens side and trying to get the true facts out there for us the people. Maqgazines also, tell about annual celbrations and good things happening in the world. Whyere you can find out the scores of sports game and what the weather is going to be like.      Last year, i remeber reading 'To @CAPS3 a @CAPS4'. It was so contraversial and talked about blackl slaves and whites treatinbg them like dirt. Also, about black never win a trial and there treated unfairly. I felt embaressed and i was the only african american in the class. It was akward. I felt like if we had a discussion people would talk badly about iot then remember i was in the room then theyd stop.     What is the world going to do? Censorship covers an entire multi media spectrum of what is bad and good censorship. It is up to the right people to stand up for what is right and wrong for your children and young adolecents in the world. To help fight this cause! Bring down all that is bad! We can do it, we will fight! Like @PERSON1 says, 'dont hope for a better change or wish for a new world.' If you want change you need to make it happen and stand up for whats right and make a differnce in the world",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
214,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS1 your at home and you are on the computer. But its been hours maybe even days since you've takin a breath of fresh air outside. This @MONTH1 sound cpzy, yet it is a reality for over <@PERCENT1@NUM1> of the population in @LOCATION1. Just loo around they are in movies, chain resurant at your home, in your office and even in schoold; computers are everywhere. I know that because of over using computers amny experts are concerned that people are spending too much time on their computers and less time exercising and enjoying nature, and interacting with family and friends, I say that because of this peopel every where shold only be allowed to use the computer on a rain everday, say @CAPS2 to computers. My point is with computers our days are wasted with vertual games and other downloads. For starter, people are spending too much time on their computers and less time exercising. Over the past two years obeseity has become a major issue in @LOCATION1 with over @PERCENT1 of the population obeseity causesan ectreamly higher risk of getting diseases and sickness like diabeaties, heart failure and even depression. recently my cousin passed away from canser caused by her fat or obeseity. My point is we can't sit her doing nothing get up and get moving away from that computer in addition to this people should get off computers and start enjoying nature. A total of <@PERCENT1@NUM2> of personals in @LOCATION1 don't spend enough time out side. With global warning killing our environment people would care enouhg to psend a little girl of their time outside. didi you know that more and more of the environment is disappering each day? I went to my good friends and expert on all things envieronmental from the instate of clean our world or cow. ",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
3517,2,"Do you think there are certain books and magazines that should not be displayed in librarys? Well here's my perspective.      I think that librarys shouldn't have certain books due to racism, violence, and etc. One, because there are young children that read books throughout the library, and two because books and magazines due to racism and ect. can be offensive to others.      How would you feel about your children reading about stuff like that? That's something a child doesn't need to know at an early age. So that's my perspective on it",1.0,1.0,1.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
12406,5,"In the memoir, the mood the author creates is peaceful. @PERSON1 says his family has a warm home, which means it's nice and quiet. Where @PERSON1's family lived, the different cultures that lived in the neighborhood were friendly with each other. In @PERSON1's family, they had countless extended family members who usually joined the family at the table for a nice meal and family get together. @PERSON1's family welcomed many people to their family. @PERSON1 was very grateful to his parents for their love and sacrifice. His family had many rich culinary skills. Their best skill was cooking, which was fun and relaxing to them. Finally, growing up in the environment in New Jersey gave @PERSON1 a great sense that ""family had nothing to do with being a blood relative."" Clearly, @PERSON1 and his family were very friendly and did many things that were peaceful.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
12439,5,"The story, ""Narciso Rodriguez"", has a comfortable and loving mood. This memoir sounds almost cozy, in some ways. If you read paragraph @NUM1, you can imagine just how happy the kitchen table was when @LOCATION1 (landlord's daughter), Sergio, and Edelmira (""surrogate grandparents"") were around it. Also, in paragraph @NUM2, it talks about the Passionate and Cuban music"" that filled the air ""and the ""aromas of the kitchen"". If that doesn't sound like a comfortable place, I don't know what does! Love must have been a main factor in the author's life because it is evident in the excerpt. This story talks about all the people that would come over the house, friends and family, too, and how everyone there was cared for no matter what. The first sentence in paragraph @NUM3 says ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" That alone says how much love there was in the house. The mood of this story was very comfortable and very, very loving.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
15087,6,"In ""The Mooring Mask"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, In order to allow dirigibles to dock there, the builders of the Empire State Building had to face obstacles. First, ""the lack of a suitable landing area"". They had to make room for the huge dirigibles to land. Second, ""add stress to the building's frame."" They had to make the structure of the building stronger so it wouldnt break. Lastly, ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting"" if they were going to be able to make this work they needed to find a way to calm the wind by the tower. Hence, In ""The Mooring Mask"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, in order to allow dirigibles to dock there, the builders of the Empire State Building had to face obstacles.",1.0,,,,,1.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
1275,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, I understand that experts are saying people are spending to much time on computers didn't agree. Im writing to you today to tell you my opinion on the effects computers have on people with their time usage, what they are doing , and computer dead. If you will please continue on I would like to share with you my thoughts. Computers today are consuming our world. People are spending way to much time on the computer. I believe they should set a timer on how long they are on the computer. Lets say they set a @NUM1 hour limit then once its up they have to get off. I think this would help because if were spending to much time inside were not gonna be able to get enough exercise, which isn't good for our health. Please continue on to learn about how we should use the computer. Parents have to set a good example for kids. If parents use the computer @NUM2 then their child will think it's ok to do so. If the child then starts spending all their time on the computer then they won't be spending anytime with their friends. Kids today need to spend more time outside then playing games on the computer. Also the parents and child need to spend time together, if they are both on the computer they cant spend time together. Please read on about how we will go computer dead. Computer dead is a term I call when all we want to do is use the computer. We need to be healthy about our computer usage. If we aren't then we could start to get withdrawls from the computer and then will spend more time on the computer. If you go computer dead then it will slowly start to take over our lives. I think if this does happen it will be hard to get over an stop using the computer. Please read on to finish reading my letter. Thank for reading about how we need to mange our time issues, how we use the computer and computer dead. I hope you will consider my thoughts. Thank you again for your time spent reading this.",3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
4200,2,"I dont think that they should remove music, movies, magazinwa, etc., Should be tooken away because if you take all of that away then there really wouldnt be anything to do in your spaire time but be bored. I know alot of people couldn't handle being bored. I know I couldnt handle it if all I was bored all the time because someone took away music. Now it would be a different story if we never had music, movies, and all that other good stuff. None would really care becaused they new what it was or hurd about it. How would you feel if you had to drive for @NUM1 hours and didn't have any music or magazines to read? I'm thinking you would be really bored im guessing.",1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
2991,2,"Yes and no, some materials such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc, should be voted upon the citizens to be removed from shelves.          I do think that some materials in those catagories should be removed if they are offensive to me as well as others, but it will take a long while to get them removed from stores and other places if other people like them. I do not like how they make some music to be very violent and cause minds of most teenagers to turn bad and start selling drugs on the street of their hometown, but i can't do anything about that because that kind of music is admired by those teenagers as well as some adults too. If some people can buckle down and see that stuff like that will mess up lives of teenagers and some adults who fall victim to it, then there is a chance that it can be stopped. Stopping things like this will save a community from disaster and cause other good chances in life for people in need for those chances.     Here's another example, like this music artist named @CAPS1 @CAPS2. She has made some great songs for the past year and a half now. People have told me that she is part of a group called @CAPS3 and its a group where they try to I think 're-birth' thereselves. My friends wanted me to stop listening to her music. I told my friends that I do not like the fact that she joined this group, but that doesnt mean im gonna stop listen to her music. Now if she makes a song that is offensive to me and as well as my friends, then that where I draw the line.     What im saying is that if people don't have others to back them up if something is highly offensive to them and oblivious to others, it will be very hard trying to prove yourself in the best way possible.",4.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
12788,5,The mood the author created in the memoir was emotional because he describes his childhood and how he grew up.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
14868,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. Although the builders thought it to be a brilliant idea, they did not carefully consider the safety hazards they may have encountered, and how unrealistic the idea truly was. One of the greatest reasons the mooring mast was destined to be unable to fulfill its purpose was because of safety concerns. In paragraph @NUM1 it states ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen... and hydrogen is highly flammable."" When a dirigible was destroyed by fire in New Jersey, the owners of the Empire State building realized how much worse an accident like that would be if it occurred over a place as densely populated as downtown New York. Another very practical reason why dirigibles could not moor at the top of the building was, as stated in paragraph @NUM2, ""there was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" That would make it impossible for a dirigible to even approach the area, let alone be able to tie up to the building. It is very apparent that the builders of the Empire State Building faced many issues in the attempt.",2.0,,,,,2.0,4.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
9676,4,He author concludes this paragraph in this story because It sounds good and to show the people he is writing it to that no matter what happend s to you in life you should Just keep on doing what you think is best for you. Just like the flower she keeps coming back for more after going through all that’s tuff. ,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
12760,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is very strong. Narciso's mood mostly has to do with his family, friends, and most importantly his culture. Narciso is very happy and lucky to be born in the United States and have a chance to grow up there. Second Narciso loves his home. He talks about how they created their New Jersey home into a traditional Cuban home. For example he says that the kitchen is the heart of his home and how his parents taught him how to cook, which he is greatful for. Lastly his mood towards his friends is that he treats them and considers them as his family. For example his landlord's daughter cooked meals for him more often than not. Also his ""real"" grandparents wich weren't his real grandparents because they were still in cuba. Those are the reasons that create the authors mood in the memoir.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
3433,2,"Libraries, not many people like them, but most people do. Libraries are almost in every town. People like to go there to read book, get on the computers, and do activities with their families. But there are some things that people would really want to do things there but they cannot because of their age or so, or it just might be prohibited at all times. Do you think the advantages and disadvantages at the library are fair enough for everyone?    Most people really do not think that you must always go to the library for things because if you are a irresponsible person with all the damage that you have done to the item that you have checked out or how late you turn it could be the same ammount of money on buying that item. If you are a responsible person then you are fine. But some do not think that the libraries should be putting stuff there if they are not going to let any one touch it or check it out.    So if they are not going to let one person get an item from the library then it should be removed from there, because there will be at least one person who will want to get that item and it would be rude if the librarian tells you no you cannot have that.     Libraries should just stick to the same old same old a section for kids with kid books. A section for the middle schoolers and the teenagers. A section for the high schoolers and the adults and mostly everything will work out fine. Just want to make it fair for everyone since it is the public library of your town.     Now that some facts and opinions have been stated hopefullly the libraries and librariens do think about what they are going to put and what they are not going to put on the shelves of a public library to make it fair for everyone. So do you think the advantages and disadvantages at the library are fair enough for everyone",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
15806,6,"The builders faced many obstacles when trying to make it possible to allow dirigibles to dock at the top of the Empire State Building. They could not add an all steel mooring mast on top of the building because it would add too much stress to the frame and foundation of the building. If they were going to add a mooring mast, they needed to modify and strengthen the building's frame.The other problem the builders faced was safety. They had to consider the fact that may dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen, which was highly flammable. The Building was in a densely populated area in downtown New York City. The last obstacle the builders faced was nature. The winds on top of the building were very strong and the air currents frequently shifted. This would have made the dirigibles swivel around the mast.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
1386,1,"Dear @LOCATION1 harold, More and more people use computers, but not everyone agrees that this benefits socity. Those who support advancences in technology believe that computers have a positive effect on people. But computers can be a bad thing. They can deprive children from excersizing, enjoying nature and spending time with family and friends. First of all, Computers can stop children from exersizing. ""@CAPS1 I can never get outside after school, because I'm checking my email."" @CAPS2 high school student. A recent studdy shows @PERCENT1 of students at a middle school @CAPS3 when they come home they go right on to the computer. This shows that almost half of the students at just the middle school are on the computer. This is way computers can be a bad thing. Secondly, some children spend more time in the grate indoors than the outdoors. ""I spend most of my time breathing in airconditioning (or heat) than fresh air."" @CAPS2 middle school student. Imagine, a child is staring at a computer screen playing a game or on facebook mean wile it's a beautiful day in the middle of @DATE1. @NUM1 out of @NUM2 students @CAPS3 that they spend more time indoors than out. Computers can be a bad thing in a childs. Finally, computers can interfere with a childs time spending with family or friends. ""I @CAPS1 spend an entire evening at a family party on these computer."" @CAPS3 elementary student. @NUM3 out of @NUM4 homes have a computer and it is beang used @NUM5 by children. This shows that little @PERSON1 of the @PERSON2' house hold is never out side playing with friends. Computers can do more harm then good in a house hold. It can stop children from exercising enjoying the out doors and spending time with family. I ask you to tell your children or grand children necies nephues to cut down on computer time.",4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
11899,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is very grateful and kind for many reasons. Narciso Rodriguez he tells why his parents made a hard choice to come to @LOCATION1 and leave all their friends, family, and careers behind. He really shows the people who have read his memoir that he respects his parents and thanks them so much to make his life better in @LOCATION1. This memoir relates to people and real life. He explains where he comes from and he just loves the way he can live his life simple and be happy for what he had accomplished so far (and his parents). In his memoir the details and the description just makes you want to keep reading and learn more about his life. In conclusion, every-thing in the memoir is so kind and precious to him.",2.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
6434,3,"In the story “Rough Road Ahead; Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” the setting of the story majorly affected the cyclist. The story tells us “…I was travelling through the high deserts of California  in June.” The extreme heat of the summer definitely put a  strain on the cyclist causing him to have to drink lots of water . Unfortonatly the  “towns” were very far apart and many not having good water making dehydration  problem. “There was no one in sight, not a building, car, or a structure of any kind.” @CAPS1 of this would have happened had he been cycling at a marathon with people handing him water when requested, or if he had been smart enough to follow a good map.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
15111,6,"Based on the excerpt, there were many obstacles the builders of the Empire State building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. ""Hydrogen is highly flammable."" The dirigibles ran on hydrogen verses helium and if it were to ever to catch on fire there would be pedestrians everywhere below that would be in grave danger. ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself."" Because the dirigible would be docked so high with little back control, the fierce winds would be a huge issue. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" If a dirigible were to dock there it would also be breaking laws. ""...was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" The builders a lot more obstacles dealing with the docking of dirigibles than just architectural.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
12707,5,"The @CAPS1 in the @CAPS2 is different and uneek to other I have heard. I belive that the @CAPS1 the @CAPS3 is trying to make is happyness, and selflessness, and grateful. I think this because he describes his parents As selflessness and takes everyone in to theire small Apartment. I also think he is creating ""warth"" by saying that his first birthday with his parent Are comfortting That is the @CAPS1 I belive the @CAPS3 is trying to create. ",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
3876,2,"Books can make a very deep impression on whoever reads them, and sometimes these impressions are not appropriate for the reader.  Books that are found inappropriate to children or even teenagers should be reconsidered to be removed off shelves that are exposed to children or teenagers. I think that children should not learn inappropriate material if they are not ready to learn about it, in other words if they are not age appropriate.  Books are just one thing, there are also movies, music, magazines, and etc.  All of these things can give wrong ideas to our children and teenagers.  Inappropriate media or imformation should not be exposed to people that are not ready, or mature enough to watch movies, or read books that could harm or give them wrong impressions.       Children that have read books or watched inappropriate media can sometimes change how they are like. I think that many children that watch movies especially that should not be exposed to them. Some of the movies that I have seen have been very inapropriate and I could not imagine young children watching these movies. This is because I do not think children know as much as we do, so it will give them wrong ideas they have taken the wrong way.  I think that books or media that is inappropriate can change childrens childhoods in a negative way.       Children and teenagers should also be mature enough to be exposed to all of the books, movies, and magazines.  If all the age groups would be exposed to all of the higher rated movies, books, and magazines I dont think that would be very resbonsible on the libraries part, or whoever was exposing it. I think that society would be harder to control with this kind of media everywhere.  Parents would also not appreciate if their children were reading, or seeing something that they think their child should not be exposed to.  I think that children are simply not mature enough to be exposed to all of the books, magazines, and movies.  It would cause a lot of problems for many people.       Many of the children would be doing stupid things that they have seen in a movie or read in a book that they thought was cool, or that they should try it.  Were are already having a problem with pre-teens or teengers. This is because many of them are exposed to things at a early age they should not see, that effect there actions.  There are many actions I have seen or heard of that relate to a book, or movie that probaly would not have happened if the person was not exposed to it.       Children simply are not ready, or mature enough to be exposed to everything that books, movies, or magazines have to offer.  It can change the way that children think, or what they think would be cool to physically do.  I think that it is bad enough that a lot of teenagers have been exposed to a lot of these things already.  This should be a wake up call for those who have children.   Books shold not be exposed to every age group, because it would hurt society and whoever is not ready to learn or witness what they will",4.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
6063,3,"In ""rough road ahead: Do not exceed posted speed limit the features of the setting affect the cyclist. Many visual features create a very deserted area thats hott in your head. For example in paragraph five they use alot of adjectives to describe how abandon the place was. Words like ramshackle and rusty. Also how often the lack of water was brung up made us think of how hott this California desert must have been. Also the heat made the cyclist belive he was seeing a miracle when he saw the Welch’s fruit juice factory. The choice of visual words in this story are words to describe what affected the cyclist.",2.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
4076,2,"I don't think that censoring books and movies is needed in my opinion. Very many people are just too protective. They just need to calm themselves down and just face the facts. Eventually everybody will come in contact with almost everything that is mentioned in books at some point in there life. Life is unpredictable and anything can happen at any moment. You will probably end up reading the books that you are not supposed to anyway when you get older.      The people that think there should be censorship on library books will most likely get there way at least in their community. I think that libraries should be organized in a way that when you walk in you know the section you want to be in. They should have the books for adults in one section, books for teenagers in a different section, and books for kids in another section of the library too. This would help the parents that go with their kids keep them in the right spot. This would also help in a way to find your book if you know what type of book it is.      Another good thing that would help in a library are signs that catergorize the books. So if you walk in the teenager section and you are looking for a good mystery book. You just look at the top of the book case or at the ceiling where the signs are. This would help majorly for people that have never been in a library or don't know how to search for their book in a library.      The next thing would be to have all the movies, magazines, and music in the categories of adult, kids, and teenagers too. They would be in the sections of the books but at the same time be seperated to where the signs in the section say movie and music. This way kids don't have to roam around to find a certain movie that they want and have to roam around in the adult section to find it. The movies and magazines don't have to be exactly in the categories of mystery and things like that because normally movies are more well known than books in our time period.     A good thing that would keep little kids in the right section would be to color it with a lot of bright colors that will attract their attention. If a little kid goes into a section that is dull and boring they @MONTH1 just wander in the adult section and stumble across something that their parents don't want them to. The kids section could be lots of colors, the teenager section could be maybe one color, and the adult section could be the most dull of all of the colors.     All of my ideas would work and keep all of the kids entertained. They also will take more of an interest in reading if they are interested by walking in a library. These are the only ideas that I have that would work well. There could be more things that would keep kids interested but only for a little bit",5.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,22.0
9412,4,The author ended the story with that paragraph because it’s telling how Saeng  feel about winter being near and how she have to wale  until spring come back around to do her teast again.  ,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
3576,2,"Do I believe that some books should be taking off the shelves if they are found offensive ?     Well what do you think ? I think they should depending on cause or what degeree of the party being offended. I feel if there are books ,movies,or music that are saying or showing a form of insluts then it depends on who is being offended.      If you have a racist book against all races like blacks,asian,or mexican etc... other minorities @MONTH1 find out about those forms of insults and they raise an issue about it, then yes take it off the shelves.      If you have a confrontation about it then it could get violent . Also, if you dont then they could sue you for racism or make it public to everyone that you are a racist library and you would loose business.      So to avoid all of the fighting and  lawsuits and other humiliation against you and the other minorites. If they bring up a situation then just take it off the shelves so you can stay safe and them as well.           Plus , they only come here for an oppurtunity to start a new life cause usually they're coming from poverty srticken towns, homes countries. I myself, am not a racist person I think that we are equal just unique individuals we're all unique in our own ways  that is what makes us who we are today.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
3631,2,"Wouldn't it be nice to walk into a library and be able to find any sort of book possible? I believe that it would be very useful and helpful for many libraries to allow a varied censorship of books. In my opinion it would be beneficial to students, parents, or teachers to get information on different topics. As well as many students who need to write a paper about a certain topic that they @MONTH1 not be familier with, and allowing all the types of books would help anybody with any topic.      A library is a place where anyone can go to find information on something, find an interesting read, or just relax. If your going to get information on a topic that you know nothing about, it would be nice to find a book telling all about the topic. This would help students with reports, along with any other person who is trying to find some extra information they might not know about a topic.      If a person was to not want a certain type of books in the library, then I think that person should just try and ignore the books. I think this because I dont think books should be taken out that are beneficial to others, just because it is offensive to someone that could just ignore it.      Maybe the books are about drugs, sex, or violence, but they still are able to teach many people that aren't already knowledgable about the innappropriate, or offensive topics.      In conclusion, throwing books out and keeping a library censored, would be a mistake. It is a mistake because it is taking away from many people who are wanting to become knowledgable about different topics. It takes away from people who need to learn about topics for things such as school, or even work",4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
14911,6,"The obstacles that the builders @CAPS1 in attempting to allow dirigibles is making its speed go up. Another obstacle that the builders @CAPS1 is the landing area. The last obstacle that the builders @CAPS1 is making sure that the passengers get on and off safely. Like it says on paragraph six, ""passengers could safely get on and off the dirigible by walking down a gangplank...""",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,1.0
14876,6,"In the excerpt The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there are described. One obstacle was that most dirigibles were highly flammable. In paragraph @NUM1 it says, ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" If a dirigible caught on fire near the Empire State Building, the accident would affect many people since its a densely populated area. Another obstacle the builders faced was the winds of nature itself. Even if a dirigible was docked, it would still swivel around too much. In paragraph @NUM2 it says, ""... they would be dangling high above pedestrians on the street, was neither practical nor safe."" One more obstacle they faced was an existing law. In paragraph @NUM3 it says, ""The other practical reason why dirigibles could not moor at the Empire State Building was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" The architects faced many obstacles while trying to bring their idea to reality. It's better to plan ahead and think of every obstacle before bringing ideas to life.",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
851,1,"@ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS1 studies have been conducted over the past few years, and they show that people of all ages spend @PERCENT1 of their free time on the computers. This is becoming a problem all over our state and country. Computers are consuming the lives of everyone. An anonymous source claims that they use their computer to contact old friends. A study shows that phone usage has gone down because adults and teens would prefer to email or instant message a friend. This results in sitting in front of a computer screen waiting for a responce. @PERSON1, a student at @ORGANIZATION2 says, I go on the computer once or twice a week. i dont use it all that much because I'd rather be out having fun with all my friends rather than be holed up in a room by myself."" @CAPS2 people believe it is a way to be more social, but it really isn't. It's just sitting in front of a screen talking to people you @MONTH1 not even know too well. When you sit down in your computer chair and start e-mailing away, you aren't doing any physical exercise. The @CAPS2 movement people will normally do is get up and go to the bathroom. Then they are right back in a chair, making minimal movements. @PERCENT2 of people who sit in front of a computer end up obese because they don't burn any calories. Since they don't relesase many endorphins, so they aren't very happy. If they got up and went outdoors to do physical exercise, they would be fit and happy . Often, teenagers feel more powerful when they are using a computer. They find it easier to disobey rules their parents set for them. Teens also find it easier to bully other children via the internet or social networks. @NUM1 out of @NUM2 students at @ORGANIZATION2 middle @ORGANIZATION2 confess to being the target of malicious bullying online. @NUM3 out of @NUM2 confess to be bullied, and they definitely don't want to be bullied on facebook or myspace where everything is out on your profile for your peers to see. Teens should have limited time on the computer, so they don't do anything they will regret in their future. Therefore, adults and teens should be aware that using a computer is fine, but they shouldn't over use the luxury of a way to find information quickly or contact a friend in a foreign country. This generation needs to be reminded that their whole life shouldn't be spent on the computer. Probably less than @NUM5 minutes a day should be spent checking your e-mail or instant messaging a friend. Then you should go outdoors and spend time with your friends and family.""",5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
355,1,"Dear @CAPS1, I think that computer are a waste of time, but they also help you in many ways. You should only go on the computer if you really have too. Peple are on the computer for hours at a time, they go on the computer if they are bored or if they don't want to go outside. People have made the computer daster and more effective. So more and more people buy computers each year. Computers als helsp you in al of ways, you can learn from a computer, you can find a job on the compter, and you can also shop on the computer. So if you need to find a job then you can go on the computer and find a job that is right for you. You can learn from the computer. The computer can give you so much information it is unbeleiveable, you can look up anything and even ask questions. Last, you can shop on the computer. Say you can find something in a store and you looked everywhere so you go home and you can go on the computer and find what you are looking for. But, you most likely are going to need a credit card. So this is why I think computer are helpful but a waste of time.",3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
3470,2,"Censorship in Libraries.                                                                           Censorship is a big conflict in many libraries. @CAPS2 are plenty of offensive books that shouldn't be put on the shelves.  Many schools call these books, magazines, and movies, '@CAPS1.'  @CAPS2 is often a week where people read all of the books that have been @CAPS1 from school libraries.  I participate in this school wide challenge beacause I disagree with banning books.  Banning books can be good and also very hurtful in many reasons.     First off, I like to think of banning books or anything else from the author or writers view.  How would you feel if you spent around @NUM1 years writing this story/movie for kids that got @CAPS1 in the first couple of weeks it was on the shelves.  I don't think that many people would enjoy that.  I also think that many people don't think of authors at that big of a deal.  When I think of that it makes me think of all the things we couldn't read in our world. Including, newspapers, books, and magizines.  Maybe even include the fact that it takes a lot of work to write the things on what people want to hear, or see.  I feel like when books or movies get @CAPS1 or removed, it makes the author feel like they're worth nothing.  The parents point of view makes things a lot worse.      Think of it this way, your child comes home from school with this book that he/she wants you to read with him.  You sit down and start reading, when suddenly you come across a violent or inappropriate secne in the story.  You stop reading all of a sudden and look at your child who is enjoying this violence and loving this story!  What do you do?             Many parents would call the school and explain what happened and complain about banning this book and taking it away from children that could get this book.  Taking it away has no point because just banning it from the school library doesn't mean that they can't find it elsewhere.  How do you think your child would feel having loved this story now it's gone?  I know that it would make me feel like I did something wrong.  Taking things off shelves also has a good side to it.      When you take the book, movie or magizine off the shelf it is gone forever from that library.  This can be a good thing because then kids won't have the obvious reason to get the story.  If you don't want your child or other children to see it then it is quite a good idea.  It makes the @CAPS1 object harder to find and also harder for the kids to grab intrest to.  If the book or movie isn't around then they won't want to read the next one or see the next movie. @CAPS2 are many different views on censorship, which could effect how people choose what happens in libraries.     My view on this topic was negitive and I support that fully.  If the author works hard on writing the story they shouldn't get punished for expressing their feelings in a story. Many different poeple come across this issue and @CAPS2 are many different views on the topic.  Next @CAPS1 book week I'll be supporting the authors that got crushed by their work getting @CAPS1.  I hope that you will too.",3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
992,1,Computers are good to use because it tells you everything. Like if you need a number to a restaurant you can just get it off the computer and sometimes when you wanna go on a vacation and if you wanna know how much it cost you go onto the computer. And computers are good because if you wanna travel to different places you can go onto the computer and look for a map and print it out. But sometimes computer are bad because when people go on web sites to chat peoples can be grown ups but talking to little kids. ,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
6766,3,"The features of the setting had an affect on the cyclist. I know this because in the story the cyclist said that he was “going to drop from heat exsostion”, he is riding through the desert in @DATE1, and he took directions from three old “gentlemen” sitting on a porch.",1.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,1.0
13345,5,"The mood and Narciso Rodriguez's memoir was love and respect. Narciso loved his family so much, and he learned that family does not only include blood-relatives. Narciso's family included the friends that he had made living in his neighborhood. Majority of Narciso's love went to his parents. He loved them for selflessly coming to @LOCATION1 just to give him a better life. They were fueled by the fact that they were giving a great life to their son, despite the fact that their jobs were not the best. He loved them for sacrificing their home, family, and friends back in Cuba just for him. Most of all, he loved them for teaching him two very important things-the spirit of generosity, and how important family and friends are. His parents also taught him courage by not being afraid of coming to @LOCATION1. He constantly thanked his parents and told him that he wouldn't have been so brave. All of Narciso's undying love and gratitude piles up, and it is clear to see how much Narciso respected his parents.",4.0,,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
14985,6,"The builders of the empire state building had to face the obstacle of safety, to make sure everyone can get on the dirigible safely without any form of danger. Another obstacle is arranging the dirigibles so that they are able to board passengers from there. @PERSON1 said ""the height made it desirable to postpone to a later date the final installation of the landing gears."" People did'nt want to try it, so that would be another obstacle. If people did'nt want to try it then it will become just a decoration, and that's not what Al Smith wanted. Last obstacle would be that it would'nt hold for long as said in the excerpt ""The mooring mast on the Empire State Building was destined to never fulfill its purpose, for reasons that should have been apparent before it was ever constructed."" In other words, the architects did'nt think to far a head into the future to see if the mooring mast would even be used. These are some of the obstacles that the builders had to face.",0.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,3.0
7043,3,"The setting of the story had affected the bike rider in many way. It was hot when he was riding so he was thirsty. For example, “The sun was beginning to heat down” (pg @NUM1). So the sun is very exhusting and made him to start dehydrating. Another example is a traveling through the desert of California in June” (pg @NUM2). California is a relatively hot state and June is one of it’s warmer months. The terrain didn’t favor in the riders either “Flat road had turned into, short rolling hills “(pg @NUM2). Short rolling hills are harder on a bikers body than flat terrain. This is how the setting affected the rider.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
12610,5,"The mood created by the author is a happy and grateful one. The memoir expresses a positive mood and their are no signs, at all, of negativity throughout the memoir. The author created a mood that tells the reader that he does not regret anything from his childhood and he's grateful for his wonderful and caring parents. The author created a mood that also tells the reader that he is proud of his Cuban heritage and everything and everyone that he has grown up around. Narciso has also made a mood of strong feelings toward his beloved parents, friends, and family. The mood of this memoir is positive and can be described in great meaning.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
15269,6,The obstacles that the builders of the Empire state building faced attempting to make the dock for dirigibles.The architects desgned a shiny glass and chrome-nickel stainless steel tower. They would have to make the Empire State Building strong enough to have the wind blowing around up on top. In the late run they would have to face the law. These are the obstacles that the builders had to face.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
1517,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, @CAPS3 a computer is a benefit. They help us in so many ways. It is very helpful, it could make someone's life easier to handle. You could keep in touch with old friends or family. It would be easier for work, and when you're bored, you could play some fun games. It's very hard to have family you can't see and keep in touch with! With a computer you could send messages and photo's to interact with them. You wouldn't have to worry about ever losing communication with them. You could also meet new people. Get new friends from anywhere in the world! Have friends from all different race and culture. Computer's are a great way to interact with others, whether its family or friends. It's always had to do work when you have no clue what it's about! if your ever @CAPS3 trouble on something you could always look up information about it. You could learn how to do things or learn more information about a certain item. When you have homework and don't know the meaning of a word, you could always look up the definition of it. They also hold your information. For example, instead of @CAPS3 a ton of papers you could simple just save it in your computer. Then you could print it out whenever you need it. Computers make work easier and help you organise better. Computer's also amuse you as well. When you have nothing to do, you could play alot of fun game's. You could also watch music video's or funny videos to get you laughing. They have practicly anything you want to play. You would hardly ever get bored! As you see, computer's are a benefit to people. It's always helpful when you could keep in touch with anyone, have help with your work, or simply keep yourself entertained. Without computers life would be harder and boring!",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
4097,2,"@PERSON1 is saying we shall all share then never giving @CAPS4 back. Also we can't all get what we want at the sametime or at all. If that book is popular then they should of bought more to sell for the other people that doesn't have the book and would like to have @CAPS4.      Of course sharing is better then wasting your money on something when someone has the book that you know and would let you barrow @CAPS4. And yes, We all know that most people these days don't usually share.      To tell you the truth you don't always get what you want. Either get over @CAPS4.      Yea @PERSON2 has a @CAPS1 but to tell you the truth everybody has there own opinion.     We all don't have to listen to what other's say but if you agree with that person then you agree.      Like I said everybody has there own opinion and I stated mine.Pretty much like '@CAPS1 OF @CAPS2.'      No, I do not believe that books,music, and etc. should be taken off the shelves because @CAPS3 @CAPS4's stupid you'll lose your job and @CAPS5 people out there in the world need something to do @CAPS6!?     I don't read I mostly listen to music because I think music to me is more interesting and entertaning then reading a book. I mean yea I read articles from magazines but like I said mostly listen to music.     Reading a book is mostly like someone telling you a story about so and so or somthing . So to me @CAPS7 book is in infront of @CAPS7 face @NUM1. '@CAPS7 life'     @CAPS8 later on in @CAPS7 life I will be interested in reading a book but now I'm enjoying @CAPS7 life being a teenager.     So basically I'm telling you @CAPS7 own opinion and I think @CAPS4's completely stupid for being graded for this because everybody has there own opinion just saying.     You could either agree or disagree but for this @CAPS4's mostly a disagree",1.0,1.0,2.0,1.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
3075,2,"The old saying one should never judge a book by it's cover comes into litteral meaning with this particular subject. Every mind that is among the world is extremely different, just as every book is. One person @MONTH1 look upon a certain subject as offensive, while others @MONTH1 not have the same point of view. However, in my personal opinion books with 'suggestive' references or language should be placed in sections marked mature and clearly labeled with a warning of the contents lieing between the pages. With over a billion different points of views residing all over the world, why should books that only a few select find inappropriate people be removed?     Every person has their own life story and rough experiences. Life's journey brings bumps in the road which can scare someone deeply and change their life forever. While reading a book, a viewer @MONTH1 skim across a passage that brings horrible experiences swelling back up in them. For one to have to relive a trauma that they have struggled to get over isn't right, but for another to read about a situation similar to a particular person's life journey could possibly grant them more understanding and compassion for the victim. I do not believe victims of abuse no matter what degree should have to read about that subject in a book they thought they were reading for leisure. However, these books should not be taken off the shelves because people who have not had to endure a struggle such as this should be able to grasp a better understanding for the other person.      Books for a more mature mind should be monitored and placed upon a shelf out of reach from a child who can not yet handle that topic. At a young age I selected a book I had thought was a ghost story. Mid way through I came to the understanding that the book was truly about a young girl my age being raped. As a sixth grader I was horrified because I was not yet exposed to that danger of the world, and I was not mature enough to handle that subject. For weeks I walked the halls scaared that I might have the same fate as the girl in the story I had read. Books with mature topics should be seperated from those for younger childeren, because the description in a book @MONTH1 leave a child with emotional scares.     Labeling books clearly with any 'suggestive' content the book @MONTH1 contain would help this issue tremendously. If books are clearly labeled that they contain offensive words, comments, or horrifying situations, then a reader who will become offended will have less likely of a chance to grab the material. If children who are still developing their level of maturity come across a book that mentions inappropriate subjects, they will have a better understanding of what they @MONTH1 be about to view. By simply pressing a label on a book that states the concerns can be found within the pages, it will save the world alot of harm.     If books begin to fly off the shelves because of offensive topics, their won't be many books left to read. Every person takes a different look at what a story says, just as every age group comprehends the message that passages give differently. By monitoring and labeling books, book worms will be able make a quick decision on whether or not the material they think they want to read is for them. So, in conclusion don't take away the wanders of reading from those who enjoy traveling through the imagination of books, but let them know exactly what they will see as they mosey through the unknown pages of a new adventure.",4.0,5.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
9335,4,"The author concludes the story with that paragraph because he wants to show that the flower was her inspiration to take the test before. The way I got my response was, throughout the story, @PERSON1 was always either gardening the hibiscus or had one. This obviously showed me that she was inspired by this flower and its beuty. In conclusion, the author ends the story like this to show the importance of the Hibiscus flower to Saeng.",0.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
13093,5,"In the excerpt ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from the book Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives, the author tries to create a mood that complements his opinion on the definition of family. Narciso Rodriguez was born to Cuban immigrants in a busy area of New Jersey filled with people of all nationalities. It was this melting pot of people and his parents hard work that shaped who he is today.                                                                                                     The main mood that is generated throughout the passage is a positive mood, exemplified best by how the author himself positively talks about the great impact his parents had on him. Narciso realizes the sacrifices and the the hard work his parents had to endure to provide for him, of which Narciso writes ""My mother and father had come to this country with such courage, with no knowledge of the language or culture. They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life, even if it meant leaving behind their families, friends, and careers in the country they loved."" (paragraph @NUM1) Narciso's parents were not selfish at all and took a huge endeavor by going for the United States. However, through their hard work, determination, and couage they established themselves in @LOCATION3. It is this positive, happy outcome that makes the mood so bright and positive. In Narciso's home, as he writes, ""the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the backdrop of life in our warm home."" (paragraph @NUM2) The use of the word ""warm"" creates the bright vibrant mood associated with his home. The idea of warmth is repeated later in the passage where the author writes ""It was in the warmth of the kitchen in this humble house where a Cuban feast always filled the the air with not just scent but life and love"" (paragraph @NUM3) The repetition in describing the warmth of the house once again establishes the positive mood.                  Narciso lived in a neighborhood filled with all kinds of people. However, despite their differences they came together as a friendly, united community, of which the author write: ""Despite customs elsewhere, all of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship."" (paragraph @NUM4) Despite the overt racism at the time, this community still came together and were there for each other no matter what. This unity with in the community definetely distills a happy mood within the reader. Overall, Narciso Rodriguez creates a very positive mood throughout the memoir.",4.0,,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
595,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 @MONTH1 be true that computers @MONTH1 make people exercise less, enjoy nature less, and spend time with family and friends less but computers do benefit the society in many ways. Computers help students with homework and projects and they help communicate with other people. Besides the telephone, computers do have some bad things about them, too. Students need computers to help them complete homework and class projects. They help students create good presentations and students can use the internet for research. Having computers will help raise a students grades and help them have a more successful life in the future. Parents and kids can communicate long-distance friends and/or relatives and they can talk to co-workers, bosses, teachers of their kids, and with their own children/parents, too. Having computers would create more communication with some people and help keep in touch with family members. Besides all of the good things, computers do have bad qualities, too. They can lead to children seeing inapropriate sites, and maybe even a virus that crashes your computer! Most of the programs to get rid of viruses block children and adults from seeing inapropriate sites (like gambling, pornography, etc). We need a computer that is pre-installed with the best up-to-date virus protection system, that helps protect children, teens, and adults from viruses, inapropriate sites, and cyber-bullies. Having these will make a computer almost perfect! The computers everyone needs should help students learn, keep raising communication between people and be pre-uploaded with programs to protect people from viruses, bad websites, and cyber-bullies. Computers are needed, and without them, our lives would be extremely miserable.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
12000,5,"In this memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives mood created is described. The starting evidence found in the memior is. ""my parents, originally from Cuba, arrived in the United States in 1956."" The mood being created is detirmenation. The parents were determined to make it to the United States because that was hard to do. But the parents did make it to the United States. The other piece of evidence found is ""in 1961, I was born into the simple house, situated in a two-family, blonde-brick building in the @CAPS1 bound section of Newark, New Jersey."" The mood being created is happiness and sadness. There is happiness because he was just born. The sadness is that they couldn't go to the hospital and they live in a two-family house. This is the moods created in the memior.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
3288,2,"There are thousands of libraries throughout the world. All of which are filled with numberous books, magazines, music, movies, ect. for people of all ages to obtain. Some people think that materials in a library should be censored while others think everything should be allowed to be there. I do not think materials at a library should be removed, or censored, because the materials would decrease, people would choose what to look at, and the material would help with research.     Materials at libraries should not be censored because the materials allowed at the libraries would decrease. Everyone has different opinions on what they think is appropiate or not. If one person were to decide a book was unappropiate and take it off the shelf, another person would have the right to take another book that they thought was unappropiate off the shelf as well. However, since everyone has different beliefs on what is appropiate and what is not, the books would rapidly decrease.The same would apply to the other items at the libraries such as magazines, movies, ect.     Another reason is because everyone has their own choice about what they want to look at in a library. A fifty year old man would not have the same intrests as a thirteen year old girl, so if some materials were removed, there would not be as much of a variety to chose from. If there is a little variety to chose from due to materials being censored, the amount of people using the library would decrease causing the library to eventually get shut down from the lack of people using it.      Lastly, materials at a library should not be censored because each and every item there could help with some kind of research. A child from high school could go to the library to look for a book to help research things for a report in one of their classes, or an elder women could go to the library in search of a cookbook to research something new to make for her next home cooked meal. Both people would need a material from the library to help them with their reasearch, but if some materials at the library were removed, they might not be able to find something to help them.     Materials at a library should not be censored because the materials would decrease, people would choose what to look at, and the material would help with research. Some people believe removing items at a library should be allowed, but I strongly disagree. There are many different materials in the libraries around the world today for people of all ages to come in contact with, and that is the way it should stay",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
12742,5,"In the memoir Narciso rodriguez by Home, the mood created by the @CAPS1 in the memoir is that growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relative. They showed me with their lives, and these teachings have been the basis of my life. but, in reality, there is no way to express my gratitude for the spirit of generosity impressed upon me at such an early age and the demonstration of how important family and friends are.  I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
3663,2,I dont think there should be any censorship good books and music shouldint be removed just becaus one person finds it offensive. Becaus the opinion's of one @MONTH1 be diffrent with another.I beleave music is cencord the most becaus  not many people get offendid by books but censorship in music i think is destroying it.Becaus its an artists way of expresion and if people dont wana listen to what there saying then they should just not listen to it.Books i think shouldint be taken offensivly forthe same reason music shouldint its a writers oppinion and expresion its like telling someone they cant voice there oppinion on anything like racesim or use curse words if they want.,3.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,1.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
13265,5,"The mood in this paragraph is pride, and hope, and love. Narciso clearly feels very strongly about his family. He states ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" That sentence alone @CAPS1 the pride and @CAPS2 in Narciso's words. The mood is happy and loving.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
1318,1,"Dear editor, I agree with having computers in our homes. I think that computers are good because of these reason. The computer has a-lot of information that you can look up. Also the computer can save a-lot of important things you need. Then you can comunicate with people far away. I think that a computer is a really good thing becouse you can look up varius things like something about someones life that way important. You can look up a website that tells you about a word or a car that you need to learn about for school or work. You can look up something that happed a long time ago @NUM1 or @DATE1 that was a. Then you could look up a your family tree and send out who you are routed to one how was or family in the past time, you could look up your book account or your e-mail on the computer to. So this is one reason that I think a computer is good for. Another reason why I would think that a computer is a good thing for anyone it can save a-lot of important things. Some you could save important from your past. Also you need save your reports for your school or work. Then you can save pictures from when you you on occation. You could favorite websites to your favorites so you can go to it any time you want to. This is another reason why I think computers are a good thing. One last reason why I think that computers are a good thing is because you can comunicate with people far away. You can have family that just went on and you can keep in touch with them through your e-mail, myspace, facebok, ect. You could vidio chat with your friends or family that lives in a diffrent place. You could go in chats with your co-workers or your boss for a meeting. This is anothe reason why I think computers are a good thing. So as you can see this is why I think computers are a good thing because of you can look up things, how you can save important things also because you can go and comunicate with your friends. So this is why I think computers are a good thing.",4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
15728,6,The Empire State Building faced @CAPS1 difficulties to have the dirigibles to dock there. Wind pressure from the dirigibles messed up the buildings frame work. To accommodate the situation they paid Over Sixty thousand dollars to strengthen the buildings framework.,0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
3730,2,"Why censor things? When there's always going to be someone out there wanting to read a book or magizine that others think should be censored. If this visious circle would continue then we wouldn't have any books left at all to read.     Theres lots of things out there that some people dont like but that doesn't give them the right to take it off the self. Then by doing that and taking it off the self just because they didnt think it was an apropriate book. Will leave someone with nothing to read now.     If the books or magazine would start being taken off the selves then we would have less ways to research or learn certain things. Even though there might be graphic pictures or writing in books or magazines doesn't make them inaproprieate. It needs to be labled on the book that it has it in there. If you see the mark and you dont want to look at it then you dont have too.     We need to code books for different ages. Then parents could be happy if there little boy or girl could only read certain books because of how old they are. Then if parents give permission then children could read books that were ment for older kids or adults.     Even though im not the biggest fan of reading but i will sometimes pick up a book that has things for me to learn in it about an engine. I dont think that people should be able to restrict anything and take it off the selves everyone has there own right to read the book or watch the movie, etc. But children are different because they dont need to learn all those things at an early age. So parents can pick what they can read. but if your an adult you should be able to read, listen, or watch whatever you want to.",2.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
734,1,"Dear newspaper, This year my school and a cop come into my school and tell me and my peers about the dangers of online. This has made me believe that computors are not beneficial. Computors are not beneficial because they enforce bad habits. Plus, websites and some applications are dangerous. Also, they are very addictive. Computors have a bad effect on people. To begin, computors enforce bad habits. For example, some websites are bad websites that say mean things about other people. Some kids @MONTH1 join in on the cyber bulling because other kids are kids @MONTH1 give in to peer pressure because they want to get accepted by their peers so badly. Furthermore, someone @MONTH1 agree to meet someone they don't know. That can be scary because you do not know if this person is really someone you thought they were. Recently, I read a magazine and it had an article in it about people going to meet other people they online. Most people found at that it was not the person they thought they were. Finally, the computor enforces bad habits because people @MONTH1 send someone some questionable pictures to someone else. As I mentioned before, when the police officer came to our school he talked about this. He said that people were sending pictures of them that were innapropiate to other people. Those other people would send it around and in the end it was a horrible mess. I'm sure if computers didn't have a giant effect on people, this would not be as big of a problem as it is. Computors do not only cause bad habits, but they are also dangerous. I'm sure if you listen to the news you will hear stories about child predators. I think that is one huge problem. If computers did not have such a on people this would not be a problem. In addition, computors are dangerous because kids @MONTH1 choose to make bad decisions because they do not knew. For example, many kids who are on myspace or facebook have not talked to their parent or guardian about internet safety. Or maybe even their parent or guardian isn't monitering them to make sure they are safe online. In conclusion, the computer is dangerous because feelings could be hurt because of myspace, facebook, a blog, a video, or maybe even more. As an illustration, one time one the news I heard a story about a girl who was tensed on the internet. She felt so bad that she committed sucide. I found that horrible. A person should never comitt sucide, especially because some other person could not be nice. To sum up, computors are very dangerous. Computors are also addictive. To start off, it makes you spend less time with your family. (not finished!!!)",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
3062,2,"Many @CAPS1 have different opinions about what's appropriate and what's not. It's depends on one's beliefs and morals. I personally don't think that there should be any censorship in libraries.     I think that @CAPS1 should have the freedom to choose what to read, watch, or listen to. Each person should be able to make a decision depending on what they believe. It also depends on a person's age and maturity level. Some parents let their kids watch certain movies that maybe other parents wouldn't. The situation is different for each person.     It's hard to judge certain materials because some @CAPS1 might find it acceptable while others might not. There would be contraversy over virtually everything because everybody has different standards of what's acceptable what's not, and these standards would clash with each other. It would be impossible to make sure that nothing in libraries would be offensive to @CAPS1. If someone finds something offensive, then they don't have to check it out.     I also think that there are some things that can be done to help appease the argument. For example materials can be catorgorized by maturity level. That's what movie ratings are for. Materials should be organized that @CAPS1 can easily see if they would be offensive or not. For example all the kids movies and books can be put together so that way parents don't have to worry about their kids seeing or reading something that would be inappropriate. It should be obvious to @CAPS1 who would find it offensive and who wouldn't      @CAPS1 should have the individual freedom to make decisions for themselves. A library is a public place for anybody to go check out anything they want. Just because somebody finds a book offensive, that doesn't mean that nobody should be allowed to read it. That being said, certain things can be done so that @CAPS1 would know if something would be offensive or not.",4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
3396,2,"First of all, Do you believe that certain materials, such as books, music, magazined, etc, should be remove from the shelves if they are found offensive, thats question should not be ask ever in life.      Why beacuse there are many people out there that read read stuff and listen to stuff that you might not like at all. when i first saw this question i answer to my self that, ''That if all people think the same way this world would be boring, and i answer the question by saying that there should not be any books remove or music remove, from any shelves' why beacause we all don tlike the same thing or do the same thing.     In first place, I know that there are many different kind of thing that people beacause they love doing it and some dont do those kind of things beacause they really dont like or dont care about it. This is answering the question about removing books, music, or magazines from shelves even if the article the book, music, etc, say's or if its offensive to other people, that is not a reason to remove stuff. There are thing that you enjoy doing and things that you emjoy reading, listening, and looking, etc that other people dont like or hate about it.     In second place, not only beacause you dont like something people should stop doing those things or stop buying those thing, NO!!, that is not the case here @CAPS1. or @CAPS2. you should not care just for you or do what ever is right for you. If you are a good person that wants to be someone in the future dont just care about you care about the other too, beacause you'll need those person or those book in the future when ever your falling down.     In my conclusion, about this article. I think that people should not remove any thing from any library even if its found offensive to other people, those thing help other in life to do what they really want to do, while other are getting hurt for those offensive this that are writting on a little peace of paper. Hope this latter help you all think about and change your decision about this case, hope you all make the right decision that would not affect anyone in general.     Thank you for taking your time to ready what I really think about removing articles from libraries",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
16630,6,"Some of the problems with the constructing of docking dirigibles were that, natural causes like high winds said in ¶ 6. The dirigibles were highly flammable due to the use of hydrogen gases that made the dirigibles fly. Also another important factor was that this project was being taken place in a highly populated area, which meant harm could be done civilians if anything ever went wrong.",1.0,,,,,1.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
1540,1,"@DATE1 @CAPS1 Local Newspaper, I think that computers have a huge affect on people. My thing about it is that the computer gets kids lazy and unactive. Having a computer will give kids the action to sit around and do nothing. I'm sure you've heard of websites such as myspace, facebook, formsping, etc. These websites can get a person to be willing to be on computer instead of exercising and staying healthy. I believe kids like me these day want to keep in touch with their friends. If the phone's not in the picture then the computer is. Also getting rid of the computer can stop the homosexuals from getting a hold of kids by acting their age. I will admit the computer can be useful but to be on all day that's just rediculous. I have a @NUM1 year old brother that stays on the computer from the time he gets til the time he goes to sleep. Compared to me he's not fit and healthy at all, that's what countless hours on the computer did to him. In fact he's on myspace so much that he has over @NUM2 friends and he doesn't even half of them he gives them his number and home address. Do you notice a lot of kids these days want to. can when you would rather waste the computer other than outside and at least self. I've always had a to football but I could @CAPS2 find the time to play with my brother. All they are about is chicks and of course the computer. I'm not asking to take away computer's in people's homes but put a stop to the daily number of hours spent on it because time is one thing that money can @CAPS2 buy. Some kids will look back to these days wondering how much time they wasted on nothing. long story short like life, dont spend it all on nothing.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
10000,4,She will go back to where she started. Its a circle and she will be back the next year where she began.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
16616,6,"In the excerpt, ""The Mooring Mast"", by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the builders of the Empire State building faced a few problems in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. one of the first problems they faced was safety. ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable"" (Lüsted, @NUM1). The builders would have to keep this in mind. The next obstacle they faced was nature and its winds. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to the violent air currents,"" (@NUM2). The winds would be a major problem that the builders would have to face because it is so unpredictable. Lastly, the builders had to worry about the law pertaining to airships flying too low over urban areas ""This law would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area,"" (@NUM3). The builders of the Empire State Building had to face the difficulties of safety, nature, and the law in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock at the Empire State Building.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
752,1,"In my opinion I think that computers have nothing to do with people having lack of exercise or sleep. I think it is all the persons decision to be on the computer as long as they want. The person on the computer obviously does not care if they sleep or not. When people are on the computer I think they dont play as much and start to get fat but that its their decision. Also when the time comes they going to realize that they need to spend less time on the computer and exercise. However, they need a time limit to be on the computer and limited time for eating right and exercising. Being on the computer @NUM1 people dont get the chance to interact with their family and friends because they want to be lazy and stay on the computer. The family and friends get angry and dont want to hang out anymore and within a couple of months they have no friends. Nature is good smells good, looks good, and computers make people stay inside all day! I think we should have more time outside. Also computers sometimes make kids want to not clean their room, not do chores because they are addictid to the computer.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
3088,2,"I believe libraries should have all types of books, music, movies, and magazines. I believe if libraries had limited things that alot of people would not come to the library. For example, if I wanted to get a certain book for school and the library does not have it i don't no were else I would go. The library should have a variety of books if not what if the point of a library. Some books might be to explicit for a child to read.      For music I think a library should be limited.I think music should be limited because alot of music has cursing in it. I don't think everyone wants to hear that type of music in a library. I dont think a person should be able to listen to music in the library anyways because a library is suppose to be quiet. But also people who listen to that type of music might be disappointed. Some music might be to bad for some chlidrens ears.     For movies I think they should have an age limited for children. Thats simple kids should be able to only watch kid movies. Teenagers should be aloud to watch kid movies and teen movies. Adults should be able to watch all movies. That is how it should go.     For magazines they should have all types of magazines. They should have them from child to adult but in different sections. For example, All the children magazines should go with the children books. All the adult magazines should be with the adult reading books. Some magzines are to explicit but the library should make sure the magazines stay in the adult section.      Some books are offensive but there books and a library is there to provide books. All kind of books should be in the library no matter what in my opinion. I've never experience a nasty, or explicit book. So if anything is explicit keep it in the adults only section. Every book should be in the library",4.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
13372,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is a sense of family. He says how when his parents came up to Newark, New Jersey, from Cuba, they had to start all over and find a new beginning. They passed on their rich culinary skills and love for Cuban food in the kitchen of a three-room apartment in a two family building. He says that the community was all a different race but they all became a big family that got through the racist times of the United States in the '@NUM1. He says that he will always be grateful to his parents for their extreme love and sacrifice. He reminds them constantly about how grateful he is and that he can't believe how they did it. So the mood in this memoir is about family.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
10431,4,"The author of Winter Hibiscus ended her story with words regarding to the story @CAPS1 failed her driving test. Saeng cried when noticing her past through flower. As well as bought dok malik seeds show that the story ended the way it did, because next season",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
10467,4,"The author concludes the story with the paragraph “When they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and the hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again,” for several reasons, @CAPS1, Saeng decides that she is determined to pass her driving test just like the hibiscus. Saeng’s mother says that it is “strong enough to make it through,” and Saeng decides to be strong like the hibiscus and make it through and pass the test. Next, the reason the geese are mentioned in the final paragraph is to tie in the fact that she is getting used to @LOCATION1 because the geese “sound familiar.” As much as she misses her old home, she is adapting. Finally, one can conclude that because she mentions the plant, which symbolizes her homeland and the geese, which symbolizes her new home, that as much as she misses her old home, she’s starting to get used to her new country and she recognizes that she ispart of it. She knows that letting her past get in the way of her will not help her pass the test and, like the plant and the geese, she will return again.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
1529,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, I rencently started researching the effects that computers have on people an have found some shocking facts. I do not belive computers benefit society at all. Three reasons why I believe this is because it makes people lack exercising, enjoying nature, and interacting with friends @CAPS1 is a rising problem in @LOCATION1 and a major factor towards @CAPS1 is computers. In fact statics so that people who spend more time exercising than looking at electronics all day actully live longer lives. So my first reason about why computers do not benfit society is that it lets people lack exercise. People need exercise to live and with computers it is becoming more lacking than ever. Also, exercise give you interfines a not more that makes you happy if you live your life exercising instead of watching or doing violant things on the web that will lead to a less violant future. My second reason is that computers cause a lack of enjoying nature. Nature is a beautiful thing filled with simmering lakes, the beautiful scent of balsam fine, and thosands of creatures. With computers thoshands of kids are missing out on the fresh air and adventures that nature has in store. My parents didn't have computers when they were little and they say that they enjoyed running around their neighborhoods playing sports and other fun activities. Finally, computers lack in interacting with friends. Remember when you were little and you called up your friend to hang out and sleepover, well now computers have caused people not to have to call or hang out with friends. Instead you can just @CAPS2 or email them and @CAPS3 you can have a conversation without even looking at a person! In closing, computers cause a lack in exercise, enjoying nature, and interacting with friends. Please help and encourage others to help me put a stop to computers! Thank you for your time and I hope you learned some shocking and interesting facts from this letter. ",4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
15795,6,"The @CAPS1 of the @ORGANIZATION1 many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One problem was the law. There was a law in place preventing airships flying too low over urban cities. This made it illegal for airships to tie up to the building or even come close to the area. Another isue they had was that dirigibles were filled with hydrogen, not helium Hydrogen is extremely flammable and it would be catastrophic if a dirigible blew up over New York City. The last problem they @ORGANIZATION1 was the wind. At the top of the building the winds shifted due to violent air currents. Even if the dirigibles were tied up the back end would move around. They got the idea to use lead weights on the back but it would not be safe over all those people.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9457,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph to create a feeling of hope. Saeng had a bad, from failing the test to her deep feeling of loss, @CAPS1 after finding the hibiscus and planting it she seemed to be enlightened, while as she missed her home land but still had the memories, which was comforting to her. She shows determination, because she declares she will take that test again, and seems to have more confidence in herself. The author adds that saeng will take the test again in the spring. When looking at archetypes, spring is time of new beginning and life. When the hibiscus is budding(being reborn), she will take the test. It will be a new, better start for saeng too.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
9144,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because Saeng has vowed to retake the test in the spring and will have more confidence when the snow melts, the geese return, and the hibiscus starts budding. “A wave of loss so deep and strong that it stung Saeng’s eye now swept over her. ” Saeng feels lonely because she is from a different country and misses everything she knew and loved. Now she has the hibiscus to remind her of home.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
6691,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist because if it’s raining or snowing it affects the cyclist because pavement can be wet and icy. Which causes the cyclist to slip and @DATE1 and the cyclist can really get injured. Also the cyclist has to wear a helmet if it’s very hot outside you wouldn’t see the cyclist in winter clothes. This would make the cyclist unfocus and the cyclist wouldn’t be able to finish any race.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
14874,6,"Based on the story it all started when they had build the empire state building and the workers should have knowned that the building was too big for the wind climate, up in the sky and plus when you make a building like that you have to make sure it's strong enough to keep balance.                         They faced problem's like when the U.S. tried to make a deal with them if they would let them use the top of the building for a dock to let civilians on the deck, and after they made a law that no more blimps can land on the dock a blimp attempted to land on the dock.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
1348,1,"Who would have thought computers can have effect for people. People all over learn things on the computer each day. Of cours every body learns and reds new things because of the computer. @CAPS1 is even fun stuff todo on the computer. You can pick from many different music videos and music. And @CAPS1 are many ways to chat with people like over the phone on a cell phone. But @CAPS1 are computers too , @CAPS1 are many ways to communicate with friends/family. Also @CAPS1 is myspace, facebook and @CAPS2. Those @NUM1 are websites that you can go on to take to family/friends but theres others website that you can go on. But I would also like to comment something about the computer. I understand the computers lots of fun. Sometimes you need a brake you cant stay on the computer all the time. You must that you need exercize too. You must go out and enjoy nature. You should take awaile or ride your bike. You must understand computers are good for learning but not for eeryday life. The computer is good for learning but you should also go out and got some fresh air.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
11841,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir was happy, enjoyable, and worth living. I say happy because they had family to be with, and other friends to help them if anything. I say enjoyable because the author talks about how they (main character) had the first birthday and first friend. I would enjoy all my birthdays if I was that person and also my first friend. I also said worth living because they had food on their table everyday. And nothing in the memoir said anything about struggling. This is why I explain the mood as happy, enjoyable, and worth living.",2.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
10422,4,"“when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snow melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” The author has left her home and moved to another country. She is now in an unfamilar place. Everything that now surrounds her is new and mostly un-known. By ending the story with this quote, it suggest that the author still has hope of adapting to her new home. When she left her home, she did not just leave a building behind. She left her home, people she loved, and an endless list of memories. At times she @MONTH1 have felt out of place because she was no longer in her comfort zone. She is now “out of the box,” and in a whole new world. When she saw the hibiscus, the exotic plant took her back to her memories and to the love of her old home. Then she came back to reality and broke apart with sadness and “failed her test.” The ending sentence shows that the author is willing to try to survive in this new place and that she is still determined to pass her own test of adapting.  ",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
4019,2,"The shelf is an object that holds many types of diffierent materials such as movies, books, magazines, and music. Its all media and entertainment. But not everyone likes the media because one or all of these materials @MONTH1 be offensive towards the foriegn and children.     Censorship in our libraries could get a little graphic and such. Yes we all the it in movies and music, but we do not want it in our libraries. A library is a place for study and learning for educational purposes. There are not for entertainment and things of that nature. Sometimes they could be a little fun but for the most part, people would like to take there children and show them something to help there minds focus on school. By all @CAPS1 rated @CAPS2 movies, dirty music, adult books and magzines should be taken off the shelves.      One day as I was in the state library looking on the shelves for a book on @LOCATION1 and its people. As I was reading the book, it said some very mean and offensive things about the @CAPS3 people. I thought to myself that this book should be takken of the shelves forever and never seen again. It shocked me that someone would put that book in a public library and let the foreign and others read it. After some people read about the @CAPS3 people; They had second thoughts and started get angey and disliking them for theses things and offensive comments made!     Magazines and movies should be taken of the shelves in the catagories in my opinion of the poeple in different countries and the way they live. That could be very sad for someone because they could of really went through everything in that movie or what ever that magzines says. Another reason censorship should be under control is the titles to these materials. If a child looks at an adult film and it happens to be for a child, wouldnt you think thats a little offensive? I know I would. There is no way I want my child watching some violet movie.      We have to think for our children and the people that come in form different countries when it comes to public libraries. If censorship is not observed carfully then we could make the foriegners very angry or make our children become very violet and reckless because of the films on the shelves, and the people that come in to our country would never come back if they picked up the book that they might of thought that was int interesting but turns out to be very offensive in there opinion. Censorship is very imprtant in libraries and on the shelves",4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
4129,2,"'Everyone has @CAPS1 @CAPS2'     @CAPS3 is true that everyone has their own @CAPS2 and their likes and dislikes. For example, books. I do not like books that are about illegal substances, but I do believe removing certain materials that are offensive should not be removed from the shelves in the library. @CAPS3 is true that finding inappropriate book or an article @MONTH1 be disturbing to certain people, but @CAPS3 does not mean that everyone finds @CAPS3 offenive.     Once, my @CAPS4 class was assigned to do a book project. The main pourpose was to find a non-fiction book and create a powerpoint presentation on the main ideas of that book. One of the classmate read and had a breif presentaion over a book that was about illegal drugs. I know in fact that not many people are offended by the words such as 'drugs' or 'alchol', but I find these words to be obnoxious. While I found @CAPS3 disturbing and uncomfortable, others found @CAPS3 interesting. @CAPS3 was a topic that drew their attention, but not very appealing to me.     Another example would be the time I went to the library to write a research paper about the human body systems. My friend, @LOCATION1, found @CAPS3 disturbing to look at some pictures because @CAPS3 showed blood. Strangly, I never thought blood as anything disturbing. While @PERSON1 found @CAPS3 disgusting to look at, my head was in the book because @CAPS3 was fascinating. I always thought how the human body works is incredible. What @PERSON1 did was instead of trying to deal with the picture, she wondered off and tried to find another book that does not have any grotesque pictures. The book did not have any benefit to @LOCATION1, but because of that book, I received an 'A' on the research paper.     I believe @CAPS3 is important that people accept the fact that everyone does not have the same opinion. Every individual is different in their own way. As I mentioned before, the book that was disturbing to me was interesting to others and vice versa. That is normal and there is nothing we can do to change about @CAPS3. If permission were given to remove any certain materials that is offensive to each and every person, I guarentee that there would not be any material left on the shelves. I think the best way to solve this problem is for he/she to ignore the book that seems to be offensive and look for different material because others might need the resource",5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
16606,6,"Based on the excerpt ""The Mooring mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the builders of the Empire State Building faced a few obstacles. One of those obstacles was making sure that blimps and other air born transportations didnt interfer with the building. Also another obstacle the builders had to deal with was making sure the docking areas were safe. Because if a blimp go to close to an urban city like @CAPS1.Y and have all thos flamable fuels leak out. It would be a big disaster. These are the obstacles the builders faced.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
10409,4,"The author concludes with this paragraph to show that Saeng, like the geese and the hibiscus, will return again and have hope. Saeng is a little depressed in the story because she is in a new country, and just failed her driving test. The hibiscus plant in the florist shop brings back painful emotional memories for her, but at the same time, s very comforting. Later in the story, she plants the hibiscus outside in the garden with her mother. As her mother goes inside, Saeng watches the geese fly overhead. “Almost reluctantly, (Saeng) realized that many of the things that she had thought of as strange before had become, through quiet repetition of season upon season, almost familiar to her. Like the geese.” Saeng knew the geese would return in the spring, just like she would to her driving test. The hibiscus would be in bloom again too to provide her with hope. This is what the final paragraph in the story “winter hibiscus” means.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
7383,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist because he saw “short, rolling hills,” tumbleweeds” and “a ridiculously large shake,” and he thought that he was not getting anywhere.",1.0,,,,,1.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
9048,4,The author ends the story this way to show that there can always be a happy ending. The geese came back  and the girl was happ because of  it.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
10147,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph because Saeng wants to start planting again. I know this because Saeng life revolves around planting and @CAPS1. Saeng and her mother get there food from what they plant. So all @DATE1 they spend most there time in the garden. growing crops to sell and save. They save for winter and sell to get there equiement to continue whot they do. The part she talking about in the paragraph that say “when they come back” talking about the geese. She loves the geese flying over her head and landing in the yard when she outside on a beauttiful day @CAPS1. when The snow melts she wants to  get back at in the soil on her hands and knee to start planting again. Once the hibiscus start budding everything else starts growing. Saeng live revolves around @DATE1 planting. The author put this paragraph in the story because this is what saeng wants to do more than anything.,1.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,3.0
16217,6,"The Empire State Building at the time it was being built was designed to be the tallest building in the world. However this was not an easy task. The workers had one especially difficult obstacle overcome, @CAPS1 dirigibles, or blimps, to dock there. The plan was to build a mooring mast on top of the building which would allow dirigibles to dock. If this could be achieved it was said to make the Empire State Building, ""equipped for an age of transportation..."" However many problems occurred. The dirigibles weight would have to be able to be held safely. The architects knew the weight would put stress on the buildings frame. The workers had to modify and strengthen the buildings framework. The workers also built the mast out of a strong, shiny, chrome-nickel. Another obstacle was faced when the mast was taken in consideration. The framework was originally stopped at the eighty-fifth floor. The workers had to finish the roof before the mast could be framed. Although the workers succeeded on making a safe mast, the ""Aviation Pioneers Dream"" never came to be.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
468,1,"Dear Newspaper @CAPS1, I've heard reports from both the news on @CAPS2.V. and your paper that more and more people are turned in to nothing but their computers. I'm not saying it's a bad thing I mean the computer has the internet which allows you to go to anything like websites and online chatting. I just think that people should get outside more often and do some outdoor things like football, basketball, baseball or if you're an adult you could get a job that doesn'@CAPS2 require a computer like for example building houses for homless people, shelters for animals, or have a job as a maitnence man, pool lifeguard, or any other job at a hotel that doesn'@CAPS2 involve a computer. You could work at a restaurant that has regular food or fast food service. Something that does'ent involve a computer. But if you can'@CAPS2 get out of the house you could do something a little different from computers video games. They maybe similar to the computer but they are something you can do on the @CAPS2.v. and it beats playing on the computer all the time.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
15097,6,"In the excerpt ""The Mooring @CAPS1"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted their were obstactes the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock their. One obstacle was the terrible winds. In the excerpt it states how bad the winds are. One dirigible was going to try to dock there was the U.S. Navy dirigible Los Angeles couldn't get close enough because of the very strong winds. The Captain feared the wind would blow the dirigible into a sharp spire on one of the buildings in the area and puncture the dirigible's shell. Another reason was their was already a law that stated against airships flying to low over urban areas. This made it illegal for any dirigible to tie up to the building or even approach it. The last and final obstacle they faced was the fear of crashing. Since most blimps from out of the country used hydrogen rather than helium it was dangerous because hydrogen is very flammable. They heard about the blimp fire in New Jersey they realize how much worse an accident like that would be on such a densely populated area like downtown New York City. And that is the obsacles the builders of the Empire State building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The huge wind gusts. The Law. And don't forget what happens of the dirigible crashes in the area of New York City.",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
1054,1,"I think computers are very benefical. There are so many uses! From learning, to games, to videos, and to a tool that is very useful. Without computers we would be like the @CAPS1 (@CAPS2 offense any @CAPS1 people). We would have to wait for a news paper or the news to come on @CAPS4.V. to see becalling news. Let me explain my reasoning in the next few paragraphs. First and foremost, there are lots of things to do. You can play online games, off-line games, surf the web, chat, match videos, and so on and so forth. Without the internet I probably would have lost my interest in @ORGANIZATION1. I now am a member of the online community called www.MOCpages.com I post my creations, look at others creations, and comment, and chat. I use the internet to reasearch for school projects. Right now, I am reasearching @CAPS5 @CAPS6 during the @CAPS7 @CAPS8. Normally I would have to slave over books to find something. Now it is much easier, because keywords are matched. Finally, it is a good fool. Did you know the millitary needs computers to store info, attack, keep record, and to pilot certain planes? I need to use a computer to type up home work, because as you can see, my hand writing isn'@CAPS4 the neatest. Also, I stay in touch with my dad, who works in @ORGANIZATION2. I hope I persuaded you on my position. Remember computers, do lots of things, help us learn, and they are a fantastic tool. Thanks for reading, bye!",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
3466,2,"What is censorship? Cenorship can be described as limitations or restrictions, and it can aslo be called common courtsy. The real question is what are we limiting?   Censorship is not something to support. Censorship to a book is like chocolate cake without the chocolate, its taking away the value and fun out of education. Though many @MONTH1 disapprove, libraries shouldn't censor their books, movies, or music because of that.      Some @MONTH1 find that '@CAPS1 @CAPS2' or 'The @CAPS3 of @PERSON1' are offensive books because of their repeated use of the '@CAPS4' word. There is also some arguement to that, there are several @CAPS5 @CAPS6 that I know that find the '@CAPS4' word offensive, but not in this case. They say that it brings more educational value to the book, because in the day of @PERSON1 the '@CAPS4' word was an excepted word. Thats just how it was back then.     Back then and now censorship is hiding reality. People who write, sing, and direct things that are considerd 'inapropriate' are the ones who are trying to set the truth free. The 'inapropriate' language, or experiences are the ones that really happen and are the words that are really said. By using censorship you are sheltering the world.      Cesorship is tool we use to block ourselves from reality. Is that the right choice? Is it right sending sheltered teens out in the world unable to fend for themselves? Or should we let them understand how it really works",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
13248,5,"Throughout the @CAPS3 the author @CAPS1 many moods to describe and fit what has happened in his memoir. One way the mood of the memoir is loving. From the @CAPS3 it tells how he had grown to understand what family ment even if he wasn't blood related to someone. This @CAPS5 the mood is loving because he is @CAPS4 Close to people in his life from everything that has happened to him. A second mood of what the memoir is, appreciative. A memoir is a true @CAPS3 witch tells true feelings behind what the author is saying about the @CAPS3. From the @CAPS3 explains how the author is @CAPS4 appreciative of his parents for going through @CAPS4 much for him, and providing him with things he's needed. This @CAPS5 its appreciative because it says that he has thanked them over and over again. Lastly the mood could be @CAPS2. The mood is @CAPS2 because in the @CAPS3 it explains how having family and friends over all the time made him enjoy everything because his family always had people over to have dinner with, and always had their arms open if Someone needed help, @CAPS4 this @CAPS5 that the mood could be @CAPS2. Overall there are many ways to describe the mood of the @CAPS3 from reading it.",3.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
13446,5,I think he has a really great life and he's a happy person.And also he appericates what happens in he live.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
6014,3,"The terrain during the cyclist’s journey greatly affects him. For example, the first terrain that he experienced was not very hilly, but rather flat and soothing. The author stated, “I rode into the morning with strong legs and a smile on my face.” This shows that he was energized and happy. However, the reader can predict that the journey will not remain this joyful, because the cyclist is basically in the desert during the summer, in which it is extremely hot. Then, the cyclist experiences hilly terrain that sucked the life from his body, especially because he had no water left. The cyclist said, “sometimes life can feel so cruel"", emphasizing that the cyclist mood had changed from enthusiastic to tired and forlorn.  This change of mood from the terrain can be connected to real life, as obstacles are include, in which the person must persevere and be strong to overcome, in which the cyclist finally did. ",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
10253,4,I believe that the author concludes with this paragraph because it shows the ending of one thing and the beginning of another.After she is upset and thinks about home she realizes that something new is happening and she needs to accept it.So therefore  in the spring she is going to start new like the flower blossom.,2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
4268,2,"I think that some books should be banned from libraries that are offensive or use certain words against people, I think that should apply to highschool libraries because it really would matter in elementeries because they wouldn't know what some things mean. If a class were to read an offensive book and someyone in the class from the opposite race that reads the book others could get affended and it could start a fight.     Some high schoolers could get affended quicker than others and which could cause a lot of problems so by avoiding that there should be votes on books that should be banned or not be aloud to be read in class or in school period. Im pretty sure people would think its dumb to ban books but trust it me it would solve a lot of problems, but it all comes down to whats acceptable and whats not without hurting other peoples feeling and putting them down.     I bet all the time in classes theres been a story that has been read that has talked about races which makes others not feel comfortable, and theres always that person that always trys to make fun of something, but if I were in this situation I would try my best to not let others get to me and interfer with my grades and performance. I would just ignore them as much as possible and if it did start getting annoying I would talk to my counselor about trying to talk to that person individually or just removing me from class. I'm pretty sure most schools wouldnt tolerate this type of behavior but you will always have those kind of kids you just have to ignore.               You should never not go to school thinking you don't fit in just because someyone is making fun of your race or how you look. They just try to make the day harder on you and all you have to do is ignore them or report it and hopefully it is taken care of",3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
9675,4,The reason why the author wrote the conclusion paragraph was to show that Saeng is looking forward to a brighter future. Saeng is hoping to see the geese once more that remind her of her homeland and that see wants to pass the driving. In this story I feel as though Saeng is a very sentimental person and so that is why I think that is reason the author wrote the conclusion paragraph.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
3887,2,"Materials such as books, music, movies, and magazines are used for peoples enjoyment. Adults and kids get a lot of information out of the libraries reading materials. Books give  people another way to learn new things, instead of in a class.       If the reading materials are already in the classroom they should not be removed. If someone is walking into a library, they have to be responsible. Adults along with young adults have to know what they should read and whats not acceptable.      No one has the right to take a book off of the shelf, because they think its offensive. There are millions of book in the world that people find offensive. Theres not one perfect book in this world that doesn't bother somebody.     Every single book that is made today has a right to be read. Theres people out in the world looking for a certain book, magazine, movie, and even music. That material is hepling find the answer to a problem, giving the right decision, and helping someone walk in the right path.      The @CAPS1 is a book of understanding and knowledge. There are a good number of people how think we shouldn't read it, or even pick it up. Like the @CAPS1 say, free will. It's our free will to pick up books we want to read.     Books give people another way to learn new things. Adults and kids get a lot of information out of the libaries reading materials. Books, music, movies, and magazines are used for people's enjoyment",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
9229,4,"In the story “winter hibiscus” by Minfong Ho I believe that the author ended the story with that paragraph because it shows that if the Hibiscus plant has enough strength to come back and flourish than she has enough strength to come back and take the test again. For example, in the story it says “but its strong enough to make it through the cold months.” This quote shows that the hibiscus plant is strong. And Saeng sees that as if the plant is strong enough to return after a cold winter than she can return to the test after failing. Overall, I think that both Saeng and the hibiscus plants are very strong.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
1226,1,"Dear Newspaper, I personally believe that new technology is a great thing. That’s why I think that computers have positive effects on our society. Some of these effects include developing skills to help people for present or future, getting a better education and helping people to become more social. Computers can help people in so many ways you just have to realize it. So come and see why computers are a good choice to have and use. My first reason of why I feel computers have positive effects on people is because they can help develop skills that one has and @MONTH1 not realize. For example a teenager @MONTH1 say while typing a paper that she really likes to write. So, she @MONTH1 go on the internet start looking at different styles and maybe she could become a famous journalist. It's all from the skills she got going online and searching what she enjoys. Another situation could be that a man applies for a job and then the employer' says he has to know how to use different softwear, so he could go on the computer and look for a tutorial on that specific softwear. A computer @MONTH1 help people build skills now and for their own future. My second reason of why computers can have positive effects on people is that it can help them get a better education. Any adult who hasn't gone to college and wants to can take classes online and earn their degree way. The education is just for adults; kids can go online and research history of different places they live and want to go. The great thing about you is you can find the information fast and easy. Computers help people learn more and get a better education for themselves. My final reason of why computers have positive effects is that they help people to be more social. There are so many ways to connect with family and freinds. You can send an email to someone and wait for a reply. Or now, you can even instant message somebody and talk to them like there in the same room. There are also websites, such @CAPS1 facebook, where you can get together and talk with old friends. Computers can help everyone connect with anyone @CAPS1 you can see computers have so many positive effects on people. They can help you build social skills for now and for our future. They can also help people get a better education. Plus, it is a great way to connect with past and present friends. Hopefully you can see how a computer can have positive effects on so many people.",5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,22.0
1227,1,"On today's society many new technologys have been released. Such as the @NUM1 player, cell phone, video game counsels such as xbox @NUM2 but probably the most popular and most used is the computer. The ability. and search information in just a couple of clicks. Some people are with technology that they almost get addicted to it and use it every chance they get. Is this good for people is what there doing affecting there health and physical activity. Yes, people these days are affect by the internet greatly. Such websites in once the addiction highly such as facebook, myspace, and youtube. These are probably the is for school. In the @NUM3 years sence facebook. the level increased dramatically and so have the high pressure level! Dr. @DR1 says. This online behavior must stop people are getting addicted and gaining wait from the lock of physical activity. As you can see the online internet can be very use but not something that should be used non stop it can affect you helth and bring other dangers.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
3927,2,"Dear newspaper editor,      @CAPS1 I am writing to tell you about the censorship in the libraries of @LOCATION1. This doesn't seem like a big problem to some, but a very major problem for others. Censorship has removed books, music, magazines, movies, and other things, from the shelf of local stores and libraries for being offensive to the seller or workers.     Its not what some store owners or library owners like in some cases, but its not about what they like. Its about the people in general that have a certian intrest towards that subject. Some people have even removed the @CAPS2 from local library systems.      Does it even matter what the owner wants to sell? In most cases, no. The belief in a religon or even a book, magazine, or movie that had one small comment about; sex, drugs or alchol is removed for just that. If we remove everything about any of that, the only thing left @CAPS3 be childrens books. Some people @CAPS3 find ways to get those censored as well. We @CAPS3 become illiterate without books, magazines and other things of that nature.     Theres even an account of a person being fired from there job for reading a magazine on there break at work! What happens if we all listen to another person that wishes to remove a book off the shelf? Then another and another, we @CAPS3 have no books in our libraries or stores.      This censorship is a major problem, very few people really care about this subject. Most think it should be done to most items, some think we dont need to censor anything, as we are a free country.      So newspaper editor, please question yourself, ask yourself, '@CAPS3 I like to have all of my favorite magazines, books, and movies gone forever, never to be seen again?' Then everyone will know the answer.",3.0,4.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
9054,4,"The Author uses this paragraph to @CAPS1 the Story because it shows how Saeng wants to adapt to this country and she is allready beging to understand it and like it. When it @CAPS2 “and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again” It is a metaphor about herself when the @CAPS3 begins to bloom and @CAPS4 Just as she is starting to bloom and @CAPS4. This is why the Author endeded with this passage.",1.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
10205,4,"The author, Minfong  Ho, concludes the story with this paragraph for many reasons. The  “budding hibiscus” symbolizes comfort for her. When moving to @LOCATION1 she couldn’t take all her friends a possessions with her, but she could bring memories. The flower reminds her of home, which is comforting after she failed her drivers test. In addition, the “geese returning” symbolizes a new beginning. After being away for so long, the geese returning ushers  in springs a time to start all over after a dreasy  winter. Finally “;,.then I will take that test again.” @CAPS1 that one should never give up. Even though ve was hard for her to adapt to a new  country, she made friends a tried @CAPS2 foods, like a Big @CAPS3. Therefore, Minfong Ho concludes the story with the paragraph to show comfort, new beginnings  a never give up.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
10584,4,"Saeng concluded the story with that paragraph because it shows what she has just been through and feels she could go through it again. If she fails the driving test again, then she use the plants to overcome her problems. She @MONTH1 actually pass the test this time. The unique plants show that she is stronger than she thinks and believes now that she feels comfortable with the plants that bring back memories of her childhood.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
3667,2,"Why should they take them off the shelves? If you ask me i think they should leave @CAPS1 up their. I think they should leave @CAPS1 up there. Not only is @CAPS1 happening in the libraries its happening on televisions also.     Everything in the library might not offend some people. Some people take @CAPS1 offensive when they see something thats against their religion, culture, or maybe their country. But we have the people that take certain things in the library offensive but don't worry about @CAPS1. I say, 'If  you check out the library and find something that you take offensive, don't get @CAPS1 just beacuse you don't like @CAPS1 doesn't mean other people won't like @CAPS1. So why waste time trying to fight to get @CAPS1 off the shelves when @CAPS1's really you the only person worried about @CAPS1?' @CAPS1 just doesn't make any sense how people put up a fit because a certain material offended them. Like someone said a pastor was on tv, talkin about how bad hell really is since some people don't think @CAPS1's not going to be all that bad. He was on tv at the time and this lady got offensive about @CAPS1 and had them take him off tv. But she didn't havve to watch him on tv, she could of watched something else. Nobody made her watch @CAPS1, she chose to watch @CAPS1.     So what I'm saying is that just like the author of the newspaper said, 'I have the right to remove that book from the shelf that work I abhor, then you have exactly the same right and so does everyone else.' @CAPS2 that if you want something off the shelf, think about the other people that actually want to use @CAPS1 rather than thinking about just you.",2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,1.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
15478,6,"In ""The Mooring Mast,"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the Empire State Building is familiar to many people throughout the world, but not many know that the original purpose of the mast was to serve as a landing spot for dirigibles, also known as blimps. Do to the obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there, they eventually shelved the idea. One of the obsticles the builders realized that if a forign dirigibles were to dock and have an accident with any heat or a spark, they would explode and fall to the ground, killing many men, women, and children, due to the chemicals that are used on forign dirigibles. ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" @CAPS1, another obsticle they faced violent winds, that would knock the dirigibles around. ""Winds on the top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" All in all the obsticles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirgibles to dock eventually shelved the idea.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
4145,2,"Freedom to chose is something every person can have, such as what type of clothes you wear.  Censorship in libraries should not be allowed because everyone should have that right to chose.  Plus, there are other ways to avoid children getting inappropriate books besides taking the books completely out of the library.  Censorship in libraries should not happen because if someone is eighteen, they should have the right to chose what they want to watch anyways, the parents can censor what books and movies they want there kids to read and see, and there are offensive things and inappropriate things on television that everyone has access to as well.     First of all, if a person is eighteen they should have a right to read whatever books they chose because they are grown adults.  Eighteen year olds can go into rated @CAPS1 movies which would be about as bad as a book most likely.  In our society, people that are eighteen can do almost whatever they chose because they have freedom.  For example, adults can look up whatever they chose on the internet, and so can everyone else of all ages.  So, if they wanted to read a book like that, they could probably get it off the internet, even if they can not in libraries.  Therefore with today's technologies, censorship would not make a difference.     Next, there are ways to avoid children reading inappropriate books besides taking the books off the shelves completely.  For instance, if parents are so worried about their children reading inappropriate books, then they should take their kids to the library themselves and tell their kid what they can and can not read.  If parents do not censor what their child reads, then those parents @MONTH1 want the child to read whatever he/she choses to.  If their parents chose to let their kid read the book, then that is their choice, not anybody elses.  The choice for what book the child reads should be between the parent and the child.     Lastly, there are so many things in the world that could be offensive to other people besides a book.  For example, people offend other people all the time by words they say.  People hear about all of the fighting because the person probably was offended by something someone else said.  Also there is the television.  The television has inappropriate shows on it all the time, yet everyone can have access to it if they chose to.  Plus there are shows on television that could have to do with racism, or someone being overweight.  These things offend people every day.  Therefore, we should not take books off the shelves just because there is a possiblity of offending someone, when a person could be offended by so many other things in the world rather than a book.     In conclusion, the books, magazines, and movies of the library should not be taken off the shelves away from the public just because they are not appropriate for some children.  Eighteen year olds are adults who should be able to chose whatever they want.  Plus if parents are worried about their child reading inappropriate books, then they can monitor that themselves.  Also, people are offended every day by other people, so books, magazines, and movies are not the only things in the world that could be offensive.  If the person thinks a movie or book is offensive to them, then do not check it out!  Not everything in our lives has to be controlled by someone, so people should lighten up and give some freedom of choice.",5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,22.0
12035,5,"The mood created by the @CAPS1 in the memoir is happy. I think there is hapiness because of what it says on paragraph @NUM1. ""In our neighborhood, despite the customs elsewhere, all of these culture came together in a great solidarity and friendship."" @CAPS2 that mean that there were a happy and friendly family. In conclusion, that's the mood I think the @CAPS1 created and some reasons why.",1.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
16536,6,"In the excerpt from The Mooring Mast by @PERSON1, there were many obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there.Their biggest concerne was safety. ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable""(Lüsted, paragraph @NUM1).  The excerpt mentions the German dirigible, the Hindenburg which was destroyed in a fire. ""... the owners of the Empire State Building realized how much worse the accident could have been if it had taken place above a densely populated area such as downtown New York"" (Lüsted, paragraph @NUM1).Another obstacle was nature itself.  ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents"" (Lüsted, paragraph @NUM3).  The unpredictable winds made it impossible to safely dock people onto and off the dirigibles.Finally, there were laws put in place restricting airships flying too low over populated areas.  ""This law would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area"" (Lüsted, paragraph @NUM4).",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
9584,4,"I think the author concludes the story the way she did to show determination. I also believe that it symbolizes adaption, when the season changes, as will Saeng, she will take the test again. Everything will soon go back to normal and will adjust just like she will. Everything is “almost familiar to her now” (@NUM1).",1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
10485,4,"The author concludes  the story with this paragraph  because she has new hope and determination. The author loves and admires the hibiscus; for e xample “But it’s strong enough to make it through winter”, says her mother. Saeng wants to be able to deal with hardships just as strongly as the hibiscus can. She is filled with new resolution when she says to herself “Then i will take the test again.”     ",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
3925,2,"What is @LOCATION1's main idea in the area of art, language, and music? The idea of @LOCATION1 in those catagories is freedom. Freedom is to write what we want, draw what we want, and say what we want, and in all, to express ourselves freely as a person. It is one of the amendments in the '@CAPS1 of @CAPS2', known as freedom of speech.     Saying that, I believe that we should not be able to ban, censor, or remove any books, music, or movies from the @CAPS3 public. It is their right as an @CAPS3 to buy what they want. It takes away @CAPS2 from people, and when they do that, it makes citizens feel like toddlers. They can't choose for themselves what to see and what not to see.     Everything in this world can be offensive to somebody. Just because that one person finds something bad or distasteful, doesn't mean that they have to make everyone else stop seeing it. That's what gives the world its varieties. What someone might think is weird, somebody else might think is normal. When that happens, why is it okay to take away what makes that person feel normal? Just to make the other person feel better?     I walked into the store once before wanting to buy a videogame. I found one I thought looked cool, took it off the shelf, and brought it up to the cashier. He took one look at the game, saw the rating for it, and said that I had to have an adult with me to purchase the game. I went on about how my dad would not care if I bought this game. The cashier said it didn't matter and that I still had to have him here. Then I had to search throughout the store looking for my dad so that he could walk back to the cashier to buy the game for me. What difference did it make? In the end I got the game anyway.      That experience I had at the store that day let me know how it felt to have my wanting of something be shot down. It made me feel like a baby that needed permission to do something. It also helps me know how the writers, artists, and movie directors feel when they get their work censored, rejected, or banned because somebody somewhere found it offensive.      We need to let people express how they feel. If we didn't then a lot of the stuff today would be different. @PERSON1 had the idea of the world not being flat and that he could sail all the way around the world without falling off of it. Everybody thought he was crazy and got angry at his thinking. But he did it, and proved himself right.      Galilaue @CAPS5 thought came up with the theory that the sun did not revolve around the @LOCATION2. He started doing experiments and tried to prove his theory. The people of where he did his work got engraged and through him into exile and imprisoned him. After that somebody thought that it was a good idea, he experimented on it, and the people supported him. Now we have that theory as a fact, that the sun doesn't revolve around the @LOCATION2.      That is what makes freedom of speech so important to the world. It makes people think in different ways. It helps people think of new ideas. Freedom is the key to any way of living.",5.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,22.0
10035,4,"The author chose this paragraph because it fit right like a good conclusion showed for example the word again it means that you did something already and it's over but you miss so you retry what you miss, but in the paragraph it's talking about the nature and how they want to test it!(""again"")!.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
6669,3,"In the story “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit”, written by Joe Kurmaskie, the author describes the setting as hot, tiresome, and aqusting. You get this picture from the author when the bikerider is describing his surroundings. The bikerider describes his as the high desserts of California in June, being hot and musky, ruff terrain, etc. This gives you an image of what the bike rider feels physically and emotionally. This image shows how tired, thirsty, and determined the bikerider really is. Using words, metaphors, and imagery the author puts you in the shoes of the bikerider emotionally and physically.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
10453,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph to show how Saeng relates the hibiscus overcoming of problems to her own overcoming of problems. Saeng is comparing the hibiscus to herself. If the hibiscus can adapt to its surroundings, then so can she. And if the hibiscus makes it through the winter, then she too can make it; and she will re-take the test that she failed before. Also, before this she says that things that were once strange to her now seemed familiar, like the geese. She then see’s them overhead flying in a V. They are also adapting to their surroundings by flying to a warmer place, and Saeng too can adapt.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
12498,5,"The author creates a loving, warm mood that is felt throughout all of @PERSON1's memoir. For example, ""...passed on to me they're rich culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today (and for which I am eternally grateful). Passionate Cuban music (which I adore to this day)..."" (Rodriguez @CAPS1 Two). Rodriguez's parents loved to cook, something he remembers fondly, and he shares their love to this day. The reader feels this love when reading the line. The reader feels how much @PERSON1 loves Cuban music when reading the next sentence. He even states how much he adores Cuban music even now. Another example, ""Here, the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, form the backdrop to life in our warm home"" (Rodriguez @CAPS1 Two). @PERSON1 even says ""warm home,"" and warmth is definitly felt while reading this line. The feeling of being a child, of being surrounded by friends and family and many celebrations consumes the reader in a blanket of warmth and love because the reader can imagine this. Another example, ""My parents always kept their arms and their door opened to many people we considered family..."" (Rodriguez @CAPS1 @CAPS4). @PERSON1's parents provided a warm envirorment opened to loved ones because they are very warm and loving people themselves. @PERSON1 and the reader feel the emotion because of @ORGANIZATION2's writing. one final example, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice"" (Rodriguez @CAPS1 @CAPS6). The reader gets a feel of how much Rodriguez loves his parents. @PERSON1 even says  ""love."" His parents are loving people and so is @LOCATION1. @PERSON1 had a warm and loving childhood, which he depicts greatly in his memoir.",4.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
4193,2,"Do I think certain materials like books, music, movies, and magazines that might be offensive should be taken off the shelves in libraries? Of course not, there supprisingly still is such a thing called freedom of speech in this country. Just because some people @MONTH1 find something offensive does not mean that the so called offensive material does not have the right to be published or shared with anybody.     Think of some authors that wrote books like @PERSON1, although there were alot of racist remarks in literature of that time period. That does not mean that they still are not a part of american history. What would taking these types of books off the shelves accomplish? Absoulutely nothing is what, racist people arent going to go hey since all these racist books are gone im just going to except everyone now.     Music and movies are forms of expression aswell, and if someone wants to get out of hand write something offensive so be it. You do not have to listen the songs or watch these movies. Nobody can force you to do anything of that nature.     People just take everything so literally these days, they got to have their part in anything and everything. When they should reallize that most problems like these do not even pertain to them at all. That they should just focus on their lives and not worry about everything they hear in the news.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
15454,6,"The architects and builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. Some of their problems included, the structure of the building, the wind and weather conditions, and the safety of their passengers. The stell frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate the new situation. The building now consisted of 102 floors and contained a stainless steel skeleton. The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. The back of the ship would swivel around and would need lead weights to hold it down. This was clearly considered unsafe. Finally the safety of the passengers, was at stake because the complete dirigible mooring equipment was never installed. Also, There was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. These are the reasons why dirigibles never moored on the Empire State Building due to the many obstacles.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
6204,3,"In the essay “Do not exceed posted spedd limit” by @PERSON1 many features of the setting effect the cyclist. First, when he arrived at the first “town” and said, “this place might have been a thriving little spot at one time – say, before the last world war.” This deserted ghost town setting was like a joke and had a small effect on the cyclist because it was the beginning of the day and he still had a good water supply. Though when he arrived at the ramshackle shed surrounded by several rusty pumps the effect it had wasn’t so mild. He says, “The sight was troubling.” Then when he got on his hands and knees and started working the pump the situation didn’t get much better. All that came out was a drop or two that tasted like battery acid. Lastly, when he arrived at an abandoned welch’s Grape juice factory after several miles. This had a very wearing effect on him since the water supply was low and he had cycled into disappointment after disappointment. This setting in this essay seemed very abandoned and hopeless. It was only determination that got this cyclist through it.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
13174,5,"The mood created by the @CAPS1 is a very good and happy mood. You can tell by how he is always talk about both happy, family, and his cuba harrtage and works, music.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
197,1,"Dear newspaper, I know that computers can place a person in its spell, but in reality it's one of the most necesary things we need in our lifetime. Computers are used for many things like school work, planning that trip you always wanted to go to, and reading the latest news. Read the following to know just how important computers really are. You know now when you have that project due for science class about protoplasms. You want to do as you can so you have that at. When you realize that the one book you find on it wont help you with the score you want you realize that the nextplace to look is the computer. The computer gives you an unlimited amount of information that will help you in any report. When a teacher gives you a book to do a biography on, for example, ""The life and times: @PERSON1"" You want to go beyond what they give you and search, for instances, his neighborhood, his inspiration, and the influences he had. You will find all this in the computer. When you see a sale on a ""five nights and four days"" trip to @ORGANIZATION1, you want to know what better sale they have. When you start to notice that your family needs a vacation what is the only place to look. You can'@CAPS3 look for that trip of a lifetime in a book. Sure you can find out that @CAPS1 is having that big blowout sale, but you cant search up the best deal. I've done a research with seven of my friends and that six of those seven parents have deal on a trip to @ORGANIZATION1 on their accounts. If you're a great fan of road trips you'll find a deal or @CAPS2's for the lowest only find out by computer. If you live in @LOCATION3, @LOCATION4 and you want to have a trip to the @LOCATION1 this deal is really good. If you live in the @LOCATION2 and you know the hottest day in the @DATE1 is coming you will be ready to get those beach balls and that blanket ready, but if you think computers are a waste of time then you wont know that all the beaches open and will be sending free drinks all day. You will be at home eating a @CAPS3.V. watching old reruns of The @CAPS4 @CAPS5. Not only will it tell you news in your erea, but will tell you about that devastating earthquake in @LOCATION5. You'll also be informed about what people are doing to help them and what you can do to help. So not only is the computer good for going on @CAPS6 and @CAPS7, you can help get your grade to an A+ on that history report. It also works well for giving your children a memory they will always remember. They also help you to get ready and not be stock in your house on that nice day in @DATE1. Maybe if you find that great deal or help your kid get a better grade then you will realize how good the computer is.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
6684,3,"the setting affects the cyclist very strongly in the story because mentally and physically he wasn’t ready for where he was going. For example the text states “No a better, piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be never. Accept traver advice from a collection of old timers who wasn’t left the cosines of theer poiches since calter was in office.” So a youg guy took maid advice from older guys about how to get to a pack backin thier day it probably was a shortcut.   ",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
16265,6,"Some of the obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced were that inside the dirigibles were hydrogen, which is highly flammable. The builders did not want to risk any lives or damage any buildings. They realized how much worse an accident could be if it took place in down town New York.The greatest obstacle was the wind on top of the building. The winds were constantly shifting due to air currents. Also dirigibles would be dangling over pedestrians on the streets below.The last reason is because their was a law against airships flying too low over urban areas. This law made it illegal for them to tie it up to the building or even approach it.",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
9399,4,"The author concludes the story with a statement that makes you think because she wants to emphasize the relationship between Saeng and the hibiscus. Just like Saeng, the hibiscus is in a new environment and has to adapt to the surroundings. Saeng had just failed her driving test so shes bummed about that. The concluding sentance makes you realize that Saeng can overcome her driving challenges if the plant can overcome the harsh surroundings.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
536,1,"Dear Newspaper @CAPS1, Even though there are good effects of computers on people, there are also many bad effects. Some of the major bad effects of computers on people are no exercise, you can talk to strangers, and no interaction with family and friends. One of the effects of computers on people is no exersise. One of the most important effect of computers on people is no exersise. Right now many people in the @LOCATION1 are obese because of bad eating and no exersise. One of the problems is that these people don'@CAPS2 get off their computers and couchs to go outside. These people choose to stay indoors and just do nothing except watch @CAPS2.V. and go on the computer. So computers have a big effect on how these people live their lives. Another problem caused by computers is kids talking to strangers. Most kids in the @LOCATION1 are a member of a social network like @CAPS3 or @CAPS4. There are people out there that go on these websites on their computers and pretend to be a teen. This can get many kids in trouble if they are not careful on these websites. Since most people access these websites from their computers its another bad effect of computers on people. Another bad effect is no iteraction with family or friends. When people are on computers, they focus on whats on the computer and not about their surroundings. Being on the computer stops many people from interacting with their family and friends. Not interacting with anyone causes their social skills to weaken since they are always on the computer. This can become a serious problem if a person becomes too adicted to the computer. This can cause many problems between communication throughout the family making the family weaken. In conclusion even though there are good effects of computers on people, there are also many bad effects which can cause serious problems. Computers can cause tragaties in families and/or in that persons's life.",3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
6910,3,"Due to the features in the setting, including the hot summer weather, the cyclist not knowing the area, and the California desert the cyclist is affected. In the short story “Do not exceed posted speed limit” by Joe Kurmaskie the cyclist is travelling through the hot desert in June when he realizes hes running out of water, “I had been hitting my water bottles pretty reguarly and I was travelling through the high deserts of California in June”(Kurmaskie). This is affecting the cyclist because hes becoming hot and has a low supply of water. Also the cyclist realizes he should have never taken the direction from the old men and thinks to himself, “…The growing realization that I could drop from heat stroke on a gorgeous day in June”(Kurmaskie). This quote proves that the heat of the desert is taking a toll on him.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
16460,6,"The builders of the Empire State building faced many obstacles while attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle the architects faced was the building's frame. They needed to design the landing area so that if a dirigible landed there, it wouldn't add too much stress to the building's frame. Another problem was the stress of the load, and wind pressure. In paragraph @NUM1, the author says ""The stress of dirigible's load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation, which was nearly eleven hundred  feet below,"" and that is why the dirigible's load, and the wind's pressure are a significant problem. Finally, after the builders figured out that they needed to make various adjustments, also to strengthen the building's steel frame, ""over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications had to be made,"" which is a lot of money! Those are the obstacles that the architects of the Empire State Building faced while trying to allow dirigibles to dock there.",1.0,,,,,1.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
285,1,"I walked into my living room. I saw my mom avidly reading the screen of our computer with pictures of caller masters and logos clastering the web page as well. I thought that the internet had just my mom better than I could that we should go on vacation. More and more people log on to a computer everyday, and although the people willing to change and believe in new advances in technology out on a strong argument of why computers are and there are still some that can only see the negative. I strongly support computers and believe they have a lot of potential. Computers make the work even smaler. They allow to talk to people thousands at miles away man instant. Also, you can reconnect with friends that you can't see anymore. For example, I used to go to an awesome @DATE1 camp and I made same of my best friends there. But @DATE1, they down, and instead of playing sports and having fun, I layed down on my basement to stand up because my sweat glued to the. Then one day, I heard the familiar that my computer's spokes when I receive an instant @CAPS1, I the energy to crawl over to the screen, to find out @PERSON1, one of my closest friends from wanted to take a bike ride down to the wall, and hang out with some other people we knew. to say I happily respond, ""@CAPS2 I definetly want to go,"" by a long scores of points. been for computers and @ORGANIZATION1. Instant @CAPS3, @CAPS4 would all have drifted apart and never talked again. anadem exaggerated argument people use against computer is that everybody that uses them doesn't exercise. I frequent my computer almost every hour, so I made a system to ensure I got exercise. Every time I walk the room my computer is hooked, I grab the pull up right and do @NUM1. I only thought of this system @NUM2 months ago and I have already my own muscles, and I can do @NUM3 pull as at a time but when I started I struggled to do @NUM2. If not for the amazing of computers that me back, I would still do exercise, only to after about a week. Computers give easy to the internet, which has so much information it is. Unless it is a closely grounded secret. You could probably find whatever you want on the internet. Ive gone countless time to find for an essay with the limited textbooks have just isnt what you need. My country project @DATE1 year couldn't have had more than @CAPS5 pleces of information from a book! It also makes a great teacher of about any subject as well. As a matter of fact, my language arts teacher told us a story about how ever the @DATE1 a ball that has never done any sort of water sports before, spent @NUM2 weeks watching videos on youtube about how to waterski, and on his first dearly doing tricks. These are only a few of the reasons I think computers are great. They keep friend ships close, give you a reason to exercise, and can teach you anything! I say we spread the good word about computers and let every one know how awesome they are.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
4725,2,"Censorship in libraries is a big argument today. Many people wonder what is considered 'appropriate' for our children. With several @CAPS3 and @CAPS2 factors these days it is hard to find something that is not offensive to ones culture. Three main reasons we are not able to find a book reasonable, yet non-offensive for our children in libraries includes @CAPS1, @CAPS2 beliefs, and @CAPS3 beliefs.      @CAPS1 was a big deal in the late @NUM1's to early @DATE1's. Thanks to @LOCATION2, slavery became illegal in the @LOCATION1. Although, there are still many racist comments, articles, and films published today. If someone does not stop the harsh comments, then it @MONTH1 never stop. Even though it is not such a big deal today, that doesn't mean it won't continue to happen. Children do not need to see or hear racist comments made toward their race like many of their ancestors did.      Harsh put-downs and comments toward @CAPS2 beliefs are also inappropriate for the society, let alone for children to read. Books containing this are not considered appropriate for children and need to be placed in a different section of the library. As a teenage reader, my biggest belief and interest is learning about other cultures to see what it would be like to live in another country.      There are countless religions in the world today, many of which are accustomed by their own god(s). I belief it is of a great cause for children of the modern day world to celebrate their own religion how they would like. However, I believe it is not right to make hateful opinions toward other religions. This is also a thing that yet children have the ability to read about. Children should not be reading about fictious facts of religions and making the thought process in their head when they assume something is true about that religion when it is not. It is definitely a great idea to stick those materials in the @NUM2 section.      For now, children should be receiving material that they can easily comprehend and find interesting. It would be a great idea to make a fiction section appropriate for kids and then a @NUM2 section for kids and/or adults. An idea to take into consideration is that every local public library could have a meeting to decide whether to keep the library in easy-access form or not. That is for you to decide!",3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
9786,4,The author concludes the story this way to show that saeng intends to try again. an example of her trying again is when she sees the plant and relizes what it symbolizes to her. Another example is her saying that she wants to plant the hibiscas herself so that she holds the memories forever. This is why the author concludes the story in this manner.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
822,1,I think that you can never spend enuf time on the computer it feel there is no bad effet computors can have on you they only improve your life is why. For one thing if you need to find out a important fact date or time. You can just look it up on the computor. The internt is a never ending sorce of knolage and you can learn just about any thing that you need to know just by searching it on the computor.Another usefull thing the computor dose is the ability to talk to people useing eother @CAPS1-mail @CAPS2 or that rooms you can meet new people or talk to a distant friend or relitive on the computor and you can even hook up a web camera and actuly see theam as they talk to you something a phone cannot do. Also the computor is a good souce of entertainment. You can play a number of games off the internet. You can even down load consal games onto your computor. Another thing you can do is watch full episodes of @CAPS3 shows and movies like if you wer fallewing a telivison selles and you missed an episode you can just go look it up. And a favorit of mine is youtube wether you watch random videos watch famous youtube stars on post videos of your own ther is always fun to be had. And finaly all the programs on the computer ther is an endless amont of programs you can have downloaded they can be for fun such as paint and flash or they can be important like worn or knot book every program tha computer offers is usefull and fun to use and you can use most of these programs to help you in the real. Now I have mentioned some of the many thing why you can never spend enuf time on the computer shure exersise and nator can be helth but you can do only of that stuff I just mentond by takeing a nator walk so wont you agree computors improve our life more then they are unhealthy.,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
9682,4,"The author concludes the story with that paragraph because she has a better state of mind because she found  a  flower that reminds her of homeland. She is afraid that her parents  are going to be mad at for not passing the test, therefore she  buys  a  flower  that she sees for it remind. When she gets home and telling her mom how much she paid for the flower  and  how  she  didn’t  pass, mother is upset for only a second, then she is understanding of what her  daughter is going throgh. By the end  of the story she has  more confidence  that  she  will succeed next time.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
7263,3,"The setting of the story affects the cyclist in a negative way. He intrusted that these men he had asked directions from knew what they were talking about. With the directions in mind he traveled on his way to his destination. Only to find deserted towns, disowned factorys, and hills. With all this being the “high deserts of California in June.” With all these aspects the cycalrst was worn out and dehydrated saying “I’d read once that sucking on stones helps take your mind off thirst"" shaving his deep name of thirst. After finding a place to get a drink he stated “I had an overwhelming and buy some bait” showing his deep gratitude and relief of finding water.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
7656,3,"The stoy of the cyclist features of the setting affect of the cyclist, The cyclist had to go thoug a lot "" The speed limit was @NUM1. The was doing a water depleting @NUM2, Sometimes life can feel so cruel.” The cyclist love ride their bike they enjoyed the serenity of an early summer evening"" to cycling.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
6728,3,"The features of the setting affect him because it is hot and their is no where to go. An example from the test is when they said ""There was no one in sight, not a building, car, or structure of any kind."" There was also a part where he got to a sign that said ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: DO NOT EXCEED POSTED SPEED LIMIT.The speed limit was 55 mph. He was doing a water a water - depleting 12 mph. Sometimes life can feel so cruel. Thats what affected the cyclist the heart the hilly roads, no water, snakes, rough roads, and most all no directions.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
4159,2,"I believe that all types of books should be available to all types of people. A library should never be intended for a certain group of readers. As far as I'm concerned, books are creativity in text-form. Creativity is a large part of life, and without it, we would all be the same. There is at least one book for every person in the world, and whether reading is a hobby or not does not matter, there is a book that will interest you.      It is not fair to everybody to take books off the shelves of a library due to 'offensive' content. With different personalities comes different writers. With different writers comes different books. With different books comes different readers. There are a lot of people out there who like to read. What are the people who @MONTH1 like 'offensive' content going to do when these books are taken off the shelves?      Books are written for two reasons: allowing authors to express themselves and giving readers the chance to explore and relate to the imaginations of authors. I think that if a writer has the ability to put whatever he/she wants in a book, that book should be available to anyone and everyone.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
7269,3,"There is many things that could have made his bycicle ride much more enjoyable, one thing is if he wasn’t in the middle of no where and if he actually knew where he was. For example, “There was no one in sight, not a building, car, or structure of any kind.” There, he had almost no water to get him through the day. For instance, “The water bottles contained only a few tantalizing sips.” @CAPS1, he did not know where he was going so it was harder for him. In conclusion these are some things that made his trip hard.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
297,1,"Dear local Newspaper, I assume you've heard about the ongoing debate about computers. I personally believe that computers do benefit society. I believe this because computers benefit by its online, internet, and overall help in other things. My first reason for why you should believe that they benefit society is that computers have online. By online in chat rooms, bank, etc. this helps because people talking to other people online can beast there their morale. it can boest morale in situations like with military officers, soldiers because they don't get to see their family but online can change that in on instant. Online also helps because you can pay bills to gave bank and it overall saves a trip to the bank & a waste of gas. So, online is my for why you, the local newspaper, should agree with me. My second reason is that the internat benifits a lot. The internet, a marvelous created @NUM1 years ago . Its great because you can buy things it, like on a websites such as ebay, amazon, etc. This helps because it also saves time. The internet is great also because with the internet, you can learn of foreign nations. Finally, the internet helps because you can receive news through it. This benefits society because people can instantly hear about natural disasters & problems occuring in the community, rather than hoping to find it in the new or on television. Thats my second reason for why you should agree that computer do help. My final reason for why computers benefit what the help, overall in other situations used later rather thab just the computer. For example one way the computer can help in the future, is that a student can research info a bout a subject online and it can help raise their grade on a project. Stedy has proven that computer training in the , by playing online games with other people, like in call of duty, helps boost soldiers' accorucy. it helps because it boosts their hand-eye coorination & we all increases their accuracy in target shooting @PERCENT1. This @MONTH1 not seem like much but, on the battle field, it can make the difference between life on death. Computers not only help that but they are plentiful & can be used in places such as libraries on internet cafe. That my final reason for why you should go with computers. Some people might believe that computers are bad thing sina they take time away from exercise, but that can easily be solved by using the internet to buy an indoor joggee. Computers benefit society by using online. the internet, and overall help in future situations. There are the reasons for why I believe you should go for the cause of computers. Thank you for taking the time to read my opinion.",4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
9334,4,The author concludes the story like that to make the reader more intrested and to understand it will all happen again and again year after year. ,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
3247,2,"Do you believe that certain materials in the library should be removed off the shelf if found offensive?     I believe certain materials, such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc., should not be removed from the shelves if they are found offensive. Some of my reasoning is very logical and if you were a reader I'm sure you want to read something thats true and very interesting. Libraries all consist of books from everything you can think of. Libraries are really for learning and not to offense anybody in any manner.     The reason why I believe they should not be removed because everybody is equal and not everybody likes to read the same books. There should be offensive books because I think that theres just to many kids that would not like to grab a book and it be orginal and not offensive about them in some way. Books are created to read and have interest, laughter, enjoying. From some of the students at my school I spoke with said that when they are really having a bad day they turn on their music and it helps them because it makes them feel alot better and the day gets easier for them. They say they dont have to be depressed or thinking about something that made them mad that day.     Well as in from my experience with books I can tell you somethings and sometimes that when I was feeling down how I grabed a book. The first time I realized books are really helpful and I'm also talkling about magazines, music and movies. Well to be honest I'm not a big reader. I enjoy listening to music because sometimes songs can relate to you and make you fell  that your not alone. Also it helps you learn how to cope with some things that you could of never coped with before because it makes you feel relaxed. Just how some of my friends said that they feel relaxed when they read a book.     So my point is that you know and I know that their are music out there that is very offensive and some books that are.  Does it drive us crazy that they do? No it does not because it actually helps us. It helps us by showing us away out from our daily streesful lifes and sometimes you learn in books and songs of how other people deal with their stress. So you learn alot of things than feel offensive about books or music. As you can tell I'm a huge music fan and there has been lots of songs that were offensive but it did not bug me much.         I hope I gave you some kind of shock that music and books should'nt be removed if offensive. It's just music is amazing as well for books we all need our space sometimes and those two things are just there for us which is either to help us learn or feel relaxed and calm. Thank you for reading this and I hope I persuaded you enough with my reasoning. Remember music and books are alot alot of fun and if you never gave it a chance, you should try it sometime. That's the end of my conclusion",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
16439,6,Obstacles the builders of the empire state building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there was nature itself. Winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. The back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast.,1.0,,,,,1.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
10307,4,"The author concludes the story with that paragraph because saeng is saying she is learning to adapt to this country. Earlier in the story she says that she failed the test, because she did not impress her mom. Saeng and her mom are used to ife in Vietnam, they trying to adapt. Saeng thought that the hibiscus she got Is just like the one she had at home. At the end she realizes if she just has faith everything will be @CAPS1 and it will be just like home. She says in the spring because by then her hibiscus will be fully growned and she will take the test again to see if the hibiscus is like the one her mother thought she would get. Saeng is learning to adapt to her new country of the United States.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
12683,5,"The mood that was creat by this author was love. It was love by how he discribed his house. ""The passionate cuban music fill the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen. Cooking and music you usally associate with love and love is happiness The author also talks about his ""close-knit community of honest, hard working immigrants who extanded a hand to people who, not necessarily their own kind were clearly in need."" This also shows the mood in this memore is love, love of cooking of music and of family. Another place were it showed love in the memore was in this quote. ""My Parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family, knowing that they would do the same for us."" This shows love because even though these people aren't blood related they still look out for each other and knew they had someone to lean on. The apparent mood in this story was love and the family had much of it.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
10424,4,"The author concludes the story with that paragraph for several significant reasons. Throughout the story Saeng struggles with her past and overcoming it. The paragraph helps bring a sense of closure to the story. When Saeng returns home with the hibiscus she tells her mother she couldn’t help it and was unable to overcome her past. Saeng said, “I-I failed the test.” When she says “the test” she means the ability to cope with the loss of her grandmother and homeland, and overcome it. In the concluding paragraph Saeng says she will retake the test. She said, “When the snows melt and the geese return and the hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” In conclusion, the author uses the concluding paragraph to bring closure to the story and the emotional obstacles Saeng faces.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
12453,5,"This story, basically, brings me back memories myself. In the memoir, the author feels a happy, strong, lovable mood. He feels as @CAPS1 those times, are never going to be forgettable, that he's always going to remember those times. That once he gets older, he will take these good times, as granted. Even during bad times, he will look back. Also he will always be thankful, for what his parents have done, to make his life better, and esier. That way he wouldn't have to life a hard depressed life. Hopefully he will always be thankful for that oppertunity, that his parents gave him. I know that @CAPS1 my parents did that for me, I would never forget them.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
15163,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles, while trying to build a dock for dirigible. One problem was safety. While American dirigibles used helium, other countries filled their dirigibles with highly flamable helium. If a dirigible were to ignite in a heavily populated area like New York City, the result would be deadly. Nature also caused problems with the mooring mast. The winds above the building were too strong and ever-changing, and could potentially destroy the dirigibles. Finally, federal laws stated that an air craft could not dock that close to a building. These three factors made it impossible for dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building.",3.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
9351,4,I think that the auther end the story Like that as a meterphor For people to think out side the @CAPS1 or thing. OR The auther might oF ended it Like that so people can get a picture in the head about what she was talking about.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
3400,2,"People @CAPS1 Offensive by Libraries         I think that libraries are sometimes offensive,but not all the time. It  all depends on peoples different beilfs and thier culture. I can see where some things in the library are very offensive and where somethings are not offensive. I believe parents are more offended by things in the library ,because they don't want their kids to experience these things that are not the childs age. Movies that are at the library @MONTH1 be offensive ,because if a parent rents a moive for their child and gets home and puts in the @CAPS2. Then finds out that the moive they wasn't a kids moive ended up being an adults moive.           Parents who don't want their kids to look at inporatiate  things should not be suable for their childs age.One way to sovle this problem is to keep a eye on their child and make sure they don't go anywhere esle except the childrens area. This would sovle so many problems if parents would actually follow through with this it might work. Some parents bring their child up they way they want to. Also the parent or parents teach their kids that they don't need to go in any other area expect the one they are suppose to go in unless their parents tell them otherwise.       I do get offensive sometimes when I go in the library, because they are some people who thinks it's funny to look at things just for fun not for any purpose. They make a big deal about and I don't like when people do that ,because it makes you think of the library as not such a place you wanna be at. If i was a person who got offensive by something that was on the shelf at the library I would pass it up and not pay attention to it. But some people would tell the people who are running the library that this certain thing on their shlef is very offensive to me and bothering me.      If I had an issue with the library for some certian reason I would complain. Because complaining will more than likely do something about it. Instead,of not saying anything it won't get done or change it so it's not offensvie to others. I would let  them know how I felt about a certain product in the library in a soft and calm manner. When you complain about something might as well complain in a nice way, because if you do then that person you are complaining to will be nice back.     I know that everyone is not the same and feel the same about everything. But one thing is for sure is to keep on living life and don't let simple things about a library product offending you or bother you.You could not got to the library anymore if it's a problem or ignore the image that is offending you. There are so many ways to handle a situation like this it's just how you handle it. One way is to be respectful to people and people @MONTH1 be respectful back. Your attitdue has a lot to do with telling someone that something is offending you. If you can't get anywhere that way then just forget it and move on",2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
6131,3,"In the story “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit,” written by Joe Kurmaskie, the features of the setting affected the author in many ways. One feature was the hills. The speed limit affected the author because he felt that he was moving to slow. In the story when it says “I was doing a water-depleting @NUM1,” is evidence of this",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
1508,1,"Computers. Theres fun. But there's also a down side. People spent more time on it than outside or exersizing or even getting together with friends and family. But on ther hand, they're also fun, help kids, and even help get together from dating sites. It makes them happy. It's fun! Computers are fun. They provide a wide arrow of games, educational can just plain fun. You can play role playing games (which and fun because I play a few myself), or you could play educational games like the games on islands, or other downlodabal education games that are, @CAPS1 not fun but essential for the growth and development of a learning child. They also can help kids learn how to and other things at a very early age. Some very adults have and various other things that I cannot the life of me think of @CAPS2 thing computer get them together and they are happy. They do this hundreds of a day. Take away computers and people will die alone and sad. so in conclusion my ideas where! fun help kids and help older people get together. Read this and @CAPS3 sure you'll see it my way.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
6358,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist. The directions given to the cyclist by the elderly was incorrect and he got lost. The lack of water led to the possibility to sucking pebbles to forget about his thirst. The rolling hills caused the cyclist to use more energy.These were the affects the setting had to the cyclist.,2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
7444,3,"In the story “Rough Road Ahead” a cyclist takes some out of rate information from a couple of old guys as he went along following there directions he found out that there directions were out of rate and at points dangerous. Also the setting didn’t help because he was in a desert with ghost towns and it was very hot it didnt help him believe he was going to make it out alive. For example in the story when he enters the  fork in the road it says he found “several rusty pumps,” and “one ramshackle shed.” This probably didnt help him because he didn’t have alot of water left and it was really hot and he was losing confidence in himslef that he went get out and there were rusty pumps so he couldn’t get any water that was good. Also in the story it says that “There was no one in sight, not a bulding, car, or structure of any kind” and that setting affected him because in this part in the story he has cycled for a while and he has no water left and he is getting very exhausted a almost has no energy. Also it decreased his hopes because it says there wasnt a building, or a car anything so it was pretty, much a empty dessert that he was stuck in and he thought he wouldn’t setent of the dessert alive. In conclusion in the story “Rough road ahead” the setting in the story didn’t help the cyclist in his hope or confiendce of setting out because the setting was very abanded and also it was very hot and it didn’t help that he was in a desert.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
6952,3,"At times when the features of the setting are bad it can have a great impact on the cyclist. For one if it’s too hot the cyclist is going to need plenty of water if he/she does'nt want to be dehydrated. There are also the dangers of heat strokes and deadly snakes, cyclist might want to avoid that. When your a cyclist times can be hard just prepared for the long run.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
16370,6,"some of the obstacles the builders went throw was that they had to make many changes, such as they could not just drop a mast on top of the Buildings flat roof. The blimp would give the building stress held by a single cable. the blimps load and pressure from the wind would have to be transmitted all the way to the buildings foundation. The @CAPS1 could have to be strengthened to accommodate this new situation. over sixty thousands of dollars for the new frame work.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
15290,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced a couple of obstacles while attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One of the obstacles the builders had was with the stress of the dirigibles load as said in the excerpt in paragraph @NUM1.             Another obstacle they had with landing the dirigibles to dock was that they had to modify and strengthened the steel frame of the Empire State Building. They needed to do that so it can accommodate this new situation, which is to get dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
202,1,"I completely agree with those people who think computers have a negative effect on us today. Even though computers are great they do have many negative effects on people who use them. Since. new technology, and post pictures on websites where everyone can see. Also they have games for computers that people get hooked on. Lastly, there are predator online. The new technology is amazing, like webcams where you can video chat or cellphones where you could take pictures, @CAPS1 they do have negative effects. There have been many suicides over cyber bullying. This is where people bully kids over the internet. Also some people send naked pictures online or even while webcamming. this is illegal and absurd that young or even older people would be doing these actions. Also there are websites where people can post these pictures of you that are very personal and make a huge difference in you life. There are many people who have games for their computer or download games off of websites. Most people actually get addicted to the game, They would play it all day if they could and if they arent playing they are wishing they could. This makes them miss out on alot of things. They might not get enough excersise or not do any homework which will make you grades drop. They could also not be spending time with family. It also might change who you are as a person. The most important thing about the use of computers is your safety. There are predator all over the internet and can pretend they are someone from school and ask where you live. You should never tell anyone where you live or your full name online. They can and most likely will come to your house for you. It could most likely cost you or even family members your lives. Computers can be fun and you can learn an abundant amount of information but as long as you smart about using it. Remember not to tell anyone where you live or dont take pictures and send them that are personal. They could be all over the internet the next day. Lastly, worry about your family, grades, and health than some useless game. Be smart and safe!",4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
9206,4,"In the story “winter Hibiscus,” the author included important part at the end that saeng vowed. The reason why she said that is because when everything in her life starts up again she will love her life again, she will be alot happier person.",1.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
16291,6,The @CAPS1 of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in the attempt to allow dirigibles to dock there. One problem was the @CAPS1 had to fix the frame of the building in order to transmit the stress of the dirigible to the bottom of the building. Another obstacle the @CAPS1 faced was the @CAPS1 had to complete the roof before the framing of the mooring mast could take place. The @CAPS1 of the Empire State Building also had to make sure that the mast's skeleton was made out of steel so that the mast looked like the rest of the empire State building and not stick out.,0.0,,,,,0.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
612,1,"In our socity computers have a big role. Some people think that this inhaces our socity and benefits the people in the @LOCATION1. Other people think computers are hurting the @CAPS1 citizens. I belive that computers can have our socity into the next and can inhance use to people. Comptores can benifit people by tracking hand-eye coordination give people the ability to learn about the world, and allow people to communicate to others. Computers can teach hand-eye coordination which helps people work with their hands. An arument on the of this is that computers take the place of exercise. For a lot of @CAPS2 a sport is their exercise and in every sport you need hand-eye coordination. Computers don't take the place of they inhance the persons ability to play for exsample to be a goaly in any sport you need fast mentions and good hand-eye coordination. A computer can help the save more goals by increasing their hand-eye coordination. Having good hand-eye coordination can also save you life. If a knife was you human nature world tell you to cover your head with your hands. This would you, if you had hand-eye coordination you away with your body to avoid the knife. Computers help you physically but they can help you mentally as well. Computers can take you around the world without leaving your room. Computers can teach go about culture and life that you didn't even know excisted. The cahan @CAPS1 can not aford the luexury of seeing the world first hand, computers let those people see the world from difient points of veiw. If a student needed to know all about one country they could go on the enternet and get a tour. A student could not go to the country so they went to the second base thing the computer. They can the wanted with one click. Family, friend and coligees are all people you need to talk to. Computers made communication easy for anyone. Now you can talk and see a person in video chat. This benifits socity because if you are talking to a buissness partner you can point to graphs and charts you made. You can also to see a love one that you miss. Their is a different type of comunication for every person. You can e-mail, @CAPS4, instant message, etc. Comunication connects people around the world it a small world after all. Computers have taken our socity in the next level. People can travel the world in a second, talk to anyone and have hand-eye coordination. Computers are growing @LOCATION2 keeping is on top. What would you choose?",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
1466,1,"Dear @LOCATION1, minute man, people are complaining. They are complaining about how computers interfer with their family and life. But it teaches adults and kids new things. Being on the computer is an exeperince. You can almost search anything on the computer. You can learn history or about the present time. Like one time I was searching (@CAPS1.com) on how to fix a playstation @NUM1 controller. I found out how to do it and it worked. While you are on the computer you can interact with friends, find out about the weather, and find out if you have any homework. The computer also teaches you how to do different stuff. Like this one time I learned to do a hardflip. Also computer's can help you with your homework. Like if you have science homework and you're trying to figure a word out you can search it. Or if you're looking for a book for @LOCATION2 you can search websites for good books or ask a friend. The computer helps many different people in many different ways. And you know how people say computers are bad. If you have a t.v. for game system its like having a computer, right? But don't go kill your self looking for a cheap one. But I do suggest that everyone should have a computer, they are helpful and fun.",3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
12941,5,"The mood of the memoir is very warm, happy and inviting. Since the whole story portrays this mood, I will tell you some reasons why. In paragraph @NUM1, Rodriguez tells you how everybody in his neighborhood were good friends and would always give a hand to people in need. Paragraph @NUM2 goes into more detail about paragraph @NUM1, telling us how many of Rodriguez's neighbors, friends and relatives joined him and his family at dinner on a regular basis. His parents ""always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we consider family, knowing that they would do the same for us."" In paragraph @NUM4, Rodriguez states how his parents selflessly came over to the @CAPS1.S.A to give him a better life. They give up everything they had just so he could have more than his parents did. This just goes to show how much Rodriguez's parents cared for him. As you can see, this is why the mood of the memoir is warm, happy, and inviting. (Also heart warming!)",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
16563,6,"The obstacles the builders of the Empire State building faced were that first, the mast designed to go ontop of the Empire State Building was thought up just to make it the worlds tallest building, not because it was necessary, so alot of problems ar ose. This mast was designed to be a dirigible docking station, which, at the time, blimps were very unsafe, and  lacked a suitable landing area so this was thought to be a great opportunity to give them a place anchor for a few hours for refueling, service, and to let passengers on and off. A mooring mast couldn't be simply dropped on top, as it would add stress to the building's frame, so the steel frame had to be modified, and took over sixty thousand dollars' to do so. After Construction took place, it was then decided if an incident, such as the Hindenburg occurred again, it would be much worse over a densely populated area such as downtown New York. But the largest obstacle was nature itself, the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting, due to violent air currents, and although tethered to the mast, the back of the ship would swivel around, the usage of lead weights could solve this problem, but because they would be dangling high above pedestrians on the street, it was neither practical nor safe. There was also an existing law against air ships flying too low over urban areas.",4.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
6202,3,The feature of the setting affect the cyclist about old timers giving him wrong information about taking this short cut he was going to take. Running out of water and energy and he was doubt himself and giving up on race It say he.,0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
4267,2,"Imagine a library without any materials that are considered offensive.  In this library you wouldn't find many of the great pieces of literature that have impacted and influenced society @DATE1.  You probably wouldn't find too many books, magazines, or movies that everyone in the @CAPS1 feels that are appropriate.  Some of the great classic novels have contents that could be considered offensive to many people.  Offensive materials should remain in libraries @DATE1 because something that is offensive to one person might not be to another person, who could be impacted by the piece of literature that is being banned.  Music should also remain in libraries because the artist did not put the lyrics in the song to bring the listeners attention to the offensive material.  Also offensive materials have made an impact in society for ages.     First, materials that one individual finds offensive could be viewed another way by many others who enjoy the material.  Some comedy and action movies are viewed as offensive or inappropriate to some people, but many others @MONTH1 enjoy the movie.  If a movie, book, or magazine has the topic of @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3, it could be considered offensive to people who were a part of it, but it could also inform the reader or the person who is watching about the events that happened.  If children want to see or read this material they should get permission from their parents first.     Next, all music should remain in libraries.  The music was created by an artist who made it for enjoyment and entertainment.  The purpose of the music is not to bring the attention of offensive material to the listeners.  The lyrics in some songs are innapropriate for children, but parents should not let their child listen to them.  Lyrics can deal with really mature things that should only be heard and understood by adults.     Last, offensive materials have impacted society for ages.  Many things the founding fathers of the @LOCATION1 did were considered offensive, but that did not make them wrong, and it made the @CAPS1 a better place @DATE1.  Offensive materials impact everyday life for better and worse.  If all offensive materials were banned, they wouldn't be able to have an impact on @CAPS1 for better.     In conclusion, offensive materials should remain in libraries @DATE1.  The materials @MONTH1 be controversial, but they still are pieces of literature that deserve to be read and studied by the people of the @CAPS1.  Offensive materials contain many teaching tools in life that could help out the lives of many people.  The @CAPS1 would turn into that of the @CAPS1 in @PERSON1's novel @CAPS4 @NUM1, where all books were burned and society was not intellegent at all, if offensive materials were taken out of libraries @DATE1.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
6544,3,"Heat, hills and ghost towns – all are features of setting that affect the cyclist. First, the heat dehydrates and exhausts him, almost causing him a heat stroke. He starts dinking more often, and nearly runs out of water. Next is the hills. They can take massive amounts of energy to climb. Which adds to his dehydration. Finally the ghost towns. They make his journey seem hopeless. Which could cause him to lose the will to carry on.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
7192,3,The features of the setting affected the cyclist a great deal. I say that because when there is peace and calmness then it motivates you more. Than when there is a lot en stuff around you.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
16170,6,The emire state building faced alot of obstacles and challenges while it was being built. The builders built a rocket shaped mast so the dirigible could be housed in the shaft itself. Which also had elevators so people could go down to the lobby. The building would now be 102 floors. The glassed observation room would be on the 101st floor.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
3245,2,I think as long as the book ain't offensive or bad then people should keep reading it. If its offensive I think they shouln't read it at all cause it would not be right to read such a thing. Also I think if there is bad music it should be taken off the shelves. Parents or teachers wouldn't want there kids finding out bad words to say,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
16123,6,"The builders faced many different obstacles in their attempt to allowing Blimps to dock there. There were two major obstacles. ""The greatest reason was one of safety: Most dirigibles from outside the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly @CAPS1"" (@NUM1). If a blimp had an accident like the Hindenburg, not only would the Empire State building go down, it would affect other buildings and people too because of the city's population. Lastly the other large effect on the building was the weather. ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself. The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents"" (@NUM2). The winds could have easily knock it over with a blimp attatched to it for this reason: ""the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast"" (@NUM2). As result to this the blimb would be so close to the mast that if a strong enoungh wind was blowing, the blimps weight you take the mast with it. All in all weather and hydrogen blimps with the builders' two major obstacles.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9028,4,The reason why the author concludes the paragraph with that sentence is because her wants to let reader know that it's not over. He wants the reader to know @ORGANIZATION1 will not forget. And also that all this will happen again.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
6125,3,"The feature of the setting affect the cyclist by one, the conditions of the road were awful. Two, the cyclist said there was a huge snake blocking his path as well as the occasional tumble weed. The biggest affect on the cyclist was the lack of water with unbearable heat and he was tired. Those are the affects the features of the setting had on the cyclist.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
3362,2,"Dear @CAPS1:     Have you ever seen an offensive book on a shelf in a library? Would you want your children influenced by these findings? These are the question you need to ask yourself about certain materials that appear in libraries.      As a concerned citizen I am writing to you to relect my opinion on censorship in libraries. In my own personal experiences I have come across magazines, books, and music that are offensive. I believe that these materials should not be found in libraries. There are many people that still would want these materials, so my suggestion is that there should be a seperate room for the offensive materials. If there was a seperate room, we can keep these materials away from young kids. When I get older and have children, I believe that the library should be a kid friendly place. In order to make that happen we need find a place for these materials or not have them at all. Libraries need to be somewhere were anyone can go: a college kid trying to prepare for a test, a young child wanting to discover @PERSON1, or a old man wanting to enjoy the peace and quiet. The distraction of offensive materials are not needed in a library.       Libraries are places to learn and explore the different sources that are inside. For young children it is the fairytale land where anything is possible and the unimaginable can become true. If there are materials that adults do not want their children to see, they @MONTH1 not be comfortable having their child there. Libraries need to be kid friendly places, so that all the ages can enjoy what it has to offer.       As you can see, offensive materials should not be in libraries. All ages should be able to enjoy what a library has to offer, and with some materials that is not possible. Please consider the following.      Kind regards,         @PERSON2",4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
1782,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, I believe that computers are a good source of technology. The reasons which I am fighting for tell why, kids are in school more than half of the school day. Parents should be limiting there childrens use and what they do, and computers are a way of contact and research. To begin, kids are in school more than have of a school day. How could children stay on the computer when there in school learning? They can't. In school you get alot of exercise because your always movign around. After school kids usually do homework or go out with friends. Computers don't have effect on people, if anything it makes them smarter. Secondly, if children have a computer at home their parents should be limiting the time and what exactly they could do on the computer. The people who support advances in technology are correct, computers open up imagination, and learning. Parents of the children that have computers should be more worried than anyone else and if they are , they should just take the computer away. Parents sould also take their kids places more often so the schild win not have to go online. Lastly, computers are a way of contacting others. If you don't have a phone, you use a computer to go on your email, or personal websites. Also poeple need computers for schol work and for their jobs too! Another thing numerous peopel use a computer for is research and reports. We need our information! To conclude, my thoughts are very important to consider because, mny other people would be shy to wirte this and get it published in their local newpaper! I would like to say computers are not interacting with family, friends, nature or anything of that sort. We as a whole need computers to do daily life things, without be able to go online, or save files we would be lost! So I will say again to consider my ideas. Thank you.",3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
6644,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist greatly. It made him become dehydrated. For example, in paragraph @NUM1 sentence @NUM2 he stated “I eased past, trying to keep my balance in my dehydrated state.” This shows how the heat and climate of the setting affected him by how he was getting thrown off balance and wears     to him getting dehydrated. The setting of the story “Do not exceed posted speed limit,” by Joe Kurmaskie, effects the cyclist in the story.",2.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
13074,5,"The mood created by the author in this memoir is lovable. Narciso Rodriguez said he will always be grateful to his parents for their love and sacrifice. He said that what they did was a more courageous thing than he could have ever done. Also, the mood is grateful. In the memoir, it says that Narciso thanked his parents repeatedly for what they have done. He also states, ""In our neighborhood, despite customs elsewhere, all of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship. It was a close – knit community of honest, hardworking immigrants, who extended a hand to people who, while not necessarily their own kind, were clearly in need."" That shows that he is grateful to have friends and family. Also, the mood is caring. This is because he stated that her parents came sefflessly to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their friends and jobs.",4.0,,,,,4.0,4.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
10368,4,The author concludes the story that way so she can keep everyone wondering. I belive she ended that way to let us know that she will be back and when she comes back she will be ready for everything including that test. She left us wondering because when she does come back she is going to want use to Read about what happened when she came back and what happened when she @CAPS1 the test. She only made that vowe to herself nobody else because if she did she would have let them down if she failed. That is why she concludes the story that way.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
3407,2,"Books are important in the life of human beings wheather they are for studies,entertainment, or any other use. On the other hand, are some books offensive to readers. If certain books are offensive should you stay away from that type of book or get rid of the book altogether. With this being said, Should certain material be removed from shelves if they are offensive? Some reasons against this are you are taught to stay away from bad things, some people have different views of 'bad', and even if they are offensive they do not need to be removed.     Some materials are offensive to some people but not to others. This is the case in anything for example movies, books, and daily life. Some people @MONTH1 think the type of words used in a book make it bad, but to others that is what makes the book. For example to show the full amount of hatred for a character you have to use some offensive words. Another example is describing how horrible a person was killed, it is not enough to say he got stabbed and beat, you have to describe just how brutal it was to please some readers.       Another reason why books should not be removed is people are taught when to tell that something is offensive. If a reader discovers a book is offensive they should know to stop reading not finish the book then complain about offensive material. Also if a person rents a movie they know they aren't allowed to get an @CAPS1-rated movie then they should get another movie. People should know to not get a book read about the offensive stuff without stopping then go complain. If a person was concerned about a certain material they could ask people or go online to see if it is offensive or not.     Even if a certain material is offensive it should not be removed. That is only the opinion of sombody. If the book was needed by somebody they would not be able to get it because it was removed. If material were removed because someone said it was offensive then ther would never be any more books. For the reason that anyone can be offended, so they might just say it was worse than it actually was because they are mad.      For those reasons materials should not be removed. What if everybody started saying things were offensive ther would not be any more books. People should not have the complete say in the removal of books. Otherwise people would complain just out of spite towards certain people's material. So do you believe that certain materials should be removed from the shelves if they are found offensive.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
16134,6,"The obstacles that the builders of the empire state building faced in attempting to allow blimps to dock there was the height of the building. For instance in paragraph @NUM1 it states ""the steel frame of the building would have to be modified, over six thousand dollars worth of modifications"" This proves that the height of the empire was its height because the city had to pay modification fees. Also, because the building is so tall the mast is not that stable so that was the main obstacle stated in paragraph @NUM2 ""the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents"" This demonstrates that mast in those currents and not being stable enough could be very dangerous for downtown New York. Lastly, even state laws became an obstacle for the dirigibles such as in paragraph @NUM3 it states ""this law would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building"" This justifies that this was also an obstacle that the builders faced",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
13303,5,In the artical Narciso Rodriguez by @PERSON1 edwards the mood created by the author the mood is happy and sad in different ways because he goes from like be nothing to living in a nice home and a good family and how his first birthday was and what his parents did to make him live a happy life in america.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
9058,4,"After reading the story “Winter Hibiscus” by: Minfong Ho the author ends the story in a unique way that demonstrates a will to survive. For example in the text the author writes and explain how the plants “dok faeng-noi,” has adapted to its cold environment is different to the ones back at home. This demonstrates the idea of survival be the fact that in the past this plant migrated to a place that seemed warm at the time, but when cold streets, it found ways to change itself and adapt all based on the instinct to survive. Another example in the text is the author     Saeng telling herself that in the spring she will try and take the test again. This demonstrates the will to survive because when Saeng failed the test she felt a sense of meloncoly and failure. The fact that she had the courage to prepare for the test in spring shows how she human being wants to live and for her to live in a new country she must adapt by passing that test to become a survivor.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
6554,3,"The setting of “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit,” affect the cyclist so many ways. First of all, the cyclist is riding in a desert, in mid- June, with the heat “beginning to beat down” on him. This feature of the setting causes the cyclist to drink more water, but when his supply of water was running low, he was unable to drink much water to hydrate himself. The cyclist began to realize that he “could trap from heatstroke on a gorgeous day in June.” @CAPS1, the long distance and changes in the terrain that the cyclist was travelling, affected him. The distance on which to cyclist was travelling to Yosemite National Park, consisted of hours and miles of riding. Over vast changes of terrain. The “flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills”, which affected the cyclist speed and energy to finish his trip.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
12243,5,"Based on the memoir ""Narciso @CAPS1"" from Home: The Blueprints of our lives the author creates a very powerful and posative mood. One strong example of this is how he expresses his parents. He implies the mood they set on him by saying things like ""always be greatful for my parents"",  ""admiration for their strength"", ""perseverance"", and ""generosity."" The mood Narciso used to express his family was very positive and thankful. Another example of the mood the author sets is what he thinks of his culture. He tells that his family and friends are immigrants and how hard they worked to be free and give a better life to their families and children. The struggle and hard work his family went through to keep their culture alive; Narciso was very thankful for. He was extremely proud of his culture and thankful for the example his family had set. Narciso Rodriguez expresses a very positive and powerful mood about his family and his culture throughout the excerpt.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
14929,6,"Most of the obsticles the builders of the Empire State Building had were due to weather. If New York ever had a windy day the dirigible would pull at the mast. The mast is attached to the ""@CAPS1"" of the building, and it might affect the frames or ""@CAPS1"" of the building. Another reason is the danger it would bring to all of New York. If a dirigible ever hit something or something went wrong the dirigible would @CAPS3 on top of New York. With all the trafic of New York you would most likly not want a burning dirigible falling overhead.",1.0,,,,,1.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
12263,5,"The mood created by Narciso Rodriguez and his mermoir is happiness. The author creates a very happy mood in this memoir. Here he describes how the people in his neighborhood acted towards each other. ""It was a close-knit community of honest, hardworking immigrants who extended a hand to people who, while not necessarily their own kind, were clearly in need."" The people in his neighborhood were very kind and generous people. The help each other whenever one is in need. The author makes the reader smile when reading about such a place. Another example of this is when he writes, ""They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends, and careers in the country they loved."" To see such selfless act is just wonderful. The way the people sacrificed their lives for their child's is amazing. Reading about this just warms a person's heart. Another example proving this mood is when the author writes, ""I will never forget that house or its gracious neighborhood or the many things I learned there about how to love. I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" The author is very proud of where he grow. It @MONTH1 not have been perfect but he managed to find the good parts. It is his pride that makes the readers feel happy for him. Thus, the mood created by Narciso Rodriguez in his memoir is happiness.",3.0,,,,,4.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
446,1,"Dear @LOCATION1 @CAPS1, I strongly believe that people should cut down on using the computer. Just imagine, more people outside and healthy. Less “cyberspace” bullying, and less burning of electricity. My first reason why people should spend less time on the computer and more outside is because @PERCENT1 of people that use the computer more than two hours a day are either at risk of being overweight or are overweight. Also, @PERSON1, from @ORGANIZATION1 says “@CAPS2 people believe that using the computer gives you benefits, but they don’t. They increase your chances of either being overweight or getting diseases such as diebeties. It’s imperative that the community takes action to stop this from happening. “In addition, my neighbor, @PERSON2 had to do a study to interview overweight adults and teenagers. @CAPS3 told me that @PERCENT2 of the @NUM1 people @CAPS3 interviewed said they don’t go outside and use the computer for about @NUM2 hours a day! I implore the citizens of the @LOCATION1 area to cut down on internet time and go outside to enjoy nature. My second reason is the less people on the computer means less cyberspace bullying. @NUM3 out of @NUM4 people that use the socializing websites have experienced more than @NUM2 encounters of cyberbullying also my sisters friend, @PERSON3, overdosed on advil so @CAPS3 ran comitt suicside because of cyber bullying. Someone had said @CAPS3 was ugly, smelled and should ""go die in a hole."" @CAPS3 didn't tell anyone about this. Luckily her mother brought her to @CITY1 @ORGANIZATION1 fast enough to be put on life support for @NUM6 hours. furthermore, if people cut down on internet socializing website than less people will be in danger of cyberbullying affecting their lives. It's excruciating imperative for people to use the computer for only @NUM7 or @NUM8 hours a day. My final reason is, the less time you use your computer the less money you would be wasting on electricity bills and spending more time on family vacations. Dr. @DR1, from the peabody museum in @LOCATION2 begs people to use less electricity and power on the internet so the environment can slowly rebuild itself to be what it was before technology and electricity was invented. In addition, @PERCENT3 of power used in todays homes is used on computers. Also my grandmother is astounded by what todays technology is doing to the environment and the people behind this madness or electricity. @CAPS3 believes that the less time on the computer means more time on family vacations and with friends. Lastly, it's extremly imperative that people stop using computers as much to help their health their self estem and environment. A case take action to stop using computer @NUM9. Thank you for reading my paper.",6.0,6.0,6.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,28.0
15510,6,"In the @DATE1's, dirigibles were known as the transportation of the future. After the Empire State Building was built, the builder's attempted to allow dirigibles to dock there. There were three main reasons that prevented the builders from attempting to allow dirigibles to dock, at the top of the Empire State Building. ""The one obstacle to there expanded use in New York City was the lack of a suitable landing area."" Al Smith thought that if a mooring mast was added to the top of the building, it would allow dirigibles to anchor there for hours. But it was not easy for the architects to drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof. ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the moorin Mast was nature itself."" The violent air currents from the wind, would caused the back of the ship to Swivel around the moorin mast. ""The other practical reason why dirigibles could not moor at the Empire state Building was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" In the end two dirigibles attempted it, but it did'nt work.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
7007,3,"The setting of this story plays a huge part in the final outcome. The author makes a mention that he is travelling through the high deserts of California in June. This sentence alone tells the reader that it is hot. And not hot by @LOCATION2 standards, where it gets to @NUM1 degrees, maybe, by noon. That means that the day starts at @NUM2. By noon, it's past @NUM3. Also, the author comes to a sign marked ""Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit.” @CAPS1 he makes note that he’s only going 12 mph. Before he reaches any sort of civilization, he has already drunken most of his water, his last ""tentalizing sips,"" This is his main problem, his lack of water. He drank most of it in the beginning of his ride, thinking he’d be okay, but he regretted it later on",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
12233,5,"In the memoir, the author creates a very peaceful mood. He achieves this by using a blunt voice and unusual punctuation.The author's voice is very blunt. for example, he describes his house as a ""simple house"" numerous times in the memoir. He tells the reader more than enough about his simple home, and there is almost no conflict in this memoir. This gives the reader a sense of peace and never leaves the reader hanging or wondering about something.To help him with that, the author uses lots of unusual punctuation. Parenthesis are used five times in this writing, as well as five words with dashes. This punctuation is used to give extra information, like the age of ""twenty-one-year-old Rawedia Maria"" or about ""Passionate Cuban music (Which I adore to this day)."" When the author gives extra information, it gives the reader a sense of peace and makes him feel ""at home"", which is the topic of the memoir.",1.0,,,,,1.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
12346,5,In this memoir author makes the mood happy. One example is when they talk about all being a family and letting people stay. Another is when they are talking about the racism and other things but says how the neighbors have united. All in all the mood for the memoir was happy.,1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
13509,5,The mood created by the author in this memoir is being thankful. Narciso Rodriguez is thankful for his parents giving him a loving home in @LOCATION1. The author created a mood that the reader should be thankful for their parents. The sacrifice and love of anyones parents (like Rodriguez's) is what you should be most thankful for.,1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
1471,1,"Dear local newspaper, I think that computers defenetly help our society for many reasons. For example we can talk to friends on line. Not only that but then you can learn alot more about the paces you want to visit. Its also tru that you can gain more hand eye cordanation with those nifty devises. Read on to find out how you can talk to friends on the computer. You can talk friends on the computer by one of the most comon website facebook. @NUM1 people use facebook, thats @PERCENT1! Not only that but you can also meet new friends on the computer by talking about games or popular @CAPS1.V. shows. Wouldn'@CAPS1 it be nice to meet up with all of you old friends from school that you don'@CAPS1 ever see. My mom always says that that is how she stays close to her friends and that is the same with me. Do you want to learn about the far away places without breaking the bank? If you do then you should deffinetly search for some nice websites that explain culture and other details about other parts of the world. It's also true that you can learn a quick history lesson on some webpages. What if you are going on a trip but you don'@CAPS1 know were to then you could use the beloved internet. Read on to find out how the internet helps gain hand eye cordanation. You can gain hand eye cordanation by using the computer so many ways. For example you can practice typing up essays and other work projects. @PERCENT2 of people that have compters type faster than they write. Thats almost everyone. Not only that but don'@CAPS1 you think typing is faster than writing? Also you see the words that you are typing and you press with you hands. Thank you for reading my essay on why computers are benefiting our society. Just remembe we learn more every day from the computers. Also you can talk to friend. Lastly you can plan your trip. ",4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,22.0
3618,2,"Should the librari be censord on the books it has on the shelvs? I think it should be. There are many offensive books and thangs on the shelvs. I wouldnt want my kid or anybody els kid reading offensive books. So lets get rid of all the bad stuff or atleast filtyer it all.     I beleve any book, movie and magazines that have alot of profanity or bad pictures in them should be removed or not be able to be cheked out to a certion age. If they wana keep teh books on the shelves they should make it where you have to be in high school and have a permsion slip to get the books. Removing teh  books and thangs complitly @MONTH1 cause to much troubl so we should defntly make sure the kid is a certian age and has permsion.     I would not want my @NUM1 year old kid read a book with bad language in it. Kids cach on to that stuff and they will start talking like that and it would not be a good thing. There is alot going on in socaty now a days that badly influnce children. They do not need to read about how guys rob places and are crimanals. I think thats why we have so much of a probly to day becouse evry one sees it at a young age and they want to be lyk that wehn tehy get older but that is a very bad thing. They do not need books and movies that make it worse on them and make them think bad things are good. If we do not filter wat they do at a young age they will end up being hellins and outa of countral becouse they will think just becouse someone in a book or movie did it that its ok for them to do it but its not.     I would not wnat a young kid to read bad things. I say lets put a ge limit on them and mack our socity beeter and are kids to become beter adoults later on in ther life. We need to filter out the bad and put new in for our younger kids. If we don't who knows how theyl grow up to be the world could go to hell if we dont stop the kids from learning bad things. So lets get the fi,ltering satrted and save the world and our kids future.",3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
10310,4,"In this story “Winter Hibiscus” by Minfong Ho , the author concludes the story with, “When they came back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” In the beginning of the story that she was less confident and she failed the test.  But this one flower gave her hope and so next time she takes the test she’ll be better prepared. ",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
15383,6,"The builders of the Empire State building faced a @CAPS1 of @CAPS2 as they attempted to allow dirigibles to dock there. The largest problems the builders encountered were due to safety and actually mooring the dirigible itself. The hydrogen used within the dirigible was unsafe, as hydrogen is very flammable. If the hydrogen caught on fire, especially over a place as densely populated as New York City, many people would be harmed. Additionally, the builders were faced with the task of mooring the dirigible. Dirigibles were normally anchored with heavy lead weights. However, if one used those weights to anchor the dirigible above city streets, pedestrians below could potentially be injured. Actually allowing the dirigible to dock brought up another problem for the builders to address: if the dirigible was tethered to the mast on top of the Empire State Building, the dirigible would swings around and around the mast to wind. Ultimately, the builders were unable to address these issues and the Empire @CAPS3 Building is now used mainly as an observation deck and building.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
8981,4,"The author chose to end the story this way for several reasons. Some of the reasons is that it creates a feeling of hope in the reader, tells us we always have another chance and the importance of persistence. The ending paragraph creates a feeling of hope since it shows how everything will return and others will be another chance. The author chose to put this in the text since it creates a happy note to end on and give the reader happiness of knowing there is hope. Another reason the author chose to end the story with this paragraph is that it tells the reader that you always get another chance no matter what you do. The author wanted to impart this on the reader since it is an important lesson to know. The ending also tells the reader that persistance is very important in life and almost essential to live. The author shows this by talking about the snow melting, the geese returning and the flower blooming which are things that happen constantly and almost stop because they refuse to give up and die. Therefore, the author chose to end the story with this paragraph for several reasons. The author chose to end it this way since the paragraph gives a lot of hope to the reader and gives the idea of a second chance. The author also chose to end with this paragraph since it has several analogies to persistance which is vital in life.   ",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
12052,5,"In the memoir ""@PERSON1"" by @PERSON1 he describes the mood. The first thing is that the mood is love. For starters he says ""growing up in this envionment instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relative. Over here, he is saying that your friends can be your family or the people that you love. Secondly he says ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice. Right here, he is saying that he thanks his parents for the life they had given him. Finally, he says ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home. Here he is saying that ""he will never forget when he was living in a home with family, In conclusion @PERSON1 rodriguez describes the mood but also his childhood When he learned about family.",2.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
16592,6,"In the excerpt  ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, there are many obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced. The task of the building something on the Empire State Building that would allow dirigibles to dock there was a daring and dangerous job.There were many obstacles the builders faced. One obstacle was the winds. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" This would make building very difficult because everything would get blown around. Another obstacle was that ""The steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate this new situation."" That means the builders first had to make the building strong enough to hold the docking place before they could start building the docking place.These two obstacles that the builders faced made building the docking place much harder. It took much longer because they first had to make the frame of the building stronger. Also they had to watch the wind so that they would not get hurt.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
10130,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph to show that Saeng is not going to give up until she successfully passes the task he mother gives her.Saeng fails the test because, though she buys a beautiful plant it is much to expensive. “But how could you? All the seeds for this vegetable garden didn’t cost that much!” Saeng becomes very upset and realizes that she has failed her mother. Saeng still plants the winter hibiscus in the ground. “Left alone in the garden, Saeng dug out a hole and carefully lowered the “winter hibiscus” into it.” This shows that even though she had failed she wasn’t going to give up on the hibiscus because it represented her home. It was very special to her.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
15499,6,"The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there were mainly due to structeral and safty issues. According to paragraph @NUM1, ""A thousand foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame."" This problem required over sixty thousand dollares' worth of modifications to the buildings framework. Although structural issues were a problem, the safety of the pidestrians created a even bigger obstacle for the builders.Most dirigibles from outside the United States used hydrogen instead of helium which created huge fire hazzards ""When the German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by a fire in Lakehurst, New Jersey, on May 6, 1937, the owners of the Empire State Building realized how much worse that accident could have been if it had taken place above a densely populated area, such as downtown New York"" (paragraph @NUM2). Even though the exsisting law against airships flying too low over urban areas prevented dirigibles from mooring at the Empire State Building, the biggest obstacle of them all was nature itself. The dirigibles shells could be punctured by the winds constantly shifting due to violent air currents.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
10267,4,"In the story “Winter Hibiscus” the author, Minfong Ho, concludes the story with a statement that Saeng vowed silently to herself. Saeng says she will take the test again referring to the drivers test. Seeing the geese flying in a “V” and seeing the hibiscus gave Saeng a sense of remembrance to her homeland. Saeng misses he homeland. The author wanted it to seem to the @CAPS1 as if Saeng is starting to feel at home again. The hibiscus is just a symbol to Saeng telling her that It will be @CAPS2.K, and that it’s okay for her to miss Vietnam but also that it’s okay to have a new life, So Saeng, in the spring, will go take her drivers test again with a new attitude and will pass the test.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
3609,2,"Imagine your child or someone that is very close to you. He's only around @NUM1 old just starting to learn how to be an adult and take on responibliltys. He wants to try new things. He listeans to his friends talking about drinking alchol and how much fun is it. He thinks it sounds amazing to drink. He dosnt no something is bad about it or not. No one every told him. So he starts to drink an dlater died of alchol posing. Now, you dont want this to ever happen to someone who is very close to you. If people are to scared to talk about the bad things in life. Like sex, drugs, etc..Then they should make books and movies to show how bad these thing are. There should not be censorship in libraries. Some of you @MONTH1 say 'well there to young they cant hanndle these things yet.' @CAPS1 your opinon you should think of there maturity level, aslo they can learn from other peoples mistakes, and it would educate people.     How do you tell on someones maturity level? There are many ways to tell. If you talk to someone about sex and they start to laugh and make jokes then there not very mature. But, you cant asociate that every @NUM2 year old is immature. Many people @MONTH1 take this as a serious thing. Others @MONTH1 not but, they still will be able to see them in there own way. Putting censorship in libraries would not be a good idea.     Many topics in books, movies, music, magazines, etc.. @MONTH1 have inapropte things in them. Like sex, drugs, drinking, bad language. Should all these things be taken out on libraires and off the shevles? @CAPS1 a hard question to answer. But, what you can answer from that is it would allow people to learn from there mistakes. If theres a movie and a guy and he is doing drugs and later dies. People could assume that drugs kill you. But, what about the other thing? Its hard to show how its bad to say an offensive word to someone, that they herd on the radio. But, when they here that word or read about something or watch. They can ask about it and we can say that saing those things or doing them can be offensive.      Now, can you educate someone from letting the person listean, read , or watch about something offensive or etc..? It depends on the person. But, you can educate someone about the subject matter. No matter how offensive the topic is. We should teach people about them. If we dont, its bound to repeat it self. Say if we censor the holocaust becuase of how horifying it was. No one would no about it and we would most likely repeat the holocaust. Censoring certain things a library would not be that good of an idea.      Ceratin people can hanndle talking about certain subjects. Its not always a good thing to censor offensive subjects. We need to teach people about these thing to educate them, and also so they can learn on what has been done and not repeat it, also some people can handle these materials, they just need to have a high maturitly level. These are some reasons why there should not be censorship in libraries and other places",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
3019,2,"From many thoughts and arguments people disagree with the school libraries. The main reason is because of the books, magazines, ariticles, and internet that contains content very disturbing for children. Such content requires material as violence, drugs, and nudity. In this argument, parents do not like the fact that their kids have resources to uncensored content. Or perhaps the parents do not care about what their children have access to.        Today libraries are not focused on the materials that they have on their shelves. That is how children could get the idea in being a 'bad kid' in school. They think it is cool seeing someone else doing drugs, violence, or nudity. But if the libraries have censored content in the library, then kids would not enjoy it if they would have uncensored content. In the parents thoughts, uncensored content should be kept away from children.      The libraries should be more responsible with the content that they have on their shelves. They either do or do not know that they have offensive content in their library. They need to remove all offensive and uncensored content from their shelves for the children. It is not right for the kids to see any offensive or uncensored material.           Their are parents who have kids in school, who do not care about what they learn or what they do. Parents should be more concerned about what their kids are learning everyday. Then they can at least teach their childern about uncensored content.      Parents and libraries should be more responsible about the offensive content that the children could possibly have access to. Children should not see any of the content because it is not right for a child. The falt goes to the parents and the libraries. They should be aware of the material that the children are looking at",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
13118,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" by Narciso Rodriguez the mood is happy and warm. This is because of the strong and caring relationships talked about in the memoir. As stated ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" @CAPS1 the story that is what is talked about. In the story he talks about being aroud ""family"" people who arent blood realative; just that can make a person happier @CAPS2 the memoir make the reader happier because the author is writing about happy memories he'll never forget. Although it was simple the author put a lot of deep emotions that were portrayed in the story, which made the story has a deeper mood.",1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
6391,3,"The setting effected the cyclist by the rough roads, the cylist having a hard time pedaling over the roads. The snake, the cyclist got scared of the snake on his ride through the “town.” The fact he was running out of water and the water he found tasted like battery acid. The setting was very rough on the cyclist.",1.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
13051,5,"The mood created by the author, Narciso Rodriguez was calm and loving. @CAPS1 creates this mood by explaining a loving family, new friendships, and an overall welcoming feeling.To begin with, in paragraph Narciso Rodriguez states, ""Here, the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the backdrop to life in our warm home."" This quote creates a calm loving mood because it explains that the author enjoyed his childhood, and loved if family who loved him back. @CAPS1 again complements his family and the way @CAPS1 was raised in the first sentence in paragraph @NUM1, also creating a common loving mood.Next, at the end of paragraph @NUM1 Narciso Rodriguez explains the love @CAPS1 feels towards his friends when @CAPS1 states, ""... All of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship."" @CAPS1 again shows the love towards his friends in the beginning of paragraph @NUM3. Showing love towards his friends creates a calm loving mood.Lastly, the calm and loving mood was also created because of an overall welcoming feeling. In paragraph @NUM4, the author welcomes the reader into his past by speaking about his childhood home that @CAPS1 loved. Also in the last sentence in paragraph four @CAPS1 explains the people his parents help stating, ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family, knowing that they would do the same for us."" This quote explains welcoming people people creating the mood. Explaining a loving family, new friendships and an overall welcoming feeling create the calm and loving mood, created by the author.",2.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
12989,5,"The memoir Narciso Rodriguez by Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives, enholds a mood of happiness and warmth, which is described in several ways. Happiness serves as an apt description of the mood in the story, due to the narrator's constant reference to a joyful essence which fills her apartment house. ""Here, the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the backdrop to life in our warm house."" This represents how happiness transpires throughout their home, and how everybody can feel free to be whoever they want to be. Consequently, Narciso's house is a warm, happy environment. Another example which describes the mood in the memoir is how Narciso explains how there is always a friend or family member in the house. ""Growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relative."" This quote, spoken by Narciso, further explains how growing up surrounded by love and laughter and warmth, creates a positive influence that remains instilled in a person forever. This reflects how the mood of the story is happiness as well. Finally, a last example which concludes how the mood is described within the memoir is how the author illustrates the admiration that Narciso feels for his parents. He describes how these are the words to show his gratefulness toward his parents, and how he admires them both for leaving their hometown to raise a family. This contributes to how the mood of happiness exists among the memoirs content, and furthermore describes the mood that was created by the author.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
4420,2,"It is a prominent question of debate whether or not certain materials in libraries such as books, music, movies and magazines should be removed from the shelves if they are found offensive. Although there are materials that @MONTH1 me harmful to children, freedom of information is far more importiant than protection because censorship is unconstitutional, prevents readers from an impartial perspective, and in some cases hides pressing societal issues that are deemed improper by the censors.     The @CAPS1 @CAPS2 states that freedom of speech, religion and the press shall not be denied or abridged. In more general terms, the @CAPS1 @CAPS2 grants freedom of expression. Censorship is effectively unconstitutional. It prevents freedom of expression. Students and scholars alike cannot access all information that should be avaliable to them if not for censorship. Although private business and libraries can be permitted to censor because they have their own contracts that permit this, public libraries and schools are effectively breaching the constitution when they censor.     Censorship prevents a whole and complete perspective on an issue. Censors often ban particular books because of personal views of alleged 'immorality.' @CAPS5 a clear and complete access to all information, how can one make any valid conclusion about anything? If, for example, one wants to learn the difference between an agnostic philosophy and a deist one, but has no access to any agnostic books, which were banned by intolerant religious zealots, you cannot effectively learn anything. Every special interest group wants to ban a certain type of material. Author Katherine Paterson said that 'if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf--that work I abhor--then you have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' @CAPS6 this is true. If every special interest group deems it proper to censor material that is against their interests, there will be no material left. There will be no knoledge left. Withought knowledge, we as a human race are left in the dark.     Many books are banned that address great problems of society. @PERSON3's @CAPS7 @NUM1 addressed the growing problems of censorship and the dangers of technology. As the fireman @CAPS8 @PERSON4 burnt books, so ironically the novel was censored. Perhaps this is a ploy by the censors to defend theire special interest, that is censorship. They feel powerfull when they restrict other people's freedoms. A novel by @PERSON2, @CAPS9 @CAPS10, was banned. Apart from vulgar language in the book, @CAPS9 @CAPS10 also denounced free will and portrayed the US's brutal bombing of @LOCATION1 in @CAPS13 @CAPS14 @CAPS15. This book reveals much about human truth, yet it was banned. How will society ever change if any time a revolutionary book is written it is banned?     Censorship is a great problem. Although there are many works that are meaninglessly violent, brutal and cruel, no book or any other material should be censored. In public libraries and schools, censorship is blatently unconstitutional. Censorship prevents people from seeing the whole perspective, and censorship hinders societal change. Censorship must be denounced as a restriction on our inteligence and liberty.",6.0,5.0,5.0,6.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,26.0
6325,3,"In the story “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed limit,” the featurs of the setting had a great deal to do with the cyclist. The rodes were bumpy, windy, and many hills. As the effect of that the cyclist had to drink a lot of water. As the cyclist rode into the so called town he found nothing, as he says “I began to pump the old rusted water pump, but nothing came out except nasty blackish water.""",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
15700,6,"While constructing the mast to docs dirigibles to the Empire State Building, there were many obstacles that led to the end of this project. An inevitable obstacle was that most dirigibles were filled with extremely flamable hydrogen, that could be detrimental to the condensed New York City streets as well as the Empire State Building, if exploded. Also, wind on top of the building was out of there control, and with the violent wind currents, docking would be highly dangerous. ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself."" Although it would be possible to strap lead weights to the back end of the blimp, it would be unpractical and highly dangerous to the public. Dirigibles could not moor at the Empire State Building even if the docking station was completed because of an existing law that forbids airships flying too low over urban areas. ""The as yet unsolved problems of mooring airships to a fixed mast at such a height made it desirable to postpone to a later date the final installation of the landing gear. The obstacles that stood before the Empire State Building's mast were to great to optimistically believe the project could be finished. It was postponed and became obsolete with the invention of airplanes.",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
1759,1,"Dear @CAPS1, I believe that computers have a negative affect on peoples lives. Computers occupy a lot of people's time which could be used for other matters. The internet also contains alot of unappropriate content that children should not be viewing. But above all, there are too many petafiles online preying on young children. These are all ways that computers have a negative affect on peoples lives. Computers occupy so much valuable time that could be used for other, more important matters. The childhood obesity rate in america is climbing. There is no doubt that electronics, play a huge role in this event. For example my brother plays on the computer everyday, so barely goes outside. He has allowed the computer and the internet to occupy his life, leaving no room for anything else. Also there is alot of content. Ranging from a song to websites containing pornagraphy. most sites don't even alert you that by how you need to be @NUM1 or older to view the content, and very little acctually ask for proof. There are millions of sites containing such content. It really is a pressing matter and needs to be deal with. Above all else, there are millions of creeps on the internet, preying on children as a young teens. Its truly disgusting. There are millions of chat sites in which people can meet and. Petafiles go on these websites under an alias, pretending to be teens and children. Their motive, to lure young teens unto meeting them in a secure location, and to commit rape. Some victims are enough speak up but sadly, most are too afraid or ashamed to do so this is all made possible through the internet. For these reasons I say that computers have a negative effect computers lives because some positive but sadly cons outweight pros such as before mention occupation of time, content on the internet. I truly believe that the planet would be better with out computers.",5.0,6.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,23.0
3256,2,"I myself beleves that censorship in libraries should not be aloud. If their was to be any cersorship it should be from the parents of a child or if your not a child then you dont need censored. By censoring something as small as books, movies, and so on I think it will give people a fake sense of what really happens. Just because something isent censored doesnt mean it should be taken out of context eather.     Think of it like this if you walking down a street its not going be censor people will say bad words, show bad habits, and even go as far as seeing death or more. Being a kid who really never been censored from anything including books ive learned alot but I feel as if I went to a librarie to get a book and if censored or taken off the shelf then I will shown a fake world. Once again if life cant be censored then we shouldnt consor anything else.     A censored book, movie or whatever it @MONTH1 be could also determin how much someone could learn from it. People go to liraries to learn hard facts with proff and evadience and depending on the subject in witch their looking up.     This is some of meny reasons I think cendor in libraries shouldnt be aloud. Consorship should be chosen by who you are not by outher people. In the end we @MONTH1 never know whats better till we try.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
6994,3,In the essay rough road ahead the setting does effect the cyclist because he has been pedaling for so long and he is becoming dehydrated “I had been hitting my watter bottles pretty regularly. I was in the @LOCATION1”. Another reason the setting effects him is because he is starting to see mirages “A sandblasted picture of a boy pouring a refreshing glass of grape juice into his mouth could still be seen.,1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
9931,4,I believe the author ended the story with the “test” because it is a big part of Saeng’s life or part of her tradition.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
3156,2,"I am a citizen of the @LOCATION1 and I believe that the censorship on the material in libraries is not good but it could be better. It should be an age limit on certain books and magazines ect. in the library. Somethings younger children shouldn't be able to read because of the maturity level. I remember taking my little sister to the public library and she got a book and began to ask me some words that she shouldn't even be hearing about now.      On the other hand, those books @MONTH1 be needed. Some people need those types of books and magezines for research papers and things like that. Now I consider myself a young adult and I believe that other children my age could read about different things and know whats right from wrong. Its also up to the parent or gaurdian of the child , if you feel that you dont want your child to read anything thats not appropriate then go with them to the library. But then some children dont have a mature parent or gardian that would tell them what to read and what not so thats when the library should do something about the censorship on the books.     Well I jus wanted to write you this because like I stated before the censorship on the books, movies, music, magazines, ect. in the library is ok but it could be jus a little better. There should be a certain age when a child reads or see's certain things. But you can't just take all the books and things out the library that are not appropriate because some people actually need the books. Thats why I believe that it would help if the library had a age limit or made certain things for mature audiance only.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
4539,2,"Everyone is @CAPS1          @CAPS2 person is @CAPS1, this much we can agree on. So why then would people try to put a censorship on books, movies, magazines, and etc., as i pointed out before, we all are @CAPS1 so we all have @CAPS1 standards on what is bad and offensive to what is good.     When we remove a book from a library shelve for whatever reason we have to do so then others should have the same right to do so as they see fit. If  picked up a book on why @CAPS3 is the right religion and i am a @CAPS4 then more then likely i will find it offensive. Yet if i gave that same book to a @CAPS3, that person would mostly likely read that exact same book that the @CAPS4 read and find it not offensive at all. It all comes down to the veiws we all have about everything so why would you let one person or even a small comittee set standards on library censorship for they @MONTH1 feel one way while another comittee or person feels completly @CAPS1. Everyone is @CAPS1 and feels diferently about issuses. There is no way to make sure that @CAPS2 book in the library won't offend a single person.     The same issue can be applied to music, movies, magnazines and ect. No matter what we do, some one will be offended. For example, the plege of allegiance is something my school says everyday, yet some people, like a @ORGANIZATION1, find it offensive. All acrosss the nation people say it before school, a sportinh game, or ect., yet you don't see very many people objecting to that. I have obsereved that most people who find it offensive just ignore it so why can't we do the same for books, movies, magazines, and etc. that we @MONTH1 find offensive.     In conclusion, there really is no way to put a cencorship in libraries since no matter to tell what a person might or will find offensive. So why then can't we just not read what offends us, this really is the only way to keep from offending  people. For these reasons, I feel that there should not be a cencorship in libraries",4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
7379,3,"The setting of the essay greatly affected the cyclist. These settings discourage him, although he tries to keep hope. Seeing dry desert, hills begin to heighten, nothing man-made is in sight. These subconsciously affect the cyclist and his growth of thirst. To one point the cyclists original objective became invalidated for his thirst pangs and exhaustion.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
12208,5,"There are many moods in this memoir by Narciso Rodriguez. One of the moods are loving ""I learned here how to love."" @CAPS1 mood is caring ""my parents always kept their arms and their door opened to the many people who were considered family. And @CAPS1 mood was happiness ""Here, the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations"" That is the mood of this memoir.",1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
9754,4,"At the end of the essay “Winter Hibiscus” by @CAPS1 Ho, it ends in a positive manner. “When they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” The reason why I think that the author decided to put that there, was to show how Saeng felt about her country. So when the country that she is has spring again, she will take that test because that country reminds her of her original country in the spring. Which makes her feel like she is at home and she can at least take the test. Thats why the author put that sentence at the end of the essay.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
12452,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is very cool and funky. I say this not to make fun of anyone but to thank them. The author says that his parents unwittingly passed on their skills and love for cooking. This piece of evidence is located in paragraph two. The mood is described as joyous, giddy, excited, and elated. This is because the author is starting to figure out what it's like to have a ""family that isn't related by blood but by race and culture. This evidence is located in paragraph @NUM1. The authors parents invited refugees to stay with them until the got back on their feet. His/@CAPS1 parents did this so whenever they needed anything than they would be alright. This final piece of evidence is located in paragraph seven. These are pieces of evidence that describe the mood of the memoir. (And also of where they are located).",1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
12871,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is a happy mood, that's sort of calming. The author explains how the house was very comfortable for him. Narsico explains how his parents were caring and selfless all the time. I think that creates a very calming are caring mood. Also in paragraph @NUM1 it says ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice"" which again creates a caring mood.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
12702,5,"The mood created by this memoir is a relaxed caring kind of mood. Several parts of this work emphasize this mood. The author often writes about how he loves his parents for their selflesness. This emphasizes the mood, and he repeats it many times and the repetition helps build mood as well. A final thing that helps the mood is how he describes how everyone in his nieghborhood was kind to each other. In conclusion, there are many things in this work that emphasize a relaxed, caring mood.",2.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
9641,4,"The author concludes saeng vow in the story to show that saeng can and does have the ability to overcome obstacle. Saeng  feels like she is a failer. Her hibiscus represents courage to overcome her obstacle which is her driving test that she failed. The geese represent survial and to never give up, to keep trying your hardest to success.",1.0,,,,,1.0,0.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,3.0
7204,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist because they change the cyclist’s mood towards the rider. For example, in the essay “Rough Road Ahead;Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” it states, ""There was no one in sight, not a building, car, or sructure of any kind. I began breaking the ride clan into distances I could see on the horizon” The cyclist had to do this because they were having trouble riding since they were thirsty and the ride was very boring. This makes the ride seem larges so it also makes it harder to ride. Also in the essay it states, ""One ramshackle shed, several rusty pumps” This affeted the cyclist because after seeing this and later realizing he could’t drink the water, he was more thirsty since he was running out of water. When the cyclist notices the Welch‘s grape juice factory, he bacames determined to get there. In conclusion, the cyclist in the essay “Rough Road Ahead"" by Joe Kurmaskie, the cyclist mood towards the ride is strongly affected by the setting’s features.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
6000,3,"“Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” had a  rough setting between harzardous things and the death defying heat. The cyclist had to endure the pain of dehydration and determination. He had been given bad directions that almost caused him his life. He was travelling through a desert and claimed the temperature was @NUM1.Also, the cyclist had to ration his water because it was ghost towns in which our character passed through. He used nature skills he’d once learned and began to suck on pebbles which take the mind off thirst and uses saliva to help refresh your throat. Throughout his adventure everything kept this young man from getting water and to whenever there was water any faster. He had survived and wouldn’t ever take shortcuts again",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
15322,6,"The excerpt of The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted reveals that the architects of the Empire State faced a number of obstacles. Not only was the construction of the building now competive, but its expectations were unrealistic. The idea for such a masterpiece of a building held a number of potential problems that its architects not very competitive. As the work-in-progress of the Chrysler building grew, the Empire State Building strived to be taller. In order to achieve greater heights, its architects suggested and addition of a mooring mast, to not only make the building the tallest, but to add to its purpose. The addition of a mooring mast would require a lot of planning, though. If a giant steel framed balloon were to dock at the top of the building as is, it could dangerously shake the foundation of the building, so the frame of the building had to be rebuilt much stronger. Also, the architects didn't realized the danger of docking dirigibles. Dirigibles, or blimps, were fueled by hydrogen, which is very flammable, and proved a threat to the thousands of people living below.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
3493,2,"I think books that have nudity, curse words, or gang related violence should be put in either a adult shelf or taken off for good. They show kids stuff they shouldnt see or do when they get older. They just arent appropriate. No childeren should know about drugs, sex, or epspecially gang violence. Its stuff they should never even find out about. So i think we should take them books off the shelf, if people want to read them they can go buy themselves a copy.",1.0,1.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
6476,3,"The setting effects the cyclist in many ways. And following old timers advice wasn't too smart of him. In that essay he was headed to the Yosemite National Park, he had a map to follow and he trusted himself, he a cyclist he knows his way around. But came around a couple of men who told him a shortcut. He trusted them which he shouldn't have and he was on his way. The setting was rough. He was riding through a California desert; which was probably way too not, and he was looking water. The only thing that he found tasted live battery and so that no good for him. It was a flat land, than rolling hills. The next town would have been in the @NUM1 miles. This cyclist was hilling himself. While riding along these lands there was more in sight, and no building or cars it was line a dead road. Those old men had him through neck and been, once he made it to the next town he knew with those conditions",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
15140,6,"The obstacles the @CAPS1 of the Empire State Building faced while attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there was the safety of the people below. Also As it says in @CAPS2 @NUM1 ""existing law against airships flying to low over urban areas."" Another main reason is in @CAPS2 @NUM2. The wind currents were violently shifting.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
15853,6,The obsticals that the builders face in attempting to allow dirigibles dock at the Empire State Building are the law to fly that low to buildings. They also face structural problems in the building to be able to hold a dirigible. They also could not keep the dirigibles from moving because of the wind. They faced safty ishuse because of some dirigibles are filled with hydrogen and it is highly flamable. They did not want to have a fire over a densely populated area. They did not want what happen to the German dirigible Hindenburg in New Jersey to happen in down town New York. Dirigible have never dock there and never will because it is unsafe.,2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
7396,3,"In ‘Rough Road Ahead” by Joe Kurmaskie the main character faces a lot of trouble. First people give him the wrong directions. But, worst of all he has to travel a lot of mile on a bike through extreme temperatures. Going up and down hills and pedaling really hard. He doesn’t even have any cool water. As the character says, “…followed by brackish water feeling somewhere in the neighborhood of two hundred degrees (kurmaskie @NUM1). That kind of water didn’t help him either. It didn’t quench his thirst because it was so hot, he said it tasted like battery acid. But, finally he worked up his confidence and kept pedalig till he found a fish camp that had a bathroom with a sink that had cool water. Then he headed off to Yosemite and didn’t take anyone’s advice.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
12378,5,"In the memoir, the author tells us all about his family and friends and his backround. He tells us that the way he grew up effected him all his life. He loved his parents and relatives and friends and his home. He even loved his Cuban heritage. In this entire memoir there is nothing but happiness and good attitude from the author. He lets us know that home is where the heart is and that he would'nt trade his childhood life for anything.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
8950,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because it has everything together. One way it ties everything together is by taking what had happen in the beginning and tieing it in with why she had bought the flower in the first place. Also it ties Saeng's old memories from Vietnam to her new way of life in the United States. The story states ""carefully Saeng dicked it up and smilled. She closed her eyes and breathed in, deeply. the familiar programe filled her lungs."" this is now the flower she found in the flower shop gave her memories from Vietnam. this is why the author concludes the story with that paragraph.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
15934,6,The obstacles that the architects of the Empire State Building faced was harsh. They had to figure out how they were going to get the dirigibles to land on the mooring mast. A another problem was that the government was getting unpaticent. What made thing worse was Al smith was being sneaky and unturful. He lied about how high the actulty hieght is. He lied about how he will fix the problems the was with the mooring mast. They were also afraid that a dirigible will blowup on the mooring mast like the @CAPS1. So they just put it aside and made over time the world's highest soda fountain and tea garden for the use by the sightseers.,0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
7573,3,"The feature of the setting affect the cyclist in many ways. It it was a straight road, it would be smooth sailing. If the road was bumpy, he’d jump up and down a little. If he was riding in the woods, it would be cool and a little dark. If he was riding in the desert, it would be very hot and bright.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
12609,5,"The mood created in the memoir, ""Narciso Rodriguez From, Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives,"" by the auther is all about love and happiness. The memoir is mostly about family and childhood memories. It expresses the authors feelings or love, @CAPS1 the reader feels it to. The author didn't have many material things growing up, or a big house, but there was great memories of love and warmth.The many different memories in the this memoir gave a mood of love and happiness. First of all, it says in paragraph @NUM1, ""... All of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship."" The author lived in a neighborhood with many different cultures, but they put their backgrounds aside and were able to great friends. Also, the memoir says in paragraph @NUM2, ""My parents always their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family..."" This shows that their family was very inviting. They were always having guests, and loved a lot of people and considered them family. The author also says in paragraph @NUM3, ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" @CAPS1, the author didn't have a big home but the memories, and environment his parents created ***** what he really remembers.In conclusion, from reading this memoir, you can really feel the loving mood from all of the authors amazing childhood memories, to his great home environment. The author really did a great job of creating a mood of love, and helping the reader feel it.",4.0,,,,,4.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
12722,5,"In this memoir it talks about what the true meaning of selflessness and a home really is. At the beginning of this memoir they talk about how their parents knew the struggles of a life. And would invite people into their home until they got back on their feet. It was at least five years until the parents could afford a decent sized house.Even though his parents left Cuba they still made an effort to keep all their Cuban traditions alive. His parents loved to cook and taught Narciso how to. They also play traditional Cuban music. Also, they taught him to be selfless. They would invite people over even if they weren't the same race because it didn't matter to them.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
10133,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because he’s saying that once winter and spring’s over and the hibiscus is budding, then I’ll start over again and try again. The author is saying saeng can’t wait till spring so she can plant her own little garden. This is why I think the author concludes the story with this paragraph.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,1.0
15579,6,"The lack of the landing area. Also the body of the dirigible can Swing Is another obstacle that the Empire State Building faced. The other obstacle they faced, ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" The dirigibles were flying to low over the urban areas and that is a law against airships. The @ORGANIZATION2 from Los Angeles could not get close enuff to tie up the dirigible do to the wind. Alot went wrong with transportation of Passengers so they stoped doing that.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
15328,6,"There are afew obstacles the builders had. to face in this project. One of them was was building the Empire State Building taller than the Chrysler building. The architect building of the Chrysler building made it 46 ft taller. When this was done the builder needed to make the Empire State building taller, but make it something ""as mundane as a water tank"" (@NUM1 ¶ Al Smith) Another example was trying to make it a stop for dirigibles. These things could go up two @NUM2 miles per hour. They were as long a 1 thousand ft. That would take up @NUM3 blocks New York City. They didn't have good landing area. A third obstacle they faced was nature. The wind was always blowing. No matter what they need hangin dirigibles over a city of innocent people was very dangerous.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
694,1,"Dear @LOCATION1, I believe that computers benefit society very much. I believe so fo various reasons that I will state through out this passage. Although sometimes people spend too much time on computer it doesn't mean computers are bad for society it just means people need to learn to spend their time wisely. Overall I think computers have a positive effect on society. One reason I am for computers is because they are a huge advancement in technology. They are able to make everyday life easier. They allow you to store information. Learn about many places, and communicate with friends and family. For one device to do all that is amazing! Also if we can make something like computers imagine all the other possibilities of technology advancements. Computers are only the start of it all! Anouther reason why I believe computers greatly benifit society is because they provide entertainment. You can watch movies on your computer, and download fun games. There is hardly anything you can't do on a computer. If it is cold outside or raining you can still entertain yourself with just a computer. Computers are very great to have around. Now anyone who thinks people spend too much time on their computer and that computers are bad for society is just wrong. I think those people are wrong because a computer can't force you to spend more time on it. It's your own fault if you choose to use your computer too much. You always have the choice to go outside and take a walk. Computers are only wrong if you choose to use them wrong, like the expression ""guns don't kill people, people do."" In conclusion I believe computers are a great thing to have espicially in this modern society. Computer are one of the greates advancements in technology and they benifit society as well. So if you are ever wondering weather or not to buy a computer I suggest you get one!",4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,22.0
15587,6,"In the excerpt from @ORGANIZATION2's The Mooring Mast, the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in allowing dirigibles to dock there. For example, ""the lack of a suitable landing area."" Architects cannot just drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's roof. The building would have had an extreme amount of pressure on it. In addition, along with the pressure, the dirigibles would ""add stress to the building's frame."" The builders needed to modify and strengthen the steel frame of the Empire State Building. This also cost a great deal of money. Furthermore, ""the greatest reason was safety."" The slightest mistake in building the mast, could affect every person in the building. In order to allow dirigibles to dock there, the builders needed to be aware of all the citizens surrounding the building. All in all, these obstacles determined the fate of the mast.",1.0,,,,,1.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
9018,4,"The author concluded the story with this paragraph he/she wanted to compare Saeng life with the plant. For example, in the story Saeng had just failed her driving test and then she saw a plant the reminded her of homeland. From the flower shop to the house, she is comparing her home land to the flower which shows how she relates to it. So the concluding paragraph shows how when the hibiscus is budding and starts a new phase she will too and go for her drivers license.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
394,1,"I think that computers are a good thing to have because most are portable, there fun to have, and you could research a lot of thing on them. Laptops are cary round computurs. They are very convient to have. You could bring them anywhere you would like. Many people have laptops in their home or with them. There fun to have because you could play many games on your free time with them too. Another thing you could do is make videos. Last but not least you could just enjoy it. You could research a lot of things on them. Internet is a very succesful product. That means you could use it for your home work if you need help. Anthor thing is that you could type up essays that you have to do for work and or school. I think computers are good to have because most are portable, there fun to have, and you could research a lot of things on them.",3.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
3664,2,"To @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @MONTH1 @CAPS3:     I am writing to you today concerning cencorship in libraries.  I have had a select few instances throughout my life where I have read a book or magazine that to some @MONTH1 seem offensive and to others not at all.  However, I do have my own view point on the situation and I feel that @CAPS2 is my duty to inform you that I feel offensive books, magazines, etc., should be removed from the shelves.     Everyone has grown up and been taught different values and morals that are important to them. They stand for these values, but at the same time respect that other people have the right to believe differently than they do.  With the world the way @CAPS2 is now, violence can errupt from the simplest of things.  Putting books on public shelves for the public to read, can very easily cause outbursts and debates between people who have opposite opinions.  Offensive books and magazines put out for the public is asking for something bad to be a result.     My suggestion to you is to remove these offensive books.  This will create a safe and happy envioronment for all who visit public libraries,and other public places.  @CAPS2 will create fewer arguments between adults and set an example for younger children who are observing their parents behaviors.  Children follow in their parents' footsteps.  Observing bad behaviors from the parents due to offensive books does not teach the child how to act in a responsible way if they were put in this postion.  When our children grow up, we want them to beahve in a responsible way.  Offensive books not being put on shelves will hopefully create a healthful environment for appropriate behavior.     As a student, I want to grow up in a world that has people who are resepectful, happy, and responsible. I want people to get along with each other.  I feel that taking offensive books off shelves will help with this somewhat peaceful world I would like to live in.  Violence can be created through anything, and I feel that offensive books should be the last thing added to that.  Without offensive books for the public to read, will create a better environment for the people living today.",4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
3073,2,"What are we hiding from? Is personal expression really that bad? Questions such as these come to mind when the topic of censorship in libraries arises. In my own personal opinion I believe forbidding works of art from libraries is the same as destroying the people @CAPS1 created them. Censorship in general is a way to hide reality and sugar coat the struggles within life itself. One can not learn unless given the oppurtunity to face the problems in society and the world. By banning certain pieces, the world destroys an opportunity to expand the knowledge of every individual.      With the removal of materials such as books and music, libraries ruin the time spent and heart that the creators have placed trustfully within them. Although most people use these materials strictly for entertainment, the writers and musicians created them for self expression and to show their pain and struggles. It could even be said that expression such as this is theraputic for these specific individuals. How would you react if your form of art was dibbed unsuitable for a public audience? Would you be hurt and taken back? Many artists probably feel that they are being placed in a state of seclusion and hatred. With the creation of art there is always a deeper meaning behind them. The biggest question in my eyes is, ' @CAPS1 deems that material as unsuitable for libraries'? What can be so wrong with specific material that we must take it away from everyone? At the pace our world is going today their will be no individualism left within the next fifty years. If people are not even allowed to listen to specific types of music, sooner or later people won't be able to wear certain types of clothes or even dye their hair a different color. The human population's greatest gift is their ability to be different. If our society cannot even handle freedom of expression through art, how can it handle any other type?     Libraries are created as a place to expand knowledge. If materials are censored how can anyone learn? Every individual has their own way of thinking and interpreting subjects. A book seen as entertainment and down-time reading to one person @MONTH1 be the very thing that strikes a world changing idea in the mind of another. A human's greatest idea comes strictly from the knowledge they have accumulated throughout their life time and off of their interests. If certain forms of art are censored individuals will never be able to find that form of interest in certain subjects. Everyone will strictly be forced to believe and learn the same things, restricting the world from the magical ideas one man could have formed with the information obtained from the art that had been censored. In a discussion based class I previously took, we read an article discussing the @ORGANIZATION1's decision to ban any information related to the loss of the @CAPS2 @CAPS3 and the terrible things their society had done in their attempt of complete succesion from the @LOCATION1. Through ideas such as this, you are not only taking knowledge, but also implanting lies into the heads of the next generation. In that specific situation in the @ORGANIZATION1 it created a hatred and false sense of the @CAPS4 in the childrens' eyes. How can one specifically influence the beliefs of a child @CAPS1 is only @NUM1 or @NUM2 years old based off of their personal selfish beliefs? Through censorship we are destroying the truth and knowledge that each individual deserves if they are determined to find it.      The biggest thing about censorship is the cover up of reality. Do libraries think if they do not publically display a controlversial topic no one will know about it? Knowledge is all around us. No one needs a book to tell you our world is not perfect. For all we know, a book censored could have saved millions of lives. I cannot fully grasp the concept in my head of hiding materials from the public. There will soon come a time where expression at all will be censored. If we are getting rid of art should we remove people too? I can relate censoring books to censoring people based on my own personal experience. A teacher once told me that I would not ever achieve my career, because I had piercings. Opinions such as these could kill a person's dreams. I have known that I wanted to be a lawyer since I was seven years old and have been working to better my education based on my goals. How can you tell someone that they are not good enough based on your specific beliefs? There will always be something in the world you do not like. Each library @MONTH1 decided to censor a different type of art from their individual location. Eventually the world will have no art left, because those few people chose that it was not suitable for everyone. I can almost guarentee that most individuals have lived through worse experiences than what are being covered up. The world cannot be sugar coated or portrayed as perfect, because that is not lfe. Everyone will struggle at some point and its works of art that really get us through it. Sometimes we relate to them or in my case art such as music is what makes me feel better when I am hurt. The pain will always be there. Going through reality and the struggles is what makes each individual @CAPS1 they are. Censorship in libraries will not hide anything from the public, it will just destroy an oppurtunity to grow.     Censorship in libraries is what will destroy our world. No individual can say that material is not suited for the public, because they are not the public. Every person poses their own opinions on life. By banning these works of art you are banning individuality as a whole. If things like this continue our planet will become mindless zombies will no personal opinions. Libraries will be taking knowledge from everyone and ruin the chances for greatness for many people. There is no true way to hide reality from the world. Let people display their feelings through their art and share it with the world. The struggles of one person @MONTH1 be what saves another and allows the ideals of the world as a whole to grow",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
7046,3,The features of the setting in this story gives the cyclist determination. Since the desert,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
7317,3,"In the essay “Rough Road Ahead: Do not exceed posted speed limit” the cyclist is on a journey to Yosemite National Park and stops for advice on a quicker route. When he asks the old men he says, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since carter was in office.” Along with using their advice he faces abandoned ghost towns that they said were thriving spots. The cyclist overcomes the rolling hills of terrain and mirages and the heat of a day in June in the California in deserts. Finally he sees bait and tack shop and when he sees that the men who own the place are older than the other guys he just stares at them in all. Based on the quote you can infer that the cyclist will ignore their advice about having the best map. ",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
12710,5,"In ""Narciso Rodriguez"" by Narciso Rodriguez, the mood created by the author in the memoir is grateful. Narciso is thankful for his parents support and love. When he talks about how he feels about his parents, he says ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice"" (Rodriguez, p. @NUM1). The words ""grateful for their love and sacrifice"" demonstrates that through his whole life they were there for him. They didnt just tell her what to do, they showed her. When he talks about the @NUM2 lessons he has learned from his parents, he says ""They showed me with their lives, and these teachings have been the basis of my life"" (Rodriguez, p. @NUM1). The words ""basis of my life"" demonstrates that they taught him how to live (the essentials to living).  They also showed him the meaning of family. He doesn't just think family is blood related, ""It was here when I learned the real definition of ""family"""" (Rodriguez, p. @NUM4). The words ""definition of family"" demonstrates that he is thankful for them teaching him what family means to them. In conclusion, the mood of this passage is grateful. ",3.0,,,,,4.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
15452,6,In the excerpt the builders of the empire state building faced many obstacles. The builders did not think of what would happen to the dirigibles if something went wrong. Also on how tall they are makeing the empire state building.The first obstacle the builder faced in building the empire state building was what if something happened to the dirigibles. For example what if the dirigibles are highly flamible like the Hindenburg. The second obsticle the builders faced was on how tall they made it because of how tall it was the wind current was very strong.In the excerpt the builders of the empire state building faced many obstacles. They tried to over come them but there were to many.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
12605,5,"The, mood created by Narciso Rodriguez is very @CAPS1 and happy. In paragraph @NUM1 nothing really happens so there is no real feeling. About half way through the @NUM2 paragraph was when the memoir started to get very @CAPS1. It is really @CAPS1 because you realize that he can turn a New Jersey apartment into a traditional Cuban home. It says in paragraph @NUM3 that they are neighborhood was made up of, ""Spanish, Cuban and Italian immigrants at a time when overt racism was the norm and there was segregation."" It is really @CAPS2 that those cultures could be in a friendly neighborhood during those times. In paragraphs @NUM4 and @DATE1 when Narciso Rodriguez starts to thank his parents it feels as if you were inside that house and your having dinner with their family. Overall, the memoir about turning a New Jersey three-room apartment into a traditional Cuban home was a very @CAPS1 and @CAPS2 story throughout the entire memoir.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
1490,1,"Dear local newspaper, The effects Computers have on people is that people realie on them and thats not good because they have less time exercising, enjoying nature, and interacting with family and friends. First of all, having less time exercising is not good because @NUM1 out of @NUM2 people ent up fighting obesscicley. ""You don't want to be one of those people trust me"" said @PERSON1. Second, enjoying nature is a good thing to do instead of playing with a computer because you get your daily dose of air by enjoying nature. ""You also have a lot of fun"" said @LOCATION1. Lastly, interacting with family and friends is fun and who doesn't love that. ""Spending time with the family is fun cause you get to go places,"" said @PERSON3. ""Who doesn't love going out and spending time with friends on the weekends,"" said @PERSON2. Those are my reasons why the effects computers have on people are not good.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
9928,4,"The author includes the paragraph, ""when they come back...then I will take that test again,"" to show that hibiscus is a symbol of time. Saeng uses the hibiscus to measure the amount of time there will be until she takes her test again.  The hibiscus also symbolizes the power to get through struggling (stay strong). Saeng had trouble with her test, but the hibiscus is there to help push her through it to prepare her for the next test. The hibiscus also helps Saeng's mother push through her hard time of seeing her daughter sad from not succeeding on the test. The plant helps the mother try and stay positive and it also helps the mother by trying to do the right thing for her daughter. In the story. the mother decides to plant the hibiscus in the garden to make her daughter happy. The hibiscus shows strong symbolism and it helps Saeng and her mother stay strong through out their struggles. ",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
12743,5,"The author does an excellent job for creating many moods in this memoir. One of the moods, is love. Love is a mood in this memoir because @PERSON1's parents took ten people who needed somewhere to stay, because they know that those people would do the same thing for them. Another example of love is when @PERSON1 says in paragraph @NUM1, ""they came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life."" The memoir also makes one feel very grateful for what they have, which, is another mood. It does this by having the author point out how little his house was, and how his parents did everything they could to give them a better life. It really makes one look back, and see how much their parents have done for them.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
6419,3,"As the cyclist continues on his ride, changes begin to occur in the surroundings, which ultimately affects the cyclist’s attitude. When first starting out on his journey to Yosemite, the cyclist started out that morning, “with strong legs and a smile on my face”. He had received information from a few of the older locals that would help to cut the amount of time it took to arrive at Yosemite National Park. However, as he was riding, the cyclist realized that perhaps the older men’s travel advice was a little out dated. with barely any water left to hydrate himself, and being surrounded by nothing but more road and desert, the cyclist couldn’t help but laugh. “It was a sad, hopeless laugh, mind you, but at least I still had the energy to feel sorry for myself. “At this point, the cyclist was mad at himself for not just using the map that he had brought with him instead of listening to the locals. Although the cyclist remained determined to find water, he had begun to lose hope when he suddenly came across a bait store. Here he was able to rehydrate himself, and with his renewed spirit, continued on his journey, this time using his map.",2.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
10428,4,"In the story ""Winter Hibiscus"" the girl Saeng @CAPS1 the drivers test ""I-I failed the test"" said Saeng. She had bought a hibiscus because the flower remined her of some of the memories from home and the hibiscus she had at herhouse. at the end she says that she will retake the test when the geese come back, the snow has melted and the hibiscus is budding. She does this I think because she needs time to just think things through to just remember back home and to make a hibiscus garden. The hibiscus in this story is just like Saeng. They both did something wrong or @CAPS1 something Saeng failed the test and the hibiscus was constrited to a pot. But they both are going to change the bad thing..",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
9342,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because he wanted to convey a sense of determination of Saeng wanting to comput what she started. She had failed the drivers test and is very disappointed, for example, she starts to cry and has “tear stains and puffy eyes” as she remembers her homeland in Vietnam, her life, her memories, her family etc. She can relate to the geese that migrate during the winter and return again, an as new begginings start in the spring, so would she. A fresh start like the blossoming hibiscus. A fresh start with the drivers test.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
12100,5,"In 1956 Narciso Rodriguez's parents arrived in the united states and bought a @NUM1 room apartment. In 1961 Narciso was born and @CAPS1 began his life. In this story Narciso describes his childhood. The home was very likely, it was a traditional cuban home that consisted of a kitchen that was the heart of the home. Both of his parents loved to cook and listened to cuban music. Narciso says ""The passionate cuban music filled the air, mixing with The aromas of the kitchen."" @CAPS1 also got a good sense of family. and it was not just those who were related to you but also those who cared for you. Although people were different (customs or culture's) they still all came together. People often came to Narciso's home and let them stay while getting back to life because they believed in doing so for one another. Narciso was extremely grateful to his parents for their love and sacrifice. They taught narciso about the true meaning of love and family they also created a home with memories @CAPS1 will never forget.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
12928,5,"In the memoir the mood created by the author I think was more of a serious, informative, and uplifting mood. The reason for why I think this is that the way his lifestyle is described as a happy and enjoyable life of also being able to talk about some serious topics like his culture and the diversity of the cultures of the poeple that live on the street. Also by how he feels so confortable with all the people that are in his apartment building and all the people that come to his house for dinner to call them family.",2.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
9831,4,"The author @PERSON1, concludes the story ’’Winter Hibiscus with that paragraph to show Saeng starting over’’… In the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding…@CAPS1 to her life, is that she is starting fresh in a way. Although she @MONTH1 miss her old life, her grandmother, the well, and the fine toothed comb, She is making on effort and ’’take that test again…’’ By relating the test she shows that she is not ready to give in to the ’’ @CAPS2 of loss.’’ and to her grief.     ",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
3431,2,"Every book has a meaning or message that all should know about. Taking a book away from a library shelf can decrease of knowledge from someone that might need that information. Just because a book @MONTH1 have certain views that can be offensive does not mean it should not be allowed on a shelf. A book should not be discriminated by what the contets @MONTH1 have source of a reader. Positive and negative books should all be allowed on shelve for any whom that have an intrested.          As for music and movies that could be place in the same catogoery can be reasonable. Its really not that neccasary to be place in a library because its a place known for peace and quite and relaxation. If music or movies become a hazard then it should not be welcome in the library. Positive side music and movie has a way for some that comfort while having a good book at hand. It is understandable to have a little tone in the with some knowledge within the eyes in a book.      Magazine is another non neccasary object that is place in the library. A magazine can have a mixture of good and negative thing obtain in it. Not all magazine have something that can be use to educate. Most magazine are known for entertainment and update on well known people around the globe. Magazines should be removed from the library.                      The library should be an experience of a learning envirnment and only materials that will be a good help instead entertainment for pleasure. Remove a book from a shelf is like decrease from knowledge that could have been known. As to remove books should not be allowed no matter how or what the content of the book @MONTH1 be. As for music, movies, and magazines should be a limited for usuage in the library.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
9949,4,I belive that the author conclude the story with this because he is saying that she will keep trying and will not give up and will keep on trying. I say this because she just moved to america from Vietnam and is having a hard time adjusting to life in america. I think the geese represent something that is always  changing their surroundings and when they come she is going to fly again to get her licence.  ,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
1260,1,"Dear local newspaper, @CAPS1 name is @CAPS2 @CAPS3 @CAPS4 in the @NUM1 grade in @CAPS5 @CAPS6 In @LOCATION1. I'm writing to you because I heard that more and more people use computer, but not everyone agrees that this benefits society. In @CAPS1 opinion I think it benfit society. If you keep reading I will fell why it benif society. @CAPS1 first reason that computer have a positive effect on people. For example, when I see @CAPS1 older brother go on the computer he look much smarter on it. That @NUM2 out of @NUM3 member of @CAPS1 family learn thing from the computer. @CAPS1 second reason that it teach hand eye coordination. For example, when I play games in the computer @CAPS1 hand are the ones doing every thing for me. (@PERSON1 example is that we I wacth the game @CAPS1 hand are roating) @CAPS7 @NUM4 of @NUM3 of human play games in the computer and let their hand do everything. @CAPS1 third reason that it give people the ability to learn. For example, when I was using the computer use too teach so much that I'm go on most of the time. @NUM6 of @NUM3 student study in computers and they learn about thing that they never knew. Also they have the ability learn more on the computer. Some one might say people are spending too much time on their computer. However, I said that computer help people learn about thing that happen in the word. For example, they could larn about the war that going on and how people are risking their life for this cause. In conclusion, In @CAPS1 opinion it benefit society. Computer have a positive effet, I theach hand eye, and it give people the ability to learn. I think you should put all you support in the problem.",3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
15248,6,"The obstacles that the builders of the Empire State building faced in attempting to allow dirt dribbles to dock there was, if they dropped the mooring mast on the top of the building they would have strengthened the frame because of the wind pressure, and pressure from the single cable. Also most dirigibles from out of state were highly flammable because they used hydrogen rather than helium. Another problem was that New York is a highly populated city and they did not want to take the risk of having something fall from the top of the building on to citizens down below. The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature. The violent winds were constantly shifting due to the violent currents. Even if that could get the dirigibles tied down the back would be flying around. They also suggest using lead weights to hold it down, but if they fell the pedestrians on the street would be in great danger. The last obstacle faced with the fact that there was a law about airships flying to low over urban areas.",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
15170,6,"By attempting to construct a mast on the Empire State Building, builders encountered all sorts of problems. The purpose of this mast was to allow dirigibles, or blimps, to dock. Many of these problems however, were the effect of the dirigible itself. In paragraph thirteen, line @NUM1, the author talks about some of the dangers of the dirigible, ""Most dirigibles... used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" Another obstacle is location. It was thought to be very unsafe because if a blimp caught fire it would land in the middle of New York City, not some remote cornfield And finally, the winds changed frequently that high up. It was an unwise decision to dock at this area if the dirigible would be blown around the building.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
1771,1,"Computers, a @LOCATION1 topic if you ask me. Sure they arnt very good for you dosn't mean if you use it correctly then it can be a souce of life. Computers are helpful in many ways, they can be an information post. The social networks can help your kids get more interactive with the world. During school kids have projects and without computers. Read on as I will explain in details. Computers, as you know, are one of the worlds greatest information posts. @NUM1 out of ten people survayed said that the computers are a value of everyday life, The earthquake in haiti is recovalng now, but half the world wouldnt know that with out computers so have a heart, and dont take away the most valued info in the world. Secondly, what would you say if I told, you that kids are more socialy retarded than ever! Well its true. Over @NUM2 of the worlds people rely on intractive websites to comunicate with each other. Fact, children have more friends over the internet then ever. You dont want to be the @LOCATION1 in all this do yours ar know as the person who kept kids from living? I dont think so. Lastly, all people in school use computers to do projects, for instance @PERSON2 had horrible hand writing and this was the bigest project of the year. So he turned his computer to type it, he gets on at. But what if there was (@CAPS1) computer! @PERSON2 would have gotten a @CAPS2 - for the project. In fact teachers @CAPS3 wear tell kids to type hw/projects. @PERSON1 says ""@CAPS3 year kids pass my class by typing and if they then they would all flunk!"" @CAPS4 got the point but more importantly do you?! To sumit all up for those of you lazy enough to not read there story essay. Computers are used for everyday needs such as finding out information. Makeing friends, or doing projects. So are you gonna be the person who sits back and lets that happen or are you going to get up and stop the maddness once and for all. Its you choice but think of the socity retarded, dumb kids that fail the grade @CAPS3 year.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
12046,5,"The mood that was set in the excerpt Narciso Rodriguez by Narciso Rodriguez the mood that was created, by the author was to reflect on your life and to relive the great expierences that the author has gone through in his mind. It was just to think of all the great times the author had with your family.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
14936,6,"During the construction of the mooring mast atop the Empire State Building the builders faced several obstacles. The greatest obstacle was @CAPS1 Nature. The winds at this height are shifting to frequently causing the dirigible to be tossed around the mast, making it unsafe to board. Another obstacle was how they weighed dirigibles down with lead weights. Having lead weights at this height was risky because they could plummet down upon the people below. The third obstacle was a law against the airships flying too low in urban areas. This made it impossible for any dirigible to dock or even come near the Empire State Building. These obstacles forced the builders to shelf the mooring mast construction.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
1591,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, @CAPS1 has come to my attention that you have asked people to tell their opinions on the effects computers have on people. In my opinion computers do not have a good effect. The reason I think that is because kids are on the computer instead of doing their homework, people do not exercise as much because they are always on the computer and they do not spend as much time with their family and friends, @CAPS2 are many kids that go on the computer all night and never get to doing their homework. I read an article that said, ""Computers are the number one problem for kids not doing their homework."" People get @CAPS4 distracted on the computer that they never end up doing anything else. Eight out of ten kids say that they sometimes don't do their homework because they get distracted on the computer. I interviewed a student in the @NUM1 grade and she said, ""@CAPS3 class inastly gets all homework done but sometimes we forget when we are on the computer. That is really the only reason we don't do @CAPS1."" @CAPS4 computers are not a very good electronic if kids are not getting their homework done because of @CAPS1. But that is not the only bad thing about them. Since people are always on computers they don't get out and exercise as much. Instead they sit and play games on a computer. I found this quote in an article I was reading ""@CAPS5 since I started spending a lot of time on the computer I have gained weight because I am not out exercising,"" Exercising and going outside is a very important things to do but people cannot do @CAPS1 if they are always on the computer. Nine out of ten people say that @CAPS5 since they started going on the computer a lot, they have not gone outside or exercised in a while. I interviewed a women and she said, ""I had to not go on the computer for a while because I realized that @CAPS1 was not good for me and I needed exercise."" People get @CAPS4 distracted on computers that they never go outside to exercise anymore. @CAPS2 are still some reasons why computers are not very good. Spending time with your family and friends is a very important thing to do, but with computers people to not do @CAPS1 that much anymore. In a magazine I read @CAPS1 said, ""People are not spending time with their friends and family because they are on the computer instant messaging."" Computers are keeping people from spending time together. Nine out of ten families say that they have realized they don't spent as much time together because of computers. I interviewed some kids and said, "" I don't spend a lot of time with family or friends. I am mostly on the computer instant messaging."" Computers are deffinitely not a good thing for families. Those are the reasons why I think computers do not have a good effect on people. Kids are on the computer and don't do their homework, people do not exercise as much and they don't spend as much time with family or friends.",6.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,26.0
12926,5,"In the memoir there is more the one mood, but this is the main one. First, the author is trying to create a ""no place like home mood,"" and the author succeeds at it. It seems he/she is using memory and telling his/her background. The mood was also very calm and very relaxing for the story. In conclusion this is the mood the author is giving.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
8979,4,"“When they came back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” The story “winter hibiscus” ended with this paragraph because it will be a fresh start for Saeng. It will be spring out and the geese will come back to her home where she lives now, which now has the hibiscus to remind her of her old home. The paragraph also compares Saeng to the hibiscus. In the story her mother says, “I’ve seen this kind blooming along the lake. Its flowers aren’t as pretty, but it is strong enough to make it through the cold months here, this winter hibiscus. That’s what matters.” Saeng is the winter hibiscus that’s strang enough to make it through winter and failing the test won’t matter until spring when she will take it and pass. That’s represented when the hibiscus is in bloom. I also think the story ended this way because it ties in Saeng’s feelings throughout the story of her new home and old home. It’s also showing her ability to conquer obstacles. She is going to forget about failing the driving test and work to pass it in the spring.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
11885,5,"The @CAPS1 in this @CAPS2 is @CAPS3 very happy and always like they are doin something as a family. it shows this in @CAPS4 @NUM1 throughout the whole thing. it shows that @CAPS5 it shows how he is @CAPS6 much as close to his family as he is to the others around him. and that should mean a lot of things @CAPS5 he really doesnt know much english and all those people are goin to be an important influence on his life As an @CAPS8 and non-Cuban, that is how and where it shows @CAPS1 in the @CAPS2.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
12268,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" by Narciso Rodriguez the mood created by the author is happiness. The author is gratefull that his parents were selfless and gave him a home in Newark, New Jersey. He is gratefull because his parents helped out other people move into @LOCATION2 and weren't selfish, the left stranger live in their home until they were ready to move on. In the last sentenee it says, ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home. That is the mood of Narciso Rodriguez as he was growing up.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
13001,5,I think in some parts @CAPS1 was happy. And then is other parts @CAPS1 was sad because @CAPS1 is talking about her first house in america. @CAPS1 is happy because @CAPS1 can look back on the memories and be happy.,0.0,,,,,0.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,3.0
16295,6,"The builders of the Empire State building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow drigibles to dock at the building. Drigibles are enormous steel framed balloons filled with hydrogen and helium maneuvered by the use of propellers and rudders. Al Smith wanted to add a mooring mast to the top of the building would let drigibles to anchor for several hours for refueling or service. But, the stress of the drigible's load and the wind pressure would have to be sent all the way to the buildings Foundation. This cost over @MONEY1 worth of modifications to be made to the framework. In May 6, 1937 when the Hindenburg was destroyed by fire in Lakehurst, New Jersey the builders realized how catastrofick it would have been taken place above the densely populated area of downtown New York. The winds at the top of the building would constantly shift due to harsh and violent air currents and the back of the ship would constantly swing around. Also, the existing law against airships flying too low over cities and urban areas would make drigibles not allowed to moor at the Empire State Building. All in all, the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow drigibles to dock at the building.",4.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
3646,2,"In @DATE1's world there are so many things around our children that if we tried to take materials away, we would be take most of what is made for entertainment. Many adults say that our world has changed so much from the time when they were younger. Well, why don't we do something about it? People need to stop complaining about everything and just do something. Adults can eliminate the amount of materials the children take home with them.      If you were to walk into any store these days you would find something that you would not want your children to watch, see, or listen to. I believe people are doing the best they can to seperate these materials from the family oriented materials. Sometimes it is just not enough, children are still getting addicted to some materials at a very early age. These children share what they have with their friends, and these other children start doing the same things.        Many materials such as movies and music have negative ideas that teach children things they do not need to know or learn. The material that talks about drugs, parties, and drinking does not even need to be on a radio station or a television channel that a young child would listen to. Our adults need to also learn that it is not good for the children to learn and listen to these things, and to keep their children away from it as much as possible.     Like the author said if everyone was able to take something off of the shelves there would not be anything left. We are always going to have these things that we do not want children to see, but we can start to eliminate some of them. The others we can not eliminate we can continue to keep on the shelves and other places, but just kept where children don't go.     I believe that our towns and cities can do a better job of keeping our children away from @CAPS1 rated movies, negative songs, and different books that talk about 'adult things.' The children are the future of the world. If that's all they are watching and thinking about then it does not look good for the future. There are many things we can do to stop our children from watching, listening, and learning about these negative things in life. Keep the children away from these materials, it will be a better world if we do.",5.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,23.0
9362,4,"The concluding paragraph in the story “Winter Hibiscus “portrays the powerful massage of change from a cold, distant failure to adapt, to a new life. Saeng relates her transformation to the changing seasons from winter to spring . this is obvious shown it states  “in the spring , when the snow melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding . she accepts this as a new chance to start fresh , and then try to pass the test. The change from winter  to spring symbolize saeng’s hardship  of flying to adapt to her new home. And then, as the geese   return and the hibiscus is  adapting in its new environment is the symbol by which saeng  follows as it is from her old home in Vietnam, but can now  also prosper elsewhere. ",1.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
9168,4,"The author concludes the story like this because she is not ready to move on with her life. When everything turns back she will take that test and move on. But until her flowers are gone, she will not worry about school. For example she wrote “Almost reluctantly, she realized that many of the things that she had thought of as strange before had become, through the quiet repetition of season upon season, almost familiar to her now. like geese.” This means that she has been use to change and has accepted the situation.",0.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,3.0
1362,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, @CAPS1't you agree that computers should be limited or often not used? Recently, it has been brought to my attention that computers have a negative effect on society. Without a doubt, I firmly believe that computers should be a hobby not an addiction. People spend to much time on their computers and less time exercising and interacting with family and friends. Most teenagers are involved with cyber-bullying which takes place on computers. People spend to much time on their computers and less time exercising. I can remember when my step mom @PERSON1 was a size six in the waist. @PERSON1 would exercise everyday after work for two hours. This all changed when my dad bought her a lime green, @ORGANIZATION1 @CAPS2 laptop for her birthday. @PERSON1 quickly became addicted to @CAPS3 (computer game) and began to cut down on her exercising routines. Six months later, when she went to a doctor's appointment she found out that she gained more than ten pounds. @PERSON1 is now a size fourteen in waist. Studies show that @PERCENT1 of people gain weight because they cut down on exercising so they can have more computer time. Most people spend to much time on their computers and less time interacting with family and friends. This reminds me of my step dad @PERSON4. When @PERSON4 gets home from work he usually goes straight to the computer instead of having a conversation with the rest of the family. He gets angry when @PERSON2 (@NUM1 years old) bothers him because he wants to play. @PERSON4 is usually online. From three o'clock till ten o'clock playing chess with strangers from all over. What he doesn't know is that while he is building relationships with strangers he is breaking the bond between him and his loved ones. @PERCENT2 of teenagers are involved with cyber bullying. This reminds me of my cousin @PERSON3. Last @DATE1, @PERSON3 became a member of @CAPS4 @CAPS2, iTrouble quickly began to find her. In other words, girls from ages thirteen to twenty began to send her threatening messangers. No later than a day when @PERSON3 was walking down the street a gang of girls jumped her. However, she survived the brutal attack and deleted her @CAPS4 account. In conclusion, without a doubt, I firmly believe that people shouldn't spend to much time on computers. My three arguments are cyber-bullying, less exercise and less interaction with family and friends, @CAPS7 take my suggestion seriously and bann computers.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
16270,6,"In the excerpt, ""the mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the builders of the empire State building faced some obsticles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obsticle was that in order to build it for docking dirigibles, they had to spend over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications had to be made to the buildings framework. Also, another obsticle was because of the safety. Dirigibles were not that safe, they were flameable and would be over an area with many other buildings and people around. Those are a few obsticles that the builders of the empire State building faced in attempting to allow the docking of dirigibles.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
3605,2,"Censorship in Libraries     Censorship in libraries is a big problem in today's society, many people get angry at libraries and markets because of the items that they have on display for the common consumer. If the consumer walks into a library and is looking for a book to read. What if they come accross a book from the early @DATE1's? In these times there were lots of words used that are 'harmful' to our people today, but what most people dont understand is that, these words that are harmful had different meanings in that time in history. So when someone picks up a book and finds harmful or un-appropriate words or phrases in them, they instantly get the wrong idea about the book. And then, this small group of people who dont like this piece of literature, go agains the vast majority of people who really do understand the literature, and the feeling and dialect of the book. That is where i am going to explain to this small group of people, a few details that they should keep in mind when trying to rip a book off of the shelf and throwing it away.     When someone goes into a store or library and starts to look for a book, they @MONTH1 come accross a piece of literature that they dont completely agree with. When this person comes across this piece of literature, all they have to do is put it back on the shelf and move on. Nobody is forcing that person to read this book, so why make a big deal about it?  Because most people who make a big deal about some of the word usage in a book, dont quite understand the dialect of the book, or the time period the book was written in. If you do not understand the literature completely, then i ask that these people do not make a big scene out of it, and that they dont try to revoke the author's rights to have that piece of literature on the shelf.          Authors have just as many rights as we do. If they write literature. A poem, novel, or even a short story, these authors have the right to have it published and put on the shelf. So why would we not have the same rights? If we dont agree with some of the literature that are being placed in our society's schools, stores, and homes. Then we can write a novel, newspaper article, or even make a website about your topic. You can make web polls much more. This is a more indirect approach to removing a piece of literature. If you want to have a better chance of this book or novel to be removed from the shelves, you can use a poll or have people vote, to recieve other people's oppinions, and use these in your argument. If you have more than one oppinion on a subject, you @MONTH1 have a more likely chance of winning your argument. And this will cause a lot less chaos and attention to be drawn to yourself and others around you.     Another reason why i dont think that people should be able to choose what is on the shelves of libraries everywhere. I do not think that anybody from anywhere shoudl be able to come into a library and take a piece of literature off of the shelves forever. Because, in todays society, we have researchers going all of the time, and we have so many people working on different theories and laws. So if we take one important book off of the shelf, maybe a book written in the @DATE2's about evolution. And we get rid of all of these books, what will happen when we really need that information? These scientists @MONTH1 need that piece of literature to test a theory, and if that piece of literature is expelled from the shelves, then we could miss out on a large variety of major information that could help out someone in the future. So the more information we take off of the shelves, the less we will have in the future to help us will our problems.     So, now that i have told you all of my opinions on this subject, i hope that you will have a better view on the cencorship of libraries everywhere. And that maybe someday all books and pieces of literature will be able to remain on the shelves, being endlessly read by consumers",5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
1705,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, @CAPS3, walking into a room seeing people interacting with their computer screen I earning new and exciting, information they can everyday. The question is what effects do computers have on people? I certainly think computers have a positive effect on people. They teach hand-eye coordination, give people the ability to learn about faraway places and peapre, and even allow people to talk online with others. Computers can definetly have a positive on soriety. Computers have tought a very valueable to every user; hand-eye coordination! Whetver it's clicking a link to a site that you found on @ORGANIZATION2, or playing the matching same of bejeweled, you are learing hand-eye coordination. A cording to recent studies, over @PERCENT1 of people interviewed said they had excellent hand-eye coordination and @PERCENT2 said it was on the computer. Sure we all need to get exercise outside, but the computer can be helpful as long as we don't let it overwelm us. Smart people would agree that coordination is a very helpful skill. These brilliant inventions also helps us learn a bout different places and people. Picture this scenario if you will; A student at @ORGANIZATION1 has to do a project on the @CAPS4 @CAPS5 in the @LOCATION1. He goes to the library to check out the encyclopedias but... they are out of date. He then goes to the computer lab and finds it on @ORGANIZATION2 like that! This scenario shows that the computer is one of the fastect ways to get information on any subject or topic. Certainly text sources can give the same accurate information, but the computer is fast and easy. When you need information on the line. But why stop there? not only can you get information on certain people and places on these machines, you can also learn what's the newest fads, what's carrently happening in @LOCATION2, and the latest @CAPS6 gossip. The computer is definetly a easy sources for information on different areas and people. This amazing device can also let you talk to people online! There are many ways to do this. You can use the old-fashioned @CAPS7-mail, you can use a device in the @CAPS8 called someone. You of course need a @CAPS9 to do thank one. I remenber a time when I was bored so I decided to do my homework. The problem was I forgot what it was! I quickly grabbed the phone and called my class mate but he didn't answer. I then sprinted to my computer and to see if he was online. Sure enough he was! I got the home work and got an A all thanks to the computers ability to interact with others.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
12126,5,"Throught the memoir Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives, Narciso Rodriguez portrays a mood of happiness and thankfulness towards his parents. Rodriguez writes ""…and for which I am eternally grateful"" (@NUM1). Narciso Rodriguez is expressing his thankfulness to his parents for the wonderful things they have taught him such as cooking. Another way this mood of happiness is portrayed is through his writing about people coming together. He writes ""all of these cultures came together showing great solidarity and friendship."" (@NUM2). He is happy and thankful for the connections he made with people of different cultures, and ethnicities. Despite the racism going on in the places around them, his parents were able to bring people together by being welcoming, helpful, and friendly. Lastly, he is greatful for all the things the parents sacrificed for him. He writes, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice,"" (@NUM3). They taught him that money isn't everything and that family and friends are greatly important. They had the ability to impress apon him many qualities that benefited his life. He writes ""these teachings have been the basis of my life"" (@NUM3). The mood is portrayed as happy and thankful about the lessons his parents taught.",4.0,,,,,4.0,3.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
1010,1,"Dear: local newspars @CAPS1 recently been brought my attendchon, that people should use computers. My three arugment are they tach hand - eye coordination, give people the ability to learn about far away places and people, and even allow People to talk on line with other people. @CAPS1 tachs people hand-eye coordination because when people type on the kyebord the more and more ther type on the kyebord and the faster and faster. Mach people have more coordinion first, they get used to typeing then, they start typeins fast last when they type fast @CAPS1 give them more hand-eye coordinion. Useins computers give people the ability to learn about far away Places and people because they could such google people and places then @CAPS1 show a lot of wedsite then when they go on one wedsite they type in the person name and state then @CAPS1 show them the places of person. Computers give people the ability to talk with people from other place like aim, myspace or face book and people could play games and talk at the same time so the computer is very poplure this time because of what people mack there wedsite do and this is why I think people should use computer far a lot of like my three @CAPS2 so @CAPS1 been to my attenchon that people should use computer for three reson i is tach hand - Coordination give people the ability to learn abount far away places and people, and even allow people to talk online withe other people so this is why I sajust people should use computer.",3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
13146,5,"I think the memoir is a thankful and grateful mood. The author is grateful that she has parents that moved to @LOCATION1 for her. Also she is grateful that the simple place she lives in feels like a home. This says so in the last sentence ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" Also Narciso is thankful in paragraph @NUM1 ""my mother and father had come to this country with such courage, without any knowledge of the language or the culture. They came selflessly as many imagrants do, to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends and careers in the country they loved."" @CAPS1 how thankfull Narciso seems to her parents who sacrificed their whole life for her. If that was me writing that story I would make the mood very grateful towards my parents.",2.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
6816,3,"Many of the settings features affect the cyclist. One of the features of the dessert like, which is the setting, is the dry air and hot temperatures. This heat made it had for the cyclist to keep going, with despair the author says, ”I was going to die and the birds world pick me clean.” @CAPS1 feature of the setting was the desolet towns that didn’t contain any water. This lack of the water made it horrible for him to continue on. The thirst was so bad that he had to put pebbles in his mouth to sucking on stones helps take your and off thirst by allowing what spit you have left to circulates. @CAPS1 features of the setting that affected the cyclist was the abandoned Welch’s Grape factory. This  factory gave the cyclist false hope because it would have been so great to have some grape juice during his thirst stricken state. The narrator called the factory.”Ironic  twist.”",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
16447,6,"The Empire State Building faced various obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. Most importantly was the danger involved in this ambitious plan. Blimps from outside the @LOCATION3 commonly used hydrogen, a highly flammable gas, instead of helium. After a German dirigible destroyed in a fire, owners of the Empire State Building saw the true danagers of an accident like this in downtown New York. Successful use of the mooring mast was another obstacle. The winds at such a high altitude made it difficult to dock. Once docked the dirigibles would have to dangle above pedestrians, which was ""neither pratical or safe"". The existing law against airships flying to low in urban areas create further probles. After the Los Angeles failed to reach the mooring mast because of the high winds the owners started to see the unsolved problems. By the late 1930's the idea had ""quietly disappeared"".",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
12483,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" there is a certain mood created by the author which makes the story interesting. It has a playful tone with a warm and loving mood. ""@PERSON2"" is about how his mother and father immigrated from cuba in 1956. They moved into a simple house when Narciso was born. Throughout the years, ""this simple house"" turned into a home"" (paragraph @NUM1). The house was filled with the loving family and special friends turning it into something special in Narciso's life, a home. How close his family and friends were added to the relevence of the home. ""It was the warmth in the kitchen in this humble house where a cuban feast always filled the air with not just scent and music but life and love"" (paragraph @NUM1). This shows how special the house was to him. This feeling also adds to the mood because of the appreciation shown. It was where I learned the real definition of 'family'."" (paragraph @NUM1) The memories from the home make the mood loving and warm.",2.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
16216,6,"The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building was not easy. They had to draw out the plan for the mooring mast. The builders had to think about the thousand-foot dirigible that would be mooring at the top of the Empire State Building. They had to think about the wind pressure and of the load of the dirigible. The builders had to come up with brilliant ideas. The ideas were ""a shiny glass and chrome-nickel stainless steel tower"" (@CAPS1 paragraph @NUM1) on top of the building. Builders had to build and think of the elevators and stairs to bring the passengers of the dirigible to the eighty-sixth floor. The eighty-sixth floor had baggage and tickets. They would come from the one hundred second floor. The builders had a hard job because they had to think of ideas on how to build the mooring mast of the building They also had to think about, how to bring the passengers in and out of the dirigible. The builders faced obstacles as the construction of the building was in process.",0.0,,,,,0.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
852,1,"@ORGANIZATION1, With the recent development @MONEY1 technology in todays society I know that there is a lot @MONEY1 controversy with computers. Many people believe that computers are positive towards our society. While others disagree. I feel that technology can be both good and bad. Technology provides great advancements in our world. But people experience less @MONEY1 the outside world when they surround themselves with technology. But I feel that we can find a balance between the two views. Having computers has brought a lot @MONEY1 advancement in todays society. Look at modern medicine, it would be nothing without todays technology in computers. We can look at todays military. Computers practically run todays armed forces. But who knows where technology can take us. Our society could continue to greatly advance with the help @MONEY1 computers. But then again we could all wonder where would we be today without computers. So @ORGANIZATION1, as you can see computers have helped our society greatly with improvement and progression. But with all @MONEY1 this technology we still need to find a balance. It is live todays @CAPS1 spend cover @NUM1 hours per week on computers. People are not experiencing the world outside @MONEY1 their computers. Our state does put in @MONEY1 each year for our parks just so we can ignore them. Also with increased computer time people are not getting outside. They aren’t getting proper exercise. You @MONTH1 even notice that if you use the computer too much you will miss more interactions with your family. So although computers can be very useful you need to be able to turn off the computer and realize the true important things in your life, besides the computers. computers can be both good and bad. But I think that we need to find a balance between the two. Computers are useful to our daily life but at the same time we also need to realize that we need to sometimes take a break from our computers. Lets face it without computers today we would not be able to function. Entire companies revolve around computers and if computers just ended, @MONEY1 @MONEY1 people would lose their jobs. But also regular people, for example teens, do not need to be on the computer for four hours a day. Those four hours could be spent with their families. We need to find a balance. For example, you could say for every hour your on the computer you need to spend that same hour to go outside, spend time with your family, etc. Computers are useful but we cannot over use it. So, to the @ORGANIZATION1, computers help our society thrive. But at the same time we need to learn when we have had enough time on the computer. So I believe that we can call find a healthy balance @MONEY1 computer use.",4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,23.0
7150,3,Setting affects many things in stories. The setting in this story affected the cyclist. The setting was very hot and it slowed him do wn a lot. For example he said he was doing 55 miles,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
6870,3,"Hot, alone, no water – all are reasons why the features of the setting affect the cyclist. It is very hot as the cyclist is riding. This makes the cyclist feel worried about getting dehydrated. The cyclist is alone and there is nothing in sight. If anything happened to him there is no one to help. The cyclist had very little water and had to conserve it in order too stay active and have energy. With very little water it is hard to stay hydrated. Hot, alone, no water- all are reasons why the features of the setting affect the cyclist.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
9686,4,The author concludes the story this way for many reasons. One reason is to show Saeng is not going to give up and keep trying to pass her test. Another way is to show that even though your life has changed that don’t mean that you have to give up. These are some of the way that the author concludes the story like he does.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
15875,6,"Based on the excerpt, the obstacles the builders of the empire state building faced attempting to allow derigibles to dock there are the stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the buildings foundation which was eleven hundred feet below. But the greatest obstacle was the wind, which would constantly shift, due to violent air currents.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
1048,1,"Dear readers, @CAPS1 if I told you that every time you sit in front of a computer, you are that much closer to death? @CAPS1 if I said that computers are destroying your lives? This @MONTH1 not be that serrws, but its shocking. You can not disagree. I feel that humans should not use computers, or at least use them very scarcely. Computers make people get less exercise, they kill brain cells, and they can ruin your lifestyle. You @MONTH1 believe computers have impared your life, but consequences remain. Many @CAPS2 today are obese and lazy. They don't get any exercise. There are many reasons for this, but one big reason is because they sit in front of computers all day! Computers @MONTH1 improve reflexes and such but you can do that by exercising, also! When you sit in front of a computer, it reels you in. Ten minutes becomes one hour in a snap! That is one less hour of exercise. Virtual sports @MONTH1 be fun, but they keep you from the real ones. Without exercise, one @MONTH1 become obese, develop diabetes or heart problems or even have muscle troubles. These can be hazardous, and even deadly. Computers dont exercise your body, or your mind! Now, that fact bring me to my next point. Computers @MONTH1 have information to teach you, but that type of learning has its consequences. When you sit in front of a computer, your eyes are on the screen. Now, scientists from the @ORGANIZATION1 foundation have found they staring at the screen kills brain cells. Basically, these cells do not reporoduce as easily as other cells, and they sometimes don't reproduce at all. You are just one step closer to death. I'm sure you don't want an death. Try opening a book! They are cheaper, more accurate, and don't kill your cells! Don't stare at the computer screen, because your slowly destroying your body, and knowledge can be gained elsewhere. For a final point, I would like to say that computers simply destroy your lifestyle. Virtual people are not your real friends and family. Computers cause you to turn away from them. Online interaction is not like just talking to someone in person or on the phone. You can lose your real friends. Plus, computers run your lifestyle because half the things you think you are learning arent real. You can't trust certain sites or certain people. Being with ones you know and love is much more beneficial, because computers drag you in you are taken away from the real world. I feel that we should all take a stand against computers. They take away exercise, cause brain cells to die and other problems occur, and they can ruin your lifestyle. No one wants to be a lonely joke! Read a book, get outside and day; but stay away from die screen. There are better alternatives. Take a stand, and do @CAPS1 is best. Be the healthy, happy person, and lay off that computers, so that you can get the best of life!",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
12209,5,"The author was so thankful, they explained how they thank there parrents for moving here. And how a house can become a  home and how important family and friends relationships are",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
1308,1,"I think that computers have a positive effect on people because you can communicate with different places around the world. Store things on them, and use them for entertainment. Computers have a positive effect because you can communicate with other people around the world. This is good because instead of calling people you can go on computer and talk to them for free. Long distance phone calls cost a lot. But if you can just go on your computer and talk to them there's going to be no charge. Being able to talk to other people over the internet is very useful and fun. If there wasnt a computer people would be talking to as much people and there social life would be bad making there life not as exciting. This is one reason why I think that computer have a positive effect on people. Another reason why computers give a positive effect in people if you have a lot of paperwork that is just lieing around is in the way. Well if you have a computer there are featers that your able to store thing and because much more organized. Being more organized there is less stress one you start to feel better about lossing things and being able to find them. This is why I think that computers are very great and useful. The last reason why I think that computers have a positive effect on people is that people can use it for entertainment. Computers can do many things like play game, listen to music, watch videos, and chat with your friends. Being able to play games for free on your computer is awesome. If you cant aford to get a game system them you are able to go on your computer and play pretty much what ever game or close to the game that you want to play. A computer can also play music. You can have @CAPS1 and download musics to something or go to web sites that have musical on them. Also you can do video chats with your friends if they live far away. I hope that I convinced you to like computers more and think that they are great and have a positive effect on people. Being able to play games, store thing, and chat with other people is pretty amazing.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
14998,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building's mast were confronted with many obstacles to overcome. Firstly, the builders had to compensate for the stress a docked airship would place on the building. According to @CAPS1, ""the stress... would be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation."" As a result, the building's steel frame would need to be modified to accommodate the load. Another obstacle faced by the builders were the weather conditions at that height: ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" Any airship attempting to dock there would be violently buffeted around by the wind. Finally, there was the obstacle of safety. As @CAPS1 states, ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States use hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is extremely flammable."" @CAPS3 of a Hindenburg-type accident over a densely populated area gave pause to the builders. In conclusion, the builders had to face several huge obstacles, which combined eventually doomed the project.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
15731,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles docked there. Based on excerpt, one of these obstacles were the lack of suitable landing area. The dirigibles were as long as one thousand feet, the same length as four blocks in New York City. Another obstacle was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. This law would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area. The U.S. Navy dirigible Los Angeles approached the mooring mast but could not get close enough to tie up because of forceful winds. If they got close enough to tie up, the captain could not even take his hands off the control levers because of the fear that the wind would blow the dirigible onto the sharp spires of other buildings in the area, which would puncture the dirigibles shell. Also, for the dirigible to be added, over sixty thousand dollars worth of modifications had to be made to the buildings framework.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
16075,6,"The architects of the Empire State building faced several obstacles when constructing the mooring mast. One of which would be that the purpose which it was suppose to serve (docking dirigibles), the original design of the building could not handle it. In paragraph @NUM1, it says ""A thousand foot dirigibles would add stress to the buildings frame."" Because of this realization, they had to make ""sixty-thousand dollars worth of modifications"" (paragraph @NUM1)Another obstacle they would have to face would be the additions of new floors. They originlly designed the building to be about @NUM3 floors, but with the addition of the mooring mast, the builders had to make an extra top and do it with such detail so that it could be both an observatory and a boarding dock.These first two obstacles, although they were difficult, nevertheless they were solvable. Some of the obstacles the builders had to face were not fixable. The first was that dirigible's from @LOCATION2 were filled with hydrogen (which is highly flamable). Due to the location of the Empire State building (downtown New York), a little accident could cause huge problems in the city. Also, thwy did not take in consideration the winds at the top of the building. The Empire State building would be at such a high altitude that there would be very high winds. These winds would cause for the dirigibles to be unstable which was also not safe. With these last two obstacles, the mooring mast was still built, but served as a design instead of a dock.",3.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
15028,6,"There were many obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock, there. They had known that the mooring mast wasn't perfect. There were many reasons but the greatest one they said was the safety. The hydrogen in them is highly flammable and after the accident in New Jersey in 1937, they noticed how much more dangerous it would be if it happened right in New York. So they dropped the idea later on and left the transportation to the airplanes.",1.0,,,,,1.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
4217,2,"Censorship is the most foul and terrifying part of society.  Our lives have been taken over by politcal correctness, so much so that our voices are no longer our own.  Until recently we had the freedom to convey our thoughts, no matter what those thoughts were, in any form of media.  But now if something is found to be offensive in any way it is essentially burned.  Censorship limits our freedoms, takes away our @CAPS2 as citizens and people, shields us from the truths of the world, and limits the knowledge we can take from, as well as ensuring that one day there will be nothing left of media.     The @CAPS1 of @CAPS2, the document that our country lives by, says that we as people have the right of free speech.  Censorship actively and violently violates that right.  Our country was built on free speech, and now it is being taken away.  Our own words forced down our throats, never allowed to come out.  Censorship ensures that no opinions will be heard, that no one's beliefs will be questioned, that no one can assume or think for themselves.  Is this not what we are supposedly guaranteed by freedom of speech?  We are supposed to be able to say anything we want to say.  We know there are consequences for saying certain things, but we are supposed to be allowed to say them.  Letting our own ideas into the world allows for new ideas to form.  Arguements come, but these arguements allow people to see other ideas that they hadn't thought of and look at issues from new perspectives.  We are able to see our world through different eyes when we hear or read someone else's opinions.  And from there we can form our own opinions, allowing our world to be rich with iddeas and knowledge, and allowing our society to advance.  But censorship wants to take this all away from us in order to please everyone.  But there will always be someone who is unhappy.  It's the inevitable truth.     Censorship is trying to shield us from the ugliness of this world.  In a way this makes sense.  We don't want our children to understand the atrocities that happen in everyday life.  We don't want them knowing what's happening behind closed doors.  However, if we don't allow people to open these doors, they can never understand the world or be prepared for the experiences that are to come.  Learning the harsh realities of our society educates people, allowing them to stop these realities as well as be prepared for when they happen to them.  For example, let's look at the issue of rape.  Rape is a horrible thing, but it happens.  It is a nasty part of reality.  Rape can be censored from books, televsion, and other forms of media.  We can walk around pretending rape doesn't exist.  But that doesn't accomplish anything.  That doesn't get rid of rape.  It still exists.  And if the people are uneducated on the issue of rape, how will it ever stop?  How will a rape ever be able to be prevented?  How will someone know what to expect or what to do?  By censoring rape from media, we are ensuring that the people in future generations never learn about rape.  Knowledge of rape is important if it is ever going to be stopped.  Pretending something doesn't exist doesn't get rid of it.  Censorship is supposed to protect the people, but it doesn't.  It hurts the people, cutting off their access to knowledge.     We as people need knowledge.  We live off of knowledge.  And the way we obtain this knowledge is through media.  Censorship takes away pieces of knowledge gradually.  It @MONTH1 not seem like a lot is missing now, but as time goes on the gap will increase, and more knowledge will be taken from our grasp.  Is this fair?  Is this right?  Is this helping us?  How does cutting out knowledge ever help?  It brings us backwards in time, makes us fear.  It is human nature to fear the unknown.  The more that becomes unknown, the more we have to fear.  Censorship is taking away crucial pieces of knowledge that we must understand to get along in society.  This is wrong and immoral.  It is unfair, if nothing else.  We should be allowed to take from any knowledge that exists.  No good comes from hiding it.     Lastly, this gradual burning of knowledge is affecting society in horrid ways.  And as time goes on it can only get worse.  Censorship is based off of offensiveness.  If something could be offensive, it is disposed of.  However, everything that exists in society could be offensive to someone.  Therefore everything and everyone should be censored in order to fulfill the goal of censorship.  This means all media of any kind should be destroyed.  No one should say anything.  The world would be forced to be silent.  All knowledge would be taken away.  Chaos would ensue.  The people's freedom would be completely taken away.  The freedom to know would vaporize right in front of their eyes.  This is our future if we allow the censorship to continue.  We cannot allow our lives to be taken over by censorship.  Yes, people's feelings will be hurt, but we cannot rid our world of ideas and knowledge purely to spare feelings.  These ideas and knowledge are too important to let censorship take away.     Censorship is taking away our freedoms and @CAPS2, slowly stealing them away from us.  It also tries to shield us from reality, but instead hurts us, ensuring that we will never understand our world and never be able to stop the very things that are being censored.  Censorship is affecting society, ensuring that our freedoms are to be taken away.  All knowledge will be trashed and no one will be able to voice their opinions.  A very dark future waits for us if censorship continues.  Only by helping people to understand censorship and the wrong it does to society can we gain back our freedom of speech; the freedom we are supposedly guaranteed, but censorship is desperately trying to take away.",6.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,6.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,27.0
16450,6,"Some of the @CAPS1 the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there are that they were docked by means of an electric winch, wihich houlad in a line from the front of the ship and then tied into the mast. Also the dirigibles body could swing in the breeze, and yet passengers could safely get on and get off the dirigible by walking down a gangplank to an open oservation platform. Finally the architects and engineers of the Empire State Building consulted with experts, taking tours of the equiment and mooring operations at the U.S. Naval air Station in Lakehurst, New Jersey.",0.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,3.0
10122,4,"The author concludes with this story to show how Saeng is ready to accept her new life. Once the geese and the hibiscus are back she feel like she's at home. When she feels more at home is when she will be ready to take the test again. The text states “run and the geese return"" this hibiscus is budding , then I will take that test again”. Clearly the geese and hibiscus remind her of home.Once she feels at home, she will feel at ease. Thats why the author concluded with this pasage.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
12755,5,"In the article ""Narciso Rodriguez"" the author talks about the home that they grew up in and the sacrifice and selflessness that their parents have. The mood of this story is happy in the author really shows how much of the love their parents and what they did for them. In paragraph two when they talked about how they love Cuban music and the culinary skills that their parents had, that was passed on to them and that they love so much. Another example of the mood of the story is shown by paragraph four when they talked about all the people they had at their kitchen table and how they were so helpful to the people that they met through where they live. The mood of the article ""Narciso Rodriguez"" was happy and loving to all the people this person has ever met from that house.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
15571,6,They had problems with the dirigibles trying to land it thyre. The dirigible could have caught fire and it would have been worse. It was dangerous to attach piece to the part.The high wind was a problem.The dirigible could burn up fall down and people would die below.,0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
13534,5,"In the passage the author provided a good mood. for example he talked a lot about love, friendship, and other related things. He talked about the differences of a home and house. He made this passage for people to start thinking about what love realy is and what people will realy do for each other. He is a very good author.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
893,1,"Dear Newspaper, I think computers are a good thing, people use computers for buissness. Computers allow you to interact with people far away. They also allow you to do research. That is why I think computers are good. Computers can be used for many different things. They can be used for buissness. Some people work at home on computers. They can also be used to interact with people far away. You can interact with someone who you don't see on a daily basis. Computers can also be used for research. You can do research on a school project or on other buissnesses you interact with. Computers are good. Some people use computers for buissness. You can also interact with people far away. You can even do research on a computer that is why computers are good.",3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
15929,6,Diregible Hindenburg was destroyed by fire in @LOCATION1 on @DATE1 The owners of the Empire state building realized how much worse that accident could have been if it had taken place above a densely populated area such as downtown New York        In The MOORING MAST          Dirigibles had a top speed of eighty mile per hour and they could cruise at seventy miles per hour for thousands of miles without needing refueling some were as longht as four blocks in New york city The one obstacle to their expanded us in New york city was the lack of a Suitable landing area,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
3565,2,"'@ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1'          @CAPS1  people have @CAPS1 types of genres of books, music, movies, etc., that they like as well as @CAPS1 they don't like. Meaning that its up to you what you like and you are @ORGANIZATION1 forces to read or listen to anything you don't want to. Books, music, and other entertaining things are here as an @ORGANIZATION1 so if you dont like it then you don't have to deal with it.     I feel that it is @ORGANIZATION1 neccessary that books should be removed from the shelves  just because someone has gotten offended @ORGANIZATION1 it. You were @ORGANIZATION1 told that it is a must to read that book and it wasn't the company nor the author's fault that you rented the book and you felt insulted. Most likely there were @ORGANIZATION1 directing the story towards you so why get all worked up over something that has happen to you and take it out on the media?  You chose it @ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1. Why make the company lose investment over something that could be easily taken care of @ORGANIZATION1 simply taking it back where you got it from?      I have read @CAPS1 books, listened to @CAPS1 songs, and seen lots of movies that weren't in my best interest but I didn't make them stop saling them because i'm pretty sure someone out there likes it. Why stop someone elses enjoyment because of my uninterest? It's really @ORGANIZATION1 that neccesary. And that's the problem in the world today, people take little situations into a big catastraphy for no reason. If you don't like it then don't get it. People need to put their feet in the company's shoes and realize that if it was them, they would understand.      Books, magazines, music, movies, etc., are made for everyone in the world to make entertainment for those who are interested. Taking them off the shelves would be more than unnessecary just because some person doesn't like it. People have different opinions about life and that's what makes every indiviual different from one another. So why ruin other people's fun just to get what you want?     As I stated before for it is @ORGANIZATION1 neccessary to remove an item from the shelves because someone has taken offense to something. It's @ORGANIZATION1 the company's fault so just simply don't buy it or take it back. Things would be so much better. Get the items that best fits you and leave the others that don't on the shelves.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
7122,3,"The setting of the story ""Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit,"" is very important to the events that occured in the  story. For example the story was set on a  highway set at @NUM1 which the cyclist was only able to do @NUM2. This is signifigant to the events of the story because since he was doing @NUM2, which by the away is a lot for a cyclist and it led to almost dehydration. Plus it was hilly. This led to the excution of the cyclist, so one could see that setting is very important to the outcome of the story.",1.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
16498,6,The greatest reason was one of safty: most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium and hydrogen is highly flammable. The greatest obstacle use of the mooring mast was nature itself. The on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violen air currents,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
10626,4,"The last paragraph of the story was: “When they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” I think the author concluded the story with that paragraph to show that she is adapting and that she is starting to accept the change. I think that because throughout the story she is upset and not really liking the change. “And in the warm moist shelter of the greenhouse, Saeng broke down and wept.” The text says. This last paragraph seems optimistic talking about the flower blooming and the geese returning which seems like she is starting to accept the change. In my opinion, the author added  that paragraph to finish the story to show that Saeng is starting to accept the change and be optimistic.",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
1728,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2 I believe that there is more and more controvosy about computer and whether they benefit society or not. In my opinion, computers are a wonderful resource that will soon become a household item. I am writing to persuade you that computers have a positive effect on people. I believe computers are a good thing because they allow people access to more knowledge, they allow people to stay in contact with people they dont see very often, and they allow people to keep up and know whats going on in modern life. One reason computers are useful is that they allow people to stay in contact with people they don't see very often. Today, parents don't mind sending their children off to college as much because they can actually see them using video chat websites like @ORGANIZATION1. This feature on computers has a big impact on the life of people today. People in @LOCATION1 can talk with people in @LOCATION2. This type of often allows for people to share new and inventive things they've discovered. Another reason computers can be useful is because they help people keep in touch with modern life. Many companies are now erasing newspaper ads and putting them all on computer websites. Some companies are only selling items on their websites and shipping them to the buyers. With computers students can also get their homework done and send it to their teacher by email if they cannot make it to school that day. There is even at home colleges now where you take your class online. I believe that in a few years from now more and more people will do business with computers and more stores will sell online only. Finally the last reason I believe computers are a good idea is that they allow people access to more knowledge with the internet. There are websites soldy devoted to history and information on many things. Also there are blogging websites where people can debate on information or get questions answired by real people who @MONTH1 know a lot about the topic. Another thing on computers that helps you get informed is websites like wikipedia where people can search a topic, read history about it, and follow links to other websites if they want to pick apart the topic even more. Overall, I believe that computers area a great resource to human kind and will be used for more and more things in a few years. I believe computers are useful because they allow people access to more knowledge, the ability to keep in touch with others, and to keep in touch with modern life. I believe that in a couple years there will be liss stores on the streets and most will be online because it is much cheaper for the companies. So, most people in a couple years will be computers and use them effectively.",5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
6297,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist in a few ways. The first was the cool forested road that he set out on. Since the rote not easy, he felt confident and started end in the wrong direction. Another factor was when he rode into the desert. The cyclist was becoming dehydrated and whats little water he could find tasted like battery acid. These factors affected the cyclist by giving him false hope and nearly lead him to his death.",0.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,3.0
13405,5,"The are many strong feelings in the memoir but @CAPS1 is the most important one. In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"", Narciso Rodriguez talks about all of the sacrifices and Love in his house hold and how @CAPS2 is forever great full for his parents selflessness. ""Love of cooking that is still with me today (and for what I am extreemly greatfull)"" is what Rodriguez says @CAPS2 appricietes. @CAPS2 is also appriciative for the way @CAPS2 grew up and how his parents taught him that ""family had nothing to do with being a blood realetive."" @CAPS2 is so appricietive that @CAPS2 tells his parents constantly that @CAPS2 ""will always be greatfull to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" The author excpetially ex presses the mood of @CAPS1 in the line, ""I will never ferget that house or its gracious naighbor hood or the many things I learned there about how to love. I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" Rodriguez is forever appriciative to his parents and their strong desitions that made him the person @CAPS2 is today.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9845,4,I am going to tell you why the author concludes the story with this paragraph. One reason the author does is because it tells you that Saeng is confident. It also tells you she wont give up. And it shows that she is willing to take her ability to the next level. This is why the author concludes the story with the paragraph. ,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
9585,4,The author concludes with this ending because it because it gives hope. It is like a happy ending to a sad story. It is also her final thought for the story and a good end point.,0.0,,,,,0.0,2.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
7054,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist because when he has water and plenty of it, the setting seems to be smooth, easy riding. This means that he doesn’t have to use much water, but he still uses some because anyone that rides @NUM1 miles on a bike will need plenty of water no matter what the terrain is like. The features of the setting affect the cyclist toward the middle and end of his trip greatly because it gets rough and hilly and so he needs more water that he doesn’t have. And since he was planning on being able to get water at the first stop he didn’t conserve it as well, so this left less water for him to have when he really needed it. He then became dehydrated after his first stop, and he didn’t get any more water there so it caused him to dehydrate. So it seem that the features of the setting affect the cyclist because when he has plenty of water and doesn’t really need it the terrain is smooth and easy to ride but as he drinks his water the terrain gets rougher and worse. So the features of the setting affects him greatly in that they don’t help him they just get worse when he needs it to get better.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
12343,5,"The mood in this memoir is gratefulness. This memoir is basically about how grateful the author is to his parents.The author is grateful to his parents because of their love and sacrifice. The quote, ""In the United States, they had to start their lives over entirely."" From this quote, I can see why the author is grateful. His parents decided to immigrate to give him a better life, at the expense of their families, friends, jobs, and their country.Another reason why the author was grateful was because the author learned that ""family"" was not just a blood relative, but much more. In the piece of text, ""In our neighborhood, despite customs everywhere, all of those cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship. From this snippet, I can tell that the author was grateful for learning the true meaning of family. He learned a ""family"" was a unity of people that helped each other.The reason why the author was grateful was because of their courage. In the text, the quote, ""They struggled both personally and financially, braving the harsh northern winters while yearning for their native tropics and facing cultural hardships."" From this quote, I can gather that his parents were grateful. Most people would've given up from the tall and wide barrier in their way. His parents could've given up, but they didn't. I think it's reasonable the authors should be grateful for his parent's courage.In conclusion, I believe the mood of the memoir is gratefulness, because the author's parents have done everything they could to make it easier for him.",4.0,,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
9069,4,"The author concludes the story “Winter Hibiscus” with this paragraph because it conveys the theme of the story, adjusting to changed in life. So many things have changed for Saeng and she hasn’t full adjusted yet to the way of life. Yet she learns that she needs to be determined to adapt and survive like Hibiscus. The text states, “In the spring, when this hibiscus is budding” The hibiscus teaches Saeng to never give up, like the hibiscus doesn’t give up and survives during the winter. She learns to be determined and even though she failed the test the first time, her memories have helped her and she is going to go for it again. These ideas are in the last paragraph because they summarize the idea of not giving up even if you feel out of place. She has slowly gotten used to this new place and recognizes the seasons now as she thinks this last thought.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9151,4,"Why did the author conclude the story with this paragraph? I believe that the author concluded that paragraph because it tells what she is going to do in the future. For example in the story she told her mom “I failed…” When she was putting the flower in the hole by the garden a flock of geese were flying, heading south.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
1085,1,"Computers have helped people tramendisly over the past years. Thanks to computer scientest have found cours for deseses, jobs have become easier and communication with friends or family have become afordable. I believe that computers have a positive effect on people because they educate people on places in the world, help people with their jobs, and give people a chance to talk to phone without having to pay for anything. Is someone a trip to a country that they might go on the computer to learn more about that country and their culture. Another thing they might do is go to a website that could have them find afordable flights or a hotel to stay at. If a child is doing a report about a country in @LOCATION1 they can go on the computer to find out facts on that country. Computers educate people about places all over the world. You can go on a website that has videos and short clips about what has been going on and learn about current events. any costs. If you want to see a friend for her birthday but don't have the money to fly halfway around the world to see her you can vidieo chat with her. Computers help people save money by talking on the computers with friends, family and even co-workers. Computers have been very helpful ever since they were invented. They help people learn about places all over the world and about anything you want to learn about. They also make jobs and work easier, and also help people save a lot of money by talking to people on the computers insted of on the phone. Computers have improved demastrecly over the years, the screens use to be so small and you would have to press all these buttons just to boot it up and now computers can be as big as a flat screen @CAPS1 and you can turn them on with just a push of a button. Who knows what computers will be like @NUM1 years from now?",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
7211,3,"The features of the setting had greatly impacted the cyclist. The heat, animals, and terrain had slowed him down throught his journey. The heat had slowed him down because he didn’t have enough water to keep his boby moving normaly, and he said he had slowed him down because he had to sneak around it so it wouldn’t bite him. The hills had affected the cyclist because it takes a lot of energy to go up there, when he said he couldn’t see anything in sight.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
1228,1,"Hi! I am writing in which computers are a bad thing to the society or good thing. I think that computers are good thing to have around. They help us in a lot of way and they also help us find new friends and new updates. This is going to be my first opinion. I think that computers have effects on the society in a good way because people can find @CAPS1 of the latest updates on the weather, society and country's. It helps the society in a good way because people don't have to look though an old Newspaper. All they have to do is click and there there reading it all and probally seeing pics and stuff of it. This is my second reason why computers are a good effect on the society they help us in a lot of ways on which meeting new people and staying in close good with them and talking with them and sending pics of stuff and you. My last opinion for computers are a good effect on society is that @CAPS2 you have a buissness or anything you can sell any of your merchandise, keep buiness plans, And also you can make a website for your business after a while @CAPS1 of people will know about it and it would make a really big inpack on your buiness. That was my three opinion on which why computers are good effect on the society and I think that computers are really good effect on the society.",4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
1143,1,"To the @CAPS1, I have recently heard that some people think that computers don't benefit society. However, I disagree with that. First, it allows children and adults to learn about distant places and other things. Also, it allows family and friends to connect with other family and friends. And lastly, it is a form of entertainment on a day that you can't go outside. Some people might not agree with me. However, I believe the computer wasn't a waste of thought. I think the computer is a benefits to society and the whole world. First, the computer allows children and adults to learn about distant places and, other things. People, professors, historians, and either highly educated people past discoveries and information about things everyday. That means everyday someone can learn something everyday of their life. When I do research on a important person in history, I learned things I never learned in school. The computer is the best way to allow people to put info they've learned for other people to see and gain knowledge of each other these are endless possibilities for everyone who owns a computer to learn. You wouldn't believe the things you can learn on a computer. Also, the computer allows family and friends stay in touch with other family and friends in far away places. If there was computers and someof your family moved to a diffrent. There wouldn't be an efficient way to stay in touch with them. The computer allows you to send e-mail to a families computer or celluar phones. The computer is the best way to stay close to your family even though they are far away. My brother is in @LOCATION1 and every day I get on the computer when I get home and video chat with him. If there was no computer, I wouldn't be able to chat with my brother. Lastly, the computer allows a form of entertainment on a rainy day. Certain software gives people the chance to create games and post online to the public. When I can't go outside because of the weather I get on my computer and play video games. The games keep me company. I can never play with other people with online multiplayer. Some of the games are educational also. The games teach you different things about history. ",5.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,23.0
1087,1,"You say that computers are bad on todays society? @CAPS1 I'm here to prove you wrong and tell you that they can actually benefit todays society. Maybe some kids don't have phones, so they can go log onto facebook and do everything a phone has to offer and more. School. School. School; so many homework assignments and projects are assigned, and using computer programs help alot and give that proffesional touch. And how coud you forget 'google' the most famous online system, that everyone loves you can do just about anything with that page. So computers bad for society, think again and listen closely. blc computers have just benifited us more than ever. www.facebook.com, that is one of the most visited pages on the internet for all different ages, it deffinetly benefits you. Logging on and seeing your friends profile's newest updates on pictures, videos and life, you get every little detail using facebook. And I you don't have a phone, no. wornes, facebook has a chat system, so you and friends and relatives can talk, or maybe theirs a family party comingup you can get inboxed on all the information, and visit the relatives homepage and see how theyve been doing. @CAPS3 you haven't logged into facebook yet, you deffinetly will now! ""This project will be done on the computer,"" how many times do you hear a teacher says that, almost everytime youre given an assignement! @CAPS1 windows and @ORGANIZATION1 programs will really benefit you in your need for school help. Lets say you've been assigned a project to create a product commerical in computer class, you can hop right onto windows movie maker and get all the help you need, and you'll have the ability to create you project right on the program so it looks and sounds professional. One program you can always use throughout life for presentation is 'power ', In my history class we were assigned a famous person from the @DATE1's and were to do a presentation; @CAPS1 when I got my assignment I went right to powerpoint and got a great grade! lastly the known, @ORGANIZATION1 word! used for all kinds of projects or homeworks and espically writing papers or short stories, having spell check, youre garenteed a good grade! Google! Everyone knows it and everyone loves it. This web hit canbe used for just about anything. From searching pictures and information for a school projects, watching videos of songs, friends, or tv shows that you love or wonna check up on. to looking at websites. Some say the @CAPS2 holds people from exersising, but google can shows you videos of special work outs or websites on healthy eating or an on exercise group or fitness club, so now you see the internet benefits us tremendously! ""Have you change your mind? have you listened closely?"" @CAPS3 so your life just become a whole lot easier, by using facebook, for social ability, @ORGANIZATION1 and windows programs for school, and google for life and health, you have just benefitted from my writing and from using modern technology, the computer!",5.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
4452,2,"Should books,music,magazines, etc., be removed form shelves that are found offensive? Everyone has their own oppion on that question. In my years of reading I have read a few books that were questionable. I wouldn't say someone else couldn't relate to it.      Personaly i don't think anything should be removed from the shelves. While growning up our parents try to keep us from things, at that point in life don't need to see. I can agree with age limit but you can't hide everything. Isn't it best to let the children know whats out there before you just letting them go to find out on there own?     You would probably get multiple answers to that question. My personal views @MONTH1 be different from the person sitting bestide me, but I think you should be able to have the right to read, see, and litsen to what you want. The world is not a safe place, its scary and mean to the people. When I raise my children, when they're younger there will be certin things that they wont know and wont see. But thats just part of raising your kids, when they get older and start asking quesions i'm going to answer with the truth.     Is keeping these things from our children lying to them? I would have to say yes to that question. By taking these things away from the youth we are telling them that its not out there, that the world is perfect and there is no wrong. Some people would actually say that, but I have to say to them that they haven't lived. Still to this day there is segregation to all people not just against races but in our own race itself.     To conclude my oppion I would have to say that we should be free to read and see what we want. We shouldn't, not let anyone see it and them and then let them out in the world, and have a complete culture shock. Teach your children whats out there, let them know the truth about the world. Should certain materials be removed from shelves? No, @CAPS1 is to judge what we see and hear?",2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
9442,4,"In the short story “Winter Hibiscus”, the author ends with the main character Saeng saying that she will take the test “when the snow melts and the geese return.” I believe that the Hibiscus and the driver’s test are relevant like the blooming of a flower. If it wilts at the first, it can blossom later on, thus the author included this to show that Saeng wilted at first, but will blossom at spring. It also a symbol of her constant blossoming. The author’s intention of the lost line was demonstrated early when Saeng was disappointed of falling the test. She is upset that she failed her driver’s test, but when she sees a flower from her homeland, she starts to get boosted and start to weep a little. It shows her blossoming because she changes from a negative mood to a positive one, after seeing the flower from her childhood memory. It shows her wilt and blossom again when she tells her mother the news about the test. At first she gets nervous and scared, so scared she tears the leaf off and shreds it to pieces. Her mother then wipes the green matter of and asks her to plant it. Saeng then gets a morale boost and start to feel better. This once again shows her blossoming because she thought her mother would yell at her for failing the test, but instead accepts the plant, showing her rise again. Saeng falters throughout the story, but manages to rise above it all and give herself determination to meet her goal. She is determined to pass the test when spring arrives, and blossom again. The Hibiscus shows it with its budding stage. It will blossom like Saeng.  ",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
4607,2,"Do yo think censorship is a good thing? Do you think libraries should take more responsability on what they offer to people? Many people think they should. But I disagree, if they dont want to learn about that topic than don't read the book.          Public libraries are a great help for the community. They are reallly helpful for children who dont have certain materials at home. Libraries do think about what information children view. That is why there are restricted areas for children of certain age. Also its not always about what the library displays, but also about the parents who let their kids read things they are not supposed to read. If to some people some information is offensive, to others it might not. People will always have different points of view.           This materials cannot be removed, they might be important in some  points of our lifes. All information is helpful in some way. The inmense ammount of knowledge our libraries have should not be taken away just because someone want to",2.0,2.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
1690,1,"My opinion on the effects of computers is that most people in the world spend most of their time sitting on the computer day in and day out. If someone I knew spent all day long on the computer I would tell him or her head on that he or she sould go out side and get some fresh air and get some exrcise. Some times the only way to make contact with them is by talking to them on the computer. Although the computer can be quit helpful by looking up important artifacts or important information about medical plans, tutorials of how to fix, make, or biuld things, and to meet new people, But, the computer can be a dangerous place as well you can meet someone who is lieing about their age that person might rape or miurder/kill you. If you spend twenty-four seven on the computer you could be paralized from lack of exercise or get lumf ophemia thats when your body a pears and will not be a to exercise and would need special treatments. Like masogise. Computers can also be good because it can give you hand eye coordination by useing the still looking sometimes some people for useing the computer: videos, video, and websites. You can get your computer uloaded for for quality. Some systems howe computers in them or can be connected to the computer like the, and the @CAPS1 @NUM1 @CAPS2. There are games called p.c. games some p.c. games comeucicate with childern to teach them how to write, read, spell, and pronounce words. There are also spiecal computers and/or web-sites you can search for tutorial for speaking different langueges. There are also sites you can search for tutorials for playing instroments. Some people use the computer to fill their emptynis inside of them inistead of eating. Some people obeuse the compeuter as a dug like they're addictied to it. Imagine someone addictied to computers every where he/she goes they would take their laptop with them. Many people have died useing the computer but thats because they obeused it. Everyday people buy computers this invention is very helpful as time goes on sciantists are makeing new things to save llives.",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
15622,6,"When designing the mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building to dock dirigibles, the builders came across a few obstacles. A dirigible is a blimp filled with hydrogen and/or helium to keep it lightly in the air. What the builders did not realize ahead of time was that hydrogen is a highly flammable gas. If it is docked on top of a building around movement it could easily catch on fire creating the whole building itself to blow up. Another obstacle that the builders noticed would occurred was the forceful winds. With a dirigible dock so high up in the air, it creates an unstable way for people to get off of it. The vicious winds would make the back of the dirigible to swivel around the mooring mast because only the front would be weighed down. The last obstacle that was found with docking a dirigible, was that it would be too low to an urban area. The dirigible would be too close to walking pedestrians, creating an un-safe enviroment if something was too go wrong. Without taking that chance, it was agreed that there were too many obstacles; therefore, the idea of docking a dirigible on top of the Empire State Building was cancelled.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
15288,6,"In the excerpt ""The mooring mast"" by marcia Amidon Lüsted. The @CAPS1 faced many obstacles. one of the obstacles was that the Back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast. Another obstacles was that the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. These were some of the obstacels the @CAPS1 faced.",1.0,,,,,1.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
6286,3,"There were many features of the setting that affect he cyclist to make his difficut journey to Yosemite. First, it was the old timers at the reservoir campground. They might have been old, but not very wise. For example, “I followed their advice and launched out at first line, nd along a ‘short cut” that was toslice away hours from my ride to Yosemite National Park.” This is describing how the cyclist takes the short cut from the old timers which almost gets him killed @CAPS1, the sun had a warming affect on the cyclist causing him to dehydrate. For example, “I had been hitting my water bottles pretty regularlyand I was traveling through the high deserts of California in June.” This is showing you an image of just how hot the climate he is in. Finally, a lack of water can cause major problems, such as heatstroke or dehydration, yoth which can lead to death. For example “I could drop from heatstroke on a gorgeous day in June…” This is stating without enough water to keep him cool he felt as if he were going to die.  ",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
9964,4,"The last line is included in the story “Winter Hibiscus” because it showed the connection between Saeng and the flower. Even though Saeng failed the driving test the first time she decides to take it again in the spring. The hibiscus flower like Saeng is out of place and will have to make it through the winter into the spring so it can bud again. This shows how like the flower Saeng will bud again in the spring by retaking the driving test. Another reason is that saeng and the flower are not used to the conditions in @LOCATION1. So they both have to weather the winter months they are not used to. This shows again how the last line connects the girl and the flower together. In conclusion, the last line is used in the text to wrap up the story with a connection between the flower and Saeng.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
7326,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist because as the terrain got rougher things to the cyclist got harder. In paragraph @NUM1; there is a senteance that says, “It read: Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit.” In the next paragraph the cyclist comments, “sometimes life can feel so cruel.” @CAPS1 because the road ahead got rough to the cyclist life was cruel. All the features like the snake, lack of water and rolling hills are all obsticules in life, people have to experience. We might not like it but the reward at the end is wonderful.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9632,4,"I the narrator this paragraph in the story because hibiscus is a valueable plant and garden is you own decision if you like to grow things like her mother grow hot pepper. Garden is a way to @CAPS1 different like the different types of foods you can plant and the different plants in the world there eg @CAPS2, lilis, and other other plants like that.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
13022,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir was a mood of admiration. I think it was a mood of admiration because Narciso admires the fact that his mother and father both left their ""families, friends, and careers in the country they loved."" @CAPS1 mood that the memoir sets is the mood of family and friends. I think the memoir sets the mood family and friend because it talks alot about the meaning of family for example in paragraph @NUM1 the author says ""Growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense that 'family' had nothing to do with being blood relative."" That means that even though someone is not blood related to you can love them just as much as if they were. @CAPS1 thing the memoir said was ""I learned the real definition of 'family'. And for this, I will never forget that house or its gracious neighbor hood or the many things I learned there about how to love. I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" This means that his parents turned a small house into a welcoming. loving place that holds so many memories.",4.0,,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
8897,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because when saeng and her mother go back to there home where the flowers were more beautiful than the flowers where there living now. She wants to plant flowers that’s going to remind her of her home. In the story saeng mother said that it’s flowers aren’t as pretty, but it’s strong enough to make it through the cold months here this winter hibiscus her mother wanted her to know that the only thing that maths is that the plant can last threw winter.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
16395,6,"There were many obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced such as the high winds, and how they could dock the dirigibles when it is against the law to fly an aircraft to low near urban areas. one obstacle the builders faced was the safety of the dirigibles anchoring above busy streets filled with people and high winds. Most dirigibles out of the United States used hydrogen rather then helium, and hydrogen is highly flamable, so any foreign dirigible that was anchored at the Empire State building would cause a safety issue because the high winds at the top of the building could cause an accident to occur causing the dirigible to blow up and potentially endanger pedestrians. Another obstacle the builders faced is the law that made it illegal for dirigibles to ever dock at building because it was illegal for aircrafts to fly to low near urban areas and it would have been a long process to ever get the government to let them.",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
1359,1,"Dear Newspaper, Computers have a huge effect on society, can you even imagine where we would be without them? They are great for communication, learning, and shopping. Computers have a large effect on people. Without computers, communication with co-workers, family, and friends would be nearly impossible. Social networking sites, such as @CAPS1, @CAPS2, @CAPS3, and @CAPS4-In play a huge wrolein everyday life. These are the sites you use to access information from others to making plans for the weekend. Do you think that your children use the intrenet too much? Nowadays, that is their way to communicate with their peer. It makes them more social, which is a great quality to have in life. Also, I don'd know about you, but I have talked to many people around the world using the internet. It gives you the chance to experince other cultures. Communication was absolutely not as easy before having computers. It @MONTH1 seem hard to believe, but you can learn tremendous amounts @MONEY1 things from the internet. This @MONTH1 include learning about people. How would you video chat with someone without @CAPS5 or @ORGANIZATION2? You can learn a lot about a person from talking to the face to face, a thing that can't be done on a phone. Also, research for school could not be done without the internet. In a recent survey, @NUM1 out @MONEY1 @NUM2 teenagers said that they use a search engine site, such as @ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS6, or @ORGANIZATION3 at least once a day, @CAPS7 out @MONEY1 those @NUM1 said that it is for school. If it weren't for these search engines, children wouldn't be doing too great in school. Clearly, the computer provides ample ways to research and learn on a daily basis. It @MONTH1 sound rediculous, but in @DATE2, @PERCENT1 @MONEY1 shopping was done on the internet. If someone wants to start a business, their first stop is usually the internet. People are making @MONEY1 every year with the help @MONEY1 computers. People find it easiest to buy something with the click @MONEY1 a mouse. It is easier than the hassle @MONEY1 crowded malls and long lines. Also, do you remember when @CAPS8 @DATE1 was the time to put the alarm clock on for @NUM4 @CAPS9? Well, how people do @CAPS10 shopping online, there are hundreds, even thousands @MONEY1 sites that offer great sales. Now think about how purchasing items would be if it weren't for the internet. It's not agreat image, is it? As you can tell, computers have affected our lives in a great way. Communication, learning, and even shopping have become much simpler. Many @MONTH1 think that computers are not bad to have, but the good over shadows those aspects.",5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
15183,6,"while attempting to let dirigibles dock at the Empire State Building, the builders faced many obstacles. For one thing, there wasn't a whole lot of landing room in New York City for them which ultimately made things tougher. Also, they were forced to put more work into the building by strengthening and modifying the steel frame of it to accommodate the new situation. A lot of money was spent on these new renevations, over sixty thousand dollars. This was done mainly to reduce stress on the building's frame. But overall they managed to get it all done, and make their way through these tricky obstacles.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
3898,2,"Older authors love to write grusome stories about their pasts, whether it's fiction or nonfiction. Sometimes those books can get into the wrong hands and end up in the trash or burned. Other times parents get angry at what they're children are doing and saying, and they normally blame television or other kids at school. Parents don't always look at the big picture.      Any child at anytime can walk right into their school or public library and pick up an inappropriate magazine,book, or movie, but parents don't usually catch on until it's too late. There are all kinds of books out there and no two books are the same. Nobody can tell a book is going to be inappropriate just by looking at the front cover. Even though books are meant to be read, it doesn't mean they should be read by all age groups.      No book at any point in time should be completely removed from a library, that's just not right. No matter how graphic, perverted, or inapproriate a book can get, it should never be thrown away. Those certain books are written for people with those kinds of interests. Even books about drugs should be allowed to be read, some children or adults could be interested in what they really do do to your body and mind, and they'd rather read a book about it rather than trying it themselves. Books about murder should also be allowed to be read, but not by children under twelve. If people in libraries would just start putting books in organized age groups then there probably wouldn't be any problems.      The author should never be blamed for something they wrote. It's their own personal thoughts and feelings and most of all it's their story. It's how they wanted it to be written and nobody should get mad over that. The rule should apply for magazines, music, and movies. Those people wrote the books, movies, magazines, and music so it should be expressed the way they wanted it to be. Even if the authors themselves thought their own writing was too bad for a child to read, or hear they would make it clear by putting something like, 'not for children under the age of twelve or whatever age they recommend.'     If adults are really getting mad about this then they need to look back at the kinds of things they were doing, saying, or reading and maybe it would change their outlook a little on movies, magazines, music, and books.",4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
15066,6,"The builders of the empire state building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigible to dock there. One obstacle they faced was that if a thousand-foot dirigible was moored at the top of the building by a single cable tether, it would add stress to the building's frame. Another obstacle they faced was that most dirigibles from outside the united states used hydrogen not helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable. The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature. The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting because of violent air currents. Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around the mooring mast. Those are some of the obstacles they faced trying to dock on the building.",3.0,,,,,3.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
10037,4,"In the short story ""Winter Hibiscus,"" a young girl from vietnam moves to @LOCATION1 and fails the drivers test. After she decides to spend money on a winter hibiscus to remind her of her homeland, The ending paragraph, ""who troy come back, in the spring when the snow melts and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take the test again. shows deep feeling towards nature. She feels as when the Geese we ready to return home and when the hibiscus is ready to bud so will she and she will take to drivers test again.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
57,1,"in @DATE1 has become far more advanced. Computers are one of the most futiristic objects. The computer is good for connecting to people around the world. However, computers have bad effects on people's lives. Children are taking time out of their homework to go on the computer, citizens are gaining weight, and children are being kidnapped. School is very important and valuable if you want to suceed in life. However, computers have made it difficult for students to concentrat on their homework. This is a horrible habbit and a bad effect on students every where. Students grades will suffer and will not obtain class credits if this problem is not mentioned. Obesity is a huge problem in @LOCATION1, five out of every ten @CAPS1 are either overweight or obese. This can lead to death. The problem is that people are spending hours on the computer each day. Most of that time can be used to exercise. Exercising can be an important benefit to someone's life. If this problem is not addressed millions of americans will be overweight, @CAPS2 is a very serious and dangerous topic. Every month dozend of kids are kidnapped. Since the internet was invented there is a twenty percent increase rate of kids missing children will go on poppular networking websites such as @CAPS3, @CAPS4, and twitter and give out their important information. Pedophiles use the internet to trick children in to giving their address. This problem needs to stop and be addressed by the police. Everyday, more and more people use computers. Compuers have good and bad effects on peoples lives. The bad effects are very serious and dangerous. How would you feel if your child fails school, gains weight, or gets kidnapped because of the computer?",5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
4706,2,"In my personal opinon I think that those books that have things that you don't want to read or you think are offensive should stay. It's not like that person that is offended by it has to read it.            Say you are in the library and you see a book that you think offends you. You think to your self that book should be removed from the library just because you think it is offensive, but you have to think in other peoples shoes.     Just becaus you think a book is offensive doesn't mean that everyone else will think it is. That is why they have age groups and grade levels that are set up so a kid who likes picture books will not get stuck with a book that has curse words or other things that are meant for adults. Same concept with movies, magazines, music, and etc.     Take this for example. I was walking through the library when I saw a book called @CAPS1 the @ORGANIZATION1, and I thought to myself that looks like a stupid book and I wouldn't want to read it. I think that they should throw this book away. Now lets think does that sound fair. Maybe that is some kids favorite book and when he comes in there the next day it is gone.      What about this, lets say you go in to look for your favorite book and you find out that someone found it offensive or someone just didn't like it as much as you did so they threw it away. Doesn't seem to fair does it.     In conclusion that is what i think about removing books that are offensive or some people just don't like. I think they should leave it on there because we shouldn't remove it based on our personal opinon.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
4760,2,"Certain books, magazines, music and movies should not be put on the shelves of a library. Children can learn rude or nasty things that their parents might not find alright for their child. There are some things that can be offensive in a library like prejudice books or music. Often music uses swearing language or states certain views on politics.     Libraries need to take control of this issue the right way. Getting rid of the material is not what should be done. Libraries need to keep better watch over certain sections of the library. They could do this by not letting children leave their parents side. That way parents can know and control what their children are seeing.     Then there is the issue of offending people. These problems could be resolved simply by putting up signs in different spots of the library. These sign could be in big bold letters stating 'Certain things in this section can be offending', '@CAPS1 control needed past this point'. Libraries should be more aware of how people feel about the way they are set up and presented to the public. Libraries should put them selves in the publics shoes, to see how they would like it if some of these things were showed to their children. Also, looking at things in a point of view of how some things could be offending, to fix the problems.     Once when I was in a library I was offended by a book title that was against my religion. After seeing that I thought if their were a sign or something around to warn me I would not of had to see that. Other things like this have occured in a library like one time my brother rented a movie my parents did not approve of. But with the way the libraries are set up and controled my brother was able to rent the movie and sneak it past my parents. Other children like my brother could do the same things only worse like look at an inappropiate magazine or read certain books that parents would not approve.     These types of occurances need to stop before something really bad happens. Libraries need to take control and show they know how to present things to the public in a proper manner. Actions that are happening in todays libraries are not alright. Putting up signs and requiring @CAPS1 control can reduce if not elliminate these unapproved occurances",4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
15361,6,"The-builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in allowing dirigibles to dock there. Safety was the biggest concern at each stage. The recent explosion of the Hindenburg showed potential problems in docking these aircraft. If a blimp was to explode in downtown New York, it could be a disaster. Another obstacle that would be faced is nature. The winds on the top of the building were constantly changing. The unpredictable wind atop the building made the idea of mooring a zeppelin very illogical. At this time, laws against flying low in urban areas were coming around. These would make for docking the airships to be illegal. The idea for making the Empire State Building a mooring post was an engineering feat but the actual usage of it was not practical.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
12034,5,"The author created a very grateful/happy mood in the memoir. For example in paragraph @NUM1 when Narciso says ""I will always be greatful to my parents for the love and sacrifice. When he is saying this he is showing he is happy w/ his parents. I the memoir he talks about how he loves his house and why he loves his house and all the great memories in that house and that shows that this memoir mood is a more happy mood instead of sad for example paragraph @NUM2 when he says ""It was in the warmth of the kitchen in this combo house were a cuban feast always filled the air with not just sent and music but life and love."" Also when he said in paragraph @NUM2 that"" It here where i learned the real defenition of family. And for this i will never forget that house or its gracious neighborhood or the many things i learned there about how to love.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
12110,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"", the author created a happy tone throughout the whole story. Narcisco talked about how when he moved to @LOCATION1 he moved into a three-bedroom apartment. He brought with him the love of cooking. ""My parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their rich culinary skills and a love for cooking that is still with me today. Narciso was very grateful that his parents came to @LOCATION1 to help him make his home seem more like a traditional Cuban home. ""It was a simple house that my parents welcomed other refugees to celebrate their arrival to this country and where I celebrated my first birthdays. It was in the warmth of the kitchen in this humble house where a Cuban feast always filled the air with not just scent and music but life and love. It was here where I learned the real definition of ""family"", and for that I will never forget that house or its gracious neighborhood or the many things I learned there. I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home.""",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
408,1,"I believe that computers have a negitive effect on people. Using the computer effects a person's time because the sit for hours playing online games, @CAPS1 also effects there heath because there not getting any fresh air or spending time with there family, lastly @CAPS1 effects there education because time they could be using doing there homework there on there computer. First useing the computer effects a person's time, @CAPS1 does that by wasteing hours sitting there when you could be outside playing or doing chores around your house. You could be helping your family or friends out but instead playing computer games. There goes all the time you could have been doing something good, wasted because of the computer. The computer also effects you heath because your in a room inside not getting any air. You're also not exerciceing and helping your body out. This could effect your emotional heath. When your on the computer your not talking to people and becoming social and you could loose connections with you friend and your family. When you loose your connections and become you will use your computer more and then @CAPS1 will become worse. My last reason is that @CAPS1 effects education because when you could be doing your homework and studing for an important lest on your on the computer learning nothing, then you will school and possably mess for ever! This is really bad because you were on the computer. A couple times I pushed homework aside to use the computer and my grades drops alot. So this is why @CAPS1 effects education. These are the reasons how the computer effects education, your heath, and your time. I know your thinking that computers could be used for education, but humans prefer fun over anything else and I hoped this helped you realized that.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
815,1,"Dear Newspaper, Computers today have a negative effect on people. The valuable time of getting daily exercise is reduced, you will not see your family enough and some of the costs are outrageous! Owning a computer is surely not a good idea. is sitting around all day your idea of a workout? Having a computer would be very bad for your physical lifestyle. Clicking a mouse & typing away are only moving your hands, not your whole body. An individual who doesn't use the computer daily, or f or large amounts of time would be healthier than someone who always uses the computer. I remember seeing a commercial about @NUM1 children & how their lives eneded up later on in life just by their computer usage as a ""tween."" Not only will you be unhealthy but anti-socialism is probable too. Many kids, or even adults, spend precious family time playing the sims @NUM2 creating their own ideal family. This however, is not acceptable. Spending time with your family is something precious. When asked about computer usage, @PERSON1 said, ""you could easily became addicted with just @NUM2 turns!"" @CAPS1 you are addicted, both your family & you suffer. They will stop inviting you places. You wouldn't want to loose the people who are going to be ther for you, on another what. ""@CAPS2!"" shouts your computer. You have another virus. uh oh, it's deleting your hardware: all your scholastic essays, important book-marked websites & sentimental photographs. Do you have any idea how much it would cost to even try to retrieve this data? Well, it'd be alot. I know youre probably thinking, ""This couldn't happen to me,"" but in reality; yes it can storing things on a computer is much riskier than having a hard copy. It will also save you more money. Furthermore, appliances use electricity @CAPS1 they're even plugged into an outlet! So when you get your electric bill, don't be surprised, computers can be very costly which, is why it's not worth it to have one. Computers are just another unnecessary thing in life. It will take away from your over-all health, reduce family time, & cost you same big bucks. It is a fact that you can survive without a computer. But without hjealth? Well, you'd be dead. I you to consider my ideas.",4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
12129,5,The mood is very warm and welcoming. It starts off with a beautiful and culturally enriched apartment. Then talks about delicious foods and great music. But at the end it leaves off on a sadder tone of her parents leaving to make a better life.,0.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
14886,6,"Some of the obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there were mainly weather and safety. In paragraph @NUM1 the author says ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents"". This means that because of the wind and air currents always shifting the the dirigibles would be hard to control. Another obstacle they faced was safety. Also in paragraph @NUM1 the author says ""Dirigibles moored in open landing fields could be weighted down in the back with lead weights... where they would be dangling high above pedestrians on the street..."" @CAPS1 that means is having something heavy dangling above people is not a good idea. It wouldn't be a good idea because if the weight would of disconnected from the dirigibles there is a possibility that somebody could get injured badly. Those obstacles are @CAPS1 builders of the Empire State Building faced in allowing dirigibles to dock.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
3600,2,"Parents should tell their kids what they are allowed to read at certain ages. That is where my opinion will start, and tell why it is that way. I will talk about why I disagree with this statement. Also, give reasons on why i feel this way about the statement.     I really think that anyone should be able to read the kind of books that they like. The library is where they get the books from. So, just because a parent does not want their child to read a certain book doesn't mean that the book shouldn't be there. I think that parents need to tell their children why they do not want them to read a book.     If the parents explain, kids will understand why it is not good for them. Those type of books are what older people like and they are very interesting. I think if people understand what the book talks about and if it does not bother them, then they are old enough for it. Also, the young kids that should not be reading these books should have and adult or guardian with them, therefore they can stop the kid from reading something that is not appropriate.     Something else that will bother many people is them not being able to get a book just because parents do not like it. This is taking a right away from us, and we should not have to go buy the book and only read it once. If these books are so horrible than why would people still be writing them? So, if they have not bothered people that bad yet then there is no reason for people to not like it now. People should be able to do what they enjoy and not have that taken from them.     This is my opinion of the statement. Many people @MONTH1 not agree but I just tried to make people to see my point of this statement. Then everyone can help stop people taking things away from the community that makes them happy. Also, I hope people can still have their rights and not let a couple people take it away from them.",4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
15164,6,"Throughout the process of building the Empire State Building with dirigibles dock there were many complications. At @CAPS1 the building was unable to simply put a mooring mast on top of the building. The roof was flat, therefore the dirigible would add stress to the building. They would need over @MONEY1 to modify the building framework. Then they realized that most dirigibles used hydrogen rather than helium, hydrogen is highly flammable which would be unsafe. They ran into a problem with nature itself. At the top of the Empire State Building the winds constantly shifted because of the violent air currents. Even if they were to tether the mooring mast, the back of the ship would spin around and around the mooring mast. Therefore with people all over the streets in @CAPS2 this was neither possibly or safe. There was also an exisisting law against flying airships too low over urban areas. All this gave way to airplanes, so even though dirigibles didn't work it helped.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
15802,6,The builders of the Empire state building faced a lot of obstacles attempting dirigibles to dock their. One of the first obstacle the builders faced was realizing that the dirigible moored at the top of the building would add stress to the building's frame. The builder's realized that the wind pressure could make the dirigible swivel which would not be suitable for the foundation of the building. strengthening the building's structure would cost over sixty thousand dollars. The workers also realize that the dirigibles are flamable and if something were to go wrong it would cause a devestation to a such populated area. These obstacles put and end to the dream of having mooring mast on top of the Empire state building.,3.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
9177,4,"The author concludes the story with that paragraph in hope. The conclusion the author made was to say in over that amount of time, Saeng will have overcome that failure and will be more prepared for the test for a second time. In the text, it says how Saeng realized that many of the things she thought of as strange before have become almost familiar which is an improvement.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
1448,1,"Dear Newspaper, Have you ever stopped to think what modern day technology brought us? A great example is computers. Many people use this device to book vacation, talk and build relationship people and to discover new ideas the world have to make the disagree strongly. The hot sun glaring down at you just is killing you not to book a vacation to a tropical island! Many people go on vacation and what brought them here has when they sat and places. the computer looking at hotels and booking thou, This modern day technology has brought many humans to places they wanted to go. Over @PERCENT1 of @CAPS1's have a chat account to talk with family and friends. The country of europe to the @LOCATION1 is over @NUM1 miles and every time you make a call it can lead to alot of big kills. Modern technology has outsmost the phones and is now using the computer to talk to far away friends and family. In the progress the computer has put over @NUM2 of single people and expressing the relationship. Many arguments have been lead to because of the disagreement. Many critic and saying not many people interact with family and friends. On the other hand the computer has that many people are connecting and communicating @CAPS2 they can set a plan to @CAPS3 many critics have people and spends the computer. Although this is true there should desicions that will improve the health of the human by limiting usage of them. Setting standards on computers can improve this problems and help exercising. In this case I strongly disagree with the critics and for my side of good uses. If they took them away not only will people files fall but everyone will be disorganized in the bong run. Lastly discovering places and websites teaches even the smartes guy or girl something new. After reading this if have proven that my @CAPS4 should be admired by many people.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
3290,2,"Books mean a lot to people that love to read. Books have pictures, or they @MONTH1 even be poem books. Some books should not be on the shelves in libraries. They have offesive language and not so well of pictures. They @MONTH1 be learning books but the little kids do not need to see that. I think books should be removed from the shevles if found offensive.      Libraries need to up their standards of what should be in the library and what should not. The books, movies, music, ect. needs to be in a certain section of the library to where the little kids can not go or reach. A library is a family place not a fun zone for adults.     On @DATE1, I went to the library with my brother to pick out a book for him. @CAPS2 is only six about to be seven. He had told me he wanted to get a book about dinosuars, but I told him to get one on space and aliens. @CAPS2 was very into reading. He  read to our mom everynight before he would go to bed. We were walking down @CAPS1 street when a bolt of lighting struck through the trees. 'ekkkk!' said @CAPS2 as he ran around me. We walk into the library and the old lady at the front desk says, 'there is a huge storm coming.' We sorta ignore her and go on about our bussiness picking our books for @CAPS2. @CAPS2 and I walk up stairs to the childrens section. @CAPS2 is looking around and he says 'hey kayla, what is this and he picks up a naughty magaizine. i rush over to snach it out of his hands and he gets scared. He ask 'but sissy what is that?' I do not respond. I tell him to pick a book and come on. He grabs one and we are on our way to get it checked out and the lights go off. It was completely dark. '@CAPS3 stay calm.' a man says. The back up lights come on and we all go to the lobby area. We sit there for twenty mins and the lights are back on. Everything is normal again and we go to check out. We get up to the front and i turn in the bad magazine that @CAPS2 had found. The lady askd why I was bringing it to her and i had to tell her the bad news, that it was up in the childrens section. She said 'oh my!' @CAPS2 laid his books up on the counter and we checked out. We walked out the front doors and we were on our way home.",2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
3809,2,"I believe that censorship is rarely acceptable, and certainly not in libraries, at school or otherwise. Censorship prevents knowledge from being obtained, spreading ignorance and intollerance. Libraries and schools are meant to be places that encourage free thinking, discovery, and learning. Censorship stops these things from occuring.     If people are prevented from reading what they want, then many will not read, period. Not all children and teens are drawn to reading. If there is a book that a reluctent reader shows interest in, then why would someone want to take it away? Because @CAPS11 or she finds it offensive? Because @CAPS11 or she does not agree with the views expressed? Neither are legitimate reasons for censorship.      Most justifications for censorship would not stand the test of time. A great number of books challenged in the past are today considered classics and/or important works, such as To @CAPS1 a @CAPS2, @ORGANIZATION1, The @CAPS3 of @ORGANIZATION2, and @CAPS4 @CAPS5 @PERSON3. To @CAPS1 a @CAPS2 and @PERSON1 were censored because of the racist language. @CAPS12 language helps to set the time period in the novels. Also, To @CAPS1 a @CAPS9 is about a lawyer who defends a wrongly accused black man in @LOCATION1. The main antagonist is an ignorant, rascist man. The book itself is not racist, only the villian of the story.     Censorship for such reasons is different than not allowing a young child to watch something violent. Preventing a child from seeing a rated @CAPS10 movie or reading a letter to @ORGANIZATION3 is a separate issue from censorship. I define censorship as preventing someone from seeing or reading something due to personal views rather than for the good of the sheltered person. Keep children sheltered when they are young, if one must, but as they grow older and mature, it is essential that they are allowed to mature in their reading, as well.     If someone lives their life reading only the books others choose for him or her and seeing only the movies and shows chosen for him or her, then @CAPS11 or she will not be his or her own person. Living a sheltered life can catch up to people when they reach adulthood. They will not have their own views, and will be largely ignorant to the world around them. @PERSON2 said, '@CAPS11 who destroys a good book, kills reason itself.' @CAPS12 is what happens to people who have grown up among censorship; they have very little reason. Censorship can mold people, not for the better. People who grow up free to read and watch generally what they wish can turn out differently.     These people can have views and values of their own, formed by, among other factors, influential books they have read throughout their life. Many of these people better understand others, promoting tolerance. Censorship takes away all of those wonderful qualities from people. Anyone is capable of possessing them.      Censorship cannot be seen as the norm. Libraries and schools should allow children and teenagers to learn and grow.That is the purpose of the institution of education. Therfore, censorship should not even be considered. Students' freedom to read what they desire should be the policy of all schools and libraries",6.0,5.0,6.0,6.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,28.0
10533,4,The reason why the author concludes the story with this paragraph is because it was a good way to end the story off. At the end of this they was talkin about how saeng would come back when the snow melt and then she will take the test again.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
6941,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist because he had limited water, he had to peddle harder to get up over the hills and he was getting dehydrated from the heat. For example, he had limited water because he had taken the directions from the old men and probably didn’t bring as much as he would have if he would have taken a longer way. Furthermore, to get up the rolling hills he had to peddle faster and harder. That affected him because he would have been more exhausted from peddling. Moreover, it was a June day and in June the days are hot with the lack of a good amount of water the cyclist would have started to get dehydrated. This is how the setting affected the cyclist",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
3426,2,I think that we should censor things our children read and look at in the libraries.They are young eyes and they are to young to be looking at that stuff.They would be taught the wrong thing at a very young age.They would grow up the wrong way.We need to take a stand on what are kids look at.Fr the future we need censorship.please everyone take a stand,2.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,1.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
3714,2,"Yes, I do believe that certain materials, such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc.,  should be removed from the shelves if thery are found offensive. The reason why I think some things shuld be removed is because some kids don't need to look at certain things. Parents don't always go with there children to the library and tell them what they can and can't get. At school libraries they really dont have bad things they only have school approte things. But the public library has alot of different things and than a school library. Therefore those are my reaons why i believe certain materials should be removed.",1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
16349,6,"Based on the excerpt there are three reason's why there were obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. These reason's were, one it was to close to the city and not high up (short). The second reason is because the wind spun the blimp around the mast. And the third reason is because German blimps were filled with hydrogen, if next to heat it would blow up. And @LOCATION1 blimps were filled with helium.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
7185,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist in several ways. First the rolling hills make it hard to pedal over the land. ""Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills,"" shows that the terrain was changing into a more difficult course. One long crippling hill,"" also shows how the hills had an effect on the cyclist. Another feature of the setting was the desert and the high temperatures. This caused the cyclist to become dehydrated. ""Trying to keep balance in my dehydrated state"" and ""I could drop from heatstroke"" show me how hot the cyclist was. One final feature that has on effect on the cyclist was the old abandoned factory. The sight of the boy with a refreshing glass of juice makes the cyclist lose hope and he doubts he will survive. ""I hung my head"" and ""abandoned factory of juices and dreams"" tell how the cyclist lost all hope at the sight of the building. All of these features of the setting have negative affects on the cyclist.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
16598,6,"The weight was an obstacle they faced. ""A thousand-foot dirigible moored at the to of the building, held by single cable tether, would add stress to the building's Frame. The stress of the dirigible's load and wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's Foundation, which was nearly eleven hundred feet below. The steel frame of the Empire State building would have to be modified & strengthened to accommodate this new situation."" The weight of the dirigible would be to heavy for the frame because the frame wasn't made for that much weight. Some dirigible were highly flammable ""Most dirigibles from outside of the united states used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" They felt that it was to dangerous because it was located in a densely populated area. The air pressure was another obstacle that was faced. ""Fearing the winds would blow the dirigible onto the sharp spires of other building in the area, which would puncture the dirigibles shell...."" The last obstacle was the law. ""The other particle reason why dirigibles could not moor at the Empire State Building was an existing law against airships flying to low over urban areas. This law would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area..."" This law wouldn't allow dirigible to land at the Empire State Building due to its location.",4.0,,,,,4.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
4480,2,"When you have children would you want to shield them from something you think is wrong, even though it goes on in the world around you every single day? Today in society even though we have freedom of speech the government has come up with something to even conflict that, censorship.    One thing about censorship is that it is just a way the government can control what everyday people say, hear, listen to, read, or even see in today's society. We shouldn't be controlled on what we can or can't read, watch, or listen to. I have experienced these things almost on a daily basis if it isn't on the radio it's on television. When someones words get beeped out for saying something vulgar or innapropriate.     The second thing about censorship is that no matter what it is, where it is, or even who it is someone will always have a problem with it. Just recently in one of my own classes we read an article about a very popular chldren's and young adult's film and a school tried to ban its books from its library because it dealt with sorcery. Most of every person I know that has read those books knows that sorcery isn't real. Why do people find it necessary to do things like that? I think most people just view something that could be entertaining to one person as completely disgusting and disturbing, just because it is a little bit different, I find that as unique not bad.      The third thing is no matter what public libraries shouldn't be censored. Everyone views things differently and they all have different tastes in music, literature, and films. Just because someone likes something someone else @MONTH1 find vulgar doesn't mean they should just be able to remove that from the library's public shelves. After all the library is public and I put a great deal of stress on it being public because every person in the world today are all different.     Today in society even though we have freedom of speech the government has come up with something to even conflict that, censorship. Leaving off on a lighter foot, whether it is purple or green, or old or new, someone will always be able to find something wrong with it. I'm sorry to today's society for not being able to realize that most of its problem is trying to control everything that everyone does",4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,23.0
129,1,"Hi! My name is @PERSON1 and I think computers are not bad. I think this because yes, people do play the computer to much, but they can also learn a lot of things. Another reason is that some kids like bullys can stop bulling and spend time on the computer to stay away from stress. You can also talk to your friends and even video chat with them too. Computers can teach you a lot. For example @CAPS1 your computer breaks or has virus you can just figure out the problem by yourself. You can also learn or read the news that your missing. For example you can also ask questions that you don't understand and people would answer your question. In moder afoot kids, teens, and even adult computers to look up things that they don't understand. For example, when I read along a book and read a word that I don't know and read around @CAPS1 I still don't now I would go to @LOCATION1 and find what the words mean. Bullys and other people like street people that have computers should stay on the computer and you can just play games. They can play hitting games, shooting games, and even board games. You can even watch fights @CAPS1 you want. What ever you want you got it. This is a good thing because then no one will get and everyone will be happy. Bullys can also go on the computer to relax and stay away from people that they hate. The computers can make you relax because you don't have to be around people and you can just tell the computer to do what ever you want. Kids, teens, and adult don't have to leave the house justto talk to a friend or two. I said this because most computers hace a microcam and you can comminicate with others. For example my dad is trying to get a computer with a micro-cam so that he can be incontact with my mom, my brother, my sister, and I. He has to get one because the doesn't live with us any more. He had to leave and go back to @LOCATION2. Another example, would be that @CAPS1 one of your friends move far, far away you can just talk to them on the micro-cam or even send message back and forth. So I think computers are not a bad idea or a bad things. I say this because you can learn, stay good, and communicate.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
4162,2,"Throughout the years, many events have taken place in our history. Throughout these times the events have been recorded, journaled, and filmed. These thoughts, opinions, and facts @MONTH1 be offensive to a select few in our @CAPS2. The question is, 'Should our libraries take these 'offensive' pieces off the shelves?' The simple answer to this highly disputed question is no. Censoring our libraries would be a harmful and wrong thing to do to the general public.      Censoring our libraries creates an illusion of a perfect @CAPS2. If libraries were filled with tasteless articles and perfect fairyland books the library would become a place where reality is not present. Libraries hold information that is raw and true without leaving the facts behind. People need to get a taste of reality in order to survive in the 'real @CAPS2' and one of the greatest ways to abtain this knowledge is through books. Being exposed to offensive material and different viewpoints helps shape ourselves into who we are or will become. To take this away would be harming our development and growth, thus creating an 'imperfect' @CAPS2.      Certain points in history are not something that everyone can be proud of. The @CAPS1, @LOCATION1's genocide, and @CAPS2 @CAPS3 @CAPS4 are all devastating points in time that can be a touchy subject to one and few people. However, history is an important factor in everyones lives; we know history in order to not repeat it. Losing this information is way for people to not be clearly informed, harming the future outcome of our society. Without public records of these happenings, it can cause confusion and misconcepted views of important topics. If we censor all the media from libraries across the nation, ordinary people, such as yourself, would be 'living in the dark.'     As people develop their own opinions and views overtime they begin to distinguish the difference between right and wrong. Your rights @MONTH1 be someone else's wrongs. What @MONTH1 be offensive to you, @MONTH1 not be offensive to the person sitting next to you. Quoted by the author Katherine Paterson, '...if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf...you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' In truth, by removing offensive material from our bookshelves there would be no media left. Not everyone will have the same opinion on matters that hold importance, but that is why the @CAPS2 goes around. We as a society have the right to guard our ability to share opinions, censorship destroys our ability to do so.      Everyone is different. The @CAPS2 is full of diversity and viewpoints that are bursting with interesting concepts. By censoring records of history, opinion, observations, our @CAPS2 becomes an illusion. We need to have these facts available to the general public. By ridding ourselves of 'offensive' media we cannot share our opinions with one another for a more successful @CAPS2. Censorship should not be allowed in libraries because it is harmul to our growth as a society and is overall the wrong thing to do",4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
9161,4,"In “Winter Hibiscus” by Minfong Ho, the author ended the story with that particular paragraph to symbolize new beginnings. The story is all about the failure and shame felt by Saeng when she failed her driving test, and how finding a familiar hibiscus plant gave her a new lease on life. By buying the hibiscus, Saeng was reminded of her home, and by giving that single hibiscus a new, unfamiliar place to thrive in, as she was. She was able to make a connection with the plant. The spring symbolizes the beginning of a new year, and the budding hibiscus represents the start of its new life, and so Saeng wants to restart her life when the plant restarts its life and retaking her driving test.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
707,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, I'm writing to you because I believe that people in the @LOCATION1 over use computers these days. I think that instead of home on your lazy and playing farmville and pets on facebook you should get out more. I think that you should @CAPS8 the gym and work out you should @CAPS8 out to the park or have family fun night with your kids (@CAPS1 you have any) The last thing I think you should @CAPS7 is @CAPS8 have a little ""@CAPS2"" time for example take your self somewere nice (you'll about time in a second) @DATE1 all you've done is sit home playing farmville and other games and what not you probably get really fastly and you eating right? well @CAPS1 @CAPS3.... boy you gained some pounds of the @DATE1 and you look you need to get your self to a gym. from sitting on your while on the @CAPS9 every day you any calories or fat @CAPS3 when you eat all your doing is gaining weight. and @CAPS4 you probably don't want to. @CAPS7 you have a family? Well @CAPS1 you @CAPS7 I think that taking a family trip to the park would be fun or going to @ORGANIZATION1 would be a fun way @CAPS3 you can get your hands off those keys and your head with your kids. Also you should make other nightfamily fun night and play games and hang out with family on family fun night you can play characles or a board game. (as long as you don't have a in your house) The last my favorite one is ""@CAPS4"" Time. During ""@CAPS4"" Time you can take your self shopping out to lunch/dinner you even take a map the whole point of ""@CAPS4"" Time is that You @CAPS7 NOT @CAPS8 ON THE @CAPS9!! you need to relax and just take a brake. Well those are my suggestions to you. @CAPS3 now its your turn to jump on out of virtual world and put your head back in reality.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
6394,3,He race trying to get yosemitre for some rushing river,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
3232,2,"Do you believe that certain materials,such as books, music, movies, magazines, ect., offensive? Support your position with convincing arguments from your own experince, observations, and/or reading.           I do believe that if it's a book you not suppose to get, if it's not for age group, don't get it. Some libraries contains books that's highly not appropriate for children, they have sections for adults and children to check out books. Some libraries need book monitors to guide and put up certain types of books.The library is  a plcae with all types of books, so you should go to your own section and check out your type of book.           When I first went to the library for the time I didn't know what book to check out, so the librarian should me my section by showing me my age group. By then I was checking out books that was appropriate for my age, magazines I didn't care to much about, I just wanted to read a whloe book.              In conclusion, when ever you nedd a book good or check out your section, make the book is appropriate for you and feed you mind with knowledge.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
4734,2,"Todays world is filled with rasicm and critisim. Anything we do is either right or wrong, no inbetween. Whenever your out to eat, or shopping you can hear offensive comments or images all around you.  The newspaper, news, and internet make events appear worse than what it is, if it refers to certain people they take it offensive.     If you go out looking for a good book to read, or a movie to watch, or music to listen to laying in bed, you pick what interests you. When your looking through the selection you're going to see and reconize titles, or pictures that offend you. I know when I do I pick the object up and look and see what it says on the back.     In someway, someone, is going to find a movie, music, books, or magazine offensive. Say we take everything off the shelves off every store that is offensive in any way to people. What would be on the shelves? Nothing, @CAPS1 have to right to write about anything they want, singers have the right to sing about what they want.     In the @ORGANIZATION1 every single person has the freedom of speech. So libraries can't take something off the shelves just because someone @NUM1 it offensive. That's the point of the different genres of music and reading, so you can read and listen to what you want.     Every @CAPS2 has the choice of what they pick up and listen to or read. If someone finds something offensive, then they shouldn't pick the object up. Then, when that person complains about it, the bottom line is that it's their fault for reading it.     There's going to be offensive things said about race, culture, looks, and weight. That's just apart of life and how people act anymore. There;'s just a point when you have to be the bigger person and ignore it and move on.     So, no I do not believe that offensive books, music, or magazines shoulkd be removed from libraries or stores. We have the choice to pick what we read and listen to.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
6102,3,"The cyclist trusted a man that didn`t know much about the world, he thought that the guy would know how to get to the place he was looking for. The cyclist took his advice, he thought that he would be there really soon so he start to drink his water really fast. He realized that he was out of water and the park he was going to wasen’t anywhere near. The cyclist got frustrated and angry he was now crossing the desert which was making him tiered and dehydrated. He pased this road that was a rough road with tumbleweeds and snakes he kept on going until he sow the “@CAPS1 Juice” company. He hurried there, went into the bathroom drank same water. When he got out an old men asked if he needed directions, the cyclist said no.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
15233,6,"Based on the excerpt, The Mooring Mast, the building of the Empire State Building had many obstacles the builders had to overcome. Some practical obstacles in building this landmark was the law against airships flying low, the complete dirigible mooring equipment wasn't installed, and greatest obstacle of all was nature surrounding the Empire State Building.The first obstacle builders had to overcome is the law against airships flying too low over urban areas. The problem with flying too low is the dirigibles couldn't even try to attempt to reach the building. In December 1930, one dirigable approached the mast, but couldn't get close enough fearing the forceful winds would cause it to run into the sharp spires. As if that wasn't a problem, the dirigible mooring equipment wasn't even installed which meant the newspapers being delivered would have to be caught by dangling ropes from the dirigable, which could get tiring. The greatest obstacle of all was nature. Winds at the top of the building were really strong due to the violent wind currents, which could cause the dirigable to keep moving, even when tied up to the mast.Overall, the nature of weather was the huge obstacle.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
187,1,"Dear,newspaper I think that people should have computers I think that because kids play game to help them learn like math game or read and grown ups can go on websites and watch work out videos and they could pay there bills on the computer to and they dont have it in the store of kids need to do there homework computers are good for that buy thet also have bad stuff like kids say they are doing there homework but they are on youtube myspace or facebook. or other stuff but computers have more good stuff about them they bad things so that? Why I think we should have computers.",2.0,1.0,2.0,1.0,1.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
6704,3,"The features in the setting of the essay affect the author in one major way, dehydration. There are several features that causes the author to dehydrate. First off, he is riding throught a desert located in california. This means that there is bent from the sun constintly beating down on him. Also the change from “Flat read”, (Kurmaskie) to “short, rolling hills” (@CAPS1) also affected him, getting dehydrated. This change cased him to use more energy to climb up the hills which means he used more water because he got thrister faster. This is how the features in the setting affected the author of the essay “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit.”",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
10356,4,"In the story “Winter Hibiscus” by @CAPS1 Ho. The author is stating that Saeng is happy when she is around the plant and she finds peace with the plant because it brings back childhood memories. For example “And that rich sweet scent, that was familiar ton.” She loved the way it made her feel. When one of the leaves fell off and she breathed in, it remined her of grandmother. @CAPS1 might of experienced something like this. @CAPS1 might of wrote this because the story could relate to other people who moved from another country and have something that brought back memories. Everytime that l touch or smell a sweater,it brings back memorises of my grandmother. I feel that he wrote this because of his personal experience and it could relate to others",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
352,1,"Dear @CAPS1, Experts agree that people go outside and exercising because their are three reason why people should go outside and there are: people don't have a lot of exercising, they can hang out with their friend and family, and people and kid should enjoying the outsid nature. Let me explain, people and kids these days do have alot of exercising. People who don't exercising can gran weight if they don't exercising at all. Also, parents and kids who spend all day on their computer or laptop can be over weight. Kids these day, have hard time to exercising because there are over weight by staying on their computer and play their computer game. Wouldn't you agree the kids and adults can hang out with there frienda and family. Kids need to stop going on the computer and go outside more offing with their friend or family. You might want to consider that parent need to spend time with there friend and family then staying on the computer at home. Don't you think that people should go outside and enjoying the nature. Amazingly, people know what nature is but the don't know what the true meaning of nature is! Adult should spend time by going outside then stayin at their house because @PERCENT1 of the world dont have computer at all.",2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
6242,3,It affect cyclest because the condition determines the pace and even how fast they could travel.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
8872,4,"In the story, ""Winter Hibiscus,"" by Minfong Ho, it concludes the story with a good ending. In the story the girl buys a Hibiscus that remainds her of home. She goes home & tells her mother she failed her test but bought the plant. While she was planting it she seen geese and she was reminded of home. America was like home and she was happier. In the text she says, ""many of the things that she had thought of as strange before had become, almost familiar to her now."" She is willing to give the test another try and is sure to pass it. America is now starting to feel a little more like home. ",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
8985,4,"The auther concludes the story with, “when they cam back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and tis hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again. I think the auther used that conclusion to make the reader want to finish the story on their own. Or he could write another story to finish it. Most authors conclude their storys like this so the reader is in control about the ending.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
12184,5,"Narciso Rodriguez by Narciso Rodriguez is a memoir from Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives and it is about Narciso Rodriguez's early life. The major mood in the memoir is honesty and truthfulness. This is because the author talks about that you don't want to hear or that makes you sad to hear. For example, the author tells us about racism and how it was normal in the United States but the community overcame it: ""a time when overt racism was the norm and segregation prevailed in the United States. In our neighborhood, despite customs elsewhere, all of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship. It was a close – knit community of honest, hardworking immigrants who extended a hand to people who, while not necessarily their own kind, were clearly in need"" (@NUM1). In conclusion, the mood of the memoir is honesty and truthfulness because the author tells us about things that might make us uncomfortable.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
12060,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is many things. But, I think the main moods in the memoir are happy and greatful. I think the mood of the story is happy because the story tells about all the good times @PERSON1 had in his house. For example, @PERSON1 says ""here, the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the backdrop to life in our warm house."" And, I think the mood of the story is also thankful because a lot of the story has to do with @PERSON1 thanking his parents for all they have done and sacrificed for him. For example, in the end of the memoir @PERSON1 says ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" and in a way thanks his parents for everything. So, as you can see those are the moods I think the author created in the memoir.",2.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
10272,4,"to show how absent she feels without them by her. You see this when the @ORGANIZATION1 says “when they come back”. also when she says “the geese return & this hibiscus is budding”. Shows how she feel without them and how she will feel when they return and how she will carry on where they left off last time as shown when she says “, Then I will take that test again”.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
15051,6,"In the excerpt ""THE MOORING MAST"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted there were many obstacles that the workers had to face to allow Dirigibles to dock at the top of the empire state building. One of the many obstacles the workers faced was that they could not simply drop a mooring mast on the top of the Empire State building. Also the thousand-foot dirigibles moored at the top of the Empire State building. A single cable tether held the dirigible and it would add stress to the building's frame. The biggest obstacle the workers would face was the mooring mast on top of the building with all winds shifting due to vilent air currents. Another obstacle was the dirigibles were moored in open field and they were weighted down in the back. The problem was they were dangling high above pedestrians on the street. Those are the obstacles the workers faced",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
6006,3,"The settings of the story were grveling. While the cyclist was riding along, the sun was beginning to beat down on him. The cyclist began to sweat due to the heat and thus he drank just about all of his water. Now the cyclist was experiencing major heat, sweat, and dehydration. The California desert is a grveling place to be, especially in June. Luckily, the cyclist did come up to a camp and found fresh food and water, before he would eventually continue his way to Yosemite National Park",1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
12392,5,"The mood created by the author in. the memoir were changing all through the book. In the begining he feels normal explaining his life and how important his parents are to him. When he explaines how important his parents are to him, he feel greatful and happy for all thing his parent impacted his life. In the middle of the memoir he explaininig how his life is like how he like how he came out in life. At the end he is looking back at his life as a little kid and how he has improved his life.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
3952,2,"First of all i believe if its on the shelf you should be able to get it, no matter what your age is. Yeah theirs thing's that shouldn't be on the shelf, but how are kids and people supposed to know to get that or not. If kids arnt alowed to get certant material on the shelfs, Then it shouldn't be their, @CAPS1 my oppinion.     Parents @MONTH1 think differnt, parents might think only certant things should b alowed at a libray. @CAPS1 not their choice though. Anything is alowed to be at a libray. If you dont want your kid reading or getting certant thing's, then when your kid goes to the libray go with them. Help them pick out a book.     In conclusion i believe you should be able to check anything that is on the shelf. Kid or if your an adult. If your not alowed to get, then why is it their? I dont know i couldnt anwser that question, other than why is it their? @CAPS1 my oppinion though",1.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,1.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
1754,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, @CAPS1 the men and women who write everyday for a living, I would like @CAPS2 you were to write rection on computers. They teach @LOCATION3 faraway places, help build hand-eye coordination, and let @LOCATION3 talk online. Computers are part of everyday life and needs to be told about. First, computer let @LOCATION3 learn about faraway places without leaving the rooms. One of my mom's friends, They decide to move to @LOCATION2 she didn't like computer so didn't look at @LOCATION2's laws saying, I'll find out when I got there. ""@CAPS2 did find out the laws she didn't find enough cause cause she was arrested multiple times in her first few years. A few monthes after her last arrest she came back to the @LOCATION3 where she could deal with the laws. @LOCATION2 is a buetifull country and all of arrests were accidents because she didn't know the laws. Ten minutes on computer searching the laws in @LOCATION2 could have kept her in @LOCATION1. Next, comptures improve hand-eye coordination. From a survey @PERCENT1 of children that spend more time on computers are better at tennis, and at baseball then others. @PERSON3, a gym teacher at the @ORGANIZATION2 says, ""@CAPS3 of these kids that spend time on the compture are weak and need to get some exercise.Dear local newpaper: @CAPS1 you being the local newspaper, you have the power to say how you feel about the effects computers give to people. I believe that computers give great effects to people because it teaches hand-eye coordination, gives people the ability to learn about far away places, and it allows you to talk to people. In all, @PERCENT2 of people agree with my idea about computers. Firstly, using computers teaches people about hand-eye coordination. For example, my grandmother told me that she knows how to use her hands and eyes well because of using the computer. This is because she types and researches information all day long. In all, computers are designed to help your eyes and hands to focus more. Secondly, computers have a lot of interesting information on faraway places. @PERSON2 from @ORGANIZATION1 quotes, ""I always use computers for my work because it helps me learn about many new things. @CAPS5, it lets my wife and I search details about a trip we want to go on."" @CAPS5, the people agree with what @PERSON2 stated. However, people @MONTH1 say that computers give the wrong information many times, but @CAPS2 you find a wonderful website, it will never lie to you. Thirly, @CAPS2 you use computers it will let you talk online or video chat with friends or family all over the world. How this benefits you is because @CAPS2 you have not seen your relatives in ages and you cannot buy a ticket to visit them, then video chat. It has gotten people so much closer and you see the world in a whole different way. @CAPS5, instead of wasting all your cell phone minutes, go buy a laptop or computer with a camera on it so you can video chat. Lastly, taking to people and being active in other peoples life is important. In conclusion, you will have great eye coordination, you will be able to research faraway places, and you will always be allowed to video chat or talk to family online. @CAPS5, I want you to tell the whole world that computers are useful and people use them everyday without a problem. Lastly, you will have the best feeling ever @CAPS2 you make everyone smile by knowing you believe that spending time on the computer can teach you a lot! From so many students having greater hand-eye cooridination they will enjoy what their good at like tennis. @PERSON1, a professor of the human body at @ORGANIZATION1 states ""Technology helps hand-eye. Many who use computers more than others to be greater at @CAPS6 @CAPS7 and games along those lines."" This shows how hand-eye and exercise is linked to computer. Furthermore, computers help @LOCATION3 talk with other people. When a child goes to college they will still be able to email their famlies and talk to them. Talking with others by computers makes the world go round. World business need computers to contact eachother to decuss plans on how to move toward economicly. Lastly, computers are useful and should be useful more. They teach @LOCATION3 of faraway places, improve hand-eye coordnation, and let @LOCATION3 talk to other people. @CAPS2 an article is made to show the pros or computers, more people will experience the wonders of them.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
4339,2,Im against cencorship for good reasons. Everyone is for censor ship well im on a different perspective. if ur not old enough to get a movie or a book thats for a reason. On another note if you are then it shouldnt matter.     People should have their own choice. If they want to go out and get a rated @CAPS1 movie and watch it with their kids thats their own choice. Its defantly not the person who makes the movies choice to censor cusswords and stuff out. Thats why they make edited cds so people can by them instead.     People have different beliefs.  and its whatever they believe in is how it should go. and if somebody else with differant beliefs dont like that then i geuss they neede ta write @NUM1 paragrapgh like im doing now.     Also people want everthing cencored out. eventually theyre isn't going to be nothing to read watch or listen to. So all u people that want everything to be cencored I hope ur happy when the world has nothing to do because of you.,2.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,1.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9405,4,"In think the author is trying to show that Saeng is finally starting to accept and get over the struggles in the life. It is showing that she has finally gotten used to @LOCATION1 and the customs, but she still hasn’t forgotten her heritage. “But she had herself much preferred it to a big Mac.” It also proves that she is going to be positive and not let disc overage her. She’s going to retake it and try again. During the beginning look on her situations in life. But after visiting the floral shop, she discovers a more cherry. Optimistic outlook on her situation and decides to do something about it.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
1526,1,"Dear @PERSON1, To this day, there are many people who use telecommunication devices, like the computer. Some think computers have a posotive effect on people. Others are concerned that people spend too much time on them. I think that both these opinions are correct. Although using a computer can become an addicting and unhealthy habbit, they teach a person everyday about something, are enjoyable, and help save the earth. Using computers is something I know millions of people use everyday, and would think @CAPS2 would be difficult to live without. For example, my family owns four computers. We each have our own specific reasons for using them. For my mom, @CAPS2's usually working or checking her e-mails. For me and my sister, @CAPS2's researching and typing of homework, and communicating with our friends via facebook or. So say when my mom is working, or me and my sister are researching something we learn. Before these were computers, everyone used, but now that we have the internet, theres no really need to get a book. Most of the time people wont even have the book their looking either have to go out and buy get one from the library. Now this is an inconvenience to people, so why not use the internet thats quick, and. People also use computers to like I mentioned above with maybe facebook, @CAPS1, or e-mail.@CAPS2's quick, easy and fun. @CAPS2 also saves paper which helps the planet. We always use to send letters, but now with these sources, you don't need to much! Computers are also fun for kids because you can play a lot of games on bring. Now even though I mentioned all those good things, there are unfortunately bad ones too. So many people use computers everyday, and @CAPS2's bad for your physical and mental health. People spend so much time on them that they can get easily addicted. This means they will be on them all the time, and never do other things like go outside. They wasn't exercise which could be bad for their physical health. Also, staring at a screen all day is bad for your eyes, and brain. So I think, due to these causes, people shouldn't use them constantly. In conclusion, I'd like to say that people should use computers for learning things, go outside or do something active because spending all this time on computers can result in physical and mental health issues. Thank you and I hope you agree with my statements.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
8971,4,"I think the author concludes the story with that parography because they want you to understand Saeng's strength. One reason I think they also end the story like that because she know inside that when her plant is strong and not covered in snow that she will be strong so that's when she wont`s to take her driving test. For example when she said, ”When the snow melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again. That is why the author concludes the story with that paragraph. ",0.0,,,,,1.0,0.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
6597,3,"In many real-life situations, nature or a setting can be the biggest hindrance in succeeding, or even surviving. For example, the cyclist with stood the blozing heat of the sun as he pedaled through what seemed to be the @CAPS1’s living room: Dry, desolate, and extremely scornful. “Wide rings of dried sweat circled my shirt, and the growing realization that I could drop from a heat stroke on a gorgeous day in June.” @CAPS2 and depicts the intense heats of the desert. Another feature in the setting was the every hanging hills and steps though pedaling down the hills was an easier task, traveling up the hill, as well  as maneuvering the thirsts and bends served as a direct conflict. An example, “with what I believed was my last burst of energy I maneuvered a setting affect a situation is ultimately, the cyclist reached his destination is great relief. But the biggest hindrance was along his setting.                        ",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
3168,2,"Picture this: you come home one day after work and before you even enter the house, you hear music blaring from your child's room. As you step closer, you begin to hear the lyrics that go with the banging bass and you realize that that isn't just any music, it's completely unedited, expicit versions of vulgar songs. Now, who would want their child listening to songs that make it seem like drinking, doing drugs, and other various risky activities are okay? I know I sure wouldn't.     Music isn't the only source of offensive material in today's society. It can be found nearly anywhere. In books, magazines, @CAPS1 shows, movies, on the @CAPS2, you name it. All of these are easily accessible by children of all ages. That is why there should be censorship of certain materials, to a certain degree. By this, I mean that if there is a dirty book in a public library, it should only be able to be rented by people who are of a certain age. Just because it's bad doesn't mean that it has to completely vanish from the face of the world. There should just be a limitation on who can view it. That applies to everything that could contain offensive material.      Kids are kids. There are certain things that should be absolutely off limits to them--such as explicit movies, books, music, etc.--as they do not need to know about drugs, sex, or alcohol at such a young age. Censorship should definitely be in effect in places like public libraries where young children are bound to be. But, as mentioned earlier, censorship should only be to a certain degree. Keeping childrens' minds clean for as long as possible would be a very positive thing to do for both them and our society in general",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
97,1,"Dear Local @CAPS1, I think computers benefit society greaty. Most of what we do today could not happen without computers. The biggest use of computers is comunication. If you're in @LOCATION1 on a buisnoss trip but need to send a letter to your company, you can send an emil which is much less expensive than paying for as piece of @CAPS1. The experts concerns that people aren't spending enough time with family and friends is a point. Many people cominucate with family and friends through computers. I would hardely yet to talk to my cousin if I couldn't go on facebook. I would have had to wait another month to find out my other cousin was engaged if I didn't follow her on @CAPS2. If the concern is face to face contact, the computer has a cure for that, too, a video messaging site called ooVoo. Another way computers allow comunication is through the shareing of information. Many facts needed for school are spread out in hundreds of books. Over the @CAPS3, I've done research for a project and have been able to get facts from the @ORGANIZATION1 and @ORGANIZATION2 about crime stats. Many times researching an animal will take you online because more modern books note good website to travel to for more information. Without the @CAPS3, a simple reasearch project could take for months. Some scientists think people are spending too much time on the computer. This both right and wrong. Sitting at a computer watching youtube for hours is not nessasarily the best thing. However, the @CAPS4 is also for computer. The @CAPS4 has designed a game so that you can have fun while getting excersize. Computers are like chocolate. They can be good, but too much is a bad thing.",4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
4101,2,"Throughout history there have been many books written at a time in history when their beliefs on certain things differed from what our world today believes. Things that have changed as our world has changed are the views on slavery, womens rights, religion, and many other things. These views are based on what most people of a time frame believed. I feel that just because something someone wrote or said offends someone, does not give people the right to ban that book or quote from society as a whole. They have the right to ban it from themselves, but it is up to each individual whether or not it is banned for everyone.      Our government gives us the right to have freedom of speech. This shows that even though someone @MONTH1 write or speak out against the majority opinion, they can say whatever they want without being punished for it. This means that people can not just ban something for what it might say or portray. In my life explicit music seems to be something that some people are trying to ban. My parents believe that I am at the right age that I should be allowed to listen to whatever type of music I want to.      I feel that public libraries can set age restrictions on items based off language, nudity, and other inappropriate things for children just as movie theaters do, but they do not have the right to ban books. Even though there is an age restriction, as long as the guardian of the child direct says it is fine if his/her child @MONTH1 check out the book or the parent checks out the book for the child, then it is fine that that child gets that book. The choice for what is appropriate for that each child should be left up to their parents.      If libraries had to ban books because someone said that a certain book or magazine was offensive, then a library would have very few to no books. In almost all of books someone @MONTH1 be able to find something offensive to them or to someone else. These books that offend people should be kept on the shelf so that people can understand how society's views on things were back in the time period that the book was written. These items in libraries that are found offensive shows us what was wrong with society at that time and helps us learn from past mistakes in history and how to avoid them. For example, in the play A @ORGANIZATION1 it shows how the society's view of women was. It showed that they did not think highly of women and how there purpose in life were to raise the children and that was it. They did not feel that they had the intellect to talk about science or anything like that. This indirectly teaches us how we should not treat women today.       If libraries start to ban books, music, movies, magazines or other items then they are hiding things they do not want people to read. Libraries should not be able to ban something because it is offensive, but they have the right to put age restrictions on certain things. Authors and artists have freedom of speech to say whatever they want and libraries can not take that away from them",5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
16562,6,"In the article "" The Mooring Mast,"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted it is apparent that the builders of the Empire State Building faced many challenges, during the attempt of trying to dock dirigibles. The dirigibles themselves could be a hazard. ""... Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable. ""In likes of what had happened to the German airship Hindenburg, officials didn't want a similar disaster to occur in downtown New York. Also, the dirigibles light mass would make it a target to high, forceful winds."" The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currets."" This reality caused fear that a zeppelin could potentially be blown into a spire of some sort on another building, causing it to suffer a hole in its fragile lining. The law also caused obstacles for docking dirigibles on the Empire State Building ""... dirigibles could not more at the Empire State Building was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" This law thwarted many of the would-be attempts of mooring these. Mooring dirigibles was a dream talked about in, ""The Mooring Mast,"" however that soon never had the chance to come true.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
15837,6,"In the excerpt The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted the builders had obstacles they had to overcome in building the dock for the dirigibles. The builders had to think about how the mast would work. It said in paragraph nine ""the architects could not simply drop a morning mast on top of the @ORGANIZATION1 flat roof. A thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the buildings frame"". The buiders had to modify the building. ""As it said in paragraph ten ""Rather than building a utilitarian mast with out any ornamentation, the architects designed a shinny glass and chrome-nickle stainless steel tower that would be illinated frome inside, with a stepped-back design that imitated the over all shape of the building itself."" The obstacles the builders overcame let them use the mast efectly.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
9532,4,The Author concludes this story With the @CAPS1 paragraph to emphasize the story and make it seem more interesting as to make the reader want the story to keep going on to find out what happens next.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
6254,3,"The features of the settings affect the cyclist in many ways when he starts of, he is bright and happy just as the slenecy is nice and calming. There is a pace that makes him feel like nothing wrong. “I rode into the morning with strong legs and a smile on my face.” After about @NUM1 miles on the cold, his life was getting low, and he came to his second abundant place. He then felt a little disturbed and worried. He needed to find a place with water. “This site was trebling.”  There he fins water plant not his hopes rise a bit, until he finds the water isn’t good. “A tarlike substance oozed out, followed by brickish water feeling some which is in the neighborhood of two hundred trees”. So he moves on and finally he re aches life! He is so relieved he can’t believe his luck.” Then as easily as rounding a body my troubles, thirst and fear were all behind me “The setting affects the mood in a very big way, the cyclist feels as the setting looks.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
3982,2,"Should materials such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc., be removed from shelves if found offensive? Censorship can be a huge deal depending on who you ask or where you go some find it necessary so kids do not get into these things found in librarys or some @MONTH1 not think it's so important.      Books are important parts of peoples lives, learning, etc, they are also read for many different reasons but some of the topics books are written about @MONTH1 not be right or could be innapropriate or possibly against all of someones beliefs or religion. I personally do not think that censorship is necessary to keep some things out of librarys just some thngs shouldnt be available for anyone to just walk in and pick up off of a shelf in a library maybe materials that are innapropriate for children or people @MONTH1 find offensive should be kept away in a different secluded section of a library and be clearly labeled of what the purpose of this room is so people will clearly know and won't really risk the chance of just stumbling upon those materials.     Another reason why censorship @MONTH1 not be necessary is that things that anyone could find in the library that @MONTH1 be offensive or innapropriate can be found just as easy if not easier on @CAPS1 or on the internet by anyone anytime of the day. @CAPS1 has some censorship but not enough to remove the effect that @CAPS1 show or movie or internet site could have on the minds of todays young people and children such as violence, drugs, language, and racism that is found in almost everything today. Todays children and young people should be taught of whats wrong even if they do think it's dumb or unecassary at the time when they mature they hopefuloly will see whay they were taught those things and why they should always try to stay away from things that are seen in movies, magazines, books, and mostly on @CAPS1 and not get involved with these activities.      Censorship I still believe is not necessary even though I know of all the innapropriate and harmful things in todays culture. Even though I know how harmful it can be if they see the effect it could have on their future and what it has done to other people that saw things in movies, books or even heard it in music if they could see and hear from people who have been affected by these things they would know to stay away from bad things and go along with whats right.     In conclusion censorship is not necessary, it could be in the future but if everyone is lead to what is right they will hopefully make the right decision and stay away from harmful books, movies, music, magazines, and other things alike.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
36,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, Have you ever wondered what effect computers have on people? It is a very negative effect. Computers are one of the main reasons of why kids do not exercise and become obese, it can effect students' grades, and by being on the @CAPS6, you are isolating yourself from your loved ones. First of all, more and more kids are using computers way more often than they should. The result of this, you @MONTH1 ask? Since computers are used daily, especially by young adolescents, it is likely for that child to become obese. Researches from well-known colleges, such as @ORGANIZATION2 and @LOCATION2, discovered that @PERCENT1 of kids who spend more than two hours on the @CAPS6 are obese or will become heavier when they are older. After speaking with @PERSON1, graduate from @LOCATION1, he told me that when children spend more time on the @CAPS6, they are doing nothing but staring at a bright screen that can damage their eyes, and not spending their time outside enjoying the beautiful weather. As a consequence, kids start to gain body fat from sitting on a coach staring at the @CAPS6 all day instead of exercising! My second reason of why computers are a negative effects on kids is that it can harm your grades! After I spoke with a current student at @ORGANIZATION1, she told me that the reason why her grades drop is because she is too busy on @CAPS3, @CAPS4, @CAPS5, etc. She does not focus on her @ORGANIZATION1 work like she should and because she doesn't, her grades go from @NUM1's to low @NUM2's. This shows that even ""A"" students are getting bad grades from being on the @CAPS6. Additionally, from being on the @CAPS6 so much and not paying attention at @ORGANIZATION1 work, it can effect your best grades on the @ORGANIZATION3's! This shows that by always going on the @CAPS6 you hurt your academic skills. My last and final reason of why computers have a negative effect on children is because it harms your social skills of being on outgoing, talkative individual! Everytime you log into that death trap device, your selfesteem becomes lower because you never talk to friends or call them. You just sit on a hard chair, looking at an electronics device that is going to take you no where in life. Also, you are pushing your loved ones away by being on @CAPS6 @NUM3. You will end up never spend time with them and you will never call your friends to see what they are up to if you keep on going on the @CAPS6. Furthermore, if your mom or dad tells you to get off your @CAPS6, you become cranky and rude to your family just becuase you want to go back on your favorite electronic device. Do you really want to act that way to your family? So, in summing up, computers are a negative effect on many young individuals, and the reasons for this are that you have less time to exercise, it harms your grades, and you are not able to be as interactive with people by being on the @CAPS6. The real question is, though, is do you think computers have a negative or positive effect on people?",5.0,5.0,6.0,6.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,27.0
667,1,"Dear, @CAPS1 paper @CAPS2 The computers we have do benefits our society, because it makes people smarter, it's a way to talk to people who live far from where you live, and it's a great way to do homework if you still in school. Having a computer is a great way to get you smarter.You could go on diffrent websites to help you learn what your stuck on in school. I remember the time I was having trouble in math, so my teacher gave me this website called a @ORGANIZATION1. It goes over on waht you need help on, and you get a live tutor. The computer could teach babies how to talk. It taught my cousin how to talk and he's @NUM1 @NUM1/2 years old. Isn't that amazing on that computers can do. Next I will talk about how computers are a great resource to talk to far away people you @MONTH1 know. When you have computers you could talk to people that live across the @LOCATION1 woudn't you want to talk to somebody long distance without paying extra money on your cell-phone? I remember one time I was talking to my dad cause I had no minuts on my phone and it went great talking to him on the computer. Having a computer is kind of like a bigger cellphone. You could talk to a family or a friend if you or they don't have a phone. Lastly, I will talk about how you could do homework. Having a computer you could do a lot of homework. Last time I was on my computer I had to find out about @PERSON1 for math, so I typed his name and his biography came so I wrote about him. You could use it for all subjects especially language arts you could type up papers and look up diffrent things you had to do in class. Would you want to write a @NUM3 page essay and makin your fingers cramp up just writing no. so you just go on the computer and type it up without cramping your fingers @CAPS3 reconsider your opinion, cause computers can get you smarter, talk far away people and help you with homework.",3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
1711,1,My experience with commputer's is good because I can play games or do my homework. I can install my own music on my commputer and do my homework at the same time. I can also go on the internet with commputer's. On commputer's I can also do things quicker and easyer. I can also get more things done faster by getting the internet and going on it because I can do reaserch and copie and past stuff off the internet. I now have a labtop and it is preaty much portble commputer. On my labtop and it is preaty much poratble commputer. On my labtop I can make data tables and graph's and write papers and use dial up connection. Dial up connection is what I can use to get free internet by putting a presons phone number in the place were the phone number goes the labtop will call up the motem if the phone line is connected to the motem. On my labtop I also have a place to put a floppy disc in and a place for a @CAPS1-@CAPS2 to go in to. I also have a calculator on my labtop. some labtop's also have a mouse that looks like a little pad like mine dose. As you can see commputer's and labtop's are realy good to own.,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
16036,6,"The obstacles the builders of the empire state Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there was the lack of a suitable landing area. Also A thousand foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame. To do that they would need a lot of money like sixty thousand dollars.Another reason was safety because most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable. But the greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself. The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
15209,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles while attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself."" (@NUM1) the winds at the top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents causing the dirigible's back to swivel around the mooring mast. ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen... hydrogen is highly flammable."" (@NUM2) @CAPS1 the Hindenburg which blew up, if a Blimp blew up over downtown New York, tons of lives would be lost, a huge risk to the mooring mast. ""Was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" (@NUM3) This law would prevent dirigibles from docking at the mooring mast legally. All of those obstacles contributed to the mooring mast being used only for show and contributing to the world's tallest building.",3.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
3275,2,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2 Newspaper, or to whom this article @MONTH1 concern.     It has become quite aware to me the problem we face in our media today. Information and how individuals seek it has evolved and is still changing at a rapid pace. Technology and new information is so vast its extremely difficult to censor.       Two weeks ago i took my @NUM1 year old niece @CAPS3 to our local public library to find her a book. Once the automatic  doors to the library opened she darted straight to the movie section. I couldnt help but laugh, because I knew thats why she truly wanted to go to the library. When i asked @CAPS3 what movie she was looking at, she turned the cover over with no reservation and, said' @CAPS5 @CAPS6'. 'I can't let my young niece watch @CAPS5 @CAPS6', I thought silently to myself. Then i realized how easy it is for a child to access adult information.      I agree with the statement of @PERSON1 in some degree. I believe if we started taking certian information away completly we would find ourselves ignorant. But when we let  our children ,the future of the world, vonerable to adult information they are greatly effected, @CAPS9 teens and violent video games, or explicit magazines. For example my niece is able to check out any book in the library, books like @CAPS10 @CAPS11 famous book intitled '@CAPS12 @CAPS13 ', which means my struggle in german. My @NUM1 year old niece can read quite well and is very impressionable as are many young children.     Public media outlets need to be more heavily monitored, this includes public libraries, retail stores, the internet, and @CAPS14. I believe books should be censored by content much like movies. This makes the distibutor left responsible and the consumer more aware of the content and its effect",4.0,5.0,3.0,4.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
4303,2,"Reading is very popular. It is something to do when you are sitting at home and also when you are in the classroom. School libraries are filled with defferent varieties of books and magazines and such. Some of these books could be arguably offensive to some people. These books should not be taken away from the library shelves.      There are some books that some people find so offensive that they can not even continue to read the rest of the book. Whether it be sexual or even political, if the reader finds it offensive they will not read the rest of the book. There are books out there that describe in detail sexual scenes and many parents do not want their kids to read these kinds of books. This is no reason to remove the books from the library shelves. It @MONTH1 be offensive to certain people but if you took it off of the shelves it would not be available for others to read who can handle that kind of story. Parents' kids should simply not read these books. Libraries can not take the books away all together from readers who enjoy these kinds of books.           There are also books about politics. Majority of people stand firm with politics and do not budge when it comes to discussing what they believe is right or true. When a reader comes across a book that is against the way they see politics, there can be a real problem. With politics being a serious matter, many people can overreact when someone tells them what they believe and think is true is really not. Politicians themselves especially. Still, many authors write about political matters and some books can educate the reader about points that they have not yet seen before. If a reader does not agree with what the author is writing or they find it offensive, they should not read the book. There are plenty of other readers out there that would like to read that book and to learn more about politics. If a reader knows that this kind of reading offends them, then they should know better than to pick up the book in the first place.      Many libraries offer music, movies and magazines to check out and to take home. It is true that many of these movies or the lyrics in the songs could strike someone as offensive. For this reason, they should not check them out. Many people enjoy music or movies that have offensive language. It is something that adds to the song or movie. People know their limits and if they know the contents then they should stay away. As long as there are other readers and people who like those kinds of books and music then they should keep them on the shelf. Taking them away would only take away from the number of people who visit the library. You could go to your local library and find people looking through the music section, and the music section is the only reason they come to the library in the first place. The music and movie section should stay in libraries. The people that are checking them out should be mature and responsible enough to know if they find the contents offensive.          Libraries should not take certain books, movies, and magazines away that some people find offensive. Some books and music do have contents that are offensive to some readers and viewers. However, if it is offensive to the first person, it does not mean it will be offensive to the next. The libraries need to keep these sections in their libraries for all different kinds of readers. Reading is an extremely popular activity. Readers want a variety of books, music and movies to choose from.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
3165,2,"Dear @CAPS1,      @CAPS2 name is @PERSON1. I am a student here at @LOCATION1, and it has come to @CAPS2 attention that the @ORGANIZATION1 is thinking about taking books they find offensive out of the library. I think this is wrong. If everybody at @LOCATION1 took the books we found offensive off the shelves and threw them away, we would be left with no books to read.      I also think that no one person should have the right to decide what books are too offensive for me to read. I am sixteen years old and responsible enough to make @CAPS2 own decisions about what is too offensive for me to be reading. If I feel I should read books that others @MONTH1 find offensive then, why does that concern you? Just because I want to read the book does not mean you have to.         Also, I think that having books that might be a little offensive makes that book more interesting. If you take every offensive word out of a book, chances are it is going to be hard to sit through it. If you take all offensive books from the library, kids will be even more discouraged about reading, and I know that is not what @LOCATION1 is looking to do.     If you think that books are that offensive, try walking down the hallways. this is a @ORGANIZATION1. Kids cuss all the time, and talk about dirtier stuff than in any book I've ever read. If your looking to make children more innocent, then taking all ofour books out of the library is not the way to go about it",4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
10244,4,She say cloning the spring I will take the test again because she know if she failed the test againg her mother will be disappointed of her because she not trying hard enough or maybe them too him never be closer again. The mother think jst because she keep failing the test because of her connection to her past expeirences or effection for her new country. and ability to overcome obstacles ar finally I think she is comforted by memories or her homland..,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
11921,5,"The mood created in this memoir was very greatful. Narciso was very very greatful for the ""house that his parents turned into a home."" And he was very greatful to his overall parents, for giving up there own life, to try to give their son a better one, with many more oppertunities than they had. He is also greatful to his parents, not only for giving him things they never had, but things they did have, too. Things like teaching them how to cook, how to treat others, and the real meaning of family. They also showed him the value of being selfless for someone you love.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
10382,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because it symbolizes the change in Saeng as well as other things. The snow always melts when the seasons change. The geese always come back when the seasons change. The hibiscus will bud when the seasons change. Saeng will try again when the seasons change. But she’ll be a different person also. Knowing that everything will change but stay the same on the inside, Saeng decides she will too. She has more of an appreciation for @CAPS1 now after seeing the hibiscus and remembering her past.",3.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
6625,3,"During the cyclist journey to Yosemite many things got in his way and slowed him down. For example, he listened to the old men who gave him wrong directions to where he wanted to go. Also, his water supply was getting low which drained his energy alot quicker than usual. The heat also played a part of his energy loss. The heat made him sweat perfusely which made the water that was in his body be of no use.    ",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9200,4,The author concludes the story with Saeng vowel to show a sense of change in Saeng. The winter time is very brutal like Saeng’s mum said but spring is when things come alive. I think is showing the sense in Saeng. Though winter is tough and you @MONTH1 get them trown around by the wind. When spring comes she will try the test again and come to life and enjoy the @LOCATION1 even thagh that she is far from rain. The author did the right thing to conclude the story with that vowel. ,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
3902,2,"In most libraries in the @LOCATION1, there are certain books, movies, music, etc., that could be inappropriate to younger children.  These books and movies can contain graphic content or offensive language that any young child should not be hearing or seeing.  However, this does not mean that the libraries of @LOCATION2 should get rid of these books, videos, etc.  The libraries should keep these books and videos because the adults of @LOCATION2 like to use them, the kids probably already know about the language and graphic content, and some of the books and movies that are offensive are very educational.     When you think about your childhood, there would always be things you couldn't watch or listen to because you were to young.  Your @CAPS1 and @CAPS2 would watch movies that you couldn't watch because they would say you aren't old enough.  They enjoy watching more mature movies because it is more interesting to them than cartoon shows or movies.  The mature content in movies, books, and more should be kept in libraries because mature audiences enjoy watching and listening to them.  If they are taken out of libraries, this mature audience has nothing to watch or read in the library.  They do not want to be reading children's books all the time.     Also, most children have already observed or heard this offensive content in these books and movies.  Most of the parents in the @LOCATION1 have used offensive language infront of their child without even realizing it.  The kid then starts using these words because they think they are cool if @CAPS1 and @CAPS2 use them.  Another thing is that most kids have seen a movie with graphic content in it, or they have played a video game with it in the game.  They have seen blood, gore, and other things in these games and movies.  It's already too late to try and hide your child from seeing or hearing these 'bad words' or 'graphic content'.     Many movies and books that contain offensive language and graphic content are very good and educational videos.  For example, '@CAPS3 @CAPS4 @CAPS5' was a great movie describing the search for one man in the middle of @CAPS6 @CAPS7 @NUM1.  These wars actually occured and movies like this give a great amount of detail on what actually went on during these wars.  If you want kids to know about the history of our country, they need to know what actually happened.  There is no point in trying to hide the truth.     Overall, most kids in the @LOCATION1 have heard offensive language or graphic content.  Whether it was from a parent or even their best friend, they have heard it.  So why woyld we try to hide this from them? Keep these books, movies, music, and more in the libraries for the benefits of the adults, the kids, and for the history of the country.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
9070,4,To set a tone and to talk about how they look. Also that little paragraph can also start another book or to get you into studing things. It could also compare Your life with the geeses life. Like explaning what hardships you went through.,0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,1.0
1315,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 this ever happend to you? ""@PERSON3, did you do your research?"" ""@CAPS3, my computer crashed."" ""@PERSON1 did you practice typing @TIME1."" "" @CAPS3, my computer crashed."" "" @CAPS5, why weren't you online @TIME1? I really needed that sales report!"" ""I'm sorry @PERSON2, my computer crashed."" @CAPS6 it @CAPS2, you have realized that computers do benefit people. Whether its doing a class project, practicing for a computers class or exchanging buisness ideas, computers are a big help to society. First of all computers are a big help when it comes to a computer class at your school. There might be a certain speed that a person types and to pass the class, and the teacher could assign practice on your own home computer. It is a fact that @PERCENT1 of kids that have some kind of personal ocmputer at home get @CAPS7 A's in their computer class. I can back that up as well. In my computers class. our teacher stresses the importance of practicing at home to get your typing speed a little higher. Every @TIME1 I would practice but one @TIME1 my computer crashed, and I could not practice for the whole work with my luch the final exam @CAPS2 on @DATE1 instead of getting a @CAPS8 or A, I got a @CAPS9+. I blame that grade on not having a computer at home. Secondly, computer can be used for learning @MONTH1 different things as well. Maybe on a class report you needed to write something about the traditons of @LOCATION2, @LOCATION1. Instead of running over to the library and wasting your time with a book. You could just open up your laptop and look it up on the internet. Not only does it make for less time, but @CAPS6 you look it up on the internet, you will get way more search results than @CAPS6 you search on a library derectory. In addition, by using computers, you can look up the cutomers of a foreign country, or look up programs than could help you learn a new language on computers, you can not only learn about your own country but you can learn about foreign ones. Thirdly, computers can enchance many skills that are needed in the modern buisness word, such as socialization skills communication skills, and even learning about the younger generation. @CAPS6 someone had not gone on an instant messaging program or a video chatting program. They would not make it in the world of today. The people need to learn to intract with each others, and solve problems. @CAPS6 someone is not used intracting with people, they @MONTH1 not make a good buisness man or woman. People must be able to communicate as well @CAPS6 people do not communicate with each other. We will all end up dies in the headlights. We will al be lost and will be able to run buisnesses, or hold meetings, for example I needed to plan at adore for my project group to work on a project, and so I went on my computer hoping they were online basically they never showed and so I could not work with my partners at all. I ended up doing all their work. In conclusion I hope you have absolutely coundered my opinion about the computers have on people like I said, computers can be helpful @CAPS6 comes to computer classes, researching foreigh affairs, and even communicating with others thanks again for even reading this letter.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
784,1,"Lies! The computers we use in society do not harm us in any way! They are a huge step forward for mankind and only benefit our lives. They benefit us greatly for the following reasons: computers are a source of knowledge, computers can aid the advertizment and buissness of many workplaces, and they are a very helpful and easy way to communicate with someone across the street or across the ocean. Without a dabt computers do nothing but benefit the people of our society. First of all, computers are a big source of knowledge. Many people @MONTH1 want answers to a question they have encounterned recently but cannot find the answers in a book or newspaper so they turn to a computer and immediatley their problem is solved. Computers today hold every bit of information on every topic imaginable from history to politics. All one has to do is find a site such as @ORGANIZATION1, type there question, and millions of answers pop up assuring a solution to the problem. Computers can also provide a place to research for a project or statistics of the economy if needed by school, buisness, or just for recreation. Times are changing fast and the sources of the worlds history and school subjects can easily be found in the corner of the internet. What you @MONTH1 have looked for in books and papers can be easily found on internet at the click of a button. Clearly, computers are a huge source of knowledge for our society. Second of all, computers and the internet support many buisnesses in advertising and making profit. Every single time a visit to the internet occurs many different buisnesses are able to advertise their products and overall buisnesses with pop-ups, side bars and websites. It clearly helps the workplace get attention. Along with advertising products buisnesses can even sell their products online without doing a thing. This can also aid the consumer because they would not have to drive all the way down to the store and pick up what they need. All they need to do is select the items they wish to purchase and await for its arrival a few days later. Clearly, the computer and internet can help support the welfare of buisnesses. Finally, the computers we use today are a huge and easy way of communication. Contact with people from another street, town, state, country, can be established by the use of social networking sites such as, @CAPS1, @CAPS2, @CAPS3. You could send a letter with the touch of a button with out having to make a trip down to the post office and await a reply. An instant message, which can be used on any of the sites mentioned can also be achieved. This is where you could write something down in the computer, send it to anyone and receive a reply within seconds. Obviously, computers play a big role in the communication of one to another without a problem. In conclusion, it is clear computers benefit the society greatly without a side effect at all. Computers are a good source of knowledge, an aid to buisness, anda great way of communication. Everyone as agreed to this without hesitation so you should too. Computers are the best things that have ever happened to our society today.",4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,23.0
15950,6,"The obstacles that were faced by the Empire State Building builders were numerous. First of all, if they had carried out their plans for the mooring mast without taking into account the weight of the dirigible, the building would surely have way too much stress forced on the foundation when it docked. Next, the fact that the dirigible weighs even less than air is both a negative and a positive. The negative side to it is the fierce winds that would take control of the back of the dirigible. Above the many pedestrians in the city, this idea was quickly ruled unsafe. Lastly, it was filled with hydrogen, which, naturally, is highly flammable. The use of hydrogen was very dangerous, and only added to the negative side of the project.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
4104,2,"There are thousands of books in libraries now a days, some are from @NUM1 years ago. Books are books, and anyone at any age should be able to remove any type of book off of a shelf. Books, music, movies and magazines are all mad to interest people and what they enjoy reading. Authors and publishers should not be pentalized for their hard work they achieved.      There are many people in the world, who like all different types of books. But just because a book has censorship inside the story doesn't mean any human being will enjoy the story. I enjoy reading stories about romance, and I'm sure there is censorship inside a romance story.     I only prefer romance stories, and if every single romance story had censorship and libraries removed the books from the shelves, I wouldn't read any type of book. Because I only enjoy reading about the romance. I only find adults and young adults reading romance stories, and these people have the matureness not to act out about censorship.     It's not best to ruin the stories for adults and young adults who like to read about the censorship inside of stories. There many be people who find it so interesting, that if it's based on a true story then they would want to be willing to help the person out based on the situation.      Don't take away the chance for these authors to succeed more in life. Let these young adults read about everything they are interested in. I'm sure there are many different people who would be upset if the censored stories were eliminted from the shelves in libraries",2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
244,1,"Dear @CITY1 current I am writing to you on the issue about people spending to much time on computers and not able to spend time with other people like family, friends and others. Also people are getting information off of the computer which is a good thing for important paper that you might have to do or collage essay to get in to that collage. Another reason is that people are truning a bit lazy and not getting to enjoy exerising and getting to get some freish air. To more on I will explain what I mean about being with family and friends. For example let's say that your friends are planing on going to yhis huge beach party that every one is going to. So you tell your friends to pick you up but beofre they come you go on the computer talk to some you know and your friends come to your house to pick you up but you are not  for them they pass on by you don't go go to school next day there talking about you miss the party. SO that is any story , it might seen long so, I'm shorting the next part which is the information on computer. Foe example lets say that you  doing on  paper you  . Just need youre more . You find a place you go on find good write come down yet of of the computer finish paper get grade that is good feel happy the end. So that is the only good end of the reason why computres are good. For some  reason some people went to stay inside on the computer but other go outside on a good warm day. So what is your reason myspace, facebook other its good if you talk to other people bad if all you worried about if your pics are good, what matters is there you need to be haapy. I think  done all I could. So thoses are my reason why computer are good and bad  for reasch bad because of nooding to exericis and need to be with friends ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
12531,5,"In the memoir, @PERSON1, from Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives, the author created a mood for @PERSON1. The mood the author created was something different, but it never seems to go down.As Narciso Rodriguez really gives you the definition of ""family"", in the memoir. One of the examples the author created for the mood is ""Growing up in this enviornment instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being blood relative."" In the paragraph before that they talked about moving into a new home, and to the heart was the kitchen, they cooked while listening to cubic music. Narciso said, ""she's internally grateful to know how to cook, and she still enjoys listening to cubic music."" Its a happy mood, showing memory. Another example is, ""My mother and father had come to this country with such courage, without any knowledge of the language or culture."" Narciso's mood is suddenly more strict, but proud of her parents. The last example would be, in all of the last paragraph. ""It was at her home where she learned the real definition of 'family'."" ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" Narciso's mood is so happy and pround to say that her home and family really meant a lot to her. The mood the author created for Narciso Rodriguez was always proud, happy, but never sad. She had a lot of memories from one home.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
16380,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles especially with the construction of the mooring mast due to the height of the building. First, due to the alleged, projected height of the mast there were concerns on how to evenly distribute the dirigible's weight. The structure of the dirigible and the fact that it was lighter than air was crucial to understand. Taking this into account, the builders had to figure out how to have the whole building support the dirigible's weight and not just the top mast. Had the dirigible be supported by only the mast itself, the dirigible's weight would probably pulled the mast right out of the building. Another obstacle the builders faced was the delicate nature of the mooring mast. The mast was not made in a business fashion, but more of an extravagant manner, with much of it made out of glass because of many windows. This made the mast's installation a lot more harder because they had to watch the mast be installed from all areas. The builders faced many obstacles in making sure that the Empire State Building was acceptable for dirigible docking.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
13617,5,"In the memoir, ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from Home: The blueprints of our lives the mood is heartfilling, and about appreciction. In the memoir @CAPS1 says, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" @CAPS1 thanks his parents so much for everything they've done for him. @CAPS1 also says, ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" @CAPS1 knows it wasn't easy but loves how his parents managed to give him the best life possible. @CAPS1 writes, ""what they did was much more courageous then I could hae ever done."" @CAPS1 knows his parents took chances and did whatever to keep him happy which sets this mood to be so warm and heart filling.",3.0,,,,,4.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
1715,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, The question is close too much computer time cause people to interact less with their surroundings? In my opinion, no computers definitely don't make people lazy and less interactive with others aroud them. First, I think that computers can sometimes make you smarter. I mean you can read about history, world news and you can research many different topics. I remember when I was younger I would love to learn about the @CAPS1. I use to search it all the time and I made a poster project for fun. Thanks to the computer I got accurate information. A survey conducted by the @CAPS2 school social studies teacher shows that @PERCENT1 of their students used teh computers to find facts for school projects. @PERCENT2 out of that @PERCENT1 end up getting better grades. Famous psycologist @PERSON2 says that ""kids and students learn more when they are on the computer researching or @CAPS7 new things."" I know you @MONTH1 be thinking that too much internet is unhealthy for people but mostly syudents. But at @ORGANIZATION1 it a good source of @CAPS7 for them. Therefore the computer helps teach everyone facts and many stays on whats going on around the world. Second, people can interact with family and friends online. i mean there's @CAPS3 where people can socialize with their families who live out of state. I remember when I was in @NUM1 grade I made a new friend and she moves to @LOCATION1 in the @DATE1 after @NUM2 grade. I keep in touch with her on @CAPS3. A survey conducted by student council at that @PERCENT3 of students had someone they know and love move away out of state @PERCENT4 out of taht @PERCENT3 keep in touch by email or @CAPS3. Famous scientist @ORGANIZATION2 says, ""People who keep in touch with family and friends tend to stay happy and not become depressed."" I know you @MONTH1 be thinking that people don't need to keep in touch with their families all the time but it makes them happier. Therefore people need computers so they can keep in touch with their families. Third, you can learn new exercise, moves or tricks. I mean you can do new exercise, train for dance competition or learn new magic tricks for you magic show. I remember when I wanted to learn how to twirl a balon between my fingers I went and found a video of someone teaching step by step on how to do it. its easier now. A survey conducted by @CAPS5 muscles @CAPS6 shows that @PERCENT5 of their @CAPS6 members get stronger and more fit by @CAPS7 new exercises. Famous athlete @PERSON1 says ""@CAPS7 new exercises online helps me stay fit for my games"". I know you @MONTH1 be thinking taht they can just go to someone to teach them BUT no one wants to pay money for something you can get free online. Therefore, @CAPS7 new exercises, moves or tricks online can help them out a lot. To conclude, does too much computer time cause people to interact less with their surroundings? No, it helps them learn, socialize with family and friends and they can get in shape with the new exercise that they learn from how to videos.",5.0,5.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
1287,1,"To begin with, The learning ability people get from it has improved. The @CAPS1 source is very helpful to many people. The communication is much easier than talking on the phone. I believe that computers benefit the society in many different ways. First of all, children and people at home and at school use computers for learning purposes. In some grades at school there is a special typing program that helps improve typing skills. There are also hard drive discs that you can play with to help you enhance on your reading skills. It is just a way to make learning fun for young kids. Another great way to learn online is going to websites that have sample math problem and print the sheet out to practice. They are great ways to help learning. Secondly, the computer has many more ways to benifit someone. They are helpful for getting your local weather. In the winter you can see if your school has cancelled in seconds. Often I get projects where it calls for me to do research on a specific topic and it is very easy to look up simple information. The computer also has different links that are helpful for writing a paper, making a power point presentation, and excel spread sheet. All of those resources can either help graphing results for science class or even typing up a paper for @CAPS2. They are useful ways to make life easier. Lastly, computers tend to make communication a little easier. For me, when I'm out sick from school I like to tell my teachers by emailing them and even asking if I can make up any work using facebook, aim, myspace, and skype are all fun and fast ways to communicate with friends. All of the websites pretty much do the same thing but different people like diffrent sites that their friends are on you can email friends and family who live far away and even close. It's a way to get back and forth to eachother. In conclusion, you have heard the different ideas and I consider computers as a benifit. It helps learn, communicate, and most of all do the important things that we need.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
4379,2,"There is many different topics that could be offensive, @CAPS5 just depends on the person's own personal judgement. In my opinion I do not believe that materials should be removed because not everyone has the same view or opinons. If someone comes from a different country or evern a different religion, topics like abortion and racism are going to be viewed very differently. I think having a variety of topics will help expand different thoughts and make the readers of the material see things in a different way.      When I am older and if one of my elementary children was to bring home a book over abortion, I would be concerned. Honestly though, I do not believe schools would let inapropriate topics for younger childeren read books like that. @CAPS5 is a little bit different with a @CAPS1 @CAPS2 student though. Their maturity level is going to be mature enough to handle the material and I do not think @CAPS5 is right for schools to remove something that could actually help someone.      In the book, 'A @CAPS3 @CAPS4 @CAPS5', there is a lot of detailed events that happen. Some might say @CAPS5 is too graphic for children but the reality of @CAPS5 is, events like those happen in today's society. @CAPS5 really opened up my eyes and I am extremely happy I read @CAPS5. The realization actually made me want to help those children who grow up in homes like the one described in the book. I believe @CAPS5 had the same effect on other people too and some children might even grow up to help others in that horrible situation.      Libraries should be able to have a variety of different books. I am not saying however that they should have books on murder and saying @CAPS5 is alright but books that will help expand the children's minds. @CAPS5 could even change their lives. Some books are a sensitvie topic but who has the right to tell someone something they should believe? @CAPS5 would mean more to someone if they found their own way and beliefs then having people tell them what they should and should not do or believe in.      I have also read a book recently titled, '@CAPS6', @CAPS5 is about the government granting the ability to @CAPS6 your children and then the body parts will go to those in need. @CAPS5 is sort of cruel in one way but the topic the author is trying to get across is not. A quote from the book is, 'On one side you have people killing abortion doctors for the right of life and on the other you have people getting pregnant just to sell their fetal tissue'. @CAPS5 states that everywhere you go people are going to disagree and agree on things but not everyone will believe in the same thing. @CAPS5 shows that just because one person thinks one way is right does not mean another will. The book changed my perspective on many different topics and helped me open my eyes on different views.      Racism, abortion, @CAPS3 abuse, unwinding your children, what ever the case @MONTH1 be, some people will support @CAPS5 and some will not. I think @CAPS5 is time for children around the world to discover for themselves what they truely believe in and taking 'offensive' material from @CAPS2 libraries is not going to help any. My opinion on this topic is strongly advising to leave the material alone because for there to be a book about @CAPS5, the author had to have had a reason to write @CAPS5 and honestly, what is better for the future then a generation of children grounded to their own true beliefs",5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
1004,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 people have computers in there house hold but they disagrees with a computer can help you. There are some advantages in useing computers such as being able to search information able learn hand-eye coordination, becomeing organized, but it also has it's disadvangtages like children spending more time on the computer rather than going out side and playing with friends and exersizeing and staying fit. I agree with computers do produce a positive impact on children. Computers not only let a child stay in contact with their family that live faraway but it can also help them get a progect done more eveficantly and quickly. It @MONTH1 seem that where are doing one thing but when in fact we can be uploading pictures and movies, downloading muisc and playing games at the same. Now with all that I have told you @DATE1 I hope that we share the same point of veiws on computers like how they are good to have and their positive in part.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
16280,6,"There were many obstacles the builders of the Empire State building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. Since the German dirigible the Hindenburg was destroyed in New Jersey it would have been more dangerous over a densey populated area like New York where the Empire State building was. the greatest obstacle to the success of the use of the mooring mast was nature itself. The winds on top of the building were shifting due to air currents. Dirigibles would not be safe dangling high above pedestrians on the street. The major problem architect faced was that dirigibles could not moor at the Empire State building because it has a law against airships flying to low over urban areas. Even though it seemed like a good idea at the time, it was not practical or safe.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
16356,6,"The builders of the @ORGANIZATION2 many obstacles. Al smith realized that he was close to losing the title of the world's tallest building. The one obstacle to their expanded use in New York City was the lack of a suitable landing area. A mooring mast was added to the top of the building would allow dirigibles to anchor there for several hours for refueling. Dirigibles were docked by means of an electric whinch. The architects could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof. A thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame. The steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate this new situation. Over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications had to be made to the building's framework. The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself. Dirigibles moored in open landing fields could be weighted down in back with lead weights. This law would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area, all though two dirigibles did attempt to reach the building before the entire idea was dropped. Fearing that the wind blow the dirigible onto",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
10174,4,"I actually like the way the author concludes the story with this paragraph. It basically sumarizises the story and sums it up into few words that would want you to wonder what happened next, and if there is a sequel. This is a very good story that I personally can relate to in many ways.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,1.0
913,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, I have been informed that recently, people are questioning the use of computers. Some say computers have negative effects on people when using them but I for one disagree with that statement. I believe that computers in today's society have created an atmosphere of learning, communication, and an ideal amount of creative fun. Computers are changing the way everyday people live. This technology is the basis of our future, and our future has evolved around our computers. People learn so they can become better at things, be aware of what is going on, and to gain the knowledge that possibly help mem succed in life. Computers gona access to information that people want to know whether it is to learn how it dance using youtube.com, to learn about a possible vacation spot your family might visit, or to research a topic for a school paper: computers have it all. It sits right at home so there is no need to drive to the library and wait for a book with the right researching skills, almost anybody can find the exact information they are looking for. Computers contribute to people who want to learn. Being a popular used computer have beenimportant to make them the best. Whether that means faster internet better, researching book or more websites, a computer has it all. Back before the telephones was invented, people struggled to have a reliable source of communications with where communication is important because it is the main source of communicating. Through the computer, @CAPS1, @CAPS2, and emails are easy and guarenteed ways to talk to everybody. With just a simple click of a mouse a person can talk to their bestfriend as if they were right next to them. Communication plays an important role for a civilization or society. It makes life so much easier without creating a place where people become lazy. Talking to people by using the computer has become easier and more dependable than ever. People can email their teachers if they have a question for homework, people can check there grades online, and people can talk to their friends and family all they want whenever they want. So we people say that the computer. If a sibling is away at college, their @CAPS3, when a family is to gether, they could since new things are discovered through the computer everyday. can come to a person in multiple ways. A computer can emphazize the fun is never a bad thing. Computers offer video games, learning games, and that bring creativity to. This technology gets people every to have an open mind with everything. It allows them to have fun but at the same time learn something about the world or even themselves. Sometimes computers can inspire people to do something like start a group to make the environment better or go running around ther block. Even though the actual computer is inside the fun and creativity can be whenever a person wants it to be. Computers expand a person's knowledge, allow one to communicate, and create a whole new word of fun. Researching topics can be easily accessed through a computer. Communicating with others makes life easier and having fun while inspiring people everywhere makes computers have a total positive effect on people. It creates a new atmosphere of enjoyment of different things. Computers effect people in the greatest way and I don't know why some people doubt its magnificent ways of indudging people in the environment.",4.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
16311,6,"There are many obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle the builders had to face was they had ""over sixty thousand dollars worth of modifications to be made to the building's framework."" Another obstacle the builders faced was meeting the president of a airship transport company and the plan to offer dirigible service across the Pacific Ocean. That is just two of the many obstacles the builders faced while building the Empire State Building.",0.0,,,,,0.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
15393,6,"In the excerpt The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, The builders had to face many obstacles in an attempt to allow dirigibles to dock at the top of the Empire State Building. Though this idea was not successful, it took them a long time to realize the causes and effects of docking dirigibles. over sixty thousand dallors were spent on modifications for the building. after fixing the structure of the building the builders found out the weather had interfered. Because of the high winds the dirigibles were constantly shift. There wasn't a safe way to control shifting. Their was also a law against airships flying too low over populated cities. another reason was, dirigibles were very dangerous and highly flammable. Trying to build a mooring mast was not a good idea.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
13088,5,The mood of the author changed during the memoir because in the beginning of the story he had mood of just telling where the character was from and where he was born. On paragraph @NUM1 he has a ill do what it takes mood. For example he was grateful about his parents and his life he was okay on how things were and he loved it. On paragraph @NUM2 and seven the author feels relieved and happy because he writes about the character remembering the good old times.,1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
3293,2,"Recently the growing issue of censorship in libraries came to my attention. This is unfortunent in the extreme. People have a right to unmolested knowledge and censoring libraries is a direct violation of that right. Libraries are meant to be a place of learning and they should be kept that way.     History is filled with moments both glorious and inglorious. We aren't always proud of want we do or what happens but those events remain, irrespective of whether or not we choose to acknowledge it. To think turning a blind eye to the less than clean will make it go away is not only unrealistic but also totally ignorent of facts.     I realise that there are some things chilldren should not see or hear and I'm not suggesting we expose them to these things. I'm merely saying that trying to hide them from what we deem to be unclean is neither right nor a good idea in general. We can't shelter our children forever and sooner or latter they will learn things we wish they didn't. This is inevitable. Life doesn't seek to hide its darker side from us at all and to hide it from our children will serve little more than to handicap them. Do children need to be protected for some things? Yes, for a time, they do but it is the role of the induvidual parent to protect their child. Protect the children but don't do so at the expence of everyone else.     Why should the views of some hinder all others? Those who would persume to know what people should see and what they should not are out of touch. Those prudish enough to believe that people need to be protected for natural, form history, or from their own desires have no more right, and preahaps even less than everyone else to interfere with induvidual decision making. People have a right to make their own choices on what them believe but no right to force those oppinions on others.       This essay @MONTH1 make no difference but it has said what needed to be said and thus served it's purpose. With that task completed I can finnish with a good concious.",4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
13222,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir felt happy, and very greatful. In the memoir it tells how the author, Narciso Rodriguez feels ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice"". which gives that he is so, so, so grateful and happy of his life, which makes the reason happy to hear that his parents sacrificed themselves for their children to have a better life, even though it ment leaving behind their families, friends, and careers in their country they loved.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
1185,1,"Dear @CAPS1, People like computers, @CAPS2 a known fact. They are very much like a dry, addicting and irrestable. Despite what people believe though computers are very good for our daily lives. You can communicate play @ORGANIZATION1, listen to music watch movies, even learn a language on the computers. So in all ways, the computer is anything but bad. @ORGANIZATION1 are fun. They help us relax. In todays age, @ORGANIZATION1 just don't give people the joy they experienced when younger. Computer @ORGANIZATION1, they are the replacement. Imagine playing baseball with a friend who lives miles away from you, while still being a kid in @LOCATION1, or set in your exercise adventure. Computer @ORGANIZATION1 broke the border giving you a higher level or ""You got mail"". Many people hear that sentence more than once everyday. By many, I mean millions. @CAPS2 a alert saying that someone sent you a email. @CAPS4 are messages. Sent over the @CAPS7, faster than any service. Instead of waiting @NUM1 days for a letter, In a matter of minutes you can have a message sent to your friends. Microsoft @CAPS3 @CAPS4, and other electronic messaging systems are a superior form of communication, these let us speak to the world! Although it sounds silly, @CAPS5 you wanted by you could send a message to anyone with a message box. Lets say you went to watch a certain movie, but you don't own it. With a computer with a dose drive, you can watch any @CAPS6. Better yet, you can download the movies media are available @CAPS7, with you able to watch them with the click of the mouse. Computers are filled to the top with gadgets & accesories that make our life easier. @ORGANIZATION1, movies, @CAPS4 anything you is not likely on a computer. They are the perfect tolls in modern society.",4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
7300,3,"The environment around people in certain situations can affect them in many ways. For instance if  you are hot, tree could be shade, or thirsty, a river neer by could help your thirst. If you were hungry and hot, but nothing was near you this could make you hot. In this cyclist case the environment affected him in many ways, from bumpy roads, “ghost towns, and trees. For example he said, “The sun was beginning to beat down, but I barley noticed,” this is because of the ""cool pines"" around him as he explains in the next paragraph. It also says in the text that the terrain changed and he even came upon a snake, which added to his thirst. So then making it harder for him to go one. From reading the the text on can see how features can have effects on a person.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
6050,3,"The setting of this story greatly affects the cyclist’s attitude and adversities. The path of the cyclist is through California deserts, which are dry and hot. This first presents the major conflict of the story, the danger of the cyclist getting heatstake. In the reading, the author says, “I had been hitting my water bottles pretty regularly” If the setting was in a cooler climate, the author would most likely not drank as often, and would not face dehydration. The trip would not have been as dangerous for the cyclist if the climate was different. Another element of the setting that affected the cyclist was the terrain. In the reading it says, “Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills.” The rough road not only would take a toil on the authors body, but also his mind. While riding, the author thinks, “ I was doing a water-depleting 12 mph” This shows how his attitude is getting less and less optimistic as well as keeping his mind on his thirst. Thinking of his thirst would only get him more thirsty. The small change in terrain had a large impact on the authors journey. Perhaps the most influential element of the setting is the isolation. Only until the end of the story does the cyclist run into another human. Up until that point, He was all alone, having to deal with his thirst and fatigue on his own. If the setting had been in a more urbanized area, the cyclist could have gotten help from other people, which would have made his ordeal very easy. Also known, that nobody was going to help him played a large role in the mental state of the author. In conclusion, the conflict of this story was set up by the setting. If the setting were not hot, rough, and isolated, the cyclist would have had an easy journey, and the story would not have been as exciting or interesting. A different setting in my opinion would have ruined the story.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
16431,6,"The obstacles the builders of the Empire state Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there was that the had to be modified and strengthened. This cost them over @MONEY1 worth of modifications. They had to make these modifications so the dirigible can dock. All in All, these are the obstacles the builders of the Empire state building face in attempting to allow dirigible to dock.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
12185,5,"The mood in this memoir I believe  is appreciation and caring towards others. @NUM1 home as well as neighborhood was a place of unity and caring for one another like a family. In the memoir it says that people were always coming in and out of the house for a place to stay or for a meal to eat and were always welcomed with open arms. ""Family""  to him didn't mean you were related but were loved and cared for by other and with that mindset he had a huge family. His parent left behind their lives in Cuba where they were both scientists and had friends and family there for their son. They knew that the United States had better oppurtunitis for Narciso (in which he becomes a designer). He states several times how grateful he is of his parents for them to move to the @LOCATION3 for him as well as making his house feel like a home.",3.0,,,,,3.0,4.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
1201,1,"Dear editor, Computers are becoming more and more prevalent in the @LOCATION1. Peolple are spending too much time on computers instead of on other activities, an effect not beneficial to society. Because of computers, people have lacked exercise, missed enjoying nature and other parts of the world and forgotten about interacting with family and friends. Computers should be used in moderation and not in place of other important events in our lives. First of all, computer users receive significantly less exercise than those who do not use computers. According to a survey done by the @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3 only @PERCENT1 of computer users reported that they exercised at least once every week. In contrast, @PERCENT2 of non-computer users (non-frequent computer users) reported that they exrcised at least once every week. Can one imagine what it would be like if everyone was a loyal computer user? Nearly everybody would be overweight, lethaigic from lack of sleep due to hours on the computer, and unworldly. Getting exercise is an essential part of everyone's life, and lacking it could be deleterious to one's health. Hopping off the computer and instead getting exercise, would make for a healthier and more fit country. Not only do computers deprive people of getting exercise, but they also prevent people from enjoying nature and other parts of the world. By traveling to @CAPS1 and unfamiliar places in the world, one is able to experience and learn about other cultures. Going on the internet @MONTH1 be a decent way to learn about other places, but actually feeling the ambiance and environment of a foreign place is allows for a much more profound understanding of another place. For example. when I went to @LOCATION2 for a vacation, I learned about the differences in traditions and culture. I saw the separation between the poor and the rich when I lookes from humble sharks along the river to the portentous, eregant edifices scraping the sky. It was an experince I could not encounter on a computer. People should be able to enjoy the wonders and differences of the world not on a small screen of a computer, but through the screen of one's eyes. Lastly, computers inhibit people from interacting with family and friends. From my personal experiences, I tend to ignore friends and family. Speaking, playing, and generally socializing with others is a critical part of everyone's life. Without this basic necessity people cannot be happy. In summary, computers should not be used in excess. This sort of use could read to people getting less exercise, not fully experiencing the world, and closs of interaction with friends and family. To make a better country and nation, the people of the @LOCATION1 @LOCATION1 should make an effort to reduce computer use.",5.0,6.0,6.0,6.0,6.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,29.0
6914,3,The cyclist has to endure ruff treain and bad road condisions and a lack of water is the ??? near did not help the prodlem. Ther was a good prasority he could have heat strock then his hope was stll up by a abonded welches take factry.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
6690,3,"Many features of the carlifonian desert influenced the cyclist during his ride.Ghost towns, rolling hills, and dangerous snakes influenced the cyclists experience during the''shortcut'' to yosenite.The Ghost towns along the journey syndized the world desrting him during his ride by offering no help with water supply as a place to cool dowdn.The road sign warning of rough terrain was another barrier on his bike ride that he had to get through in dehydration to reach his goal,yosenite.The diamondback rattlesnate caused additional horror to the cyclist's'' ride from hell''.He had to manuever around the serpent while unstable from dehydration.All features of the cyclist's riding setting affected his ride to yosenite.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
3042,2,"I @CAPS1'@CAPS2 think that books should be censored. There are no books, besides maybe math books, that @CAPS1'@CAPS2 offend at least one person or a group of people. Books are an important part of the learning system. If a certain book offends you then you @CAPS1'@CAPS2 have to @CAPS3 @CAPS4. @CAPS4's that simple. there is no need to over react to words on paper. Besides there are more important issues at the moment.     While being offended by a book is bad, we must realize that some people are going through things that are way worse than that. People who do drugs or have a family member that does drugs are an example. A better example would be the parents or gaurdians of a kid who was killed either by accident or on purpose. One of the most common but overlooked examples is the what the loved ones of people who die serving our country go through. As you can see if people can live with that then we can definantly handle an offensive book.      Censorship causes blidness. What I mean is, if we censor one offensive book then we have to censor every book that someone finds offensive. All men are created equal, right? So they'd have to censor the book. If a book offends you that much then listen up, @CAPS1'@CAPS2 @CAPS3 @CAPS4! Just because a book is offensive to you doesn'@CAPS2 mean @CAPS4's offensive to everyone. sometimes a history book could be considered offensive so we censor @CAPS4 and then we @CAPS1'@CAPS2 learn about the mistakes of our past and repeat them. The point is if a p erson can handle some of the things I've mentioned, then we can all handle a little bit of words on a little bit of paper.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
16386,6,"There are a few obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building face in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle would be the building of the mooring mast to be added to the top of the building. Although it was a good idea, it was very complicated. Another Reason consists of law @CAPS1. There was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. New York is defanitley not the City for this idea just because there is alot of people walking around the @CAPS2 and there is many buildings around. This idea of docking dirigibles on the Empire State Building would @CAPS3 to be over with the invention of airplanes. The idea @CAPS4 disappeared.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
15451,6,"When building the Empire State Building, the architects and engineers faced many problems. The first problem was reconstructing the buildings framework. This had to be done in order for the building to be able to undergo great amounts of wind pressure and stress from the dirigible. The next problem the workers encountered was the wind currents. The wind was so strong at the tip of the building, if a dirigible were to be docked to the mooring mast, it would be rotating around it depending on the wind currents. The final problem the architects faced was a law against a dirigible's height. There was an already existing law that stated airships could not fly too low over urban areas. These obstacles were but some of the many faced by the building team of the Empire State Building.",2.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
10113,4,"I think that the reason the author concludes the story like that, is that it awhave ending. also so you know that the story is that they could make more.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
12027,5,@PERSON1 is a short story about a boy who is very grateful & shows a lot of appriciation torwards his parents. He feels that he is at home even though he moved to @LOCATION1. In paragraph @NUM1 it said his parents created his new home to look like a cuban home he had back in cuba by putting cuban thing on the wall. I feel that in this short story he is very grateful because he said in paragraph @NUM2 he will never forget how his parents turned this simple house to a home. @PERSON1 is a very calm and happy short story.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
1523,1,"@CAPS1 you know we all like computers and we all use it for all different tyoes off things like to chat or to do work and most importantly to fine something but computers are in a way not that good for you especially if your computer is your life, one reason I think computers are in a way bad is because when you are on it for when you are on it for along time you get hungry then you get some snaks and by the time your done using the computer gained. A pound no imagin how much wiget you will gain if you do that every day alot! My next reason why I think computers are in a way bad is because when you are the computer too long your eyes start to hurt and your hands start to cramp and everything starts to hurt to much typing and looking at the same thing for along to can make you have eye problems and can also give you something in your hands and then you will not to be able to do anything with your hands for along time because it will start hurting. My last reason why i think computers in a way are bad because it can mess your computers up it can over heat or just down because you have ben on it for too long. It can also get a virese then you will just have to get a whole new computer @CAPS1 you can see there are plenty of reasons why I think computers are kinda bad",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
9357,4,"The author ends the story with that paragraph because she wants to show that the peace that the peace that the flower gave will build her confidence and she will not give up. I know this because in the story the main character fails her driving test and when she sees the flower it helps remind her of the home she had in Vietnam. Another reason is because the flower blooms in spring and it never stops blooming. She knows it will never give up and she relaizes that she shouldn’t either. Plus the plant gives her stength to try again. So the reason the author ends her story with that paragraph is to show the power the flower that was know to her, give her and how she will no give up.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
16090,6,"Based on the expert, builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles and attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. Allowing a dirigible to dock on top of the Empire State Building was never thought of an easy task to accomplish. As it was mentioned in the article the idea of the dirigible was ""destined to never fulfill its purposes."" One obstacle in which builders would face is safety. Since most of the dirigibles from outside U.S.A uses hydrogen rather than helium, hydrogen is much more flammable. This is a very dangerous obstacle to builders because fire itself is really dangerous. The greatest obstacle was nature itself, however. If the winds are shifting violently, the dirigibles could be way down and be dangling high above the pedestrians. This would not be safe to the people or the builders because it could hurt them. Another obstacle builders would face is that there was a law against air ships flying too low over urban areas. It would make illegal for a ship to ever tie up or get close to the area. This made it harder for builders to accomplish because it's against the law.",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
12892,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir. First, the mood created by the author is that he love to cook, his parents taugh him how and her is eternally gratefull for his parents. Second, his mother and father ""had come to @LOCATION1 with such courage, without any knowledge of the language or the culture. they came to give a better life to Narciso @PERSON1, leaving behind their country they loved.""third, he parents had a simple house. They always filled the air with not just scent and music but life and love.In summary, this are the mood created by the author.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
1367,1,"Dear @CAPS1 I would like to inform the public that using computers isnt so bad. The first reason I think make computers good is because of the people we can meet via @CAPS2, yahoo, @ORGANIZATION1 or gmail. For instance we could meet someone from @LOCATION1 and learn about his or hers culture or beliveths. My second reason I think computers help people is because what if someone didnt have @CAPS3 or the newspaper he or she could get the @CAPS4 news via nbc.com or fox.com and will be able to still find out whats going on in the world.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
13098,5,The authors mood towards the memior was ok I guess. In some areas it was low. It could of been better.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
12175,5,"The author in this memoir created a mood that showed how @CAPS1 felt about this house and his parents. He appreciated the house and was grateful for his parents. He is grateful for his parents and for their love and sacrifice. He is grateful they love and care for him. He says, ""I've often told them what they did was a much more courageous thing than I could have ever done. I've often told them of my admiration for their strength and perseverance."" @CAPS1 appreciates this house and how his parents made it into a home. He appreciates how his parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people they considered family.So in this memoir the author created a mood that showed greatfulness and appreciation.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
10488,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because the paragraph is about how the snow melts and the greenery returns, like a rebirth. This similizes his renew motivation to take the test again. This really shows how close he is to nature and the affect that his exposure to it has had on him over the years.",1.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
3209,2,Hi my name is @PERSON1 I have a couple topics that I would       like to talk to you about. I have been hearing alot of people          talking about libraries taking alot of there stuff off the shelves      well I think that that the libraries around the world have alot        of information inside of them and if we started taking                  information out of them then what would be the point in              having them. I think that everything in libraries are very               important and who is to know that everybody wants this to          happen. The one thing that I dont really think that libraries           need in them is movies because like pretty much every movie      has a book that goes with it or is the same thing pretty much.       And lets get on with the whole offensive thing I think everone      should be mature about all the negative stuff people can say         even if it is hurtfull. Though I think that the more people read      about what people are saying about them is the less that              they are goin to care because they are goin to just be so used       to it that they are not even goin to know what they are                talking about. If there was one thing that I could tel the world      it would be dont be offened by what people say to you.,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
12925,5,"The mood created by the @PERSON1 in the memoir was to show how happy it was for Narciso Rodriguez growing up. ""here, The innocence of childhood, The congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the back drop to life in our warm home"" and when the @PERSON1 says ""growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relitive."" as you can see the mood of the story is warm and tells us about how he had a good Childhood",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
6531,3,I read “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” written by Joe Kurmaskie in the story the features of the setting affect the cyclist by accepting advice from “old timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches @CAPS1 was in office”,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
12164,5,"In the memoir of Narciso Rodriguez, it gives a cheery, happy safe mood. Paragraph @NUM1 explains a traditional cuban home, with the cooking and music and everything. It's like that in my house, just with @CAPS1 things, not Cuban. Also, the narrator explains how everyone in the neighborhood was a close - knit family of Cuban, spanish and Italian people. No one would hurt one other and every one will help in case of a problem, giving a safe feeling. Lastly, All of paragraph @NUM2 and @NUM3 explains how his parents risked everything to be in the @CAPS2. My parents did the same thing and it makes me feel happy that they did. So, its probably the same for the narrator. In conclusion, the memoir has a good and happy mood to it.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
9132,4,"The story Winter Hibiscus by @CAPS1 Ho the author concludes the story with  ,”When they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and hibiscus is budding ,then I will take that test again"". The author does this as a symbol of hope for the reader. Also so its not just an ending where you never know what happens it gives you something to forward to. Furthermore when the geese do come back there is warm weather and the hibiscus is blommming then Saeng will be more comfortable because she has gotten use to idea of living a new place and has met more people. Meanwhile having the hibiscus in bloom will bring good memories back from when she was young and living in her homeland .This will help Saeng achieve her goal of passing her test .Also I believe  the author ended the story with that passage because it makes people want to read it again or recommend the story to someone else .I know that I hate reading stories  that just end and don’t  tell you what happens next . However the Author resolved this by letting the reader know that Saeng wants to pass the test and is going to go back and try again.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
1699,1,"Dear Newspaper, I think that computers have a good effect on peoples' lives. You can do alot of stuff on the internet that costs too much to do without it. You can study different foods and cultures around the world. If you play games online you can get better hand-eye coordination skills. There are also things you can buy to video chat with family or friends. The computer is very convinient and useful. If you are interested in a place in the world you can type in the name of the place and get facts about cultures, foods, and more. Instead of buying an airline ticket to see @LOCATION1, you can go online to learn @CAPS1 language. You can also study food s that people eat and the clothes they wear. You can also learn sports and games. If you play games on the computer you can get a better hand-eye coordination. Most games you can daunloads and are free. There are puzzle games that challenge you, action that are fun and take rapid button pressing, and adventure that let you explore new lands. And in alot of these games you can talk to people and make friends. There are otherways to talk instead of games. There is email, chat rooms, facebook, twitter, and video chat. With any of these things you can talks to friends or family around the world or in your state/country. All of these you can either download, go on the internet for, or buy them. You can talk to old friends or you can talk to family you havent seen in a while. Video chat you can see eacho ther, face book you can share pictures and chat rooms you can talk with multiple people. In conclusion computers are very convinient for our society today. Whether it's studying the world, having fun, or talking to people you know, the computer has many wonderous things for people",3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
12197,5,"The mood created in this story was happiness and greatfulness towards his parents. In the story he told the many sacrifices his parents made to give him a better life than the one they had. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" ""But in reality, there is no way to express my gratitude for their spirit of generosity."" His parents came to the country knowing little engish and having to start their lives over just so that his life would be better.",2.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
15601,6,"The obstacle the builders had in attempting to allow dirigibles or ""blimps"" to dock on the Empire State Building were nature itself. The reason nature is the obstacle for blimps to dock on the building is because the wind currents moving the end of the blimp. If the blimp is moving by the wind while passangers are leaving or getting in, it would be very easy to fall off. Another obstacle the builders had with docking the blimps is the lead weights dangling from the end of the blimps. Those weights were used to keep the blimp from shifting directions due to the wind currents but it was a concern for the safety of the Street Pedestrians. On @CAPS1 @NUM1 of ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, it quotes that ""... that using these at the Empire State Building, where they would be dangling high above Pedestrians on the Street, was neither practical nor safe"". This quote proves that putting weights on the back of the blimp would be dangerous. If they some how fall off then someone could get really hurt on the streets.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9086,4,So she did not forget to take the test again.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
13006,5,The mood of the @CAPS1 is @CAPS2 and happy because Narciso Rodriguez parents immagrated from Cuba to @LOCATION1. The parents lived in a one room apartment for one year and when Narciso Rodriguez was born They moved in a @NUM1 room house. The parants try to make the house as @CAPS3 can be.,0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
15852,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building had many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The number one obstacle was safety. The builders thought to themselves, How are we going to safetly land a dirigible thousands of feet above the ground, while its freely floating in midair? Plus when you attempt this you are above crowded New York streets. If there was ever a malfunction or error while docking then thousands of people may lose their lives. Its much easier lending dirigibles in an open field than in mid-air because you have much more room, your planting the dirigible on secure ground, and you can weigh it down so it doesnt move around. Yet landing in open fields is dangerous because on @DATE1 in @LOCATION2, New Jersey the German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by a fire. This example shows how that if that were to happen in mid-air over a crowded New York City street or block then many more casualties would have been recorded. These obstacles were real and these are some of the reasons why the idea of landing a dirigible in mid-air slowly went away, because it wasnt the most logical idea.",1.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,3.0
15167,6,"The builders of the Empire State building faced many obstacles in building a mooring mast for airships to dock at the top building. The stress and preasure of a thousand foot dirigible docked at the top of the building was too great for the buildings original frame work to support, so they had to reinforce and strengthen the framework and base so the preasure would be transmitted to the buildings foundation. Another obstacle was most dirigibles from outside the @LOCATION2 were filled with hydrogen instead of helium. Hydrogen was much more flamible and the hydrogen dirigibles like the German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed in fire and they didn't want that to happen over New york's population. The final obstacle was the violent and shifting air currents over the building. Even if the front of the dirigible or ""mast"" was tied to the mooring mast the back would swivel around the mooring mast. The many unseen obstacles of the mooring mast made it in unpracticle docking point for dirigibles. In the 1930s after airplanes, and dirigibles had disappeared the ticketing & bagging rooms were turned into tourist and site seers areas.",3.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
6828,3,The features of the setting could affect this cyclist. In this case it do effect the cyclist. According to the text “Sometimes life can feel so cruel.” This is a good example because he knew that this road was going to be rough and he was only going 12 mph. So the features of the setting did effect the cyclist. ,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
9061,4,"The author choose this end to show that saeng hasn't given up on how she is living yet. It shows that even though she really loved her hometown, and feels and remembers a lot back then. She had taken the test and failed, living where she was living then just seemed too much pressure on her. Although she hasn't quite adapted throughly she will try her best to surcome situations that are brought upon her. It gives the reader hope by ending the story like this, instead of just leaving the reader at she bought a flower after failing a test and moves on with her life. For example when she failed the test she seemed distressed and very angry. I,”I-I failed the test,” Saeng said. For a long moment mrs. Panouvong said nothing. Saeng did not dare look her mother in the eye. Instead, she stared at the hibiscus plant and nervously tore off a leaf, shedding it to bits.”it anger Saeng how she had to leave her happy past life for one that is different and challenging. When faced with a challenge extreme emotiona situations occur. Saeng just needed hope and the author choose this to betray to then reader there is a chance of hope!",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
16441,6,The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there was a existing law. In paragraph @NUM1 saying the reason why dirigibles could not moor at the empire state Building cause of an existing law against airship flying too low under urban area and the law would make it illegal for a ship to even tie or even approach the mooring mast.,1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
3324,2,"Libraries should have censorship because young kids could come and open and look at it. I think we should have it because it would make sure the kids wont look at them. There are three reasons why they should have censorship. First they can teach kids bad things, second bad influence, and third they just dont need to be there.     First was they can teach kids bad thing. That is because they would start looking at it more. Then they would get in trouble. There is really no reason for them to looking at it at all.     Second, its a bad influence. They go and tell and show there friends and make them start doing stuff that isn't right. Makeing then do stuff and then have a bad future.     Third there really isn't no reason they should be looking at it. Like unless it fell from a book case and was laying on the floor. But there really isn't no reason they should be looking at it.     I think we should have it so it cant hurt and kids so everyone would be right in life",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
13037,5,The author of this memoir presented a kind of grateful and cheerful mood. I believe it is this type of mood because in the memoir he talks so much about on how that he is so grateful that his parents were so caring and selfless people because they moved from their home country cuba just for the sake of their children. He presents the cheerful mood by focusing all the good things in his life with his parents in his house and neighborhood. Example's are him talking about how all the cultures got along good with one another in his area. He also talked about the good times he had with his parents in the kitchen. The memoir he left was definetly a pausitive one not a negative one.,2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
16334,6,"In the story ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon @CAPS1 the builders of the Empire State Building faced an obstacle in building a dock for dirigibles. One of the problems they faced was that the did not have suitable landing area. In paragraph six it said that it would only allow dirigibles to anchor there for several hours. Also they had realized that most dirigibles from outside the country used hydrogen insted of helium which was more highly flammable. In paragraph thirteen they said that an accident could have been worse if it had taken place above a densely populated area such as downtown New York.",1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
15532,6,"Some problems the designers faced, were the violent air currents that form in urban areas, this would be a problem because the dirigible would be tossed around due to it's light weight. Another problem, is the fact that it would be too dangerous to land a dirigible over a densely populated area like New York City.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
9439,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph because at the beginning of the story Saeng went to take a driving test but didn’t pass and so she goes and buys a hibiscus that reminds her of home and gives her strength and comfort. So her mother says this at the end because she knows Saeng is going through a hard time adapting to her new country and she doesn’t want to put more pressure on her just because she knows Saeng is very upset and is trying to make it up to her by buy a flower for her so she says by next spring she should be adapted and ready for the test because the flower should give her hope. She wants her to know she is three for her.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
15354,6,"Builders of the Empire State Building encountered many obstacles during construction, according to the article The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted. The biggest obstacle of allowing dirigibles, or blimps, to dock their where the forces of nature, such as wind and gravity. As in the article, the ""winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" It was unsafe for both passengers of the dirigible and pedestrians below to be close to the blimp and the turbulent air. Also, the flammability of the hydrogen in the blimp caused a problem; it was very unsafe to have a possible fire hazard that was @NUM1 feet long, floating close over a very populated place such as New York City. In addition to that, laws that airships could not fly too close over urban areas prohibited dirigibles even coming close to the mooring mast over the Empire State Building. A test run with the U.S. navy dirigible Los Angeles proved that it was too dangerous and impractical; the dirigible could not even get close enough to tie up. All in all, the mooring mast over the Empire State Building was a genius idea, but too many obstacles sprung up for it to be in use.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
16553,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One of the obstacles faced was making sure that the people below would not get hurt. If something happened to fall, someone could get hurt. Another obstacle faced was the law against airships flying too low over urban areas. That's the obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
9259,4,The author ends the story with this paragraph to show how Saeng changed. Saeng didn’t want to take the test and she had no confidence. In the story saengs mother supports her no matter what. She even understood when Saeng bought a plant for @MONEY1 because it reminded her of home. Now that Saeng has been comforted she feels more relaxed and she is ready and more confident to take the test again. therefore Saeng has changed.,1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
6319,3,The features in the setting effects the cyclist because there it different kinds of hills. He has watch out for rocks in the middle of the road. He has to make sure he has a lot of water because it looks like he is in the desert. There is no cars around but he still has to look for any cars in case they came out of nowhere. There is a lot of turns. It is very hot so he has to make sure he does not have a neat scaoke. There is no places where he can stop because there is no shade. There is no stores where he can stop & get water and food at either. That is the setting of the cyclist.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
1052,1,"Did you know that @PERCENT2 out of @PERCENT1 children today, prefer to play games on the computer than do other activities? My opinion about this topic is that it is more important for children to do things other than sit on the computer all day. The reasons why I feel this way is because it is important to exercise, children tend to be addicted to playing on the computer, and if someone's life revolves around the computer than they most likely, won't be able to live on the ""real world"". When a child sits at the computer all day, they are not getting exercise. Today, obesity is a major problem. If people stay on the computer less and exercise more than this situation could decrease. Also, it is important for children to get fresh air. When someone plays on the computer they are not getting as much fresh air as you would outdoors. Lastly, who realize the importance of exercise tend to participate in sports, to stay active and have fun. Once you begin to play games on the computer, there is not turning back. In today's society, children of all ages, become addicted to the computer. Children who are addicted pay no attention to their surroundings. Also, some of these games might be inappropriate for younger players. Lastly, if children become addicted, they could do poorly in school for refusing to do homework. If a child is constantly on the computer than they have a chance of not being prepared for the ""real world."" In the ""real world,"" you can't rely on computer games. Also, games won't teach you things that you can only learn during school. Later in life, when you want to get a job, you won't be able to be accepted because you will not sound knowledgable. Lastly, when you are writing your application to go to a college, they will look at your records of sports and activities you've done in middle school. When they don't find anything, they will reject you because of your lack of participation. So when you are sitting at the computer screen, remember all the possibilities you have other than the computer. For example, it is important for you to exercise, playing games on the computer could make you addicted and you won't be prepared for te ""real world"". What is your opinion?",4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
13565,5,"According to the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives the author created a mood throughout the memoir. The mood was happiness because Narciso was happy with his life.One example of Narciso's happiness is with his home. When @CAPS1's telling about the apartment @CAPS1 grow up in the mood is happy. Although it wasn't much his parents made him comfortable in it. They made it seem like Cuba as much as they could. Narciso loved his apartment even if it wasn't Cuba. In paragraph two ""within its walls, my young parents created our traditional Cuban home."" @CAPS1 was happy with the apartment because his parents made it feel like a Cuban home to him.Another example of Narciso's happiness is with his family. Narciso tells how his friends seem like family. In paragraph four ""Our landlord and his daughter... do the same for us."" Even though the people aren't blood related to him @CAPS1's still happy with them. Finally, based on the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from Home: The Blueprints of Our lives the author created a happy mood. This mood was created because Narciso is happy with the life @CAPS1 lives.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
775,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS1 that use computers is a good thing. I state this because the web has many things to do. For example, facebook, twitter, and myspace are all social sites. Also there are video sites such as youtube. Plus @CAPS1 learn how to type fast. Social network sites are good for @CAPS1. Teens got to talk to each other, make new friends, and post what they want. For example, twitter you can post tweets, facebook you can join groups, and become a fan of something or someone, and myspace you can send messages. TEENS relieve a lot of stress on the web. Videos are great when your bored. Type in youtube and get a good laugh or two. Teens that go on youtube become more social. For example, teens can learn the new dance. Plus on video sites there are comedy. Comedy helps daily life. @CAPS2 helps life if you work in a office or a trademark. Teens learn to type to make life easier. For example @CAPS2 fast is like texting. @CAPS2 is like writing a letter electronically. So get to @CAPS2. Ok so computers do help life in teen years. Basically it is @CAPS3 somewhat. All people should have a computer. Just remember that social sites, video sites, and @CAPS2 make life better.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
10304,4,Saeng was waiting for spring then she could take the test again. I think at se was wereing about it doing spring because she whent to wacth the geese fly in a u shape and she whent to see the plant grow but the snow don’t melt yet. She started takeing to herself about it but she could whant to take at test doing spring. At if she can passed it again because she doesn’t like to take the test over and over again. When every body gets to the diffent thing after thee test is over.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
9359,4,The author is saying that she would take the test again in the spring instead of the winter cause she would be more focus to just keep her mind on the test & not the planting.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
12300,5,The mood created by the author in the memoir is lifting. The mood created by the author is lifting because it shows that race doesn't matter when it comes to unity or friendship. It is also lifting because Narciso's parents gave up everything and everyone so that their family can live a better life. Another reason why it is lifting is because in the story it talks about how the family doesn't have to neccisarily blood related and can be someone you love and will help you. That is why I think the mood created by the author in the memoir is lifting.,1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
10597,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph for several reasons. First, when the hibiscus buds in the spring that means that the plant is about to bloom. That also means that Saeng will be ready in the spring to take the test again. Also the last paragraph is at the end because if the plant can make it, then the girl can pass her drivers test and be happy both ways.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
10280,4,"The author concludes the story with ""When they came back, Saeng vowed silent ly to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding then I will take that test again."" because the girl is willing to try again and to not give up no matter what. The girl is upset because she doesnt have the real flower her mom had. ""It’s-it's not a real one,"" Saeng mumbled ”i mean, not like the kind we had at- at."" She was upset and afraid that her mother was going to be angry with her that she started to shake. “I know,"" her mother said quietly. ""I've seen this kind blooming along the lake. The author is just showing that the girl is going to try again next time.",1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
13264,5,"The mood created by the author in this memoir is a very welcoming and happy one. Right off the bat Rodriguez talks about the advantages in his life. The advantage of where he lived, his heritage and his ""family"". When Rodriguez first moved into his house, he thought of it as ""a modest three- room apartment. After all the good memories shared in the apartment Rodriguez attitude about the appartment changed. ""Turned this simple house into a home. His heritage, or culture, filled the air. Some of these cultures included Cuban cooking and music. ""Which I adored to this day"" another mood setting advantage is his ""family"". Rodriguez talks about how his family was always over filling the house with laughter ""family"" had nothing to do with being blood relative."" A welcoming and happy mood is created by the author.",2.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
16310,6,"the mooring mast of the empire state Building was destined to never fulfill its purpose, for reasons that should have apparent before it was ever constructed the greatest reason was one of safety must dirigibles From outside of the united states used hydrogen. hydrogen rather Building realized how much worse that accident could have been if it had taken Place above densely populated area such as downtown New York",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
10317,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because Saeng is going to try keep her next plant. The reason why she says she is going to take the test again because she sold the plant to somebody. Saeng has seed the plant before as a child and that's why she was so attached to it. In conclusion, the author concludes the story with this paragraph because Saeng will try and keep her next plant. ",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,1.0
14965,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One problem was that a thousand- foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable, would add stress to the buildings frame. So in order to strengthen the frame it would cost over sixty thousand dollars. Another challenge was the stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure. The last obstacle was safety because of an accident took place in downtown New York it would be devastating.",1.0,,,,,1.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
6072,3,"In the short story the cyclist was affected by the setting in many ways. The author was running out of water throughout the whole story. “The water bottles contained only a few tantalizing sips.” There was a limited amount of water in the bottles. He had to travel a long distance. “Not two miles into the next section.” He was getting tired quick. Also the terrain was not good. “I noticed the terrain changing, flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills.” It get harder and harder to continue his ride.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
6108,3,"The features of the setting affects he cyclist. One way it affect the cyclist is it by being hotlike a says in the text""I could drop from heat stroke on a gorgerous day in June ""@CAPS1 way it affects the cyclist by being bumby like it says in the text ""ROUGH ROAD AHEAD:DO NOT EXCEED POSTED SPEED LIMIT."" that is how the setting affects the cyclist.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
1186,1,"Dear @CAPS1: Some people believe computers benefit society. However, others feel they are too consuming. I for me I belive computers help society. Computers teach hand-eye cordination, give people, and even allows computer to chat online with other people. I'd bet your job requires you to use a computer, you probably even have a personal computer which you like to use to chat with friends. I do that all the time and I like it. Another thing I like are sports. One of my favorite sports is softball. In softball you need to have hand-eye cordination, this will help you swing at the ball more accuratly. When a pitcher throws the ball you have to had the bat at the right angle and watch the ball to know when to swing if kids used computers and become good at hand-eye cordination, then possibly more kids would join a local sports team, and possibly even join travel team. Do you like to travel? I do, and are why I learn about places before I go is by looking that particular place up on the internet. About three years ago I went on vacation to @LOCATION1. I wanted to know what it was like there because I had never gone before, so when I looked it up I found out that they had many torist attractions and ""packages"" that let you swim with dolphins, I was very excited to go and when I did, I had a biast, and to think if I didn't look it up I would not have known what kinds of fun things they had! No wonder so many people like computers! One of the biggest reasons why I like computers is because I can chat with my friends online one main attraction online is @CAPS2, everybody, primarily, has one. Some people have one because they like to look at pictures. I have one because I like to chat with my friends. One night I was chatting with a friend we were laughing having a great time, and then she reminded me that we had science homework due the very next day! I thanked her and then completed my work. You see if kids chat online their friends can remind them of important nescesitys such of homework. This could impove grades by @PERCENT1! So you now see why society needs computers and if you have forgotten let me remind you: computers teach you hand-eye cordiantion, let's you learn about faraway places and people, and now allows you to chat online. Just think what would society be like with no computers.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
6010,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist in many different ways. One example is the hot sun that was beating down on him made him very thirsty. Another feature is the rough road that wore the cyclist out and made him tired. My last example is the old juice factory with the picture of a refreshing cup of juice on it made the cyclist feel like giving up because he thought he would die of dehydration. These are my reasons as to why the features of the setting affect the cyclist in many different ways.   ,2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
15376,6,"The builders of the Empire States Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. For instance, in paragraph @NUM1, the author mentions that they had to consider the Hindenburg incident that took place on May 6, 1937, ""The owners of the Empire State building realized how much worse the accident could have been if it had taken place above a densely populated area such as downtown New York,"" says the author. They realized that the safety of the people has to come first in all scenarios. Also, another obstacle that Al Smith and the builders faced was docking the dirigible when people are down below. In paragraph @NUM2, The author says: ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself."" @CAPS1 dirigibles are often docked in open fields, weights to hold down the back of the ship could be used safely. But above a highly populated area was out of the question because lead weights dangling high above pedestrians is a safety violation. The builders had many obstacles in designing the use of the mooring mast.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
8967,4,"I think that the author made that the concluding sentence because it means that when Saeng is ready then she will take the test again. I think that she is comparing herself to the snow, the snow the geese, and the hibiscus. I think so because she says that when the snow melts and the geese return and the hibiscus is budding then she will take the test again. So I think that she is saying that she is not ready for the test and when she does get ready then that is when she will take it.",1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
16063,6,The first obstical came when the @PERSON1 builing had changed its height. They created the mooring mast and made the empire state builbing @NUM1 ft. higher. Then they figured out that the mast would add stress to the buildings frame. Then with the new laws and the hindenburg that the mooring mast would not work-out. So the gave up trying to make it useful.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
16228,6,"In the excerpt The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon @CAPS1 the builders of the Empire State Building had to face a lot of obstacles to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle that the builders had to face was when they were building the mooring mast to hold the dirigibles. The single cable tether that would hold the dirigibles would add stress to the buildings frame. The builders had to come up with a new idea that would not put stress on the Building. Another obstacle the builders had to face is it would be safe for the passengers. Since the building is so high up the fear of falling out of the dirigible made them worry. One last obstacle that the builders had to face is the ""existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas,"" it made it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building. The builders faced many obstacles while building the mooring mast.",2.0,,,,,1.0,4.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
420,1,"Dear @CAPS1 people, Your have been told that using a @CAPS1 can give no knolege, but I agree that it gives you hand-eye cordanation, A @CAPS1 is the most helpful thing in the world. For my first reason, computers have so many technology things inside that help people everyday. I want to talk about interacting with family and friends. You can go on facebook, myspace and even twitter to talk to your friends. Its the most common thing to go on the @CAPS1. About @PERCENT1 teens and adults use myspace and facebook. Litter kids would be like @PERCENT2 use @CAPS2 to interact with some friends. This technology is the most best thing you could ever use. The second reason is, that people need to learn how to use a @CAPS1 and the hand-eye cordination. For learning, you could learn how to type, write stories, using @ORGANIZATION1 word, and even learning whats to use on the internet, for hand-eye cordination, you can learn all the keys an the keyboard and what they do to get better skills. My thirdly reason is, how to search on google or the @LOCATION1. Google is the most common thing that everyone uses. To look up pictures for projects, labs basiclly for anything. And for the dictionary, you can see what words mean and the dictionay is for learning and doing homework. For my conclusion all these reasons are true and computers are the greatest sources on the planet, everyone do you want education or not? computers help everyone. You gotta love it!?!",5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
15479,6,In the story construction workers faced a problem. The idea of having a dirigible's dock ontop of the empire State Building was comming to an end. When thinking about the idea the architecture Never put thought in legal persasures as in air crafts cant fly low on urban areas. Also the heavy wind that picks up from the building making the air craft hard to controll. Another was the dangers they could inflict to civilians. If not @CAPS1 right the air craft can get loose and dingle down to urban areas or like the german dirigible catch on fire and Blow up. Even though they had a prototype that work they discontinued the project giving air planes the better way to travel in the air.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
12386,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is gratefulness. Narciso often explains how thankful he is to his parents. Like When he says ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice. Narciso starts off the memoir by talking about the hardships of his parents and than goes into how well of a home they made for him. He than talks about all of the good times that they have, and than, he thanks them one more time.",2.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
6939,3,"All the feature of the area have a have a big affect on the cyclist. It is a hot June morning, and he is on his bike, pedaling hard, going many miles. He can't find any water, because all the towns along the road are deserted. He is getting dehydrated, and losing strerigth. It seems like he might have collapsed it he hadn't thought he was going to @CAPS1, and if he hadn't gotten some water at that store. All in all, the setting seems to have the intention of king him.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
15249,6,"When the builders of the @ORGANIZATION2 took on the difficult task of building a mooring mast at the top of the structure for dirigibles to dock at, they faced various obstacles that made it difficult for them to carry out their plan. One of the first obstacles they were faced with was the fact that they couldn't just slap a long mooring mast on the building's flat roof. The huge dirigible that would be held by one cable tether would add an immense amount of stress to the building's frame and fandation. The builders responded by constructing an even stronger frame for the building. The main problem the builders faced when trying to allow dirigibles to dock at the top of the structure were the safety issues. Dirigibles (aside from the @LOCATION1) mostly used hydrogen instead of helium. Hydrogen is extremely flammable and increases the risk of fire. Since the blimps would be above thousands of pedestrians of the city, the risk of a blimp catching fire was much too high. On top of that, the winds at the top of the Empire State Building were always Shifting due to the violent air currents, causing the blimp to swivel around the mooring mast. Although Al Smith had a great vision for docking blimps at the top of his building, the reality was that it was unrealistic, and the bulders were faced with too many obstacles for it to work.",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
12089,5,The mood created by the author is how much the author missis his or her home and were she or he was born and riesed.I think the outhor misses that pleace more then every and that she or he wantes that @CAPS1 back. that the auther well never forget what happened and what the auther did and @CAPS1 in that house.,0.0,,,,,0.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,3.0
15762,6,"Builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles well attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle was the ""violent air-currents."" Due to these currents, it became very hard to be able to allow a dirigible to dock at the top of the empire state building, without blowing away. Another obstacle was safety. The dirigibles were filled with hydrogen, instead of helium. Hydrogen is a very flammable object and if an accident were to happen, a flaming balloon flying over a highly populated area of New York could become very dangerous. Although the idea of making docking stations for dirigibles is a good idea, there are too many obstacles and hazards preventing it from ever happening.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
13127,5,"By reading the memoir I know that a Family @CAPS1't Just a Family because they are blood relative a family is about loving eachothor and always being there for eachother The author is greatfull For everything his parents have doneFor example in paragraph @NUM1 he says ""I will alway be greatful to my parents for their love and sacrifice.""",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
9305,4,"The author conclude the story with “When they came back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again”.because she wanted to grow hibiscus in the winter time. She had failed the first time and she wanted to redeem herself and do it the second time arround. She didn’t want to fail again so she did some things differently. She planted it with care patted the soil down firmly around the plant. That is why the author concludes the story with that paragraph.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,1.0
12176,5,"mood created by the @CAPS1 in the memoire. The @CAPS1 memoir in cube was real grandpareAts, aunts dertha @CAPS2 and their cousins Arnold, Maria, and last but not least Rosemary also lived by. had language or the cultureThe childre a much much better life were they are staying now facy cutrarl hardships",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
7325,3,"One part of the setting that is affecting him is the sun, which is mercilessly overheating the biker. Another problem is the terrain he is on, which is a number of small hills is wearing him out. There are also apparently no trees for shade and no clouds or wind to cool him off.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
10402,4,"I think the author ended the story with that phrase to show that she wont give up; no matter how hard it is she keeps trying. The girl says in the story “I failed the test,” and then at the end of the story says I will take that test again so she is not willing to fail forever. I also think the author ended the story with that paragraph to make you wonder if she will ever pass the test.",2.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
9227,4,"The author uses this sentence to conclude the story to show that Saeng’s hope is restored. Throughout the story Saeng is sad and misses her home. She feels hopeless in this new land, the hibiscus reminds her of home and brings back memories of her being at home with her grandmother, which makes her want to be back at home. The author adds the part about the geese leaving because they also have to leave their home. The hibiscus is to symbolize her being strong and that she will make it through moving to just strange land.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
15856,6,"The builders of the Empire State building faced several obstacles while attempting to let dirigibles dock on it. The first obstacle the builders encountered was the dirigible ability to dock on the building due to the building's structure. ""A thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the frame"" (@NUM1). The frame of the building had to be modified and strengthened for the project to work. The next problem was the use of hydrogen in dirigibles, which is highly flamable. Anyone under the dirigible while it was docked could be in danger if the blimp was destroyed by fire. The biggest problem the builders encountered was the violent air currents. The back of the dirigibles would constantly swivel around while docked due to the constantly changing winds. The mooring mast was not a safe idea that could never have worked.",3.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
8960,4,The authoR concludes thEy stoRy with thE paRagraph bEcause in thE bEing oF the stoRy heR Family movEd to thE United States from Vietnam. Saeng was walking home FRom Failing heR dRivER's test. She See a FamiliaR plant. Later she goes to a FloRist shop to see iF thE plant can be puRchased. So she gEt thE plant seeds and plant thEm so when they staRt to bloom she will go to heR dRiving test she Failed. I @CAPS1 she use the FoR good luck That is why I @CAPS1 the authoR conclude that paragRaph in thE stoRy.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
16348,6,"In the artical ""The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon @CAPS1 the obstacles the builders of the empire Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there, One set of engineers here in New York is trying to dope out a practical workable arrangement and the government people in washington are figuring on some safe way of mooring airships to this mast. The architects couldnot simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State buildings flat roof. A thousand- foot dirigible moored at the top of the building held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frames. The stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the buildings foundation, which was nearly eleven hundred feet below. The steel frame of the Empire State building would have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate this new situation. Over Sixty thousand dollars worth of modifications had to be made to the building's framework.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
1695,1,"Dear local Newspaper, @CAPS1 you @MONTH1 know, @CAPS2 people are starting to buy and own computers. Some experts say this is a bad thing and that we should spend more time outdoors. I disagree with this statement. First, computers help us with every day life. We check news on computers, some people even use their computers @CAPS1 a @CAPS3 and watch important shows. Second, a computer is a great way to comunicate. @CAPS10 its friends, family or even buisness, a computer is a excelent way of communication. finally, a computer is help when it comes to school or work. You could write a paper on the computer for example read on to see how I support my reasons of why computers are helpful in peoples lives. Have you ever had a time when you see something on the news that you want to learn more about? Well, @CAPS10 you had a computer, you could go online to the news website and read more. This is only one way a computer comes in handy in every day life, there are plenty more. Another way is @CAPS10 you don't own a @CAPS3, you could watch your favorite show on the computer. My english teacher @PERSON1 says ""I never owned a @CAPS3, I only watch @CAPS3 on my computer and I like it better"" In fact @PERCENT1 of people who watch videos on the computer like it better than @CAPS3. This is how computers come in handy in every day life. I love how computers have @CAPS2 ways of comunicating. I like it because I have @CAPS2 relatives who live far away and I use my computer to comunicate with them from time to time. Skype is my favorite, I can see the person @CAPS8 talking to at the same time. Also computers can be good for business for large companies who need to comunicate out of the contry. I'm sure being a amazing newspaper company, you could use a way of easy comunication. finally, comunication with friends. These are @CAPS2 programs for this, @CAPS9 @CAPS1 facebook and myspace. This is why a computer is a good way of comunication. finally, computers can be useful for schools and work. You can type a paper or news article on the computer. It's much faster than writing. Also, @CAPS10 you need more info on something, you could look it up online. like @CAPS10 you are writing an article on dolphins, you could learn more about them. In conclusion I think computers are good things. They help with everyday life, They are good for comunication. And last they help at school or work.",6.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,26.0
6415,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist by causing him to be hit with his water bottle regularly, the high deserts of California affected him. Also, “Not the miles into the next section of the ride, he noticed a terrain change.” For example flat roads was replaced by short, rolling hills. Then after over coming that, “A large highway sign jumped out at him saying or reading,” “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not exceed Posted Speed Limit. And that was 55. Last the author says, “Sometimes life can feelso cruel. In conclusion there were many things that affected the cyclist.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
16008,6,"In the excerpt The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted the builders went through many obstacles to get their @CAPS1 done.The builders thought they had every all set and under controll. when they had made their plans they had planed for the mist to be a big pice. when they had made the mist it just wasn't right. ""The mooring mast of the Empire State Building was destined to never fulfill its purpose."" Then they had more problems because a law was p being passed that the ships could not tie them self to the buildings they wouldn't have anyone visit the building. But they solved that problem by haveing the airplanes bring the passengers. Even though the builders went through many obsticle they still managed to get passed them.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
14947,6,"In the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the builders of the Empire State Building faced while trying to dock dirigibles. One obstacle was nature. At the top of the building, the winds constantly changing because violent air currents. This would make a ship swivel around dangerously. Even if it was tied in the back would move. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. Even if the dirigibles were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of ship with swivel."" Another obstacle was safety. Foreign ships use hydrogen, and extremely flammable gas. In fields, they use lead weights to weight down. If an accident happened with either it would be extremely fatal. A flaming dirigible or a falling metal object  at extreme heights would cause serious injuries because the landing is above a highly populated city. ""Dirigibles from outside the @LOCATION1 use hydrogen... is highly flammable."" ""Could be weighted down by lead weights, but using these at the Empire State building, where they would be hanging high above pedestrians on the street."" A law forbids ships to fly in low urban areas so, if the moore worked it couldn't be used. These events led to the quiet dissaperance of the thought in the late 1930's.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
13366,5,The mood would probably be happy and sort of sad at the same time because on one hand he's describing his family's happyness and unity amongst his family and Spanish and Italian family's around the area but also segregation in @LOCATION1.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
10223,4,The author concludes the story with that paragraph because the author is showing how she feels more comfortable with her old home. The winter hibiscus is related to her new home but when winter is gone and new hibiscus came they relate to her new home. The hibiscus from her old home give her a sense of comfort. So when she feels that comfort again she will be brave and go take the test. The author ended the story with that paragraph because it shows that Saeng still doesn’t like the change and would like to go back to her old home,1.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
315,1,"Newspaper and Readers, Computers are a very large part of our lives and society. However, there are still people who think that computers do harm. Actually there are many positive effects that computers have on people. Among those effects are ease of communication, ease of gathering information, and ease of find entertainment. Computers have far more positive than negative effects. Computers have made communication easy for people. There are so many different means of communication using the computer, which are all free. For example, instant messaging, @CAPS1-mail video chat, chat rooms, @CAPS2 (and other social networking sites), are all there and help you communicate with friends and family. The positive effect that this has on people is that it allows them to stay in touch with people whom they might not otherwise due to financial or convienency issues. Being social is heathy for people and therefore communication is a positive effect of computers. Information is far easier to aquire when a computer is used. For example, if a kid needed to know about the climate of the @CAPS3 @CAPS4.S for his social studies project, instead of having to get in his moms, drive all the way to the town library, spent time looking for the book, he could just log on to @ORGANIZATION1 and go from there. This is a positive effect on him because it saves him some time and effort. Furthermore much more useful information can be found on the internet as well, such as: flight times, prices, restaraunts, stocks, weather, news, and basically any fact that you need to know. All at these things make having a computer a very positive thing in somebodys life. Computers are a great source of entertainment. In this economy, I know we all could benefit from not having to pay rental fees for movies and big prices for your exams or playstation games. Internet gaming is very amusing and you can find many good games for free. In addition to that, there are websites who offer free movies and television shows to be streamed right to your computer. These things are a great solution to the rising lost of entertainment. Saving money and enjoying good entertainment are both positive effects on people, and both offered by computers. I hope now that readers of this newspaper will now understand how good computers are next time you are for king for a late fee on a libary book or movie, remember that the internet and your computer have offered an alternative.",5.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
13311,5,The author was gratefull. His parents moved to america for him. so he could have a good education. He can't thank his parents enough for moving. He tells them how much courage they have and thanks so much for leaving their jobs. He also talks about home. How home is a place you learn to love and admire your relatives. It doesn't even matter if your blood related. He will love you either way.,1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
12955,5,"The mood created by the author is fairly formal, with a few informal parts. For example a formal paragraph, like paragraph number one, sets the stage of the whole memoir and uses formal transitions like ""After [living]"". Also, the paragraph is very informative, telling about his parents imigrating to the @ORGANIZATION1 from Cuba and how they were financially poor + could not afford a fancy home like they could in Cuba.An informal paragraph in the memoir is a paragraph like number six where he is describing how thankful he is for his parents being as selfless and giving as they are. He also uses informal transitions such as ""But, [in reality]."" And ""these...,"". It also just has an informal tone to that paragraph.As a conclusion these parts of the memoir have a good balance of formal + informal settings to keep the reader engaged.",1.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
14910,6,"The builders of the empire state building encountered many obstacles. These obstacles were not easily fixed. First, the steel frame of the empire state building had to be modified and strengthened to accommodate the ""new situation."" Another obstacle was safety. Having an accident would be detrimental to many peoples' lives, because it is located in such a densely populated area. Also the winds made the whole thing very dangerous. Lastly there was an existing law saying that airships could not fly too low over urban areas.",2.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
7352,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist in many different ways. To start with, the terrain of the road turned from flat bumpy which caused the cyclist to have an easy trip. In the story it said, ""Rough Road ahead do not exceed posted speed limit."" Since the cyclist had to use a lot more energy on the roads and his water supply was limited, he became very thirsty when he finally say an old town ahead, he stopped and it looked like it was a bandoned he began to pump water out of the water pump and no matter how long it pumped for it looked like battery acid. The quote  from the story said, ""when I tried a drop or two, it hard the flavor of battery acid,” that is some features of the setting that affected the cyclist throughout his journey.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
15173,6,"In The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, it describes the obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. In paragraph @NUM1 they described the greatest reason was one of the safety because most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable.In paragraph @NUM2 they also describe another obstacle was the nature itself because the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast. Even dirigles moored in open landing fields could be weighed down in the back with lead weights, this could be dangerous for pedestrians. In paragraph @NUM3 they describe another reason why dirigles could not moor at the Empire State Building was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. This law made it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area. These are some examples of the obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in allowing dirigibles docking there.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
10197,4,"In “Winter Hibiscus” Saeng took her driver’s test and failed it. She she wants to try and take it again in the spring. I think she ends the story say that because in the spring the hibiscus plant that she got and her and her mom planted, will be growing and blooming and the geese will be back with makes her feel more at home. That way she will feel comfort and be able to take the test and pass, because it will remind her of being home.  ",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
12128,5,"In the memoir Narciso Rodriguez, there is a certain mood created by the other. This mood is a mix of many things. Love, generosity, and greatfulness. The Love feeling comes from the bond between friends and family. To them, family was your community and friends. They would let people stay at their house untill they got back on their feet, and often they would have many people join them for dinner.                                                                  The feeling of generosity comes from the selflessness the parents had for their kids, friends, and family. They would do kind things for them. They even immigrated from Cuba to have a better life for them and their children. The sence of greatfulness is from the friends and family, since the parents were so generous, people were greatful, and so was the author.                                                                                                                                                    The author says ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home.""                                  The mood in this memoir is created by the people and family who live there, and go there.",3.0,,,,,4.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
134,1,"Computers are the way of the future. I believe that computers benefit society. I believe this because computers enable you to talk to family and friends online. It also gives you thousands of websites to learn valuable information from. Lastly it teached hand-eye coordination. First computers alow you to socialize online. I know @CAPS1 I get home from school I can talk to virtually any friends online. People against computers say it takes away time from interacting with family, however, this is not true. I talk to all of my aunts via facebook and other social websites. Also @CAPS1 my parents are at work the are abile to message me over the computer with out having to go get a phone and call my house. My last reason for this is that it helps me and my friends get intouch easier lets say I'm having a friend come over, but he got sick. He woulden't have to go look up a number and call me, he could just send me a message of the internet. My second reason is that computers help with education. I know that @CAPS1 I'm stuck on a problem at home, I'll just go on the computer and look up the answer. Also, @CAPS1 I have to do projects, the computer is very helpful for me and many other kids, @CAPS1 doing a project, I can't getall of my information from one book so I go on the computer and look up information about the subject. This really improves students grades, because they had more resources and more information to choose from, instead of only the information in the book. My last reason is that using a computer can help with hand-eye coordination. On the computer there are many sites that have very interactive sites the you can really benefit from I know of one website that was able to help me with my fielding in baseball because it had interactive games that would actually help with things is real life, like fielding in baseball. I know there are other websites like this for many other sports like basketball and foot ball. So the computer actually helped with real life activities. To sum it all up I think computers can benefit society a lot. Like being able to communicate with your friends. Also being able to look up school work with. Lastly helping with hand-eye coordination.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
1672,1,"Computers, are very popular these days. Many people use computers for research, jobs, shopping, homework, and more. Although, some people think computers take up too much of our time and that it prevents society from interacting with friends and family. What's great about computers is that, you can chat with your friends and family online or even have a video chat with them. So, you're never really avoiding your friends and family. Another thing that is great about computers is, you can research anything you need to, for projects, jobs, homework, and things for school, etc. The top websites people use for resources are, @CAPS1.com @LOCATION1. etc. Computers are also great for typing out reports , making powerpoints for jobs and projects, and so much more! Anything you could think of is most likely found in a computer. As, you can see a computer is so helpful and is a great resource. having a computer at home is much better than taking a trip down to the public library save time and money from taking all those trips and get your own personal library ny getting a computer. you never know what new technology could bring.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
4114,2,"Everyone in the world has different opinions. Some people care about things that other people don't care about at all. One topic that seems to get everyone going is censorship. Everyone has an opinion on it; and not everyone agrees with eachother.     All libraries have different sections based upon age. There are childrens sections, teens sections, and adult sections. I think censorship has a lot to do with maturity levels. Things in books and movies that aren't appropriate for children, shouldn't be put in the children section. I understand parents' don't want their children reading or watching abscene material; but as kids are growing up, they're going to learn about the innapropriate things sooner or later in school.      I don't think anything should be taken off of a shelf just because a handful of parents find the material offensive. I don't take censorship very seriously. Some parents want their children reading books with innapropriate material so they can learn about what goes on in the world and what life is like. Most children and some teens don't know what the world is like because they don't get out much. They don't learn things that they should know already. Reading is a way of learning. When someone wants to know more information about any place or anything, they go to the library and check out a book. For a school project or just for fun.      Most parents agree that nothing innappropriate should be in a childrens' section at a library. Just because they're young and parents don't want their kids going around at the age of @NUM1 cussing like a sailor. But I think that teens are mature enough to read or watch innappropriate material like a book with cussing or a movie with kissing scenes. Parents shouldn't have a say on what goes on or off the shelves in a library. They should just mind their own business. If their kid picks out a book that they think is too offensive for them to read, then they can just simply tell them that they cannot get the book. It's as simple as that. Parents who ask for books to get taken off the shelf are just asking for too much.      Censorship in libraries is not a big deal to me. I think kids should be able to read a book that they want to read. At least they're wanting to read. Let them read for @PERSON1's sake. But like I said, everyone has their own opinions.",3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
51,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, Have you ever wondered how to get somewhere and you didn't have a map or @CAPS1 near you and the only thing that was the near you was a @CAPS3. Well I am saying you should go on it and search were you want to go. Computers are very helpful in every one's daily life they have so many facts and interesting things on them, @CAPS2 about again trying to figure out were someone lives it's very easy, go on google and type in someones's adress and there you go. The @CAPS3 is also very good because have you ever thought about one of your friends or a special someone and you havent seen them in like a really long time and you miss them well no problem mostley all computers have some sort of camera in them were you could video chat or just chat regular on the enternet. That is very helpful because even though you could just go on the phone and call them it's better to do it online because how about if you havent seen them you want to see a picture of them they could just send it to you on some sort of chat page or just your email. It is so much better then mailing one picture in the mail and it takes days for the mail to come if you could do it the faster way on line and on video chat it will be better.. The @CAPS3 is also very helpful because how about one day you want to go some were and you dont know what the weather is going to be well you could go to put on the tv and see but there is so many communications and you cant really see because they move the weather days fast. On the @CAPS3 you could type the weather in for one week and it will tell you and you could look at it for as long as you want and it will stay there so you could see the whole week without the screen having fast as the image is not in the light light or if it's to dark. The @CAPS3 is so helpful. People do say that it is good to get off the @CAPS3 and go for a walk outside in nature I do agree with that but people and children do get their exercising by walking around the house and going outside going shopping. Computers are helpful and nice and another thing is say one day you are online and you are looking at clothes or shoes and you want to buy them but you dont want to go to the mall a half hour away from were you live you could just buy them online and they will be shipped to your house and you dont even have to lift a fingure. They are also good because they have like a dictionary on it were if you dont know how to spell a word you type it in the best way you can and it corrects your spelling and tells you what the word is, also the computers have pictures of everything, if you want to see how something looks like you can type it in and shows you. with all the facts I have given you I hope you agree with me that computers are very helpful nice and safe.",3.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
9815,4,"The author of the story “Winter Hibiscus” concludes her story this way to demonstrate the girls determination and to leave the reader anticipating more. I say this because obviously Saeng is determined to do well, but leaving the story hanging builds excitement for more action.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,1.0
42,1,Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3: Computers have a negitive affect on people and their to connect with others because they always are on the computer and never outside. My first reason is that computers hurt your eyes after a long time sitting at them. People I know have complained of their eyes hurting after using the computer. Studys show taht @PERCENT1 of all people who use the computer after a long time are more likly to loose their eye sight than people who are outside all day. Another one of my reasons is people who are inside on electronics all day are less likly to have good people skills. If you don't have good people skills then you probibly wont have alot of friends and if you need them it would probibly be over the computer. And you never know what they could be like. Also if your inside all day then you will not get the proper excersize could be very bad you and others. My third and final reason is that people will makes fun of you if you sit inside all day don't come out because your on the computer. If you ar on the computer you are more likly to fail in school you don't do your homework or projects but instead your on the computer playing games. And your more likly to get into fights with your parents or guardians because your on the computer and they never see you or hear from you. Also they wont be able to go online and pay their bills witch could be bad for everyone. So these are just some of the reasons I think computers could be bad. Thank you.,3.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
3246,2,"I do in deed believe that certain material should not be in public libraries, or places where young people can see it. Things, such as pornagraphic material should not be out in the open where kids can see it. I think we would all believe the same way when we say that kids do not need to be seeing these things.     I personaly have been in a movie rental shop, and seen some of the movies that my parents would not want me to see. Material such as this should be put away somewhere out of sight, and requested if wanted.     I also have a religious view on all of this. I know that it is a sin to look at the things such as porn and so the people in charge of the shop, or library ought to respect me and my religion. @PERSON1 in the @CAPS1 says that if eating meat causes his brother to stumble than he will not do so. We need to have the same aspect on life. If something causes someone else harm we should not do it.     This is an issue that we face every day, and the reason I am using pornagraphic material is because it is everywhere. If I am standing in the @ORGANIZATION1 check out line I see the people magazines and I find it verry offensive!     I will say though, if you are old enough to live by yourself than you can look at whatever you want. I just find it untollerable to post these materials were viewers who do not want to see them have to see them.",2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
13625,5,"The mood in the author's story is happy and gratefull. Happy because even though it was a new country the came with a purpose and are living it with their culture which is past down family to family. ""My mother and father came to this country with such couage, without any knowledge of the language or the culture. They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their family, friends and careers in the country they loved."" Also greatfull because he sees what his parents did and does for him so he could be happy. ""I will always be gratefull to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" ""I was in the warmth of the kitchen in this humble house where a cuban feast always filled the air with not just scent and music but life and love!""",2.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
6235,3,"In the story ""Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit"" the mans ride gets pretty rough. Because he took the old mens advice on a shortcut, the once enjoyable ride became a  ",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
7000,3,"To a cyclist, the surrounding setting can either cause triumph or despair. The cyclist was given very old directions. He was given back roads that are abandoned now. These towns had no people in them normally that would not matter, but he “was traveling through the high deserts of California in June.” (@NUM1). If there was shade, a breeze, and @NUM2 weather, he would be fine, but he is pedaling a bike in a desert during the summer. A “ghost town” with no good water could have killed him. A cyclist needs to know their surroundings and be prepared for what nature throws at them.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
10186,4,"What the author is talking about is that the snow was melting and the spring is coming. I guess what they mean is that flowers, trees and grass are going back beautiful. Also he was letting us know that spring is here and that is not winter nomore. Thats why she start to plant plants in the winter. So in the spring that can grow out to be nice and beautiful for the spring. Thats what i think the author meant. Also thats the reason why he put that in the paragraph. He should of add more to the paragraph like how the plants and stuff was growing so beautiful. He shouldn't add more details to let us know, what was talking about in this paragraph.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
10243,4,"At the end of the short story, “winter Hibiscus”, the writer Minfong Ho includes somewhat inspirational concluding sentence “when they come back  in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding then I will take that test again.” I think this sentence was added in order to create a sense of hope for the future, which contrasts so greatly with the depressing nature of the story, creating a happy ending. Throughout the essay, Saeng is depressed she had to leave her homeland so hurriedly losing her childhood and beloved grandmother, “A blink, a channed switch, a boat ride into the night, and it was all gone.” as Saeng narrates in deeper detail. Also contributing to the feelings of sorrow in the story is how much saeng cries remembering her tragic past. Im both the greenhouse, recalling the events of her grandmother such as when she says, “Saeng could almost feel the light strands of her grandmother’s grey hair Saeng would help knot the hair the hair into a bun, then slip a dok Malik bud into it."" and in the garden, when she talks to her mother and plants the flower. After all this sorrow, by putting in a hopeful ending, the writer has successfully allowed a sense of hope for the future.    ",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
4416,2,"Is @CAPS1 Right?     Is @CAPS1 right to have censorship in libraries? This question could be answered in two very different opinions. Some people @MONTH1 want all censorship items out of public areas. On the other hand, there are people that @MONTH1 like to read this type of material. This is a very opinionated topic.     In my opinion, libraries are places I go to find a book to read, research, listen to music, rent movies, or relax while looking at a magazine. Libraries are puble areas and not everyone is going to agree. Everyone has their own favorite book or genre. I believe @CAPS1 is unjustiful to take away censorship in libraries because this @MONTH1 be ones favorite genre. Why do libraries need to limit their choice while noone else does? For example, many parents would love if all clothes stores would ban holes in jeans because they are to revealing. The stores don't. They do not ban holes in jeans because many teenage girls like holes in their jeans. American @CAPS2 is not going to band capris just because I do not like them. There are different favorites, likes, dislikes, and opinions.     A great resolution for this dissagreement is catorigizing. By putting all of the censorshiped books, movies, magazines, and music in one area, @CAPS1 will decrease arguments on this topic because all of the people that like censorship in libraries will be together in their area. Where as the people that do not want the censorship in libraries do not have to be around @CAPS1. This is a quick and easy fix.      There is no reason to take away ones favorite genre because someone doesn't like @CAPS1. If this is true then our world will have nothing because not everyone likes one certain thing. For instance, I do not like blue aeropostale shirts. Pink are my favorite. My friend @CAPS3 likes the blue shirts and hates the pink shirts. We both write to the manager to get rid of the shirt color we do not like. This is nonbenifical for either of us because now the one we do not like is got but so is the one we do like. This is nonsense. There will be nothing left in the store. Pople in charge can easily sort material at a store or a library to make @CAPS1 fit the communities likings. Getting rid of material is not the answer. Catorigizing is the fix that needs to be put into action immediatly",4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
6146,3,"With little water the setting was not helpful to the cyclist. Joe @PERSON1 said, “There was no one in sight, not a building, car, or structure of any kind” (@PERSON1). After receiving bad directions from a few old men having people passing by in cars or near by stores would probably help the cyclist for asking directions. @PERSON1 said, ""working the handle of the rusted water pump with all my strength"" (@PERSON1). Having no water to replenish your body will make you weak and unstable. In the middle of no  where that is a problem. @PERSON1 also said, ""Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills” (@PERSON1). With little water left and a weak body it must have been hard going up and down those @NUM1 also said, “I was traveling through the high deserts of California in June” (@PERSON1). I dust in your lungs and heat from the sun as it becomes harder for your body to work.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
9118,4,"The story elds with ""when they come back, Saeng vowed sileltly to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take the test again. ""The author concludes with this to show determination to try again and to pass her driving test next year. Also the flowers reminded her of home in Vietnam. (for example, ""Plants that she had not even realized she had known but had forgotten drew her back into childhood world."") and by next year when the flowers bloomed she would more determined and ready for the test again. Also, the flowers blooming resembels starting a new life and maybe it could be the same way for Saeng by passing her drivers test. That's why the auther ends with that statement.",2.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
4478,2,"Books should be removed only if they are found a certain degree of offensive. Some other books, though, are meant for educational use and not meant to offend anyone. People sometimes take it too seriously. Many books have posed a great educational source for many years.     Books have been around for a very long time. People many years ago used to read books on scrolls, or even in pictures to tell stories. Stories have been around for a very long time and are meant to be stories, not criticised pieces of work to put down other people. There are a lot of books, however, that have been meant to put other people down. These books I agree should be taken off the shelves since they might promote people to turn on certain races.     A good book that demonstrates it is not putting others down but sounds like it might is 'To @CAPS1 a @CAPS2'. This book has been intended for people to read it and learn of the life back when there was slavery or, a time just after slavery but where people did not respect the newly freed men. Another book that tells of times during slavery is 'The @CAPS3 of @ORGANIZATION1'. This book tells of a young boy that runs away to live his old life and meets up with a runaway slave named @PERSON1.This book has been meant to tell of what slaves would be punished by if they were caught.     Many other books exist as these. But I guarentee that over ninety percentile of books are meant to be used for educational purposes due to the context they have been used in. Most people will take books the wrong way, but that is only because they are afraid that they will be judged, just as the book was judged by its cover. I have read many books over the past couple years, and I find that many of the books that I read have proved to be educational to me.     There are some books though, that I agree should be taken off the shelves due to them being over the top on offensive. Censorship has a job to protect us from many unnerving topics and I agree that certain books should be taken off the shelves. But, I think that sometimes, places go over the top with censorship and should let certain people decide which books are right for a place, as well as movies. The world is maturing, even as everyone speaks, and people are learning all the time. There should be some censorship in public places, but only on over-the-top topics where authors have written about an issue that will offend many people",3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
10524,4,"In the story, “winter Hibiscus saeng made a promise to herself that she would never fail the test again Saeng wanted to remember her past and homeland. That is why she bought the flowers. At the end of the story she vows,” In the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and the hibiscus is budding, then I will take the test again. She says this because she wants to move on now and try to get used to her new home.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
1636,1,"It has come to my attention that there is an argument about whetehe or not computers have a positive effect on people. I think that computers do have a positive effect on people because with computers people can get needed information that could be used to help them, it lets poeple talk to friends and family around the world and also computers tecah people new things. Therefore, computers have a positive efefct on people. students whether it be at college oer elementary schoools almost always go to a computer when they have to fo projects for thier classe without computers students wouldn't be able to get the information that they need and could cayse them to get a bad grade on the project which could result in grades geting worse and worse. Adults use computers often for work and planning, so if there weren't any computers then it would mean thousands of people would lose their jobs and could forget sceduled plans that could be important and could result in causing families to lose money, not enough money to pay bills and could result in losing their homes causing them to live on the streets. Evry person has at least two or more friends or relatives that live in a different place in the wrold that is not easy to stay in contact with so it could result in having to use long distance calling which could waste alot of money. However, with computers people can talk to freinds and realtives from around the world without having to psend any extra money on phone calls to their friends and fmaily members from around the world. Also if something happens to a family member of somewhere around where a realtive lives we could use the internet to check in with them to see if everything is ok. Many parents are using computers to help teach their kids at a nearly age so they are ready for when they go to school for the first time. Also computers are used at schools mainly to teach the students about things that they need to know for the future, as a result computers become very usefull to people when they are trying to learn how to do something wheather its for school. college or a job computers are of tun used daily for important things that we need to learn for our lives in the future sow e won't need any extra help tyring to learn how to do something. Also we would be bale to help people when they neede help if we already knew what to do. As you cna see computers do have a positive effecton peopel because people can use computers to help them gain the information they need for school or work, it lets you check in with friends and family from aorund the world and finally computers help teach us very important life lessons. In conclusion, computers have a positive effect on people and it could save a person from losing things that are.important to themselves or others. ",4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
15291,6,"In the excerpt of ""The Mooring Mast"" the people attempting to make dirigible docks had ended up with big obstacles in reaching that goal. Before even adding the mooring mast on top of the Empire State building, the workers had to modify the frame or otherwise ""A thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame."" The mooring mast goal was really starting to be dowstable when one problem wasn't realized. Safty, as most of the dirigibles from outside of the United States use hydrogen instead of oxygen, for example ""a German dirigible named Hindenburg was destroyed by fire in lakehurst, New Jersey, since hydrogen is very flamable. Because of realizing this, the situation could've been ""how much worse that accident could have been if it had taken place about a densely populated area such as downtown New York."" Also ""nature itself"", was the greatest obstacle, as Shifting winds would cause the dirigible to swivel around, even if it makes it to the mooring mast. The dirigibles could use weights, but using them at the Empire State building, ""while they would be dangling high above pedestrians on the Street, was neither practical nor Safe"".",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
7574,3,"The features of the setting in “Rough Road Ahead: Do not exceed posted speed limit” greatly affect the cyclist. I’m sure that the heat makes the cyclist more thirsty, and heat can also drain energy extremely fast. Being in “the california desert in the middle of June” does not sound like an enjoyable time to be riding a bike. When the cyclist got tired and exhausted from not having any water, I’m sure that riding past all of the empty land had an effect on his attitude. I think that seeing a building made him get excited, and then when he found out that it was nothing more than an abandoned building, his spirits greatly dropped. He probably felt that he couldn’t continue for very much longer simply because all of the buildings he came across were empty, or abandoned. When the cyclist reached the bait store, he probably felt much better, and very relieved to have gotten there before he had a heat stroke.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
565,1,"Dear Newspaper, The world that we live in today is full of technology. Everything from check out isles at the grocery store to coffee makers at home are being upgraded all the time. The technology has many great things about it, but theres also a huge down fall. The most common technolgy device is the computer, its a great thing to have but its also very bad. The computer can be used to bully, it can take time from exercising and it even takes from your social and grammer skills. We all know the websites such as facebook, myspace and @CAPS1. They sseem harmless but its really just a place for harassment. Their said to keep friends in touch, butkids use them to say hurtful things about each other. Half the kids in my eighth grede class have admitted to either getting bullied or bulling over the computer. If so many kids are getting hurt by the then why do we all keep using computers? Many kids @MONTH1 say they don't spend to much time on their computers but @NUM1 out of @NUM2 kids in my school admit that they do. Checking the computer is the first thing they do when they get home from school and the last thing hey do before going to sleep at night. All the time these kids spend on the computer is taking away from exercising and enjoying life as a child. I've seen many kids gain exessive amount of weight because they don't eat proper food they don't exercise and they shut down from reality all because they are obsessed with their computers. kids are even getting portable computers, thats how addicted they are. Do you want your kids like that? However, all these programs and websites that are on computers have a way to inneract with friends, and socialize. But all of this is taking away from your social skills, even grammer. Most kids and teenagers would rather talk over the internet thant face to face, and half the time they don't even spell word correct or use proper grammer. In the long run all this talking over computers is going to hurt them when it comes to school and getting a job. I know that computers are good for school because you can research stuff for projects and e-mail your job. But the time spent, kids getting bullied, and the now lack of social skills is not worth it. We need to cutback on our societys use of computers because it will help us all when it really counts. Just ask yourself do you want your kids getting bullied? Do you want to gain weight? Do you want to loose your social and grammer skill? Just ask yourself these questions and you just might change your mind.",4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
9340,4,"The author concludes the story with When they come back, saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the shows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again” because the hibiscus budding would symbolize starting over and Saeng taking the test again is giving her a chance to start over fresh and try again. The hibiscus doesn’t stop budding so Saeng shouldn’t stop trying!",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
3492,2,"In this life time we will all have our own oppinions about topics and problems in the world. There is a question that ponders in my mind. Is censorship in libraries a problem or a right? If i was a parent, I think I would be able to understand why I mite want to have a book removed from a shelf, but the thing is though, it is unconstitutional to do that. That is why in my oppinion censorship in libraries should not be aloud.      When I was twelve, one time at the library I was reading the back of a book, and my mom approached me and told me that book was a little too graphic for me to be reading. It was about the @CAPS1. Now that I am older, I realize why my mom wouldn't want me to be reading a book like that at that age. That is one reason I can understand why some one would want to have a book removed from a shelf, but they can not do that because, that book is there to remind us why we should never have another world war again. I also think that everyone has there right of an oppinion on why somthing should be, or not should be done.     One thing that I have obserbed, is that when kids read bad things, and look at bad things, it can really have a big impact on there life as what they do in the future, and there present. That reason it's self is a very good explanation on why I think that instead of censoring books, there should be some type of boundaries posted on what types of books should be read beyond a certain age, or if the child wants to read a certain type of book, the child must have a legal gurdian with them at that time.     With that being said, I have come up with, what I believe to be a very good idea on what should be done in libraries. I think that any book that mite have somthing that is a little bit appropriate should be put into a section that is rated just like movies. If somthing has a little bit of inappropriate language such as cursing, these books should be put in a section for people over the age of thirteen just like a movie. Basically, the books will be put into sections depending on what they are rated just like a movie. If the book is rated @CAPS2, you must be over the age of seventeen to read it.     This idea could be a really good solution, that way no books would be removed, but also these books will be kept out of harms way of children. Honestly, if I was a parent I would not want my children to indulge in reading of books that talk about sex, violence, and vulger, but also it is my belief that we all have our own oppinion, and have the right to be able to read and see what we want.      On thing I think we all need to think about is things that have been done in the past that have had huge benifits on our country. Our four fathers, more than one hundred years ago wrote a document called the @CAPS3 of the @ORGANIZATION1. This document has amendments. These amendments state that we have the right to speak, have oppinions, and read what we want because, we should have the right to live a free life.               To remove books from the shelves is unconstitutional, and I don't know about you,  but I know that all the people that have gone against the constituotion have not found a great place in this world. My basic belief is that, why remove a book from a shelf, when we can impervise so everyone is happy? If the world would just get over the harsh things of the books we can all come up with a solution. There is an answer for this, books should not be burned they are master pieces. Cencorship can not continue in libraries or there won't be any books left.",4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
13162,5,the mood is that the author is very good.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
7552,3,"In the setting the conditions were brutal. The author experienced sedring heat, dyhdration and getting wrong directions. He experienced depression and mear death. He had an encounter with a big old snake and last he reached his distination. This affected him and he learned to bring a map and not to take direction from old people.",1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
7581,3,"In the story, do not exceed posted speed limit by Joe Kurmaskie the cyclist was affected about the road ahead. He took advice that he thought was right but it was wrong. So it took him off track of his good he was trying to reach",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
9115,4,"The author shows a willingness to try harder in this story. She states that, “In the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” I think the author realizes that she is going to have to adapt. Also, saying that she will wait till the spring, means she is going to try again, and not give up. The author has a sentimental value to. Insince she is waiting for the hibiscus to bud, I believe she is referring that hibiscus to her country. Insince she has left her country, the hibiscus is the closet thing she has to it, and therefore, she will wait with the flower",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
13542,5,"In the excerpt, the author created a relaxed tone in the memoir. ""Passionate Cuban music (which I adore to this day) filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen"". This shows how equipped his parents were with Cuban culture. Culture was a big piece of Narciso Rodriguez child hood and life. ""Here the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the backdrop to life in our warm home"". This shows that the author is trying to focus your attention on the culture of the @CAPS1 and that the house was relaxed and calm which is the tone of the author.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
15842,6,"Some obstacles the builders faced during the construction of the Empire State Building's mooring mast was that the building was not stable enough to be able to moor an airship. They solved this easily by creating a stronger exoskeleton. Another obstacle that they faced was the high speed winds and being able to get passengers off and on. They never did solve this problem, and so the mooring project was shut down. The obstacles the builders faced were too many and this project soon became impossible to finish and it never was.",1.0,,,,,1.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9515,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph to show Saeng’s outlook on the future. It is a fitting conclusion, drawing from numerous elements in the story, and it shows how Saeng has grown. Saeng refers to “When the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding.” In this phrase she shows a growing acceptance and even an affection for her new homeland. The geese are “familiar to Saeng now “ despite her thinking of them as “strange before.” The hibiscus is a piece of her past, adapted to fit her current situation. Saeng’s vow that she will “take that test again” in the spring, “When the snows melt…”etc. This shows that despite losing so much - her home, her grandmother, her way of life - Saeng is still determined to make the best of her situation. She plans on passing her driving test come spring, no matter what. The concluding paragraph is a fitting way to wrap up the story. It was how the thrends of Saeng’s past and her present are entwined , and displays her attitude towards the future. With its optimistic words the final paragraph nearly ties up the mood of optimism amidst regret. The author’s wording was very well done.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
1025,1,"Dear local newspaper, I believe that computers have a positive effect on people. It teaches hand-eye coordination, give people the ability to learn about faraway places and people, and even allow people to talk online with other people. Computers are one of the best technology invention yet to come that benefits society. First off, computers teach hand-eye coordination. For instance if you're in a rush to type an amazing long essay you won't have the time to keep looking back at your paper, the keyboard and the screen. So you would need to know where these handy-dandy keys are. However, if would be a lot more trouble if you didn't have any knowledge about computers are where the helpful keys are. Secondly, people would be able to learn about faraway places. If somebody wanted to take a nice, relaxing vacation/honeymoon with their beautiful wife they would need to know the weather forecast so they would know what clothes to bring, and how much money they need to bring to visit all the luscious, freshest restaurants, hottest stores in this enormous populated city. Without a doubt, I would love to take a vacation, but if it's going to cost a fortune I might have to re-consider this amazing trip. Lastly, you can talk online with other people. On blistering cold days and you can't go outside, or call them because you don't have phone you can myspace or facebook them as long as you want as long as you have a @NUM1 and only email address that nobody else has. Now it's time to decide! Do computers have a positive or negative effect on people. In my opinion computers are great for society and we should keep having them around because they teach hand-eye coordination, and give people the ability to learn about faraway places and people. Best of all, you will be able to talk to your friend and family online. This is certainly a great form of technology people should have.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
1239,1,"Dear editor of @LOCATION2 @CAPS1, @LOCATION3's society is being ruined, ruined by computers of course. They are so time consuming that I am afraid they are causing more people to be obease in @LOCATION3. People are afraid that they are limiting themselves from interacting @CAPS2 to @CAPS2, and spending time enjoying nature. I feel the exact same way and someone should put a stop to this! An average american goes on a computer for about @NUM1 hours a day. With going to work or school, and sleeping, that way leaves a litle @NUM2 to go out and explore nature. Our national parks @NUM3's have been decreasing in their numbers of customers at a fast rate. I visited yellow stone last week to find out if as many people have been goind. The man who works at the entrance was saying that ""since the start of @DATE1 alone about @PERCENT1 less people have been to @LOCATION1,"" I believe that the reason for that is because of computers. They limit people from goind to parks or to zoo's, by consuming the public time with all of the ""new fashion"" or the newest game on miniclip.com. Also, I believe that the public is spending so much time on computers that they are not able to go out and exersize. With the newest ""sims game,"" how are kick supposed to stay fit and healthy? I did a study on how many hour kids spend on thier computer and out of the people who said more than @NUM4 minutes. @PERCENT2 of them could legally considered obease. Is that now we want our next gerneration to be out next president and lawyers, and doctors? @CAPS8, we want them to live life to the @CAPS4 by taking care of themselves by exersizing. Computers are getting kids so consumed that is not ok. Lastly, with computers, families and friends don't really talk to each another @CAPS2 to @CAPS2, or interact with each other at all i mean sure, parents come home to thier child on the computer and give them a kiss on the head. But is that enough? I do not believe it is. I asked a friend of mine's child about how much he interacts with his family and friends? @CAPS2 to @CAPS2 he said that well since he got his new ""@CAPS5 @CAPS6 with a @NUM5 gig hardrive"", he hadn't been talking to them a whole @CAPS2 to @CAPS2. However, everyday we went on ""chat"" ""for a good @NUM6 hours"", to talk to his friends. And only occasionally would he get an @CAPS7-mail or two from his asking how his days was. I do not believe that that is good in order to have good friends and a strong family life. That is what @LOCATION3 has come down to computers. They limit you from interacting to friends and family, give you less time to exersize and limit you from going out and exploring nature. Who knows, maybe at this time in @NUM7 years, @LOCATION3 will be run by computer. Do we want that, @CAPS8! so lets put a stop to it now. Thank you very much!",4.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
9588,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because of some causes. Saeng vowed silently to herself. That shows she calm down already, she feels better with her new country. She feels the snows meet, the geese return, she says that she will take that test again. It shows one that she doesn’t feel bad with the test more. She knows that she has opportunity to take it again and does it better. She has a different feeling with her problem. She looks her new country with a different eyes. All things with her become better. These are some reasons explain why the author concludes this story with this paragraph.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
351,1,"Dear newspaper, Some people say that computers don't benefit society. But I think diferent. Computers benefit society more than you would think. They help people learn and makes work much easier. They help prevent acidents, and the save lives. Computers help people learn and make work easier its a fact. You can type you can plan your sedual. You can make a presantation or check your email. All of those things make work easier. And there are tons of more things you can do. As I said before they can help people learn. You can learn trillions of things on the internet. You can learn about everything on the internet and it is quite amazing. You could get a medical degree on the internet. Makeing work easyer or helping people learn aren't the extent of the computers abilitys. Computers can prevent acidents in anything that moves. For example cars millions on the road today and some can practily drive them selves. And that is all done with computers. Also planes, the only reason the piolot is there is in case something gose wrong. Same thing with trains. Furthermore @CAPS1 are completly computerized all the humans do is tell the computer what they want it to do. Almost everything that moves within its own power has been computerized at some point in time. And that makes the world safer for every one. Finaly computers save lives, its completly true. In hospitals without computers people would be dieing every day. They use them to keep records, record vital signs and asist with surgery. In surgery computers help by only haveing to make a tiny insision and can be much more acurate than human sergons which save lives. Also computers can mak sure that a operating room is completly sterial which reduces risks of infection. As you can see computers benifit society a lot more than you might think. They help people learn and make work easyer. They prevent acidents with which reduces people going to the hospital. And if they do go they are almost garenteed a survival. So what do you think about them now.",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
7092,3,The setting effects the cyclist in away that most people can’t tell cycling forty miles on maybe a gallon of water is hard expecialy in California “I had been hitting my water bottles pretty regularly and I was traveling through the high desserts of California in June” The effect on his body would be rather devastating.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
1405,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, I have herd that some people do not agree that computer benefit our society. Well in this letter I am going to give you three reasons how computers do benefit our society. Those reasons are @NUM1) People have friends and family in other states @NUM2) some people use them to stay organized And @NUM3) Computers help you learn more. I hope that by the end of this letter you will see that computers do benefit our society. First of all, I think that computers benefit our society because @CAPS7 lets people @CAPS3 in contract with family and friends in other states. This is true that you could use the phone and call them out you have to pay for long distance. You don't have to pay anything to email somebody. I know from experience because, I have friends and family in a lot of states in the @LOCATION1 ""@CAPS1 computers help me stay in contact with my family all over"" @PERSON3 ( @ORGANIZATION1 ) @CAPS2 many people use the computer the contact with loved ones everyday. Some people even on them to stay in touch with family or at war. Next I believe that computers benefit society because @CAPS7 keeps people organized. I know this many not seem like a big deal but a lot of people or computers to @CAPS3 things organized @CAPS2 they know how everything is would happen if didn't have computers to @CAPS3 all of the appointment in? Well I will tell you what would happen to @CAPS3 all would end appointment would @CAPS3 giving you things you already got. ""I @CAPS3 @CAPS4 on my computers - @PERSON1 And @CAPS5, I strongly belive that computers benefit our society because they help people learn more. Yes @CAPS7 is right that not everybody goes on the computers to learn but that doesn't mean they don't learn. Here's a cuple examples is @NUM1) @CAPS6 - @CAPS7 lets you learn song lyrics, dance moves and more (@NUM2) @CAPS8 - @CAPS7 lets you learn what other people like, don't like and @CAPS2 on. Then there is face book, @CAPS7 lets you see what people are doing that day. ""People learn everything to the computer"" @CAPS9 @PERSON2. Now I hope you see that computers don't benefit our society than that is your opinion. I hope you see what I see now.",4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
4702,2,"I do not think that a random stranger should have the right to decide what books to allow in a public library. If they have a problem with certain material in certiain books they should bring it to the attention of the library. The auther who wrote that book has the freedom of speech, and they are allowed to write anything that they would like to write. If somebody did not want their children looking at a book, or reading that book, then they should just tell their child to stay away from it, and if they raised their child properly, he or she should respect those boundries that the parents have set.     However, I think there should be a line drawn about what is too graphic to be displayed at a public library. Some magazines that contain graphic material are very educational, such as @ORGANIZATION1. On the other hand, I am not saying that we should be lining shelves with @CAPS1 magazines either. There is a difference between having books that educate children about other cultures, and those that educate them about sex and explicit material. It is the adults job to protect their children from material such as that. But they can do it in another way, other than taking the book off the shelf.     Even if the book is filled with drugs or nudity, the concerned parent cannot just take actions into their own hands. The owner of the library is the adult that gets to decide what types of books or magazines he or she allows in the library, not the customers. I think that if you are offended by a certain book at a library, you should bring it to the attention of the owner, or simply go to a different library. If the owner refuses to remove the item from the shelf and the material offends you that much, you could go to court and plead your case to the judge. But you have no right to remove a book from a shelf that does not belong to you.",3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
782,1,"Dear I think computers greatly benefit society, and advance technology. They provide knowledge in a click, and entertainment after a long day out work or school. Not only that, but people have found long-lasting careers because of the invention of the computer. So obviously, computers are a great influence on society. Do you want to find out when major legue baseball first came to be? Or maybe you have a history report due the next day, and your parents can'@CAPS3 drive you to the library? This isn'@CAPS3 a problem anymore. Computers have evolved a long way since they were invented in the @NUM1's. You can check up on your local news, by having @NUM2's of electronic newspapers right at your fingertips. Or maybe you want to venture outside your neighborhood, and check out what's happening in @LOCATION2 or @LOCATION1. News isn'@CAPS3 the only thing the internet is useful for though. You can also go onto one of the @DATE1's of websites for school help, or check how the stock market is doing. Or, you can just use the handy calculator found right on your desktop. What could be better? Of course not all users have a computer for information. Many have it for entertainment purposes. In fact @PERCENT1 of people use the computer for entertainment everyday. What, with all the fun stuff you can do, who can blame them? Social networking is placed at the top of the list. A whopping @PERCENT2 of internet users use sites like @CAPS1 or @CAPS2. These sites are useful for catching up with friends you might not have seen in years or continue a conversation from @NUM3 minutes ago. You can also use computers to watch live-streaming @CAPS3.V, or that new @CAPS4 you got yesterday. That's right, @CAPS3.V's might not be needed soon! And what would a compter be without games? There are @NUM2's of @DATE1's of them scattered all across the web. How great is that? And finally, many people have found their careers through the internet. Did you know that @PERSON1, @NUM5, was found through you tube when his mom posted videos for the family to see when they couldn'@CAPS3 attend proformances? Of couse, you tube isn'@CAPS3 the only way to make money. Tons of jobs are listed by employers only for the curious person to find. No more wondering city streets, now you can just submit on aplication or have an interview without ever leaving your. Artists have also discovered talents, by playing around with @CAPS6 or @CAPS7. Not to mention the career paths involving computers directly, such as repairing or movie special effects. So no matter what you use a computer for have it be job hunting, entertainment, or information, they are a good idea to have them in your home. There's a erason that @PERCENT3 of @CAPS8 use them, and it's not just an excuse to sit around all stay.",5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,22.0
12859,5,"In the story Narciso Rodriguez the person telling the story is @CAPS1 grateful to to parents for moving so thay could have a better life. The people that were around them were like their Family evan though thay went blood @CAPS2. The Parents wernt selfish, and thay helped if people need help and let people stay if thay needed a place to stay. The parents moved to make a better life for their Family evan iF it ment Leaving every thing behind.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
15124,6,"In paragraph @NUM1 it states, ""The mooring mast of the Empire State Building was destined to never fulfill it's purpose, for reasons that should have been apparent before it was ever constructed."" These reasons are one that is due to flamable gases, a second is due to nature itself, and the last is an already existing law.     As said in paragraph @NUM1, ""Most dirigibles from outside of the united States used hydrogen rather than helium."" @CAPS1 how Flammable hydrogen is they didn't want that above a highly populated area.     Paragraph @NUM3 now states, ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting."" @CAPS2 the dirigible would not be stable enough.     Finally I said in paragraph @NUM4. ""There was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. This law would make it illegal to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area.""     @CAPS3 there was never a chance of a dirigible being able to dock there, as stated above.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
809,1,"Dear The @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3, Computers do not benefit society. They make people antisocial, unhealthy, and do bad things. The internet is very addictive. I use to spend three hours online everyday. I did not get any exersice at all. Also, I was incouraged to eat unhealthy snacks while online. This made me very unhealthy I gained nine pounds in one week. Now, I have dietbeaties. I can't enjoy things like sweets or running. I will probably have arthritus in my hands when I'm older because I spent hours typing away. I used the computer in the dark so now I need contacts. Using the computer is one of the most unhealthy choices ever. II spent so much time on the computer i wasn't able to socialized. I missed out on alot of activities with my friends and family because I was so busy online. I barely talked to anyone unless it was through email. I lost alot of friends and close family members. My pets died because I didn't take care of them. I didn't really want to do anything but go on the net. I messed up on colledge and job interviews. To this day I have no social life and no job because I spent more time socializing with the computer than people. Computers ruined my life. Computers incourage very bad things. Not just unhealthy choices and antisocial behavior they uncourage things against the law. Alot of drugs and weapons are bought online. People kill others or themselves because people gossiped about them online. People don't care for nature and destroy it. People steal so they can buy extra technology. Alot of car robbers happen because someone left technology in there. People gamble through online poker. People hack bank acounts through the computer. Prostitution happens because of online chats. Thier are sex affenders that go online posing as people that want a date when they are rapists. Terrorists can communicate by the internet. Computers are a menace to society. They turn people into low life scums and criminals. Computers should disposed of before they cause the end of the world.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
15069,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building were faced with multiple obstacles while attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. Although some of these obstacles were fixed early on, others were not brought to the builders' attentions until later on. The first obstacle that the builders encountered were the modifications that were needed to be done to the building's framework. ""The steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate this new situation."" (@CAPS1 nine). The Empire State Building would not have been able to support the mooring mast without having the essential modifications done. This process costed an extra sixty thousand dollars. The second obstacle that the builders faced had not even been brought up until after the building had been completed. The wind factor had made it nearly impossible to be able to dock any dirigibles. ""Even if the dirigibles were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast."" (@CAPS1 @NUM1). With all the pedestrians located on the ground, this factor made it extremely unsafe. The final obstacle that was faced was with the law. Under already existing law, airships were prohibited from flying too low over urban areas. Blimps docking at the mooring mast would be violating this law. The architectures and engineers of the Empire State Building clearly did not look into what was necessary to building the mooring mast.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
9483,4,"The author concludes the story with the afore mentioned paragraph to represent the connection between the return of the hibiscus’s bids, and the return of Saeng’s resolve. In the photograph for question #@NUM1, the hibiscus flower is out of place, as if it doesn’t belong similar to Saeng. The hibiscus represented the link to Saeng’s past, as portrayed when the author writes: “Plants that she had not even realized she had known but had forgotten drew her back into her childhood world.” The hibiscus was native to her homeland, and by helping Saeng to remember her past, she began to cope with the present, and later the future, “when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding then I will take that test again.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
3531,2,"One @MONTH1 walk into a library, look over at a magzine rack and think, '@CAPS1 is that in the young adult section, the content of that book is not age appropriate?' In many libraries, some books are not censored and catagorized the way they should. In some of the reading material, one might not even realize that some inappropriate things are in it. Supervision of children and young adults are not always looked upon, and some of these people might not even know what they are checking out. Censorship needs to be pushed more in libraries.      In most libraries, the catagories for books are children, young adult, adult books by genere, magazines, and music, but what needs looked upon is what is on the inside covers of those books. Some magazine articles are not appropriate for some teens, even if it does claim to be age appropriate. I remember when I was fourteen, I read a series that was related to colors off the color weel. Each one covered a different topic such as suicide, alcholism, drugs, sex, same sex dating, and jealousy. Looking back on it, I am surprised I was allowed to check them out at the library. A fourteen year old didn't need to read books on such heavy topics.Also, language in books and music maybe unappropriate for children, and @MONTH1 be distasteful and disrespectful for some adults. The catagories need to be catogorized even more, so people further know what they are getting into when checking out a book or magazine.      When a child goes up to check out a book they found, a librarian sometimes doesn't even pay attention to the book they are getting, they simply check it out. Libraries should have a rating system like movies do. Generally people would not let their ten-year-old go to a movie rated @NUM1, @CAPS2 or that is unrated, so @CAPS1 would they let their child get a book holding the same content? If books had a rating system, that ten-year- old would not get their hands on a book rated '@CAPS2' or '@CAPS4' for mature.     In libraries there is not as much supervision as their needs to be. I am aware that libraries are not day-care center and the librarians are not babysitters, but there also needs to be stricter guidelines, because some people are not fully aware of what their children or what they, themselves, are reading. For example, a thirteen-year-old girl wants to check out @CAPS5 magazine, because her best friend's older sister gets it. The girl's mother allows it because it probably won't be too bad and she assumes her daughter wants to look at the pictures of new clothes and trends. What the mother @MONTH1 not realize is in the middle of the magazine contains an article about sex and protection, and that @MONTH1 open a whole new world for the little girl. Even though the mother shouldn't have had let her daughter check out the magazine, if the guidelines were stricter at the library the girl might have never have read that article. Even if librarians had to check or scan a person's library card to make sure they can be in the section or be reading a certain book, it would be protecting many more people then it would be hurting.     If libraries censored books better, then children and teens @MONTH1 not be reading things not age appropriate to them. I'@CAPS4 not saying that books should be removed off the shelf, just maybe put up higher, and be watched over more carefully",5.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
12916,5,"The mood created by the author is happy and grateful towards his parents. He is happy and grateful towards them because they gave up their old lives in cuba where they had good jobs, friends, and family so that Narciso @MONTH1 have a good life. The mood kind  of shows his attitude of hope and that his parent hardships created a good life for him. The mood also shows that he is proud of his heritage because he adores Cuban music and is grateful for learning culinary arts from his parents. His parents were not the only people to make him feel happy but it  was also his neighbors who were also immagrants were kind and he felt united with them. This mood is great and shows anyone can be happy.",3.0,,,,,4.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
12417,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez from Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives"", the mood created by the author is gratefull and family. Throughout the memoir, Narciso Rodriguez talks about his life growing up. Readers read things like: ""My mother and father had come to this country with such courage,"" and ""Growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relative."" @CAPS1, towards the end, the author explains that he is very grateful to have his parents: ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."", and ""in reality, there is no way to express my gratitude for the spirit of generousity impressed upon me at such an early age and the demonstration of how important family and friends are."" @CAPS2, Narciso Rodriguez was greatly influenced by his family during his childhood, and his memoir shows that along with how grateful he will always be.",2.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
825,1,"Dear local @CAPS1, I think that computers are good for people to have. My first reason is kids might have to write an eassy for school. My second reason is kid might have to look important things up. My third reason is kids might have e-mails. My first reason is kids might have to write an eassy for school. Teachers mostly perfor to have the kids typ their eassys. When kids write eassy's they have to get information on what they are looking. My seocnd reason is kids might have to look important things on. They @MONTH1 have to fill out an alpaction out online when kids get older they want to look up schools they @MONTH1 want to go to. Kids in high school look up collages to get into when they are in like @NUM1 or @NUM2 grade. My third reason is kids migth have e-mails. When kids check their e-mails they are probably trying to see if their parents wrote them. Also some kids don't live near family so they e-mail each other on-line. My first reason is kids might have to write an eassy for school. My second reason is kids might have to look important things up. My third reason is kids might have an e-mail. Now I hope you like the reasons I wrote on why computers are good to have.",3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
10282,4,I thank he uses it because she wants to get a nother one next year to see what its like to like something so much and get to look after it for a wial That is why I think the nararator use that phrase as his last one.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
684,1,"Dear Newspaper, @CAPS1 has come to my attention that there is an ongoing debate about the issue stating that not everyone agrees that computers benefit society. I can't understand why. Computers present many oppurtunities for people. They allow for people to communicate with each other, they allow people to research topics in a simpler way, and they teach hand-eye coordination. This is why I agree that computers do benefit society. In the modern world, nearly all businesses rely on communication. Many people in those businesses use not only phones to communicate, but computers as well. Online communication is a fast, simple, and effective way for people to communicate whether @CAPS1 is at home or at work. This is one way computers benefit all of society. Nobody knows everything, we are always trying to find out about new things that we neven knew. Sometimes we @MONTH1 use books, but the way most people use is online researching. This is because not only is @CAPS1 quicker, but simpler as well. When you research online, the information literally comes to you. All you do is type a subject to @CAPS1. @CAPS1 is another reason why computers do benefit society. The final reason is that computers teach hand-eye coordination. This shows because as time progresses while you are on the computer you realize that typing becomes easier. @CAPS1 might take a while, but over time people get the hang. @CAPS1's as @CAPS1 the computer is letting you teach yourself. Some people would say that people spend too much time on computers. This isn't a problem though because people have to spend long periods of time on computers in order to do the beneficial things that computers have to offer. In conclusion, you can see that I have clearly stated the benefits of computers. They allow us to communicate, research, and improve our hand-eye coordination. This is why computers do benefit society.",4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
3738,2,"Have you ever read a book you thought was offense? Have you ever read a book you didn't want any one else to read? I agree with katherine paterson if we can take one book off the shelfs we can take all the books of the shelf.      Katherine Paterson says if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf that I abhor.  Which  means that if one person takes a book off the shelf then so does everone else then we will have no books to read at libraries. This is why I agree with katherine on this subject books are wrote for us to read not to be sensored just because so stuck up parent doesn't want their kid reading some book that so many other people enjoy.       Magizines that people think are offense then the should put in a differnt area so the kids cant get them. The same with movies so movies are not ment for kids, but that doesn't mean that we have to take them off the shelf! One thing we can do is put the valgur moves that we dont want are children watching behind the counter and have the libraian get them when we watch them.     As far as for the books make a separte part of the library for books that kids shouldn't read, such as romance or horror books, adult books, some action books.  Music is another thing that some parents have a had time with because of the offense lyrics in them, but some poeple like that kind of music so we can't take that away from them because we don't like it. does that seem fair??     Now does some of those books seem a little better now?  Yes we still dont want are kids read valgur books about killing, and romance, and serial killers, but for some people enjoy  reading those novels. This is why i agree with Katherine @PERSON1",3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
171,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, @CAPS1 opinion on the effects of computers is that some people are spending to much time on computers they are good to be on for a while but not all day. So @CAPS1 first reason why I think spending to much time on computers is not a good thing because it's better to be outside doing other activities with other people all day instead you could hang out with friends and do some sports or something else and if your on the computer all day you will start to lose some friends. @CAPS1 second reason why I dont think it is good to be on the computer all day is because if your not exercising you will start to gain weight cause your sitting all day just on the computer so its good to go outside and go for a walk or you could go to a gym so you could do exercise is good for you it will keep you healthy cause I know someone who is on the computer all day and he really does not go outside because he says that computers teach you alot and they do but it is not good to be on it all day. @CAPS1 last reason on some bad effects of computers is that some people could use these computers for bad things they could be going on some bad websites and that will just make you to be on the compute even longer you could even become addicted to being on computers because your doing nothing else ans some people have cameras on their computers and some people use them for same bad things so thats why it is better not to be on a computera ll day long. So these were @CAPS1 reasons or some bad effects computers could have on people if your not go outside to do some activities or to hang out with some friends.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
9653,4,The Author was trying to end the story quick thats why he ended it with this one.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
9684,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph to tell the reader that Saeng is going to take the test again. The author wants to tell the reader because she fail the test she know what she did wrong and shes going to correct. For example when Saeng said, “then I will take that test again.” Saeng feel sorry she fail a simple test so she wants to retake the test when the snow melts.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
7640,3,"In the story Rough Road Ahead the author takes a trail he had previously heard about. After the ride didn’t turn out to be what he expected it to be, the setting began to “set in”. The aridity of the climate would cause the author to have to struggle against himself and the conditions around him. Also his lack of water was a problem to begin with. Also his lack of water was a problem to begin with but the scorching sun would make him become dangerously dehydrated.",2.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
7525,3,"The cyclist was affected by the climate, the people, and the surrounding. The climate was the desert in June which was very hot with little water. This made him dehydrated and miserable. The old men that “helped” him acused think to be in the guiding situation he was in. There were no surrounding shop or buildings that were inhabined. This way there was no place for him to get any water nouroushment.       ",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
12599,5,"The mood created by the author in this memoir is happy, grateful. In paragraph @NUM1 the author says ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrafice"" In paragraph @NUM2 ""My mother and father had come to this country with such courage, without any knowledge of the language or culture."" @CAPS1 therefore I say the mood of the author in this memoir is happy, grateful.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
3420,2,"Sometimes i think its always good to have an anappropiate material on the shelves of stores or a library. i feel this way because of when you see stuff that is offensive, most people are willing to buy. Or maybe when you been through rough times in your life, people like to read books that can be offensive be cause it was a reflection of the way they've been brought up.         My views on censorhip contain to keep the offensive materials because its what people like best. Music, magazines, books, and movies. All of these materials can entertain adults, and teenagers because of the anappropiate sayings. It seems to give people to boost up their style and ways to act, such as music as the number one offensive material. Music comes from everywhere around the world, where young teens adapt to that kind of music and starts to feel that anapprpiate vibe.          Another reason my views on censorship contain to keep the offensive materials is because of what we see and watch. Movies and television. when we watch a movie thats is offensive and that can be very anappropiate, you learn from whats in the movie. Most people make movies that can teach lessons if your willing to follow behind, or some movies contain advice for people that are going for the wrong things in life. Thats one of my main reasons i think the newspaper should keep offensive movies in stores. Television is basically the same for movies. You can learn a lot from a offensive @CAPS1 show, you can learn what and what not to do.          Also my views on censorship contain to keep the offensive materials of what we read, books; books are entertainment and what most of us like to do when we have free time off our hands. People seem to read books because of the catorgories that most likely are to fit the way they are, such as reflections of peoples lifes, rough, lovely, funny and drama. We attend to read these offensive books because of what some of us been through as a kid or just would like to read it because they wanna maybe feel the same sympothy that some one else @MONTH1 have had. Also books can be adviceful of ehat people want to do in life, careers that you @MONTH1 be intersted in.     last but not least on my views on censorship contain to keep the offensive materials like magazines. Magazines are the least offensive object that is placed on a shelf. I go against the reason of magazines to be on the shelf because its alot of gossip. I believe gossip is one of the main reasons why most people buy magazines. Also because of the false information. The false information that that give, is what we wanna buy. But for the most part of my oppinion, i believe that this material should not be in the store unless they change it up.     I believe the offensive materials music, movies, books, and some what of magazines should be on the shelves of stores because lots of people are willing to buy. They all catch eyes for gossip, provokinding adds",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
1516,1,"Dear local news, @CAPS2 more and more people use computers people ask if computers actually benifit society. In my opinion I think computers do. They provide entertainment, acess to daily uses, and have many websites for social interactions. I think computers really do benefit society here in why. Computers provide entertainment to people. Many people will want to watch funny videos or thier favorite @CAPS1 show on the internet. of the most popular website for watching videos on you tube. Another great source of entertainment are video games. People buy video games at their or play them on websites like @CAPS2 you can see entertainment on the computer has a much more compared to the @CAPS1 were @CAPS2 program is shown at a certain time instead of when ever you want. Another benefit computers bring to society is acess to dailt uses, the internet provids that can tell you your local weather. Instead or local news imidiatly acess it on you @CAPS4 you can acess encyclopedia and distionarys like at the websites @CAPS5 provide an easy imidiats fools for daily uses. One least example towards the of computers Their are many websites that you can. One of @CAPS5 websites is called , @CAPS6 lets you upload picture of pople or family events for people in you @MONTH1 video chat with people over a and see the other persons face. You can't do that on a telephone or with texting or a cell phone. Many experts believe that computers are taking away time with family and friends but with websites like @CAPS6 it is actually adding time. In conclution, @CAPS5 reasons support my opinion that computers benefit society, They provide entertainment, easy acess to and have many websites for social interactions, @CAPS7 society would be alot harder and this is why I think computers benifit society. ",4.0,5.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
12511,5,"The mood created by the story could be described as thanfullness or gratitude. After reading about a loving pair of parents that gave everything they had just for their children makes you feel guilty and respectful of your own parents. The author portrayed that they were grateful for their parents and they he or she knew they would never be able to repay them. From what the author says, times at home financially @MONTH1 have been tough, but because they had such a loving family, everything was alright. It makes me happy and proud to think that my family plays a huge part in who I am. The mood that is created by this story is admiration.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
9011,4,"In the story ‘’ Winter Hibiscus,’’ the author concludes the story with this paragraph  for many reasons. This paragraph shows that Saeng  will not give up, she  will wait for next time  to come around to take the test. It also means she will be well prepared and will have a list  of  confidence in passing  this test. It gives the reader an idea that Saeng will not give up and she will complete the test. Her mother will be proud of her  for it and it shows Saeng will never give up. Just like when she said “let’s plant it, right now,’’ T his example shows that even though Saeng had failed the the test and disapointed her mother,she will never give up and she still has hope in the plant just like how her mother has hope for Saeng.         ",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
15037,6,"The obstacles the builders of the Empire State building faced law against airships flying to low over urban areas This law made it illegal for ship to ever tie up to the building, fearing That The Wind would blow the dirigible onto the sharp spires of other buildings in that area. That would harm the dirigible's shall Then another dirigible attempted a Publicity stunt, when it would tie up and deliver a bundle of newspaper to the Empire state building. The Idea of The mooring was shelved. They yet unsolved Problems of mooring air ships to a fixed Mast at Such a height made it desirable. The highest open observatory dock, intended for disembarking Passengers, has never been open to The Public.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
1556,1,"Dear @CAPS1, Computers play a huge role in society. Many adults and children spend a lot of time on a computer every day and I think that is bad. Instead of being on computers, I think it would be best to spend time with your family. Exercising and enjoying the outdoors is also a good time consuming activity to do. Studying, school work, and jobs are also important things people should be doing instead of being on the computer so much. Family is very important in life and some people take advantage of it. Instead of being on the computer all day, spending home with family and doing activities with them could be more fun. For example, most teenagers come home from school and go on this computer to talk to friends or play games instead of talking with this parents about this day or anything. By spending time with family you not only learn more about them but you can become closer and be able to talk with them about anything. Nature is a beautiful thing. Sure you can see pictures of nature on the internet, but! is is not the same as the actual thing. By outside, and enjoying nature, taking walks, runs, or even hikes, you can get your exercise. Exercising is a very important thing in a persons life, because you need to be fit to be healthy, and by being on a computer all the would happen. Adults, and even some teenagers have jobs in. While some jobs involve computers, most do not. No one can get in job by spending all day on the computer playing games. I talking to people. Teenagers well and do while playing game talking to. Computer are all the time. There are plenty of important activities, such as, spending time with family, enjoying nature, and school work and jobs. Computer are not necisity. We lives, so I think use should using them",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
3085,2,"I beleive that certian things such as books, movies, music, magazines, etc., should and shouldn't be taken off of the shelf. The reason i think that  they should stay on the shelf is because it might interest some of the people that read them. If people don't like them, or they think that it is offensive, they shouldn't go to that library.     I don't get offended by anything. When I am going through the library I have seen people get offended by some of the  things that they have on the shelfs. Reading things and them getting offensive is a totally different thing. People that read things and get offended by it, should have a say in whether it is on the shelf or not.     The reason I think that some of the things shouldn't be on the shelf is because it might be inappropriete. It might not be good for the eyes of people.     I think that all libraries should carry the same content in them. So that way noone is making a big deal about what is on the shelves.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
895,1,"To whom it @MONTH1 concern, I believe that computers benefit society. Computers are a wonderful household object to have that make life easier in many ways. Computers allow the everyday family to see new places, through photos online, and people, through the internet. Computers also provide a social networking throught a community, state, or even a country! Lastly, a computer is another resort to go to when trying to accomplish something, because there is always something on the internet that will help you. There's a famous quote that goes, ""the largest room in the world, is the room for improvement."" In my opinion, the computers could make that room a little smaller. While experts say that computers are making people spend too much time indoors, and not too much time seeing the wonders of nature outside, the computer can prove them wrong. The internet is a wide ocean of pictures, wordes, and sounds. The computer is the item that organizes it, for your entertainment. There is a picture of just about anything imaginaeable on the internet; from the palm shaped islands of @LOCATION1, to the frozen @CAPS1 tundra in the @LOCATION3. You are able to see penguins in the southern ice cap and the ricefields of @LOCATION2 a bird's eye view all by simply moving your fingers. It's also possible not just to see places but to see people from how for the distance is! Today, people are sending pictures to and from each other via emails. People are actually sharing their memories with each other, all thanks for the computer. I hope what I have just explained now helps me make my. Computers are only here to make our lives. Imagine talking to your friends, not having an with his ever leaving your room. This would or even an impossibility fifty or seventy @DATE1, but this is People's social relationship have greatly progressed the half and it only goes has allowed people to their up on the their up on the their with their family and friends. I'll always a positive thing, using this right way. Having your house to tell, individually, your friend about your time to disney world is such a hastle. If you just put the pictures on a social networking system, like facebook, or twitter, memories will be stored through, litterally, the clicks of aborton. Memories are shared thanks to the social networking ability of the computer. Planing a vacation is a trough job to do, but what if that job could all take place in our sport? An entire vacation can be planned, confirmed and paid for thanks to the computer. Jobs that would normally take hours of researching and calling can be done in @DATE1 minuets for less using the computer. This allows people more time to go have fun with their lives and not have to worry about plannings. Computers allow people to compress hours of work into a matter of minutes. Experts say that computers are taking away people's lives"" I would disagree, because; people are new places or people, social networking is more advanced, and time that could have been spent planning is now living.",3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
9166,4,"In the short story “Winter Hibiscus” by Minfong Ho I think the author ends with that paragraph because it shows that she is determined to pass. “When they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snow melts, and the geese return and the hibiscus budding, then I will take the test again.” This shows she is determined because geese migrate every year and flowers always bud every year. She will keep coming back just like the geese and the hibiscus do. She will be determined to pass the test and fit in sooner or later. If she was not determined she might never pass and fit into her new society.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
1068,1,"Computers are a huge impact on society, but do they make everything better? People spend way to much time on the computer. Computers do not help you brain they can make you fat and for a lot of people they cause drama. People should stop spending so much time on computers. Computers do not help you brain in any means possible. Think about it, sure you do alot of you work on computers but, what about your kids they spend most of their time gand online and doing pointless stuff. Instead they could be going outside or even study. the internet is open to the world so anyone goes on it and if your child is on the computer is exposed many vile things that will not help them in the future. Its a proven fact that the less time you spend watching tv or on the computer you get better grades. I remember my mom always yelled at me for being on the computer and getting bad grades so she took the computer away for a while and now i have much better grades. So being on the computer does not make you smarter. The computer can make you gain quit a bit of weight. If your on the computer a lot you are sitting around and a lot people eat while they are on the computer. So now you are sitting around the computer eating. That can make you gain weight. I know from experience that being active and going outside or exercising really makes you feel good. Once you gain all that weight it is very hard to get rid of it. Sitting around like a couch is not healthy. You can become obese. So you could say your happy with your weight but no one ever said it was healthy. A lot of people have died frombeing that beaky. It puts a huge tall on you life. If you dont want to die from being to heavy then I advise you to get off the computer and go outside and live yor life. The last thing that makes computers so bad is the drama they cause. Mose pople have facebook, aim, or @CAPS1 but if you ask anyone with one of those they will most likley say they have gotten in a fight through one of those. Also now they have something new called formspring which can let you be anomous and people go on yours and just say horrible things. One of my friends was a victim in that and it ruins you. Also their are so many people on facebook that lie about who they are and anyone can easily find out who you are and kill you now a days people know how to hack into peoples computers and get info. So computers can not only be unhealthy but they can be deadly. Why would you want any of those things to happen, when its so easy to just back on your computer time. Remember computers dont help your brain, they can make you fat, and they cause a lot of drama. So please dont use the computer.",3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
16454,6,"The builders of the Empire State building faced a few main obstacles in attempt to allow dirigibles to dock there atop the building. These three main obstacles where the designing of the mast and the building modifications, safety, and existing laws about aircrafts. The designing of the mast was an obstacle because a dirigible moored to the mast would add stress to the building's frame. The load and pressure had to be transmitted to the base of the building and they faced ""over sixty thousand dollar's worth of modifications"" to do so. One of the other problems was, most importantly, safety. The article states that most countries used hydrogen in their balloons to stay afloat, unlike the United States who used helium. This was dangerous for hydrogen is flammable, and the building owners did not want a repeat of the Hindenburg accident when a German dirigible was destroyed by fire. Also, a dirigible had to be weighted down or it'd spin around the mast and the commonly used lead weights were a hazard for pedestrians below. The last main obstacle of the Empire State building's builders was the existing law banning airships from flying low above urban areas. It would be illegal for a dirigible to approach the area let alone tether to the building. These are three of the main obstacles which the builders faced in building the Empire State building and its mast. Design, safety, and legal issues all were obstacles which got the better of the builders.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
6313,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist in many ways. The cyclist persevered through the rough terrain which caused him to become weak. For example, the author states “looked the majority of the pavement in front of me and ceased past tilling to keep my balance in my dehydrated state.” This shows the author is dehydrated because it is so hot and he kept going even with a physical obstacle. Another thing that affected the author was that he felt like giving up because the terrain was too harsh. For instance in the text, “it didn’t really matter I was going to die and the birds will pick me cleary waveng only some experience outdoor gears.” This shows that the author still had to go even when time get tough. The text shows how exhausted he is by the winds eating at him when he dies. He would dehydrate to the humidity of the desert and heat. In other words, the features of the setting affected the cyclist in many ways.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
1409,1,"I believe that computers make everyday work easier to do. Computers allow someone from a faraway place to talk to another person who they can’t see in person, they allow you to get work done in a quicker manner. And get a college education without leaving your home. Imagine that you have a relative who lives a great deal of miles away from you and it’s too expensive to call or fly over there. Computers enable us to communicate with them through email or video chat without the hefty price. Because of computers, talking to your faraway family is a few clicks away. Getting work done can sometimes feel like another chore. Computers only make doing your work easier and faster. Would you rather sit and write out a term paper for hours or type it up and email to your in half the amount time college students find that computers get them efficiently than writing by hand. Computers are way to burdens of work. Education is an of all need, but what if the college that you want to attend is too far from home and you can’t afford to move in ? Thankfully, online college courses are available. If it wasn’t for this source of technology, you would be left to do what? Online courses allow an eager student to learn without breaking their bank or leaving their child if they are parents. Without computers, everyone would not be able to get the education that they have a right to. Computers have allowed us to communicate with our family that live somewhere we can’t afford to travel to. These technological devices have enabled to us to get our work done in a timely matter to receive the grade that we deserve. Computers have allowed over @NUM1 citizens to get their education right in their home at a price they can afford. Without this gadget, we could not be able to live the life we have @DATE1, a life that can get us to where need to be.",5.0,5.0,5.0,6.0,6.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,27.0
7025,3,"The setting in “Do Not @CAPS1 Posted speed limits” affects the mood of the cyclist in that every time the setting changes the mood of the cyclist changes. In the begining of the story the cyclist is riding through the “cool pines and rushing rivers of Yosemite.” @CAPS2 this time the cyclist is enjoying his trip and is in a positive mood. As the story goes on “there was no one in sight, not a building, a car, or structure of any land.” At this point in the story the cyclist has exchanged his positive mood for a desperate one as his water begins to run out.",1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
4450,2,"I do not belive that they should be takein off the shelfs beacuse @CAPS1 people still come to get that sort of stuff. @CAPS1 people say is not plite for little kids 'well keek your kids away from it then.'             @CAPS1 people dont like it and @CAPS1 people do. I am one of the people that like that kind of stuff, beacuse no one can tell us what we can and cant watch or say. It is our life if we wanna watch that kind of stuff or read about it we can.            Noone is telling people that they half to read it or even look at it. If you dont like it dont look at it. @CAPS2 kind of stuff should be off to the side where you know what your goin to look at and away from kids                       @CAPS2 shouldnt even be a problem. @CAPS2 is just people that think they are high class and think if you look at that or watch that or read that you are a dirt bag. That is there opinon.             In conclusion  I think if you dont read @CAPS2 stuff or watch @CAPS2 stuff you are trying to be something you are not. Trying to act better than every cause your to high class to read something like that.  We all get a laugh out of @CAPS2 kind of stuff.",2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
304,1,"Dear local newspaper, @CAPS1 opinion @CAPS3 as to why some people support advances in technology belive that computers have a positive effect on people is that I disagree. Some people dont even get enough sleep if they stay up too late on computers. Also they spend less time exersizing and less time interacting with family and friends. Thos are @CAPS1 reasons as to why I disagree. In this paragraph I am going to tell you about why I think that people should @CAPS4 other things than going on the computer all night. If they wake up in the morning and start being grumpy dont blame them the computer had them stay up late. Would you rather get a good nights rest or be extra tired in the morning because you stayed up too late on the computer? Well once I stayed at @CAPS1 friends house and she was up on the computer all night she didnt even get any sleep. In the morning she was soo grumpy because she was soo tired. @CAPS1 languege arts teacher ""@PERSON1"" says that ""@CAPS2 up late on the computer all night isnt healthy because you get bugs under your eyes and youre sleepy. I mean theres a whole lot of side effects."" @NUM1 out of @PERCENT1 of parents agree with me and @CAPS1 first reason. In this paragraph I am telling you @CAPS1 second reason as @CAPS3 why I disagree which is less time excersizing. (@CAPS3 the parents) @CAPS4 you realy want your kids to be lazy and on the computer all days or @CAPS4 you want your kids to excersize and get healthier? @CAPS1 friends kids always are on the computer everyday all the time and thats not verry healthy @CAPS3 them especialy because they're young. So a couple of weeks ago I talked to them about being active and how its not good to be on the computer alot. Now they bearly go on the computer they always are outside and playing and running around. @CAPS1 science teacher @PERSON3 says that ""@CAPS5 excersize is better than doing anything non active also it can be fun. @NUM2 out of @PERCENT2 of kids agree with @CAPS1 science teacher @PERSON2. In this paragraph I am going to explain to you why I think interacting with family and friends is better than on the computer. If you were in your familys shoes @CAPS4 you think that they would rather have you come hang out with them or be on the computer? When I was younger @CAPS1 family used to have to yell at me to get me off the computer so I could hang out with them but finaly a day come when I got to understand their family pain. @CAPS1 mom says that ""I should hang out with @CAPS1 family and friends more often."" @NUM3 out of @PERCENT3 of @CAPS1 family members and friends agree with @CAPS1 mom. @CAPS3 @CAPS1 conclusion I disagree with the statement ""Some people support advances and technology belive that computers have a positive effect on people."" @CAPS1 reason as @CAPS3 why is that people arent @CAPS5 enough sleep, less time excersizing, and less time interacting with friends and family.",5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,22.0
3978,2,"In the words of the author, Katherine Paterson, 'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf. But if I have a right to remove that book from the sheld---that work I abhor---then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books on the shelf for any of us.' @CAPS1 are countless books in the world which will offend someone in one way or another. If everyone were to expect their feelings to be accounted by everyone, they are mistaken. Everyone has a right to discover the thoughts of others as long as they keep in mind they @MONTH1 not always be pleased with the outcome. Certain books carrying harsh opinions or uncencored material can be found on every shelf. As my many years as a student, I have come to find books containing vulgar images and language.     @PERSON1's play '@CAPS2' describes him in very crude ways. Our class was very surprised at the language and sexual innuendos involved. @CAPS2 was described as a 'black ram' by his nemesis. Comments such as these in books can mold a young mind into thinking name calling is appropriate. Unfortunately, this is how children are to learn the nature of select authors and the world outside the classroom. @PERSON1 also discusses a 'strumpet' in '@CAPS2'. Once a mind is aware of such adult matters they will look at the world completely different. Life must be hard for children as their books and magazines show racy pictures of girls and advertisements for products.     Magazines are a threshold of adult matters. Once a teenager or child view all the vibrant advertisements and beautiful models selling products, they begin to lose a sense of reality and childhood. The photoshopped images of tall, tan, and thin models make a girl's head ponder that way of life. They begin wearing shorter skirts, dieting, and tanning all because of an ad they saw in their magazine. Who wouldn't want to be like a model? When every actress, singer, and model begin looking like godesses, the men picture the perfect girl as the ones they see on billboards. After the men picture the ultimate female as the images they see, the women will never be able to add up to their qualifications. A whole cycle of being underappreciated and the obsession to be perfect makes the media more powerful.     In conclusion, the world has become absorbed in the unrealistic fantasies racy books and magazines provide. Crude comments are found in classics and are a powerful influence on the mind. Advertisements in magazines cause a sense of worthlessness in women and the feeling of unfulfillment for men. Are you going to control you're life or let the media?",3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
892,1,"Dear Newspaper, I often think about the effect of technology on humans. The human race has discovered many things but our biggest advance is technology. New machines are robots are built all the time, and our knowledge of machines and artificial minds is rapidly growing. The most widely used machine is the computer. People use it for all sorts of things, communucation, awareness and learning and entertainment. Some experts are concerned that people spend too much time on computers and it couldn't agree more. Computers maybe useful but they are over used. People spend more time staring at the screen than exercising and interacting with friends and family. Computers are also not always dependable or safe. First of all, the biggest computer users are adolesents. Young adults spend hours on websites like @CAPS1, @CAPS2, and @CAPS3 communicating with their friends. At their young age, exercise is very important. Obesity in children from lack of exercise is becoming very common, and its because young people are glued to their computer screens. The averange child need @NUM1 minutes of exercise a day, and many have very little none. I say the computers are ok, but only in small doses. The growing mind and body needs to move and exercise. If internet use among children and teenagers is not cut back, some worry that there will be a lot more health problems in the future. Although it is very east to quickly communicat through the internet, it can sometimes do more harm than good. Kids who spend hours @CAPS4 or emailing their peers spend less time with their families. I've heard parents say they barely see their kids because their always either doing homework. Also, @CAPS5 to @CAPS5 conversations are fading. Because of the internet, people no longer need to get together and talk, @CAPS6 turn on their computers, which is a waste of energy. Why not just go see your friend @CAPS6 of typing all day? Lastly, computers have just as many disadvantages as they do advantages. There are plenty of dangers out there in @LOCATION1. Online predators lurk as many comers, and your personal information and identity can easily be stolen. The risk of any of these things happening is very high. Its better safe than sorry. So, if you think about it, we really don't need computers to survive. You need your exercise, don't blow it off for online chat. Also, its very important to interact and be part of your family, and less internet use will cut down the risk of identity theft, or any other problem or virus. It's your time now. Get outside have @CAPS5 to @CAPS5 conversation with a friend and internet with your family. You can be healthy, happy, and safe without constantly typing any at the keyboard.",5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
1110,1,"More and more people use computers but not everyone agrees that this benefits society. Well, to me it does benefit society in many ways like, learning online. You can learn many things online, you can practice math, reading, and even writing. You can also have fun online if your bored at home and have nothing to do. Also, you can interact with friends and family members, by email etc. When your online you can learn alot of things. If your at home, and you need to study for a test, you can go online and study. You can also learn more, because you can learn how to do a math problem if you don't know it, or just catch up on reading. People sometimes need a computer because they might be bored, so they can go online and play games and have fun. People, especially kids get bored at times, so they can just go on the computer and play games and trivias so they can still learn. Computers can let you interact with your family and f riends. You can e-mail or webcam. if yopu haven't talk to someone a long period of time you can just go to the computer and talk to them. If you want to find a @CAPS1 school classmate that you haven't talked to in years, you can now. Computers do benefit the society, In my own opinion we do need computers. If parents do not want their child on websites they don't approve of, the parents can always block those websites. Computer are really nessacary they can help in a huge way.",4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
4064,2,"Nowadays, children can look on the shelves of libraries and find any type of reading you can imagine. Some magazines, books, and movies that are age appropriate. Children can also reach up on those same shelves and find some very inappropriate magazines, books, and movies. Should we remove these inappropriate items? Can we somehow get kids to not see them? Children are very curious. They want to know about everything and they will ask as many questions as they can. When they see inappropriate items on library shelves, what do we do?     Libraries shouldn't get rid of items that @MONTH1 be inappropriate for children. Instead, there should be a rating system on the books and magazines. Movies have ratings so children don't see things that are inappropriate; books should have those ratings too. If someone wants to check out something that isn't suitable for kids, then they can show the libraian their @CAPS1. Everybody can check out what is appropriate for their age. Libraries could even put all of the most inappropriate items in a separate section of the library. It could be a section that kids could not enter. Parents should also watch their kids to make sure they aren't getting into anything inappropriate.     The only censorship they should put into libraries is rating the items by maturity. Children can look onto the shelves, but we should put labels on what they can and can't check out. Parents could look out for what their children are trying to read. I believe that's the most we can do.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
9232,4,"In the story “winter Hibiscus“ by @CAPS1 Ho, the author concludes the story with that paragraph because it goes along with the story. In the story Saeng went to look for the pant that reminded her of her grandma. She found the plant and then she thought of her grandma and she cried. I think she was testing herself to see if she had gone on with her life but she failed. So I think she bought the plant so she can try again when the plant is in bloom.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,1.0
6900,3,"The conditions and features of the setting caused the cyclist to be tired and dehydrated and think that he was going to die from it. For example, it says “and ther growing realization that I could drop from heatstroke on a georgus day in June”. Also , he thinks he is getting dehydrated when he says “I  was doing a water depleting 12 mph. sometimes life could be so creul”. in conclusion, this cyclist started this without enough water causing him to think that he was going to die from either heatstroke or dehydration.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
15644,6,"In attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there, the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles. Safety was a huge issue. Foreign derigibles often used hydrogen gas to stay aloft, which is highly flammable. A fire posed a dangerous threat in such a densely populated area as New York City. Another great obstacle was the turbulent wind at the elevation of the mooring mast, which would have prevented the dirigible from staying in one place. This would make it extremely difficult for passengers to safely board or exit the zeppelin. One way to solve this problem would be to weigh down the blimp with lead weights, but this was also a dangerous practice, because the weights could fall to the ground and crush those passing by. Although a mooring mast was in theory, a useful idea, it was neither safe nor practical.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
6326,3,"The way the features of the setting effect  the cyclist in what was, going through hot neighborhoods and very road that made her dehydrated and effected her journey including the long cycling which he had to go up.",1.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,1.0
6107,3,"In the story “Do Not @CAPS1 Posted Speed Limit” there were many features of the setting that affected the cyclist. The most challenging problem faced  by the author was the lack of water. “ I pumped that handle for several minutes but the water wouldn’t calm down nor I tried a drip or two,it had the flaver of beatterly acid.When @CAPS2 set out for the next train @CAPS2 came to a road that read “Rough road ahead, Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit. The tarrain got more bumpy & hard to cross. The effected the determination the cyclist had left @CAPS2 the regreted not listening to the old men of didn’t think they knew what they were talking about. Due to the fact they never left their porches. As you can see the setting most deffinated effected the cyclist in physical or mental ways.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
11949,5,"In the memoir the author, Narciso Rodriguez, creates a mood of faith throughout the reading. As the author describes the parents moving into the United States, it tells how they had to leave behind their families, friends, and careers in the country they loved. The motivation to do so reveals the parents faith in creating a home just as good as before. The author is very grateful as he admires his parents faith that has traveled so far over time. Rodríguez believes his parents have more courage then anyone and have expressed so much generosity upon him and others to always have their arms open to help others. It was the parents faith at the struggles would lead them and their children to better times drove them to endure these hard times.",3.0,,,,,4.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
16014,6,"In the excerpt the builders had faced many obstacles in ader for dirigibles to dock there. They had faced many challenges. One of the main concerns were safety. Al Smith had commented saying ""They were trying to figure some safe way of mooring airships to this mast."" among any other safety issues. ",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
9953,4,"I believe the author concluded the story with “When they come back, saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the gesse return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take the test again.” because it shows the entire theme of the story. The theme of this story is adjusting to things in life. The conclusion demonstrats this when she says she will take the test again. The hibiscus allowed her to get over the changes in life. For example “The familiar fragrance filled her lungs, and saeng could almost feel the light strands of her grandmother's long grey hair."" The hibiscus was something from home that gave her good memorys. The hibiscus encouraged her to except her new life and keep trying to make it better. ",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
12213,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir was a happy and grateful mood. Some evidence to back up my thinking is in paragraph @NUM1 it says ""and for which I am extremily grateful."" @CAPS1 can tell that the author wants @CAPS1 to also feel grateful. Another example in paragraph @NUM2 where is says ""I will never-forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" that quote showed me how satisfied with how his life is now and how much the author is appreciative for what his parents did for him.""I've often told them my admiration for thier strength and persevearence and iv'e thanked them repeatedly"". That also show how the author was pushing to make the mood grateful. It also shows how the author is happy about his parents desisions.",2.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
13400,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir was warm and comforting. The author described his home with great words and descriptions. While describing the meals and get togethers, the author made me feel at home. Memories are sometimes greater than plans of the future. Memories of homes are the best in remembering times at home. This memoir made me think of past times and happy memories. The vocabulary and extra information in this memoir made the mood of it very happy and comforting and made me want to read more about his past life.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
678,1,"Dear local newspaper, I think people are spending to much time on the compture an these are my reasons, Less time exercising, an enjoying nature and interacting with friends an family. My reason is less time exercising people are to busy on the computer playing games an talking to other ones. Dont you think you should be outside doing some exercising like running around or playing sports instead of being in your house on the comptuer doing nothing. People should at lest get @NUM1 of exercising. You could be on the comptuer for a little while but not on it @NUM2. Take a break from the comptuer an go outside for a little bit injoy the weather an being outside. People just cant take @NUM1 away from there comptuer time I find that really hard to belive that people cant. Its like the comptuer took over there brains an all they want to do is be on it an never get off. My second reason is enjoying the nature go outside for a little bit an see whats going on there go take a walk outside in the woods an look for the animals or look for animal tracks. There are a lot of fun things you can do outside like climb a tree or going fruit picking. You dont have to be inside all day an stare at the computer playing games an talking to friends. You could be outside injoying the nice weather you are getting. Peopl need to learn that there is better things to do with there time. My third reason is that interacting with friends an family. It inportant you spend time with them an see how they been an what they been up to. But instead people are always to busy to talk to there family members becuse they are always on the comptuer doing stuff they dont need to being doing. There are a lot more inportant things in life an people need to understand that. Family is way more inportant then being on the computer but people these days they put family second because they never want to talk to them or see them because they are always so busy waisting there time on the comptuer. Like checking there email is fine but waisting your time on these chat things like @CAPS1 or @CAPS2 or @CAPS3 its just a waist of your time people can hang out an do things they dont have to be on the computer asking there friends that they should just call them an ask. Dont get me wrong I have a @CAPS2 to an it takes away from your hanging with family an things but I make time for I can hang out with friends an family an enjoy the natuer an I do exercis. So I dont see why its so hard for people to do that. So in conclusion I think that people do waist there time on the comptuer to much like I said there are more inportants things in life an things you can be doing like exercising, Enjoying natuer an hanging with friends an family. So I hope you take my ideas an consider them an thank you for listening to what I think. I hope people can get it through there head that they dont have to be on the comptuer @NUM4.",4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
15891,6,"In the excerpt, The Mooring Mast, there were numerous obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle being that the architects could not have a mooring mast on top of the building because the dirigible would be, ""... held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame"" (@CAPS1 @NUM1). This would cause the building to have to weak of a frame from the dirigible's load, as well as the wind pressure. Then the stress would be transmitted down to the foundation of the building. As a result, the building's frame was modified, costing ""Over sixty thousand dollars'"" (@CAPS1 @NUM1). Another obstacle was designing the mooring mast, so passengers could be brought, ""... down to the eighty-sixth floor, where baggage and ticket areas would be located"" (@CAPS1 @NUM3). In order for this to be completed, builders had to complete the roof. Lastly, ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the moor mast was nature itself"" (@CAPS1 @NUM4). When the winds came into action at the top of the building, the dirigible would swivel around the mast. This would cause a safety hazard for pedestrians on the street. The Mooring Mast, supported many reasons as to the obstacles builders had to face in attempting to allow dirigible to dock at the Empire State Building.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
127,1,"Computers can affect the way people are and how they interact. Why is there a need to spend your precious life sitting in front of a compute all day?When you can be getting exercise for example going to your local gym. Computers become a distraction to your social life, thats why you should use them for emergency's and spend more time with your wonderful family and friends. Lastly you can enjoy you surrounding and appreciate life and nature. Computers are meant for business not for people to sit around and to nonsense things. Exercise is very important it helps the human body grow and stay in fit. If your sitting in front of a computer all day your body is going to shut down and won't get the proper exercise. Sports can be just as enjoyable and helps build the human body and gives you the right amount of exercise that your body needs. Sports also build hand and eye coordination just like if your sitting on the couch using a computer. In conclusion exercising can give you all of the same utensils that computers give you but it also benefits citizens more. Family is a wonderful thing in life, but they don't live forever. That's why we should cherries every last moment we have with them. A complete citizens and drives them from family and friends. Computers can take away your social life and you never do go out and meet people and friends. To sum things up computers are a to citizens and cause them to drive out family and friends. Nature is exotic and beautiful and all of us should take care of it and appreciate what we have. Computers can become harmful to nature and destroy homes for animals, for example when you print something from your computer it prints if out on paper. This causes more trees to be knocked down and cut for paper. We should only use paper for emergency's and not splurge on it. We all want the world to be a better place so stop destroying it for our own benefits! In conclusion computers just in the and will cause chaos and destruction. Instead of using them we could be getting the right amount of exercise, and spending it with family, and lastly enjoying nature and our surroundings. I strongly consider that you take my ideas into consideration and hopefully agree with them. ",4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
535,1,"In my opinion having computer is good to have. Therefore I think having computers are a good thing because nowadays computers are very useful. Also a lot of people are using the for there businesses. My there reasons are to look up information, home work, and to talk to friends and family online. My first reason is to look up information on the computer. If you have thred reports to do it will best to use a computer to look up the information because it will be easier and faster to do. For an example using the internent will be faster then looking for it in a book. For that it will take at least @NUM1 to @NUM2 minutes for the interenant if you were to lookingit in a book it can take at least @NUM3 to @NUM4 minutes. My second reason is to you could talk to your friends and family online like if one of your relatives live long distance like in @LOCATION2 then you can talk to them on your telephone or cellphone because the bill will outragouse. Or if you talk to your friends online so can ask them a question on homework or whats the homework? Like if you have a that to like @LOCATION1 you can to online and you can talk to them. My third reason is that you can even do your homework on the computer. If you have history you can go on a website for an online book instead of bringing a book to school and back to home. Also it will be easier for that you would not have to worry about bringing your history book with to home. For the example it will take less time using the interneat the using a book it will take like @NUM5 to @NUM2 minutes using the computer then using the book for @NUM5 to @NUM8 minutes. In my conclusion using a computer is very useful and very important nowadays. My three reasons are to look up information, homework and talking online to friends and family. Even though people don't like computers or don't like to use them.",3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
4229,2,"I personally believe that there shouldn't be a whole lot of censorship in libraries, except for things such as complete smut and pornography. However there are many different beliefs on this subject. Some parents @MONTH1 think it's necessary to control every bit of information a child takes in, while others are more forgiving.     The main conflict with this issue is how different everyone's restrictions are. A lot of parents believe that if any politically incorrect information enters their child, he/she will be corrupted for life, but that is completely false. Nowadays, almost every single person goes through something traumatic, witnesses something illegal, gets involved in drama, experiments sexually, and/or experiments with drugs. The truth is, it's everywhere, and your kids have already experienced it and are used to it. Reading one book with a couple curse words here and there, or an intimate moment isn't going to ruin your child, because chances are, he/she is already doing it all in real life. It @MONTH1 even be happening in your own home and there is nothing that can be done to stop it. Trying to control our lives as if it was your own provokes kids to rebel even more when the chance arises.     I say don't worry about censorship in libraries except for the obvious things like pornography, and sex novels, racist books,  ect. Maybe if we quit hiding so much from the more mature teenagers, and quit treating them like toddlers, they wouldn't go looking as much for all of the 'bad' things out there. Parents need to quit thinking they can get their child to believe there is nothing bad in the world. If they aren't aware of the mistakes that can be made and the consequences from it, they won't know what to do if they find themselves in a similar situation as one of the characters in one of these 'offensive' books",4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
12820,5,"The mood of the memoir was him being very thankful of his parents. This is shown when he says ""In reality there is no way to show how greatful of my Family I am. This show that he shows and respect all of his Family.",2.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
10460,4,The reason why they include the story with the paragraph is because they talk about the same thing. Then they probably included the story with the paragraph might have been to show the good relationship between the mother and daughter and how they can do things together. Then in the story they talk about going to Canada together.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
15518,6,"Builders of the Empire State Building faced many challenges while attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One of them was not being able to just drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof. A dirigible attached the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would stress the building frame. Its weight and air pressure would weaken the foundation of the Empire State Building. They had to make sixty thousand dollars worth modifications to the frame work so it could be strong enough to with stand the weight of the dirigibles. Another problem the mooring mast not fulfilling its purpose, which should have been thought about before it was built; safety. Many countries outside the U.S used hydrogen instead of helium, hydrogen is really flammable. There was an inccident where a blimp was destroyed in a fire due to hydrogen in their balloon. The biggest challenge was the wind above the building. The wind was constantly shifting because of violent air currents. If the blimp was tethered to the mooring mast, the back would turn on the mooring mast. Blimps use weights to land in open fields but couldn't over the Building because weights dangling over pedstrians wasn't safe. Builders had troubles attempting to allow blimps to dock there.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
12711,5,"The mood  Created by the author in the memoir is a happy One because in the memoir Narciso was happy with with all her parents did for her and the neighborhood was a peace one, every body reached out to help who ever needed help.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
7137,3,The settings of the story is very desert like what I mean by that is its the desert and its hot and he really had to push his self to make it. The condition at the rode are very rough and has a lotof shape turn it in. Apart in the story he gets a boost of energy and pedal as hard as he can down a hill and then relaxes. This is the setting and is summary of the story.,1.0,,,,,1.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
6192,3,"The features of the setting that the author cyclist through definitely effect not only his mood, but his the physical condition. To start, it is mentioned that he is in “the high deserts California in June,” @CAPS1 it is implied that the weather is hot causing the author to sweat as he bikes along. Next there is a change in terrain an he soon approaches “rolling hills” which are more difficult to bike on. Finally the author sees a sign that reads “ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: DO NOT EXCEED POSTED SPEED LIMIT” and becomes discouraged because his bike is not even capable of reaching the speed limit but he still has to manage getting past the rough road. After passing this road he approaches a picture of a boy drinking juice that is posted on a juice factory. Seeing this sign most likely perpetuates his thirst and leaves him more exhausted and frustrated before. Such features of his surroundings played a large part in the author’s change in mood.  ",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
926,1,"I believe that people spend too much time on the computers. If people spend hours on the computer it will result in bad eye sight. They don’t get enough exercise.most teens aren't getting home work done because of this @CAPS1 people sit on the computer for countless hours their eye sight is slowly going bad. The bright lights of the screen make your eyes unclear state say more people lose eyesight from looking of a computer than they would by staring at a light. Sitting down in front of the screen you aren't down in front of the screen you arents getting any exercise. You mostly just move your hands and fingers. If people dont exercise for at least @NUM1 minutes a day, we will all become week. Lastly, your teenager probably do their homework. while they are in his or her room they've most likely all the computers. if they spend too much time on the computer they are more likely to fail their classes. which means they will most likely stay back. In other words, people spend too much time on the computer. If we continue this most people will lose eye sight. if citizens keep sitting there then we will became unhealthy. And lastly, more teens want do homework and wont succeed.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
3700,2,"Katherine Paterson once said, 'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children have taken off the shelf. But if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf--that work I abhor--then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us'.  Although I understand her message, I don't completely agree with it.   I believe most things such as books, music, magazines, etc. should be censored in some cases.       One reason why I think there should be censorship is because of minors that @MONTH1 want to see things that @MONTH1 not be suitable for them.  First of all, children often follow after what they see.  For example, adutly trends that they see on the television. Not all things adults do are not appropriate for the young eyes.That's why I consider that the things that are broadcast should be censored. Children are being influenced by things that they see, read and/or listen to.     Another reason why I believe there should be censorship is because of a lot of very explicit action that appears in today's movies, books, magazines, and music.  Violence is a main topic  in newspaper articles.  For instance, most front page content is about the wars and hostility in the world.  It is hard to believe that we ever had a peaceful day without any violence. Disrespectful acts, cussing, and rude gestures are not a positive way to keep a more mature role going that will make a better environment.  Because libraries are public, they are open to all eyes so we must be careful about what we allow on their shelves.     In addition, censoring is the correct thing to do.  Where would it lead us if we don't? Do we want our society to be badly influenced by a bunch of profanity, violent slogans, or jargon?  Shouldn't we all want to be treated with respect and common courtesy and avoid promoting outrageous movies, music, and books on the shelves of our public libraries for everyone to see.     So now you can see why I believe that such things like books, music, movies, magazines, etc. should have some type of censorship.  We don't want all the disrespect in the country, so why make it available in our public libraries?  Keep these things separate: adult books, magazine, movies, music, etc.",4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,23.0
12693,5,"The mood created by the @CAPS1 is friendship and love. When the @CAPS1's parents moved to the United States, They created a traditional home. The hard being the kitchen. ""Passionate Cuban music filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen."" In the kitchen celebrations, childhood, Friends and family formed the backdrop to their life. The @CAPS1 learned that '""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relative.' The neighborhood the @CAPS1 lived in is made up of many different cultures but they blend with each other to form a small comunity of honest, hard-working immigrants who help others when they themselves are in need. ""My parent's always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we consider family."" The many immigrants gave up their lives in cuba to move to the US to make a better life for their children even though they did not know the language or culture. The @CAPS1 will always be thankful to her parents for that reason. There is no way to show her thanks for her parents love and sacrifice that they showed to her when she was just a child, and showing her the importance of family and friends. The @CAPS1 states ""I will never forget how my parents turned the simple house into a home."" They didn't just change it, they did it through love and friendship.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
12990,5,"The mood in this memoir changes throughout the story. First off, the mood starts with being friendly. ""In our neighborhood, despite customs elsewhere, all of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship."" This tells us everyone in the neighborhood is nice. In the middle of the story, the mood is strong and determined. ""They struggled both personally and financially, braving the harsh northern winters."" This tells the people had to stay strong through hard times. Lastly, the end of the story is greatful. ""I will never forget that house or its gracious neighborhood or the many things I learned there about how to love."" This tells how the narrator is thankful. All in all, the moods in the story fit together nicely.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
915,1,"Do computers really benifit society? This has been a tricky question for years. Some people say computers are a huge help and it allows us to see the world through a different perspective; we learn more from computers and this vast increase in tecknology. Though others say computers are addicting, it is the @CAPS2 unsafe and unsecure machine to be using especially when it is left a lot of personal files on it while hooked up to the internet. Plus people spend more time on a computer than ever, missing out on thier families and friends, not being able to enjoy nature and the other simple things in life. Besides, if you want my honest opinion, computers should only be used as tools. ""The fact is many people look to computers as personal diaries or something to save files on or even something to play games on,"" says @PERSON2. ""They ignore the biggest fact that computers are only used to make life easier."" This is really what computers are made to do, help us. It could be as simple as a @CAPS1 (@ORGANIZATION1) or as complexed as a super computer but it still only serves the main purpose of making life easier. Even if you tried to upgrade a computer it would still serve the same purpose, yet people still look on it as if it were still the next big thing in entertainment. Many people might not even know it yet but computer can turn on you and really ruin your life. Ever since @PERSON1 made @ORGANIZATION2 the @CAPS2 popular disk @ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1 around, people have been using computers alot. Its not because he created the fastest computer ever. It is because @ORGANIZATION2 is selling world wide; for buisnesses, small companies, schools, even in entertainment. A few years ago they made something called the xbox @NUM1. It revolutionized both gaming and the way people look at gaming. But whats the problem here? The problem is that because of @ORGANIZATION2 people are now more addicted to entertainment. When this happens people will start becoming dependent on a computer. Its not that @ORGANIZATION2 did anything bad but the fact that since @CAPS2 computers have internet, those people who depend on computers are going to find it hard to avoid being hacked or worse getting all their information stolen. There is this one thing about computers that remains constant. Family and friends will find it hard to talk to there loved one when they spend all there time on computers. This makes comunication hard, and like I said before its very addicting. ""@CAPS2 of the people who don't have real friends will chat with people online not knowing who they really are."" says @CAPS3 @PERSON3. Making friends online is the @CAPS2 unsafe thing to do on a computer. Over @PERCENT1 of the people online are not who they say they are and people will often break away from thier real friends just to find this new ""friend"" they've made. So remember, even though computers are",5.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,22.0
16478,6,"While they were attempting to allow the dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building, the builders faced many obstacles. One obstacle they faced was the lack of a suitable landing area. Al Smith thought if a mooring mast was added to the top of the building, then the dirigibles would be able to anchor there to refuel and let passengers off and on.Another obstacle that was faced was that dirigibles from outside the United States used hydrogen rather than helium which was extremely flammable. The owners of the Empire State Building felt that it wouldn't be safe if the dirigible set on fire with a densely populated area right below it.The greatest obstacle that was faced was the use of the mooring mast with nature itself. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" The owners of the Empire State building believed that if something went wrong then the dirigible would be dangling above pedestrians on the street. This was very unsafe.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
642,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, I am writing a letter to you today because I have herd a complaint that and more people are using computers and getting less exsercise. These experts that are concerned also say people need to enjoy nature, and interact with family and friends more. These experts @MONTH1 be smart but they are wrong. I am going to tell you how they are wrong. My first example is that people that go on the computer alot still exercise. Take twitter as a example. The football player ocho-cinco ""tweets"" all the time but that doesn't mean he doesn't get exercise. There are plenty of sports players that are on twitter and they are fit. Most of the kids in my grade including me have a facebook. Most of the kids are fit. Just because they are on the computer alot doesn't mean they can't exercise. My second example is the effect of the computer. Students use the computer for a lot of things. We use wikipedia for are projects and research a person. Some schools know a day almost depend on computers. I rember when I lived in country we never had to reely type anything unless it was a project. When I moved to @CAPS3 I am always typing something. Even a rough draft they want me to type. In couentry I would write out my final draft. I have to use the computer. Schools also are teaching us about the computer @CAPS4 as we learn more and more things on the computer we are on the computer more and more. When someone. Finds out a new website there going to tell there friends and there going to pass it on and @CAPS4 on. My third example is how the experts say that people are spending to much time on the computer and less time interacting with family and friends. My grandpa, aunt, other family members have a facebook account. That means I can still interact with family and friends. The people that are the computer alot that are adults probably don't have family over every night and probably go out with friends evey once in a while. Computers also benefit Society for buisness people they might have to a powerpoint and they have a computer. When experts say we need to enjoy nature, interact with family and friends, and do more excising they might be right but we can do all these things but we can also still go on the computers. If you take a survey in @CAPS3 to see how many people are on the computer almost everyday and then you ask them how many of them exercise you would see that you can do both.",4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
9773,4,"The author ends the story likes this so readers can understant the theme. Which is, you can always start over, after a mistake is made. For example saeng failed herb driving test and then it took a toll on her she will try again in the spring. I guess she figures that once she once she has renewed  herself she'll do better.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
4282,2,"Now days people can get offended over anything. In todays trying time readers, listeners, even wirters, are trying to get what they want not what the consumer wants. Even though some stories, books, or articles, are completly bogus it shouldn't matter. Dont let others opinions ruin it for everyone else.      Many people get offended now days over absolutly nothing; and they feel the need to do somthing about it. whitch nesessarly isn't a bad thing but isn't a good thing either.It is freedom of speach, or so thats what the constitution says, meaning folks have the right to read, write, or say, anything they please.      Fake and bogus writings is a small problem to readers, and writers. People are reading articles, and book and believing every bit of what they read or write or even hear on their radio in recent times. It is hard to believe anything now days, because you never really know the facts unless you experence them your self.      Opinions are the big thing folks have to look out for, but still that goes back to the freedom of speach. Reading, and writing is a wonderful thing to do and has been around longer than any human will ever know. Just don't let other readers opinions get in the way of a great thing",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
11877,5,The mood created by the author in the memoir is happiness because Narciso is happy for everything that has happened Narciso is happy for his family and his native haratige. For example in the beginning of the story is says Narciso loves he haratige and his family. This means he's happy.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
10086,4,"The author includes the story with this paragraph because since Saeng failed her drivers test for the first time when the hibiscus starts to bud it will represent a change in her life. Also, Saeng use to have hibiscus flowers at her old home in Vietnam so when the flower buds it could show that she has a new home. ",1.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
4074,2,"Books, music, and movies are being taken off of shelves around the globe, because they are found offensive.  Books, movies, and music were created for a reason.  It's a form of entertainment as well as to build knowledge.  Artists, authors and publishers release their work to get information out and to let others hear their voice, it is their freedom of speech.     Books, magazines, music, and movies should not be taken off of shelves if they are found offensive.  Censorship in libraries just hides certain things from society.  If all books on the @CAPS1 were banned and nobody could read them, nobody would be informed on the horrible event and it could easily be reincated.  The majority of movies and books have relevant information, portray events that could take, or have taken, place, and teach valuable lessons.     Artists and authors use their works to get points across to their audiences, whether it is a lesson or learning valubale or interesting information.  People shouldn't be allowed to just take things off of shelves like they are doing.  The material we read, music we listen to, and the movies we watch should be our decision to make.  It shouldn't be decided upon by others wanting to take it off of shelves.  If someone finds material offensive then they should take their own actions to benifit themselves such as, choosing not to expose themselves or their family to the material.  Banning things from the public takes away opprotunity for people to engage in things that interest them.     Some material could be banned for something as simple as one provocative word, sentence or even a thought.  The book '@CAPS2 @CAPS3's @CAPS4' had multiple occurances of cursing, but the book told a true story of an event that can happen to anyone.  It also indirectly included that families can be torn apart if you let them be, but the choice is yours and you can prevent it from happening.  Small things like such as language should not cause the material to be taken off of shelves where people who appreciate it cannot obtain it.     Katherine Paterson's quote is correct, if we can just take things off of shelves then there wouldn't be anything left for us.  Most materials contain something that someone isn't going to agree with, but if we just keep getting rid of things then what is the point in making new material.  There is always going to be the issue of finding offensive material, but nobody should have the right to ban it from everyone.     Materials around the globe are being taken off of shelves due to offensive material, but they were created for a reason.  Not only is it for entertainment,  but it is also for knowledge too.  Artists, authors, and publishers release their work to get information out to let others hear their voice, it is their freedom of speech.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
10173,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because she says “Then I Will take that test again” she believes in the Flowers. she and the Flowers both adapte to there circumstances. They both being determined to @CAPS1 in @CAPS2 places. They both overcome obstacles. Maybe she wants to see what lays ahead. she hopes she is right about the Flowers maybe, she likes the spring.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
13182,5,"The author gave a @CAPS1 and cultural mood to the memoir. He talks about the music and food of his childhood but he also talks about his Extended ""family"" and how they always had someone staying in the house until they could get back on their feet. He also talks about how the House dosn't make a home- its the people that do. If no one lived in a House it could never be called a home. The family and friends @CAPS2 bring it closer and closer to being a Home.",1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
12038,5,"This memior created a warm, touching mood while he explained his childhood. I espicially think the part when he said ""Here the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and  endless celebrations that encomposed both, formed the backdrop to life in our warm home"", because it shows an overall perspective on a normal day during his childhood. Also, where he states that family ""has nothing to do with being a blood relative really makes his memior interesting because it is also teaching lessions.All in all, this memior was great, and the warming mood is something that I won't forget, and I hope that I too too can write a memior such as heart-warming and interesting as this one.",2.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
511,1,"Dear Newspaper, I think a computer is not something bad for you. A computer can help you do many things @CAPS1 could help you learn, chat with friends, and @CAPS1 can entertain you. A computer can get you sucessful in life @CAPS1 helps you learn a lot of things such as computer engineering. Computer engineering is a job that pays you good money to fix computers. @CAPS1 is very challenging at first, but when you look @CAPS1 up on search websites you'll find all your answers. Chatting is the number one thing kids, adults , and teenagers do. @CAPS1 is good and bad in a way, @CAPS1 is good because because your phone bill wont be that high up so you save minutes. @CAPS1 is bad because @CAPS1 can also ruin your eyes just remeber dont get to close to the screen. The computer is all about fun, you have millions of websites you can go on. To have fun for example @CAPS2.com, @LOCATION1, and @CAPS3.com those are the three main ones I go on they are so fun. They have tons of games for kids and for adults too. I Have proven my point that computers are not bad for you because they can help you learn, they lower your phone bill, and its also very fun. Yes I know they might take exercise time away, or hurt your eyes but who cares just make up a time limit so you have time to exercise. Do not get to close to the screen because @CAPS1 can hurt your eyes.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
8920,4,I think the author wanted to express Saeng when she took a vowed and to express the way he felt. When the statement was made that also I think it was to make readers feel interest in it but mainly to help understand.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
4003,2,"First, libraries are a good source of information. At the same time a library can have pros and cons to its information. Some information should be only seen by adults. Have you ever wondered what if a child got their hands on an adult book? What's one way we can stop this?     Next, you can find information about everyday life. Through magazine, movies, music and books are ways you can find them out. You have explicit music where the artist curses, and says inapropriate things. There has been books from my past experiences where an author just talked about her sex life. I have a past experience with magazines too, such as '@CAPS1'. All these have to stay out of libraries or put in a section where children can't reach them.     Third, parents should monitor their children when they go to public places anyways. The library should be divided into different parts. Music isn't really necessary at a library. They could throw the music out. Also, at the same time children shouldn't get their hands on the books but they would have to learn about that stuff in life eventaully. The committee should have a contest in which people of any age of the community could write an essay telling their opinion also.     Finally, I've came up with a plan to fix this situation. I personally don't think they should throw these books out because this is how people make a living and some people actually like these things. So they should set up an adult section in the library where you have to be @NUM1 or older to enter and a identification card to prove it. Also, you must have a membership to that department. That way we don't have to worry about censoring these books, etc. Children will not be able to proceed in this section.     In conclusion, libraries are a good source of information. So they shouldn't throw these books, music, magazines and movies out. The library could just set up a different section for certain things and people of certain age. In that way they won't need censorship",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
12280,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is @CAPS1. In @CAPS2 @NUM1, he says how his parents left everything they loved to give the author a better life in @LOCATION1. In @CAPS2 @NUM2, the author says, ""I will always be grateful to my parent for their love and sacrifice."" In @CAPS2 @NUM3, the author says, ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" Also, in @CAPS2 @NUM1, the author talks about how his parents @CAPS3 nothing about the country when they came and how the struggled financially when they came. Also in @CAPS2 @NUM2, the author talks about how he could not thank his parents enough for all they have done for him.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
7537,3,"There were many land features that affected the cyclist and his trip. First of all, it is a desert, which greatly affects him as there is no water in deserts. There was also a snake, which could have bit and kiiled him. As the road were not very well paved and had obviously been abandoned for years it made cycling much harder for him. And the juice factory just taunted him, making him remember his need for water, as did the well that did not pump cold water, but instead pumped hot,gross water",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9356,4,The author concludes the story the way he or she dose because it shows that the time she found the plant that she will get her lisens So it is a reminder for her. I also think she did it that way because when the plant blooms it starts over and so when she sets on gose to take a chance at the test she is starting new,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
16315,6,"The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building face in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there are: @CAPS1 they choose dirigible instead of balloon, because the fabric used in dirigibles is lighter. Second, their extended use in New York City was the lack of a suitable landing area and think about the safety of passengers get in or get off",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
10536,4,,2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9499,4,I think the author concludes that paragraphs to show more meaning of the story.The author could of wanted to show more details in the story.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
9825,4,The author includes this  because he’s using metaphors to explain how the author felt about Saeng’s personal life is,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
9119,4,I think the auther concludes the story with the paragraph because it is saying I’ll never give up. She is determined to concor everything. I think she is saying she will take the test over and over until she succeeds. That is why the author concludes the story with this paragraph because you should never give up.,0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
9710,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph to show that the hibiscus is a symbol for Saeng. In the sping time the hibiscus grows just like Saeng. When Saeng got to the new place she was small and peuney just like the plant. “Its leaves quavering in the wind"" (@NUM1). This quote tells us the the plant was weak a peuney. If the plant was strong it would not be quivering. The fact that Saeng brokedown and bought the plant tells us she was not strong. And at the end the author uses that paragraph to tell the reader that the hibiscus is strong and so is Saeng and the can over come anything.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
75,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, In the past ten years, advances in technology have completely changed the world. Technology makes peoples lives much easier and helps keep more and more people connected throughout the world. More jobs are created and help speed up ordinary events such as taxes, messages, news, and teaching. However, many people have proven that too much use of technology can make teens and adults addicted to the internet. In this addiction many people can lose time with their family, time to exercise and enjoy nature. Since being part of the generation growing up in the new technology era, I have had a first hand experience with the benifits of the new technology. I believe that this technology is a great help to society today. Many more jobs are being created because of this technology. For example, think about how many people could be employed if a new computer system was created. There would be thousands of people working on many things such as the founder, manager, creater of new ideas or just working at the new companies retail store. Running a business or a corporation is a very difficult job to do. But because of the advances in technology, running a business can become much easier and not as much time is wasted. With the new technology, people can send emails within seconds instead of running around the entire office giving out memos. Also for businesses, their stocks of the company can be updated every minute. These advances will make easier to run and make them more efficent. With the advances in technology average people can be updated on the new around the world every minute. Also when it comes time to pay taxes, fill them out and pay on line. None the less, there is more entertainment open to everyone. Through todays new technology, peoples lives are made much easier. They can work faster, get more arrands accomplished, learn more, connect to people around the world, and be caught up with local and international news. Technology is benifiting society and will hopefully continue making life easier.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
16422,6,"The obstacles which the builders of the empire state building faced to allow dirigibles to dock there were numerous for this project. The first problem was that, other dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen. Hydrogen is a much more flammable substance than helium, which is what dirigibles in the United States used. The owners didn't want anything to occur similar to the German dirigible the Hindenburg, which would be worse in downtown New York instead of Lakehurst, New Jersey. Another practical reason why dirigibles faced problems docking at the Empire State building was that an existing law prevented dirigibles from flying too low over urban areas. For example a @ORGANIZATION1 dirigible named the Los Angeles, could not get close enough to tie up due to forceful winds. These problems go to show that owners of the Empire State building faced numerous obstacles in allowing dirigibles to dock there.",2.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
15044,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles while attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The first problem that the workers faced was that a ""thousand-foot dirigible... would add Stress to the building's frame"" (@NUM1). This meant that the frame would have to be Strengthened. Another obstacle they came across was that there was a ""law against airships flying too low over urban areas"" (@NUM2). Therefore, the it would be illegal to dock a ship on the building, because the airship would be too low down. Finally, the most difficult obstacle they encountered was that ""the winds on top of the building were constantly Shifting due to violent air currents"" (@NUM3). This made it unsafe and unpractical because the dirigibles would be above pedestrians on the street. Due to all of the complications and challenges that faced the workers who were trying to allow dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building, the project was never completed.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
12366,5,"Based on the excepert, the mood created by the author in memoir was being grateful and happy about his life.The first example that the mood created by the author in memoir was being grateful. This author this author was grateful for his Cuban culture and heritage. In paragraph @NUM1 it tells what he is grateful for (cuban music, food...). Here's an example from this text or passage "". My young parents created our traditional Cuban home, the very heart of which was the Kitchen. My parents both shared cooking duties and unwitting passed on to me they're rich culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today (and for which I am eternally grateful). Passionate Cuban music (which I adore to this day)..."" That's an example how he was grateful.The second example that the mood created by the author in memoir also was being happy about his life. In paragraph @NUM2 it explains how he is happy about his life. Here's another example from the passage, ""It was here where I learned the real definition of ""family"". And for this, I will never forget that house or its gracious neighborhood or the many things I learned there about how to love. I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" That was another example of how this author was happy about his life.",3.0,,,,,3.0,4.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
10362,4,"The author concludes the story with that paragraph because he basicly trying to say that everything happens for a reason, and that reason might mean through seasons. She @MONTH1 think that she would have better on her test in the spring only for the simply fact that everything blooms in the spring.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
1723,1,"Dear newspaper, @CAPS1 you think that computers have bad effect on people today? I know I don't. Over @PERCENT1 of people today have a computer. On a computer you can find great things about a place and people. If you don't have the best handwriting then you can type it and computer can help you look stuff up. @CAPS1 you want to go and look you your favorite hockey player? Instead of going to the library and hoping that theres a book on him. You can just @ORGANIZATION1 his name and hundreds of different websites using will came. That will save a lot of your day and it will save a lot of you money. If you go on a family trip each year to the sum. Place you need a change? Then you can look up another place online that @MONTH1 has the same features but it @MONTH1 be way closer then going to @LOCATION1 each year. So, if you have a computer then you can look places you @MONTH1 want to travel to or look up cool facts about your future sport player. If you have messy handwriting and its getting harder and harder for your teacher to read then you can just learn how to type it up on the computer. At least @PERCENT2 of students in schools today are getting zero on homewrok or test because their teacher can't read their hand writing. If you type it up on a s computer then you will spelling or grammar as you ever you for sizes and color as pictures are make your grade high to the fact you little more work into you die. So, to all the people who think that computer help anyone well reasons why computer can help someone. Computers can help kids find something or can help them computer can also find video about your favorite player or about you favorite hockey players give warning not the playoffs. You can find all good stuff online. You can find your favorite song for your cellphone. Over @PERCENT3 of people get the song from the computer. Also the computer can play the favorite song on the computer. For example if your favorite band was drop kick murpheys then you can @ORGANIZATION1 that are you will find all of their songs. Alot of people think that computer are not good for us. But, I say they are wrong. You can find info about there future person they can look up there. If you have messy handwriting then you can go and type it up lastly you can songs, video, and much more when you browse the web. For example, @LOCATION2, @MONTH1 be there very own website. Computer can help kids find info better we type your paper sloppy.",4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
9951,4,"Saeng  would  silently in spring she will take the that again in the good ending to this story it was as goods ended  because the story had listed   come  of  malance  ready and spring it and of the plant beautiful  time the spring the all as plant ending because spring in a near trying and for the take the test again of that time , to think it’s a goods ending because the ruler strong are  about   machines saeng and spring it  and  makes  is near paragraph . That is why its is a good ending plant to the stays.   ",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
4733,2,"Offensive materials @CAPS4 be anything but I'm talking about libraries and whats inside. Books, music, movies, and magazines @CAPS4 be offensive to someone but not everyone. Removing these materials from library shelves because a few people veiw them as offensive material is not a good idea because if they find it offensive then somewhere someone is enjoying it. Not everyone will find a book, song, movie, or a magazine to be offensive and for that reason no books, cds, movies, or magazines should be withheld from the public in any library. My friends liked reading @PERSON1 books but i did not like them, but i did not make them stop reading because of it, just like 'To @CAPS1 A @CAPS2 @CAPS3,' @CAPS4 be offensive but if you find it offensive don't read it, plain and simple. There wil always be one person who doesn't want their kid to watch a certain movie, or read a @PERSON1 book, but that is not a good reason to remove any materials from the libray shelves, let people read what they want to read, watch what they want, and listen to what they want, there is no good reason to remove a book form the libray shelves.     We all have a right to read, watch, and listen to anything we please. Having somebody you have never seen get a book, movie, or a magazine removed from the library because they find it a little offensive, is like having someone kick you because you don't have a lot of money. Many books from all over the world @CAPS4 be considered offensive to at least one person and that one maybe two people do not have any right to tell anyone what they can not read. Censorship in libraries is a horrible idea because not everyone will read that book or listen to that cd. Having a chance is all we need to read a book or listen to a song that might change our lives, for better or worse it should be our choice to read what we want.     Any material @CAPS4 be considered 'offensive' but most of it is not offensive just what people don't want their kids to read. Offensive or non-offensive materials can not be declared by a few people but by an entire country. What one man considers offensive another man considers to be life changing. Anything can make someone change and in order to have that chance we should have the freedom to read what ever we would like. If you find a book offensive remeber this you had a chance to read it, now give that chance to someone else.",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
7598,3,"The features of the setting in the essay “Rough Road Ahead.” affected the speaker by presenting challenges such as dehydration, dangerous animals and rough terrain in order to teach him a lesson about following travelling advice from old men. In the essay, he starts out confidently, on his journey after following “their advice”, reasoning that the men sounded “no sense of themselves when pointing out landmarks and spouting off town."" The setting changes from cool to dry and barren with then mention of tumble weeds,” and even changed to dangerous with the appearance of a diamondback snake that blocked his path in the end the setting changes back to comfortable, allowing him to learn his lesson through the hardship of the features of the setting, and follow his own map from then on.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
15550,6,"There were several obstacles to the success of the construction. Perhaps the main obstacle, the obstacle that nothing could be done about, was the wind itself. On paragraph @NUM1 it mentions how the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. These giant- balloon like machines would constantly swivel around the mooring mast even if they were tied down. The Hindenburg disaster in May 6, 1937 also proved how dangerous it would be to have blimps filled with highly flammable hydrogen gas over a densely populated area, like downtown New York. The project was also held back by existing laws about flight in an urban area. ""It was illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area"" -says the author on paragraph @NUM2. Incoming blimps would simply be flying too low against law for this to work.",3.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
12762,5,"In the memoir the mood that was created by the @CAPS1 was saying Family is the most important thing in life. In the memoir Narciso Rodriguez says ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifise. That means he is saying that he will always love his parents and his family. The @CAPS1 is trying to say that it is better to have family than money because in this memoir it talks about his parents leaving Cuba with no money no job but for them being together it gave them hope and now they live in a @NUM1 room house with their family. With out family life would be much harder to deal with.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
15330,6,"four main obstacles prevented dirigibles from ever docking at the Empire State Building. The first was that a much more complex mooring mast would have to be installed on top of the Empire State Building, a very different mast than the regular masts found in open field docking areas. When a dirigible would dock on the mast cause great stress to the building's frame, a problem that could be solved by increasing the strength of the steel frame. Another problem was that a dirigible was made of hydrogen and could easily catch fire and explode. Engineers saw this would cause large problems over a densly populated area like, New York City. Once the mast was built a new problem arised, even if the dirigible could dock the intense winds could make the back end of the dirigible move violently, or cause an airship to be unable to dock, like the inncodent with the Los Angeles. Nor could they use lead weights to weigh down the ballon since they would be a danger to civilians. Lastly, a law against airships flying too low over urban areas could have prevented docking. These reasons made it impossible for a ship to ever moor on top of the Empire state Building, although two ships got very close.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
8904,4,"I think the author concludes the story with this paragraph because it shows that saeng is most comfortable when she is surrounded by things from her homeland. She thinks she will be ready to take the test when she sees the ducks again, and when the hibiscus begins to bud. Narrator says ‘’A saebya ledges tall and high, had surrounded their garden…’’ @CAPS2 is evidence that Saeng had hibiscus in Vietnam, and the story of the well reminds her of it. The narrator also says,’’ Overhead, a flock of @CAPS1 geese, their faint looks clear and -yes-familiar to Saeng now,’’ @CAPS2 proves that the geese symbolize @CAPS3 home also.     ",2.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
298,1,"Dear Newspaper, I think computer use is good because, it will teach people to have hand-eye coordination. Also people will have the ability to learn about different states and countries. I ask people would be able to interact with their family and friends from different towns. Those are all the reasons why I think computers are a good use. The first reason why I think people should use computers is it will teach people to have hand-eye coordination. People will know how to stay focussed with their eyes and also know how to also use their hands all at the same time. To stay focussed with their eyes people would have to wear glasses for the light. Also so when they are typing they wont have to keep looking down all the time. When people coordinate with their hands on the computer its so they know were the different are thats why computers are good. My second reason why computers are good is because people will have the ability to learn about the different states and countries. They can also see how nice or bad the countries and states look. Also they will be able to read about what different cultures they have and religions. In the states also be to read about @LOCATION1, @LOCATION2, and how we have a wonderful state. That's why computers are good use. My final reason why the use of computers is good because, people can interact with their family and friends online. There are a lot of different websites you can go to that you can search for one of your family members or friends. You can talk to each other. Also you can talk to them even if their in a different state. You guys can talk about a lot of different things. For example, the family and life and even if you miss them. Thats why computers are good. Those are my reasons why computers are good. Not only can it teach you about hand-eye coordination, family and friends, and about different states. But also you can play a lot of different games and also type on an notepad. Also if your stuck on a math problem you can use the calculator. That's why people should use the computers.",4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
16325,6,"The builders of the empire state building faced @NUM1 major obstacles. One major problem was that they used hydrogen which is highly flammable and they were in a highly populated area. Another problem had to do with laws, because aircrafts aren't allowed to fly to low over urban areas. Also the strong winds at that height made it impposible to land. Many problems are faced in the building of the empire state building.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
11937,5,"The mood created by the author is one of blithe and thankfullness. The reasons that it is thankful if because of the frequent refrences made by the author to the courage and bravery shown by his parents. This is shown in @CAPS1 @NUM1 when the author said ""they came selflessly as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends, and carrears in the country they loved"" This quote from @CAPS1 @NUM1 shows how grateful Narciso is of his parents leaving everything they had to make a better life for him. The last sentence of the memoir is ""I will never forget how my parents turned the simple house into a home."" This is showing that the mood is Grateful because Narciso means that he's is thankful because they were able to turn their little house into a place of great friendships and great times. The last reason this article has a mood relative to thankfullness is shown in @CAPS1 @NUM3 when Narciso says ""But, in reality there is no way to express my gratitude for the spirit of generosity impressed upon me at such an early age and a demonstration of how important family and friends are."" This sentence shows that no matter what Narciso does he can never repay his parents for their selflessness and care. The reason this article is also happy is shown in @CAPS1 @NUM4 when he talks of ""the endless celebrations"" or ""a love of cooking that is still with me today... ""This is showing the ""mood is happy and joyous because it is clear that as a boy the kitchen and cooking were a source of happiness and @CAPS2 in his home. These are reasons as to why the author has created memoir with a mood of happiness and gratefulness",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
385,1,"Dear Newspaper, Computers have a positive effect on people because they teach hand-eye coordination, give people the ability to learn about faraway places and people and allow people to talk online with other people. The invention of computers is the single most important event of the @DATE1. @PERSON1, a professor at @ORGANIZATION3 says that ""the invention of computers has led to hundreds even thousands of new discoveries. This week alone, @CAPS3 have discovered @NUM1 new drugs that could put an end to cancer."" A report in @ORGANIZATION1 stated that @PERCENT1 of fortune @NUM2 companies are run soley by computer programs. @ORGANIZATION1 also state that the other @PERCENT2 of fortune @NUM2 companies plan to switch to computer based operations by the end of @DATE2. For personal use, computers allow you to communicate with your fellow peers in order to work on school projects. Computers make life easier in general and can help with all life throws at you. First, computer teach hand-eye coordination and can improve reflexes and reaction time. Computer based video games can prepare you for real life tasks and challenges by improving your physical skills. Numerous flight simulators and driving simulators are available on the consumer market. In this day and age, flight schools require their students to complete hundreds of hours of flight simulators. Some driving schools even make their students learn to drive in a simulator before hitting the open road. Other games such as the @CAPS1 @CAPS2, require you to think on your feet and can improve your reflexes. This @CAPS2 maker you dodge bricks and can greatly improves reaction time as well. All of the programs available via the computer can help you with real life obstacles and make you think createvly. Next, computers allow you to learn about faraway places and people. This is espicially interesting because you can learn about a countries culture without actually going there. This oppurtunity allows you to imerse yourself in different cultures and religions and would make it easier to relate to people to in faraway lands. @CAPS4 once said ""@CAPS3 are afraid of only what is different than us, therefore, @CAPS3 have nothing to fear if nothing is different."" @CAPS4 meant that if @CAPS3 know about people and places different than use, @CAPS3 do not have to be afraid of anything. Computers allow us to see people all around the world an learn about them. Seeing different things enriches our life and can make us better people. Lastly, the invention of computers allows us to communicate with people from all around the world. With the invention of @CAPS5, @ORGANIZATION2 and @CAPS6, @CAPS3 can talk to friends that move out of town. @ORGANIZATION2 reported that of its @NUM4 million users, @NUM5 million users have friends that live in a different country. When I was @NUM6, my friend @PERSON2 move to @LOCATION1. @CAPS3 missed each other until I turned @NUM7 and @ORGANIZATION2 was invented. @CAPS3 were both online one day and I searched his name to see if he had an account. He did and @CAPS3 immeadiatly started video chatting on a weekly basis. Programs like @CAPS5 allow you to make new friends as well as reconnect with old friends. In short, the birth of computer has allowed for vast improvement in society as a whole. Individuals can talk with friends who live in different countries as if they were in the same room. Businessmen and women can have meetings on the computer with programs such as @CAPS8. Government officials can talk with other leaders from around the world. Despite some people that think the advent of computer has affected communication. I belive that it is an effective too that everybody should have access to.",6.0,6.0,6.0,6.0,6.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,30.0
6177,3,"In the story the cyclist faced many problems, one of the biggest problems was the terrian that he had to maneuver them. The terrain was hilly, having to go up a hill on a bike is tireing and wears you out faster than flat land would, and making him use more energy. The heat was also unbearable making it harder for him to focus, the cyclist did everything he could to keep consiese while  manuvering threu the terrain and deserted landscape being a huge desert of rolling mountains he pushed forwad, finding no civilization anywhere to get a refill of water. For example, if the terrain wasn’t as hilled then it would of made it easier for him using less energy and less strain on his legs, the heat of the desert beating down on him probably slowed his progress also. Heat will make you move slower and a cyclist moving down a  barnest road with no shade will make the journey seem longer, and imposible. In the end his will and determination got with threw the landscape, so he could get the water he needed to finish his trip",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
1399,1,"Do you feel that computers effect you in a possitive way? well i don't. I feel that computers have a neggative effect on people. I feel this way because you wan't be getting enough excersize in your life, you'll have a high light bill, and it'll begin to interfear in your everyday life. Now that i've shown my reasons, all defind them in detailed sentences. To start my essay, i feel that people want begetting enough excersize. I feel this because if your on the computer all day, and you don't go outside to talk, as side your bike then you went be burning any calarise. You'll be come a couch potatoe which down the line can become fatal to your health. As you get oldes you can possibly became with a list of items that can be wrong with you such as diebites, high cholesteal, and heart problems. Also i feel that if you are constantly sitting in front of a computer @NUM1, then you can possibly injure your back, which can add on to the list of problems with your health do to not enough exersice. Next, i feel that if your constantly on the computer, then your parents will have an extremely high light bill. Your parents will be with you, can possibly be in to the light company. If your always on the computer non stop, before you knew it the bill will be so high be able to pay it, you'll hour a high light bill, and can possibly be without light in your house. My personal opinion is that i dont feel computers are worth a family being in without light. Finally, i feel that computers will day life. I feel way if your always on the computers, and your never outside, then your friends will like you want to be bothered. They'll feel like your ignoring them, and you'll begin to lose friends that been there for you, and helped you when you needed it most. Also computers can effect your everyday life by ruining your social life. You'll always be inside, while your missing opportunities to meet new people, and build your social skillz. To conclude this essay, live brought to you my ideas, and opinions about computers. I've explained to you my reasons wich are you want be getting enough excersize, you'll have a high light bill, and it'll interfear with in your every day life. I've provided you with facts, and details about the consequences about computers, now you decide whether computers have a possitive or negative efect on people.",4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
233,1,"Dier: newspaper I thingk the computers are beneficial and consequencial. Computers are beneficial because thy entertainment, inforormational and super yousfall., I injoy all the cool vidio on youtud while older pepole mite wash the news. You can also send mail, it is most semplr. Then sanding a ordnery envelope. Wating for days or even weeks depnding were you live but wegth e-mail it can get ther in a mater of secons, big deforents right. Pepol who depend on computers can uploud inpotan informashon all the pepol on palands of the poles and army yous the internet on there computers to control speshol equenent like @CAPS1.A.V. for the army or everiday monrting sestoms for a policeofficer. I mayself yous a computer to resrech school slot like math and history but computer all arnt good pepole abyous it. Some pepol can hack in to other computers and steel importen information and make your life misardol it can effact your haus onlin players spend countless howsr playing it can mak you game wat, stend les time weth your frend and fameli thy play so offen ther eight weekends and required glasses, computers my complateley replace newsepaper.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
13279,5,"The mood created in the memoir is I think comfort and happiness. First in paragraph @NUM1 ""Here, the innocence of childhood the congregation of family and friends the endless celebrations."" These all make people happy childhood, family, friends and partys, so its no wonder that I think the memoir is happy. Also in paragraph @NUM2 ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we consider family knowing that they would do the same for us."" This puts a smile to my face that people are so giving to others when they don't have to, I hope it brings a smile to you to. Last in paragraph @NUM3 ""filled the air with not just sent and music but life and love."" when I read this I think of nothing bad jut a family singing, laughing and all by a warm cozy fire place. It brings me comfort. Over all thats why I think the memoir is comforting and happy,",2.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
15423,6,"In The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted there are many obstacles faced for the builders of the Empire State Building. One of the obstacles builders came across was safety because they were trying to build a mooring mast on the very top of the building for blimps to stop and refuel and such. If builders proceeded with that, it would have been a safety concern. Marcia Lüsted writes ""most dirigibles from outside the U.S.A used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" That could be a huge problem if it was to explode in New York, many lives would be endangered. Another obstacle builders faced was strength, because since the mooring mast was going to be used for blimps, ""a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame"". That stress of the blimps load would add stress to the building's frame so steel frame of the Empire State Building had to be modified and strengthened.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
3761,2,"History is bond to repeat itself right? Well, we must make sure that this is a great opportunity to ensure our future @LOCATION2. By censuring items on certain shelves is like when your mother makes you leave the kitchen so you don't get burned. This is just a way to protect the minds of young ones, which are like little sponges soaking everything they see or hear up.      The effects of what @MONTH1 come are far worst than making it so an adult must reach a little high for the book they want to read. Making it so only certain material is available to young children and teenagers is a way to prevent the same racism, poverty, assinations, and religions protests of the past. The @ORGANIZATION1 prides itself on that children are the future, well, why not put in the effort to prevent the from seeing what the see or read?      I wish that when I was younger many people were trying to stop causes of such things as teen pregancy, drugs, alcohol, and abuse. But, there wasn't, there was a thirteen year old girl in my class who got pregant. She thought it was cool, because she read it in a book. This book she read wasn't hers it was her mothers and she left it on the table to take back to the library. Her mother forgot and @PERSON2 read that book. She told a bunch of friends and me about it. @PERSON2 said the book explained what guys wanted. She did that because of a made up story her mother checked out at a library.     This story makes me think about why they should put books on a different shelf or higher up. I have two younger sisters who already have to worry about being picked on; because of their clothes, their religion, the fact that they only listen to certain music. They should be able to go to school, and not worry about the book that they @MONTH1 grab at the library. My sisters are the inspiration for me to make the world in which we live a better place,well, my brother is too. But, my point is they should have to live up to the expectations of others, or the what's cool.      By censuring what children are reading or listening to is a way to make them be children. When they look at magazines or listen to music, they make discissions that could effect the rest of their lives. Just like how @ORGANIZATION2 has a new song out. The lyrics are inapporiate of many young children, but you can look it up on youtube. The lyrics of many songs or singles that have just been released are astounding. These songs show us why children are having children, or doing drugs. It is all caused by what they see or hear around them.      Our country has hit an economical low, and this is caused by the youth not taking life seriously. I think that if we could focus on the factors in hand, such as censuring we @MONTH1 accomplish something no one else has. To show the world @LOCATION2's youth is the future, and it is looking pretty bright. We each should take proud it making the children learn better, act better, and above all make their dreams come true.      If we have more students reading stuff such as, ' @LOCATION1, or To @CAPS1 a @CAPS2,' and enjoy them it would show that their dreams can come true fiction or non-fiction. It doesn't aways matter as long as your reading something that isn't stopping your mind to grow and develop fully.      Many of the young women in my sophmore class have read, ' the @CAPS3 series,' and they loved it which made them read other vamiper books. It shows we can read stuff that is stimulating and not just to make us act like celebrates who party all the time or go to jail. By looking at those magazines or reading books about those people teenagers think that everyone is doing it. To tell you the truth more people aren't doing it and have found other ways to stay occupied. We have say in whether or not the future is good or bad why not make the choice easier by elimating the ones we would choose for ourselves at the age of children picking up the books or reading the magazines; about @PERSON1 who just drove around with her baby on her lap. What choice are you choosing for you life?     In my personal oppion I believe children and adults should have separate televisions shows, magazines, and books. We want children to mature without the lies that everyone lives this way. These are the reasons as well as more to why censuring in libraries would help the impact of lies to children lessen. To add one final thing, would you tell everything you know to a five year old if you knew they would retain every word? I don't think I would want them to mature that fast, otherwise what is the point of life, or school. To go and learn what you already know",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
3580,2,"I dont think books that would affend people should be on the shelf. some of the books that maybe on the shelf @MONTH1 hurt some ones feelings. But i also think people should beable to read what they want to read. many people wouldnt read a book that they think would affend them.      There are many kinds of books not all book will be bad or affend people. but books that are not apropriot for young kids or teens shouldnt even be in school librarys. In public librarys i think it should be ok to have every type of book. and have different books in different place's. like haveing the young adalt section and the adalt and children section.     I think screton books should be sold in book stores like i dont think they should have inapropeiout books in children book store's. They should have a different store for certain books. And parents should monitor what there children are reading and take part in the book by helping them understand what the book is saying.      There are lots of parents that dont really care about what there kids read, and to me that's there busness but my apenioun is that they shouldn't let there kids read what they want. Parents should be with the child when he/she is picking out a book. But if it is a teen @DATE1 and older, i think they would be old enough to choise what they want to read. by the time they are that age they have matured enough to read and understand things much easer",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
6004,3,Well I would put it like this is that the weather had everything to do with it because the not weather make you tired and upset and easy to angre so now it make you upset and and then stress.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
8994,4,The author of this essay includes those sentences as the conclusion to make it that she will realize that they are coming back.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
13016,5,"In the memoir, ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from Home: The Blueprints of our lives, Narciso Rodriguez creates a powerful mood for the reader. First, right of the bat I felt love and thoughtfulness, which I still felt throughout the story. ""They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends, and careers in the country they loved."" This made me think of my parents immediately. My father gave up his career and my mother gave up her family to give me and my brothers a better life. This feeling is without words. I can't describe the level of gratefulness I feel, just as Narciso does. Secondly, the admiration I shared with Narciso. She described her parents well enough to put me in her shoes. ""I've often told them of my admiration for their strength and perseverance, and @CAPS1 thanked them repeatedly."" What her parents did for her was incredible and something to learn from. From Narciso's story, I got a sense of admiration, greatfulness, and connection, which I believe are the moods she created throughout his story.",2.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
12448,5,"Narciso Rodriguez @CAPS1 the following definition of family in this memoir. In our neighborhood, despite customs elsewhere, all of these cultures came together in great solidarity & friendship. My mother & father had come to this country with such courage, without any knowledge of the language or the culture. In the United States, they had to start their lives over entirely, taking whatever work they could find. I will always be grateful to my parents for their love & sacrifice. They showed me with their own lives & these teachings have been the basis of my life. It was in the warmth of the kitchen in this humble house where a cuban feast always filled the air with not just scent & music but life & love. It was here where i learned the real definition of ""family"". And for this, i will never forget that house or its gracious neighborhood or the many things i learned there about how to love. I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
16283,6,"The builders were Building about @NUM1 ft high Above surface, so Safety is an issue. Then a @NUM2 ft @CAPS2 would moore, at the top of Building, held by a single cable tether would add stress to the building (@CAPS2 load would). Also, The Wind pressure would have to be transmitted @NUM3 ft below to the foundation. So its a @CAPS1 that could affect @CAPS3. The @CAPS2 could catch on fire on top of Downtown New York hurting @CAPS3 And its costing a lot of money @NUM4 Dollars.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
6081,3,There are numerous features in the setting that effect the cycleist. For example  the rough road. A nother example is the tumble weed and the snake also affected the cyclist. In conclusion those are the reasons the setting affects the cyclist.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
7029,3,"At the beginning of the ride, the cyclist is feeling good and strong and the day as well as the journey, is just beginning. The sun begins to beat down on the cyclist but he remains upbeat, still feeling good and barely noticing the heat. When he arrives at an old rusty water pump, he feels disappointed and tastes a liquid that resembles “battery acid.” The terrain begins to feel like more of a hill, which makes the struggle even worse. The cyclist is drinking water more now, and is becoming tired. He comesto a rough road and says, “sometimes life can feel so cruel,” which lets the reader know he is feeling the negative affects of what he presumed to be a nice bike ride, a snake blocks his path and he becomes dehydrated. The cyclist feels refreshment and relief at a sign for a fish camp, and his thirst is replenished when he takes a satisfying gulp of water in the restroom. The water is a feature @NUM1 the setting that refreshes the cyclist, while the hot sun, rough terrain, and unknown area are features that make the cyclist feel lost and tired.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
15703,6,"While attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on top of the Empire State Building, the architects faced many obstacles. Usually, when given an obstacle, you either succeed it or fail it. In this case, these men didn't overcome the obstacle.In the reading, it mentioned that dirigibles from outside the U. S. contained hydrogen rather than helium. Hydrogen is highly flammable and it could cause a lot of damage. Not only to the building itself, but the area of downtown New York as well. Winds at the top of the building were shifting due to air currents. This could cause the dirigibles to circle the mast when even tied down. The architects also had to think about the existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. The builders didn't realize how complicated the process of even tying down a dirigible would be because of the high winds. Even the process of dropping off newspapers was difficult, and took up too much time. Who would want in enormous steel framed balloons dangling over them anyways?",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
12514,5,"Narciso Rodriguez creates a mood of happiness and greatfulness in his memoir. He talks about how his family is always celebrating @CAPS1 From their native Cuba. The memoir states, ""It was in the warmth of the kitchen in this humble house where a Cuban Feast (albeit a frugal Cuban feast) always filled the air with not just scent and music by life and love,"" about the house Narciso grew up in. Narciso's parents came to america ""to give their children a better life"" which makes Narciso greatful to them. Narciso was also greatful to his parents for their love and sacrifice they gave to him. Narciso says, ""there is no way to express my gratitude for the spirit of generosity impressed upon me at such an early age and the demonstration of how important family and friends are"" Which makes his greatfullness come out into the mood. He shows his hapiness and greatfulness for his parents @CAPS2 the mood of his memoir.",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
9411,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because it is a personification involving snow smelting, geese returning, and the hibiscus budding. It’s explaining moments in time. The author describes how isolated the hibiscus is.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,1.0
12858,5,"In this article I am given information about this main character's life and his caring parents.The author's mood in this article is grateful, happy, and amazed. The author is so grateful that his parents would do such a brave, corageous thing for him. It makes him amazed that his parents would do that for him to live a great, happy life.The author will never be able to show all of his appretiation towards his parents, for they did a great thing for him.                                                                                                           That is what this article is about, and the author's mood.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
10224,4,"The author includes this paragraph because Saeng is starting anew in a new country. In this country she misses her homeland and the hibiscus reminds her of so. Saeng took a test and failed and in the winter, flowers fail but they bloom again in the spring. When the hibiscus blooms Saeng will ""bloom"" and try the test again. Moving can be a hardship especially when it is to place very unfimiliar. People find ways to make themselves promises & to remind them of their old home.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
15716,6,"The main problem they had with the docking of the dirigibles was it would have to be really safe. To hold the aircraft down they would have to use lead weights. I weights fell from the top of the building in such a dense, populated area it would be very dangerous. Also when the owners of the Empire State got notice of the hindenburg blowing up they felt uneasy. Even if the aircraft was floating moored to the top of the building the wind would whip it around making it even more unsafe. The idea was good but not probable to be safe.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
9109,4,In the response that explains why the author concludes the story with this paragraph is because this story was about a plant growing back every year around the same time. The paragraph ment like I think when the plant came back inspring & the geese would come back around it be another test of growing and not letting the plant die,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
921,1,"I believe that computers benefit society and help people understand things more clearly. Computers help people study, learn, and even talk to other people. Here are some good reasons on why computers help people out with problems. First of all, computers give you information on things that you cannot find in books. People can look up places for vacations, what their child's grade in school is, and find healthy food recipies. Without the computers people would be lost not knowing what to do. Next, computers let you talk to friends. You can discuss things like weather, ideas you have, you can even plan exercise days. What if something important happens? The person does not have his or hers phone. What could they do? They could go on the computer and tell their friend. It would be a lot easier than driving over to the persons house then driving driving all the way back. Finally, computers can give you a good sense of hand eye cordination. Computers can teach you how to type without even looking at the keyboard. This skill could be used to pursue a good career in the carpentry field. Computers can also help you study for a new job and what the requirements are. In conclusion, I believe that computers make peoples a little bit easier knowing that they have vital information right at the tips of their fingers. It can also help them in anything they want to do. Like talk to friends, look up info and teach skills.",3.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
3859,2,"I do not feel these types of things should not be taken off the shelves.What i think is that thing should come with a rateing because  this is a free country and for some one to do something like that it would be takeing away someone's freedom of speach.To many people have faught in the past for just simply freedom of speach.I think that if people rate the  thing's  that come out then they will not go in to the wrong hands. That's like saying they should have taken @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3 when it first came out off the market because it has violance in it ,profange language,and guns that company will had lost a lot of money because it is inapprotive for kids.I think that parent's shouldn't go buy a @NUM1 or @NUM2 years old something like that but some parents do .It not the creaters fault of the actions of how people react to what ever is put out there because the buyers have to be more responseable and make sure that what ever it is is supervised and carefully montoired. There's an old saying ' every thing isn't made for every body' .I strongly belive that;That saying is so true .Every body don't like the same thing that some one eles likes but its okay for that person but it's not okay for you because as they say everything isn't for every body and you can't fource nothing on some one.Well every thing isn't approtive  for every one we all have are limites to every thing and if you watch what kids watch and do than things want be so inapprotive for this wold . Certion books young children should not read because they have sex in them and they talk about things that a child should not even be thinking about at that age.When children read books like that they tend to think about sex and how what they read about will feel but children should not be thinking about that type of stuff that why its there parent's responseabitly to montoir what there children read because that there job as parent's to do not the person who wrote the book because they @MONTH1 think there writing to a much older group that can relate to what there talking about but then again there just speacking there mind and infourceing there freedom of speach right one of the rights that we as a people together have been fighting for .I also feel that music help's us to express are selfs so if someone feels that the music is inapprotive for there child then they need to watch what there child is listen to.Music brings out the different moods in every body.All magazines are not for every one because as we all know there are adult magazines the produce certion imagary that children should not see but you can not blame the creater only the buyer is in fault for leaving it in the wrong place after there done with it .There just people trying to make money  off things that they know that people like.",2.0,2.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
16628,6,"There were many obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there like nature, law, and of the sharp spire. Nature was proably the biggest problem because you can't control wind. The wind at the top of the Empire State Building were so strong cause ""... the back of the ship would swivel around and around..."" This would make it hard to land and unland the dirigibles. Law was also a problem. There was a law that prevented ""... airships flying too low over urban areas."" The spire at the top of the building was sharp enough to pop the dirigibles that flew over it. If a dirigible was to hit it it would pop the dirigible and kill many people below.",3.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
14896,6,"Despite Al Smith's goal of fulfilling the ""dream of aviation pioneers,"" the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One such problem that the builders faced was the stress a dirigible would add to the building itself; by mooring a large dirigible to the building by a single cable tether, the building would have to be able to withstand the stress of the dirigible itself and the wind pressure that would be transmitted throughout the entire building. Thus, the builders were forced to strengthen the frame of the Empire State Building with over @MONEY1 of modifications. In addition, dirigibles from outside the United States posed as a danger hazard due to most of them being filled with highly flamable hydrogen. When the German dirigible was destroyed by fire in Lakehurst, New Jersey, it became obvious of the risks of such an accident above a densely populated city of New York. Not only that, but the raging winds on top of the Empire State Building also posed a problem as even when tethered to the mooring mast, the rear of the ship would continually sway around the mooring mast; this proved to be a danger hazard with the citizens of New York directly below it. Furthermore, there was an established law prohibiting airships from flying to low over urban areas; this made it illegal for a dirigible to tether itself to the Empire State Building and further cemented the impossibility for the builders in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there.",4.0,,,,,4.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
12003,5,"The mood in this memoir was soft, with an exception. I say that the mood is soft because it has a nice thankful mood that's really telling everyone how grateful he is of his parents and their care. It's also saying that there was racism and segragation, so in that paragraph (which is the exception) the mood is more of a rougher mood, I say rougher as in ""a rough life,"" having to deal with racism and segragation. Back to the soft mood, @PERSON1 also mentions his friend and her putting meals on the table and having his family there regularly, this reminded me of when someone is going through a tough time and the camunity helps out by sometines cooking neals. This was nice of Alegria (@ORGANIZATION1's friend). And also, how they would house family until they were back on their feet and having the feeling that their familly would do the same. for them. And lastly, the last sentence of the last paragraph gave the sense of them took a house and turned it into a home would be comforting. These all gives off the soft sense, meaning nice and thankful",3.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
15534,6,"In the short story of ""The Mooring Mast."" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted describes three obstacles of the builders of the Empire State Building faced for the attemption to allow dirigibles to dock there. Two resons were safty. The first ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable"". A flammable ship above a ""densely populated area such as dowtown New York could result in desistiar. The second safty reson was due to ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifing due to Violent air currents."" Dirigibles ""dangling high above pedestrians on the street, was neither Practical nor safe."" The final obstacl the Empire State Building faced was Law. ""An existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" ""This Law would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the buildings or even approach the area."" The Law and to safty obstacles the builders of the Empire' State Building faced would not allow any attempts for dirigibles to dock there.",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
16437,6,"According to the excerpt, the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obsticles when attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on its mooring mast. A large dirigible moored at the top of the building would add tremendous stress to the building, and ""over sixty thousand dollars worth of modifications"" had to be made to accommodate the stress. Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, winds would cause the back of the ship to swivel around the mast. According to the article, dirigibles could be weighted down to prevent this, but it is to unsafe for pedestrians. There was also the issue with docking dirigibles that use hydrogen, a highly flammable gas. In May 6, 1937, a hydrogen dirigible was destroyed by fire and according to the excerpt, the owners of the Empire State Building realized that if the accident was at downtown New York, it would have made the densely populated area to unsafe. The mooring mast of the Empire State Building was destined to never fulfill its purpose, for there were too many obsticles for such an accomplishment to be made.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
16538,6,"While attempting to allow dirigibles to dock at the Empire State Building, the builders ran into a few obstacles. One obstacle was a previously existing law about airships flying too low over urban areas like downtown New York. Another problem the builders ran into was high winds causing the back end of the dirigible to swing in the wind, making it unsafe for passengers unloading. Unlike dirigibles moored in open fields, lead weights could not be used to weigh the back of the dirigible down because they would be dangerous for pedestrians on the street. Another safety issue was most balloons outside the United States filled dirigibles with hydrogen which is much more flammable than helium. Dirigibles filled with hydrogen could cause a disaster if it ever caught on fire. Although the idea seemed great at first, the builders at the Empire State Building realized it was not practical or safe.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
15609,6,The builders had many obstacles in their way to accomplish their Idea of docking dirigibles. One main problem was that most dirigibles around the world used hydrogen gas which is highly flammable which can make things very dangerous at such an altitude.                                                 The greatest obstacle to it's success was nature itself. The winds where the docking would occur were constantly shifting and this would make the stability of the dirigible very difficult with the back end stretching so far away from the tower. Another reason this wouldn't work was because of an already existing law against air ships flying so low over urban areas.,3.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
12380,5,"The mood the author created in memoir was that of happiness and acception. Even though Narciso Rodriguez is Cuban, as well as his family, he fit into his neighborhood, and most likely made a lot of friends very quickly. This gave a feeling of acception as well as a lot of happiness. That is the mood that the auther set on the story.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
9001,4,"@CAPS2, memories, hard @CAPS1 – All are reasons why the author conluds the story with this “When They come back, saeng vowed silently to herself in the spring, when the snow melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is buddng, Then I will take the test again. First @CAPS2 because she failed her test first so it takes some guts and will power to go back and even try it again. Also because when she remember her grandmother it upsets her so that definatly takes @CAPS2 and the human will power to do her test a second time. Next memories. I @CAPS4 she keeps wanting to do this test because she has had so many good memories with her grandmother and doesn’t want to ever forget them. But again goes back to the will power or the want to, to go back and do the test a second time. Last All the Hard @CAPS1. All the Hard @CAPS1 because She knows what her grandmother  ment to her and threw all the things or Hard @CAPS1 that her grandmother put out she saw and wants to honaor or apreciate all of the stuff that her grandmother did for her. These are the reasons that @CAPS3 @CAPS4 the author ended with that Paragraph rather than some other paragraph",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
7084,3,In the story “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” the settings affected the character because he thought he wouldn’t make it to the park because of the way things looked around him. Because of the rolling hills and snakes he didn’t think he would make it any where and thought he was going to die. That’s how the setting affected the character.,1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
9055,4,"Saeng said that when the tree she bought starts budding she will take the test over. She means that without that plant she just does not feel like taking the test. She does not because the plant was with her, her whole life. She also thinks that she can not do it, without that plant. Saeng means that since she’s had a plant like that her whole life then she thinks she needs it, but I don’t think she really needs it. I guess it just “comforts” her.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,1.0
12195,5,"The mood of the storry is happy. She discribes how lucky she is to have parents like her own, and be Cuban. She loves the music, the food, and the culture. She's glad her parent were careing and helped people.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
9962,4,"He ended the paragraph like that because he @MONTH1 want you to read on, or it could be that he is showing you the comparison between the flower and Saeng. ""When they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when. the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again, ""The quote is showing the flower can fight through the winter and come back. Saeng failed the test once and is now going back to retake the test. Which shows that they both have modivation and the integrity to come back.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
12125,5,"In this memoir, Narciso Rodriguez creates a very loving and carring mood.                                                         Throughout the memoir, Rodriguez can't stress enough how much love, greatfulness, and respect @CAPS1 has towards his parents. For example in paragraph @NUM1, Narciso Rodriguez says ""I will always be greatful for their love and sacrifice"", meaning the sacrifices parents made for their children. @CAPS1 also says ""I've often told them of my admiration for their strength and perseference... but, in reality, there is no way to express my gratitude for their spirit and generosity..."" @CAPS1 cares about the lessons his parents taught him so much, that @CAPS1 bases his life on them and will never forget them. But perhaps the most important thing Rodriguez says in this memoir is in paragraph @NUM2, when @CAPS1 says ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" This somes up everything his parents taught and sacrificed for him. giving this simple sentence a great meaning.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
144,1,"Dear local Newspaper, In my opinion computers are a help to our plant. The new technology makes life easier to handle. The computer are a help because it teaches hand-eye coordination. You can talk to people, and it is a new way to be entertained. Computers can teache hand-eye coordination because of typing. Whether someone knows it or not when you are typing fast it is help you hands. Also the fact you that if your typing without making is also helping because it makes your hand easier to move. The typing is giving your hand lots of exersise because your hands are moving all over the place. The more you move them the more excersise you can get. Computers can really help hand-eye coordination alot. Computers can also help by talking to people. To talk to people far away is better to talk to on the computer because if you have a webcam you can see each other. You are able to talk to people from different countries. Also computers are able to be used in business meetings when a business has to talk with another from different locations. Like if part of the business is doing a project in hong kong, then the boss can set up a meeting to see how it is going. Another way to use computers to talk to people is to speak with a person you are not able to see in person. Like if a oerson is in the hospital but you're not able to go, then you can talk while seeing each other throw the computer. Computers are a great way to use in communication. Computer are also a new way to get entertained. They can entertain you because there is games that you can play. There are games that come with the computers and a lot of games on the internet. Other they being bored all the time you can play thousands of game with just a click on a mouse. Also to not be bored you can watch videos like youtube. You can listen te musicor watch comedy videos. Video also show a way do express what you feel and sat it in comedy, horror, or sad videos. Also for teenagers there is ways to talk to their friends like facebook. On the website you can talk with anyone on your friends list. In the end computer can help kids, adults, or teenagers. With just a clicking your mouse you can find a new powerful way of technology. And be able to got better hand-eye coordination talk to people and get entertained. So go get yourself a computer and amazed!",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
15065,6,"In The Mooring Mast builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles to attempt to allow dirigibles to dock there. The obstacles the builders faced were that they realized hydrogen was very flammable. An example from the excerpt is a German dirigible was caught on fire, the builders then thought how much worse it would of been over a densely populated area. Another obstacle was the use of the mooring mast. The winds at the top of the building were harsh, and made it hard for landing. It was also a law that airships could not fly low over urban areas. The builders of the Empire State Building then decided not to use the mooring mast for dirigibles.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
1557,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, @CAPS1 tired, lazy people sitting on their computer and wasting their life bacause of it. The issue to with is do you think that people are spending to much time on the computer or not. I strongly believe that people are spending to much time on the computer. And, here are @CAPS2 reasons why, people are spending less time exercising, people not enjoying nature, and less time interacting with family and friends. Without a doubt you probably know that exercising is at least somewhat helpful to life, @CAPS4 if people are sitting home @NUM1 on the computer with no exercise, it is going to cause people to gain an excess amount of wait. Because the more they just sit around. And do nothing except the computer. The more they're going to be and the more lazy they're going to be. So they're not going to want to do anything and really it's just a waist of life. And, in some cases it can cause depression. Just ask a local resident who says "" @CAPS2 mom used to be on the computer all the time and did nothing with her life,"" and @CAPS3 she became depressed. And, soon after, killed herself."" @CAPS3 more and more people are going to become like. I know that a lot of people like to be outside when its a nice sunny day. @CAPS4 @CAPS1 somebody on that day in a room, with their eyes to the computer screen. Because they cant think of anything else to do with their lives. @CAPS4 @CAPS1 if that was someone you loved. Doing that with their life. I'm pretty sure you would try to do something to help them get off that path. Just ask another local resident @PERSON1 who says, ""I remember coming home everyday, and there was @CAPS2 mom, no shades up, pitch block, it was like a dark cave, and she would sit there for hours on the computer wasting her life, and I remember asking her how long has it been since you've gone outside, she answered, its been almost two months."" @CAPS4 I know from @CAPS2 family that there was a family member of mine who was a ""computer junkie"" And, I remember at a family get together @CAPS2 aunt was the only one who could never come. Because she was to busy on the computer. And, she",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
12698,5,"The mood is a mixture of things, it's really hard to say withe all the emotions the author throws around. But however the strongest feeling is unity, and family.I'm Not sure family can be called an emotion, but it is I think something that can be described by several. One of course is unity, or as he says it, ""great solidarity and friendship""it's rather sweet how he charectorizes family as something as the bonds you make withe people in contrast to other cultures where family is from blood ties and family s always first. So in a way I think his way of thinking comes from his culture.But also he puts in a bit of sadness but overall seems to be extremely thankful for what he has. As they say ""happiness is nothing without appreciating it"" and as he says ""I learned the real defnetion of family"" so apparently he knows real happiness",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
7200,3,"The features of the setting around the cyclist affected him to the point of exauhstion and dehydration. The cycllist being exauhsted and dehydrated,or tired and thirsty, was beging to wear as the setting went from being flat to many ups and downs. The cyclist exlained the change by saying, “flat road was replaced by short rolling hills”(Kurmaskie @NUM1). The cyclist’s idea presented here is that he was to find new challenges when riding the hill of this californian desert rollar coaster. His water supply was thinning from the heat and the hills were tiring him beyond reason. All this cyclist could hope for was the blessing of a water refill and the shade of a puffy cloud.",1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
7517,3,The features of the setting affects the cyclist in manyway. The hills are to long. Every town is fear appert and the rodes are rought. The heat also affectes him. He is affected health wise.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
4393,2,"In this world you never know what someone might writing. There're many materials in this world that I think aren't appropiate for someone to be reading, watching or listenning, ect.  You @MONTH1 be thinking that anyone makes his/her own decision of what they read, watch, listen.  Well, I do agree with that, but I do believe that some materials aren't rate it properly to age.  I do think that some materials should be banned from people under age, some from kids, and some from everyone.      You @MONTH1 be thinking that all of this is wrong and that there is nothing wrong with books, music, movies, ect., but in my opinion some materials are just offensive and not proper. I seen so many materials that I think are not proper for people under age to been looking at. In some movies, for example, the rating is just not right because some movies have so much violence or language.  You might not think it's that big of a deal, of course, but I do. In my opinion, some materials are not too low in rating, and should not be for people under age.     It's not surprising to me that kids are now yelling, hitting, and or acting like a rebels to their parents. Many of this things kids get it from books, music, movies, ect. This is many of the reasons some materials should be banned from kids.  You ask yourself why? Well, first of all, kids are just learnning and they do everything they watch, see, or listen. I mean now kids don't even think about what their about to do.  They just do, they don't care, they think it's okay. I think that parents should be alert to offensive materials in the shelves, and should say something about it so they banned them.     Why banned some materials from everyone?  Well, first of all, why do we even want to watch, see, or listen to things that are not right? You @MONTH1 be thinking that we just do it for fun and that it's enjoyable and nothing wrong with it. Well, you @MONTH1 be right but also wrong.  I certainly do agree with you, we all watched things for fun and to enjoy them, but some things are just too out of this world for us. Why do people do crazy things now in these day? In my opinion, I think is because they mostly get it from books, music, movies, ect.  I think that if a book shows very offensive things they should be banned from everyone no matter what. It's the right thing to do.     If you don't want to see this world get more out of control than it already is. Well, we need to do something about all these materials that are offensive and banned them for good.  We certainly don't want to see our kids yelling, hitting, or and actting like rebels to us. We don't want some crazy person coming to our hosue and do crazy things to us just because that's what they learn from those materials they had on the shelves.  It's come to me that some materials should be banned from people under age, from kids, and some from everyone",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
13235,5,The mood of the memoir is very appreciative. The author is appreciative for his culture and Cuban descent. He shows that his culinary Skills improved because of the phase change from a house to a home. His parents are greatful to have a great designer learn and egknowloge @CAPS1 of the Cuban Skills he had learned just from the mood of his life as a child.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
1676,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 glad to see that you have a debate if computers are good or bad for human society. Well I would like to state my opinion if that is good with you. In my letter @CAPS2 going to tell the bad stuff about computer and why there not good for society. Well I dont think computer are good for society because you dont work-out as much as you use to. I can say that a fact because I use to work-out then a computer games came out and I spent @NUM1 hours a day playing it I had no time to spend with my family, I had no outside commaction it was like it topic over my life. Plus I know a lot people who feel the same way. The computer is like a addiction. I say this because once you hit the power button you cant get off. All the commution website are hard to get off because there starting to put games on so you wont log off as fast. THe have different website that play video of things that are funny. Like once you find it you click and a of things so when you look you on same thing else. Dont get me wrong you can see and talk to family members you dont see but you dont have ime to go to the park and have fun and enjoy nature it like you looked up. I dont think we should get rede of computers but we should spend least tine as we do know. I know people are going to be upset by waht I say but we as a society are addicted to the computer. Every were you look theres a computer. I going to leave on one not would you pick computers or life? ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
9858,4,"The author ends the story this way because by the time winter ends she will have adapted to her new society, just like the hibiscus.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
12902,5,He was happy to be educated like he is and he was happy to be Cuban and even though his parents didn't have much he was still proud of his family because is not where you live or in what conditions is. If you are from an honest family and if they're with you in the hard moments.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
9939,4,The importance as to why the author ended this story like this was to show readers the importance of the plant. It seems that because the author is not in her native country that she doesn’t have a lot around in this new place that can comfort her. The author being able to find a hibiscus in a place she thought she wouldn’t be able to gives her strength to do anything that she can. It is possible that whatever the challenge @MONTH1 be that the author is trying to get by the fact that she has some support from the plant gives her the achievement and confidence to complete her task,2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
4718,2,"If I found a book that I thought was innapropiate for others to read, I would ask the librarian to check into to see what she thinks about the book(s). If she believed they were offensive, then she could remove the book(s) without any questions being asked. If she was in the middle on a book and didn't know whether she should remove, she could take a vote or tally on that book and then go from there to see if it did needed removed. The only way I would find a book to be offensive is if it had pictures that were not appropiate for people to look at and it also depends on how old you are. Another offensive object would be too many words that involved foul language and or racism.      If i found a movie that was offensive, I would just ask that it would be moved to a place that only mature adults should watch or some teenagers. My opinion can't remove an object from its place unless there were multiple complaints about the book or movie and ect. Some movies and books should be removed from shelves because younger kids get a hold of these movies ans watch them and then go out into the real world and do these bad actions that was on the film. For example, if the movie/book was about drugs, then some kids would think it was alright for them to do because they  saw it on tv. Some kids even get killed because they go out and try these dumb ideas they got from the book and or movie. But the parents also play a role by letting their kid watch these, I think if they would watch what their children do, then some of this won't happen.      Music is another big thing that is becoming more and more out of control with offensive subjects. There is more foul language in music as it progresses. @NUM1 years ago, it wasn't that bad, but it's getting worse. I think some music should be banned because of the violence and sexual content it describes on the music. Some of the music I listen to, I just want to run it over with my vehicle because the whole song was about drugs, sexual content and or violence. I don't even know why an artist would want to write a song about bad content because they know younger people will hear it. I think offensive music has an effect on the violence that actually occurs in today's society because there might be some racism. I'm not trying to blame the artists or say it their fault, but I think they should think twice about their songs before they release it so everyone can listen to it.     Everyone is entitled to their own opinion, but some things should not be on the shelves for our kids and children to listen to and or watch. I think there will be something done, but it will take time",4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
13007,5,"The mood set by the author is very solemn. He started by telling the scenery he lived in during a time of segregation. That was hard because he was Cuban. He didn't have a lot of money, and lived in an apartment. His life was like a somewhat below avereage life today.Towards the middle the memoir was still serious but happier in a sense. It was happier because we Know that he could have more life opportunities in @LOCATION1. He grew up and actually met people and made friends. Also he had a caring family that did what they could to make his life easier for him. He made the memoir and nice and passionate.The moods started off a bit shaky and very serious. Then he got into a happier mood by telling how his parent and family were good to him. It ended in the same mood started in the middle of the passage, happy.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
6017,3,The setting in the story changes many times. It starts in an area with rivers and pine trees. Then the cyclist arrives ant a town. After that he is pounded by the hot sun and along hilly road. With not much water left the cyclist uses all the energy he had to get to a town where he could get something to drink. The setting was what made the cyclists journey a hard one.,1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
9101,4,In the short story “Winter hibiscus” The author concludes the story with this paragraph because the author felt as thought Saeng would be ready to take thee test at that particular time.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
15137,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock their. An obstacle dealt with if the dirigibles were fit to dock in the Empire State Building. Another obstacle dealt with the mast. These obstacles made this construction a failure such as the author who says, ""The mooring mast of the Empire State Building was destined to never fulfill its purpose, for reasons that should have been apparent before it was ever constructed"" in @CAPS1 thirteen.First of, @CAPS1 five states the dirigibles were actually enormous steel-framed balloons, with envelopes of cotton fabric filled with hydrogen and helium to make some lighter in the air."" @CAPS1 six states that, ""Some were as long as one thousand feet."" @CAPS2 how may a blimp of that size ever managed to land on the Empire State Building. Also @CAPS1 nine says ""A thousand foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame."" This @CAPS1 also states that ""The stress the dirigibles load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation, which was nearly eleven hundred feet below.""These were just a few of the obstacles the builders had to face. The fate of the mast such as in @CAPS1 @NUM1 says ""was neither practical nor safe."" The architects were blind to the potential problems of the mast. In the end the mast was a great attempt, but indeed a failure.",3.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
1744,1,"Dear Local newspaper, @CAPS1 you have a computer at home you enjoy? Computers are a big thing now in life, they help with many things. Such as staying organized, studies, and even entertainment. These are the three topics I will focus on, because I @CAPS1 believe that computers are useful and people use them a help to make life a lot more easy. Let me start by saying: ""I am a man who enjoys computers, as a way to talk to friends, listen and search music, watch videos on youtube, get school work done, and much more! Although, on main point is it helps me stay orginized. I can make many folders to store my work in, rather then losing or spilling something on the paper if I wrote it out. I can have my music, homework, projects, does work, videos, pictures, and much more saved and orginized so I know where it is everytime I go to find it. There can be no more, ""my dog ate my homework"" excuse. Moving on to the next topic. As I mentioned you can save work onto your computer, you can add without earasing as well, the work becomes neat and perfect everytime. So when you teacher is grading on neatness no worry. You can also look up information on any topic you are working on in class witch alows you to get. More information, the better the grade. Spelling is not a factor now, because your computer tells you when a word is spelt wrong. It even gives you suggestions on how to spell the word by underlining it with a red squigle line. This really helps because a lot of people have hard times with spelling. You can even get @CAPS2 to play a book you are reading, witch helps you learn new words that you @MONTH1 not have knew how to sound out. Teachers can even post notes on school websites of homework, when projects are @CAPS1, ext. No more, ""I didn't know/remember what was homework/project due. Lastly, entertainment is the biggest thing with computers. People go on every day uploading videos, pictures, blogs, and just about what ever they want. Games are played on computers by younger kids, just learning, while older kids are enjoying playing maze, driving, shooting, adventure, and much more types of games. Just about everyone using a computer knows of some chat website in witch they use to communicate with any one. Myspace, facebook, twitter, and so much more are used by people to talk, express how they feel to everyone/to just let it out), show love to someone, send birthday wishes, to @CAPS1 what ever. Those are endless possibilities at entertainment on a computer. Without a dobt, no more, ""I'm bored"". @CAPS1 you use your computer to @CAPS1 anything like this? If so you must enjoy it. People use computer for every thing from work to expressing feelings. Now what side are you at?",5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
15106,6,"In the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, describes complicated obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One of the obstacles was competition. ""It was planned as the world's tallest building taller even than the new Chrysler Building,"" (@CAPS1 1). ""Al Smith realized that he was close to losing the title of world's tallest building"" (@CAPS1 @NUM1). There was a competition as to had the tallest building between the Empire State Building and the Chrysler Building. Another obstacle, was the safety and dirigibles. ""when the German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by fire in lakehurts, New Jersey, The owners of the Empire State Building realized how much worse that accident could have been if it had taken place above a densely populate area such as down town New York."" (@CAPS1 @NUM2). The owner didn't want to risk a accident to cost people's life it would have been bad rep for them. The obstacles that the builders went through was a positive thing, it made them @CAPS2 and open their eyes.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
13091,5,The @CAPS1 @CAPS2 a lot of his @CAPS3 in the story. The @CAPS1 creates a mood that makes you think about your self and your family. He talks about his family and when he was a boy and were he grew up. The @CAPS1 also spoke about his parents and there life. He also talkes about how he and his parents lived in a neighborhood with imigrints. The @CAPS1 talks about how it is hard for him and  his parents to leave without the rest of there family. The @CAPS1 also talkes about how he loves music and how he loves his parents as well. His parents helped him and gave him hope. He also uses music to simbolize his life. Now he is a successfull fashion designer.,1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
9009,4,"The author concludes the story with the last paragraph. The author chose because the sentence informs you Saeng will take the test agin. In paragraph @NUM1 Saeng tell’s her mother she faild the test. So by the time spring comes around the hibiscus will start budding and Saeng will retake the test. Also the geese left the home temporally because of snow. So she sort of compares herself to the geese because she missis her home. The geese will return when the time is right, that is what the author concludes in the story’s paragraph.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
16313,6,I think the builders main problem they faced was making sure people would be able to safely get off the dirigibles and onto the actual building.They would also need to make sure that the blimp wouldn't burst into flames if it came close or crashed into the Empire State Building.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
10590,4,"I believe that the Author ended the story with this paragraph, because I think it is showing that Saeng isn’t a quiter. Saeng can’t wait until the Hibiscus comes back. When the Hibiscus comes back she’ll retake the test and show her mother that she can do it.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
15629,6,"In The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the architect and builders have to overcome very big obstacles while trying to make this plan of docking dirigibles work. ""The architects could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof. A thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of this building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame."" With this enormous dirigible in the air and the wind blowing around would hurt the buildings structure."" The stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation, which was nearly eleven hundred feet below."" With all of the wind the dirigible would be tugging back and forth on the building. ""The steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate this new situation. Over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications had to be made to the building's framework."" @CAPS1 to build a docking station the architects would have to transform the whole construction of the building.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
4681,2,"I personally do not think that books or magazines and such with offensive things about them shouldn't be removed because they give people something to read. Most people don't want to read @CAPS1 or a novel. Some people want to read about crimes, mysterys, and action. There are alot of good movies out there but some of them I can agree with are too offensive to others. I gurantee that movies with comedy in them will be put down about what is being said. For example: @CAPS2 @CAPS3 to some people is very offensive. The only reason the person would think that the movie is offensive is because they are stubborn people that don't have a life.     I can believe that there are literature materials that are offensive to others, but the person that criticizes others doesn't think that they are offensive to the people that read the books that offened the person that is being offended. Books about war to some people are too graffic. But those books about war are probably books about history. I have only started noticing the people that are trying to get rid of those books that they don't like. But back in the @DATE1's people didn't care about what was in a library. They just want something to read. I say leave the librarys alone!",2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
146,1,Dear local newspaper I think that usieng computers help people becuse if we did not have computers we would not now ehey thing about eneyone or eneything like all of the @CAPS1 I would not now eneything about them but with computers I know alot about them and there lives like @CAPS2 @CAPS3 @CAPS4 got shot in the back of the head and. @CAPS4 got shot to and I know alot about the @ORGANIZATION1 there white people that to fear in to black people and the same with the wars like world @NUM1 and world @NUM2 and the @CAPS5 and @PERSON1 and the @CAPS6 war there was like plain spy palin flying across @LOCATION1 and they shot him down becuse we were trying to see if thay had eney nuculer bombs offer there. And the same with google and yahoo with google you can type in eneything and you will get a answer and most liked a corect answer yahoo and google is great for some worke and products end studying becuse you then you do to and that I think that computer are good.,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
16104,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building had great plans to allow dirigibles, also known as blimps, to dock there. Although they kept their expectations high, they faced many obstacles while trying to make this happen. The first problem they ran into was the fact that the steel frame of the building would have to be strengthened due to the stress of the dirigible's load. So, the architects had to make changes to the building's skeleton. Safety was also an issue because hydrogen made the blimps flammable, which could cause a destruction by fire. There was also an existing law stating ""airships can't fly to low over urban areas."" @CAPS1, dirigibles wouldn't be allowed to tie up to the building, let alone even reach that area. ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself."" Due to heavy winds, the dirigibles would swivel around too much, and the area was not open enough to weigh down the back with lead weights. So, the architects of the Empire State Building faced too many obstacles while attempting to allow dirigibles to successfully dock there.",4.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
12067,5,"The author was @CAPS2 likely describing his happy @CAPS1. Because in the memair it was talking about how he loved his home and his parents Cooking and music. He was @CAPS2 grateful for his parents caring and selflessness. He liked how his home was a community for Spanish, cuban, and italian immagrants. He thought back to his memorable birthdays and feasts and it made him happy. This is my summary of Narciso Rodriguez's mood of the story.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
10338,4,The author ends the story this way for a few reasons. First it shows that she is starting to like this new life. Also it is an ending that is open. It shows her liking her new life for a few reasons. “She realized that many of the things that she had thought strange before had become… almost familiar now” that is when she starts to see that her new life in the @LOCATION1 is not so bad. This is about the geese and is referred back to when she vows to take the test. Also it shows how the hibiscus she just planted is already important to her. The second thing it does is dreams about future conclusions. The reader does not know if she will pass the test next time but assumes that she will because of the way she vows it. That is why the author ends this story the way they did. To show how she feels in her new life and leave an opening for people to draw conclusions.,3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
13467,5,"The mood is obvesoly love, and greatfulness. ""(And for which I am exernally greatful)."" The boy is young so he doesn't quite get how big that move for them was. ""In the United States, they had to start their lives over entirely."" This means leaving family, friends, @CAPS1 new jobs, a house to put over his head, and leaving their home to give a great one for their son. He is thankful that his parents were still able to keep his cuban life alive. They didn't forget where they came from.Now I think about it one of his moods could be sad because he was the reason for all that happend. What happen if he was never born he would ever never found out what family means. That is why in this memoir has some greatfulness, some love, and that little bit of sadness.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
4459,2,"Today, we live in a world where there are many different political, religious and personal views; and with time, these views are only going to become more varied and more wide spread. Unfortunately, it is not always easy to cater to every single persons individual takes on the world. When it comes to libraries, it is even harder to have different books for all the different opinions that will not offend people with other opinions.    Let's take @LOCATION1 for example. There are many different races and people with different religions living here. This is a place that has already been through a @CAPS1 @CAPS2 and has fought against racism and slavery. Although these are things that our country has overcome, there are still going to be arguments and disagreements over these problems. When there are different opinions, there are always going to be different books out there about the same topic from multiple points of view. As the readers of these books we need to know what point of view this is coming from and not choose a book that goes against our personal beliefs. This is where the offensiveness comes from. We live with many different people and we need to understand that not everyone is going to have the same views on life that we do.      When I was in eighth grade, I was @CAPS6 @ORGANIZATION1 with some friends. One of them was pulling her eyes back (like someone would do if they were imitating an @CAPS3 person) because they were itchy. A very pregnant @CAPS3 @CAPS5 woman walked in and took offense to my friends eye movements. She yelled @CAPS6 us and said, 'I would have thought your parents raised you better than that.' @CAPS6 first, we did not understand what this woman was talking about until we realized that our friend had been pulling her eyes back. This showed us that different people can take offense to different things because of their heritage.     There is nothing we can do about the expanding cultures in our country. We cannot change the views of certain people in order to match those of our own beliefs nor can we change the fact that all the different people are going to voice their opinions and view them as 'right'. However, we can change the way that we view these people. We need to understand that there is no 'right' when you are dealing with multiple opinions. @CAPS6 this point we need to embrace everyone else for who they are and what they believe because there is nothing we can do to change those beliefs.     So next time you pick up a book @CAPS6 the library, read the summary and check to see that the author agrees with you before you take the book home or there are going to be disagreements in your views. If you get a book and you don't agree with it or if you are offended by it, there is no one to be mad @CAPS6 but yourself for not checking to see the author's stance on the topic before you started reading it",4.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,22.0
10353,4,The reason why this author includes this story with this paragraph is because it is still talking about saeng and that is more like her and that she has a mind like a butterflye that was trapped a burst out with this open the Saeng and her mom had but a tennage girl me and saeng we kind relate to the same thing.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
15422,6,"The problems the builders had in attempting to build the Empire State Building were first of all, the dirigible would have to be tied to the mast and the single cable tether would ""stress the buildings frame."" In paragraph @NUM1, the author says that the wind pressure and the weight of the dirigible could not be supported by the current foundation and so the frame would have to be made stronger and changed. The final problem was when ""Columbia"" delivered newspaper to the Empire State building. The mooring equipment was not installed because of previous problems with the design, laws and common sense used when making this building. The rest of the problems had to do with the obliviousness of reality due to the actual effectivness of the building.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
324,1,"I think computer have shaped @LOCATION1 to what it is today. Computer help people learn, give people a passtime, and all of that can be managed in a certain space of time so you still have time to go outside. Computers help everyone learn. It makes things easier by typing up essays because you could type it faster and its eaiser to make changes. Also, its cheaper to buy a computer and go on the internet and look up foreign countries then acually going there. Another example, is that a computer teachees you hand-eye coordination from typing and using the mouse. Finally, computers can teach you life lessons by reading articles another person wrote. Computers give bored people passtimes. One example, is that you can play computer games during rainy days or when you can't go outside. Also, you can talk to friends through facebook or aim. Another example, is that you can talk to distant family in another country by using programs such as skype. Finally, you can order stuff online instead of wasting gas and going to the store and the things you might order you can play with outside. A lot of people say computers keep kids inside don't know that their are ways to prevent this. One example is you can use shut-off timers that keep anyone from going onto the computer for to long. Also, many people learn how to manage their time on the computer. Another example, is that parents can make rules that their children aren't allowed to play games on the computer on certain days and/or times. Finally, you can keep the computers in the family room so that children don't play with it all night in their room. Those are just some of the many reasons why computer help @CAPS1. They help us learn, pass the time, and it can all be manage during a certain amount of time. Now reading this I hope you believe that computers benefit society.",5.0,5.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
10299,4,"The author concludes this paragraph to the story because, seasons change, plant don’t most likely grow during winter time. So you learn a lesson and take it as it is and a wait until the next time you learn basically the same lesson, when the right time comes.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
12754,5,The mood is good and happy. In this artical the mood is peaceful and positive. It's a secsesful mood also great-full because @PERSON1 is greatful for everything.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
12298,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is one that is used in lots of memoirs because they are like thing's: someone will never forget like the author said ""my parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their rich culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today (and for which I am eternally gratefull). Passionate cuban music (which I adore to this day) filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen. That's all stuff that he will never forget.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
3635,2,"Should materials in libraries be censored? No, i dont think that stuff in libraries should be censored or taken off the shelf. If something is offensive to someone then that person doesnt need to look at that material. People should have the right to get whatever they want from the library and if someone doesnl't like the materials they have then thats too bad.     What if kids get bad stuff off the shelf ? If a kid were to get something bad or innapropriate for themselevs the libraries wont let them check it out so it is fine, and the parents should be watching the kids get.     I go to the library all the time and I have never seen anything thing that is innapropriate and i don't know anyone who has ever told me they have found something offensive in a library, because I think the libraries know what people want and what people dont want there. and it's not right to take something off the shelfs if a few people dont like it because im sure other people like it. But if there is something very offensive that everbody thinks is bad than you can remove but you can't remove material every single time someone complains it is offensive because then there probally wouldn't be anything left in the library.     So I dont think anything should be removed from shelves just because some people find it offensive because im sure just as many people don't find it offensive and it would be wrong to take it from those people.",3.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
12079,5,"Narciso Rodriguez creates a truely original mood in the excerpt. I would say he puts a kind of grateful mood in the excerpt. He is consteintly stating how grateful he is toward his parents for their selflessness, and courage. One example of Narciso creating a grateful mood is when he says: ""I will always be grateful for their love and sacrifice. I've often told them that what they did was a much more courageous thing and I could have ever done."" This quote shows how much gratitude Narciso actually has for his parents. Another example where Narciso shows tremendous gratitude is when he says: ""they came, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends, and careers in the country they love."" In this quotation, Rodriguez shows that he knows what it took to come here, he knows the loses that his parents went through, and for that he is truely grateful.",4.0,,,,,4.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
6727,3,"In the essay “Rough Road Ahead” the setting is able to affect the cyclists emotions and moods in both positive and negative ways. As the author travels through the desert he is already upset because it is so hot and water is scarce showing how the terrain is a negative influence. Another example would be when the author first sees the old water pump and he is relieved showing positive influence but the pump oozes a shine like substance he referrs to as tasting like “battery acid” changing his mood for the worst. Finally, the pebbles he puts in his math show is desperation and willingness to try anything to survive show a new posotive outlook on the desert until a pump “lodges are in his thro at” making yet another negative influence. All of these feature lead him on his way to “Gary and will fish camp” and grounded an extra boost on his journey through the desert.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9898,4,"I think the author concludes the story with this paragraph because new beginnings.What I mean by this is,the hibiscus represents new beginnings.She says “When the hibiscus is budding ,then I will take the test again “.This will be a new start for her  .The plant  blooming makes her happy and reminds her of her grandmother.She’s saying by the time the spring comes around she  would be ready for a  new obstacle as so for the hibiscus plant.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
9719,4,"After they come Saeng  was  silently  to herself , In the spring , when the snows melt  and  the geese return and  the hibiscus  is Saeng  then  I am  take that test again.  She  say this sentence she is herself back to home .She  thinks  it familiar to Saeng  was. She  is herself  how  quiet it vowed  to  so  every season . Her live is very quiet and leavy . She feels  as  of place .  Due to failing her driving test things herself  was thing for her to united state was so different from vietnam and she expresses  her  feelings  will she talk a about this something flower.   ",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
6586,3,"When the biker listened to the old folks he had confidence. He biked to the first town but it was like a “ghost town.” A town is a town. soon after that, he did not see anything. No cars, buildings, or anything. He was getting sad and dehydrated. The old men swore there was a town coming up so he put his trust and confidence in him once again. He saw a building  coming up, but it was just an old wore down factory. He thought he was let down. He was sure he was going to die, right there right now. He than saw a siga for a fish comp! He was overjoyed! The place was real to! He thought of them as his savior! The settings effect the cyclist tremendously.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
16024,6,"Many problems faced the construction workers of the Empire State building, @CAPS1 in allowing dirigibles to dock. To begin, construction for dirigibles on the Empire State building was dangerouse. Dirigibles couldn't do many basic things to dock at the building. For example ""dirigibles could not moor at the Empire State Building."" (@CAPS2 @NUM1) Mooring was impossible because it was against ""an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" (@CAPS2 @NUM1) This made it illegal for a ship to tie to the Empire State Building. Also, the greatest threat to dirigibles was nature. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" (@CAPS2 @NUM3) Because of this and be fact that construction on such a high building at the time was unpractable, dirigibles never touched the Empire State building. So to close, the difficulty of building dirigible landing gear and of landing dirigibles ultimately ened the Empire State Building docks.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
4206,2,"Dear Newspaper @CAPS1,      I believe that the country should take off all the books, movies, magazines, and music that has any kind of offensive cover, or any offensive mind grabbing, sexal contact in any of the  story, music, etc. Children don't need to be seeing that stuff just sitten around, the radio for example, the music that they put on like rap, hip-hop with all the cusin and singing about mony, cars, girls, and sex. Kids don't need to be hearing that stuff on the radio, and adalt books that are sitten around in @ORGANIZATION1 ready to be read by adalts, not children.The children need to know about all the sexual conflict some day just not when there @NUM1 or @NUM2 years old looking at pornograghic magazines, and movies. So I hope you keep this in mind get that stuff off the streets and not into childrens hands.",3.0,2.0,1.0,2.0,1.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
10287,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph because he or she feels like the audience should know what saeng is feeling. This paragraph ending shows that saeng will keep trying every spring to grow back her flowers and this shows that Saeng has a lot of potential to make her vowe top herself successful.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
12058,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is that it is lave. An example from the text says ""My mother and father had come to this country with such courage, without any knowledge of the language or the culture. They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families friends, and careers in the country they loved ."" @CAPS1 example from the text says ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice. I've often told them that what they did was a much more courageous thing than I could have ever done. I've often told them my admiration for the strength and perseverance, and I've thanked them repeatedly. But, in reality, there is no way to express my gratitude for the spirit of generosity impressed upon me at such an early age and the demonstration of how important family and friends are."" In conclusion because of his parents love for him they sacrificed alot, so he could have a happy and good life. ",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
3371,2,"When one person is giving a right to do something, then everyone else should have the right to do the same thing. But every so often, you have someone that abuses their rights to something.          I belive that all books, music, movies, magazines, and everything else has a right on a library shelf. And they shouldn't be romoved if they are found offensive because in almost every book someone reads, there will be some kind of offence in it.          I also belive that all books, music, movies, magazines, and everything else has a pupose to it. And if the purpose is good enough for it to be published than, it should have a good message worth delivering to people, even if it is a little offensive.     I've read a few books, watched a few movies, and heard a few songs that were offensive even to me in some way. But, considering that there was more of a purpose to it, and the purpose being a good message, I liked the few movie and songs that most people would say its 'junk'. I don't have alot of experiences because there isn't a lot that I can say is offensive, but the few songs, movies that are offensive to even me, I belive that there was some kind of good message there.     I personally think that no one should have a right to take a book, a peice of music, a magazine, or anything else off a library shelf. Because everything has some kind of purpose to it, and has some kind of message in it for each and every person to discover",2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
426,1,"Dear, @CAPS1 of the @ORGANIZATION1 @CAPS2 has come to my concern that many people are debating on whether computers benefit our society or not. Some people think computers are the lives of many people, but I have to disagree with those who say that. I think that computers benefits our society in there ways, they bring people together, they offer many websites to research a topic, and they let people shop at home. One way that computers help us is that they bring people together by using the internet. Many families do not live close to other relatives, making hard to see them. But with the internet, people can use social networking sites such as facebook or myspace to keep in touch with one another. Distant relatives can talk and share picture with one another to keep in touch. Also, the internet can help bring couple together and potentially lead to marriages. How @MONTH1 times have you seen those @CAPS3 harmony commercial that claim to have brought two singles together to make a happy couple? Another way that computers help today's society is that they offer many places to conduct research on a certain topic. There are so many search engines on the internet that lead you to numerous websites to help you find out what you need to know. Also, researching a topic on the computer is so much easier compared to going to the library and reading books. When using books, to research a topic, you need to find the right book, read the whole thing or at least most of @CAPS2, and find what you're looking for. But with the internet, you just type in what you're looking for, click, and go. Lastly, computers let you shop online and lead to a better shopping experience. By shopping online, you skip the long lines at retail stores which means less time walking to get your product. For example, many people rush to stores early in the @TIME1 for huge sales on ""@CAPS4 @DATE1."" A person could be left waiting in line for hours to get a product. Why wait outside for so long when you could just buy the product in the comfort of your own home and get the product delivered right to your house? Also, many websites offer special deals for shopping online so you can even money. In conclusion, I think that computers benefit our society in three ways, they bring people together, they offer many websites to research a topic, and they let people shop at home. A world without computers would be so much different than the world we live in today.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
13365,5,"The mood created by Narciso Rodriguez in the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" is greatfulness.Throughout the memoir, the mood created is greatfulness. There are many quotes in the memoir that support the mood created. One quote is ""I will always be greatful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" @CAPS1's greatful for his parents giving him a better life in @LOCATION1 and raising him up to be a good guy.",1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
13629,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"", the mood created by the author was loving, caring, and appreciative. loving is what they did most because they basicly called everyone thier family. For example in paragraph @NUM1 it says that ""My parents always kept thier arms and thier door open to the many people we call family, knowing that they would do the same for us"". Another mood was caring, because they wanted thier children to have a better life. A example is ""My mother and father had to come to this country with such courage, to give thier children a better life, leaving thier friends, families, and career in the country they loved"". This shows they care about thier kids. One last mood is appreciative. ""The barriers to work were strong and high, my parents had to accept that they both might not be able to find the Jobs they deserve, they had to start thier life over. These are the moods that was created by the author.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
10622,4,I think the author concludes the story with that saying because it shows that she is adappting to the new place. It @CAPS1 shows that she isent going to give up. Just like the geese don’t give up flying back and forth ever winter and spring. ,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
13348,5,"In the memoir, ""Narciso Rodriguez"" the @CAPS1 create a mood in this memoir. ""Growing up in this environment instilled im me sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being blood related."" That mean people that weren't blood related, he still constiders them an family. He also says ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" That mean that evan though it wasn't a nice house it was still his home and he loved it. The mood of this memoir is love and he will never forget it. Thats the kind of mood in this memoir.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
1292,1,"Dear local newspaper, I have some arguments to tell you how computers aren't all bad. One you can use them to get information for a project, talk to your friends, or learn about something you have never known before. My first argument is that most people use there computer to get information for a project they have to do for class. For example, they could need information for a country like @LOCATION2, @LOCATION3, @LOCATION1. There are many way you can get this information. So if you didn't have a computer where could you get all this information. If you get it from a it might not have what you are looking for your project. Had the computer here a bigger range of knowledge then a have. My second example, is you can talk to your friends you haven't seen or talked to in a long time. There are many ways you can do this On @CAPS1, @CAPS2, twitter, yahoo. You could always because it is always better to make new friends. Even better to a family member. I know it is alot better to talk to a family because they already know you. Finally, it is always better out something you never knew before or something you have been wondering about. But you could always go on google, ask or wikipedia. They can all help you you have been looking for. But that doesn't mean you can't find it in a book either. They are chalk full of answer and ideas that can help you. My conclusion, is that you can always find ways to get the answer you need. But that also doesn't mean that you should be sitting on the computer when you could be going outside, or playing with our friends. And nothing is better then spending your time outside. So use the time on the computer better. Then go out side and enjoy the outdoors.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
4719,2,"'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf. But if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf-- that work I abhor--then you also have exactly yhe same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us,' states Katherine Paterson. Books and movies all over the world are being censored and removed from libraries, day after day, due to their explicit content. I believe that books, movies, and magazines should not be removed from the shelf, and that they are there for a genuine purpose. Explicit objects should not be censored because a human being should have a judgement of their own, children's parents have a right to exclude the material from the child's life, and some material can be useful in life and someone @MONTH1 learn from @CAPS3.      Children everywhere are being influenced by books, magazines, movies, and even songs. Some people argue that these harmful materials are affecting how kids behave and act. I, however, believe that a child should have superb morals and values to know right from wrong. For example, if a child happens to see a pornography magazine lingering on a shelf of their local grocerey store, they should know that no matter how temping @CAPS3 @MONTH1 be, that buying that pornography magazine would be wrong. From birth, parents are constantly teaching their children what is right and what is wrong. They attempt to teach their children the basics: that drugs, alcohol, and smoking will corrupt their health. @CAPS3 doesn't matter if a child sees someone doing drugs in a movie or hears a song about a teenager getting drunk. They should not be influenced by this because by using their logic, they should infer that what is being read or listened to isn't always the right thing to do.     Everyday, children's parents have the right to exclude harmful material from a child's life. After all, they are a superior figure in the child's life, and the child will always look up to them to lead the way. At most local theaters now, you have to be seventeen to see a rated '@CAPS1' movie. A lot of theaters allow a child to view a rated '@CAPS1' movie, no matter what age, as long as they have a parent or a gardian present. Movie theaters feel that by having a child's parent there would help immensly because the parent is choosing for their child to watch that particular movie, instead of the child viewing the movie without their permission. If a parent doesn't want their child to view a raunchy movie, they can simple say, 'NO!' @CAPS3's as simple as that. If a parent feels that a movie is decent for a child to watch, then go ahead and let them watch that material. Parental agreement should always be a main factor in determined whether or not a child could view a particular movie or read a certain provacative book.      If all offensive books and movies were removed from the shelf, we would be living in a structured world where no one would learn any more than what they already knew. Life @MONTH1 possibly become rather boring. Although, some people @MONTH1 find books and songs to be offensive, others @MONTH1 contribute from these materials. A child @MONTH1 pick up a book, start reading, and discover some disturbing thoughts that they never would have encountered beyond picking up that book. They would never of learned such things. Reading information like this, creates a move advanced society. Adults and children are becoming smarter each day. Any parent would agree that they would love any opprotunity to arise for their children to become smarter and more wiser than they already were. Songs, movies, books, and magazines could provide that for their child. Reading is an escape from a jungle of wild monkies for some children. They @MONTH1 use a book to get away from the struggles of everyday life and get lost within its lively pages. If more and more books are being censored and thrown out, that equates to less books a child could have an opprotunity to discover. I once read that even @CAPS4 classes all over the world are not allowing their students to read The @CAPS5 of @CAPS6 @CAPS7. The teachers find this book to be too inappropriate for their students. This is unfair for any student, because this novel is inspiring and life changing, so they are definitely missing out. Also, movies and songs are provided for one's pure entertainment, so @CAPS3 shouldn't always matter if its crude. A child or young adult @MONTH1 learn things that they never thought imaginable through provided public materials.     In conclusion, books, magaizines, movies, and music are one's individual way of expressing themself. They should not be censored because a human being should have a judgement of their own, parents have the right to exclude offensive material from a child's life, and material, not matter how crude @CAPS3 @MONTH1 be, can be used as a learning tool. If more and more material is being removed from our local libraries, @CAPS3's almost like authors are being punished for being unique. Our children won't be exposed to as much, therefore, they won't learn and grow from @CAPS3. Do you really want our society to prohibit intelectual thinking just because they think certain material @MONTH1 be offensive? Think about @CAPS3",5.0,5.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,23.0
14950,6,"There were several obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The first problem they faced was they would have to change & fix the @CAPS1 of the Building in order to compensate for all the Stress there would be on the Building when the dirigibles landed. After they constructed & built the landing, there were several more problems. The first problem was that the hydrogen in the balloons is very flammable. This is a problem because New York is densely populated & with a flammable substance above there heads, it poses a threat. The second problem was the dirigible itself. It can easily blow in the wind, & would constantly wave in the wind, & unlike in a field, weights cold not be tied to the back of it because of the crowds below. The third & final problem they dealt with was the law: airships are not allowed too fly low over urban areas. The Empire State Building was too low in an urban area for anything to fly over it. Several of these problems led to the failure of the original idea & left the Empire State Building with a tall post of no purpose.",4.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
15542,6,"The three insurmountable obstacles that the builders faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock at the Empire State building were all a matter of public safety. They should have reallized that ""most dirigibles from outside the United States used hydrogen"" and that they were thus prone to exploding. In an urban city like New York, a thousand foot dirigible that would cover four blocks would cause immense casualties. Secondly, violent air currents cause the winds at the top of the Empire State Building to be constantly shifting. The mooring mast would not work in that environment unless the back of the dirigible were weighted down with lead weights. The lead weights ""dangling high above pedestrians on the street [would be] neither practical nor safe"". Thirdly the importance of public safety from aircraft had already been reallized in the form of a law banning airships from flying too low over urban areas. ""This law would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area"". Docking in an urban setting proved too dangerous to risk.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
12337,5,"The mood the author gave in the @CAPS1. was a very happy, thoughful, respectful, thankful, moved when he explained his reason and his thoughts, him expressing his family life was very nice he said the best things his parents did for him was to leave there family in cuba and start a new life in @LOCATION1 for new life and, future, also he expressed that he always thanked his parents for what they have done for him. but he knew that wasn't the best way it was just that he had to prove he was thankful.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9029,4,"The author concludes the ending as “I will take that test again” meaning that the things she going through now is going to happen again but next time she will be peperd. Saeng has a very difficult time moving to another country and getting comfortable in the place the mother suports her as she go throught winter the hibiscus that she bought is a symbol that represent more than it selfs, in this text of winter Hibiscus by Minfong Ho shows this biscus that she bougth when she was in wrost time, she went throug winter with the hibiscus nand at the last paragraph of the story express “when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding” she is thinking of the feature and how she “saeng vowed silently to herself in the spring. She can’t wait until winter is over and is just waiting for the spring to come.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
7071,3,"The hot wheather is dehydrating the cyclist, who can’t find more water. The hills are rough terrain is draining the energy he has. The heat is so rough he has to break the road down it to polants he wants to get to. He get drained physically and emotionally. He has a hard journey.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
3894,2,"You are not elgible to check out this book', says the libranian. You are just too young for this book.      To me censorship laws in libraries are not needed. The common people should have the liberty to check out what ever they please. The people who make the censorship laws should be pleased that young people actually want to read.     Books, music, movies, magazines, etc., are all under censorship. Everyonee takes things in differently, being said some are mature than others. If they want to play that game, or read that book they should be allowed. The person who picks up the product should know how they are and should know if they can handle the material. Therefore they are held accountable for their actions. Isnt that how legal laws are carried out?     If any sort of content is found offensive it still shouldnt be removed from the shelves. Something @MONTH1 seem offensive to one person but someone else @MONTH1 find that interesting. For example, when the newspaper talks about a specific athlete they @MONTH1 say things tha offends his?her fans. They people who are not fans of him/her @MONTH1 find it ammusing; so they should remove the post because some people dont like it. Someone @MONTH1 like that book, music, movie, or magazine dont inconvience them because of a few people.           Interest @MONTH1 vary, but a teen @MONTH1 like the same type of books as an adult. Censorship laws wont  let the teen read the book they likes because of his/her age, and to me that is unfair. It is a new day and age; things have changed from what they once were. Cencorship laws should be wiped out completly. If you @MONTH1 find a book offensive in any way, shape, or form just dont read it. Nobody is forcing to read that specific book; libraries are filled up with a numerous amount of books. There is a book out there that you will enjoy.     In conclusion, certain material shouldnt be removed from shelves if found offensive. Some other peoople @MONTH1 like that same aterial. There shouldnt be censorship laws in libraries at all. That is just unfair, and unjust to some people. Its a new time and age and things are different. People of any age should be able to check out any book they please",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
340,1,"Computers, More and more people are using them. They are used to talk, for lesieure and many other things. But are computers a good thing? Computers can be a very good thing to have around. Besides practically unlimited information, you can stay in touch with your family using @ORGANIZATION1. You can use @ORGANIZATION2 word to make documents and powerpoint presentations that organize your ideas. Also you can use @ORGANIZATION2 excel to manage your finances! Windows movie maker allow you to contruct your own movies ifl you own a camera. Besides the obvious most helpful features, you can play computer games, watch mores and listen to music on a computer. Like anything, computers have downsides too. Some are small and some can be very big. computers are expensive. You can't see who's really talking to you on a computer. Also, many people have important information on a computer. Peoples computers have been infected and information has been stolen leaving people helpless. Bugs can also seriously damage your computer rendering it imposible to use. Many people can be smeared on the internet as well. Hate sites that encourage terrorism, racial violence and drug use are all over the web. You have to be careful where you go when using the internet. Also, sometimes computers can take over peoples lives. People spend too much time on facebook and not enough time reading or keepng in touch with family. Computers can be great things. Between their great features allowing you to be informed all the time and programs that or be great for managing buisness, it's no wonder almost every @CAPS1 household has one. Many people don't like computers. They say that the cons outweigh the pros. I disagree. Yes, the cons can be annoying & sometimes serious. But if your smart enough to stay away from @CAPS2-@CAPS3, install anti-virus software, and never give away your information to an unamed surce, the pros outweigh the cons. So overall, if your smart enough, a computer can be a fun, convienent edition to your life allowing you to do more than you ever imagined.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
393,1,"@ORGANIZATION1, Are technology is advancing greately and more inventions are coming out; but aren't you worried that people spent to much time on the technology? I know @CAPS1 worried. For example computers. Computers have to technology to go online and chat with various people all around the world. Thas when I get worried. In this essay I will explain why it is bad to spent too much time on computers. it is bad because people don't execisi enjoy mothers nature, and interact with family and friends. Firstly, people are for geting how important it is to excaise. It is very important because it keeps you fit and healthy. With the computers in use people become less fit and healthy. They start getting fat theire carasaprel get high and they stress more. Secondly they don't enjoy mothersnature. When people start going on the computers they stop doing a lot of things. Like stop going outside and getting fresh air. They get c losed in a small bubble and all they case about is the computers. They don't go out to camp, play outside; they don't do nothing. Every day they are on the computer. Finaly, one big main problem is: they stop inter acting with family and friends. When mothers and fathers are oh it they don't pay attention to these young ones and they are always on it. When teenagers are on the computers they don't talk to these parents, they ignore there friends and the people that care about them most. They wont care for everybody, but them selfes @CAPS2 there you have it; that is why I think we should cut down on the computer usage. For these following reasons: People stop exercising and being fit. They stop enjoiying mother nature, and they stop @NUM1 with family and friends. @CAPS2 what do yoo think?",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
3172,2,"Should books, magazines, movies, and music be put in higher reaches of children, or should they be left in plain sight? Is @CAPS5 fair to not be capable to see a movie, magazine, or even read a book because others in the area believe @CAPS5's offensive in their view? If an adult is reading a specific book or magazine and they feel @CAPS5's only for their eyes to see @CAPS5 then they should keep that item in a personal place that only he or she knows, not anyone else.      Books and magazines should not be removed from shelves if they are found offensive. The reason for this is because, @CAPS5's not fair to others who haven't read them, and who would like to read them, but can't because they have been removed to others oppinions. If the books and magazines weren't appropriate for children then the companies wouldn't print them and releasr them to stands for them to be sold. If certain music also wasn't appropriate then music producers wouldn't let artists release that song out on a track.     There are many chances for school projects that @MONTH1 require getting information, but the student who is assigned to get @CAPS5 is not able to, due to the fact that adults think the website @MONTH1 be inappropriate. For example, in history class a student is assigned an assignment to get done over the @DATE2 about @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3 for a grade. @DATE3 comes and he/she doesn't have @CAPS5 and gets a @CAPS4 for the homework he/she was assigned. The student explains why he/she wasn't able to get any information. He/she starts explaing themself by saying 'the websites I went to were blocked. The books and magazines I tried checking out were either thrown out, or I wasn't able to check them out.' '@CAPS5's all because our neighbors who live in this neighborhood think the pictures and words are offensive, and since then the librarians stopped putting them out on shelves.'      The teacher then says, 'well then I will go and sign out a book for you and you can try and get as much information out as you can, how does that sound to you?' '@CAPS6 good, at least @CAPS5's better then getting an @CAPS4 on the assignment,' said the student. @DATE1 @TIME1 comes, adn the student has as much information he/she was able to get out of the two books, and hands @CAPS5 to the teacher. At the end of class @CAPS5 gets graded and the grade on @CAPS5 turns out to be a @CAPS8. Student is happy for picking up the grade but is still unhappy he/she wasn't able to get the items they needed from the start.     This is why movies, books, magazines, or even music should not be removed from shelves. Things like this will probably happen, and the kids will land up getting in trouble for not having the assignment turned in which is not even their fault. If only a few citizens have oppinions about certain items and they feel that those items should be removed, then they should be from their sight, and they shouldn't bother thinking of them. Even if @CAPS5's for safety of the children they @MONTH1 have in the house with them, then they shouldn't even have the books out of the little private personal spot where nobody knows of excpet for that one particular person.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
12204,5,"There where many different moods that the author created in the memoir. The three most important moods where grateful, loving, and happy. The first mood the author showed for this story was being grateful. This family was very lucky to move from cuba to the @LOCATION1 and find a better home. They where also lucky that they where going to have a better life. The second most important mood was loving. This family showed alot of love for each other. An example that shows how loving they are is when it @CAPS1 they left their family, friends, and careers so their children could have a better life. The last mood was happyness. When reading this story you can really tell that this family was happy. It talks about how they will never forget the memories and how generous their parents where. In conclusion there where many different moods in this story. The three main moods where grateful, loving, and happy",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
10393,4,The story is about he failing the test. She says she will try next year when the geese come back.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
4715,2,"Katherine Paterson wrote about the true impact of censoring what is put in a library.  In the quote she mentions how if what every single person finds offensive is removed, eventually nothing is left.  The question of, 'Should library content be censored?' is a largely debated question.  There is a simple answer to this question.  It should not be censored.     Views on what should be censored and why, vary based on type of person and their background.  As Katherine Paterson said, 'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf.  But if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf-that work I abhor-then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else.  And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.'  @PERSON2 made the observation that most people would not think far enough to realize.  The most logical thing is to not censor what works are put into libraries.  As was previously stated, once every person pulls what they deem should not be on shelves, the library will be but a building without books.     To keep children from getting into certain types of literature, movies, and music, libraries could have a section set off within the adult section for these works.  Many public libraries do not even have these types of items that would be so highly disputed for the simple fact that if the library does not even carry it, they do not have to worry about issues.  These public institutions are working for the best of the visitors, and if there are works needing to be kept from the childrens' section, there is no doubt that this would be taken care of appropriately.       The topic of censorship is a very touchy subject to start with.  This goes back to the debate of what exactly should be censored.  The problem with what is 'explicit,' is that there is no black and white line.  Does a book become inappropriate because a teen girl becomes pregnant within the pages?  In some eyes, the fact that a teenager got inpregnated within a book makes it inappropriate, but critics will argue that this is life and to shield the world from reality makes us all blind.  Proper instillation of morals and values on the homefront will help young citizens make intelligent choices, but expecting the world to censor itself for each individual is something that would never be possible.     Censorship in libraries is a touchy subject, but like Katherine Paterson said, if every person in the world removed what they thought inappropriate, there would be no books left.  This truth being stated, censorship in libraries should be stopped before every book is gone.  As the world turns, life cannot be stopped because bad or inappropriate things exist.  It can only be learned that yes, these things @MONTH1 exist, but by using better judgement the whole world can get along just fine without trying to remove everything 'bad.'",5.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,23.0
3023,2,"Book @CAPS1     @CAPS2 I think about removing certain materials such as books, music, movies, and-or magazines is that it should be your choice. I always thought that was part of our constitutional right.     I read alot of urban books because that's @CAPS2 I enjoy. They realae towhere I have been, or where I @MONTH1 be going in my life. No they are not the kinds of books I would read to my grand childern, but they @MONTH1 choose later in life that they also enjoy urban books and movies.      You @MONTH1 not enjoy reading the materials that I enjoy either but that doesn't mean you should banned them. There are alot of books, and movies that I don't care for but I wouldn't ask for them to be banned. If everyone started @CAPS1 @CAPS2 they don't like, there wouldn't be any need for movies,  libraries, or book stores. Kids wouldn't have a future because they wouldn't know where they came from. @CAPS2's bad to you @MONTH1 not be bad to me, or the next person.     When you go into a library, or book store, you already have and idea of @CAPS2 you are looking for. If there are books that are not appropreiate for kids, they should have their own section that reads, 'For @CAPS3 @CAPS4'. We are the @CAPS3 and parents. We should be the one's in control of our kids and @CAPS2 they read and watch. I don't think @CAPS1 the materials would make the problem go away because kids these days, if they want them bad enough, will figure out away to read or watch them anyway.                                                 Ann                                        @CAPS5 and @CAPS6",4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
10586,4,"The author concluded the story in such a way that the reader’s eyes are opened. It shows the reader that dispite what @MONTH1 happen, how bad things seem, and how hopeless you feel, there’s always a way to make it better. Saeng failed her test, was in a new land, and had lost her grandmother, but still planned to try again. like the waves on the shore, they will always try to wash away the sand by coming back again. just like these waves, Saeng is willing to try again, as should we all.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
15739,6,"The greatest obstacles the builder of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there was one of safety. Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable. When the German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by fire in Lakehurst, New Jersey on May 6, 1937 the owners of the Empire State Building realized how much worse that accident could have been if it had taken place above a densely populated areas such as downtown New York. The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself. The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. The other practical reason why dirigibles could not more at the Empire State Building was an existing law against airships flying too low over your ring areas. The wind would blow the dirigible onto the sharp spires of other buildings in the area, which would puncture the dirigible's shell, the captain could not even take his hands off the control levers.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
12872,5,"The mood the author creeted is gratefulness. @CAPS1 is grateful for many things @CAPS1's grateful for culinary skills and love of cooking that was passed on from her parents. @CAPS1 is grateful of her close-knit community, who are honest hard working immigrants who always extend a helping hand. But the big reason @CAPS1 is grateful is @CAPS2 her family. @CAPS1 is grateful for her countless family & extended family who joine them for meals and who stay with them temporarily. @CAPS1 is also mostly grateful for her parents. @CAPS1 is grateful that her parents are @CAPS3 nice and always keep there arms & door open for help knowing they'll do the same. @CAPS1 is also majorly grateful for their courage to come to a new world without knowing any of the language or culture just to give their children a better life. @CAPS1 is grateful her parents had to make a huge sacrifice just for her benefit to leave behind there friends, family & careers in the country they love. @CAPS1 is also grateful for both the personally & financial struggle her parents had to go through and braving the harsh northern winters. For her culinary, love of food, family, and parent sacrifices @CAPS1 will be forever grateful.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
15463,6,"There were many obstacles the builders faced when trying to allow Dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building. One of the obstacles was nature. The winds at the top of the Empire State building were always shifting due to violent air currents. Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around. Another obstacle builders faced was a law not allowing airships to fly too low over urban areas. This law would make it illegal for a ""ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach it.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
16092,6,"To start off, the builders of the Empire State Building had faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. Many of the obstacles had delt with the dirigible itself. For example, the dirigible was highly unsafe and flammable by the 1930s. ""When the German dirigible was destroyed by fire, New Jersey, on May 6, 1937 realized how much worse that accident could have been if it had taken place above a densely populated area, such as downtown New York."" Another obstacle that the builders had faced was nature itself. The winds were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. It would be highley dangerous for a dirigible to fly that close to a mooring mast with winds like that. Also, dirigibles could not fly near the Empire State Building, due to an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. This law would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or approach the area. Al Smith's dream was to make the Empire State Building suitable for transportation, but sometimes dreams don't always go threw.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
7161,3," The features of the setting affect the cyclist because they doubt or lessen his chances for survival, but the cyclist is determined so he survives.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
12782,5,"The mood created by the auther in the memoir are love, happyness, and @CAPS1. Love is one of the moods because they welcome people in need ""My parents always Kept their arms and their door open to the many people we consider family, Knowing they would do the same for us. Happieness is one of the mood because Narciso is pleased with parents. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and secrifice."".  @CAPS1 is one of the moods because all every one in the neighbor hood got along. ""In our neighborhood, despite customs elsewhere, all of these culture came together in great solidarity and friendship."".",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
13207,5,"the mood that the author created is happiness. I know because he explains how much he is grateful for his parents, @CAPS1 happy he had a great home and he learned the real definition of family.The auther is grateful for @CAPS1 parents for the love they gave him. He says ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice.He is happy to have a place called home. And he wont forget it either. He also says. ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home.And last he learned the defintion for family. The article says ""It was here where I learned the real definition of ""family"".",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
6847,3,"To be able to have a good bike ride, you must have a good setting. To me, a good setting would about @NUM1° outside and sunny. You can’t go bike riding in snow because there is no way that the tires will move in the snow. You can’t go in rain or hail because the roads get slippery and you could getin a accident that could injure or kill you. If it is sunny outside you be able to ride freely on dry roads with a little breeze to go through your hair and you could be refreshed. That is why I believe it is important for the setting to be just right for a bike ride.",0.0,,,,,0.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,3.0
3725,2,Hello my name is @PERSON1 one day me and a friend were in the librairy on @DATE1 @TIME1 looking at some books. Later that day my @CAPS1 and I were at school reading our books she came up to me in the hallway. @CAPS1 said that her book was offensive and she was going to tell somebody about it. So school went by the bell rang it was time to go. When she got home she went and told her parents he parents said that she should go and tell the librarian.      On our walk to the librairy @CAPS1 and I stopped at the store to get something to drink. While were were there she got a newspapaer to read about what was going on at the scool when she noticed something about books about how they needed to be taken off the shelf. when we walked in the doors to the library the librarian was sitting at her desk she asked us if we needed any help. @CAPS1 said no but I need to talk to you about a book the librarian said she was way ahead of her. That she had already had complaints about the books and she was taking them off the shelfs. And moving the to the back closet.     About a week or so later @CAPS1 and her mother were reading the newspaper about the library it said that all the offensive books were being taken off the shelf and they were replacing them with newer and better ones. Some people thought it was wrong and they shouldnt do it because of one person said it was offensive but they did it any way.,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
337,1,"Dear Local newspaper, @CAPS1 well @CAPS1 many others, i believe computers are not only good, but beneficial. Computers are advanced our world little by little every day. We all use them for communication, entertainment, and knowledge. Computers are like people with fun to do and things to learn. Computers are beneficial to everyone worldwide. Computers gradually advance communication more and more everyday. It used to be old letters by mail, then it became e-mails, twitter, and facebook. These websites upgrage communication today. Long distance friends can view photos, information, videos, and chat from far away. Some site like @ORGANIZATION2 allow you to instant message your friends. Lastly, video chatting is a new improved way to see a live video of the other person. According to @ORGANIZATION1 @NUM1 more user signed up for web-cams since the beggining of @DATE1. Communication is positively affected by computers. I know you @MONTH1 have fun with sports or nature, but sometimes it is great to get great entertainment for yourself instantly. Computer games only cost about @MONEY1 and are instant access. Also, surfing the web for news or funny videos is fun sometimes. Almost everyone who has a @CAPS2 gets a blast surfing the internet. Do you ever wonder how to hear the song you like when it's not on the radio? Itunes stores, organize, and plays music in a virtual library for permanent access. What also happens is youtube allows you to watch music videos or hear songs for free. Now thats why computers are straight entertainment. Finally, computers provide you with so much knowledge and is great for education. Certain websites let you access tons of knowledge. Wikipedia and diccionary.com are great for learning.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
6571,3,"In the essay, “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” there are many features of the setting that greatly affect the cyclist. Many of these features affect him in a negative way. One such feature is the hills that are present in the essay. These probably exasperated the cyclist even more than he already was with the sun beating down on him. Another feature was the road sign that said “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” “The speed limit was @NUM1. I was doing a water-depleting @NUM2. Sometimes life can feel so cruel.” The author/cyclist probably felt like he would never make it. Also, the sign advertising grape juice probably made him feel life was even crueler with its sadistic irony. Finally, the bait shop offered much relief to the cyclist. “I had an overwhelming urge to seek out Gary and Wilber, kiss them, and buy some bait.” All in all, the setting affected the cyclist in some pretty bad ways until the end.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
11972,5,"The mood created in this memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from Home: The Blueprints of our lives is a magnificent mood. A family move to the United States from Cuba so there @CAPS1 could have a better education. They have a nice home nice friends and a good and caring family. The neighbor, landlord, or friend Alegria makes them dinner some times. Also, they have friends that go over for dinner and often bring some food over with them. They have a family/friends that were Spanish, Cuban, and Italian people. They always had there door open for friend and family and most of there friend would go over every night. They would let people stay at there house if they needed help or if they had to rest. The mood was magnificent in this story.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
13009,5,"In the memoir the mood is very loving, @CAPS1, and thankfull. The mood is loving in many different ways. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" Also, ""it's gracious neighborhood or the many things I learned there about how to love."" Also @CAPS1 is expressed throughout this memoir. ""It was in this simple house that my parents welcomed other refuges to celebrate their arrival to this country, and where I celebrated my first birthdays."" @CAPS1 is expressed by the family gathering a the dinner table more times that not. The greatest mood in the memoir is how thankfull he is to his parents. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" Also ""I've often told them of my admiration for their strength and perseverance, and I've thanked them repeatedly.""",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
3955,2,"Some people often go to the library to check out books,movies,magazines,etc..But what some people might not realize is that some of the things that they have at the library might be offensive towards certain people. I think that everything thats in the libraries should stay there. Obviously the library allowed it there for some reason. So honestly it cant be that bad.          I do not think certain things should be removed from the library. People have to realize that that's life. There's going to be certain things that you dont like but you have to deal with it. If you watch tv you'll notice that there's some offensive things towards certain people. But no one really makes a huge thing out of it.               The books might be offensive to you but to someone else it could just be another book that they want to read.With no intentive purpose of offending anyone. The library is all about learning. Everything is for educational purposes. I've read books that I stopped and thought about for a second while I was reading it and noticed that theres some pretty harsh things in it. But i didn't complain about it, I just kept reading.            Alot of books are based off of true events so no matter how offensive they are to people, you just have to think what the purpose was for the author to create this book and same thing with movies. So people can see what the author has to say. Everyone has the right to have their own opinion. And thats what most magazine articles are about. Expressing what you think about a certain topic.          Even in the @CAPS1 class that im in now we had to read 'To @CAPS2 A @CAPS3'. Some @CAPS4 @CAPS5 people might think its racist but it reallu isn't. The author is trying to get his point out. Of how things use to be before white and colored people were treated the same. Now if you still think that is being offensive towards you or other people then thats alright. That's why this is a free country. Everyone has the right to say how they feel and not get in trouble for it.          So I hope i got the point across that it's alright for some things to be offensive towards people. As long as thats not the whole point of what you watching or reading. Which i doubt it is. So next time your reading or watching something that is offending you. Think about the point that the person who wrote or made the movie were trying to get across. Mybe by it offending you it is getting the point across.",4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
6780,3,"In the story “Do not exceed posted speed limit” by Joe Kurmaskie the setting affected the cyclist in a hard way. With only a few sips of water left he said'' … abandoned years earlieR, by the looks of it it had been a @CAPS1 Grape Juice factory and bottling plant. A sand blasted picture of a young boy pouring a refreshing glass of Juice into his mouth could still be seen. I hung my head.'' When only having a few drops of water and seeing that would have increased my thirst more. Another way the setting affected the cyclist in a hard way was "" The speed limit was 55 mph. I was doing a water-depleting 12 mph. sometime ife can feel so cruel.'' This remind him that hes not in a car, and that hes not even going half the speed limit. The setting affects the cyclist by reminding him how long his journey is, and now at this point he is suffering.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
320,1,"Dear editor of the @ORGANIZATION1, In my opinion I think people are spending to much time on technology because their is many people I know who stay on technology and don't even do work. Also, spending to much time on the computers and others things then taking time exercising, enjoying nature, and interacting with family and friends. People who stay to close to there technology will be addicted to it and they will start to kill brain cells. Some times people get locked because to much information was given out or you did somthing that you were'nt suppose to do. Downloading certain things also bring harm to your computer like viruses that can crash downthe computer hard drive and system. There are many good and bad thing about being on a computer like the bad things stalkers, hackers, seizers, blindness. Then the good thing about being on a computer is it teaches hand-eye coordination, give people the ability to learn about faraway places and people, even allow people to talk online with other like friends or family. In my life it helps a little because I play lots of army games so when I go out with my cousins and friends we go label tagging in a sports complex and I use the same tactics that i learn to beat the other teams. It hurts some people eye site when all their doing is stairring durectly at eh screen. one experience was like @NUM1 months ago the last time I stayed at my aunts house all my cousins do was stay on th ga me till they have to take a bath, clean and eat, They didn't even go to sleep till eight in the @TIME1. Some parents should at least give an hour a day to say he game. For me I only go on the computer for like twenty minutes then log and go back online later on in the day.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
12123,5,The mood created by Narciso Rodriguez in the memoir is very touching. the memoir explains how as a kid he didnt have much growing upas a kid but he did have family and he was extreamly greatful and proud of his parents for their efforts to start a new family in a different country without knowing the languge. When I hear about someone being that @CAPS1 it makes me think how times have changed from whe Narciso was growing up in the @NUM1's. He was so greatful and happy when compaired to now he has nothing. But he was abel to show all his gratude with the deepest heart warming simpathyall in all @CAPS2 learned from his parents and knew that family was the most important thing you can have.,3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
16187,6,"The main obstical was to be the tallest building in the world. That all changed to being able to have a mooring mast so blimps can land on it to drop-off/pick up passengers and refule. They had ""@NUM1 thousand dollars"" in renovations to sturdy the structure of the tower. they couldnt make the foundations sturdy enough to hold the weight of an @NUM2 foot ship + cargo.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
7708,3,"The features of the setting in “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” greatly affect the cyclist. Depending on what sort of new terrain or landmark he came to,his determination increases and decreases. For example, when he saw a building come into view ahead of him, he got excited and used all his energy to get down the hill to the building. Also, when he came to the next building and found a working bathroom, he drank from the sink as his hope (of not dying) was renewed. The man riding the bike in the story had many different changes in his emotions during his long trek in this story that were dependent on the setting. ",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9615,4,"The author concludes with this paragraph to show her determination. When she says. “…when the snows melt and the geese return and his hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” Saeng is explaining how the geese have the determination to fly back and that the hibiscus has the determination to bud again so why shouldn’t she have the determination and confidence to take the test again. Saeng said, “I-I failed the test.” It seems as if failing the driving test made her feel like she was going to fail in the new country. But after she saw the geese’s and hibiscus’s determination through harsh conditions, she was determined to try the test again.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
6184,3,"In the story “Rough road ahead” the setting affect’s the cyclist. The cyclist is affected by lack of water, the distance he has to travel, and the hilly terrain. “The water bottles contain only a few tantalizing sips. wide rings of dried sweat circled my shirt,” this statement shows how he was out of water and was tired and hot. The setting affected the cyclist a lot in the story.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
655,1,"Dear local newspaper, I think computers are used way to much in this society! People spend more hours sitting the computer than exercising because people find it more thrilling spending more time with computers than trreadmills! People in this society think we are spending to much time on the computers, while others don't realize how long they've been staring at a screen for! I am one of those people who like using the computer a lot but I have relized changes. I can tell many others and spend to much time with the computer screen that we have drifted away from our familys! I never really thought about how much I don't talk to them anymore because I'm to busy cyberly chatting with friends. Although, I don't think we should get the computer either. Online we can research almost everything in the world. I can even type my name in a research bar and find me and anybody else with the excel same name as me! The internet got for more technical in the past years. Without it, these days, just about everybody would be lost! The internet should be used less on blogging and chatting, and should be used more on things more useful like @CAPS1.com or @CAPS2.com. I hope you consider this.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
16444,6,"The builders of the Empire State building faced obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there.  One obstacle that faced the builders was that the dirigibles could not simply land on top of the building.  The thousand foot dirigible would add stress to the frame of the building.  They would have to ""transmit"" the load and the wind pressure to the foundation which was nearly eleven hundred feet below.  The builders had to make over @MONEY1 worth of modifications.  Another reason was nature.  As stated in paragraph @NUM1, ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting"".  The dirigible could not be teathered down because the lead weights would be dangling above pedestrians.  A final obstacle was an already existing law.  The law was against airships flying too low over urban areas.  This made it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building.  These obstacles destined the mooring mast to never fulfill its purpose.",3.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
3383,2,"For many students it is hard to compose essay's in a public school's library. Aquiring the neccisary information is comparable to finding a needle in a haystack. This is not due to the lack of funding or even the quality of teachers and staff. No neither of these problems is the cause behind many student's inabiltiy to compose thought provoking essay and analysis over a myrad of topics. This is due to the extremes in censorship that are being placed on libraries and schools in general. Many of the relevent topics and materials need to truely understand our constantly changing world is being removed from the grasp of those who will go on to lead this new world.Some prime examples of this tyrany on knowledge is the removal of books suck as @PERSON1, @PERSON2, the @CAPS1, and many other classical works. Each of these according to many parents has good reason to be removed from our libraries. @PERSON1 @PERSON1 promotes discrimination and racial supremacy along with being written by what @CAPS3 has pegged as one of the humanity's most vile of creatures. @PERSON2 uses racial surrs that are not appropriate to be in the hands of our young children. The @CAPS1 violates the separation of church and state. Many other classical works refference racism, drugs, murder, sex and use rampant profanity. All of these are valid reasons as to why a parent @MONTH1 advocate for there to be censorship of our libraries.These reasons, as well meaning as they @MONTH1 be, are no longer good enough to be valid in todays changing environment. Many of the books that have been recomneded to be removed show us an unfiltered view of a time period from a point of view that did not belong to the 'victor' of the social battle. As we know, '@CAPS3 is written by the victors.' @CAPS4 it is good that the @CAPS5 won the @CAPS6 @CAPS7 and helped abolish slavery it is still important to realize that we still cannot remove the view point from our centers of knowledge. To forget is to remember at another time. That time is when we repeat the same mistakes again.For the parents who also want to save the innocence of their children by forbidding these books from libraries need to realize that the media has been pumping these forbiden images to their children more than books have. To censor our libraries is to cripple our children from the knowledge they need to fully understand our shadowed and fragmented world. Just because we try and close our eyes to the realities of the world does not mean that they don't exist. It is better to see and understand than to enter the world blind and dumb",5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,23.0
7416,3,"During this bikers adventure heat and lack of water affect him. In this short story when the cyclist feels lost he says “I was traveling through the high deserts of California in June” This suggests that the rider was faced with the extreme heat of the desert during his ride. He also says “The water bottles contained only a few tantilizing sips.” This quote shows that not only was he faced with the heat, but also with lack of water. These facts and quotes show the clear threats this biker faced on his long bike-ride.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
4230,2,"Offensive @CAPS1     @CAPS1. Books, music, magazines, movies, commericals. Is it right to have all types of @CAPS1 shown to all ages? I disagree. A variety of people could take offense to the content this @CAPS1 contains. I think that there should be a designated area, or all the alarming @CAPS1 should be removed so everyone can be at peace when they are at the library, or just watching television in their own home.      Even though some people @MONTH1 not take offense to any type of @CAPS1, you have to think about the parents. A majority of parents would not want their children to be surrounded by all the effects that this @CAPS1 brings. Some content @MONTH1 not be suitable to younger kids. Whether it be going to the movies or just going to the library, children can see all the violence and misbehaving going on in the world today. I believe that drugs, alcohol, and curse words have a big influence on kids these days. I think it is our responsibilty to protect them until they are at an age they can make their own judgements.      Religion. Our religion plays a big part on what we think is right or wrong. I was taught to always treat people with respect and to try my hardest to get along with others. A lot of the @CAPS1 contradicts what I have been taught. If you see something on television with your favorite actor or actress on it, we tend to believe it is acceptable behavior. If you have ever been to a movie theater, you know they have certain ratings. The ratings are there to protect younger kids from getting into adult movies. They enforce this rule to an extent, but I don't think they enforce it enough. At the least, libraries and movie rental places could have a designated area for adult rated content to respect those who disagree.      A few years ago when my little sister was about two or three, she was watching a movie with me and it had a few curse words in it. She had never heard them that often and wasn't sure what they meant. For the next couple of days, she went around saying the word and my parents weren't very happy. She had no idea she was doing anything wrong because she heard it on a movie and if they could say it, then she could too. Children sometimes don't know any better and if they would happen to say it to a stranger, they would be offended.      @CAPS1 can be harmless, but it can also be offensive. The safest way to keep the new generation respectful, is to shield them when they are young so that they can learn what is right and what is wrong. When they come out into the real world, they won't be difficult to put up with and will have proper manners. No one will ever agree on the same things, but in the end, we need to do what is right for the betterment of our community.",5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
1389,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, @CAPS1 are so many people that addicted to computers. They think that computer can help them but yes to others it helps them to their work and education. Most children are addicted to computer games. @CAPS1 are @PERCENT1 of children who are addicted to computers. For some reason, computers had a lot of effects on people. It might affect children's education or it might be the cause why your bills of electricity went higher. The worst of having computer at home, it can be a reason for millions of teenagers that got killed for always talking online with people they don't know. Computers are sometimes dangerous for people. Do people still need computer? Having computer at home is not good specially to children. This is because computers can affect their education. Parents don't want that to happen to their children. A lots of uneducated children that stay home or do drugs in the street. Yes computer can help them for their studies or computer can help them for their studies or projects but other children in the computer because they just want to play games. That's why a lot of them didn't learn anything at school but they learn a lot in the computer games. They should stop the computer games. Also, having computers at home can be the cause of people's electricity bills that went higher than they had @DATE1 when they didn't have computers. Other people think that computers can't give you any problem but computers works with electricity and pay for the electricity bills. If you have @MONEY1 for your electricity bill @DATE1 year when you didn't have computer, it might go high to @MONEY2 for your bill that now you have the computer. It's a big problem for you. Nevertheless, computers are dangerous. Computers can be good or bad. Without a doubt, @PERCENT2 of teenagers have been killed because of talking online with strangers people. Most website like @CAPS2 is now in danger. @DATE1 @DATE1 months, husband and wife got killed because of @CAPS2. The husband killed his wife because of being ""single"" in her relationship status on her @CAPS2. She got shot by her husband. However, her husband killed himself. They're both got shot! Talking online and meeting up with strangers people you don't know can be a reason of your lost. Parents should not have computers at home unless they will use it but it needs to be at their room where children can't use it. Now is the time to agree! Do we need computers at home? Can we live without the computer? We don't need computers at home and yes we can live without the computer. We can do any activities with our family, exercise for our health, go picnic with friends or we have fun go on vacation with the whole family. Local newspaper, I want you to tell the people to stop the computer and tell them to go out with their family and have fun doing activities or go on vacation.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
15000,6,"In the passage, ""The Mooring Mast,"" by Marcia Amidon @CAPS1, a myriad of obstacles had faced the builders of the Empire State Building in terms of allowing dirigibles to dock there. First was the problem of constructing a mooring mast on top of the building's flat roof. Because, ""a thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame,"" the building would be unable to support the stress of both the dirigible and wind pressure. Next, safety became an issue. After the discovery that, ""most dirigible's built outside the United States use hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable"", owners of the Empire State Building realized the hazard involved when having a highly flammable object fly over a densely populated area. This was brought to their attention when a German dirigible was destroyed by a fire in Lakehurst, New Jersey. An addition problem was nature itself. The winds on top of the building posed the problem of having the dirigibles back end swivel around the mooring mast, seeing as weights could not be used to weight the back down since they would be dangling above pedestrians on the street. Lastly, there was, ""an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" @CAPS2, it would be illegal for a Ship to be tied up to the building or approach the area. In light of the aforementioned reasons, it is evident that the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there.",4.0,,,,,4.0,3.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
7672,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist mentally, physically, positively and negatively. For instance, had been do @CAPS1's Grape Juice Factory and bottling plant. A sandblasted picture of a young boy by pouring a refreshing glass of juice into his mouth could still been seen."" This affected the author mentally, making him remember he had no water. Which inturn affected him physically by becoming dehydrated as moments passed. So overall that setting features had a negative direction affect on the cyclist. Another example, ""One ramshacked shed, several rusty pumps, and a coral that couldn't hold in the lamest mule greeted me. This sight was troubling."" This affected the cyclist mentally by making him think he was never going to see civilization again. It also affected him physically because the water tasted like ""battery acid"" which put him deeper into his dehydration state. This setting features had a negative affect on the cyclist. The setting features and had they affected the cyclist is like an environment a person is adised in and how it makes them who they are.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
3346,2,"Should books, magazines, or movies that are found offensive be removed from the shelves? I think that the book, magazine, or movie should stay on the shelf even if it is found offensive. If it is offensive to one person, it doesn't mean that it is to every person. Everyone has their own view on the subject of offensive or not.     I don't think the person that wrote the book or magazine meant for it to be offensive. They were just writing what they thought went along with the story and some people took offense from the book or magazine. But, they shouldn't argue over it because, like I said before, the author probably didn't mean for it to be offensive.     In conclusion, the books should stay on the shelves. Everyone has different point of view. The author probably didnt mean for the book or magazine to be offensive.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
13111,5,The mood created by the author in the memoir is a very happy mood. The author's parents gave up everything to come to @LOCATION1 for their soon to be child. They did that so that he could have a better education and for that he is verry greatful. The author loved his home and had great times in their. It is his most favorite place in the whole world and that is why he talks about his home in great detail. The author had great family memories in the kitchen with Cuban music and the scent of Cuban food. The author's mood is gratefull. It is because for what his parents did for him by moving to Cuba. It also is happy because of all the great times he had there. The author would probably want to relive those times as I want to relive  times of my childhood.,2.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
15660,6,"Based on the excerpt, the obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there was a huge challenge for them to face. For example, mother nature itself was one of they're huge challenges they would mostly face. At the top of the Empire State Building, winds were constantly shifting and shifting due to violent air currents. As soon as an dirigible would hook up to the building, workers would have to find a way to keep they're airship from crashing into the building from the rusty winds at the top of the building. Therefore, if a dirigible- crashed anywhere on the ground it would burst into an inferno because the inside of a dirigible is filled with hydrogen and helium, so if it did crashed it will involve heat and fire that would be coming from the sparks it prevents as it crashes on the ground.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
3036,2,"Who cares about unsensored things anyway? Offensive things have been around in libraries, probably since the first library opened. There has been 'offensive' things in a library for as long as i can remember. Now everyone is suppose to share there opinons on pulling these offensive books off the shelve?     What is the differnce between someone saying somthing offense or writing it? Ok, so maybe you dont want your child reading somthing unsensored, but the chances are some other child will say somthing unsensored around him. If there is a book that is so bad you wouldnt want your kids reading, why would it of been published? Publishers do read the books they publish them, they will not publish any random thing. I think that they just need to leave the unsensored things alone. If you cant be mature enough to take a article, book, or magizine seriously, then you dont need to be reading it anyway.                                         In the news or radio you always hear about some boy getting bullied and stuff at school. That isnt because of unsensored things, why dont they blame it on parents and ask where they were at? Parents look at anyone and everyone, but themselves when a kid comes home and has learned a cuss word or somthing. It is never the parents fault.                                             If people pull unsensored things out of the library it will serve no purpose and thats just my opinion. I know that i have no say in it and thats ok i can still believe that i am right. Thank you for your time",3.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
169,1,"Dear @LOCATION1 @CAPS1, after reading your article about advances in technology, I would like to offer my opinion about this contraversal subject. All around the world, people are using computers to do all sorts of things; weather its for games, the buying and selling of items, talking with people in different countries; the possibilites are endless. This is, however, not nessessarally a good thing. Many people become addicted to computers. Esspecialy adolesents, who enjoy the games that computers offer. From personal experience being addicted to computers, I can honestly say that I was under almost complete control by that computer. My grades started to go down, I stopped interacting with my friends and family, and trouble on things. Many parents watch their children go through this and are sometimes helpless to stop it. This poses a large problem for parents. My word of advice; don't let your children become addicted!",3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
174,1,"Coumputors are mind browning on what they can do. They can make or break somone financhely. They also can perduce amasing graphis that aritist cant perduce. Coumputrs are also for great for recer antal acitivitys, and they also take your life away. I not talking about a real life @CAPS1 talking about the activitys you do away from home. Now lets see the benifits and problems we come so far on how we handle money. We use to put it in chets and hide them now all we do is click and type in a securty number. people can also invist in items but invisting is tricky you dont always win. You can win small or lose big they say @CAPS2 coumputers today are hd. The screens are made of a liquid crystal fourmula that hardens. The lights in the back pixels do most of the wort to bring stunning graphis to life. On coumputers today people make money by selling graphis they made on coumputers. So this would be another plus on what a coumputor dose to a human. I went to a school to lern how to perduce great graphis. All teens kids and adults have used a coumputer for recerantol acivitys. On todays coumputors you can play games watch videos, and listen on coumputors. People do this to engoy then selfs. Some people ran get in trouble for fooling around on the web. But there is nothing stressed out and just playing some games for a while, personly I like to go on youtube and find funny vidos after school. I use to own a youtube account and get many views. The worst thing about coumpurts is it can ruin plan gobo or somones socal life some people get addicted and cant stop being on the coumputor until it is takin away. For example some people play world of war craft get addicted and cant stop! I had a problem when I had to chek you tube a lot. Well I hoped you readers. No matter what happens I think coumputors bennafit more than the problems",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
14857,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced difficult circumstances and many obstacles during the task of designing a brand new Empire State Building to accompany this new means of travel. The builder's mission was to design the top of the Empire State Building to accommodate the mooring of blimps over one thousand feet in the air. The first obstacle was designing a landing area. This was difficult because the architecture needed had never before been created or even attempted in the past. A second obstacle was having to make sure the Empire State Building could withstand the stress created by the blimp. Paragraph @NUM1 says ""The stress of the dirigibles load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation."" The difficulty with this obstacle was having to refurbish the steel frame at the Empire State Building which took lots of time, work, and over sixty thousand dollars. ""The greatest obstacles to successful mooring was nature itself."" There were violent wind currents at the top of the building and the blimps were never very stable. There were many pedestrians under a moored dirigible so this was a very dangerous obstacle. Lastly, the pre existing laws of airships flying the low over urban areas posed a new problem. even with successful architecture, laws disallowed the blimps in the first place! Planes were also becoming more popular.",3.0,,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
7021,3,"In the short story “Rough road ahead .Do not exceed posted speed limit ,” The cyclist faced many difficulties .These difficulties were the result of the setting .The story takes place in “the high deserts of California in June “ .Because the month June is very warm , and the climate of California is usually hot and dry ,the cyclist ran into problems .Not only did this affect the cyclist , but he travelling through the desert .The setting also included several abandoned towns along the way , which contributed to the problem .The cyclistsoon ran out of water , and discovered the towns that lay before him were unoccupied .He had no choice but to continue with his the journey .",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
15721,6,"Builders of the Empire State Building faceD many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. When designing the mast, they didn't realize that the mast ""would add stress to the building's frame"" and in order to fix this problem, they would have to pay ""over sixty thousand Dollars' worth"" for modifications for the building's framework.      Another problem they encountereD, besides the fact that there was ""an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas,"" ""the winds on the top of the building were constantly shifting."" This did not allow dirigibles to be able to get close enough to dock, in fear that the ""wind would blow the dirigible onto sharp spires,"" which would damage the dirigible's shell.      An alternate problems faceD by builders was realized when the Hindenburg was destroyeD in New Jersey, due to the fact that ""hydrogen is extremely flammable."" They realized how unsafe it be to have an accident like that ""above a densely populateD area."" AnD so, builders were forceD to stop their work.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9627,4,I think the author includes this because she doesn’t want to leave her audience guessing about what would happen next. Then “I will take the test again.” This quote is saying she @MONTH1 have failed the test with the plant but she is never going to give up and that when spring comes she is going to try again. I feel as though the author added this to give a better understanding of how it feels to leave your homeland to come to a place you don’t no or understand such as the flower situation in the story. When she thought about the plants and how they smelt it gave her the old feelings that she had about her homeland and how close she was with her grandmother. She was so use to plants being free and growing rather than seeing them in pots and not having the room to grow. By seeing all this got Saeng to break down and cry. In conclusion I feel as though the author added the paragraph in the end for understanding and to all so let you no that Saeng @MONTH1 be in a new place with a new culture but she will never give up on that test until she feels that she has passed it.,2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
18,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, I must admit that the experts are centainly right cause I know people that stay on the computer all day and that’s really not good if you ask me. Instead of being on computers learning about faraway places, and talking to other people, you should go exercising, you should relax, and you should interact with family and friends. Exercising is much more better than being on a computer, and I say that to say this. When your on a computer just sitting there playing online games and checking other things out, or whatever the case @MONTH1 be, you get board, and hungry, and I know theres some snacks around you while your doing whatever your doing. Instead of being on a computer for @NUM1 or @NUM2 hours or maybe even all day getting fat. There are many ways you can exercise. You can take walks, you can go joggin, you could play a sport, I mean there are a lot of things you can do when your not on a computer. I know some people that could be workin all day and still come home to there computer. Rest is good also. You don't always have to jump on your computer, you could just relax watch a movie, eat some pop corn and just enjoy yourself, you could even take a nap for a little while or something but you don't always have to get straight on your computer if you really don't have to use it. The way I see it is family, and computers are always going to be there but at the same time which one is more important. Friends aren't always dependable so you really don't need them around only a selected few, but thats not the point. Both family, and your true friends have feelings, and if your not spending time with them over a computer that your gonna have when you leave, and come back home too something isn't right. Tomorrow isn't promised, we live for today. So enjoy life while you got the chance, and spend time doing something active, with family and friends, and if your really into computers, try to balance your time out.",3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
16415,6,"Al Smith and his group of architects encountered many problems when they attempted to build a mooring mast atop the Empire State Building in order to dock dirigibles. Before they began building, the architects realized that they could not land a dirigible on the buildings flat roof. They had to make over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications to the framework before they could think of docking dirigibles there. After they finished building the conical top of the Empire State Building, the team working on the project realized that dirigibles could never be docked at the Empire State Building for several reasons. First, landing dirigibles was dangerous to the people of the city. Dirigibles contained hydrogen, which is highly flammable, and if there was an accident like the Hindenburg in New York City, the damage would be devastating. Nature also prevented dirigibles from docking at the Empire State Building; air currents were too powerful, and if the ship did land, it would swivel around the spire of the building. It was possible to prevent this by putting lead weights into the back of the dirigible, but this was also unsafe for the people that lived underneath. The last obstacle the architects faced was an existing law that prevented airships from flying too low over urban areas. Although the architects had a great idea, they never realized why it would not work until after building.",4.0,,,,,4.0,3.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
3469,2,"Censorship in school libraries is important, but at the same time it is not necessary. I believe that many books in the school library are not apropriate for younger children, but these same books should not be taken out of our libraries becuase I feel like high schoolers are mature enough to be reading this material. The material in this books are no differnt than what goes on in the high school years.      Most of these books give a prospective on real life stories and @MONTH1 be able to help someone cope and realize that they are not alone. At the same time though many of these books do contain curse words, some sexual scenes, partying, drinking, and doing drugs. These books are too old for a elementary school age child and maybe even a middle school age child to be reading. For example the books by @PERSON1, these books are about a girl who becomes addicted to drugs, pregant, in jail, and homeless. I read these books, they are really good books, and they showed me how by just trying one drug, one time, could ruin your whole life. I learned a lot from these books, but I don't think that anyone younger than fourteen should be reading them.       There should be a limit on the censorship. Many things talked about in the books, are the same things talked about in the school hallways, what is the difference? That is why authors write about the things they do, so they can conect with teenagers. Many books are an authors experience, so they are meant for high school age. Many authors will put an age level on their books, like fourteen and older. Librabries should pay attention to these ratings before putting the books in the libraries.      Someone @MONTH1 become offened by what they read in a book, but I don't think that book should be taken off the shelf becuase of one person. If it becomes a bigger issue, than yes it should be taken off, but at the same time, that one book @MONTH1 be someone else's way from escaping the hardships in their life.     Many adults would disagree with my statements becuase they feel like if a teenager is reading about someone drinking, do drugs, or having sex, then they are more likely to do those things. I feel like this is not true becuase the book I am reading now, they are partying and drinking, but I'm not out doing that. What is the differnce between someone reading it in a book and seeing it on television? I see many worse things on the @LOCATION1 than I read in books. Parents should be happy that their teenager is reading and not playing video games or out with friends.     These are just my oppinons, some people @MONTH1 agree with me and others @MONTH1 disagree, but I am going to stick with my oppinons",4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
533,1,"@ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS1 computers are a part of our advanced technology. They have a positive effect on people because computers make almost everything easier, they can teach people things with tutorial or educational websites and @CAPS2 @CAPS3, and they keep people entertained in their spare time. Computers are becoming more and more advanced everyday and that's why I think people are so addicted to them, yet they do have positive affects. Computers make things a lot easier for a lot of people. If you really think about it, a lot of things that we use every day such as books, nice clothing, and music on the radio would not be here if it weren't for computers. We would have to hand write those books and hand sew our clothes. As for the music, we would just stomp our feet and clap our hands to make music. If ancient egyptians had computers, they would have built millions of @CAPS4. Our computers have programs like microsoft to help me do a major school assignment neatly. Computers have positive affects in this way. Everyday after I finish my homework and I go on the computer most adults think that all that us teenagers do on the computers are facebook and myspace. I do admit that I go on those websites, but if I notice that my grades are not in the best condition, I go on websites that can help me understand what I'm not getting. Ninety percent of the time that I do that my grades go up and I get a satisfying grade. I have also taught little cousins of mine how to add and subtract using the computer in pre-school. Computers are helping schools teach students. Besides education, computers can also keep us entertained with games such as virtual solitaire. When I go on the computer, I might need to research something that I have interest in. Maybe I might want to know when @LOCATION1 was invented or, if the universe ever stops. Maybe I don't want to watch @CAPS5 all day to keep me entertained. Computers will save me from bordom. When I use a computer, I am not addicted. In fact it has a very positive effect of me. Yes, I might stay up countless hours, talking to my friends on facebook, but to me that's a part of being a kid. The next day I might learn something in school that I want to search deeper into. That is what the computer is for. Without computers we would not have some of the knowledge we have @CAPS1. Their effect is the most positive effect on people, ever in my opinion.",4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,23.0
15061,6,The builders of the Empire state building faced obstacles in order to attempt to allow dirigibles to dock there. One issue was that the winds at the top of the building were very dramicaclly shifting because of the air currents. Because of this the Dirigible end would swivlle around the top of the building. An other issue was the people walking the @CAPS1 of New York below the building. To stop a Dirigible heavy lead weights had to be used. This was problamatic because one of the weights could very easily come lose and @DATE1. The law that was about a flying airship lingering too low over a city would be broken if a Dirigible had been stationd at the Empire State building.,2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
16424,6,"The Empire State Building was designed to become the world tallest buiding, with a few tricks up its sleave. The building was originally planned to also function as a Mooring mast for dirigibles. Unfortunately many problems lay in the way interning this theory into reality. One obstacle the constructors of the Empire State Building faced was the use of dangerous gases in the balloons. ""Most Dirigibles from outside the @LOCATION2 used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flamable. ""The use of hydrogen posed a dangerous threat to the safty of civilians in New York City. Another problem which was encountered with the building was the wind."" the back of the ship would swivel around the mooring mast... (the dirigibles) dangling high above pedestrians on the street, was neither practical nor safe. A third problem the builders had was the leaglity of the issue of mooring ships the buildings. There was an existing law against air ships flying to low over urban areas. ""With this law in place it would have been impossible for ships to moor. Although the builders had good intentions, they failed to realize the reality of the situation.",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
15724,6,"The obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there were @CAPS1. In @CAPS2 @NUM1 it reads that ""Over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications had to be made to  building's frame work."" This @CAPS3 that the designings of the Mast was going to take some time. Another obstacle almost called the end of the mooring mast. In @CAPS2 @NUM2 Architects @CAPS5 that, "" The mooring mast of the Empire State Building was destined to never fulfill its @CAPS6 pose, for reasons that a pparent befrore it was even constructed.' The greates reason was one safety: Most dirigibles from outside the @LOCATION3 used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flamable."" @CAPS7 this was such a huge @CAPS8 the owners thought of the densely populated area of New York and how People could get hurt.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9002,4,The author include s the last paragraph to show that she still has hope. it is the last sentence because @CAPS1  fong Ho wants to show that when all seems lost and your at the end of the line you can always hope for the better when spring comes so will a new beginning not only saeng’s plant but also for her life in a different country.,1.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
13520,5,"The author created a heartfelt mood in the memoir. The mood the author created was greatful mood. In the memoir it states ""skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today (and for which I am eternally grateful)"" This quote make me feel grateful for my culture and heritage. This story also make me feel proud. In the story it states ""My Mother and father had come to this country with such courage"". I feel so proud that they wanted to leave to come have a better life. Lastly the mood is happy. This story is happy because he learns a good lesson and he pround of his parents and culture.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
3818,2,"I do not believe that any material should be removed from library shelves.  I stand frmly with this because it is a choice to read material that is found offensive.  I would not expect a young child to seek out inappropiate materials because they are not interested in them.  Just as I would not expect an adult to go searching for a little kid book.  Basically there is a maturity barrier that seperates what each age level is interested in reading.     There is no point in removing any material from libraries because you would accomplish nothing.  People who would get offended mainly children are already exposed to violent videogames which glorify war and violence.  And you can not just go ahead and remove material that you think is offensive.     If you removed offensive material from libraries then I guess you would have to shut down the internet as well.  A child could much more easily go to a computer and find anything offensive they want to find with the click of a button.  Also at a library their are age level restrictions on cards that prevent a child from checking out offensive material.     Some people might enjoy material that is offensive.  If material is removed  alot of people would be upset that libraries do not carry what they wanted.  There would be alot of complaints, and problems.  And some people might stop going to the library because the content was limited..     The best thing to do is allow libraries to have whatever material they want to have.  Many people will be satasified, and most people will be happy",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
968,1,"Dear @LOCATION1, I think computers are a great tool for everyone if they use it right. Here are my reasons why. First of all, I think computers are good because news travels quickly. Using the internet, world changing news can spread like wildfire and inform everyone in seconds. It is great for staying in the loop and reading about things you need to know. This reminds me of the time when a massive earth quake hit @LOCATION2 and traumatized its citizens. Within moments of the accidents, it was already circling the internet. This brought mass attention to @LOCATION2 which caused many people to donate and needed items. Secondly, the computer is also good for researching topics for school and common interest. If you need facts for a school project you can easily search what you need through the internet wide variety of search engines, you will be able to pin-point exactly what you are also look up things that interest you. If you have a favorite sports team, band, or are interested in a famous figure, you have tons of information on them at your disposal. You can do all of this within the privacy of your on home so you can remain as secret as a @ORGANIZATION1 agent. This reminds me of the time when are of my idols died. Within seconds of hearing the tragic news I was able to search the topic and get an endless uphoria of information regarding his death. Finally, you can chat with someone from around the world if you wanted to! Using social networking sites like facebook and myspace, you can connect with your friends and chat with them for hours on end. You can also enter chatrooms with people who share a common interest with you. Just like how I talk to people about a band we both love. I believe access to news, research, and staying in touch with your friends is without a doubt the best reasons to use a computer. What are you waiting for? Get one!",5.0,6.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,26.0
7659,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist. The dry desert affected the cyclist because these was no water and the cyclist was dehydrated. The strong heat, because the cyclist could bare had a heat stroke. The animals because the snake could have killed the cyclist and these was no one in miles to help. In the story it says, “These was no one in sight, not a bulling, car or structure of any kind,” If the cyclist had needed help then the  cyclist could most likely have died. if I was the cyclist, I probably would have given up by then but I’m glad the cyclist didn`t. The features of the setting affected the cyclist because of the many things that could make happened to him.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
16522,6,"There were many obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there.  One obstacle was the stress on the building from the dirigible.  The stress of the dirigibles load and the wind pressure would have had to be transmitted all the way to the buildings foundation which was @NUM1 feet below.  So the steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modified and strengthened Another obstacle was that most dirigibles from outside the U.S use hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable.  The third obstacle was the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents.  Even if the dirigible was tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would move around uncontrollably.  Lastly, the last obstacle with the existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas.  This would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area.  These are the many obstacles that builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock their",4.0,,,,,4.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
61,1,"Do you spend all or most of your freetime sitting at your computer? People are spending too much time on computers. Obesity is a growing problem in today's society, people need to interact with eachother, and we need to get some fresh air. Computer are ruining these things for people. Unplug yourself from your computer. More and more people are becoming obese. This is do to spending too much time sitting down in front of computers. There is absolutely no exercise involved with being on your computer. People need to get outside and go jogging, play games or ride their bikes. Cutting back on computer time would cut back on the obesity problem in our society. Top scientists and researchers say that it is extremely important for people to interact with others face to face. To our whole life, we will have to interact and socialize with others. If you don't develop these skills, you won't be happy where you end up. Talking to people over the computer is nowhere near close to talking to someone face to face. Get out and get some fresh air. Go experience nature. Bring out on the beach, hiking in the woods or even just sitting on the swing in your backyard can be the most. Fresh air clear your mind. Time says that kids who spend time outside receive better grades than they would if they were inside on the computer. People need to releave stress so go outside. Click turn off your computers and get out of your chair. Go get some exercise, go interact with friendsand family, or even just go outside and get some fresh air while relaxing. People are wasting too much time on their computers and it's flushing our society down the toilet, so just turn off your computer.",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
3317,2,"Have you ever got or check out a book or something that has been racial to you or you think it should have been censored? I haven't but I checked out a book before that had a lot of racism in it and sex. Im not racist but some people are very racist. Some of the book in libraries aren't sutible for some viewers but yet again the can check it out, some books, movies, magazings, and others should be taking in consideration on being removed so some viewers can't read them.     In libraries there are book that have alot of racism in them. Some racism gets to be very bad in the book and it could intrest and provoke the young viewer to go down that road in a later life. Which could be very bad if you think about it. He could talk his friends into becoming what he is. talk them into becoming racist towards others. No mother or father wants their kids to be racist, but there are familys that are racist. Which i don't get because we are all the same to me.      In some books in the library there is sex talk that accores in it. Sometimes the sex talk gets into great detail which isn't sutible for young viewers, because they could get the idea that they want to try that with someone of a different genger. Which is okay if ur older but if ur really young and reading a book with sex talk in it. Well that's wrong because young kids shouldn't be introduced to that kind of life stile till later in life. Some parents wouldn't like their kids to read that kind of book. I know I won't let me kid read a book like that.      Music is something that everyone listens to, no matter is its rap, country, or the blues. Certain people like certain kind of music. Some people think that rap music is offensive and should be removed off the shelves. Well rap music is based on their past and how their life is. It does have some racism in it like certian rappers say bad words that aren't really sutible for young viewers.      Although some of the racism and cencorship that should be cencored are on shelves, I think it should be in a separete room so only older people can check it out or buy it, instead of the young kids getting a hold of it. I believe that books should have racism in it because it shows how much we have changed from the past",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
3922,2,"Books, music, movies and magazines are all offensive in different ways. They all are some how offensive to people if they have inappropreiate launguage or actions or stories in them. Should thease materials be taken off the shelf just because some people think they are to offensive to be on there and they don't want their children getting ahold of them?      When I go to the library I see different sections, fiction, nonfiction, ect. What I don't see is a section marked 'offensive'. Librarys don't do that. If parents or anyone don't want their children or any other children reading offensive books they should go with them and make sure they don't pick up offensive books, or have them wait in the childrens area.      Librarys usually don't carry offensive music. They have @CAPS1's for books to listen to. That might have offensive lauguage in it.  Before renting or buying the @CAPS1 you should ask someone who works at the library to tell you if they conscider it offensive or not. If they don't know then don't get the @CAPS1. Most of the time you know what your looking for before you go to the library anyways.      If movies are offensice they are marked rated @CAPS4. @NUM1 movies are the better ones. If parents or anyone do not want their children watching rated @CAPS4 movies before renting or buying one they should check the back where it always tells you. When I was young my mom would always check the back of movies because she didn't want me watching rated @CAPS4 movies. She herself thought most of them were too offensive for me to see.     Most of the time magazines don't have offensive lauguage in it but they sometimes have inappropreiate pictures of men and women. They also have a bunch of gossip stories you might not want your children to read. But if your letting your children read this then you should read it before they do to make sure for yourself there is nothing you wouldn't want them reading.      I don't think there is any reason to remove books, music, movies, magazines, ect., from the shelves if they are offensive to some. If a parent or anyone else doesn't want their children or anyone else's children to read something they think is offensive they should make sure they read something before they let them read it. Also walk around with the child in the library to make sure they don't pick up anything they wouldn't like, or have their child pick things from the childrens section. Some people like reading books, magazines some might think are offensive. Everyone shouldn't be punished for those who just don't want their children finding offensive things in the library",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
7180,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist because it is so hot the cyclist keeps drink and sweating water so he is really work down from dehydration and fatigue. Also just the feeling of how unsafe it is out there. Like how he saw a ridiculously large snake or how it just keep getting hotter.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
6647,3,because he was telling to make it wirte he nite to go and he much it because he was drieing to soil and because he was drieing 55 mph pert hour and 12 mph and sometime life can feel so cruel in life ya dig and that ia all I can said right now.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
7697,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist. It seems to be the more despirate the situation the more determand her becomes. Pg @NUM1 (I was going to die and the birds would pick me clean). Right after he thinks this he climbed away for the abandoned factory of Juices and dreams. He says pg @NUM1 come troubles, thirst and tean where all behind me, this shows that after a situation the bilaver tells realeoved of all earthley obligations. Not only does the settings affect the cyclist but the entire story around him.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
1309,1,"Dear newspaper editor, @CAPS1 you have a computer? @CAPS1 your kids spend all of their time on it talking in people or going on facebook or myspace? Well that’s fun and all for a few hours but some people spend a lot of time on there. They don't go out and get exercise or interact with their family and friends. Also they @MONTH1 end up getting in trouble in school or at home. If you spend all of your time on the computer doing whatever your doing you won't have time to go out and exercise. Not only will it be in appeling but it could be dangerous for your health after a while. All your time gets sucked into the computer and when your on it you feel like your not on for a long time and it ends up being like a few hours. It even happens to adults, my mom was on the computer for about an hour and she felt like it was only a few mins. When your on your computer for several hours you tend to got sucked in and not interact with anyone. I know this from experience. A few months ago I spent about a whole month just coming home from school and being on the computer for several hours. This effected my life a lot, I stopped going out on weekends with my friends, I always wanted to stay home when my family wont out. Then my mom confronted me about it and I realized all of my time on the computer wasn't good. I was missing out on a lot of things. Kids @MONTH1 also get at home or at school if they are on the computer for a long time they @MONTH1 not @CAPS1 their homework and end up failing a class and then stay back. Statistics show that @PERCENT1 of the kids that stay on the computer for a long time end up either failing a class or staying rack. They @MONTH1 also get in trouble at home because they dont @CAPS1 their chores because their busy on the computer and neither the child or the children like getting in fights with one another. Now I know in a way it's good to have computers and be able to use them so we can look up information and its nice to sometimes talk to people on the computer for a little while but being on the computer for a little while but being on the computer for to long of an amount ran really mess you and your social life up. So all im trying to prove is that computers are an amazing invention but we should just use them a little less and get out and excersise, and have fun with our family and friend and @CAPS1 good in school and at home so we @CAPS1 get to spend some time on the computer. I hope you see it my way now.",4.0,5.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,23.0
15618,6,"The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there are that dirigible use different gases to stay aloft. As stated in paragraph 6, The first obstacle the builders faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock at the Empire State Building is ""To their expanded use in New York City was the lack of a suitable landing area."" From paragraph @NUM1 it states that if a mooring mast was to be droped to the roof of the building and a single cable tether would add stress to the building and pressure would cause them having to modify the building and framework, which cost over sixty thousand dollars. In other words most dirigibles outside the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable. Also from paragraph @NUM2 the mooring mast was nature itself. The winds would cause constantly shifting from air current. ""The mooring mast of the Empire State Building was destined to never fulfill its purpose, for reasons that should have been apparent before it was ever constructed.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
16278,6,"There were several major obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One such problem was that, ""the stress of the dirigibles load and the wind pressure would have been transmitted all the way to the building's foundation..."". It cost over @MONEY1 to make the modifications nesescary to do this. Also, the, ""roof had to be completed before the framing of the mooring mast could take place."" @CAPS1, they did not solve several other obstacles. Forein dirigibles normally ""used hydrogen rather than helium..."" And this would cause vast damage if they crashed in ""a densely populated area such as downtown New York."" In addition, being so high, the dirigible could not be weighted down in the back and thus would swivll around the mast. There was also a law prohibiting ""airships flying too low over urban areas. In the end there were too many obstacles so the dirigible docking plan was scrapped.",4.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
6711,3,"The setting affects the cyclist in many ways. First, he couldn’t get water from anywhere because he was in a dessert with nothing but ramshackle sheds and rusty camps. Second, there were short rolling hills, and rough roads which made it hard to ride on. There were tumbleweeds in his way and large poisons snakes. The heat made it hard to keep riding. And there were no buildings structures of people around to give him a lift or water. That is how the setting affects the cyclist.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9140,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because Saeng failed to get a certain plant because it died but winter is over in spring is here it’s her chance to get that flower. For example in the story it says Saeng broke down and wept. It was already dusk when Saeng reached home. It’s not her fault because in the story, it says the wind was blowing harder, tearing off the last remarks of green and chicory weeds. The concludes because it will be a next time when you see Saeng again with a beautiful plant in her hand.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
9459,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because when Saeng was saying this to herself, she made a promise to not give up getting her license and the hibiscus makes her feel like she is at home again. In the text when the mother says, ""@CAPS1 seen this kind blooming along the lake. Its flowers arent as pretty, but its strong enough to make it through the cold months here, this winter hibiscus. Thats what matters.” when she says this it makes Saeng not sad because she knows that the hibiscus will remind her of the hibiscus at home and that gives her the power to want to try again in the spring.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
9555,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph as a way to say that in due season she will take the test that she failed in the belief that the hibiscus will help her to overcome the obstacles. I believe that she she bought the plant when she failed the test, that she hope that with the blossoming of the plant, I will give her a time table as to when she is ready to try again.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
4503,2,"Should libraries be more careful about what they put out in their place of establishment? Of course they should. Libraries have all kinds of people walking in and out everyday. Certain rated material should be put in certain spots for certain people. The library should be more strict on the material that the people in the library look at on a day to day basis. Libraries need to become a little more organized.     Libraries have people that come in and out of the library everyday. People of all different ages and anyone is welcome to come in the library. With that being said, children of all ages come into the library all the time and pick all kinds of material. Children of course can't read everything in the library. They have to stay within their appropriate rated material selection. So if the library is more censored and strict about the material children can't get their hands on the material that they shouldn't be seeing at that time in their lives. You would want your seven year old child seeing inappropriate or offensive material, right.      Libraries should put the material that for adults eyes only in one completely different section of the library than what they would want the children that come to the library to see. With doing that it decreases the chances of the children getting a hold of material that they should see. Also, some books that the library think that some children should be able to see just might be offinsive to another set of people and wouldn't want their children to see. So books @MONTH1 show racism, or maybe another kind of discrimination and it @MONTH1 not be the goal of the book to make that suggestion but it still is in the book and in the wrong hands it can be a very bad thing especially in some childrens minds.      The libraries really need to just stop and think for a second is this book really appropriate for this age group or even for this establishment. Libraries have become where children are just checking out books by themselves and to me thats a problem. I think that children need a parents concent to check out a book from a library but do the libraries care, no. Library @MONTH1 check their inventory and notice a book @MONTH1 be missing but guess what, by that time its already to late. Children are able to just walk right out with books these days and know one will even think that they just took a book without checking it out. When children find a piece of material in a library and they know they aren't suppose to have it and they know they cant get out of the library with it they might decide to just take the book. The sercurity wont think twice to check the child and what is the result the childs mind is corrupted. Guess what you can blame it on the though the library. Isen't that something the child got the material from your friendly neighborhood library.     Oranization is the key. Libraries need to orginize their material better, plane and simple. It's really not that hard. They need to review the content that thier putting on the shelves in their establishment. I feel that the people at the library are lazy personally. If they just gave a little more effort maybe the children wouldn't get their hand on material that they have no buisness getting a hold of. Just pay attention to whats going on in the library. Their are books everywhere, right. Their are children, correct. The children @MONTH1 be in their appropriate rated section of the library but maybe a book from the adult section of the library stumbled over there by accident. Though it was an accident it still happened and it can be prevented and it should be prevented for the sake of the children. All we need is a little more organization.     As you can see from the following libraries just don't about our children as much as we do. It's okay that everyone is welcome in the library no questions asked but, they people need to stay in the designated place in the library. Children shouldn't be allowed in the adult section for saftey. Also a book from the adult side shouldn't be in the childrens section because anything can happen and corruption will rise. We need stricter libraries. Better sercurity to what they children are looking at and where the material is. Also the library really needs to look at the material and decide if it is appropriate for all the readers that @MONTH1 look at the material. Organization is the key to all our worries, if we use a bit more effort this won't be a problem anymore.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
12389,5,"In the memoir, the author creates lots of moods. First of all, the author creates this mood that makes you want to cry. While there is a kind of Love mood here. Narciso loves his home because that's where he grew up and he cherished it. Also, Narciso is graceful that he got the chance to grow up in @LOCATION1. Finally, he's happy that he has a Cuban culture and that he has good caring parents. The author has good moods.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
3723,2,"Newspaper staff and/or whom it @MONTH1 concern,      Reading material found in a library is very useful and informative to the world, there is no limit to what could be found on paper. Whether it be offensive or not, having limits to books will only create tension, effect the economy, and will lead to illegal activity, ironically enough, in which offensive books will be written and sold, completely undercover.      In today's world, it would be nearly impossible to pick up a book and factually state that it is not offensive. Almost everyone has some little issue with something in the world today, and because of that, original and unoffensive material are hard to come by. With the stripping of offensive material from libraries, authors will be devastated, not just emotionally, but will be out of a job and will have less income. Because of how virtually impossible it is to write a book that is not offensive, authors will become very frustrated, and most are very passionate about what they do. Also, because almost all reading material is offensive in some way, there will be little to no reading material on the selves of the world or nation's libraries. @CAPS1 could potentially lead to violent protests that quickly tear down even the most successful of nations. However, physical devastation would not be the only toll paid for the stripping of offensive reading material from libraries      Books cost money; to make books costs money, to buy books costs money. Paper companies would take a major nose-dive in the market, having almost no clientel. When a major divistion such as the paper industry falls, it will bring others down as @CAPS2, and due to the nation's market complexity, almost all major companies rely on paper. @CAPS1 would ruin the economy. Some might say, '@CAPS1 means that the people of @LOCATION1 will be much more green!' @CAPS2, the past few centuries when economics and the environment are put on a scale, economics takes the cake by a mile. Obviously, @CAPS1 will do much more harm than good. The people of the world always have a priority. Also, the majority of the people don't enjoy having something taken that they have grown so fond to.      People, in general, want what they can't have. An obvious example would be illegal drugs; the drug market is extremely successful, but it's illegal. If people were to have these currently illegal drugs for their use, being completely legal, chances are that the success of drug marketing will plummet. The opposite situation for books: We have them now, but when they are taken, we will want them even more. People who read tend to be very passionate about literature and very intellegent. All it takes is one group to gain numbers, and have a very talented speaker persuede others to follow in a potentially violent revolt to be given back permission to write and publish alleged 'offensive' books. All other material found in libraries, such as music and movies, being taken away will have the same effects, give or take a few similarities or differences.      Avoiding such problems is easy, keep the books and all other material in a library on the shelves. It will only be problematic to take it all away, especially for being offensive, when there are very few books that the general population will find not offensive. If keeping the material in libraries means individuals will become offended for very different reasons, let it be organized chaos. @CAPS1 is how people work, and keeping the material on the selves is how the people are pleased or motivated",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
12615,5,"The mood that is created by the author is joy. The reason I think that is because Narciso's parent's are immigrants who works hard. They could've stayed in their own country but they wanted a better future for Narciso. When Narciso realized that he felt happy and filled with joy. In paragraph @NUM1 it says ""I will always be grateful to my parents."" When you're grateful you feel happyness. This is the mood that I think this author created.",1.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
9404,4,The author include it because her mother took the test and passed it and the daughter wanted to do the same Just like her mom. And she can only take it in the spring because there is no flowers out in the winter.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
9683,4,"Minfong tto ended the story with aphrase dialogue because it was about the main topic of the story. Saeng was to buy a plant and bring it home, but when she did so, her mother did not approve. The narrative states ""You what?"" Her mother stared at her incredulously""(Ho ). When her mothesaid this, it showed that she was displeased. The narrative states, ""I-I failed the test""(Ho). Saeng was not proud to displease her parents in any way. By saying, ""When hey come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return  and this hibiscus is budding, then i will take that test again""(Ho), the author is just showing Saeng's love and want to grow foe her parents; it shows maturity. ",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
3196,2,"Cencorship in books is one of the main concerns in @LOCATION1. If it was up to me to remove a book from a shelf, I would not do it, to my personal opinion, I think that we as @CAPS1's should just read over the probloms and quit complaining about it. Yes, we do have some books that people seem to not like, such as 'The @CAPS2 of @ORGANIZATION1', but the only reason that it has been pulled off the shelfs of librarys and schools is because it uses the word 'nigger', and I find it to be kind of idiodic, that people would over react to that word when themselves were not even around to know the real meaning of.     Cencorship in music. This is another big concern for people in @LOCATION1. The lyrics used in most songs I find to be 'disturbing' or are trying to get people and young kids to comite acts of crime and other illigal acts. Music such as rap and the lyrics used in rap are whats making kids do stupid stuff, the music talks about sex, drug usage, and murder. I don't think that I would go as far as to pull it off the shelf, but I would make the sellers put them in a 'can only perchas if @NUM1' section. Most of the crime we have today people blame on music.     To my observation about these subjects are that I have seen people read a book that uses profound language in it and be ok with it, they don't over react to it so therfor it shouldn't be removed from shelfs. To my observation about the rap music, sure, in a way it should be pulled off the shelfs and never be sold again, but, I have seen people who listen to it and never smoke, never kill, and never harms another person. To my own experience I listen to some of these gore obbsessed bands and read profound languaged books and got over it, these thing should be overlooked and forgotten.     This is just a common scence thing but, there are a lot of things that should be pulled off shelfs, I would, and it has to do with movies and magazines. Some movies have always been a problom to society, I have witnessed this that some movies show just a little bit to much nudeity in it, which I seem to think is not a good thing that our younger children should see, whether it's at the theater or on t.v. this things should be pulled.     My observation about magazines it that I have personal her one of my best friends say that 'I want to look as skinny and this girl does on this magazine because I'm to fat'. There are a lot of magaziens that should not be showed or read because it does say that skinny is better and so many girls and women are starving themselves to look like the person on the cover of a magazien, and it's rediculous to see that happen, If it was my choise, I would ban these matirals from useage or sight, mainly because this is all just one big peer presure conspericy. I would not ban all of the things that I have put in this paper, just the things that I that personal find disturbing or not fot the publics eye's.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
3509,2,"From the point of view of a student, books, music, movies, magazines, etc., should not be removed from shelves just because of the material it contains. I read, watch, and listen to things everyday that my parents my not be too thrilled about, but it hasn't changed the person I am today. You can't escape things like drugs, sex, and other explicit things that we might not want our children reading about. It's in society. These things are everywhere, and just taking these materials off the shelves are not going to solve the problem. I think that we have a freedom to read about, listen, or watch whatever we would like, and removing these things takes away our freedom. I think that inappropriate books, music, movies, magazines, and etc., should not be taken off the shelves.      '@CAPS1' items are all over society. It's everywhere you look. Billboards, signs, books, magazine, music, television, movies, etc., but taking things like books, movies, music, and magazines off the shelves are not going to stop the inappropriate behavoir. Everyone in society is still going to act this way, whether you can stop your children from hearing about it or not. You still have commercials, billboards, etc. What are you going to do? Ban your children from life in general? No, I don't think so.      Reading, listening, learning, about this stuff isn't going to make your child a horrible person. I personally think, at a certain age, they need to know about this stuff. For example, I'm a good student, I behave well outside of school, I have good friends, and I get along with my family. I also read every single one of @PERSON1 books. All of them are about people who do drugs, are suicidal, and do sexual related things. These books are extremely good. Definitely the best books I've ever read, but reading these books hasn't changed who I am. I don't do drugs, I'm not into sexual things, so why would it hurt if I read books about it?      From my experience, reading these things are honestly kind of helpful. It takes you deeper into things. Everyone knows the basic learning you get in school, which is extremely @CAPS2. Reading these books, and listening to this kind of music, and watching these kinds of movies, takes a whole different point of view. Back to my experience with the @PERSON1 books, you read stories that are based off of her life and relationship with her daughter. Crank, @CAPS3, and @CAPS4 is a trilogy of books that show the life of @LOCATION1. You see the struggle, the hurt, and the pain the family goes through as @PERSON2 starts to walk with the monster, also known as @CAPS5. Reading these books makes me realize that I don't want to ever put myself through the things @PERSON2 does to herself, and her family. It gives a whole new look on things. After reading these, I believe I won't ever do 'offensive' things.      From my experiences as a student, I don't believe taking offensive material off the shelves is necessary. It gives a deeper look into information about these things. Also, you can't escape explicit material. These things are a part of life, something you can't run and hide from. You just have to accept the fact that it's there, and it's not going away. If you think your children are going to start doing those kinds of things after reading them, talk to them about it. You can't protect your children from offensive material. At least not forever",6.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,26.0
7420,3,"The setting affected the cyclist because the terrain you ride on can determine how you ride. For instance when you have hills and dry weather like they did when it said “flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills” The one easy terrain was now made more difficult and only added to his frustration and his dehydration from having no water. Also the heat contributed plenty and it was there the whole time.  Sometimes he didn’t seem to notice or feel it but it was there and it was taking energy from him: Like when it said, “The sun was beginning to beat down, but I barely noticed it.” He didn’t know it but that took from him so he drank more water and that affected his ability to take enough to complete the ride.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
4558,2,"Yes, I believe that certian materials should be removed from the shelves if they are found offensive. Some people do not want to read about those things that they have less intrest in. Materials like that can offend many people, so they should be removed from public shelves.      For example, someone, by accident, @MONTH1 stumble upon a book containing inappropriate materials. They could take it home and begin reading it, and realize that the material that they are reading contains information that offends them. That really concerns some people and can hurt the library that held the book, and they could begin losing customers.      Another reason why inappropriate materials should not be publicly displayed is, children. What if a young child was wondering around a store or a library, and randomly picked up a book or magazine with offensive pictures in it? That young child would see things that were not meant for that child to see. But, it does happen. Imagine how angry the parents of the child would be. They would most likely do everthing they could to get those materials removed from being displayed in public and from being within a child's reach. Children deffinately do not need to be seeing those things and also, even some adults do not even prefer it.      Religion is also an example of why places should watch what they put on their shelves. It @MONTH1 be against some religions to read inappropriate materials. And with out them knowing their book contained it and they read it, they would be greatly offended and very upset. That could turn many people away from reading certain books, or even going to the store where they even purchased those materials.      In conclusion, all of these are perfect examples of why inappropriate materials should be removed to prevent people from being offended. This is why materials such as books, magazines, etc. should be removed from public shelves, because they can offend many people",4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
7278,3,"In the short story “Do not exeed the speed limit” by Joe Kurmaskie, the setting has great impact on the cyclist. In the begining of the story he describes the scenery as ""@CAPS1"". As he continued following the old mens out dated advice. It lead  him through more barren lands. When he came to the first ""town"" he described it as a ghost town. The second setting he arrived at was “One romshackle shed, several rusty pumps, and a corral that couldnt hold in the lamest muic” he continued moving to the next town, which was @NUM1 away, he came to what he thought was a Welch's Grape juice factory and bootling plant. This tools a toll on his confidence because he said ""I hung my head"" he moved on and had finally arrived at un abandoned buiding called ""@PERSON2 and wilbers’s fish camp. ""This is where he drunk water and became repleshed. The setting had a great effect on the cyclist. Because depending on the location, decided weather he would live or die in the hot deserts of California.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
252,1,"Dear local newspaper, I also agree that computers have a positive effect on people. I agree with this because the computer can teach people things. Also people can talk to each other, and believe / create whatever they want. Computer have a positive effect on people because i believe the computer can teach people a lot. The computer can make things visual to kids and out. I know that when i was younger i used to play math and science games on the computer to help me study for tests. The computer also helps out with adults and their jobs. I don't know what half the adults in the world would do without computers. If you think about all jobs that are happening today also @CAPS1 of the computer. Such as e-mail. What would some buisnesses do. without e-mail? also adults like to check websites for the news and to catch upon sports. we can all learn so much from the computer and there are so many people who @CAPS1 their jobs on computer. we all learn something everyday and with the computer, we can make it kind. Also the computer benefits online chats e-mail and now even with a cam you can talk face to face with people all over the world I know e-mail helps out so many people who live long distance and e-mail doesn't take long at all. I know thanks to cam and microphones that are buit into computer helped our because now I can talk to all my friends and family and see them I hear them without traveling just simply clicking a button. There are websites now that @CAPS1 of taveing to @NUM1 people online and over cam or microphone. Things like this help out so much somepeople just. Think about all those people who have relationships and what not, @CAPS1 it off of computers really do help out. Lastly all the people who @CAPS1 their imagination off computers, all those people who put that thoughts and feelings into the computer. I know plenty of people who type their feeling because they would never dare say them a loud. Now imagine if computers faded away? That's what i think about what people say such things as the computers not. Everything is useful and everything has at least some sort of positive effect coming out or it. So @CAPS2 in my opinion computers do bring out a positive effect to the world.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
10234,4,"The author conclude the story with her saying in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding then I will take that test again. to say the she will not gust out like that.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
9835,4,The author concludes the story with that paragraph because she wants us to know that she’s not giving up on her test. The author wants to inform the readers that she’s not giving up “…then I will take that teat again” which clearly states she still has hope. Author wants to continue on her test to find the right flower. This is why the author concluded the story with that paragraph.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
12828,5,"In the memoir the author had a certain mood. The mood of the article is somewhat happy because in the memoir the author is remembering good things. The author is reminising and being grateful for being what he is. Narciso is remembering and bringing us through his heritage and home, which is in a happy setting. The mood of the article is happy which the memoir was.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
12222,5,"The mood that was created by the author in this memoir is being happy. The author is happy how Where she use to live she left there to move to @LOCATION1, and made it feel just like home instead of looking back and thinking no place could ever take my real home. The author was positive about this memoir.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
9855,4,"I say the only reason why the author included that last paragraph was to show she was not going to give up easy. She was still going to take it again, she might get good luck from the hibiscus. Saeng was walking home one day from failing her driver’s test and she realizes that she recognizes a flower so she went to a florist to see if she can buy it. When she does purchase it she goes home and gives it to her mom and they plant it. So maybe it can bring back good memories from her home town or just good luck I think.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
3772,2,"I belive that everyone has there own appioin on whats appropreate, and whats not. You can't @CAPS4 taske a couple people and ask there oppinon because everyone is differant, we all have our owne rights to know books and what the aurthor realy wanted us to learn or here about. Like i said everyone is differant if you @CAPS6't want your @CAPS1 to read it tell your @CAPS1 why and explain it to them. @CAPS6't make the rest of the @CAPS1 suffer.         I belive some parents need to look at our ansatre there wernt even aloud to have dreams and thoughts. Why would we want our @CAPS1 to go threw the same thing they had to, @CAPS1 @CAPS2 everyone shopuld have a right to look to read listen to what ever makes them happy, So what if i has volger launguage in it get over it or @CAPS6't listen to it all.            Would you want someone telling you that your life story for example was crummy and diddent like the way you worded things. Thats the way you talk it's because it's your life story. The way i see it is let our children of this generation learn all they can about the bad stuff so they can stay away from it and also infor them of the good stuff in life so there won't allways be in fear. Let the chinlden read what ever they want to read. So what they curse tell your @CAPS1 that its bad launguage. @CAPS6't get ride of good books movies music.(@CAPS3:) @CAPS4 because the Author has a diff veiw on life than yours. Open your @CAPS5, @CAPS6't be so shallow",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
12147,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is the begining of the memoir he tells how his parents had a hard time coming to another country and having to deal with allot of problem and the mood is really sad or with allot of suspense and by the middle of the memoir he talks about how he grown up in a family that everbody was so happy and live most everbody together and they had allots of feast and that mood changed to a more happy mood or joyfull mood that he had with his family, and by the end he talks about he thank his parents for the person that he is and all the opportunities they give him and that change the mood to a thankful mood or a grateful mood. And that is how the author creates all the moods on the memoir.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
7004,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist in many ways. First, the heat made the cyclist overheated. For instance, the weather was sunny in June. Also, the hills made the cyclist very tired. For example, the cyclist was losing energy and had to keep pushing. Lastly, the setting had no places that could have helped the cyclist. For instance, the cyclist had trouble finding a place with water to drink. In conclusion, the setting affected the biker in a very negative way.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
1693,1,"Dear Newspaper, Have you notice that now a days more and more people are becoming overweight? Well its true. People say that it is because of eat a lot of fast food but I think that since we are always on the computer and not excersing helps contribute to it. Also as the technology is getting better it is keeping people from going outside and enjoying the beautiful nature. Sitting infront of the computer isn't going to help our environment. Lastly, kids aren't getting out of their house to interact with friends and family because technology has been able to let us communicate without leaving our house. @CAPS1 not saying that we should downgrade our technology, but we need to find a way limit it. To start on with, technology has a role in the increasing rate of obesity. Some @MONTH1 say that people chose not to excerise but if we limit things then they won't have to chose. As a kid myself, I love to be on the computer. My parents are always trying to get the computer and take the dogs for a walk and I always say ""@CAPS1 busy"" @CAPS2 its true, I don't really like to go outside because I have a computer to play games or talk to friends and to be honest excersing to me seems important but I don't do it because I'm always on the computer. I think that other people could feel this way so thats why we need to limit the computer. Secondly, global warming is occuring right now and people would rather be inside on the computer then go outside and enjoy the nature. @CAPS2, you @MONTH1 be able to look up ways to stop global warming, but does it mean you are going to really do it? Some @MONTH1 not because they could just stay on the computer and keep ""@CAPS3 up"" ways to help another things is that when we use our computers, we use electricity, which adds to global warming so it we limit the use of computers then people could go enjoy nature and not destroy it. Lastly, internet sites like myspace, @CAPS4, @CAPS5, etc have allowed us to communicate with friends and family but we are still not able to get out and interact with them. When we get out and interact with our friends we gain like communication teamwork and respect friend and family can teach you this with them the computer they can't. Also interacting with your family and friend @MONTH1 let you go in new places that you haven't been before and on the computer you can't go there. Interacting with friends & family is better than talk thru the computer. In conclusion if we stay on the computer then we won't get excerise enjoy nature or interact with friends. So we need to act now limit compute usage!",5.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
15904,6,"The obstacles that the builders of The Empire State builduing faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there were they had to allow the dirigibles to anchor there for several hours for refueling or service, and to let passengers on or off. The dirigibles were docked by means of electric Winch, Which hauled in a line from the front of the Ship and then tied it to a mast. The body of the dirigibles Could Swing in the breeze, and yet passengers Could Safely get on and off the dirigible by walking down a gangplank to an open observation platform. They had to go through all these obstacles in order to build The Empire State builduing.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
13591,5,"In the story The Blueprints of Our Lives by Narciso Rodriguez the @CAPS1 creats a mood, here is the mood created. The first mood is the one of her house. She describes friends and family with cuban music along with the food here is one example of the food and music ""Passionate Cuban music...filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen. Another mood is the family and friends. An example of this is in paragraph four where it says ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family."" And those are some reasons how the @CAPS1 set a mood in The Blueprints of our lives.",1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
12025,5,"In this memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives, there was only one @LOCATION1 mood I think. The mood I think the author was trying to make people feel is happiness. There are a lot of examples that make me think that. One example that I think is best is the last sentence ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home"" I think this is the best example of happiness because even though they didn't live in the biggest house, the were still happy with what they had. That is what I think the mood created by the author was.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
113,1,"Dear @CAPS1 paper, @CAPS2 name is @PERSON1 and I am writing this letter on the count of the computer issue. @CAPS2 look on this subject is the oppisite. People @MONTH1 spend more time on the computer then exercising, but theycould still be social in chat rooms. People can use laptops out doors. You can spread your imagination with the games you can play. Lets get onto @CAPS2 first point, being social. The experts say that people are spending less time with there friends and family then on the computer. They @MONTH1 be spending less time with there friend and family physicly, but who said there not being social. Theres facebook, @CAPS3, and chat rooms. You can talk to your friend on there so they on being social. Not being physicly social but verbily social. On to @CAPS2 next subject the expert say were not enjoying out doors, but the over looked something here it is. If were not enjoying outdoors then half of amarica would be as plae as can be. Then theres laptops. You can use thoughs out doors. People that have laptops can go outside on a sunny day grab some fruit and relax. You could stay out there till the batterie deis. Then just grab the pluge and keep relaxing its easy. Computers also help your imagination. Some computer games help expand your imagination because when your playing games you think of things that could make the game better. Simulaters help you design or even controll things. Some games allow you design and play as a character you created. They help you jobs that you might be intrested in. For me computer games expanded @CAPS2 drawing. All these thing can be reversed. No one is a robot that repeats what they do over and over again. Humanity has the power to get off the computer, and go outside or be social. As I just proved everything you can physicly you can do on the computer.",4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
8878,4,He states this as the conclusion because it shows the faith that she has in the flower and how it will bring her luck for her up coming test. She feels like the familiar flower is out of place as she is and they can relate to somethings.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
13209,5,"The created by created by the author in the memoir is happyness because his happy cause he grow up in @LOCATION1 and for the courage of his family. Also love because he said ""I will never forget that house or it gracious neighborhood or the many things I learned there about how to love.' @CAPS1 admiration ""For their strength and perseverance.""",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
12581,5,"Narciso Rodriguez created a caring and greatful mood throughout the memoir. He did this @CAPS1 never premoting himself, but always thanking his parents and talking about his childhood in a way where everybody helped eachother. Fer example in @CAPS2 @NUM1, he talks about the sacrifices his parents made to give their children a better life. He states, ""They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends, and careers in the country they loved. They struggled both personally and financially, braving the harsh northern winters while yearning for their native tropics and facing cultural hardships."" @CAPS1 writing about the hardships and sacrifices others (in his case his parents) had to go through and make in order for his life to be better, Narciso Rodriguez shows apretiation towards them, which then gives the reader a sense of gratefulness. Also, in @CAPS2 @NUM2, he describes how his neighborhood was like a family. He stated, ""Growing up in the environment instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relative. Quite the contrary, our neighborhood was made up of mostly Spanish, Cuban, and Italian immigrants at a time when overt racism was the norm and segregation prevailed in the United States. In an neighborhood, despite customs elsewhere, all of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship."" This @CAPS2 gave me a sense of how in times of struggle, people will come together and help each other push through. So it gives the reader a sense of caringness. Narciso Rodriguez produce a mood of caringness and greatfulness throughout his memoir.",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
13253,5,"In the memoir the author gives off a happy and greatful mood. He talks not have they changed their home into a tradition Cuban home, the hearth of which is the kitchen. Narciso says he is eternally greatful for the skill of cooking his parents gave him. They had ""family"" over all the time, and they would even let people stay over till they got back on their feet. He was greatful for them doing everything they could so their kids could have a greater life. They had also taught him the real definition of ""Family"" and he is greatful to them for ever more.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
3807,2,"Every person is different, and in being different, people have many varying veiws as to what is or is not acceptable or offensive. Something that is very offensive to one person @MONTH1 not be offensive to someone else, it is all a matter of values and beliefs. Libraries contain a variety of books, music, movies, magazines, and other materials on a variety of topics, some of which @MONTH1 not be appropriate for everyone.     I do not believe that a material should be removed from shelves just because one person or a group of people find it offensive. The offended group is not being forced to read that book or magazine, listen to that music, or watch that movie. Materials are placed in a library for the public to enjoy, not just to please certain people.      I do beleive, however, that materials should be clearly sorted in a library. If they are clearly sorted, people are less likley to take something that offends them by accident, and can completely avoid books, movies, magazines, and music that they do not to read, watch, or listen to. This can also help keep children away from unwated material.      To conclude, materials should not be removed from shelves if they are found offensive. What is offensive to one person, another person might enjoy watching, listening to, or reading. It is impossible to please everyone, because every person has different veiws, but a situation can be avoided by careful organization. If everything that was found offensive to certain people was taken off of library shelves, there would be nothing left",5.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,23.0
14986,6,The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles while constructing a mast that would make it possible for dirigibles to dock. The greatest obstacle of all was nature itself. It was unrealistic to have a dirigible tied by a single cable tether to remain intact when the winds on top of the building were constantly changing due to violent air currents. The back of the ship would swivel around the mast which was hazardous for pedestrians. There was nothing the builders could do to alter nature so their ideas soon became unrealistic. Another obstacle the builders faced while constructing the building was that the dirigible's weight would add to much stress (especially with added wind pressure) to the building's frame. They then decided the only way to fix that problem was to shift the weight to the building's foundation.,2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
3643,2,"When u go places there will alway be something that one won't like not everyone likes everything. A library has to be the worst place for people not liking things. Censorship in libraies is getting worse and worse everyday, it is in everything in books, movies, music, and magazines. Should we keep things like this on shelfs? Everyone that will read this will think differently about censorship in libraries.     On the shelfs is lots of things with bad laugauge naughty pictures. These books little kids can pull off a shelf and see things that there parents dont want them to see. Censorship is everywhere not just in libraries. The books and things in the libraries need to be changed and not be so bad. If there is a need for things like this Then have a special store for things like this",1.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,1.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
4549,2,"What I belive is that certain material should be allowed on a shelf. The time it takes an author to write a book, is very long. It could be their passion to write, so why would you want to take that away. Every person has an opinion, which is allowed to have by freedom. Material in libraries are sorted by age group, and as long as the material is fitted for that age group, there should'nt be a problem.      There are many books that some people do not want their children to read, but the books actually help children learn. For example, a book that you think is boring could actually be interesting to another person. There are many opinions in the world, that is why there are so many differnt kinds of books. If you took away a book or certain material off the shelf, how could that help a child. Yes it could have bad words or beliefs, but it could help someone. If a person is a loner or just likes to be by them selves, they could learn from the character's mistake in the book.           Many children these days are getting bullied or pick on, and don't want to tell an adult. If there was a book that they read about a person being bullied, maybe it would encourage them to tell a teacher. Yes I agree, every material has something in it that another person does not like. There are a couple books that I did not approve of, myself, but I know that it has connected with a child some where in the world. Every person does not grow up in the same conditions, but material could teach them.      You should stop and think if you was a writer, would you want someone to throw your hard work in the trash? Every time there is a big rally about an author writing about a certain belief, there is negative thoughts. No one stops and thinks about someone else or their family. All they care about is their own family. Even the author's family is embarassed of the rally, but no one stops and thinks of their family and how they feel.      Think about you opinion, does anyone care about what you think? That is why as a person, we should not bring down someone's opinion, and let them say what they believe on paper. How would you like it, if someone threw your belief or opinion in the trush? If there is a rally about a material in the library, next time think before you judge. Would you want someone judging your belief or opinion?",2.0,2.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
3768,2,"In this persuation essay it will talk about the content of should we or shouldn't we remove all offensive books, music, movies, magazines of the shelf. In this essay everyone will agree with the content or be in the opposing side of the aurgument. In this essay it isn't the exception that this essay will disagree with some of the viewing audience; however, there are situations in which the audience can go with both sides.      To begin with, in the matter of the case should we or should we not remove offensive books,music, magazines, or movies from the library. I don't believe that all content should be remove for all to see. In some cases there are the exception, but in banding all material doesn't seem logic. In my point of view the removal of materials seems a little extreme; however putting the content in a higher shelf seems more pratical instead of removal all for good. Yes, it might be offensive but in this time period offensive movies, books, magazines, books, and so on are look as more comedial and not taken serious. For example, a really offensive show called '@CAPS1 @CAPS2' is a really offensive and people just see it as entertaining. This show can be offensive to everyone, but yet we still see it. In this show there is warning label stating only be seen to children @NUM1 and older. Parents are advice and to be acknowledge what their kids are seeing. It's not the creator of the content to be banned, yet it is the job as a parent to be mindful in what their kids are reading, watching, looking, or listening not them. In which case there there isn't away to be right in this subject. However the creators of the conent see it as a way to vent over their lifes, experiences, and what opticals they had to faceor just to make people laugh. They see it as a safe way to espress themselves. It might be offensive to you, but for some people that's there life. You might not like it or it @MONTH1 seem harsh for you, but that's real life.      Secondly there are always something that @MONTH1 offend you, but it doesn't seem logical to banned it. An example might be religion. A religion a person might be it might offend you. It doesn't mean if the religion offensive that it will get banned or be remove for everyone. Your religion @MONTH1 offend someone, but they deal with it and embrace the differnces. If your friends has a different religion it doesn't mean you will never talk to them ever again.      Thirdly, you might express yourself and there are going to be people out there that won't agree with you. You might create a book, a song, or a movie that will offend someone in a way. For example, the @CAPS3 series is offensive to some guys and girls. A disagrrement between two girls fighting over which charater is better for @CAPS4. There are always an opposing side. A @CAPS2 might be tried of hearing about @CAPS5 all of time and might find offensive when a girl @MONTH1 compare him to @CAPS6 or @PERSON1. Saying why can't boys be like them, but even then they don't remove @CAPS3 all together. For you it might seem the greatest movie ever, or the most terrible movie in the universe.      Fourthly, another example is a @CAPS8 show called, '@CAPS9 @CAPS10 @CAPS11 @CAPS12' (queen of the south) where a women that had nothing to begin with, yet ended up being the most wanted in some countries. Some people @MONTH1 seem that it might be cool to be just like her. It doesn't seem that people will go uot there and do what she does cause in the television show shows all of the consequences there are if you do what she did. This show is an example of what could happen if you become exactly like her. Some offensive material @MONTH1 teach a lesson and can pervent a person to do something that they @MONTH1 later regreat.     In conclusion, everything in our life offends us in some way. It doesn't matter what it is we deal with it and our life goes on. There is no way to see this, but one thing you enjoy maybe be offensive to others. It wouldn't seem fair to take something you enjoy just because it offended one person. So I belive that the libaries censorship isn't at risk. In my opinion everyone has the freedom to choose what they want to read, watch, or even listen to. And also have the choice to stop reading it, watching it, or listening to it",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
15486,6,"When the builders were almost ready to place the mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building, big problems became apparent to them that caused complications in docking dirigibles. One factor was that by law, dirigibles couldn't be that low above the city, as they could accidently  crash into a building and fall onto the crowds below. Another factor was the air currents around the tall buildings, especially the Empire State Building at a height of 1,250 feet. Even if the dirigible was tethered to the mooring mast, the winds would violently rock it, and could crash against the building and fall to the streets below. A recent factor arose when the Hindenburg dirigible burst into flames from the hydrogen in it when it flew over New Jersey on May 6, 1937. Nobody wanted to risk that happening over New York City, either. So because of flammable hydrogen, violent air currents, and by law, the builders had complications when building the mooring mast to allow dirigibles to land there.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
16189,6,"As a result of the idea to build a mooring mast, the builder faced a few obstacles in construction the mast. The first problem was structural, the weight of the dirigible tied it with a single tie would put great stress on the building. It was said between the dirigible's load and wind pressure the stress would be distributed all the way to foundation of the building. Another obstacle was the safety. Many dirigibles outside the United States used Hydrogen instead of Helium which is highly flamable. The owners realized the ""Hindenburg"" incident and realized the effects it could of had on downtown New York. The final obstacle was nature because the winds shifted at the top of the building. The problem discussed on this was despite the dirigibles being tied, it could swivel around the mast. The many obstacles faced led to the mooring mast not being constructed to its full purpose and blimps were less commodly used.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
1053,1,"Dear newspaper, @CAPS1, my name is @PERSON1 and I believe that computers have a negative influence on people. When people are on computers all day they have less time exercising. They are in alot more danger, and they spend less time with there family. These are my only some reasons why computers dontbenefit society.. In more, more time spent on computers equals less time exercising. With the obesity rate rising no one wants to be unable to do regular activitys. With spending all your time on the computer, you would just be using to get over weight and unhealthy. It also makes many people feel self consiou about themselves. If they dont have enough time exercising and keep eating they will become even more self consious. More over it will bring more danger to you and your family. There are many places on the internet where you can meet new people. But how do you know if people are who they seem to be? If you spend more time on the computer then you will increase your chances by @PERCENT3 to get a personal assuts, or even give you personal information up. So why should you take the risk? Just get off that computer! Even if you dont meet on internet assuter you will still be glued to your computer cauzing it more likley to be harrased. I definatly dont want that for my family. The last reason is the most important to @PERCENT1 of @LOCATION1 family. If you are spending all this time on your computer you will be out on in your family. This time is verry important because you never know when your family will be gone! And it is a verry scarry topic to think about. I know that most people in @LOCATION1 was spend all the time with there family. On another note a survey shows that @PERCENT2 of children that spend time with there family and less than @NUM1 minutes on the computer have grades higher than @NUM2 in all classes. Wouldn't you want to make the honnor role in your school? In conclusion, computers have a negiteve effect on people! Spending most time on your computer can causes less time spent exercising, more danger/harm to people, and less time spent with your family. Wouldn't you just rather spend less time on your computer? Thank you for your time.",4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
13506,5,The mood of the menoir is grateful And thankful And it is somthing @CAPS1 @CAPS1 Never will Forget And the comfart of his home.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
9016,4,"I believe there is a meaningful reason why the author concludes the story with this paragraph. I think that the author will feel more confortable and ready to take the test. I was able to come to this conclusion because by waiting for winter to be over to take the test again, she is giving herself time to prepare. Also, she is waiting for the hibiscus plant to bud. Something. I was able to extract from the fact that she wants to wait for the hibiscus is the presence of confort, the whole story revolves around how saeng was able to confort herself by reminiscing on her past experiences in Vietnam. When she feels that an important part of her life is returning, that she can become comfortable and focused. I think the author would conclude the story with this paragraph is because the author wants to stress the importance of this flower involving how saeng lives her life",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
11884,5,"Heartwarming. That is the mood that Narciso Rodriguez creates in his memior Home: The Blueprints of Our lives. Narciso talks of the passionate cuban culture, his welcoming home, and his caring and selfless parents.Narciso starts out the story, describing his home. He explains that it was filled with cuban culture. Food music and all. Narcisco states in paragraph @NUM1 ""My parents both shared a love of cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their rich culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today (and for which I am externally grateful). Passionate Cuban music (which I adore to this day) filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen."" That description allows the reader to picture the warm culture of his childhood home.Then, Narciso explains that his home was always open to friends family and neighbors. He explains that they were all united because the country was filled with racism. To overcome that, they needed to stick together. Narciso states in paragraph @NUM2 ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the money people we considered family, knowing they would do the same for us."" That just invites the reader in.Last, Narciso explains his gratitude he has towards his parents. He states in paragraph @NUM3 ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrific. I've often told them that what they did was a much more corageous thing that I could have ever done."" His gratitude and love towards his parents just warms the readers heart...Narciso Rodriguez truely and honestly creates a heartwarming mood in his memoir Home: The Blueprints of Our lives. @MONTH1 his message be carried on for centuries.",4.0,,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
11978,5,"In the memoir, the author creates a specific mood to help the reader better relate to his life's story. The mood of this memoir is cozy in the beginning as he describes what his house was like and his own definition of family. As the memoir continues, the mood shifts to how grateful the author feels toward his parents. He describes how their selfless acts of leaving Cuba and creating a new life in @LOCATION1, helped create a strong foundation for him to grow up on. He says how his parents left behind their friends, family and jobs in the hope that their children would have a better life. His parents came to @LOCATION1, with no knowledge of the language and having to endure many hardships in finding and keeping jobs. The author says how he can't put his grateful feelings into words but is completely in their debt for taking such a big risk in coming to @LOCATION1. In the memoir, the author creates a specific mood to entice and interest the reader as they read more about his life.",3.0,,,,,3.0,4.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
6934,3,The features of this story tend to affect the cyclist very much. Because he took a shortcut he had an even longer journey than before. He was in the middle of no where with barley any water left and on top of all that he’s exhausted from all the hills on the terrien. So because he took a shortcut it ending up costing him in the long run.,1.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
13339,5,"The mood created by the author in this memoir is over all warm. @CAPS1 explains the positive things about his home and where @CAPS1 grew up. @CAPS1 also explains the positive things about his family and culture, which @CAPS1 is very proud of. @CAPS1 says ""growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relative."" @CAPS1's basically saying that @CAPS1 realized that all the people that lived around him came together and all connected somehow with their cultures, which made them all feel like family. @CAPS1 also explains how gratefull @CAPS1 is to have his parents who did so much for their children to have a better life. They did struggle at times, but the author is still happy for what went right in his childhood, and having all these wonderful people there. All of the people that came and left his house for all those years made him realize that ""family"" is just being around everyone you love and connect with which makes a house a home.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
12933,5,It seems kind of happy and sad mostly happiness. They were sad because they had to leave everything behind in Cuba.,1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
7424,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist in many ways. He always kept his head up and was determined to make it to his destination. The first problem was when he came to the “fork of sorts” as he put it. He needed more water, but the pumps were rusty and all he could get out of them was a tarlike substance followed by blackish water. He tested it, hoping it was better than it looked, but it wasn’t. It tasted like battery acid. He was very thirsty, but had to move on, looking for another water supply. Another problem that occured was, while he was becoming dehydrated more & more by the minute and unsteady on his bike, a huge snake lay across the road. He had to slowly maneuver around it, though it was hard, he was successful and continued down the road. The third ""obstacle"" he ran into was he was so thirsty and finally had a chance for a drink, when to his dissappointment, he found an old abandoned welches grape juice factory. As nervie and upsetting as it was, he continued to move on, still determined to make it to his destination. He finally came up to a fishing supply store where he was able to take a break and get a nice drink! Even though the setting was tough, teasing, and ironic, the man made it through and still with a smile on his face.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
3369,2,"All kid's have their own style of books, @CAPS1 people like scary, funny, or romance books, but can we really take that to an offense? We should think of how taking @CAPS1 books off the shelf would affect more then one person, @CAPS1 people @MONTH1 be mature enough to read the more 'grown up' books or magazines, libraries have all types of syles for different people, you just might have to look a little harder to find the right book for you.         I do not agree that @CAPS1 books and or magazines can be taken offensive. All libraries are different  types of books,for example  an elemantry school library they will not have grown up or teenager books, and a middle school will not have little kid books. We also have to think does peer presure effect what books or magaiznes kids read? , for example when I was in middle school my friends were all reading romance books, and I was still reading @ORGANIZATION1, and I had to change my reading style to fit in, so that's exactly what I did.      Books that have offensive content shouldn't be taken off the shelf, I believe that if there is 'offensive' books in your library, just ignore them you @CAPS2't have to get that book, we cant just take the more grown up books out because @CAPS1 kids @CAPS2't know what their suppose to be reading. Libraries have all different style of books to fit everyone's taste, so just look for that right book that suites you, and @CAPS2't take all the books that have an offensive style of the shelf, @CAPS2't judge a book by it's cover",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
7003,3,"The features of the setting greatly affect the cyclist. Some of these features include:- the heat, dangerous animals, not a lot of civilization, and the terrain. In the essay, each of these features were spoke of and they all affected the cyclist in a negative way. For example, when the cyclist headed from the intense heat, he needed to find a town. The first “town” he found he described as a “ghost town” It took a while to find another town and he had been hitting [his] water bottles pretty regularly and [he] was travelling through the high deserts of California in June so he was getting really dehydrated and ready to collapse. The flat road [being] replaced by short, rolling hills wasn’t helping either. The terrain really affected the ?? he had to exert in order to keep going, along with being dehydrated the cyclist had to deal with dangerous animals. During his journey “a ridiculously large snake blacked the majority of the ?? “which  ?? him it could have ?? The features of the getting definitely affected the cyclist in many ways",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
10177,4,Why did the author concludes the story with this paragraph. Is so he can right another story budding on vowed silently and he will right the. Story in the spring when they come back,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
1147,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1 staff, Are computers helpful to us regularly? Computers are very helpful machines that increase productivity daily. Computers not only help people discover @ORGANIZATION1 places and learn more about other parts of the world, but also computer allow people to communicate with others around the world. In addition, computers have word processor and other applications that help workers do their jobs daily. So, now do computers help people learn more about our earth? Many teachers and students use computers daily to help them teach. There are many online websites that help students discover and process different areas around the world. For example, there is a @LOCATION1 website (www.canadamaps.org) and this website has a map and students have to match the place/area onto the map. There are also website such as mapquest & yellowpages to help people navigate cross country and around town. As you can see, computers also help students education and just our everyday life. A large amount of teenagers of all ages like to use a programs on computers called @CAPS1. @CAPS1 stands for @ORGANIZATION2 @CAPS2 @CAPS3. This program allows people of all ages to talk with their friends or colleages instantly. What one does, is type in a chat box to someone and the message is instantly sent to the person. Emailing is used for many things. To catch up with friends, or to talk something with another. One can also attach documents that @MONTH1 consist. Emailing helps things go faster as well as your computers. But, if your newspaper were written out by hand, then that would take a lot of time, people, paper, & money. As you can even see, @ORGANIZATION1, computers are a necessity! So, as you can see computers really are needed. Computers affect us in many ways that aren't noticed clearly or easily. Like I said, computers teach and help people learn about different places among the world today, helps us communicate with others around us or in @LOCATION2! And as well, allow us to bring our work, family, friends, and cases everywhere we, in addition to computers allowing us to word process papers so our lives are ease for our everyday life. So, don't spent your life on the computer but use it for our needs. Please use computers to help our everyday routine. Stop writing on that pad, get up and type it on your computer!",5.0,5.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
4061,2,"What if someone told you that you couldn't wear a yellow shirt because it was offensive? What if they said you couldn't look a certain way because you might offend somebody? Not just one person or group of people have the right to decide what is suitable and what is not. There are so many different religions and traditions throughout the @LOCATION2 it would be completely rediculous to set one standard for all people. If @CAPS1 aren't restricted when it comes to apperal, groceries, or automobiles, why should there be limits in the libraries? Libraries should not be censored because not only would censorship limit the resoursfulness of the libraries and smother the knowledge intake across the @LOCATION2, but it would also pose a threat to our future.      When one takes a trip to the library, one would expect to find a book, magazine, and/or movie on just about anything. It would be extremely frustrating to find that a library, which is supposed to contain content on nearly every subject, does not have what your looking for. Say a book on the asassination of @PERSON1 is what you fancy, so you ask the librarian where you could find it. You would be dissapointed if she says they don't carry assassination books because they are too vulgar for young children. This could become very troubling and would limit the library's resources.           Not only would censorship in libraries limit the content but it would also limit learning in the @LOCATION2 @CAPS2 are people supposed to stay informed if they are being sheilded from knowledge? Many people that do not have computers depend on the library. If they cannot get what they need at the library where would they go? The libraries would lose business and funding if they did not supply library-goers with the content which they desire. People would take their business elsewhere. Protests @MONTH1 break out and rebelious citizens @MONTH1 protest the censorship, causing an uproar in society.           The people would not be the only thing out of hand. The censorship would surely get out of hand, aswell. @CAPS1 are already being censored through news stations, radio, and tv shows. Libraries are a place where infinant knowledge is realistic and that is comforting for many @CAPS1. In libraries people choose what they learn: they aren't forced teachers or parents. The censorship @MONTH1 start out as a small intervention, but it could turn our nation upside down. Next thing we know, our desisions could be influenced by the books that only 'they' decide are suitable. What kind of society would we have then? Individuality would be lost and opinions would be forgotten.      Clearly, censorship in libraries is dangerous and unpredictable. If libraries were cencored, not only would  knowledge in the @LOCATION2 desinegrate, but libraries would lose their respect and threaten the future of @LOCATION1. No one tells me what to wear or say, so why should anyone tell me what to read? We are all entitled to our own opinions and beliefs. Our @CAPS4 @CAPS5 earned us our freedoms, we can not let censorship take them away",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
15877,6,"The success of the mooring mast of the Empire State Building was prevented by many obstacles. Safety was one of the greatest reasons because ""most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen was flammable."" @CAPS1 starting in a densely populated city like New York could damage a lot of people. Nature also proved to be an obstacle because ""winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" This would cause the dirigible to ""swivel around and around the mooring mast"" that was neither practical nor safe. It would also be difficult to control the dirigible once it is tied to the mast because of the violent motion that the dirigible is in. There was also an existing law ""against airships flying too low over urban areas"". This law made it illegal for any dirigible to even get near the mooring mast or tie to it. All of these obstacles were faced by the builders of the mooring mast, which eventually led to the disregarding of the idea of using the mooring mast for ships.",3.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
11836,5,"The author generally stayed in one mood. The mood portrayed in the story was family and friends are very important and they help what you will be in the future. This is why the author stressed how thankful he was that his family had come to @LOCATION1 to make him a better life and that his friends came over to share their culture. Also the author was saying that even in @LOCATION1 it was important to remember his cuban blood and culture. This is why he says ""...and a love of cooking that is still with me today (and for which I am eternally grateful). Passionate cuban music (which I adore to this day) filled the air, mixing with the aromas, of the kitchen."" Also the author say's that a home is where geat memeries are and were you grow up, you should never forget it.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
7602,3,"The setting affected the cyclist mood in the story. The cyclist was riding rough terrain and rolling hills. This made the cyclist feel like his journey was hopeless. When the cyclist arrived at the abandoned @CAPS1 Grape Factory he felt on twist of many. He was extremely thirsty and there used to be a @ORGANIZATION1 build there when the cyclist was a the fock in the road, he thought he could get some water. When this failed the cyclist was even less determined. He felt like the world was against him.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
10069,4,"I think that she was that way to say, hey I didn’t over come something and I’ll be back next year to take the test again like the hibiscus budding when she snow melts and the geese return @CAPS1 year.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
15099,6,"Builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles. The first problem was the material of the dirigibles. Dirigibles ""were actually enormous steel frame balloons with envelopes of cotton fabric filled with hydrogen and helium make them lighter than air."" The first problem is that it's material could be broken if happened to fly into a sharp area of the building, and the ""violent air currents"" did not help. Since the dirigibles could not be weighted down at the Empire State Building, it would be dangerous to have them ""dangling high above pedestrians on the street."" Another obstacle was the fact that the dirigibles were filled with hydrogen. Although dirigibles from the United States were filled with hydrogen and helium, ""most dirigibles from outside the united states used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" With these obstacles builders of the Empire State building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles dock there, the theory did not work out in reality.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
13224,5,"His mood of this author is @CAPS1 and detailed. He describes the life of this person and tells life about the family. He says and describes how he lives in a two family, blond brick house in @LOCATION1, and passionate about cuban music. There was Cuban and Italian immagrants who were racist and didn't care.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
308,1,"I think computers are good because if you need to remember stuff all you have to do is just look at there emeil and they will remember what thay have to do and also it is good if you is lost all you have to do is look at the map quickly. if you need to finish a school project you could do it in the computer looking for the websit of the project, if you need to cheek a websit about enythiny inportent you could just tipe the websit down and it will show up on the computer and if your child don't have nothing to do they could play games in cluding math games, @CAPS1 games, and also thay could look for nock nock jocks.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
12597,5,"The mood created by the author in this memoir is love. Narciso and his family had so much love that they were able to overcome struggles and help others to overcome by allowing them to stay in their home, and live with them. They allowed people who weren't even apart of their family to become part of their family, they loved and cared for other, possiably even more than them selves and gave up everything they had in cuba to come to america for a better future for their children. The amount of love in this house is what turned it form an ordiary house and into a loving, caring, compassionate, and selfless home, not only for Narciso but for everyone in the community, and family"" that was created. That is what the mood of this memoir was, and in whom created it.",1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
7195,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist because you wouldn’t put the sitting in rain or he wouldn't be ride the bike. Anther one is you wouldn’t have a the sitting a city when there is nothing around but trees and rivers.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
6402,3,"The features of the setting negatively affect the cyclist. When the cyclist arrived at the first “town”, he could tell there’d be some issue. It was a deserted, run down area. The water was hot. Down the road the setting started to change from flat land to hills. There was a big snake in the road. He was becoming very dehydrated going through hilly areas with little to no water.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
16340,6,"Based on the excerpt, the obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to dock dirigibles at their building were that foreign dirigibles used highly flammable hydrogen over helium, the winds at the top of the building violently changed, and it was illegal to fly too low over urban areas.First of all, foreign blimps using hydrogen are very dangerous due to the high risk that they will burst into flames. This only occurred to the builders when a German blimp Hindenburg caught on fire on May 6, 1937. After this tragedy, they ""realized how much worse that accident could have been if it had taken place above a densely populated area such as downtown New York."" If the incident happened over New York City, many more lives would have been lost. More people would die, which would cause a bigger fiasco.Also, the winds above the building change constantly, which would make the blimp unstable. The article explains this effect by stating, ""Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast."" The changing winds would be torture on the back of the ship. The front would be secured due to its tethering, but the back would be left free to sway and swing in the wind. Pedestrians below would be at a high risk of danger, making this idea impractical.Finally, the law made it illegal to even approach the building, nevermind dock on it. The article tells this by saying, ""... an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas... Would make it illegal for ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area..."" The builders simply could not use the dock unless the law changed. The law was made to protect pedestrians and innocent bystanders, and flying the craft to the Empire State Building would violate said law.In conclusion, the three obstacles stopping the use of the Empire State Building were the hydrogen gas used in foreign blimps, the unpredictable winds making the craft swivel, and the law prohibiting aircrafts from flying too low over urban areas.",3.0,,,,,4.0,3.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
3304,2,"How would you like to read or listen to something disrespecting and calling you out of your name such as, '@CAPS1 did you say to me @CAPS2'? Would you want to keep things like that in your libraries? I would, I think anything that was hurtful, harmful, or offensive should be open to the public because it's a great way and opportunity to learn.                             Books, magazines, and music on slavery are things I think we as a people required to read are things we are required to have. Sure it might hurt, depress, or even aggrivate some people but it also fills you with knowledge on the past. For a person of any race this is a way to feel the pain and struggle of people before us. Despite the pain or irritation this is a type of learning I would welcome in libraries.                             Knowledge of suicide is also something I think should be available. Because some of our friends and family have either did or attempted suicide, and without knowing about it how can it be prevented. Books on the subject would provide help for those going throughout life with suicidal thoughts. Reading about past struggles or facts about it could give them tips or ideas on how to avoid suicide. I think we need literature on this because I feel enlightenment on the subject is the only way you can avoid it.                                                                      In conclusion, I think that all types of literature should be admitted and released to the public. I think this because all forms of literature offer a great opportunity to learn. I believe that only by reading the literature on past situations and  struggles can you avoid or overcome struggles you face or will face in your lifetime",5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,22.0
3454,2,"I do believe that certain materials should be removed from the shelf. They are certain books, music, movies, magazines that people find quite offensive. There could be a few books that have some aweful material in it. The pictures in magazines, on cd cases or on movie/dvd cases would have stuff that people @MONTH1 find really offensive. I have never actually seen anything like that before, but it does happen in schools all aroung the world. People might not get what certain materials want you to do, but they @MONTH1 get offended and tell someone about it. They would most likely to tell people to not get it and tell the school that they were offended by the material. Certain materials should be removed from the shelves.",2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
1479,1,"My oponion is computers should be used for many different purpuses. One reason is chating online with friends and family. Another reason is that if you are going far away and you know someone that can give you directions to where you are going then you can chat with them as they give you directions to where them as they give you directions to where your heading. Another reason is if you have family that does not live with you and you can't go an see them then you can chat with them. Another rwson is that of your going somewhere and you don't know the weather for the next day then you can go online and find out what's the weather for that day. Also if people really want to exercise then they can go on there computer and go to youtube and od exercise from there computer. Also if you want to see the @CAPS1 then you can search it on your computer to see what's going on. Lastly if you don't think it's rite for people to have computers then you should try to get one to see how much stuff you can do with it. You will be amazed. This is my reason why people should have computers to enjoy while chating, watching @CAPS1 and many other stuff that you can't probably imagine. Also, maybe kids should not have computers but they can get one when they get older. Also, if kids need to search from school then they can also do that there are many reasons why people should get computers. That my my opinion about why people should have computers.",3.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
9339,4,"In the story ""Winter Hibiscus,"" the author, Minfong Ho, concludes the story that paragraph because, she wants to show the determination the girl in the story possess. At first, the girl could not help herself and bought the expensive flower. She did not want her mother to be disappointed though, so she was determined to ""pass the test."" In the spring when it is time to buy more seeds, the girl wants to be able to buy the seeds. So the author is showing the trait of determination that the girl controls.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
16573,6,"After reading The mooring mast, by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building are faced with in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there are evident. The number one reason is because it is not safe. First, most dirigibles used hydrogen, which is highly flamable. The chance of a fire starting is especially not good because its a highly populated area. Also, ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself"" (¶@NUM1). With the building being so high,"" winds were constantly shifting due to violent air currents"" (¶@NUM1). The conclusion has been made the dirigibles land in landing fields because they can be weighted down in the back with lead weights. This method would not be safe if used on the Empire State Building. Clearly, the builders of the Empire State Building are faced with too many obstacles to allow dirigibles to dock there.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
13524,5,"The mood created by @PERSON1, the author of the memoir, Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives, is a comforting one. This is shown, for instance, by his reccolection of his childhood in his family's home being fond. For example, he states that he is ""eternally grateful"" for his parents passing on, ""their rich culinary skills and love of cooking"" that he claims to still have. Also, he remembers life as being neighborly and treating neighbors and friends as part of their family with kindness and sharing. This is shown when Narciso says, ""my parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family, knowing that they would do the same for us."" In addition the comforting feeling is shown when Narciso says, ""I learned here about how to love.... My parents turned this simple house into a home. This shows that Narciso had a great place to grown up in and has fond and comforting memories of it.",2.0,,,,,3.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
6898,3,"I think the features in the setting of the story ""Do not exceed the speed limit, by Joe Kurmaskie, highly affect the cyclist. Some implied a information would be that it is very hot out, and the people in towns didn't help him. I know that it is not because the text says,""somewhere in the neighbourhood of @NUM1 degrees."" This implies that it is very hot outside. I can tell the people in towns didn't help him because the text says, ""Never accept travel advice from collection of old-timers who havent left the confines of their porches since carter was in office. ""This shows that the people in towns didnn't help him. Some expressed information in this text would be that there is a rough road, and a shake was in his way. I know this is expressed because it tells you right in the text. ""Rough road ahead: Do not exceed posted speed limit. ""This comes right out and tells you there is a rough road. You know there is a shake because the text says, ""and rediculously large snake blocked the majority of the road. I think there are many implied t expressed information in the story""do not exceed the speed limit. ",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
15814,6,"Based on the excerpt, ""The Mooring Mast,"" various obstacles were faced in the challenge of docking dirigibles atop the Empire State Building's mooring mast. The first challenge the builders faced was that of nature. ""The greatest obstacle ...was nature itself."" (@NUM1) The violent winds that high up would cause the dirigible to swing unpredictably, making it unsafe. Another problem arose when the ""Hindenburg"" caught fire in New Jersey. ""Most dirigibles from outside the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" (@NUM2) If a hydrogen-filled dirigible would catch fire while at the Empire State Building, it could be very dangerous for both the building and the pedestrians below. The last obstacle was a law. ""...existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" (@NUM3) This law made it illegal for any aircraft to fly even remotely close to the Empire State Building. In the excerpt, ""The Mooring Mast,"" the builders faced many obstacles when attempting to allow dirigibles to dock at the top of the Empire State Building.",3.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
1019,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2, I would like to thank you in advance for taking the time to read this letter, it means a lot to me, I am writing today because it has come to my attention that some people are saying that computers do not benefit society. Those people are very wrong! Computers are amazing! They allow easier research, I can learn about other countries, and can talk to people online. I do all of this stuff alsmost every day! We're just finishing up a pretty big research assignment for english and social studies. It involved taking a note cards from different sources. Luckily, I was able to go on the card catalog on the computer and find many books on my topic, just by typing the keyword! We can narrow down our options so easily because you can search for something so specific. After you find your topic, you can check and see if there's reliable information by reading a summary. All of this can be done in about @NUM1 minutes or less.This would be nearly imposible without a computer. I have a few relative in @LOCATION3, @LOCATION2. A while back my family and I were trying to plan a trip to @LOCATION2 to visit. We were able to go on a search engine and find directions to their house from the airport. it gave us the directions and the estimated amount of time it would take to get there. i've also been able to do plenty of research on other foreign countries at the push of a button. it's so simple and convenient, too! My two uncles live in @LOCATION1. On thanksgiving my mother was upset because she missed them I was then able to set them up in a video chatroom so my mom could talk to them. this is great, its so convenient to be to go an instant message. i can talk to people all over the world and it doesn't even any money! In conclusion, computers are very helpul because you can learn about foreign countries, have easy access to research, and can talk online. there's a long list of other things that make computers great, but it would take too long to write. Thank you again for listening.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
3796,2,"Libraries are a great resource for information all around the world.  They contain many different styles and genres of books.  Some might not be appropriate for young children to read.  There are people that debate whether or not some books are too offensive to be put up on library shelves.  I believe that no book should be denied of this right.  Most children that go to a library already know what kind of book they want and are with an adult at all times.     Most libraries have children sections.  Offensive books are most likely found in the teenager or adults sections, not the children section.  So, to my defense, there could really be no way that a child would seek out these 'offensive' books anyway.  Children today are exposed to more explicit topics, but I doubt they would want to read a book about them.     Next, if a child goes up to the check out desk the librarian should be able to tell their parent or guardian that certain book is not suitable for that age of child.  Going back to my point of children usually go to libraries with their guardians, they should be supervised at all times while in a library.  If an adult cares that much about what their child reads they can easily decide what is offensive or not.     Finally, authors should not be punished for writing something they believe in or like.  They worked hard on writing and publishing their novels, they should be able to show them off.  If librarians do take off books for being offensive to some adults, a lot of books will be gone from the shelves.  The quote used for this essay explains this thought more thoroughly.  People should be able to read whatever they want, offensive or not.  Children being able to do this? Depends on the parent.      There is no way a child could check out an offensive book, take it home, and read it without their guardian knowing.  Yes, all parents do not care about what their child reads, so this could happen.  Just because some adults complained about books being too offensive for their children doesn't mean a revolt has to happen.  Those parents should just step up and be more strict about what their child can and cannot read.  Some of the most 'offensive' books out there are the very best to read.",4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
12023,5,"The mood of the memoir is happy. I know this because the Rodriguez family crossed the border from Cuba to the United States to have a better life. They came in 1956, but had to wait until 1970 to be reunited with their Aunts and @CAPS1. They now have a bigger house. They are grateful they live in the United States.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
6940,3,"The features of the setting in “Rough Road:Do Not Exceed the Posted Speed Limit”by Joe kurmaskie affects the cyclist in a very negative way.It begins slowly with the “ghost town”.The narrorator “chuckled, checked my water supply and moved on,” he wasn’t especially worried,but the fact he checked his water suggests that he’ll need to ration it for a while.The decline continues when he reaches the fock and the “ramshackle shed.”@CAPS1 the description of the place shows you he did not like it,and he confirms that with the words,“this sight was troubling.”He wouldn’t be replenishing his water here.Any more of this he’d be dead,either from dehydration or from pessimism.Eventually he reached the road sign which declared that going over 55 mph was a bad idea.This is ironics,he only going 12 mph to put it in his own words,“sometimes life can be so cruel.”He quite obviously hates the setting,and it’s all the fault of the setting.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
6335,3,"In the story “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit”many features of the setting challenge the cyclists.The cyclist accepts information from foreign old people which made his first mistake.After realizing this he,“I had been hitting my water bottles pretty regularly,and i was traveling through the high deserts of California,in June”the lack of water plus the heat in California,in june would have turned to heatstroke for most people.Even further into the journey,even with all those things against him it states,“flat rode was replaced by short,rolling hills,""@CAPS1 not only did he have excessive heat,and no water,but @CAPS1 he was handed troublesome rodes too.Although the cyclist must have been near to complete exhaustion,he continued through.Fighting all adds,and elements,many features in the setting of this story affected the cyclist,but he overcame them honorably.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
13519,5,"The mood in the memoir is gratefulness and happiness. For example, in paragraph @NUM1 it says ""My parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their rich culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today (and for which I am eternally grateful."" This shows how @CAPS1 thanks his parents for loving cooking. Skill that cooking and his eternal gratitude. Also, in paragraph @NUM2 it says ""I will never forget how my parents turned the simple house into a home."" @CAPS1 is happy that @CAPS1 grew up in @LOCATION1 and how grateful @CAPS1 is to them for passing down their traits and loves to him and all their hard work.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
13396,5,"In the memoir, Narciso Rodriguez is very grateful for his parents. The overall mood is happy and very grateful. It is happy and grateful because his parents came from Cuba and started a new life in @LOCATION1, but they made their house to look like a regular Cuban home.            He is also very proud. Hw is proud of his Cuban background and culture. He is also happy his parents kept their homes open to everybody. He is grateful for his parents sacrifice and love. Those are the overall moods of the memoir.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
3449,2,"Many people find certain books, music, or magazines offensive or inappropriate for some young reads. Many people think that this material should be removed from libraries completely. People think that have young people exposed to this offensive material will effect the choices they make, and how they will react in certain situations. At the same time other people say that we should not remove it from the book shelves. They say that everyone has the right to read or listen to whatever he or she wants to. Its that persons right to choose weather or not it is age appropriate for them or not. Its not some elses right to take away choices that aren't theirs.     People who belive that they should remove this material from libraries think it will corrupt young minds. They believe that this material will convey a message that it is alright to do what these books and music are saying. This in turn will create a different mind set for the young reader. Which @MONTH1 cause the young reader to be more aggresive or more like to make bad decisions about there well being or the well being of those around them. These people want there libraries to be about learning and be a healthy eviornment were young minds can grow naturaly and unharmed by offensive material.     People who believe that they should leave this material on the shelf say its no one elses right to make this decison for you by removing them. Its the readers right to choose weather or not to read the material. The read will most likely learn what the material is saying regaurdless of weather it is in the library or not. They believe that it would be better for a young reader to learn about it in a safe enviornment then to have some one else later in there life show them or tell them. The enviornment maybe alot more dangerous then a library if learn though some one else.     I believe in both in a way. I believe it is not some one elses right to remove these books from libraries. But i also believe that it should not be avalible for young readers to get. These books maybe be offensive to some people but its there choice to read it. They do not have to read these books it does not affect them. I believe the books not suitable for young readers should be placed on either a higher shelf or in a different part of the library where young readers do not have acsess to. If a readers parents want them to learn about it in a safe enviornment then they should sit there children down and explain it to them themselves. In the end we all have our rights and we use those to choice weather to read or listen to certain material. It is no one elses choice besides your own.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
957,1,"Dear Local @CAPS1, I am deligted to write this letter to you. It has come to my attention that the people who support advances in tecnology believe that computers have a positive efffect on people. I agree with those people. I agree with them because one: you can communicate with your family and friends via email, via @CAPS2, via @CAPS3 ets. Number two: you can use a computer for research, and number three: it can tell you directions or give you info. on a resteraunt or place you want to go. I will now get into more detail on these three topics. You can communicate with your family or friends via computer. For example my friend amor, when we were best freinds and we were in third grade, he had to move to @LOCATION1. I cried the first day he moved. then the next week or so I got an email from him and so now we can keep in touch with each other. He comes & to @LOCATION2 every @DATE2 and we hangout with each other. Maybe one day, I will like to go visit him now In @LOCATION3 becasue he moved again, but I will have to do some research on @LOCATION3 first. With a computer you can research alot of things like this year our language @CAPS4 class read a book called ""my brother @CAPS5 is dead"" and it was a true story. Se we had to some research on the book and I found out that without computers how would I be able to research anything on the website it shared where everything , a description of the thing, and how to get there (diretions). Directions are very important. The show you how to get to a certain destination. You can get directions off a computer. I remember one year I had to go to my friends birthday party and we didn't know how to get there. So I went online on @DATE1 and we got the directions from there and we printed them out and we found the place in @NUM1 minutes. Without a computer we would have been able to find the house easily. You @MONTH1 disagree with me on this because a computer can have bad websites and can also became very addicting to some people, but I think I am right. Thank you for reading this letter, once again computers are good for the study!",4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
10076,4,"The author of Winter Hibiscus ended the story with the paragraph, “when they came back, saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snowsmelt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” She did this because she bought the flower when she failed the test so when the flower blooms she will take the test again.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
15431,6,"Based on the excerpt, The Mooring Mast by @ORGANIZATION1, there were many challenges the builders of the Empire State building faced while they had high hopes in creating the world's tallest building. They added on hundreds of feet allowing dirigibles to dock there. Competing with the Chrysler building, Al Smith announced that the Empire State building would reach 1,250 feet beating the Chrysler Building by @NUM1 feet. Al Smith was desprite to do whatever he could to construct the world's tallest building, even to create a landing spot for dirigibles. @ORGANIZATION2's idea didn't work out as planned. Instead, the @CAPS1 assigned to dirigible passengers was made into the world's highest soda fountain and tea garden.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
3651,2,"The censorship in a library should be kept the same as it is already.  A few reason explain why the censorship is alright as it is.  Those reason are That the parents should be in charge of the books their children read, that not all people agree on censorship, and that the libraries have books of different subjects that people like to read.     The first reason is that parents shoud be in charge of what their children read.  If the parents would just tell their children no to a certain book, then the child will not read it.  If the parent does not want their child to go into a section then, the parents can just say keep away from that area.  Although, sometimes the child @MONTH1 stray away from its parents it is not very likely that the parent will not notice.  That is why the parents should be in charge of what their children read.     The second reason is that not all people agree on censorship.  Certain people think that religion is important no matter what the book shows, but others would think parts of religious book (nudity, swears, etc...) is extremely innapropriate.  Some people would say that books like @CAPS1 mythology books are innapropriate and need to be censored, although others think these books are past culture and that they should remain in the libraries forever.  Most children will look at these books and think that the books are to big to read, so they would not even look at them.  Few people would agree on censorships, and a lot of people would disagree.     The third reason is that libraries have different subjects than the innapropriate books.  The people can look at a different book and completely ignore the others.  It is not like a child will go up to the dirtiest book they can find and say '@CAPS2 I want to read that one.' the child will probably want something that relates to a television show or a movie of some sort.  The point being that a person can read other books than just innapropriate books.     Library books should be kept the same because the parents should be in charge of what their children read, not all people agree on censorship, and libraries have different subjects that people want to read. The censorship should be fine according to some people other would disagree.  The children probably would not look at the innapropriate book anyways, because they would not interest the child.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
8919,4,"Change and disappointment are enough to over-come. Some people have an arid fear of change. For Saeng the main character from “winter Hibiscus,” change comes in the form of a move to @LOCATION1. Everything around her is different and new. Coupled with disappointment of failing her driver's exam, the feeling of living helpless overwhelms her. After buying a winter hibiscus plant, she vows to take the test again when it blooms in the spring. The resiliance of the winter flower and the memories it represents inspire seng to try again.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
13139,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir feels like that of simplicity and home. He talks of the music and smells of his house, giving the feel that one is actually there sensing everything. He describes his home in such a relaxed way, and how the people in his neighborhood were also good to eachother. It gives the empression that his life was like a relaxed dream where everything is right. He talks of all his relatives that live nearby, and being a child I feel a somewhat comforted sensation from that very part. He describes how his parents had been working in Cuba with great jobs, but had moved for their children to @LOCATION1 where they would have to take lesser paying work. Sacrifices like those make me feel as if there is pure love left in the world, I only wish my parents cared like that. Though this story proves the love of two parents to their children, and that alone makes me feel a sense of peaceful closure.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
6403,3,I think it explains because they did good job but it was not good either because they did the right thing but they did same thing worng to.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
715,1,"Dear local newspaper I support the advances in technology. I am going to tell @NUM1 thinks way. One is on a rainy day. I don’t think you are going to go out an play in the rain so you could go on the computer and play games. Talk to friends. Or you could use the computer for school work or for work. Say that you have to look something up for school and you can't get to the liebery, but you have a computer at your house. You can use it to find info. You can use the computer to learn how to do something like making somthing and a lot more. You can use the computer after school if you cann't go out and hang with your friends. You can do something with them online. Last things you can ask your friends if there is homework so you don't miss it. So that is why I support advanes in technology.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
11913,5,"In the memoir, ""Narciso Rodriguez from Home: the blueprints of Our Lives,"" the author creats a special mood. I think the mood is kind of both happy and sad at the same time. It is sad because the parents had to leave all of their family, friends, and careers back in Cuba, while coming to @LOCATION1 not Knowing the language. He didn't even get to meet his real grand parents until 1970 when they were allowed to leave Cuba. The mood is happy too because the parents did all of this for their child. He gets to live a happy life in their new home, with their new friends.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
3572,2,I think alot of books are good to read cause some of them will tell you more wat u didnt know so thierfore u might pick up a book that u like and read it andyou @MONTH1 like it but doesnt have more meaning to  what your reading alot of books you read have some type of character in it that might talk about another thing thats opposite then what the other charcter is talking about magazines show you sometimes wat the persons life style is like some books that people read has no action or felling in it so they can just pick up and read the book its always good to pick up a reasonable  book so someone can read books thats positive and would mean something to other people to read the same book you read i think the best book is one that tells you about life and what you need to know to suceed life you @MONTH1 run in to a book that is true and get into it so you can learn sometimes about what you read and write about it on a essay paper a magazine and movie book shows alot of action and wat its like what they do most people migh think its boring to read a unaction book so they get a book that they have action to so it might exsite them more than a regular book but most books have more pictures than words in it you should take a book off the shelf that has wat  you need to know about cause action books might not help you all the time the more action fun books you read are not as good as wat another book is taking place at in a stor,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
7455,3,"The features of the setting really affected the cyclist. The author wrote of rough terrain and isolation. “Flat roads was replaced by short, rolling hills tumbleweeds crossed my path and a ridiculously large snake”. After reading this information and the descriptions. I inferred that the author was alone in the desert with awful conditions. I go inferal a tone of resentment also. He seemed to wish he hadn’t taken the “shortcut” that landed him in the desert. The hot weather was another factor that affected the author, trying to keep my balance in a dehydrated state. He seems to have not really planned how long the ride would be and how to conserve water. The rough terrain desolation and hot temperatures seemed to have affected the cyclist / author.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
4492,2,"Every we go there is censorship. Childrean hear their parents saying them and are more than likely to repeat them. Children should know what cursing is and know it is not right to do. It should be up to the children what they read.       Books should be censored if they are made for children. Adults should have the option of reading any type of book they would like. Children who have been secluded should learn that curse words are a part of reality also. We can learn something from any thing we read.     There are a lot of facts teachers do not teach that books can. When uncensensored things are said aloud children are estatic. If they read themselves they would learn alot more. If your parents do not inform you either, you can miss out on some of the most important facts of life.      It is very unnecessary to have rated @CAPS1 movies.Parents should be able to watch a mature movie with their children without being on the watch for something they do not want their child to see. The choice of children watching censory movies should definitely be on the parent.     I always think it is a bad idea to have derrogatory pictures on magazines. These photos @MONTH1 give children negative thought, such as insecurity of wishing they looked better than the model. Children remember almost everthing they hear/see. It should be up to the children what they read.",2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
11834,5,"In the excerpt the mood created by the author is love. Love for family and love for each other. The author talks about his parents in a loving and respectful way, ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" The author discribes all his parents went through to make their own and his life better. In doing so they turned an apartment into a place of love and caring that he will never forget and more importantly passed this love onto him. The author also talks about his ""family"" and the love shared between them, ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family..."" The author's ""family"" wasn't completely blood related. Many people were friends but very close friends that hav become like family and were always welcomed. Finally, the author talks about his community, ""In our neighborhood, despite customs elsewhere, all these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship."" No matter what nationality they were the comunity was very close together and understanding. It was these basic principles of friendship, trust, love, and caring that were passed onto the author of this excerpt by a varity of people and give the excerpt a mood of love.",4.0,,,,,4.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
7647,3,"The features of the setting affects the cyclist because it was really hot out, he had very little amount of water, and a long way to go. The temperature was so hot, the cyclist said he felt dehydrated. He also had to go over a lot of hills and go through deserts to get where he needed to go. He took a “shortcut” but it ended up taking longer and he got dehydrated. This is how the setting affected him.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
3108,2,"Libraries are known as places where a person can go to find material on almost any topic they could want to learn about, whether that material is a book, movie, or magazine. Anyone can use the library, and it is a valuable resource to many people. So why do some libraries insist on removing some of those valuable materials from their shelves?     In past years, censorship in libraries has been the focus of many news reports. In almost all cases, library patrons have been angry that certain materials have been deemed unsuitable to be offered at the library. I have to say that I agree with them. People have a right to choose what books they want to read, what movies they want to watch, and what music they want to listen to. People have opinions; people disagree. What one person loves, another person could hate. But just because one person dislikes or is offended by a material on a library shelf does not mean that the opportunity to use that material should be denied to all other patrons. I feel that if a resource is checked out by just one individual, and that one individual is able to learn from or enjoy the resource, then the library has achieved its purpose and helped the community by offering that material.      In conclusion, censorship in libraries is limiting and wrong. It creates barriers for those who want to learn and it takes away people's freedom to make decisions for themselves. Everyone should be able to decide whether to pick up a library material, and censorship makes that impossible",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
6959,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist in many ways. Three features I found were the lack of the water, the heat and the conditions and limits of the road. The lack of water really affected the cyclist. When he was died tried he/she didn’t have anything to drink. The essay stated how would say she/he would save the water til the end. He /she was so tired so the lack of water really affect him/her. The conditions he/she was in really affected the cyclist also. From the beginning he/she was told the wrong directions. That was the reason why he/she was lost the entire time. Finally the limits of the road affected the cyclist. Hills and different grounds did not help the cyclist. In conclusion, the cyclist had many factors affecting him such as lack of water, limits of the road and his/her conditions.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
974,1,"What compters stop you from doing is your homework in school. But when you do something on the computer your not soposes to do, you get stuck on a website you can't get off your screen. So what I'm trying to say is to don't stay on the computer than just @NUM1 min.",1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
3013,2,"A book represents a person's beliefs and feelngs about a topic. Therefore censoring books is wrong because it goes against freedom of speech. I do not believe books, or other media should be removed because while it @MONTH1 be offensive, if it is the truth about something then we need to read about it to prevent tragedies from happening again. A person who finds a topic offensive isn't forced to read about it. If we do not accept other people beliefs, we are just as prejudice as the books we are trying to censor.      Many books that are threatened by censorship are books about historical facts, such as the holocaust. I think we have the right to know about important events. For one reason, if we forget about such things, than they are more likely to be repeated. Do we really want the murder of millions of people to be repeated? Just becaused we are ashamed of something dosen't mean we should sweep it under the carpet where it can lay hidden waiting to stike again like a hungry alligator. Instead books about prejudice events should be kept out to show an example of how we shouldn't act.     While some books are censored because of shame, some are censored because a certain group of people @MONTH1 find it offensive. There is a much easier solution that censoring those books. The offended groups should just ignore the book. If it is offensive in the first place then no one should be forced to read it. The book shouldn't be forced in any other way like posters, and television broadcast. It should be kept in a certain section of a library so parties wishing to avoid it can.     The main reason for a book to be censored in the first place is because someone finds in offensive. However, isn't keeping someone from saying something just as offensive? To @CAPS1 A @CAPS2 is a big target for censorship, but it is about treating everyone fairly. If that book like that was censored, it would be like saying some people are better than others. Another big target for censorship in some countries is the @CAPS3. Censoring that book would basically tell the @CAPS4 population that they are wrong.     Censoring something is wrong. Not only could it cause sad events to repeat themselves, offended parties can just simply avoid the book. While some books offend people, censoring a book can be just as offensive to other parties. The simplest thing to do is to leave it up to the reader to decid if they should read it, or not.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
7324,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist physically. The want of the California desert canes the cyclist to became tired and dehydrated. For example the another states “I cased past, trying to keep my balance dehydrated star,” The setting is the main factory which causes the cyclist to become dehydrated.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
1663,1,"Dear Newspaper, @CAPS1 you agree that people could use computers all the time and never get off. Well I don't. Think about all the negative things that could happen. Like spending less time with your family, getting addicted, and unhealthy. People who spend all there time on the computer forget that there family is there. For instance, I remember when I was little and I was on the computer and I forgot that i had family members with me, so I missed out on all the fun things like going to the mall or park. Certainly, playing on the computer is fun but woudn't you want to give some attention to your family. Almost @PERCENT1 of people in other countries be very lonely because all they @CAPS1 is play on the computer and forget about other people. You woudn't want to be like these other people right? I never thought playing on computers could be addicted. Lots of people in other countries can't last a day without playing on computers. Some say almost all the people that play on computers all day, day to night have died because they bairly eat, sleep, or use the bathroom. Imagine you life being ended because of addiction on computers. I remember when my friend told me, ""don't be on the computer to long you might die,"" and I thought it was a joke. So think about going on the computer all day and night. Not but not least, some people aren't treating their body properly. For example, some people playing on compters forget about eating, sleeping or walking around. This tends to make people's legs num and make people's stomach hurt alot. Imagine not eating, sleeping and walking around for a day. You woudn't even want to try this. Now is the time to decide, wheither people should be able to play on the computer day to night. Also all the negative things that can happen like spending less time with family members, getting addicted, and being unhealthy. So get right up and decide.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
15608,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building had a lot of struggles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. First, they had to consult with experts to see if the equipment was safe enough. They took tours of the equipment and mooring operations at the @ORGANIZATION2 at Lakehurst, New Jersey. Next, they had a hard time dropping the mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof. They would have to us @MONEY1 worth of modifications to strengthen the building's framework. They were never going to have this happen in the first place, because of the safety issue, the hydrogen gas in the dirigible is highly flammable. The biggest issue though, was nature. The winds on top of the building made it very hard to work, and it got very violent.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
12073,5,The mood the auther has is good. He's very proud of how he lives. The most thing that matters in his life are family. His family cares alot and watch over him no matter what and he is very thankful for all.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
9678,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph because it shows that Saeng is starting to take responsibility for her school work now. For example in the story she made it obvious she cared more about the garden then school.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
343,1,"Dear editor, @CAPS1 name is @CAPS2 and I am a @NUM1 year old girl; yet active in reading the daily newspaper. As I was going through last weeks newspapers, I saw an ad to write an article about either the negative or positive factors about computers. I am here to persuade other readers about the negative affects computers have on people. As an active member of the computer, I take part in all negative factors. People who spend more than one hour on the computer are involved in @CAPS3, @CAPS4, or playing a computer game. of those kids are too involved in their compute games. I saw this segment on @CAPS5 @NUM2 about how @PERCENT1 of all teens play on the computer atleast once when they are supposed to be homework. Computer games distract from kids learning. Kids feel that @CAPS3 is more inportant than doing math homework. Computers don't benefit to kids learning. Kids or even adults who are too involved in some use of computers don't want to talk. They feel they need to focus on winning and beating all their friends. To win, people can't talk, just focus on the game. Kids who need to win and not talk could lead to lifetime results. Being self-consious or having no social skills are the biggest lifetime results from being too involved in a computer game. That is how being too involved in computer games affects their social skills. Kids who are too involved in their computer games, don't get enough exrcersize causing obsity. Kids think they are getting exrcersize by playing but in reality they are doing nothing at all. Kids think they can't leave their game, but they can. there is always a pause button somewhere on the screen. Soon kids get addicted to playing and dont think going outside is important anymore. That is how computer games cause long term effects. In conclusion, computers have no benefits on people. Computers cause no learning to be done anti-socialism, and abesity. All of these results are long term which causes you life to be okay. I dont you want a happy and successful life?! I know I do!",4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
16017,6,"When the builders of the Empire State Building attempted to construct a mooring mast for dirigibles, they were faced with several obstacles that would ultimately defeat them. The first and most obvious obstacle was the danger of crashing. When the Hindenburg crashed in New Jersey, the builders realized how much worse the horrific crash would have been in downtown New York. Another more present obstacle was the wind at the top of the tower. As said in paragraph @NUM1 ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" That coupled with the lightweight nature of dirigibles would make mooring much more difficult than on an open field. The last obstacle faced by builders was the existing laws that made it illegal. There were laws that prohibited airships from flying too low over urban areas like New York City, though they were largely ignored. All those obstacles eventually lead to the realization that the mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building was not practical or feasible.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
16359,6,The Mooring Mast has two obstacles @CAPS1 the winds on top of the building are constantly shifting due to violent air currents. The other reason dirigibles could not moor at the @ORGANIZATION1 law against airship flying too low over urban area. They try to get close but they can't because of forceful winds. In nineteen thirty the @ORGANIZATION3 dirigible Los Angeles approched the mooring but not get close. So they stablish a low to a securit for a urban Area.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
9915,4,The author @MONTH1 have conclude the story like that because of the titel and the begening of the story. Or he @MONTH1 have conclude the story like that because he wants to. He @MONTH1 have concluded the story like that to show what @MONTH1 happen. But is good conclusion is a good conclusion. ,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
590,1,"I use computer all the time and im healthy. Just because you use a computer more than getting exercise dosn’t mean your not healthy. I think computers help a lot in life. Now I will talk about some of the things that computers help out with in life. Computers help out with finding out what the weather is and everything you need to no. It will even help you, if you have a job and don't no what time to goin for waste. Computers are also fun. You go to different and play any games. You can also talk to people on them. Or get email with is like getting real mail but from an computer. But there @MONTH1 be some issues, People are useing then to much. They need to get more exirses. So thats what I think of computers hopfuly people will get more exirse now.",3.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
3896,2,"What is censorship? Censorship is editing or just plain getting rid of.  Censorship can be a good thing it could also be a bad thing.  Does censorship really help in our society?  Actually think about it, there is still murders, rapes, and whatever else with censory.  How I would argue with this, is by listing my own experiences, observations, and readings.     Firstly, my experiences would have to be about movies and/or television shows.  In some movies you get to choose on what you want to watch. The unrated version or the censored version.  Well, most people want to watch the unrated version, beacuse it's more than likely more funny and shows more.  Other people might choose the censored version, because of the fact that they have children and dont want them watching stuff that would be in the unrated version.  I would perferably pick the unrated version, because i like all the funny parts that wouldn't show in the censored version.  Then there are those television shows that 'bleep' out alot of words, because of course you are not allowed to say them on television.  Parents dont want their six year old going around and saying all of them nasty words.  That's why most of the time you hardly ever see them kind of shows on in the afternoons, they are usually on at @TIME1 or later.     Secondly, my observations about movies and/or television shows.  I cant say that I dont watch shows that have some language in them nor can I say that I dont watch shows that are all bloody and gory.  I do watch them, but i would never watch them around my younger sister!  She is eleven years old, I dont want my littel sister going to school and saying a bad word and have a teacher hear her.  Then she would say well @PERSON1 was the one who watched the movie.  I would also never ever watch a bloody, gory, and really graphic movie in front of her either.  Some movies could do without so much violence, but they have to make money some how. Right?     Last but not least, my readings about, lets say books and/or music lyrics.  So many books have been banned across the @LOCATION1, because people were offended by them or just didnt want that book on the shelves just in case their child reads it.  Some songs cant be played on the radio, because of some of the stories behind the music and/or the words in and through out the song.  That's why the artist of the song has to make two different copies of their song, so they can be played and so they will get popular.  I have read books that do have some words in them, but they are also my grade level and I'm pretty sure most people are more mature than they were.  When I see a word that isn't the nicest word ever, I keep reading and dont let it bother me.  Same with songs, the artist probably has a reason why he/she uses the words they use.     Censorship can be good or bad, it really depends on how you look at things.  Honestly, I have no objections to censorship and other times I do.  My experiences, observations, and/or reading has made me think about how censorship could be bad or good.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
4286,2,"I think that the books, music, movies, magazines, etc., should not be removed from the shelvs. If a book, magazine, movie, etc, is found offensive then you should just walk away and ignore it. Dont go back and keep looking at it because what you find offensive someone else might like.      The world won't change around you so you shoud do the smart thing and ignore it. If somthing is found offensive on censorship in libraries then mabey its not a good idea for you to be where you are in that library. And if somthing does offend you, you should still act appropreatley and deal with the situation the right way.     When i was younger i used to see book's with a cover titled @CAPS1, @CAPS2, @CAPS3, @CAPS4, etc., and would think it was funny, but the adults didnt think so. The books are put there for people to read not just to look at. The books, music, movies, magazines are not there to offend you in any type of way.  If you find somthing offensive then you should just move away from that area, so that you wont worry about having to be offended.      Diffrerent people like different things, so they will have many different verieties to choose from in a library. They might have some things that really offend you or they might have some things that you really like. You have to make a wise choice and know that if somthing is goin to offend you stay away from it.     Censorship in libraries have every right to put up any and every peice of book, music, movie, magazine, etc., because it in their phacility. They should'nt have to worry about people being offended by anything they put up. They should'nt have to worry about people being offended because @PERCENT1 of the time the things they put up are not bad at all, 'it @MONTH1 even be helpful,' but to one person it @MONTH1 be harmful or offend them.     In @CAPS5, censorship in libraries should be able to post or shelve anything they want. If your offended/not offended they have every right to shelve whatever it is. because in the real world you dont always get what you want, and you wont always like what you see",3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
948,1,"I am so happy, I just finished my school report on @PERSON1 and I didn't even need to leave my house. I was able to talk with my classmate and ask her questions online. I also managed to get all the information just from my computer. I also learned how to row a boat, to show my class how @LOCATION1 crossed the @CAPS1 river, I learned that by taking on online course. This is one situation why computers have fantastic effects on people in everyday situations. Local research show that @PERCENT1 of @CAPS2 planning their vocation use the internet. The reason these citizens use internet is to get the information about the hotel and vacation cite. That is one way that makes computers helpful and positive devices, beacuse it makes it easier for busy @CAPS2 to get ready for a trip by looking at pictures of the hotel online and getting all the info they need. Doctor @PERSON2 of @CAPS4 university says ""computers now offer programs that allow busy @CAPS2 to learn a new skill, @PERCENT2 of @CAPS2 currently use this software. ""@CAPS7 everyday @CAPS2 don't have time to go out a join a group or class to learn new skills. That is why computers are so helpful and people just love them. Instead of leaving home they can be cooking, doing yoga, or speaking a new language all from their computer at home. That is another reason why computers are useful in vey positive ways. Imagine forgetting your homework at school and not be able to an A in that class. Well because of computers forgetful students can talk to a classmate online and get the homework and do it. Or they could even use the internet to go to that school website and find the homework and print it out. Many students around the country forget homework once in a while, because of helpful computers they can fix their problems easily. Let's recap, students or adults can get information off the internet for projects or even vacations. Busy @CAPS2 who don't have time to leave their house can take a class or learn a new skill right on the computer. Anyone can use the internet to talk or chat online to get school work or to long distance friends. That is why the effects on computers to people are nothing but positive. Now what can you do? It is important that computers stay in our lives, they are helpful and we have learned to live with them, which is why they must stay. This benefits you because newspaper houses are organized by computers and it keeps you business running.",5.0,5.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
6422,3,The cyclist is out in the desert there for was tired & also running out of water so hes getting dehydrated. ,0.0,,,,,1.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,1.0
1740,1,"I think computers have a good effect on people. They teach hand-eye coordiantion, give people the ability to learn about faraway places and allow them to talk online with other people. Computers teach hand-eye coordination. This will be used through out people lives. WIthout hand-eye coordination people will be clumsey. Hand-eye coordination is used from day to day everyday. Using a computer you have to look at the screen and type at the same time. For people who do not have good hand-eye coordiantion this will be a big help. They will be able to do more thing without messing up. Like hitting a baseball! For kids who want to play sports this could acually help. They will learn to use there eyes, arms, and hands to there advantage. Computers give people the ability to learn about faraway places. If we did not have this ability we will not be able to know what is going on around the world. Also if you have family in a faraway place you will be able to look online and see what is happening there. If something bad has happened you will know this and will be able to help them. Also to be able to learn about faraway places will help in school. If you have a report to do on of faraway place instead of looking through you can look on the internet for information. Computers also allow people to talk online with other people. This gives more comunication. You will be able to make more friends and better friends. To have the opportuniy to talk to people online is great. You can learn about someone and become friends and hang out a lot. Also you will become a lot more interactive with people. If you are a shy person this can help you. You will get used to talking to people and when you get comfortable you will talk to them in real life. This will make you a lot more friends. This will help you come out of your shell and become a lot more interactive around people. These are three reasons why I think computers are a good thing. They help hand-eye coordination give the ability to learn about faraway places and allow you to talk online with other people.",4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
3731,2,"There are many things in this world that childeren should not see and that poisen the minds of them and others whatever age they @MONTH1 be. The things people see these days can be bad and shouln't be seen by anybody of any age. These things should be disposed of so our minds will be clean and the minds of future generations will be clean also.     The reason that I think that no one of any age should think about these bad things is because if kids shouldn't know about them than, then why should the same kid that has grown up know these same thing. But if things like this are in libraries thenthe question is who should be in charge of deciding what is right for wroung?      Sence the worlds population is so large and so many people have diferent ideas then how could we get one person to look through all things and decide between good or bad? Well the awnser would be that it is impossible to. That is why it is up to the head of the family to decide what to do about this crisis.",3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
1670,1,"Do you like learning about faraway exotic land and animals? Are you good at sports but would like to be even better? Do you ever miss your family that lives in other states? The computer can help you with all of this but is @CAPS1 bad for you too? In my opion kids and adults should use the computer. When people are on the computer they can learn about interesting far away lands. When your on the computer you can look up some of the natural disasters. For example people could google each quakes and learn all about the people that has lost their life's. The people that they will donate some money to the poor. Children living on their own. They can also learn about all the wonderful beautiful lands that are out their waiting to be explored. Everyone I know likes to the beutiful birds and animal. In their the world, They will be able to do this on computer. The might be so more this lands. Having a computer will also let you talk to people that are not easy to get. With having a computer people will be able to talk to their family that live in other states then them. I have a uncle that lives in @LOCATION1. I only get to see him because a lot of money to come. Somewhere on the computer, @CAPS1 is easy to just send him a message that say how I'm doing. With computer you will be able to talk to your friends cant talk on the phone. For example, what if your friend and did not. She can not talk phone because so what do you do you. This help you her. The last reason why we should have computer. If you let @MONTH1 periods of time then @CAPS1 will help you with hand eye coordination. This will help the kids that play baseball. They will know where the ball is at all times is they will most likely cauch the ball more often so playing a a little bit of video games is not bad for unless one. Using the computer is @CAPS1 good to do or not using the computer helps people be able to interact wild people that so easy to talk to. So @CAPS1 you are compleatly agenst using computer the get up and use @CAPS1 right now.",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
16506,6,"In the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by @ORGANIZATION1 faced many problems with the attempt to allow blimps to dock their. One problem was that the already constructed frame was not strong enough for a new mooring mast for blimps. A second problem is shown in the quote ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents..."" (Lüsted para. @NUM1). The weather at the height of the Empire State building would throw and move blimps in violent ways when trying to dock. The push of the winds even caused the threat of blimp being blown into a spire on a surrounding building, the threat is shown in the quote ""which would puncture the dirigibles shell"" (Lüsted para @NUM2). That is what could happen if a blimp tried to tether to the building. The builders also faced the laws about flying that low over an urban area. All in all the builders of the Empire state building did face a many problems while trying to allow blimps access to the building.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
4552,2,"There is material out there that some people consider offensive and or have material in them that we don't want our youth to indulge in. Such items can include music, books, and movies, but I am just going to give you some of my thoughts on the issue.     On materials, like music and movies, there are ratings on the item saying what age is apropriate for the content that the music or movie have in them. Like movies there are ratings such as @CAPS1 which means that you should be @NUM1 or older to view it. @NUM2 which is parental guidance or @NUM3 and up. PG means you should have your parents with for the younger kids. And @CAPS2 which is for all age groups. If there is something offensive and or the language is bad in music the cover will have a lable that says explicit content.     I agree with this. I don't think that they should take anything off of the shelf unless completely nescessary. If someone doesn't like the content in that item they have the option to not listen, watch, or read it. There are people out there that might disagree with me and I can see where they are coming from too. Say if there is a book discriminating a race than I agree that it should be taken off the shelves.      There are also people out there who are more leanent and others that are more strict. Just like parents for example. A lot of parents want to raise there kids in an envirenment where there is no swearing and violence, while other parents let there kids watch and listen to items out of there age group. Like with me my parents let me watch, read, and listen to what I want and in my opinion I turned out just fine, while others might not thing so. I have seen kids that had parents that weren't strict and let them indulge in these items and they turned out to be well behaved adults. Then there are also people you had strict parents and they turned out to be not so good of a person, and vise versa.      That is about all I have to say on the topic. You have seen my views and what I believe. In a summary I guess I could say that everyone has there own opinions and views",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
16412,6,"The builders faced a lot of issues to allow drigibles to land place on the Empire State Building. The builders had to be very cautious or carefull on building the platform to allow drigibles to dock. The drigibles (Blimp) were very big transportation machines that were made out of Steel and Cotton Fabric that was filled with hydrogen and helium. Hydrogen is a flamable substance which the builders had to be carefull with power and electricity supplies. To allow a blimp to dock above @NUM1 feet in the air on the Empire State Building, they need to work on the framing of the building so it there is any bad weather condition, the building would not collapse, and would be stable. Because of all these problems the procautions the builders had to make, makeing the mast was a failuer and left for the future transportations to plains.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
15804,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles while attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One of these obstacles was that the ""stress of the dirigible's load and wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation."" This meant that they would have to spend over @MONEY1 to create a frame that would be able to stand that amount of pressure. Another obstacle they were facing was that most dirigibles had hydrogen in them, which is very flammable. They were afraid that if the balloon caught on fire, it would fall down to densely populated city below. And there was nothing that they could do to change this. A third obstacle they were facing was that ""the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" This meant that the dirigible be constantly moving around while passangers tried to get on and off, which would not be safe. These are some of the obstacles the builders of the Empire State building faced.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
6216,3,"In the essay “Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” time setting very much affects the cyclist during the story. One of the things that affect him during the story is that it was a very hot, sun scorching day. Also he ran out of water and there was nothing but desert and poisonous snakes around. Another thing is that when he ran out of water there was no snakes warmers  just desert so he started to become very thirsty. In the essay it also said he reached a part where she saw a sign that said “ Rough Road Ahead, Do not exceed posted speed limited, so the road conditions starting to get rough him that was another affect. In the end of the essay he reaches a camp where it is all peace and relaxed, and they have cold water there, this affects him because he feels replenished. All these different features of the setting affected the cyclist greatly.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
13138,5,"In the memoir, the mood that is created by author is a loving and grateful mood towards the author's parents. A example from the memoir is when the author talks about his gratefulness toward his parents. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice"" (paragraph @NUM1). This quote shows that the author's mood is loving and grateful toward his parents because he mentions his gratefulness towards them. Another example is when the author tells the reader that his parents showed him two important lessons that he chose for the basis of his life. ""They showed me with their lives, and these teachings have been the basis of my life"" (paragraph @NUM1). This quote shows that the author's mood is loving and grateful towards his parent's because the author tells the reader that what they did helped him become a great/better person. Lastly, when the author tells the reader that he is grateful for the fact that his parents gave up their life in cuba to make his life better. ""They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life"" (paragraph @NUM3). This quote shows that the author's mood is loving and greatful because he expresses what his parents did for him and it shows that he feels greatful that they did that. The author creates a loving and greatful mood toward his parents in this memoir.",4.0,,,,,4.0,3.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
15663,6,The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building was nature itself.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
4244,2,"I believe that everyone's opinion deserves to be publicized fairly. Just because one person's view is considered to be right, doesn't mean another is wrong. What is offensive to one person @MONTH1 be informative to another.     I've read a lot of books that parents @MONTH1 not pick out for their children. In reading these books I see that there is no glamour in doing drugs or getting in trouble with the law. For some teens, books like these can show them the side of life they haven't experienced and find that they never want to.     If a book is too explicit for children, simply place the book in another section. I realize that there are books with graphic sexual details, and those should only be premitted to be checked out by adults. Parents should have concerns about their children's innocence. But I also believe that they should watch over what type of books they're reading too monitor the vulgarity of them.     Some @CAPS1 contain profanity or sexual induendoes, some contain praise and worship, others even have screaming. Any of thses type of musics can be found offensive by someone. That doesn't mean to run off and hide all of them. There'd be no @CAPS1 left.     Not everyone shares the same opnions in this world, therefore there should be equal opportunity for people to read,watch, or listen to whatever suits them. I'm not saying that there should be a stock of porn in the library, but if there are movies or books about shunned religions or beliefs then they should be just as welcomed as the ones about common religions and beliefs.     Everyone finds different things offensive. If there was a bible in the library and someone found it offensive, should it be removed? It's one of the most popular books in the world, yet some people still find offense by it. Someone who is mormon, muslim, or athiest might find offensive if there is nothing in the library about them because some people find it offensive.     The library is a place of knowledge, not judgement. I dont't believe that certain books should be removed from the library if they offend someone. If you don't like something that is at the library, don't rent it. If you don't want your children to, don't let them. Simple as that. Everyone is entiled to freedom of speech. Authors express themselves through books and articles, directors through movies, and musicians through their music.",4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
3608,2,"Well do you think that every book you read, every movie you watch, and all music you listen to is offensive. Who can say what is offensive to everyone? Who can tell you what you think is offensive or not? How can you be your own person if people are making desisions for you about the books you read, the movies you watch, and the music you listen to? I'm going to tell you about why I think that no certain materials such as books, movie, music, magazines, ect., should be taken off library selves because someone finds them offensive.      Who can be the ultimate decision maker in deciding if something is offensive to everyone? Everyone has their own meaning of offensive. Everyone thinks that different things are offensive to them. How can you say that one thing is offensive to one person and is also offensive to another person?. I think if one person thinks that something is offensive to them that is ok, that is their own opioion, but maybe the next person that walks by and see's the so call offensive material will love it. You should not be able to make someone elses decisions for them if they want to read an offensive book, watch an offensive movie, and or listen to offensive music that is their chose not someone elses to make for them.       If every peson took a book off the selves that they thought to be offensive then we would not longer have any books on the selves. Some people think that certain music, books, and movies are offensive and other people think that the books, music, and movies are cool and interesting so what do you do then? I have learned over the years that not every person will agree with your opinions on everything and you won't agree with them but yet you both still have your own opinions. You both are allowed to decide what you do and dont like. You both get to choose what books you read, what movies you watch, and what music you listen to. So why should we let anyone stop us from being ourselves?     You can never say that anyone thing is offensive to everyone because no one person can be everyone. You can't talk for someone else because everyone has a voice for themselves. So do you think that every book you read, every movie you watch, and all the music you listen to is offensive? well you @MONTH1 not but someone else somewhere is trying to take that out of the libraries because they have a negative opinion about it but is that fair?",5.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,22.0
1211,1,"Dear editor: @CAPS1 you know that @PERCENT1 of people in the @LOCATION2 have comuters? These computers are definatley benefitting society. People need computers to get updated on important issues, contact others and learn new information. Computers are neccisary for everyday life. It's very important that news gets around, and one way for it to do that is by computers. Average people like me and you need to know the weather, global issues and many other important topics. If you use the computer to get updated on important issues you will be able to acess the information right away. For example there is no need to wait for the weather to come on the television when you can find out the weather for your local area withen seconds. Just recently there was an earthquake in @LOCATION1 and million of civilians died. if a natural disaster was to happen somewhere in @CAPS2 people would need to know and computers are a great way to make sure everyone is updated. Not only does the computer help us get important updates on global issues but it is also a great way to contact people. My relatives live very far away and we can't afford the long distance phone call charge and so we e-mail them. @NUM1 out of @NUM2 people contact far away friends and family by e-mail! The computer is also a great place for friends to contact each other through social networking sites, such as @CAPS3, @CAPS4 and @CAPS5. People need to interact with other people and the internet is a fantastic place to do that. Finally computers can also be used to learn new information. If children need to find inforamtion for a project or essay the can easily search the internet and find an answer. Kids need to acess the information that is neccisary for school on the internet. Computers are useful for adults as well. If adults want to learn something new all they have to to is search it on the computer. It's so much easier than going out to the library and finding that information in a book. @CAPS1 you know that most adults use an online dictionary to find the definition to a word? Computers can find every answer to your questions. In conclusion, computer are really benefitting society. Computers can update you on important issues, help you contact people, and find out new informatiuon. These avandces in technology are good for human society.",5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
3242,2,"Censorship is a big controversy in modern society due to the fact of so many opinions being conveyed through all the new medias in the modern world. When a person has a veiw they tend to want to share it with the world or defend it againts those who opose their opinion. Some people do not always like what is being said or take offense in the way it is presented, thus causing the government, or any authority, to remove or replace these words, photos, lyrics, or film from a select public, such as children, or the entire public. This is censorship and it has caused many debates over what is acceptable in society's media.     I believe censorship is wrong. It violates the @CAPS1 peoples' rights of free speach. When a person has an opinion, they have the right to voice it anyway they want. The authorities should not be involved in what someone writes, sings, creates, etc., in anyway. Censorship takes away from the integrity and purity of a human's thoughts.     Who is to say what can and can't be said? Do we just let the government tell us what we can say and what is illegal? Do we stop expressing ourselves in the way we desire because it is not appropriate? No. We, as the people, must be free to say what we want in our stories and songs, along with movies and other media. If a person does not like what they see then they can turn away or they have the right to speak out against it in their own way; but they do not have the right to opress. They should write back, convey their message and try to win support, not control.     Censorship is not good for any society. People want to say whatever they want and they have the right to. Censorship is not a solution to discrimation or anger, it is only a fuel. If parents do not like something and do not want their children to experience it then do not take it from them, then they should tell them how it is 'wrong' and give them their opinion and reasons so the child @MONTH1 descide what they believe in on their own. An opinion is every human being's right and it belongs to them, not the authorities.",4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
406,1,"Dear local newspaper I disagree because people should just enjoying spending time with famimely and not on the computer  doing nothing do you agree with me so far? Frist of being if you wast all you're time being of the computer there is nothing there is nothing you can get done as I have notice many shildren are on computer every right after school playing on the computer. For example my cosiun is on the computer evryday doing  but wasting his time are you still with me. Secondly children should be studying on the computer not playing video games and going in website that are not allowed more then @NUM1 do students and children are on the internet palying video games and doing something the is done everyday also I have seen many kids playing games on the computer. Thirdly student will never learn nothing if they wast there time because computer is for studing and many students don't have there time wisely as they should also many student should be useing comput only sometimes not everyday I have notice that so many students don't learn from compu for because they are not studing tests mre then @PERCENT1 stundent fail classes because of computer. First of people should be spending time with  and friends because they are teh most important people aroun ud not computers. Are still with me? Secondly friends are the most important people I ever had because they care about and love you like you're ther families but what if you just wast youre on computer how are you know all your friends. For example m allways on comput never goes to see her friemds amd her friends to to here because she never cares about their only computer do god get what im saying here. Thirdly family is also important then just being on the computer because they care about you have to at lease spend sometime with family for example many families stop spending time with each othe because computer is important to them. Lastly help you're community is goal because you make you\re city look you don't want it he be massy also many people quit help with commicity servic around the neighbor for example I have see  trash on grounds and because they dont care. Finally going out doing sports and starting fit is very important. First of playing sports is far and youve health but people never play sports anymore just because computer for example @NUM2 people stop playing sports, secondly going to is very import because is good.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
1534,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 oppinon about computers are that people should use them. Think about your children, when they grow up they will need to know how to use a computer for school, or even a job. It also teaches hand eye cordanation for multi tasking. The computer is also fun and easy to use. I am almost positve that you love to use a computer, who dosn't? @CAPS2 first reason is that you will need to use a computer in everyday life. For example if you are going to a job interview most @CAPS3 will ask how meny words a minuet can you type you need to be proficant. Also at school if you have a writing asinment due then it would take more time writing it than typeing it. All @CAPS3 you will have to type one time or another. Aspesaily your job as an @CAPS1 you need to use a computer everyday. The computer also teaches hand eye cordanation. Hand eye cordanation is kinda like multi tasking you could type and talk on the phone or even excircising and txting. Hand eye cordanation is a very important skill in life. All @CAPS3 you will need to multi task like at a library you need to find a book and talk to people. Even driving a car you need to multi task to stay on the hand, you need to use one fast from brake and gas and you need to be looking at the road. You must to multi task along with hand eye cordination. Your in luck a computer teaches you. @CAPS2 last and final reason is its fun and easy to use. I was @NUM1 when I started uing a computer I loved to play fun games. I never could type but I caught on because if you are having fun while you it will be easy to turn. Just like math its not fun but you have to larn how to do it. So if you like having fun while lurning some thing the computer is for you. It's now or never for people to larn, get @CAPS3 and get good grades. Its fun and easy to lurn how to use. It teaches you hand eye cordanation plus multi tasking. You will absolutly need to know how to use a computer for @CAPS3 and school. We need computers for life we always will need to use computers for every single day of our lives. Don't tell people it will note your brain or you will become unhelthy from being on the computer look past it. Don't you see all the good uses for computers?",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
4166,2,"People will always take things offensive.  It is a fact of life.  No one will ever be completly satisified no matter what.  We can not try to please everyone, but it will never happen.  We have a freedom of speech even if those words are offensive to others.  Things on the internet are offensive and no one can mandate how it is veiwed either.  The same should go for a library.     I understand a parent's concern with their child reading or listening to things that are not appropriate.  Some of the things authors write can be either innapproraite or offensive.  That is their freedom of speech.  We can not take that away from them but there should be some censorship at least to the apprearance of books.  For music and movies they usually have a warning lable if it is not intended for younger kids.  It might be a good idea for some libraries to do the same with books and magazines.      In order to see a rated, '@CAPS1', movie you have to be over @NUM1 and for a good reason because of the mature content.  The books being writen now are more and more mature.  But if we take on the custom of being of certain age for books we might invaid the privacy of others.     No one has the right to remove books from a library's shelf on the count of being offensive.  Who can judge whether something is offensive? The libraries are publicly owened and therefore have no one owner.  The city owns them.  If there is a problem with whether a book should be at the library it is the city's decision.  Even if there is such an uproar about one book, unless the decision is unnanimous, no book should be taken off the shelves.  The book should simply be put in a spot either behind the counter or where it is available only on request.      Taking books off the shelves I beleive is taking away from the public's ability to read.  If a parent is concerned about what their child might read, they should confront their local librarian.  The librarian @MONTH1 be able to help them retrieve books that are appropriate and apealing to their child.",4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
15246,6,"In the Mooring Mast, by @ORGANIZATION2, the builders of the Empire State Building faced numerous obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on it. To dock, a moor mast was necessary. One could not simply Place one on the empire state building because it would add stress to the buildings frame. Also, the stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure would add stress, which would force more modifications to the frame costing upwards of sixty thousand dollars. The mooring mast was not completed mainly because of safety. After the combustion of the Hindenburg, owners of the Empire State Building realized a disaster it would cause if it hapened in New York. Nature was also an obstacle, with constantly changing violent air currents threatening to move the dirigible, which could not be anchored down as it could be in a field. It was a risk not worth taking. Lastly, a law passed earlier prevented dirigibles from even approaching buildings on such elevation over urban areas. These were the obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
15738,6,"The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in allowing dirigibles to dock there are many, mainly it is a safety concern. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents"", stated the article. ""They would be dangling high above pedestrians on the street [which] was neither practical nor safe."" This shows the dirigibles are inpractable and a danger to both the people in it and the people on the street below.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
12622,5,I think the mood given by the author in the memoir is a happy mood. I think this because throughout the entire memoir the author didn't talk about one unhappy thing. In paragraph @NUM1 the author talks about how his parents taught him how to cook and how they gave him a love for passionate Cuban music. In paragraph @NUM2 the author talks about the unity and friendship throughout his neighborhood despite the racial differences. The author talks about all his friends and family who graced his table in paragraph @NUM3. The most important thing I think he talked about was how he learned to love in paragraph @NUM4.      As you can see there are no sad memories in this memoir and I think that is what gives it such a happy mood.,2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
3865,2,"Katherine Paterson, who is an author, thought that if a book was not one that she would want her children to read that it should be taken off the shelf at the library. If you found a book in your public library offensive, would you want that book removed from your sight and public view? Personally, I wouldn't. I would not want the book to be removed because that book could be a good learning experience for others. In this essay, I will explain from my personal experience @CAPS5 I disagree with Katherine Paterson.     In the sixth grade, I learned about how to find a certain book in a public library using a system. We had to find certain books in our school library, using this system, as an assignment. One of the books we had to find was the @CAPS1 @CAPS2. I found it very easily because I knew where it should have been and what it looks like. But there was a child in my class who had never seen a @CAPS2 in her life. After helping her find the @CAPS2, she ask, '@CAPS5 is this book so important to people? I don't understand it.' I explained to her in the best of my ability the life of @CAPS6 and @CAPS5 this was important to me. She soon found out that it was something she wanted to learn more about.     It is against the law in some states that a @CAPS2 be in school at all. This is because of others beliefs or non-beliefs. If it were not for the library having the @CAPS2 on a shelf that girl would never have learned something that is now important to her. A book can be offensive to other people but that book can change a person's life forever. Katherine Paterson believed that some books should not be found in libraries. Unfortunatley, other people think this also. One book can change a person's life, what if that book was not in the library to change another?",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
532,1,"Dear Local newpaper editor, I think computers benefits us in a good way. Weither computers are helping kids with research for homework, projects and essays or building online stocks to help make buisness grow. Computers are now a benificial way of life. We can see what happens on the other side of the world. And learn about new things everyday. What I think people are focusing is what they thikn computers are doing to people, but are really not focusing on how it helps us in so many ways. One way that people say computers effects people is that we don't exercise instead were attached to our computers. I doubt computers do this not everyone likes or wants to exercise. And why would computers stop people from doing that. It's people choice, the computer doesn't forces them to stay in the house. And computers are a great way for you to catch up with friends and family. It could be online chatting and even sharing photos. And I highly doubt people stop seeing their fmailies because of computers it just doesn't make any sense. People who are against computer are giving people in chairs or controlling them, it's just silly. If people acually stopped to take the time and think; theirs a chance that they would see how computers has helped us grow as a nation. And how much they used computers and that it really helped them than just searching through books for a ton of information. As years have gone by I could see that a ton of thinhs are runed by computers and that alot of people use them. And it has impacted our country, in my opinion a good way. And if it wasn't for computers who knows how are nation would be running. And if computers amde such a posotive impact on our country already I can only iamgine the years to come as computers become bigger and better. So as you have read I gave mt reason as how think computers impact our lives. And how I think the years to come it will impact our lives bigger and better. Now I can't force you to be for, or against computers bbut what ever your opinion is just think of a world without computers especially if you grew up with them.",3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
13027,5,The mood created by the author in the memoir was ment to be a happy and thankful mood. The mood was created happy because the child Narciso was very hapy that his parents moved to @LOCATION1. He was also happy because his house was not just a house it was a home. The kin Narciso was thankful because his parents let other people into the home untill they have somewhere elese they can call home. He is also thankful that he got his parents marvilous culinary skills so he can cook very well. He is also thankful for his parents love and sacrifice. The mood that we are suppose to get is a happy yet calm mood well we read this because Their is nothing to exciting but their is some parts where you get happy for what they did and you feel calm because as I said their is nothing really jumping out at you.  it is just a life story.,2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
6407,3,"Rolling hills, open terran, hgh deserts-all are features of the setting that affect the cyclist. First, Rolling Hills could take energy out of the cyclist when having to travel for miles on end. The open terrain leads to the beating sun which also puts pressure on the cyclist. Lastly, high deserts would have an affect on the cyclist because he has to pedal for mles on end in rough dry terrain putting strain on him overall.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
11985,5,"The mood created by the author of the @CAPS1 Home: Blueprints of Our Lives is love. One example of this is in paragraph @NUM1, ""Growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relative."" This quote shows that even though they technically weren't family, they still loved eachother enough to be family. Another example is in paragraph @NUM2 and it says, ""They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends, and careers in the country they loved."" This quote shows that they love eachother more than anything. they are leaving behind and would do anything to give them better lives. Lastly, in paragraph @NUM3 it says, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" This quote shows that for his parents loving him, he gives them love. That is the mood in the @CAPS1 Home: Blueprints of Our Lives.",2.0,,,,,3.0,4.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
3913,2,"@CAPS4 I think all books,music,movies,magazines,etc. should be removed from the shelves if they are found offensive. The reason I say this is because what if their are little children that are willing too read grown up books and its all types of naked pictures and words thats not in a child vocabulary. Then they will pic up bad habbits and then use them with knowing what the words actually means.  Then, I think music should be edited because somer music has cursing and talking about things that a young minded child or children shouldn't hear. The music should only be something children are suppose too listen too things that are in their age group.    Next, I believe movies should be censored because now a days we are letting are children watch every and anything they want too. Things that doesnt control their language such as(@CAPS1 @CAPS2). I believe that @CAPS3 sahow needs too be blocked because they really do and say exclusive things on that show, and alot of childern watch and repeat every thing they hear and see of that show. Finally, magazines...I say @CAPS4 too magazines because they have neaked girls and men on the covers and pages of these magazines that shows just way too much and they put things in the magazines too them look real when they are actually not. I think that etc.. should only be used when needed too research and do homework because children use enternet too watch exclusive things and listen too such bad things.    Inconclusion, All together I think it should be an limit too everything we listen too and watch. Because children pick up everything they hear and see",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
15555,6,"In the excerpt, ""The Mooring Mast"" by @ORGANIZATION1 wanted to allow dirigibles to dock on the Empire State building for refueling and services and to let passengers off and on. However, the builders of the Empire State Building went through many obstacles to allow this to happen. ""The architects and engineers of the Empire State Building consulted with experts, taking tours of the equipment and mooring operations at the @ORGANIZATION3 in Lakehurst, New Jersey"" (¶@NUM1). They had to meet with experts and analyze if that was going to be a successful idea. ""The mooring mast of the Empire State Building was destined to never fulfill it's purpose, for reasons that should have been apparent before it was ever constructed....the greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself"" (¶'s @NUM2 & @NUM3). Another obstacle that the builders had to deal with was nature. the winds up there were very strong, therefore the idea of docking dirigibles on the Empire State Building was not successful.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
203,1,"Dear Newspaper, I think people need computers. It helps them see the world if they can't. It can be used to send important messages to people that are farther away from you. Also if someone has a parent or loved one far away they can see each other through the computer. So here is examples of these three things. Some people can't physically or mentally and can't afford to travel. Its sad how some people are so sick with a disease or illness that they can't go places. But if they go on the internet they can look up pictures and information of places they've never been to which can help them see the world better. But there are people who can help them see the world better. But there are people who have fears which prevent them from travelling to different places. So thet could go to the internet and find ways to help them get over their fears. Which in turn will allow them to get over their fears and let them travel to places. Then there are people who can't afford it. So the internet can help find a good job that pays good money which they can use to afford to travel the world and see it for what it is. What if you need to send a really important message to someone to prevent them doing something or help them live or even stop a war. So take into reconsideration if there is a war going on for a miss understanding. So if the government figures out what happened and they know how to straightin out the situation then they could send a message to the attackers. What happened and that it wasn't what they thought we did then they would stop fighting and the war would be over. What if a bomb is in the white house you would want to get out of the building or find it and disarm it. So then a guy finds out about it and send a message to the white house and that would save all the people in the white houses lives. Sometimes loved ones go away to some where far away and you can't talk or see them. Someones in the military and he/she has a kid so the computer allows them to see and talk to them through a webcam which would keep the child and parent together and not seperate them. Also you see a friend in facebook who you haven't seen in years so you friend him and you guys get back in touch with each other and you can be friends with them again. So in conclusion the computer can do many helpful things. It can fix relationships, save lives, help you get over fears and see the world. Which isn't bad sure we sometimes go over board with it but it is very useful. It isn't horrible but it is sometimes bad but also sometimes good but",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
12641,5,"The mood created by the memoir is a mix between a happy mood and an unhappy mood. Everything is happy when they talk about his parents welcoming the other imagrents into thier home. And how thier landlords daughter was his first friend. And then how it talks about how thier neigerhood is filled with @CAPS1, Spanish, and Italian imigrents and how they are in that neghborhood because of racism.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
7284,3,"In this story the cyclest was affected physically and emotionally in many ways. One such way was the setting around him. For example, when he rode into the first town he gained of boost of confidence because he believed that he was on the right track to Yosemite. Then when the cyclist rode upon that old shed and the rusty water pumps he began to feel a little worried because he was running out of water and The Old Timers never mentioned the shed. When the cyclist encountered the rolling hills with tumbleweeds and snakes I believe he began to feel dismayed because he was lost. I believe this because in the text he says ""I was going to die and the birds would pick me dead."" This shows how hopeless the man fealt. when he reached ""Gary and @CAPS1 fish camp"" he was relieved and thankfull because he no longer had death blazing towands him in the form of a yellow sun, empty spaces, and empty water bottle. This was how the the features and setting affects him in many ways.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
9486,4,Saeng would return to her homeland.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
3794,2,"Do I believe that certain materials should be taken off book sheleves if found offensive? There are many answers to this question and many people have different views to the question. For instance, you have to look at all of the different races, customs, and more of what people believe in to find the true answer. Some materials are very offensive, but should they be taken off the shelves of our very own libraries?     There are thousands of books in a library, and hundreds are written every single year. These books range from romance, action packed, and scary. Now many books are starting to be found offensive to our society today. I have read many books and have not found hardly any book to ever be offensive. There are offensive things in other matierals such as: music, movies, and magazines.      I do recall listening to music, watching movies and reading magazines and not liking what i was doing at all. Some music today is just extremely bad. From the fowl language and missinterpretation of words, music has become worse. Some movies that I have watched are not very well either. Movies can be offensive in many other ways than any other material there is. You got the scary, gorry and the movies with all of the different sex scenes that are made every year. This can teach the younger kids what is wrong and right, as well let them be aware of what life is about.     I do believe that all of these materials should stay on the shelves of our libraries. Learning from books, music, movies, and magazines is good in a way. Knowing that many things in this world today are offensive to people, I think that it can only make our society stronger to help us understand all of the different views that our people have. Yes it can go in bad directions, but there are many ways to get people to understand what is right and what is wrong to push them to stride for the best.      Knowing that materials on our shelves are offensive, I still believe that the right thing to do is to keep them there. Clearly people get mad and upset when reading, listening, or watching these materials, but this is what makes us who we are. There will always be offensive stuff being said written and so on, but the way you can handle it yourself will show everyone around you that it is possible to change their own views of the offensive matter and look at it the better way.",4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
4290,2,"Almost every city in the @LOCATION1 has a public library. A place where the citizens can check out books, music, movies, magazines and more. Inside a library, there are different sections. There are kids sections, adult, fiction, and many more. Just like any ordinary store, there are items in a library that are not subject for children. A common question has been coming up everday life, 'Should we remove these offensive items from our shelves?'                                               Libraries have been around for years and so have uncensored things that are being put in front of children. As a child, you want to explore and know everything. Bad things will always be put in front of you as an obstacle to make the right choice. Just like these degrading items found in everyday stores, libraries, or in general everywhere you go. A library, however, is not just intended for adults, teenagers, or young children. A library is made for everyone's access and not everyone is alike. Therefore there is plenty of variety in these libraries. It should never be a libraries fault for containing things not appropriete for children in my belief. Almost every library is very organized into categories. If children are separated and exclusive to adult material, I see no problem in having these items on the shelves. When I visit a library, these items are very out of reach for children. Society knows what should and should not be brought upon a child, so they know not to put it in any reach of children.                                           'All of us can think of a book that we hope non of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf.' said Author, Katherine Paterson. Katherine makes a very valid statement. If I have a child one day, I could think of plenty of materials I would hope my child never came acrossed. However, as a parent it is their job to protect their children from these things. Coming from a teenage perspective, at a young age, I was very clueless about all the terrible things sitting around me. A majority of children would not be able to get their hands on such uncensored items, nor would they understand them if they did.                                                         There are things in this world that are much worse for children to see then taking a quick glance at something not for their age at a library. If anything, concerned parents should be paying more attention to what their children come in contact with at stores, the people they are around, or what they are listening/watching. The internet is probably the most uncensored place a child can come acrossed. Reaching out to libraries about what they put on their shelves should be of their least concern compared to what is really out there in life.               I do believe that no children should be handed or put in front of uncensored adult conduct because one-hundred percent unacceptable. If these items were placed in spots where only adults can get ahold of, then I see no problem in the situation. The children of our generation and more to come will always encounter something they should not be put in fron of. However, that is life and there will always be something come up in your life that you should not witness or be apart of. If libraries continue to keep these items out of reach of children, then there should be no censorship in libraries.",5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
9744,4,"In the winter Hibiscus, the author chose the to end the story with a hopeful paragraph which stated, “when they come back, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this Hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” The reason for the decision to end on an optimistic note are as follows. For example, the Hibiscus represents. The ideas of resilience when faced with challenge , and the determination To adapt and succeed. Saeng’s situation is similar to the flower’s, which has been uprooted from its original spot, replanted, and forced to try and survive the Winter. Saeng has moved from her beloved homeland, she must begin life anew in another country, and has been faied with the obstacle of failure in reyards to an unnamed test. In the final paragraph, she finds that like the cherished hibiscus flower, she must be resilient and determined to succeed in her new home   ",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
16609,6,The @CAPS1 says the greatest obstacle would be nature itself. The wind would blow the blimps on to the Sharp spires of other buildings.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
12410,5,"The mood about the @CAPS1's memoir is his happiness and caring and the selflessness. According to the text in @CAPS2 @NUM1, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice. That's how the mood describes the @CAPS1 memoir of Narciso Rodriguez background and his family.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
15687,6,"The obstical's the builder's took on Were difficult, and time @CAPS1. In Way's Such as the onley benefit's the Empire State building relly passed Was being the tallest building in the world. They also attempted to @CAPS2 a dirigible's docking base for future transportation @CAPS3 filed to do @CAPS4 during certain law's and technicall difficulties. @CAPS4 obsticles such as adding extra body work to the building's structure was not even neccarasary.Those are the obsticle's the builder's faced and as well as @CAPS5 time and @CAPS6.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
4394,2,"A place fill of knowleged should be a place where you can find all the news that is making the world what it is today, a person should be able to find out things from the past also. A library has many different things found in it: books, magazines, movies, and some have music. The books range from encyclopedia's to @PERSON1, the varity of books and information is to the extreme. But then again with all the good things there always comes a bad side of the information. With all the profanity found in today's society you would not want a child seeing or hearing any of it while at a public library.     Books are put into a library so that people have the chance to read them and become more knowledgable. The thought of a younger person going into the older, adult area is very upsetting but then again who's to say that that individual is not allowed to read an article or magazine that has more mature type's of information or language found in them. I feel that a person will see what they want to see and what they want to read, fact of the matter is they have the right to.      Both, young and older people need to be educated in the worlds past history and the present news. One reason being to prevent things that happend in the past, happening again. Another reason is just so that they know what is going on around them and so that the individual is informed.      Libraries should have banners or flaps up saying what is in a certain section of that specific area and people can make the decision to go over to those area's or not. Things that are found 'not right' in one's eyes @MONTH1 not seem so bad to anothers, it's all in personal preference. Things should still be out for the public to read or see.     Making the choice to go into a library is an individuals decision. Fact is that the library is a place where a person should be able to get knowledge, no matter what type of information.  A person should be able to get their information without the censorship of others.",4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
3026,2,"Have you ever been offended? Did you lash out, or did you keep an open mind and come try understanding? People are offended by many things every day in life. So, we should broaden our minds, and see these 'offenses' as a normality.     You're at a party with a bowl full of candy stationed right beside the front door. You walk in and take a piece. Wait, you don't want that piece? What are you going to do with it? Do you take all of the same pieces that you don't like out of the bowl and throw them away, or do you simply drop it back into the bowl and choose a new one? If you throw the candy away, what does that mean for the other party guests? You have narrowed their choices down because of your own selfish opinion. That candy could have been the guest favorite. But, since YOU don't like it, you take away the other guests' privilege to eat that candy. They didn't deserve that, now did they?     If you're searching through books in a library and you come across a book that doesn't interest you or offends you, then put it back and look for a new one. If you're having trouble finding the right book, ask the librarian for suggestions on other topics or books to check out. Go to a new library, even, but don't mess with something that isn't yours. Especially, something as small as a book.     The point of the matter is, if you don't like something then disregard it. The moment the book, and the book alone, starts causing problems is the moment anyone should intervene. But, come on, do you really think a book could cause a problem? If your child is having problems, don't you think you ought to check what's going on with him instead of looking to see if he/she checked out the 'book that we hope none of our children' took off the shelf. This is quite possibly one of the last things I would think of causing a problem, if I even thought of this at all. Opinions can cause a lot of problems. Sometimes, people just need to keep their opinions to themselves, agreed?",3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
898,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, I think computers have affect on people because firstly, it gives people the ability to learn from faraway places. Secondly, it allows people to talk online with friends. Thirdly, gives online games to little kids. Lastly you can wacth video's that can teach you all sorts of exotic things. My first reason I think computers have affect on people is it gives people the ability to learn from faraway places. For example if I want to go to @LOCATION4 for the @DATE1 and I know nothing about the place I can go online and look up I can look up their foods, their culture, their villages, and even there landscapes. Also the computer is good for book reports if your teacher told you to do a book report on @LOCATION5 instead of going in your text books, goion line you can look up their culture, there food, there location, how is there economy like, what kinds of school the kids go to what kinds of festivals they have etc. My second reason computers have affect on people is because it allows people to talk online with other people whenever they want. For example there are @NUM1 things that let you talk on the computer and that is @CAPS1, and @CAPS2 these two allows you to talk to friends that live faraway from you, my friend lives in @LOCATION1 and I live in @LOCATION2 we don't have cellphones so we go online to eiether @CAPS1, or @CAPS2 ""isn't that great""!!. The computer also allows you to talk from faraway places like if you live in @LOCATION3 you can talk to somebody else in @LOCATION6. My third reason I think computers have affect on people is it gives online games to little kids. For example when I say games I mean educational games like reading games, math games, writing games, etc. Statistic say the @PERCENT2 to @PERCENT1 of kids learn more things on the computer than they learn in school that a huge percentage even for kids. Also when kids play computer games it more fun to them then sitting in class all day like my litt ",4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
3063,2,"How would you feel if you wrote a story about your life, and someone found it offensive, so the took the book off of the shelves? I feel as if the censorship in libraries is becoming a controversial problem for the following reasons: it is wrong to take away freedoms, people have different opinions and views, and some books, magazines, or songs are trying to make people aware of dangers.     One important aspect in why censorship is becoming controversial is; it takes away our freedom of speech. In @LOCATION1, we have the right to speak our minds. If everything we read was censored, there would be nothing to read. The liberties and freedoms of @CAPS1 citizens should not be taken away because of something that is thought to be inappropriate.     Another reason why I believe censorship is wrong is; different people have completely different opinions on things. One person might feel that a book about a sexual assault victim is offensive, while another person might think the book is informational and helpful. No one can base censorship on one belief or idea, because it will never be the belief or idea that everyone approves of.      A third reason why censorship should not be inforced as much is; it takes away the awarness of the dangers in everyday life. Stories about people who were kidnapped, or were in a car crash because the person who was driving was under the influence of drugs, can be a good thing. Eventhough the story @MONTH1 have some accounts that are not appropriate, it could be very influencial, and convince someone to make the right choice. If we censor stories about abduction, drugs, alcohol, or people making the wrong choices, no one will be able to read a story about it and make the right choice instead of making the same mistake as the person.        Although stories or magazine articles that @MONTH1 be seen as vulgar are looked down upon, they help to make people aware, give people the freedom of speech, and allow them to have their own opinions. Censorship in libraries and media should be abolished",5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,22.0
13109,5,The author was in a respectful mood. In the memoir it tells a lot about how his parents took care of him and about his life and how his parents heped him through it. So when the author wrote this he was in a somewhat happy mood because he looked back on all the good times but that can also make you sad too.,0.0,,,,,0.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
6339,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist by making his travel a lot harder. The weather was very hot making him very thirsty and due to the towns being abandoned, he could not stock up on water. The terrain that he had to cross had many hills and the road was not in good condition. With the heat, lack of water, ghost towns, and tough terrains, made his journey a very hard achievement to overcome. With all these obstacles in his way, he was able to achieve his goal of getting water.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
15043,6,"Al Smith and the builders of the Empire State building faced several obstacles when trying to allow dirigibles to dock there. First obstacle was designing strengthening beams to the frame and foundation to support the extra stress caused by the dirigible's load and wind pressure. The second was that the gases used in some dirigibles were unsafe. ""Most dirigibles from outside the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable"" (Lüsted, @NUM1). The inefficient the gases, the violent air currents would either cause the dirigible to spend, or add lead weights which would ""... be dangling high above pedestrians"" (Lüsted, @NUM2). Among all of these problems ""... was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas"" (Lüsted, @NUM3). Therefore, not only was it unsafe or impractical, it was illegal.",3.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
7258,3,"In the story the features of the setting affect the cyclist. The setting is described as a rough terrain, which makes it harder for the cyclist to travel. Also it’s hot, and there are no buildings or people around. This also makes it hard for the cyclist because he runs out of water. throught the story the cyclist keeps going and ends up sarving",2.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
12708,5,"c.The mood in this passage Narciso Rodriguez's home, nationality, and his family. He often talks about his nationality. He is proud to be born in Cuba and not afraid to say it. He is also married. He lives in the @DATE1's. In america. He also often talks about his @NUM1 bedroom apartment in Newark, New Jersey. He aslo likes to talk about the new freinds he mad here. And his family. Also Narciso childhood. His neighborhood is made out of cubans, And @CAPS1. That was the memoir of this passage. ",1.0,,,,,1.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
3530,2,"Have you ever wondered why a movie you rented from a library when you were younger, isn't there today? This is due to censorship. Libraries censor certain books if they believe them to be inappropriate for young children. Should censorship be allowed in libraries? Everyone has their own opinion, as do I, and I believe it should be allowed.     Censoring books allows libraries to withhold books, movies, magazines, music, and more from children who are not quite mature enough to handle the contents within the material, rather it be curse words in a movie, book, or music, nudity shown in magazines, or fighting shown in a video game. Young children look for role models, someone to follow, therefore, more than likely they are going to repeat what they hear or see. Some children are not quite mature enough to understand that it's not alway 'okay' to repeat what you hear, some words are inapporopriate for young children. Maybe they saw that on a movie, a man or woman solved a problem he or she had by fighting, the young child @MONTH1 take the message the wrong way, and try and solve one of his or her problem by fighting.      I believe that an age limit should be set for certain types of materials. Children that are under the age of @NUM1 should not be watching movies that are rated @CAPS1-@NUM1. There is a reason the rating is what it is. Just because your child is not allowed to rent/check out whatever the material @MONTH1 be, doesn't mean that you couldn't check it out, maybe go home and watch/listen/read/play it. If it doesn't seem to violent/graphic for your child then allow them to watch the movie, read the book, or play the game. That is your choice, but a library doesn't want to be blamed for your @NUM3 year old coming home cursing and fighting. My sister took my neice to the library once to rent a movie, it was a childrens movie, and my sister thought nothing harmful would come about it, but in one of the scenes, there was some arguing and fighting, and my neice began arguing with my sister, and hitting her, and my sister wasn't very pleased that they allowed that movie to be on the childrens floor of the library.          Censorship is a wonderful thing to have in libraries. Maturity level for some children is just not quite high enough for them to see/watch/listen/play certain materials. Not only should censorship be allowed, it should be enforced. I believe all libraries should have to have censorship in their library",5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
15801,6,"The main problem the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to let dirigibles to dock were the wind conditions and how close dirigibles were to the building. The wind conditions made it hard for the builders to figure out how dirigibles would dock there. The winds near the top of the building were, ""constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" (@CAPS1 @NUM1) The other problem the builders faced was how close dirigibles came to the building. In one case, as a test run, the Los Angeles tried to approach the mast but it, ""could not get close enough to tie up..."". Even though the building was not what it was suppose to be it is still one of the greatest of all time.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
4243,2,"In my way of viewing things i say that what i think is that the book, movies, music, and magazines should be put in critical order because some of us want or like to read or see stuff about what we want to see like the news that are in one way good to us, but some others like to see what's behind from the reality and want to speak up but they can because they are afraid that they would get hurt for speaking up. So i think that those things(books, music, movies, magazines) should not be removed from the shelfs because those books or movies can bring you what's going on in the world and how is affecting us in the way of not paying attention to it. Some experiences that i have is music i had once heard a song in spanish called '@CAPS1 The @CAPS2' and it talks about the corruption in @LOCATION1 and that how the people from the bottom suffer because of the people from the top do not care about them, also if you treat them as kings they will treat you as a slaves, and that if you give them the @CAPS2 to control you, they will take out advantage of it, how the honest people work hard to bring food to their homes, but its not enough because of the leaders on top that want all for them... its a very good song that says the true about it and that nobody does something to finished.So i don't want that songs or books that show the reality disapper because some people doesn't like them at all",2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
15988,6,"There were many obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The man who came up with the plan was Al Smith, who saw the opportunity to add a mooring mast to the top of the building. Which this would allow dirigibles to anchor there for several hours for refueling or service, and to let passengers on or off. But with this came lots of work. And they couldn't simply drop a mooring mast on top of the building. The architects had to make plans on how they were going to set up the mooring mast. In the story it says ""Once the architects had designed the mooring mast and made changes to the existing plans for the building's skeleton, construction proceeded as planned. When the building had been framed to the 85th floor, the roof had to be completed before the framing for the mooring mast could take place. The mast also had a skeleton of steel and was clad in stainless steel with glass windows.""",0.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
10636,4,The author ended the story with that paragraph to let the readers know that she did not give up. In the story it seem like she had thoughts of giving up but her thoughts of her homeland comforted her when she thoughts she was going to give up. But the last paragraph of the story she confirmed that she wasn’t giving up.,1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
6552,3,"With age comes wisdom and all that, but the world is a fluid place things change No a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist. Never travel advice home old-timers who haven’th confines of use porches.Flat road was replaced by short rolling hills. Rough Road ahead Do not exceed posted speed limit.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
157,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 much time do you spend on the computer daily, @NUM1 hour, @NUM2 hours. While computers, are amazing advances in technology they are also very bad for you. People spend hours at at time on the computer causing less time exercing, horrible speaking, and dangerous searches. From @DATE2 to @DATE3 the numbers of obese people increased from @PERCENT2 of @LOCATION2 citizens to @PERCENT1. In a recent study the amount of families with computers is now @NUM3 out of @DATE1 compared to the @NUM4 out of @DATE1 in @DATE4. Scientist wonder if they were connected and relized they were. People who spent hours on the computer live a sedentary life style. They are more likly to go on the computer than go exercise. The lack of exercising causes obeseity, and cardovascular problems. Without this valuable exercise more people are . At a visit to the hospitial a surgen said he has seen a huge increase of heart surgreys in the @DATE1. We found that the computer manual booklets says to only go on for an @NUM1 hour at a time. The hottest thing online these days is social networking, whether @CAPS6's twitter, or facebook. These social networking allow teens to talk with there friends. But @CAPS6 really isn't talking. For example they write @CAPS3 @CAPS4 going @NUM2 dance. Not only is the spelling wrong but also the grammer. And this language doesnt just stay online, @CAPS6 is now now they talk. @PERSON1 the grandmother to a social networking said, ""I can't even have conversations with her because she is is talking like she is on the computer. @CAPS6's so sad."" @CAPS5 for public speaking and english class, @PERSON2 an english teacher for @NUM7 @DATE1 states @CAPS2 she has seen a drop in teens ability to write gramaticly correct and @CAPS2 when she corrects essay the are written is social networking form. ""@CAPS6's hard to see litiature dissolving because kid are spending so much time on the computer. The average day for children in @LOCATION1 @CAPS7 is to go home and going on the computer for hours at a time until a parent comes home. @CAPS2 would you like your child to be surfing the internent alone without you for hours when you don't know what they are doing. Parent blockers can only do so much. Children can find out the password and net around @CAPS6. The dangers are always there. You can get a lot of good information on the internet but you can also get a lot of bad information. You dont know what your child is searching or who they are talking to on the computer, @CAPS6 could be ""@CAPS8,"" the who lives four blocks over.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
934,1,"Dear @CAPS1, I strongly believe computers have positive effects on people and the society. My reasons are you can learn and find new information on anything, you are able to talk to people faraway and computers teach skills to use in the future. I will now like to elaborate my reasons further. First of all, going on the internet and search sites help you learn and find information on anything you want. On the internet you can even ask questions, and they will probably be answered. You my even use information on the computer for a report statistics show @PERCENT1 of people who do reports, find their facts on the internet. Google, yahoo, and other search sites have helped children become more intrested in learning. Also, using a computer ables you to talk to other people from faraway places or friends you have not seen in a while. You can even webcam with people. I remember a few weeks ago, my best friend moved to florida, and now we webchat everyday! Talking online will even lower your telephone bills. Chatting online doesn't lost anything, where as the telephone charges for out of country calls cost . Computers will let you talk with your best buddy and save money. Last but not least, computers teach skills that can be applied later in life. Today many jobs in due using a computer, and technology is getting mom advanced. Before you know it will have to know how to work a computer. Also, you probably will need a computer in college. Proffesor @CAPS2 even stated, ""every single kid in my courses have some sort of computer."" In college you will take notes and do assignments. Using computers will help you do this and make your life easier. As you can see i believe computers help people and society greatly. My reasons are you can learn and find information on anything, you are able to talk to other people who are faraway, and computer skills will help you in life. Technology is advancing and were going to have to use a computer sooner or later.",4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
12747,5,"In the memoir 'Narciso Rodriguez' the mood of it was happy and was meant to sorta touch someone. In his memoir he explains something he found fun and amusing that he still does today ""a love of cooking that is still with me today (and for which I am eternally grateful). Passionate Cuban music (which I adore today)"". ""In our neighborhood despite customs elsewhere, all of these cultures came together in great solidarity in friendship"" this shows the neighborhood he lived him was happy and united. ""My mother and father had come to this country with such courage, without any knowledge of the language of the culture. They came selflessly"" this shows that he wanted the readers to know how caring and loving his parents were.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
401,1,"Dear, @CAPS1 paper edattor we should stop because people arent doing anything their just staying home using the computer. Making there life worser they should make a day whith out computors and every one goes out side and gets exsesise. Wo could mapse the world better the more you. Exersise the stronger you get people livse computers because they could there frends play games thats but some time we have to go outside. Some times i like using the computer but a littile to much land that i dont get that mach exesersise and i hope i could stop from that and go out side and exersise more. We would have computers but we wont use it like for along time then spend more outside. We should only olw kids for only two or three hours a day. When there using the computer they use over like hours thats not good they should go out side thats why.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
4296,2,"Dear Newspaper,      I would like to start off by saying yes, books, magizines, music, movies, etc., are great for the kids in the library.  I think thats the best thing for them to do when they dont have anything to do, go to the library and read or work on stuff in the library and I think that some things should be in the library because we are in high school and we need to learn some things here but some of the things we learn are not very appropriate.      In high school just walking down the hall ways your going to learn alot of things you probably dont need to know yet but when you walk into  a library they dont need to encourage it by putting  books of drugs, alcohol, and sex on the shelves.       Books about drugs are alright to an extent.  If your reading about medicanes you can take and being in the doctors office and getting percriptions is alright but when you got books about pot, weed, crank, or meth thats a little much.  We need to learn about those drugs and what they could do to us if we use them or abuse them but we dont need to know how to roll a blunt or make meth.      Books about alcohol are the same way.  We need to know the dangers of drinking but we dont need to know about teen parties and things to do when your drunk.       Advertisements, magizines, etc., are the worst things for us kids because everyone of them have something to do with drugs, alcohol, or sex and trying to get us to do those thing in high school. The front cover of magizines always have people who have got caught with drugs who is dating or sleeping around with who and ik that we will and need to know these things but i dont think we need to read them out of books because then we read it and see how other people did it and we feel the need to do it or try it.     I believe these books that are over the line about alcohol, drugs, and sex need to be taking out of the librarys so that the kids have something to learn about and ask there parents about.  I have been in the librarys and I know for a fact that the first books I go for have one of those three invloved in it because those are interesting and we like reading about stories at parties or someone getting pregnant or an @ORGANIZATION1 but also when I read I think about it and I think I want to go to a party they made them sound fun.     This is what I think about some of those books on the selves and what I think should happen.                                                                       Sinceraly,                                                            @LOCATION1",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
7083,3,"The setting affects the cyclist by showing that he is a little angry. He states that “don’t remember the saying don’t take candy from strangers.” So we know he is upset about something. He is mad about the fact that this one older man tells him directions on how to get somewhere, and it’s wrong. The man figure that out halfway through the story. He also said that “the old man hasn’t been off his porch since Carter was in office,” so he needs to get his directions up to date. So the beginning is a negative attitude.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
12354,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir Come in different ways. The first mood giving is greatful, in the ""Skills and the love of cooking that is still with me today"" @CAPS1 mood of greatful is ""I will always be greatful to my parents for their love and sacrifice"" The mood of Admiration, ""I often told them of my admiration for their strength and perseverance. In this memoir there was a lot of moods, the ones the stood out from the author was his greatfulness and admiration.",2.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
15596,6,"Allowing dirigibles stock at the Empire State Building was never possible because of the obstacles that the architects faced. First, nature was against the builders. The strong winds on the top of the building were constantly shifting, which proved a hazard to dirigibles. Mooring dirigibles would lead weights was out of the question because they were a danger to pedestrians. Another obstacle was an already existing law that prohibited dirigibles from flying low over urban areas. This law made it illegal for a dirigible to dock at the Empire State Building. The final obstacle was that a dirigible could be accidentally ignited and fall on New York. The destruction of the Hindenburg made clear that it was not possible to have a dirigible dock at the Empire State Building.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
13155,5,"The author sets a mood to the memoir that allows the reader to attach and relate to what he is trying to explain. The mood given off by the memoir to me is selflessness. We all have an experience in life where someone gives up a piece of their lives for you. And Narciso's case his parents ""moved from Cuba to give him a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends, and careers and the country they love."" Even though they gave these things up they brought along a lot of their Cuban customs with them such as music, cooking and lifestyle for Narciso to experience while living in the safe and comfortable environment of @LOCATION1. They took those things and invited them to their new house to create a comfortable, suitable, loving living area which allowed Narciso to call this area ""home"". By showing the selflessness of his parents the author is able to create a connection to a time in the readers life where someone showed this sort of mood towards them creating a perfect mood to enjoy the reading.",3.0,,,,,4.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
846,1,"Dear local newspaper, I have heard about this issue concerning people are on their computer to much. In my opinion, i think that people should not spend so much time on the computer for several reasons. There are the reasons to why I think that people should less time on the internet, and more outdoors. One reason to why I think that people should spend less time on the computer and more times outdoors is so that they can get more exercise. When you get exercise you can lose weight. You can also feel lighter and better about yourself, you will be more active. Another reason to why you should spend more time outdoors than on the computer is because if you don't you will get very very very lazy. If you don't get out and play or exercise, you will become tired. Also, you will become cranky and want do what your parents tell you to do because your mind will be so into your computer screen. My last but not least reason to why we should spend more time outdoors than indoors on the computer is because we can miss out on family fun that goes on. Since people are on the computer so much they miss out an parties and social events. They @MONTH1 also miss out on family dinners and movie night. If you do not want to miss out on the fun, I suggest that you get cuclasses more and stop being a lazy couch potato. As you cansee, there are many reasons to why we should spend more time outdoors doing activities such as going on a bike side, going kout to eat, as even a nice stroll along the heart while walking the dog. I really hope that my opinions means something to you. And I also hope you agree with me. Thank you for your time.",3.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
3116,2,"I think that if there are books, music @CAPS1, movies, or magazines that we should have a right to take it off the shelf if its offensive. The reason why I think this is, because I have a baby girl who I don't want to see that kind of stuff. I don't want her listening or watching movies or reading anything offensive or vulgar.           I know this is a free country and everyone has the right to have their own opinions. The libraries are paid by tax payers dollars and if we take the offensive to vuglar movies, books, music and magazines then they should come off the shelf.  Kids can read or see or listen the these vulgar things an think its ok or cool to say or do these things.     They can see bad pictures, nudity, drugs and violence. They can see the different types of drugs and learn about them. For example pictures of weed, cocaine or pills are in books. The kids can look at this stuff and see violence. For example they can see pictures of  men hitting women or kids killing kids and this sets a bad example.     We live in a world where people are influenced by the things they read, watch, and listen to. It is important that people are aware of what their children are seeing. The library is a place where many people go to learn. It is important that only people are allowed to see material that is appropriate for them",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
6550,3,"The setting affected the cyclist, because he didn’t know if he was going to die or live. He had used up all his water because it was so hot and his mouth was dry.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,1.0
259,1,"As time goes on, our society becomes more advanced with more and more unnecessary technology, such as the television. What I really want to write about is the computer. Society today has developed a very unhealthy habit, and it is always using the computer. Everyone in the twenty first century uses a computer. The world got so used to having the computer around, that if all the computers in the world were to ""break,"" then most people probably would not know how to @CAPS2. Like the basic theory of. Which was that the world was ""@CAPS1"" to end back in the year two-thousand because everyone thought that the world was going to end. Only because the computer were going to crash and lose all the data that we have ever recorded. Humanity relies way to much on the computer. Since many people rely on the computer to @CAPS2, a lot of people ""forget"" to excersise! Our body needs excersise to live. Excersise one of the most important activities in our daily lives. When you don't excersise, and all you do is eat junk food and drink today, you better bet on your mothers grave that your going to either get diabetes, the fly, heartburn, or any other sickness or disability. You are what you eat is what I say. Life already has enough distractions in it, why add another distraction? All the computer is, is a distraction from keeping you and everyone else healthy. The computer started off as an ""innocent"" invention. Now a days, people literally worship the computer like it is a @CAPS3. People who use the computer all day every day, end becoming very lazy, because all they want to do is sit down and use the computer. In my opinion, everybody should be a part of some physical activity. Whether it is basketball, football, baseball, track, tennis or my favorite thing to do, skateboarding. Everyone should get physically active atleast three times a week for many reason, fact is, that if you excersise three times a week at the least, that your body will function better, you will look better, and you will feel better. excersise can be fun, as long as you make it fun. I hope this essay has really made you think about how you want to live. excersise should be a huge part of your daily routine, now sitting on your buttox all day searching pointless videos on ""youtube."" The way you want to live your life is up to you. And I hope to @CAPS3 that you start living it healthier.",5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
9557,4,In the last paragraph they trying to express what is coming. When winter is over spring will come which means the hibiscus will come back and it will be like home. Also the geese will return and because of that she will take the quiz again. To her it’s like starting all over and hopefully she will pass. Also she loves the hibiscus and seamce thats back maybe she will do so much beter. Overall a new time is coming.  ,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
1692,1,"Dear The @CAPS1, People have been saying that computers are not beneficial, but they are wrong. In my opinion computers are very beneficial. Computers teach hand-eye coordination, give people the ability to learn about other people and faraway places, also, you can use the internet to interact with friends and family. Computers can be very useful and efficient to anybody. Did you know that computers can teach hand-eye coordinaiton? Some computers have programs that teach you how to type. Without having to lock down at the keyboard. Even if people don't have the program they can learn how to type fact without having to look down. Many people that I know, have learned how to use the computer or type without anyone telling them hour to do so. Computers are very needed all around the world. Computers give people the ability to learn about other people and places. If you go on the internet you can go and searching person or place and the computer will find it for you. Children and adults need computers because if for example, a child get a project from schoool that need to be done about a famous person or smoking. she would most likely need to go to the internet . The game goes for adults that love jobs in offices, schools or anywhere else. Computers are essential to people all around the world. Computer can be used to comunicate with each other. People use computer to communicate with friends or family in far away places. They can communicate via e-mail, @CAPS2, video and maybe even in other web sites. Some web sites contain the ability to talk to each other through video or through messages, such as @CAPS3, or @CAPS4. People like using the computer because it is very useful when you need it most. If you ask anyone they will tell you that having a computer is very important and necessary. Why would people intend to take away something as important and useful as a computer? Computers can be used to learn hand-eye coordination, and help you move your fingers faster. They give poeple and places in the world. Finally, they can be used to communicate with one another through e-mail, message and many other ways. In my opinion, computers are one of the most important things to a person.",5.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
9432,4,"The author concludes this story the way she does to say that the girl not going to give up on trying to fit in this new country. The author concludes this way because it refers that its not over, and even though the test was a failure, it wont be next time. The author leads is know that the little girl cares about the test, and wants to prove to show people that she can pass it. She is reminded of her home by these flowers, and she has with this she can retake it and do it rite.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
11997,5,"In the memoir, Home: Blueprints of our Lives, by Narciso Rodriguez, @CAPS3 sets a mood of warm, loving, and fun. @CAPS2-out of the whole memoir, Narciso talks about how his family moved into a home in Newark, New Jersey, and... ""within it's walls, my young parents created our traditional cuban home, the very heart of which was the kitchen,"" @CAPS1 you picture that in your mind you create a very warm, tasty, good-smelling room, which helps create a mood for the whole memoir. Another way Narciso creates mood is when @CAPS3 talks about the cuban music flowing @CAPS2 the house, ""Passionate Cuban music...filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen."" With this @CAPS3 shows that it was fun, warm, inviting, and exciting. @CAPS3 says, ""Here, the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family, and friends, and endless celebrations that encommpassed, both, formed a backdrop, to life in our warm home."" @CAPS3 also creates a mood of fun, warm, entertaining, and loving feeling, by describing parties, celebrations, with friends and family, In This memoir, the author sets a mood of warm, loving, fun, and entertaining.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
16219,6,"Due to Several factors the Empire State Building faced many obstacles trying to allow dirigibles to dock there. One serious obstacle was that the dirigible moored at the top of the build held only by a tether would stress the buildings frame. In paragraph nine it says ""the Empire State Building would have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate this new situation. Over sixty thousand dollars worth of modifications had to be made to the framework.""Another complication was nature itself. Above the city were strong winds which were constantly shifting due to air currents. This made it impossible to dock. As well as nature working against the mooring mast so was the law. In paragraph fifteen it says ""on existing law against airships flying too low over low urban areas."" Which made it illegal for an airship to ever tie up the the Empire State Building.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
7165,3,"A cyclist is affected by many things when riding, most being features of the setting. One feature of the setting that can have an affect is the terrain. If the terrain is rough then the cyclist could have a more difficult time maintaining control of the bike, especially if he is not a professional rider. For example, the author of the essay on page @NUM1 titled: Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Speed Limit, had a hard times on the rougher roads partly due to his level of experience. Another aspect of the environment that can have an affect on a cyclist is the climate. Most people who go cycling ??? know anything about the sport know how to dress for it to keep their body at a comfortable temperature but sometimes the weather plays tricks  on us. The cyclist could get caught in a sudden heat wave to drop in temperature.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
3931,2,"My opinions on the censorship in libraries are that libraries are great places to get information on books such as biographies, fiction, nonfiction, science fiction, and other genre books. I don't believe that books, music, movies, magnizines and other things should not be removed off the shelves because people love music and they want to get information about the artist who made the songs and information about the artist. Also people want to learn the lyrics to the song.     The reason why books shouldn't be removed off the shelves is becuase people enjoy reading books and they want to know what the book is about and have some information about the book. Books are very important to people and need some entertainment other than television. Also people used books to study for the book is going to be read and then going to be tested on. The books that are found offensive should be removed because people get very upset if they find out that the book is talking bad about them. Unless some people are not mature at all and can't read books that are not even talking about them.     Movies shouldn't be removed off of shelves because people love watching movies and they are very entertaining to them. If a movie is very offensive to the people, yes it is probably best to remove the movie because they don't want to watch it anymore. But other movies are not even bad. Yes some movies have foul language but people still enjoy it. But sometimes in movies people hear something from the movie and they spread it around the @LOCATION1. Then everybody starts saying the foul language. People just have to learn how to not use foul language when not needed.     Magazines shouldn't be removed because people love reading magazines especially sports related. I know I love reading sports magazines because I am a very true sports fan and sports are very important to me other than school. There are very inappropiate magazines that children shouldn't be reading and they should be removed off of shelves. Magazines are also used for different things such as comics, housework, as for ladies makeup, perfume, etc. People think that magazines are very important to the society",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
4475,2,I dont think people should remove the books and movies and music cause its the peoples choice to read and listen and watch the things that that get.      Why should people change cause other people can't handle what the stuff has on it. If the people want to read or watch or listen to bad stuff they can its not other peoples choice.     The people will choose what they want or what they think they want to read or watch or listen too. People will find out by themselves what they want to hear or listen too.     Like I said its the people who choose what they want to watch or listen or read and it is nobodies elses choice to say so. The people will find out what they want there kids to read and listen and watch and so will they.     This is what i think of this essay it will be up to the people to choose what they want the listen and hear too.,2.0,2.0,1.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
10199,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because she is thinking what it will be like when all of this happens. Saeng said; “when they come back, she vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take the test again.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,1.0
16321,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in the attempted to allow dirigibles to dock there, ""The architect could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof"". A thousand-foot diriglble tethed by a single caple would add to much stress to the building's frame. ""The stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation. If not the Empire State Building might fall over. For the Empire State Building to take the extra load the architect would have to modify and strengthen the building's existing framework. Also the ornate mast would be difficult to raise on top of the Empire State build due to the high winds. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents"". If the dirigible was tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the dirigible would swivel around and around the mooring mast. If this happened the dirigible would crash into the Empire State Building or other building. This would be bad for the people on the street. Where dirigible's usually land are in open fields. The dirigible could be weighted down in the back with a lead weight. But on top of the Empire State Building dangling weights above pedestrians was neither practical nor safe. Also laws were passed restricting a dirigible from getting to close to a building.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
15242,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building attempted to create a mast where dirigibles could dock. At first I thought it was a great idea, then realized there were obstacles. First obstacle discovered was ""most dirigibles from outside the United States used hydrogen rather than helium"" (Lüsted). This was an issue because hydrogen is very flammable and if it were to catch on fire in New York, thousands of people would be hurt/killed. The greatest obstacle was the wind. The amount of wind changed constantly and even if the dirigible was attached properly, the back would continue to move around, which would lead to danger on the streets. The dirigible would be dangling over the pedastrians (Lüsted). One other reason was a legal reason. It was illegal to fly a dirigible too low over urban areas, therefore the dirigible was not allowed to get low enough to land on the building Two tried and neither of them were successful. The constructors of the mooring mast were oblivious to these issues at the beginning, than realized them after. The Empire State Building could not be used to land dirigible due to the fact that non-U.S dirigibles used Hydrogen, the current of the wind changes frequently, and it was illegal to fly the dirigible low enough to attach.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
6622,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist because it was June and the cyclist had little water. The cyclist was dehydrated and couldn’t find any building or water for many miles. The cyclist took advice from oldtimers which didn’t know what they were talking about. In conclusion, the weather and the location affected the cyclist.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
11903,5,"I think the mood is happy. because Spanish cuban and Italian in the same neigh borhood with out fighting, and it seems like they like than life in United States.",1.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,1.0
12987,5,"In the memoir Narciso Rodriguez, from Home: The Blueprints of our lives, the mood that is created by the author is love and sacrifice. In the memoir, the author shows love by not only showing the love between the child and the parents but by also showing the love throughout the community. The author shows sacrifice by showing what the parents had to give up in order for their child to have a better life. In the memoir, it talks a lot about the neighborhood, ""all of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship. It was a close-knit community of honest, hardworking immigrants who extended a hand to people."" This shows the closeness of the people in the neighborhood had and this represents the love as well. Sacrifice is shown by Narciso's parents. ""They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends, and careers in the country they loved."" This  shows what his parent left behind for him, representing sacrafice. At the end the author also mentions ""I will never forget that house or it's gracious neighborhood or the many things I learned there about how to love."" This ties up the mood throughout the memoir. Love and sacrifice is the mood throughout the memoir that the author created.",4.0,,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
1447,1,"Dear @CAPS1 of the @CAPS2 @CAPS3 @CAPS4, computers are a wonderful tool and they bear many positive impacts on society first, computers have created numerous @CAPS2 forms of communication. Also, they have enable us to create a @CAPS2 age in research. In addition, computers have given us amazing @CAPS2 ways to entertain ourselves computers have a incredibly positive effetct on people. One reason why computers have such a positive effect on humans, is that we have developed many @CAPS2 ways to communicate with people all over the world. First, one fantastic program such as @CAPS5 (instant messaging) has given us the amazing ability to hold a conversation with one or more people any where in the world, and be able to respond within an instant. In a recent survey @PERCENT1 of people said that they prefer instant messaging over any other type of communication beside face to face talking, second, most computers come with webcams built in now, so you can actually see the person you are communicating with. I had friend move recently, and we are able to see what each other are doing and remain friends even though we don't live in the same town, and I'm sure a similar experience has occured to you or someone you know. Finally, the popular program of facebook has changed communication forever. People can now see things go on in your info whereever want. Although some it has a wonderful computers have established incredible ways of communication. A second reason computers positively import people is that they have created a numerous research. One example would be our phenomenon search engine, google. Google to almost everything with help people in finding schools now use computer resources such us @CAPS6 which allow in research to the fact that there is so much availbale on the. In addition, computers have created many opportunities for people to learn more because of the billions of web you in existance studies have shown that @PERCENT2 of people have found a website conataining information relevant to their research that was than a book. Computer are the reason that research has contuined to thrive and @CAPS2 continue to be made. Finally, computers have established amazing @CAPS2 entertainment for people of all ages. First, video websited such as youtube have created a place for people to watch music videos and creative films just to enjoy themselves. If you can't get tickets to a concert you want going online to watch music videos by that person is a much cleaper alternative, second, jaming websites are a less expensive, but if you go online you can play similar games at no charge. Finally websites with appropriate funny stories posted on them are a fantastic way to get the laughter of a comic, without leaving your couch wouldn't you prefer to stay home, rather than going out when it isn't necessary? computers are an incredible way to achieve quick, un expensive entertaiment in todays economy. In conclusion, computers impact proper in many positive ways. they're established now forms of communication, research and entertainment that will forever change society. Therefore, I invite you to join me to demonstrate the icrredible strenght of computers.",6.0,6.0,6.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,28.0
6963,3,"Heat, abandoned roads, snakes all are reasons that affected the cyclist. The heat made him get dehydrated faster while he was using energy. The long abandoned roads further increased his doubt of living the whole bike ride. He used up allof his water. So when he got to the old pump hot dirty water came out. The snake in the story made the journey for this guy perilous and deadly. This all happened because he listened to the old guys. When the other old guy was about to tell him whereto go he said no.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
15615,6,"Competitive architect Al Smith wanted the Empire State Building to be the tallest most unique building. ""Their top, they said, would serve a higher calling"" (@NUM1). The Building was supporting the age of transportation by dirigible. Al Smith commented ""It's on the level, all right. No kidding. We're working on the thing now"" (@NUM2). In reality the architects were blind to the potential problems of the mast. There were many obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One great reason was safety. If any dirigibles from outside the United States used to the mast it could be highly flammable due to using hydrogen rather helium. Another reason was nature itself. Shifting winds due to violent air currents made it dangerous as the back of the ship would twist around the mooring mast. Most importantly an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. That law would then make it illegal for a ship to ever tied to a building. By the late 1930s dirigibles, instead of becoming the transportation of the future, had given way to airplanes.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
1139,1,"Dear Newspaper @CAPS1, The average american uses the computer at least once, everyday @CAPS2 machines definetley beneffit society, with then people can easily learn about faraway places, learn whithout having to carry heavy books and papers and chat with people all over the country and sometimes even the world. First of all computers can teach you all about the world without you having to go to a library appart for a book free sites like wikapedia provide fast knowledge and most anything, you can use @CAPS2 sites for essay, trip planning and just to satisfy your curiousity some people believe that computers @CAPS13 people from excersizing and enjoying nature however computers promote exercise and going out to look at nature computers provide quick and easy access to travel agencies, as well as information on popular tourist areas, in any reason, They also bring advertising sites for gyms and ideas on excersizing at home, Computers don't hinder workouts and nature walks, they make @CAPS6 easier to do them. But computers make other things easier as well, @CAPS3 can be much easier with the use of computers, @CAPS4 of dragging around heavy books, @CAPS5 can carry a small laptop; @CAPS5 also can @CAPS13 worrying about keeping track of papers. Everything can be saved to a laptop. Computers organized files so even a messy student can keep organized, another advantage is that anything typed on a computer is neat and easy to understand @CAPS9 some handwriting, @ORGANIZATION2 in @ORGANIZATION1 is an example of how schools can be simplified with laptops. Each @CAPS5 is given one to use @CAPS4 of books, ""@CAPS6 is so much easier"" said one student. @CAPS3 is very difficult for some kinds. Computers can make @CAPS6 simplier. My last argument is that people can talk to anyone using chat sites. if someone has a cousin distance country they can still keep in touch @CAPS6's the sam for a friends who moved. @CAPS10-mail is a lot faster than @CAPS7 @CAPS8 mail carriers taking a @CAPS10-mail from one person to another is almost instantanious @CAPS6 is also more private, @CAPS9 mail that is just sealed with give, @CAPS10-mails are pass word protected, there are also other sites that are for socializing, @CAPS11 messages also for People talk with one another, This can help people learn about culture in other cities, @CAPS12 and sometimes even Different countries, @CAPS2 sites can help close the gap between cultures, They can help get video racism they can help make the world more ideal. Computers make our comunity better, They let us learn about faraway places, make @CAPS6 easier to enjoy @CAPS3, and enable us to talk to other people from almost anywhere, so, @CAPS13 anything about, You'll realize computers @CAPS14 are benificial to our society.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
3053,2,"Have you ever noticed how much bad materials are out there for childeren to get ahold of?  A movie, book, magazine, music, or even something on @CAPS1?  It would be nice to get rid of all that bad material, but what if someone else doesn't feel the same way about that song, movie, or @CAPS1 show?  I think it would be horrible if we took away all the bad materials because it might bring violence between some people who disagree on it, and it goes against one of our rights, freedom of speech.     In the world we live in today, if you take something away from someone like their favorite book, its going to bring out some violence between some people.  Look back into our history, we are a country full of rebels.  That is how @CAPS3 even came to be.  So take away something from people they are going to stand up and fight for it.  There will always be people trying to smuggle and hide some things, so we will never be able to get rid of it completly.       If you take away all the bad materials it would be taking away one of our rights, freedom of speech.  Some materials out there @MONTH1 be offensive to others, but it's not like we have a right to get rid it.  It's not like there is any book, magazine, or even a song out there that someone doesn't get offended by.  If we do take away all the offensive materials we should take away everything. So what is the point we all will never all agree on something, we can't please everyone.  In taking away all the offensive materials you are taking away people's right to freedom of speech.     Don't try to take away all the offensive materials, it will just bring violence and make it all much worse than it was.  If you're a parent it's not like you can shield your children from everything because eventually they will learn what it all is.  So it won't do any good to try to get rid of it.  It will still be around.  It is just something in our world that we have to live with",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
6287,3,"In the story “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit,” the setting often affects the character. One example of this is when the character got to a place where there was nothing. “One ramshackle shed, several rusty pumps, and a corral that couldn’t hold in the lamest mule greeted me”. This quote explains that the character (cyclist) was confused. Another example of this harsh setting is when the water in his bottle feels @NUM1 degrees. “I was traveling through the high deserts of California in June.” That quote suggests that it is hot outside, which would make the water hot. Another example of the setting is when the terrain changed. ""@CAPS1 road was replaced by short, rolling hills."" This made the biker have to work harder, and use more energy. These conditions all made the cyclist have to work harder to find his destination.",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
3328,2,"In my opinion I think that censorship shouldn't be allowed in libraries.I think that people are smart enough to make their  decisions on what they want to read. Their are a few reasons why I think censorship shouldn't be allowed in libraries or out in public. The first reason why i think censorship shouldn't be allowed in libraries is becuase it's showing disobedience. The second reason I think censorship shouldn't be allowed in libraries is because many people will overuse their authority, and it'll make many people have a bad review for that library. The last reason why I think censorship should not be allowed in libraries is that it'll change the whole enviroment of a library.     Censorship should not be allowed in libraries because it shows a form of disobedience. I think that many people will use profanity and will have an I don't care attitude. If people use profanity at home im a strong beleaver on leaving it at home and not bringing it out in public. Censorship should never be allowed in libraries or anywhere else in my opinion.     Censorship should not be allowed in libraries because many people will overuse their authority and most people wouldn't want to come back to the library. Some people overuse their authority by being loud in the libraries preventing others from reading or during something to occpy themselves. If a library is loud and obnoxious it'll drive people away from the library. I think that a library should be a nice quiet welcoming. That'll make the library much flow by easier.     At the of the day i think that censorship should never be allowed in libraries or anywhere else public. A library is a place to go read, study, complete homework assignments etc. And finally i think that people should be able to make decisions on their own rather they want to read a book with censorship or anything to do with censorship as long as they can controll it",2.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
1626,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 have come very far with technology. Computers and other gadgets have helped us go farther. But the computer is one gadget that does not benefit society. My reasons for this are when you are on a computer you could be cyber bullied. My next reason is that when you stay on too long you miss out on stuff like being with family. The last reason why computers do not benefit society is when you type on a computer the spell check on @CAPS3 checks spelling and puncuation and grammar so you don't learn from your mistakes. These reasons support me in saying computers haven't really benefited society. Firstly, my first reason for saying that computers have not benefited society is you can get cyberbullied. For instance somebody goes home and checks their email. They get threatening emails. They are scared what do they do. Cyber bulling, being induced by computers, is the easiest way to bully somebody. You can make them feel bad without doing anything besides typing a message. All you really have to do is find out somebodys email. Also cyber bulling could be anybody. Some one you knkow or someone you don't. computers haven't helped in society by inducing more crimes. Next my reason is if you stay on too long you miss out on life. Between checking email accounts and updating @CAPS4 the average person spends @PERCENT1 of their day on the computer. People who spend that much time on the computer miss things. My sister always come, out asking questions in the middle of the conversation because she's following and updating on @CAPS4 while @CAPS2 are having a conversation. People miss things while on the computer. Lastly, when you are typeing an essay or something you don't learn anything about grammar or spelling because spellcheck checks it for you. Most teenagers in @LOCATION1 when texting don't use proper grammar or spelling. So they can write an essay in text language and when typing it over students choose what they mean from spellcheck and move on. This is unacceptable because students must learn proper grammar and spelling. This is reducing students thinking levels just above read and click the awnser. If computers did everything for us @CAPS2 would be mindless slugs quick. In conclusion I think computers have not benefited society. Computers inducieng cyberbulling. When you type spellcheck corrects your mistakes so you don't learn and people miss stuff when on the computer. Computers have not helped society for all of these reasons and more. Computers should be used less.",4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
15683,6,"In the article 'The Mooring Mast' by @ORGANIZATION2, @CAPS1 describes of several problems the builders of the Empire State Building faced in trying to allow dirigibles dock there.For example, most blimps (dirigibles) out side of the United states used hydrogen, rather than helium. Since hydrogen is highly flammable, and since downtown New York is so populated, if anything were to go wrong it could impact the people of New York, resulting in injuries as well as deaths.Another reason is an existing law against flying airships too low over urban areas. This law making it illegal for ship to even approach the area. Overall, the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles that could have been noticed before building.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
12463,5,"This memoir, ""Narciso Rodriguez,"" from ""Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives,"" is very enjoyable. The mood made it really easy to understand and read.The mood of this story is not funky or funny. The mood is like haveing a regular conversation with a person. I like when the author adds little perenthesis, it gives it a personal touch and adds more of a conversation touch to the mood. For example in paragraph @NUM1, ""Passionate Cuban music (which I adore to this day)."" Its more of a fun fact or personal note.In the memoir, ""Narciso Rodriguez,"" has a very formal mood, with a personal twist. The formal mood makes the memoir easy to understand, while the personal twist makes the story enjoyable to read. This is how to use mood correctly.",2.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
3399,2,"Libraries should not remove a book from the shelves just because someone didn't like it or finds it offensive. If there is a group of people that are interested in a book and want to read it more then once they will like telling a new person about it. Then if another student has decided they don't like the book and they don't want anyone else reading it becuase they find it offensive then I honestly believe it shouldn't be taking off the shelves.      I think it would be different if everyone found the book offensive, but if it's just one or two people complaining then I don't think they should take it down and ruin it for everybody else. It's just a book and students should know just because it's there doesn't mean its directed towards them. I think they should overlook it.     If your playing some music, dacing around, and just having fun with it then thats good. Now, if there is cussing and talking about drugs and those sort of things in a song then don't play it in a school system or around someone that @MONTH1 be religious or against that kind of thing because they @MONTH1 not like it and think that your into that sort of things. They might not want to be around you as much. Show them respect and play something everyone can have fun with. So if the libary has this type of music it should be monitored as to who checks it out.     Movies are something you have to look out for too. Movies already have ratings so this kind of helps for people to check them out and make sure the movie would be safe to watch. If your getting movies from the libary then I would think it would already been watched by an adult there to make sure it can be watched by a student or a child. I wouldnt want my little sibblings watching something that they didn't need to see or hear.     You have to watch out for magazines too. You want a magazine that is going to be interesting and clean. Kids @MONTH1 not know what is bad from good, but you still have teenagers. You don't want kids seeing nudity, cussing, or drugs in any magazine. If I were to walk in a library and see those kind of things in a magazine I would suggest you to take it off the shelves. I would only suggest that so the kids will have a healthy thought about things. I wouldn't want them thinking about doing anything bad like they saw in the magazine. I'm just looking out for their safety.     Libraries @MONTH1 always need advice. They need to always have an eye out for things and make sure everything is clean and so that everyone can look at it, read it, or watch it. I'm glad we have these safety ideas for kids. I hope everyone has an eye out for these kind of things. I know I if I were to ever have children I would want them around something they understand and know, nothing bad and harmful. So thanks to libraries that have an eye out for things like this",5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,22.0
6318,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist greatly in the story. The list desert climate tales damage onto the cyclist by quickly depleting his water supply. He also began to get worried when every town the old men told about turned out to be a ghost town. This crawled doubt in the cyclist mind that he might not survive the “shortcut” told off by the old men.  ,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,3.0
9864,4,The auther concluded the story with this paragraph because this shows that Saeng is willing to change and she wants to do so by the time spring comes. By change Saeng wants to feel comfertable in @LOCATION1 and be able to remember things from where she used to live and not have to break down and cry. Also the author use the geese because they need to leave home earely year and they deal with it so Saeng can deal with it as well.,2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
15917,6,"The architects and builders faced large problems in the construction of the docking platform, even though they had not notice them at first. The builders did not notice any large problem untill after the dirigible Hindenburg crashed in Lakehurst. The building's owners became greatly concerned for the safety of the people inside and below the building if a blimp fell into the same situation as the Hindenburg.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
15916,6,"By reading the passage ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted it is easy to see the many complications with landing a dirigible on top of a 1,250 ft. building. For one there is the natural effect of wind. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" @CAPS1 winds would make it difficult to land any floating aircraft anywhere if the back wasn't able to be weighted down. Another obstacle the builders faced was that the frame had to be strong enough to hold a @NUM1 ft. long dirigible. ""The stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation."" The worker's then had to spend over @MONEY1 to remodel the framework of the Empire State Building. Another issue is that anchoring the blimps would be illegal. According to ""an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" All these safety troubles and violations would all together make the ""mooring"" an impossible feat.",3.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
15726,6,"Upon taking up the task of building a mast for dirigibles to dock at, the architects encountered many obstacles which made the idea of a mooring mast unplausable. One obstacle they ran into was the violent nature of the wind currents above the city. If the dirigibles were to dock at the building with a tether, then the back would be free to swing and sway. Another factor they had to consider is that dirigibles are full of the flamable gas hydrogen which imposed the risk of a serious fire hazzard about New York City. Even if the engineers and architects managed to work out all of the kinks of building the mast, they still would face another obstacle. It was illegal to fly dirigibles to low over urban areas. These are the reasons why the idea of a dock for dirigibles could never work out.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9791,4,"The author concludes the story this way to show how the main character, Saeng has changed from the beginning of the story to the end. It show a small amount of newfound confidence Saeng now has. This ending also shows how much of an effect the “Winter hibiscus” had on her. with bringing back memories of her old country. If Saeng wouldn’t have found the hibiscus, she would have never started to reminisce about her old home. This reminiscing not only reminded her of her past, but it also helped her compare her new home to her old home. Through this she realized that life in @LOCATION1 is not so bad, and that she still has a little bit of her old home with her everyday. This realization gave her just enough hope and confidence to want to try the driving test again This ending shows the change of heart Saeng feels for @LOCATION1 and her small gain of hope and confidence.  ",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
12218,5,The mood created by the author is welcoming and warm. The author makes it so that you want to be @CAPS1 and being able to smell the good food. Also just being able to appreciate the cuban culture.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
4677,2,"Censorship in libraries could have negative effects on the library. Parents have different views on books, music, ect. One parent @MONTH1 not have a problem with one book that has a few curse words in it but another parent might think it is not something they want their children to pick up and read then later on start using that kind of language. But if the libraries censor that book and is taken out of the library it would make a big impact on people because, what if somebody really likes that book but since someone complained about it, it is now not allowed in the library. The library would lose people because of books being censored.     Everybody might not agree on different subject and they would want a certain book, music, movie or magazine censored. But if one person complained and the book is no longer there does that mean the libraries are going to be empty for now on. A person who @MONTH1 not have children might say, '@CAPS1 one little joke can hurt.' A joke not suitable for a child under @NUM1 to read, hear, or watch. But a parent might get upset that their child is hearing, reading, or even seeing these things and might band it from the library.     When a student @MONTH1 need to go to the library to go look up their topic they must research for school and can not find any or even good books on that topic because someone who thought the book was offensive has been removed from the library. The student might get frustrated and would not know what to do and would have to get most to all of their research off the @CAPS2. What if their teacher/proffesor said that they needed more then one source and all their information can not just be off the computer they need a book, magazine, or newspaper source also. But since that topic they are researching about has upset someone they are not able to find the imformation they are looking for.      Yes, there are some books, music, movies, magazines, and sometimes newspapers that are not for children under @NUM1 or even pre-teens to teens. That is why the libraries are divided into sections for the age groups. Still how do these section keep our children from reading something unaporite. Parents should know when they come into a library they should look for signs on the walls, if a library does not have signs that tell them what kind of section they are coming into all they have to do is grab a few books of the shelfs and read the inside cover or outside to suggest what kind of books are in the rest of that section. It should not be hard to find these sections because usually the children section has toys and puzzles in them and children theme walls.      Censorship would not only get rid of the books, music, movies, magazines, etc., but it would also make our libraries empty. A lot of people have different point of views, his view might be diffrent from her view. From teens to young adults, teachers to children, parents to non-parents. Everyone is different no one person can speak for the whole world. This is why censorship would not work in our libraries.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
9833,4,"I believe that the author concludes the story with this paragraph to show how as the plant will grow, so will Saeng . After failing the drivers test, saeng goes to the greenhouse and finds the Hibiscus plant which reminds her of her true home back in Vietnam when they had similar plants. The plant then makes her think about all the memories and she is comforted by them even though she is said. She uses this plant as a tool for comfort  to  help  her think about when she is from and all the good memories to help raise her spirits higher. So to boost her confidence  she decides to plant it. “The “winter hibiscus” was in the ground now, and Saeng tamped down the soil around. “Then she sees geese flying in the sky which  is kind of a symbol do that day, something to rembember  it by, so the next year.” When the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding.” She will take the test again. These things bring back good memories which help to make her stronger.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
7335,3,"One of the biggest problems that the author faced in his essay was his surroundings. The setting of the story in Yosemite provided many obstacles such as the vastness of the park, the summer heat, and the fact that many places had been abandoned. The summer heat was the biggest problem for the cyclist. He had to bike many miles, but he only had limited supply of water. Eventually, his water supply began to run low, which increased his determination to find the next town before he collapsed. It is this determination which moves him from ghost town to ghost town and keeps the story moving. Another big problem was the vastness of Yosemite National Park, which he was biking through. Any wrong turns (which he took, thanks to the direction he was given) could get him lost and thrown off track for a very long time. It was his confusion as to where the next time was that kept him biking, with difficulty and made for an interesting story. An example of the vastness of the park was when he quote, “About forty miles into the pedal, I arrived at the first ‘town.’ This place might have been a thriving spot at one time-say, before the last world war-but on that morning it fit the traditional definition of a ghost town.” This quote shows that even after many miles, he hadn’t seen a sign of anyone living, which would have increased his desperation to keep looking for civilization.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
599,1,"There has been a debate weather computers benefit society or hurt society. I personnaly agree with th statement that computers benefit in society. I think that computers do improve your hand-eye coordination. When you can type fast and accuratly you know your hand eye coordination is doing well. I remeber as a kid I would watch my grandmother type about seventy-five words per minute. Just from her year of practice, she becamr very computer coordinated. My hand-eye coordination is becoming a lot better because I have types for a long time. Scientists say that @PERCENT2 or people that type for at least four years become better hand-eye coordinated typing fast keeps your fingers quick and agile. I once read a book on computers and an expert said ""the invention of the computer keyboard could possibly be the greates hand-eye coordination practice ever."" @CAPS1 plus about computers is that they allow you to learn about far away places wtihout really going there. In school you can do projects on other countries without traveling just by using a computer. I once had to do a class project on @LOCATION1 and got a @PERCENT1 just by using a computer, people can look up information on countries for pleasure too. Mu mom just wanted to learn about @LOCATION2 so she just looked it up on the internet from her computer. You can research schoold too. My older sister went online to bok at collges without acctually traveling to the actual college states. Finally one more thing you can do on a computer is talk to people online. There is such a thing as @CAPS2-mail which allows you to write people over the internet on the computer. I remember when my baseball coach was going to tell me I made the team he just @CAPS2-mailed my parents because it was the most simple way to get it done. There is also such a thing as @CAPS4 (instant messaging) that allows you to imediatly talk to somebody and for them to immidiatly talk to you back. I remeber I used to go on @CAPS4 everyday to talk to friends. Also you can video chat which allows you to directly see somebody and actually talk to them physically. I read a news article on video chatting and an expert said ""video chatting is the single best way to communicate with someone without being right inforn of them talking with them. These reasons are why I think computers are a big help in our society.",5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,22.0
3707,2,"Dear @CAPS1,     @CAPS2 are many books, music, and magazines that are saturated with offensive words or obscene themes.  However, just because a book or song contains an foul word does not mean that the book needs to be sheltered from the public's eyes.  @CAPS2 are many reasons we should not censor public media.  We cannot ignore wrongdoings happening in our world; plus, in @LOCATION1, we have the freedom of speech; and, finally, if media was censored, people @MONTH1 start to think every little word has an offensive connotation.     If a bystander observes a person being abused in a hallway or alley, the bystander just cannot pretend like the incident never happened.  If the world never reported accidents, @CAPS2 would be too much crime and terror.  Sometimes, a book or movie is like a cry for help or a way to raise awareness about some wrongdoing in the world today.  Most of the time, I only hear about an event through movies or books, and I want to know the honest story, not a fairytale version of it.  After all, if the language in some slavery books was not as vivid as it is, some people @MONTH1 not oppose slavery as strongly as they do.    Here in @LOCATION1, we have the freedom of speech.  We are allowed to give our opinions on any topic, and describe it in any way.  We should be permitted to say anything we want, even though in our hearts, we should know what is right and wrong.  People should at least be trusted enough to use their own conscience.     Also, another reason why books and other media should not be censored is because people @MONTH1 judge almost every little word offensive then.  Then we @MONTH1 have 'no books left on the shelf' according to Katherine Paterson.  Once people are allowed to censure books or other media, they would look for words with negative connotations.  If a word was close to being offensive in one person's perspective, it would be left out.  Then, many words would be gone.     Sure some types of media, especially songs and movies, just spill out nasty themes and foul language.  However, I have the choice to watch a movie or listen to a song.  I can always change the radio station if I do not like what I am hearing.  People however, just cannot remove the words of another right from their mouth, no matter how bad it is.  We just cannot pretend that we all live in a perfect world where everyone is polite and caring.  If we hear about something wrong in our world today, we need to act.  However, we might not act if we do not know the full extent of its terror.                                                            Sincerely,                                                              @PERSON2",5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,23.0
6858,3,"During the authors ride to Yosemite, he doesn’t have the proper tools to go along the long stretch of desert he was to face, and by tools I mean water. The California desert is extremely hot and can be potentially dangerous depending on your situation the author was describing how the lack of water was affecting him. He described this with sentences like “Rattled around the dry honey combs of my deteriorating brain.” The author clearly cannot face the rugged heat with his immense lack of water. The author was getting neat stroke being passed by @LOCATION2  desert snakes and tumbleweeds. The author was clearly in a struggle against the @LOCATION2 desert heat.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
12837,5,"The mood in the memoir swifts throughout the story.  First is that in the begin Narciso wasn't sure he would like moving to @LOCATION1 because it was so different.  But that changed when they started having family over and also using there imagination to decorte there house.  Next is that the mood change in the middle of the memoir when they rellized you can have just a good life in @LOCATION1 then you can anywhere else.  Also, by them having there family with them while in @LOCATION1 made there moods more positive.  Lastly the family's mood was negitive when having to move to @LOCATION1, but once they were there and made there house into a home there mood change immeditly and they were happy in @LOCATION2.  Thats the mood created by the author in the memoir.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
1313,1,"Dear local Newspaper, @CAPS1 waste your time learning at home when thats what schools for? People are concerned that too many people are spending too much time on their computers. They spend less time outdoors, excersising, and enjoying nature! People need more time to interact with their family. People are concerned. They are concerned there is way too much computer time. One time my mom had just bought a new computer and I stayed up all night on the internet. When I woke up the morning I was so tired and I didnt want to go to school. I think you should consider less computer time. The more time people use their computers the less time they are enjoying the outdoors. Insted of talking to you on myspace that they right down the street at the park with them. @NUM1 out of @NUM2 people in @CAPS2 that use alot of computer time. Interacting is a nice enjoy nature and have fun. Family activities is a nice, fun and enjoyable way to spend your time. You can go to park when its nice outdoor weather, go swimming, play sports, in the wintertime you can possibly go to the movies, go to the mall, have fun with the family dont waste your time on the internet. In conclusion, there is too much computer time and you as the newspaper editor I advise you to make computers more expensive so people can spend their money on something more usefull because there is too much computer time. My mom says that ""more people use there computers, more that they put their feet in their shoes and walk outside!"" @CAPS3 people in @LOCATION1, @CAPS2 think the same. Please consider my opinions the right way. Thank you",3.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
6607,3,In the essay “Rough Road Ahead” the author goes through many seneries. All of the places that the author goes to make him even more determined because he wants to find water and he just wants to get to Yosemite. The determination pushes him to keep going further and further. And then the determination finally pays off after he goes around a turn because he then see’s a place where he can get something to drink and a place to cool down.,2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
520,1,"Dear newspaper, I think computers are good for you because talk online, teach hand eye coordination, and other stuff too. One reason @CAPS9 he helps you with your hand eye coordination for example teach you how you look while typing. @CAPS3 we don’t learn hand eye coordination we won't know how to do other stuff that @CAPS9 hand eye coordination. The second reason @CAPS9 @CAPS1 you have a webcam you can use @CAPS1 for example when a family member @CAPS9 living in a different state you can see their face and talk to them like you do in person. The last reason @CAPS9 searching the web because @CAPS3 you want to get @CAPS4 ticits for a trip look online. @CAPS1's the best way to get them. researcher say @NUM1 out of @NUM2 people say getting online @CAPS9 the best way because you can see when the @CAPS4 take off, when the next @CAPS4 also when to come back home. All in all I say that compuetrs are a good thing because they help with you hand eye coordination also. @CAPS3 you have a web cam you can see family members from different states and see the face and talk to them like you are talking In person. The last thing @CAPS9 searching the web for @CAPS4 tickets @CAPS3 you want to go somewhere far a way go online and see when the @CAPS4 and comes back because researchers says that @NUM1 out of @NUM2 People say that getting online for @CAPS4 ticket @CAPS9 the best way to get them. Ask your self woild you like to have the web to seach or not?",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
6561,3,"In the essay “Rough Road Ahead” by Joe Kurmaskie he accepts directions from old men for a shortcut to Yosemite National Park. He ends up cycling in a desert with no water just barley able to push the pedals of his bike. The setting affects the cyclist by it being so hot, him not having anything to drink, nowhere to get water or food and him maybe seeing mirages. In the essay it states, “Wide rings of dried sweat circled my shirt, and the growing realization that I could drop from a heatstroke.” This shows that the lack of water and the surrounding enviroment with nowhere to go is making him give up hope to survive. It also says in the essay, “I wiped the sweat from my eyes to make sure it wasen’t a mirage, and tried not to get too excited. “The cyclist is coming out himself and stating that the dessert has him thinking hes seeing something and letting him down by it not being real. The desert setting of this essay effects the cyclist in many ways other then one.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
3506,2,"I personally think that certain materials that are found offensive should not be removed from shelves. I think this because it's parent's responsibilities to keep track of what their children read, watch, or listen to. You can't get away from things that are offensive to some and everybody has a right to do what they want.     The first reason why I don't think offensive material should be removed from shelves is because it is the parents duty to watch what their kids are doing. If parents don't want their children to observe this stuff, then they should keep it off limits. I have heard some parents claim that they didn't know what the material was like, but that is why they made warnings. That is no excuse.      The second reason for not removing offensive material is that there is no way to get away from it. Now a days, material that is offensive to some is all around. Shows, movies,and music, they all have something not suitable for all audiences. Plus children will learn about this offensive material sometime in their life anyway. If they do not hear about it in movies or magazines, they are probably hearing about it at school. These days children learn about things sooner and sooner.        The third reason offensive material should not be removed from shelves is that everyone has a right to read or listen to whatever they want. It is up to them as to what they want to watch, not everybody else. They should be able to go in a place and buy something that they want to watch and not get questioned about it.     That is why I don't think offensive material should be removed. It is the parent's responsibilities, you can't get away from it, and everybody has a right to do what they want. A way to help with this problem is to move offensive material to a higher shelf. This would make parents of younger children happy, but also the people wanting to view this material happy. This way you are not completely removing it, but making it harder for younger audiences to get to it",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
11958,5,The author was speaking very proudly and happy about her parents. The author explained how her parents were very courageous and brave for leaving their home land. That's because neither of them spoke english. Also because they had to leave their lives back at home and start all over again.,2.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
6484,3,"In the story “Rough Road Ahead” the cyclist was excited and determined to get to Yosemite National Park. The cyclist had to be thinking of the beautiful waters with “His name written over them”. The rough terrain and harsh weather took its affection on the unaware cyclist. The sun, beat down on the cyclist back, he tried to ignore it, but soon the heat made him frequently drink his water away to sips to drink. The cyclist was told by the old man a town was only @NUM1 miles aways. The town was the traditional definition of a ghost town. “That probably gave the cyclist no hope for surviving of finding anyone to help him reach his destination. The conditions of the roads, the lack of water which made him see a mirage, made the cyclist not trust the words of an old man who had led him to the abandon locations he had seen. The cyclist was affected by the settings in a bad way but in the end was given a little help from a traditional map.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
1050,1,"Dear @PERSON2 ""@CAPS1, @CAPS1"" I'm sure you all have heard the sound of a mouse or people typing if you have walk into an office, our local library, a doctor's office, or even our districts schools. The reality is that computers and the world-wide-web is seem and used everywhere. Without a computer, how would @CAPS3 be able to access our emails, interact with family memmber across the ocean and finish that research paper out teacher has assigned us? In my opinion, computers hace a phenomenal affect on people and their lives. The computer helps develope hand-eye coordination, learn about specifil subjects and interact with people on the computer. Therefore, with such positive affects, @CAPS3 should keep using this wonderful technology and get our jobs done. Have you ever walked into your schools lab or walked into a office building and all you could hear was the clicking of mouses or the buttons being pressed down on the keyboard? Well, not only is a job being completed, but you are also exercising I remember last month when my class was assigned a five page essay. After the second page, my hands hurt very badly, @CAPS4, not only was i completing my essay, I was also exercising my hands. Not only does computers allow you to exercise, it also helps develops hand-eye coordination. Have you ever played a game where you had to cath fist, or playes a fast-pasle game of pinball? Well, those games require one key thing i hand-eye coordination. Computers are very helpful in todays world. The computer and the world-wide-web is useful in several other ways too. The internet also allows you to learn about certain subject or events you might not have a book for. My bestfriend, @PERSON1, called me one day from the train. On the phone, she was frantic because she was giving a speech and she did not know what the statistic was for type @CAPS5 diabetes. What do you do when you have no book for a specific subject? @PERSON3 went on her laptop and found all the information she she dit not know. this is just another way the quick acces to a computer benefits people. ""You've got mail"" I'm sure you have all heard this before. Besides communicating through letters or on the telephone, the internet has also given us more ways for fast communication. when you need to confirm a meeting place or ask your classmate what problems were assigned homework, what could be a fast mean of communication? Sending a instant message, or e-mail are two ways of course. Not only does computers allow you to communicate quickly but also privately. Both your e-mail account and you instant message account have passwords so that only you can access them. Every four out of five households have a computer avalable for completing assignments, checking, e-mails and learning about the, that happend in @LOCATION1 last week. The computer has put a positive affect on numerous people and their everyday need. In my opinion, the computer has been one of the best technologies in history. This amazing technology has helped students, teachers, doctors, police officers and even you bank aggents serve our community and make it a better one. Thank-you.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
12323,5,"In the story ""@PERSON1"", the mood created by the author is loving and peaceful. For example, Passionate Cuban music filled the air, mixing the aroma of the kitchen. This shows that the home is peaceful. Another example is, ""My parents always kept their arms and the door open to the many people we consider family. This shows her family is kind and loving. lastly, I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice. They shows she loves her parents very much and always will. In conclusion, that is the mood wich is loving and peaceful created by the author.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
8992,4,the Author concluded the story with this paragraph because @CAPS1 was try intoto let us know what happen after the story was done. and tryed to make it clear and that’s why I think that @CAPS1 came up with that idea to conclude with that paragraph.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
9731,4,"I think that the author ends this story with that paragraph to some up what the story was all about and to also say that Saeng would try the test again. In the story it says “she realised that many of the thing that she had thought of as strange before had become, though the quiet repetition of season opon reason, almost familiar to her now and this last paragraph help bring all this together.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
13409,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir I would have to say a loving mood because through-out the whole memoir Narciso Rodriguez talks about how loving and caring and selflessness his parents were. For example in paragraph @NUM1 it states ""They came selflessly, as many immigrants do to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends, and careers in the country they loved."" Also near the end of paragraph @NUM1 it says ""In Cuba, Narciso, Sr., had worked in a laboratory and Rawedia Maria had studied chemical engineering. In the United States, they had to start their lives over entirely, taking whatever work they could find. The faith that this struggle would lead them and their children to better times drove them to endure these hard times."" @CAPS1 are two reasons of why I believe the mood of the memoir the author created is a loving mood. Also in paragraph @NUM3 it says ""countless extended family members came and went- and their was often someone staying with us temporarily untill they were able to get back on their feet. My parents always kept their arms and doors open to the many people we considered family, knowing that they would do the same for us."" That is the final reason of why I think the mood of the memoir is a loving mood.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
1543,1,"Dear local newspaper @CAPS1 i think some peoples are not to much on the computers. Some peoples might be talk to their family members. To see if they are ok or if they are bad so they can know. How about if someone die in they family and they don't know notthing about that peoples. It might ben their parents, grandma, grandpa, aunts, uncles or it might ben one of their best friends. Some people also might be on their bank acount. To see if they can get out money fror the bank. Might also be sending money by going to the computer and be sending to their family members. They might be paying a bill by the computer. The money they own to that bank or they might be doing some thing eles. I also think people are useing the computer to much. Just like kids they go on the computer to just play games. That's not go for the little kid because if they keep going on the computers. They might not want to get away from the computer. Then parents will have so hard time calling their kids to go eat or to go to sleep. That's going to be a hard work to do. So i think some people should go outside to do exercis and enjoy the nature. I do beleve to people will go outside and do exercis, enjoy the nature, and spenting more time with their family. And thank you local newspapers. Some people are also now things about people are about some eles.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
4060,2,"Should someones work catagorized as 'inappropiate' or 'offensive' be taken off of a shelf and not able to be sold or seen in stores? If you believe so, then do you think it is okay for the campaigners that run for @CAPS1 be able to express their thoughts and opinions on different topics? This is exactly what is being done when someone writes an article or a book that they have published to be distributed into stores or libraries.     When someone writes a book on something, they usually have a lot of interest in whatever topic they are discussing. Just as when @CAPS2 campaigners present themselves to the public and announce what party they will be running for and what their beliefs and disbeliefs are. If it is okay for someone to take a book off of a shelf, or even a magazine because people think the book is 'inappropiate' then maybe we should reconsider what the campaigners say on live @CAPS3.      Even if you were to walk into a store and there be nude magazines on the shelf, or cd's with lyrics that contain cuss words do you feel those should be taken off of shelves as well? There is a time and a place for where things like this should not be displayed. For example, when you go to a little kids store and things like this are being sat out for the kids to see, they will not forget what they saw or heard if referring to music. Kids have a great memory on things that should not be remembered. Like when they read a story and it includes someone robbing a bank, or a song that refers to drinking or doing some form of drug. When kids see or even hear things like this, they are more likely to try things that we would hope little kids would not try.     When someone spends months or even years on writing a story, they hope that they can get it published and be rewarded for their long, hard work. By doing this they try and get it to be published, and put in stores so people can buy it. Whether or not if your talking about music, movies, or books, its all the same. Things should be put out on display and people should be able to see all the different types of music and stories that are available.      If things were going to be taken off of shelves or not put out onto display, people will stop recording music, acting out movies, or even writing ad's and books. When and if this were to happen, people will not become educated with new available data. If there is nobody to write science books, or biography's then nobody will learn about new things. Same with music and movies, if people spend a few months or even a year writing a new album, or coming up with an idea for a movie and they work hard to get it done, they expect to get it out to the public. If its finally out and people have the chance to buy it, they hope it will stay available. If it doesn't and people think the movie is 'inappropiate' then the song writers and actors will more then likely not have the urge to do it all over again.     In conclusion, I think that if someone writes something or records something that has taken them a good amount of work and time that they should be rewarded and allowed to have their item sold. If someone belives that an item is 'inappropiate' then they should keep their comments to themselves, and not have the item taken off display. There are some people out there that enjoy things that are not 'appropiate' and they think its funny. Surely if the write or producer got a book or movie produced they thought it was good, and they believe that people will buy their product. So, if the writer thinks this, surely there is someone out there that feels the same. How are we to know if there is someone out there that agrees, and enjoys the book or movie if it has been taken off of the shelf because someone thought the material was 'inappropiate.'",3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
15459,6,"There were many obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The excerpt ""The Mooring @CAPS1"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted explains some problems architect Al Smith experienced when constructing the world's tallest building in the 1920s. For example, ""The greasest issues was one of safety."" Safety was a major obstacle because most dirigibles outside the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable. If a dirigible was to explode high above this densely populated area many people would be killed or seriously injured. Another obstacle faced in this attempt was ""nature itself."" Nature was one of many major problems to allow a dirigible to dock. For example, ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" The winds would shift the ship and it would be very difficult to land on the mooring mast. The other practical problem builders faced was ""a law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" The entire idea was eventually dropped by the late 1930s. Builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in the creation of ""The Mooring Mast.""",3.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
3936,2,"I think that they shounldn't remove the censorship books in the libraries because so bigger kids can read the books not the little kids because they don't need to here the kind of words in the books.  Also the little  kids has to small of ear to hear and also to small of eyes to even see the words in the book like that.  The bigger kids like in grades @NUM1  should be able to look at the books because it will be word that have heard before.          The books shouldn't be in the lower grade libraries becaues the little kids will ckeack the books out of the libraries, like the books thatis called @CAPS1 A @CAPS2 @CAPS3 because it says the n word a lot of times, a other one is @CAPS4 and @CAPS5 becaues says a lot of dirt words like the f, s, and ect.words that they don't need to hear that young of age.       Another reason why it wounld not be fair to the bigger kids if they take away from the libraries becaues they tring to get the out of the libraries so the littler kids don't get the books to take home read at home.  If you are going to take away the books tale them away from the grades @NUM2 becaues the that the book called @CAPS1 A @CAPS2 @CAPS3, and @CAPS4 And @CAPS5 will be bad for those kids to read.     Some more reasons why bigger kids should read the books and why not the little kids shouldn't read the books.  Why should the bigger kids in grade @NUM1 should read them becaues they are bigger then the littler kids are. The littler kids shouldn't becaues we don't want the littler kids to go home and say the words to there mom, dad, grandme, grandpa, and ect.       Now I have come to the end of my persuasive essay for the newpaper about my reflecting on why or why not we should get reid of the consorship in the libraraies.  Also until the next time I right again about this topic and I hopest you like this persuasive essay for the newpaper.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
1161,1,"To @CAPS1 it @MONTH1 concern, today people of all ages are useing computers. Computers are a great way to do reports, talk to friends & family, & also to research things you @MONTH1 have needed to know. Kids in @ORGANIZATION1 have many projects to do & most of these projects involve writing a paper. Teacher have troble reading other hand writing so it would be helpful for the students to use the computer to print out a very neat paper. The computer has many ways that you can write that paper & now it will be very helpful. The near by libarry will always have extra computers students can use to write a papper. If you walk by a teenager on the internet, now a days you @MONTH1 find them on '@CAPS2'. '@CAPS2' is a website to talk to friends & relatives. Some of these relatives @MONTH1 live very far away or not have a phone to talk on, so you can talk to them here. Some people think '@CAPS2' is 'stupid' & can't be any good, because it takes away time for homework, but what if a @CAPS3 forgot to write down the homework? The @CAPS3 could go on '@CAPS2' & chat with a friend from @ORGANIZATION1 to get that home work. There are many search engines on the computer such as '@CAPS4 pile', '@CAPS5', or even the ever most popular '@ORGANIZATION2'. Most people use these web pages to research for papers, trips, or even just to find out random information. Many people want to go to @LOCATION2 or @LOCATION1 for @CAPS6, but don't know what to do when they get there. By going on one of the search engines they would find that in @LOCATION1 they could go to the @LOCATION1 zoo. In @LOCATION2 they could go to @CAPS7 world or the @CAPS8 @CAPS9 @CAPS10 to learn all about @CAPS11 & how it is in a @CAPS9. Thank you for taking the time to read this & I hope you will look into what I said.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
15407,6,"There were many obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock. One of those obstacles was that there was a lack of suitable landing area in New York City. Another obstacle was that the architects couldn't drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof. A dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame. However, the greatest obstacle was nature. Wind on top of the building shift constantly caused by violent air currents. The back of the ship with swivel around the mooring mast while it was tethered.",1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
13285,5,"In this memoir Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives @CAPS2 Narciso Rodriguez, the mood of the story really translates the way the reader is reading it. As Narciso live in this small house it becomes his whole life. And his life revoles around his family. ""I will never forget how my parent turned this simple house into a home."" (@CAPS1 @NUM1) @CAPS2 this simple hous it changed his whole life. As @CAPS3 grew up many of his blood relations were not near where they lived but his neighbor were like his family. ""Growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense that 'family' had nothing to do with being a blood relative."" (@CAPS1 @NUM2) @CAPS3 figured that people close to him was his family. The unique tradition of daily routines his family did really becam a part of his life. ""Passionate Cuban music (which I adore to this day) filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen."" (@CAPS1 @NUM3) these little things like music or the smell from the kitchen had a memorable impact on his life. In conclusion, the mood created in this memoir was created @CAPS2 these tradishon of his family",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
6285,3,"The features of the setting affets the cyclist in afew ways. For example, the features of the “Rough Road” didnt allow him to arive as fast so was drive @NUM1 on a @NUM2 speed limit. Second the fact that he was drivuing through a desert a large snake made its way on the Road, causing the man to have to ""ease past, trying to keep my balance in my dehidrated state.” @CAPS1 again because he was driving through the desert,hegot so hot & started to get dehydrated of lack of water. Lastly the features that there werent any buildings far miles so he was left lost and didnt have anywhere to stop & ask for directions. These few features defenitly affected the cyclist.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
16314,6,"Based on ""The Mooring Mast"" there were several obstacles the builders faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. First of all, they couldn't just put a mast a top the building because it would put too much pressure on the building's frame. Also the stress would be transmitted all the way to the foundation of the building, which was 11 hundred feet below the mast. So before they could build anything, they had to re-inforce the entire structure of the empire state building. Finally these obstacles were fixed, but those were the obstacles the builders fixed.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
9473,4,"In the story, ""Winter Hibiscus,"" by Minfong Ho, Ho concludes the story with the paragraph due to the fact the flower represents her hapiness from her home. The flower symbolizes the past and comfort, once Saeng began to dig the ""winter hibiscus"" In, ""she could hear the sounds of cooking from the kitchen now,"" All of Saeng’s sense were beginning to return; she was happy, likewise, the author uses the geese to explain the comfort of Saeng. The country around her began to feel like home. She became familiar with her surroundings. Many references to home was made throughout the piece because home is a place of comfort and happiness. therefore, Saeng would gain more confidence, which explans the reason @CAPS1 Ho concluded with that sentence.",1.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
3448,2,"Dear Newspaper,     I do indeed believe that certain books, magazines or any other form of redaing material should be removed from the shelf if they are found offensive. I say this because, in every situation, either one side benefits, both sides benefit, or neither side benefits. If you do not want that article or piece of writing to be seen by certain audiences, then do not put it on a public display.      It is best that they are in a solitare area for audiences mature enough to handle the influence and/ or consequences that go along with that type of material. I say influence, because studies and personal views have shown that teens and even young children are often influenced by explicit views portrayed by media. These children act in ways that reflect what they have seen. If they watch a movie full of violence, they @MONTH1 feel it is their job to act in violent manners. Until they reach an age of maturity and responsibility to make their own decisions, they let the outside world decide what is best.     As a child is grows up, they are obligated to follow certain rules or take authoritative matters seriously. Authority teaches us, as children. We develop through our teachings and grow through our surroundings. You @MONTH1 ask what it is i am speaking about. Well, i believe that this situation relates to the phrase 'think before you speak' because it seems that the people displaying this media don't think about the after affects of their actions.     Suggest that certain material @MONTH1 not only be impacting children and teens, but adults are highly affected as well. I am not speaking as though everyone who watches a movie or reads a book about a murderer will go out killing people. I am only saying that our surroundings almost make us who we are along with the way we were raised. The media gives us insight and ideas, in which sometimes revole around our every thought.      I do believe that certain media, should be displayed in confidential locations. If not, then it should be a recommendation and obligation to have an age limit. My concern for public media display pertains to the concern of the impact on human lives. Thank you for your time.                              Sincerely,                 @LOCATION1",3.0,5.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
7666,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist in so many ways. Some ways the cyclist was affected is, the lack of water was the biggest problem he had. The group of the old guys that gave him directions werent a big help at all. The men gave the cyclist directions be what they remember when they were younger in age. The cyclist knew not to take directions from the old men, but they seemed so sure about what they were talking about to him. The cyclist first had determination to get to his destination. As he begin to get hotter and more thirster into giving up. As soon as he was about to give up his troubles, thirst, and fear were all behind him now. He stumbled across water.",2.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
10118,4,"The author most likely uses this paragraph to show her setting a goal for the cycle to start over. She uses geese as a symbol for spring, when she would start preparing for this “test” once again. The hibiscus budding in this paragraph shows hope, because it is once again, a start of a cycle as well as an object of reminiscence in the story. In conclusion, this concluding paragraph uses several symbols and devices in order to convey hope, good memories, and fresh start.",3.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
11924,5,"The mood that was created by the author in the memoir would be I believe love. I said love because basically throughout the whole story all that was being talked about was ""eternal @CAPS1"", ""a dore"", bonds, and unity. The family are imigrants and they came looking for a better lifestyle in a foreign country Just for the benefit of the children. From my point of view only loving parent would give up The country they all love in order to do something like that because they had to leave behind families, friends, and careers. Now their facing cultural hardships over Just one desition.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
10598,4,Ii think the author concludes the story with this paragraph cause the author is saying Its gonna be a @CAPS1 year or some change is gonna happen and he feels That could of did better than what they did and is gonna take that test again.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
12912,5,The mood created by the author in the memoir is very grateful and happy. The memoir explains how proud the author was of their parents. They did so much for the author. The most important thing was bringing family and strong relationships into the house making it an actual home.,1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
16045,6,"There were many obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle was the fact that most diribles from outside the United States used hydrogen in their blimps instead of helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable. The builders of the Empire State building did not realize that this was a problem until on May 6, 1937, the German dirigible Hindenburg caught on fire in New Jersey (paragraph @NUM1). It was only then that they understood how bad matters would be if a dirigible caught fire right over the masses of people in New York. Another obstacle was nature. The winds on the top of the building were always violently changing, making the dirigible swivel around over the heads of the @LOCATION2. As stated in paragraph @NUM2, such a problem could be easily solved by weighting down the dirigible with lead weights. However, using lead weights that could accidentally fall on the people below was an unsafe way to keep the dirigible still. Lastly, as written in the beginning of paragraph @NUM3, there was an ""existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" By law, the whole idea of using the Empire State Building as a docking area for dirigibles was illegal, and rightfully so. There were too many complications, and one spark or strong breeze could jeopardize countless of lives. These reasons are why by the 1930s the plan to create a mooring mass for the dirigibles on the Empire State Building was dropped.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
670,1,"Some people believe that computers are a positive effect to people, but its positive because it rots you brain. I think that computer is a waste of time and is an excuse for you to not spend time with you family as to go outside and enjoy nature. This is why computer time should be reduced and family time increased. Absolutley, computers is the type of things that can kill brain cells if you spend to much time on it. Teenagers are the main cause of this and when they get on the computer and get on myspace and facebook they wont be learning anything and just kill major brain cells. When they go to school to take the cmts they are going to fail because they wont know anything because of the computer. Also, This is a big problem for familys because they dont hang out with each other because their always on the computer. The excuse for parents is ""@CAPS1 im on the computer"" then they never go and the children get very upset. This leads to anger problems then they stop listening to you. All it is, is cause and effect. My friends on @NUM1 has anger problems and doesn't listen to anyone all because her family never hung. Consequently, peope spend most of their time inside on the computer, you guessed right! my sister is on the computer @NUM2 and she never goes outside to enjoy the nature. People can get that @LOCATION1 were they haute to go outside and we dont want that do eve. Doctor @CAPS2 brown says everyone should go outside to just relax mostly everyday because staying in the house is not good. The computer is defeating that purpose. On the other hand, the computer is a nifty device and can be very handy at times like if your need perfect directions or need a question answered. Sometimes you just want to talk to old time friends you haven't seen in a while. Computers are good for alot of things but to much of it is not good for us lastly, i'd like to say the computer has great purpose but i think it just makes excuses for us so we dont spend time with our family, dont go outside enough to enjoy the nature.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
1533,1,"Dear local Newspaper, Have you ever wondered why people spend so much time on the computer. The effect of people a computer is good and had because the good parts you can communicate with people in far away places, like you can talk to someone you went to @LOCATION1 with in @LOCATION1 and / or @CAPS1 @LOCATION1 with. The bad part is that if your on the computer all the time then you are neglecting time with family and friends. When you are spending all of you time on the computer you are becoming a couch potatoe and its very unhealty of also a good reason is a family member moved and you had to communicate by webcam so if you like live in @LOCATION2 and you have all you family here in @STATE1 other by sending letter and by sending pictures but they cant see how you act and by phone you can only hear voices you can see anything. A lot people disagree because alot people think computers are a big waste so thats all i have to say on the subject.",3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
10185,4,"The author concludes this story with this sentence, because it shows hope for the future. This sentence lets readers know that times are hard now, but in time things will get better. Saeng might have failed this test, but shes not giving up hope on passing it. She believes she will pass that test in the spring, when the time is right. Saeng might miss her home, but she won’t tell that interfer with her future. That is why the author concludes the story with “when they comeback, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return andthis hibiscus is budding, then I will take that tests again.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
7564,3,"When riding a bike for a very long time with no water is bad but is even worst when your surroundings are worst. For example, when the cyclist has no water it is a day with nothing around him to help. Also with no water he could pass out & get dehydrated. When he finds no one to help & nothing around him he sucks on a pebble to keep his mouth hydrated. Therefor you should always check you destination on a bike before just going for it.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
7360,3,"There were many features that affected the cyclist. One feature included the first ghost town that he come by. “but on that morning it fit the traditional definition of a ghost town.” This had to affect him a little because he knows now that the people who told him the shortcut haven’t peen out for awhile. Another feature that affected the cyclist was the lack of water in a ""desert in California in June."" The cyclist now knows that it might be awhile before he gets any more water. The hills also had an affect on the cyclist because he knew now he was going to have to work really hard to get into the next town, without drinking much water. The Welch’s building also had an affect on him since it was abandoned and no drinks were left. In conclusion, the cyclist had to battle many features on his way to the National Park.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
4594,2,"Books, Music, Movies, and Magazines have been taken off the shelvs.we are forever more blocking or cesoring these items. reasons why iot is a good idea is because their are children parents and religeous people who are so agains some of the thngs that are brodcasted if you want something uncensored then you can buy or rent an unrated version.          children are our future, why would you carrupt a mind so young and innocent? If your child is one second watching @CAPS1 and happy as can be and the next watching people being killd and the @CAPS2 bombs being droped that will forever be threre in his or hers mind. i dont think you would be to happy if your child was piucking up valgure language from the @CAPS3 or @CAPS4. Picture it your @NUM1 year old talking to you and then says an innappropreate word not knowing where it came from you just ignor it then that vacabulary grows into words and sentances much worse turning thins child into a bit of a potty mouth maybe even violent. we dont want our future presidents and authorities to be so violent that they put the woukd in danger just because they got if off the @CAPS3 do we?            Parents have the right to watch what they want but also have the authority to put a stop to what they dont want them and their @CAPS11 to view or even hear.More families these days enjoy taking car rrides together and vacations watching @CAPS3 and listening tgo the @CAPS4 as they go one minute they are all singing happy as can be unti a song with a bunch of innopproppreate words come on its not only dissrespectful but embarrasing to listen to your kids sing along to it. parents dont want to listen to that so they turn it off  everything is fine until they hear them again singing to their music divices @CAPS2,@CAPS8,@CAPS9, bombs all around the car their is no escape thats when parents should have a say to what their children are not only watching but listening and reading also. Books about @CAPS14 @CAPS13 and @CAPS15 are not something an @NUM2 year old should be reading we dont need them to be a bunch of stoners parents eaither. One minute you think you are reading a book about love and rommance next you read that the character is smoking a joint.         People with strong religeouns dont want to be watching @CAPS3 late at night and then be watching on @CAPS11 gut that @CAPS12 is doing @CAPS13 and sleeping with all these girls yes it @MONTH1 be funny to those non believers but to those who have a relligion it is just dissrespectful . Then listening to music hearing about people with no religion them lighting fires to crosses and using valgure language and the lords name in vein.not something they want to hear. When it comes to reading a book the religious have a strong oppinion on what should be read so they usually stick to the @ORGANIZATION1 but whjat happens when their kids go to school to fiind a fake @ORGANIZATION1 with nothing but lies and dirty pictures in it?       @CAPS3 shows, Music, Books, and magazines should always be censored it not only gives a good  example for everyone but it helps us as a community to stay strong. Not being violent or cursing after everything you say is not going to hurt anyone. Why would you want a future president to be a violent killing machine?  the environment we grow up in is how we turn out @CAPS13, @CAPS14, and @CAPS15 being read about or heard is not the way to be",3.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
16027,6,"In attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building, the builders faced a few problems. First, they had to figure out a practical way this could be done. When they decided to construct a ""rocket-shaped mast"" that the dirigible could attach to, they realized that the roof had to be built first. After the building of the mast was completed, saftey became an issue. ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United states used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" (paragraph @NUM1) If there were ever an accident with a foreign dirigible, the safety of New York City would be at risk. Also, the dirigibles could not be tied down with weights like they can in an open field. This would also be unsafe for the people of New York. The main obstacle the builders faced with saftey, which is a big issue. Therefore, the dirigibles could not dock on the Empire State Building.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
910,1,"@ORGANIZATION1, In the @DATE1 computers have help man kinds. Computers are every where in a schools, homes band business across a @CAPS1. They help people in many ways depending on the what the person wants to set done. The ways that I use my computer is by staying in contact with my friends, a family, and it also helps me with my school work. I have been a live for @NUM1 @DATE1 and have already live in @NUM2 different states: @LOCATION3, @LOCATION1, @LOCATION2, and now @CAPS2 you would think I would have had lots of friends living in so many places. How do I stay in contact with them you @MONTH1 use? I use various and @CAPS3. If you get rid of computers I would not be able to stay in contact with tem anymore. Moving from place to place was very hard and sad thing to do for me. Another hard thing to do for me was moving away from my family, but thank to technology and computers I stay in contact with them. Imagine you haven't seen you family in @NUM3 @DATE1, well sadly thats my life so many birthday @CAPS4 all the family you can see is you parents. School another great example where society benefits from computers students and teachers use them everyday to learn. In my opoion learning is the greatest thing. One of my friends, @PERSON1, said this about the dell computers we use in the library @CAPS4 ever u don't get something about what we learned in @CAPS5 class that day. I use the computers to better understand it. Computers are a great way to research a topic, and thats why they should not be gotten rid of. I use computers every day for two reasons for school, researching or writing a project for any of my classes. Everyday I spend at least @NUM4 our writing something up for school. Computers help lessen the time spend writing it because it is fast and easy it is easy to type something, like a @CAPS6 paper on the ways to persuassive the readier. In the end computers are something we I need in are life because it makes life simpler. If I was to send a message to some of my friends in @LOCATION2 through @CAPS7 it would take seconds. Instead if I was to use the @ORGANIZATION2 it would take days. A life with out computers is a lot harder to do things, that we cant make simpler with computers""",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
12357,5,"the mood in the memoir can be exaessed in many different ways. The memoir is mostly eprssed with gratitude from Narciso to his parents. He describes in good detail all the sacrifices his parents made for him. Leaving behind all their friends and family, the hot climate, and their cultures back in Cuba. Another mood expressed in the memoir is love and kindness. Narciso's parents were kind to everyone. They turned their house into a hotel for people who needed help until they were ready to go. They had open dinner where friends and family members came. Even when they struggled financially they still let everyone in. Narciso's parents made the biggest sacrifice for him. What they did for him created the beautiful moods described in the memor.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
3543,2,"In Katherine Paterson's writing she tells us that she does not want her child to pick up a book off the shelf that could be found offensive. But I think that there should be sections of the library that are cut off away from the public eye, but are still there for those certin people.     If my child were to pick up a book that was not for his/or her age group I would not get made, because I know that some of the book groups are close to others them some, but they are for everyone to see, which could be offensive to some. I would tell my son/ or daughter that that book is not for you, and we would go and pick out a new book to read.     Over all I think that there should be sections of the library that are made for a certin age group, and should not be seen by kids. Because once I was that little kid, and went wondering through the miles of shelfs to find a really wonderful book to read, but long behold that didn't happen, I had wondered along to find a book that was not in my age group.     So I think that there needs to be more careful eyes in the library staff to make sure that those kind of things will never happen again.",2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
1229,1,"Dear Newspaper @CAPS1, @CAPS2 you think that computers have a positive or negative affect on people's lives? Well if you think it is negative I am going to show you why it is actually very positive. First, it teaches good hand-eye coordination. Second, it lets people communicate with other people. Third, it can help with school and work. As you can see this is why I believe it is positive. First, computers teach good hand-eye coordination. While you use computers you are improving your hand-eye coordination. One way is that when you are online and you see something you like or want to see even bigger, you move the mouse and click. This helps because you saw something and didn't need to see where you were moving the mouse to click on it. Also it helps because when you are typing a paper you don't need to look at the keys to know what to type. You can look at the screen and move your fingers freely. As you can see this is my first reason as to why I believe computers are positive. Second, computers help people communicate with others. This can be important if you need to talk to someone that lives far away. If someone lives to far away and their is something important then the @CAPS7 is great. You can send people @CAPS3 or even @CAPS4 chat someone. It helps communication so much that you have choices on how you want to talk to someone. Third, it helps people with school and sometimes work. It helps people because they could @CAPS2 projects. This can be helpful to learn about places you didn't even know existed. One time I was wondering what people from @LOCATION1 did to live and survive. Being @CAPS5, I just had to know. I went on the computer and in about a half hour I knew exactly what and how @CAPS5 people did to live and survive. This could also help at work because it your boss is counting on you to have work done, you can use the @CAPS7. As you can see this is my third and final reason as to why I believe computers are positive. In conclusion, I believe that computers are positive for three main reasons. First, they can help to improve hand-eye coordination. Second, they help people communicate with people from other areas. Third, it helps with school and work. So now that you have read this I hope I have shown you that computers aren't bad for us at all. In fact the are the best bet for a better future.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
931,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, I think computers have both good and bad effects on people. Some people just sit around all day playing games and being lazy. Other people actually use their computers for things that they need. Also some people need their computers for their jobs. I do agree that some people who spend all day in front of their computers are spending less time exercising! Would you rather play games all day instead of spending some quality time with your family and friends? Not me, I would much rather be with friends outside or having a family picnic at a park or lake. For other people though, the story is much different. Some people need computers and other advances in technology for their everyday life. A lot of jobs today require you to use a computer, for example working at a bank you use computers all day! I also think students rely on computers to do work too. A lot of students type up reports and other things for school on their computers. Students also use computers to look up information. The internet can be a very good source for students. I know for me, the internet has come in handy for school projects, or maybe something as simple as just looking up a word. I can also see why people dont really care about advaces in technology or computers! Some people dont need them for anything, and some are probably thinking people are on them way too much. To me, I honestly find computers useful because I can talk online to my family in @LOCATION1. I hope you liked my opinion about computers, remember, they are useful to some people, but not all.",4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
12241,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives there is a mood of happyness created. There are several examples from the article that show happyness. The first example is ""they came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their child a better life"". Narciso's parents left everything they had just to give their son a better life. This made him happy because he knew his parents loved him and would do anything for him. The second example is ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" This shows he is very aware all his parents did for him and makes him truly happy knowing they care for him that much. The third and final example is ""It was here I learded the true definition of family."" Where he moved to his parents, siblings, and neighbors became his ""family"" and although he didn't know all of his ""real"" family he was happy with the one he had. Those three examples show the mood of the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"".",3.0,,,,,4.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
16057,6,"There were a lot of obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. For instance, they wanted to add more hight to the Empire State Building so it can be, ""equipped for an age of transportation that was then only the dream of aviation dream"" @PERSON1 said. Next, Al Smith wanted to add a mooring mast at the top of the Empire State Building so it can allow dirigibles to anchor there for several hours for refueling or service, and to let passengers off and on. ""Over sixty thousand dollar's worth of modifications had to be made to the building's framework."" Then they, ""designed a shiny glass and chrome-nickel stainless steel tower that would be illuminated from inside, with a stepped-back design that imitated the overall shape of the building itself."" Also, ""the rocket-shaped mast would have four wings at it's corners, of shiny aluminum, and would rise to a conical roof that would house the mooring arms"". The roof had to be completed before the mask can take place. The greatest obstacle to the successful use of mooring mast was nature itself. In conclusion, those were the obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
6701,3,"During the cyclist’s biking adventure he encounters several interesting situations. Each experience is in response to the setting in which it takes place. For example, this young man starts out confident with a bright hope of eventually reaching Yosemite National Park. The first spot he comes to is a ghost town This sight doesn’t immediately affect him, however it greatly adds on to the long term effects. He decides to continue on his treck reaching the next ghost from at this time he is becoming dehedrated due to his lack of water supply He decides to keep persueing his good and figures there must be water up ahead in the next town. In order to get the next town he must encounter some precarious situations including some changes in terrain. Eventually after reaching a source of running water he is overjoyed with happiness and relief. As evident in the provided text this man was effected by each feature of the setting. The different settings greatly affected his nature of confidence.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
11853,5,"In the memoir Narciso Rodriguez the author creates a serious, happy and thankful mood. The author was serious to the point where his family had to go through economic and personal problems. However, the author was happy how they lived in a friendly and unified neighborhood with other immigrant from different countrys. The author showed thankfulness because his parents worked so hard to give him a new life. The memoir showed a good mood as well as a accurate portrait of the athour childhood.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
3777,2,"Materials that are offensive for some people in my point of view should not be removed from the shelves. If some people are offended by materials they shouldn't pay any mind to those certain materials. If everybody paid attention too offensive entertainment regardless to what kind, people would be upset all the time. There are many things people see, hear, and read about that @MONTH1 be offensive. Don't take everything seriously most of those offensive things @MONTH1 just be a joke or just someone trying to get attention.               When you just sit and think about it, most television shows you would watch everyday @MONTH1 have at least one moment that's says something offensive. In example I watch a television show some nights that says something racial about @CAPS1-@CAPS2. I don't pay the show any kind of attention because I know it's a show their just trying to get more rating. So when it really comes down too it I am goin to be watching the same show again the next night.      What if some of our most historical people had listened to everything that everyone esle said about them. Then, our black culture and history wouldn't be so '@CAPS3' today. I probably wouldn't be able too take this test that im doing right now. So don't take everything so serious everyone has some type of  humor.     If we removed everything that was offensive today. Some of your favorite actors and singers wouldn't be the famous actors or singers you love and respect today. All of the grammy's and award shows that we watch on television would not be themselves. There are all kinds of different genre of music. Some of the words that different artists use would be offensive but they still release those same songs because they're only words.     My conclusion, is that anything and anyone can be offended or offensive. People don't take everything serious because it might just be a joke or some ignorant person that needs attention. When I was younger my mother always said 'sticks and stones @MONTH1 break your bones but words only make you'. So don't take everything serious I mean it's only the media, tell me who does take them seriously",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
649,1,"Dear Newspaper, In my opinion, I think computers do benefit society. One reason is because people can learn about new things, it makes life a little easier then it is, and lastly, people can meet new people while they're on the computer. First off, we can benefit from computers because we can learn new things. People can find places that they've never heard of, or they can see whats going on in the world. Computers can help kids that are in school who want to learn new things. Computers help you find out important information that you might need to know in the future. Secondly, having computers in our society can make life a little easier for some people. On computers, you can order things from online websites instead of trying to go out and buy them. For people with no transportation, this'll help make their lives a little easier than it is. Or, for example, if a person wants to buy something that isn't in stores yet, they can go online, and they might have it up there. Lastly, having computers can help you meet new people. If someone just moved from another town or state, this will help them meet new people. Or if a student doesn't know anybody from their new school, they might find them online and then they'll be able to get to know each other. In conclusion, computers help our society in a lot of ways. They can help us learn new things, we all can meet new people. and computers can make our live s a little easier. Thats whay I think we should keep computers in our society.",4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
16367,6,"In the novel the @CAPS1 of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there, Because in the novel it said ""A thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame."" This quote said that the dirigible would add stress to the building and @CAPS2 risk of colapsing.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
4132,2,"Shut down libraries?     Yes, I do, because music, movies, etc. could not only contain unnessisarry attire, they could also contain potty mouth language.  The words could, and can, corupt the minds of youngsters.  All librairies put them there because of the needs of customers.  The things they do to make some cash around here, do you agree with me?     They should create seperate libraries for each type of reader.  Still, they put all of these things in the same building.  They should put up sales for kids' movies not adults, but the librarians say 'books are books'.  I think I'll write my own @CAPS1 sieries, thank you very much.     However, because some have dull enviornments, or lack of customers, some libraries close down.  Make use of that thought I just told you.  I wonder if some books on endangered species of fish.  But some kid's sieries are dieing of because of more popular ones, or being replaced by some family stories.     If a little kid were to listen to some cursing, his/her mind will be warped for life.  What chic-cursing out loud in front of the baby.  How about saying '@CAPS2 @CAPS3 that?..' or '@CAPS4 that ball, you meanie!'?  Maybe THAT will give some education.     However, some older boys and girls are teaching this bad language to the young mind-maybe even before they learn good language.  Those dilenguents don't care about their minds at all.  Your honor, I have my proof right here.  I suggest reeducating those teenage dilenguents to acting more @CAPS1.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
12988,5,"In this paragraph I'm going to tell you the mood created by the author in the memoir I just read. One mood that the author had was happy. The reason why I said that is because everytime he spoke about being Cuban or about his family, he spoke with this joy or pride in his voice. Also when he was talking about Spanish, Italian and Cuban all like being a family. Another mood he had was kind of sad. The reason why I say that is because when he was talking about how he couldn't his a real grandparents until 1970. He sounded a little deppressed about that. I also feel that he is a very happy man for the rest of the memoir. Those are the moods that I think the author created during the memoir.",2.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
15911,6,It @CAPS1 like a veryhard test for them because there trying to make an age of transportation with the thoughts of the pioneers. But once the architects designed the mooring mast and made changes for the building skeleton. They have framed the 85th floor the roof had to be completed before the framing.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
6623,3,"The cyclist pedaled through all types of different terrain. Through   hills, high desert, flat roads and the woods. This cyclist took the advice of bunch old men who thought they knew a short cut to the Yosemite national park. This short cut turned out to be a nightmare. The cyclist had only brought so many water bottles and was quickly drinking them all. The setting of this story changed a lot making the cyclist at   times have to pedal faster and slowes. The cyclist was quickly worn out and started to loose hope in himself. The  terrain kept changing making it  hard for him not to be thirsty. Eventually he drank all of his water and knew he would die of dehydration or a heat stroke. As he came up over a long hill he saw a bait store and stopped inside to have a drink vowed not to listen to a bunch of old guys again.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
9782,4,"The author concludes the story by the paragph that says, “when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snow melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, the I will take that test again"", because the author wants to convey that. Saeng isn’t going to quit. She is determined to take and pass the test. It also meas that saeng will wait for the right moment to take the test. She will wait till things get better. The situation that she is in improves because it say’s, ""The snow melt, the geese return, and hibiscus is budding.”",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
6034,3,"The settings that affected the cyclist were in fact ones you don’t want to be near when you are out of water and tired from pedaling. The time and place affected him greatly because there wasn’t a cool breeze in the air in June at California. He was in the middle of flat deserts and had no sense of where the part as and where civilization too so he can get some water. The quote “old timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in office” helped you realize taking advice of direction from old people who don’t go anywhere is a bad idea. “Flat road was replaced by short rolling hills”. This quote shows you some terrail features that affected the cyclist. Furthermore, the cyclist realivingly found civilization with running water.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
15901,6,"There were many obstacles the builders faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on the empire State building. One obstacle they faced is the safety of the passengers when the dirigibles would dock and the frame work of the building wouldn't collapse. I know this because in between paragraph @NUM1 and @NUM2 the excerpt says, ""'One set of egineers are here in New York is trying to dope out a practical, workable arrangement and the government people in Washington are figuring on some safe way of mooring airships to this mast.'"" The mast weighs alot so they're afraid it will put too much pressure on the empire state building. The egineers were also afraid of the dirigibles blowing up because the dirigibles use hydrogen. Hydrogen is way more flammable than helium. I know this because in between paragraph @NUM3 and @NUM4 it says, ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable. These were a few of many obstacles the workers faced",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
7144,3,"The setting affects the cyclist mood in the story the cyclist takes a short cut with many abandon towns, and buildings as well as a bumpy, terrain. When he came to a fork in his path that had a water pump he immediately began to pump it the water was not good for drinking. He was determined to make it to the next town. “I could make that” he said. Because of the ghost town and the old pump he had to continue on. When the cyclist came to a sign in the road warning him about the road a hed he began to get depressed, “I was sad”. Finally when he reached @CAPS1 and @CAPS2 Fish Camp he was thankful and wanted to show his gratitude. The setting can affect a cyclist by his mood at first the cyclist is determined but as the setting gets worse his mood and hopes go down the drain. At the end when the setting is bright so is his mood.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
6327,3,"In the story, the cyclist starts out with a lot of confidence that he can complete the whole ride. But after he left first town he had been riding and needed water, so he stoped at a fork in the road he had just to;to get water from a pump which tastes like battery acid. Then as he progressed further in his trip he came to a sign that said “Rough Road Ahead: Do not exceed speed limit”(Joe Kurmaskie pg @NUM1) This part of his trip made it very challenging by making him face rough roads and mountains that he had to cross which sucked the water out of him. Then as  he came over the last mountain, he saw a sign for a gart store. So when he arrived he got some water and got directions for a man who had the best map. So you can see that going over an the mountains, sucks all the water out of the cyclist, so he was so relieved when he got the water at the end.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
1650,1,"Dear local newspaper, @CAPS1 would a person do with out a computer? Well I think nothing because @CAPS1 if you are like me that have their family far away in another country well whith a computer you can see them throught a camara and talk to them just like if you where there. Computers just don't take your time they help you understand the menning of a family.These are many reasons why I think computers should be very important. My first reason is that they give you information about a place that you might be interested to see or know their culture. There are many people that like to explore and see new places, but they can't because maybe they just don't have time or they might have to much work. There is no exception for someone to not put their oportunities out, just because they don't have the time or a computer. My second reason is work. People like you that work in a office need information about a place that a disaster happened. You might need somenthing to see how it happen and @CAPS1 was the condition it happend. People that work in a important place need a computer because they are saving their work so they don't lose it and get fired. My third and last reason is to be organized. Being organized is very important it helps you keep a job or having everything on hand. Well computers are not just a pass of time it also makes your life easier. Many people say that they don't @CAPS1 to have to much papers; with a computer you can have all those paper in just one page that is saved by you, and only you can see it. As you @MONTH1 see many people that have computers use it in a productive way. It's not just a pass of time like people say it is. It also helps you do many stuff for your own future: not just to play around with some new friends. Well as you @MONTH1 see this are my three main reasons for keeping a computer in your house and using it in a good and productive way. ",4.0,5.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,23.0
685,1,"In this modernized world computers are key. They offer many benefits that enclude communication, enterntainment, and an education. These benefits have positive effects on people throughout the world and are why I support the advances in technology. Communication is a large benifit with computers. Whether you are keeping in touch with friends or organizing business meetings computer offer a large amount of aid. With the modern technology that is provided with the computer, people can instantly send messages to co-workers or friends in a matter of seconds. In some cases businesses completly relie on the computer to function; for example, to have conversation with people accross the globe to discuss they are going to expand internationaly. Computers are greatly necessary for people to communicate and enable people to make plans with simply and effectively. The computer also supplies an endless source of entertainment. With the internet the computer provides the users with websites that enable them to talk to friends, watch videos, play games, and more. The computer provides a relaxing way to enjoy yourself when it is late at night or a rainy-day. The computer enables people to stay entertained, and relaxed when needed. The most important function of the computer is education. The computer supplies the user or student with a wide variety of information. The computer aids the user with vast information on every subject or topic that @MONTH1 be brought up in a class room. It comes to be very useful for research projects or even learning another language. The computer is a very beneficail when ti comes to education. The computer is a technology that has come to make daily life simple. It has come to be incorperated with almost any daily task that @MONTH1 occur during the day. It would be unjust to stop advancing in this technological wonder. The computer is a technology that greatly benifits our communication, our entertainment, and even our education.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
7357,3,"The features mentioned in the settings of the story made it harder for the cyclist. The lack of water during a summer in California  made it very uncomfortable for the cyclist to go through the deserts. The worst part was when he tried to suck the pebbles to cycle his saliva in his mouth, he ended up swallowing one.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
6066,3,"The setting in the features of the cyclist is that if it is too hot or too cold, it could affect how the cyclist is riding . If it’s to hot the cyclist would get exhausted a lot faster . And if it’s to cold then the cyclist would @MONTH1 be get sick . Also if it‘s  too windy then he would go a lot slower if he is going in the wind’s direction.",1.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
15646,6,Some of the obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced on attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there were That architects cannot simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building. They would also have modifie and strengthened the steel frame of the Empire State uilding and all this was going to be worth sixty thousand dollars of modifications. Theese engineers had to try to dope out a Practical workable arrangement and also the government People in washington were figuring on some safe way of mooring airships to the mast. This idea of doing this was neither practical nor safe because all this things would be dang ling high above Pedestrians on the street. This could have never happened either because there was an existing law against airships flying to low over urban areas. Theese were some of the obstacles the builders faced on attempting to allow dirigibles to dock over the Empire State Building.,2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
4479,2,"'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf. But if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf-that work I abhor- then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' wrote by Katherine Paterson. If you think about it when you go into a library there is a ton of books to choose from. But how many do you think is appropiate for every age and including children, not very many. That is why they have sections for the books, but there are times people are rude and mix them up on purpose.          How many times have you been in a library and find a misplaced book? Many of times right, that can be accidental or on purpose. I know if I took my child or children to a libraby and they got a book that was inappropiate for them, I would take it to the front desk and complain about that book. Now if it was a book that has been misplaced I would take it from them. But, yes there are some books, magazines, movies, and music that should be removed from the libray.      I remember from when I was a little girl going into the library to check out books with my mom or my dad, it did not matter they both enjoyed taking me to the library. They were pleased that I loved to read but, one day my mom took me to get books from the library, she did not think about looking at the books I got until we got home and she realized on of my books had a cursing word in it. She was not happy at all, I had no clue what she was doing. But I figured it out, she grabbed me by my hand and took me to the car. She fastened me in and off we went, back to the library. She had no problem going off and complaining, I can remember her every word she said it sounded like this. '@CAPS1, my name is @LOCATION2 and this is my daughter @PERSON2 she is six years old. We were just her about an hour ago, but you want to know the funny reason we are back. Well if you can give me a funny reason for why my six year old daughter has a childs book from here with cursing in it. Please speak up and explain I would love to hear it.' The lady at the front desk was stunned she has never had someone go off on her for the seven years she had worked there. But the book is no longer in the @LOCATION1 library, I can not remember the title of this book, I just know that with a mom like mine she can get something done.   Just like Katherine Paterson said, 'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf. But if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf- that work I abhor- then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' I can tell you from experience and observation, you can do and get what ever you want with a little power and persausion. It @MONTH1 cause trouble but just set your mind to it and you can help and solve problems when you do set your mind to it",3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
3101,2,"No, i do not think that books, magizines, movies and music should be removed. However, I do think that the books, magizines, movies, and music should be monitred by age. The reason why is because younger children sould not be reading , listening, or watching material that is for adults or teenagers.       They way these type of things can be monitred is by the child's library card. The card could have their name, age, grade, and date of birth. If there is a certain book, magizine, movie, and music that the child want a parent has to be there with them. The parent needs to show a form of identification so that the librian knows that the parent  is of age.           Teenagers should also be moniterd. Event though they are almost adults. Some parents @MONTH1 not agree with some of the material. So, if their parents does not want them reading certain things their should be stickers on their cards.     Even though there are plenty of opinions about what a persons child is reading , watching, or listening to I think there should be certain ways to watch what children are reading, watching or listening to",3.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
1717,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 name is @PERSON1 and I want to argue about the issue of computer use in @LOCATION1, @CAPS3, I'll tell you about the benefits of owning a computer. Then, I'll talk about the whole computer network. Finally, I'll talk about the advances in technology due to the computer. I think the use of computers in our town are very good for society. There are the major benefits of using a computer. @CAPS3 is the fact you can use microsoft to write up a paper. Sixth grader @PERSON6 says, ""I would rather type than write a paper. Another reason to use a computer is a for research."" @CAPS4 many articles and facts are online about anything you need,"" says @PERSON4. The final benefit of a computer is the fact you can know about world news in a flash. ""I would've never known about the earthquake in @LOCATION3 without seeing the article on @CAPS2 homepage,"" says @PERSON5. Those are just some of the major benefits that the kids do on their computer. Now lets talk about something. That is said to be bad but really isnt; social networking. Stuff like @CAPS5 use a texting form on a computer which helps us connect without making a huge phone bill: with instant messanger I can talk to @CAPS2 girlfriends,"" says @PERSON2. Also, there is facebook which can help us connect on a global stage. ""I can talk with @CAPS2 cousin in @LOCATION2,"" says @CAPS6. Those are the major social networking tools we use to talk to people around the world. One thing that is important about the computer is the advances in technology caused by it. @CAPS3, we have the laptop which is a portable computer we can take anywhere. ""I can use @CAPS2 computer anywhere I like,"" says @PERSON7. Also, the memory card which allows us to save data on a computer and take it to school or work. Eigth grader @CAPS7 says, ""I can take work I didn't finish in school home with the stick."" The final major advance is the use of the printer,"" I use @CAPS2 printer to print of papers to bring to school,"" @PERSON3 said. Those are some of the major advances caused by the computer. That's why I think using the computer is good for us. There is many benefits to owning a computer. We talk to people world-wide when ever we want to. The computer has even been the sole purpose for many other ground breaking improvements in technology. @CAPS4 please help defend us kids in this case about computer use.",5.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
3149,2,"You know when you find a @LOCATION1 book on the shelf and discover that the content in the book are not word that are oppropity for children to read. Or when you go to copy something and you notice a magazine on the table and find out that the cover of the magazine has an image not for the young mind see. Or a movie or music that you see and the content from them shocks you and makes you that they bleep those word. I see it more better to have offensive items such as: books, music, movies, magazines, and etc. removed from the shelves, because those words and pictures will poison the minds of children and children learn from the world around them stuff like will make the child think that's how your suppose to act and talk. Here two example of why they should be remove from the shelves music and magazines.     First, in deal with music children word immate act they see and the words the say. One good example is rap music: their song have cuss words in them and believe me when I tell you this that I have to constantly to kids at my school saying cuss words like the n- and f-word and many more and seeing some boy's underwear, because they think they are being thugs just because they have their pants sagging low. It drives me crazy and make me think why are their parents letting their children do this. In the next paragraph I will talk about magazines.     Second, with magazine some of the images they use on their covers and pages are something that are ment to be seen where children read. an example for this is when I went into my school library's copying room to copy an article from magazine I found a magazine on the table and it show three of the cast members from @LOCATION1 in their birthday suits. I thought what in the world is this doing at my school they should have something like that in a place where kids are in a learning environment. Why on earth did they send this to a school for crying out loud. What do they think it want bother any kids' parent about it that I sure would be furious about it if I found out that my child had a something that at there school.     In conclusion, this is why they should be removed from the shelves so the children don't see them.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
6143,3,"There are a couple things that affect the cyclist in the story. One of the ways he is affected is de hydration. In the story about dehydration it says “ The water bottle contained only a few tantalizing sips. Wide rings of dried sweat circled my shirt, and the growing realization that I could drop from heat stroke on a gorgeous day in June.” A good affect on the cyclist was no one in sight to slow him down on his bike ride. A bad affect on him  was don’t ask direction from a guy from heat strokes on a gorgeous day in June simply because listened to some gentlemen who hadn’t been left their porch in decade, caused me to laugh”. One more thing that got in his way was the poisonous snake."" At some point, tumble weeds crossed my path and a ridiculously larg snake--It really did look like a diamond back.. Blocked the major of the parement in front of me"".",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
1230,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 you ever wonder who really invented the ice cream cone while standing there licking one? Well why don't you just rip out your blackberry and find out? That is that great thing about technology. You can talk to friends or family get help, and it is there. Whenever you need it. Have you ever had to move so far away from your best friend that you cried so much someone thought it was raining? Well this is not nessesary because you can now have a webcam in your computer and talk as much as possible. Of course, its out the same as being there with the person, but its pretty close. You can talk whenever, wherever, with the great invention of computers. One other way that a computer benifits talking in other people @MONTH1 be you and your friends can chat. If your parents are out and won't let you get out you can still talk to your friends. Lastly if you are older you can use facebook to find friends you have not seen in a long amount at time. Another reason that the computer and technology are great is because you can get information you need it. Schools practicaly live on computers. Not only the students but teachers too. The teachers assign projects that include going on the computers and finding information all about your topic. Also if you just that you have never heard of before you can go and find out about it. It is great to those all you have to @CAPS2 is clik a buttom and every bit of information is at you fingertips. This can coms in handy when you are in a fight with your friend about who is a better @PERSON1. You can just look up who has gotten more home runs and there you go. You've got a winner! Have you ever been at dinner and someone ask if you have the hockey game score and you friends, husband brothers out his phone and then says @NUM1 to @NUM2 about @NUM3 minutes after you asked? Well that must mean they have internet on their phone. Phones such as blackberrys, @CAPS3, and iPhone all have internet built in. This means when they are in the airport waiting for their plane, they can just play a game or watch some television. To me that is a pretty cool invention. Also people in business and industry have phones with internet built in because they can just look something up at anytime. So this is why I think having technology is good in our society. Ecspecially because they can talk to far away friends and whatever. Kind of information you need you can already have it with a touch of a button. Also, you can have it in stuff such as you phone or in another technology related thing.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
1065,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 my name is @CAPS3 and I do not no where to start this letter. Im writing you this letter to let you know that I think that not everyone should use a computer. My first reason not everyone should use a computer is because they get so distracted in the computer they forget about school. My second reason not everyone should use a computer is because they @CAPS4 dont spent time with there parent. My third reason they shouldn't have people use the computer often is because they would get sick. My firs reason computer shouldnt be used often is because they forget about school. They forget about it in the way that there so distracted writing or chating or playing @CAPS4 that they forget about school. @CAPS5 reason is because their grades get low. They dont do homework either. My second reason is because they dont parents. Are more could be there so the computer they dont. My third reason is because their get computer there get @CAPS4 they dont and not @CAPS5 could that they dont get no education for being in the computer. That is why is bad to use a computer a lot I hope u understand.",3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
16032,6,"Builders of the Empire State Building were faced with many obstacles of construction, especially in regards to allowing dirigibles, or blimps, to dock there. From the beginning, builders were faced with obstacles of very high expectations. Expectations including the desired title of ""world's Tallest Building"". With this desired title came many underlying obstacles like frame and support. Another obstacle also arose: being ""equipped for an age of transportation,"" as said by John Tauranac.With the desire to now be a dock for what was known at the time as the ""transportation of the future"", came even greater obstacles. These obstacles included the responsibility of getting passengers safely off the dirigibles. One of the biggest obstacles was constantly shifting winds and violent air currents. This problem normally solved in open fields using dangling weight belts, was nearly impossible to fix in populated @CAPS1.Y.C. The final obstacle that really led to the operation's demise, was the law against airships flying too low in urban areas.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
9336,4,"The auther ends the story in this way because it represents the new brith that will take place. It’s almost as if she’s saying that she will hibernate during the winter, and when spring returns and everything begins a new cycle of life, then so will she. Saeng “realized that many of the things that she had thought of as strange before had become, through queit repitition of season upon season, almost familiar to her now.” She is saying that when the new season begins it will be her beginning and she’ll have a different outlook on her new life.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
9035,4,"The geese flying south for the winter and the hibiscus budding are normal things to Saeng. The author wanted to conclude the story with this to show that Saeng felt comfort in things that she was acustomed to. Saeng wanted to have the geese and hibiscus there to feel more comfortable while taking her driving test. Saeng still longs for home and does not quite feel like she fits in the u.s. The hibiscus gives her that comfort feeling like she is home again, in Vietnam, Saeng still feels homesick because she wants things to be how they were. The plants in the green house along with the disappointment of failing her driving test bring her to the emotional state that she was in. In the second to last paragraph the author talks about the feeling of repetition Saeng has when seeing the v formation. Saeng feels that in the winter she will not have the same comfort feeling as when she can see the hibiscus and the geese flying overhead. It says when Saeng arrived in the @LOCATION2 she had nothing that was familiar to her.  Now she gets that feeling from the geese and plants. The author concluding by saying Saeng will take her driving test when the winter ends is a good closing because it gives you some insight as to what Saeng is going to do.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
10104,4,"The auther includes this at the end to show how much she cares about the plant and that she seils brought back her back to her childhood. An example of her loving the plant is that rich scent"" (Paragraph Minfong Ho), @CAPS1 examples “It felt smooth and cool” (paragraph Minfong Ho) An example of to childhood's plan is that she had not even realized she had known but had forgotten. she come back we could reed (paragraphs Minfong Ho) For these ways think that is why the author adds that at the end.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
12137,5,The mood that the author shows is happiness and love. In the memoir he talks about his mom and dad coming to the @PERSON1 without fear and not knowing anything abot the language or culture. Also he talks about when the rest of his family comes his mom and dad lets them in with open arms and when someone needs help to stand back on their feet. The parents were happy about what they did and who they loved.,0.0,,,,,0.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
1257,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 you know computers are a major part of our society. Ever since the first computer they have been improved so much, that now you dont even need a keyboard. Having computers benifits our society because it allows us to learn about technology, and how to memorize when we start to type a lot. You have an opportunity to learn about things you like. And @CAPS2 a plus you can communicate with people from all over the world. Every day you learn something new! Learn a lot now, and you will be better off down the road! That's all teachers say. We'll computers do just that. Computers can teach us! The more you use a computer the more you know about it. You can learn about how it's made and the vireses it can have. The computers can also teach you in a way you might never have thought of. When you sit at a computer and type you start to memorize where certin letters, numbers and punctuation are. Now you @MONTH1 ask what about the little kids? How do they learn from computers? They sell millions of games for kids to help them learn even before pre-school. In fact @PERCENT1 of all kids who start off playing educational games before entering pre-school are ahead. How great is that? Kids and adults both go on computers. For kids when they go on computers they are doing things they enjoy. For example my brother is really into parcore. Parcore is when a bunch of people do flips, off of buildings, walls, or anything they can find. When he goes on the computer he looks up different parcore tricks he can do or learn to do. For adults they use it for work. They to, might have to look up things for a meeting they might have, or a buisness that they might have to work with. Using computers could be fun for some and work for others. But eather way they are using computers ina way that can help them down the road. Communication is one of the main reasons people use computers. There is e-mail, @CAPS3, twitter, facebook, myspace, and so much more.If you were to ask ten randum people on the street and asked them if they have a facebook @PERCENT2 of them will say yes. Communication is key when it comes to buisnesses and relationships. For relationships like family and friends having a computer to talk from if they are far away is great. Even for buisnesess using those internet communications you can communicate to people if your going to be late. Computers have been and always will be a huge part in our society. The computers help us in ways like learning communication, and work, knowing that this technology can help us suesede is great.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
16417,6,"In the passage The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon @ORGANIZATION2 t buiders of the Empire State Building faced with obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One example is ""The architects could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the empire state building flat roof. This is saying that you need to have a solid amount of support to hold a dirigible. Another is ""Most dirigibles from outside the United States use hydrogen not Helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable. So if that were to catch fire in the middle of New York City That would not be good. Another is the changing wind speeds would cause the dirigible to sway in the air. This could cause issues with stability. So in this passage The Mooring Mast by @ORGANIZATION2 had to overcome obstacles and attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
4544,2,"My opinion on this would be that , they are going to learn about @CAPS3 anyways so why take @CAPS3 off the shelfs ? No I don't think any adult material should be cencered . You know when your little girl or boy as about what they have in there hand , simple just take @CAPS3 from them and say '@CAPS1 your eyes can't handle .' @CAPS2 , they are going to ask questions and @CAPS2 , they will start to wonder , but they learn that stuff in school anyways so what's the big deal ?      If I had a child , who had got into my personal stuff and started asking questions , I would simply tell them '@CAPS3's a mommy and daddy thing ' , and then hide @CAPS3 in a diffrent place to where I know they can't find @CAPS3 . I mean , when you was a child , of course your parents would have yelled at you for going into there room and looking threw there stuff , but then again , you would yell at them for having @CAPS3 when they got older . So don't disaplin your children for @CAPS1 they 'stummbled' on to , you should learn how to hide your stuff better . I'm not saying I would have any of that stuff (why would I need @CAPS3 ?) but , as a student looking into the future , I have a opinion .     Now lets say that you have a couple of maginzines under your bed and your child happens to see them . @CAPS2 they will start looking at them , and some words might come out , but that does not mean they did @CAPS1 wrong , @CAPS3's the parents fault . Like I said before I would hide my stuff better but , then again , I don't need that kind of stuff to live a happy life , I have my children and my husband and that is all I'll ever need .     So before you parents decide to protest about the library having stuff that children are not suppose to see , check your room , hide your stuff so you wont be the embarassed one . No , a library can have whatever they want , @CAPS3's not your place to say what they should get ride of and what should stay.As a student , I stand up and say , No , adult material should not be banned from library's , then you would here the adults complaining and that is @CAPS1 we don't need .",2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
9188,4,"The author concludes the story with, “in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again,” to show Saeng growing up. As another year passes, Saeng will be more comfortable with her circumstances, and ready to start over fresh, just like all the plants will be blooming and budding. Failing her drivers test, really upset Saeng, so by waiting another year, she will be able to practice more, and become better, so that when she goes back and retests, she will be an even better driver, by having the time to practice, and start over. It’s almost like a new beginning for Saeng, another year has past, and new when her familiar plant budds, and begins to start over, so will she. Since the hibiscus plant is familiar to Saeng, she is better able to relate to it, and as it buds, and start fresh, so will Saeng. In conclusion, this is why the author concluded the story with that phrase.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
9083,4,"Minfong Ho ended her story ""Winter Hibiscus"" with an optomistic sentence. She concluded it this way because the main character of the story was beginning to lose hope. Saeng decided to retake the driving test when her hibiscus flower was blooming. This flower reminds her of her past life in Vietnam with her grandmother. ""Saeng could almost feel the light strands of her grandmother's long gray hair, freshly washed, as she combed it out with the fine-toothed buffalo-horn comb"". She preferred her life in Vietnam than hers in @LOCATION2. She was goint to wait until ""this hibiscus is budding,"" so she can feel more comfortable and happy. The author wanted to end it so Saeng would be happy. ",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
4215,2,"I think that their should be rooms were certain adult books are at. I think that they should have to be of age to get the books in that section.     I feel strongly that libraries should have every differnt kind of book for anyone. Everyone goes to a library so i think it should be an open library and have all different kinds of books. If a kid or a teenager is trying to get an adult book someone of age should have to come their and check the book out for them.      I think that libraries are for everyone in a community and that not everyone reads and looks at good nice books some look at naughty books and they should have the right to go and check out books like that. When you go to a library you should be able to go their and get whatever genre that you want and their be no restrictions.      I think that the only restriction that should be made is the age limit on naughty adult books or novels and if they are very bad then they should be behind the desk and you have to be of age to get it.      My conclusion is, if you are going to look at all kinds of books they should have no restrictions on what you look at. You should be of age for romance novels and darougatory books but for the library they should have tons of books and magazines with no restrictions",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
16560,6,"There was many obstacles in the way of adding a mooring dock to the top of the Empire State Building. First was that new many modifications would have to be added to the frame of the building. This is because the previous frame could not hold the extra weight of a @NUM1 dirigible hanging from 1 cable. These additions would take ""1 over sixty thousand dollars"" plus extra time and effort,. Another huge problem was saftey. Winds around New York were ""constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" This would lead to the blimb wraping around the tower and possibly break off or worse. Not to mention that all around was a densely populated city and any accident could cause much more destruction than normal. Forgein dirigibles also used mass amounts of hydrogen, which proven at Hindenburg, could explode into a massive flaming dunk of steel. This chance would be magnified with the weather and any accident would have high human and property costs. Finally, It was illegal for blimbs to fly low near a city, making the whole project illegal. As you can see there is many problems with having a blimb docking center on the Empire State Building.",4.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
13292,5,"Mood was created by the author in the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez."" The mood that he creates is a happy and proud mood. The author is happy to have had a wonderful family and was proud of what his family accomplished and proud of his home. Also the environment of were he was growing up taught him that ""family had nothing to do with being a blood relative. He sets a happy mood because of how he thinks of his whole community as a family. He was very proud of his mother and father. For example he says ""they came selflessly, as immigrants do, to give their children a better life."" And he also says ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" This is the mood I think that the author created in the memoir.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
4111,2,"Have you ever been in that situation where you couldn't read a book because of someone else having bitter feelings towards it? Are you furious when you finally get a chance to read that book you've been waiting on for two months and all of a sudden it's not to your avalible because of its content? I know I always amd because at @ORGANIZATION1 this happens quite often. I believe that a book shouldn't be removed because only one person found it to be offense. Sure some novels @MONTH1 expose a few word of profanity or discrimination but everyone has to deal with it. So why take one book off the shelf for saying something vaulger because not everyone might dislike the book. If we took a book off the shelf everytime someone reported a bad word or a discrimitive remark then we would be left with no books including the ones that tell us a great deal about past history.     Some authors, movie directors and artist rely on history to help them create a great piece of reading, comentary, or lyrics. If the libraries in the public and in schools censored everything there could be a @ORGANIZATION1 risk of loosing alot of historic and epic material or information from the past. As im sure you know alot of history books about the holucaust, slavery, and the civil rights movement include words that people of certain genders or races @MONTH1 find offensive. These words are a vital source in the attempt to explain what the people in those situations are going through; therefore those words shouldn't be reported for histories sake.     I know im not alone in my fight to keep books on the shelf because an author named Katherine Paterson says, ' ... If i have the right to remove that book from the shelf-that work I abhor-then you also have exactly the same righ and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us' (Paterson). In this quote she is trying to say if people abuse this policy there will be no books left on the shelf for anyone to read becasue someone found something offensive to them. This is what will eventually happening if we don't censor the @CAPS1 in the libraries.     Now don't mistake me for someone who believes that @CAPS1 should be dropped all together becasue I believe it is needed in some cases. If there is a song that use profanity multiple times without any logical reasoning then it shouldn't be availible to the public through a library. Also if there are inappropriate movies I don't think that they should be distributed by the library to the public becasue thats what movies rental stores are for. On the other hand I haven't found a single book that isn't suitable for the library; so why are there so many books being takin away every year due to what some people call '@CAPS1' also known as  self opinions?     In this writing my goal was accomplished; I wanted to let everyone know that the whole @CAPS1 thing is getting a little out of hand. We all know that there is some offensive things that @MONTH1 be happening but they are things that everyone who views that book, movie, or soundtrack has to deal with. With some offensive things comes a reasoning like in history books and movies that @MONTH1 contain a few bad words but are used to get a point or setting across. I know that @CAPS1 is just another way of looking out for the better of humans but alot of it has a reason. The only case where @CAPS1 should be used is in innapropriate movies and songs with no hisrtoric purpose. With all that has been said, do you still believe in all of the @CAPS1 going on in your nearby library? How can you help prevent the destruction of all of the historic words in libraries?",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
15824,6,"The idea of using a mooring mast in order to allow dirigibles to dock at the top of the Empire State Building was never a practical one. This is due to the many struggles that were faced when Al Smith's team was attempting to create a mooring mast that would serve the purpose of docking dirigibles. such obstacles included; the pressure a docked dirigible would have on the building itself, the hazards of high winds causing the dirigible to be shaken violently, the chance of the dirigible catching on fire due to the flamibility of the hydrogen if in it, and the close proximity the dirigible would have to other buildings in the area The first problem faced during the development of the mooring mast was the stress of the heavyweight of the dirigible would put on the building. ""The steel frame of the [building] would have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate [the added pressure from the dirigible]."" The dirigible's weight was not the only thing that put stress on the building, the wind pressure would also. The wind made it difficult for creating a mooring mast's structure because it would not only add pressure to the building because the dirrigible itself to not be able to stay in one place ""Even if the dirrigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast."" An accident that could occur would be a fire due to possible flamibility. And since the dirrigible is so close to people, such as tourist on the building's observation deck, the dirrigible catching on fire (if it's filled with hydrogen instead of helium) could be more disastrous than if it landed in an open field. Lastly,  the dirigibleis so close to urban areas that it is illegal for such airships to dock or even fly at such proximity.  For example, when the Los Angeles tested  the docking process to the mooring mast of the Empire State Building it ""could not get close enough to tie up because of forceful winds."" All of these were major obstacles to the building process of the Empire State Building and it's mooring mast for docking dirigibles. These are also the reasons why the architects of the Empire State Building came to the conclusion that such a structure would not be practical to construct.",4.0,,,,,4.0,3.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
15961,6,"There were obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow derigibles to dock there. In the excerpt the author states nature is one of the biggest problems for the mast. ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself."" The author explains that the wind on top of the buildings are dangerous for the dirigible. ""The winds on top of the buildings were constantly shifting due to violent air currents"". The author also describes what the dirigible would do as an affect of the wind. ""Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast. Those were obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow derigibles to dock there.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
10413,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph because the paragraph is like say most of the story but in a small and shorter way.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
15639,6,"The dirigibles had @NUM1 obstacles to face, They had posidletys of fire, poping, and law troudle. They feared the dirigible would get on fire for it has hydrogen, that is rather highly flammable. They do not want to relate to the acsident that happened in lakehurst, New Jersey in May 6, 1937. also withe the fear of pops rase more concens. for the wind might blow it of chores into another building with a sharpe top that could possibley puncher the baloon. The feared this happening in downtown New York were it is highly populated. another reson prodley the biggest was that Empire State Building wanted a law for air crafts flying low over urban areas, so that ment there was no chance they could do what they were planing on doing.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
10144,4,"The author uses symbolism to convey a different message. Saeng said in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, and then I will take that test again. The author uses the hibiscus to symbolize Saeng gets older like the hibiscus, that then she will be ready to take that test again. The author uses symbolize to convey more of the story.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
12516,5,"This memoir by Narciso Rodriguez has a grateful mood. @CAPS1 is thanking his nieghbors for the unity that @CAPS1 had in his community and explaining how @CAPS1 learned about family from them. @CAPS1 is also thanking his parents for giving up everything they had in Cuba to give him a good home. For example, @CAPS1 explains that @CAPS1 had a ""close-knit community of honest, hardworking,"" ""Spanish, Cuban and Italian immigrants at a time when Overt racism was the norm and segregation prevailed."" @CAPS1 says his neighbors helped people who were, ""not necessarily their own kind, (but) were clearly in need."" In paragraph @NUM1, @CAPS1 describes the things @CAPS1 loved about his ""traditional Cuban home"". In paragraph @NUM2, @CAPS1 says, ""My Mother and father came to this country with such courage, without any knowledge of the language or the culture. They came selflessly... to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends, and careers in the country they love. @CAPS1 describes his parents hardships and says @CAPS1 will, ""always be grateful... for their love and sacrifice."" @CAPS1 makes it clear that the passage is written with gratitude.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
10446,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because it connects the hibiscus back to the trials and triumphs of saeng . Just how saeng can’t give up .and must go back to retake the test, the winter hibiscus must make it through the hard, rough winter and come back strong . The hibiscus are a symbol of hope and saeng thinks of them as her hope. Throughout the story, the hibiscus are comforting to saeng because they remind her of home. The author includes this because many people can relate to this and find hope in things.  For saeng, knowing that each year the hibiscus will come back in those conditions, reassures her that she’ll be okay there as well.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
12677,5,the mood givin by the @CAPS1 (In My prospective) is happy becaus even if you had to move to @LOCATION1 away from his loved ones he still managed to be happy with his family in @LOCATION1,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
12177,5,"The author of this memoir put a mood to it. The mood of this is very loving, because the parents gave everything to make their child's life easier. There is also a very friendly and caring feeling for because the article says how their neighborhood is mostly immigrants and that they are a close-knit community of honest, hardworking immigrants extended their hands to people well in need. I would say all the moods in this memoir is loving, caring, friendship, and equality.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
249,1,"According to @PERSON1, economic @CAPS1, every hour you spend on the computer, you raise your electricity bill by @MONEY2. The average @CAPS2 spends @NUM1 hours on the computer everyday. I believe that spending too much time on the computer could be a bad thing. You have economic loss from the electric bill, health loss because you won't be able to exercise as much, and community less because you won't spen as much with your community. Financial loss is something that many people are concerned about. If everybody spent @NUM2 less hour on the computer, they could save @MONEY1 off their electric bill. In a survey, @NUM3 out @MONEY1 @NUM4 people said they would do anything to save money. So if they spent less time on the computer they would save lots @MONEY1 money. In addition to financial loss there is also a health issue. Many people are talking about how americans are becoming obise. Part @MONEY1 this is due to spending too much time on the computer. Proffesor @CAPS3 @MONEY1 @ORGANIZATION1 says that, ""the obisety in @LOCATION1 is a problem, if people spent less time on the computer and more time exercising, that problem would be solved."" @CAPS4, @NUM5 out @MONEY1 @NUM6 people are obese. If everyone spent @NUM2 less hour on the computer, it would become @NUM1 out @MONEY1 @NUM6. Although health is a problem community is a bigger one. People never talk to eachother face to face anymore. They all talk on @CAPS5 or @CAPS6. Commmunities are spending less time together in real life than on the computer. @PERSON1, expert on human behavior, says that when people spend less time on the computer, ther spend more time together. It's a fact that when people spend more time together, they have more fun. So, I would say that spending less time on the computer would be beneficial to our community. It would provides financial, health, and community benefits. These are all important things that we lack if we spend too much time on the commputer.",5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
4143,2,"As a teenager I am trying to grow and find my way in life and find ways to express myself. I do not believe that certain materials, such as books, music, movies, magazines ect.. should be censored in libraries. Everyone has their own opinion on things such as the music we listen to or the books we read. I do believe that younger children like middle schoolers/preschoolers should be censored from violent songs and movies, but for highschoolers and older I think that it should be our choice. I think that if the libraries really believe that a book or magazine is truely offensice they shouldn't allow them to be published. Not everyone is going to like every book or every type of music that is out there. We should be able to get the books that we like from libraries. Like Katherine Paterson said ' And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' If libraries are able to remove books music ect.. because they believe they are offensive there would be no books left for us to read or songs for us to listen to.I believe that highschoolers and older should be able do decide for themselves what kind of books they read or music they listen to. If you dont like a certain type of music dont listen to it, if you dont like the way a book is written, dont read it. No one is making you to read or listen to something that you dont want to. Books that @MONTH1 be offensive to some @MONTH1 be eye oppening to another. In books we learn about war and things that I fing gruesome and unnessisary, but sometimes it is a fact of life and the things we might find offensive in books are usually things that are happening in real life.I do believe that younger children should be censored form books and music that might be offensive, because they are not big enought to know what is right or wrong, and they dont know what to do with violent information in books about war and music with cussing. In conclusion, I believe that libraries should only censor books that are found offensice to parents with younger children and in younger sections of libraries.",3.0,2.0,3.0,4.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
16178,6,"It is clear that there were problems in trying to dock dirigibles on the Empire state Building. The first reason's that, the law against flying airships to low over the Empire State Building made it hard to do so. Next is that the thoughtes in being unsafe because some dirigibles use hydrogen instead of helium and hydrogen is flammable A big reason is when the german dirigible got destryed by fire in Lakehurst, New Jersey, the owners of the Empire State Building then realized how much more worse the accident could have been if it had happened on such a densely populated area suched as downtown New York City. The last reason was the thought that they would use lead weights to hold the dirigibles down, but they realized that it wasn't practical nor was it safe. It was clear that there were problems in the docking of dirigibles on the Empire State building; but it is probably a much safer choice for both the residents/citizens of New York and all of the people who ever work(ed) on it such as architects, engineers and the aviation pioners.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
585,1,"Dear Newspaper, Computers! Computers! Computers! Computers seem to be the talk of the year. Many people believe that computers are needed for everyday life, but I would have to disagree. In my opinion we do not need computers. The effects computers have on kids and adults are astonishing. Humans today are not spending as much time in nature and excirsising for a healthy body and a healthy planet. Also, as us kids are growing up, we have too many advantages because of computers. Thirdly, so much money is being used towards computers and not whats truely important! As you can see these three reasons alone should persuade anyone to believe that computers are harmful to all areas of life. First off, as we continue to use computers our natural environment is going to waste. The effects on nature and people are horrible. Polution is being spread all over the planet! People are becoming addicted to computers. I know it will surprise you when I tell you that the average person spends about ten hours on a computer a day! This is about half the day! This is a terrifying effect on people, because now these computers are brain washing us! Instead of going on the computer all day, we should be going outside to enjoy fresh air and the sun. Their the more, computers have us sitting inside all day and not getting any excirsive, which is a health issue we need to learn about the little things and be thankful for what we already have! Consiquently, banning computers would have a positive effect. Today, many are loosing their ability to write card forgetting about the simple things life has to offer would writing an essay with a pencil and paper be so bad? This @MONTH1 be old fashioned, but there are an enormous amount of great effects for using pen and paper. Maybe, the @ORGANIZATION2 states would become smarter and contain more knowledge. By writing everything out is proven to help remember important facts easier and for a longer amount of time, writing on paper is like writing it in you brain. Therefore, students, children and adults would benefit by having better handwriting. Since most information is typed on the computer people are forgetting how to write neatly, clearly, and resonsibly. @PERSON1 is an english teacher that has been with the @ORGANIZATION1 school since before computers, she has seen the horrible effects taking place on her students right befor her eyes. @PERSON1 told me, ""@CAPS1, students are completely absorbed in computers and have no life, energy, or reativeness in them anymore! Kids have too many advantages with computers and not taking the time. Last, but most definetley not least is my third reason as to computers are effecting humans negetively. Humans are sending huge amounts of money on getting the latest computer technology. Most of people pay chedes are being used for their computers. These fancey computers are very expensive, but also very useless. In my opinion many people are just following a trend. Instead, the money can be spent on schools, and especially the wars! Do you hear the humming of the computer the clicking of the buttons? Realize that these sounds are not what you should be spending! To wrap it up, computers effect people. There are many reasons to support this, but here are three. One is that people are not spending any time in nature! Another is that people of all ages are becoming brainwashed by this electronic and not spending the time to learn things in quality. Thirdly, people are using all there money on those computers! I know some people think computers are very usefull,but I know now, after you have read this article, you know how unuseful computers really are.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
778,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, I don't know if I am understanding correctly but are you honestly thinking about not advancing technology? Quickly rethink that because that @MONTH1 just be the worst mistake you could ever make computers can tech hand-ey coordination, they can also give you very useful knowledge. Lastly, computers help us stay close to our family and friends. Fisrt off, about @PERCENT1 of people say that they use the computer every day so that they can increase their knowledge. This could ba as simple as going on @ORGANIZATION1! and discovering the latest news. This is ten times easier that going on the @CAPS1 and waiting for the news stone you want details on. I took a survey and @NUM1 students say that they use thier computer every night so that they can read more into thier social studies or science unit, @CAPS2 computer advances away is like @CAPS2 learning advances away, now is that what you want? Second, @PERSON1, chrildrens doctor states, ""Computers give children that hand-eye coordination they need to enhance in sports"" I agree! Sports such as baseball, soccser, and basketball all need a great deal of hand-eye coordination. Without the hand-eye coordination, students will not do well and end up quiting. I know that if I was having trouble with sports for a long time, I would give up! If the teens gave up sports then they would't have anyining to keep them fit one! that would lead to hundred of kids with on obesity problem. Lastly, @CAPS2 away the advancing in computers maens that you are @CAPS2 away family and friends connectionds. Computers offer many sites such as facebook or myspace o connect with loved ones. You can also go on @CAPS3 or sype to chat or video chat with them. Yes, maybe computers are @CAPS2 away time with family but what about @CAPS4 or @CAPS5 in @LOCATION1 that you have at to in over a year? Don't you want some time them too? You can make time limts for yourself so that you don't spend your whole time on the computer. This way you can took to all of your loved ones would you want to be the one crushing the oceans of a child that wants to talk/ see his grandparents? In conclusion, I remember talking and laughing with my friends over the computer when @CAPS6 sick so that @CAPS7 could cheer me up. Dont take that away from me! Keep enhancing computers so that I can advance my knowledge, increase my hand-eye coordination and get to see my far friends and family.",5.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
4283,2,"Controversey and @CAPS1     'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf. But if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf--that work I abhor--then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' (Katherine Paterson, Author.) Paterson makes a very valid point here. Right off the bat, I can think of many offensive or inappropriate books, movies, songs, and magazines. There are equal amounts of good and bad publications, and the decision of what is good or bad is very controvesial.     The creator of each song, movie, song, magazine, or any other publication has made their product for a specific customer. Playboy magazine was not created for five year olds, but for desparate sex-crazed men, and @CAPS2 and @CAPS3 wasn't made for adults, but for young kids. Usually, the intended purpose of the product is not meant to be negative.      It breaks my heart to hear of the rising amount of people of varrying ages getting into pornography. I think the whole idea of it is wrong, degrading, and uttterly disgusting, but others firmly disagree. Some religions think the @CAPS4 series is blasphemous evil, as others don't agree at all. Controversey fills everything in our culture. We all have our opinions and choices.      Should I have the right to take away books from my child? My mother would not let me read the @ORGANIZATION1 books when I was younger. She felt that it was from the devil and pure evil. That make me desire to read it even more than before. When I entered middle school, I read the books anyway: I had the ability to make my own choices. I didn't see the devil in the books. I actually felt the opposite feelings toward the book. The books reflected upon good vs. evil, which I saw as @CAPS5 vs. Satan. My opinions and views were very different than my mother's.     If I would have read the books when I was younger, I might've thought differently. I think that my mom protected me from what could have been bad. I think it is perfectly fine to protect your kids by setting up rules and boundaries. Parents just need to be aware that once the kids are older, they will make the choices on their own.      All in all, certain books will be in the kids section for a reason, and others will be in the adult section for other reasons. We must use our judgement and trust our kids to make good choices on what they allow to enter their brain and consume their thoughts.",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
16488,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building were challenged with significant obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One example, was the architects had to address the potential problem of the ""existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" This law clearly would prohibit and make it ""illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area"". Dirigibles were designed to be ""moored in open landing fields"" and ""could be weighted down in the back with lead weights, but using these at the Empire State Building, where they would be dangling high above pedestrians on the street was neither practical nor safe."" Another example, of an obstacle that the builders of the Empire State Building faced was the potential risk to passengers and resident safety. The reason the landing of dirigibles were a potential threat to the entire population of New York City was that ""most dirigibles from outside United States use hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" The owners of the Empire State Building saw these potential risks ""when the German dirigible ""Hindenburg"" was destroyed by fire in Lakehurst, New Jersey."" Also, another obstacle of placing a mooring mast among one of the world's tallest buildings was ""the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" Due to the unpredictable winds the dirigible could sway and ""swivel around and around the mooring mast"". The architects of the Empire State Building were threatened by the possible obstacles of constructing a mooring mast atop the building.",3.0,,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
165,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, everday @CAPS1 technology is developed. One of the biggest and most popular machines in the technocle society is, the computer. Some people don't like computers. The think computers are ruining social skills and healthy bodys. The reason I'm writing to you is to presuade those people to realize the greatness that lies inside a computer. For starters computers help us recive/give @CAPS8. One of the great featurs that computers give is email. Without email, we would be completley out of the loop. For example @CAPS2 there is a snowday at your childs school, you recive an email from the usper intendent saying school si cancled. Without that email, we woulden't be able to know that @CAPS8. Another example, @CAPS6 say that you lost your voice to a terrible cold. You don't feel good and need to call work to report being sick. Now you're stuck because you have no voice. @CAPS2 you had a computer, you could have simply emailed your boss. Another posative tool computers gives us is making communicating esayer. With all of the social networking now avalible like @CAPS4, twitter , @CAPS3 and yahoo messanger. It nearly impossible not to stay in contact with friends and faimly using @CAPS4, you can look up old friends and faimly. Once youve found them, you can friend request them and become online friends. Once youre online friends you can instant message, video chat, look at their status, and browse their photos. So with a computer @CAPS7 nearly impossible not to be able to keep in touch. The last and final reason computers are great is because, they make shopping much esayer. @CAPS2 you have used amazon, ebay or overstock, you know what I'm talking about you can buy almost anything online. From electronics to @CAPS5 animals. The list is endless. With a computer you can even get your house hold groceries online. For example @CAPS6 say your home from work with explosive diharrea. But @CAPS7 @DATE1 so you need to go grociery shopping. You've been on the toilet @PERCENT1 of the day and alls youve got is your laptop. Well you can shop online. So as you can see computers help us communicate, shop and get and recive @CAPS8.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
6880,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist in a negative way. For example, A tarlike substance oozed followed by brackish water feeling somewhere in the neighborhood of two hundred degrees."" This affects him because cant get water from the well. So this means he needs water, but cannot get water. Also in the essay it says the terrain is bad so that means that the cyclist has to pedal harder to keep moving and he has to work harder to hot reek. So all this puts affect on him from just whats around him. The old abbandon factory with the boy drinking juice was had the  most effect on the cyclist because he was so thirsty and that was when he was about to give up. In this essay the setting had alot of affect on the cyclist to were he thought he might die.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9419,4,"Emotion, camitmint, hope, all are reasons why the author ended the story with “when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snow melt and the gees return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take the test again."" @CAPS1, that last paragraph shows that she has emotion. Next, It shows that she has comitmint, she says that when the hibiscus coms back she will take the test again. Lastly, it shows that there is hope and the she will try and redeam herself. These are all the reasons why she used the last paragraph.",2.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
10107,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because the paragraph before they were talking about the “winter hibiscus” and the geese. So the author just simply writes another concluding paragraph that just wraps the story up, and the reader walkes away with a feel good feeling.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
1768,1,"I think the effects of the computer are bad, these are my three reasons why I think its bad; @CAPS1, the computer could cause blindness to people when they spend too much time or hours on their computers, @CAPS2, people need to relax their vision and do something rather than on their computers, @CAPS3, people need to use computers out a less time. These are the three reasons why I think the effects of the computer are bad. The @CAPS1 reason why I think the effects of the computer is bad is that computer could cause couse blindness to people when they spend too much time on their computers because the screen of the computer has too much light, people can't just stop staring at the monitor and even worse they could probably lost their sight and they will end up with blindness. That's why you have to be away from the screen but, being too long on your computer is bad. This is my @CAPS1 reason why I think the effects of the computer is bad because the computer could cause blindness to people when they spend too much time on their computers. The @CAPS2 reason why I think the effects of the computer is bad is that people need to relax their vision and do something rather than on their computers because when people are on their computers too much time they just couldn't come down stairs talk with their family of friends, they could'nt go outside and enjoy the glory of nature and the enjoyment at the outside world, and also if they had nothing they can just read a book, draw, watch the @CAPS4, etc. They could do those things rather than wasting their time on their computers. This is my @CAPS2 reason why I think the effects of the computer is bad is that people need to relax their vision and do something rather than on their computers. The last reason why I think the effects of the computer is bad is that people need to use their computer for a less time because when people use their computer for a less time it is good because now they finally could be with their family and friends and spend so much time with them. It also good to saving energy, and prevent you from paying alot of electrical bill, and also it is good to finally let your vision of the eyes to relax. In conclusion, the three reasons; @CAPS1, the computer could cause blindness to people when they spend too much time on their computer. @CAPS2, people need to relax their vision and do something rather than on their computer, and @CAPS3, people need to use their computers for a less time will prove that the effects of the computer I think its very bad.",3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
15887,6,"The builders of the Empire State building faced many obstacles in attempting to dock tere. Many foriegn dirigibles used hydrogen instead of helium to keep it a float. Hydrogen is extremely flammable, and has proven to be. on @DATE1 a German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed in a fire caused from hydrogen, in New jersey. When the owners of the Empire State building the severity of this happening they were turned off.Nature if anything was the biggest obstacle of them all. Considering the building was so tall, ""the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent wind currents"". The law if anything was pretty important to get approved, and tere was a law against airships flying too low over urban areas. So it would make it illegal for the dirigible ships to ever tie up to the building or to even approach the area.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
1171,1,"@ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS1? Are you there?"" ""@CAPS2 you hear me?"" You never have that issue with computers. It has come to my understanding that there is a dispute about the benefits of computers - should we have them and advance them, or not? Well, I believe that computers are a necesity to an average person. Computers help everyone, and make life easier! Sure, there are cellphones and other helpful electronics, but @CAPS2 they always prove trustworthy? Computers are alwasy reliable - whether it's for homework or another reason! Computers provide easy interaction without breakups, they make it easier to learn, and if you are smart then they are safe. Without computers, who knows where our society would be? To begin, computers allow people to have conversations with others...that are halfway across the world! There are a variety of applications that you @CAPS2 choose from, and they are all easy to use. My personaly preffered option is @ORGANIZATION2 email. I myself have family in @LOCATION1, which is a whole continent away! Sure, I could call them, but my phone bill would be through the roof! How else am I supposed to keep intact with my loved ones? Do you know how many others face the same problem? Through a recent study, @NUM1 out of @NUM2 families in @LOCATION2 say they have relatives that are far away. That is @PERCENT1 of @LOCATION2's population! Imagine there was no computer for them to use. Phone companies would be in money and regular families would be living on the streets. Or worse - they would lose any relationship with their famly. Do you want that? Computers are easy to access, and you @CAPS2 interact with loved ones, friends, or new people. It doesn't get any better than that! So, which would you choose - losing your family relations or keeping in touch via email and computer applications? If that isn't enough, computers make it easy to learn new things and accomplish tasks. I know that as a student of @PERSON1, other students and I need to type our homework at least three times a week! Just yesterday I had to type up a response, a free writing choice, and an entry for a history project. Imagine if we had to go back to using typewriters. Either homework wouldn't be done or everyone would have a major lack of sleep. Both options are unacceptable. Plus, computers are great for research. If you have to look up a new country, look at far away colleges or find out about the world, why not visit your handy computer? You could learn which college is right for you without leaving your house. You could visit a new country without leaving town! Sure, you could read a newspaper, but answer me this where does the paper come from? Yup, trees are killed for them. Computers are the easy, environment friendly alternative for you. If those two reasons didn't convince you, maybe this one will. Most people think computers are unsafe, and that @MONTH1 be partly true. But if you are smart or listen in school like me, you will know that isn't always the case. In our school, we are taught about the risks of computers, and how to prevent any possible @CAPS3. I'm sure most schools do. In fact, nine out of ten students say that when it comes to safety, computers are rated an A+. Everyone knows about hackers, and so we avoid them. My parents even say that for over thirty years they have never had a single issue or risk of safety when using a computer, and neither have I. ""@CAPS3 are only powerful if you let them be, and let them take control,"" says @CAPS4, an expert on the subject. So, if it's safety you are worried about, then don't. The kids of today, and tomorrow, know what is out there, and how to stop the minor @CAPS3. So, why don't we recap what we learned today. Are computers helpful and the best way to go for communication? Yes, they are. What is the best way to learn now things easily? I believe the correct answer is computers. What are safe even if some don't agree. It wasn't phones... no, not television... oh yes computers! I see why you might think no, they should be outside, well let me tell you, cellphones and t.v. will keep them from that anyway. At least computers don't rot your brain. Well, I have done my part. I support computers, and their advancement. But it isn't up to me, is it? No, it's not. So please do your part by spreading the word. It's the right thing to do. You know that you want to!""",6.0,5.0,5.0,6.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,27.0
6788,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist because he first didn’t know where he was going and took directions from people that he wasn’t really sure about. It was hot he was running out of water he had no idea where he was there were snakes. His water was running out. there were no sings he kept thinking that he would never take directions from an old guys and that he would stick to the future.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
6164,3,"The cyclist lost hope because he was in the California desserts in June. The cyclist started to lose hope because there was a rusty water pump that pumped out battery-acid tasting water. When he said the sign “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit”, was very cautious. The cyclist thought for sure that he was going to die out there. The cyclist also felt lonely because in the text it says, “There was no one in sight, not a building, car, or structure of any kind. The cyclist was in the California desert and that made him think he was going to die out there.",2.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
4553,2,"Have you ever had a book, movie, or magazine offend you? Have you ever wished that no one else will ever have to read it? Should those offensive materials be removed from libraries? I don't think they should. The books, movies, and other materials should be marked saying that they @MONTH1 be found offensive.      From my own experience I know how easily one can be offended by a book or movie. Many times I have read a book that has completely contradicted my religion. Most times I will ignore it and move on to a better book or movie. Sometimes it is harder to ignore. I always try to forget and move forward with my life, as others should do.      Have you ever read the book The @CAPS1? If you have you are aware that there are some ideas in this book that bring up many controversies. One example from the book would be when they kill some of the children. Most people, like myself, do not agree with this idea. They think that it is wrong. Again some people @MONTH1 try to get this book banned, but it is still a wonderful literature.     As you @MONTH1 have seen in the media lately, many people are trying to get the book @CAPS2 @CAPS3 removed from schools. Some people have found the book as offensive because it repeatedly refers to native americans by a more profound word. The law has not passed yet and has remained in schools. The law hasnt passed because it does not affect everyone. Some people @MONTH1 not find this offensive. Therefore it was not removed.      Removing offensive books from libraries is the exact same thing. Some people @MONTH1 find the books offensive while others @MONTH1 not. Removing the books from everyone's reach would be appauling. The book @MONTH1 only be offensive to one race or religion. Why not simply put a warning label for that race or religion? That would take care of the problem by putting the decision of reading it and being offended in their hands. Possibly it isnt that the books are offensive to a race or religion, maybe it is to an age group. If that is the problem then the librarians can put those books in the appropriate age section.      I have given reasons from my own experiences, other readings, and my obersavations in the media. I only hope that you consider my ideas. Do not remove the books from the shelf only because it is offensive to one person. Simply put a warning label on the book after a few complaints. This would put the responsibility of being offended in thier hands. Once again I do not think that offensive materials should be removed from our libraries only censored to the people of whom it is offensive",5.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,22.0
10364,4,"“When they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in th spring. when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” I think the author concludes the story with the paragraph is that what happens to his life that he will take the test again. But in the story it talks about. One of the blossoms had fallen off, and carefully Saeng picked it up and smelled it So I think that they take care of there garden and try to make it live in the winter. So thats what I think about the last paragraph “when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring. when the snows melt and the geese return and his hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.”",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
733,1,"Honestly, I totally and absolutely believe that child internet use should be cut down in the @LOCATION2, because of many reasons. And here are just a few of them. First of all, the internet can make people very obese, for example, if your friend was going to a walk to your house, but then decided to @CAPS1 you instead, he is probably not getting a lot of exercise. As a matter of fact, the leading @CAPS2 in @LOCATION1 is no longer cigarettes. It's obesity. Actually @NUM1 @CAPS3 are obese, with that number still rising. Another reason why internet use should be cut down because bullies, hacker, and terrorists. Because. And the some I believe that child in the @LOCATION2",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
13457,5,"In ""Narciso Rodriguez"" by Narciso Rodriguez, many moods were shown and created in the memoir. One mood shown in the memoir is great love. In paragraph three, Narciso wrote, ""In our neighborhood, despite customs elsewhere, all of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship."" @CAPS1 mood described in Narciso's memoir was gratitude. In the final paragraph, the author wrote, ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" A last mood produced in the memoir was pride. In paragraph two, Narciso wrote, ""My parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their rich culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today (and for which I am eternally grateful). Many positive emotions were created by Narciso Rodriguez in his great family memoir.",3.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
12787,5,"The mood of the author in the memoir are grateful and thankful. Narciso life seem original like others would have. It was a simple house they started, turned to a warmth home. Narciso appreciated his parents brought them to this land, Cuba, selflessly care for their children for a better life. Although they is struggling but they are have happiness. His parents often welcome neighbors and relatives to join the dining. family to him that he be learned is not just his parents, sisters and brothers. It's neighbor surround you and treat you with respect like a family. This is how Narciso Rodriguez felt of worthy to have a home like that. He felt grateful and thankful for his parents love and sacrifice. He admired for his parents strength and perseverance. He'll never forget the gracious neighborhood brought him memories and his parents turned this simple house into a home.",2.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
15131,6,"The obstacles faced by the builders of the Empire State Building by attempting dirigibles to dock there were to many to predicte. The obstacles faced by dirigibles to dock there were because of many variables such as climite, Buildings and most of all the dirigibles them selfs.The climite as said in paragraph @NUM1 consisted with dangerouse and uncontraiable winds and the reason was because of the Empire State building itself. The urban areas around consited of sharp hull breaching spires and due to the winds it made a hull breach @NUM2 times more likely.Finaly there constrousion. Dirigibles were made with steel fram wrapped in cotton and filled with hydrogen to make it lighter unfortuntly the hydrogen with highly flamable.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
6615,3,"The cyclist and his journey in Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed limit were impacted by the setting. The “deserts of California in June” caused him to be weary very easily. The terrain change from the flat road to hills made him feel less confident because he felt the road sign was taunting him by saying DO NOT Exceed 55 mph. He could only go @NUM1. Finally, the large snake created an obstacle for him by blocking the majority of pavement in front of the cyclist. All of these features affected the cyclist in some way.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
12978,5,"This passag has a very calm and happy mood. He is looking back on his childhood and the memories. He talked about the cheerful house, people and neighborhood. You could picture the house and smell the aromas. Narciso set a very nice setting and tone that the entire passage was lifted in energy. You could tell he was passionate about what she was writing. He showed a real admiration for his childhood and the people he shared it with. The way he felt about her childhood was potrayed beautifully in this piece and that really helped the reader get into the happiness and community like feel. Her gratefullness potrayed into the mood and made the entire piece fun to read.",2.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
289,1,"Dear @CAPS1, The effect that computers have on people is not a positive one. I think people spend way too much time on computers, some information on computers is inaccurate, there are still telephones and cellphones that people can use fir communication. A majority of peoples' time is spent on the computer. Whether its playing games, checking @CAPS2-mail, or even working, peoples' valuable time is getting used up. This time could be used by doing more important things such as being with friends and family, being outside with nature or exercising. Being on the computer insteads of exercising has had a huge effect on people. Some people are overweight because they eat and then do not exercise after. My sister works on the all day and she says @NUM1 or @NUM2 ladies at her work are un healthy because all they do is go on the the computer and eat granola bars, wich are usually healthy. If others spent at least a half an hour being outside to @CAPS3 some fresh air instead of using a computer most of them would feel a lot better. My doctor always used to tell me and my brother, ""@CAPS3 out and play an hour a day!"" This is true, and I strongly encourage people to go outside and do an activity as opposed to playing on the computer. The computer is used a lot for researching. Some of the information on the computer is very helpful, but you can never really know what information is inaccurate. At least when you research using a book or encyclopedia, you can trust those sources. What if you had to do a report and you could only use the internet, how would you be able to tell if the information is trustworthy? Sure, computers also teach hand-eye coordination by playing video games, but when in real life, will you need to know how to shoot a dragon or dodge candy that's falling from the sky? This is just an example of unneeded information and skills that keeps people wanting to go back on the computer. Another thing you can do on the computer is communicte with others. When computers weren't invented or even that advanced, people were more than happy to give one another a call. Now with computers, people @CAPS2-mail, instant message, or even skype; a webcam website. What even happened to cellphones, you can take.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
10117,4,"The author concludes the story with this parapraph because it ties it all together. I think that the author uses. it also to say that in the spring she will pass the test. I really like the part when she says ""…in the spring, when the snows melt…."" I like that because it explains what she wants and how she puts her mind to it.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
1049,1,"Dear edditer of my local newspaper In my opinion computers have a positive effect on people. I support the advances in technology. I believe @CAPS1 is a positive thing because @CAPS1 teaches hand-eye coordination, gives people the ability to learn about far away places and people, and even allows us to talk online with others. In the following poragraphs I will share with you my opinions and why they are the right opinions for all to believe in. Firstly hand-eye coordination plays a big part in our lives, many of us do sports. Now sports isn't just about being the best @CAPS1's about getting better and doing your best. Sports take alot of practice, and are way is computer games though I bet you didn't know @CAPS1, these games help you develope hand-eye coordination. Defeating these monsters and such really helps you in sports. Catching and throwing is a big part in alot of sports and thats all hand-eye coordination, and where do you think you get @CAPS1 from practice and computer games. So next time your on the computer play som games and that will be like practicing for sports and will help you devolop the hand-eye coordination you need to suceed in a sport. Secondly, @CAPS2 in favor for computer use is because @CAPS1 gives us the oppurtunity to learn about places and people from all around the world. Think about @CAPS1 before computers if you want to know something you might have to locate all around for a book that tells you @CAPS1, @CAPS1 could take, now you type what you want to know or google and bing theres your answer. This ability to quickly find what your looking for allows you more freedom to learn and spend other precious time doing other things you want to do then take the to locate and read the right book. As you can see this is a ability and can be a big help when you need to know something fast. So help you yourself and use computers make life easyer. Thirdly computers are a way to communicate they can let you talk to people all around the, when you might and usaly be able do. This is a great way to stay in contact wen people move, go away on a buisness trip go on vacation, or even to meet new people. Say you cany get a hold of someone because there phone is off and its important you talk to them you could email them or if there online and ahave @CAPS3.M. you could @CAPS2(instant message) them. This would save you the hessle of having to keep calling him. Also if you want to see what there doing or where they are you could us a webcome and see them instead of just talking to them. As this paragraph shows internet and computers open more then ever before. As the I wrote above, I showed not even a fraction of what computers are good for. My reasons for computers being more of positive thing, ever a negitive thing are as followed; they help us with learning things that before we couldn't, communicate with others, and help us develope hand eye coordination. I can only hope that as I write my conclusion, ""that my opinions were heard and that this letter has helped all see why computers are a great thing, not a bad one.",4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,21.0
901,1,"Dear local news paper, In @CAPS1 oppinion I think that those who makes compiuters should make up an times added to the compiuters. There should be a law that people has to go out and exercise before and after then use compiuters finally, I think that childrens should use the compiuter less than the adult fee health reasons. @CAPS1 first oppinion that I think that those who makes compiuters should make timers added to the compiuters to time tha amount of tim people should take depending on what they are doing like when some one is playing a game they spend hours playin instead of doing a diffrent activity. Also like when a person is doing their home work they start getting carried away in taking their time going slow and ends up finishing very bad. @CAPS1 second oppinion that I think that those who makes compiuters should have a law that people has to go out and exersise before and after they use compiuter because there is a big percentage amount of people who are obeast because everyone sits in the sits in the compiuters and starts to eat while they are playing games and watching videos for hours and they dont take a break to go outside and @CAPS1 third and final oppinion that I think that those who makes compiuters should have childrens use the compiuter less than the adults for health reason's because kids are always looking at the compiuters an their eyes are always getting red and then they start to not being able to see as well as they used to then they end up having to need glasses or abetter perpscription glasses. Also becaus kids are usually going into chatting sites and they start to talk to people who they dont know so they end up getting raped or kidnapped by the person that they went to talked to for hours. So local news paper will you make that change for the society and for the childrens? Because I would!",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
15606,6,"In the short story ""The Mooring Mast"" by @ORGANIZATION2, The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. For example they needed a suitable landing area which they could not do very easily. They needed to put a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building, but the architects could not do that with no problem. It took a lot of work. The @CAPS1 says ""The architects could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof."" @CAPS2 they had an idea to add to make it work, would add stress to the building and take it down. The wind pressure had a great deal on that also. The winds were making it hard to keep the Dirigibles stable. They wanted to add weights to hold it down but that wouldn't be good for the people below. The @CAPS1 says ""Could be weighted down in the back with lead weights, but using these at the Empire State Building, where they would be dangling high above pedestrians on the street, was neither practical nor safe. They faced way to many problems.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
13406,5,"the mood the author had created in the memoir is happyness for his home.The author says that family doesn't have to be blood related. the author states, ""Growing up in this enviroment instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relative.""",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
10342,4,She going to take the test agan @CAPS1 she feels like She needs to and She @CAPS2  when the snow melts and geese came back that means She wants to take the in the Spring. ,1.0,,,,,1.0,0.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,3.0
7560,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist because real cyclist know what the speed is for a bike so you don’t need to tell them. If a cyclist needed some dierections they would go to a gas station not to some old person’s house. A real cyclist can go as long as they want before the stop because they are tired. A real cyclist knows haw to do tricks on a bike don’t have to do them over and over again to be able to do them. A real cyclist doesn’t have to train to go into a tourtement and win they must have to practice to be able to win.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
13596,5,The mood the author created was how they were immagrants and they had to adjust the the @CAPS1 way of life but they still celebrated his first birthdays In that very house. They will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice. It was deminstration of how important family and friends are. And that I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home.,1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
9096,4,"  In the article the author concludes the story with Saeng vowing to herself that “in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is bidding, then I will take that test again” because the spring and the hibiscus reminds her of home. For example in the article she gets shaky because she cant say home because she misses it too much. So she finds things that reminds her of it like a plant called dok faeng-noi. It’s not the real plant but she gets it to remind her where she comes from. In conclusion, Saeng finds a plant, she likes the soring because it reminds her home. How about what reminds you of home. Think about it.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
15889,6,"they haD to worry aBoat the. Saftey for the pepole, to keep it still as they DockeD. How they woaD @CAPS1 it anD the posible out comes if something DiD @CAPS2 wrong.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
15643,6,"Turning the mast on the Empire State Building into a dock for dirigibles had many obstacles. There were obstacles like flamable gas in the dirigibles, dangerous to be near a densely populated area, the wind were constantly shifting due to air currents, and it would be dangling high above pedestrians. These obstacles were very difficult to solve.      In the dirigibles, there are filled with hydrogen, and hydrogen is highly flamable if the dirigibles caught on fire. It is also dangerous to be above a very densely populated area because if the dirigible ever failed, it would fall on inocent bystanders. It also is dangerous because the winds shift a lot, and it can get popped by other objects or buildings around the dirigible. Thus, why it is difficult to turn the mast into a loading dock for dirigibles.         Turning the mast on the Empire State Building into a loading dock for dirigibles is very difficult to do because it is not safe.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
13344,5,"In the memoir, the author creates a loving, caring and friendly mood. He creates this mood by describing the atmosphere of his home. ""Here the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the backdrop to life in our warm home."" The setting of their warm, welcoming home contribute greatly to the mood of the memoir. The author's greatfulness to his parents selflessness and courage also contributes. ""I will never forget how my parents turned the simple house into a home."" His greatfulness creates a thankful mood through paragraph six and seven, ""it was here were I learned the true definition of ""family"""". This quote helps bring out the love in the mood. The warm, loving mood of the memoir really helps the authors point get across in a meaningful way.",3.0,,,,,3.0,4.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
10505,4,"Saeng is trying to say that when the time comes again that she will take the test. The author concludes the story with this because it leaves you wondering about what will happen the next time she takes the test. The auther also does this to show that you should never quit like if the flower can survive winter then she will be able to survive that test. Also the author is saying that when the seasons change, things change. She was going to give up because she failed the test but she seen that plant surviving through the harsh weathers and that gave her more confidence. Also she cherished the plant because she wants to see it budding because her and her mother spent quality time dve to this plant she had.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
9541,4,"The author concludes this story with the paragraph because she is proving how something from a memory can make someone determined. For example, saeng failed her driver’s test but upon reaching the hibiscus plant, it reminded her of her old home. Also, while she is planting the plant, she sees the geese with a new familiarity. This combined makes her determined to complete her test because having two reminders of both homes, it comforts her to know that she can adapt easily and treasure her memories as well.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
3289,2,"In my opinion i don't really think certain items should be romoved from the library. I think this because many people have different kinds of interests in many things they love doing. In my personal opinion I never remove anything from a library because I know their are alot of people with many interests. At the same time I do understand some of the items should be removed from the library, beacuse they could not appropriate for childrern. If we removed cerain items from the library people would get mad.      I think no item should be removed from the library because many people are interested in many things. There are many ways we can arrange the library by sections so that certain books or topics are in one area, and others are in another area. We can aslo make sure that no under age kid can go to an adult area. If we don't remove nothing from the library we would have alot of people coming. In the other hand if we removed a certain type of books, people would get mad and not come to the library. If that happens smaller amounts of people will come.      In my personal opinion no item should be removed from the library because many people  have many interesting in many topics in the library. If we remove a certain item from the library then we would loose a certain amount of people. Thats why we should not remove anything from the library to provent the decrease of people coming to the library. Like I said many people have many intersts in many things and they deservie to enjoy them in the library.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
4126,2,"Can literature, which is the basis of civilization, be censored?  Can you take these ideas away from those who wish to think them?  I think not, for it would be a futile endeavor to even attempt. To keep something as important as written word away from the culture of the people, would be one of the highest crimes against humanity and could not rightly be condoned, in my mind.      Not only would this attempt be a futile (for the people know ways to extract information) it would be downright idiotic of the 'administration' to do so.  I will concede that there are explicit materials out there that are not suitable for children or even adolescents, but that is where the parent should step in by setting guidelines and positive examples which their children feel the need to follow.  Not feel that they 'have' to, but feel that they 'need' to.  If parents cannot take control and decide what is appropriate for their children, then in my mind, they are not doing their first and foremost job as a parent that is to protect the child.  Some @MONTH1 say that the censorship of culture is protecting the children, but I say that this is not so.  I believe censorship is a lousy excuse so that parents and upper government officials have to do less work.     If every piece of written, filmed, or recorded work, that was offensve only one person, was thrown out on that basis, there would be none.  There has never been a piece of literature, film, or music that has not offended someone in some way, whether it be spiritually, ethnically, or morally.  The fact is that people cannot exist without strife and misery, and whatever people can do to cause that strife and misery, they will.   People find all sorts of ways to do it, whether it be war, discrimination, media, or just downright obstinance, they will find a way to offend their selected party.     I personally am appalled at the aspect of censorship, for if a person cannot speak his mind, then is he more than a mindless homunculi?  Created and controlled by the government surrounding him.  Made their slave through ignorance.  If in a society I  cannot say what I need to say then I do not wish to live in that society, for it is nothing but a horrible image of civilization.     In short I do not believe that libraries should be censored, rather that parents should pay more attention to their children and dependents.  If a person is offended by a certain thing, then it is their absolute right to not take part in whatever it @MONTH1 be, but these afflicted peoples have absolutely NO right to say what I @MONTH1 or @MONTH1 not read!  If this offends anyone, then I apologize, but at least you knew enough (through your education by media) to be offended and not just another mindless sheep",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
15580,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. In paragraph @NUM1 the author States ""The architects could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the @ORGANIZATION2 ing's flat roof."" This was true because it would ""add stress to the buildings frame. Also paragraph @NUM2 states ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself."" There were violent air currents, and landing techniques weren't promising. The builders had to use much caution because the idea of having a dirigible land at that height was neither practicle or safe.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
7432,3,"In the story the cyclist explains how the road goes from good to bad: An example,“ Rough road ahead: Do not exceed Posted Speed limit. Also the dry.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
3577,2,"Many people have many different thoughts and beliefs. Some people @MONTH1 believe that a movie or song needs to be removed, but others @MONTH1 disagree, and nobody wants the things they enjoy to be taken away.     If there was a book on a shelf in a bookstore that you didn't agree with and thought should be removed, and you removed it, then you are taking away from someone who @MONTH1 enjoy that book. If everyone removed things from life that they didn't enjoy, then there would be very little to enjoy.    For example, I personally love horror movies. I love the thrill you get from a horror movie and how they can make you jump even though it's just a movie screen. I'm sure there are people in this world who think horror movies are wrong. If those people were allowed to just remove them forever, I, and many other people, would be sadly dissapointed. I also love video games. Video games are a huge part of my life, and I know for a fact that there are people who highly disagree with some of the content of them. If people could take video games away because they didn't agree with them, i would be crushed.     I am also aware that people @MONTH1 just be worried about their children watching movies, listening to songs, or reading books that are not appropriate for them. I understand that the parents want their children to be supervised, but removing the books, movies and songs is not exactly the answer. Movies and books can easily be censored. Many movies and songs have language filters and some movie programs now have parental options that allow the parents to decide what movies they want to allow their children to watch. Parents can also supervise their children when they download music onto an ipod or phone, and depending on where they are bought, books and magazine's @MONTH1 require parental consent. Video games also require parental consent depending on the rating of the game.      We can't just go around removing everything we dont like, because it is not fair to those who @MONTH1 like it. We live in a world with many different ideas, thoughts and beliefs, and we all need equal right to share them",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
1561,1,"Dear Local @CAPS1, @CAPS2 do you feel about computers? Are they good or are they bad? I strongly believe that computers are bad and people spend to much time on them. I'd much rather spend time outside where I can excercise; @CAPS3't you? Computers are a waste of time and they keep family and friends from spending time together. Finally, computers can be very dangerous. People could be lying and you @CAPS3't know it. To start off, computers take away from excercising and spending time outside. I know if I had to choose between looking at a boring computer screen all day and going out for a run; I'd choose the run anyday. Computers don't keep people fit and healthy so they should find something else to do instead. I've observed that the average teen spends @NUM1 to @NUM2 hours a day on the computer. That's @NUM1 to @NUM2 hours they could be excercising or playing outside. For example, walking the dog, or kicking the soccer ball around. You see, there are many things you can do other than going on the computer. Further more, computers cut into quality time with friends and family. I know you can video chat and instent message them, but @CAPS3't you rather spend time with them in person? Too many kids are on the computer so much they don't know what's going on in their mom or dads lives. Theres is a lot of things kids can do with their friends and families instead of using the computer. They could play a board game, watch a movie, and much more. I garentee they will enjoy these activities more then staring at a computer screen for @NUM5 hours. Finally, computers are extremly dangerous. People have been killed because they don't know who they are talking to. Kids go on myspace and put up pictures and posts, but they don't realize that everyone can see what they said. Once they put something out there they cannot take it away. It's also dangerous because it someone is applying to a school that school can see what they put up and can decline the person from college. I hope you agree with me when I say computers are bad. They keep people from excercising, spending time with friends/family, and are very dangerous. In my opinion we should get rid of computers in every house.",4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
9437,4,"Saeng was taking a test and she didn’t quite pass it She was afraid to tell to her mother but she has to tell her anyway. Her mother got upset because she didn’t pass it. Saeng knows  that right after winter's over, She’ll be taking that same test again and she hoped she will pass it this time.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
15995,6,"In the exerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by @ORGANIZATION2, the builders faced obstacles in an attempt as to allowing dirigibles to dock. One example of an obstacle that the builders had to face was how to attach the mooring mast on top of the building. In paragraph nine it says, ""The architects could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof."" They had to come up with a safe way to attach it. Another example of an obstacle was that they had to strength and modified the building because in paragraph nine it stated that ""A thousand foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame."" The last example was in paragraph nine when they explained that ""The stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation, which was nearly eleven hundren feet below."" The Stress might be so much for the building that it could cause the building to collapse. In the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon @ORGANIZATION2 the builders faced many obstacles as to allowing dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building in New York City.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
513,1,"Dear Newspaper @CAPS1, I am writing this letter on behalf of all the busy people in our country. We have come to the conclusion that we need, not want, but need computers in our life. First, we need them to communicate to other people. Second, we need computers to do research for school and work. Lastly, us kids need computers to type essays, prompts, or papers for each class. Communication is very important in everyday life. For instance, I have a grandma that lives in @LOCATION1. I only get to see her once or twice a year in person. Throughout the entire year, I video chat with her through @CAPS3 computer because it is a whole lot easier than flying there. Without computers to video chat with @CAPS3 grandma, I have no communication with her they one or two times a year. Using a computer for communication is extremly helpful it allows you to do so many things without travelling for, like video chatting. Another reason why computers are a neccessity in our is because reseach for and easier. Many kids nowadays have so much homework and spend on the internet. For I myself, that I. The internet is a quick way to get the reseach. Plus, the research I have found is just as accurate as a book from a library. Computers are absolutly needed when kids have a load of homework and projects that need to be researched. Thinks when the time a to, kids have to type up essays and prompts that its unimaginable. Just in the @DATE1 I had to type on english, essay and a fluently paragraph. Final grade @CAPS2 I did not type it, on a computer. Typing things on the computer cames out of school also, whole @CAPS3 dad is frequently typing up and he is also typing up essays for his company. Many things nowadays in order to be perfect, have to be written up on the computer or you will not get the result you were hoping for. In conclusion, computers are modern devices and you are going to have to live with it. Computers provide great communication with everyone around or even across the country. Also, they make research for school become a lot more efficent. Finally, computers type papers and essays up faster. Computers are a neccessity for living.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
6524,3,"The features of the setting greatly impacted the cyclist. First the setting at the middle of the story was empty and no place to get water. This filled the cyclist with doubt and despair, he/she thought they would die. The setting also made the cyclist thirsty because of the extreme heat. Finally the cyclist was filled with regret because they regretted listening to the old men because the cyclist didn’t make it where he/she wanted to go.",1.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
7617,3,"This would be a hard risk to begin with, but the cycalist is taking it in the desert. As we all know, the desert can get boiling hot, so a bike ride could get enjoyable quickly. Also, when the only thing you see for miles is rode, sand and an empty factory, your moral can easily dray quickly. It’s just an overall way setting to give lost in.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
6246,3,"The cyclist is dehydrated. He has lack of water for a significant distance before he realizes “that the old men would have been right,had he been riding,” before the last word war.” But any “town” he rode into, was just a run down, deserted, and abandoned piece of desert. He says,“It was a sad, hopeless, laugh, mind you, but at leas I still had the energy to feel sorry for myself.” @CAPS1 that he was getting more and more dehydrated, but was not quite ready to die. He still had enough energy to keep going, But “hope was fading.” Then all at once after climbing a large hill he gains all hope back. He sees “Gary and Wilber’s fish camp” The rider is safe now, he stumbles into the modern looking bathroom and drinks from the sink. He is now safe, ready to ride, and avoid all men who haven’t moved from their front porches in years.",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
10041,4,"She wanted to learn, and do more things. She loved the way the plants looked at the store. Her mother got the plant, went home, and they started planting it. The daughter loved the plant very much. And she said that next year I’ll grew a plant as wonderful as the oh her mom was growing.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
348,1,"Dear newspaper, @CAPS1 people think that computers are a waste of time and that they are dangerous. Yes computers can be dangerous but they can also help you in @CAPS1 diffrent ways. Such as paying bills on line or planin vacation and even attending collage classes. For @CAPS1 people bills are a strugle. They are an incovenienc and there are way to @CAPS1 of them. If you think about it @CAPS1 people work all day on some time all night, wouldn't it be nice to come home and have all your bills payed? Well one way you can do that is from a computers, computers have @CAPS1 programs that can help you pay your bills faster so that when you come home you can relax and enjy you free time. Computers are also good for planing vactions. @CAPS1 people each year use on line programs to plan there vacations and trips, for example my family and I planed a trip to @LOCATION1 in the @DATE1 of @NUM1. When we get to the airport we had first class tikets and a ride wateing when we got of the plain that @DATE1 was the best so far. Going into a new generation @CAPS1 people are starting to take on line colleg classes do to the fact that they work or have a kid at home these @CAPS2 are good for people with jobs because they are short and you learn alot. A computer is very helpful for taking these classes because if you did not have one it would incible you from taking the class. A computer is a great thing to have for all these things. So if your a mother of a worker and you would like to go back to school you should consider taking on line colleg classes. And if your family wants a vacation you should try out one of the @CAPS1 programs the enternet has for travling.",5.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,23.0
9749,4,"ThE author concludEs the story with this paragraph bEcausE mEans that whEn thE shovEl grow again in the spring, whEn thE snow mElts and the gEEsE rEturn and this hibiscus is budding shE will takE thE tEst again. So shE will wait until thE nExt spring to takE thE tEst..",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
929,1,"Dear @CAPS1, I believe computers are a huge benefit to society. I myself have a computer; it is very important and useful to me. Over @PERCENT1 of the families in our town own at least one computer. Computers are a great source of information. They also allow you to talk to people, even if they are far away. They are also very convenient and easy to use, in mu opinion. Based on these positives, @CAPS3't you agree with my opinion? Computers are a great source of information. Unlike books, which you must find and buy, there is an enormous amount of information just a mouse click away! With computers, you can learn about far away places and people without having to visit or talk to them. Let me compare this to a book. Let's say you wanted to do research on @PERSON1. You would have to go to the library and search for a book about him. And what would you do if you couldn't find one about him? With a computers you could type ""@CAPS2 of @PERSON1"" into a search engine and receive of information in under a minute! I love saving time, and computers help me do that. They also augment the information I use. Another astounding development in computer technology is that you can talk to other, no matter where their location is. Email is extremely faster than writing a letter. having to pay to travel. Who @CAPS3't like that? Computers are very convenient. You can surf the internet, talk to people, and much more from the comfort of your bedroom. There are jobs that you can do from home on a computer. No need to go anywhere to work. My uncle is one of those people. He is s stockbroker, and operates his whole job from the computer in his house. It is a convenient and a well-paying job. I asked him what he thought of his job. He said, ""I love my job because I can work when I want to work, and from the comfort of my home."" @CAPS3't you want to have his job? I would most definately. In conclusion, computers are very beneficial to us. Did you know computers were first invented by @ORGANIZATION1 to perform calculations that were very long? Look at what they have involved into @DATE1. They bring us information at amazing speeds. They let us talk to people all over the world. They are very convenient. These are major benefits to society, and everybody should embrace computers.",5.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
1545,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, I am aware that many people are stateing that people spend too much time on computers and not getting enuff exercise well I have that their are a lot of people useing computers and they are gettiing enuff use. Im going to explane why within the most few paragraphs. First I would like to start off by saying its good that people are into computers and working with them because that books their learning activities and they learn new thinngs and it will help them be sucessfull in life, people play games, cross word puzzles, riddles, and many more. Same use the internet for ingredence, car parts, ect. Next, useing computers is very helpful to the human race because it will effect students school, parents/guardians/teens. It will effect and lots of schools are useing computers now and exspecialy students to do their. It effects parents, beca use it will sucess them in life and help them find jobs, with their jobs. Finally their getting enuff exercise because their going to bed, their eating, they go to school, work, or do something for the day that involves walking. Nobody just sits home and does nothing those days. Theirs always something to do or a place to go. Well I hope you think about what I told you and take it into consideration. Thank you for your time, and just remember your job is done on computer too.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
4192,2,"I believe books, music, movies, magazines, and etc. should be removed from the lilbrary if they are offensive. Some peole take things wrong and lilbraries could have issuses. Also keeps customers happy and it will get ou more guests daily. Lastly, it might let someone feel better about themselves.   First, some people will take things wrong and lilbraries will have issuses. If someone comes into the lilbray in feel its something in the lilbrary that is offensive you can get a lawsuite. Also it could set off anyones mind to feel disrepsected and feel they dnt have to respect the lilbrary because the library isnt respecting them. It can cause plan in someones eyes by making them feel like they arent equal around other people.   Second, it keeps customers happy. If a customer feel that they see something offensive and the lilbrary discards of the object it will make them feel that you respect them. If you keep offensive things in a llbray less people will cum to the lilbrary if they feel they are offended and have no say in if it should be removed. The more people feel home bond the more they will come.   Next, it might let someone feel better. If you walked into the lilbrary and seen something you didnt like in there you would want it removed too. If it didnt get removed you would feel that you are not respected and you will feel not wanted. Lets say someone see something offensive and the lilbrary doesnt remove it and the person took a book out the lilbrary, then never returned it you would lose money because you would have to get new books in stock.   In @CAPS1, there are many ways to resolve problems and resolve issuses without conflict. You can disrespect someone and they might disrespect you back, but when it all come down to it you have to give repsect to get it. somethings help people feel better about themselves and keep there day goin. So before you make your decision thing would you want it done to you",2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
6273,3,"The features of setting affects the cyclist because the setting then you won’t had, lots on hills. Also there was no water. For example, in the story He says in was were hilly area. Also he says that there are no buliding he is all by him self which @MONTH1 make him scared. So the setting affects the cyclist by being a very hot dry cimate with no water and no builiding; and no peole to ask for direcions would make him scared and lost and fearful of what is going to happen to him.",1.0,,,,,1.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,2.0
15075,6,"The obstacles the builders had to face where rational, but there are some things you sould think of first, such as peoples safty, aircraft hight limets, and wind. They they thought about how to dock it, How to get the passengers safly to the landing area. What they did work on was smart though, they had the the thing that connects the dirigibles to the dock, the electric winch. They had a baggage, and ticket area. What they thought of was smart, but the other stuff first.",0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,1.0
4066,2,"Libraries have books, magizines, movies, ect.The library is a wonderful place to read in a quite place.It can also be an offensive place to some people.They think they can complane and bikker about it, But should all those activities be removed from the library shelves? But whose oppenion is it anyways.          If I found an offensive book, movie, or magizine on a shelf at a library I would just leave it. Apparently its not a bad thing because if it was they wouldnt have it on a shelf. So if I got offensive by it I wouldnt look at it or pick it up. I mean its that simple.A library is full of well, about everything you would enjoy. Many diffrent people like diffrent books and movies to read and watch, that means the library has a right to put what ever they @MONTH1 want. Even if it is offensive to some people.           With my experences in a library nothing has came across to be offensive to me. Im a kind of person that dosen't care. However I have seeen so books ware the author is making fun of the @CAPS1 people. Also @CAPS2 seen a book ware the author is writting about the black people and how they used to be treated and some of the book has the @PERSON1 in it witch is a major racism to black people.                   It could be a unfair situation to some people that have kids with them and a inapropreate book is on the shelf and they see it. That could be offensive to the children and the parents .Or it could even be in a magizine. But why should the books magizines and ect.. be tooken off the shelfs when its not effensive to all people? If the libraians took all the offensive books off the shelves then there wouldn't be any left. Everyone has diffrent things that can offend them. If you dont like how the book is you can take it to your friend and they can read it or you can just turn it back into the library. You can also talk to the library manager and tell them the issue with the offensive it has given you.      Books, movies, magizines and ect are all in a library. They could be offensive or not. If you think they are then dont look at it or read it. Its that simple get it or dont",3.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
610,1,"Dear @CAPS1 times, @CAPS2 people think that computers are good for socity but I do not. Computer's riskes out weighs the benighits. My first example is my father. My father never turned on a computer in his life and his buisness is doing fine. My father and his father has all of their records in a safe. One of my fathers friends had everything on his computer. When a virus hit it all of his files were gone and along with his records. My father handwrites all of his papers. He says if i need to type something out i'll buy a type writer. Also on things like facebook someone can see everything that another is doing. This is were alot of people pose as someone eles and thus @CAPS2 people get kidnapped or killed. A very good reason is that when people have alot of personal information when a virus hitls that person knows everything about you that you put on. For exampel i was watching a show on discovery channel when a man hacked into a myspace acount and used that persons name to people and try to create a cyder to the pentagon, that person almost got caught but never was. So you can see why my family does not like computers. My family is always at the farm or in the barn working on we have no time to be on the internet the only thing you need it for is school work. What ever happened to the old fasion way no computer, no problems.",3.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
1202,1,"Dear Newspaper I think that computers have a positive effect on people, here are my reasons. You can get in contact with people, if you have a question you can look it up and you can do your job on a computer. I think that these reason will have you positive too. Many people like computers and have one. My first reason is you can get in toch with friends and family. I think this is a good reason because if your grandmother lives in @LOCATION2 you don’t want to drive there every time you want to see her when you live in @LOCATION1. You would use the computer to live chat with her so you wouldent have to drive all the doun there. If you wanted to you could plan a day to go and see her. You would use a computer to get in touch with friends. If you needed to ask them a question about the homework they could answer it. That is my first reason why computers have a positive way on people. My second reason is if you have a computer you can look up questions that you would have. If you needed to know some thing for a big report and none of your friends are up you can look up your computer. Computers can help you so much if you need an answer. If you didet hav a computer if you would be so hard to do stuff. That is why I think that computer can answer your questions. My third reason is you can work on the computer. If your a stay at home mom ya can work on the computer to handle finances. A lot of people work on the computer to save the envirment. When I grow up I’ll probaly work on the computer because it is easer. That is why I think that you can work on the computer. The reason I picked were you can get in tuch with family and friends, you can look up a question that you might have, and you can work on a computer. I hope you have a positive way on computers they help you out. People might think that they not your brain not they don’t help and knoledge you. Many people like and have one. I think that you should have a positive way on computers too.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
3630,2,"There are numerous books and movies which are deemed not appropriate for younger audiences. By marking movies with a rating, and marking books with a specific age group, it helps categorize them.      In our public libraries, all books and movies are settled into one place for everyone to have the ability to check out. There is the ongoing discussion on whether these should be available to everyone. If a child were to check out a book, and it happened to be rated @CAPS1, the parents would most likey become upset with the library for giving the right to the child to check out a rated @CAPS1 movie. There is also the instance where a parent would have the child check out a specific movie with a @CAPS1 rating. In which the library would be harrassed for not letting the child check it out. Furthurmore, should public libraries let certain age groups check out movies/books which are not appropriate? The logical answer concludes to no, they shouldn't. If a child can not see a rated @CAPS1 movie at the theatre, why should they be able to check them out freely at the library? Public libraries should invest in a way to keep underage kids from checking out inapropriate materials. By simply having their age on their library card, there would be a lot of misunderstandings taken care of.      Our public libraries should take it into their own hands, by changing their censorship. It would give them a better name, and give our children a secure place to gain access to these matirials.",3.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
7547,3,"The features in the setting of the essay “Rough Road Ahead Do not exeed the Posted Speed limit” affect the cyclist in a cruel manner. The old man say that the towns are going to be there and they are just not functioning towns. To make the cyclist feel hopeless the setting puts him in a California day in June which is extremely hot and puts in all these unexpected twists. A cruel thing to add in the essay was when it read “The Speed limit was 55 mph. I was doing a water depleting 12 mph” This lowers the cyclists confidence making him seem more worried. Another cruel thing is the author adding a welch’s Grape Juice factory that had been abandoned with “A sandblasted picture of a young boy pouring @NUM1 refreshing glass of juice into his mouth"" totally causing him to lose hope left. These features in setting are cruel.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
15386,6,They @CAPS1 A alot problem with people @CAPS2 about Airship on @CAPS3 @CAPS4 with the @ORGANIZATION1,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
12968,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is warm, grateful, and very palpable to the reader. One mood the author conveys very deeply is that of his love of his family. However, his ""family"" not only consisted of blood relatives, but also of the immigrants living in the neighborhood. He says, ""In our neighborhood, despite customs elsewhere, all of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship."" It is obvious that the author feels very strongly about the good relationships his family had with the other immigrants around them. His mood is warm and compassionate as he talks about how much each one of his community was important to him. The next mood conveyed by the author is gratitude and admiration for his parents. In paragraph @NUM1, he talks about how he will be forever grateful for his parents' sacrifices and their hardwork and the numerous times he has told them of his admiration for their strength and courage. However, he does not feel it is enough and says, ""But, in reality, there is no way to express my gratitude for the spirit of generosity impressed upon me at such an early age and the demonstration of how important family and friends are."" The mood shown in this quote is that of thankfulness, and even a small bit of frustration that he cannot fully express his gratitude towards his parents.",4.0,,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
16449,6,"The people who built the Empire State Building had many problems building it. The one obstacle to their expanded use in New York was the of a suitable landing area. The Empire State Building was going to have a mooring mast at it's top for docking these new airships, which would accommodate passengers on already existing transatlantic routes and new routes that were yet to come.",0.0,,,,,1.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,1.0
4739,2,"I believe that censorship in libraries can be a good thing, but can go too far. Removing movies and magazines that contain pointless offensive material from the shelves could be a good thing. If those are removed I do not think that people would care that much. Removing those small things, however, could grow into a bigger problem. It has to be decided how far is too far when removing objects from the shelves.     It all starts with a bad magazine that has a bad picture of a movie star doing something offensive with text surrounding it being pointlessly judgemental. A parent sees his or her kid reading this at the library and they do not believe it is appropriate so they complain and the magazine is taken off the shelf. Then a movie arises that is offensive and it is taken off the shelf. Pretty soon everyone is comming in with minor complaints about many different things and almost everything has someone who wants it banned.     Even if there was a set limit on what qualifies as able to be banned people would still complain until what they want happens. If the government has all these complaints they might just shut down the libraries to avoid looking over every 'offensive' piece of literature, film, or artwork. The original purpose being to block out offensive meterial ends with the realization that everything is offensive to somebody. Even what might be considered a great piece of work by most could be considered an abomination by some.     In the end a library should not be given the right to censor anything. The things that should be censored are a very small percentage and it is not worth the risk. Books that are offensive to some serve as inspiration to others. Libraries were made to give people the chance to be inspired. The library should not have the right to take inspiration away from the reader's hand.",4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,22.0
4434,2,"I do not believe that these types of books should be taken off of the shelves. Everybody has their likes and dislikes with music, books, movies, magazines, etc. If the reader does not like the book, then the reader will not continue reading the book. If the listener does not enjoy rap music, then they will stop listening and try to find a different kind of music. This topic is about personal opinion and choice. If it was me, then I would say yes to allowing censored materials. I like getting the full effect out of things. I wanna hear the rawness of a song or the anger of a character in a book. I don't want to read and see a bunch of little stars on a censored word. I want to see that word and feel its full effect.          I am actually reading the very controversial book '@CAPS1 of @ORGANIZATION1'. As you @MONTH1 know the author of this book is named @PERSON1. Another thing you @MONTH1 know is the use of the '@CAPS2-word'. This is a very controversial book because he doesn't call colored people black or colored, he calls them the '@CAPS2-word' throughout most of the book. Most people now think this is very racist. But back in @LOCATION1's time it was very commonly said and used in his society. It wasn't racist back in that time, I mean it still was but it wasn't as controversial as it is today. Now critics and some readers don't agree with this term and think the book should not be held in libraries or read at all for that fact. I have to disagree though. I understand why he used the word, it was a common word in his time. If you take that word away from the book, you lose some history of the old south.     People have the freedom of speech to say whatever they want to say, whether that be in written form or verbally said. I honestly say some of these censored words. Most of the time these words are said when I am angry at myself or another person. People can't control what we say, so why should they be able to control what we write or sing? Just a thought. Saying that, on the other hand I can see why people don't want these censored words. Maybe they just don't want their little kid to say a censored word in class to the teacher or to another classmate. That's understandable, but you can't protect your kids from censored words. They are everywhere. From video games, to movies, and even most books now. You cannot control what other people do or say. It is their freedom to do whatever they want.",3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
6091,3,"The features in the setting of ""Rough Road ahead"" affect the cyclist. First of all, the weather causes most of his problems. Since the cyclist was biking in a california desert in June the temperature had to be in the @NUM1's. This causes him to become dehydrated, which is evident when he states, ""I had been hitting my water bottles quite regularly"" The heat therefore causes the cyclist to drive excessively and run out of water, also, the objects the cyclsit comes across on his journey affect him. For example, while riding on a rough path, ""a ridiculously large snake blocked the majority of the pavement in front of me."" This saves the biker progress and most likely scared him. The cyclsit is greatly affected by the features in the story setting.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
11969,5,"The autor created a good mood in the memoir because, when you think about how sticked those people were, you have a warm feeling inside.The parents left their country and came in another without any knowledge of her language and her culture, they had to start over their lives with the job they could find because they wanted a good life for their child. They handed a hand to people who were in need, considered all their neighbors as family and they taught their children the real definition of ""family""",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
12779,5,"The author of this memoir creates a warm, loving, lively and festive mood as he describes his home. A few times the author uses ""warm"" to describe the home, for example he says ""warmth of the kitchen."" @CAPS1 reads this memoir gets the feeling it's a bright and warm place. The reader also gets the feeling that everybody is loving and friendly, especially as the author talks about how immigrants from different places came together and were great friends. He also says his parents ""always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family"". @PERSON1 paints a picture of a home filled with love. There was also a lot of life at his house. ""Endless celebrations [...] formed the backdropto life in our warm house. He also wrote that 'Cuban feasts [...] always filled the air with not just scent and music but life."" From reading his memoir we get the feeling that his home was a great place to be during his childhood,he created a warm, inviting, and festive mood.",3.0,,,,,4.0,4.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
3943,2,"What I do think is that they should keep everything in the library. Some people like to stay and read the newspaper and listen to music while out in the library. If you do think it's offensive, then don't read it or just pick out another book. Everybody has their own ideas on a library and if they want their voices heard let them speak it out.      What I think about all this stuff in the library these days are good for the kids so they can learn faster and have a lot more to look forward to when they do get older. My own experiences in the library that I do see that there is a lot more people in the library and there is a lot more you can do instead of reading books most of the time. You can read magazines or newspapers to pass the time when no one is home or to hang out with, and it does get boring just reading books so try something different for a little while then go back reading the book that you did start with and wanted to take a break from.      Then other people have their own voice to say something if they don't want it in their library. Some of my observations that I have seen were not really good. I've seen some protesters in front of the libraries and I have seen them close down because of it. But people sometime can take it to far and do sometimes burn it to the ground. I have seen people cry over it and it makes me really upset that I want to do something to help them but I really can't do nothing.      The most valueable thing is the kids and young children that read the books. What if someone burn down you home, this is how these kids feel when you close down the most safe place to them? They have the biggest voice of everybody put together. That if you do something that make them feel better that would be really good to them. That they have not done anything to deserve this kind of mess that we put them through. It is very difficult to have somewhere to go to read but there is nowhere to go.      If you don't want to be quiet then let your voice be heard aroud the world and have the freedom to let it come out. You have three diffenent voices your own, other people that do or don't agree and you have your children. So which one are you going to listen to? When you have a choice and you have to make it and hope you make the right one",3.0,3.0,3.0,5.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
614,1,"Dear @CAPS1, I am writing to you to inform you that I agree with the followings said on the writing prompt. First, I will be talking about how people  use computer too much. Secondly, I would talk about people who talk online way too much. Lstly, I would say spending to much time on their computers. To start, people that use computers too much. First, people like to go on things such as myspace, secondly people like playing online games. ALstly, some people like to gosep to others online. For example, if you go to soemones house you are always going to see a young kid or a parent online somewhere or playing online gmaes. Also, peopel talk online way too much. First, they go to face book all the time. Secondly, they got ,myspace which you can get your identity stolen. Lastly, kids love to go on myspace it's the smae as myspace. for example, peopel might come to you and say do you have a so and so and sya can I get your eamail address. Certainly, spoending too much time on their computers is bad. first, kids might have problems online and to keep the problem to get worst. Secondly, might be argueing with a friend. Lastly, might nit be active but live playing or going other online websites. So @CAPS1 did you start to agree with why people should get active outside and have fun. In conclusion, this was why I agreed with beign active because being on the computer all day would get your and hard use too being on the computer @NUM1. ",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,16.0
4039,2,"Ever went to the library and seen a book that was to graphic for a certain section. When little kids came into the library does it seem like they should stay away from that section. Well censorship should be in librarys now a days. Many children are seeing bad material at too young of an age.  Due to seeing this they @MONTH1 get bad ideas and possibly lead them the wrong way in life.     In librarys they have many books that are too mature for young children. They should have a restricted section in the librarys that only peolple of age or with parental guidance can pick books, movies, music, games, and magizenes from that section. For example, in video stores they have and adult section that only adults @MONTH1 enter not children. Librarys should be that same way but not with same material in video stores.     Personaly, I have seen children learning bad behaviors from video games, movies, and some books. While these children are young they do not know what is bad for them. So when these kids see the movie stars they envy and video games they enjoy harming other people they will pick up on the violence and do it themselves.     Librarys do need to take these books, movies, games, music, and magazines off of the shelves. If they do not then they should make a place children can not get ahold of these materals that can affect judgement. So when taking a younger child ta a library go in with and walk with them. It will save our kids of the next generation from violence and all other wrong doing habbits in these books, games, magazines, and music.     As long as there is not censorship in librarys our children will see these bahaviors and recreate them with other friends thinking thats its okay to do. Yes, once again I say censorship should be in librarys of any thing of certain age groups or if it is offencive. Do not let young kids walk alone in librarys so they can come across the wrong material for their age.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
13555,5,"In this memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez by The blue prints of Our Lives, the author sets a deep and powerful mood to the setting. Throught this memoir we feel happy as he explains his culture, for example as it states in paragraph (@NUM1) ""Here the innocense of childhood, the congregation of family and friends and endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the backdrop to life in our warm home's."" @CAPS1 the author uses warm words that fill our heart's. For example in paragraph (@NUM2) it state's ""But in reality there is no way to express my grattitude for the spirit of generosity impressed upon me at such an early age. And @CAPS2 this author uses @CAPS3 to use further information which explains Narciso's feeling towards certain childhood memories. Such as the cuban culture. These are three examples of how the author sets the mood in this memoir.",2.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
1311,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3: @CAPS4 people are skeptic on whether or not computers benefit people. I strongly believe that computers do indeed benefit humanity for it allows people to talk online with loved ones and friends across the globe, and learn about those foreign places. Computers don't take away from lifes, but shows it through fascinating synthetics. Computers allow people of all ages to interact with others over the world-wide web. Sometimes it's better to meet with people in person, but that isn't always the case. What @CAPS5 you have relatives or friends in a different country? The internet is the best way to contact those people. Also, what @CAPS5 you are in a band or a group, and need to contact them while you are out of town? Social sites like facebook or myspace allow the group members to talk and discuss matters at the hotel or wherever he @MONTH1 be. In addition to both of these reasons, students can obtain missing work and email the teacher from his household. This allows the pupil to obtain his lesson and catch up on anything he or she has missed. The technological breakthrough of the @DATE1 known as computers allow interaction with other people as well as learn of distant lands. @CAPS4 people including myself, want some culture in their lives, and wander about this lively planet we call earth and find out whats out there, but can not acheive said goal. The computer saves us time and money to do these things. All we have to do is open a search bar, type in a word, and boom, we are looking at @LOCATION2, @LOCATION3, or even the fields of @LOCATION1. Any place you want is at your. In addition to this, @CAPS5 a new tourist attraction comes to be, whether it is an amusant park, a monument, or a historical find, the internet can show us this. We can see things we would be seeing @CAPS5 we were present at the place, but instead on a monitor in your home. The computer allows you to do @CAPS4 things without actually encountering their happenings. In conclusion, computers are helpful for they allow us to preform things we could not do under certain circumstances, like talking to people over the internet, or learning of foreign countries. Not everyone can do these things, but everyone who has a computer can.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
3527,2,"There are plenty of books that people don't want their children reading. Books such as '@CAPS1 @CAPS2 @PERSON1' is a book I had read and it was very out there and straight forward. But I would have to disagree I think those books deserve to be read. It shows kids that not everything is perfect.      People complain about how they think books are bad or things people say on @CAPS3 or in music is bad but if you don't want to listen to them, don't let your kids listen to it. If parents are so worried about what kids are reading or learning because of the world we live in now, lock them up. But I do have to agree with one thing, there are alot of bad things in muic and magazines but I think it can be avoided and not be caused to crupt a kid. I'm very into music and some music I dont listen to because of the things in it but I dont let that music or magazines change my option on things. I dont think people should be able to take books of the shelfs becaue it doesnt give other students or people to read them. Some people get inspired by books about drugs, not like to use them but to know that there are people out there that have overcome stitutions just like them. I like reading books about teenage problems and like to know all the different ways people have overcome them and see how they live. If people can get offended off of a book or movie I don't think they have a right to take that away. I think people that feel offended by books, magazines, and movies should stay away from them if they are offensive to them, because everyone has an option and not everyone thinks the same things.      With all the bad or good movies or books out there, I'm certain someone at least feels offended by one or two books or movies but that isn't a reason to want to take it down. Because once you do that someone will take a book you thought wasn't offensive and it will make you mad. I think if people stayed away from things that offended them and stayed close to books that they liked we wouldn't have much of a conflict unless you get that picky, always wanting to start a fight person to find something else to be picky about with the books or magazines or movies",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
15058,6,"There were many obstacles in allowing dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building. One problem that was addressed was the fact that dirigibles all over the world were mostly filled with hydrogen, which was flammable. This was a problem because on May 6, 1937 a dirigible was destroyed by fire and the owners of the Empire State building relized ""how much worse that accident could have been if it had taken place of a densely populated area."" (@CAPS1 @NUM1) Another potential problem were the strong wind currents on top of the building, as described in @CAPS1 @NUM2. The concern was that these strong currents would prevent a dirigible from docking, and could possibly blow it into another building. This could puncture the dirigible's material and cause a horrifying accident. The final obstacle that prevented dirigibles from docking on the Empire State Building was the fact that it was against the law. The law stated that ""airships flying to low over urban areas"" was prohibited. There were many obstacles that prevented dirigibles from docking on the Empire State Building.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
3357,2,"Books, movies, music, and even @CAPS1 are all important in this life, and enviorment of ours. They all have a learning process. When you read you learn, when you watch a movie you learn, even when you listen to music you can learn. Weather its about past present or future, everyone has the right to learn it's part of being a citizen.     Speaking of all this I belive just beacuse one book, or one movie makes someone uncomfortable i dont think that you should take that away. Thats not only taking away from your kid, or yourself thats taking away from everyone else. Just like the book huckleberry fin it's a wonderful book i love it because it's about the old days where they still belived in slavery, and there were still some good-hearted people around.     This book to some would be very offensive beacuse of the fact it has the word nigger in it one-hundered and twenty-seven times. In fact last year at my school a mother tried to get it taken out, because she didnt want her son to read it he was actually a mixed boy but thankfully the committee saved it and it's still here. That's our history and everyone needs to learn some of it, weather it's offensive or not.     As well as movies that can and mostly likely is offensive to people, they still should not have that stuff taken off either, like I said earlier thats taking away from everyone else. If you dont wanna see it then dont buy it, or if something that you find innapropriate comes on just change the channel. History is important and I dont think people should keep you from your right as a citizen and deprive you from learning what you wanna learn or need to learn for the future.      Now the music part i can understand, some @MONTH1 be a little innapropiate for younger listeners so like i said before again change the station or dont buy that @CAPS2. Dont deprive people of what they wanna learn, watch or listen to.     People that feel offended or embrassed should be ashamed of them self because that is very selfish, and rude. No one should be ashamed of who they are or any movie that describes the old days in the way it actually happened, if they put it in the nice way then it would all just be a lie. That's why I dont belive in censorship. It should not happen, any book, movie, magazine, @CAPS2 should be available to who wants it",3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
3251,2,"If everyone in the world could permantly take a book, movie,music, etc., off the shelf because they think it is offensive would there be any of those thing left for us to enjoy?      I personally think that if people could do that they would, but is everything someone else finds offensive really offensive to you? No, it might not be, so does that give that person the right to pull it off the shelf permanatly so no one else can read it? I think no one has the right to pull that item off the shelf because of there own opinion of it.     If anyone could do that would there ever be uniqueness in people? I dont think there would be. Just because you think the music a person listens to is offensive does not mean they think the same. Thus it shouldnt be taken away from that person if he/she enjoys listening to it.     On the other hand I understand that some people might listen to music or read books that has offensive language and that they would not want there children hearing or reading that but that does not mean the music or book should be pulled from the shelf. Ask yourself if you would react the same way to a person who uses offensive language what should we do then? You can just take that person out of the world.     So I guess the point im trying to get across is that just because you think its offensive and dont like it doesnt mean everyone in the world thinks that. To end my acticle I want you to think about whats offensive to you @MONTH1 not bee the same for others.",3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
3884,2,"I do belive in censorship, but i do belive that it is not that big of a deal. It should the parants job to block materials that they think is bad for their kids. If it is to bad then it is the parants right to make sure that their kid does not see it.                  My point of view in stoping materials like books, music, movies, and magazines is that some things are not ment to be shown, read, and heard by someone of a yonger age unless they get the ok from their parents.     The views of censorship in my mind is that if someone see something they don't like they want to get rid of it and if is something to wrong then yes it should be censor, but if it could be avoided and is small like a word in a book then I say that people should be a little more understanding of it and try to think past it or try to find another path to take about it.     If you don't like something then maybe you should not read it or listen to it, and if is so bad don't let your kids get involved in it. I have never found a book and readed it and found it affensive or disterbing. I have found books that I don't like or are not good but never have I seen something so bad that I never want any one to read it.      If people are going to censor something I think it should be for a good reason not because they don't like the person or they think their idea is wrong, but for something that is bad about anetirer race or to graphic for a yonge age.     My point in censoring something in my mind is the right way to look at it we see it all the time in the real world people do something because they dont like some one they try some extreame things to get rid of some bad marerial, but in any case is a lot in this world that people should know about and when i do have kids I will decide wether to block something if I wont to and that is how it should be",3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
13197,5,"The mood created by the author In the memoir is a good mood  @CAPS1 knows that her parents moved from Cuba for her, to give her a better life. ""My young parents created our traditional Cuban home."" There trying to give her the life they would have had in Cuba, only better. And @CAPS1 had unselfish family because they moved for her and let her grow up in a good community. And when they say ""All these cultures came together in great solidarity it just makes you feel good that segrigation stoped and people can hang out with others, from different places. Family is always first no matter what even if you dont understand, its always first which is why @CAPS1 creating a happy and good mood in the people reading this because of family.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
1130,1,"Dear Newspaper I disagree with the hole computer thing I think it's just a wast of money and it's a wast of time for kids. That will be the kids will get fat and kids will never want to go out side they will want to play video games, eat junk food. If you stay on the computer for to long, it can make your eyes week and it sometimes can give you canser and you can die from canser or you can get really sick and not die and you will hike @NUM1 sick year of pain. Mostly kids stay on the computer for mores playing stupid games and they will never go out side and they will stay in side for days and never go out side and play with there friends. When they get sick of there games they will want to try and hang out with there friends but they wont be able to they will be to fat and slow. My aunt died from useing a computer to much she had brain cancer and she died she lived for @NUM2 year with the cacer. I felt so bad for my cousin he had to watch his mother die all because she used a computer everyday cause that has her job. Therefor I state that computers should not be used for more than @NUM2 houre a day",2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
10274,4,"I @CAPS1 I @CAPS1 the author concludes the story with the paragraph saying that she’s going to take the test again, to show us that this time she’s goin to pass the test and she’s not going to feel the same way she felt when she didn’t pass. it tell us in “spring when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding"" because thats when she is going to take the test. ",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
9878,4,"The author uses this paragraph to conclude to show she’s going to give the test another try as well as her new surroundings. For example the story says “Almost reluctantly, she realized that many of the things that she had thought of as strange before had become, through the quiet repetition of season upon, almost fimiliar to her now”. Saying that she is getting used to where she is now and wants and is willing to give it a chance. Almost as if she doesn’t find it that bad as she thought at first it being different and not her home and where she was used to being.  ",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
629,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 the ages, technology has constantly been evolving and improving the way we think. From the first simple telephone in the @DATE1's to today's touch-screen iphone. From riding horses to riding extraordinary fast sports cars and hwlet trains. The advances in technology have proven the sky have the limit the invention of planes. We have even reached the moon and left our ! Computers have only become faster and. Although more and more people are using one of our greatest technological advances, computers, believe it doesnt benefit socialy. I veherrertly believe that computers benefit. They have the ability in and teach us what seems like information, second, they have made the could a smaller place through communication. Last, they even have the ability to locate missing people. Computers are constanly helping society. They follow what technology to make life @CAPS3. First of all, computers are a benefit to society because they have the ability to and teach teach us what seems like infinite information. Today, when soneone know/wants to some first place they usually that's light the. This is because engines such as @ORGANIZATION1 have of limits to with much information on the topic being. This has not only made leaving @CAPS3, but has also helped in studying for tests for elementary school. Computers also of for the average. From banking to powerpoint computer with all! For this reason even older such as @PERSON1 find computers weird. Second, computers benefit society becuase they the world smaller through communicates. Sixty years ago, it could relative on the. Today, you can easily video a rective in @LOCATION2 from @LOCATION1 in less that ten seconds. Not only can you talk to grandma or grandpa but you can even see them smile what children can even such as @CAPS4. When there is a they can still talk to warry of. Finally, computers benefit society have the ability to locate missing people. The record earthquale in @LOCATION3. cries of mothers children whom they from. It is to computers that these families were scuniled. On many sites on the internet, @LOCATION3 set up person locators. These locators allowed you to write down your name disaster should over happen. Not only this you family. All they had to do me! Computers have even made our society. What move could. In conclusion, I strongly believe that computers society is because computers contain much informations and programs they have proven the earth is a ""small world after all"" and they have made the world safer. It is that many people are buying computers, so why don't you get one?",5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,23.0
15473,6,"The obstacles that the builders were faced with in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building was that they could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building. Is because it would have added to much stress to the frame of the Empire State Building, which could have caused the collapse over a period of time. So the steel frame of the Empire State Building had to be ""modified and strengthened to accomade this new situation"", as said in the excerpt. After the builders completed framing the Empire State Building up to the eighty-fifth floor, it was now time to do the framing of the rooftop to create an area where the mooring mast would be placed. After the workers completed the framing of the rooftop, they build the mooring mast on to it, now the builders faced the challenge of framing the mooring mass. The builders framed the mooring mast with a skeleton of steel. The builders faced these challenges in the attempt to allow derilibles to dock on the Empire State Building.",0.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
181,1,"Dear Readers of the @ORGANIZATION1, Computers are machines that have been around for @MONTH1 years. With internet, you can do things like play games, research information, and even talk to friends and family, all through a computer. Advances in computer technology are beneficial to @CAPS1 society for several reasons. These includes that computers improve hand-eye coordination, provide abundant information, and allow people to talk online. As said earlier, using a computer can improve hand-eye coordination. In fact, it is known that computers can immensely improve your reflexes. This reminds me of a time when my brother went to an eye doctor and was told that his eyes had trouble focusing. Patrick, my brother, was then literally assigned by the doctor to play computer games to help his hand-eye coordination. As a matter of fact, @PERCENT1 agree that computers can have a gargantuah, positive impact on reflexes and hand-eye coordination. If computers heldful in this way and, in some cases, necessary for your eyes, then why would the use of computers be classified as bad when they are clearly a beneficial factor in @CAPS1 society? Computers are also beneficial because of what huge resource they are. the internet offers so much information for people of all ages who want to learn and thrive. For example, most schools have their students use computers for research. When I say most schoold, I mean @PERCENT2 of schools assign students to research using a computer. Principal of new city @ORGANIZATION2, @PERSON2 says, ""@CAPS1 students use computers at leat every week if not more. They are fantastic resource with endless information."" Computers are getway to countless amounts of knowledge that everyone should have access to. It is well known that almost everyone knows someone who lives far away. I, myself, have friend who lives in @LOCATION1 that I miss very much. When long-distance phone calls are too expensive most of the world and I rely on computers to talk to out far-away friends. Computers are the bridge between @CAPS2; (my @CAPS3 friend) and I. However, computers are not only used long distance. I also use computers to e-mail, instant message, video chat, and just stay connected to family and friends. A local teenage boy, @PERSON1, says. ""I use my computer to stay connected with friends and my family that lives in another county. I don't know what I would do without it."" This means that @PERSON1 and thousands of others rely on computers for communication with friends and Family. Computers are necessary for @MONTH1 reasons. They help people, educate, and connect people. You must have access to a computer in my opinion, in order to thrive in life.",5.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,23.0
10077,4,I’ll think the author tried two say wean it coming two snow melt like @MONTH1 they she will be come back. Author will because in the spring sometime to written a new book.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
7189,3,The fatures of the setting affects the cyclist because in the story the character makes it seem like horrible weather for example when he said “wide rings of dried sweat circled my shirt” this is one way the setting affects the cyclist because it almost like your in the story and you can imagton what the character Is going through because everything is written in details.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
314,1,"I believe computers aren't having a positive effect on people in this time period for some people they’ve really taken over their lives. There are many health concerns that take place in a generation full of computers. Also there is less time in your schedule for more important things when you're adicted to facebook. Also money will always be less when computers come along! Computers can really be dangerous to you health! For example all that typing can lead to arthritis in the hands and fingers in the long run. Did you know, more seizure are induced by compexors than epileptics? Dr. @LOCATION1 is as saying ""People don't cause obesity, computers do"" @CAPS1 also thinks that the majority of the obeisity is caused by an addiction to computer games. Ever been depressed than taken a long nature walk, and felt great? Well a lot of people tell on rely on thier computer when they're down. Computers usually make things worse. When on twitter, facebook, google and you tube all the time its hard to find time for even the most important things. For example if you're a parent your child might feel abandonned if you start caring about the computer more than very little time spent together could turn them to alchohol or smoking. I let you never of a computer like that! Computer can be good way to wind down but they can also become an addiction there when youre addicted to sitting on a computer you forget about the beauty of nature! Money can also contribute to the addiction. For example shopping addictions are a good way to blow money because it's so easy. All you have to do is type in a credit card number which gives you the illusion that youre not spending money, until the bill comes! Another thing is kids websites like webking which you need to pay for you also need to pay for internet and the electricity bill. It's clear to see that computers cause nothing but health problems, less time in your daily schedule and the money out of you pocket. To me computers are just a trouble in our lives.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
7609,3,"In ‘Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit,” a cyclist follows some bad advice, which leads him on a tough ride through the desert with little water. The setting has a large effect on the cyclist because it causes him to be dehydrated, which presents the main conflict of the story. “The water bottles contained only a few tantalizing sips,” the author states when his fresh water supply begins to run out. Another factor the setting presents to the cyclist is the extreme heat of the California desert. This adds to the cyclist thirst and dehydration. The reader can tell it is unpleasantly hot when reading, “wide rings of dried sweat circled my shirt…, that I could drop from heatstroke on a gorgeous day in June…” The rough roads and challenging terrain also present a challenge to the cyclist that slows his advance to Yosemite.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
9830,4,"The author concluded the story with the paragraph to set the sonip theme. In the story, the @CAPS1 represents very important thing to saeng – confidence, beauty, adaptation… some things she can apply to herself, & her memories of her old homeland. She had failed the driving test. Afterwards, she bought the @CAPS1 to comfort her homesickness. I saw the @CAPS1 as a sort of metaphor to Saeng the same @CAPS1, but growing differently in a different area just as she is still the same but in a new home. The significance of the last paragraph is mainly about the @CAPS1 budding. It represents to Saeng her homeland by the @CAPS1 blossoming ,it can represent her love for the homeland. When the author wrote “then I will take that test again” it is referring to the new confidence she @MONTH1 have later when the @CAPS1 blooms (another @CAPS1 /person metaphor)",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
1001,1,"Dear Newspaper, I think people should use computers for spicific reasons. One reason is that many people lose family or to be more spicific lose contact with people. Then when you have a computer for someone else has one then you would be able to see them. For other purposes like wanting to play online with fellow student or friends then you have to use computers. Plus your fingers get a exercise when your typing. Many of us young kids say that myspace and facebook is a bad place. Actually its not because most of your family is on it. Doctors use computers all the time to notife other doctors that something wrong with a patient or give a visual of the bereathing. Workers even use it to see whats going on with the jobs if theres any jobs open so they can take it. Students use it to show what work they have to do when the teachers not there. If i was a capenter of a real estate agent I would have a computer with me. The reason why is that my group would know what houses are avalable to use or thats sold. Or I would give them different house to choose from and give them a good deal on it. I would also bring a computer with me for gps so i can know where I am. Many people use computers for different reason. Such as pog, cheatcodes, @CAPS1 cards and other thing. My reason for using this is because my work is important to me. I would do it on the computers if I miss it. That is why you should have computers all the time. You newer know what would happen. In conclusion, This is why computers are very important to have. The reasons are for if somthing happens. To you and you don't have a phone use a computer. Also its beneficial that everyone has thing to do but computers are the best thing to do.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
3244,2,"Some books are not suitable for kids. They could make a section for adults that includes books that are not censored. These books should not be aloud to be checked out by kids under the age of @NUM1 unless their parent or guardian allows them to. Some adults don't care what there kids read but the library should. I've read books at school that were adult books at school.      Back in elementary school, I remember checking out alot of books but I don't think they were adult books. Some kids enjoy reading adult books. It helps their reading skills but the content in the book is not suitable for them.     Making a section for adults would help stop kids from reading adult material. I believe that this should take place at every library around the world.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
4208,2,"One @MONTH1 subject the censorship of library content in certain places and times, whether fictional or not, to his or her own opinion.  I personally disagree with the concept.  The facts point out that society fears the dystopia predicted by publications exploring the outcome of similar campaigns and has instated systems designed to prevent such occurrences.  Certain examples stand in play to explicate my opinion.       Society, at least in my native @LOCATION1 and surely abroad in other democratic countries, dislikes enforced censorship for a few reasons.  First, many countries have a @CAPS1 of @CAPS2 and priviledges upheld in the face of the law.  Our founding fathers wrote out one of the documents establishing this trend on the prompting of the general public.  The first ten ammendments to our fine constitution, bundled as the @CAPS1 of @CAPS2, resulted.       Some of the included statements ensure the freedom to speak as it publicly pleases us as citizens and the freedom to write, individually and collectively without boundaries.  The removal of these principles so ingrained in our nation's conscience would cause a general uproar.  We as a people instituted our government to preserve our freedoms, and we could prepare ourselves to replace it as implied in the @CAPS3 of @CAPS4 if so required of us to continue doing just that.       Secondly, publications such as the ones mentioned for banning rebuke the enforcement of opinion for its effects on society.  I can mention three books portraying this dystopic outlook on censorship.  '@CAPS5 @NUM1,' required by state standards for one possible choice of reading assigned to us by my teacher, describes book burning and utmost uniformity between citizens.  '@DATE1,' by @PERSON2, I know describes a dystopia in which all citizens completely submit their will to and omnipotent '@CAPS6 @CAPS7,' who utilizes omnicient surveillanceeven though I have not read the composition myself.  '@CAPS8 @CAPS7,' a recent novel by @PERSON1 whose title employs a pun on the name of @DATE1's prime antagonist, weaves the exciting tale of an older teenager who tries to beat the system of surveillance from under the radar.  All, however, betray a sense of fear in their content, and that fear has transferred directly into local civilization.       In reviewing the aspects of censorship portrayed in its effects, the system itself reveals that the even the intended creation of a utopia and compliance through censorship @MONTH1 result in decline and misery throughout the area within which government or civil officials practice the method.  In any case, a more effective solution must exist today.  To prove the point, let me introduce some content advisory systems currently in place.       Libraries divide themselves into sections for the various age groups, and therefore create an inherent barrier between differing groups of content deemed appropriate only in the face of maturity.  The film and television industries rely on ratings displayed at various times during video to provide the same sort of psychological fence dividing content into pieces.  Even the video game industry, into which I plan to inject myself upon exiting college, has a system in place to separate existing media into tiered subcategories designed in a similar way to film ratings.  Different regions utilize different systems, but that of  the @ORGANIZATION3, or the @ORGANIZATION1 for the @ORGANIZATION2, compares relatively well in ranking video games to the rest of the globe.       As explained, censorship already exists in a form accptable to all.  Nobody forces anybody to comply to the recommendations, but hopefully everyone does so on their honor.  Capable parents most definely follow the guidelines which have cropped up over the years.  Only if these methods of moderation were enforced would everyone be upset.  It's up to everyone to prevent a situation like unto the worst-case scenario and useresponsibly the systems available for this purpose",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
16096,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building had various problems to @CAPS1 in allowing dirigibles to dock there. The nature of the ships, added stress to the building and safety were all against the ludicrous idea of landing blimps on the Empire State Building.The nature of the ships would cause the body to sway in the wind. One problem that comes from this is tangling the mooring cable. To combat this captains would have to use lead counterweights. These were highly impractical to use because they would hanging over crowded streets.Another problem was added stress to the buildings Foundation. Since the building was not ordinarily designed for this role, modifications would have to be made to its foundation. The cost of these renovations was over sixty thousand dollars.The most obvious problem was safety. These airships were filled with highly flammable hydrogen. The area surrounding the building had other buildings with sharp spires on top. If a ship hit one of these, there was no stopping the disaster.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
13541,5,"In the memoir written by @PERSON1, he tells about how his parents immigrated from Cuba to The United States so that he could have a better life. He tells of how he will always be grateful for his Cuban culture that stayed with him his whole life, and for the selflessness of his parents. The mood that he sets in this memoir is gratefulness. When his parents moved from Cuba, they had his best interest in mind. This memoir also tells that economically, they struggled. However, @PERSON1's family still found away to have a home. They created a bond with the people in the area and stayed very close with them. This gave @CAPS1 a sense of family even though his real family was very far away. He is grateful for this because he will always have his cuban culture because that's what he was raised with. The overall mood he created was gratefulness.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
12460,5,"In this memoir by Narciso Rodriguez, The mood was pretty much the same throughout. The mood in this @CAPS1 of writing was very happy. Narciso Rodriguez was very grateful and happy throughout the @CAPS1. He would always say that he was very grateful for his Parents being all nice and coming over here to the united States from Cuba to give him a better life. Also, his family gave up their friends and family, good jobs and all said goodbye. Just to have a chance at a new and better life. He was also very happy, because even though he wasnt in Cuba anymore, he still grew up with a Cuban cuture.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
7606,3,"In “Rough Road Ahead” by Joe Kurmaskie, the features of the setting affect the cyclist negatively. The story takes place in June in California. This is a very hot time of the year in such a desert location. The heat adds to the speed at which the cyclist becomes dehydrated, as well as his inability to think as coheratly as he could had he not been in a desert in June. The cyclist is also travelling through desolate, an inhabited land. The author says, “There was no one in sight, not a building car, or structure of any kind.” This emphasizes the characters total lack of resources. There is nowhere within sight that he can turn to for help, water, food or shelter. The road was also rough, plagued with many rolling, crippling hills. Such terrain is much harder to manuver, especially in such a are state of despair. The setting of the story, ""Rough Road Ahead"" greatly impacts the cyclist.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
1439,1,"Dear local newspaper, I am sure you will agree with me about keeping the computers in this world. I am sure you will agree with me about keeping the computers in this world because computers help everyone in their education. For example when i don't understand some words i go to the computer type www.dictionary.com. Then i words that i don't understand. After that the definition comes up and in a faster time because when i look in the dictonary i take about @NUM1 to @NUM2 minutes to just find a word but on the computer it takes me @NUM3 seconds. Also computers let us chat and send massages when we can't see or take to a person so we send massages and the receive the message them they send back a message. Lastly computers help on english class like on spelling, writing, typing, editing & revising. That's why i think we should keep computers in this world. I know everyone doesn't know everything. Computers could help us in math, by using formilas and a calculator on calculator.com. Also computers help in science, by going to @LOCATION1 and asking questions like, ""what is matter or what are . Finally i am gonna talk about not understanding some words. I always go to dictonary.com so that website could give and help understand the word and get the real definition. I always use these @NUM2 websites when i am stuck in math or science or in english. Those websites could help a lot in our education. That's my way of thinking about the computers helping us in our education. My parents are always staked about me talking to my friends and hanging out with them. So, when i can see or talk to my friends i go myspace or facebook or msn to talk and send messages to my friends. We just keep chating and sending can messages because our parents don't let us hang out. Mostly everyone does the same. I do we could also send much other pictures, music and lot more. That's my opinion of why we should have comuters because we need to chat or send messages. At the end you know we all need to type our essays, lesson and more. The computers help use make power points they check our spelling, the could also change why we wright like cursive and more, they also help in editing & revising. I always keep sending words wrong. So the computer help me on spelling it also makes your project look better. That's why i think",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
12647,5,"The mood created by the author is loving because it talks about how generous and caring his family is. ""... @LOCATION1 graced our kitchen table for meals..."" That quote gives you an idea of how close everybody is ""...family had nothing to do with being a blood relative.""  @CAPS1 around Narciso treats him like family. He learned what family really ment by living in this house during his childhood. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" In the memoir you can see how Narciso loves his family and friends. Overall the main mood of this memoir is loving.",2.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
9856,4,"The author concludes the story wt this passage because its symbolic. When the Geese come back in the spring it will be like a now beginning. When the Hibiscus is budding it has a new life. When all this happens Saeng will have a new fresh start too. Leaving the story to end like this is a cliff-hanger for some. It makes you wanting more, knowing she failed her test you want to know if Saeng will pass it in the spring, @CAPS1 a fresh new start. Everything and everyone will have new starts when the beginning of the new season comes around when the hibiscus blooms it will be like she has the new ability to overcome obstacles, new connections w/her past and comfort during hard times. The Hibiscus symbolizes all this",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
6655,3,"The cyclist was affected by the fact that he took advice from some old men who’s information was not accurate. Then he cycled along the desert which was very hot. He had a limited supply of water and that also affected him in a very bad way. He almost had a heat stroke a few times. He was probably angry that he took these men’s advice and got himself into this. Then when he found the fish camp, he was overjoyed with relief. But at the same time, if he had asked someone else for directions, he would not have been in this situation in the first place. So it’s really confusing because he probably felt relived and mad at the same time. And then the other old man asked him did he know the best way there. He was right to say yes because if he didn’t, the old man would have gave him some more messed up direction and he would have been out there again, about to have another heat stroke.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
8940,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because it shows that saeng is going to accept her new home and reconize the similarities from her old home and hold memories close to help her overcome obstacles that she is facing in life. ""I've seen this kind blooming along the lake. It's flowers arn't as pretty, but it`s strong enough to make it through the cold months here, this winter hibiscus. That's what matters.” This sets similarities from their old home to their new home. This shows that things do change but they are also the same. This leads to the conclusion because this is where Saeng relizes that she will always have the memories of her old home and will use them to help her overcome the troubles shes going through.  ",2.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
3895,2,"The things we find in libararies shouldn't be offensive to anybody. It's the choice you make rather you won't to read it or not. Nobody is making look at those things if you don't want to. Don't look at it, if you think it's offensive.     The best thing to do is to keep it on the shelves. Some people like looking or reading things like that. People don't go to the library and pick up a book or a movie that they know they wouldn't like. If that was to happen, then there wouldn't be any library around because anything you get from the library, I bet you can find something offensive about it. People find stuff like that entertaning when watch or read stuff like that.     That hurt the people that make the books and movies that are offensive because they feel like thats what people wan't to see. True enough thats what people won't see as long as it's not effecting them in no kind of way. That what we see on a daily basic on tv is offensive things, so if we can sit there and watch it on tv then we shouldn't have on problem reading or watching a book about it. I see stuff offensive on tv about everyday, but it doesn't bother me so reading a book or anything else like that, I woudn't care because i'm use to seeing it on tv.     Nobody can make read or stop reading things like that, only you can. You don't have to look at it if you think its offensive. It shouldn't be a problem with anyone because thats what we hear and see everyday. No matter what some people find that entertaning.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
16337,6,"The obstacles builders of the Empire State Building faced was many things surrounding safety and money issues. Successfully docking the dirigible would mean spending over @MONEY1 more, to make arrangements to the building. Also, there were many safety problems such as the gas the dirigible carried, the danger of people below in the city, and it was against the law for airships to be flying so low.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
13497,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from Home The Blueprints of Our Lives the author has a very appreciative mood. One example of this is when he says, ""(and for which I am an enternally grateful)"" this shows that he is incredible thankful to his parents for everything they have done for him. A second example is, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" @CAPS1 the author saying that you can see how much gratitude he has for his parents for everything they have done for him. Lastly, he says, ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home"" This tell us that the author truly understand what her parents did for her. That is the mood in the memoir.",2.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
7430,3,"The feature of the setting affect the cyclist by giving him hope that the finishing line is not far and there was nothing in sight no cars, building or stucture of any kind.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
7417,3,"The settings affect the cyclist in more than one way. These ways are that he is running out of water, he might become dehydrated and he is unsure of the path he is on. With him running out of water, he is in real trouble. Because of the lack of water, not only might be die but he begins to see mirages. His lack of water eventually leads to dehydration and he become uneasy about things. For example; in the text it says that he staggered into the store. Because he is unsure of the path he is on, he begins to panic a little. Panicing isn’t good especially considering that he is running low on water and is becoming dehydrated. Panic can’t help to solve anything. The setting is in a dessert so he needs lets of water, which he runs low on. Desserts are extremly hot which causes a person to become dehydrated or die. Desserts have little shade, if any; and they have rough weather as well as rough landscape. For example, they’re landscape is mostly all hot sand. Therefore, the setting does affect the cyclist.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
4639,2,"What is censorship? Many would say it's a book without cuss words or it's a movie without racism. For me, I think censorship is covering up the truth. I don't think movies or books should be taken off the self because some people find it offensive. When a book uses a cuss word to show anger or simply use the word, I think that it's okay because isn't that what we hear in the world already? Now I know some people @MONTH1 not have grown up hearing foul words but many of us have.      With movies I think that if people have a problem with their children watching something bad or offensive then they shouldn't let their kid watch it. Thats whats wrong with people now a days, they don't want to take blame for things that go wrong in their lives. People use censorship as a way to make themselves feel like their a good parent or that the world owes them something.      When it comes to someone thinking that a movie or book has gone to far with their race then censorship gets thrown around. Many people have issues with their race or nationality being messed with. Though it's funny to see that race use those foul words among themselves but when it's in a book it's racism. Or when a certain race is being made fun of or shown in a movie in a way that that race doesn't feel comfortable with, that movie is called racist.      I feel that if people have an issue with something they don't agree with, then they should take it out of their own lives. Too many people try to control something, like cencorship. For years now people have wanted books that are read in school to be censored for bad language. Why put all that time toward the book being censored and not the school. I know kids in school use foul language all the time. Even worse then the books we read. If adults would realize it's their kids they need to censore and not the books then censorship wouldn't have become such a huge issue. People need to just realize that by cencoring the books or movies doesn't make the offencive words or bad images go away, it just covers them up",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
10131,4,The Author concludes the with paragraph because she wont to.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
15863,6,"Intended uses for buildings often are met with challenges. In the article ""The Mooring @CAPS1"" by @PERSON1, the obstacles faced in allowing dirigibles to dock at the Empire State Building are discussed. The first obstacle faced is stated in paragraph @NUM1, when to build a dock on top of the building the entire building would have to be inforced. This was an obstacle because it would be at a cost of @MONEY1. Another obstacle faced was the weather. Above the building violent air currents rage. These currents would cause the ship to swivel around and around the mooring. The final obstacle in allowing dirigibles to dock was the law. According to the article, ""an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas... Would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building."" The cost of reinforcing the building, the weather, and the laws were three obstacles faced in docking blimps to the Empire State building.",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
6826,3,"The features of the setting taunt the cyclist with cruel irony. As the cyclist continues down his path he pasts through a ghost town, then twenty mile up the road he sees a ramshackle shed & some rusty water pumps. He attempts to get water out because he was runing out but all he could get was muck, then what he described as “water feeling two-hundred degrees, it had the flavor of battery acid. Further down the road was a sign that said rough road ahead, adhere to the posted speed limit of 55, he was going 12 mph. Even worse he found an abandoned juice factory on the way, at that point he was out of water.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
798,1,"I walked into my living room one night and saw my mom on the computer. I thought to myself ""she is always on that computer, doesn't she work to do?"". I said to my mom ""I think we should have an hour two of the computer each night, or not have one at all."" I told her that I think computers are a bad choice because you don't know who is on the internet and is trying to talk to you. Also, it gets in the way of exercising and spending time with family and friends. The internet/computers are very dangerous now a days. You never know if someone is a friend or a predator trying to get you. Say if you were talking to someone and you thought it was your friend, well you don't know for sure if it is then or not. I could be an older man or women trying to get a hold of you so they can probably kidnap you. Steal from you and worse. Now I watch the news and see many kidnapping because kids are talking to people on the internet and don't know who they are or what they look like. Like, when a girl was talking to a man and she thought it was her friend, turns out it wasn't and she got in a whole lot trouble. Maybe if she met him she would have gotten very hurt and be scared of that memory for the rest of her life. Family is very important to most families now a days. I have heard that spending time with family would bring your grades up in school because as you talk to them, you learn new things. Sadly this is not happening because people are so isolated to their computers they don't spend one minute with family or friends. I have a friend who is always on the computer. She never spends time with her family or friends. She is so focused on the computer screen then what is going on around her. Recently she has been getting off the computer and making more time with family and friends. Even her grades started going up because she spending more time studying with her mom and dad, then being on.... for example @CAPS1 or myspace and not getting any work done for school. In other words, she is very happy in life now and has changed from this experience she has gone through. Most people think you can use your brain for knowledge and call it exercise. That is one way to put it but it is not exercise for your body. People have spent more time having their eyes glue to the computer screen that they don't go out and play or maybe go a gym. The rate of obecity in our country is increasing for many reasons and lack of exercise is one of them because people spend to much time watching tv and being on the computer. I have a little cousin who is over weight and should be out playing sports and exercising. But does she, ""no""... She spends her free time on the computer in a stuffy room, instead of getting fresh air from outside. She keeps asking me how did I get and what age, and I keep telling her, I exercise and play sports so I can't tell you when. I keep saying that to her but she never listens. To this day she is still the same because she didn't take my advice to get off the computer and go outside to play. I strongly agree that we should have only two hours of the computer each night or have no computers at all. For kids saftey from bad people out there in the world, spending time with family and friends and finally for exercise and to stay fit with our bodies. I hope people understand what I say and take action to persue them in they own life and convice others too.",4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
1234,1,"More and more people use computers everyday. Computers are a great help for projects, email, vacation spots, and so on. However, some scientists think people are spending too much time on the computer instead of excercising, or taking a walk. I think that computers are an important part of a persons life because the information found on a computer is very useful. It can be useful to you when you have a report coming up. What if your teacher tells you that a report is due tomorrow? What are you going to do, you don't have time to go to the library. I would go on the computer and get all the information I need. I would also use a computer to learn about far away places, or even famous people in history. I also could look up where I'm going on vacation and then I could learn more information about it. Like, you could find where the best resturant locations are, the best holers, and even the best tourist spots. Computers are also helpful for chating. My grandparents moved so I don't talk to them that much anymore, but since I have a computer I can send a quick e-mail saying hi, or asking how they're doing. Also imagine going to work and not having a computer! Thats a lot of work to write down! At some works, the work consists of emailing other work members about the problems they are having, and about meetings. By using a computer you can keep up to date on everything thats going on. Also computers are helpful because if you had a test to study for, and you forgot your notes at school, you can look up online what you are studying. Then you can study from the computer. So then the next day you won't fail the science test. Computers can be a nice little break after all your homework is done. If you want to go on the computer to talk to your friends, it should be an insentive to get all your homework done first. Sometimes people need some down time after all their homework is over with. Playing games on the computer can be a nice way to relax. Computers are a great help for reports, vacations, chatting, information to help you study for a test. Also to play games on. A lot of people use computers to do work on for their jobs. I think computers are an important part of a persons daily life.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
3086,2,"Yes, I think that some books should be taken out of all libraries. No little kid should be looking at or saying those things. Some of the books could offend some people when they don't know it.      Parents need to watch what there kids read and watch on a daily basis. Kids need to know why they shouldn't watch those shows or read those books. Maybe if parents would watch there kids they would mind better than what they do.      Some of the books could offend people when they don't know it. No little kid should be looking at or reading those books or movies. That is why i think those books should be taken out of all libraries",3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
4029,2,"Do you think that books, movies, music, etc., should be moved if they are found offensive? I can't choose @CAPS3 they are both understandable. Therefore, I well dicuss how i feel about it in this essay and what I have experience on this topic.     Well lets get started! I could go both ways with this. But first I well just discuss the way I disagree with removing offensive things. Material that is instersting to many people mght not be instersting to me. I mean everyone should be able to listen and read things that the loved and enjoy. And I could really careless what other people loved to read and listen to. Someday, we all might come to enjoy things that we wouldn't every think we would. It's just that simply. I mean I love romance and scary books, and someone else might dislike them both. Noone can tell anyone what they should like or dislike.          I agree in away too! When people make a big deal out of somethings it kind of gets on your nerves, like when your mom is telling you make sure room is clean all the time! I agree with this @CAPS3 something maybe to offensive to someone and doesn't want their children. One time I was in a library looking at this book that really seemed good to read. But then some lady told me that I shouldn't read it @CAPS3 it to much for me. But it was just right for me. @CAPS2 went up to the main desk and started complaining. I was like, 'Are you serious?' I didn't want to be rude so I told her calmly, '@CAPS1 are you so worried about what I am reading?' @CAPS2 replied, ' @CAPS3, the book is to reviling.' I showed her what the book was called, '@CAPS4 @CAPS5 @CAPS6'. We ended the agruement. I still checked out the book, @CAPS3 I knew I would love it, and I do! They should just put things aside, that they think well be offensive and let people ask for the things. So people won't make a big deal out of it. Just keep the peace and give everyone what they want.          Well I'm done now. Hope you understand both sides of the agruement. Just remember that if you agree or disagree.Or you like me, who can't choice or understands both sides. It's your decision and noone can make you change what you love and enjoy to read or listen to. But I can't pick aside @CAPS3 either way their both a understandable.",2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
9859,4,"The young girl Saeng from the story ""Winter Hibiscus” by minfong Ho, has moved from her home land of Vietnam to the United States. The young girl was hoping to get her drivers license but failed, The hibiscus she sees comforts her reminding her of Vietnam. When she purchases it her mother is concern of the price but sees how home sick her daughter is and becomes understanding. After planting the Hibiscus She watches the geese and understands that every year they change their habitat. The geese inspire Saeng along with the Hibiscus and promises herself that"" in the spring when the snow melts away the geese return and thes Hibiscus is budding, then I will take the test again.",3.0,,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
1665,1,"Dear @CAPS1, Advances in computer technology have positively affected the society we live in today. Computers teach hand-eye coordination, help kids learn inside and outside of school, and connect the world socially. These amazing devices have done nothing to harm the new generation. In fact, they have done quite the opposite. Computers are an excellent way of teaching hand-eye coordination. People who are opposed to using computers believe that all they do is make kids lazy and ignorant. This is not the case. The coordination gained from using the mouse games over to sports like baseball and lacross. Players have to look at an incoming ball, and guide their stick or mitt to catch the ball. As you can see, coordination is essential to sports. It is also needed for simple every day tasks around the house. These could be as plain as just taking out the trash or cooking meals. We overlook the fact they easy jobs like these still require coordination. A misplaced pot could pour boiling water on the floor and cause a huge mess. W are lucky that we live in a world with such a good teacher of hand-ey coordination. Computers are the worlds most knowledgeable teachers. No matter how hard you try if you are using a computer, you will learn something. The internet is a best cache of information. In the current day and age, the environment is a growing concern. Paper no made from trees, so must be cut down. It takes forty years for a tree to grow, and seconds to cut one down. Schools everywhere should use computer and keyboards for work instead of paper and pencil. Since most students are familiar with computers, they enjoy working with them more than writing. The average kid could learn more in an hour with a computer than they would whole day at school. The transiton needs to be made. Computers are also a massive social network. Instant messaging and @CAPS2 are now primary sources of communication. If it hasn't for computers, I wouldn't be able to talk to my friend that moved to @LOCATION2 two years ago. This is just one example of how social networks are helpful. They help people stay connected with old friends, and work. All major corporations use computers to invest, sell products, and store information. Computers are the ultimate way communicate. Obviously, computers are growing exponentially in popularity. The @LOCATION1 should put this to use. Imagine a more eco-friendly country where we don't have to cut down a million acres of @CAPS3 @CAPS4 rainforest every year. The benifits of computers are endless. Three of these are hand-eye coordination, knowledge and communication.",5.0,5.0,6.0,6.0,6.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,28.0
489,1,"Dear The @ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS1 I can see both sides of your argument, on wether computers are important. However, computers have revelotivizied they way we live our lives. Just for a moment, think what would the world be like without computers. I feel the computers one or important aspect of our lives. Computers are espicially important to students and teachers. For instance if a student needed to do a report on @LOCATION1, he could look up facts and other things on @LOCATION1, then he could condence the facts into a paragraph on a word document, and if he had a question he could email his teachers. Finaly he, could print out the finished report. All that, without having to get up and bother his parrents to go to the bookstore and pay @NUM1 on a book that he will probably read one time. Also if he had a question there would be no comunication outside of school. Anothe example of students using computers is online textbooks, which spares them of logging heavy texbooks home. Because I know computers have helped me in school and more work much easier. Secondly, @PERCENT1 of busnesses say that they use computer daily, and some agree that without computer, their busnesses would fail. Computer make busnes much easier, espically with the busness monoging and file keeping programs that are oidible. On a computer, busnesses can store customer information, comppare income, and keep stock of inventary without having a cluttered pile or file cobinet. Computers can also saave buseness money because that con cut out jobs such as record keeper. Also busnesses con save time of having meeting via web cams instead of having people drive from state to state for one meeting then do it next monet and the month after; and they coud emall impertant things such as sales projections and other things as well. Computers are also important and helpful in the home. People can do grocery shopping from the home they can order pizza online and they can go shopping online. Also, people can pay their bills online which saves paper. Lets say this, a moter, has a child! who is sick and she wants to know the to heal him, what to feel him, and what medicine to give hime. She can look all this up on the computer and bookmail the websites for next time. Then her other child comes provide, and she wants to find a health snork. She can feed him which she ca do online. Next she ways to make chicken fried rice,out she wnet know how, she can look up the recipe online. Finaly after dinner she need to cleen a stain on the carpet but it wont come out so she buys a carpet cleener from the web. Computers have just moderthy mothers day so much easier. Without computers our lives would be much harder. If we didnt have computers if the person who a report on @LOCATION1 would have failed, the sick child would have not, the hungry child would have been fed unhealthy food, and @MONTH1 would fail. coputers are an important afect of our lives.",5.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,22.0
3142,2,"Comics, romance, adventure books, and mystery books are just the few different types of books out there as well as the magazines and music we listen to. With a little bit of everything, and whatever your passion is, we have that right in our local libraries to go look at or hear whatever pleases us but, some of the people that go there are not adults. Some of them are young children who are either checking out a book themselves or are simply with there parent/guardian. I believe that even though there are some books magazines, and music not attended for children, they still shouldn't be removed just because they are found offensive.     Everyone once in their life had to atleast experience something unpleasant. But knowing our world today, we simply can not hide from those things but yet face them, we adults are old enough to just walk away from something we find offensive unlike what our children or other children can do. Sometimes, even children have to go through it as well. It's part of growing up and also a learning experience for all of us.      If you already know what parts of the library have stuff children shouldn't see, don't bring your child to that area. And if it's possible, bring them to an area where they @MONTH1 sit and read there favorite books as well with you by there side where you can watch there every move. And at the same time, you don't have to take a chance at explaining something that you are not quite ready or sure that your child is ready to hear or see.      Since it's impossible to hide things from your children that you are not wanting them to see and hear at the same time, that's a part of life. Even if they are still really young and ask what a certain thing is, we can simply turn there heads and make them get distracted by something else and pretend that we didn't hear what they said. But as your children get older, they should know right from wrong and know what things they @MONTH1 read and things they can't.     Some of us are oblivious to the world around us and @MONTH1 not know that certain things can cause more harm than good, even like taking your children to the library. If you don't like a certain thing there or know that there is going to be something you simply do not want your child to see or hear, then don't bother taking them with you on your next visit and go another time when your child is with a babysitter or take a chance into bringing them with you an expect the unexpected when it comes to offensive items at the library",3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
13101,5,"They were sad through some of this memoir. The first reason why they were sad was that they left there familys. They also had to leave the country of Cuba. And left their friends to. They were also happy too. The reason why is because it is a Spanish, Cuban, and @CAPS1 comunity. So they feel like they are at home.    They were made because they would half to start there life over. They would have to find new jobs and transportation.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 ",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
7057,3,"The setting of the story affected the cyclist because it kept him going because he was all alone and had no help. First, just the fact that he was by himself kept his determination high. If he would have had a partner they could have stopped and took a break or shared the water. Next, the fact that there were no buildings, houses or anything in sight affected him.  He got a bolt of strength just from seeing a building ahead. If there had been building he could have stopped and asked for more water and rested. The fact that he was in a desert in California in the middle of June really affected him. He had no determination there because there was nothing he could do to better the situation in his cause. He even at one point felt that he might die. In conclusion the setting really affected the cyclist because it determined his endurance and will power.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
16202,6,"Right from the start, the Empire State Building had architectural demands that posed several obstacles for the builders of it, especially when it came to building the mooring mast for dirigibles. Initially, the Empire State Building was built only for inside use, so the mast would add stress to the buildings frame and possibly damage it. Secondly, the Empire State Building was built in a very densely populated area so if any malfunctions were to occur such as the Hindenburg in 1937, many people could be killed down below. Another problem posed to the mooring mast was nature itself. Winds on top of the building were constantly shifting, and they were very strong as well so any dirigible mounting on the building was threatened by swiveling and flying off when landing. The masters in the architectural era had made a true mistake when they planned the construction of the Empire State Building, and it never could have reached its potential for many obvious reasons.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
13351,5,"The mood created by the author is respectful. The mood is respectful because They came from cuba and went to @LOCATION1. as the @CAPS1 says ""My Mother And father had come to this country with such courage, without any knowledge of the language or the culture"". Another reason why the mood is respectful is that the Mother and father went to this country for their child. As the @CAPS1 says ""They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life."" This shows that they moved for the kid and not For themselfs.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
9425,4,"The author concluded the story with Saeng vowing to herself “in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that the test again” to express her determination of fitting into new things and to express the change she was getting used to. Describing spring was important in the conclusion because it described what Saeng once thought was odd in @LOCATION1, but got used to the seasons and weather changing. Once she realized that she needed to deal with change, she knew that she would need to try the driving test again. It was very important that the author’s conclusion was “in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again” because it expressed how Saeng was accepting change in her life.  ",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
3980,2,People out there have the right to descide weather or not there childs books have censorship in it. Some parents dont want there child to read books like that till they get older. Kids in grade school dont know the book they are getting has profanity in it.           I think that in all grade schools and middle schools should have no books that have censorship in them. Yea some parents dont care what their child reads. Think about the ones that do. Not every one has the guts to say something to the school. If you ask me i would not but books with censorship in them in my childs school.     Then again the high school students are old enough to look threw the books and descide if they want to get that book or not. Yea some parents still care about their child when they get into high school but high school students are old enough to make their own descions. Some students @MONTH1 not relize what book they grabed untill they start reading but thats when they turn around and exchange it. I think high school students are smart enough to choose their own books.     This is why I think bout the books and magazines etc. with censorship should be removed from the grade schools and middle schools and not high schools. If you agree YOU can do something about it. Talk to your childs school,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
1492,1,"Dear local news paper, I think computers can have a bad effect on people from a really early age. Starting at thirteen and up through adulthood. People spend hours at a time on the computer when they canbe exercising or doing some type of activity out doors. Computers can make some people feel like life is being taken away form them. Spending so much time on a computer can really damage a person posture. It is said that when some get on a computer a state of comfortbility comes over them and they lean over with their backs bent and they there for periods of time. Imagin a person being cramped in a tight space for eight hours and when that person gets out they all their joints and muscles being stretched from that point of tensions. This is what we do to our bodys when we get on computers.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
4158,2,"Do I believe that certain materials, such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc., should be removed from the shelves if they are found offensive? No, it should not be removed. Katherine says, ' I have the right to remove that book from the shelf, that work I abhor.' @CAPS1 of all, she can have the right to do that but there is people who have a say in this. There are people who can read, listen, watch, and see what they like. Definately, I really think that it should not be removed even though it doesn't have positive things.     Although, it might offend some people they have a choice whether they should see, watch, listen, and read it. Many people might agree with the author about what she thinks about this. Though, many people might go against it. One reason why I think that people should be allowed to see, watch, listen, and read whatever they would like to see, it's because it's their own choice. We make our own decisions whether people like it or not. Another reason would be because people would want to see the funny things that people invent that actually make the shows. Some people do not like to be bored of the same thing.     Katherine Paterson the Author, is right in some ways. She wouldn't want her children to see things that are inappropriate. I have a daughter and I wouldn't want her to see things that are abhor. Last reason would be children should not allowed to see inappropriate things until they are eighteen or older. These things can influence children very intensely.     Indeed, many people in this world are influenced with bad things. The author stated, 'then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else.' Right, she is meaning that we have a choice of what our children would like to see. For example, there is a magazines full of negative words and full of horrid stuff. Would you pull it out of the shelf for your child to not have a chance to see that? You should if you love your child even though it's your own choice. You would want the best for you child to not see, read, watch, and listen to things that are inappropriate.     In conclusion, this would be your choice. There will always be things in the world that you don't like. You cannot stop the terrible things from happening. In the libraries there shouldn't be anything negative anyway because you never know what your child might be doing. Simply, teach your kid what is wrong and right. Finally, from what you experienced. Teach them the right things from the wrong things you learned so they wouldn't do the same mistake as you did.",4.0,3.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
719,1,"Dear local newspaper, I believe that computers have a positive effect on people because it teaches hand-eye coordiantion. You can also learn about different people and places. But it also allows us to communicate with the people online. Computers have a positive effect on people because it teaches hand-eye coordination. Because it's rely important to have hand-eye. And when your out in the world you rely need to be able to look at something and pick it up or say if you get into a altercation with someone. So it's rely important to have hand-eye. Another reason why I feel computers have a posative effect on people is because you could learn about diffrent stuff over the internet. Like learning about far away places and people. So the internet is giving you a great opportunity to learn more about or earth, other than your back yard. So technacally it's preparing you for life. My final reason why I think the computer has a posotive effect on people is because it allows people to talk to other people who are online. Like say you dont have a phone but you have a computer and you need to tell something very important to someone; you could do it online. And people say it's one of the fastest pieces of technology known to mankind to people who need it. Those were my three reasons why I believe the computer has a posotive effect on people. And if you don't believe me go hop on a computer and see for yourself. You won't be dissapointed.",4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
608,1,"Dear, Newspaper @CAPS1 my name is @CAPS2, @PERSON1 and I think that this idea based on why people need computer is a good statement/ @CAPS3. My @CAPS4 oppinon is that same say people use their computers so much they don’t yet exercise. When that is not true do to the fact that computers have. Programms on how to watch your weight. Stocks and etc also Technology helps people around the world on websites, programs such names as to video chat, @CAPS5.com for instant messaging. on the way teen stuff like computers help people for on video chatting, emailing people their rezemates to jobs on why and how their based. On showing people their recent jobs. And giving details on showing people reading this article is that technology of computers also help @CAPS6 save. Most reasons we need tech equipment is that people use it on fields such as the navy, @CAPS6, dealships, all over the world industry. Why is that good well my point of view is that business need that to order their stocks for store carriers and more. For @CAPS6 on field to use for @CAPS7 sean, pregnacy, pulse radar's and more. And on the negative point of those side of the readers are based on the mostly that people get addict to technology when the truht is that people really need technology look around you and everything in this world has mostly been made by technology and. the @CAPS8 is that people should agree. that computers help people, speak, @CAPS9, email, lives, help find family, friends, give directions, so on my point of view @CAPS9 tel your dean @CAPS1 and readers that interacting with technology. Is a good way nto control ways on how or what you do in the computers do to that in my way I make sites audio and interesting Technology can allows people on ways to help people. Find and create ways to making money or interesting positive out comes out of using person in this world goes in and thru out tech equip. These days, and to the people who have read this article should pass this story on to people who take technology on negative terms and to help them think about it positive.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
92,1,"Dear local Newspaper; @CAPS1 you know that computers teach you to do many things? You probably do! I understand you would like to know my opinion on whether or not computers have a positive or negative effect on people. Well, I think that it has a positive effect. Computers teach you how to type and learn the moun keys. It also helps you to look things up like people, states, and etc. Lastly, it helps you to interact with other students when not in school. i encourage you to continue reading to hear my wonderful and strategic ideas. First of all, I think that computers have a positive effect on people because it gives you the learning skills to learn how to type I remember last year in @NUM1 grade, the tech ed teacher, ma @LOCATION4, told to go on a website that was all about learning how to type. It told us that the main keys were. A,@CAPS2,@CAPS3,@CAPS4 and @CAPS5,@CAPS6,@CAPS7, and colon(;). It was very helpful. From then on I typed like that. I think that learning how to type is an excellent thing. Typing helps you if you want to become a secretary or even a newspaper editor. My mother is a secretary down town at the low form called: @ORGANIZATION1. She works for three houses so she learned to type really fast. Typing is a big part of your life. You can use it for a project that you have to do for class, or an essay lthat you have to type to apply for a scholarship ro colege. Typing is used everywhere, even in math class my teacher types up things and pits them on the @CAPS8 @CAPS9. In addition, computers have a positive affect on people because they help look up famous people, states, countries, and etc. I remember on @NUM2 grade I @CAPS1 a project on @CAPS10, and in @NUM3 grade I @CAPS1 a powerpoint on I've also done a project on @LOCATION1 in @NUM1 grade, I @CAPS1 one on @PERSON1 this year for music, and I'm beginning one on @LOCATION2 and @LOCATION3. As you can tell, I've been using a computer, basically my whole life, except when I was a baby, but now that I think about it, when @CAPS11 a baby I got a little fake computer. i know computers are @LOCATION1 but they do have a positive effect on people. When was the last time you need a computer to help you look up something or someone? Priority not too long ago. Computers are the real dael. They can help you do anything. They've helped me my whole life. To be continued, computers have a positive effect on people. They help interact with other people students, and fa mily members, when not in contact. I remember when my cousin moved away. i was so sad. I didn't went her to leave. So then she gave me her email to contact her on the computer so I could talk to her. The computer has many websites where people can interact like: @CAPS12, @CAPS14, @CAPS13, aol, msn, yahoo, g-mail, twitter, and many more. i like talking to people from all over the country. I talk to my friend when I'm at home. i talk to family members. My favorite website is @CAPS14. I am a fanatic of it. It'@CAPS2 spo much fun. Do you have a favorite interaction website? @CAPS1 you have any interaction websites? If you don't you should get one. This is why computers have a positive effect on people. In conclusion, i think that computers have a positive effect on people. One because they can interact with others. Two: they can look up things to help them. Three, they can develop a sense of typing. Thank you for reading my letter which I 'm sure has persuaded you to agree with me on how computers have a positive effect on people.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
9866,4,She concluded the paragraph with that paragraph to show that she is serious about her gardening and that she won’t garden until geese come back.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
3636,2,"I believe that if there is a book in a library that a child is not allowed to read that the book should be some where the kid shouldnt be able to get it. I think those types of books should be stored in the part of the library were a child shouldn't have access to. Also the library should have a section to where only the certain age can read that book. In some libraires there are a bunch of books that are not made for a child to read and they have them to where a child can get access to them and that shouldnt be allowed. So i believe that they shouldn't allow children to get access to those types of books.     The same thing applies in a store. In some stores they have a magazine section where there are bad stuff that a kid is not allowed to see. I know in the grocery store that i go to there are inaproperiate images and words that a child should see or read. So there should be an area inside that store that a certain age can access them because one day i was in the store and i saw a little kid reading a magazine and saying the bad words that were in it and looking at the bad pictures it also had in it. So that is the reason they should put the magazines in a place were children shouldn't get access to them.     In the same store there is a music section and there are children in it all the time. The music is not all that bad its just that the kids can take these off the shelves and take it home and listen to it. This is the part that is the parents fault by buying the @CAPS1 for the child to listen to. So if the parent buys the child that @CAPS1 that is bad it is the parents fault. But i think that the @CAPS1's for little children should be in one part of the store and the @CAPS1's for the older people should be where the can get access to it.     This same thing applies with movies. There are movies in stores that are rated from @CAPS5, @LOCATION1, @LOCATION1@NUM1, @CAPS6, and even for @CAPS7 audiences only. In a bunch of the movies form @LOCATION1@NUM1 abd up have a bunch of stuff in them that a child should not see. Like in the @CAPS7 audiences only movies they show nudity and a lot more stuff that no one under @NUM3 shouldnt see but they have some of those just sitting on the shelves at stores. So children shouldn't be able to have access to those types of movies.     The reason i explained all of this is so children dont get ahold of them. Like in the music if the kids start listening to some bad music they will start saying those bad words and get in trouble at school and anywere else. Even if the chid reads a book that has bad stuff in it they will start saying those words or even do the stuff that happens in the book. In the movies that a child is not suppost to see like a gory action movie or a movie that shows nudity or even a movie that cuses that child will see that movie and will show there friends or get ideas form the movie. And these are the reasons why a child shouldn't be allowed to get access to this kind of stuff.",4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
8955,4,"After Saeng fails her driver’s test, she gives up hope for the future. The sight of the hibiscus plant reminds her to never give up, no matter how tough the situation. In the story, Saeng’s mother says, “Its flowers aren’t as pretty, but its strong enough to make it through the cold months here, this winter hibiscus. That’s what matters.” This quote shows how even though its not an object of beauty, it can do what it takes to survive. Saeng feels that she is also like the hibiscus, having the strength to be able to survive in a new environment. Even though she is new to this country, Saeng had proved that no matter how big the situation, anything can be overcomed if you believe in yourself and your family.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
12620,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir was happiness and gratitude.                                                            The mood was created from the words, and the way the auther described his home and his appreciation of what his parents did for him. @CAPS2 was born into a simple house in a blonde-brick building situated in the @CAPS1 section of Newark, New Jersey. The auther said, ""Within it's walls, my young parents created our traditional cuban home, the very heart of which was the kitchen."" @CAPS2 explained that his parents both shared cooking duties and passed on their culinary skills and love of cooking down to him. ""passionate cuban music (which I adore to this day) filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen.""                                                            The auther also explained how everyone in the community helped each other and treated each other like family. Even though his parents had no knowledge of the language or culture, they immigrated to make a better life for their children. They left everything behind them. Struggling financially and personally. @CAPS2 was eternally grateful for what they did.                                                                                                                                                                     In conclusion, the mood created by the auther was happiness of love and gratitude. ""I will never forget that house or it's gracious neighborhood or the many things I learned about how to love.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
1400,1,"Would you like to be on the computer @NUM1 and throw away your life. Well, some people already are throwing their lives away. @CAPS1 you spend your time on the computer you can become obese, can lose the ability of interacting with friends and family, and can even lose the ability of exploreing the @ORGANIZATION1!!! Its now or never to decied @CAPS1 you want to waste your life over a computer. @CAPS1 you use your computer to much you can be at risk of becoming obese. You can become obese for @NUM2 reasons. You aren't exercising while you are sitting. Since you are sitting not doing anything else you start to eat a lot of snacks. finally @NUM2, is that you can lose the ability to walk as well because you aren't doing anything with your legs and the obesety makes it hard to walk anymore. The time has come to decide. Also, @CAPS1 you waste your time on the computer you can lose the ability to interact with your family and friends. @CAPS1 you have children you can lose the ability to watch them grow up to adults and can even push them away. Also, you can lose your friend because they won't want to hang out with some thats a computer all that you will have will be your computer. Finally, You'll be all alone because @CAPS6 one will be there when you use trying to finally interact with your family. It's now or neve to choose what you want to do with your life. Finally, while your on the computer checking you myspace or your face-book there's a bunch of things happening around the @ORGANIZATION1. Instead of looking through your hard drive you be looking over the @CAPS2 @CAPS3 or looking at the @CAPS4 tower in @LOCATION2 or finally even going to @ORGANIZATION1 in @LOCATION1! with your family. The time has come to decied. As a conclusion, wasting your life on the computer is bad and can hurt your life in many ways. I can maek you obese and take the ability to walk away from you. It could prevent you from spending time with family and friend and can even push them away. Finally you can waste your time at home and not explore the @ORGANIZATION1. The time has come to decied @CAPS1 you want to waste your time or not @CAPS5 opinnion is @CAPS6!!!",4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,17.0
3421,2,"@PERSON1, an author, once said; 'All of use can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf. But if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf- then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' In other words, she @CAPS2 prooving the fact that books should not be censored in any form of way, in which I take the affirmative side on.      To begin with, censorship @CAPS2 simply the banning of certain things that are thought to be offensive. An example of this would be the society in the book '@CAPS1 @NUM1' by @PERSON2. In this book, @PERSON3, the main character and eventually the protagonist, @CAPS2 a firefighter that cause fires instead of putting them out. The government believes that books are dangerous because they cause people to become knowledgable so as a result, they order people to burn them, making society ignorant and a potential 'slave' to their government. Despite loosing his job and almost being killed by the goverment, @PERSON3 rises to understand that books have true meaning and that what the government @CAPS2 doing @CAPS2 wrong.      This topic now poses a question: '@CAPS2 all censorship bad?' Of course not. Some censorship should be allowed as a matter of fact. For example, any form of media whether it @CAPS2 books or magazines that portreys hatred toward a certain religion or group should be censored by the government because according to our constitution, people have the right to believe and practice whatever they wish (also know as 'freedom of speech'). However, the majority of censorship does not take a good side. In the political world today, censorship @CAPS2 applied to people who speak out against their government or leader due to the fact that they had been dishonest or ruthless to the people. Even in our country today, the government applies this which in some cases violates the constitution because people have the freedom of speech, but to a certain extent only.      Overall, the negative outcomes of censorship outweigh the positive outcomes. Censorship causes people to become uneducated which on the other hand makes it illegal for a person to speak out against something even if it @CAPS2 wrong. On the other had, censorship towards things that portey hatred @CAPS2 not bad either. In conclusion however, bad censorship causes people to become uneducated, at the end resulting in pure ignorance.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
3090,2,"They were talking about thinking of a book that no one should take off the shelf. But if the author had the right to remove the book from the shelf - that work I abhor, then everyone else should have the same right to remove the book from the shelf. But then, they would have no books left on the book shelf for any of them to read. They think that they should get some books that are not found offensive. This is what they should do about books that are found offensive.     If kids were reading books that the author found offensive, they should get rid of them. The books that were found offensive should not be read at all. Books that are found offensive are really bad for you to read. Offensive books should not be anywhere you are at. If you are going to read a book, do not get a book that is offensive.     Non-offensive books like @CAPS1, those kinds of books are not very offensive. If books were not offensive, people would read them very often. If people were to read books very often, there would not be enough @CAPS1 to do anything else. We do not deserve offensive books that have bad things in them. People deserve to have better and not offensive books.     Every day we read books, but do we know if they are offensive. If we did not know about the books we are reading were offensive, then we would be saying things right out of the book that we should not be saying. If we say stuff right out of the offensive book, we would get in severe trouble. Getting in trouble can mean some serious punishment. When you get punished, it could cause you to lose something for a certain amount of @CAPS1.     In conclusion, you understand what you can and cannot read. You also understand about what to do with offensive books. That non-offensive books can make you learn something. You can also understand about what happens when you say bad things out of the offensive books. And that you can end up losing something for a certain amount of @CAPS1.",2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
9538,4,"Saeng and her mother have to be determined to try their best in order to survive. Saeng and her mother has been thourgh a lot and when she failed the @CAPS1 test, she was more depressed than before, The author concludes this story with this paragraph to give readers the thought oF how it is to be determined to adapt and survive in a different place and though Saeng and her mother are away from their homeland they still enjoy the things they did in Vietnam, like the flowers, and the hot peppers and bitter melons, her friends disagree with the taste but it doesnt stop her from enjoying what she loves most.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
10474,4,The author concludes the story with the paragraph they did because it shows how much the main character has grown. She has learned that if a delicate flower like the hibiscus can make it through rough times she can too. nature’s fight for survival is like Saeng’s struggle in a new place. She discovers that you will adapt to your surroundings over time. Then after that time it will feel just like home. The adaption principle is shown throughout this story demonstrate by nature or a child’s life it’s there. Therefore the author would agree that the conclusion of the story illustrates the biological and physical growth of Saeng.,3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
7562,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist in many ways. One of them is that it was in the daylight and the sun bothers the cyclist. Another one is that because there was nothing around him, he felt frustrated. “There was no one in sight, not a building, car, or structure of any kind.” If something were there, he wouldn’t feel frustrated and at least he would have more hope to find something. ",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
7613,3,"The features of the setting make the cyclist feel hopeless after realizing he is not on a short cut. The cyclist has the ""growing realization that [he] could drop from heatstroke"" as he rides along. Also, the only building he sees for miles ""had been @NUM1 Welch's Grape Juice Factory."" The cyclist is driven deeper into despair and feels that all hope is lost when he sees this building. As he rides on, the song ""'@ORGANIZATION2' rattled aroung in the dry honeycombs of (his) deteriorating brain."" At this point, the cyclist believes his own death to be inevitable. He saysown death to be inevitable. He says “with any luck I’d hit a bump and lodge one in my throat” when talking about pebbles he placed in his mouth. Finally, the cyclist reaches a small bait shop, and all hope is returned as he “drank deeply from the sink.” The desert setting, with its lack of water, shelter, and people was the cause of this mans concern and later panic about his own life. The hopelessness of this cyclist is much like the hopelessness of those in the @ORGANIZATION1, who trapped in a blizzard far from civilization, resorted to eating their dead just to survive. While the @PERSON1 @ORGANIZATION1 went to extremes for their survival, their setting caused them to feel the same hopelessness as the cyclist.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
12440,5,"In the memoir the author creates the mood of happiness when he talks about his parents 'love and caring for others.'The author talks about in paragraph two when he was born. His parents passed on their rich culinary skills and a love for cooking, ""and for which I am eternally grateful."" His parents would play, ""passionate Cuban music (which I adored to this day.)""In paragraph three, the author says, ""Growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relative. In his neighborhood, everyone came together and extended a hand to people who were clearly in need.Rodriguez went on to explain how his parents would have everyone over for dinner and help people get back on their feet. Towards the end of the story in paragraph six he says, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" Narciso Rodriguez says, ""I will never forget how my parents turned the simple house into a home.""",2.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
570,1,"Your spending too much time on the computer your mom and dad well out. You relize it's time toget off and go outside. You spend about @PERCENT1 more or less on the computer each day, but @CAPS1 good reasons. You can multi task on it, you can talk to friends and family you haven't seen or talked to forever, and lastly, you can spend time outside as well as in side. @CAPS5 you were smart you would not listen to those experts Have you ever heard of the word multi tasking? It's were you can do more than on thing at a time, @CAPS1 example you car read and talk, or text and talk, or walk and be reading something. You have all these things you condo. Another example is when your on the computer you can listen to music and talk to friends or read. What you can even do is you can talk to your friends, listen to music, and do homework. What i mean when i say homework is when you have to type up an easy or something. The fourth and final examples is that about @PERCENT2 of us can multi task @CAPS2 of my friends told me that they just bought a laptop with a built in camera, @NUM1 now they can talk to people they haven't seen in a long time. ""I haven't seen my sister since she moved to california @NUM2 years ago, so i thougnt I would use the @CAPS3 on my laptop to se her."" @CAPS4 a mother of the @ORGANIZATION1. A computer or laptop can be good @CAPS1 talking to friends or family you haven't seen in a long time. Anouther from a student say's."" @CAPS5 you were smart, and understanding you would now why everyones on the computer so much"". When your on the computer and your friends start to talk to you about things you understand why, you ussaly don't see your friends unless its lunch"" or before class. Computers help talking to friends move easier than writing letters or waiting @CAPS1 calss to get out. You get off the bus and you relize that it's pur sunshine out. You decide to do some or all of your homework now so you can go out and play. Your outside @CAPS1 about a few hours. When you come in its around @NUM2:00 pm. You eat dinner and ya just want to unwind from the days gigantic adventure so you go on the computer. Ypu can go on the computer around like wild animals outside too. Only responside kids plan their time acordingly In conclusion it is important that you now that computers are good @CAPS1 multi tasking, talking to friends and family you havent seen in along time, and that you can go outside as well a stay inside now is the time to call, @CAPS5 you were smart you wouldn't listen to these experts.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
713,1,"Dear, local news time editor using a @CAPS1 daily has a positive effect on people, wouldn't you agree? People should use a @CAPS1 more often. I think everyone should have at least one or two computers in their house, they were invented for a reason. Computers allow you to interact with friends and family, help you with school work and, I guarantee that you will have a good time using a @CAPS1 by playing games and meeting new people. If you have school work to finish, computers help will work. If you need to do some research, you can just go to a website google and what you needed to know will be right in front of your eyes in a matter of seconds. Computers can help you with as well. There is icon inside one of your documents. I read an article on @CAPS1 about @PERSON1 stated that ""@CAPS1 users are most likely to succeed in school."" Interacting with friends and family is always a . Maybe you do not understand if you have been assigned in a certain class. You @MONTH1 add a friend and you will tell you what has . Talking to family members can do good for you in many ways. You can be having some trouble in your socical life, you can always talk to a family member or friend secretly through the @CAPS1. I remember having some difficulties with a few friends and one of my cousins gave me very good advice through an instant messaging program named ""@CAPS2"". I garantee you will have a good time using a @CAPS1. There are many games out there that you @MONTH1 enjoy. Playing these games, will teach hand-eye coordination, says @PERSON2. You can meet new people who can also give you good advice. As you computers have a lot of positive effect on people. You can interact with family and friends, recieve a lot of help for school work and meet a lot of new people. Take my advice and buy a @CAPS1.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
1453,1,"Dear local newspaper, I have recently saw that you think that people are spending way too much time on computers instead of excercising or hanging with their friends and family. Well I think the opposite of that opinion. People interact with people online if the want to. People can also learn new things. Plus computers help people make money. So read on to hear more. Most people that use computers are interacting with people someway somehow. @PERCENT1 of all people have either a facebook, a myspace, a skype, or all three. on any of those sites you interact with people. We can meet new people on the internet. Like people on the other side of the state or country. Also we hear about what is going on in our big or small town. Like for instance if there was a missing child we know the description, so we could help find him or her. Not only do people interact bu people can research useful information. For an example, one day I was told do a project on teen mothers. I went straight to the library I took some books out and whatever I couldn't find in the books. I went to the computer for. Also we can learn about faraway places like @LOCATION2 or @LOCATION1. My mom always says, ""@CAPS1 your room or @CAPS2 going to give your stuff to people in need."" @CAPS3 the first time she said that to me I went to the computer to see how other people were having to me. Some were good, nice, big houses but tyen others lived in boxes and trash cans. That changed me big time, I felt really had for those people. Lastly computers help people make money and support their family. @PERCENT2 of all people found out about their job on a computer. Theycan go to websites to find good safe jobs that makes good money. Plus if you have a computer you can easily work from home. Some people dont have the money for babysitters so have to watch their kids all day so have to work from home to make money. Finally people can apply for jobs or even community service online. My sister, @PERSON1, got her first job by going on the @CAPS4 museums website and applying right there on the computer. Therefore computers are good. I say this because people can interact with other people online, people can research useful information, and finally computers help people find jobs and make money. Do you use computers for any of these reasons?",4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,23.0
6793,3,The features of the setting affects the cyclist because the old guys had worn the next town was only eighteen miles down the road. So the features affect reading the story “Do not exceed Posted Speed Limit” was very dangerous and unsafe for people to ride on.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
3227,2,"Censorship in libraries in my view isn't a good idea. Library now days have alot of offensive language in there books so if someone were to take all of the book like that out of the library then library wouldn't even have that many books in it. Music is the same way all music now days might have some offensve words in them thats just something people now days have to get over.          I think library censorship is not a good idea. Some parent might not like the idea of there librarys haveing offensive language in the books, music, movies, and magazines. If the parent don't want there children to not read those book then they need to chose there childrens book, but I think takeing all the offensive book of the shelves isn't very smart. Some people enjoy reading and listening to that kind of music.           Some of the best books, and music now days have bad stuff in then like drugs, language, sex, gangs and much more but sometimes books like that can teach you a lesson on how to avoid that going down the road. So if you take those books off the shelves and werent able to listen to that music maybe your child could do some of those things. They really wouldnt know the side effects and bad thing that could come out of those things. Some of the top music and books have offensive materials in then and why would you not let your kid read them because of a couple choice word in them.I know some of this material could be bad for people but sometimes it can teach you a huge lesson in your life.     If there are book you dont want youself to read then don't read them. I think it would be unfair to take everthing that have some bad language or maybe some racism away from us just because you don't think its good for your child to read. Its not fair to people who @MONTH1 enjoy those books to not have the luxary to read those book anymore cause a few parent got mad about a book. Some of the old books have alot of racism in them, and you actually @MONTH1 read some of them in a school for a class. Those book @MONTH1 also have bad language in them to. Take thing those books away from us @MONTH1 take away are education, and we won't be able to learn from those books like we should.          So i think that censorshipn in library is just a horrible idea. It can take away from lesson we could learn and are education that we need to be successful in life",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
1088,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, Have you ever wanted to see the whole world with just a click of a button. That is as simple as just going out and purchasing a computer. Computers are becoming more and more popular. Some people think that people use computers too much. I am here to say that, that is a terrible accusation. First, computers help you with school work. Let's say you have an essay and it needs to be @NUM1 words or more you can just use word cant, then you have the exact amount of words. Also you might need to look up some information about a certain topic. You can just simply type in the word and search and then you have millions of choices to choose from. If you had a homework assignment that you didn't understand you could look up how to do it on the internet. But this i just the begining. Another reason computers are so great is that you can meet and interact with people all over the world and learn their culture. You can enter a free chatroom and meet someone from @LOCATION1. You would also be learning about their culture. This could also be a way to learn another language. If the person spoke fluently in @CAPS1 and @CAPS2 than he or she could teach you. You might be able to see how an @CAPS2 household runs. You could then make comparisons between the way you both live your life. Finally, you can understand the world around you. There are many websites where you can get a live sattelite feed on places on every corner of the globe. You could also do reasearch on the planet itself. You can learn about the care of the earth and what goes on inside it. You might also learn about nature. You could understand more about plants and animals. You can also got a look into space. You can learn about planets, if there is life on planets or water or anything else these would be things you can reasearch. So to sum it all up, you can get school work done. You can interact with people all over the world. You can also learn about the world around you and that covers less than a fraction of everything you can do on the computers, but don't stay on all day. Make sure you go outside and have a great time too!",5.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
9668,4,when they come back Saeng vowed silently to herself In the spring when the snows melts and the geese return and this hibicus budding then I will take that test again,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
4043,2,"One book or movie doesn't make a difference in the huge library full of books and movies. Thats why the books, magazines, or movies shouldn't be removed from the book shelf of the library.     They shouldnt be removed because some parents of the children don't care what their kids listen to or read. Only if they are doing what the parent says. Also the parents might think to much of their kid and think that their kid knows what books you want them to get or don't get.     Although, if your one of those parents that not only care about what your children read or listen, and you realize that every kid doesnt know what their parent wants, then you should talk to the school's principle and see if there is a way that you could come up with an area of the library that is just for the books that have the wrong type of language or sex appeal that you don't want your children to have, or ever read, or you could ask them about a permission slip for the students to ask their parent if they care about these types of books.    Then there are some kids who like to read those types of books and would be very dissappointed if their favorite books got taken off the shelf, and they didn't have anything else to read, but everybody else in the school got to have their favorite books in school.     If someone where to tell me that the book is changing their lives into something that is unbearable. I would say to them that, its not the book. The kids chose to read the book in the first place, so it would be their own doing if their life changed.     Finally, thats the reason why books shouldnt be taken off the book shelf because some people like them, and if you are some of the kids or parents who dont like them or don't want their kids reading them, then have the librarian make a note to say they aren't aloud to check them out",3.0,2.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
4086,2,"Parents are responsible for their child, whether it's taking them to school, making sure their grades are up or even watching what their child reads. Libraries should not remove 'offensive' books, magazines, movies, etc. That is the parents reponsibility, it's the library's.      The library is a place to go when you want to get a book or a movie or a magazine, ect. Whether it's for enjoyment or research. That book was specifically placed in the library for someone to read. If we took out all the material in the library that some people, in there oppion, found offensive, then there wouldn't be very many books left in the library. Who is to choose if the books were offensive anyhow? If an adult or mature teenager went to the library to look for a book and it wasn't there because they took it off the shelves because parents couldn't watch their child pick out a book? Or even teach them that those books are wrong.      The parents have full responsibiliy if their child is reading something that is inapropriate in their eyes. How would the library know which books to take off the shelf because all parents have different ideas of what is right and wrong. If the kid is young, the parent would be the one taking their child to the library, so they could easily watch which book, magazine, or movie they're picking out. Most libraries have a children's section anyway.     It is not the library's responisbility to watch out for your child, it's the parents. Their job is to supply the community with books, movies, magazines, etc. Libraries should keep the books on the shelvles so people from all over can enjoy any book they would like to read.",3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
15977,6,"The obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on the building were lack of area, populated area, and hydrogen is highly flammable. ""Also known today as blimps, dirigibles were actually enormous steel framed balloons, with envelopes of cotton fabric filled with hydrogen and helium to make them lighter than air."" Hydrogen is very dangerous and it's flammable and Empire State Building is located in a populated area, so it's dangerous to risk. Also as German dirigible ""Hindenburg"" was destroyed by fire in Lakehurst, New Jersey, it proved to the owners of Empire State Building that it's more dangerous than it looks. Other reason why dirigibles couldn't moor at the top of the building was the existing law agains all airships flying too low over populated areas.",2.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
13096,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir was mellow because he's talking about his life and his greatfuless to have been raised in @LOCATION1. Also the mood was happy, because he said ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home"" which is him talking about how his parents made @LOCATION1 feel like home. Those with the moods of the story",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
14846,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles trying to construct this marvelous building One obstacle was making sure the stress of the building from the dirigible would go to the foundation of the building and not the top or middle where it could cause it to collapse. As said in the text ""The steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate this new situation. Over @MONEY1 worth of modifications had to be made to the building's framework."" @CAPS1 the building had to be changed in many ways to make it stable enough for dirigible to dock.Another obstacle was the weather above the building which was very strong winds and air currents. This would mean that the dirigible would just be ""dangling high above pedestrians on the street"" and that's not a safe thing to have highly flammable hydrogen floating around above millions. An obstacle as well that came with these dirigibles was all the time and effort they had to put in to learn how to safely install a mooring mast. This took people going to professionals like the Navy and finding out the proper way. The mooring mast on the Empire State Building caused many obstacles to get in the way.",3.0,,,,,3.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
6244,3,The features of the setting affects the cyclist in many ways. One way it affects the cyclist is because of the weather condition. Being that it is very hot outside the cyclist does not have enough water. Another way it affects the cyclist is because of the condition alongside the road. For example the tumbleweeds and the snakes. Being that its not out most likely the desert is in process of a drought and he gets very dehydrated. I believe these are the reasons because it all makes a lot of sense and affects the cyclist.,2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9697,4,The author includes  this sentence in  the paragraph  because  it’s  the  start  of  a  new  beginning.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
13270,5,"The mood created by the author in this memoir is peaceful and loving. Narciso really believes that the definition of home is relationships & love rather than furniture and expenses. His home sounds really great because the way it is described in the memoir, you can see that his family are very caring and selfless people. The fact that his parents take in strangers and allow them to stay at their home really shows that they are very caring people.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
15905,6,"Al Smith, a former governor of New York, led the way in constructing the Empire state building. This building was being constructed to be the tallest building, taller than the Chrysler building which stood at @NUM1 feet tall. In order to make the Empire State building taller than the Chrysler building, Al Smith wanted to add a mooring mast to the top for docking dirigibles. This idea faced many obstacles. First, the passage states that ""The steel frame of the Empire State building would have to be modified and strengthen to accommodate this new situation."" This would cost a large amount of money to construct. Also, ""Most dirigibles from outside the United States use hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" @CAPS1, the passage states the issue that ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" The builders realized many problems after the mooring mast was constructed. The builders should have thought of each situation before building the mast which cost a lot of money. Although the mast was no longer used, the Empire State building still stood at the height of @NUM2 feet, the tallest building built.",3.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
1002,1,"Dear Local newspaper, I think computers are great sources. They help us instanly when we have to find something. Computers are very helpful and they are easy to use. Once you have mastered the computer it feels like you can do almost anything on it. Computers are great but the can also have negative effects on us too. I like, computers but I am going to say I am against them. When people get on their computers it's like they're in another world. When your on the computer you are alot less socal than you would be if you not on the computer. On don't know about you but alot of people are addicted to their computers. They get on an they stay on forever. The act like it is a neccesity to be on the computer every day. I do not have to be on computer websites like @CAPS1 and here is why. Compters get really annoyting sometimes. They distract people alot. Like the other day my sister and I were going to @NUM1 walking but we didn't go because she wouldn't help us exercise so we shouldn't be using it. In this economy it is important to have socal skills. Instant messaging people doesn't mean you are going socal skills. You actually have to get out and talk to people face to face. When I am on the computer to long I know. I know this because my eyes start to hurt. This is bad for your eye sight. People sit in their houses and just stare at the bright screen. They @MONTH1 not know but that is blinding so they must not stay on the computers long. These were some reason why you should not use the computer. I am not saying that it is an evil contraption I'm just saying, use the computer for info and work not for games and other things. You could be outside having fun instead of sitting up in your house so get out! Go make some real breathing friends in person.",4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
360,1,"Do Computers @CAPS1 Society? This question might be answered forever. I have an opinion about this and it might not effect everyone in the world but I do hope so. Exercising, great way to stay in shape but is you sit on the @ORGANIZATION1 all day you don’t have a chance to stay in shape. So while everyone is fit you eventually will be fat. Whik you sit there playing the some @ORGANIZATION1 game everyon is out side playing at the park, swimming in the pool or fishing at the lake. Sitling on a @ORGANIZATION1 destroys your life bot physically and socially. Lastly, @ORGANIZATION1 will stop you from spending time with friends and family. Also this will stop you from interacting with new friend, and your old ones will find new ones. Lastly, I you sit on the @ORGANIZATION1 @NUM1 you will miss out on the awesome @CAPS2 life you were waiting for since you can remember. So the next time your friend says to go online after school, say you'd rather not because you don't want to get addicted.",4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,19.0
1621,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 you belive that the advances in our technology are not good for our society you must be misunderstanding computers have a positive affect on the people in our community by giving us well hand and eye coordination and giving us the ability to seek and find information to learn. It can also allow people to communicate online with others. Hand and eye coordination is an important thing that helps us everyday. @CAPS2 new technology such as computers, can help us with that skill, we should use it. @PERSON1 of @ORGANIZATION1 says, ""Computers do help us a lot; almost @PERCENT1 of active computer users do improve their hand and eye coordination just by using the computers for a small amount of time everyday."" @CAPS3 and education are essential, especially now; the more you learn, the better salary you get. With this new technology, you can earn degrees and learn in a short period of time. My aunt got her @CAPS4 online about six months ago, and just because of that, got promoted at her job. Gaining valuable @CAPS3 online doesn't just go for adults but children as well. @CAPS2 they have a report on @CAPS5 or need some help on their homework, these new technologies are one of the most effective, fastest ways to learn and find information. @PERSON2, a doctor that specializes in @CAPS6 emotions/feelings says in the @CAPS6 @CAPS7 @CAPS8 last month that, ""in this new millenium, preteens and teenagers simply love the new advances in technology, and @CAPS2 we want them to learn, then we can take this tool and have them use it."" Computers are also a great way to communciate it's fast and easy. I have an uncle who lives in @LOCATION1, and we rarely get to see each other due to the distance, som we catch up by messaging each other by social netwroks or emails. It's even free, unlike the costly long distance calls. The communication is also great for businesses. A company can reach out and contact their customers to reschedule an appointment, give receipts, advertist and many other things. Computers are essential and effective techorlogy that are use by people around the country and world. They improve hand-eye coordination, allow people to gain @CAPS3 and education, and gives people opportunity to communicate with others. this is another great and useful step in our communities around the world.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
6902,3,In the essay the setting had every thing to do with  the cyclist cause he is ridding through the desert with batey tay water. He is pedaling through the dry heat thats tough even you had water pluse there were hills deadly snakes.Its dangerous enough with out that stuff being there. So I would listen to the cyclist & never ever listen to old men.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
8905,4,"I belive the author concludes with that quote for an assortment of reasons. One is to show that the charecter isn’t just going to give up, that her failing wasn’t the end for her. This shows sorting like morale of never giving up. It feels as the character is referring to the hibiscus as sensely. “The hibiscus will be budding”   which means that she herself will branch out and learn more. By the spring time she would have learned enough and experienced enough to try to pass the test again. The hibiscus also reminds her of her home. When she will look at it she will find the courage to pull through and to face her challenges like her test.The ending quotealso wraps up the story.It also shows the charecters will of not giving up and to always try.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
16138,6,The builders of the Empire State Building faced many challenges trying to allow dirigibles to dock there. The challenges ranged from nature itself to laws against it. They didn't take into consideration the constantly shifting air atop the building. At such heights as the moring mast violent air currents would cause the dirigible to swivel around the mooring mast. This was also due to the fact that the blimp would only be tethered in the front. Not only were those large factors coming into play but laws also came in the way of dirigibles mooring at the Empire State. They didn't think about the existing law. It stated that air ships flying to low or over urban areas was against the law. So many factors came into play with building such a project. Overall it was too far fetch of an idea.,2.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
4046,2,"Do you want your children to have bad images in their head? Does everybody deserve to read or watch anything they want? I believe strongly that these materials should be removed from libraries in most cases. Offensive materials have no business being in libraries. These materials are not good for children, offend people, and do not look good on the libraries that carry them.     First, I believe there is absolutely no reason for any child to see explicit material. This material can create a very ambitious young child. If a child sees a magazine containing pornography, the child will think that this material is acceptable. The truth is, that child should not know about anything of this subject until he or she receives approval from his/her parents. I know from experience that most parents would not want one of their children to see any of this material for a very extensive time. I have had a few disturbing experiences myself. One time when I was a young lad, I checked out a horror movie from the local library not knowing what the movie was about. I made sure my parents were not home when I watched it. After about three minutes, I was terrified. The images from the film stayed in my head for a good month. Children do not deserve the feeling of fear for that long of a time.     Next, some material in the library contain certain things that offend random people. Large public libraries contain music with explicit lyrics. We, as a society, do not want our youth to hear the nasty words in some of the rap songs that are released. In addition to that, this music offends many adults as well. Adults agree that there is no reason for any rap to be released in a public place like a library. Music is a very great art, but when certain people abuse it, it no longer has a good image. I have observed that children listening to rap at a very young age are more likely to end up turning out to be an unsuccessful individual.     Also, some specific magazines contain images that are offensive to the people of our society. This idea relates to my first idea, but I will speak some of it again. Images like blood can sometimes offend the people of our generation. We do not need any of this. If offensive material was banned from libraries, our society would have eliminated one more problem that is taking away from our good world. I have been offended of some different magazine pictures before. Someday when I have kids, I will never let them go to certain sections of the library with this material.     Last, I want to address the fact that specific libraries can carry a bad reputation if they carry this material. In addition, employees will definitely go to a different library without the bad music and the violent movies. Most of the adults that want their children to be successful and have a good, creative mind will think twice about going to the library without censorship of certain items. I have read that libraries with bad material are much less likely to attract customers than libraries with censorship. I know that if I was the manager of a public library, I would make sure that any items that have the potential to offend people would be immediately removed. A library should definitely not want that bad gossip to go around town about how bad that specific library is. Censorship is as necessary to libraries as flavor is to food. Shelves that contain inappropriate books, magazines, and music will only make their number of customers drop. If you think that this is only going to help libraries, I dare you to go ahead and try it out.      Everyone has their own opinions, but I am a firm believer in censorship at public and private libraries. Inappropriate books, magazines, and music will only destroy the good reputation that a library @MONTH1 have. A library is a great place to be, but the libraries without censorship are an utter disappointment. After all, it is your life, and you get to choose the way you want your children to act. Disturbing materials are only going to bring a negative effect on these minors. I hope to see the amount of censorship rise in libraries. If it does, people will see a dramatic change in all of my ideas discussed.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,25.0
246,1,"Dear editor, Have you ever would to know something so badly that you can't focus on anything else? Have you ever tried to find that information and had an""ah-hah!"" moment? What did you use to search for this knowledge? You probably used a computer. All you need to do is type in your request, hit "" enter"" and viola! Your screen fills with choices of information sites. Computers help so many people with everyday questions. Our country has gotten smarter because of computers. You can converse with friends that have moved across the state, country, or even world. At every click of your mouse there are new things to learn. You can even use the computer for your personal enjoyment. Computers have opened up so many opportunities the world needs to lake. When I was four years old, my best friends at the time moved to florida. I was devastaded. At first, we tried writing letters to each ohter. Then, as we grew older and became busier and busier, or connection with each other halted. As technology and computers have advanced, my friend and I text, e-mail, and instant message each other all the time. It has made our long distance friendship easier and closer. Because of computers, you can communicate with friends you thought were long-lost. You can also meet new people with one of the many sites available. How would you like to talk with someone all the way down in @LOCATION2? World communication has also opened up many business opportunities. Since the economy is failing, computers will open job spaces, help college students study for their futur career, and hopefully help to improve the lives of many people. Communication is needed for many things to make our world better for generations to came. Instead of going to a noisy arcade, why not play exciting games right in the privacy of your. Any game you can think can probably be found on the @CAPS1. From a simple game of solitare to an advanced level of shift, games for any age and difficulty level can be found. New, some people @MONTH1 think that all kids are going to do is sit in front of the computer and play games. There are going to be some peole that will refuse to go outside, spend time with their friends or just read outside. There will definitely be some people like that. I can't help it. What we can do is all those that refuse to go outside to do so. I know many people who spend and budget their time wisely and still have a great time. We can also encourage kids to use exercise programs on their computers and video games to improve their health. There are many fun and games that help you to be a better and healthier person while still having fun. The computers we have in our homes right now are equipped with so much information that if you tried to take it all in are you would be overwhelmed. @ORGANIZATION1, a popular search engine, gives you the power to look up anything you could ever wait to know from the vice president's birthday to the price of eggs in @LOCATION4 to how wide the @LOCATION1 is can all be found with the click of a button. this knowledge helps with homework assignments incredibly. Most reference books are out of date and information is inaccurate, but computers are updated so frequently, you have all the facts all the time. I think our country has gotten much smarter because of computers. So whether you want to talk to your long-lost friend in @LOCATION2 or talk to an expert on osprey in @LOCATION3, you can find your answer on the computer. While you're at it, play a couple exciting games and learn about the best movies ever released in @DATE1. Have fun and learn lots!",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,24.0
9148,4,The author ended the story with that paragraph because he was trying to tell us that hibiscus represents a comfort in a time of disappointment for Saeng. She saw the plant when she just fell her driving test. ,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
15825,6,"In the excerpt from ""The Mooring Mast"", by @ORGANIZATION2, the builders of the Empire State Building faced very difficult obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One of the most difficult obstacles was ""nature itself"". There were very strong winds that ""were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" The back of the dirigible would move around and around even if it were ""tethered to the mooring mast"". Also, dirigibles usually landed in open landing fields and would be weighted down with lead weights. However, weighting down dirigibles with lead weights at a height of about 1,250 feet in a place as densely populated as New York City would be ""neither practical nor safe"". Lastly, there ""was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas"", meaning the idea of a mooring mast on the Empire State Building was simply unpractical.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
16254,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building had many obstacles they had to face in order to fulfill the @ORGANIZATION1. The Empire State Building is @NUM1 feet tall which made for some problems. Lüsted stated, ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the Mooring Mast was nature itself. The winds on the top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" The wind speed on the top of the Empire State building would be terrible because the Dirigible's tail is basically weightless and it would move around violently which could make the support beams give out, or could put people's life in danger below. Lüsted said, ""But using these at the Empire State Building; where they would be dangling high above pedestrians on the street is neither practical nor safe."" Another reason as to why the Mooring Mast can not be constructed is the law against airships flying too low over urban areas. Lüsted stated, ""This law would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to a building or even approach the area."" It is not legal for the Dirigible to even be in the viscinity of the building which makes it impossible to do.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
7078,3,"The setting has a great impact on the condition of the cyclist. First, it is a very hot dry in June. The cyclist is maneuvering his way through “high deserts in @LOCATION1” where he comes across many hills that he must climb over and maneuver his way down. With all of these obstacles and the heat slowing him down he will need water but is already low.",1.0,,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
1184,1,"In todays day in age, computers are a key part to business, education, and recreation and they benefit our society. First of all, you can get a better education learning from them, also, it is a great way to communicate with people. Finally, it even teacher hand-eye coordination that you could use in your everyday life. My first point is that you can get a better education using them. For example, the textbooks that we use in social studies at our school still refers to @LOCATION3 as the @LOCATION1. Computers are a great way to get up-to-date information about the world. ""With our outdated textbooks in school, the @CAPS1 is our number one recourse to get information."" @CAPS2 @PERSON2 eighth grade teacher. With computers, you can learn about far away places without learing the comfort of your own home. In addition to getting a great education from them, computers are an eyelent form of communication. I remember when I was in @NUM1 grade and my father was across the world on a business trip. Our phones couldn't call long distance so we relied on computers to communicate with each other. This helped me get over my father's absence. When you use a computer to communicate you are also saving money."" You can save over @MONEY1 a year. When you use the @CAPS1 to communicate over a cell phone."" @CAPS2 @PERSON1, electronics expert. Finally, the use of a computer increas hand-eye coordination. With all the typing you do on a key board, your hand dexterity increases by the second. In fact, ""@PERCENT1 of computer users are more coordinated throught their day, opposed to people who don't own a computer."" @CAPS3 a recent pole in the @LOCATION2 times. And in this day in age hand-eye coordiantion is a neccesity. Besides wouldn't you like to have the ability to have your hands work without having to look at them? So as you can see, computers would benifit society and everyone who uses them. They are a great benifit that @CAPS4's need for their education and buisness. Thank you for listenging.",5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,23.0
14895,6,"In the short story ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon @CAPS1 There is an obsticle that the builders had to over come. Building the top of the empire state building was difficult because the dock part of the tower wasn't stable. Also the frame of the building couldn't support the dirigible, ""dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the buildings frame"". The designers designed a new tower that was a ""shinny glass and chrome-nickel stainless steel tower that would be illuminated from the inside"". The winches and controlling machinery would be housed in the base of the shaft its self. They also added a observation deck and more passengers were able to wait for the dirigible. another problem with it was there was a law that aircrafts couldn't get to close to urban places. Over all it was a hard pain saking design for them and costed alot of money.",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
9810,4,"I think Saeng concluded with this story because there is always time to make up for the past if the past allows you to meaning that @CAPS1 didn’t past the test. I fell she met that “in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again,” to me this means that even though it is snowing outside there is always next spring to start growing back up the vegetable garden this also relates to Saeng even though she failed the test there is always another change we can make up for that lost and retry and try to succeed at this one.",1.0,,,,,1.0,0.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,3.0
16199,6,"The early @DATE1's was a time where everyone was out to find and build the next best thing. In @CAPS1, two tycoons were competing to build the tallest building in the world. Al Smith, the man creating the Empire State building, had an idea to make his building taller and more popular; build a mooring mast for dirigibles on the top of his building. Though a good and creative idea, the obstacles his architects would face would turn out to be more than they bargained for.first off, putting a mooring mast on top of the Empire State building was very unpractible without changing the whole design."" The steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modified and Strengthened to accommodate this new situation"", (@CAPS2 @NUM1). Also, the dirigible would put so much stress on the foundation of the building. ""The Stress of the dirigible's load and wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the buildings foundation...,"" (@CAPS2 @NUM1). Nature was also a giant obsitacl these architects faced while building this. ""The greatest obstical to the suceessful use of the mooring mast was nature itself"", (@CAPS2 @NUM3)As you can see, these architects faced many challenges while building this mast, that saddly never paid off in the end.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
14842,6,The obstacles the builders face were great. They explained how most dirigibles from outside the @LOCATION1 use a different gas called hydrogen which is highly flammable. Following that they told @LOCATION1 how Hindenburg by fire in 1937 which used hydrogen. They realized if this had happen in a urban area it could have been worse. Anthore obstacle they faced was the wind. If the dirigible was parked at mooring mast the violent wind speeds would make the Blimp shift and cause strees on the building steel frame. The greatest obstacle was the law passed. The law stated that no airships could fly to low in urban areas. This would keep blimps from landing there.,2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
12501,5,"Narciso Rodriguez expresses many moods of happiness in the memoir. @CAPS1 is thankful, ""But, in reallty, there is no way to express my gratitude for the spirit of generosity impressed upon me at such an early age and the demonstration of how important family and friends are."" That statement shows how thankful Narciso is to have such a wonderful life full of great friends and families. The mood of the memoir is very up-beat because Narciso is talking about how great his life has been since @CAPS1 was born. ""I've often told them of my admiration for there strength and perseverance, and I've thanked them repeatedly."" That quote shows how proud @CAPS1 is of his parents because they gave up their families, friends, and careers so that @CAPS1 could have a better life in @LOCATION1. Narciso says, ""my mother and father had come to this country with such courage, without any knowledge of the language or the culture."" @CAPS1's saying that @CAPS1's very happy that his parents did that for him. Many quotes from the memoir support and set the mood to describe Narciso's life.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
4527,2,"Today it seems as if anything you could imagine is out in the world somewhere, somehow. Whether it is found in a magazine, a book, music, or movies is irrelevant. The fact of the matter is, if good stuff is out there, then you can generally make the assumption that bad stuff is out there too. This bad stuff is sitting around on the shelves of our libraries nationwide waiting for someone to open it up and induldge in their naughty, intense, or graphic ways.      As an @CAPS1, every man has the right to do or read what he wants. But what happens if it is not a man at all but in fact it is a child? This child is not choosing to read such bad things but just so happens to stumble upon it. Should they be punished for accidentally coming across this material and reading it? Which raises the question; who is to blame, and, what is the solution? It is a good and respectable idea to censor certain things in libraries but if someone wants to read something, they should be able to right? It is a very sticky situation and determining the answer should be a long and thought out process examining the issue from all angles, and different perspectives.      The people that have brought this issue to the surface more than likely have personal experiences that make them feel so strongly on thier views of censorship in libraries, as have I. On a dry, blistering @DATE1 day I wanted to find something to do indoors. So instead of staying home all day I walked down to the library. I had been there a lot that @DATE1 and I was pretty familiar with their selection so I was looking for something new. So I strayed out of the kid section and browsed other areas of the library. There were so many choices and options right at the tip of my fingers. I got tired of reading all the titles so I did what generally any other kid would do, and something parents have been telling their kids for centuries not to do; I judged the books by their covers. I found one that looked interesting, and long story short I just so happened to stumble upon a love story. But not the kind I was used to. It was an adult book and want into vivid detail about the relationship of a sexually active older couple. Needless to say I was speechless. Reading that stuff as a child, scared mevery much so.     Nevertheless it leads me to believe that it would be smart for censorship to be put into place in libraries. Of course, not every kid is going to have the same experience I did. In fact hardly any will. But I know that I was traumatized. So I can easily imagine how other people felt when the same thing or a realitively similar thing happened to them. But for all the other people that have not had things happen to them or that have not stumbled upon such material would probably think that it is unfair that things should be taken away from them just because other people could not handle it. But if you were like me, or any other innocent child that happened to find and experience certain things they just were not ready for would you not agree that censoring libraries is a beneficial thing to everyone? If you want things that are more intense or out there, then you can go to a bookstore, instead of a public library.     I am a teenager and I do not have children but I can only imagine how you mothers and fathers out there would feel if it was their kids who were emotionally scarred from experiences they could have been shielded from in the first place. Kids should be kids and not have to be worried about the bad things in this world, and the most effiecient way to keep that the way it is, is to censor books, music, magazines and movies from the shelves of public libraries.",4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,22.0
3594,2,"Censorship?  What is it?  Well from what i know cenorship is where you are blocked from certin things that you are not able to ever bring into the place that blocked it.  So the question is it wrong to censor something or not, i think that libraries should be able to censor certins things that people find offensive.  First reason why i think it is right that people should be able to censor things is becuase little childeren could be able to take at peek at what they shouldn't be looking at, when it comes to magazines and also movies.  Next reason why i think labraries should be able to cenor is because people can find centin things offensive just as music, for example like vulgar language can be listened to and aslo also naughty things can be watched in movies.  My last reasoning why i think it is fair that libraries are able censor things is beacuase some people like to read but in thier reading can be bad things that they find offensive and they can always find a way to take an item out from a labrary.  These are reasons why i think they should be able to censor books, music, movies, and also magazines.     My first reasoning in why i think it is fair that libraries are able to censor books, music, movies, and magazines is because little childeren could be able to look at things things they should not be able to take a peek at.  Thses things could be like pronogaphy, and also really grusome things in magazines and in movies.  If these things were in labraries they can possibly show other childeren, inwhich it would not be good.  This can be a problem beacuase parents can put the blame on the libraries by saying that the workers didn't do a good job at watching out for the children.  Also i think think they should be able to censor movies beacuse little childern shouls not be watching gursome movies at a young age.  This can really hurt them and others if they learn and see what is on this movies and magazines.  Also labraries can censor music.      I also think libraries can censor music beacause in music these days there are very bad things that any body can find that is offensive.  Little childern can be listenig to vulgar lyrics that are in the songs and they could be repeating it to other people.   This can be bad in many ways because first of all they might not know what they are saying,  so if one day they say it to an adult, that adult can put the blame on the library owners.  Also they should be able to censor movies again beacuse naughty things can be shown in those movies that certin age levels should not be able to see.  These are ressons why libraries have a right to censor music and movies.   They aslo have right to censor books.      Books in they libraries are great but some books should not be able to be in a library, certin books such as books about faith and other religions.  And also about gursome items.  Some people can find books about religion and faith to be very offensive because some people @MONTH1 not see eye to eye about other religions.  And to minimize this problem libraries can take these books out so peolpe won't find it be offensive.   And also libraries should be censoring certin books about death because it can really get to a person and they can show other people that will find it very offensive.  So this is why i think libraries should be able to censor things.     In conclusion libraries should be able to censor books, music, movies, and magazines, because in some books they can have religion problems and problems with death,  movies beacuse in some movies it can show pronography and gursome things that peopel should not be watching,  and they should be able to censor magazines and music beacuse in magazines childern could be looking at certin things they shouls not be looking at.  And they should be able to censor music beacuse peopel can be offended if they ever listen to vulgar language.  So in other words i do think libraries should be able to censor books, music, movies, and magazines",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
16496,6,"Marcia Amidon Lüsted, author of ""The Mooring Mast,"" highlights not only the safety hazards that the Empire State Building builders encountered while attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there, but also a factual aspect dealing with laws and violations that solidified the failure of such transportation. Normally dirigibles would moore in open landing fields and then weighted down to ensure that they would @CAPS1 motionless on the ground, but since the builders of the Empire @CAPS1 Building are tempted to dock dirigibles @NUM1 feet in the air, nature and airspace laws come in to play. The Empire State Building rising 102 floors high was a feat in and of itself; the vision of dirigibles docking at such height by builders was maimed by both the forces of actual nature and legal disputes. The fact that dirigibles would have to dock at the top of the Empire State Building was not approved by nature. the winds in the airspace @NUM1 feet in the air were not only strong but constantly shifting due to violent air currents so forceful that even ""the U.S. Navy dirigible Los Angeles... could not get close enough to tie up. It was too much of a safety hazard and gamble to more a dirigible with winds not cooperating. The most factual and practical problem builders faced with the idea of docking dirigibles atop the Empire State building dealt with a violation of an airspace law. The existing law banned ""air ships from flying too low over urban areas,"" meaning that legally it was a potential safety hazard to direct and dock a dirigible that high in the air. Without certainty for success, the operation of docking dirigibles on the Empire State Building was halted in the late 1930s. Although the builders of the great Empire State Building could build at @NUM1 foot sky scraper the attempt to dock dirigibles upon the building failed mainly because of safety hazards.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
12709,5,"The mood in the memoir is grateful. It is grateful in a few ways. One way is in paragraph six he says ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrafice. I've often told them that what they did was a much more courageous thing than I could have ever done. I've often told them of my admiration for their strength and perseverance, and I've thanked them repeatedly."" This shows that he is grateful toward his parents because they moved to the @CAPS1 from Cuba. Another way is in paragraph @NUM1 he says ""my parents both shared cooking duties an unwittingly passed on to me they're rich culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today (and for which I am eternally grateful). Passionate Cuban music (which I admired to this day) filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen."" This shows that he is grateful toward his parents because of their Cuban culture and specifically their cooking skills being passed on to him. Those are some reasons why the mood of the memoir is grateful.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,11.0
10058,4,"In the story “winter hibiscus” by minfong Ho, the author is concluding the story with this last sentence because its showing everyone that the seasons over for the growing of the plants but when it comes time for the flowers to start growing again she will be back to take care of the plants because its her favorite & they are what she lives for now that she has to take care of them. Also the author probably put the conclusion of the story like that to get people interested in reading more of the story later on because your getting left in a sense of suspense, because you don’t know if she really will go back to the plants or just about them. another reason I think, the auther ended it that is because its still snowing she cares about the plans but she isn’t gonna worry about them until it is the right time again. For example she says “when they come back then I will take the test again,“ that’s showing she isn’t giving up on anythin she loves and she will keep trying until she gets it.",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
16364,6,"The builders faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building. They had to find a way to keep the dirigibles from spining around the top of the tower. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" This meant the dirigibles, would swivel around the mast unless tied down. The next problem or obstacle was making the buildings structure strong enough to withstand the tension caused by the dirigibles. ""Over sixty thousand dollars worth of modifications had to be made to the buildings framework. The next challenge was to create a safe enviroment for the pedestrians below. That was not possible because the city was already made below. The drigibles ""would be dangling high above pedestrians on the street was neither practical nor safe. Clearly the builders faced obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on the building.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
15306,6,"On @DATE1, The Empire State Building was announced to reach the height of 1,250 feet. Al Smith, the architect of the building mentioned that the top would be more than ornamental. It was said that this amazing dream would come true for aviation pioneers. The building was going to have a mooring mast at its top for docking these new airships called dirigibles, otherwise known as blimps. This was thought out to be a great idea. Things didn't quite turn out as originally planned, and Fate struck. As fate struck, things should have been more apparent before it  was ever constructed. Resons being; Most blimbs from outside the states run on hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is more flammable. Winds on top of the building were constantly shifting, causing the dirigible to swivel, and it would be a disaster for anything to happen to New York City and the pedestrians it holds. Another law was the law of how close airships can be to the building. Thus, still leaving the Empire State Building at 1,250 feet, but never completing the original goal.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
16402,6,"In the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, workers building the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles, or blimps to dock there. At first Al Smith, who headed efforts to construct the Empire State Building, was really trying to win ""... the title of world's tallest building..."" against the architect building the Chrysler Building. Then Al Smith had an idea that would make his building over @NUM1 taller than the Chrysler building. Al Smith decided he would add a to the building to serve as a mooring mast for derigibles. ""The Empire State Building would have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate this new situation."" ""over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications had to be made..."". ""The architects and engineers of the Empire State Building consulted with the experts..."" to make sure everything would be safe and in check. The builders went through such trouble and ""The mooring mast of the Empire State Building was destined to never fufill its purpose..."". After so much work and effort the mooring mast never got put to use because ""Dirigibles moored... at the Empire State Building, where they would be dangling high above pedestrians on the street, was neither practical nor safe.""",1.0,,,,,1.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,7.0
566,1,"Computers are not having a negative affect on society. In fac when you talk with someone online @CAPS1 helps build relationship within that person. A use for computer that is also use full is hand eye coordination. Education is also a useful thing you can use with computers. You can learn about faraway places and monuments. The myth is that computers ruin relationship between friends and family however, In some ways @CAPS1 improves them, when you go on skype you talk with some one online. By doing this you actually improve the bone between you and that person. This information proves that computers can actually suport replationships. Hand eye coordination is also something useful that a computer an teach when you type on keyboard your fingers inprove on reflectsel. If you continue to type your hand eye coordination will improve. Some people might say that a computer won't help you much @CAPS1 really is possitive to use @CAPS1. A computer is more educational than what most people would think. On certain websites you can see something that can teach you. If you go on a historian websites that someone could learn about different typs of people. Lots of critics say that a computer is not educational. However when you look at the facts a computer can teach a lot. @CAPS1 is easy to belive a computer is not a good thing. But when someone looks at the facts A computer is a great thing to own. If critics acna take these facts into consideration a computer is a better object than what most people say.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
12347,5,"The overall mood created by the author, Narciso Rodriguez, in the memoir is very warm, loving, and shows great unity at his old home and family. In paragraph @NUM1, Narciso talks about the great selflessness and courage that his parents had when they immigrated to @LOCATION2. Narciso talks about how grateful he is to them, for leaving their homeland so that he could have a better life. During the @NUM2 and @NUM3 paragraphs of the memoir, Narciso describes the warms and generosity of his family. He also showed how family doesn't necessarily mean a blood relative. His family came from Cuba, but there were also other cultures in their neighborhood such as @CAPS1, and also Spanish immigrants as well This loving and extremely rich cultural background that he had lived in as a child showed great unity between different types of people. Narciso's family's door was always open to anyone in need. Narciso Rodriguez's definition of family, shows that his background was full of sharing, joy, and love all squeezed into his small apartment in New Jersey.",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
381,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, more and more people are getting hooked on computers. I am here to say that computers are not the best way to benefit our society. First off, most @CAPS1 are spending less time with friends/family and more time looking through a screen. Also, it would be so much better for our bodies and minds to go out and enjoy nature instead. Lastly, you can get addicted to the computer. So here are my reasons why computers do not benifit our society. My first reason includes friends and family. more and more people are neglecting to spend time with their loved ones to get to the next level on '@CAPS2 wars.' @CAPS3 this really how we want our future generations growing up, looking blankly at computer screens? I know I don't want that. I lknow this from personal experience. When I was young, I visited my cousin @PERSON1. All I would get to see of him was a quick '@CAPS4', but then held escape to his room to continue clicking angry on the computer. The point @CAPS3 you can't replace family and friends with a computer screen. It's not right. My next argument against computers @CAPS3 about our bodies and minds. The best way to take care of those things @CAPS3 nature. Unfortunately most @CAPS1 aren't getting outside for a wack of exercise due to computers. In fact almost @NUM1 @CAPS1 say they spend more time on the computer than anywhere else. This @CAPS3 not a good way to spend time. We need to solve this issue before more @CAPS1 make the switch from nature to computers. Fresh air, trees and birds are much better than a screen, a couple clicks, and the hum of a machine. My third and final reason @CAPS3 about addiction. So many people are getting adicted to the things they are finding on their computers. Addiction @CAPS3 a very sericuse matter that we need to fix. All of this @CAPS3 pointing to lazyness too from lack of intrest to anything else. I know this from personal experience. When my brother first got his computer he literally locked himself in his room for days. All he did for almost a week was socialize and beat his personal best score on a game. This @CAPS3 not the way to be treating a device. So, as I know you can all see computers don't have a positive impact on our society. First of all computer @CAPS3 over ruling family and friends. Also, nature @CAPS3 becoming less and less of a priority with the computer in mind. Lastly it's becoming a worldwide addiction. Thank you for deeply considering all the arguments that I have to offer. I know it majorly helps people keep in touch globaly, but there are other ways to do it, such as mail.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
10526,4,"The author concludes the story with this because its winter now + the flowers are gone, but during that time when she was planting she grew more mature. like it says in the text things she used to think were strange are now becoming firmiliar + shes getting the hang of things. Because shes learning more about it + will be ready for the test next spring. ",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
7515,3,"The cyclist “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” was definatly affected by the setting. He was cycling in California - which is a hot place to begin with - in June - which made it even hotter coming upon a hot desert. When you’re doing a physical activity like that, the last thing you want is to be in the heat. The narrator only brought one bottle of water which at first he was drinking regularly. Then it started to get hot and he was out of water. This affected his body by making him tired, and his mind because he started doubting himself. Then there was the abandon juice building where they made juice. He said “In an ironic twist abandon years earlier had been a Welch’s grape juice factory and bottling plant.” He was dying of thirst and then he found the bottling plant. The cyclist was definatly affected by his surrondings both mental - by saying “I’m going to die.” - and physically by becoming dehydrated.",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
9656,4,The author concludes the story with the saying because it shows that she has confent in her self because she did not pass the test she could take it again and know she can pass the test she was up set about it her mother when she talk to her made her feel good and confent to do or retake the test and know she could pass the test so that why I think the author concludes it with that saying at the end of the story.,0.0,,,,,0.0,1.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,1.0
7145,3,The features of the setting affected the cyclists because he was thirsty and it was hot and he was almost out of water and he almost died because when he was drinking the water and he hit a bump and spit got lodged in his throat and tiring hills it seemed to never end.,1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,4.0
3685,2,"I think that a library should be just books because that what they are made for. If we started putting movies in the librarys why put books in the libraries. I think it should be one or the other. If movies were in libraries i think that people would get more movies than books, and just think how it would be if you put music in a library also. I do think that a magazine is a book.     Movies should stay in a movie store of at the movie theater. not in libraries. Music should stay on the radio or in stores not in libraries. People would lose intrest in books if people started putting movies and music in libraries. I think they are trying to put technology in libraries and im not for that.     If music and movies were at libraries their would be no need for books and people would stop buying books. We need books they are the oldest but most acreart way to express yourself or tell a story. but now they want movies or music.",1.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,9.0
7164,3,"In the story by Joe Kurmaskie it tells about a cyclists challenge through the heated deserts of California in June. The cyclist had started out with confidence, followed by determination, then relief. The setting affected the cyclist physically and mentally. First, listening to the old men was stupid, then taking the trip not certain if you would have enough water, and lastly traveling through the desert in June. He started getting a little doubtful with himself as well, that won’t help much with bringing success of the trip. Once he had made it to a fish camp an old man even older then the men who gave him the false information told him he knew how to get to Yosemite, but the young man did the best thing and told him he already knew how to get there. He didn’t need to be traveling out in the desert heat for hours that’s just unhealthy",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
13129,5,"The mood created by the @CAPS1 Narciso Rodriguez's mood was a loving, caring, thoughtful feeling which came from his childhood home. In the passage ""Narciso Rodriguez"" it states ""A cuban feast always filled the air with not just scent and music but life and love"". This quote shows how much love and caring the mood is and makes the mood a more loveing and thoughtful feeling In the passage ""Narciso Rodriguez"" it states ""it's gracious neighborhood or the many things I learned there about to love."" In This quote I felt the mood which was love and the @CAPS1 inquires it with his word choice. Also in this passage ""Narciso Rodriguez"" it states ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home"". This quote signify's all three moods loving, caring, and the thoughtfulness of the memoir. It describes how the mood was brought on, how it was and the meanings. The mood to the story is touching with all the warmth of love brought into the house, instead of caring about the possessions with greed.",3.0,,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,12.0
1627,1,"Dear local Newspaper, I think using a computer has become bad influence on modern society. When people talk to each other via text message or e-mail there is no emotional sense. You are blind a way because you can't see who's on the other side of the screen, @CAPS1 you know is the username of that person. Its practically the same as using a disguise. Not only is the computer dad for your healthy. Its become a threat to its user. Would you really want to use something that bad toward your health and your privacy? Statistics show that @PERCENT1 of teenangers have access to/and use the internet more than three times a week. Statistics also so that more than half of teenagers in the @CAPS2.S.A spend more than @NUM1 hours on a computers, some even @NUM2 hours! This has become the addiction of the world. My friend barely used a computer and always played outside. When his sister showed him @CAPS3, @CAPS4, myspace, @CAPS5, etc. He would stay on for hours and after a month, it didn't get better, day after day he began to come outside less and less, and I began to hate him fo that. Statistics show that people who are using computers excessively tend to have drop in their grades. People are mixed in to these machines they become anti-social, don't do homework, potentially fail the unit and reappeat the grade. Computers are the same as watching tv, sure! they teach hand to eye coordination but at the same time their brains are being turned into swiss cheese. I believe computers are the best idea, since pouring gasoline on pancakes. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
15850,6,one of the obstacles that had to face was they had to make it taller because it was sapoosed to be the tallest building. They also had problems with it so they had to keep fixing it.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
3276,2,"That saying Katherine Paterson said 'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf.' I disagree with that statement. I think it is the goverment's choice if these items should be taken out of libraries or not. So we will need ligitement reason's to take some books off the shelf.     Some people think we should take books off the shelf that teach the kid's our history. People don't have that right to take away from children. In the statement Katherine made, she is supporting that very idea; taking away our kids right to learn US history. The kids have that right to learn our very own history and some people want to take that away. Then what will our future generation be like. Some kid's might not even know who @CAPS1 @CAPS2 is or how we got here to this very continent.     Parents also don't want us to read anything in books that have foul language or anything to do with nudity. I see what theese parents are trying to do. They are trying to protect their children, but the fact is people are going to have to go through this in life and if they arn't introduced at a younger age what will they do when they are older. Some kids that have that right taken away from will have no idea what to do when they get older and the foul language in the texts of theese books put voice into the books. We don't want the up coming generations to be blind to all of this because it is the real world.     When I was was in fifth grade I liked to read alot. I really liked the adventure books such a the boxcar children and books like that. One time I went into the library and I picked out a book about a haunted house. The librarian would not let me check the book out because there were some texts in the book not apropriate for me. That sort of crushed my reading spirit and I really never wanted to go and check out a book by myself any more. So adults that want to take theese books of the shelves you might be stopping our generation from learning and if we don't learn then our next generation isn't going to want to read anything or learn.     Theese are just a couple of reason we should not take books, magazines, movies, and music away from us. There are more people out there that have reasons to, so if you want to take this right away from us then be prepared for an argument because will fight for this right. So you adults who want to take that book off the shelf, you better have real good ligitement reason to take it off.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,14.0
7363,3,"In the story, The man has a very hard time trying to get to some water. He faces many obsticales in the story. For example, he has gone about @NUM1 miles without water. Also, their are a lot of hills and turns withen the story which slow him down He is having a hard time getting to water because of many obsticals",1.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-3/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,3.0
708,1,"Dear @CAPS1, Computers are an amazing advantage to use in this modern day and age. They are easy to learn how to use, you can connect with old friends, and even learn by going to an online school or college they offer. Computers are amazing advancement and this is why you should use one. Who doesn't like computers? They are easy to learn how to use and are in a variety of forms. Almost every college student has a computer or laptop. They could have never used one before, but then they learned how easy it was. Most computers come already installed with the necessary programs including: @ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS2 @CAPS3, or some form of @CAPS2, a virus protection software, and other simple software. Moving is very hard, you leave a place where you have so many friends to a place that is so new to you. Computers make this so much easier by letting you connect with them without having to wait for the mail by writing letters. There is email, facebook, and myspace that let you chat with old friends, new friends, or even parents. Some people say that these things are dangerous, that is only if you start talking to people you don't know. People keep coming up with even more ways to stay connected so don't miss out on the opportunity. These people are so smart, they figured out a way to have school online. This is very helpful to somebody who is injured or is trying to get another degree to get a better job. People get assignments to do and each class only takes about one or two months. People get to do their job or enjoy nature still because their day is open and not busy. Sure people don't get to enjoy the campus, but with the price of gasoline these days, it's worth it. So don't be the person sitting around doing nothing, buy a computer and stay in touch with technology. Remember computers are easy to use, you can stay connected to friends and you can go to school on them. This technology can help you more than it can hurt you.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0
13383,5,"The mood of this memoir is happy. The main character of this story is Narciso he was kinda poor him and his family lived in a on bedroom appartment and he didnt mine because he loved everyone around him especially his parents because they gave him everything and now Narciso Rodriguez is a fashion designer in his hometown Newark, New Jersey",1.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
8909,4,"The author had concluded this story with this paragraph to make it as if they were on a clean slate like they had started over. So the past no longer haunts them. Saeng sounds as if she has a bit of relief after she takes her mom the plate. I believe that she feels better because at the end of the paragraph she sounds sure of herself. She sounds certain she sounds as if she want to start over because she says ""when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again”. To me she sounds like a brand new person. Who has forgotten about the past.",2.0,,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,5.0
15420,6,"The obstacles of the builders of the Empire State Building faced were hard because they couldn't just drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building do to the frame work Also the stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation. Which was nearly eleven hundred feet below. The steel frame of the Empire State Building would also have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate this new situation. And over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications have to be made to the building's framework The architects designed a shiny glass and chrome-nickel stainless steel tower that would be illuminated from sides, with a steps-back design that imitated over all shape of the building itself capital rocket-shape mast would have four wings at its corners, of shiny-aluminum, and would rise to a conical roof that would house the mooring arm.",0.0,,,,,1.0,2.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,6.0
4346,2,"I don't believe that any certain materials, such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc; Should be removed from the libraries shelves, because any thing can be offensive. What if someone needed to resourch about the @NUM1? Well they really won't be able to, if all the books about @NUM1 were taken off the shelves, only bacause someone found it offensive. Now days, everything is offensive to somebody.      For this, people need to understand that it is what it is, and if you were not appart of that problem, then what do you need to worry about. This day and age is evil all around the world. There are going to be things happening that are going to make people feel a little offensive. Just like all the earthquakes around the world, I know that there is some people offensive about that, but what if somebody was in college, and they wanted to learn more about what happened, so maybe they can get a group of people, and make there lives better.      People are hurting and I understand that, but us people are not here to judge, we are here to help the poor, and the sick, get by with what they have, and just help them see that there is a way out. With all this said I don't believe that we should remove the books, music, movies, and magazines off the shelves in libraries.",2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,13.0
15767,6,"Obstacles such as nature, safety issues, and weight as well as length of the dirigible were obstacles that the builders of the Empire State building faced in trying to allow dirigibles to dock on it. They were very hopeful in the idea of having the Empire State building, ""equipped for an age of transportation that was then only the dream of aviation pioneers,"" until they saw the risks. First was nature itself, winds were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. This means that the dirigible, which was made to be, ""lighter than air,"" would swivel around the mooring mass. and have no weight support to keep it down. Sometimes, the winds might even prevent the dirigible to get close enough like in @DATE1 when a U.S. Navy dirigible named Los Angeles approached the mooring mass but couldn't get close enough. Another issue with safety. It was stated that outside of the U.S., most dirigibles use hydrogen instead of helium, which was used in the U.S. Hydrogen is highly flammable which is a very dangerous asset when there are millions of people down below. When the owners of the Empire State Building heard about the German dirigible the Hindenburg that was destroyed by fire, they imagined that situation over New York which was highly populated. Lastly was the size and weight of the dirigible itself. The dirigible (@NUM1 ft) held by single cable would add stress to the building's frame. In order to prevent this, they would have to modify the frame. These obstacles plus many more showed that that this idea was, ""destined to never fulfill its purpose.""",2.0,,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/prompt-6/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,10.0
4481,2,"Libraries have no right in my mind to decide what is offensive and what isn't. Libraries shouldn't have the view on censorship the people who rent or buy the items should. The @CAPS1 has an idea of what is offensive but they shouldn't be able to make that decision. If the @CAPS1 wants buisness they should try to make sure the customers are happy. Libraries should take surveys of what everyone wants.     Not all the people in the world have the same idea of what is a offensive book, magazine, movies, music, etc. The different views of people can vary from a lot to none at all. If the people feel that they are that offensive then they should bring it up with the @CAPS1 and find a solution instead of getting rid of these items. A safe but easy solution would be to create a section just for offensive items the @CAPS1 or people claim them to be.    Another possible solution would be to jus rearrange the area's of the books into to main category's such as offensive and none offensive, and then break it down into their specific categorys. So the libraries need to have a survey showing what items the people think are bad and the librarys opinions and then go on from there. The surveys could be made up of a paper one you fill out in the @CAPS1 to it's online website. The survey would have a list of books, movies, magazines, and music that people could check off.     Now the @CAPS1 needs money to keep books and other items in stock and so they can repair them if necessary. So if the @CAPS1 feels that a book is offensive they shouldn't have the right to censorship. All these books have been in libraries for this amount of time why change it now. Think about it if it was offensive why did they put it into the @CAPS1 in the first place.     So in conclusion the @CAPS1 should have know right to censorship books, movies, magazines, music, or any other item they have. This would cost time and money which they don't have. Customers could possibly stop comming in because of the change which would be a loss of money. Now everyone knows a big loss of money could hurt any buisness and possibley bankrupt them, or could take weeks, months, or even years to recover and no buisness wants that. So the easy way to make sure that doesn't happen jus leave everything the way it is",4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,18.0
4592,2,"If there was a book on a shelf that I found offensive, I would want it removed, but then again I wouldn't. Every one has there own opinions and there own view on things. Mine are different from every one elses'. I mean I @MONTH1 find it offensive, but how is everyone else going to see if it is or not, if you take it off the shelf?     Everyone is entitled to their own opinion. What we do, believe in, or think is what makes us ourselves. Just because one person finds a book, music, or some movies offensive, doesn't mean everyone else will. Others might happen to like it even if you don't.     Taking something away just because you think it is offensive, is like taking a little part of some one away. It's like the school making kids wear uniforms, it takes our individuality away. We all have to have some way to express ourselves and maybe the thing you find offensive, expresses some one else in some way.    There is going to be a lot of things in life that people don't like, but can you really just get rid of it all? It does not work like that. You are not always going to have your way in life, but it's life and there is nothing you can do about it. Just because you don't like something or you find something offensive, doesn't mean you can just remove it or replace it.     Life just goes as planned and there will be things that you don't like, but you can't change that. It is life and replacing or removing things won't make things easier. So if I found something offensive, I'd just ignore it and leave it there because is taking it off the shelve really going to help?",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,15.0
13468,5,"the mood they created in the author in the memoir was very diffrent from other people We all have diffrent mood swings but some people have the same and it never changes, one way you need to change this how you act around others and how to get to know them the way they are around and not with friends.",0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-5/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
10221,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph to emphisise the theme that changes in life are hard to adjust to. Saeng has moved to @LOCATION1 and longs for home. The flowers in the greenhouse reminds her of where she grew up and her grandmother. ""A wave of loss so deep and strong that it stung Saeng's eyes now swept over her."" Saeng cannot look at the flowers without crying. She tells her mom that she did not pass the test but in the last paragraph she vowed to herself that by spring she will. The author is giving us insight to Saeng's character. We now know that eventhough it is difficult for Saeng to let go of what she knows and love, she will have the strength to make it in a new world.?",2.0,,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,8.0
906,1,"Dear @LOCATION1, I want you to imagine it's a beautiful @DATE1 day. The birds are chirping, the smell of beautiful flowers are filling the air, but instead of playing outside with your neighbors, you are inside trying to master the unbeatable game cubefield on the computer. Computers have had a negative impact on today's society. When people are engrossect with whatever they @MONTH1 be doing on the computer they become very lazy, they lose the motivation to go out and exercise, people also lose intrest in helping around the community. This is why computers have a negative impact on todays society. Statics shows that @PERCENT1 of people would rather stay instead on the computer then out and about helping and working around their neighboorhood. Computers have had such a negative impact it makes people want to stay glued to their chairs with their eyes glued to their monitors. Yes computers have had a lot to do with a lot of technical advances, but at what cost do these technological advances come? Many kids are becoming obese and lack my motivation to come out of their room off of the computer. Computers are making society very lazy this is why they have a negative impact on us. Computers have also made society lack motivation to go and exercise. A very close family friend was very obese. She was lazy and never wanted to exercise. Instead of going out and doing something about it, she stayed in her room on facebook for weeks at a time. Though the computer wasnt the one who made her obese, it was used as a much to hide behind the real problems. It is sad when @PERCENT2 of teenagers say they would rather stay inside on myspace than going outside for a jogg. Yes its true computers helps you learn things you @MONTH1 not have known before, but so do books, newspapers and magazines. Computers have had a negative impact on society. Helping out in your community provides many opportunties to meet new people, and it feel a sense of accomplishment. But the urge to stay in on the computer clouds your better judgement. I know that I would rather help the elemntry school across the street build a new garden rather than stay inside on twitter. If you are inside searching the web how will you know if the old lady across the street needs help with her groceries? Helping around your community lets people know you care about whats going on. So dont let the computer have another second of your time. Computers have had a negative impact on society. Teenagers as well as adults have become very lazy. They lack motivation to exercise as well as help around the community. Now its your turn don't just stare at your computer screen absent mindley. Go out and toss the ball along with the neighbors dog. Youve heard the facts now make the right decision.",6.0,5.0,6.0,6.0,6.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-1/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,29.0
10499,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph. He concludes with this paragraph because that’s how the girl feel. She feel that in the spring she can do better then what she did.,0.0,,,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-4/source_essay.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,0.0
3131,2,"Libraries are sometimes connotated as very boring. Walking up and down isles looking at all of the books, and wishing that they were all more interesting. Minutes after searching through the one shelf you have been rummaging through for what seems like hours, you get a glimpse of a very interesting title. Inside of this book could be countless inappropriate pictures and profanity on every page. Who is to blame for opening the book and reading it?     Profanity, nudity, and crude humor, as well as many other things, are all over the media, including books. Some parents try very hard to keep their children out of the way of those things by telling the child that they just simply cannot watch, listen to, or read certain things. The parents typically do not say why they are not letting their child see, hear, or read these things, other than, 'it is bad, and I said no.' If parents were to tell their child specifically why they were not supposed to be exposed to certain things, the child might not be so inclined to get involved in those things.     Not only should the parents teach their child why they should not be exposed to those things, but maybe they should be around when their kids have an opportunity to see things they shouldn't. And if a child is too young to see, hear, or read certain things, than they are far too young to be browsing a library or any other place where they are not properly guided by a parent.      Censorship, in my opinion, should not be done by libaries, movie producers, television programs, and record companies, it should be done by the parents of a child.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/Prompt-2/prompt_and_rubric.html,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP%2B%2B/General%20Guidelines%20for%20Scores.html,20.0